/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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Spooky apartment.

Fresh ideas? Ok, here's one. Space ship and/or pirate ship CYOA. Not only do you make all the normal skill/item/training/history decisions for yourself, but all 4-8 members of your crew. Of course you're the captain and get more points to spend or decisions to make, but the idea is still you're not just making a character, you're making a crew.

So... what type of stuff would you guys like to see in this? Also, fantasy pirates (like One Piece) or space ships?

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If you had a yandere waifu, what kind of things would you want her to do to you? I need to add more options.

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Postan' cause I've got bad ideas and worse decisions to make.

>>53175810
Kill my boss.

>>53175823
>CYOA for ants

>>53175833
Shit, I misread that. Disregard me, I suck cocks.

New to /tg/. Do we not care about gets?

>>53175810
Stroke your ego. Make your enemies suffer and dominate the people around you (by being manipulative and/or very popular).

Doesn't want to make you a better person but instead makes your surroundings easier.

>>53175850
Anything suggestions regarding yanderes are welcome.

>>53175874
Oh, then I still say again for posterity. Add a high cost option of beating her. Beating her makes her stop harming others and harming herself.

What would you guys say to a WorldBreak cyoa?

Let's say our modern Earth collided with an Earth from another universe. Fantasy, Eldritch, Monster Girl, haven't decided on it yet. The two worlds are fused together, the Earth is made twice it's size and magic takes care of anything that would adversely affect it.

Someone given power by the Fracture, you gain powers and allies on a quest to either separate the worlds again, fight evil/good forces, or just fuck around in the new world.

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>>53176016
Sounds awesome, like exactly my kind of thing.

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>>53175823
>>53176022
>>53175842
Let's see if I can be slightly less retarded.

>>53175897
Some yanderes are already the type to accept any abuse from you as long as you stay with them.

Yandere is not inherently violent. There are several archetypes, only some are violent. The only requirement for yandere is for them to be hopelessly in love with the target, and for them to be insane in some way.

>>53175810
Clean my room. Do my laundry. Cook me food that doesn't come out of a fucking microwave. All the stuff I normally put off until it's absolutely necessary because I don't have the time.
It's kind of sad that was the first thing I thought of with all the possibilities

>>53175810
Play video games.

>>53175810
Regularly act clingy and demand physical contact/affection. Like a cat. Gets worked up and thinks you're cheating if you don't run a hand through her hair or rub her back often enough.

Maybe when she grabs your arm she digs her nails in just a little bit to make sure you don't forget she's there.

She would also try to isolate you, screening your calls and insisting that she be the one to go outside and get things done.

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>>53176016
I think I'm gonna make it.
Never done something like this, any tips?
Testing size

>>53176066
>>53175823
>>53175800
Oh sweet, combo time.

>The Gunslinger
>The Greatsmith
>The Far-Sighted
>The Bulwark
>The Slayer

>Improbable Ultratech Variable Projectile Kit, Pow Pow and Fishbones.

>>53176066
>Become the Saber
>Chaotic Evil
>Saber of Red: Wrathful, Tomboy, Immature, Cruel, Mischievous.

>Berserker Saber
>Female Saber
>Horrifying Impressions
>Adult Saber
>Double Extra Long Ahoge

>Scantily Clad
>Cosplay Outfit
>Skimpy Outfit

ST C, Agi A, Lck EX
End C Magic D, NP B

>Mad Enhancement EX
>Item Construction C
>Independent Action C

>Projectile Proficient EX
>Instinct EX

Noble Phantasm: Super Mega Death Rockets, comes in Anti-Unit, Anti-Team, Anti-Army and Anti-Fortress varieties. The Loose Canon can conjure a cartoonishly designed rocket projectile which may strike targets for damage expected of a rocket its size, but tends to work best on targets already weakened by bombardment previously. The anti-fortress and anti-army applications are rather self-explanatory, but the number of rockets called on scales to the number of targets; one or a handful results in one, but a city or large assembly of enemies results in a rain of such rockets all at once. (EX rank, counts as EX+ when targets are already weakened by any means to a degree of fatigue or injury.)

Mad Enhancement ramps up Jinx's abilities more and more as the destruction resulting from any conflict in which she participates increases.

>>53175810
Make sure all my needs are met so that I don't need anyone or anything but her. End goal being isolation from everyone else I know. I'd say from the outside world as well but that would be nice to experience together.

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>>53176333
>forgot the image.
I need to stop internetting for tonight.

>>53175765
Check out this sweet setup.

>Gothic Revival
>Upper Floors

>Abandoned Store
>Bar Between Floors
>Crazy Dan's Supplies
>The Apartment Gym

>Occupied Mirror
>Amazon Tandem
>Painter's Memento
>Desiccated Hand
>Ex-Tenant's Journal
>Local Channels

>Yarn Spider's Nest
>Bathtub Mermaid
>Ancient Witch Irina
>Bearded Chronicler
>Delving Adventurer
>The Chessmaster
>Demon Falfarafax
>Charm-Giving Lass
>Arm in The Basement
>Hallway Wanderer

>The Stairs to the End
>High Five Hands
>Give and Take Well
>Odd-Jobs Listing
>The Illustrated Stalls
>Open Door Day
>Bashful Haunt
>Hokousha Tengoku
>Gravity Anomaly

Just imagine a comfy, party filled, and chill life with the abnormal. Diving in with the adventurer from time to time. Sounds awesome.

>>53176469
Add Corner Grabbers and the Irregular Grocery Store.

>>53175796
Excellent! Time to fuck around!

I'm considering starting on that CYOA where you travel around with other anons, although it'll be a while before I can devote much time to it, and I'll probably do a quick and moderately dumb CYOA (maybe Puppies-vs-Dragons) first just to get the hang of the format. I can find some kinds of images for use in a traveling CYOA fairly easily, but I thought I'd ask for a few images for very unusual landmarks, along the lines of Carhenge, the Boll Weevil Monument, or the Biggest Ball of Twine in Minnesota. If there's a highly weird thing that I wouldn't think to look for and you'd like to see it as a destination, could you post it?

>>53176066
What happens when you stack high ranks of Eye of the Mind and Instinct?

>>53175810
cosmetically she should be completely subservient, but she always gets her way. It just happens that often 'her way' is to please/worship/whatever you.

She should have some sort of obsession with something easy you can give. Headpats, ejaculate, a nickname she loves to hear, whatever.

