/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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If Acehld is still around

Would it be feasible to expand upon the Sorcerer Supreme template in the Myth n' Wonder DLC?
A worldwide magocracy modeled in your image effectively running the planet would be cool and unifying.

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C'mon anon, let's make a deal

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>>54524419
>Sequelitus
Can I make a sequel to World War II?

>>54524419
Fuck it why not?
>Powers
Inmortality
Money
Waifu
Telekinesis
>Fetishes
Manboobs
Buttboobs
Midas touch
Dickhead

I look kinda freaky yes, but i dunno maybe i try to go the trap route i will look less fucked up? Worth it though.

>>54524423
Gets posted every thread. I can't even tell if it's tok desperately hoping someone will see this and give him pity praise or a third party who just wants to humiliate him by showing it to as many people as possible.

>>54525054
that's just how he posts his cyoas

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>>54525110
>that's just how he posts his cyoas
This Anon understands me.

>>54524419
immortality, your fetish, manboobs, dickhead.

Since autogynephilia is absolutely one of my biggest fetishes, I'm going to use this option to be a girl. That nullifies man boobs (also there's nothing saying girls can't pick that/can't play), leaving dickhead as my only real drawback. I think that one should be manageable.

>>54520122
Occultist
Troll Family
Celestial Family
Power: 0 (9)
Knowledge: 5 (8)

>Demons
-Troll
Fossegrim in a Tool (Empowering Lute)
Huldra in a Tool (Agility Light Armor)
Gargoyle in a Jar
Etterkop in a Tool (Magic Absorbing Shield)
Jotnar in a Tool (Gloves of Strength)
Jotnar in a Jar
Ragnin in a Familiar
Minos in a Bound Body (Martial Ally)

-Celestial
Ishim in a Magical Construct x2
Muse in a Tool (Helm of Inspiration)
Chariot in a Dwarf
Virtue in a Tool (Healing Banner)
Seraph in a Tool (Magical Chalk)
Cherub in a Tool (Blazing Sword)
Vultare in a Tool (Bow of Light)
Baphomet in Possessed Human

>Perks/Drawbacks
Demonology 101
Wizardry
Multi-Discipline (Troll)
Permanence
Artifice
Hermeticism
Nemesis (Shade)
Martial Ally

I feel like a lot of people weren't taking advantage of the raw power offered by binding demons to tools. I have the basics in jars to power me up, while Ragnin works both to help me summon and offers me aid in regards to forging (all of my enchanted gear being forged). I work part time as a teacher with the rest of my time spent adventuring to discover new things. I use a set of light armor that is boosted with a Huldra's agility, a Bow enchanted with the ability to fire arrows of light, and a lute that can inspire my allies. I bound Minos into my friend's body, granting him a great tactical mind due to his massive intrinsic power. He uses my Helm created to inspire people, my white flame sword, my Banner that heals all around it when thrust into the air, gloves that greatly increase his strength, and a shield that absorbs magic. He's comfortable in person-to-person combat, but his abilities REALLY shine through when he is commanding or leading others.

Baphomet is basically my Teaching Aide and the Seraph Chalk is so I can write in the air, negating the need for a blackboard.

>>54525054
or a third party who just likes to shitpost and knows that it will make people mad

>>54525054
He did that with Nemesis before.

>>54524419
Immortality, Money, Waifu, Super Strength, Your Fetish(monster girls), and Sequelitis

Man Boobs, Uniboob, Tile Lover, Butt Boobs, Dick Head, and Lipples

All these drawbacks are pretty easy to live with and even open up some opportunities like having all my lipples beat box while I overpower monstergirls. Will live a nice life out with my free money and my waifu. The ability to produce sequels will go nicely with my money and immortality. The monster girl fetish will make life more interesting and will open up some neat avenues for sex play with my waifu she will be a cuckqueen.

>>54525562
>I feel like a lot of people weren't taking advantage of the raw power offered by binding demons to tools.
Well, i already feel bad for the demons that i jar i don't need extra guilt for binding then in tools. Pretty cool build though.

Haven't been here since Eronomicon, anything good come out recently?

>>54525779
Yeah, Tok's epic 'The End' cycle is being worked on!

>>54525779
The daemon cinnamon CYOA seems to have staying power.

Someone post the Harry potter CYOA

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OC here. Waifu-picked with light chess themeing. People were talking about it a while back and I decided to try my hand at it. I didn't want to spend too long on it, so it's still a bit rough (I'd want the "powers" to be better balanced, make the waifus more appealing, fix the tone and so on) so I might revisit it in the future if there is interest. I hope you enjoy it anyway.

>>54526082
Oh, who could the queen possibly be? I've got too much of a weakness for choosing the narrator.

>>54526301
It's extremely mysterious. Nobody could possibly tell. But unsurprisingly, I also have a weakness for narrators.

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>>54524419
What happens if I pick 'your fetish' to turn into a girl but also pick 'mind of its own'?
Is it a free power or do I turn into a futanari?

>>54526082
>Pawns promote when they get into the end of the line
>The most common promotion is to the Queen
>Queen is likely Pawn in disguise using her friend's dry ice trick.
It's the little things that make CYOAs like this great.

A+ content, anon. Keep it up.

>>54526082
>Cafe
>Play Dangerously

>Secret Gift
>Long Live the Queen

>Partner: Bishop
>Rival: Queen

There's something about the atmosphere of this one... I think you somehow managed to capture quiet coziness without leaning too hard into it.

Nice work, (You).

>tfw not enough realistic become trap cyoas

>>54526403
Thanks. Coming up with little details is one of the most enjoyable parts of CYOA making for me.
>>54526474
I tried to strike a balance with the tone, so I'm really happy it worked for you. Taking Secret Gift with those two is a great idea, since both of them are hiding something (or trying to).

>>54524423
What's all that shit? Is it some e-celeb drama I missed. Have we really fallen this low?

>>54526736
Some guy said he was rewriting Tok's Eronomicon because it was shit, Tok said he was quitting, and decided to post that CYOA. And the next. And the next. The less attention given to him the better.

>>54526775
That's what you get for engaging name/tripfags for any reason.

Any nice OC in the last 2-3 months?

>>54525562
Tools have the problem that they are tier 1 vessels, which means that they only get a fraction of the power of things like tier 5 demons. Admittedly, low level demons work well in tools, but if you're working with trolls or celestials then pushing up to a artefact or a halo and a higher tier demon is a lot simpler and can get you just as much power if not more.

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>>54524423
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>>54524525

>>54525921
Second this.

Lost my save of Necromancer, anyone got it on hand?

>>54526829
Yes.

>>54526829
There's a Four Horseman one that's comfy.

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>>54520122
So what's everyone's favorite demon type of fae, trolls, shades, celestials, and djinn?

Personally I'm fond of trolls.

>>54526082
Breezy Seaside

Play Dangerously

Cold Comfort
Long Live the Queen

Rival: Queen
Partner: Pawn

It'll be fun to see how she trains me to beat herself. Also, childhood friend/narrator a cute.

>>54526082
Her place . Gotta dig around and maybe I'll find something she'll get flustered over and lose her edge.

Play dangerously. I'm not a great player and making lots of piece trades against a superior player ends up more in my favor than playing by the book.

Break the cycle. Sometimes, the answer is just to throw things around a bit and see what happens. A sharp turn could throw others off the track.

