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>>54538263
NIGGERS
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>>54538339
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>>54538263
What would you want in a cyoa that lets you design and puts you in charge of the grim reapers?
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>>54538370
lore
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>>54538370
Waifus.

Idk, I guess different motivations for doing it?
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>>54538370
Non-goofy looking grim reapers

Also please include my OC Samayyel, the Bling God.
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>>54538370
qt magical girl reapers
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So the original Cuddle CYOA was made in a fit of anger when my hardrive failed. It is my most reposted work, and spawned countless comfy pocket dimension spin-offs.

It also looks like aids.

Here's one that looks slightly better, but only slightly. I meant this to simply be a remake, but I ended up adding some things so enjoy.
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>>54538511
I always thought your picture choices were cute.
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Whoever was working on that afterlife themed cyoa, hows it going?
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>>54538511
Noice! Always really enjoyed the first one.
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>>54538511
You ever going to finish that cyoa with the superpowered sapient cats?

Also, please stop trying to give me depression with cyoas that will never come true.
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>>54538563
Fatposter.
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>>54538563
>please stop trying to give me depression with cyoas that will never come true.
You need to run, run far far away from this dreadful place anon. Before It's too late.
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>>54538610
One of these days I'm going to remember that anime or comic where dog people stood watch over their cryogenically frozen masters for centuries, waiting until it was finally safe the unfreeze them.
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>>54538401
Ghost Hunter
Coins
Helloffice, ectochill, keepsafe, purerites
3 barghests
All complications
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>>54538511
Midnight. Maybe some week I'll use other to set it to the time just after dusk/before dawn when part of the sky is glowing but you can't see the sun.

Rain seems most cathartic today but some weeks I'll want Cloud or snow.

Rustic, with some nice little windows, a bookshelf, and a couch.

Ooh, companions now? We can mix and match, yes? Because a person or two to talk to and a cat would be great.

Candles, board games, plants, and hot drinks sound really cozy.

Thanks, Ferrean!
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>>54538370
Some sort of bag or sack to stuff souls into.
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>>54538401
Ghost Hunter
Scythe
Holiday, Aurapath, Dayhunter, Purerites + Cordsnap
Karmic Vagrant, Agent Tombstone, and The Conductor + Dire Owl
Complication of Thinning.
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>>54538370
Booze and hookers.
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>>54538511
Sunrise/Sunset

Clear Skies

Other: Greek Style

Couch, Bed, Television

Companions: Pic related- Human+Magical creature

pillows and blankets, baked goods, hot drinks, sleepwear

i just want whoever made this to know my hatred for you is like a thousand sons,
dont tease me with these fantasies
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>>54538440
Tok, you really matured as a writer during this self-exile. Congratulations Sir!
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>>54538873
Anyone have that image?
"Get in the fucking bag"
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I just want Tok to stop hurting
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>>54539243
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>>54538511
Midnight

Snow

Ruined/Victorian combo

Bed, Bookshelf, Fireplace

Other: Ms. Doll

Candles, bedding, plants, hot chocolate

Decorations and setting she would like.
We can lay and talk and get to know each other and be comfy together. Sleep will come easy and we'll dream together.
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>>54539187
>>54539243
I found the story, probably I probably should of looked before asking someone else
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>>54539265
good hunter?
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>>54539196
I don't.

This is too entertaining.
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>>54538555
>>54538845
>>54539109
>>54539265
Thanks fellas.

>>54538546
I try to use matching images for each group, that means I end up using whatever style is most readily available. Still though, I had no idea that some some of the charm of the old version was in the image choices.

>>54538563
I have no Earthly idea what you're talking about, but it sounds hilarious.

That being said, I've got 3 active CYOAs I'm working on. Go ahead and ask me whatever while I'm still here.
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>>54539196
>>54539312
I want him to go self-pity somewhere else.
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>>54539312
You are a heartless wretch, SDA

May a thousand toasters crawl up your anus
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>>54539312
Why do you always post with your name?
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>>54539312
I share your opinion, but I'd prefer him to make less noise while suffering.
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>>54539517
One must shed their sympathies if they're to truly reach cosmic enlightenment.

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>>54539567
Was he not self-banishing to plebbit?

>>54539550
>always
I want to be with you.
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>>54539622
As if he could live without us. We give Tok's life meaning. Just as you couldn't leave us even if you wanted.

In his latest autistic stroke, he said he'd return here to create CYOAs. And something about subverting us by being a shitlord.
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>>54539622
Why do you always post with your name? I'm asking out of genuine curiosity. I don't understand why you do.
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>>54539622
Are you almost done with your CYOA?
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>>54538339
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>>54538423
>>54538440

I'm gonna start reporting this shit.
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>>54538610
Just a reminder dogs like to eat people's faces after they die.
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>>54539317
How many bears are present?
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>>54539809
So will people. Cannibalism was common in caveman times.
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>>54538349
mystery boxes where?
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>>54539788
If you break global rule 7 you will get banned anon.
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>>54538511
Midnight

Rain

Victorian

Fireplace, Bookshelf, Pool

Companions: A bunch of futas

Baked Goods, Sleepwear, Plants, Work Table

We're going to fill the pool with jizz.
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>>54539317
What's the most completed CYOA about?
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>>54539622
Is that Shizune?
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>>54539670
>you couldn't leave us even if you wanted
I am bound by eldrich contract. An eternal slave to this place. In a way, this is my phylactery.

>>54539686
Cause it's funny.

>>54539784
That depends. Inspiration comes and goes, and sometimes persists for intense amounts of time. I could have it done by the end of the coming weekend (which I took another day off for to work on CYOAs), or I probably won't finish it until months from now.

But, realistically, I'm just juggling a lot of numbers around. I've revised everything like 5 times now only to end up with a system I originally designed in the first place. And fine tuning will take much longer than that, because I want to ensure a variety.
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>>54539857
posted as needed
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>>54539902

I hope it's finished soon. I can't wait to use the Sartre CYOA to reshape the world to my liking.
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>>54538370
For you to actually make it instead of posting these silly questions pretending to be making cyoa's
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Gonna repost one I have saved. Not the creator, so I can't answer any questions but it always entertained me.
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>>54540018
Honestly the build here is kind of complicated, but seems super-satisfying.
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>>54538511
>Midnight rain continues to be the most atmospheric setting
Ooh, theme is new, isn't it? This cyoa just got a lot harder... let's go with...
>Victorian
It's what I imagined with the old one, though I'll probably try out most eventually
>Couch
>Television
>Windows
netflix and chill
>Probably a lamia for starters, though I could see myself cycling through partners
>pillow fort
>hot chocolate
>board games
>Baked goods
Just whatever sounded nice

All in all it's a nice update. The bathroom looks pretty messy though. I think it could use an update
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>>54540031
Orb maaaaath
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>>54539902
Consider cutting the number juggling part out and posting only that.
I mean, you did do Star Dust so you obviously have the autism required to handle it yourself but feedback could still help. Even if it means changes to cruiser costs.
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>>54539980
I'm actually serious. My biggest problem is that I tend to create cyoas around a single build I have in mind. The desire to make this cyoa came from a dream in which Yuyuko was in charge of the kuroshitsuji' grim reapers and that's why they all have gardening equipment themed scythes.

