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Spoilers ahead, proceed at your own Frisk.
-The Game's Demo
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Whatever for shameless fanfic plug
Xth for reposting this:
What's your last favorite character and why?
NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TAKING ABOUT!
Reposting part 27. Enjoy your feels, kids.
Xth for... I don't know who this guy is, anyone remembers him?
Out of the main ones, Probably Mettaton. He's selfish, shallow, obnoxious and murderous, and ditched Blooky after telling him he wouldn't. He tries to kill Frisk and contributes to Alphys' suicide in several timelines, he's a cunt.
I was about to post that you sly motherfucker
nth for please come back, my child
How would you react if as Sans and Papyrus aged, they started to look more and more like skeleton furries?
Who do you usually play as on Shamchat?
Mettaton for me!
Maybe more of your kids would have come back if you hadn't locked the fucking door to the ruins Toriel
Everyone wants Undyne to dominate them.
Undyne's worse, desu senpai.
>tries to kill Frisk
Majority of the bosses did, it's kind of their job.
That was her choice, plus she only dies when he does too.
I don't care if you don't like him but at least have a proper argument about it.
>tfw no Gaster date available
I was just trying to save them from Asgore..
You wouldn't leave an old woman like me alone, would you? Do you like buttscotch or cinnamon?
Well he goes on to join that band with Blooky in the TP ending.
>contributes to Alphys' suicide
Repostin the first part of my little fic that will eventually be about forgiveness.
Criticism, feedback and etc.. would be helpful.
>"... I don't see why you're asking a question when you know the answer. We both know you're not here to talk."
>Asgore was at a loss for words.
>There was a strike of lightning, and Asgore was no longer in the hospital room. The area outside has become a black void. Him and the human were no longer alone. The dingy room was now shared by two others.
>One appeared to be his wife, the other a child. But he couldn't see any of their faces. Not even the old man's.
>He spoke once more.
>"Looking for someone else to blame, I see? Well, I'm sorry to say, but this one's on you."
>Asgore felt like he was stabbed in the heart.
>"I had no choice. It was either that, or let the monsters rot underground."
>To his left, he heard the voice of Toriel speak up. He almost hesitated hearing her voice again. But he knew it wasn't her.
>"There was always a choice.... You just made the wrong one, I'm afraid!"
>The same mocking tone as the old man.
>He heard himself retort, "It was in anger. I've put it behind me. It's been so long..."
>This time, it was not one voice, but six that came from the void to respond. He knew each of them all too well.
>"If that's the case, then why are you here? You're going in a circle, but this loop is leading towards a dead end."
>Asgore tried to find something to respond with, but merely fell silent.
>The other entities disappeared. It was just him and the old man.
>There was a small click, as in the distance he saw the automatic doors of the hospital. Was he back outside?
>The raspy voice of the man tore him away from his thoughts. Looking at him, he could almost make out a beak in his silhouetted face "You've seen firsthand what happened before. Are you sure this is such a good idea? I know I can't stop you, but don't say I didn't warn you."
>At that, he was back at the entrance to the hospital.
He's round and blobby!
You got sniped, nigga.
Please refrain from romancing the void.
Do you like this hat squidward? I made it
with my tears
Gaster please don't drop your face, people might step on it.
Undyne was trying to kill Frisk under Asgore's direct orders, because she was trying to save everyone she ever cared about, and believed that humans were all evil.
Toriel did not try to kill Frisk, nor did Papyrus. Asgore and Undyne tried to kill Frisk to save their people. Mettaton tried to kill Frisk for fucking popularity with the humans.
He openly admits in the King Mettaton ending that he treated Alphys like shit and acts as though making a fucking statue of her means he's made up for it.
Saying 'I do not like this murderous, selfish, narcissistic douche for being a murderous, selfish and narcissistic douche' is a proper argument you dumb fangirl.
>His death contributes to Alphys' suicide
>Something he can't prevent causes someone else's death
>When Alphys' does commit suicide when mettaton is still alive he's really sad about it
I don't think mettaton is that bad of a guy.
he's not cute, he's dark and mysterious
If I could write for shit, I would totally write that.