Long live the queen. The only immortality option. Besides, even that can be used to my advantage.

Rival : King. Although I may not be successful, there shall always be a kingslayer awaiting their time.

Partner: Pawn. True kingslayers come not from nobility nor fame. Nay they come from the nameless and the forgotten. An unexpected spark. Quick to fade, or light all in it's path.

>>54526082
Black and White CYOA:
Where To?:
>My Place
Strategy:
>A Good Defense
Lost and Found:
>Secret Gift
>Shape of All Things
Aim for the Top:
>Partner: Knight
>Rival: Pawn

>>54524419
>waifu
>your fetish

>man boobs
>tile fetish

Man boobs and tile fetish seems relatively normal and I should be able to handle them without too many issues.

And of course, having my fetish being fulfilled does no good if I don't have the perfectly smug giantess to go with it, so I'll need to pick the waifu as well.

>>54526907
second this

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Does anyone have that one Djinn CYOA?

>>54526082
>Head to "My Place"
a little funny and a little charming
>Show off the first Fool's Mate, then Play Dangerously
I may not win this time, but if I do the same thing every time it won't improve.
>Break the Cycle, Shape of All Things
Understanding is critical. I was tempted to take the Secret Gift over Break the Cycle, but I'd rather not bring the pain and those two seem to go together to do so
>Rival queen, partner Pawn
This is goign to be FUN. I could jsut as easily reverse it, of course

god DAMN this one is comfy. Like I'd actually watch an anime the emotional drama of two friends over a 'high stakes' chess tournament with a lot of quiet moments with Narrator/Pawn/Queen and "Anon" experiencing both the climb up the charts and the bonding of two people with some secrets, some not unpleasant history, and maybe a few unspoken questions. And aside from Narrator/Pawn/Queen's double life there are some neat plot hooks with King and the idea of AI and....

I'm overthinking this. Thanks for posting.

>>54527806
Which one?
I made one a while ago, but it wasn't that popular, most anons like the art genie ones.

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>>54527971
Post some art genie ones

>>54526878
You get a lot less 'bang for your buck' using a T5 vessel. Rebirth Artefact is 40 ritual points, a Magebreaker Artefact would be 35 ritual points.

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>>54528134
I don't save them.

I do have the one I made though.

>>54526082
>Where to?
Local Cafe. As much as I want to go to the beach, It'd be a little awkward playing on the sand. At least I can get some coffee and cake while I play.

>Strategy:
Fool's Mate! Fool's Mate!! Fool's Mate!!! Then buy her something expensive to apologise and actually try. Play Dangerously.

>Lost & Found:
Secret Gift and Cold Comfort. Mainly a tactic, to use my craftiness as a means of setting up my moves in the right way, and not betraying whether they've gone off as planned or not with my expressions.

>Aim for the Top:
Pawn as Partner, and Queen as Rival. My dear friend knows an awful lot about chess, considering she's the only other member of the club. So, who better to work with... and who better to beat~! Cue smug laughing. But, truth be told, I'd play 'em all if I could.

Real nice CYOA, fampai. The theme's awfully rose-tinted, I think, and that coupled with the retro undertone makes it comfy af. Reminds me of Chihayafuru a little.

>>54526082
I want to fool's mate with her.

>>54528188
You made this? Cool, I'm a fan. I've always wanted to know exactly what the limits on Minor Djinn are, though. E.g., can they do impossible things like reduce your physical age or change your body, or is that in the realm of Major Djinn?

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>>54528188
And the mystery box.

>>54526082

"My Place" - Get into position

Play Dangerously - I have to throw her off balance

Secret Gift - The plan is perfect

Clear the Board - I'm almost recovered from the disaster

Partner: Bishop - Maybe she can help me set it up

Rival: Pawn - Soon, I will be victorious!

End Game: I don't care about any stinkin White Queen piece, once I defeat her.... I will finally take my damn marbles back!

There I was, innocently playing with my marbles, and some cruel monster tricked me out of them.

I lost my marbles!

But now, NOW she shall see...

>>54527136
Celestials are cool but everything about them is OP as fuck
Trolls are the most relatable by human standards and go for the 'might makes right' kind of feel
Shades are kind of lame in the early tiers but the later concept demons have some cool stuff going on
Fae and Djinn are just dicks, 0/10 would not bind

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Here's your chance to reveal to world your inner garbage by picking Mox.

Those with taste can pick Nero.

>>54528188
4 WISHES HERE WE GO

IMMORTALITY

MAGIC POWERS

ABILITY TO TRAVER TO OTHER WORLDS

THE TASTIEST FUCKING STEAK AND THE BEST WINE IN THE MULTIVERSE FOR ME AND MY BUDDY ADIL

>>54528188
Djinn CYOA:
>Loving Djinn

>>54520122
>Occultism
>Shade
>Dark Mindx20 for 20 stars and all my ritual points
>Infused Powerx10 for 10 intrinsic power and no stars

Enjoy being a god.

>>54524352
Can the highwayman stop bullets by standing in front of them? They're vehicles too right?

>>54528188
>loving djinn
>immortality and prosperity
maybe not as good as the other options, but living long and well is a pretty good deal, all things considered
could switch out the second for "happiness" since they can't alter the mind, though

>>54528668
Anon what are you gonna use all the power for? You have no demons.

Anybody got a cozy town/life cyoa, perhaps with modern/future theme's?

>>54528710
Becoming an archwizard because the cyoa straight out says they are stronger.

>>54526082
Man, this CYOA is so comfy. Great job anon. I love the sad/disappointed look when you play into a Fool's mate 3 times.

>>54528608
>tfw djinn only eats well-done

>>54526082
What does NG++ mean

>>54528828
That you are not the sharpest tool in the shed.

>>54528851
Thanks

>>54528828
New Game Plus Plus.

Fool's Mate is a move that relies on your opponent being a complete dumbass, so the 'game' ends quickly. Since it ends so fast, she can reset the board again making it a New Game+. Then you can try to Fool's Mate again and fail, meaning she has to do it again.

It's a joke, dear.

>>54528568
IF YOU PICK NERO YOU GONNA GET FUCKED BY

HUEG

HORSE

COCK

>>54528943
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BK5QdJ715zw
It's not just dumbasses.

>>54528701
I'm pretty sure they mean *literal* vehicles. Otherwise the highwayman could theoretically stop anything or anyone that could arguably be a "vehicle" for something, which would include just about anything or anyone in the world.

>>54528568
Still picking Chalice.

>>54528568
The writing is so good that the creator had to spell "pure" twice to really persuade the reader.

>>54528992
Yay!

>>54528301
Minor djinn do more minor things, and are restricted to wishes you'd consider not worth wasting a wish on if you had a limited number.
Like you can wish to change your body, but you can't become immortal or anything like that.

>>54528188
>>54528304
Fallen Angel the best, together we shall purge.

Will waifus ever become a reality in our lifetimes?

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>>54529571
Definitely not in mine.

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Made this for practice. I've never made one before so this is my first time. Only took a few hours to make. Is making quick ones to practice a good idea?

>>54529296
Couldn't you effectively get immortality by constantly changing your body to a younger one?