So now I'd like to make a cyoa about designing your grim reapers as the god of death, them being a reflection of you and your interests.
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>>54540055
Honestly, I'm not sure why some things (like minigames) are considered drawbacks but I'll take it.
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>>54539978
No need for that, anon.

If you're going to do something like that, then you can just pretend you have the intellect/motivation for a good job or are daring/fit enough to do the hardest contracts and make lots of money to do whatever you want. Or attractive enough as a person to marry someone influential and wealthy.
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>>54538511
>>54538511
My great thanks to you, Ferrean for providing the original, which inspired my Chill Zone. You were the one that prompted me to start working on CYOAs, so I am happy for your enhanced remake.

>Noon (not like one could tell)
>Rain (heavy and stormy)
>Rustic, Modern
>Couch, Fireplace, Electronics (actually the reason I made Chill Zone was because I thought it was ridiculous that you have to spend a choice on a simple gosh-dang couch. Seems like that of all things should come free, don't you think?)
>One human, one animal, and one other (a female friend of mine and my waifu, both; just want to cuddle and play vidya with them by the fire, plus a large cat of some kind to cuddle up with, too)
>Pillows & Blankets, Hot Drinks, Baked Goods, Sleepwear
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>>54540018
Yeah, I remember this one. It was a lot of fun
15

Action 14
Fantasy 13
Romance 12

All I want is somebody I can charge into battle alongside. I want to spar with my woman, and she should get turned on by the mere thought of fighting a worthy opponent. She may well be stronger than me, which is also hot. We'll just have to wait and see.

Fantasy world 11

Medieval and religious location were also tempting, but you can get a lot of variety out of fantasy. Next stop: The floating kingdom of zeal

... Of course it's so long I have to post my build in three parts, but still
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>>54538511
>Other
Right after the sun has set and it's dark and cool
>Snow
Light snow that's only visible in the glow of the streetlamps
>Victorian
>Fireplace (green), Windows, bookshelf
Will be a bit sucky I don't have a nice place to sit. I'll need a blanket.
>None
>Pillows and blankets, extra soft carpet, blinds, snowglobes
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>Be struck by inspiration
>So tired that can't do shit
>Feeling energetic as fuck
>Have no idea what to do

The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak. Bestow me your energy anons so i can fucking start making this shit already
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>>54540084
...fuck it, I'll just make a pastebin for my build
https://pastebin.com/vhiHFUnd
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>>54540072
Clearly you haven't played minigames in many visual novels. They're basically shitty games added in to extend game length.
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is there a visual novel equivalent of /cyoag/? I'm not thinking about stuff like /qst/
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>>54540077
But I want something that will definitely not be in the CYOA, so I'll stick with my plan.
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>>54539317
You know, that fantasy world cyoa where one of the races were anthropomorphic cats which lead to some autists throwing up a shitstorm. Is that cyoa still in the works?
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>>54538610
Good doggies.

Part 1/3
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>>54538610
Part 2/3
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>>54540101
>>54539902
That's really cute, if you are like me you can shit out a 6 page high quality CYOA with a coherent and exciting story that will never be forgotten on just a whim.
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>>54540108
*shrug* I suppose I'm a sucker for the Zero Escapes series and was thinking of the puzzle solving there as a VN Minigame.
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>>54540136
There was once, but it died an ignoble death and moved onto discord exclusively. Search any /vg/ archive for "/evn/" and you'll be able to experience the slow death of the community like audio logs in a bad horror game.
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>>54540136
There was some talk about making a few VNs. I think ZBG got started on one.
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>>54538610
Part 3/3
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>>54538511
Sunset. Sunrise is nice, but sunset's colors are more beautiful.

Partly cloudy. So you can still see the sky, but you've got a whole range of cloud colors.

Futuristic and Roman. Sort of a neo-Imperial Rome. I don't know, I'm going to change if a lot, I might as well experiment.

Bookshelf, Bed, Other: Game Table. A place to relax and enjoy myself.

Animals: Pair of kittens. Because kittens.
Magical Creatures: Dragongirl, Angel, Dryad. A nice mix of monstergirls for gaming and sexy times.
Other: Android. For when we need a fifth player in one way or the other.

Hot Drinks, Baked Goods, Board Games, Plants. Something to do, something to eat and drink, and something to liven things up.
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>>54540101
Tell us about what you want to make. Maybe boucing ideas will help.
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>>54540228
There are some rare examples of good minigames in VNs, but the majority are just crap.
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>>54540225
>coherent and exciting story
lol
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>>54540198
DO NOt
My pupper is getting old. I'm not ready for this
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>>54540225
>coherent and exciting story
Was it? I didn't read it, I'll just take your word for it though.
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>>54540253
I want to make a CYOA about creating an order of knights it would have things like a small section about you as the grandmaster, choosing the place where to build your fortress and the buildings that it has, a shit ton of waifus/husbandos/bros/companions and i would like to somehow use that time mechanic that SDA is going to use in its Cat girl waterworld utopia
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>>54540343
>husbandos
Godspeed, brother.
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>>54540343
What is your favorite aspect out of all that? What part really excited you?
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>>54540308
I always thought of this as a kind-of happy story, with all the doggos going to the stars.
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>>54540136
What exactly do you mean a visual novel equivalent? Like one that's just like a bunch of autistic morons yelling at each other? Or one where you are stuck at character creation?
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>>54540343
>i love 'base building' CYOAs

Make it happen anon
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>>54540375
I am not quite sure what would be my favourite part, It just calls to me all of it. but i would like to start with yourself and the fortress.
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>>54540433
I mean /cyoag/ but with visual novels instead of cyoas, or at least with cyoas with advanced resolution mechanics
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>>54540455
Let's go with the fortress, then. How exactly would you customize that? What would the options be? Maybe a choice between being attack or defense focused, or maybe you'd pick a certain number of elements for it?
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>>54540455
Oh and i would like it to have a lot of quests and stuff like that
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>>54540418
Not taking the bait! I'm not risking this being sad!
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>>54540485
It would be more like picking elements for it making it just attack or defense focused is just too vague for me.
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>>54538370
Type of afterlife, powers of your grim repaer branch, your employer, your subordinates and their job positions.
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>>54540518
What elements? Things like wall materials and gun types?
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>>54540198
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>>54540249
I really like this, is there any more?
There's this book I read, I don't remember much of it, like most books I read, but it had a similar theme to this, Humans died out dogs with intelligence telling stories about them, but without aliens. City by Clifford D. Simmak If your interested.
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>>54540235
>SDA said Sya'ra wasn't a lesbian who'd try to steal your waifu Ley'ra.
>Makes this
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>>54540473
So CYOAs but instead of imagining what happens you need to be given an answer?
You're looking for CYOA books.
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>>54540516
Don't worry, It's not as sad as it could be.
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>>54540536
Something like that i guess. You would have a number of resources to use to put things like more rooms, or better walls, a library or something full of books about the occult, Maybe some quality of life rooms That kind of stuff
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>>54540539
If there is any more, I don't have it. I can't even remember where I found it (might have been imgur).