But he doesn't love you. That's where your date ended. :^)
Flowey follows the crew around after they have all left for the surface, but he stays close to mom, dad, and Frisk. Thanks to Frisk, he doesn't wanna hurt everyone anymore and wants to feel love again, but he can't without a soul.
I'm trying to think of a decent way for Frisk to find a soul to give to Asriel without being an hero.
Once Frisk gives him a soul, he can feel love again and discovers that he has feelings for Frisk
that he originally wanted to have for Chara if she wasn't a dick. Frisk is a dude, of course.
i'm too nervous to roleplay
i get this feeling whenever i watch rp happening/attempt to do it that's like a mix of embarrassment and shame and nervousness
like if i do it im going down a path i cant come back from
>Tim curry will never voice sexy gaster
>Ron perlman will never voice gotedad
>David Bowie will never voice Mettaton
>cr1tikal will never voice sans seriously or well since he can't fucking voice act even though his voice is nearly perfect for it
>Grey Delisle will never voice pretty much the rest of the female cast with Jennifer hale.
why even fucking live.
a version of this with Sans in Asriel's place and Frisk talking about Gaster would be perfect for this situation
Indeed, we shouldn't even speak his name, really!
>the sounds of excited children fill the room
>Toriel titters a bit before trying to clean herself
>Tells him she has to go teach
>Asgore heaves a heavy sigh before going out to do his grounds keeping
>his move improves over the day
>lost in his work and seeing the smiling children wearing his knitting
>petals litter the ground and shrubbery grows wild
>he sets to work immediately and before long its recess
>child comes up to him
>wearing Fun Magnet sweater
>He asks him if he pricked himself on a thorn bush
>the once king asks what hes talking about
>he saw him crying in the garden earlier
>he tells him not to worry before sending him off to play with his friends
>Asgore feels himself sporting a big smile
>doesnt even take a break, his garden needs him
>Toriel just looks out the window to the slightly disheveled grounds
>Seeing him out there
>in the untended garden
>and making children happy
>She makes her way outdoors
>Tells him that she would like to see some lavenders outside her window
>Massive smile appears on his face
>"Anything for you Tori. I mean... Toriel"
>she turns away slowly
>looks back at him
>"Its fine, Asgore. Tori is... fine"
Friendly reminder that your goat may have excess neck fluff that is perfect for nesting your head in.
>implying you'll become some sick monster if you do some RP
Don't listen to the 4chan boogeyman.
Oh, it's a headcanon? I was worried I missed a huge portion of the story.
>Reveals all of Alphy's plan to befriend Frisk that he'd agreed to for no reason other than cruelty towards the chronically-anxious and self-loathing woman who'd given him the body he needed to become a star
>Possibly did so on live fucking TV
If he'd just attacked Frisk, it would have been one thing. But why in the fuck did he feel the need to tell them outright 'lol Alphys is fucking pathetic and she was only trying to make you think she was a good person when she isn't'? What did he think would happen? Obviously he didn't expect or want her to kill herself, but why reveal it at all?
Formatting is the major feed back I'd give.
You have alot of run on sentences that need split up and the paragraphs need far more breaks.
As a begginer it's ok to say what characters are doing but you should always aim to
"Show, not tell"
Aim for that.
I.e., saying a character felt this way or felt that way isn't as good as showing it with body language, how they interact with the world, etc.
All in all, keep up the effort anon! I look forward to more.
I must be missing something, then. When does Alphys kill herself, then?
No offense intended, I just wanted to get a proper explanation about that, because I might be a bit dense
I agree, Void Daddy can be kind of attractive sometimes
come on you little shit, don;t you want to fight Undying and Sans? Those fight are fucking top tier. I swear pussies like you are worse then those dumbass goat fuckers who think its possible to save Asriel.
Two things made me feel super warm and fuzzy today, the first was finding my shitty little hugfic on the writebin and the second is knowing someone actually put in some effort and made something based on what I made.
I kinda like what you've done here actually, not much I can give in terms of feedback, not without sounding like a self righteous holier than thou prick. Other than a few things like
>Asgore felt like he was stabbed in the heart.
sounds a bit off in my opinon and would sound a little better as
>Asgore felt like he had been stabbed in the heart.