>>54524419
>money
>your fetish

>man boobs
>big knees

A few weeks of saving up and I'll be able to afford a surgery to get that shit removed, after about 3 months I'll have enough to customize my sexbot (muh fetish)

Is there any good place for animu-styled fantasy art other than the typical boorus? I've kind of hit a wall, here

>>54529628
We, you -are- talking magic. Perhaps they could keep you at a certain age as you suggest, but an individual only has so many days on the earth a-la Death Note and when your time comes you're done.

Unless that isnt' the case, but given that the author said that you need a Major Djinn, I suspect that something like that is behind the scenes to keep you from working around that limitation.

>>54529640
pixiv

>>54529687
It's such a pain to navigate, though. Most of the art seems really amateurish. Am I just browsing it improperly?

>>54527136
I find each family has it's good and bad parts but over all my personal favorites are djinn = troll > celestial = fae > shades.

>>54529625
>Is making quick ones to practice a good idea?
Absolutely, it certainly helped me a lot.

>Spaghetti marinara

>Beer

>Hot Sauce

Thanks, cooking doll!

>>54529628
I'd say they'd know what you're up to, and wouldn't let you get away with it, or they wouldn't be able to change your age with the intent of cheating death.

>>54529698
Well no you're not really browsing it improperly, unless you are willing to pay for the ability to sort by popularity, and aren't doing so. Pixiv is basically japanese deviant art, and doesn't really have a better average quality than deviant art.

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>>54528568
Chalice definitely.

>that Persis kink tho

>>54528753
You need some one to teach you wizardry since you don't automatically know it. So you aren't so much a god as some one who would make a very promising apprentice if you can find some one willing to teach you.

>>54529625
Barbie you fucking slut

>>54529571
They already are, they just date men better than you

>>54529753
A quiet morning. Lots of existing infrastructure and hopefully plenty of time for me to download basic stuff like maps and stuff. Servers should also still technically work so if I ever reach them it's even possible to get them running and access the rest of the database. Textbooks and libraries still exist in perfect form as well of course.

First things first is obviously collecting Knowledge, since eventually the electricity and internet will cut off. After that it's about searching for solar panels, batteries, generators, etc. Well, not that it truly matters unless I can somehow clone myself or somehow get more humans though.

Perks: Strong Infrastructure , Found a friend. Honestly only the extended water/electricity/etc is useful.

Friend: A breeding pair of dogs I guess. They'll probably find other dogs to mate with eventually too.

Drawback: Haunted. Eh. Doesnt seem too bad. It might even seem endearing once the mental breakdown sets in eh? I mean, maybe its a nice mysterious figure.

Goals: Find the truth / survive I guess. It's not really a big deal if I find the truth or not. But it would be nice to find and figure out some cloning facility or whatever. I mean we are pretty sure we have the technology, it's just that we arent allowed to do real testing. Maybe find sperm/egg banks as well? I'll probably be reading a lot of scientific papers I guess.

Note, theres not a lot of love for quiet morning huh? No special choices at all.

>>54529927
Waifus aren't 3DPD, you silly crocodile.

>>54526775
Speaking of, has anyone seen the Eronomicon re-write yet?

>>54529739
>I'd say they'd know what you're up to, and wouldn't let you get away with it
That kind of implies that the djinn is against you instead of being your friend, but several of them seem like they *would* be your friend.

>or they wouldn't be able to change your age with the intent of cheating death.
Well, if their powers allow for changing a person's age, I don't see why it should matter if immortality just happens to be a side effect of that. Maintaining a certain body should definitely fall under the Lewd Djinn's power, at least, because that's definitely something that's "strongly tied to a sexual purpose", and she seems like one of the djinns who would be more of a friend (and a lover), so she'd probably be willing to creatively interpret the rules for your benefit. "Oh, my master's not wishing for immortality, he just wants to keep looking good, which is totally within my power. It's not my fault that that also just so happens to give him physical immortality."

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>>54530193
Stop trying to rules lawyer the CYOA you dumb cunt, if they 'unage you' it's more likely that they repair any mental side effects caused by your aging as well as the processes that cause you to look like a corpse and don't actually turn back time. Just follow the rules of the CYOA and shut the fuck up.

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Kinda wish there were more to this one

>>54530193
>That kind of implies that the djinn is against you instead of being your friend, but several of them seem like they *would* be your friend.
Or that they have certain rules and laws they have to follow, and they're not willing to break them.

>>54530193
Even if they can change your age, you will still die if you are killed.

>>54530149
I vaguely keep an eye on the trash thread and I havent seen it. I've seen him taking some ideas or adding to the kink list or whatever but yeah. Probably still in the real early stages. Dont expect eronomicon+ anytime soon I'd say.

>>54530699

People die when they are killed anon.

Not him but technically, if you change your body fast enough you could just heal wounds with it as well. Like regen a new body with a new heart if you ever get shot in the heart. I guess you'd have to be conscious for it though.

>>54530518
Be the Fighting Game Villain CYOA:
Origin:
>Conquering Dictator
Name:
>Wizard King Eldridge
Theme:
>Magic
Techniques:
>Rocket Fist
>Shadow Step
>Electric Aura
Mini Bosses:
>Victor Von Carovitch
>Mallory Le Fay
Heroes:
>Agent White

>>54529625

>Spaghetti
>Wine
>Ketchup

Solid first effort my friend. As with all things, practice makes perfect. I'd reccomend experimenting with a few different types/genres to see what fits best for you. All OC is generally well recieved.

Yes I have ketchup on my spaghetti. Only god can judge me.

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>>54530905

>>54530518
Origin
>Outer God
Name
>Anathema
Theme
>Ruin/Entropy
Techniques
>Flight
>Izuna Drop
>Electric Aura
Minibosses
>Victor Von Carovitch
>Edward Drake
Heroes
>Damien

>>54529625
>Curry
>Beer
>Chutney

Fuck it, I'll wait for a good Thai curry. Looks like your image got cut off at the bottom, but you've got a good foundation for future CYOA goodness.

>>54530518
This could definitely use an expansion. Maybe bring in some Arcsys games, or at least more Tekken.

That said,
>Master of the Dark Art

>Shadow Step
>Lightning Fist
>Ground Slam

>Shino Atama
>Mallory Le Fay

>Corporal Jensen
>Damien (and take Mind Over Matter)

I figure that movelist would make for a nice, arrogant boss. And I would spam the shit out of those teleports.

>>54529625
Home made pizza. Pepperoni, black olives, sausage. Sparkling water. I'm a simple man, I'd be jazzed to see it made. Nice first time, anon.

>>54531220
>his could definitely use an expansion
It really could
A couple of more origins and a few special moves would do wonders for it
I mean it is a shame that the only way to get a projectile of any kind is to take Shujinko's special

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>>54531250
Did someone say pizza?

>>54529625
>ugly as hell
>literally just a menu

I don't want to shit on you, but even for a first try you should try harder.

>>54531283
FROZEN
PEPPERONI
SAUSAGE
ONIONS
PEPPERS
COLA

>>54526082
>Secret Gift
I recall the amount of grains starting from one, not two (and the picture you used seems to agree).

>>54526082
Are there cute boys in this?

>>54531283
>no pesto topping
>no cherry tomato slices topping
>having the gall to imply that peppers are anything but trash-tier

At least he has the correct opinion about root beer.