>>54540516
It has sad bits, but the ending is happy.
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>>54540583
cyoas that give me more cyoas after finishing the first cyoa in the cyoa
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>>54540675
You're looking for Jumpchain.
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>>54540597
If you elaborate more on the quality of life rooms, then in this conversation you've already started writing down concrete details. That's the main thing. You've already started working, now all you need to do is keep going.
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>>54540687
I've never seen that one. Please post it.
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>>54540774
Hah.
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>>54540675
Head to the jumpchain threads if you're into that sick shit
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>>54540774
>>54537163
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>>54540585
One of those dogs probably outlived the other.
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>>54540687
jump cyoas have resolution mechanics?
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>>54540724
Hmm... Better quality ''Bedrooms'' is an obvious one but clearly i need more stuff to put in there, maybe some sort of drinking hall?
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>>54540875
Oh shit and a temple thing too! You can't have knights without some deus vult.
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>>54540549
Only thing holding me back from going full game/VN is lack of time and art. I can write, design and program it all from scratch.
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>>54540947
I think you missed the point of my post.
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>>54540956
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>>54540875
>>54540919
You're getting it. Once you start getting excited about your own ideas, then it's just time to write them out. Good luck anon.
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>>54540995
Thank you anon. I promise that when i finish this it will be so good that maybe it will get reposted from time to time.
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>>54540956
Is this finished yet? I only want to read it when it's done.
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>>54541030
>Charisma 3
Gotta play the game, gotta sell the game, that's the only way playa earns his rep
>Love 3
Daddy knows all 'bout love
>Will 3
Born in the hood, raised on the streets. I've been doing this for 19 years. Niggas wanna fight me? Fight these tears
>Intuition 2
Gotta keep an eye on dem trick hoes
>Aptitide 1
Sometimes gotta cap a nigga's ass, sometimes gotta use dat other "tool", knowimsayn
>Clash with Evil
My city, my hood, my rules. Anyone hurtin' my homies and tryin' to wreck' my crib? Gonna put some hurtin' back on them muthafuckas.
>Witch Hunting
More like Bitch Hunting, amiright? I am on to any nerd hater's game.
>Gunslinging
Sometimes you just need to shoot a bitch
>Espionage
Give them an ice cold pimp stare, they always back down, that's how you interrogate. And dem niggas always pass what the word on the street is, that's how playa knows all.
>Paragon
That nigga's name is the synonym for the game
>Camaraderie
All those superhero hoes doin' what the Daddy tells. No evil mofo can beat the power of love.
>Performance
My whole life is a grand performance, you can sell tickets just to see how that playa strolls down the street.
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>>54539827
As many as you want.

>>54539898
The Gravekeeper, a simple CYOA about getting powers at the cost of your humanity.

>>54540193
Skies of Eden.
Hoo boy.

SoE is definitely still in the works. I could write a novel on it's current dev cycle. Most of the races have been removed or changed majorly. It's going to be a while before it's done, but expect high flying steampunk airship adventures eventually. If anyone wants to ask questions about this one I would be thrilled, there's so much nonsense behind it there's no way I'm ever going to share all of it.
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>>54541113
Sharing is caring.
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>>54541007
It isn't good to lie, we had a big argument about it with you insisting Sya'ra totally wouldn't do that, then you make stuff implying she would.
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>>54541147
I think that picture is way, WAY older than that discussion.
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>>54541088
look at the version number I guess? seems finished to me
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>>54538349

Modular shotgun

Robot Maid (2) -> please let her penis be small

Fictional Universe (3) -> I will go with pick related

Shock suit (2)

AI companion (1)

Multipurpose laser "tool" (0)

I guess I will accept Jesus Christ as my personal lord and savior, and have fun as a mercenary.

I know you said pick one red but the fact that you have at least 6 boxes suggests the other 4 or 3 options (if I guessed correctly that drug will kill or maim me) exists and are permutation of those three, also I wonder what you do, please no bully
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>>54541113
Still keeping the furries? I enjoy watching the autists rage fruitlessly. If you cave though it's not so fruitless
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>>54541095
If I was a wizard getting killed by a non-caster I'd want it to be this guy.
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>>54538511
Sunset

rain

Other, Cabana

Desk/electronics(pc)/fireplace

Companions: A cute waifu and a small pup

Alcohol/plants/baked goods/candles
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>>54541030
Str 1
Spd 2
Res 2
Apt 1
Int 4
Cha 0
Wil 1
Ste 1
Lov 0

Strange Journey
Resistance
Survivalism
Performance
Harvest
Wuxia
Acrobatics

Because someone has to explore the farthest reaches of the world. It may as well be me.
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Necropolis
Knowledge and Answers
Strong Infrastructure
Lord of the Dead
Haunted - I already experience this.
Rehabilitator
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>>54541552
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>>54541563
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>> 54526082
I tried doing the whole respond to every build thing I’ve seen other authors do, but I’m not really very good at it. So in general, I’m really happy people enjoyed it, I was a bit worried nobody would like the characters and I’d have to do more of a rewrite. I loved reading your builds too. For now, I’ll just respond to specific questions and concerns here, hopefully I didn’t miss anything. If I did, I apologize, please just point it out and I’ll address it.

>>54531643
>starting grains
Yes, you’re right, I can’t believe that slipped through. In 1.0 I’ll be correcting some typo and formatting things (rather than the rewrite I was worried I thought I’d need to do) and that is definitely on the list. Thanks for pointing it out.
>>54532767
>Lost and Found
I’m of the opinion that if something is vague and implied in the CYOA, you don’t have to take it as canon. So since there isn’t a direct link in dialogue between the sections, you can just view them as illustrations if you want. But if you want to make links, the images do support it. You already identified the boxing gloves, and combining that with the Knight’s immediate actions after a medical emergency and her sudden free time, you can guess what might have happened to the family member, and why she might be linked with “not going through with a self-destructive path.” But maybe you prefer her as just a regular cheerful tomboy and you don’t want that shadow looming over her.
Likewise, just before that slot there’s the disturbed shougi board illustrating “recovering from a disaster with potential sacrifices,” in the last slot there is that White Queen piece the narrator keeps referring to, and so on. But again, unless it’s actually explicitly written in text, all implications are up in the air, so feel free to ignore them if you don’t like them.
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>>54541244
Stop trying to use him as bait, it's like you want people to be mean to him.
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>>54541586
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>>54541595
>>54533524
>Doll-anon
No, if I was Doll anon the cutting out would probably be less amateurish. I’ve only made one other CYOA so I don’t really have a name. And sorry for the Pawn thing, I know some people like to make their builds as they go along and hoped the above links would be enough to imply she was a choice. Maybe I should have made it more explicit.