At any rate keep writing all the random shit in your head down, you never know when you might stumble upon a thread of inspiration.
Casually dropping more Gaster while I get some chores done. Gonna be starting part 28 shortly.
I somewhat agree, but I think he was doing Alphys' a favor at first for making his body, and then had to stop playing around when he realized that humanity was at stake if Frisk were to get past him.
thanks for this fic, some of my favorite fic authors finished their work or disappeared so now you're my fuel
if you stare into the strafait, the starfait will stare back
welp, maybe retarded is a wrong word, but he can be Pap's dad so
NOOOOOOO IIIITTTSSSSS MMMIIIINNNNNEEE
Thanks for the feedback. One-off joke greentexts are the only thing I do so it's good to get some actual criticism if I do want to actually do some shit with my HM memes.
>Tim Curry voicing Mettaton
OH GOD NO! PLEASE, I CAN'T HANDLE THIS MUCH UNF!
Luckily I got RHPS on DVD for Christmas, I can go give myself over to absolute pleasure.
I'm as confused as you anon, but
I never played any of the different Neutral endings, so I didn't know. That's just one/a few timeline(s) though.
Well, if we go by his "She started making things right -> About time" comment when you talk to him during the victory lap, he probably did know about the Amalgamates, so I figure when he says that "he looked," he was referring to the True Lab.
>Classes going to be starting soon
I'm so fucking scared /utg/. I already failed like two of my classes jesus I need to get my shit together
>"Beware the man who speaks in hands."
I'm getting the feeling that we should be less afraid of the man himself and more of the reality-bending bullshit that happens around him.
My pleasure. Sorry to hear about your others not finishing their work, that drives me nuts too.
The only reason he cared about humanity was because he thought they'd make a better audience than the monsters, that and his shallow humanaboo shit.
Also, note how he treats the populace in the King Mettaton ending. He puts himself before things like education and economic collapse, and either kills or imprisons anyone who speaks out against him. And Papyrus says that everything sucks and everyone is unhappy, too.
Mettaton is a pretty terrible person.
This mcflurry pic needs a gaster edit now
>not wanting to see why Undyne actually deserves the title of hero
>not wanting to see what Sans truly values in life
It's full of moments that make you feel like shit and moments that are chilling as fuck, but it's essential for truly appreciating the characters.
Just helping the others that didn't saw the other thread.
>Undyne was trying to kill Frisk under Asgore's direct orders
Nuremburg isn't a valid defense.
>believed humans were all evil
And... that doesn't strike you as bad? I like fish but she was very misinformed.
>Toriel did not try to kill Frisk, nor did Papyrus
Papyrus would've captured you and brought you to Undyne, who would've then shredded your ass.
They're exempt, but what about the others? Muffet was only joking when she talked about baking Frisk into a donut, right? Mad Dummy was just messing around. Nahhh only the robot tried to actually kill you, huh.
>Asgore and Undyne tried to kill Frisk to save their people. Mettaton tried to kill Frisk for fucking popularity with the humans.
Killing is still killing. In the TP route, they're all just killing an innocent kid for their own means. Plus to be fair, Mettaton was indirectly saving the rest of the humans from being attacked by angry goats and fish.
>He openly admits in the King Mettaton ending that he treated Alphys like shit and acts as though making a fucking statue of her means he's made up for it.
Did you forget the part where he said he wanted to ask for her help but couldn't find her? He made the statue because that was the best he could do for her at the time.
>Saying 'I do not like this selfish, narcissistic douche for being a selfish and narcissistic douche' is a proper argument you dumb fangirl.
THAT is a proper argument. The rest of the shit wasn't. That was my point.
This chapter: Asriel commits sin and then goes to confession. (kind of lewd) http://pastebin.com/6x7LynQU
Part 1: http://pastebin.com/PyrfRtwa
Thanks anon. I'll just try not to stress out.
Thanks so much anon. You saved me some work, in creating this
I was very much by this song
and pic related.
Im going to longform this greentext. I really want to see this finished.
