/efg/- Erotic Fiction General (Formerly /wst/)

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A guide to constructive criticism, because "Your writing/artwork sucks" doesn't help anyone get better at it.

http://pastebin.com/1s1fLktL

Currently we are creating a set of guides to aid new and upcoming smut writers, if you feel as if you can contribute anything, please do so in-thread!

Completed guides:

Smut Writing for the Sexually Inexperienced: http://pastebin.com/znDUfbtB

Writing from the Female Perspective: http://pastebin.com/M5FNyVWH

Guide to writing monsters in smut: http://pastebin.com/iXjPcUTb

What is a good place to anonymously post the completed fictions, without needing an account of any kind?

>>6636699
I'm stupid. I forgot to add
>Writefags, consider pastebin/1d4chan rather than dumping for long stories.

When I was playing frankenstein with the OP.

Flockdraw ongoing:
http://flockmod.com/tgwst

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Oh well. Something to remeber for the next thread.

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>>6636704
Should we also place the flockmod in the OP? It could go under the requests document

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Here's to a great beginning!

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>>6636686
>make this exact same thread
>only notice now that this was here and learn that my OP is too old to delete

Well, I feel like a moron.

>>6636713
Of course. It's our de facto chatroom.

>>6636734
Oh, and reposting this


Fertility Rites
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VHUecci7DGE3IMhpvidbTT-zPUyrMgpyljqXwGYe5lo/edit
Tags: boyxgoddess, /ss/, lactation, vaginal, oral (female), vanilla, impregnation

>>6636734
So. Things to add to the next OP
>Writefags, consider pastebin/1d4chan rather than dumping for long stories.
>our unofficial gathering:
>http://flockmod.com/tgwst

>>6636744
Yeah, good thinking. With all the discussion last thread, we overlooked this.

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I should repeat from last thread

Wallbutt erotica, when?

Seriously.

Do we at least have any good stocks/pillories stories in the master smut list?

>>6636781

Not that I recall. But I don't have the most comprehensive knowledge of the master list. Some bondage stuff like that might be a good way of breaking in this new thread, if anyone's willing to take a crack at it.

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>>6636788
The public use fetish is nightmare made flesh.

There is literally no fetish fuel for it. I mean, it's not even that there aren't good stories around. There aren't any stories around.

>>6636802
Well, think of it this way: you can be a smut pioneer for us!

>>6636813
I'm seriously considering writing a story like that, but I'm afraid my expository skills leave much to be desired.

It would probably read like a pizza delivery pamphlet. Too descriptive.

>>6636823
Sounds a bit like my first smut. Don't worry about it, we all have to start somewhere. Besides, you yourself said it would be better than having nothing at all for your fetish.

>>6636827
Yeah, yeah, but you know how it is. Everyone's self-conscious about exposing themselves or their skillset to a judging audience.

>>6636823
There's plenty of people here willing to lend a hand, far more than there are writers available to produce what you're requesting. Give it a shot and see how it goes.

>>6636841
In what sense would they lend a hand?

I'm not being sarcastic, I have no idea how this shit is done.

>>6636859
We look at WIPs, give suggestions as to what you can improve, and point out errors that need correcting. That kind of stuff.

I want to propose something.

The /d/rawthread has a lot of drawfags getting shit done, and it pretty popular for a /d/ thread.

What do you think about coming in contact with those guys, to ask if they want to add a "for story requests go to /efg/" reference in their OP? We can add a "for image requests go to the /d/rawthread" in ours.

My thought is that if we succeed in linking the two generals, we can get some more traffic, which I'm sure the old guard would appreciate, but far more than that, we might start a good thing with stray drawfags coming around here and stray writerfags going there, possibly ending up with stories inspired by their work or pictures inspired by ours.

>>6636861
I might try my hand at it.

>>6636874
That's actually a pretty good idea.

>>6636781
>>6636802
Hang on anons, I'm scribbling something for you now. It's going to be pretty soft but it's still wall mount. Should be done within an hour.

>>6636883
I'll leave it up for discussion in case anyone objects and might act on it tomorrow.

>>6636903
That sounds great anon. I'll check it when I wake up.

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>>6637002
Ok here it is:

http://pastebin.com/im0hXcy6

Tags: MxF, willing, wallmount, vaginal, anal, bareback, condom

Never written something like this before, hope you like it.

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Hi mates, I just heard the news of the exile. I wanted to stop by and see if anyone could give some feedback or some suggestions with something I'm working on.

Demon Hearts. A choose your own adventure game. The basic premise is that you play an adventurer (male) who was caught and sold as a slave to a monster girl town. I have a few fetishes covered, like bondage shortstacks ghost bj etc. I'm curious as to what you mates would want to see in it?

Like specific fetishes certain monster girls or scenarios.
Right now I have about ten girls and two men you can interact with. This is still in its roughest form at the moment, but I would love some I put.

I can answer some questions about it and I can link to the tumblr.

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>>6637101
http://projectdemonhearts.tumblr.com

And a pic of the main cast at the moment

>>6637051
>http://pastebin.com/im0hXcy6

not bad i'd love if you would continue that story line

is anyone actually participating in the magic sex smut off that was mentioned last thread? I'm 500 words into it, and I'm really happy with it as my first piece.

What's the difference between this and the wst threads?

>>6636874
Anon, if our drawfags wanted to go in the /d/rawthread, they would have done so already. /wst/ isn't just about your stories, or art for your stories, it's also about production of /tg/ related smut, which the drawfags contribute to as much as the writefags.
Beside, I seldom see /d/rawfags draw anything vanilla, and their drawthread is filled with... /d/ related requests at best, which is not necessarily everyone favorite stuff. You are free to go and see if /d/rawfags want to take a look around there, but our own should stay there, or do as they please.

>>6637239
they're the same thing, just renaming

>>6637051
That was pretty good. Simple and small, but enjoyable.

>>6637239
We're just rebranding and branching out. All the subject matter ot the /wst/ threads is entailed in our new /efg/, but /efg/ is not limited to the weekend or to scifi/fantasy smut.

>>6637190
Ooh, I almost forgot about that. Mind re-posting the prompt?

http://pastebin.com/01unPkp2

Wrote this for a request in the 'weirdest fetish' thread we had earlier this month. The requested theme was 'domination via food'.

