/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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Post things that should be cyoas.

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>>52733369
>cyoa wants you to take options before explaining how you are to pay for them

How 'bout hell to the no. Momma ain't raised no fool.

>>52733427
Come on we're all friends here. Nobody's going to eat your soul or anything.

>>52733342
What's going on in that picture, anon?

>>52733427
You were born black, you were born a fool.

>>52733437
Looks like deaging.

>>52733342
Why aren't you making it? Do you honestly think someone else will make shit for you?

>>52733441
>>>/pol/

>>52733437
A woman dotes on a cute little girl only to have her grow up to be larger than her and also attracted to her.

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>>52733369

>>52733460
I thought it was about two kids who grow up without ever growing asses.

>>52733460
How would you make a CYOA around that?

>>52733460
But jp reads right to left.

>>52733470
Anon he just want to post cute pictures.

>>52733029
Undeath type: Spectral
Seal: Holy circle
Phylactery: The amulet
Nemesis: The thief

Eh it is not that bad she will die eventually anyways

>>52733480
I assumed it's been flipped for the benefit of gaijin like myself.

>>52733450
I'm right though.

>>52733470
Time skip cyoa. Someone from your past returns to waifu you.

Like, a little girl you played with in the woods outside the village but suddenly dissapeared one day. Years later she returns as an amazon tribal chief intending to turn you into her bride.

>>52733541
I guess that's pretty good, but only because that specific idea (amazon waifu) is pretty good. The core concept is basically just an excuse for waifus.

>>52733519
>>52733450

>>52733541
Great, now come up with a couple more, slap some cute animuh girls on, and you got yourself a CYOA!

>>52733549
Waifus and husbandos. Maybe some pets too (little bird you fed outside your house, comes back as a Roc to carry you to a desert fantasy world). Etc.

In fact you can do lots of interesting things with it. The core concept is anon being "rewarded" for something trivial he did in his past and forgot about.

>>52733579
You should do it like
>Part one: choose who you want to help (the drawbacks are whatever you have to do to help them)
>Part two: the reward for helping them

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Okay, this one has spelling mistakes corrected here and there.

Glad everyone seems to more or less like it.

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>>52733660
Why is this page's width different from that of the other pages?

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>>52733717
There isn't a reason that I could give you that wouldn't make me sound like an absolute idiot.

>>52733660
Reposting my build
German occult society
Die Glocke: Gotta have that nazi gold


Magic
Magical circles rank 3 really useful
Alchemy rank 3 Im fucking rich i can make all the potions i could ever want making healing and magical enhancement useless for me i could probably end making the philosopher stone or something
Weird science rank 2 With the power of SCIENCE! monster girls are now a thing
Ilusion magic rank 3 Fucking around with people is fun
Runecrafting 1 Better quality anything is nice

Equipment
Magical robes rank 3 how i could pass this up?
Magical supplies rank 3 great daily effects
Bow rank 3 without this the build is fucking useless
Antimagic device (Free) It could save my life more than once
Allies
Adolfo Moretti
Simon haueter
With this team everything is fucked before it started

I think i will do fine

>>52733579
>>52733587
Cool, you will do great, get on it! Don't be shy to ask for ideas.

Best nation builder cyoa?

>>52733771
I said YOU should do it for a reason. I ain't doing shit.

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>>52733807
>Axe Lily
who comes up with these names

>>52733794
I ain't doing shit either. Fuck doing what YOU want me to!

>>52733587
>Mystery box
No

>>52733823
Then I guess it'll never get made. Good.

>>52733829
Anon if you don't read both fully before making your choice you're doing it wrong.

>>52733660
I'm still here, to still say, Raven is not a good faction for Americans because it's full of nobles and monarchists.

>>52733838
Since when have Americans been against nobles and monarchists?
>le revolution
Yeah sure fought against the French monarchy right

>>52733830
I don't mind. I ain't doing shit for you.

>>52733816
The Japanese, in all likelihood. It's not uncommon for them to make a name by randomly picking and putting together foreign sounding words that sound "cool".

>>52733848
It's not like we don't do the same, I guess.

>>52733846
When we didn't have any in our country and tried hard to keep those concepts out.

And anon, let me tell you a little something about American history. Very soon after independence, the French government started to violate American neutrality and act like snobby dicks when we complained, like the French are wont to do. So we started to hate the French. Then the Brits decided that the best way to deal with the colonies was to be far too nice and paternalistic towards them, so they'd still trade all their shit to Britain, which inspired colonials to open up to Britain again. The British were still dicks about impression, and Americans still wanted Canada, so the War of 1812 happened, but after that ended the Brits decided to be even more nice and paternalistic to Americans for more of that trading market at no expense to themselves.

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>>52733838
If that's the stance you wantto take on it, sure.

But their are 5 other factions, and if none of them appeal to you, even in the slightest, then that's my fault, and I haven't done my job.

However, I'd like to think that I've at least done a halfway decent job of providing a number of different options that should appeal to almost anyone.

>>52733891
senpai Americans are even less likely to join the nazis or the russians.

>>52733912
>not wanting to join the magic nazis
are you a jew or something?

Lads, help me out here.

I need the expanded CYOBF thing, the gay one. The one that had like 10 gay categories or so.

F-for reasons.

>>52733528
Typos D:

Crown of the Emperor is kinda bad deal, that kinda thing just ends up with half of your sons rebelling against you and you getting stuck as undying corse on your throne.

I would go for the Jail Keys. Would need to be a bit careful about who to jail since just because nobody has escaped so far, doesn't mean that nobody will. Also, some beings might resent about getting shaken up for benefits and I might have to leave the prison temporarily at some point. But other than that, it should allow me to collect almost whatever strikes my fancy.

>>52733912
Then there's 3 other factions, for the people who can't conceive of a universe where they aren't allowed to walk around in an american flag shirt/shorts combo.

>>52733927
No, but I aint an aryan either.

>>52733816
>>52733848
Lilly in Japanese is Yuri.
This also refers to lesbians and to non-sexual, close girl friendships, often in their school years.
Don't know if Axe / Ono has any significance other then being as 'masculine' thing.

>>52733943
Those other factions are more germans, eastern europeans, and the evil ones.

>>52733951
Well, then I'm stumped.

Sorry lad, guess this CYOA's not for you.

>>52733931
I got it. Why you need it? If the answer is anything other than "I am working on a CYOA and here's the proof" I'm not sharing.

>>52733838
Their perk is Pax Britannica, no shit.

>>52733528
Mask of the dreamer
I am going to clean the filth from inside

>>52733966
I actually made it; but okay.

I just lost everything and I was sure I had it saved in my Drive somewhere. I wanted to show it to my friends.

>>52733369
I'll bite.

Grace and Poise:1
Empowered Eyes:2
Within Your Grasp:1
Integrated Internet:5
Stay the Devourer:3

>>52733965
Cruelty of cruelties. I'm frankly surprised you didn't have the thought cross your mind when making these nation-flavored factions considering this website.

No bully, but are there good revenge themed cyoas?

>>52733991
I didn't really consider that anyone would care.

>>52734007
Rejecting Monarchism is one of the top American things, alongside chanting freedom a lot, though.

>>52734007
To be honest i think the only one who cares is that autist here

>>52733342
School bully CYOA?

>>52734020
That is remarkably badly drawn.

>>52734016
Maybe because 99% of the rest of you want to roleplay science nazis.