She should want to keep you satisfied to prevent any temptation, eg refusing to let you leave without a blowjob.

Sometimes punish you by locking or tying you up and refusing to let you leave.

She should want data on you. Everything from your favorite color to your present location. She might have various means of acquiring this data.

She has her own ideal for what the relationship is, which is strictly enforced. She has a sense of roles and proper place that she refers to often. ("I'm supposed to do this for you," "this is mine," "this is where I belong," "I'm your property" etc)

Jealous of pornography and refuses to let you look at it. Will offer pictures/video of herself, or just suggest you clearly need more sex.

>>53176656
At a glance it looks like pretty much perfect calculation of a combat situation in real-time with reflexes and reactions essentially becoming perfect counters to anything so long as it's within your ability to do so.

It also tells you instantly when you're out-matched, so hey you know if you can't win and whether you have a chance to escape or should use those lightning quick reflexes to light a cig before the unlimited baitworks kicks in.

>>53175711
>We need fresh ideas edition
No we need you cunts to make some shit

>>53175810
Conditioning. Yanderes should probably attempt to get a handle the target of their affection through control. Maybe it's a carrot and stick system, maybe it's emotional manipulation. It should be something that could be employed in public without raising suspicion. Ultimately, the goal would be to get the guy to believe that doing certain things would be wrong or hurtful toward her, and that he should avoid that behavior. Stockholm syndrome that has him believing that her abuse is normal and justified.

>>53175872
respect for quads and up on content
quints and up on comments

>>53177036
You mustn't forget that the devil's trips earns a mention if the comment was ironically mean-spirited. And the super devil's quads and ultra devil's quints are equally important.

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>>53175777
Holy Trips

I'm off to fight in the Drug Wars!
DEUS VULT

What are some interesting ideas you have for a CYOA?

>>53177292
linked to wrong post, I'll delete this in a minute.

>>53175766
What kind of traits would you get from a snake familiar I wonder? I can think of several possibilities.

>Guile or deception
Nothing to do with real snakes, but commonly associated with them in mythology, especially the Bible. Mainly because a snake is representative of the Devil.

>Bursts of speed
A snake can strike with lightning quickness, which would translate to bursts of movement and reflex boosts

>Thermal vision
Only applies to certain species, but finding a black one shouldn't be too hard.

Level 4 features
>Venomous Fangs
types of venom to include paralytic, deadly, and perhaps some other effects. Whether at will or restricted to the type of snake.

>Lamia form
taking the "animal tails" to the logical extreme. If the snake is a constrictor type it would be especially strong.

>Second penis
Ok so that's taking things a little too far, but for a witch(male) or male familiar, it's on the table.

>>53177135
I've got one that's nearly done, and another I had planned was a Magical dad CYOA.

In short, teen girls aren't pure-hearted like they used to be, what with internet and shit, and they're too frail and unstable, so dads start fighting for justice.

You get new powers, called dadly arts, costumes like sexy firemen and lumberjacks, and you can take an ex-magical girl to be your wife. You also get set up with a cushy job and your supporter animal is a total bro bear who drinks with you on weekends.

You have to follow the rules of a good parent to avoid becoming a fallen dad, and if you break your contract you become bald and impotent. Having more children and raising them well gives you more power.

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>>53175810
Find me a bf.

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>>53177313
>daddy cyoa

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>>53177135
Thunderbolts CYOA
You're the person in charge of the thunderbolts, a government run program that uses jailed supervillains for missions in return for reduced sentences. You have power dampeners you can activate so you can ensure they don't turn against you.

Choose from a wide variety of villains, and pick some missions to send them on, along with some things that might go wrong in exchange for some perks.

>>53175777
LSD. Her abilities mean she can effectively give me anything I can imagine.

>>53177373
And also extend your (perspective) lifespan, potentially infinitely.

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>>53177135
Omniscience cyoa

You know everything but you can't know everything at once. You need to dedicate a percentage of your mind to keeping the knowledge active and/or passive.

Example.
For 1% you'd know everything about there is to know about a single subject, like Law.
For 5% you'd know everything related to your own safety.
For 10% you'd know the current thoughts of everyone on the planet. Giving you global realtime mindreading.

Stuff like that. You'd design your personal brand of omniscience.

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>>53177323
You can't be gay after she fixes you.

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>>53177440
Making assumptions, huh?

>>53176016
>Monster Girl
Well, if that were an option, I'd just choose that and live my life as a massive slut for all the monster girls to pass around. But since other people are more creative than me, I suggest making that CYOA so they can do more complex things with it. It's a good premise.

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>>53177468
Never said you couldn't try. Never said it was wise either.

especially if the BF is a yandere too.

>>53175766

>Form: Hag Witch
>Catmancy 5 (Cat)

>They can also put out things like animal ears/tails/horns or hide them in human form (so can you, by the way).
Neko-hag modo, nyaaaa~!

>Witchery 5

>You de-age slowly while wearing your robes, down to a minimum of 18.
18-year-old neko-hag modo!

>Potions 5
>Charms 5
>Transmutation 2

It's not clear whether extra items use up level 5 skills or simply complement them. I'm going with the former interpretation.
>Witch Hut
Installing indoor plumbing ASAP, obviously. A well is great, but indoor plumbing defines civilization.
>Bottle Stash
>Charm Charms
>Necronomicon

I am a classic witch, with the hat, the cat, the cauldron, the broom, the little hut, the robes, and the hideously ugly visage. But I'm also 18 and I have cat ears and a cat tail, nya! To go with the wrinkles, boils, and stringy white hair. Also, I am a crazy cat lady who can fly in space.

Time to confuse the hell out of everyone.

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>>53177471
Why would monster girls want to pass you around unless you're Chad? A-are you Chad??

>>53177492
>Assuming monster girls are like normal women
They have an entirely different mentality. They don't necessarily want Chad. Some do, but most don't. Most of them like all men.

>>53175781
>hypothetical history book
>adventure helmet
>meme machine
>apprenticeship
I think that's probably one of the more enjoyable, less risky ways to go about with this one.

>>53177313
I would rather waifu my daughteru.

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>>53177492
> Monster Girls become real
> Absolute sex crazed sluts with no standards
> Go for losers like us
> Suddenly we're inundated with our own monster girl harems and inadvertently make us chads

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>>53175810
Be completely psychotically convinced that she is your knight and you are her lord, reincarnated into a different life, and would do anything to protect you.