Again, thank you to everyone who made builds or had a comment. I really enjoyed reading your thoughts. Sorry for the text wall.
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>>54541147
What if she just wants to sex you, anon?
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>>54541610
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>>54541595
Implications are canon and can't just be ignored.
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>>54541625
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>>54541030
This calls for a main character! A protagonist, in his own comic!
>Aptitude 1:
I have perfect knowledge of how to use Google and YouTube to learn anything I need.
>Intuition 1:
I recognize the patterns in my enemies movements and I can remember the stuff I've read in their comics
>Charisma: 1, Love: 1
I'm the protagonist! Who could hate me?
>Resilience: Main character/4
I can't die (but it's not a superpower it's because it would be boring for the readers)
>Strange Jouney
Isekai, but for non-weebs.
>Resistance,
How else do you think I keep warm without pants?
>Paragon
Yes, that! I'm a hero. I'm a good guy.
>Stunting
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>>54541646
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>>54541630
Would you rate author clarification as more or less canon than an implication?
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>>54541639

>>54541625
aww crap I get in your posting streak sorry.
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>>54541630
Cancer, kill yourself
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>>54541660
Because of the martial nemeses.
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>>54541667
Can't take back what you did. If you intended a link then it's canonically there no matter what and can't be ignored.
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>>54541615
My name's not Ley'ra, to which her dialogue is directed.
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>>54541088
>>54541201
Yes, it's fully finished.

I am pondering a quest-based DLC for after World of Myth and Wonder, but no date set for it, or firm plans. What is there, though, is done and stands alone.
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>>54541689
What I intended was something you could choose to link together, or choose not to. Hence, the "choose" in "choose your own adventure." I hope this answer satisfies you.
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>>54538349
>multipurpose laser "tool"
>fictional universe - nasuverse/TMverse
>modular shotgun
>express pistol
>shock suit
>gold

unspent gift but who cares
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>>54541724
Ignore retards
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>>54541670
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>>54541595
So what's Pawn's reaction be to just asking her out rather than being her rival or chess partner?
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>>54540956
Mentor:
>Calladan, Knight of the Silver Cross
That guy's awesome. I wanna be his squire.
Lover
>Mithrodae Deford, Runic Calculator
She's a cutie and she needs love. I had to make up an appealing personality for her in my head. No waifus immediately grabbed me desu.
Friend
>Tige Eahlsin, Monk of the North Wind
To always push me further, and to have long college conversations with around the fire camp.
Rival
>Masorn Xarae, Lighting Dancer
Not-really-serious rivalry. He mostly makes me laugh with his drama queen antics, though he can be irritating. We fight side by side, he's just competitive and insecure about it.
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>>54541717
>My name's not Ley'ra
Nice try, but you can't fool me.
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>>54541721
did you make your own build for it?
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>>54541613
>And sorry for the Pawn thing, I know some people like to make their builds as they go along and hoped the above links would be enough to imply she was a choice. Maybe I should have made it more explicit.
It's alright. I seem to be in the minority with this.
I do feel silly for not realizing that there's a hint Queen is Pawn
That you've only made one other makes me even more amazed at your work. Lord knows my first ones looked awful. The options are amazing, the art is great, the presentation is pretty. It's so good, easily 9 of 10.
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>>54541842
SDA please, you lied to me.
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>>54541276
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>>54541865
But anon, she's not even saying anything sexual. The redhead just happens to be there, and Sya's trying to get her to pay attention to you, the captain. Obviously she wasn't paying attention, she's not even looking at you!
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>>54541830
Probably something like pic related with an "Are you sure?" followed by a great big smile, even (potentially) an embarrassed hug.
>>54541862
Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

>>54541862
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>>54540956
>>54541721
So the player just ends up being the same class as his mentor?
>quest-based DLC
Sounds good.
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>>54540823
Wow, fuck you
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>>54541986
The content you create is simply amazing, i hope you stay with us forever.
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>>54541986
I really hope you make more in-depth CYOAs in the future; the amount of story and detail you managed to put into what is basically a very good waifu-picker is incredible; I can only imagine what you'll do with a bigger project.
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>>54541836
I'm really glad to see your build (Calladan *is* awesome), but
>I had to make up
I'm confused why that's a bad thing; only so much of the personality can be put down, and it's a fun imagination exercise, or at least I hope you had fun.
I also wouldn't claim that this is a proper "waifu" CYOA in many ways, though I don't mind anons referring to it as such.

>>54541853
A few. But in answer to the implied question, here's one "skill" build.
>Power: Farsight
Note that power is not an explicit choice given, but the text at the beginning mentions that you can develop any *one* of the inborn talents that any of the choices has. So, I'll develop Ellyn Hancey's farsight, confused at first as to why I'm having such strong gut feelings, but mastering it in time.
>Mentor: Lei; there's no end to the number of non-magical skills that she can teach me, even if she might mock me at times, it's out of love.
>Lover: Sulvora. That kind of responsibility and duty is very attractive to me. Druidic powers and "face" ability is strong too.
>Rival: Umur Sanzig: Good to have a notable mage, and I'll compete with this guy over magic/no magic, but still be friendly. Going to try to hook him up with Lei or Ciara in time.
>Friend: Ciara; I love her spirit, she's a powerful front-liner, and I hope to rekindle some hope that she can have a long life.
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>>54540225
Tok, how does it feel to be back?
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>>54542010
>So the player just ends up being the same class as his mentor?
No, it's easy to miss, but at the beginning it says you can have any one innate ability that any of the characters listed has; they don't have to be in your party. It will certainly be *easier* to learn skills that people in your "party" has, but nothing stops you from going to the mage academy for a while, or whatever.
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>>54542078
Forever is a long time, anon, But I hope I stick around until just before I wear out my welcome. But thanks.
>>54542097
My first CYOA was actually a much bigger project than this. It was Dream of Genie. People seemed to enjoy that until I meddled a bit too much, so maybe a small scope is best.
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>>54541595
>in the last slot there is that White Queen piece the narrator keeps referring to,
I-I think I need an explanation on that one. Is it supposed to be some form of symbolism?
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>>54542138
If it's the one I'm thinking of, I immensely enjoyed that one, too. I can see the similarities, now that I'm thinking about them. Was that the one where people were pissy about the "impossible to avoid bad end" that was supposedly implied?
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So who's Tok exactly?
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>>54542046
Don't worry, they look old. They're probably both dead by now.
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>>54541986
what happens if you take the queen as a rival and her as your ally?
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>>54541986
I really want to impregnate her.
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>>54541986
Sounds adorable. I'm glad I went for that option.

I'm the one who made the build with King as my partner and Rook as my rival. Is it wrong that I think those two would be an amazing couple?
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>>54542138
>People seemed to enjoy that until I meddled a bit too much
Nonsense you clearly have a gift with this it would be a shame to squander it. Mistakes can and will happen, but in the end the final product is an amazing piece that has been enjoyed by many anons.
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>>54542161
Like someone pointed out, that option is essentially the only form of immortality offered Pawn's entire gambit (if Pawn is really Queen, it's super mysterious after all) is to make people tell stories about chess again, like the anecdote in Secret Gift. To get people to care again. You and her share a story because of her marble queen and your marbles. But, again, only if you want that to be true.
>>54542163
Everyone has a right to their opinion. But yes, initially there was concern that I had presented an unwinnable scenario. I'm happy you enjoyed that too, though.
>>54542193
As Pawn, she wouldn't be able to stop herself from helping you achieve your goals and genuinely give you her best advice. As Queen, she'd put all of that out of her mind and fight you as hard as she could. In between, there'd be a lot of running around and trying to keep plates spinning, sort of like how she reacts when you suggest playing the game at her place.
>>54542223
As long as the lights are off, and you're under the covers as a married couple.
>>54542251
> Is it wrong that I think those two would be an amazing couple?
All's fair in love and war.
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>>54542278
>As long as the lights are off, and you're under the covers as a married couple.