Not my best but open to any criticism.

>>6637442
"Write a fic involving the creative use of magic and/or psychic powers during sex- the more exotic the better. Mind-linking, superhuman endurance, maybe transformation during the act itself- the sky's the limit!"

As transcribed from the original thread.

>>6637116
Yeah I sort of wrapped it up after describing the first two because I wanted to go to bed. Might pick it up later, but no promises.

>>6637101

Okay, will this be designed like a typical eroge, with a number of routes leading to different sex scenes with different characters and then endings? Are you using a VN engine to do it? If not I highly suggest you do unless you're a proficient programmer.

So are you guys just interested in reading normally written fiction here or would you be interested in some logs from erotic roleplay sessions? I have a few logs from sessions playing on F-list, mostly centered around Futa-On-Male and some weirder kinkier stuff like smell, that I'd be willing to share.

Hey I have something I am writing but I don't want to share it publicly before it is done. Would anyone be willing to email me and I'll email you the link?

[email protected]

>>6637602
Unless you edit the logs into an actual story, no. And futa is disliked by /wst/.

>>6637606
Why don't you just post on pastebin as a guest? or make some sort of throwaway account there.

>>6637602
Take your logs, turn them into a story and post them. Of course, we're not an /erp/ general so it would be best to avoid posting logs as such.

Also ignore that other guy. I personally abhorr futa-on-male (or futa-on-anything, ir anything-on-futa, really) but someone else might like that and we're in the process of getting a bit more inclusive.

>>6637642

It's too long for a pastebin.

>>6637607

And it is a futa story so I don't know if y'all would like it.

>>6637647
Then post it in several chapters.

And our delayed new year's revolution was to stop sending people away in order to grow and start getting shit done, again.

Maybe I don't like futa, but someone else might. Maybe you can post a futa story for the guy above, and he can organize his logs into a futa story for you and you two can be happier while otherwise you wouldn't, while I can venture forth and contribute to the unjustly overlooked genre of mechanical rape.

>>6637657
Wait, that was supposed to be resolution, not revolution.

Then again, it was a pretty revolutionary resolution, sooooo...

>>6637666

So it's not done and I really need some feedback.

>>6637471
Tags, please.

>>6637535
>> will this be designed like a typical eroge, with a number of routes leading to different sex scenes with different characters and then endings?

Yup, so far there are at least 8 characters to fool around with. Each will have at least 1 sex scene but the main girls will have multiple scenes as well as multiple endings, generally a good and bad end.

>>Are you using a VN engine to do it?

I'm using renplay, and there is enough of a community to help if I want to try anything new.

Character wise I'm trying to stay away from the normal stereo types and give them a better personality than just here is yandere girl, and here is tsudre girl 2. Ironically enough I would prefer it to end up like katawa shojo where the characters drive the story more than sex but the sex will still be there as some fun.

Also a small list of fetishes as of right now are,

>size play
>vanilla
>anal
>bdsm
>power struggle
>biting
>paralysis
>gay
>insect
>3 way
>lesbians

I think there are a few more but they are slipping my mind at the moment

>>6637761
Since you're making a game, have you also posted this on /d/gg?

>>6637762
I didn't think of it since I thought it was more appropriate for tg... My brain didn't even make the connection till now. I'll post it up there in a minute

>>6637666

Oh and if you guys needs tags

> M/M
> Futa/M
> Futadom
> Male Sub
> Dystopian

>>6637255
Not just /tg/ related smut, mind you. Any form of smut is fine. Drawfags are just as welcome as writefags.

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>>6637471
>>6637740
Tags: MxF,domination, vanilla, vaginal, mind break, baked goods

I think that's it... I'm rubbish at tagging.

>>6637997
Good enough for me.

>>6637997
>baked goods
... well, that's something different

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http://captaincaption.deviantart.com

Gender Bender writefag. I'd appreciate some criticism of my work. I've been on hiatus for a while and want to start writing again. Also, hit me up with some ideas for TG stories.

I can't seem to be able to connect to the Flock.

How dark can we get here? Would some heavy sensedep nonconsent be looked down upon?

>>6638190
You're on 4chan, you dummy. It's hard to get much darker without the FBI coming for you.

>>6638190
Back on /tg/ somebody wrote what basically amounted to snuff and thought nobody would like it. People liked it.

Incidentally, I won that bet and still want that fic you owe me Cornelius.

>>6638187
Me neither. It's not the first time it's acted up, though.

>>6638195
I think that's something 4channers tell themselves to feel cool.

>>6638201
But ok. I'll try my hand at it. But beware. The villain is intentionally going to be written to be extra creepy.

>>6638257
>intentionally going to be written to be extra creepy.
That's more like it. I measure all villains by the standard of this guy I found in a story on AFF once. He's also the main character, the story is in first-person.

I literally cannot describe how creepy it comes off, but one of the other people who reviewed the story summed it up quite well: "Excellent story, and may god have mercy on your soul."

>>6636686
Hat is pure! Using his works for such a lewd purposes isn't right.

>>6638283
Surprising that no lewds of Chiaki and Midori has ever been made, about this.

>>6638271
What story would that be?

>>6638401
It's a long one, you sure you want to know?

>>6638411
Why not? What's the worst that might happen? I shelve it?

>>6638414
Very well, http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600098537

Mayhaps I'll bring the tags over as well: Abuse, Anal, Angst, BDSM, Beast, B-Mod, Bond, BP, Contro, CR, D/s, Dom, Fet, Fingering, Fist, H/C, HJ, Humil, M/F, M/s, MCD, MiCD, Minor2, Nec, Oral, Other, Preg, Rape, S&M, SI, Slave, Solo, Spank, Tent, Tort, Toys, Violence

Don't say I didn't warn you.

>>6638421
For those of us who aren't well-versed in tose things, can you define all those tags? I haven't seen most of those before.

>>6638421
Thanks. I'll check it out.

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>tfw you write a ppmm fanfic with dickgirls and xxx scenes, but the sex happens so infrequently it's not even a porn fic

>>6638421
>BDSM
>Bond
>D/s
>Dom
>S&M
You could have just had BDSM. The rest are redundant.

>>6638468
Would read.

>>6638429
Well, a good few of them are meaning less even to me, but I'll leave out the obvious ones and give it a crack.