>>54526362
a crazy clit, maybe

>>54526082
Waifu you piece of shit you know I fucking suck at chess you cunt

>>54528188
It's boring because it's a pick one, Scientist. We've been over this. You can make one build and that's it.

>>54527136
Djinn all the way.

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How do male centaurs fuck human women?


It's for research purposes.

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>>54531283

>>54531819
http://oglaf.com/heterogeneous/

>>54531857
Literally came here to post this.

>>54526082
>Local Cafe
You know that our games take so long to end. I would love to order something while we are playing.
>A good defense
I might get a little bit too attached to my pieces but hey, it works
>Clear the board&Long live the queen
The best games are never those what are won smooth sailing i am right?
>Partner: Queen
I have a thing for theatrics do ''you'' think she would take me to be something like partners in crime?
>Rival: Rook
How i could settle for less can you imagine what people would say if i managed to beat ''c:/blue''? Well probably i won't but i will put up a good show regardless.

>>54525562
The magic chalk is amazing.
>>54526878
It gets exponentially more expensive though.
What do you think? 50 magic items or one artefact?

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>>54531946

>>54525054
Whatever it is I must say that while I liked Tok's earlier works (barring, yes, kinda crappy eronomicon), he kinda starts to look pathetic now. The whole "look how much I troll you now!!1" while he reposts boring work over and over, while still lacking balls to really go and from time to time even going "Ex-Tokhaar Gol here". At this point he comes off as petty and quite salty at that, losing last shreds of respect and proving people hating him earlier when he didn't deserve it - right.

>>54525562
Oh I forgot to say, Chariot acts as a personal assistant for my job at the school. Both Chariot demons and Dwarf vessels seemed really suited to it.

>>54532055
And the Ishim guard my office. Yes I created two constructs just to protect my college office.

Ain't no one sneaking in to change their grades. Ain't no one.

>>54531283
>Scratch
>Pepperoni
>Root Beer
>I don't drink alcohol.

>>54529625
From the technical side - not bad. Simple, won't impress anyone, but it doesn't look like shit and it works. Only slight improvements necessary - like being mindful of how brighter parts of the background mess with the text, making it unreadable or making sure that images fit well.

Amusingly, content-wise it's disappointing. Normally budding CYOA makers have plenty of great ideas but absolutely shitty layout but in your case, it's the lack of originality and interesting ideas. You basically just choose ingredients, each paired with largely uninteresting, biased, hardly helpful or really descriptive blurb - more like opinion piece, like if one wouldn't know what each ingredient is and how well it works. If there's no character to give such opinions for some reason, you really should leave it.

In the end, the worst fault of your work is that it fails to fulfill the most basic, fundamental role of CYOA - to stir imagination. It's just a set of pizza ingredients and side-stuff. No background fluff, no scenarios, no powers or effects that would create a story. Just "what ingredients you want on pizza from this very limited pool of choices, often lacking absolute basics?". Anyone who cares will have more immersion just going to closest convenience store and buying themselves some cheap, frozen pizza.

>>54532103
Shit, looked at >>54531283 writing this. As for your CYOA, since you wanted feedback:

Very simple background (or even lack of it), with images that sometimes look cut, misaligned (not just inr elation to each other but the text, too) and at times in shitty resolution. Doesn't look good and it could look much better if you'd just improve that.
Also, if you plan to use eye-hurting font colors like that pink stuff, add borders.

Content: It's passable. Choices are described okay, though you forget that tastes differ so it's kinda arbitrary when it comes to stats. Would be nice if there'd be a table of effects at the end regarding to the stats, with some results, otherwise it really does nothing for imagination when someone just gets a number "Your overall taste is 12 points". No comparison, no relation, no particular result for it. Halfway to "on a scale of 0 to infinity, your food was BDFASD". Doesn't tell one anything.
Like in case of the previous CYOA, make sure that your work suggests or encourages certain scenarios with results of one's actions. Here it's mostly "you get such and such food, enjoy".

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>>54525562
>Shade Nemesis: Bloodfinger
Shade Contract
Patron: Hemolin

>Vampire, Posession (Himself) (51)
This makes his intrinsic power 4.
>Vampire, Posession X3 (24)
His vampire brides.
>Ifrit Convert, Bound to Body (Himself) (16)
Since he needs something that's good against both your schools.
Some pyromancy should work. Also:
>Convert Morgana, Monster (0)
>Shepard, Bound to Body X3 (-12)
For each of the brides.
>Stalker, Bound to Tool (-15)
The ring of unseen pathways will find you.

>Outlaw (****)
He's a vampire, out to kill a tenured professor. You bet he's a criminal.
>Pulling Rank (******)
>Nemesis (You) (*********)
Since you took celestial as an extra family I think I can give him three stars for that.
>Martial Allie X3 (***)
He turned the heroes of humanity into monsters. These are his vampre brides.
>Converting the last stars (0)

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>>54532245
>nemesis builds are more interesting than player builds

>>54532326
Cyoa doesn't give you any enemy to defeat. Nothing specific to build towards.

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>>54524352
Post your favourite cyoa right now and tell me what's good about it.

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>>54532441
It allows me to flesh out my uchronic fantasies.

>>54530518
>>54531220

I definitely wish you make an expansion

>>54530905
>>54530914
>Age: Adult
Why would I want to become a kid or an old guy? Adult is the obvious option.
>Techniques: Tyrant's Sword Style, Sublime Force, Nine Summers Prana, Black Typhoon Prana
Fuck you, I'll cut you in half with fire-sword attacks from the other side of the room.
>Weapon: Enormous Weapon, Truesword
Get this... I have a sword... inside a giant sword.
>Lair: Mountain Fortress
Because the lord of an army should have a castle to be based out of.
>Minion Perks: Informant Network, Trustworthy Minions, Minion Teamwork
I've got an organized army of disciplined, loyal soldiers who have the respect of the citizenry.
>Allies: Loyal Child, Bloodthirsty Ronin, Ritual Attendant
So, I've got an heir, a loyal samurai warrior, and a waifu.
>Drawbacks: Forbidden Love
So, like I said, I've gotten myself a waifu.
>Nemesis: Rival Sect
There are, of course, forces that seek the destruction of my army of honorable warriors.

>>54526082
Are each of the Lost and Found choices somehow connected to a partner/rival option? I only ask because Knight's boxer relative made me think of the boxing gloves shown for Break the Cycle. And the "family stuff"under her description relates pretty well to "friends and family, if they're still around, can sweep up the ashes when it's all over." Did one of her parents die in the ring?

Just a thought. Maybe I'm reading into this too much or missing something about her character.

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What's your favorite WIP that will never come to fruition?

>>54532892
I hope it's not mine.

>>54532892
Mine desu.

>>54524352
>Identity Thief
>Changeling
>Pocket Watch

Literally become an unsung superhero, replace all manner of bad people, put them in really bad positions (Make a Narco march down to the police station and plant a bullet in the wall.) and then immediately fucking stop time and haul ass while reverting to my own form. Depending on how the Identity Thief rules work, it becomes way better.

I can also pretend to be rich people and make them funnel me money, I can also totally fuck whoever I want merely by possessing their loved ones. I wouldn't even really cause harm doing that because for all intents and purposes I would pretty much be them for the time being.

>>54526082
>>54532767
Might as well post my build while I'm at it.

