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Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered
Scrapped the last one and started over again with better reference. Suggestions?
Thinking of the torso as box forms and building spherical forms on top helps.
Reminder that porn threads are not synonymous with stylized drawing threads. That's why we keep them separate.
Both stylized and non-stylized porn can be posted here.
If you only want critique on your drawing style, post in the style threads instead.
(I felt the need to post this due to the know-it-all drama fags spawning in the previous thread).
hmm started nsfw really recently so im just getting how it works, I need to find out some poses, any help would be appreciated
Can bad art be sexy? follow up question is my bad art sexy?
The rope one is quite good, but feel like you would want to add ropes supporting the rest of their body as well.
The current pose would be a huge strain on the persons shoulders and core body.
Look into shibari guides for reference, as they very often explain supporting distribution of body through contact points with ropes.
Here's one for arms that I quite like.
No one mistakes the amount of effort. It's just the fact that he even bothered to acknowledge and respond at all is counter productive to his point. That's why those responses are always hilarious.
I really don't think replying is really that indicative of giving a shit. There might be an argument if he gave you a paragraph explaining why nobody cares in elaborate depth, but seriously anon.
Different guy here, but really now, saying it's barely any effort to put "no one cares" to justify someone apparently not caring is just dumb. Little effort still = effort. Meaning you still cared to even bother.
That's about as retarded as saying taking the time to change the channel on the TV means you cared about whatever was on TV. The effort to make such a statement is negligible. You might as well say "if you didn't care why did you even read it? Why do you read anything at all if you don't care?"
Basically us having this argument shows we give more of a shit about the technicalities of whether someone cares than that guy did about whatever shit he was replying to.
>I really don't think replying is really that indicative of giving a shit.
Replying in of itself is indicative of giving a shit because you gave it that much attention in the first place. This shit isn't rocket science. If you don't care, you don't reply. It's really that simple. If you're replying, you do care to some degree. Period. You can't argue otherwise.
What, changing the channel to typing "nobody cares"?
How engaging do you think typing "nobody cares" is?
>You can't argue otherwise.
Ok. Fine. "To some degree."
That seriously doesn't need to be any considerable degree. You can argue degrees of giving a shit for anything, and replying with two takes a very, very low degree of giving a shit. So yeah, if you really want to split hairs so you can feel haughty and chuckle to yourself that somebody cared enough to take literally two seconds of their time to tell you to fuck off, sure.
Don't try to step to me in a meme-off you fucking silly cunt.
>mfw that OP
I'm about half way through an erotic short stories collection for that kindle dosh but will need some illustration done; I was always intending to do them my self but carpal tunnel stalled my progress something fierce.
What would the average porn anon charge for a few vore-esq pictures and one book cover, keeping in mind that they would need to cede all rights to me for aforementioned artwork?
Don't just try again with another stylized weeb copy. Instead study properly from rl references and/or read some anatomy books.
You are never going to learn this properly if you have this hit and miss approach.
The bodies are garbage, the faces are better. Which makes it obvious that you are too influenced by anime. Instead of learning what I told you above, you draw from imagination, which isn't wrong per se, but your limited visual library doesn't allow you to draw everything you want.
I'm not flush with naked at the moment, but how is my anatomy on this character?
That's some heavy stylization, kinda like 90's animes.
Her body reminds me of Masami Obari's style (Fatal Fury), while her face has a little of Sadamoto's style (Evangelion).
Considering these aspects, I would say the anatomy still has some flaws, not because of the exageration, but the fundamentals.
In the full body image, she has a weird neck position, also her shoulder doesn't seem to connect well with her body in a convincing way. Balloon tits may be your thing, but I don't think it works here.
In the close up, I think her clavicle looks misplaced.
thanks. I need ideers for a new years themed drawing. please help any1
your palettes are really nice, they look like actual acrylic on cel sheets. do you color drop older illustrations or you just got a knack for colors, interested in your thoughts on color regardless.
big is good, kyle-kun, especially large legs, lowers the center of gravity, grounds character like a tree trunk, makes them feel stable, sturdy, balanced. chris sanders said a lotta neat things about large legs as a character design on the model sheets for Nani from Lilo & Stitch, but if comforting/supportive is what you're going for, big legs can help you achieve that.
>Your anatomy is pretty much garbage
His anatomy isn't perfect but it's far from complete garbage. It's easily passable specially for the weeb style he's got going on. That doesn't mean he should stop improving though.
why do you you write that like that is something bad?