>>53177650
Isn't that an anime?

>>53177511
you're sad.

>>53177650
Reincarnation delusion is such a fucking strong concept for a yandere, why didn't I think of that?

>>53177657
I remember reading a kinda lame shoujo manga like that. A whole class of kids were reincarnations of a group of people from some fantasy castle, and the princess who led them revived as a guy. One pair started dating because one was a reincarnation of the other's body guard.

Later they started fighting and using really weird magic, but I remember the art kinda sucking. If I can find it I'll post it.

>>53177680
> A whole class of kids were reincarnations of a group of people from some fantasy castle, and the princess who led them revived as a guy. One pair started dating because one was a reincarnation of the other's body guard.
The concept alone would get me to read that desu

>>53177718
Just found it, it's Bokura no Kiseki. It's pretty boring honestly, if I'm remembering right.

>>53177680
Don't it's crap. The guy spend his entire childhood bullied because he told stories of himself as that princess (only he remembered), then when the others regain their memory they spend 6 billion chapters looking for the princess but can't seem to remember that she's right there under their noses.

>>53175777
Steroid obviously.

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Just found this WIP. Can't help but wonder, is there anyone who wouldn't pick 1 of the highest tier powers in cyoas with tier systems like these? Are there people who go for quantity over quality?

>>53177485
The items are bonus

>>53176066
Can the author clarify if Territory Creation or Irem Construction (or both?) are the class skill for Caster?

In the class description it says it is Territory Creation, and in the class skills it says it's item construnction.

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>>53177895
I'm not the author, but both of them should be Caster's class skills. That's the way it is in Fate.

>>53176066
Remove Saber, worst character

>>53177926
Everything Nasu is bad, anon.

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>>53177938
Everything? You sure?

>>53177949
Everything, anon.

Everything.

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What's your honest opinion on waifus (male) in cyoas?

>>53178016
If the CYOA includes be the girl as an option/default, I will consider them. Otherwise it's just trashman.jpg

>>53177958
Anime is pretty gay in general. Not that this is a bad thing.

>>53178016
Only if it's alongside standard female waifu options, and includes the option to be a girl.

>>53178016
It's not my thing, personally, but it's fine if those options exist. It's slightly odd that we don't have more husbando CYOAs, really.

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>>53178270
Vast majority here are male. Even of the ones who really want to be a girl in a cyoa, and even of those who would be totally OK with taking the dick afterward, aren't going to be very interested or talented at writing appealing male options.

>>53178338
So what you're saying is that there are a ton of uncreative homosexuals here?

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>>53178336

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>>53178360
Essentially.

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>>53178391

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>>53178429
It's not gay after you are a girl

>>53178493
It's gay if she has a dick.

>>53178497
As long as one of you doesn't it's fine.

>>53175777
Marijuana.

Plus couldn't I strictly speaking still be able to process weed?

I mean it depends on whether weed counts as "stronger than alcohol" or not.

>>53175810
Some yandere are harmless so they aren't that direct with you but do things that make you happy, like bake you stuff, do your work, do your chores etc.
Some might want to stalk you, taking note of what you've been doing at all times, threatening any female associates that you meet.

>>53175777
Steroids actually seems pretty cool. I need the trainer.

Are traps gay?

>>53175777
>Choose LSD
>Thanks to handholding you two can be in a dreamworld for as long you like
The others can't even compete

>>53178658
yes

>>53178658
Definitely not

>>53178658
maybe

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>>53178658

>>53178658
if you never see the dick and convince yourself that what wherever your sticking your dick in is the traps vagina than fucking traps is straight.

If you see the dick though than you're gay senpai.

>>53178705
It's only gay if the balls touch

>>53178705
That's not how this works, anon. You're automatically a fag if you fuck another dude, dude.

>>53178725
But asserting your dominance over another man is the straightest thing possible.
The Greeks were right

>>53176291
Size looks fine. What kind of tips are you looking for? Also you can go max of 10,000 for size if needed.

>>53178747
Listen. If it has a penis. You're gay.

This isn't something you can refute.

>>53176807
After you fucktards stfu and stop shitposting.

>>53178497
What if it's a feminine penis?

>>53178819
Still a penis.

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>>53178795
By your logic fucking right in pic related is straight because he has a vagina.

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IT'S HAPPENING AGAIN

>>53178836
>he
>vagina

it's a chick

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>>53178836
>tfw a ftm is more masculine and handsome than you

I'm a genetic failure. I'd do anything to look that good.

>>53178850
No, it's a boipussy.

>>53177751
It's impossible to have a tier 5 power.

Tier 1=4
Tier 2=3
Tier 3=2
Tier 4=1
Tier 5=0

>>53178850
So you're saying that fucking that person is 100% straight?

>>53178836
Technically his logic says nothing about vagina. And if you follow the, way to many, arguments about this stuff here, you would still find almost nothing said about vagina, because the people arguing only care about cock, and how much of it they can suck.

>>53178870
it's clearly a chick

so yes

>>53178870

Yes, it might be incredibly disgusting but it's still straight.

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>>53178855
>I'd do anything

How about becoming gay in exchange for a seme's perfect body?

>>53178855

How about exercise and a proper diet?

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>>53178880
Fujoshi begone!

Take your gay shit with you to the void!

>>53178887
>exercise and losing weight can change your face

My body is /fit/, my face is /crimeagainstnature/.

>>53178910

Then get a job and go see a plastic surgeon when you have enough sheckles. Though visiting a dermatologist might also be a good idea.

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>>53178895

Does this trigger your straightness?

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>>53178895
This is my gift to (you).

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>>53178895
Do you know where you are?

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>>53178849
Another thread down the drain.

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>>53178895

THE FUJOSHIS ARE HERE TO STAY

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This thread is sorely lacking in genies.

>>53178855
Well then you must become a trap

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>>53178934
It was so comfy, too.

>>53178921
Did Senator Armstrong reincarnate?

>>53178931
A hell called 4chan (Ft. Traps).

>>53178972
That is Young Senator Armstrong

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>>53178966
We can still be comfy, anon.

Why are you idiots so easily derailed.

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>>53178992
What's the comfiest CYOA? What ideas do you have for comfy CYOAs?

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>>53178994
Because pic related.

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>>53179003
We can go lift or something. Just a few manly men exercising together, bro. I can spot you.