>Local Cafe
I was gonna pick Local Park until I saw "impromptu class." No. No, that's the opposite of fun. No. The cafe sounds nice since we can buy refreshments. And why am I taking care of the narrator's cat? I'm allergic to cats; she owes me big time.

>Play Dangerously
After a game of Fool's Mate for fun. I'm not one for elaborate plans, so I'll stick to a series of gambits and hope for the best.

>Cold Comfort
>Shape of All Things
Not much to say here. I think these two are the most applicable to me. Though maybe I should take Break the Cycle instead of Shape of All Things.

>Knight (Partner)
>Pawn (Rival)
Damn it Pawn, stop trying to seduce me. My heart can't take it. I hope Knight's not actually a guy. Something about her seems off, but I can't put my finger on it. Anyways, I'm tempted to swap the two around or replace Rival Pawn with Rival Queen. Pawn will probably remain a partner of sorts so that might not be a bad idea.

Breddy gud, and I don't even like chess.

>>54532982
>not impersonating world leaders and reshaping society to your whims
unambitious desu

>>54533062
I don't want to be a supervillain, I want to be a superhero who also questionably steals money and fucks taken women.

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>>54533126
Is it still cucking if you use shapeshifting powers to turn into their partners?

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Some OC.

>>54533162
According to Zeus, no.

>>54532982
My nigga. Body theft is the ultimate comfy fetish. It's pretty rare in cyoas though.

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>>54528568
How can you be this wrong

>tfw you pick Nero

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>>54533182
>cyoa insults you

>>54529625
Curry and Rice
Plain Water
Chutney

A good curry and chutney are worth the wait, and water's the perfect beverage for any meal.

I think you're falling into the trap of having stats for stats' sake. You don't need numbers for a cute fluffy CYOA like this, unless they have some meaning.

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>>54533189
>remember, it's not rape if you're a swan.

>>54533230
At least the wizard cares about you enough to laugh.

>>54533230
fuck off, frogposter.

>>54532892
The one SDA got banned over. Thanks, SDA.

>>54533182
Can the golem move the bound item for you? If not, can the apprentice?

>>54533280
SDA was banned? When did that happen?

>>54533230
Dumb frogposter.

>>54533317
No. No person, machine or creation under your direct control can do so. Someone else has to do it of their own free will.

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>>54533182
>Unbound

>arcane bolt (1)
>steel skin, perfect form, haste (7)
>dominate, counterspell (15)

>planeshift

Time to gather more powers. Let's get a Stand in Jojo. Fetch myself some chakra in naruto. Learn nen in HxH. Entrap a demon in kuroshitsuji. Should I risk entering the Uminekoverse to become a full fledged Witch? Maybe I'll just call it a day already and retire in a new victorian setting as a rich, foreign noble.

Honestly, I'm familiar with a ton of works but when pressed thinking up places to harvest powers is really, fucking hard.

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>>54533182
How does undying interact with the perfect form? Will I eventually become pic related, but with less ki and more magic?

>>54533334
Only on the Discord, unfortunately.

>>54533391
You'll remain a perfectly healthy physically ~80 year old with minimal health issues, but you are still going to be very slow and frail compared to even a healthy normal person who is in their 20s or 30s.

Is it considered a 'dick move' to create a cyoa with images and formatting etc. Using another's jump chain cyoa if taken ad verbatim with reference?

>>54533182
looks good! I'mma try to make a comfy build
15
>Bound
To an big-ass uncut black diamond. (Those are tough and look pretty ugly, less risk of someone trying to steal it.)

Lvl 1 Spells
>Flames
I've always fantasied about conjuring flames in my hands. It's just cool.
>Stem Bleeding
Is that redundant with Regenerate? I'm guessing it's still useful to not die immediately.
>Least Shifting
Crowned eagle motherfuckers!

Lvl 2
>Perfect Form
>Boost Strength
10 times tougher means I'm more resistant to damage, correct?

Lvl 3
>Regenerate
>Dominate
Need a minion to move and protect my phylactery.

Enchantment
>Planeshift
Fuck this gay earth.

So I'm not much of a wizard, more of a super strong dude who can regenerate and control flames. Also turn into an eagle! Once I've hidden my bound item into a secure place I'll open up a portal to a medieval fantasy world.
My quest: find an elf waifu!

>>54533432
/cyoag/ generally doesn't care about /jc/.

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>>54533432
You realize 99% of cyoas are made with stolen images on pirated image editing software referencing existing works?

Steal away, I say.

>>54533429
What if I take Boost Strength and Haste as well? Perhaps Steel Skin and Perfect Sight to be safe. And Regenerate to be triply redundant.

>>54526082
What is this made by Doll-anon? I've only seen her do the thing with the narrator's feet being on top of the text box.

>Local park
>A good defense
Fool's mate was adorable options, even if they are non-options.
>Clear the board
>Cold comfort
Depressive options are the best.
>Training partner: Knight
>The latest theory is "goddess" but that's also silly. I don't think they're still around.
>That fateful AI chess match ten years ago
I don't think I've ever wanted to know more about a cyoa world as I do right now. We still have VHS tapes but there's AI!
>Rival: Bishop
For the variety and needing to beat unorthodox playstyles.
And ah shoot, you're able to pick the narrator. Dangit... I want her. She's nice, she's honest.

Jesus these characters are good. There's so much heart in them. They're actual people, not waifus whose personality and live revolve around you and what they can do for you.
But to be frank, while I love reading the descriptions, I don't particularly want any as a Partner or Rival. I just kinda want one to play with who teaches me when I make mistakes, and one to use as fuel to try my best and do battle with.

Now I want to play chess. I've only done so like three times.

This was excellent. Excellent way of dropping in story and plot and background without being too much, weaving it into the options. Nine outta ten. It wasn't even a problem it isn't self-insertion thanks to the delivery.
Could move the third line in the Strategy intro so it's on the same line as the others, and I think it would be better if Sea wasn't given a name, like the rest of the options.
God damn the presentation is good. Cold Comfort is perfect. Unlike all the other options it isn't filled out, the last line is moved in. Damn. I wish I were this imaginative. I want to write so much about how each option is good but I'll stop.
Only real downside is how often I've seen the image for Breezy Seaside

>>54533463
Regenerate can take a few hours to fix severe damage, you can still bleed out while that happens. Stem bleeding stops a wound killing you if it hasn't already.

10 times tougher means it takes 10 times more energy to inflict the same amount of damage.

>>54533500
That would undo most of the effects of ageing. You'd still look a little old though.

>>54533182
>Immortality: Undying
Fortunately, I can mitigate its effects!
>Level 1 Spells: Stem Bleeding
>Level 2 Spells: Boost Strength, Perfect Form, Haste
>Level 3 Spells: Regenerate, Dominate
Between Regenerate and my Level 2 spells, I can mitigate the drawbacks of my chosen immortality method. Stem Bleeding lets me shrug off otherwise potentially fatal wounds, and Dominate is an actual magic spell bought with the points I have left over.
>Enchantments: Planeshift
Why pick the waifu or more power options when I can go to another universe and get some myself?

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>>54533401
I'm here forever, nigga. Too many people love (and simultaneously hate) me here to give up that easily.

>>54533182
>Bound: Unbound
>Enchantment: Apprentice
>Apprentice always does what she's told, so possess indefinitely.