>>52734020
Yes. Please.

>>52734030
German science is the best afterall

>>52733931
You should be able to find it in the archive. I posted it at the beginning of every thread for quite a while after you released it. Wrote something like "warning: you might be gay".

>>52734043
The Archive as in the 4chan Archive? Nope. Not there, already checked. That's why I was asking here!

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>>52732915
This one has one particular bit which seems easy to exploit - you can choose the species of your townsfolk, and yourself, for a pittance of resources. So you could be something stupid, like i dunno, Xeelee or Downstreamers or Q.

I won't go that far, but I will exploit it a bit.

>Terrain
Coastline - 5
>Estate
Settlement - 10
Townsfolk, choose species (kryptonian) - 20
Workshop, High tech, AI - 60
Library, Magic Organization, Cosmic Knowledge - 110
Portal, indestructible - 130
>Gifts
Form change (to kryptonian, obviously) - 135
Immortality - 145
Charisma - 160
Elemental Magic - 175
Battlemaster, perfect aim - 190
Resistance - 210
Eldritch Bride - 250

The waifu has
Form change - 5
Scrying, Recognize magic, earth - 30
Psionics, Telekinesis, Illusion - 65
Immortality - 75
Summoning - 90

The settlement starts off very low tech, but given enough time the workshop can turn it into a high tech wonderland. Horrors are dealt with by mission control waifu directing me to where they are, then obliterating them. The library exists as a place to learn how to make more of those wonderful workshops, which we can then export to earth if we feel bored. Or conquer the place, whichever strikes our fancy at the time.

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>>52734073
I found it for you. Please make more cyoas. With hot guys.

>>52733985
>>52733465
2 Free Coins (10)
And I must Scream (5)
Chill Touch (3)
Sensory Swap (0)

Will things be difficult?
Yes.

Can I live my dreams of being a shut in with a legitimate reason not to talk with people?
Bonus

Things will be pretty trippy with the enhanced visual spectrum and sensory swap.

>>52734030
Nazis have the worst aesthetic. It's all buttery.

>>52734132
Thanks!

I'll try.

>>52734142
Buttery?

>>52734175
Yeah. I don't really know how to describe it otherwise. It's like their clothing is covered in a thin layer of unsalted butter. Kinda crinkly, like stars. Effeminate and insubstantial.

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>>52734007
No build-making without Representation!

>>52734083
Weren't kryptonians only superpowered under a yellow sun?

But even if they are, you can probably find some other race that doesn't have such limitation. I personally don't like rules abuse in CYOAs because it just ends with every CYOA coming with 15 page document detailing what you can and can't do.

>>52734236
It's basically under any sun that's not red.

>tfw the images that fit your options are all turbo-/d/ related
I hate having one category go without images but I don't feel this would be a good idea.

>>52734213
You americans are worse than the fags on here. He doesn't have to cater to your needs.

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>>52734249
But I'm an American and want to make a build.

>>52734261
Well create your american cyoa for american people with american builds if you are so insistent

>>52734248
Post a version with the images in this thread: >>>/d/7360539

>>52734272
Making things is unamerican.

>>52734236
The illustrations show a blue sky so i was kind of assuming a yellow sun.

But being kryptonian is honestly more of a perk than a hard requirement for the build to work. It basically grants you super strength and flight for significantly less cost, but compared to ultratech weapons/armor that can be produced at the workshop, those benefits are small time.
The costs for a lot of stuff has balance issues, like most of the settlement buildings. For example, it would be a looooot cheaper to just import stuff like hospital supplies from earth than spend precious build points on such a thing.

>>52734284
Then you will never be able to make an american build

>>52734278
I can't even find the pictures I need on hypnohub. so I couldn't do that if I wanted to. The cyoa is not suppposed to be turbo-/d/

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>>52734316
Hypnosis pleases me.

>>52734331
or at least you think it does..

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>>52734331
It's not hypnosis related but this particular category is most easily visualized with hypnosis.

But here, have a cyoa relevant to your interests.

POST FANTASY CYOAS WHERE YOU CAN MAKE ELABORATE BUILDS I NEED IT PLEASE

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>>52734458

Hey so would you guys like it if I made a missions bit for the CYOA?

Maybe like, 12 different missions?

I know I said I'd work on it in a week or two, but I'm bored, and like (you)s

>>52734470
Wait, there's an updated version of that isn't there?

>>52734473
Yes.

Templars need at least two different purging missions.

>>52734473
Sure missions are cool will they come with or without rewards?

>>52733369
>Boons
Empowered Eyes (2)
Fountain of Youth (7)
Rebindable Flesh (11)
Clawed Hands (12)
Thunderburst Speed (14)

>Issues
Free Coins (2)
Informal Gluttony (4)
Eternal Hunger (6)
Chill Flesh (8)
Discomfort in comfort (11)
Sensory Swap (14)

I live in a country filled with criminal filth, and they shall be my food-source.
Every chilly night I'll go hunting, barechested and constantly pained, my face disguised by a feral looking mask.

They call me The Ghoul.

>>52734487
Reward probably won't be in points form, but will probably give you perks, like, you know, the factions perks.

Just to save people having to go back and redo a build.

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SAME GAME, MORE BALANCE

Begin petition to add additional section to this reeee now I want to know what was in it

>>52734373
Nothing

Arousal

Stockholm Syndrome

*tips fedora* m'lady

>>52734520
>Reward probably won't be in points form,
Good. It's fucking dumb to get points from something you do in the future and you might fail it.

>>52734473
I'd like a mission to found an American faction desu.

>>52734540
I've always thought that.

Why not just take all the missions you can and become some sort of demi-god? Then you *wouldn't* lose.

>>52734553
I actually had an idea for something like that. But trust me, you won't like it.

I will.

>>52734470
friends and money

>>52734568
Objectively correct answer.

>>52734559
>But trust me, you won't like it.
I'm going to fucking throw limes at you u fuckin nonce

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>>52734248
Man this "summon a Succubus" but now it's "summon other Demons but Succubus" took an unfortunate edge-turn. Sorry. I just wanted to build a world and make this more than "pick a waifu"...

>>52734636
'S OK mate. Same thing happened to me. At this point, I'm just running with it.

>>52734527
anyone got the unofficial(?) dlc for this about the "other" being who wanted to just screw with the observers?

>>52734636
Scrap it and start over. I don't think people are going to like your SUMMON A BRUTISH MONSTER WHO WILL MURDERFUCK THE WORLD CYOA much.

>>52734470
gf and money
Who need friends seriously

>>52734636
It sounds like you basically ruined it.

>>52734636
How the fuck do you turn a CYOA about succubuses into a CYOA about everything except succubuses? That's an impressive failure.

>>52734704
I'm still using the images I got from the thread. I just made the world more dangerous than initially planned. There's opposition, basically. Can't pick the Balroc/Unsure-yet and take over the world in a day.
>>52734710
Yeah well, it happens.

>>52734736
>I just made the world more dangerous than initially planned
I'm expecting it to basically be impossible not to get murdered instantly and for all the demons to be intensely revolting. That's what happens every time someone says what you do.

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>>52734733
>summon other Demons but Succubus
means that there will also be Succubus, but 100% of the summons won't be Succubus.
>>52734754
>impossible not to get murdered instantly
Nope. I haven't said anything about how common demons and other urban fantasy stuff is. Some of the ways to summon are edgy, some are not. You can pick the totally-non-edgy one and say it's slice of life.
You know what, just for you I'll rewrite the non-edgy one to be slice of life-tier.
>all the demons to be intensely revolting
Nope. I look forward to making pic related a waifu.