Marriage is a given, but I definitely want to see her face while railing her.
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>>54542276
I'll try to keep that in mind. Thank you for the encouragement, I appreciate it.
>>54542368
That's lewd, anon. But you're not wrong.
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>>54540675
EVN was probably your best bet.
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>not reposting the oc that people are talking about
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>>54540585
I think the reason they don't go anywhere without each other is because they are leashed to each other.
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>>54542278
Yeah, cool. I think you could dip your toe into the pool of more complex CYOAs again, now that you have another notch on your belt.
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>>54541601
I want him to get over the fact that people WILL "be mean". We have far too many exceptionally thin-skinned authors
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>>54541667
Explicit information > Author clarifications > Implicit information
Straight up contradicting implicit information makes you look like a hack though.
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>>54542448
Are you blind, dog?
Lead dog is holding the leash in it's mouth.
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>>54542278
well the here's my build

Where to?
>My place-it's comfy and her cat will want her to visit

Strategy
>FOOLS MATE!- caused by the cat...really
>Play dangerously- gotta try different thing to throw her off

Lost and Found
>Break The Cycle-gotta know when my wild plays aren't working and it will help me stay unpredictable
>Long Live The Queen-my unpredictability will be legendary

Aim For The Top
Ally- Pawn
Rival-Queen

I will use this ally/rival ting in a couple of ways. First to get to know all about her. Secondly to get to know all about how she plays. And lastly to unbalance her so that I can finally take her white queen. Then when I beat he in the grande finals, and we're shaking hands after the match, I'll propose to her and reveal that this my master plan all along. The whole plan was to hide the fact that I was going to ask her to marry me.
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>>54541986
Everyone knows the patrician choice is Queen as an Ally and Rook (The AI I think) as a rival.

You can work together to fight against the AI scourge.

Then you ask out the Pawn.
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>>54541865
Please remember that SDA in fact will lie just to hurt you.
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>>54542518
Don't forget Long live the queen, you two need to be a mysterious duo that together sparked the desire for more chess and become legends.
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>>54538263
Failed to hook me and I lost interest about half way through. Too bad, it looked like it could have been interesting.
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>>54538370
strong vanilla fetish
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>>54542455
Here's hoping, then. We'll see what the future brings.
>>54542489
That sounds super cute, ending scene especially.
>>54542518
>>54542582
VHSes are still around in the CYOA, though on the way out. Fast forward to "now," who knows what those rankings would look like with you working together, as opposed to the ones in reality?
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>>54542278
Either I'm really stoopid or that immortality thing is really damn subtle. I can kind of see it now, but I don't know how that anon figured it out.
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>>54542429
>Where to?
My place just seems comfortable with the messy room
>Strategy
Playing dangerously sounds like my style
>Lost and Found
Clear the board will be useful if i screw myself over sacrificing pieces
Secret gift sounds like it will help forming the situations for sacrificing pieces
>Aim for the Top
Partner Queen
Rival Pawn

I think working together with your rival is the most interesting option here

I also really want to tease her over her "secret"
maybe say something like having fallen in love at first sight with queen just to see her reaction
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>>54542278
First of all
>But, again, only if you want that to be true.
who wouldn't want that to be true? As long as the implications aren't some actually horrific stuff, I don't see why anyone wouldn't. Though the existential dread your last cyoa gave me made me revisit one of my favourite novels, so that is nice..
Also, are we talking actually immortal or 'immortal in the hearts of the people'?
The former would definitely be useful, because I'm probably not going to be able beat the queen or any of them without it.
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>>54541030
>Stats:
Strength 1
Speed 3
Resilience 0
Aptitude 3
Intuition 3
Charisma 0
Will 2
Stealth 0
Love 0

Strange Journey

>Traits:
Wuxia
Gunslinging
Stunting
Acrobatics
Exotic Wielding
Espionage

So… I kind of evolved into a Jason Statham character. Or an amalgamation of them.
Cool, but weird.
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>>54542846
>not telling queen how much you love pawn
you were so close
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>>54539809
That's cats you fucking ultranigger

Dogs are bro tier
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>>54543022
Dogs can do that too, though it's more on accident.
They lick their (dead) owners face. No reaction => panic, so they may get frantic and bite. This leads to them potentially tasting blood and the rest is history.
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>>54538511
>Sunrise
>Rain (Practically a flood of rain)
>Cramped
>Bookshelf
>Bed
>windows
>Animal (Ragdoll cat)
>Radio
>Hot drinks
>Mobile games
>Ice cream

All I want is to play Bravely Default while listening to old timey radio and the rain. Is that too much too ask?
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>>54543022
Both of them do it actually. I'd be willing to bet any animal would.
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>>54541030
>Heroes have 4 traits associated with their background and only 2 with all the other together.
>2 with all the other together
What does this mean?
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>>54539196
>>54539312
>>54539441
Dare I ask what the hell happened?
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>>54541073
>pommelberry juice
Sweat, or cum?
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>>54543739
/tg/ broke Tok's heart

He was precious. We don't deserve his love.
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>>54543667
That you're supposed to pick 4 of the 5 traits associated with (i.e. on the same column as) your chosen background, and any combination of two traits from the other two columns.
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>>54542754
>subtle
A charitable way of saying obtuse, but I appreciate it. I'll have to work on my communication.
>>54542904
Well, a lot of people liked the comfy tones. I don't want to go in and mess that up with a bunch of sadness. But yeah, it'd immortality in the hearts of the people. Physical immortality from playing chess might be a bit too much. But be more optimistic about your chances: you have a very dedicated teacher.
>>54542846
>>54542954
All this Pawn bullying. Poor girl!
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>>54543837
How... how did you break through my secret code, anon?!
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>>54544122
I was reading all sorts of innuendo and delicious coincidences that made me think I was getting erotic winks from the author.
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>>54544149
It's true! I'm known for my erotic winks!
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>>54544224
Don't indulge them, they'll just get aroused and unruly.
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I found an oposum, and it was actually dead.
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>>54542954
>telling queen how much you love pawn
Flawless. If this were an anime, that would have to go down, with MC professing that his love for Pawn is what keeps him going in the tournament, and he must defeat Queen because he can't let Pawn down by losing here and now.

And the plate-spinning finally comes to an end when Queen surrenders the White Queen Piece at the end of that match?
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>>54540018
https://pastebin.com/A5Wjh40J

Whew... that took a while but I feel like I actually... designed something.
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>>54541073
>the truth is sexist
Did plebbit make this?
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>>54544233
>aroused and unruly
just the way I like my women
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>>54544294
jokes on you! or is it...
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>>54544321
here, have a "pommelberry", it's... just a piece of fruit.

>>54544290
>Did plebbit make this?
In this world, men and women have equal magical potential. Consider that an author elaboration, if you're willing.
Oraran believes that women are inferior in magical potential. He is objectively incorrect in at least that fact, without getting into any discussion of physicality.
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>>54544266
Ah dang now I want a heartwarming chess anime.

