/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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>It's been about a year since my first cyoa (pic related).
Holy shit, time flies.

I'm thinking of creating a C.Y.O.A., wat advice would you give me, /tg/?
In before 'kill yourself'.

>>52695036
>>52695052

Where is the rest, you fucking assmonger?

>>52695339
start off small. They take longer than you probably think. My first one took me like a week of hard work, and it had shit formatting

>>52695339
Write it out in a word doc first, that way you avoid most spelling errors. Also, make sure to fill out at least a page of word doc per day; you'll be surprised how fast you get done.

From there, it's just a matter of getting the image set up, fine tuning the text, and copying and pasting onto the image.

>>52695339
And music thematically fitting for what you're trying to write and play it as you do so.

>>52695339
If you're using photoshop or any image editing software and/or have the intention of adding pics, you should get yourself a database of artists that do stuff. Not only to be able to find usable pictures but also to use them as an inspiration if you intend to draw yourself.
Also, there's no need to start small, but don't expect your first CYOA to be particularly popular. But I digress. Point is, no need to start small. Know what you want to do and how much effort are you willing to put in. Longer stuff'll naturally require more effort. More numbers'll require more attention to balancing. Shit like that.
>>52695412
is super fucking useful as well.

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>>52695339
Use GIMP

The devil will try to whisper in your and to tell you to use photoshop, don't listen.

>>52695339
Fuck >>52695503, come and use Paint with me.

>>52693928
I like reading Stardust builds. Then again I took up like 5 posts a few threads ago with one.

>>52695519
>mfw I use paint and sometimes paint.net

get on my level fags

>>52695589
Nigga

MS

Get with it.

Someone post some lewd shit please

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>>52695685
You asked for it you naughty boy.

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>>52695715
I can't believe I'm posting something like this on a blue board.

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>>52695503
>GIMP

>>52695715
I started to listen to Dio because of this CYOA

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>>52695945

>>52695948
Oh. I did not anticipate it having such an effect on someone. Huh.

Zodiac Brides when?

>>52695715
Armor
Infant Slayer

Andrew Jackson
>Maybe I'll be the one to finally assassinate him

>>52696020
Like three or so weeks from now, dude is playing P5.

>>52695036
Do you need to buy level 5 Magic to get access to Arcane Bonus or what?

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>>52695945
>>52695959
Travellers CYOA:
Origin and Background:
>Serval 'The Serval', 2, True Travellers, Kemono Friend
>Race: Friend (Serval), Gender: Female
>The Now: Watcher (+Low Tech Understanding, +5 Traits, +Alien Body, +1 Companion)
Skills, Perks and Traits: (+3 Traits)
>Low Tech Understanding
>Common Ethereal Manipulation
>Basic Ethereal Manipulation
>Advanced Ethereal Manipulation
>Natural Beauty
>Nobel Physique
>Runner
>Lucky
>Frontliner
>Sneak
>Unarmed Combatant
>Psyker
>Friendly Face
>Nocturnal
>Touched by Fox Fire
Initial Equipment Requisition: (+2000)
Clothing:
>Friend Outfit (Free)
>Travelers Leathers: Upgrade (Free)
Weapons:
>Yuta Brace: Upgrade + Double (Free)
>Natural Weapons (-300)
General Items:
>Pegs (Free)
>Basic Survival Kit (Free)
>Basic Bag (Free)
>ID Card (Free)
>Travelers War Horn (-200)
>Behlit Fragments (-3000)
>BIO Chip (-300)
>Ring of the Wild Gods (Free)
Little Things:
>I Don't Need No Governa's Dalla! (+3 Trait, -1200)
>Fuck Your Glowy Bullshit (+600)
>Brothers of the Bite (+2000)
>Scattered Mind (+100)
>Goldfish Retention (+300)
Factions, Departments and Others:
>The True Travelers: Faction Leader Dusan Duwal the Fifth of the Order (Absent) (+Travelers Leathers Upgrade, +Double Yuta Brace Upgrade, +1 Trait)
The Convents:
>The Temple of the Wild Gods (+Touched by Fox Fire, +Ring of the Wild Gods)
Allies: (+4 Companions)
>Kaban, 3 Months, True Travelers, The Park Guide
Home District:
>Hubworld: Outland is Best
Hubworlds:
>Terra D561488: The Park of Friends
Panic Button:
>The Unbreakable

>>52695036
Is there a source on the Prof. Lana pic?

>>52696738
http://pablofernandezartwrk.deviantart.com/art/Dragons-Shadow-Scholar-Xmas-special-602173624

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>>52695036
>>52695052

Since the above idiot apparently can't finish what he started

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This one is pretty fresh

>>52695036
>>52695052
HWAT COULD POSSIBLY GO WRONG build

Tristain
Professor Lana Palandine

Combat Skill 3 (15)
Command 3 (10)
Arcana 3 (5)
Investigation 3 (0)

Lore of Wind 5 (6)
Lore of Fire 3 (1)
Lore of Heavens 1 (0)

Living Metal Symbiote (2500)
Artificer Spear (1100)
Firearms (600)
Academic Pass (500)
Safehouse (0)

Lady Filliah of Shroudsong
Tyhaniel Carmine
Glory of One Song
Pyyrah
GARD

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>>52697012

>>52694944
I look forward to your buttslut coming on here

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>tfw hundreds of cyoas but none of them have your fetish
>it's not even a bad fetish

>>52697625
and your fetish is?

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>>52697658
Extremely confusing, needlessly complicated love dodecahedrons centered around an oblivious main protagonist.

It gives me an angry kind of erection.

>>52694642
What's the point of these?

>>52696909
>>52696926
> You'll never be as cool as KAGHAN, CHAMPION OF STEEL!

Why even try?

>>52694642
>they will definitely not want to fuck you
I guess I'm not picking that one, then.

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>>52697753
Secrets etc.

Anyhow, going over the archive I remembered Harem Anon actually claimed to have made this as a sort of experiment on how to present triggering waifus in CYOAs. Here's what he said:

>I can't hope this won't anger anyone, but I actually think I might be also surprised by how few it will. A lot of observation went into the smallest details in here, from the pictures chosen to the wording of descriptions, and I'm confident in most. As you know, I'm a firm believer in that "harshness" is integral to the identity of CYOAs - as a medium, few others are better suited to provoking people to consider their choices, which can be an emotionally powerful experience and an avenue to self-realization. With this kind of CYOA, the real question isn't "which girl you picked", but "how would you respond to finding out ____ about her, and what does it mean about you?". I hope that by not shying away from "harshness", but presenting it properly, this issue can be safely addressed.

>This is why I chose to keep the level of harshness (with one exception) flat across the board - what I did change was the treatment. With each option, "harshness" was presented differently. In ascending order of how much anger I think they might provoke, these were:

>1. Replacing expected harshness completely.
>2. Ignoring negatives.
>3. De-emphasizing negatives.
>4. Changing the subject of harshness.
>5. Changing the focus of harshness.
>6. Silver lining harshness.
>7. Distracting from harshness.

>(as a fun exercise, try figuring out which character was which).

Has anyone ever tried doing that? Trying to analyze which was which type of treatment?

>>52696640
IIRC, you need max arcana, as well as to max the spell school you want to get the arcana bonus for.

>>52697684
Does he fuck any of them?

>>52697684
Considering it is centered in a oblivious protagonist making a cyoa from that perspective is weird but what can be done is for you to be one of the integrants of this mess

>>52697884
This gives me an idea. The villain in a setting could be a harem protagonist whose mere presence is keeping everyone cucked and unhappy. It's your job to get him out of the picture so everyone else can pair up nicely, including you.

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Any updates on this?

>>52695036
UPDATE WHEN

>>52698008
The other three were already posted.