Beast (bestiality), B-Mod (body-modification, though I'm not sure having skewers stabbed through your breasts and welded into a weird frame counts as "modification"), BP (had to look this one up, apparently it's an umbrella term for "horrific acts", which fits the story nicely), CR (Child Rape, I assume), Fet (either Fetish, or Fetters, which would be bondage related), H/C (Hurt/Comfort, those are the parts where the story gets creepiest), MCD (unsure about this, the closest I could find was a slang reference to getting head off a fat girl, and seeing as the victim in the story is often described as being on the chunky side, I figured that was what it referred to), MiCD (really not sure with this one, possibly referring to "A person or thing willing to do anything to get their way, as it is its belief that they deserve it.", which fits the viewpoint character nicely if it's correct), Other (fucked if I know, everything else, I imagine).

Right, that looks like all the hard ones, the rest are mainstream enough that I think you should get them.

>>6638486
MCD = Major Character Death
MiCD = Minor Character Death

>>6638468
Trust me, friend that happens to me more often then I'd like.

I've already talked about a story of mine on here that started out as a one-shot smutfic and ended up breaking out and running away from me to become a quasi post-apoc story.

>>6638490
Doh, trust me to overthink things again.

Nice save.

>>6638497
Since it's AFF's tagging standards, there's a list of tags somewhere on the site in one of the drop-down menu links.

>>6638421
Very well written. The ending killed me. I was rooting for the girl.

I need more happy endings in my perverse torture erotica dammit.

>>6638503
(Fuck me, you read that quick) I did as well, actually. It's all the times that she almost escapes that gets me (that thing with her glasses was pure genius). Before long I wanted the creep we were watching all this through to get his head split open with an axe or something.

>>6638507
Yeah, I read fast. Faster when I find the plot progression interesting, in which case I don't take fapping breaks, I just identify the fappy parts for later. But now I'm feeling too uneasy to fap to them.

Damn thee efficient writers for making me root for characters with a death foretold.

>>6638517
Oh yeah, exactly the same for me.

It was only after, when the disgust (both at the story and myself for liking bits of it) had faded, that I was able to appreciate it more. The bit with the horse especially.

I wish she'd survived though, bashed his head open with a rock or something.

Though It wouldn't have been pretty seeing her trying to put her life back together afterwards, especially with all that he did.

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>>6638492
Heh, that kinda happened to me with one of my distinctly smutfics, only in my head. My gnome mage from WoW got raped by vines in it, and now that's her whole character in WoW. She's completely traumatized after the events of the story, and is struggling to keep her shit together.

>>6638472
well... okay. go nuts

http://archiveofourown.org/works/2642588/chapters/5900327

and here's the tentacle rape fic
http://archiveofourown.org/works/3705703

>>6638525
Oh I'm not disgusted. I feel dissapointed. It's a strange feeling, like when you see an objectively good movie that drops the ball at the end.

She should have won. She deserved to win. I don't care about her life. What's the point of developing a character that is seen to be smart, enterprising, strong willed and unrelenting if she's just gonna be neck-chopped at the end. Especially after the scene where she told him she'd kill him and then again foreshadowed that by asking him whether he recalled what she had told him and he couldn't. A perfect setup. Then a waste. A bad ending. Boooooo.

But seriously, very well written throughout.

>>6638526
>She's completely traumatized after the events of the story, and is struggling to keep her shit together.
That reminds me of a brief discussion I had with a few other anons the other day. We were talking about a story where all the main characters are the party members (this was on /tg/) who are left when all the important ones get killed (or raped in catatonia, as I suggested), and now they have to try and save the world from whatever ruined/killed their friends because they're the only ones left who can.

>>6638526
I had to look up omega verse. Holy shit is that trash. Why the fuck would anyone want to simplify and compartmentalize human relationship dynamics in a fic where romance is supposed to be a key feature, especially when the compartmentalization is based on debunked theories created from horribly biased studies on captive animal behavior? Absolutely disgusting.

>>6638533
I know what you mean, and its kinda why I dislike snuff in stories.

Killing a character just for cheap gratification... it just doesn't feel right to me. Like reading halfway through a book and then tossing it away. Cutting a story short just as it's getting good, leaving you wondering at what might have been.

I get philosophical when I'm up late.

>>6638541
The advantage of killing important characters is that it preserves tension: If you know characters don't have perfect plot armor then danger matters even if you're not fully immersed. The disadvantage is that if you fuck it up YOU FUCK IT UP.

It also doesn't kick in until the first death a reader gets to, but killing somebody too soon means they weren't important.

>>6638535
would read the fuck outta dat

>>6638545
Yeah, but it's like the other guy said; she should've won.

Admittedly it would've been a most pyrrhic of victories, considering the state she's in, but the fact reminds that all the story was leading up to it, and its a mystery as to how the evil bastard manages to survive all that she does to him.

She stabs him in the eye for goodness sake, and he still manages to chase her down! That sucks.

I'm positive that there are a half-dozen people wandering around the world un-murdered at this moment because the psycho that wrote this story was able to vent all of his pent-up lunacy into it, instead of taking it out on his fellow man.

>>6638539
I actually agree with you, and I wrote the damn fic. There's a reason I completely revamped how omegaverse works for mine.

I won't lie, though, I think part of the reason it appeals to me in the first place is cause I like bestiality and fucked up shit like that. :\

>>6638541
I mean, I'm not on principle against snuff, because I do have a sadistic streak and it can capture some emotions and some degree of despair that other kinds of stories can't.

However, there is an intrinsic problem with it, in that you seem to have one of two choices, either you build an uninteresting character just as cannon fodder, in which case it can't quite capture the same emotions, or you can build an interesting character in which case it's a damn waste. Alternatively you might build a good character, bring them to the edge then save them with a deus ex machina. But this is both silly and robs you from the warm and tingly feeling of a worthy character finally triumphing.

So eventually it seems that you can have at best above-average snuff stories, but not really great snuff stories.

>>6638553
I mean, since their dicks are magic, if they want dog dicks, they can have dog dicks. Why stop there, even? Write about their decent into debauchery as things get lewder and lewder.