You're free to ignore the how you summoned her/ how much are you in control categories if you prefer. I won't judge.

>>52734813
>means that there will also be Succubus, but 100% of the summons won't be Succubus.
So you can't summon a succubus, you just get some violent murder demons. Again, I ask you how you failed that hard?

>>52734789
Great Observer sounds pretty great.

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>>52734813
>I'll rewrite the non-edgy one to be slice of life-tier.
Ew, don't do that, that's even worse than making them edgy. Being grimderp makes you retarded, being 'slice of life' is fucking BORING, which is a far worse sin.

And I meant revolting in a behavioral sense.

>>52734813
why do cyoa makes act like people are going to ignore lore they don't like? that isn't how it works here

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>>52733660
>Faction
Deutsche Okkulte Gesellschaft
>Perks
Mad Science
>Magical Abilities (60 pts altogether because perk)
Runecrafting R3 (50)
Alchemy R3 (40)
Magical Enhancement R3 (30)
Thaumaturgy R3 (15)
Weird Science R2 (7)
>Equipment
Magical Robes R2 (2)
Bow/Crossbow R1 (0)
>Companions
Siegfried Koch
Ripsnarl Murdersmash

It's a bag and tag squad in the same vein as MIB mixed with Cherion Group from WoD. We respond to magical threats similar to the Fading Giants or GRU-9 but I try to harvest and collect as many ingredients or viable organs/parts from our target when I can. Using Alchemy+Magical Enhancement+Weird Science allows me to go into combat mode and I use Runes to store the various forms I created by grafting animal parts into others or myself. Ripsnarl was trepidatious about some of my grafts affecting his combat potential but he seemed overjoyed when I gave him dragon wings and the ability to breathe fire. Siegfried chides me every once in a while when I try to solve things with tact but he comes around once things devolve into violence and I reveal my modifications in combat. Oddly enough I thought he would be irritated by Ripsnarl but they both seem to connect with their irritation for subterfuge and their straightforward natures.

>>52734813
>the non-edgy one
Anon, I hope you know that forcing people to rape babies and murder their mom isn't going to make you popular.

>>52734823
>So you can't summon a succubus, you just get some violent murder demons
No, that's not really the case.
>Again, I ask you how you failed that hard?
I like it. Having nothing but Succubus would be boring. Having no setting and only waifus would be boring.
Other demons can be cute, too, if you're picking them for that. Most would probably be into a relationship.

>>52734892
>No, that's not really the case.
But you said none of them are a succubus, and you said it's really edgy. You can have a setting without being all murderkillfuck, you know.

>>52734813
>>means that there will also be Succubus, but 100% of the summons won't be Succubus.

Goddamn it man. Stop caving to whiners. Follow your original vision to the end, come what may. We have so many bland waifu CYOAs here already.

>>52734923
His original vision was a succubus CYOA, though.

And I bet $100 you're not going to make a build for his baby rape CYOA.

>>52734923
>Stop caving to whiners
Said anon while whining.

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>>52734636
It's been a while since we've had a good witch burning like with HM or WS anons. There's probably going to be a thread or two devoted just to hating you. I'm looking forward to it on my end.

>>52734284
>implying

See, sentiments like that are why the rest of them hate us, anon! You can't just go around acting like one of those "goes-everywhere-in-a-Hawaiian-shirt" tourists!

I finally realize what is missing for me in Domain Master: an established world. It feels weird making a domain in a world you know nothing about.

Is there something like that? A cyoa with a semi-detailed setting you can design a kingdom in?

>>52735057
Why not take a bunch of builds and staple them all together into a functioning world?

>>52735075
Then there'd be no room for new people's builds.

You also have to consider how minmaxed and ridiculous people's builds are here.

>>52734813
See >>52734862 desu

>>52734373
Ya know what why not

>Cuffs
Easy enough to play off as "normal" while still allowing for POWER.

>Love Potion, Hypnosis, Stockholm Syndrome, Maid, Endocrine Control
And such power! Such undeniable power!

>Patty, Sam, Kirrie, Jill
POWEEEEERRRRRR

>>52735057
My problem with most "god" CYOAs. An interesting world goes way farther for me than any number of power options. If I can't get invested in the world I won't be able to get invested in my build either.

>>52735075
We tried that once.

I rolled critical failures at all the worst possible times and there was that whole thing with the magic/anti-magic war, and then there was the romance of Ice Demon Lady and Shota Mage or something I barely even remember.

tl;dr It got weird.

>>52734789
Eternal Paradise sounds like the best option

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>>52735123
I'm not talking do a complete RP rolling against eachother, that was fucking stupid. I'm talking about meshing a ton of builds into a setting, like people did with Solar Inheritance and JoJo.

>>52734470
GF and money, my friends are already stupid

>>52735057
Domain Master was made mainly to focus on the imagination of coming up with your realm and minions. It lacked with showing more of an established world in exchange for a more detailed selection, including synergy.

If nothing strikes your fancy just make your own CYOA containing everything you want.

>>52735093
Some people will always min-max but I think the cyoa was pretty good at handling it.

>>52735075
you mean like how occasionally happens with Fate /jojo/stardust ?

i think that the CYOA just isnt suited for it. the builds tend to be attheir zenith and with no reason to interact naturally. each is a self contained story so to speak

>>52734906
>But you said none of them are a succubus,
Nope.
>>52734813
>>summon other Demons but Succubus
>means that there will also be Succubus, but 100% of the summons won't be Succubus.
>you said it's really edgy
After re-reading the options, there's only really one kinda edgy. I spoke too soon.
> You can have a setting without being all murderkillfuck, you know
And it is.
>>52734923
What >>52734964
said. I intended to make a pure "you summoned a Succubus-waifu, which do you want?" but have since turned that into "you summoned a Demon, which do you want?".
They will hopefully end up very varied, even if I'm sure most will pick the pretty girls. Can't blame them. Just means I have to buff the more demonic ones.

>>52734964
>baby rape CYOA
What?
>>52735099
Calling it "slice of life" was wrong. It doesn't feature any actual summoning. You summoned the Demon through random happenstance, not doing anything actively.

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Since people are talking about it, might as well post it.

>>52735212
Not if you purposefully design your build to invite interaction with other builds, such as with that mountain dragon guy a while ago.

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>>52734813
Looking forward to it.

>>52735224
>What?
You said it yourself that you're making a super edgy demon CYOA. That's the kind of thing that you see.

>>52735237
>with that mountain dragon guy a while ago

Storm affinity, right? Should I repost?

>>52735274
I'm not sure Expansion has any downsides if you also pick Hidden or Separate.

But I think winning move is to pick Expansion and Mobile and then just wander away whenever neighbors get uppity about your realm eating theirs.

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>>52735224
I'm going to be 100% honest with you. Succubi are the least interesting summons. They're good for fuck and that's it. I do adore a good summoner cyoa because I love the concept. Making it edgy and chuuni is fun too. Make me a male Bayonetta, baby.

Bonus point if the setting is urban fantasy
Double bonus if it's also of the school life genre

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>>52735382
>Succubi are the least interesting summons
Is hard to take what seriosuly when you end your post with
>Double points if it's also of the school life genre

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>>52735441
Fuck you, I was homeschooled. I want to experience a real school life like in my cartoons!

