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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.
Do not start flame wars.
Do not reply to funposters.
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Scrapped the last one and started over again with better reference. Suggestions?
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>>2330260

Thinking of the torso as box forms and building spherical forms on top helps.
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>>2333107

I like your linework, looks very confident.

As for critque, her expression looks very indifferent towards the situation.
And I think her lower legs could use some more attention.

>>2333092

Thanks for using my image OP.
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>>2333109
Thank you and I'm not even the anon who drew that.

Lovely loli.
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Reminder that porn threads are not synonymous with stylized drawing threads. That's why we keep them separate.

Both stylized and non-stylized porn can be posted here.
If you only want critique on your drawing style, post in the style threads instead.

(I felt the need to post this due to the know-it-all drama fags spawning in the previous thread).
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>>2333145
Nobody cares.
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hmm started nsfw really recently so im just getting how it works, I need to find out some poses, any help would be appreciated
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>>2333192
Try venturing away from stiff poses, even when she's suspended I don't get the impression of her having any weight.
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>>2333192
Well, you got 2 options:

- Look for hentai doujins http://nhentai.net/
- Look for porn https://www.google.com
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>>2333192
Don't forget to post the results of your studies, because you already draw some pretty cute girls, it's halfway to decent NSFW.
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needs moar nude males
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>>2333210

You're right, I noticed that now, doesn't have any weight, thanks for opening my eyes
>>2333218
Hentais are the best for sure
>>2333251


Thanks everyone, i'll do what I can, for now im studying anatomy
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Can bad art be sexy? follow up question is my bad art sexy?
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>>2333273
>Can bad art be sexy?

Yes, I do like some pretty bad porn art and I'm sure I'm not the only one, it's almost like a guilty pleasure, but it needs to appeal to some of my fetishes.
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help to fix fuckups please.
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>>2333273

Yes.
No.
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>>2333311
forearm on red is too short
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>>2333115
I keep forgetting to draw the structure on top of the gesture. Thanks for pointing out the problem.
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>>2333170
>>I don't care, but I felt the need to make a post pointing out how much I don't care.

False truth.
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>>2333192
you have a tumblr?
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>>2333368

Not him but I think you mistake how much effort it takes to type "nobody cares" and post it.
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>>2333192
The rope one is quite good, but feel like you would want to add ropes supporting the rest of their body as well.

The current pose would be a huge strain on the persons shoulders and core body.

Look into shibari guides for reference, as they very often explain supporting distribution of body through contact points with ropes.

Here's one for arms that I quite like.
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>>2333374
No one mistakes the amount of effort. It's just the fact that he even bothered to acknowledge and respond at all is counter productive to his point. That's why those responses are always hilarious.
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>>2333386
I say again, no one cares.
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>>2333386
>>That's why those responses are always hilarious
Precisely, it's a great laugh.

>>2333387
Lol.
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>>2333386

I really don't think replying is really that indicative of giving a shit. There might be an argument if he gave you a paragraph explaining why nobody cares in elaborate depth, but seriously anon.
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>>2333374
Different guy here, but really now, saying it's barely any effort to put "no one cares" to justify someone apparently not caring is just dumb. Little effort still = effort. Meaning you still cared to even bother.
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>>2333401

That's about as retarded as saying taking the time to change the channel on the TV means you cared about whatever was on TV. The effort to make such a statement is negligible. You might as well say "if you didn't care why did you even read it? Why do you read anything at all if you don't care?"
Basically us having this argument shows we give more of a shit about the technicalities of whether someone cares than that guy did about whatever shit he was replying to.
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>>2333400
>I really don't think replying is really that indicative of giving a shit.

Replying in of itself is indicative of giving a shit because you gave it that much attention in the first place. This shit isn't rocket science. If you don't care, you don't reply. It's really that simple. If you're replying, you do care to some degree. Period. You can't argue otherwise.
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>>2333404
>comparing passive activity to engaging activity

Your analogy is pretty shit.
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>>2333401
>>2333400
>>2333404
>>2333406


Get back to drawing dicks you faggots nobody cares if it is an animu dick or a dick that uses bridgeman tier construction.
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>>2333411

What, changing the channel to typing "nobody cares"?
How engaging do you think typing "nobody cares" is?
>>2333406
>You can't argue otherwise.
Ok. Fine. "To some degree."
That seriously doesn't need to be any considerable degree. You can argue degrees of giving a shit for anything, and replying with two takes a very, very low degree of giving a shit. So yeah, if you really want to split hairs so you can feel haughty and chuckle to yourself that somebody cared enough to take literally two seconds of their time to tell you to fuck off, sure.
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>>2333412
what is that picture from?
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>>2333371
No, just facebook profile, i dont feel really confident to post stuff on net.
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>>2333377
Thankss, you're right, i'll remember this
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>>2333434
it looks fine, just post man~
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>>2333311
You drew dicks on all of those women.
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>>2333311
I like your art but i try i must best to ignore since shemales are just wrong.
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>>2333595
>>2333605
>complaining about girls with dicks
>in drawn porn

That autism though.
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>>2333613
Dick girls are just fucking boring at this point. They are fucking everywhere. It's the most entry level quasi-transgressive fetish for people who completely lack imagination.
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>>2333616
>Dick girls are just fucking boring at this point.