Complete with over the top dramatizations of various fantasy armies fighting each other every map.
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>>54541549
Rapture
Knowledge and Answers
Found a Friend
The Voice
The Signs
Rage Against the Heavens
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>>54544369
Why does that make him a misogynistic sexist? Doesn't it just make him wrong?
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>>54544745
Why are you getting so worked up over a character being called sexist?
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Pretty fuckin Gary Stu build

>Kingdom
Iron Islands
>Professions
The Blade - Higher Education
The Quill
>Gifts
Tools of the Trade: plate armor, shield, and steel warhammer
Tools of the Trade: Valyrian steel longsword
Giant's Blood
Grace and Beauty
>Companions
Ashara Hewett
Muwari Vaballatha
>Curses
Chains
Disfigured - facial scar
Wanted
Without a House

Basically a Euron Greyjoy kinda guy, but less of a massive dickbag about it. Minmaxed combat potential with some good soft skills to boot. I'm an ugly fuck but I've got a good handle on it and can generally win people over. Being so easily identified does not help when hunted by the throne and slavers but I should be able to handle it.

Let's say that Without a House happens right around the time of the Kingsmoot and I flee the islands shortly thereafter. This means that neither Ashara or I are at the Shield Islands which will help avoid some awkwardness. Having been 12 during the time of the Greyjoy Rebellion I won't have much real reaving experience which goes along with the not being a massive dickbag thing. It's not an option listed, but instead of the armor I might choose a sweet galley instead of armor for my first Tools of the Trade.

While in Chains I assume I will make a fantastic gladiator. Spectators will come to see the hideous brute from some savage islands on the other side of the world and they'll stay when I start eulogizing my enemies in verse.
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>>54544745
It says, specifically, that he is *not* a misogynist.
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>>54538511
>Time
Midnight

>Weather
Rain

>Theme
Rustic Modern, bit of Industrial

>Room
Bed
Fireplace
Pool

Christ, this is tough. I want so much more.

>Companions
Human, variable

>Gifts
Candles
Alcohol
Inflatable Furniture
Plants

The plants will be kept well away from the candles
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>>54544838
Why are you projecting emotion onto my questions?

>>54544860
My mistake.
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>>54542429
This thing is cute as fuck. Author did a solid job on the atmosphere.
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>>54541030
>Stats
Strength- 1
Speed- 1
Resilience- 2
Aptitude- 0
Intuition- 1
Charisma- 3
Will- 1
Stealth- 3
Love- 0

>Background
Clash With Evil

>Traits
Gunslinging
Espionage
Witch Hunting
Wuxia
Acrobatics
Survivalism
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>>54544984
She's not a thing, dude.
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>>54538263
>Seaon
Autumn

>Flame
Blue

>Powers
Rekindle, Mastery, Instinct
With Blue flame I can already fly just fine

>Kingdom
L'Ran
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>>54544009
Thank you.

>>54541030
>Abilities
Speed 1
Strength 1
Resilience 3
Aptitude
Intuition 2
Charisma 2
Will 2
Stealth 1
Love

>Background
Clash with Evil

>Traits
Witch Hunting
Wuxia
Gunslinging
Espionage

Performance
Acrobatics
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>>54545203
I see you are also an anon of taste >>54545045
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>>54540516
If you were had studied genetic engineering and mixed your pupper with a turtle or something it could live for like 1000 years.
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>>54544841
A CYOA of Ice and Fire: (+3 Blessings)
Seven Kingdoms:
>Gender: Young Boy
>The Free Cities: Ruling House - Large and Profitable Enterprise (-2 Blessings)
Seven Professions:
>The Coin: Higher Education - Beginning with Substantially More Money (-1 Blessing)
Seven Gifts:
>Touched by Magic: Minor Illusion Magic - I Intend to Learn More
Seven Companions:
>Corton Penrose
Seven Curses:
>None

Money and magic~
An easy and comfy life for me~
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>>54538263

>Season
Autumn

>Flame
Green

>Powers
Form, Instinct, Rekindle

>Kingdom
Draeli

That... ended suddenly
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>>54541030
Stats: (+12)
>Strength 0: Peak Human
>Speed 0: Peak Human
>Resilience 0: Peak Human
>Aptitude 0: Peak Human
>Intuition 4: Conceptually Perfect
>Charisma 4: Conceptually Perfect
>Will 4: Conceptually Perfect
>Stealth 0: Peak Human
>Love 0: Peak Human
Background:
>Strange Journey
Traits: (+6)
>Animal Husbandry
>Resistance
>Survivalism
>Performance
>Witch Hunting
>Camaraderie
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>>54544841
You call that a Gary Stu build? Watch this.

Kingdom
>Beyond the Wall

Profession
>The Blade, Higher Education (2 Blessings Left)

Gifts
>Animal Companion
>Targaryen Blood (1 Blessing Left)
>Touched by Magic (0 Blessings Left)
>Tools of the Trade, Valyrian Steel Spear (-1 Blessing Left)

Companion
>Corton Penrose

Curse
>Without a House (0 Blessings Left)

>You should have acted.
>They're already here.
>The prophecies told of their return.
>Their defeat was merely a delay,
>Til the time after Valyria fell,
>When the sons of the North would spill their own blood.
>But no one wanted to believe,
>Believe they even existed.
>And when the truth finally comes,
>It comes with winter
>But, there is one they fear,
>In their tongue he is Dovahkiin:
>DRAGONBORN!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x-wQmxGRvsk
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Hey, where's a guy gotta go if he wants to jack it to some smutty CYOAs?
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>>54545604
>where's a guy gotta go
I'd recommend a private bedroom.
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>>54544285
This was really neat to read.
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>>54545626
Okay, but to what www. do I direct my internet browser on the information superhighway to find jackable material presented in a CYOA or CYOA-like format?
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>>54545604
/trash/

Not just insulting you, that's actually where they are right now.
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>>54545593
>>Tools of the Trade, Valyrian Steel Spear (-1 Blessing Left)
>Not making it a sword
>Not making it Blackfyre or Dark Sister, the two lost swords of the Targaryen bloodline.
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>>54545646
Oh you know that makes perfect sense actually thank you.
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>>54545666
It was originally, but I was looking through my image folders and saw Kargan Dragonlord and thought it was too perfect.
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>>54545235
Cool. I felt kind of trapped into some of those choices, honestly.

I liked the flavour of the Strange Journey Background the best, but Clash with Evil had the 4 most interesting/useful traits and the best Ability synergies.

Our different ability profiles actually mean we are very different heroes when it comes to our traits and which are dominant, despite how similar our trait list looks. For example, your top traits are Espionage at 6, Survivalism at 5, and Performance at 3 (nothing else above 2); my top traits are Witch Hunting at 4 and Wuxia, Espionage, and Acrobatics at 3. Your build emphasizes different traits, is more effective at the top of your traits, and decreases gracefully from there and clusters at 2; mine starts lower than yours and clusters around 3.

I envy your 2-points superior Stealth a bit and your 1-point superior Charisma a lot.