Has anyone written my request "the bard's dick that got magically chopped off, and passed around by the party"

>>6638559
Things are only gonna get lewder for the next timeline and a half, though. Third timeline, Madoka's gonna wish to be able to heal witches, but it makes her super goddamn griefy and depressed all the time. Things just get worse from there

And honestly, I think it's closer to human dicks that just happen to knot. Still magic, still weird.

>>6638566
Not yet.

>>6638566
You know, that reminds me of something I saw on gurochan once...

And no, It didn't even involve any slicing of the genitals.

>>6638571
thank you

>>6638572
There is a hentai with the concept of a magically disembodied dick being passed around in a classroom. I distinctly remember reading it.

>>6638574
Hm, that was similar, in "magical disembodied dick" terms, anyway. But still not what I was thinking of (I'm not that sure what I was thinking of, considering I only saw the last page of it).

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Remember, while recommendations are fine and all, our main goal is to create new content, not just discuss the old stuff. OC won't make itself, after all.

>>6638581
Oh don't worry. The story I just read has definitely inspired me to write up my ultralunatic story.

>>6638585
Assuming you're talking about the one up yonder, I'm glad I could help.

What's your one going to be about?

>>6638589
I'm the guy further up yonder that was thinking of writing a story with an intentionally creepy villain, which led to your recommending the /tv/ fanfic. Then we had the discussion on the ending. I'm the same person.

So: Creeplord ultralunatic, abduction, rape, heavy mod, sensedep, bdsm, abuse and torture. And a non-GRRM ending. Probably four chapters. Will be done by...someday. I don't like deadlines.

>>6638593
Heavy Mod?

Reminds me of a story an anon once mentioned about a supervillan kidnapping his nemesis' sidekick. I showed him the scene from Return of the Joker.

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>>6638581
I gotta lay the ground work for the rapey half-veela in my hp au fic. Good smut doesn't just arise out of context-free situations.

>>6638595
I'm referring to heavy modification. Code word for quadamp.

>>6638601
Don't know what that is either. You're talking about Body-mod, right?

>>6638605
He's talking about quadruple amputee content.

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>>6638610
Yes, this.

>>6638605
I think it counts as an extreme form of body modification.

In other news: Tentacle monsters. Can't live with them, can't live without them.

Hey guys, this is a really weird question, but would it be possible (discounting any risks of infection) for an organism of some sort to enter the breast (that is, the mammary gland) via the nipple without causing any damage?

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>>6637666
I know futa is only barely tolerated here, but... I really, really liked that. Though it's a damn shame to find out that the picture is where the pastebin ends.

Though I'm not necessarily into futa, just bisexual male anal play, and futa is about the closest I ever get to there being a woman in a story about a guy getting fucked. Even strapons are a rarity! Still, thanks.

>>6638663
Define organism. More specifically, how large?

>>6638668

Thanks! Looks like it got deleted. Must have been the caption. Mods...

Anyway It is a WIP so it will be done eventually. Who was your favoite character?

>>6638674
Erm, a sort of slime creature. It can vary its consistency. About a liter and a half of it

>>6638680
*though it's not all trying to get into the one tit.

>>6638679
or the art was too western

>>6638680
No, but that doesn't stop nipple penetration from being /d/. Just make it magic. Then you ain't got to explain shit.

>>6638685

Ahh oh well.

>>6638680
Depends entirely on the viscosity. If it's not a thicker liquid than milk it's not going to shatter disbelief if it goes in reverse.

Volume is going to be iffy depending on bust size and the description of the entry. Most people aren't going to look up lactation volume to factcheck you.

Hey,

If the writer is here, how goes that story on the psyker and the SoB squad?

>>6638692
Yeah, you're right. Maybe I'll give that bit up and have it go straight for the puss.

>>6638695
The psyker part won't be done for a while, but the first part with the Tyranids should be done in a few days. I'm planning on having it posted before the 20th, as I am out of town that day.

>>6638701
sweeeet.

>>6638692
You must not be from /tg/ then. 120 mL seems to be considered average at peak production.

>>6638706
We're not on /tg/ anymore, in case all the red wasn't reminding you.

>>6638708
Wait, there are people who actually use Yotsuba? It's an absolute eyesore.

>>6638708
and we don't have accept all the shit on /d/ either

>>6638708
We're not there, but we're from there.

>>6637471
>>6637997
Not too shabby. Decent job for what sounds like a pretty odd prompt.

>>6636686
Man, EFG huh... where have I seen that before?

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We're /efg/ now? Why not /dfg/ since we're one /d/?

Shout out to Deathleaper Fangirl.

Tentatively trying to get shit done for the first time in a very long while but suffering choice paralysis as always.

Options I want to work on are
>Supervillain and superhero's sidekick
>captured Beegirl laying eggs after waspmen drug her to make her a queen of a hive? It's based on a weird dream I had
>Doctor vampire and agoraphobe human friend cohabitation

Other news that I haven't shared here is that Monster and I parted ways a few months ago. We might write together still but it's hard to know. I don't know if monster intends to continue writing things here. Other than those pieces of information I'd rather not discuss anything here and clog shit up.

>>6638503
>I need more happy endings in my perverse torture erotica dammit.
this is my fetish too

>>6638190
Nope! Please post.

>>6638806
Those all sound pretty good, but I'm leaning towards the beegirl. Incidentally, whatever happened to that drider story? Did I miss it somehow?

Nice to see you back around in any case. Get back in the game, maybe it'll keep your mind off of things.

So I've been stuck listening to a lot of old/classic music at work and it struck me that plenty of them could serve as the basis of wst/efg stories.

Love Potion Number Nine
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z0DUmqSrzH4

In a rush to get back into battle the party bard takes the wrong potion...

There are several other good ones I was thinking of but they've slipped my mind and I don't have time atm to look them up.

I wrote this a year ago and I'm getting back into writing the third chapter. Would love some feedback/thoughts, still sort of in my smut infancy. It's niche, but hey it's /d/ enough.

Chapter 1 http://pastebin.com/0KQU2hbZ
Chapter 2 http://pastebin.com/S7wqq7tT

Tags -

1st - m/f, elastic

2nd - m/f, elastic, tf, polymorphism stuff

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>>6638780
I know. Didn't think that could even be a fetish until now myself.

>>6638806
Doctor vampire sounds the most interesting to me, supervillain & sidekick after that.

But a doctor vampire and a human living together would be pretty damn awesome.

>>6638806
Doctor Vampire? Is it a hematologist?