>>54524419

>Immortality
>Pre-cognition

>big knees
>tile lover

>get big knees surgically removed
>avoid tiles (or not ;)

>>54526082
So queens secret identity is pawn is it?

>>54533529
>You'd still look a little old though.
And it costs most of the starting points. But that's fine, I like passive-oriented builds and being underestimated.

>>54533182
Here's my build:
>Undying

>Flames (14
>Stem bleeding (13
>Perfect sight (12

>Steel skin (10
>Boost strength (8
>Perfect form (6
>Haste (4

>Regenerate (0
I really want Blink but I'm not too keen on the drawbacks. I'd give up Perfect sight but I fear I'll go blind due to age at some point, unless Regenerate can prevent that.

>Planeshift
Time to romp around in fiction land!

>>54533720
Other way around.

>>54533744
I mean that depends on how you define "Secret Identity". Superhero shit usually uses that for the mortal/normal identity

>>54521773
what are your other two?

>>54533182
>Unbound
Spooky ghost is way better than the other choices because you don't have to worry about anything other than finding another suicidal guy to possess
>Lvl 1 spells: Arcane bolt, Perfect sight, Mind hand, Stem bleeding, Shield
Mostly useful stuff, and a gun.
>Lvl 2 spells: Blink, Steel skin, Perfect form, Haste, Boost strength
A muscle wizard basic pack nothing more nothing less.
>Lvl 3 spells: Regenerate, Counterspell, Fly, Blast
A nuke, Flying, and a way to not die. Pretty much essentials.
>Planeshift
I am going to get the fuck out of this place.
>Apprentice
She is cute and i could use her as a way to get a body quickly if nothing is available
>Drawbacks: All
I am greedy.

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Gwenpool cyoa? Does it exist? Should it exist? Discuss.

>>54533182
>Undying
It's the self-sufficent immortality
Stem Bleeding (14)
Perfect Sight (13)
Perfect Form (11, counters the drawback of Undying)
Scry (7)
Regenerate (3)
Go back to buy Haste (1) and Mind Hand (0)
The enchantment is tough between Planeshift and Teleport but I think, ultimately, Planeshift wins out.

I don't do a lot of flashy stuff, but I think I've gotten a good deal.

>>54533182
>sacrifice
>Planeshift
>Go to some universe with better immortality options
GG ez no re

>>54533182
Unbound
Dominate (11)
Steel Skin (9)
Boost Strength (7)
Invisibility (5)
Haste (3)
Mind Hand (2)
Perfect Sight (1)
Float (0)
Teleport
On Call
Plane Shift

Dominate solves the main problem of being an unbound spirit. Assuming I don't need a body to cast spells, I'm set. If I do, then after I get my first body it'll be trivial to just dominate someone and make them surrender their body to me when I ask. I just have to make sure not to run through them before I get another victim lined up, and given my bodies become physical demigods that shouldn't be too hard.

It shouldn't be too hard to get that first body, either. I bet there's plenty of prisoners who would give up their body for a day to get out of jail, for example. Or people in war zones who would give up their body to save their children. I can even live up to my promise and give it back, because I'll have a new one.

>>54533861
No, only if you're going to make it, no.

>>54533182
>Sacrifice
I'm forced to pick one and I can choose not to use this one.
>Mind hand (14)
>Perfect sight (13)
>Blink (11)
>Teleport (10)
Don't need anything else.

>>54534052
>I'm forced to pick one and I can choose not to use this one
>Not relentessly tormenting criminals in their sleep until they agree to give their body away

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>>54533429
A fair price for immortality.
>>54533529
Huh

>>54533182
>Undying
Getting older doesn't sound so bad when you have magic.
>Flames, Arcane bolt, Shield, Stem bleeding Perfect sight
>Steel skin, Boost strength, Perfect form, Haste
>Blast, Regenerate
A rather generic setup focused on survivability and offensive power. It also counters the downsides of aging, which is a very nice bonus.
>Apprentice
Got all the power I wanted, so I might as well get my hands on this qt3.14. No ulterior motives. No siree.
>Dogsbody, Assassination
Assuming I survive being an assassin and an assistant I should be able to lead a peaceful life of an immortal pervert. Might go full hermit should I ever have the means.

>>54534052
I'd pick up some of the level 2 buffing spells and regenerate at least. You can't say no to curing any disease within a day and being peak human.

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>>54534012
I'm going to make it.

>>54534091
What it is even going to be about anyways?

>>54534091
Ok. I'll play it if it's good, but until then this is my last (you).

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>>54534081
>A criminal body
You don't know where it's been

>>54534117
Pfft there is plenty of bodies to take i am sure i will find a good one eventually

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>>54528188

>Friend Djinn

Benefits

>Unlimited wishes
>They feel personally responsible for my safety and won't let me JUST FUCK MY SHIT UP on accident
>Perfect embodiment of a friend no matter what so essentially a soulmate that can grant and experience wishes with you

Only one downside..

>Grants wishes how she believes it should be granted to best benefit me as her friend

This could be a plus. I am just a human so what the fuck do I know about wish granting?


Such an obvious choice for me.

I imagine it would be like Fairly Odd Parents but even more awesome

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>>54534104
Well I need time to think. Could be sponsored by Gwen, she'll send you on a quest and reward you appropriately. Trying to write in character as her would be a good writing exercise for me. Maybe it'll be completely unrelated to Gwenpool, except that she'll be the "host" of the CYOA. Like how the genie art galleries are unrelated to genies. Maybe every CYOA I make from now on will have Gwen in it as a sort of trademark. Lots of possibilities.

>>54534081
Yeah no I'm not an edgelord.
>captcha related: Supermar when

>>54534088
I don't want to be given gains, I want to earn them.

>>54524352
Requesting assistance from helpful anons. I've been looking for a CYOA that was made pretty recently. It was similar to zodiac brides but was set in a futuristic empire that had a very "fall of Rome" esque tone to it. Each waifu had different reputations with the factions and the writing was great. Thank you for your help!

>>54528188
Yours was the CYOA that glanced at once that got me to stay in these threads and lurk here often. Thanks.

>>54533401
>>54533334
>>54533280
SDA isn't banned? He posted yesterday?
>>54534164
>thin thighs
Why draw her with exposed thighs if you make them sad?

>>54534198
Of Damsels and Devistation, I think. I can't post it now, but It's in the "yet another cyoa archive" Google drive linked in the pastebin if you want to post it yourself.

>>54533996
Dominating someone requires them to give consent of their own volition. Dominating them into doing it won't work, though bargaining will.

>>54534175
>Implying that taking bodies for a couple of years to do some good deeds with them and then leave is edgy and won't benefit them in the good run

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>>54534235
They're sometimes drawn thicker. Sometimes not. She's not a fatty though.

>>54534257
*possessing someone requires their consent, not dominating.

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>>54528568

Nero is the only choice.

>>54534267
I want to waifu her now.
But give her plumb thighs please.

>>54534295
"Muh THICC"

You people are disgusting.

>>54534263
>relentessly tormenting people until they give up their body
Literally what Lucifer, the Christian embodyment of evil, did in Supernatural
It's edyg.

>>54534317
Alright i will tone it down to bargaining

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>>54534295
If you loved her like I do you'd accept her how she is.

>>54534310
I'm sorry for having a sex drive.