I like it bruv, obviously stylized and i also love your colour selection, it's very nostalgic.
Just make sure to keep up actual anatomy study. Who knows, you may be able to find a style you enjoy even more with more experimentation.
Basically, reach outside of your comfort zone.
Hate this shit, 90s had some truly ugly designs. Personal opinion of course.
sorry for the shit quality scans but it's all i could find at the moment
(namely this in that last link http://36.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcqxdyBWmX1rj945mo6_1280.png)
his style was all about how weight on the figure should be moving down towards the earth, so big legs, big forearms (aka things i like a looooot)
Yeah I'm familiar and like it for the same reasons. Just looking for an interesting read. Fenks links.
Your light source is all over the place and 'streaky' and even "cloudy" (like on the back of her head?). multiple focal points due to overly bright elements (that eye in the bottom left especially), leading to a very dizzying image. Her skin tone looks mottled and unappealing, almost like a dead body along with the streakiness/shiny. The metallic texture on her legs is similarly offputting, the original character has those parts more similar to a "creeping darkness" which fits the cthulhu mythos concept of her design, same for the tentacles. The original line drawing looks servicable enough, though the bottom of the ribcage terminates oddly (right behind the boob?) with a terrible indent below the armpit and above the breast.
Basically, too glossy and the dodge and burn are very (too) obvious with confused textures and form. The pussy also has a gizzard. Study muscle insertions.
>poverty level income
>stuck paying rent and doesn't own a home
>living in borderline 3rd world
Well that explains everything.
>me talking about making a living with porn
>you talking about personal taste no one could care less about
what assumption is going to be next? my penis size?
keep the jello flowing m8
please draw qt yuri waifus instead of full on lewds
Red's feet are weirdly defined, one too much the other too little. Hand looks pretty small and spindly, and breast starts a little too far to the side, would be better following the pectoral lines more like the other two. Blue's heels are very angular and makes it harder to judge their orientation. Purple's hand on blue's butt needs redone.
Looks nice though dude, good work on the poses, particularly purple.
That hasn't stopped JP artists from drawing qt monkey girls fanart or not.
The JP artists draw qt girls of literally everything ever. I was just making the point that if you want to do something themed for the Chinese new year, then maybe Chinese new year is the time to do it.
>would be better following the pectoral lines more like the other two.
i'm sorry my eanlish if far from good, can you say this in ather words?
Also, i fuckup red's butt and spine, i hope i fix that.
if red was suppose to have goat legs from the start then you have to redraw them completely. It's always obvious you drew normal feet first and just replaced them with a bone and a hoof and called it.
That is because it was drawing with pure lust, but void of fundamentals.
You cant tell that his leg is in front. Shade the two bodies so people can look at it easier. Her bottom leg and butt cheek would be in more, and her other leg looks like it's inside his torso.
It's SonSon from Marvel vs Capcom 2.
Prices vary a lot with artists, but not many will give up all their rights and if they do it will inflate the price by 200%-400% >
Do you intend to reuse the images?(as in merchandise or other products)
If not you may even not even have to buy the rights.
Just make sure to be clear about what you're going to use it for.
And if you did make enough money to expand your products it shouldnt be a problem to but extended copyrights from the original artist.
Sure, sorry. I mean the breasts lining up with the chest muscle, leading up to the shoulders. Blue and purple are good, but red's looks a bit detached, even with purple's pushing it up.
It is pointless to do a redline or give instruction on how to correct such a flawed artwork. He's got to learn his fundamentals.
What I said is true, so I don't really give a fuck about you being butthurt.
ehem, thenx for redline, and fixing heands. Also it can sounds angreitful, but the purple have four heands, so that shoulder that we see is lids to blue's butt. But maybe i fuck up in that too, but i dont see that yet.
in any ways, thenx.
hm, so you want to say that red's boob grovs too far on the chest? right?
Also i think i fuckup theyr faces. All of tham, exept purple. She is perfect.
The images will probably show up in a paper back version or for promotional artwork.
Most authors obtain the rights to the artwork they use on their covers, it can get messy considering I intend to make a profit from selling a product which contains said artwork.
The expense increase I was expecting.
hoping there might be more traffic here to tell me how to fix these retarded feet before I start painting it -.-
what can I improve on this senpai
does my drawing/painting style actually look alright?
It struck me that this could be the case. Sorry for that.