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>>53175711

Realm: Not-So-Evil Hangout

>Affinity: Dark and Illusion
>Size class: Giant
>Race: Celestial and Undead

Boss perks
>Agility
>Magical
>Perception
>Charisma
>Phylactery
>Corruption
>Hybrid
>Empowerment

Minions:
Race One: Average Undead (Vampires)
>3 Recruiters
>3 Scouts
>2 Agents
Race Two: Average Demonic (Succubi)
>1 Recruiters
>1 Harem

Minion perks
>Appearance
>Talented (Musician)
>Specialty (Charisma)
>Ascendancy
>Training

Realm perks
>Large
>Hidden

Complications
>none

Plan is to have lair for dragons, vampires, succubi, and other fun-loving creatures of darkness to hide out. Recruiters will spread rumors about this domain in dark circles, but it's hidden so only people who really want to can find it. So like a not-so-secret secret club. Lair is always changing and visitors are watched closely because we don't need any hero types causing mischief. We'd have more fun playing tricks on invaders and trying to bring them to the dark side than actually hurting anyone, except the occasional blood sacrifice of course.....

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>>53178994
They have ancient weapons of unmeasurable power

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>>53178880
When

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>>53175711

Taloneth Amaret

>Gaia
>Illusion
>Acoustics
>Large
>Celestial
>Bestial

Perks
>Magical Prowess
>Perception Prowess
>Charisma Prowess
>Corruption
>Domain Control
>Hybrid
>Empowerment x2

Minions
>Petite
>Humanoid
>Average
>Celestial
Mooks
>Scouts (Faeries)
>Soldiers (Faeries) x2
>Servants (Faeries)
>Recruiters (Faeries)
Elites
>Sorcerers (Fallen Angels)
>Agents (Faeries) x2
>Harem (Fallen Angels) x2
Lieutenants
>Chosen (Fallen Angel)
>Hunter (Faerie)
>Witch (Faerie)

Minion Perks
>Appearance
>Talented (Corruption)
>Specialty (Charisma)
>Native
>Devotion

Realm Perks
>Large
>Hidden
>Legendary

Complications
>Rumours

>once a angelic harp player from heaven
>seduced by the wild freedom of the fairy folk
>now live in remote corner of magical forest
>adventurers seek out my realm to drink from the Fountain of Youth
>the path to the fountain is illuminated by enchanting music
>it is a long journey full of detours, distractions, and corrupting influences
>the weak are led astray into the forest and never heard from again
>the strong are offered eternal life and youth in exchange for something supremely important to them

Idk if having my own realm is even all that necessary. I'd probably be happy just being one of the more powerful "boss" types living in another magical-forest-of-the-fey type realm.

>>53179027
I haven't lifted in years. I haven't boxed, either. I've been wasting away. I'd be honored if you'll still have me, brah. I miss being strong.

>>53179048
Never because the author ran away

>>53179048
I'd prefer seeing the superhero wip finished first.

>>53179048
This one looked great.

>>53178321
>Nordic-Roman-Mesoamerican Realm
Imagine the central area being Roman, but then, the outskirts--in the north-east--start to slowly but surely take on the Nordic characteristics. In the South-west, you start to see the Mesoamerican influences more strongly, but there's still the gradual change, rather than any sudden changes.
>Lascivious Enhancement, Ancient Ruins, Humanoid Enhancement, Monsters Enhancement
Bawdy songs and raunchiness are great ways to relax after delving into the mysterious ruins in the hunt for treasure; plus, I've always been about sexual freedom. A wide variety of the myth inspired races (Norse and Roman) helps add color and more excitement to both the civilized lands, and the not-so-civil parts of the realm, too. Monsters make this world even more exciting, and their presence should make it easier to form adventuring parties.
>Melee Master (Spear), Berserker, Negotiator, Scholar (2), Sailor, Poetry, Prince Stallion, Hunter, Merchant-Trader. Luck-blessed Prince, Prince of Thieves.
Since I got so many free skills from mixed realms, didn't see the reason to buy too many. As a scholar I'm good at studying those ancient ruins; as a sailor, getting to some of them. A warrior-poet will earn me clout in the Nordic realms, and artists are always great at wooing women. But, back to adventure: I am a strong, capable fighter in the Nordic tradition. Not much slows me down once I get my rage going. I can live off the land by Hunting, which means fresh meat, vegetables and fruit to supplement rations, and I know just how to get the best price for my goods. Since I'm an adventurer, I'm more of a 'rogue' than a 'thief', really; the skillset helps. Also? Lady Luck and me, we kinda got a thing goin' on.

>>53179141
>Amu'zan's Armament, Bulwark Band, Amu'Zan's Aegis
A simple but well-designed spear that is aligned with the 'energy' of acid. Nice fitting 'cloth' armor reinforced with soft and hard leather pads, that will keep me safe from fire. The band will keep annoyances from bugging me, which is nice.
>Murky Move Mantle
Because some times, you need to be stealthy. And teleportation is nice.
>Magnificent Mount, Mount Magnification
I want a war griffin, and now, I shall have it.
>Speaking Satchel
I'm plundering ruins. I don't want this bag, I need it.
>Easily Distracted
Well, this world is lascivious already. Random stripper-dressed women in ancient ruins were bound to show up sooner or later.

>Pixie Poachers
Oh no, I am shutting that shit down. I will met with the Fair Folk, and I will find out what is going on. Bastard responsible for this won't be killed, of course--not quickly--but they will be made an example of, their market will be smashed, and the captured shall be freed.
>Sphinx Snafu
Sounds like it's time for me to go Scholar mode, and dig up the books. I bet I can find or create a riddle that she can't handle, and that'll send her packing.
>Valkyrie Venture
I think my Berserking Stallion Style can handle this challenge.
>Coruscating Charger
As a Hunter, I should be able to track this beast down. As a Scholar, I should also be able to dig up information on it to assist in ending its existence.

>>53179155
>Katla Vandradottir
I mean, I'm going to be adventuring a lot. Free repairs will be nice. Also, I'm pretty sure I have some iron she can pound.
>Bula Ghorza
Scholar, Diplomat, Mantle. I'll catch him cheating and call him out on his shenanigans, and shame him in front of his entire tribe. I'll give Bula her freedom; but if she'd like to tag along on my misadventures, I won't say now.
>Constance Hillington
I think I can keep Miss Hillington safe from a protracted assassination attempt.I might not feel the best once I find out what that trade law is, but meh, giving her the benefit of a doubt.
>Zariea Sha'tul
Diplomacy + Scholar, I'm solving this one without bloodshed. I'll prove that what was done was illegal, and in order to keep the pits from getting into trouble, they'll just... "give" me her, yes, you see? Of course, if something were to happen to her, I will bring the full extent of the law to bear against the pit masters and their affiliates.