>>52734789
Construct.

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>>52735479
Look at this pleb, he didn't go to a school and make friends. Your life must be really fucking pathetic if you never had friends, I bet you're a virgin too!

>>52734527
25pt+Penalties=59
Food
Kitchen+kitchen basic upgrade=-10
Health&hygiene
Basic hygiene products+High quality upgrade=-3
Proper bathroom+shower+=-3
Monthly checkup+panic button+remove disabilities+Ubermench upgrade=-16
Computer upgrade+Gayman pesee+=-7
Outside
Vacation+survival suit+cool knife=11
Room and misc
Complete body reform-10
Bonus
No aging-9
Platinum briefcase-1
Penalties
10 extra years of stay +10
Weekly migraines +6
Monthly blindess +6
Mute+2
Monthly Asshole visit+4
Monthly stench +4

Can i atleast keep the knife?

>>52734527
25 points is ludicrously small, considering you have to spend half of them on being able to cook anything reasonable.

>>52733029
Do you prefer companions that introduce themselves (Vampire King), or where some third person narrator describes them?

>>52734789
Eternal Paradise is easily the best option, since it encompasses and surpasses the other two.

>>52735862
Does it really matter?
But I personally prefer the 3rd person, those that introduce themselves make it seem like you've already picked them.

>>52735862
No particular preference, as long as the relevant information gets through.

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>>52735862
No reason not to have both at the same time.

However, regardless of which you choose I urge you to consider the meta-context that the information you present implies.

If it's first person, then why would that person introduce themselves to us? Why would they tell us what they're saying? Remember that people rarely divulge their deepest secrets and honest personality traits to someone they just met and have very little emotional investment. What about their own perceptional bias?

If you choose third person narration, then how did THAT person/log/profile learn that information? Are we supposed to ignore this in favor of believing that the information came from god? How much information do they have access to? Is this source capable of lying/not being truthful?

Inevitably these considerations or lack thereof can wildly change the tone of your CYOA and how your readers will see the companions/waifus you write up.

>>52735780
Don't be a sissy and take drawbacks

>>52734992
Can you Combine Cataclysm with Warp?

>>52728993
So which of these did you make

>>52736082
The ones with my name on.

The Eldritch one and the Space Bounty Hunter one.

>>52734992
>Noble

>STR: 3
>DEF: 3
>AGI: 6
>MAG: 4
>SKL: 5 (+5 when using my Ancient Weapon)
>+20 Tribute

>Tempered
>Athletics
>Enhanced
>Sixth Sense (4)

>Finesse
>Spellsurge
>Arcane
>Psionic
>Detect magic (9)

>One with nature
>Bloodlust
>Fleet Footed (12)

>Marksmanship
>Ancient weapon
>Overcharge
>Stamina
>All-seeing Eyes
>Ancient Will (20)
A bow with seeking properties. The bow helps with aiming before releasing the string and knows how to compensate for wind, distance and movement.

Went primarily with skills that made sense fluff-wise, not those that gave me the highest stats.
I would absolutely prefer having Killer Instinct - but that requires Monster Within and I am having none of that.

Attack-strategy:
Use Psionic to temporarily stun the enemy, then snipe them with an Overcharged, Arcane-infused arrow. Gonna shoot lightning bolts.

>Licenses
I'm not hunting the same three monsters until I die. Sounds super boring.
>Forest + Deep (45 T)
>Mountains (75 T)
Forest should be ideal for me but the wind in the Mountains might pose a challenge.

>Physiology - Monster-girl (70 T)
>Gender (65 T)
>Beauty (60 T)
>Exempt (35 T)
>Library (25 T)
>Training (20 T)
Gotta learn how to actually hunt somehow
>Scavenging (15 T)
>Campsite (10 T)
Hunting might as well be comfy at night

I can't afford accommodation which sucks, but I guess no one can stop me from making camp outside the town.

>>52733838
Who cares? It's a CYOA, not real life.

>>52736146
Thanks wasn't sure if you made FUN or not.

>>52736235
Because as an American I can't really join any of the factions but he seems to think Raven, despite being so tip top cheerio long live the queen, would be faction in America.

>>52736272
I'm American, and I'd probably join Raven if I wasn't a Templar.

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>>52736272
>He doesn't there are still Royalist Americans
If there can be Sikh knights in service of the Queen then Royalist Americans aren't far off from reality.

>>52736296
>>52736301
Yes, there are people in America who are Tories in spirit. That's still not most of us.

>>52736301
>Royalist Americans

So Canadians?

>>52735951
Yes, I came up with similar issues if they described themself. Would sound weird with certain options.
>>52735972
>No reason not to have both at the same time.
That was the plan: Some objective narration, some subjective. The real issue was how much of each.

>If you choose third person narration, then how did THAT person/log/profile learn that information? Are we supposed to ignore this in favor of believing that the information came from god? How much information do they have access to? Is this source capable of lying/not being truthful?
Okay I don't know how to answer that. I would assume you trust the narrator?

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This one about horror boarding school ring a little bit too true of high school/college experiences?

>>52736272
They are a faction in America. They recruited people, and now they're there.

They're the magic illuminati, they're more difficult to get rid of than AIDS.

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>>52734992
I had a lot of fun doing this build, but I'm not sure if it can actually work.


>Class
Sorcerer

>Stats
Strength: 2 (1+1)
Defense: 3 (2+1)
Agility: 4 (2+1+1)
Intelligence: 10 (5+1+1+2)
Skill: 9 (2+1+1+1+3+1)

I pick 3 stat points

>My Ancient Weapon

Behold the mighties, most flexible, mysterious and ugly weapon in the entire existence! Witness The Grey Mass Used To Forge Things! Sure, you may say this little shit over here is nothing more than a cube of bland grey clay and you wouldn't exactly be wrong, but, but BUT - it actually has a very interesting set of propieties beyond simply being used to forge weapons, armors or items: it is VERY permeable to magic and spells AND it is possible to get more of it by separating it in two pieces and waiting for it to regrow! You see where I'm going? Exactly, fella, there's a new artificer in the neirbourhood.

>Magical
T1: Catalysts
T2: Arcane, Inscribe, Psionic
T3: Combine, Blink

>Weaponry
T1: Bladed Arms, Blunt Arms, Marksmanship
T2: Ancient Weapon, Enchanment
T3: Ancient Armor
T4: Spine Weaponry

>Elemental
T1: Terrain
T2: Affinity, Duality
T3: Enhance

>Ethereal
T1: Pocketing

>Bounties
Volcano (Ancient) + Glacial (Deep) = 120

>Persona

Exempt (25) - I'm not touching that shit even with a stick. Not even if I had spent the whole year creating a powerful stick that with magical propieties that can extend and contract itself however I want while chanelling lighting magic. But I have one of those if you happen to be interested, my beloved costumer.