Cry me a river autismo. People have their kinks. Get over it.
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>>2333618
Go back to tumblr you snarky twat. I'm shaming your basic fucking kink and there is nothing you can do about it regardless of how many times you yell "austism".
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>>2333623
>can't give any legit critique on the image
>complains about the fetish

Nah, you can fuck off to tumblr though since you're clearly useless to this thread.
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>>2333625
I was just having some bantz. You're the one who stirred up shit shouting autism.
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>>2333623

here i have a gif for you
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>>2333633
Don't try to step to me in a meme-off you fucking silly cunt.
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>>2333633
>not posting the better gif
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When doing commissions, do you simply use paypal to send invoices to a given email? How much do you stress the no lewd info in the transaction?
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>>2333107
The feet are a huge turnoff, as it were the hands in the previous version. I think it's time to learn some proper anatomy, anon.
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>>2333613
If anyone's autistic here, it's you. Who the fuck gets this offended over a joke?
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>>2333107
Them feet.
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>>2333663
Uppity faggots in denial
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>>2333092
>mfw that OP

I'm about half way through an erotic short stories collection for that kindle dosh but will need some illustration done; I was always intending to do them my self but carpal tunnel stalled my progress something fierce.

What would the average porn anon charge for a few vore-esq pictures and one book cover, keeping in mind that they would need to cede all rights to me for aforementioned artwork?
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is the anatomy bullshit?
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>>2333695
A bit, but probably good enough to have someone pay for it.
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May animate this girl.
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>>2333618
It sounds like your " kink" is mental illness true autism detected
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>>2333727
Please, get out of here cancer.
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>>2333695
pretty much, yes.

>>2333702
top kek
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>>2333653

When you send the invoice, you don't have to give any info.
The clint usually uses the same email for contact and paypal, but I ask just to be sure.
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>>2333657
Aye.
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>>2333715

>mouth detail

It's vore, isn't it?
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>>2333715
Your anatomy is pretty much garbage. You really need to study that a lot dude.
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>>2333715
Its very stylized, idk if thats good or bad. Remember to take your time and think when you animut
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>>2333736
Point out for me why it's bullshit?
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>>2333777
Nah, not really into vore.
>>2333784
Guess I'll scrap this and try again, is it just the bodies or the faces?
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>>2333814
Stiff pose, perspective/foreshortening issues, proportions too extreme.
On top of that the line-art is unconfident and messy.
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>>2333822
Fair enough, thanks.
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>>2333817
Don't just try again with another stylized weeb copy. Instead study properly from rl references and/or read some anatomy books.
You are never going to learn this properly if you have this hit and miss approach.
The bodies are garbage, the faces are better. Which makes it obvious that you are too influenced by anime. Instead of learning what I told you above, you draw from imagination, which isn't wrong per se, but your limited visual library doesn't allow you to draw everything you want.
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>>2333421
mikufag's "friend" made a comic making fun of him.
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>>2333826
I'm not flush with naked at the moment, but how is my anatomy on this character?
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>>2333857
meant to say naked chicks.
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legs are too big but don't care
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>>2333904
Aside from her breasts, she's really massive, I'm not much into these titan chicks, but you draw pretty well.
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>>2333857
Nigga u on the internet. You can find thousands of free art-ref naked ladies, and millions of porn ones. Not as good as life drawing, but anything is better then nothing
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>>2333916
Sorry, I meant naked chicks I have drawn, I don't have much porn to show and ask if the anatomy is better or worse.
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>>2333857
That's some heavy stylization, kinda like 90's animes.

Her body reminds me of Masami Obari's style (Fatal Fury), while her face has a little of Sadamoto's style (Evangelion).

Considering these aspects, I would say the anatomy still has some flaws, not because of the exageration, but the fundamentals.

In the full body image, she has a weird neck position, also her shoulder doesn't seem to connect well with her body in a convincing way. Balloon tits may be your thing, but I don't think it works here.

In the close up, I think her clavicle looks misplaced.
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>>2333936
I've been focusing more on drawing passable faces than anything else lately. I'll work on my bodies, I guess I'll try referencing actual women instead of just comics and anime.
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>>2333905
thanks. I need ideers for a new years themed drawing. please help any1
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>>2333857
your palettes are really nice, they look like actual acrylic on cel sheets. do you color drop older illustrations or you just got a knack for colors, interested in your thoughts on color regardless.