>>6638421
Thanks for the recommendation. I love stuff like this.

Would anyone read an erotic horror set in 1891 where Jack the Ripper is a rogue wizard/vampire/something else in the hp universe, with a team of witches/wizards attempting to take it down?

>>6640112
>hp universe
No. The Harry Potter universe is trash.

>>6639447
I read this a few months ago, but it left a good impression. The transformation was horrifying, which was awesome. Though, was it just me or is it really hard to follow what position they are in, what with her being elastic and bending like a pretzel during sex? I think he did what any fa/tg/uy would do and munchkined the fuck out of the desired form. It was pretty solid in that regard. He fucked up when he didn't consider what her own fetish was when he made her base form rubbery. It would have saved him that grief when she flipped out since he violated her right of self-determination. If this were a webcomic or a much longer fic with much less smut per volume, I'd keep that as a point of contention for a while at least. It's an interesting concept in and of itself. Also, maybe some fear of her leaving him, since with a polymorphic body, she can get anyone she wants.

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Oh man, its been forever since I visited /wst/. It's been at least since the /tg/ purge. Just seeing this thread makes me want to start writing again. What sorts of stuff are hot right now?

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>>6640213
Well, given the holiday, Chocolate Elves.

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>>6640241
Seconded, it's been way too long since we got anything with Drow.

>>6640274
Drow are not chocolate elves. Drow are black coffee colored.

Do any of you post on HF?

>>6640300
You mean hongfire or hentai-foundry?

>>6640274
We want chocolate, not niggers.

>>6640305
Sorry, I meant Hentai Foundry.

>>6640314
I lurk there, but I don't post.

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>>6640295
>>6640307
Fuck you, we still need them anyway.

I'm conflicted between writing futa-dom or sexually enslaving lizard-people (inb4 furry). I just want to write something that's shame inducing and full of helplessness, man.

>>6640373
I vote for the latter. Insofar as those are sexy lizardgirls.

Otherwise I don't care either way

>>6640112
Of course. But where does the erotic part come in?

>>6640373
I like lizard people as well as enslavement.

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How do my fellow amateur writers deal with the crushing feeling whenever you receive criticism? I have absolutely nothing against constructive criticism, in fact, I like giving my own, but for whatever reason, I just lose my drive to continue writing something whenever I put my draft out there and people mention even the tiniest of flaws. I want to improve, and the only way to do that is to let people read my stuff

>>6640445
Try this: Write until you consider you're done with a piece and only post it then. When people point out the flaws in the work, take them into account for the next time but as long as they're minor, leave them alone.

Perfectionism isn't bad in itself, but it can quickly drive you to waste your time obsessively 'improving' something that's good enough. Deliver, take note of what other people think should be improved and try to put it in practice next time.

>>6640445
The first step is admitting to yourself that the things you put out aren't perfect. We all strive for perfection, but if such a thing exists it pretty damn hard to attain. So instead of seeking perfection, seek self-improvement. Practice, practice, practice. Take the criticism and ask yourself "is this true" and "how can I improve". Accept your flaws and accepting criticism (as well as learning from it) will come naturally.

>>6640445
I drink heavily. The sting fades after a few days, then I can consider it with more distance.

I know some professional authors have a trusted friend filter out legit constructive criticism from shitposting.

>>6640445
Take it as something to learn from. Hell, we all get criticisms, but the story is already out there, so learn and move on. If you really hate it, write shorter stuff faster and get as much feedback as possible and then get more developed and extensive as you feel comfortable with it.

Remember, if you got a criticism, then someone was attached enough to write it. Most of the time, they read it, go "fuck it," and then move on without bothering to tell you what they didn't like it.

The other thing is that one person is an opinion, they are like assholes, and you can *never* get everyone off. Two people? Might want to look at it? Thirty people say it's wrong, then just fix the fucker.

>>6640391
Um, the fact that many victims were sex workers? I'll do something with that, I'll make it work, don't worry

I honestly haven't done anything like this in years. I can feel that it's terrible but I can't actively point it out. Please give me some advice before I actually start writing the smut.

http://pastebin.com/ffZiSvmv

>>6640546
It's fine.

It will be easier to read on pastebin if you put a blank line in between each paragraph.

Line 11 seemed the most awkward in English:
>Her chest was as well very heavy
should probably be something like
>Her chest felt heavy.

>She tried to shift her gaze down but found it difficult, something cold and heavy clasped around her neck. The realization sparked her awake, claws attempting to scrape away at the blockade on her neck.
I would add the following corrections and tweaks:
>She tried to shift her gaze down but found it difficult, something cold and heavy was clasped around her neck. The realization sparked her awake, her claws automatically attempting to scrape away at the collar her neck.

But like I said, it's fine, very readable. Don't agonize over it. The situation and the feeling is the most important thing in smut.

>>6640622
>*the collar around her neck
Sorry, meant to add "around" here

>>6640622
Alright, thanks man I'll simplify it some when I make future lines. Nice doubles btw

>>6637051
>consensual public use shit
holy fuck, I've NEVER been able to find this shit before
top gun, anon

>>6640482
>notices trip
You're not he of tsade's rodo, are you?

>>6638115
Going halfway through a male to female transformation, resulting in a futa with the sex drives of both genders.
A guy who wants to be a trap so badly he turns into one, and then immediately starts doing trap things.
Girl TFs a guy into an intelligent tentacle monster, and then is surprised when he starts teasing her as revenge rather than just ravaging her.

Well, I'm writing something right now that I don't think I'm ever going to finish but oh well.

Premise is based off this one recently-translated doujin on sadpanda involving a group of girls who go to a "doll corner" where they shrink and get turned into inanimate dolls and of course there's a bad end that is basically murderfetish. The basic concept was good, the execution was not.

What I'm writing is a better version of it.

> Guy and girlfriend go to "figure corner" where people get shrunken down and turned into living versions of anime figures (ie; actual flesh and blood not plastic).