She can stay and adventure with me if she likes. I'd certainly like to meet her people, though.
>Ashanti Willowsong
A good fight, and possibly a good fuck. This is a challenge worth taking.

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>>53179063
Why? Because she was a fujoshi?

>>53179051
third time i saw this

>>53178725
But if you convince yourself its not a dude than it's all cool...until you see the dick.
It's playing with fire.

>>53178855
You know that "guy" looks like a dyke right?
Are you literally a child that you somehow believe that that dyke is more masculine and handsome than a full grown man.

>>53175810
Touch my penis.

>>53175711
>Gaia, Mystic
Nature is a beautiful place to be. Plus, regeneration is awesome. That everything has a surreal, dream-like quality due to its Mystic nature just makes it more amazing; and our magicians moreso.
>Average
I like being middle of the road.
>Bestial, Draconic
I'm more like a half-dragon than anything else.
>Vitality, Agility, Perception, Enchanted Weapon, Enchanted Armor, Hybrid, Personal Guards, Personal Guards.
Plenty of stamina to suit my high speed fighting style, and great perception to compliment it.
>Personal Guard: Champion, Oracle, Witch, Archmage.
Me and the Champion are front liners. Oracle heals, Witch debuffs, Archmage lays the smackdown with magic and assists with summons.
>Minions Sizes: Large and Average
I want some big tanky beefy dudes, but I also want light and nimble healers and harassers.
>Minion Races: Bestial and Beast
Beast-men and Monster-girls in charge of some of the nastiest animals imaginable.
>Servants, Clerics, Scouts, Guards (2x), Mages, Engineers, Merchants.
Servants and Clerics to keep my people healthy and content. Engineers and Mages to make my realm prosper. Scouts and Guards for good, solid defense of the realm. Merchants, so that I can trade with others. I mostly just want to be left alone, but trade is essential to survival.
>Craftsmen, Overseers, Harem, Priests.
Craftsmen produce the great goods that we trade; overseers help make sure that our economy is well-oiled. The harem helps with diplomacy, and keeps me in a good mood, too. The priests are needed for the well being of my people.
>Warlord
He is needed to lead my defense force.
>Training, Upgrade
The best minds, and the best materials. But will it make for the best domain?
>Treasure, Grand Lair, Enchanted
Enchanted with Mystic. Treasure is always nice to have on hand, even if it makes people come after me for the wrong reasons. Thankfully, my Grand Lair, blatantly defies physics.

Too bad none of the others have merchants. We could trade.

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>>53175810
This??

>>53176016
I'd like it.

Have multiple worlds able to be collided, and limit certain choices to certain worlds.

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How lewd is too lewd for /tg/? Is this too much?

>>53179756
Cover the paws, you degenerate.

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>>53175822
Fuck yeah, it's like being a Guyver villain
>Arthropod

>Increased Defense
>Bio-laser
>Aquatic Adaptation
>Regeneration

>Budget Rangers
>Magical Girl Team
Seems tricky, but manageable with the boss token boosts.

>Enhanced Defense (Which puts me up to boss leve)
>Enhanced Strength
>Napalm Breath
>Band of Mooks (Free)

I guess I'll start off with the budget rangers for practice before taking on the magical girls. I should be nigh indestructible and while my strength is only average, bio-lasers and napalm breath should make up the difference.

>>53179756
That's fairly tame. Don't expose nipples or more, and just censoring stuff isn't enough. Beyond that, you should be fine.

Anons, I don't remember the name of cyoa but it was posted half a month ago, it's about waking up on giant space station that was closed ~80 years ago with robots going haywire, dead-space like abominations and human bandits. Anyone has it saved?

>>53180015
That sounds very scary. Please don't post it.

Anyone got the CYOA that had one choice being something like control over ones self (had an anime picture of a guy punching the ground or something) and another choice as a Druid?

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>>53175822
>Reptilian - lizardlike
>increased strength, increased defense, increased speed, bio lazer
>magical girl team, budget rangers
>enhanced defense, enhanced regeneration, gigantism, band of mooks (free)

Strength -very high/ extremely high
Defense- extremely high/ final boss
Speed- moderate

hard as fuck to kill - nigh indestructible. dont know how i feel working for an evil organization, but so long as they stick to saturday morning cartoon evil im game - coworkers are pretty chill too. been assigned to keeping the budget rangers and magical girls busy, dont really have it in me to kill them (assuming i can).

suppose i might as well remove some of the other more bothersome monsters while im at it - cant have them ruining the peace and all that ( i wonder if i can count that as overtime?)

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>>53180015
Derelict Station.

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>>53176066
Name: "The Black Huntsman" - True Name: Jager von Einzbern
Wish: Become a Saber
Alignment: Neutral - Neutral
Personality traits: Archetype - Saber Alter. Cruel, Selfish, Wrathful, Confident, Honorable.
Servant Class : Lancer - closer to Avenger class
Physical Features: Male Saber - Adult Saber - Gallant/Horrifying - Double Ahoge - Short Ahoge
Clothing: Ceremonial Medium Armor, Suit & Tie

Servant Parameters
Strength-A (13)
Endurance- B (A with armor) (7)
Agility-A (13)
Magic- D (1)- Projection Specialization
Luck- C (3)
Noble Phantasm-A (EX with Armor) (23)

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance -B (0)
Avenger - EX (26)
Independent Action - D

Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation - EX (25)
Monstrous Strength - A (15) (Demonic)
Mana Burst - B (10)

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Haven't seen this one in a while and felt like making a build for it.

>>53179784
would you mind NOT killing them? if they disapear i might be forced to get some other job - and that seems like a hastle

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>>53180160

>>53175777
>Steroids
>No delts
>No traps
>No arms
>No forearms
>No lats
>Obviously fake titties
>Wearing that much fucking make-up
>AT THE GYM
Garbage

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>>53180150
Noble Phantasm(s):

"Arbiter - Blade that slays the heavens"
EX+ (20). Anti-World Weapon
A get black glaive with a blade of disproportionate size. Absorbs magical energy and concepts by emmiting a wave of devouring darkness - can unleash contained energy in a blinding flash of annihilating power. This blade is particularly effective against being heavily composed of or reliant on energy.