>>2333904
big is good, kyle-kun, especially large legs, lowers the center of gravity, grounds character like a tree trunk, makes them feel stable, sturdy, balanced. chris sanders said a lotta neat things about large legs as a character design on the model sheets for Nani from Lilo & Stitch, but if comforting/supportive is what you're going for, big legs can help you achieve that.
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>>2333990
happy nude deers is what i'm goin with
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>>2333996
I come up with the colors on my own, I try to use three tones for each color, i make a channel for each color afterwards so I colorize them to see what combinations look good.
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>>2333904
>>2333990
You simplify the form in a really nice way.
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>>2333857
Do you have tumblr? I want to see how you progress. I've got a huge thing for old school anime style.
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>>2334073
Naw, I might make one later on, for now all I have is a skype username. [email protected]
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>>2333990
Teach meeee
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>>2333990
blog?
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>>2333784
>Your anatomy is pretty much garbage

His anatomy isn't perfect but it's far from complete garbage. It's easily passable specially for the weeb style he's got going on. That doesn't mean he should stop improving though.
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>>2334122
>>>Loomis
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>>2333822
Good stuff saying a whole lot of nothing. Great critique m8.
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>>2333595
why do you you write that like that is something bad?
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ugghhhhh.
I promise I'll study anatomy seriously.
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>>2333715
>>2333857
I like it bruv, obviously stylized and i also love your colour selection, it's very nostalgic.

Just make sure to keep up actual anatomy study. Who knows, you may be able to find a style you enjoy even more with more experimentation.

Basically, reach outside of your comfort zone.

>>2333936
Hate this shit, 90s had some truly ugly designs. Personal opinion of course.
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>>2333990
Year of the monkey. Cute anime girls based on zodiac animals are always popular.
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>>2333996
Source on that Chris Sanders stuff?
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>>2333663
>I was just pretending to be an idiot
>it was just a joke

You aren't fooling anyone.
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>>2334247
Thanks, I just got some anatomy charts and I'm looking up some real life reference.
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>>2334251
sorry for the shit quality scans but it's all i could find at the moment

http://stitchums.tumblr.com/post/34691705430
and
http://stitchums.tumblr.com/post/34690915563
(namely this in that last link http://36.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcqxdyBWmX1rj945mo6_1280.png)

his style was all about how weight on the figure should be moving down towards the earth, so big legs, big forearms (aka things i like a looooot)
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>>2334272
Yeah I'm familiar and like it for the same reasons. Just looking for an interesting read. Fenks links.

>>2334276
Your light source is all over the place and 'streaky' and even "cloudy" (like on the back of her head?). multiple focal points due to overly bright elements (that eye in the bottom left especially), leading to a very dizzying image. Her skin tone looks mottled and unappealing, almost like a dead body along with the streakiness/shiny. The metallic texture on her legs is similarly offputting, the original character has those parts more similar to a "creeping darkness" which fits the cthulhu mythos concept of her design, same for the tentacles. The original line drawing looks servicable enough, though the bottom of the ribcage terminates oddly (right behind the boob?) with a terrible indent below the armpit and above the breast.

Basically, too glossy and the dodge and burn are very (too) obvious with confused textures and form. The pussy also has a gizzard. Study muscle insertions.
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>>2333633
>>2333638
>>2333639

>A meme-off

Jesus christ stop.
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>>2334313
>p-pls stop having fun
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>>2334315
Yes exactly
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>>2333109
thank u (and I am the anon that drew that)
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>>2334136
not him but http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/
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>>2334402
I can't really wrap my head around that way of coloring (I'm new to digital). Is it just round brushes of different hardness? It looks so simple and pleasing.
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>>2333904
Love it
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>>2334150
I said everything there was to say.

I hope you die in 2016 ^^
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>>2334276
Nice work polishing the turd.
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>>2334604
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>>2334604
>I said everything there was to say.
>I hope you die in 2016 ^^
>>2334606
Playing with dice isn't all that edgy, imo. :^)
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>>2334607
You pornfags will never make it.
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>>2334609
>making a GOOD living off it.
feels good
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>>2334614
>poverty level income
>stuck paying rent and doesn't own a home
>good living
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>>2334622
>salary cca. 70% above country's norm
>own house because inheritance
>normal living
try not to drown in jelly
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>>2334632
>living in borderline 3rd world
>jelly
Well that explains everything.
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>>2334639
>living in normal EU 1st world country
>living off own drawing skills
>not a care in the world
all your jelly makes it worth even more
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>>2334642
>EU
Not even the slightest bit jelly.
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>>2334643
>me talking about making a living with porn
>you talking about personal taste no one could care less about
what assumption is going to be next? my penis size?
keep the jello flowing m8
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>>2334622
>>2334639
>>2334643
my sides
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i dunno
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>>2334690
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>>2334703
huh?
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>>2334705
he must have one hell of a curved penis.
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>>2334715
help
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>>2333192
please draw qt yuri waifus instead of full on lewds

>>2333311
Red's feet are weirdly defined, one too much the other too little. Hand looks pretty small and spindly, and breast starts a little too far to the side, would be better following the pectoral lines more like the other two. Blue's heels are very angular and makes it harder to judge their orientation. Purple's hand on blue's butt needs redone.