>This is it, Snake. Now's your chance to end the monster threat for good.
>Sir, this Sans guy... it doesn't seem like he's looking for destruction. In fact... it doesn't seem like any of them were.
>That is not important, Snake. Finish your mission and destroy Sans.
I still think his focus on hedonism is at least partially him needing a distraction from his guilt while freaking out over how everything is going to shit.
Obviously, the other half is him being a shit, but still, he's not ALL bad. I'd say half-empty of badness.
It's not, it's just slow-er compared to the previous few weeks. Fortunately, it doesn't seem to be slowing any further. I mean, you should see the /indie/ threads, they only make a new thread every couple of days
goteposters don't show up for a few more hours
that's the spirit, pumpkin pie
That part was very sweet, Skull. I can't wait to see how it all goes downhill from here.
I feel like if we keep going like this we'll be going down a dangerous path of emotion.
Watch one. The story, music, and action are worth it.
Don't do it yourself. Infecting the rest of the game is not worth it.
Have some cheery videos on hand to watch afterward though. I didn't, and I couldn't find anything good enough after the fact, so I felt fucking horrible all day.
Seeing all these new baby fic writers fills me with determination.
Keep at it you glorious fucks. Yes! Even you lewd fuckers.
Okay I kinda lied. I'm going to enjoy this sweet potato pie before I start writing. Have a picture for your troubles.
that's because the allied leadership was full of cunts just as much as the axis
doesn't make the defence any less morally valid because arbitrary legal systems controlled by victors who had absolutely no opposition to answer to say so
>'This character was acting under orders and under the misinformed claim that all humans were evil' is not a valid defense and Undyne is an irredeemable brute while Mettaton, who wanted to kill a child for popularity, is a-ok
Papyrus didn't know that, he only thought you were going to be imprisoned at worst. And play the damn game, after three halfassed attempts at capturing you (where he places you in a cell he knows you can escape from and tries to encourage rather than force you to stay there) he gives up. He wanted to capture you, but he's completely unable to do so because of his good nature. And Muffet and Mad Dummy are minibosses, you
Killing because you think you're doing the right thing is better than killing because of shallow and selfish reasons. And Mettaton only stops trying to kill you for shallow and selfish reasons too, as in he sees his popularity.
Yes, realizing that he'd treated the woman he owed everything to like utter shit gave him an emotion. Didn't stop him from being even more immoral and selfish as a ruler than he was before he grabbed power.
I said that he was a selfish, narcissistic douche and gave reasoning for it, you stomped in and shrilly claimed that because characters I hadn't even mentioned did things from completely different motivations, it was somehow invalid. Shoo.
It goes downhill pretty fucking abruptly, let me tell you. Glad to know you enjoyed it, next part will have more feels in it too. The closer we get to the end of chapter two the more I'll be exploring Papyrus growing up a little. He goes through his own set of trials before everything goes tits up.
okay I'm going to read it now
I've had it in tab since you last posted it
fuck add, not even meds or the psychotherapy help me with this.
>every single fucking /utg/ thread there's one dumb faggot that has to break the mobile site's layout by making something with enough letters to fuck the spacing
>every god damned thread I have to waste time hiding these fucktarded sub-tumbler tier posts
Feel free to run your fingers through a tablesaw the next time you think one of these posts needs to be made.
>people thinking of the characters aside from chara were actually evil or bad people
baka at you desu senpai
>Going to University.
I'm scared, /utg/.
>not wanting to see why Undyne actually deserves the title of hero
What's the worst Undertale stuff you've seen, Anon?
I could show up right now.
I've just been undercover.
We're always here, watching, waiting....
Hey /utg/, what's Asgore's favorite kind of hot dog?
Things that would make even the most stalwart of men weep in fear.
Thank Christ I've forgotten the links to all of it.
I don't have my ORAORAORAORA version of this gif here!
Honestly, it's like he's never heard the phrase, "Speak of the devil."
Probably that humantale shit that gets posted every thread. This is pretty bad too, though.
I don't get it
please go into more detail
I'll probably be productive later this week because the mail most flow
Papyrus still tried, plus I'm exempting him anyway. Both he and Toriel had (completely) good intentions.