(Continues)

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>>52736371

>>52736370

>Resources

Library (10) - Knowledge is power, never forget that. It's also money. And if I'm not wrong that library is going to help to earn some of it. Knowing the monsters, their patterns, strenghts and weaknesses can be crucial while making weapons to deal with them.
Forge (10) - Skilled craftsmen who repair, maintain or custom-make weapons or armors? What a coincidence, this hunter is very interested in learing your ways, you fuck... noble craftsmen! So that's how you do it? Very interesting, very interesting... You know, I would like you to forge something for me using this special material I have stumbled upon!
Market (10) - Well, I have to buy things.
Underground (5) - Well, I have to buy /other/ things, you know. No, not /those/.
Diner (5) - A man as busy as myself can't bother to lose his time with such a trivial activity as it is cooking. Plus, once my business skyrockets I'm going to swim in cash.
Bar (5)- Drinks, socialization and rooms for business. A great place to meet some people and to tell them about my great skills. A broken heart you say? I can give you a hammer that commands the thunder of the heavens while it shatters the skies! What- that you only want her back? Oh, for fuck's sake...
Club (5) - New clients! Oh, so that monster is only vulnerable to fire? There, there. I just happent to have this little thing over here... Seriously, it's a great oportunity to make a contract or sell whatever I have already made.
Bounty (5) - Well, often men as aventourous as myself end up facing untrustworthy fellas who want to hit them as hard as they can in the face. I may need someone else's face to get punched for me.
Upper (40) - That was a hell of a purchase, but, as you may know, image is as important as the product to a business. Besides being a confortable place, I will have plenty of space to storage anything I need and the perfect building to partialy turn into my store. Wellcome, wellcome, my fellow hunters.

>>52736353
What kind of American joins a monarchist faction?

There's also the tone clash, obviously. You have people running around acting British in America, as an actual American in the setting that'd feel completely wrong.

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>>52736348
No not at all. Hopefully your experiences didn't compare to Rapture, even on the Noblebright mode.

>>52736370
>>52736394
You may be asking yourself, what the hell is this prick going to do in order to survive? Simple answer, my friend: I will sell magical items, armors and weapons. A the begining I may need some people from the Forge to help me with the forging, but I'll eventually be able to do it on my own. My items are high-class products imbued with strong magic, sutiable for the job of the hunters. You want a sword that trows flames? An armor that protects you from ilusions and mind magic? A a pendant that lets you teleport around? Something that helps you to survive during the Culling? Fear not, I can craft those for you! My payment, you say? It's easy: I want my quota filled without me having to do the dirty job. Since teamwork is allowed and the kill may be claim by anyone participating in such teamwork, I will give you the item you desire so much and, in return, you will fill a certain amount of my anual quota. Simple, right? What? What if you break the contract? Listen, boy, there are laws around here and I'm sure nobody likes to have a betrayer around, even the worst hunters have some sort of morality. Plus, it would be a shame if that hammer you like so much exploded in your face because you cheated, wouldn't it?

I want my items to be rather exclusive so I'll try not to flood the market with them, but I want to live a live confortable enought without risking my life on those damn monsters.

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>>52736396
>Not knowing the boner a lot of Americans have for Brits
We love English people and others love them beyond that.

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>>52736399
>>52736408

I tend to think less direct comparison and more allegory. Then again I didn't go to Choate.

>>52736396
If someone came up to you, and offered to make you an actual wizard, I'm sure you could overlook their accent.

And even if you couldn't, I'm fairly sure you can imagine their are people who would.

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>>52736423

>>52734373
Collar
>Sure it's tacky, but hopefully with Love potion and Stockholm Syndrome they can take the stupid thing off

powers
>Bimbo ,Love potion, Arousal, Hypnosis, Maid, Stockholm

Slaves
>Ellen, Kirrie, Melody, Jill, Michell

>>52736423
No, high school and college was/is nothing like this horror school. It's boring and nothing goes on and I have no friends.

>>52736418
>loves the island of angles over your own hat

God damnit America.

>>52736396

Quite a number of Americans fetishize the British aristocracy. Did you never catch Downton Abbey?

>>52734132
The hunk. def the hunk. He's perfect. I know this is for gay dudes but I dont care. He sounds amazing.

>>52736476
>Did you never catch Downton Abbey?
No?

>>52736469
Canada defines itself by saying it hates America and is totally better and different you guys.

>>52735224
Thank god, when will anon finally learn that non-succubus is the best form of demons. I would rather have a fit muscle demonfu or a mage demonfu over pure sex demons.

>>52736529
someone will have to make an appealing CYOA first and not an edgelord one.

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I'm reposting thos one since once I update Vile Carols, I'll be updating this one CYOA.
Feel free to tell me what you'd like to see changed or added.
I'll be changing some of the skills and adding more, just a heads up. Perhaps also adding more Terrors and starting locations. Everything else, unless several people give me a good reason to change it, will remain the same.

>>52736570
Should be a male bonus for non-sands since those are exclusive to that one race while females get theirs no matter what race.

>>52736570
I'd like you to change the land of Sadira to the land of Sandra.

>>52736570
Would you mind posting the rest of the pages? I remember I forgot to play this one.

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>>52736570
I'd like to stress the "several people give me a good reason" I wrote in the last post.

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>>52736601
I am on that, but captchas are diddlin' my fucking ass.

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Any SDA's here? If I have fighter inside destroyer and that fighter has two drones in it's hangar does those drones count toward maximum hangar capacity of destroyer?

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>>52736615
>Click on all the mountains
>All pictures are buildings
Are you fucking shitting me, captcha?

>>52736630
Not SDA, but they looked at my build, Had a Rhino Frigate with two fighters in it, and the fighters had drones, and didn't comment on it. So I assume they do not count towards the Destroyer's hangar capacity

>>52736630
I would assume not. If you have a carton of milk, no matter how full that carton is, it's not going to take any less or more space in the fridge.

>>52736630
>>52736654
Why would they? What kind of bizarre logic are you using here?

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>>52736615
>diddlin' my fucking ass.

>>52734992
Okay so I can't be arsed to type up the build but basically it's a guy with a shittonne of skill (literally the maximum) + overcharge + Skull Weaponry + stealthy shit + a magical Rocket Propelled Grenade Launcher.

>>52736677
>What kind of bizarre logic are you using here?
to maintain those drones you will need to detach them from fighter and put them somewhere, so they theoretically could require hangar in it's ship it's in

>>52736423
Hmmm, member of faculty was raped for several years and everyone just kinda shrugged their shoulders and went on with their lives. Truly a serious and mature CYOA.

>>52736631
I would like a way to have a better than 1-in-9 random chance of beating the last Terror. It doesn't have to be guaranteed, or even likely, but 1-in-9 is a little rough.

>>52736755
To maintain them, but in the end they'll still be in the fighter. Nothing says you can't maintain them while they're in the fighter either.

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>>52736758
>everyone just kinda shrugged their shoulders and went on with their lives
she is FEMALE, what did you expect? Should have gave boy grades he deserved

>>52736516
Sounds like Canada is tsundere for America.

>>52736758
its a grimderp chuuni school in line with a hentai

what did you expect

>>52736823
No it's mostly just tsun.

>>52736755
Hangar space is how much you can store, not how much you can lug around the ship. You maintain things in engineering, or if that fails you can just dump it in a corridor for a few hours.

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>>52733660
>Name
Jasper Kennedy
>Organization
The Order of the Raven
Perk: Highborn, +10 magic points and more effective against the Undead, Werewolves, and Abbysals
>Magical Abilities
Healing Magic Rank 3
Defensive Magic Rank 3
Thaumaturgy Rank 3
Elementalism Rank 2
>Equipment
Magical Robes Rank 3
Small Gun Rank 3 (Smith & Wesson M&P Shield named Samuel)
Explosives Rank 3 (Elemental Effect: Frost)
>Allies
>Adolfo Moretti
He's such a jerk and I don't think he trusts me, but his blood magic will be useful. And the protection he gets from working with me convinces him to help.
>Ripsnarl Murdermash
Every group needs muscles and he's the man-wolf(?) for it. It's weird that he sniffs around where I sleep.