>>52698024
THAT IS NOT AN UPDATE

>>52695715
>>52695728
hhnnnnggg

>>52698048
There need not be an update, you tool.

It's already fabulous.

>>52697946
I don't want some villain's disgusting used goods.

>>52697767
Wonder where he went off to, I disagree with his methodology but the reaction to this one wasn't explosively negative so it's not like it should've been enough for him to leave.

>>52698069
IT NEEDS MORE THAN JUST AN UPDATE
THE CREATOR HIMSELF SAID SO

>>52698113
Still your vagina, you vagina.

>>52698108
IIRC, the last anyone's heard from him he was swamped with schoolwork.

>>52698138
WHY HAS HE FORSAKEN US

>>52698108
I guess I can confess the truth already. I murdered him. He shouldn't have included... that girl. It was only natural.

>>52698162
Shut your whore mouth, you whore.

>>52698144
Damn real life.

>>52698169
HE MUST RETURN

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Okay, replaced rng with a more game like system
https://pastebin.com/9TaEx9Jb
How is it so far?

>>52695339
Have fun with all the different settings in Photoshop. Don't worry too much, just try.

>>52698223
How do carrier ships work? Like, do tiny girls live inside the bigger girl?

I know about the fairies in kancolle, they're stupid and poorly explained and gross. The difference here though is that in yours the planes are full on girls of their own, not just retarded chibi sprites with brain damage.

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>>52688372
>Noble
>Plus 3 stat points (Strength X2, Intelligence X1)
>Toughness (19)
>Tempered (18)
>Willpower (17)
>Enhanced (16)
>Overdrive (13)
>One with Nature (12)
>Monster Within (11)
>Fleet Footed (10)
>Killer Instinct (9)
>Hybrid (8)
>Bladed Arms (7)
>Blunt Arms (6)
>Marksmanship (5)
>Stamina (4)
>Indomitable (3)
>Blessed (2)
>Cloaking (1)
>Healing (0)
Are there times that I don't enjoy the stat benefits from skills like one with nature? I put them in the same bracket as those from override anyway.
>Ancient Ruins, Underground Caves (4 skulls, 50 crowns, 3 skulls, 45 crowns)
>Forge (85)
>Alchemy (75)
>Market (65)
>Training (60)
>Map (55)
>Bounty (50)
>Underground (45)
>Upper accomodation (5)
>Servant (0)
Strength: +++ [++++++++]
Defense: ++[+++]
Agility: +++[++++++]
Intelligence: ++
Skill: ++++[+]
I'm going to be one of those annoying people that takes pleasure in lording their power over others during the culling.
My entire build is for PvP. I could probably get someone to pay me in exchange for protection.

Wait a minute. Why does everyone start killing each other on the culling island? What's the incentive?

>>52698412
>Why does everyone start killing each other
Why wouldn't they?

>>52698412
> Wait a minute. Why does everyone start killing each other on the culling island? What's the incentive?
Because the majority of the people who make builds want to. That's about it really. There isn't an incentive, it's just that a large enough chunk of the hunter population wants to kill other hunters simply for the lulz that it then ends up playing to the fears of the more paranoid, who in turn add to the numbers of hunters out to kill other hunters out of a belief that they must kill before they themselves are killed. On top of that, the people who aren't interested in the culling have largely taken exempt, meaning the overwhelming majority who participate in the culling do so because they want to kill people.

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>>52698457
Can't we just all agree to sit at the beach and eat berries together without bloodshed and then spend the points left over from not taking exempt on better accomodations? Can we do that?

>>52698457
I can see the master of the hunt offscreen laughing like a retard while watching the culling unfold

>>52698476
Normal people haven't been able to do that for the most part, so I don't see why a subset of the human population that is even less mentally healthy than the average person would be able to do that.

>>52698476
Prisoner's dilemma. If everyone agrees to play it friendly then you can wreak havoc, if nobody agrees to play it friendly then you get slaughtered.

>>52698247
Well, you can have a carrier girl and plane squadmates, but its going to be like sitting on her vehicle parts, or on her shoulders/in her hands .
Fairies will pilot the carrier's non squadmate planes that are kept inside the vehicle parts

>>52698476
There have been people trying to make builds to kill people who take exempt, aimed at ambushing hunters in the wilds and avoiding attention by the guards who might try to stop them. And they're doing it for no reward beyond killing other people. You're not going to get those people to sit down peacefully just by asking them.

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>>52698503
Multiple people being peaceful together can protect themselves against a single bad apple.

I have decided my purpose. I will form a mighty clan. A hierarchy of battle prowess ensures that someone always has someone more powerful right above them to keep them in check.
Every year during the culling we will seek each other out and protect ourselves against enemies as a united front. If everything goes well they'll see that if they can't beat us they should join us.

>>52698476
Fuck that

>>52698543
Human organizations naturally gravitate toward corruption and dictatorship. You get much further in terms of rising in group hierarchy by screwing over the vast majority of the group in order to get the resources to secure the loyalty of a few vital power brokers and lieutenants.

Such a clan will quickly turn into a protection racket, and you will go the way of all idealistic revolutionaries. You will be quickly outmaneuvered within the group's internal power structure and ousted by a brutal tyrant who bought the loyalty of key supporters at the expense of both the masses and the movement's ideals and usurped it to serve his own selfish ends.

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>>52698605
My only ambition is to avoid mass slaughter.
I have no idealistic political ideals I want to bring to fruition.
I see no reason why I can't be the corrupt tyrant that buys loyalty and uses the threat of force. My build is centered around PvP. I am in a position to bully people into servitude.

>>52697626
>The Palace of Ryujin
I'll just make sure I learn written and spoken Japanese before I take the plunge.

>>52698605
Man, I dunno. You're assuming that ambition wins out here over the desire to keep the status quo and stay conservative. Some people don't want to rock the boat, after all, and go to great lengths to keep everything the same.

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>>52698412
>My entire build is for PvP
>Can't deal with mages

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>>52695036
> Lyran Farwander
professor lana palandine x2

1 combat skill
1 crafting
2 governance
1 alchemy
2 shadowcraft
3 investigation
1 wild lore
2 charisma
3 tradecraft
1 command
3 arcana

2 lore of fire
3 lore of water
3 lore of heavens
1 lore of the abyss
3 lore of wind
1 lore of earth

+10000 gold
spellweave clothing
- 180 earthforged weapon
- 2100 godstrike
- 15 traveling supplies
- 45 ammo
- 90 potions
- 240 specialized tools
- 30 academic pass
- 150 trading licence
knighthood
knight bodyguard
- 180 familiar
- 6900 corvette
60 gold remaining

lulu lansvard lelanden
anna
katrana artix
lyra bowsung
illnalta

wasn't sure if the bonus ranks were before or after the buy, and took a guess. Kind of wish there was an option to add more companions. Kind of like a high fantasy space refuge, this one.

> Lyran wasn't exactly much up for becoming some sort of universal focal point, but traveling sounded pretty fun and a free top tier education wasn't exactly the sort of thing a person could just turn down. After somehow haggling down a top class aircraft, he took off to try and have "anime-style adventures," as he put it. Nobody really understands half of what he says sometimes, and he blames his precognitive perceptions for that. Gets depressed when his so-far failed search for a "waifu" is mentioned.

>>52698642
> My only ambition is to avoid mass slaughter.
That's already enough idealism to get you outmaneuvered and overthrown. Your idea is to actually provide a service to others, which takes resources. Someone who does not provide a service to others can use the resource advantage that this provides to sway your supporters away from you by promising a larger share of the pie to them. Any resources spent on the people, be it money, time, effort, or anything else, are resources not devoted to maintaining the loyalty of key followers, who will be in a position to eliminate you and replace you with a rival who will turn around and give them the resources that you were expending on providing a service. This is why the most horrifying of dictatorships, that do the absolutely least possible for their people, are the ones that endure the longest.