Try to show what's going on a bit more explicitly (by showing parts of arms that are now entirely behind the other girls' backs.
Also give more thought to the hands/palms. Right now you are showing them all from the same directions. Look at how I put them more into perspective, to show some variation. Don't be afraid of hiding parts of the anatomy, but be aware that this might cause some confusion if there are unclear visual clues.
thenx for that, but with heands i can do something guiding your advices... Can you say something about thayr faces?
I had a little incident with this piece in other thread, so i sould feel safe to post this here. Opinions?
I love it anon, i'd fap to it.
The first one I like the most, but it looks heavily referenced, which isn't bad.
The good thing is you know what's sexy, and what looks attractive, so you have good taste.
The bad thing is, you are still just a beginner.
You really need to work more on your fundamentals, basic forms, perspective, anatomy. Basically keep it up fampai.
I would suggest going over the chapter on form from the famous artists course (i think its the second chapter), or watching vilppu dvds in which he talks about the basic forms in the human body.
Your animu faces are top notch though, keep it up senpai.
I'm pretty shitty when it comes to inking, that's why i'm doing some practice. Here's more if you're interested.
You have good gesture, which is the most outstanding thing about these.
The most off-putting is probably the cross hatching, which is way too rough and pronounced. Try to be more subtle with it, or don't use it at all. If you are shading with colors, you don't really need it.
dunno, you should probably look at it as if it's a ball inside of the socket. do some top down and profile views of the face with emphasis on the eye, i think that could help you wrap your head round it
Armpit guy from a few weeks back is back.
R8 or H8
Not sure why. They look fine on my cellphone.
You are too bad to be able to absorb specific critique that is related to porn art. Take your artwork to the beginners thread or start learning fundamentals from scratch. This is not the place where you'll learn how to draw.
Took a stab at doing peg pete.
Even disney likes a good milf.
Anatomy too hard, I should just stop taking human commissions and go back to furry
>Go back to fury
Sorry, my keyboard just vomited... really anon, your anatomy looks great, you just gotta keep on working on it, and please stop drawing children getting fucked, or whatever those tiny cunts are.
Going back to furry is stupid because he/she is going places with human anatomy drawing. And children, well, that's fucking disgusting, still, at least he/she is not raping any kids out there.
Whatever, man, you could draw poneys fucking fucking dinosaurs and it would still be a drawing.
The good thing about art is that nothing is real, it's like controlling your own dreams.
I didn't make my self clear, i meant that he/she (you?) shouldn't give up on drawing human anatomy and go back to drawing furry. I don't care if he like some humanoid dog fucking an humanoid chicken on his paper, it's the children pornography that sickens me.
I wasn't the one who posted that drawing.
I get you now, there can be very unpleasant subjects in hentai, it's just that everytime people make so much drama out of simple drawings that it's kinda irritating.
kek, as i said, i think those are children, but as i said myself, those little cunts could be something else, maybe dwarfs, idk. I don't have a fetish for furry, i don't find it much gross though, but if it's child, even drawing/painting, it's sickening to me.
Instead of copying anime symbols and comfort-zoning your poses, learn some proper anatomy and perspective from rl references. That's it if you want to get good. If you want to be mediocre, just keep doing what you are doing.
>HAHA Practice more, git gud.
This literally applies to everyone in this thread, you included. Even the artists of this thread that the shitty beginners here praise have a long road ahead of them to being inspirational to anyone who isn't a complete beginner.
>Even the artists of this thread that the shitty beginners here praise have a long road ahead of them to being inspirational to anyone who isn't a complete beginner.
How is this relevant in any way?
Saying that every artist in the world, no matter their level of skill, should strive for improvement is simply stating the obvious.
To me it just sounds like you are trying to make these guys look bad.
>every artist in the world
I'm specifically talking about the artists in this thread. Where did you get "every artist in the world" from? Not even 1% of artists of the world post here. The artists who post here aren't anything special. Why would any expert bother posting on /ic/? There are only beginners and lower end intermediates here. Saying "do more studies" or "practice more git gud" is redundant because it literally applies to every artist who posts here. That should go without saying.
>I'm specifically talking about the artists in this thread. Where did you get "every artist in the world" from?
I don't know if I am the one who is unable to express his thoughts properly, or you aren't a good reader. I said your post is irrelevant, since it can be applied to all artists (not only the ones in this thread). Everyone should strive to get better, all the time. That's all.
>Saying "do more studies" or "practice more git gud" is redundant because it literally applies to every artist who posts here.