Looks nice though dude, good work on the poses, particularly purple.
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>>2334248
It's not year of the monkey until February.
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>>2334736
That hasn't stopped JP artists from drawing qt monkey girls fanart or not.
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>>2334744
Is that a giant red dildo with yellow balls?
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>>2334744
The JP artists draw qt girls of literally everything ever. I was just making the point that if you want to do something themed for the Chinese new year, then maybe Chinese new year is the time to do it.
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>>2334745
i think that monkey girl is a genderbent sun wukong with his(her?) huge ass cane for beating people up
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>>2334735
>would be better following the pectoral lines more like the other two.
i'm sorry my eanlish if far from good, can you say this in ather words?
Also, i fuckup red's butt and spine, i hope i fix that.
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>>2335333
if red was suppose to have goat legs from the start then you have to redraw them completely. It's always obvious you drew normal feet first and just replaced them with a bone and a hoof and called it.
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better, worse?
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>>2333273
There is something about shittily drawn porn that can be erotic somehow. Not too shitty though.
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>>2335435
That is because it was drawing with pure lust, but void of fundamentals.
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>>2334154
More polite fag who bitched about Futa last time. Do you have somewhere you post regularly? You're not perfect but I like where your style is headed.
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>>2335435
>>2335458
>trying to justify own bad taste
All my keks.
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>>2335468
Post your fap material faggot.
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>>2335460
>You're not perfect

No one who posts in the porn thread is.
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>>2335515
Yeah but if you keep it too positive in here it devolves into samefag inquisition.
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>>2334722
You cant tell that his leg is in front. Shade the two bodies so people can look at it easier. Her bottom leg and butt cheek would be in more, and her other leg looks like it's inside his torso.
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>>2335421
Haven't seen the original but this looks good so far.
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>>2335421
General form is okay-ish. The only bigger concern I have is with her right arm being too short imo.
The lineart is too rough, to be able to give you a better critique.
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>>2335538
ty
>>2335563
Where is the form falling down? Noted the right arm.
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>>2335098
It's SonSon from Marvel vs Capcom 2.
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>>2335575
Mainly is the anatomy breaking up in some spots (pelvis and shoulder/clavicle area). But all in all is not bad since it has weight and presence in a 3d space.
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>>2333682

Prices vary a lot with artists, but not many will give up all their rights and if they do it will inflate the price by 200%-400% >

Do you intend to reuse the images?(as in merchandise or other products)
If not you may even not even have to buy the rights.
Just make sure to be clear about what you're going to use it for.
And if you did make enough money to expand your products it shouldnt be a problem to but extended copyrights from the original artist.
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>>2335627
Perspective-wise this is utter garbage.
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how do i delete my uploaded image from sankaku complex ????
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>>2335333
Sure, sorry. I mean the breasts lining up with the chest muscle, leading up to the shoulders. Blue and purple are good, but red's looks a bit detached, even with purple's pushing it up.
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>>2335686
Opinion-wise you are utter garbage.
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>>2335897
It is pointless to do a redline or give instruction on how to correct such a flawed artwork. He's got to learn his fundamentals.
What I said is true, so I don't really give a fuck about you being butthurt.
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>>2335884
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>>2335950
ou shi...
ehem, thenx for redline, and fixing heands. Also it can sounds angreitful, but the purple have four heands, so that shoulder that we see is lids to blue's butt. But maybe i fuck up in that too, but i dont see that yet.
in any ways, thenx.
>>2335884
hm, so you want to say that red's boob grovs too far on the chest? right?

Also i think i fuckup theyr faces. All of tham, exept purple. She is perfect.
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>>2335661
The images will probably show up in a paper back version or for promotional artwork.
Most authors obtain the rights to the artwork they use on their covers, it can get messy considering I intend to make a profit from selling a product which contains said artwork.
The expense increase I was expecting.
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>>2336001
grorious.
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what about this one
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hoping there might be more traffic here to tell me how to fix these retarded feet before I start painting it -.-
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Ok
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>>2334735
Sure.
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>>2336094
Pretty weird fetish you got here, but that's actually a cute pussy.
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>>2335906
I guess I have someone defending it, but I'd agree my perspective's shit
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>>2336077
Good shit... but the furniture seems a bit over-scaled. Dunno if that was intended.
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>>2336180
i will try to make the couch smaller.
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>>2334690
>>2334703
>>2334705