>>52698660
>>52698605
These are people that are going to have to go back to living in the same village as all those who they're in the culling with.
It's not even lord of the flies. It's a few weeks of camping. They're still in the same social structure they always are.

>>52698697
What about things like "trust" and "loyalty" and, heaven forbid, "justice"? The vast majority of people aren't as black-hearted as you make them seem; if you can exterminate the few trouble-makers and clip corruption wherever it seeds, you can avoid those problems entirely.
The only reason that hasn't happened yet in human history is because no-one has had the balls - or the power - to exterminate evil on such a widespread scale before. But this is a world where magic is a thing; some good old-fashioned "Detect Evil" will work wonders.

>>52698660
The people with ambition tend to be the ones who rise high enough to get into key positions that are capable of deciding who is the one in overall command. Such a position is itself a position of power, with its own identical struggle for power one level down, that likewise is won by the most corrupt and brutal of the contenders.

>>52698687
Sounds like a cool dude with a noble goal.
I've always liked the idea of someone who could look a few seconds into the future, and it's hard to talk to them because they start answering before you finished talking.

>>52698721
>if you can exterminate the few trouble-makers and clip corruption wherever it seeds, you can avoid those problems entirely.
Sounds like start of civil war in ranks of those "protectors". The leader going rabid trying to execute trouble-makers will be seen as corrupt leader who tries to kill all those that oppose him(her).

In any way, this Order of Protectors would not be widespread and even then start the infighting

>>52698721
> What about things like "trust" and "loyalty" and, heaven forbid, "justice"?
That breaks down once you get hierarchies that isolate people from what goes on in other branches of the hierarchy. Inter-service rivalries are a thing in pretty much every organization on the planet for exactly this reason. Yes, trust and loyalty and ideals such as justice and fairness are sometimes a factor in individual human interaction, but group dynamics tend to keep these confined to individual relationships. They aren't a reliable glue capable of holding an entire group together.

> The vast majority of people aren't as black-hearted as you make them seem
The majority aren't. But the people who rise to positions of power are not the norm, nor are they a random sampling of the group. They're a particular subset, selected for based on their ability to rise in stature in a group.

>>52698700
The Culling is just a stupid idea from the start.
> Hey, I'm the bitch goddess!
> Here, take these powers on an unpayable loan.
> Now kill monsters endlessly or be punished for not keeping up.
> You want to use the market? Fuck you, pay me for the permission to do so.
> You want to make friends? No. Fuck you. Pay me for club permission.
> You pay up? Good! It's that time of the year, so those people you bought off can just try to fucking kill you without repercussion. Even those healers you bought!
> Why? Because fuck you!
It's just badly planned, man.

>>52698697
People want security. It's a natural instinct. There's nothing idealistic about thinking they'll go for it.
And yeah, it'll be like a corrupt banana republic. You know what you don't see in corrupt banana republics? Anarchists.
Forcing people to be part of the power structure directly serves the purpose the power structure was made for. To have them not kill each other.
I don't need to spend resources on the protection of the "little people", the fact that we're in a shared covenant is good enough. Yeah I force them to work and distribute most of the rewards to my keys to power. What I also give my keys to power is a promise that if anyone is after them I will come to their aid and so will everyone likewise sworn to me. Every one of those keys is going to have the same deal for the people directly under them and so on. A faction like this is build on the promise of coming to each other's aid. That's the main resource you're spending and it's a natural binding agent.

>>52697626
I kinda dislike these kinda offers, where arguably the best choice is the magic waifu who loves you magically and everything else fucks you in the ass. Honestly the actually best choice is picking the ring since that requires you to activate it and throwing it in the sea at the first possible moment.

>>52698777
> You know what you don't see in corrupt banana republics? Anarchists.
You know what you do see in a corrupt banana republic? Plenty of violence and death. The one leading the perpetrators happens to be sitting in a presidential palace instead of a gang hideout, but the result is the same for the victim.

>>52698685
>indomitable

>>52698796
That's because there's insurgents that expect better than what the nation's offering them. They want the whole human rights deal.
The culling is a few weeks out of the year and it's generally accepted that it's a special situations and you've got to grit it and bear it because there's no real alternative.

>>52698797
>indomitable
>only protects against corruption and illusions
>doesn't protect from almost all other magic spells or traps

>>52698816
> That's because there's insurgents that expect better than what the nation's offering them. They want the whole human rights deal.
Gasp, people don't like being rounded up, horribly tortured, and ultimately murdered by the forces of a dictator, who provides nothing other than the promise of security that, in practice, he doesn't even follow through on.

>>52698739
Must get pretty weird when his advice starts to make sense, and you suddenly find yourself doing really weird chores at odd hours so 'fate' can direct you toward fortune,
> Be on the street corner at 1:10 with a sewing kit and bath soap in hand. Also, avoid the puns, her dad will just hit you if you try it.
> ..why? Who is "her?!"

>>52698830
They're no different than non-magical attacks and traps.
I can use physical and spiritual skill to get around them. Of course, what I really want is to find my enemy before they find me.

>>52698831
Yes. It's a less than ideal scenario. Great insight you have there.
It's also a step up from the status quo. I'm sure we will have no trouble communicating that.

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>>52698804
Anatomy: electric
Expansions: Sunthetic skin (12) hidden arsenal (9) Wing Blades (6) Machine Spirit (3)
Extras: Anatomically Correct (2) Alternative model (1) Wardrobe (0)

Quests: Prometheus

Misakabot is a go - just avoid albinos

>>52698863
> It's also a step up from the status quo.
It's not particularly different than the status quo. The violence and killing and torture all still happen to the people, it's simply more centralized in terms of the perpetrator. For the victim, the result is no different.

>>52698863
So now instead of everyone killing each other it'll just be a particular group killing everyone else.

>>52698851
No Sixths senses, Detect magic or Premonition, 3 Agility without overdrive. I'd say that samurai girl will have hard time dealing with it

>>52697626
I will take the stone it will only take me what? 60 years of study? then i can do whatever the fuck i want? easy peasy

>>52698891
Made worse by the fact that an organized group of killers has a better shot of being able to circumvent Exempt and kill people even if they tried to opt out of the culling.

>>52698887
No that's bullshit. I simply can't accept that.
Being bossed around by an angry group of gangsters is not the same as being hunted by serial killers.

No matter how you frame it. You can't justify people uniting under a common goal as being a constant lethal struggle against each other. I know you saw the CGPGrey video about having to divert resources to maintaining loyalty but that doesn't translate directly into a murder the civilian contest.
You know I'm not forming a nation right? The whole deal is centered around survival for 40 days. People are not going to expect to be allowed to vote on who is going to plan out the survival strategy.
Also, how many people are we talking about really?

>>52697626
solomons ring

surely I will outsmart the demons and get away with it, everyone else if just incompetent...

>>52698932
Has it ever been explained how exempt works?

>>52698804
Daughteru catgirl-android
>Biotech
>Synthetic skin (12)
To disguise herself as a human
>Synthetic skin - upgrade (10)
So that she also can "grow up"
>Machine spirit (7)
I am not dealing with that "Does this unit own a soul?" carp
>Translator (4)
Inredibly useful and I fear we may need to eventually flee the country
>Anatomically correct (3)
To feel like a girl
>Creativity (2)
Even more

Feels cute to have that little slice-of-life blurb.
I'm already trying to complete Prometheus and a slice-of-life urban fantasy life sounds so much more fun
>slice-of-life
Hey, I am not old enough to raise a young girl by myself. She needs a mother figure, too. Maybe a cute little vamp-girl or something would do just fine.
Their interactions would be adorable - sitting in the couch with my vamp-girl waifu, having fun, then out the corner of my eye I spot my daughteru, gleering at us, trying to detect if I have any bitemarks in my neck.
God, urban fantasy is the best.