You:
Gunslinging 1
Espionage 6
Witch Hunting 2
Wuxia 2
Acrobatics 2
Survivalism 5

Me:
Witch Hunting 4
Wuxia 3
Gunslinging 2
Espionage 3

Performance 2
Acrobatics 3


One criticism(?) I have is that the more Resilience you have, the less you need the traits that draw from Resilience.
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>>54545673
>>54545646
>>54545604
Did they kill the /cyoa/ thread on /d/?
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>>54545642
Thanks, anon :)
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>>54538511
I like it, but feel the lack of some furniture and toilet among options.
I'd go with:
>Sunrise
Looks nice, provides some energy, gives one will to start doing things
>Clear Skies
Nice and pleasant
>Modern/Grand mix
Functional, modern style but with a bit of space and that impression of lasting since and for centuries.

>Bookshelf
I like reading
>Electronics
Magical, always workign and dependable PC I assume? Awesome.
>Desk
Need somewhere to put my PC on/by. I really hope it comes with a chair though I worry it doesn't, since each piece of furniture is an option.

>Companions
A few of different types possibly. If only one type can be done, a few different fantasy characters, perhaps. It really depends how sizeable the room is.

>Pillows and blankets
I couldn't choose bed despite wanting to, this will allow me to prepare a sleeping place.
>Baked goods & alcohol
Just need some food and water for my dimension to allow me at least partial independence from external world
>Plants
Herbs and decorational plants, maybe something edible to complete diet of baked goods.

Would really enjoy general "soft drinks and simple, varied meals" option. But eh.
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>>54545854
Pretty much
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>>54541030
Resilience: 4
Charisma: 4
Love: 4

>Background
Strange Journey

>Traits
Animal Husbandry C
Resistance R
Survivalism R
Performance C

Paragon RL
Camaraderie CL
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>>54538666
Color me interested and provide links.
>tfw no cute doggirl will ever loyally and devotedly wait for you, no matter what
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>>54545917
I wonder why? It seemed to be getting along marvelously the last time I checked in (ages ago).
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>>54545954
They deemed it not /d/ related enough. They also got rid of caption threads and the erotic lit thread. Only images with little to no text are allowed now for some reason.
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>>54545838
Pure autism.
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>>54545954
/d/iscussion was banned years ago, every so so often they go through and get rid of thread types that are mostly about talking, make a fuss about it and then start to ignore the board again.
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>>54545981
>>54546004
So it is actually relegated to /trash/, now? Sad. Is /cyoa/ here also super prude mode?
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>>54546004
boo
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>>54542429
Why is this so good? Something about the writing, the dialogue. It's just that right amount of cheesy. A bit wordy towards the end, but otherwise, fantastic.

Reminds me of older days.
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>>54539622
>Was he not self-banishing to plebbit?
Too full of himself and doubling down to show that anons actually got to him, needing very hard to prove everyone all the time that he's just glad he trolled everyone and he's not butthurt that people who were feeding his ego till some time ago called his recent work crap.

At the same time, while having enough ego to shit around, too vulnerable to admit he did fuck up somewhat, it's no big deal and he'll live and learn moving on from that point.

>>54539622
>I want to be with you.
>tfw you'll never have qt CYOA-making waifu with whom you could create wondroud, fantastic scenarios. I know you're not a waifu anyway, but I can dream.
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>>54546030
Well, people have posted fetish CYOAs with the images cropped and the mods seemed to be okay with that, sometimes.

For now it will stay in /trash/. I think it's gone there and come back though, because it really is a matter of the mods having a fucking fit briefly and then becoming disinterested again down the line.
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>>54546030
>Is /cyoa/ here also super prude mode?
No, we share big part of community with /d/ so to expect only prude mode is retardation. In fact, many full /d/ CYOA were posted here in the past, just censored.
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>>54546090
Anon sounds like they've returned from a long hiatus to find things significantly different. Pretty reasonable to question if /cyoa/ had also changed for the worse.
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>>54546125
No problem with that. I don't question them wondering about things. I just answer and say why, including that "retardation" part which I guess can be misunderstood as accusation it wasn't meant to be.
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>>54546090
With explicit images a non-option, I think I'd prefer lewd CYOA with titillating but safe images over white squares with erotic text under them.
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>>54546030
Most good lewd stuff is still made by and for /tg/.
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>>54543022
Hmm, pork or steak flavor?
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>>54546173
Thank god. This thread, while good, has been rather clean. I was scared.
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>>54546165
I concur
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>>54546165
True, building CYOA in a suggestive way that doesn't need outright censorship is an option that's worth consideration. Especially since it's not too hard - you can even risk it with nudity as long as no genitalia or nipples are visible.

At the same time, I'd say that there are certain CYOA and choices that would loos worse without fully explicit images. But in such case, it's not a big deal either - posting them in /trash/ and linking them here worked before, as did uploading them in general elsewhere and sharing the links.
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>>54546206
Personally I find pics that hide more than show to be hotter
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>>54543194
>>54543649
True, possibly, though dogs do it far more rarely than cats. In case of dogs it may be an accident and even then the dog will only go for it once very hungr. In case of cats, it's a much more common occurence.
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>>54546165
You could always just go the text route
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>>54546185
Comes and goes, sometimes people post lewd, sometimes they don't.
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>>54546280
Or my personal favorite.
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>>54546319
Lavender is really good.
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>>54540956
Mentor, Lover Friend and Rival CYOA:
>Mentor: Lenth Alchus - Whisperer of Ishtu
>Lover: Mithrodae Deford - Runic Calculator
>Friend: Alenso Asodil - Artificer
>Rival: Evala Harvest - Soul Sorceress

I choose to become a mage. For my inborn gift I choose a spark for magic similar to my rival.
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Could anyone upload Traveller's Tale and its Allies Extended DLC!
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>>54546444
NO
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>>54546448
B-but anon. Please?
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>>54546325
>>54546319
I could never get into it. Like most of the CYOA based upon "just build your body" it doesn't provide enough of potential goals and challenges for me to really care about it.
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>>54546280

I wonder how hard it would be for a dimension hopper to get on Slut Life...

I think about that every time a cyoa offers multiversal travel.
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>>54546460
NO
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>>54546460
Wasn't that uploaded a thread or two ago?
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>>54546444
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>>54546206
>certain CYOA
>links
Care to share said links?
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>>54546534
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>>54546365
This is hardcore magic build. Where da meatshields at?

Careful, your lover and your friend are pretty ineffective in a direct fight. You could easily get rolled if you aren't very cautious. If you can squeeze by and train up your power, you should be alright.

Thanks for sharing.
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>>54542429
[Where To]
>Local Cafe
I'm addicted to coffee and tea and I enjoy nice quiet cafes and just because I find the atmosphere both calming and entertaining with the kinds of people that you see come through.
[Strategy]
>Play Dangerously
I am ass at strategy, I played Fire Emblem Awakening and Fates on Pheonix Mode because I'm a giant baby man who only wanted to waifu another unit and force the other characters to bride ideal children, so my best chance at victory is relying on luck and hoping I can make my opponent make an even dumber move than I did.
Also, what the fuck are the 'NG' bits on the last two options?
[Lost and Found]
>Secret Gift
>Long Live The Queen
I like the idea of being able to outthink others since it seems to always be me that's on the receiving end. And being remembered, whether positively or negatively, isn't anything to scoff at.
[Aim for the Top]
>Training Partner
Rook
I just want to be her friend and talk to her about stuff that isn't solely about chess...
Maybe I can even beat her at some point so I don't have to worry about her being "retired."
>Rival
Queen
Okay, she seems like the best match for my apparent play style.
I may even do my own take on her theatrics and go full blown dramatic entrances and give myself a ridiculous title so everyone knows exactly who I am.