Being an enforcer is a tiring job and I do not know why my brothers joined the Templars. It's bad enough Father and Mother disowned them, now I have to keep an eye on them so they don't become brainwashed fanatics. It's never easy being the eldest child.

>>52736755
They can probably run maintenance inside of the fighter I would assume

>>52736758
This is only the beginning of the horrors you will witness.

Abandon hope, all ye who enter here.

>>52736830
That's just what they want us to think.
>I-I'm just here because this was the only place left with m-moose and maple trees.
>It's n-not like I l-like you or anything, you b-baka!

>>52736925
No trust me it's pretty much entirely smug nationalism (but don't call it nationalism!).

>>52736915
or you just don't be female

>>52736938
Nah, one day they'll express their true feelings and ask to be annexed.
Meanwhile America will be completely oblivious and never see it coming.

>>52736348
My fetish is leading revolutions but I'm a boy so to gain their trust I guess I'll have to dress up as a girl...

>>52736967
>What is Articles of Confederation Art 11?

>>52737045
>the women here trust each other
If you want to make up an excuse for you to dress up like a girl at least come up with a good one

>>52737101
This way I can change my outfit and outlandish mannerisms to suit the houses I need to butter up!

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>>52734992
Hunter
+1 Skill Point Blessing

STR 2
DEF 2
AGI 4
INT 1
SKI 3

Physical (7)
T1 Tempered
T2 Willpower, Athletics
T3 Sixth Sense
T4 Nullification

Spiritual (6)
T1 One with Nature
T2 Monster Within, Soul Spirit (Phoenix)
T4 Twin Soul

Weaponry (2)
T1 Bladed Arms
T2 Enchantment

Elemental (4)
T1 Primal Power
T2 Affinity (Fire)
T3 Propulsion, Enhance (Lightning)

Ethereal (2)
T1 Pocketing
T2 Premonition

Copy Ninja, looking for team. I excel in agility, evasion and lightning strikes for physical combat. With my twins I can pretty much nullify any kind of magical foe. Relying on my ninja insticts for hunting and surviving, and if something doesn't feel right I can send in a twin. I had to give up Enhanced and Stamina but I suppose Propulsion is a good substitute for both of them if you have enough elemental power.

I don't really mind what soul I get for Monster Within as I can use most of them in my build. So I would just look out for the most rare and useful one.

Terrains
Twilight Forest (3) +35
Twilight Mountains (4) +45

Persona
Beauty -5
Just to fix a few complications

Forge, Alchemy, Market -30
Training, Scavenging -10
Diner, Hot Springs -10
Underground -5
Inn -10

10 tribute left, coins are always nice.

>>52736019
Warp is an arcane ability, and Cataclysm is an elemental ability. So yeah you can.

>>52737059
My Google-fu has failed me, and I'm not a history buff.
If it's something that's supposed to stop America from annexing countries, that just means it's forbidden love.
And we all know forbidden love is the best kind of love.

>>52735972
What does the "gar-" mean?

>>52737137
http://avalon.law.yale.edu/18th_century/artconf.asp#art11

>Canada acceding to this confederation, and adjoining in the measures of the United States, shall be admitted into, and entitled to all the advantages of this Union; but no other colony shall be admitted into the same, unless such admission be agreed to by nine States.

If Canada wants to join the USA they are automatically allowed without any objections.

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>>52736570
Third line intro,
>a land like this is doesn't
Remove the "is"
5th line, intro
>and unique in the
Should probably be "on" ?
Sixth line, "thousand of legends"
Should probably be plural.

Might be better if blue stats apply to boys and pink/red to girls. You know, "boy/girl colors". The first three races have identical stats if male or female - why not write them in black?

>Darkskin elves
Because pretty also hot they used to be slaves and might still be treated like that by some...
>shorter and thicker
Unf.

>STR: 5 +3 +2 +1
>SPD: 5 +2 +2 +3 +3
>FIN: 5 +2 +3 +1
>STA: 5 +2 +3
>WIL: 5 +1 +1
>CAST: 5 +1 +3
>CRA: 5 +1
>CON: 5 +1 +1
>ELO: 5 +1
I honestly cannot remember what these stats mean or what they represent at these levels. I stopped counting and caring by the skill section. I'm not going to keep count of nine stats that I can't remember what do.

>Accursed Township
You had me at Slavehouse
Okay just gotta figure out what/who the Velvet Veil are and If I'm happy they may take an interest in me
Why not write the "Only female" bonus in blue?

>Spear
>Bow
>Leather
Don't really need anything else, so I'll pick
>Dagger
>Staff

>Muffled walk
>Acrobatics
>Smithing
>Living arms
>Breathing technique
>Devourer
>Pack mule
You gotta change the colors for Survival and Magic, that is not easy to read.

>Drake Halfling Alana
Looks cute.
Under Enyala and Hastur, change "were brothers" to "were siblings".
>Moira "The Scholar"
Guess I'll go to mage school now.

Yep I'm going to forget about Terrors, they respawn anyway.
>Archivist
Just gonna work at the University until I have enough money to be a student I guess.


The cyoa looks very pretty but there are glaring faults, the main fault being having to keep track of 9 different stats. Then there's having no frame of reference what each level entails, why a weapon gives you stats and having to track "levels" with jobs. It's awkward.

>>52733660
>Faction
Fading Giants

>Perk
Alpha

>Spells
Alchemy 3 [10]
Magical Enhancement 3 [10]
Illusion Magic 3 [10]

>Equipment
Heavy Armor 3 [15]
Bow 3 [10]
Explosives 3: Armor-Piercing Earth [10]
Magical Supplies 2 [5]

>Allies
Siegfried Koch
Ripsnarl Murdersmash


Soldier of fortune. No one lives forever, so why not do something exciting? Enhanced strength is to wield my bow. Arrows have a variety of effects; healing allies with potion tipped arrows+empowering allies with Magical Enhancement infused arrows (have fun meleeing a Magically Enhanced werewolf, enemies), instant kill poison tipped arrows or armor piercing explosive charge arrows.

Siegfried makes up for my slower arrow attacks by spamming machine gun bullets, shredding any horde of weaker enemies. Ripsnarl keeps any melee monsters from getting near us and is generally terrifying to most creatures that can feel fear.

I took illusion just in case we need to set a trap (luring enemies into a minefield) or use general trickery to win. It also lets Ripsnarl walk around in public without drawing attention.

>>52736860
>>52736907
>>52736777
>>52736672
>>52736654
With this knowledge I can evaluate drone swarm tactic

>>52736570
>Goldstrand Elf males
>Fin+3, Spd+2, Cra+2, Con+1, Cra+1, Wil+1
>Cra+2, Cra+1
So three total? Or are there two kinds of male Goldstrand Elf?

Also, I noticed some of the races have a few identical stats between their genders, namely Drachmanians and Darkskin Elves.
Are you going to put those in black?

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>>52737153
>Gar
It's an old meme, but it checks out: Being "gar" means being "gay for archer"

>>52736570
Nightward Elves, should be "which leads to their settlements being dimly lit" I think.

Vecator, "able to percieve the eneries" perceive, energies.

Stillwater, "thiefs", thieves

Accursed Township, "There you found some discoveries", sounds kinda really awkward.