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>>52698891
>>52698932
>>52698863
>>52698831
>>52698816
>>52698796
>>52698777
>>52698697
>>52698642
That's all cool and stuff but why in the world of cappable hunters any substantial number of people would surrender their right to one girl who "will provide protection". I'm sure she can build herself a party or group of like minded individuals for that cause, but it will never grow further

>>52695036
Fulcrum CYOA:
>Professor Lana Palandine x2 (Level 2 Arcana, Level 2 Investigation, Level 2 Lore of Fire)
Skills: (+20)
>Governance Level 1 (-1)
>Alchemy Level 3 (-6)
>Investigation Level 3 (-3)
>Charisma Level 1 (-1)
>Tradecraft Level 3 (40% Discount) (-6)
>Arcana Level 3 (-3)
Magic Lore: (+20)
>Lore of Fire Level 2 (Free)
>Lore of Water Level 4 (-10)
>Lore of Heavens Level 4 (-10)

>>52698963
You do not have to participate in the culling.
Seems straight-forward to me. You simply don't get teleported.

>>52698975
Surrender their rights of what?
Freedom of expression? The fruit of their own labour? There's plenty of time for that outside the culling. I mean if you're confident in your own ability to survive, sure, there's nothing in it for you. But it's not like it's a big sacrifice.

>>52699017
Most people already have their own people that will protect them, they don't need your clan

>>52698983
>arcana 3
>no level 5 magic

>>52698804
A chill roid would be nice
>Steam
Easy repairs, best for helping out with mundane tasks due to greater strength. Only problem is noise but that can be fixed.

>VR+upgrade
>Pheromones+upgrade
>Synthetic Skin
>Portable Kitchen
>Wardrobe
>Anatomically Correct
>Alternative Model

>SoL

>tfw no ara-ara meido robofu that will take care of me till I die

>>52698899
60 years of working 8 hours per day on it. Hopefully you have some source of money, otherwise it's all day at work, then all evening studying the stone. The transmution ability after 20 years won't probably be much help, valuable elements tend to be extreme illegal to own or have extremely specialized use, so good luck finding buyer.

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>>52699388
captcha is being an unbearable nigger today

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>>52699112
Transmutation is after 10 years and it is not like it will be THAT hard to find a buyer i am already invested in this shit anyways

>>52697626
>>52698795
>Not taking the Firebird and teaming up with the wielders of Excalibur and Solomon's Ring

>>52698795
You don't have to use the Philosopher's Stone, either. If you're not planning on using your artifact either way, it makes no difference.

>8 fucking pages when it could have been 2 with proper use of space

>>52697626
Vimana Pushpaka just so I could attempt to study it and have a comfy radioactive mobile home to live in

>>52699653
???

>>52699653
Are you talking about the Tank Crew one?

>>52699682
Maybe he's talking about StarDust? But I don't think he can make it much smaller, text is already tiny.

>>52699699
Stardust is 5 pages though.

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>>52682039

>Erotic horror

>House Hecate
Most likely way to become Eldritch waifu
I originally planned to be a gynoid but I can't say no to Eldritch
Medusa are all dumb monsters and I want to stay away from Discordia as much as possible
+1 Study/Threat, +3 Magical perks

>Allure 2 (8)
>Elusive 1 (7)
>Force 0 (7)
>Study 4 (3)
>Threat 4 (0)
I really don't like how these stats are designed so you always have one or two glarring weaknesses.
Plan is to use high Threat and magic through Study to fake physical power.

>Favorite classes:
>Magic (9)
Medicine is totally useless and Biology doesn't offer any knowledge of physiology and altering it. Guess I will have to be very careful when I create my human body.
(But really these classes do not seem worth half an Attribute point.)

Traits:
>Feared (7)
They aren't sure why. It's only natural to fear an Eldritch abomination wearing a meatsuit.
>Aberrant form (-1)
Unspeakable Eldritch nightmare.
>Tentacles (-4)
Tentacles that form from wherever I want, usually originating somewhere that's covered by my clothes.
>Unliving (-8)
Naturally gasses and poisons do nothing to affect me.
>Vampiritc (-13)
hot
>Bane (-12)
Let's say... glue. Seems fair.
>Binding Vulnerability (-7)
Must try to find a Master. Must protect them from harm. Must stay close enough to be able to protect them.
I could have issued a rule of "must be the waifu" but that shouldn't be forced by rules

>Inherent magic (-13)
1 perfect spell
>Magical training (-17)
4 spells

>Addiction (-15)
Wearing a collar
>Aversion (-13)
Bullying cute people
>Phobia (-10)
The sea (but only if it's saltwater)

>Lesser Enemy (-11)
A dumb broad from House Medusa, completely convinced that I'm a monster and butthurt beyond belief that I get to stay in another house.
Luckily no one takes her seriously, both from her being a monster, and from my high Threat level + Feared

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>>52699811

Actually, on second thought, I'll switch to Angelanon's setting and pick her as my enemy. That's a free point AND I get out of having an enemy that is, well, an enemy that plans to do something.
>Wealth (-11)
>Crush (-9)
yes please
>Dark sercet (-7)
That I'm an Eldritch abomination masquerading as a cute, innocent but somehow scary girl.
>Ward + upgrade (-4)
yes please
I don't know why Angelanon is after my Crush... possibly she's trying to start some threeway-drama and I am having none of that. I am not losing my crush to a big boobied bimbo!

>Cute (-7)
Yes. Obviously the first thought for an Eldritch abomination trying to pretend to be a human girl, is to make my vessel CUTE
>Virgin (-5)
>Denial, compulsive masturbation (0)
This is definitely not hot and I am definitely only picking it for the points...
Let's go with... I will deny that being ordered around and treated more like a maid than a person turns me on.
Seikon no Qwaser was amazing.
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2799681

>Magic:
Study 4 + Favorite class magic = Difficulty 4
>Banish
The spell I can do perfectly with no preperation
>Counterspell (Diffulty 4 and below)
>Illusion
>Modify memory
>Suggestion

Dark Fate:
>Stockholm Syndrome
And I will hate myself for it which is why I can't lose. It beats the others, even if some are hot.

>>52698721
Lots of people have tried to "exterminate evil" on a grand scale. Every single case of genocide started like that. Willingness to go along with such bullshit is the very corruption tyranny grows from.

No, what stops corruption in its tracks is democracy, transparency, rule of law, and the refusal to tolerate brutality or injustice of any kind. An organization build on those things might suffer greatly, perhaps even be destroyed, but its ideals will live on and eventually win. Human history gives ample evidence of that.

>>52699388

man if this gave more options about building the tank it would be perfect

>>52700027
>democracy
>rule of law
We have this and there's still plenty of corruption

I'm going to travel the world as a tourist

>>52695412
WHOAOUHOO

SIIIILENT VOICE

SIIIILENT VOICE

Yasashii me wo shita dareka ni AHHHHHIIIIIITAHIIIIII

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>>52699811
>I'm telling you, she's a monster! She's got tentacles under that skirt and everything, just look!
This gal got a name?

>>52700256
Whatever my name would be as a girl I guess?