Saying what you are saying or saying get back to basics, because your current level isn't good enough for porn, isn't the same thing buddy.
I guess you really have trouble with reading comprehension.
Better luck next time.
Also, stop being mad if people point out you are bad. There must be a reason if they do.
Oh, that wasn't me. Sorry for the commotion.
>I said your post is irrelevant, since it can be applied to all artists
This is literally false. Experts don't need to bother doing what beginners and low end intermediates do. They are already good, masters even. No one who posts here is even close to that level. The people here are still on that path and have a long way to go. They haven't made it. Experts have. So you're full of shit.
>Saying what you are saying or saying get back to basics, because your current level isn't good enough for porn, isn't the same thing buddy.
It is, I'm just including the low end intermediates and not just picking on the beginners. No one here's a master and there are a plethora of porn artists who never post here who are closer to that status than everyone here. You can't name a single poster here who's even remotely close. Everyone here has a lot to learn and should keep going back and grinding the basics. Now shut up and draw.
Oh, the omnipresent nonsense arguing in this thread. :^)
I need some serious bashing regarding this pic. How can I improve the coloring/shading? I know I am bad at this on many levels so any kind of advice would be awesome.
Also, please keep in mind that Chun's yellow skin color is mandatory and I can't change it.
Oh god those skin tones.
Try to put some variation in their skin tones please. The brown is meh, but the yellow skin hurts my eyes. Try to put variation in between the people as well
>also chun li best crapcom
Brilliant setting, love everything about this. The atmosphere and poses are wonderful. What are the little colored things on the table?
Critique, as per the other anon, the contrast needs some work between foreground and background. There's currently too many things for the eye to try and focus on, where as you could certainly try to direct focus towards the foreground primarily.
Additionally, your overall skin colors seem to have a bit too much green/yellow, or at least their skin seems that way to me. It almost looks like she has pancreatic cancer.
Here's an edit I did to illustrate what it would look like with less contrast, a hue shift on the foreground and a darker background.
Ignore my shitty lasso tool work.
Maybe you should stop being such a pretentious fucking casual faggot and put them in your computer, and post them properly like every fucking intelligent human being.
I like your stuff, but man, does you casual fuckers annoy me.
RE-SIZE AND FLIP. THANK YOU
No, mostly It brings up the question of what audience the commissioner intends to appeal to. If it's gay porn why is Chun Li there at all and if it's normal poen why are there four guys just standing around with their dicks out?
Study some realistic references. Also keep in mind the vagina is closer to where the balls are than the penis. It's also extremely close to the anus. People always seem to get really weird stomach vaginas.
I think I overworked the metroid.
Will finish tomorrow.
You can also find me on HF under the same name
My point is you aren't saying anything of importance. Everyone here needs to keep grinding fundamentals, everyone. If anyone here was truly good and didn't need to do that, they wouldn't bother posting here, at all. Only beginners and low end intermediates post on /ic/. Just because you have beginners who think you're good doesn't mean you are. If you want to call that trolling, be my guest.
if kyle or bbc could give me face redlines id be thrilled god bless
1st time shading, i don't know if the shading according to the source of light is right, but i think that doesn't look like shit.
Stiff uninteresting pose with bad proportion and guessed anatomy. Rather than fixing this, start with a new one, preferably not from memory, since you are not good enough yet to pull this kind of stuff off.
You hide hands and foot because you don't know how to draw them, you also made fixed symmetrical pose because you don't know how to draw anatomy in perspective. Whole image is just compromise for your luck of knowledge.
sup guys. doing a sw pic here. i tried something a bit unusual for me with perspective. some help needed
Bad hand and face anatomy + guessing when it comes to perspective + really bad line-weight are all huge turnoffs. You should really study all this stuff instead of spending your time coloring and rendering half-turds.
Cleaning this up. Any anatomy/perspective fuckups I should address? Also, do you have any suggestions about the standing character's left leg? The pose seems stiff/unnatural because of how straight it is and I don't have a clue how to fix that.
Will definitely try that. Thanks.
However, now that I look at it I think the main problem is the unappealing pov. I guess I'll have to push the perspective a lot more to achieve a better result.
Yeah I should have exaggerated the expression more.
I thought it might not have fitted her image.
I admit to the hand but I belive that the face is on par with the rest of the picture.
Could you go some more in depth about the line weight?
What exactly is it that is off putting about it?
Thank you, anon's