"the anathema - what man has wrought let no god put asunder"
A (10). Anti-Self Ability
Nullifies effects, abilities, and damage from sources of A rank and higher (A-,A,A+...), also grants a stock of lives (8) - lives can regenerate over time. combined with his battle continuation skill this ability becomes closer to time reversal than regeneration. It acts as a "refusal" of the abilities rather than outright resistance and therefore does not factor in magnitude of effect nullified.

"Aegis of the Slayer- never outmatched"
C (5). Equipment
A small shield of black metal - runes engraved upon its surface glow when it is in use.
Prohibits the use of a single offensive noble phantasm per opponent - when outnumbered grants an increase in Str, Agi, End based on number of additional foes.

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>>53175711
Land is filled with conflict? I'll be to make the fitting final reward for those who dare strive for greatness! Assuming they're humans and angels. The other races can get fucked.
>Affinity: Light and Glacial
>Size: Average
>Race:Celestial

Boss perks
>Physical Prowess
>Charisma Prowess
>Vitality Prowess
>Magical Prowess
>Enchanted Weapon x2 (Spear & Shield)
>Enchanted Armour
>Empowerment
>Guardian (Champion, Warlord, Chosen Average Human)

Minions
Race One: Average Human
>3x Soldiers
>2x Riders
>1x Mages
>1x Clerics
>1x Servants
>1x Recruiters
Race Two: Average Celestial
>2x Warriors
>1x Priests
>1x Craftsmen
>2x Warlord
Minion perks
>Devotion
>Sustenance
>Upgrade
>Training
>Appearance

Realm perks
>Enchanted (Necrotic)
>Separate
>Hidden

Complications
>Saviour (5 minion tokens)
>Hero (5 minion tokens)
>Nemesis (Shard of power)

There. Can't wait to make holy war against evil and give those intent on fighting evil a beautiful afterlife. Dead humans return as angels to give aid to their still living fellows. Everyone else can enjoy being a zombie in the fodder squad.

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>>53180180
Shes a magical manifestation of steroids anon, something people take to look more attractive, of course she's going to be conventionally pretty

just enjoy your trainer waifu, don't make a thing of this

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>>53180165
No promises man, if I kill/capture them I bet I'll get some more sweet enhancements

I'm gonna be BIG

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>>53180209

Originally an artificial servant created by the Einzberns in the aftermath of the 5th HGW by utilizing a lesser form of the third magic and remnants of the corruption present within the grail to combine elements of heroes inside a humonculous. has since ascended into the throne of heroes after his death in the 6th HGW.

Combative and arrogant in nature - yet willing to suppress himself to achieve his goals. possesses a sympathy for those given a raw deal by fate having been made as nothing more than a weapon himself, and holds a dislike for those whom are favored by fate or who have an "easy life". dislikes facing opponents who resort to underhanded methods.

Likes: good fights, fair maidens, acting "heroic", being a smug cunt
Dislikes: sadists, tyrants, cowards, those who sacrifice others for their ambitions, the french

>>53175711
>Pitch 'em!
Romance of the Three Kingdoms advisor CYOA

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>>53175822
>>53179784
>>53180116
>all these rad fucking monsters
>still no playable Kamen Rider

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>>53180241
man why'd you have to be so inconsiderate - they might force me to get a real job!

>>53180319
The only thing this makes me think is that the author is a pretentious twit.

>>53180319
the downside of the beloved is that you will inevitably feel inadequate for them, right?

>>53180327
Maybe after his death his CYOA will become the cornerstone of a new religion.

I'm new to cyoag, but not to cyoa. I'm thinking of starting a personal coding project to create a program to do the build for a cyoa, specifically for Stardust at this point. Ideally I'd build the one for stardust in a way that would give me a framework to make others but small steps.

Anyway, I'm looking to get in touch with SDA to see if they'd want to collaborate, providing original images, the source text and what not. Not sure how often they are around, if there is any social media they have to be contacted at or anything of the sort. Anyone able to help me get in contact with them in some way?

Also, would anyone have interest in a program like this for Stardust and/or other CYOAs?

>>53180344
>Anyone able to help me get in contact with them in some way?
Discord link is in the pastebin.

>>53180340
It's that she clearly doesn't really love you. The "sting" of the choice was whether you really care about this or are fine with someone who just acts this way regardless of what they feel.

>>53180343
Doesn't have enough pyramid schemes or creepy cultism.

>>53180353
>and wont like you any less for it
it kinda implies that they do love you - but that as a consequence their existence is torment

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>>53180319
>Socialite: you become gl'ing, charming, and rich
>drawback: no one will love you unconditionally so don't become a smelly, homeless schizophrenic

>>53180319
Explorer is best option. Just survive until AI are made and can accompany you, no real drawback after that.

>>53180375
"Won't like you any less" seems to have been chosen specifically because it doesn't imply love. It's a relative statement. They could hate your guts, and all this would mean is it doesn't make them hate you worst. For that matter, they could just like you "VERY LITTLE". The play here is between feelings of "great love" and behavior you'd associate with "greatly loving" someone.

>>53180407
>reading this much into a standard waifu description because you expect the author to pop out and go WHAT A TWEEST
kill yourself

>>53180352
Welp, didn't see that in the pastebin at first, my bad. Still wonder if anyone is interested though, might not stop me from making SD one but would effect if I do any others.

>>53180430
The author took a CYOA that was speculated to be "what a twist" and rewrote it to be so explicitly.

>>53180407
it also doesent state that they DONT love you - and the description of the choice is "to feel what its like to be loved without work"

i think the sting is at the "theyll never have a headeache or be too tire, or at least theyll never say so" part of the thing "they will never complain about anything"

>>53180430
dude, thats the entire CYOA - they all have some kind of sting/drawback for this one choice to have 0 negative would seem strange

>>53175777
My life is horrible without sleeping pills. And I can't properly study without Adderall-almost-equivalent. I constantly suffer from headaches.

You people of the Bureau of Divine Intervention better give me Adderall, some other sleeping waifu, and Steroids as compensation because she is a cute.

>>53180451
>implying i care what the author intended
What's written is the only important thing, and even then his writing is shit so discussing this is pointless.