>>52682039
>Noble Bright +reverse rapture+
My plan is to avoid seduction by posing as one of the girls. My house will therefore be a girls house.
>Venus (+1 elusive)

>Allure: 5 (10)
>Elusive: 5 (6)
>Force: 0 (6)
>Study: 5 (1)
>Threat: 1 (0)

>Home economics (14)
>Business (13)
>Inhuman attribute, Elusive (7)
>Just as Planned (3)
>Giant Cock (0)
>Guardian (-1)
Big sis found out I was going to be send here and came up with the crazy crossdressing idea
>Dark Secret (1), is a boy
>Cute (-2)
>Virgin (0)

>Dorm Raid
>Martyrs Grail
>Restricted Section

>Bully, House Venus
She just has it in for me. Even before she knows my dark secret.
>Stockholm syndrome
Getting mindbroken into a boytoy

>>52700352
>by posing as one of the girls. My house will therefore be a girls house.
>>Venus (+1 elusive)
Literally how will no one find out?
Why would your big sister not help you run away and not go to rape school?

>>52699826
...
a maid is a person

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>>52700366
Anime trap logic, high elusive and allure

>>52700371
You don't treat a maid the same way you do your girlfriend, or good friend. There's a clear difference in power.

>>52700437
the average boss/employee relationship is not one of dehumanizing domination, but whatever, I know what you meant

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>>52688372

>Noble

>Weapon - flaming ball and chain
A less common weapon, with some interesting strengths and drawbacks that form the core concept of this build. Skill is the most important attribute for me, for handling the ball and chain to its potential.

Str:
Def:
Agi:
Int:
Ski:

Blessing - +3 Stat Points

Physical
>Tempered
>Martial Arts - Backup plan when the enemy gets into very close range
>Willpower
>Flurry
>Athletics - Better balance and reflexes will help a lot with a weapon that throws its weight around
>Enhanced
>Shockwaves - Good synergy with the amount of force you can slam into the walls and ground
Weaponry
>Blunt Arms
>Ancient Weapon
>Enchantment (fire)
>Overcharge - Works well with a momentum-based weapon
>All-Seeing Eyes - Good for spotting dangerous enemies at a distance and fighting while surrounded
>Ancient Will - An important skill to master weapon handling
Elemental
>Primal Power
>Adaptation
>Affinity (fire) - Along with Enchantment will allow me to set the surrounding ground ablaze
>Infusion
Ethereal
>Pocketing - Travelling light, could use the extra mobility and space for survival gear

Licenses
>Deep Plains (25)
>Desert (45)

Persona/Resources
>Gender (65)
>Age (60)
>Beauty (55)
>Forge (45)
>Alchemy (35)
>Market (25)
>Club (20)
>Inn (10)
>Pocket Change - 10

Not against working together with other people, but this fighting style is frankly pretty terrible for it. However it should be very useful if surrounded by packs of monsters or if I can't locate allies and am going it alone during the Culling. Spent a lot of points on provisions, which along with Pocketing will keep me independent and well stocked with survival items.

>>52700502
Whoops.

Str: 6
Def: 4
Agi: 6
Int: 3
Ski: 8 (+5)

>>52700087
The focus of the CYOA lies mostly on the crew members, since that was the original pitch I was working from. I played around with more tank construction options early on, but various anons advised me that, since it was my first attempt at writing a CYOA, I should keep it simple.

Out of curiosity, what kind of options would you have liked to see?

>>52700366
easy, he cuts his dick off

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>>52700799

2/5

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>>52700838

4/5

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>>52700854

5/5

>>52700799
I don't remember that intro pic.

>Old
For obvious reasons
>Well: Romance (Benevolence, Will)
First objective, find someone to serve love.

>Magical:
>Sol C
>Flare C
>Life B (19)
>Conjure B (17)
>Shift A (14)
Neat semi-teleportation, too.
>Arma S (10)
>Circa B (9)
Making invisible walls is incredibly useful

>Physical
>Defense B (8)
I don't want to be as dense as metal. Would be very difficult to move around in an apartment, or sit on someone
>Strength S (4)
>Stamina A (1)
>Flexibility C (0)
For obvious reasons
>Mind C
>Reserves C

>Weapon
>Sword
I'm boring. I'd pick a shield if I could. I like the idea of using a shield as a weapon.

>Outfit
>Elegant
Mostly because of how lewd she looks.
I mean, I'll be using the Arma armor most of the time, so this is really more of an "at-home" cosplay kind of outfit.
>Phased
Because I am not wearing Elegant in public. I need to wear something that doesn't make me look like a slut.

>Cute pet
>Gooey
I'd have picked a slimegirl if it was possible. And no, it's not going on my body. My Gooey is only for petting.

>Missions
>Emergency rescue
I thought of picking Help people because that is what heroes should do, but it's a waste of my powers.
>Slay phantoms
With the power of Romance I might be able to weaken them before killing them.
Plus, I am not touching the moral questions of Stop war.
>Rebuild Utopius
And with my experience gained from slaying phantoms, this should be right up my alley.

>>52700869
Dang. I didn't expect to need to spend points from the regular cyoa and I am not going back to recount.

>>52701058
Huh. Dang. I would love
>Perversion C
Because I should try to look the most appealing to whoever I end up with
>Depravity C
Because muh Eldritch waifu fantasy

But sorry, Lewd-magical girl, I don't have the points. And you're being way too aggressive!

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>>52698795
Oh, if you think that cyoa offers some rough options, try this.

>>52701195
There's none of these I really want. Mental knowledge is okay but that's really just to make school easier and based on your post, I assume none of the prices are worth it and didn't read those.
Now, if the option that starts off with "The secrets of the universe..." would be, you know, about learning horrible secrets that erase your sanity and turn you Eldritch, I would be on board instantly

I did read the prices to Love and those aren't downsides from my current position. But I'm not interested in love, not yet.

>>52699388
>Conquest
>Survivor
>Strategy
>Flamethrower
>G.E.S.
>Sword

Crew
>Pierre Locksley
>Ana
>Ricky Matthews
>Penny Hathaway
>Tatjaa Baumgartner
>Agnes Kagutsuchi

>>52701273
Oh shoot, the right side price for Knowlegde IS to lose your sanity, but it doesn't say I become Eldritch. Just that I go insane. 3x reading speed and memory are not worth losing reality.

>>52701195
High cost low reward i pick none

>>52700799

>Appearance
Average
>Well
Hope
>Magical Rites
Luna: C
Tempora: S
Shift: S
Arma: B
Astra: C
Form: S
>Physical Rites
Agility: A
Defense: A
Mind: A
Stamina: B
Reserves: B
>Tool
Sword
>Outfit
Flowing
>Companion
Mini dragon, because dragons are cool
>Missions
Slay Phantoms
Defeat Kaiju
Save the world

Somehow, these stats seem broken as hell

>>52700799
>average
>will
>Sol A
>Frost C
>Warp C
>Motion C
>Arma S
>Shock C
>Blood A
>Strength S
>Agility S
>Defense S
>Mind C
>Flexibility C
>Reserves C
>Sword(club)
>Armored & Flowing
>Gooey
>Purifiy Rogues
>Destroy Puppets
>Defeat Kaiju

>>52697684
I'd argue Ranma is less oblivious, rather that he actually understands and is aware what's going on, but actively resents it and works against it until it benefits him in some way.

>>52697837
It's heavily implied that he marries Akane in the end.

>>52697684
AM I reading this right and a) Someone called Yotaro wants to fuck a panda and b) Someone called Ranma is both a dude and a chick and c) Shampoo wants to fuck Ranma?

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>>52695036
Alright chumps, let's do this.
>Tristain
>Oberon
>Combat skill 1
>Holy Faith 3
>Governance 3
>Command 3
>Wild lore 1
>Lore of heavens 5
>Lord of fire 1
>Lord of water 1
>Lord of wind 1
>Lord of the abyss 1
>Lore of earth 1
MY LOVE FOR YOU HITS LIKE A TRUCK
>Plate armor
>Basic ranged bow
>Travelling supplies
>Ammo
>Potions,
>Specialized tools
>Paladinhood
>Knight bodyguard
>War Bear
>War Dog
>Small ship
BERSERKER
>Glory of One Song
WOULD YOU LIKE TO MAKING FUCK
>Lucfil
>Lord Caleb Palandine
>Marneus
>Swordbrother Boemond
BERSERKER

Time to re-establish the crusader state.