>mini bosses don't count even though they're doing the same thing
>And Mettaton only stops trying to kill you for shallow and selfish reasons too, as in he sees his popularity.
Which promptly falls flat once he gets the phone calls. That's why I like Mettaton, he's a pile of shit but he learns his lesson.
Asgore didn't really want to kill you but felt like he had to. Undyne realizes not all humans are bad, as well, but I like Mettaton because I feel like he had the biggest change. He's still a narcissistic cunt but not to the point of killing a kid.
>Didn't stop him from being even more immoral and selfish as a ruler than he was before he grabbed power.
There was nothing he could do about Alphys at that point. If anything, she was being the selfish cunt offing herself and leaving him to ruin the underground. I'm not going to deny that the king Mettaton ending is one of the worst because he's clearly not meant for that role.
I like narcissistic dicks, that's why I like Mettaton. It's fine if you don't, but the "Mettaton tried to kill Frisk!!!!!" is the blindest fucking argument, that's why I went after you.
You're welcome. It was a nice reading. Looking forward to the longform version ;)
No I'm all set up and stuff its just freaky.
desu I'm worried about my family at home.
are you putting yourself into insane debt?
even the powerful skeleton andy gaster's greatest creation, the experimental nephew the man of many powers including blue attack and orange attack and black attack?
looks like andys got to showoff why he was sealed away in the firstplace...
don't forget to look me up on sheezyart for art trades
oh no because that sounds scary
why are you worried about them?
you'll still post, won't you?
>tfw Chara tulpa
Looks like some of you guys aren't coolio for this girlio. You gotta be really cool to get a girlio like this. Maybe if you guys were cool enough, maybe you would have a cool, qt3.14 Chara BF tulpa to cuddle with. Whoops look at the time, it seems like its time to leave, got a date with my cool, qt BF Chara. See you uncool brolios later! Over and Out Dudes!
utg, ive fallen in love with a goat
how much do the dakis cost
Asgorefags will crash a thread with no survivors if someone insults their husbando, they never shut up about bullying the goatdad, and when people tell them why they're unpopular they get mad and defensive instead of cutting the crap. Them and the fags who start or continue arguments as to why Asgore is an irredeemable cunt are easily the worst posters in these threads, but at least the anti-Asgorefags don't cry victim before anyone even starts shitting on them. See: Last nights threads.
Have fun not having a soul.
Less than a tulpa.
Nah I'm gonna be trying to work at the same time. Plus my family at home is gonna be working too.
Heh, I'll still post, Anon.
I'm just worried my brother is gonna freak out without me there to keep him stable. But I guess I'm not giving him enough credit he's a big boy.
weedfic as promised here (note, male frisk since i never do that and people were asking for it)
i had to just wosh everything about the dickbong and weed magic. i wrote it during fever haze and i couldn't salvage any of it this morning, just ended up rewriting that entire bit.
that along with having to restart this already due to a bluescreen kinda killed my urge to finish it.
critique etc welcome.
not sure if im gonna try to pump out another chapter of will or do more filler comfy.
>not using clover
That was some good pie.
OKAY. Part 28 is a go for real this time.
Jesus christ what I was saying in that post had nothing to even do with goatdad. I was implying that it was silly to label any charater (mettaton in this case) as a terrible person when the game goes out of its way to show that Mettaton does a lot of realizes that it was wrong of him to forget his old friends
Chocolate covered pizza flapjacks.
The good stuff.
"Daki" is short for "dakimakura", a body pillow with a character printed on both sides (usually casual on one side and lewd on the other).
A tulpa is, well... Just click this: http://www.tulpa.info/
I WANT OMEGA FLOWEY TO BE MY ROOMMATE!!!!!!!
I believe it's time for you to confess your sins, /utg/.