Impossible space
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what can I improve on this senpai
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does my drawing/painting style actually look alright?
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>>2336366
it would be nice to see some depth in her upper torso. it seems flat in comparison to her thighs. arch her back to give it more depth
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>>2336077
The girl in the red's weight is off. She's gonna slip off the couch, so either straighten her hips, or put her uncrossed leg on the floor.
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>>2336001
It struck me that this could be the case. Sorry for that.
Try to show what's going on a bit more explicitly (by showing parts of arms that are now entirely behind the other girls' backs.
Also give more thought to the hands/palms. Right now you are showing them all from the same directions. Look at how I put them more into perspective, to show some variation. Don't be afraid of hiding parts of the anatomy, but be aware that this might cause some confusion if there are unclear visual clues.
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>>2333904
If only the head wasnt anime styled, this would be fuckin epic. Still mirin ofc
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>>2333595
No he drew tits on men
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>>2336488
>Also, your feet and hands are fucking amazing, where/who did u learn from?
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>>2335333
Study anatomy
Specifically the chicks not having penises part
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>>2336491
he is known for copying form photo references. try doing that.

>>2336507
probably you must have burned at least a few witches today already, ha? time to start the fire again?
how the fuck can you be so pathetic?
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>>2336507

stop getting so triggered or you might catch the gay.
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>>2336427
thenx for that, but with heands i can do something guiding your advices... Can you say something about thayr faces?
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>>2334690
>>2334703
>mysides.jpg
this is golden
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I had a little incident with this piece in other thread, so i sould feel safe to post this here. Opinions?
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>>2336731
Here's more
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>>2336732
And more
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>>2336731
I love it anon, i'd fap to it.
The first one I like the most, but it looks heavily referenced, which isn't bad.
The good thing is you know what's sexy, and what looks attractive, so you have good taste.
The bad thing is, you are still just a beginner.
You really need to work more on your fundamentals, basic forms, perspective, anatomy. Basically keep it up fampai.
I would suggest going over the chapter on form from the famous artists course (i think its the second chapter), or watching vilppu dvds in which he talks about the basic forms in the human body.
Your animu faces are top notch though, keep it up senpai.
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>>2336773
What do you mean referenced? I didn't use any reference.
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>>2336773
Oh excuse me. Thanks for the critic and the material tho, looks helpful. (Sorry for double post)
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>>2336881
you didnt reference the pose? my bad I guess, just the complexity of the pose+perspective didn't match with line quality etc.
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>>2336886
I'm pretty shitty when it comes to inking, that's why i'm doing some practice. Here's more if you're interested.
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>>2336731
>>2336732
>>2336733
You have good gesture, which is the most outstanding thing about these.
The most off-putting is probably the cross hatching, which is way too rough and pronounced. Try to be more subtle with it, or don't use it at all. If you are shading with colors, you don't really need it.
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can somebody explain to me how to make the eye pupil of a human been point to where i want ? i usualy cant make the character eyes focus on a thing i want.
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>>2336094
beautiful
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>>2336956
dunno, you should probably look at it as if it's a ball inside of the socket. do some top down and profile views of the face with emphasis on the eye, i think that could help you wrap your head round it
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Armpit guy from a few weeks back is back.

R8 or H8
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>>2336988
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>>2336990
/ic/'s redline
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>>2336731
>>2336732
>>2336733
>>2336907
Very nice... BUT WHY DA FUK IS IT ROTATED LIKE THAT?
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>>2336991

10x better
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>>2336907
Sorry for asking but what markers do you use.
Is there a specific brand.
Very nice work.
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>>2336344
Not too much for what you've drawn so far, but hands need work.
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>>2336988
I'm the guy who did the redline. Very nice work man. I love your rendering.
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>>2336992
Not sure why. They look fine on my cellphone.
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>>2337003
I use water colours.
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>>2337029
weird... very weird
are you sure you're not an iloominarty?
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>>2337031
Thanks dude.
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>>2337056
What?
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>>2337003
If you want to do that kind of thing with markers, use alcohol based ones, for instance copics
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>>2336094
Ok, second try
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>>2337109
Please, for the love of God, stop trying.
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>>2337110
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>>2337115
huehue
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>>2337122
I'm trying to play on your level of humor. Maybe some critic?
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>>2337129
You are too bad to be able to absorb specific critique that is related to porn art. Take your artwork to the beginners thread or start learning fundamentals from scratch. This is not the place where you'll learn how to draw.
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Took a stab at doing peg pete.
Even disney likes a good milf.
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>>2335460
ZionAlexiel on hentayfoundry
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Anatomy too hard, I should just stop taking human commissions and go back to furry
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>>2337454
>Go back to fury
AhjAHGJGHjahgAGHJahgjksghsaGHSgashjgAHGJS
Sorry, my keyboard just vomited... really anon, your anatomy looks great, you just gotta keep on working on it, and please stop drawing children getting fucked, or whatever those tiny cunts are.
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>>2337469
>can't draw furry or children
only state-approved art for me!
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>>2337474
Going back to furry is stupid because he/she is going places with human anatomy drawing. And children, well, that's fucking disgusting, still, at least he/she is not raping any kids out there.
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>>2337115
I swear i have seen weirder shit...
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>>2337469
Whatever, man, you could draw poneys fucking fucking dinosaurs and it would still be a drawing.