>>52701431
All of it is correct yes

>>52697684
What's a P-chan?

>>52695036
>>52701465
Damn, beat me to it.

>Master
Harlen of Caer Cuilhain

>Skills (20)
Crafting 1 (+2) [19]; Trading 1 (+2) [18]; Combat Skill 2 (+1) [15]; Governance 2 [12]; Command 2 [9]; Holy Faith 3 [3]; Wild Lore 2 [0];

>Lores (20)
Earth 3 (+2) [14]; Heavens 4 [4]; Water 2 [1]; Fire 1 [0]

>Clothing and Armor
Plate Armor (Free)
Artificer Plate (300)

>Weapons
Earthforged Daggers (Free)
Artificer Greatsword (Free)
Bloodthorn (2700)

>Misc.
Specialized Tools x2 [Commerce, Smithing] (80)
Books x20 (600)

>Rights and Properties
Knighthood
Paladinhood
Academic Pass (10)
Trading Liscense (25)
Safehouses (50)
Sanctuary (650)


>Hirelings/Employees
Hireling (free)
Skilled Workers [100] (600)
Soldiers [100] (900)
Knight Bodyguard [6] (Free)

>Mounts
Warhorse (Free)

>Vessels
Sky Frigate (700)

>Companions
Lucfil, Holy Blade
Lady Aria Heldesvard, Knight Errant
Brother Tankred of the Mount, One-Man Siegebreaker
Svana Palandine, Tsundere Warrior Princess
Katrana Artix, Living Saint

Only ~6,000 of my 10,000 spent, so I can keep paying my ship crew and sanctuary workers and soldiers for a good while without having to worry about it. We’re a party of 11, counting the six elite knights and not counting the sentient sword, with 50 non-elite crusaders coming crusading with us on the skyship and 50 staying behind to guard the sanctuary.

>>52701463
I do enjoy being struck by lightning while walking down the street

>>52697946
Hey that could be a fun cyoa to do

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I'm absolutely done with this world. I accompanied my gorgeous cousin with her beautiful husband all day to fetch gifts for our grandma. The way people treated them. How everyone was so incredibly nice to them. Three fucking people asked for their numbers, god knows why. How did I never notice that before? It's not fair.

I need a cyoa to forget everything!

>>52698804
Biotech

>Expansions (15)
Synthetic Skin [12]
Personal Computer [9]
Portable Kitchen [6]
Translator [3]
Machine Spirit [0]
>Extras
Anatomically Correct [-1]
Accented [-2]
Creativity [-3]
>Quest
Invasion [0]

>>52699388
Light Tank "Noisy Cricket"
Liberty

Cannon *********(*)
Armor ***
Speed ******(*)
Tactics *****

Spotter
Strategy

Sniper
Vacation Kit
Camouflage

Commander: Marcelle Browning
Operator: Ricky Matthews
Gunner: Eirika Opaline
Driver: Penny Hathaway
Mechanic: Agnes Kagutsuchi

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>>52696940

Trirastra Pryslyn

>Goldstrand Elf
>Female
>Goldstrand Refuge

>Spear
>Staff
>Token
>Tome
>Scalemail

>Elemental Magic 1
>Transcend 2
>Summon 3
>Warding 4
>Alchemy 5
>Quickening 6
>Trapmaking 7
>Muffled Walk 8
>Preparation 9
>Meditation 10
>Acrobatics (Dancer)

>Pathfinders
>Alchemist Targas
>High Priestess Nadir (ELO)

>Swamplurker

>Dancer 10 Years

>Primeval Dragon

Final Stats
STR 15
FIN 24
CAST 39
CON 24
WIL 29
SPD 18
CRA 20
ELO 24
STA 15

Plan is to become incredibly powerful sorceress and use a staff that's also a spear to cast spells and fight with quickness and finesse instead of strength and lots of magic of course. Will learn how to summon the Primeval Dragon by listening in on the conversations of adventurers while working as a dancer, which will also help me be quick and graceful. Once the dragon is slain, goal is to quest to find the secret to eternal beauty and youth and become immortal sexy sorceress. My companions might also be interested in this quest and join me.

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>>52699811
>>52699826

But I'm not after your crush! It isn't my fault I turned out like this!

>>52695036
This world is full of corruption, it is ruled by vice instead of virtue, by weakness instead of strength. It must be remade. I will seize the world and remake it into a Kingdom of Conscience and Morality.

>Tristain and Oberon
>Combat Skill, Command, Governance, Holy Faith at 3
As much as it is the duty of the peasant to toil the land it is the duty of the King to govern efficiently and with virtue and be able to defend the peace of his lands through war and battle. Mastery > Versatility

>Lore of Wind 5
In times of war to insure that my soldiers aren't made to force and fight in terrible weather and in times of peace to ensure that my people are free from nature's worst excesses.
>Lore of Water 3
It is the fluid of life, even a rudimentary control of it will prove immensely helpful

>Knighthood
>Paladinhood
For how better to lead men into virtue than by example.

Free Warhose
Free Earthforged Lance - to use on the horse
Free Hireling(squire)
Free Plate
Free Artificer Greatsword - versatile weapon to use when not taking part in a cavalry charge
Free 2 Knight Bodyguards

Artificer Plate - for battle
Spellweave Clothing - for peace
Hippogriff - a mount befit a paladin and a king
100 Soldiers - A starting force
18 horses - to ease the initial burden of traveling for some of my followers

>Gai Buruh
A 100 men is not much to start with, but this man is the one that will help me put them to best use.
>Cassius Bellorum
Our goal is the same, but his disdain of the elder races is against virtue as such we are bound to become enemies eventually. Why not then be allies for a while? I will use him and learn from him.
>Marneus
A good man and a good sword.
>Lise the Ghite
Though lacking Oberon's lessons she is still capable and I will require someone taking care of the home base while I'm too busy in particularly demanding periods of the upcoming wars.
>Edwin Aldorf
A worthless drunk. For the first few months at least. Then he will become my chief admiral

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>>52699388

>Purpose:

Protection (For the mother/father-land!)

>Tank type:

Super-heavy (Go big or go home).

Stats:
Cannon - 5 (or 6)
Armour - 11
Speed - 5 1/2 (or 4 1/2)
Tactics - 1 1/2

Just like my uncle Roger the gimp, we'll soak up any punishment anyone can throw at us & keep coming back for more! We just have to cross our fingers that our supplies hold out.

>Commander skills:

Survivor (+1 1/2 armour)
Buff McLargehuge (+1 armour +1/2 speed)

>Upgrades:

Ablative armour (yes, even more armour)
G.E.S. (hover tank a go-go)
D.L.C. upgrade - Rune engine (never need to re-fuel)
D.L.C. upgrade - Expanded crew (+1 crew)
D.L.C. upgrade - Dweomer plating (Free with crew member bonus - 1/2 damage from non-standard attacks)

>Crew:

Operator:Tatjana Baumgartner
> +1 1/2 tactics, + 1 armour, lots of publicity.
Gunner: Marcelle Browning (would've had Heather Bowen for another point of armour, but I hate acoustic guitar.)
> +3 cannon, +1 speed, change +1 speed to +1 cannon when drunk.
Driver: Penny Hathaway
> +3 speed, +1 armour, +50% turning & turret rotation speed.
Mechanic: Agnes Kagutsuchi
> +3 Armour, +1 speed, free Dweomer plating.
Extra crew (from upgrade): D.L.C. crew Akeldama
> +1 1/2 armour, can possess inanimate objects.