>>53180319
So socialite turns you into Chad but no one would love you if you weren't Chad but that's irrelevant since you become Chad.

I don't see the drawback. Am I too autistic for this?

>>53175777
Marijuana seems like the best choice

>>53180319
I can tell you're a pretentious twat just from the images you used

>>53180327
Holy fuck I didn't even notice this when I wrote that

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I want a comfy adventure CYOA that has fairies with plump thighs.

>>53175777
>No heroin waifu for intense pleasure

>>53175810
cuddling, play vidya with me

>>53180565
Oh, is it random statement time?

Okay, let's see... Ah I got it.

I think you're an idiot.

>>53180565
I made one like that already. Maybe not quite comfy enough for you.

>>53180569
I hope you're not speaking from personal experience.

>>53180319
What if I've already got my soulmate before I choose Socialite? Seems like a win win

>>53180285
The only differance between Kamen Rider and Shocker Monster Grasshopper was the choice he made.

>>53180209

Anathema seems ludicrously underrated for an A-rank phantasm. The immunity to A and higher things is grounds for an A+ phantasm alone, and the 8 lives pushes it even further.

>>53180109
Anybody?

>>53178016

If the CYOA forces the protag to be female, I will go for the waifu(male) version.
>bear mode>Bishōnen>>>>>>Trap

>>53180622
its reverse God Hand (a C rank NP) with less lives, and without the resistances - against stronger enemies its much better, but against regular enemies its immeasurably worse. it seems fair at A rank

>>53180605
Is that the one that's connected to the Adventurer and Valhalla CYOA?

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Update to Mindslaver!

New stuff!
>1 New Page!
>3 New Means of Control: Siren Song, Parasites and Contract.
>3 New Boon: Fertility, Objectification and Monstrification.
>3 New Powers: Planeswalker, Dream Weaving and Alchemy.
>9 New Drawbacks: Sign of Influence, Dollmaker, Power of Chaos, Superstition, Madness, Vampyrism, Unnatural Aura, Star Guardians and The Abyss.
>1 New Section: Pacts (9 different pacts).
>3 New Slaves: Jamie Smith, Mary Williams and Hayami Yui

Changelog
>Intro: Starting points increased from 13 to 14.
>Lactation: Can also adjust breast size.
>Tireless Servant: Also includes immunity to diseases.
>Immortality: Increased cost from 1 to 2.
>Hive Mind: Increased cost from 1 to 3.
>Mass Control: Increased cost from 1 to 3.
>Summoning: If you have Familiar you will be able to summon your familiar and make it take on a physical form.
>Pocket Dimension: You will be able to manipulate how time works in your pocket dimension when you create it. I also Changed "mental power" to "power". Someone thought they would become retarded by choosing pocket dimension.
>Telekinesis: Got a longer description and slightly less powerful, can still crush large buildings tho.
>Eldritch Horror: You are able to change your appearance as long as it follows the restrictions of Eldritch Horror.
>Deus Vult: The nuns no longer have blessed clothes which make them immune to mind control and they won't steal your powers if they defeat you, point gain decreased from 2 to 1.
>Mind Fucked: The effect is applied when mind controlling someone, but mind degradation time has been from increased 1/2/3 years to 2/5/10 years.
>Slaves Description: A lot clearer and Mind Fucked and Vampyrism own't affect any of the slaves in the slave section.
>Typos: I don't remember them, but a lot.

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>>53180651
I dunno. Seems in bad faith given the rest of your build, since it's pretty clear that non-bullshit enemies wouldn't stand a chance against your Servant unless they were a Caster with prep time or had something like that Assassin from ages ago that could fuck with defenses.

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>>53180670
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>>53178862
"WIP"

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>>53180586
Why do you hurt me, reddit-spacer?

>>53180708
Watching you cry makes him aroused.

>>53180685
EMIYA, and other servants that utilize tactics and such seem like the natural counter - but yea, the build is meant to be nigh unbeatable in a straight up fight by most opponents ( although top tier servants like beowulf, karna and such would still be a threat), requiring human resourcefulness to beat - just make him waste the aegis charge and have a B rank NP ready

>>53180708
Because you're making pointless posts. And I'll have you know I've been using spaces here for like ten years before it became a reddit space meme.

>>53180586
>Not wanting a comfy adventure CYOA that has fairies with plump thighs
What is wrong with you?

>>53180661
Yeah

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>>53180727
>Because you're making pointless posts.

Man, if you only knew. I'm happy you revealed what annoys you. It only makes me want to do it more. I'm surprised a "veteran" such as yourself would so that.

>>53179344
Because it received a lot positive attention and the pressure was too much for him.

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>>53175711
Repostan.

>>53180670
>>53180687
>>53180697

In general, I don't like your lewd CYOAs (personally, it's just that I don't think the big number of fetishes superficially explored alluring, and usually the characters are given superficial descriptions too, also I'm not much into /d/), but I think it's really nice how you preserve some characters and universe consistency (such as Zynthia).

>>53180784
Same happened with that old dragon child WIP, where you got to pick your dragon powers and your family members and their situation.

>>53180651

>It doesn't help against enemies I can beat without it
Immune to S rank is A+ or even S
Adding in the rest makes it 100% S rank

>>53176066
I want this to continue, so badly

Somehow

>>53180896
dlc of what happens next (4th/5th HGW - ahnebre carnival- Grand Order)?

>>53180896
Continue? Seems pretty finished to me

>>53180565
Where the fuck is this from? Did I miss a Bravely Third announcement?

>>53180896
All that could be really added is the more weird classes, and a few more personal/class skills.
Other than that I can't imagine what could be added, it seems pretty complete.

>>53180887
A rank and up NP's are pretty rare- usually only possessed by the strongest heroic spirits, so i argue that it makes sense for a character designed to take on said strongest characters to possess it. as opposed to God Hand which is for stomping on the scrubs but useless against the strong

perhaps there is too many extra lives tho

>>53180806
>>53180806
I get easily attached to characters and it would be fun to make my own CYOA mythos with reoccurring characters. I also like easter eggs and references, I had to reference EDGs Lavender, love that CYOA. Was originally planing to make a pact which included Teitat in lavender, but my whimsical style wouldn't really do it justice.So that's why I didn't the pact.

>>53180149
thanks anon

>>53180319
What's wrong with terminator.

>>53175765
I like to think even the tenants who you don't befriend still live in the apartment somewhere.