> There's a "clean" side meant for roleplayers and people who use the place like a cosplay cafe

> They wind up going to the "adult" side, get handed magazines for ideas

> Guy picks what he thinks is a large-breasted succubus, girl picks this one cowgirl figure from Comic Unreal that is coming out in February

> Guy actually picked a futa succubus with full anal training and a tongue long enough to reach her own vagina

> Guy finds his sexual preference changing in that before he merely preferred women and now is such a lesbian that the mere thought of sex with another girl is almost enough to make him cum

> Lesbian funtimes ensue, succubus discovers the wonders of a breastfeeding relationship with her cowgirl girlfriend and also the pleasure of vibrators in both her ass and vagina while she fucks something with her cock

> When they go to get back to their original size/bodies, something screws up and they re-size but are stuck as sort of hybrids of the figures and what they were before, think of it as being a sister to the character rather than being stuck as the character themselves

I think it's a lot more palatable than a shitty bad end and also far more hot. I was considering having the guy turn into some form of monstergirl instead but the idea of a lesbian succubus sex machine was too good to pass up.

>>6640927
>I think it's a lot more palatable than a shitty bad end

You aren't alone there. Bad ends are always tricky to pull off at the best of times, and even when they're done well they end up rubbing a lot of people the wrong way, so to speak.

>>6640944
What about a story that is completely based around the whole idea of Bad Endings?

I brought this idea up in the last thread: "Adventurers slip up and then either meet sticky ends or longer, more drawn out (and much stickier, if you know what I mean) ends."

Came up with a few ideas as well, although they were all of a /tg/ sorta slant.

>>6640927
Link to said doujin?

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>>6640927
I'd read it

>>6640944
I'm on the fence about them, I like bad ends when they go from dubcon to consensual but given that most bad ends are noncon to mindbreak and usually not my thing

Which is bizarre as I'm currently writing up a nongreentext version of pic related

[spoiler]On that note, if anyone from the /tg/ thread I mentioned I was planing to have this done by last weekend is waiting for it, well it's a three day weekend for me, and I hope to have it done by tonight but I'm horrible at estimating deadlines, it'll be done soon I hope though[/spoiler]

[spoiler]No spoilers on /d/[/spoiler]

>>6641184
Depends on the bad end for me, and personally I like /tg/ bad ends, provided they don't focuse too much on how horrible it would actually be

>>6641198
I think you might have been the guy I was speaking to, actually.

The ideas I thought of last time where stuff like, public use (chained up so the minions can have a crack at the females one after the other), mindbreak (the evil alchemist needs test subjects to experiment on with his new potions), beast (the hell-hounds and the sorcerer's python familiar are getting restless) maybe a bit of impreg (the evil sorcerer and her cabal now have a chaste paladin on hand who perfectly fulfills the criteria to be the one who will carry the demonic overlord into this world).

Stuff like that. Can be as horrible or not as you'd like.

>>6641198
Y-you can always have a good ending where it turns out her mother was teaching her a lesson about keeping a bad company or something and so she eventually raises her...

[spoiler]I hate bad ends ;_;[/spoiler]

>>6641252
Not entirely sure how I'm gonna handle it, never really done anything with time skips before, but by the time she ends up in MILF's possession I think any damage would've already been done

[spoiler]Does it count as a good end if the healdo ends up taking a "I don't like it but I'm not against it" stance to her fate/she finds this fate shamefully enjoyable?
[/spoiler]

>>6641260
[spoiler]In the hierachy of bad ends, that's the least bad end lagging behind murder, horrible disfigurement, despair in continued captivity, catatonia and lilith mindbreak. It's basically soft mindbreak[/spoiler]

>>6641252
>I hate bad ends ;_;
Friend, let me give you a word of advice.

All the bad ends, all the shit I've seen on here and outside as well, all of that just makes the good parts look all the better by comparison.

So whenever I read a story like >>6638421 where it's suffering and misery all the way through, it makes all the fics that are about people treating each other with care and kindness seem all the sweeter.

Cheesy idea? Maybe. Doesn't make any difference to me.

>>6640739
Yep, that's me, t'Sade. Imageboards never handle the single quote, so I just use it without most of the time.

I also run Rodo, which I finally got up last weekend, though there is a lot of pages that need cleaning up after the last round of spamers.

>>6641313
I noticed that, yeah. Big fan of TDM's work (if you remember him), afraid to say that the other stuff never really did it for me, what I could access, anyway.

>>6641319
TDM is awesome and one of my favorite authors. That was actually the first set of stories I was asked to recover. :) Someone was having their Spider Attack cravings.

>>6641327
That wasn't me, was it? Eh, the third one(?) was the only one I really enjoyed, I felt the others didn't really do enough.

I liked his couch monster one too, though sadly the ideas were again underutilized.

A'llo! Sooo, I wrote a willing, happy ending, Unbirth fic, and was wondering if anyone here might be willing to critique it? Pretty please! Do note that it's set in the skyrim. http://werdsmith.com/p/bJLYoSMRn

does anyone have a link to that choose your own adventure bimbo story? The one where you are a witches bf and she turns you into a bimbo?

>>6641198
>>6641202
>>6641252
Well, been procrastinating all weekend and forgot how long this one probably will be, get the feeling I won't have healdo story done tonight, so sometime before the end of next weekend I guess

[spoiler]I am really bad and guessing how long story writing will take[/spoiler]

Also should probably start using my name for these thread

>>6641388
It's good, the explanation about the sword in the first paragraph felt unnecessary for something that's only a minor detail but other than that no issues

>>6637471
Odd but pretty decent, not my thing, felt too unsettling for me to fap, but that's just personal preference, so I can't think of any real criticisms

>>6636744
I liked it, wouldn't really call 17 /ss/ though (personally I consider 15 the max for that) but it's good, the flavored pussy was a nice touch. On a whole I'd say the romance was nice, smut was good, and it had no noticeable flaws, would love to see you do more

>>6641878
>would love to see you do more
While we're not going to continue that story, SmAA is working on a sequel to that Electric Sleep fic we did. I helped him for a bit, and then I kinda burned out (think I'm getting SAD, this shitty weather means I've not seen the sun for a week). I'm not even sure if this next one is going to have smut in it.

>>6641894
>I'm not even sure if this next one is going to have smut in it.

I already have some ideas on where we can fit the smut in, don't you worry about that. Don't underestimate how I can fit that stuff in without making it seem forced.