The good thing about art is that nothing is real, it's like controlling your own dreams.
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>>2337454
I like it, please, keep doing it.
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>>2337492
I didn't make my self clear, i meant that he/she (you?) shouldn't give up on drawing human anatomy and go back to drawing furry. I don't care if he like some humanoid dog fucking an humanoid chicken on his paper, it's the children pornography that sickens me.
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>>2337497
child*
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>>2337497
I wasn't the one who posted that drawing.

I get you now, there can be very unpleasant subjects in hentai, it's just that everytime people make so much drama out of simple drawings that it's kinda irritating.
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>>2337497
What children? I see a drawing with no age or consciousness. Your ok with half human half dog mutant sex but if they have small bodies it's disgusting?

>>2337454
Arms are weird. It's looking great thought keep it up. Just out of curiosity...how do you study anatomy of this small person?
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boobs
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>>2337520
There some nice tities.
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>>2337518
kek, as i said, i think those are children, but as i said myself, those little cunts could be something else, maybe dwarfs, idk. I don't have a fetish for furry, i don't find it much gross though, but if it's child, even drawing/painting, it's sickening to me.
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>>2337518
Mostly looking at Simon's art. It's supposed to be a young-ish Astrid
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>>2337511
haha, who likes drama, anyway? btw, i wasn't trying to make such commotion, did i seem dramatic?
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>>2337529
No, not really, just that "please stop drawing children getting fucked" part that could be interpreted as a protest demand instead of a personal taste opinion.
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>>2337520
Instead of copying anime symbols and comfort-zoning your poses, learn some proper anatomy and perspective from rl references. That's it if you want to get good. If you want to be mediocre, just keep doing what you are doing.
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>>2337547
Symbol titties work well for porn.
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>>2337522
thanks!

>>2337547
yeh i've been practicing lately
refs are good for studies but i don't like using them for my drawings.
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hey babies props good so far?
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>>2337599
Well, you need studies. Lots of them.

>>2337889
This is really really bad. You basically have no idea what you are doing. I suggest you study some perspective and anatomy by doing beginner studies. So ditch figure drawing and get back to fundamentals and simple shapes.
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>>2337563
They do if you know how to use symbols. He doesn't.
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>>2337897
Haha, go fuck yourself buddy.
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>>2337925
>mad cuz bad
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>>2337925
HAHA Practice more, git gud.
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>>2337889
Why would you do pacman yellow as your line color on a fucking white background?

Holy shit. Just WHY. My eyes.
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>>2337930
>HAHA Practice more, git gud.

This literally applies to everyone in this thread, you included. Even the artists of this thread that the shitty beginners here praise have a long road ahead of them to being inspirational to anyone who isn't a complete beginner.
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>>2337925
Sorry if my blunt honesty rustled your jimmies. The sooner you'll realize what I sad is true, the better it will be for you.
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Don't reply to funfuckingposters, godammit.
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>>2337937
>Even the artists of this thread that the shitty beginners here praise have a long road ahead of them to being inspirational to anyone who isn't a complete beginner.
How is this relevant in any way?
Saying that every artist in the world, no matter their level of skill, should strive for improvement is simply stating the obvious.
To me it just sounds like you are trying to make these guys look bad.
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>>2337966
>every artist in the world

I'm specifically talking about the artists in this thread. Where did you get "every artist in the world" from? Not even 1% of artists of the world post here. The artists who post here aren't anything special. Why would any expert bother posting on /ic/? There are only beginners and lower end intermediates here. Saying "do more studies" or "practice more git gud" is redundant because it literally applies to every artist who posts here. That should go without saying.
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>>2337927
>>2337930
>>2337948
fucking samefag
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>>2337948
Sorry, I guess you're right. I'll stick to the beginner thread. It seems I my ego was in shambles.
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>>2337978
>I'm specifically talking about the artists in this thread. Where did you get "every artist in the world" from?
I don't know if I am the one who is unable to express his thoughts properly, or you aren't a good reader. I said your post is irrelevant, since it can be applied to all artists (not only the ones in this thread). Everyone should strive to get better, all the time. That's all.
>Saying "do more studies" or "practice more git gud" is redundant because it literally applies to every artist who posts here.
Saying what you are saying or saying get back to basics, because your current level isn't good enough for porn, isn't the same thing buddy.
I guess you really have trouble with reading comprehension.

>>2337980
Better luck next time.
Also, stop being mad if people point out you are bad. There must be a reason if they do.
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>>2337985
Oh, that wasn't me. Sorry for the commotion.
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>>2337985
>I said your post is irrelevant, since it can be applied to all artists
This is literally false. Experts don't need to bother doing what beginners and low end intermediates do. They are already good, masters even. No one who posts here is even close to that level. The people here are still on that path and have a long way to go. They haven't made it. Experts have. So you're full of shit.