Sandstone Chapel, "a gift from the divinity", I don't think divinity is correct word to use here but I might be wrong.
"recieve training", receive

Fog Valley, "in Azrha terrotiry", territory
"Unofrtunately"
"Dissinterest", should have only one s

Azrha Yahud, "are Azrha, which are" should be "who are", I think.

I'm not native english speaker so I might be wrong about some of these.

>>52737227
Yeah I know that but presumably she's not -- gay for superbuff men?

>>52737227
That's retarded.

>>52737164
The Articles of Confederation were replaced 229 years ago.
So it's still forbidden love. The best kind of love.

>>52737240
i assume she likes machismo

>>52737240
gar has come to just mean incredibly manly, to the point that it makes straight men gay. It's an adjective now

>>52737266
only if you're new

>>52737299
>>52737304
I guess.

Well then, out of a sense of duty and kindness I will not pick her.

>>52736570
Is there anything requiring that you try to take down more than one terror, or can you stop after the first?

Also, could you potentially take your sweet time preparing?

Do you guys like companion specific quests?

So far I have a mix of companion and faction specific quests.

>>52735972
>A cockroach
I suppose you gotta give the turks something

>>52736570

Honestly, everything looks good to me but the quests and terrors. The quests are way too open ended. I mean, you can spend a few centuries on the quests and just end up with the stats of a god. On the other hand the terrors are nothing but a random die roll to fight. The gateways to fight them are a bit of a joke because the quests give you infinite stats. On the other hand, who cares? No matter how much you prepare it's all up to the roll of a die. You don't even get anything from defeating them! ... Other then that, like I said, I like it.

>>52737212
One thing I need to address is the fact that Moths have 4 hangar spaces, so I'm going to have to address that unfortunately.

>>52737335
I hate all [x]-specific quests.

>>52737354
Ah. Shit. Currently there's only one quest that doesn't require you to either have a certain companion or be of one of 2/3 Factions.

>>52737335
I like them in addition to not-at-all specific quests.

>>52737384
MGE fucking when?

>>52737353
Couldn't you just make a note somewhere that fighters can't fit in fighters?

>>52737384
It's mostly because I hate factions. Companion-specific choices, at least, are pretty cool -- they flesh out the characters a lot IMO. You know, so you don't end up in a "well I chose this dude to be my waifu and now the CYOA will never mention them again" situation.

>>52737396
MGE exists independent of me. I'm making MGSI. I'm currently on page 4 of 6.

>>52737335
I like it when it ties into the companion, so you're doing something that involves them more than just as a measure of capability, such as doing a task personal to them.

Rolled 5, 6, 9 = 20 (3d10)

>>52736348

Rolling on erotic horror for antagonist

>>52737229
Neither am I. Whatever the case, I appreciate that.
>>52737216
>Are you going to put those in black?
Most likely.
>are there two kinds of male Goldstrand Elf?
You may need to explain yourself better.
>>52737327
No requirements. You can ignore terrors if you want. You could also spend 10 years preparing, but that wouldn't improve your chances.
>>52737342
>On the other hand the terrors are nothing but a random die roll to fight.
I still can't come up with a better way to represent the risk that is getting into a fight with one. RNG'll have to do unless someone has a good alternative.
>Stats of a god
That is one of the things that's getting changed.
>>52737173
>9 Stats
I do recall someone saying that the first time I posted it too. Still, I'm sorry, but I'm not going to reduce the number of stats. Each fulfills a very specific niche, none of which I'm willing to compromise.

>>52737335
I like the idea of companion specific.
Faction specific quests less so.

>>52737420
But muh stats

That's a possibility but I want to avoid putting more specialized rules into descriptions. There's enough as it is.

Removing 1 hangar space still leaves the Moth in a good place. If anything I'll give it 1 more point-defence hardpoint to compensate.

>>52737426 >>52737424
Yeah, basically I picked a few companions that either had nice easy plot hooks, popular ones, or ones that I thought needed a bit of fleshing out, and gave them a quest, that usually involves helping them out.

>>52737458
The faction specific ones aren't ever limited to ONE faction, and are usually open to 2 or 3, even when I have to contrive it to be possible. And that being said, it's hard to justify, for example, Cultists fighting a cult, or DOG guys going after DOG guys.

>>52737442
>You may need to explain yourself better.
I figured that the double Cra stat for males was a mistake, and was trying to make a dumb joke.

>>52737470
Maybe you could give Moths 1 room. That would be another specialized rule, since you've stated fighters can't have rooms, but being able to stick a bedroom or a cargo space into a fighter would be cool.

>>52737353
About hangars, can I fit inside cruiser a fighter and fit Lamprey inside of it and fit two Ground mechs inside of it, how much hangar space would it all take and could those mechs be useful for boarding party?

>>52737488
Well, that second Cra was supposed to be Cast, so it was a useful joke, if not a funny one.

>>52737442
You could possibly combine spd with fin and turn it into dex, but otherwise the stats are pretty good. Though crafting ability in pretty much all CYOAs is a skill instead of a stat. It really doesn't make much sense as a stat.

>>52733369
>>52733465

>Services:

Beauty - cost 1 (total cost so far 1)

Hot blood - 1 (2)

Empowered eyes - 2 (4)

Strength beyond - 2 (6)

Thought processing - 4 (10)

Clawed hands - 1 (11)

Divine the secrets - 6 (17)

Fountain of youth - 5 (22)

Structural enhancement - 2 (24)

Rebindable flesh - 4 (28)

Thunderburst speed - 2 (30)

Stay the devourer - 3 (33)

Impenetrable skin - 3 (36)

>Payment:

Free tokens - -2 (34)

Parasitic organs - -2 (32)

Mindslaver - -7 (25)

And I must scream - -5 (20)

Informal gluttony - -2 (18)

The light within - -4 (14)

Eternal hunger - -2 (12)

Uncontrollable limbs - -3 (9)

Sensory swap - -3 (6)

Dark midas touch - -4 (2)

Weeping god's toxin - -3 (+1)

Word triggers (corpulence) - -2 (+3)

Burrowing larvae - -5 (+8)

Murkblood reek - -2 (+10)

Robbed of pleasure - -3 (+13)

Dysphoria - -4 (+17)

Discomfort in comfort - -3 (+20)

Quarter time - 20 (0)

>Spend 25 years as mindless, man-eating monster in weird, non-lucid, dream-like, nightmare, state.
> 'Wake up' 25 years later if I'm not killed during this time.
> ???
> Profit.

>>52737320
>ywn have a monstergirl weeb waifu
>ywn make fun of her shit taste

>>52737515
Assuming you put all of those things inside of each other, it'd only take 4 hangar spaces in the cruiser. Just try not to think too much of the actual physical limitations I'm breaking here with these rules.

Mechs are useful in boarding parties, yes. Less so in smaller craft, definitely in bigger ones.