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>>54534295

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>>54534351
I do love her. I'm a sucker for hair with a gradient
I'm going to read this now it better be good

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>>54534392
It starts great and gets better. Bitter people on /co/ that haven't actually read it will claim otherwise, but it's only cuz they haven't read it.

>>54533182
Undying

Arcane bolt (14)
Perfect sight (13)
Boost strength (11)
Perfect body (9)
Blink (7)
Haste (4)
Regeneration (0)

Enchantment: Planeshift

Drawback: on-call

Extra enchantment: bonus points

Extra spells
Fly(4)
Flames (3)
Mind hand(2)
Steel skin (0)

>>54534392
>>54534422
So what is Gwenpool? Is it a spinoff of Deadpool?

>>54526082
Cafe. A comfortable place to play, and it looks like the cafe owner might enjoy our support.

Fool's Mate! Just kidding, let's go for The Best Offense. If you sit around waiting for the right opportunity to happen you might just wait forever.

Secret Gift, Break the Cycle. I feel like Break the Cycle is a necessary counterpart to Secret Gift. If you waste too much time spinning your wheels then you'll never notice what's right in front of you.

Partner: King, Rival: Rook. It'd be a shame to let this game we've been enjoying for so long just fall by the wayside, becoming nothing but an intellectual challenge for software designers. It'd also be a shame to let their last match end with such heartbreak. It's tragic when two people who could share something magical let it all fall by the wayside.

Anyway, I guess that's game. It doesn't have to be the end of our day, though. Want to catch a movie?

>>54530082

Was going to post a build but you chose all of my answers so I will just le upvote your post

Any CYOAs where I can be an Onii-san WITHOUT incestuous implication?

>>54534422
Well modern /co/ likes girl thor and squirrel girl, so their opinions are suspect

>>54534257
I mean, it does say they'll have absolute loyalty and do anything under their power to fulfill my wishes. That does technically include consenting to giving up their body. If you're the author you might want to clarify in a revision.

>>54534450
From googling "gweenpool" and clicking the wiki article on the right:
>Gwendolyn "Gwen" Poole is a fictional character who appears in American comic books published by Marvel Comics, originating as an amalgam of Gwen Stacy and Deadpool on a variant cover of Deadpool's Secret Secret Wars #2, one of twenty variant covers published due to the popularity of Spider-Gwen from June 2015.

>As a result of the character's popularity with fans, Marvel produced two stories featuring Gwenpool as a character, a backup story in the series Howard the Duck, and a one-shot Gwenpool Holiday Special. Despite the name "Gwenpool", the character has no relation to either Deadpool or Gwen Stacy

tl;dr
>Despite the name "Gwenpool", the character has no relation to either Deadpool or Gwen Stacy

>>54534450

Nah, despite the name she's not a relative. That is literally just her name. Gwen Poole.

She's one of marvels several dozen dimensional travellers. In her case, from a universe where these characters exist as movies and comic books (Basically our world).

It's marvel's take on those 'Wake up in a fantasy setting' books japan likes. If people treated you as just as crazy as you sound when you start ranting about being in a fictional world.

Weirdly enough, the series made Batroc the Leaper one of my favourite marvel villains in a long time. Yes, he's the guy Cap will take down in three minutes. How many other people can say they lasted even one with him?

He also has an interesting speech about the idea of being a fictional character in a story with no set ending. Just how disturbing a concept that endless purgatory is.

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>>54534450
Basically a girl from our Universe (Gwen), somehow is transported into the Marvel universe. She doesn't want to die a horrible death as an extra, so she dons a costume and decides to have some fun. No relation to Gwen Stacey.

PLUS Gurihiru art!

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Oh Discord, you never change

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>>54534496
Fair enough. Here's the revised version.

>>54534567
Now that's what I call salty.

>>54534562
I am diggin her blush showing through her mask

>>54534567
hhe sounds like a nutter

>>54534567
>furry icon
yet another reason I'm glad to never go there

>>54534593
Literally
>People are having fun!
>Stop having fun!
>>54534621
He spammed a lot of it.

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>>54534392
>>54534422

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>>54534567
Why is he upset about Gwenpool? He can kill her if he wants, but doesn't make a lot of sense. I'll still make the CYOA.

>>54534644
I'm not salty at all. I enjoy Gwenpool. For context, I had been planning to do that, then discarded the idea as too much work. If she's in the current awareness, though, it makes more sense to bring that idea back.

>>54534644
Some kiddos hate others liking things he doesn't like.

>>54534539
In my headcanom, she is our lord Moot's long lost sister.

>>54534590
Also fair enough. I'll swap Dominate for Regenerate, then. I figure there will be plenty of desperate parents who will give up their body for someone who can save the life of their child.

I think I'll also take Dogsbody and Perfect Form, just for an extra bargaining chip and because I don't want to have to get stuck in ugly forms without any ability to trade up.

>>54534590
>Bound: Voyager 1

>>54534800
>your soul gets slowly torn apart by micrometeorites

>>54534808
very, very, very slowly, though. Voyager 1 is still doing just fine, and will be intact for a very, very, very long time.

>>54534808
Hey, that's probably slower than any other bound object is likely to decay.

>>54534590

Unbound

Perfect form (13)
Blink (11)
Haste (9)
Regenerate (5)
Blast (1)
Perfect Sight (0)

Apprentice (Blink, Haste, Counterspell, Steelskin)

>>54534903
>>54534590

And y'know, I think I'll take On-Call to add Planeshift. My apprentice is immortal and I'll always be able to find someone to possess, so this world might get boring eventually.

>>54528188
>Loving Djinn
Knowhow and cando on making an immortality serum like the one in "Baccano!" but which also brings people back to their prime.
The ability to create and bestow superpowers like Hanten from Medaka Box.

>>54534590
So, the full build
>Bound: Voyager 1
>SPELLS
>Perfect Form, 2
>Steel Skin, 2
>Haste, 2
>Regenerate, 3
>Counterspell, 3
>Transform (Earth Elemental), 3. Easy escape from anywhere with dirt.
ENCHANTMENTS
>Planeshift
Obviously. Lots better dimensions to visit than this one.

My choices are fairly defensive in nature, in order to protect me better as I go dimension-hopping to pick up even more awesome powers.

>>54533771
well yeah
clark kent sometimes pretends to be superman
batman sometimes pretends to be bruce wayne

>>54534950
>Obviously. Lots better dimensions to visit than this one.
This stinks of the beginning of a "chain"

>>54534590
So is there no downtime to your spells?

>>54528188
>Choose the child djinn
>Get to be the little girl and become ageless by extension
GG EZ

>>54534989
Not unless it says there's a casting time.

>>54534961
And sometimes Superman pretends to be Batman.

>>54534961
>>54535044
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wBdUUThebwM

>>54524367
>If Acehld is still around
Almost missed this cause it's "acheld". I'm happy to listen to requests, but I'm afraid I don't understand what you are asking for. Obviously you *can* achieve what you are describing, in terms of establishing a magocracy, so what are you asking to be added?

>>54530905
>Age
The Youth
>Techniques x3
Dragon Tether
Cardinal Shift (pull with dragon tether, push with cardinal shift)
Sorrow Palm Style
>Weapons x2
Healing Salve
Poisoned weapon (sword)
>Lair
Pleasure Boats
>Minion Perks x2
More Minions
Covert Minions
>Allies
I ran out of time :(

>>54534567
>he doesn't know that they already had that in the comic

>people on /cyoag/ actually read shitty Mary Sue Gwenpool
Just when I thought your taste couldn't get any worse.