>>2337985
>Saying what you are saying or saying get back to basics, because your current level isn't good enough for porn, isn't the same thing buddy.
It is, I'm just including the low end intermediates and not just picking on the beginners. No one here's a master and there are a plethora of porn artists who never post here who are closer to that status than everyone here. You can't name a single poster here who's even remotely close. Everyone here has a lot to learn and should keep going back and grinding the basics. Now shut up and draw.
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Oh, the omnipresent nonsense arguing in this thread. :^)

I need some serious bashing regarding this pic. How can I improve the coloring/shading? I know I am bad at this on many levels so any kind of advice would be awesome.
Also, please keep in mind that Chun's yellow skin color is mandatory and I can't change it.
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>>2337997
You are either not understanding what I'm saying, or trolling.
I give up.
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>>2337999
It looks neat as is, imo. Maybe Increase the contrast between the background and the subjects.
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>>2337999
Oh god those skin tones.
Try to put some variation in their skin tones please. The brown is meh, but the yellow skin hurts my eyes. Try to put variation in between the people as well
>also chun li best crapcom
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>>2337999
Brilliant setting, love everything about this. The atmosphere and poses are wonderful. What are the little colored things on the table?

Critique, as per the other anon, the contrast needs some work between foreground and background. There's currently too many things for the eye to try and focus on, where as you could certainly try to direct focus towards the foreground primarily.

Additionally, your overall skin colors seem to have a bit too much green/yellow, or at least their skin seems that way to me. It almost looks like she has pancreatic cancer.

Here's an edit I did to illustrate what it would look like with less contrast, a hue shift on the foreground and a darker background.

Ignore my shitty lasso tool work.
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>>2338058
I should mention, my changes aren't spot on for the contrast either. In fact I think I've made the background a bit too dark.
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>>2338048
>>2338058
>It almost looks like she has pancreatic cancer.

>Also, please keep in mind that Chun's yellow skin color is mandatory and I can't change it.

Other than that I love what you did with the "paintover". It's much better than my version.
Thanks.
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>>2337454
i really like the curves
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>>2337999
There are too many dudes in this composition.
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>>2336991
lrn2ears
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>>2337999
what the hell is wrong with her vadge?
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I'm not sure this is the place to ask but I'll risk;
Any of you have any tips on how to draw vaginas? I have great troubles with them.
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>>2337029
Maybe you should stop being such a pretentious fucking casual faggot and put them in your computer, and post them properly like every fucking intelligent human being.

I like your stuff, but man, does you casual fuckers annoy me.

RE-SIZE AND FLIP. THANK YOU
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>>2333092
Very good art, have more?
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>>2338343
Are you afraid it might turn you into a homo?
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>>2338356
I already know them. Thanks anyway.
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>>2334154
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>>2336553
Dude that's... oh almighty, forgive my poor soul. I can't stop laughing, we're so going to hell for this.
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>>2338433
No, mostly It brings up the question of what audience the commissioner intends to appeal to. If it's gay porn why is Chun Li there at all and if it's normal poen why are there four guys just standing around with their dicks out?
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>>2338372
Study some realistic references. Also keep in mind the vagina is closer to where the balls are than the penis. It's also extremely close to the anus. People always seem to get really weird stomach vaginas.
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>>2338489
Because people have gang bang fetishes, and group fetishes. Just like people have bukakke fetishes.
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>>2338489
I think that's called "Gangbang".

And anyways, whatever happen to bisexual? Seems idiots think only gay or not gay exist. There is a middle you know.
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>>2333092
do anyone have a link to fuchur tumblr/site other than uab?
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I think I overworked the metroid.
Will finish tomorrow.

>>2338426

Yup: http://graniem.tumblr.com/
You can also find me on HF under the same name
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>>2337454
this art seems familiar, whats your furfag name?
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>>2338512
>bisexual

You mean indecisive faggots? No one gives a shit about bisexuals.
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>>2338001
My point is you aren't saying anything of importance. Everyone here needs to keep grinding fundamentals, everyone. If anyone here was truly good and didn't need to do that, they wouldn't bother posting here, at all. Only beginners and low end intermediates post on /ic/. Just because you have beginners who think you're good doesn't mean you are. If you want to call that trolling, be my guest.
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>>2337999
she looks like a pickle.

her face is kinda scary, she looks like a chinese grandma
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if kyle or bbc could give me face redlines id be thrilled god bless
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so wheres that tutorial on drawing vaginas?

no roasties please, i know how you western artists love drawing roasties.
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>>2337454
dude, keep up the good work.
Glad to see someone new drawing loli.
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>>2338601
Is that her anus or something? I don't think we're supposed to see it.
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>>2338933
Nice work at the moment. What do you think wrong with her face?
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>>2338933
just mirror the image and get some general reference you lazy cunt. More than the face looks jank btw.
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1st time shading, i don't know if the shading according to the source of light is right, but i think that doesn't look like shit.
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>>2339088