[nospoilerson/d/]I'll have to discuss the details with you later, but I can give you the general gist of it if you pop back in our google doc. I also finished that one segment of banter I was working on earlier too.[[/nospoilerson/d/]

>>6641894
I meant more like other works, not necessarily a continuation of that one

I once ran into a bestiality story that involved it. Woman was presented with the reality that she was going to be public use, then presented the option of being used by dogs. Goes with what's behind door B... and is made public use after that's done.

Basically the same sorts of things that could enter any of the other pores in your skin without causing damage.

I do a bunch of erp with sentient slime that causes breast enlargement.

>>6642134
Think you missed part of your post, but I'm always interested in stuff involving absorption or bodypart TF so
> sentient slime that causes breast enlargement.
has my interest

>>6639186
Drider story hit a wall, as I often do.
I have this chunk of dialog that I'm really proud of but nothing to follow it up with.

>>6639819
>>6640050
He's a psychiatrist/alchemist who met the human after she was voluntarily committed to his private psych ward because her rich parents wouldn't let her be an agoraphobe in their basement anymore.

He neglects her as a patient for a few years to use her as a guinea pig figuring out how to make blood more nutritious to vampires. When he perfects it he decides to quit the job at the psych ward and be a full-time alchemist and he volunteers to take the agoraphobe with him. That's where the story left off.

http://pastebin.com/VpvQpUP6 Tags: Male Vampire Psychiatrist / Human Female Patient, minor injury and blood, fingering, vaginal sex

The next part will be cohabitation in his house. A lot of the idea is that what works for vampires works well for a person who is terrified of the outside--permanently blacked out windows, for instance.

>>6641388
"With his mind preoccupied on said events, Dakar failed to notice the tell tale shimmers of invisibility following the road behind him.." I'm never fond of a limited POV story telling something outside of that POV's. I believe the term is author intrusion, but if he didn't notice it, then don't mention it. It also gives it a larger impact when it becomes important. Plus, double "..". I follow Chicago style (at least) where you have an ellipse of exactly three periods (...) potentially followed by the end of a sentence (.) for 1, 3, or 4 periods in a row, never more or less. :)

"showed signs of occupation despite him having cleared it less then a week ago." Damn, this area populated again? :)

"Turning to face her, he reached behind him [to] unsheathed the Ice Monarch from [his] back holster." I'm not fond of inanimate objects having possessions, but this is a case where I feel that it is his holster. You could also strike "from its/his back holster" entire and still have a useful sentence.

"she attempted to warn him off, "That's close enough friend!"" This is a case where you have a tell (she attempted to warn him off) and a show (her speaking). I found that always go with the show. This could also be seen as a POV violation since he doesn't know that she's attempting to warn him off. It could be foreplay. Better to show with body language (She held up her hand, set her jaw, and spoke sharply...)

"These aren't my Daidric boots!" Cute.

"The bandit's joke" Depending on how you read it, "the" bandit is the one he just defeated, not a new one. It would be better to describe said bandit first or at least indicate it is a new one.

I found that narrative reads better if you put a paragraph when it is a new character acting. He swings (paragraph) She dodges. She strikes (para) He dodges.

>>6641388
As for the scene itself, enjoyable. :)

"gauntlet of her crease" That made me smile.

"He could hear Seranas lust filled groans" (Seranas's lust-filled groans) might be a better phrasing, stronger.

BTW, I love unbirth. The details were fantastic (a bit light for me, but that's okay, I *really* like details).

The final paragraph jarred me, mainly because the story is mostly in one POV and this is in a different one. I think it would be better if you remained in his POV and just had the response muffled by her body. Or end slightly differently.

Well, just my opinions.

>>6642100
And what story would that be?

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So, is everyone satisfied with the OP, after all?

The following modifications will be made by the next thread:
>Writefags, consider pastebin/1d4chan rather than dumping for long stories.
will go under the "this is the go-to place ..." line
>our unofficial gathering:
>http://flockmod.com/tgwst
will go under the requests document
>to keep the thread alive
will be added after "when possible"

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I'm thinking of making some Destiny shorts, of all things. I was bit by the inspiration bug. Thinking of making a smut one now so I can contribute to this thread. I don't know, could be fun. Anybody interested?

>>6642784
I'm interested. What did you have in mind?

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>>6642846
Something involving the Queen of the Reef, rewarding a Guardian that she fancies. I was thinking an Exo Titan, for the fun of a big strong machine obliterating the Queen's orfices in true hentai style. Lots of (fake) jizz. I know it doesn't make sense, but let's be honest: a lot of stuff in Destiny doesn't make sense either. I also feel it's easier to name Exos than humans or awoken.

>>6642780
Sounds good to me, although I'm not entirely comfortable about using 1d4chan for adding stuff not directly related to /tg/.

Fortunately, I thought ahead and made a Titanpad containing everything on the list that we can use as well, so that won't be an issue. At the very least, we can use it as a backup in the unlikely event the original list is deleted.

I'll link it here as soon as I get back to my regular computer and copy down all the new additions from this thread.

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I want to make a request for a story if anybody want to write it. A girl agrees to lock her boyfriend in a chastity belt, and finds she likes seeing him suffer in it. Jump forward a few weeks, and he's still not out. She keeps teasing and toying with him, keeping him hard and aroused, but ultimately refuses to let him cum. I'd be very pleased if you could write the girl as something pic related, wearing high heels. Good luck, and thank you.

>>6642855
Please involve Cayde, so I can read everything in Nathan Fillion's voice.

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>>6643135
Heh, sure thing. Hell, I can make it all about Cayde if you want. Let's hope I can do him justice in writing then.

>>6642862
Here I am. Anyway, the backup archive is here; TitanPad doesn't require you to make an account so don't be shy about adding things to it directly.

https://titanpad.com/v7k2vcJRS8

>>6643238
>https://titanpad.com/v7k2vcJRS8
Ah, neat. This will be useful. I'll spend a few minutes browsing this. God, I hate being on so late, these boards are so slow late at night.

>>6637471
Interesting read... though I'm not sure if the image of a girl falling to pieces and fingerfucking herself at the whiff of some muffins is arousing or hysterical.