>>53180949
maybe adding avenger/shielderas actual classes?

or some kind of companion/ enemy selector

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>>53180939
It's a mobile game with awful female designs.

>>53180976
Adding enemies would definitely improve the pick a Saber route, because as it stands the need for a combatant servant is low due to the war being over at the start making a lot of the options not very necesary.

>>53180958
>it makes sense for a character designed to take on said strongest character

If you want it for less than A+, It should make you weaker when fighting against scrubs, making them always have a chance of beating you.
Or at least make it not give complete immunity, but just have it tone down how powerful A & S stuff is.
Unless you don't care about other people's opinions, in which case you are more than welcome to go
>Sartre Mode

>>53181033
Just teach her to cook or something.

>>53180976

Nobody is going to remake Sabre CYOA
The author (not me) is done with it for now

>>53181038
>, but just have it tone down how powerful A & S stuff is.

so kind of inversely proportional defense? where the stronger the blow the less the damage? - i just wouldnt know how to word that in a way that doesn't become useless or even more OP - since even C rank np's can be very strong

>sartre mode
pardon?

>tfw your cyoa is turning into a clusterfuck of each option giving bonuses
>tfw you know you're gonna have to spend hours going back and fords between pages to """attempt""" balance
>tfw wasting too much text giving world-building and not describing the options enough because I suck at world-building
Don't make multi page cyoas if you suck.

>>53181038
>It should make you weaker when fighting against scrubs

so make it EX- and have it give negative luck or defense versus "the weak"

>>53181083
>so kind of inversely proportional defense?

So if someone were to flick you it would be like a Gaeberg to the heart?

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>>53181099
You shouldn't feel ashamed for your autism. Good luck!

>>53176066
So, it's technically possible to have an EX (+++) Noble Phantasm with this. What kind of bullshit would that even be capable of?

>>53181112
something like

E - 0% defense
EX-100%
with a scaling value in between maybe

it would be absolutely useless if it made a servant designed for combat unable to fight masters

>>53181138
Goetias NP is a death star laser that can fuck with the nature of the universe and time

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>>53181083
>>53181083
>>sartre mode
>pardon?

He means
>Option 1 in this CYOA
it has become a shorthand for
>I can't force you to imagine what you don't want to imagine
in /cyoag/

>>53181138
It kills anything forever before killing them while at the same time un-killing you so you stack without limits extra lifes

>>53181072
The author is DSA, a renowned cuck and terrible person.

>>53180319
so we do know that guy stole an old CYOA and
"updated" it right?

>>53181160
You liar DSA is a person too pure for this world

>>53181182
I need a CYOA that lets me waifu DSA.

>>53181182
>>53181160
is DSA SDA?

>>53181120
I'm going to waste tens of hours in an attempt to have this shit make sense. Just make everything into "pick one". It's so much easier.

>>53181196
Yup, alteregos.

One of them is a canadian shitposter, the other is a starving venezuelan, neither knows that the other exists.

>>53181193
We're all waiting for you to finally make that authorfu CYOA!

>>53181213
SDA's a pretty cool guy - he posts anime girl and isnt afraid of anything

>>53181161
Yes we know

>>53181138
Am actually working on a build with one of those, themed after the seven signs of the Apocalypse. Not sure if I'll get it out by the end of this thread, though.

>>53181237
But he's not a sexy but humble Venezuelan cowboy who will sweep you off your feet and take you on spooky adventures like DSA.

>>53180958
Remind me, how DID this thing get taken out in that grailwar writeup?

>>53181112
No
It goes off of the most powerful attack that your opponent is capable of delivering

>>53181153
This is just what he wanted originally
Instead I am suggesting
It makes you immune to S or EX
But it gives a boost to C, D, and E tier attacks that give the user a chance of harming you.
It can be a small chance something like ~1% boost for E-tier attacks, but you trade being able to take on enemies much stronger than you, for making it theoretically possible to lose to an enemy whom you should completely outclass.

>>53181265
We all know that DSA and SDA are two authors in a single person

>>53181276
Got all his lifes removed by his own arbiter because he fought the luckiest motherfucker alive with lancer tier luck

>>53181276
"rider" (read assasin) with a C++ NP that is designed to counter defensive abilities

the master died to manjew bullshit a few days earlier

>>53181182
What alternate universe did you come from.

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>>53180670
>Immortality: Increased cost from 1 to 2.
>Hive Mind: Increased cost from 1 to 3.
>Mass Control: Increased cost from 1 to 3.
Well shit, there goes my build.

>>53181196
Do not compare the lovely DSA with Stupid Dummy Anon.

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>>53181161

Fresh OC is fresh OC
Who the fuck cares if someone updated an old CYOA
Especially if the author isn't going to touch it ever again
It isn't like you could stop it from happening

>>53181313
>>53181315
>>53181313
>>53181276
this too, but he recovered somewhat

>>53181265
At least SDA won't cuck you.

>>53181332
Ah, now I remember. I was expecting him to get BTFO in the war really early because of how OP he was. Surprised how long he lasted.

>>53181347
was it the longest a lancer lasted?

but dealing with him would require setup - theres no way he'd be early to die

>>53176207
>Like a cat.
This is a perfect description.

>>53181338>>53181160

Are you still going off on that? Terror birb anon dint du nuffin

>>53181371
Except, you know, have an NTR fetish he vented in the thread.

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>>53181265
Shut up, bitch. He's mine.

>>53180697
>>53180806
I do agree with this anon. It's not that I don't LIKE lewd CYOAs. It's just that they're way too general for me to get into, like your Superjail CYOA. I need some more specific characters rather than a list of fetishes.

>>53181338
>DSA will never fuck another woman in front of you while relishing your sweet heartbroken tears
Why even live?

>>53181366
I meant more that I thought that he'd be fucked over early on to establish a villain, or make the war less one-sided. Underestimated how fucky the author's war ended up getting.

(not that I'm complaining, I was the dude who built Saver)

>>53181391
I'll fucking kill you. He belongs to me.

>>53181396
That ''Make your master a shitty servant'' noble phantasm was the shit

>>53180670
Why does the /tg/ version have 3 pages while the /d/ version has 4?

>>53181396
>fucked over early to establish a villain

Edgelord-kun ain no jobber


i was also fairly happy with how it went, it didnt feel like any servant was wanked and lancer dealt with one of the strongest builds (luckman)