>>54534590
>Undying
It can probably be worked around.

Let's start at the high-power stuff:
>Planeshift
Always the most broken one when it's given, and helps avoid that whole "heat death" problem.

>Transform (Electric elemental)
I'm assuming that a 'magic elemental' is being too cheeky, but this offers fast travel, protection from mundane attacks, and basic offensive power at the very least, and potentially some basic technopathy (for things I'm possessing), avoiding the aging problems, and other miscellaneous benefits.
>Regenerate
Takes care of scars, broken bomes, and other aging-related (but not caused) frailties.
>Counterspell
Scry and die? More like not scry and fuck off.

>Perfect Form
There are 80-year-old martial artists that can still break bush league athletes with their pinkies, and that's disregarding genetic mutants - the humans with absurdly durable bones or strong muscles. In any case, it and Regenerate should work together to keep me wizened-but-useful indefinitely.

>Arcane bolt
Unless Least Shifting's second form ignores aging and other time-based effects (in which case a human form would invalidate Perfect Form), this is probably the most versatile thing to spend a point on.
Not sure if Stem Bleeding would be better, though - it only has a single use (stabilize them while Regeneration does its work), but not needing to try to cauterize wounds might come in handy more often than chipping through a heat-resistant wall.
I'd love to take both, but there isn't really anything else (beyond Least Form cheese) that I'd want to spend that last point from Dogsbody on.

>>54535062
Hehe

>>54524582
Sure, but without Nazi Vampires it just wouldn't be right.

>>54535629
>no alternative universe cyoa where hitler won and everything is nice and we get waifus

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>>54524352
>tfw you can lucid dream and make cyoas real

>>54535668
>Lucid dreaming to make CYOAs real
That only works with powerfantasies though.

>>54535668
how do you do it?

>>54535668
It's a good feel.

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>>54524423
>>54524450
>>54524471
>>54524499
>>54524525
Should someone make a rule about banning this shit from cyoa thread? It's not even funny anymore

please kys

>>54534643
His body makes Frankenstein's monster look like a model.

>>54535814
We can't get them to ban the fucking frogposters.

>>54535814
How about we first ban the fatposter who has admitted to start multiple shit because he's lonely?

>>54535645
Isn't that Man in the High Castle's America?

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Wish Servant sounds like a really fun option in my opinion.

>>54531912
For the cost of 50 magic items, you can put Ymir in an artefact and get more than all 50 of those items put together.

>>54535694
>>54535668
>lucid dream about your waifu
>do it so much she becomes a tulpa
>your waifu is also yandere
>you now have a yandere tulpa who does jump scare scenes at you when you're dosing off
>literally jolt awake when a creepy horror movie face screams at you about raping you forever and ever
not as planned.jpg

>>54531946
Outworlder
Survivalist
Star child
Carna
Contaminants
Grenade launcher, riot revolver, mechanized gloves
Transport hub

>>54533182
Sacrifice
Blast, counterspell, boost strength, haste, blink, arcane bolt
Bonus points, dominate, regenerate
Hunted, dogsbody, assasination, on-call

>>54534590
>>54534590
so fly goes from 200 kph to something like 127,000 kph?
thats a big range

or i suck at math
maybe both

>>54536041
You can go as fast as you want if you go high enough to leave the atmosphere. It's breathing that's the problem.

>>54526082
Solid CYOA, friendo.

>My Place
>Fool's Mate -> Play Dangerously
>Clear The Board, Long Live the Queen
>Aim for the Top: Queen

We shonen-protagonist now.

>>54536071
badly hand-made space suit here i come!

my corpse on the moon should be fun to explain when i rip my suit trying to flip over one of those chinese moon rovers like the asshole that i am

at least the nasa budget will probably go up
so thats nice

>>54536145
Take transform and become an earth elemental. No breathing needed then, so you can go to Mars and do the same thing.

>>54536144
>no rival
U what m8

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I made something quickly.
I don't know if I like it myself.

>>54535884
For real? Or is this just a story. I always considered tulpas counterproductive to normiedom so I never looked too much into it, plus the community is full of fags, but I've always found it an interesting subject.

>>54536221
I hate you for using that picture of the fat black tumblr women
Is there a reason not to max all stats?

>>54536223
yes for real, though it happens very rarely

>>54535884
Why did you make her a mean yandere instead of a loving one?

>>54536241
You only get twelve points.
It says so right there. Even if you missed it, that would be grounds for rereading it, not assuming you just get infinite.

>>54536262
i think she's just mad about me neglecting her

>>54536221
>4 traits with own background, 2 with other together
Sorry, what does this mean?

Also, max intuition. "literally without limit" danger sense. You can't be ever in danger, because you'll sense it way in advance, and just avoid it.

>>54536276
Don't do that then.

>>54535360
It looks awful. Like the kind of thing people only like because they want to fuck her.

>>54536278
Under each background there are 5 traits. Choose 4 from your own column, and 2 from the other two columns.

>>54536302
>Like the kind of thing people only like because they want to fuck her.
So, like most CYOAs?

>>54534590
Sacrifice gives you one day for every year you sacrifice. Unbound basically gives you one year for every year you sacrifice (but non-stackable). Unbound even gives you insurance in case you don't fill your tank in time.

The ratio just seems really bad. Basically you kill a healthy young person for one or two months of life. Then Bound isn't really immortality.

>>54529753
Rip Van winkle. Good way to go cold turkey on my internet addiction. I know a bit of out-doorsey stuff too.

Tools and Equipment. I'll get the essentials, then find somewhere to stay. There will be plenty of ruins, but only a few good tools.

Perks:
Found a friend: Cryptid. Some type of awesome Chimera friend/mount to hang out with/ride/kick ass on.
At Peace. Might as well enjoy myself
Survivalist (free) Will definately need this

Drawback: A new Predator. Time to hunt the greatest game of all. I think I can take it.

Goal: Beastmaster. Better to reign in hell than serve in heaven, or so they say.

can you post the spire/duskcity cyoa (whichever is first) or one of those really long pdf ones? I'm really bored

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>>54536243
Seems very silly to make a waifu a tulpa, to be honest. If I were to have a mini consciousness in my brain, I'd rather it be formed from my own thoughts and ideas.

Regardless, was there a specific technique you used? How often does it talk to you? Does it talk unprovoked? Can it remember things for you? Can it hold a conversation?

Also, how can it be tsundre? The entire concept of tsundere is something you know, and so by extension it knows it as well. Shouldn't that nullify it's "angry" thoughts?
>>54535751
Try a website called ld4all. Good community, good tips. There was ways to actively do something during sleep time to induce one, but for a random chance of passive lucids:
>Keep a dream journal
>Work on dream memory
>Reality checks
>Keep a consistent sleep schedule

Being a NEET helps since you have time to really wake up and remember in the mornings, but it's still easy even if ya can't.
>>54536302
But it isn't. Looks awful, stupid premise, but ultimately a good comic. Most that have read it are in agreement that it's good. Some that say it's bad genuinely don't like the style, but a lot are contrarians that think it's SJW pandering shit (it isn't).

>>54536278
Just because you know you're in danger that doesn't mean you can do anything about it.