All in all, this was pretty fun.
Reminds me of the flashbacks in Welcome to the NHK meets Shougi Chuuni's Confidant in P5.
Pretty comfy.
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>>54546470
Your goal is to please your husband by being the bestest whore or else by spreading his cult throughout the cosmos.

Or you can be more ambitious and be a conquering warlord sloot.
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>>54546470
After the build your body part, there's items and spells, companions, minions, factions, and missions. I admit the goals and challenges aren't as fleshed out, but there's more than just building the PC's body.
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>>54546549
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>>54546534
Thank you, brother anon. May fortune and favor find you.
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>>54546562
> Or you can be more ambitious and be a conquering warlord sloot.

> Not playing a bonded bride in a loving, monogamous relationship with plenty of cuddling and hand-holding as the two of you conquer worlds together.

You sir. You are a blight.
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>>54546629
Well sure, as long as your husband doesn't mind getting Tleilat's sloppy seconds. He takes your first time regardless. It really doesn't matter, as long as you do your best to do something, you're serving Tleilat.
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>>54546319

Lavender and Exalted DLC are made by the same person, right?

I almost feel like the two are each two-thirds of the same CYOA with some mutual overlap, and that if the two were to be combined together, they would make for one unified, really good, and comprehensive CYOA.
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>>54546590
Anon. There is NO NEED to post this anymore. i hope you understand that. It's not a build template. It's for something that has long-since passed.
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>>54546671
That's a bold statement. What's Lavender's missing third, and what's the DLC's missing third?

Or is it a general feeling? I can respect that. No work is perfect, and a near miss is more frustrating than something that's merely close.
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>>54546534
>>54546549
So now we boil down to the final questions.

Who is best girl?
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>>54546561
>Also, what the fuck are the 'NG' bits on the last two options?
If you perform the first Fool's Mate, you get put onto New Game+. From there, you can decide to play for real, or try the same thing again which puts you into New Game++.
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>>54541030
4 Speed
4 Resilience
1 Intuition
2 Charisma
1 Stealth
Fast tank is fast.

> No speed resilience combo. sad.

Strange Journey
Resistance, Survivalism, Harvest, Animal Husbandry.
Other 2 will be Wuxia and Witch Hunting

I run and hug things until they love me.
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>>54546672
I've still seen people make builds with it. Don't see the problem with posting it.
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>>54546725
What the hell does that mean?
Does that just let you take multiple options with each "NG"?
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>>54545938
>that intense specialization
Holy shit. Can I be on your team?
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>>54546703

I guess the word I would use is "endgame scenarios"? They're very good at setting up the rules and the constraints, but the endgame, and challenges that you face once you've completed rolling your character are non-existent. It almost feels like that feeling you get after you finish rolling a character from a PHB, and then you look around and realize that not only do you have no GM with which to pit your freshly-rolled character against, but the best you can do is compare your character sheet against those of others' and see how badly you failed to min-max your point buys. And then you also realize you're also a nerd on the internet with their dick in their hand/fingers in themselves.

Of course, this post is being written by one of those internet nerds typing one-handedly, so obviouly my opinion amounts to a pile of beans anyhow.
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>>54546809
It's part of a joke.

The Fool's Mate is called that because of how fast it ends a game, and the board can be reset easily after that. If the player willingly plays the Fool's Mate, the narrator resets the board for NG+. If the player does it again, it's NG++ and a slightly exasperated narrator.

There's no benefit, it's just funny.
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>>54546809
it's a joke
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>>54546844
You sound like you want to pigeonhole and force people into doing things you want them to do rather than giving them any sort of freedom to determine their own goals. I feel that's railroady and counterproductive to an enjoyable CYOA.
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>>54546785
>I run and hug things until they love me.
You need boobs for that.
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>>54546844
I get that. I suppose that's just a problem inherent to CYOA's though. There never will be a GM, unless you get crazy like Power Armor did.

All authors can do is give you a choice of missions, which have to be pretty general because of the varied set-ups players can build for themselves.

At least, I've never really seen a CYOA that gives really satisfying missions. Anymore, I feel that, if a CYOA leaves you wanting more at the end, the author did a good job. Like Stardust, or Dream Prince.
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>>54546865
Hmmm. I can see why you would think that.

But on the gradient between "on rails" and "wide open expanse", I feel like there's a happy bit of medium to be had. Maybe a few footpaths, instead of a rigidly-defined railway system.
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>>54546844
I felt like Lavender had plenty of potential plot hooks and inspiration for a wide variety of post-build storytelling for me. I had several builds with very different plans and goals for each of them. It's not all plainly written out in the options (and I suppose at some point you might as well ask why you're even playing a CYOA if you're just making stuff up) but it's fun I think.
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NEW BREAD WHEN
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>>54546940
When Pokemon Personified Plus+ comes out.
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>>54546940
never
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>>54546940
Don't urge hoggy to make the thread even earlier than he usually does.
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>>54546926
I don't want any paths to be forced on me. That's not what I consider 'fun'.
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>>54547014
Would you consider Lavender's Ambitions too confining, or inspirational for character goals?
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>>54546940
Never, this is the end my only friend, the end.
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>>54547031
Been there, done that. The sky isn't falling.
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>>54547027
One of them fit the kind of thing I wanted to do anyway, so I'm a poor judge in that particular case.
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>>54540823
Nope, Worst.

Lily attacked Maddison out of the blue one day and they were separated from eachother
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>>54546874
...
...
Boobs are resilient right?
>>
>>54541650
What's that comic called?
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>>54540228
My man. Shame ZTD was a pile of shit.
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>>54545070
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>>54547356
I really didn't need to know this.
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>>54538511
Awesome, I love Cuddle.
>Sunset
>Rain and Cloudy, alternating every week
>Rustic/Modern
>Bed, Electronics, Television
>lots of animals and a couple of waifus
>Baked Goods, Ice Cream, Mobile Games, Alcohol
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>>54546629
>lavender bride
>monogamous
pick one
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>>54547356
Well there goes my good mood for the week, thanks a lot anon.
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>>54546319
https://pastebin.com/VsNLFdGC
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>>54547913
>Orouboros Metabolism is pretty superfluous when it says you can feed off ambient cosmic energy
Right up to the point when you get a hostile ward placed on you, cutting you off of your energy source

>Is Rising Star Easy Mode?
Yes and no. You get points, yes, but you also life in interesting times from that point on...

All in all, though, I like your build. Interesting commentary, and you've got quite the imagination!
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>>54541563
Uh-oh! You seem to have posted the shitty one! Luckily I am here to correct your horrible mistake.
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>>54538263
Is this a new CYOA, because I like it. One of my favorite things is when a CYOA creates a world I want to run a TTRPG game in, and this one does exactly that.
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>>54548286
It's been here for a while. I think it was slightly overshadowed by Eternal's Rising, which came out like 5 hours after.
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