What have you done, and is it the right choice?
a lot of good is what I was suppose to type there...
he inspires the underground and gives them hope and entertainment, hence everyone calling in during his show about how inspired they were by him
I made a tf comic because I thought it would be funny
I don't know
>no goatshotaboy and chara tulpa to hug and pissies and cummies inside and outside while he says "you are great and i love you"
every night i scream and i scream and i bang the walls and break plates and they want to evict me? what the fuck do you people NOT UNDESRTAND the PAIN I AM GOING THROUGH
I made a tumbly to stalk writefriends and expand my image folders and this shit just keeps giving me an error 90% of the time when I try to go to my dashboard. Erasing cookies or changing the browser sometimes works but not always. What the fuck?
Asriel wants you to vote for Trump.
You wouldn't deny him, would you?
being sad is cute though
That's not true at all.
I'm more of a gote man myself but i really like the idea of chara.
As an evil demon, or the narrator or anything inbetween.
>ever drawing alphys
>ever drawing TF alphys
But anon, its your civic duty to participate politically and make your voice heard, else our Democracy become a corporate farce.
I agree with you though.
There's always John McAfee, modern-day Teddy Roosevelt
Also he killed a guy so that's pretty cool
I still need to read your stuff, Skull.
I mostly browse /utg/ but each time I see you post, I get more and more tempted. I guess I don't feel up for wall-o-texts of Fanfiction, but I'm starting to really like the whole concept behind Dadster.
>Sending 4chan after your own fans who haven't done anything to you except like your content
>Said fans are fucking 14 years old
I was joking about the Alphys shit but that's a real dick move, dude. I'm a little disappointed.
>Unironic trump discussion
It's just Frisk teaching Asriel how humans become friends, but okay.
Fell in love with a goat
It's easier to write a shitty fanfic than to publish a shitty drawing.
But good fics do more for me than any fanart can. Only some good comics with plot in them can go close.
Welp, anyway, have some comic without plot.
Why do the comfy Asriel/Frisk pictures make me so sad?
Aren't you glad you're not this person, /utg/?
You're... you're not this person.. are you?
FELL IN LOVE WITH A GOAT
>take 3 week-ish break from /utg/
>far, far more fanart/rule34 than when I left
Its like a second christmas
>Implying Trumpet won't make it worse
Do you know how this shit works? Push the oppressed down and they scream twice as loud.
Besides getting rid of all the Mexicans would never pass congress with how fucking expensive it is.
>I secretly think writefags aren't as important as drawfags in a fandom
This is a well known fact, friend. As a writefag, I know if I don't really try, nobody will give a shit. But people will always love a bit of art.
It doesn't hurt because it only forces me to either get better or be really creative with the 2000 character limit.
Guys, Toriel is my absolute favorite character from Undertale (and probably any game in 2015).... I want to Cosplay as her because she is so cool but there's one problem...
I'm a dude. And I'm not a gay or trans dude either. Just a normal, straight regular guy.
Would this be okay or do I have to be Asriel or Assbut
That was really cute and comfy. Thanks for sharing!
You should read some of it, at least the beginning and if you aren't hooked then you can stop i guess. His early chapters are pretty short and bite sized. Very easy to get into.
thats one of my ideas for next filler, taking as/frisk out for the 21st and undyne/sans shittalking asriel for picking appletinis and shit
i really want some kind of inebriated magic use but im not entirely sure how to write the situation
hi tacitly! thanks!
Best version coming right up
>Dworven has retired from doing lewds
>I'm back at school and have no time to draw thick anymore
Is this the end of an era?
Sometimes you gotta rock the boat anon
Wow rude, I never shat on anyone. I personally agree though that the life of a fandom does rely on visual medium more than written. You can't denying that it captures a broader audience.
Hey no pressure! I know my stuff is pretty long and AYEM is a daunting undertaking for readers just recently getting into it.
I help convince someone to make Snowdrake porn
apparently they are looking at pictures of real chickens fucking as reference
Depends on how shitty or if it has shitty fetishes like vore or scat
Why do you people always panic like this? You scream about how everything is awful, the thread is awful, /utg/ is dying, no one's ever coming back. He's just working a lot lately.
I'm convinced that's a fake account but if it's legit I am shocked by the fanbase I'm building. But then again my biggest view boost was through Reddit after my comic trickled down there.
>someone actively shilling my garbage
Goodness you're making me blush.
I do sometimes, then other times I'm too lazy. Sorry friend.