>>52737470
Well then i would also like to point you to the rhino with the 8 hanger spaces so same problem
the point defense is a pretty good trade off though

>>52737493
instead of giving them one room maybe +free crew quarters upgrade
I imagine fighter living spaces are about as big/nice as moderate sized long haul truck rigs
so lets just assume moths have plush(er) ones

>>52734992
I AM THE WALL
>Warrior
>Blessing
+3 Agility
>Stats
Strength: 8
Defense: 9 (14 with Iron Mass)
Agility: 5
Intelligence: 1
Skill: 3
>Physical
Toughness, Willpower, Sixth Sense, Iron Mass
>Magical
>Spiritual
One with Nature, Poisons, Bloodlust, Monster Within, Hybrid
>Weaponry
Blunt Arms, Ancient Weapon (Hammer), Stamina, Ancient Armor
>Elemental
Primal Power, Affinity (Water), Infusion
>Etherial
Indomitable, Blessed
>Licenses
Tiger, Leviathan, Dragon
>Persona
Beauty, Vacation (Winter)
>Resources
Forge, Market, Training, Scavenging, Campsite, Map, Diner, Hot Springs, Club, Inn, Servant (Wolf), Personality (Loving)

Once I get the 3 souls, I can have a water coat, bonus resistance, and even more bonus resistances. I had to give up on healing, so I'll need to find a teammate that can heal.

>>52737580
More like
>you will never have a monstergrill waifu

>>52737622
nvm...i just realised the crew quarters thing would essentially make a navy ship appear more plush then a pulsar one, which doesnt make a whole lot of sense

so point defense i guess

>>52737622
>Well then i would also like to point you to the rhino with the 8 hanger spaces so same problem
Yeah, but it's somewhat less of an issue because you can only fit frigates inside of carriers, which is a unique trait given to carriers and their role as opposed to saying "fighters can't fit fighters".

>>52737594
>Just try not to think too much
I was thinking more if this matreshka was an exploit you missed rather than physical part of it

>>52734789
The Construct

I love simulations. World/galaxy crafting sounds entertaining.

>No one knows you exist
I'm guessing that means even if you perform miracles or communicate with them, they'll worship and understand only the barest, smallest fraction of your true self?

>>52737668
Gave that dagger a write-up, don't think it's good, but it's there
https://pastebin.com/WqDL6qvN

>>52736570
Jesus fucking christ, 9 stats? It looks quite interesting, but 9 stats is a clusterfuck I don't want any part of.

>>52737673
He just told you it wasn't senpai.

>>52734789
Yeah eternal paradise is the best, mostly because you won't have crushing loneliness.

>>52737668
Honestly I don't get how people are having trouble with this. They think their ship swells up like a bag when they dock other ships? A ship with hangar space has those empty spaces integrated, if you open them up and slide a fighter in or whatever that's actually completely logical. It's a hard body, you're filling empty space, it's not getting any bigger. It's not some cheat for your frigate not to swell up like a fat pig because something docked in it.

>>52734527
This one was fun, my build was studying future mathematics for 20 years.

>>52737760
I also choose Eternal Paradise, but I think it would be hard to have a fulfilling adventure or relationship when you're essentially God. Part of the reason I think Time Stop Chill Zone is such a good CYOA is still having access to reality gives you the ability to appreciate your own dimension

>>52737714
No idea where you're getting that you're shit at writefagging, desu. This was more than I could ever ask for.

I mean, by writing a backdrop for your builds, I usually just mean something to give me some semblance of the sort of character you have. This was neat.

>>52737779
I imagine fighter hangar spaces as not being air-tight, like having the drones just attached to some designated surface of the hull that's classified as a "hangar space". At least, that's how I write it off.

I have no explanation for vehicles, though.

>>52737798
But you could always create a subreality where while in it you don't have unlimited power

>>52734789
>Great observer
That's literally what my idea of Heaven is: Endless cyoas, designing them before living them.

>>52737810
I mean, you can similarly just hook a vehicle under there and undocking just involves hovering close to the ground and decoupling it.

>>52737810
Reworking profile is finished. Herald fanatic begins his search!

https://pastebin.com/GRQVs1EU

Actually, is it possible to fit in Officer Quarters by cutting room number? I have double of what I really need, most ship systems are automated

>>52737798
The adventure thing will be very hard. Playing god would be fine though, because you won't actually be OMNISCIENT INEFFABLE LOVECRAFTIAN YHWH. Actually making your own world and making you and your friends into mythical gods would be pretty cool.

>>52737839
>you can similarly just hook a vehicle under there
Yeah, but what about the drivers/passengers of the vehicle? I imagine that most vehicles aren't air tight, especially ones like the dunebuggy.

>>52737862
I have to compliment the way you organized this, makes it easy to read.

>8 Overchargers
Christ you're a madman.

>Actually, is it possible to fit in Officer Quarters by cutting room number?
I don't follow what you mean by this.

>>52737865
I would have to make facsimiles of my friends. Which is not the same, but preferable to actually dragging them in with you. Eternal Paradise doesn't say your friends can leave once you drag them in, so you're fucking stuck with them. Tired of fighting BBEGs and want to relax in a nice harem fantasy? Too bad, Jim is still stuck here too.

>>52737919
>Yeah, but what about the drivers/passengers of the vehicle?
They're not in there in transit. That'd be really dumb if they were. They'd board after decoupling.

>>52734789
>you can have any power you want except for omnipotence
that IS omnipotence

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>>52734992
Alright I guess I'll try this. Expect nothing special.

>Hunter
Stat points seem to be the only difference between classes, and I don't really know how much of a difference stat points make so I'll just go with the obvious choice.

>str: 2 +2
>def: 2 +3
>agi: 4 +2
>int: 1 +2
>ski: 3 +2

>+20 tribute points
Again, I don't know how important the stats are, nor am I going to build a stat-dependent character if I can help it. 1 skill point isn't interesting as I have all I want and while the monster soul could give a big advantage (especially as a rookie I think) the tribute can be used for other kinds of advantages.

>(20)
>toughness
>martial arts
>athletics
>enhanced
>(16)
>one with nature
>poisons
>bloodlust
>monster within
>bindings
>fleet footed
>killer instinct
>siphon
>(6)
>marksmanship
>ancient weapon
>stamina
>(3)
>recall
>premonition
>cloaking
>(0)
I'm going for a mobility and stealth approach. I'd rather use ranged surprise attacks, poisons and traps than fight monsters straight up.

>>52736370
I like the build, but I also wonder how the Godess would react

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Here's an early prototype. Thoughts? Suggestions and things you'd like to see?

>>52734992
Haven't posted a build for this before because i was too lazy

>Class
Warrior
>Blessing
Monster Soul (Dragon)
>Skills
Tempered, Willpower, Enhanced
Toughness, Flurry, Sixth Sense
Martial Arts, Athletics
Finesse
One with nature, Monster within
Bloodlust
Bladed arms, Ancient weapon, Stamina
Adaptation, Infusion
Indomitable
Recall
Pocketing
>Attributes
STR: 7
DEF: 6
AGI: 5
INT: 3
SKL: 6
>Bounties/Licenses
Ancient Plains
Deep Mountains
>Persona
Physiology, gender, and beauty
>Resources
Campsite
Map
Diner
Middle house

I'll rush the quota at the start of every season then go back home and chill for the rest of the season once i hit it. During the culling i would try my best to stay away from others, hopefully no one comes to fight me.
Plains and mountain terrains seem like the most visually appealing and easy to fight in conditions, so i'll go with that. My attack strategy would most likely just be brute forcing the monster's weak points until it dies. I wouldn't mind joining a team, but I would go solo until someone asks because of my social anxiety. Ancient weapon would be a large, otherworldly long blade that has exceptional durability and lightness to easily swing around with one hand and deal damage.
Combining the persona changes with monster within so i can be a half dragon half human monster grill.
15 Tribute points left over just in case.