>Battleground:

North Canarican battlefront. Sounds like they need a super-durable tank up there, and heavy snow & rough terrain don't bother a hover-tank. Hopefully plentiful mil-spec resources will compensate for our abysmal tactics rating.

>>52695036
Does anyone know if you need the lower ranks of your teachings first? Aka does Governance Rank 3 tank 6 points or just 3?

>>52702151
It's my understanding that it's six. Otherwise you could take almost all of the skills at rank three.

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>>52699388

Tank Name: Ragnarök

Reason: Conquest - FOR ALL WILL FALL BEFORE US!

Class: Artillery - MAXIMUM POWER

Commander Skills: Spotter & Munitions - MORE POWER TO THE GUNS

Upgrades:
Expanded crew - MORE PEOPLE TO POWER GUNS
G.E.S - NONE WILL GET IN THE WAY OF OUR TANK
Sniper - HIDING WON'T WORK
Phoenix Rounds - INFANTRY DOESN'T GET A FREE PASS

Crew:
Operator - Genevieve Friday
Gunner - Marcelle Browning
Driver - Imogen Matthews
Mechanic - Monique Bellerose
Extra - Akeldama (Extra Cannon)

Battlefield: North Canarican Battlefront - HERE THERE MIGHT BE AN OPPONENT STRONG ENOUGH FOR US!

End Stats:
Cannon: 12 (13 when the gunner is drunk) - NOT EVEN MOUNTAINS TAKE A HIT FROM US!
Armour: 3 - WE MIGHT NOT TAKE A HIT WELL, BUT WE ARE FAR BEHIND LINES, WE NEVER GET HIT, ONLY HIT THEM.
Speed: 2 - WE ARE SLOW BUT DESTROY ALL
Tactics: 2.5 - COMMUNICATIONS ARE OF MINOR IMPORTANCE WHEN YOU ARE BEHIND LINES, OTHERS CAN TELL US WHERE TO HIT

THE MIGHTIEST SHALL FALL TO OUR GUNS, WE WILL WIN THIS CAMPAIGN WITH A SPEARHEAD OF OVERWHELMING FORCE

>>52702293
>>52702023

WE LIKE THESE GUYS, THEY ARE THE ONLY ONES KNOWN TO BE ABLE TO TAKE A SHOT FROM US, THEY ARE ALSO GOOD SHIELD FROM ENEMIES, GOOD FOR LURING INTO OPEN GROUND BEFORE WE FIRE.

>>52696899
>>52696909
>>52696926
Thanks.

>>52701950
Like I would trust a titty bimbo.

>>52702293
You already posted this.

>>52697684
Oh you just have to write that part your self. There a some CYOA that let you pick enough named characters to drag along on your characters adventure to make it work. Star Dust for example. It even has a bonus page discussing the named female crew members like/dislikes and kinks. I think there is like a 1/4 finished version for the male ones too some where.

>>52699388
Reason for Accepting:
>Protection

Tank Class:
>Tank Destroyer (C = 1, A = 2, S = 0, T = 1)

Commander Skills:
>Morale (T +1.5)
>Strategy (T +1, C +.5)

Upgrades:
>Camouflage
>Ablative Armour
>Machine Gun

Operator
>Eleonore Waterhouse (T +4)
Gunner
>Marcelle Browning (C +3, S +1)
Driver
>Penny Hathaway (S +3, A +1)
Mechanic
>Agnes Kagutsuchi (A +3, S +1)

Assigned Area
>North Canarican Battlefront

Final Stats:
>Cannon = 4.5 (Double damage to vehicles and structures)
>Armour = 6 (50% resistance to non-physical attack)
>Speed = 5 (Tank turning speed and turret turning speed increased by 50%)
>Tactics = 7.5

Basically, I have designed myself to be the White Death: stalking the snowy northern battlefronts as the bane to all Not-Russian tankers everywhere. Let's just hope the rest of our forces can handle that infantry for me.

>>52702426

It was just an experiment! It wasn't even on purpose!

>>52702539
Tit monster.

>>52697684
Are you being serious or memeing because I can't understand why that would make your dick hard

>>52695339
Become an hero.

>>52702539
Even less reason to trust you. You're impulsive, easy to influence.

Do you and your companions each fill a specialized role?

>>52702693
Who are you talking to?

>>52695339
Do something original and different.
Add a never before seen mechanic.

>>52702550

I happen to be a very good student and a great sorceress in the making.

>>52702651

I may be impulsive at times, but I'm still a nice person!

>>52702728
Being impulsive means that you're only a nice person at times. You're not reliable.

>>52702728
And a tit monster. That's disgusting, and terrible.

>>52702728
>>52702737
You might be a nice person, when you're not being pushed into bathrooms and """forced""" to drink strange potions.
Nice person =/= trustworthy person.

>>52702728
Insecure flatty is not a real person. She's a character with a specific sentiment. You're not going to make up with her. Drawing out the conversation takes all the fun out of roleplaying.

>>52702815
>Insecure flatty
You calling me flat? I picked Cute for a reason!

Are insecure girls cute?

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>>52702982

>>52703011
No.

>>52703028
I only want answers from heterosexual men, thank you.

>>52703011
yes

>>52703011
No.

>>52703025
No.

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>>52703067
>not liking flat chests

>>52703011
Cute people are cute.

A cute girl/attractive guy could talk only in Jar Jar Binks quotes and people would find it charming as long as she's cute/he's attractive enough.

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>>52703028
update when

>>52701629
Wait, you need a CYOA to escape the fact that people like your cousins?

Please get over yourself.

>>52702737
>>52702790

Impulsive doesn't mean not nice.

>>52702748

Literally nothing wrong with boobs anon.

>>52702815

But she took me as enemy for her build and said I'm after her crush when I'm not!

>>52703416
>>>52702426
You're being fatuous.

>>52703442
Literally nothing wrong with flat chests either.

>>52698752
>The leader going rabid trying to execute trouble-makers will be seen as corrupt leader who tries to kill all those that oppose him(her).
Or a great unifier. Worked really well for China.

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Here's the WIP for part 2. I've cleaned up part 1, I'll release that with the when I finish/clean up part 3.

Wondering what you guys think about the Equipment/Magic balance.

Do you guys think the faction specific shit is overpowered/under powered?

Do you think I should increase or decrease costs?

Do you regret your faction/perk choices?

Exactly what percent of me is human trash?

Let me hear it.

>>52703455
Less is not more, anon.

>>52703483
You don't need more when you have the perfection that is flat chests.

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>>52703318
tsun tsun dere tsun dere tsun dere

>>52703472
Is that a total of 10 points for rank 3 or 5 points?

>>52703472
>Do you guys think the faction specific shit is overpowered/under powered?
Looks okay for it's cost. Better question is if there is way to rise even more skeletons than rank 3 gives?

>>52703455

I'm pretty flat and would like to be bigger.

>>52703472
I say yes on color coded ranks. It helps break up the text and makes it more readable.

>>52703559
If you could trade 10 IQ points for a one-cup size increase, how many cup sizes would you get?

>>52703472
I think the unique stuff is pretty good.

The only balance thing I have a concern with is, none of the equipment provides an effective way to counter a muscle wizard using Magical Enhancement. I guess maybe a gun, but that's boring. Maybe make one of the armors boost your agility and strength, instead of being more defensive?

Also, yes on color-coded ranks.

>>52703559
Nothing wrong with being flat. So am I, but then again, I'm a dude, so I guess it doesn't matter.

>>52703513
>ragefire cost reduced

Wow SDA you literally just broke the entire CYOA I mean why even buy Destroyers if Ragefires can do what they do.