It is.
I don't think the placement is wrong but the butcheeks should probably be covering a larger part of it.
I simply kept it this way ecause I tought it looks more sexy.
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>>2339110
It's done!
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>>2339155
Learn to draw hands. Seriously, if you don't know how to draw a hand that is put in any pose in any perspective from memory, then you don't know how to draw. Sorry.
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>>2339180
i didn't draw it.
i took it from Rule34
anyway i though the same, but i do not have drawpad to fix it.
My work was shading and coloring.
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>>2339110
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>>2339221
Fucked up her point of gravity apparently, oh well. Will post a fixed one in an hour or two probs
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>>2339224
Stiff uninteresting pose with bad proportion and guessed anatomy. Rather than fixing this, start with a new one, preferably not from memory, since you are not good enough yet to pull this kind of stuff off.
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>>2338933
Excellia!!
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>>2339224
fix'd

>>2339226
I'll draw her in a more interesting view.
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>>2339314
You hide hands and foot because you don't know how to draw them, you also made fixed symmetrical pose because you don't know how to draw anatomy in perspective. Whole image is just compromise for your luck of knowledge.
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sup guys. doing a sw pic here. i tried something a bit unusual for me with perspective. some help needed
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>>2338470
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>>2336731
>>2336732
>>2336733
Really like your style. How long do these take you to do from start to finish?
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need money, so I'll try some furry commissions
if I'll start having fun with it, send help
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>>2339509
silly me, forgot the image
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>>2339412
That guy was in the draw thread for /h/ and said it takes about 30 minutes
>>>/h/4140631
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>>2339530
Oh, thanks for the link m8, I usually don't got to /h/
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>>2338933
I think you just should continue drawing your furry shit.
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>>2339396
whel.. I need advises.
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Fin
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>>2339727
Norasuko/10.
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>>2339512
It too late it was always too late

>zootopia

dis gun b gud
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>>2339731
lol. get yourself a pair of glasses, dude.
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>>2339740
>>2339741
What is this autistic rewriting?
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>>2339727
I nominate this for the next porn thread image.
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>>2339727
For all that's going on I must give Samus credit for only being slightly miffed at her circumstances.
>What? Again? That's the third time this week.
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>>2339761
I second this nomination, WITH A VENGEANCE!
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>>2339777
Can't argue with trips. Next OP image it must be
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>>2339761

All of these are way better
>>2338933
>>2338058
>>2336988
>>2336991
>>2336907
>>2336553
>>2336366
>>2333904
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>>2339742
What is this autistic triggering?
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>>2339727
Bad hand and face anatomy + guessing when it comes to perspective + really bad line-weight are all huge turnoffs. You should really study all this stuff instead of spending your time coloring and rendering half-turds.
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>>2339783
These would be nice, just to change things up.
>>2336988
>>2336732
>>2336553
>>2333904
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Cleaning this up. Any anatomy/perspective fuckups I should address? Also, do you have any suggestions about the standing character's left leg? The pose seems stiff/unnatural because of how straight it is and I don't have a clue how to fix that.
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>>2339810
It seems stiff because of the way her foot is bent. Make it face forward (so you'll have to draw t in profile almost) and you'll find it looks like she has much better balance.
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>>2339817
Will definitely try that. Thanks.
However, now that I look at it I think the main problem is the unappealing pov. I guess I'll have to push the perspective a lot more to achieve a better result.
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>>2339182
nicee
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>>2339182
Awesome, what software did you use to color?
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>>2339798

This one is GREAT
>>2336553

use it for next thread
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>>2339926
Honestly I prefer
>>2333904
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>>2336344
Whats her left breast attached to? Looks like she's holding up a bag over her chest.
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>>2339182
blog?

>>2339923
judging by the filename it's most likely sai
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>>2340015
i do use photoshop, but i think my problem is the inexperience not the software.
i colored this >>2339155 Cat girl
But his Coloring is better, i wonder how does he "imagine" the lights and the shadows in the pic.
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New thread
>>2339998
>>2339998
>>2339998
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>>2339770

Yeah I should have exaggerated the expression more.
I thought it might not have fitted her image.

>>2339793

I admit to the hand but I belive that the face is on par with the rest of the picture.

Could you go some more in depth about the line weight?
What exactly is it that is off putting about it?

>>2339731
>>2339761

Thank you, anon's
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>>2339810
forgot your trip
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>>2339810
Fixed the pose. I think this way it works better and it looks more interesting. Still would like to know if you see any errors.
>>2340360
What?
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>>2339727
>>2340265
Dude, your colours are sick! Can I make a colour request? It's just lineart of a nude chick, real easy (I can't colour for shite).
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>>2339724
The human's right leg is waaay too long.
Try drawing an outline of the rest of her leg and you'll see what i mean
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