>>52703539
>You must purchase the previous rank of an ability or item to purchase the next.

So 10.

>>52703548
Magical supplies would double the potency of your raising, which you could interpret to mean double the skellebums.

>>52703570
Yeah, I was leaning more towards colour-coded ranks too.

>>52703579
Perhaps if I make the robes an agility boosting armour? Also, magical cancelling effects would apply to a wizard using magical enhancement.

>>52703579
Seriously was a dreaming or did you not say MGE would be done last saturday?
Remember that Jesus died for our sins today so it's okay to admit you're behind but give me something dammit!

>>52703472
>Magical Enhancement
Might wanna put a duration on the spells or whatever, otherwise people are just gonna assume they last forever.

>>52694642
Why is Historian so shit?

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What settings or atmospheric tones do you feel are criminally under-represented in CYOAs?

>>52703607
Magical enhancement is a passive thing, and so does last forever. If it has a time limit I think I mentioned it in any other case. Otherwise, I think it's implied that if, for example, your barrier breaks or your skeleton is destroyed, that it must be recast.

>>52703472
So level 3 Magical Circles/Runecrafting limits you to one type of non-standard circle/rune?

They seem kinda shitty without an explicit way to learn more.

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>>52703590
I also increased the costs of Destroyer hulls and nerfed their spinal mounts.

I also removed the Carapace.

>>52703605
4.0 was done. I don't think I ever promised a date for 4.1.

>>52703598
That might work. I personally would add it to armor, and have robes for magic resistance/enhancement, and armor for physical resistance/enhancement.

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Tried to make a lewd cyoa, hopefully it didn't come out too shit. Hope ya'll enjoy it!

>>52703635
Urban fantasy.
Mysteries.
Starting off sounding like you're the Mary Sue hero but really you're a fly on the wall next to the shit's giving you power.
Some kind of meta setting where it's explained why all these point-giving entities are doing their shit. Like A Cabin in The CYOA.

>>52703671
>I also removed the Carapace.
That's just evil.

>>52703671
They better be more expensive than Dreadnoughts now. It's the only way to balance it.

>>52703653
Basically it's allows you to apply one of your other learnt magic categories to it. How many uses you could have for that is up to your imagination.

I could expand it to 2 or maybe 3 other magic categories, though there's no guarantee, that you would *have* 3 other magics.

>>52703675
Armour already reduces your speed, so it'd be weird for it to increase your agility. I suppose it could be:
Rank 1: Makes you slower.
Rank 2: No effect on speed.
Rank 3: Makes you faster/stronger.

Though I would have to remove the damage immunity bit from it, though.

>>52703679
>incest

Fuck yes, one of my fetishes. Gimme a minute to read through them all.

>>52703679
>Madeleine
Drawn by an artist I like
>Grace
Clearly the 10/10 Yandere option. Second choice is Jade she was Yandere face too
>Brooke
Isn't dressing like a slut or is an oppai loli

>>52703578

Two. I really want three, but that's top many IQ points to lose.

>>52703581

But that's natural for you.

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>>52703679
>tfw child soldier CYOA

Now I'm going to have to go and make one myself, fuck you.

>>52703715
Yeah, that sounds good. I'm not a big fan of one-per-day powers, in any case.

>>52703724
Of course, if I was fat I'd have man boobs which means I'd love big tits instead, am I right? I'd pick flat chests over big tits any day. It is a shame some don't realize the greatness of flat chests.

>>52703442
Look, I'm not saying you're not a nice person. I'm sure you're very nice, and you must be a very clever student or you wouldn't have been able to go to Rapture Academy. In fact I'm sure we could do some awesome stuff together with your apathecary-knowledge and my magic knowledge.
But do not touch my crush. Do not talk to my crush. Do not think of my crush. I don't want to share and I don't want to lose either. That would break my heart.

>>52703716
Naomi, Fuuka, Lucy.

Also, lol, Castiel.

>>52703715
>though there's no guarantee, that you would *have* 3 other magics.
Then why not open it up to all your magics?

>>52703788
I genuinely don't care what boobs or nonboobs you like, but could you quit spamming all over the thread?

>>52703815
You can't silence my love for flat chests. I bet you love tit monsters, don't you?

>>52703810
I suppose. I was just thinking of all the many ways having the ability to apply one would be dangerous, but I suppose in retrospect it's not as good as some of the other rank 3 options.

>>52703679
>Madeleine
>Tia
>Opal

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>>52703472
>Magical Enhancement 3
>Long Guns 2
>Heavy Armor 3

Newfag here, so how does this work. I pick a setting make the character and that's it?

>>52703926
Lurk moar faggot.

>>52703788

Big are superior in every way. I still want at least C cupsDs look amazing to though. Maybe I could afford fakes if I didn't blow so much money on random trips and /tg/ hobby stuff.

>>52703791

I don't even know who your crush is! I'm not in Rapture for relationship bs! I just want to learn as much as I can until I graduate! I'm not even straight.

>>52703926
Sure. You can also whine that you don't have more points, that there aren't more drawbacks and they aren't simpler, and that your fetish isn't included or a fetish you don't like is included

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>>52703731
godspeed

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>>52703941
>Big are superior in every way

>>52703948
Sounds like a lot of effort can I hire someone else to do that for me? How many points is that because I need more of them.

>>52703968

>man

Anyone have Star Dust CYOA? The 1d4chan page is outdated, and I didn't get to save the latest one.

>>52704032
Whatever, shit taste transcends gender.

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>>52703941
>I'm not even straight.
Why are you implying my crush is a guy?
I don't know if my crush is a guy or a girl, or a shoggoth, or an elf! How could I know that yet?
Maybe my crush is that beautiful upper classman-girl getting straight-A's and who's the president of my club? You know, the one who's kinda serious and stern but has a soft side and I want to be the one who makes her relax, the one she opens up to?

>>52703472
It is as I feared. Equipment is severely underpowered compared to magic, in fact most equipment seems to be magic-made. It's not the end of the world but it's always annoying when one build is """""objectively""""" the best. In this cyoa I'm predicting that's going to be Highborn: more spells, stronger spells, and a damage boost against almost everyone else, keeping in mind that magic is already ridiculouslu powerful.

>>52703635
Vampire love interests with rock hard abs, 12" cocks, and unconditional love for me.

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>>52703679
Cyoas like this make me so happy because I have no interest in those whores but they're made to love me. I'm going to "blueball" them and break their hearts over and over again. Filthy incestual whores.

>>52703679
Madeleine
fuuka
iris

:3

>>52703679
>Chelsea
I'm reasonably certain of my ability to corrupt her into letting me peek on her teams while they practice or change. Plus she seems like the most fun of the moms.

>Fuuka
qt sports onee-chan. Also her hidden submissive nature is 10/10

>Lucy
Tsundere imouto is best imouto, plus I'm the kind of guy who'd smell his sister's clothes so we'll have that in common.

best cyoa we've had in ages

>>52704179
Look at this madman

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>>52703679
>it's a double, all-around pedophilia cyoa with extra incest

>>52703679
I'll be honest, all of those mothers are really terrible people. I guess that's kind of the point, but I'm just sitting here trying to figure out what's gonna be the best life for myself.

>Mother
Naomi I guess.
Catherine's a cruel drunk, I don't like sports at all, so not Chelsea, Madeleine is trying to drug me, Fiona is trying to break my will in public, and I might be able to deal with Diana filming me if she was at least an OK mom.
At least Naomi is rich.
>Big sister
Luara
These option are better.

>Little sister
Lucy
I aint doin' my little sister. I'm not okay with that. So it's Lucy or Opal. I went with lucy because she can do whatever the hell she wants behind my back as creepy stalkerish as they seem, as long as she does my chores.