>>6643004
I love chastity when it's mixed with femdom and tease & denial, anything else you want thrown in there?
And would a fantasy setting be fine? Elf ears make me assume so, and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind if I where to include a bit of magical enforcement to said chastity.
Also wondering what you were thinking of for the guy, because I probably default to my usual preference of younger, possibly trappyish, and somewhat submissive guy if not outright /ss/

No promises that it would be done soon, I have like four other stories I'm going to do first and my writing tends to be sporadic but I love the idea

>>6643271
I wouldn't mind if she treated him nicely while continously teasing him every day. Like, instead of calling him trash, she says how much she loves him, but prefers to keep him locked up. Some ball-torture would be nice too. I love the idea of a hot girl stepping on a boy's pent-up balls with her heels. And I'm totally fine with fantasy. Love fantasy. A magical chastity belt sounds fantastic. And feel free to bring out the sex toys. I'm sure they both would do good with a nice big plug up their ass. Or at least his.

Trappish is fine. Though I wouldn't mind if they were the same age, childhood friends if you will. Take your time, I'll be keeping an eye out for it. ^^

>>6643282
Dear lord, you have fantastic taste in BDSM.

>>6643304
Thank you so much. That really makes me smile. Yeah, I can come up with a few good ideas now and then. Most of it I tend to keep to myself. What's your opinion on gags? I love gags. A nice thick gag in the mouth of a girl, her lips stretched around the rubber... *Shudder* I love thinking about that.

Right now, I'm just very into chastity and denial. Though I prefer a more active, cuddly mistress than a... um, well, for the lack of a better word, bitch. You know, the kind of girl who knows you can't do anything about it, so she does her best to make it a living nightmare you want to keep on experiencing, your cock aching as she cuddles up to you at movie night, or buries your face in her pussy in the shower, begging you to stick your tongue inbetween her folds. And at night, she lies next to you, her warm breath on your face. Or even worse, she makes you spoon her, your twitching cock rubbing against her heart-shaped butt. And she keeps on denying you, your balls aching with the need for release. She cradles your balls in her hand, squeezing them (I'll let you imagine how hard or soft she squeezes), fondling them, letting you know your place, not by beating you with a stick, but by dangling the carrot just out of reach... And you love every second of it.

>>6643282
>I wouldn't mind if she treated him nicely while continously teasing him every day. Like, instead of calling him trash, she says how much she loves him, but prefers to keep him locked up.
That would be my preferred way of handling it too, so no worries there

>Some ball-torture would be nice too. I love the idea of a hot girl stepping on a boy's pent-up balls with her heels.
Never done CTB before, I'll give it a try though

>And I'm totally fine with fantasy. Love fantasy. A magical chastity belt sounds fantastic. And feel free to bring out the sex toys. I'm sure they both would do good with a nice big plug up their ass. Or at least his.
mind if I include a bit of a minor fetish of mine? I love the idea of sextoy that is linked to a guys cock so he can feel everything done do it but (in this case at least) can't cum from it

>Trappish is fine. Though I wouldn't mind if they were the same age, childhood friends if you will.
Mind if he's shorter? Or at least when she's wearing heels? It's giving me ideas

>Take your time, I'll be keeping an eye out for
Hopefully it won't take more than a month

>>6643316
Knock yourself out. That magic toy sound fantastic. I can imagine the elf playing with it, plunging it into her while her boyfriend is forced to watch and endure it. Heh, a young girl's gaping holes after playing with a large toy... Anyway, yes, sure, everything sounds great. I'm glad we're on the same page. I'll write your name down so I don't forget it. Use your ideas, I don't want to hinder your creativity. You sound like you already have something planned, so that's good.

>>6643316
>>6643322
Actually, came to think of something. What would happen if that magical toy was used on the boy? It's linked to his cock, right? So, if he licked it, he'd essentially be licking his own cock, or at least feel like he is, right? What if the missy were to peg him with it? By the way, I love the idea of him not being able to cum at all, no matter what is done to him. That's the kind of thing that makes me diamond.

>>6643315
Gags aren't really my thing, and any that showed up in the fic would probably be on the guy, but if you have an idea I might try something

Actually thinking about it I do like the idea of a scene with him having one while she has him bent over her knee playing with his ass/giving him a few spanks (maybe because he tried to get the chastity belt off?)

>Though I prefer a more active, cuddly mistress than a... um, well, for the lack of a better word, bitch. You know, the kind of girl who knows you can't do anything about it, so she does her best to make it a living nightmare you want to keep on experiencing, your cock aching as she cuddles up to you at movie night, or buries your face in her pussy in the shower, begging you to stick your tongue inbetween her folds. And at night, she lies next to you, her warm breath on your face. Or even worse, she makes you spoon her, your twitching cock rubbing against her heart-shaped butt. And she keeps on denying you, your balls aching with the need for release. She cradles your balls in her hand, squeezing them (I'll let you imagine how hard or soft she squeezes), fondling them, letting you know your place, not by beating you with a stick, but by dangling the carrot just out of reach... And you love every second of it.
And you've just summed my preferred type of dom (at least not without getting into some very /d/ fetishes like giantess or inanimate TF)

>>6643338
>What would happen if that magical toy was used on the boy? It's linked to his cock, right? So, if he licked it, he'd essentially be licking his own cock, or at least feel like he is, right? What if the missy were to peg him with it?
That's part of the reason I like the idea

Also what do you think of a slight degree of feminization? Probably not more than the missy making him grow his hair out but I have an idea or two for it

>>6643358
Some feminization is fine, but please refrain from doing anything harder. Giantesses and that other thing is not part of my fetish. Nor is vore.

>>6643365
>Giantesses and that other thing is not part of my fetish. Nor is vore.
No worries, I have no intention of throwing something like that in unless the requester specifically asks for it, also how I like the doms for those fetishes wouldn't fit with the GF's personality at all

I mostly just want a bit of feminization because of a bit with her playing with his hair before commenting how cute it (and his ass) looks as she slowly eases a buttplug in and her "encouraging" him to grow it out would be a good way to show her control over him. Also a subtle hint at how long he's been in chastity after a time skip

>>6643382
Sounds perfect. I'm already into it. Well, like your trip, it's time for me to hit the hay. Good night, Sleep, and good luck with writing all those short stories. I'll be looking forward to read my requested one. :3

>>6640910
TF isn't TG, and futa never appealed to me.

>>6643411
That's okay. does the trap thing work?

In your collective opinion, or as best as we can manage, what do you think is hotter: being gagged and forced into slavery, or begging to be fucked and claimed to avoid a worse fate?

>>6643462
I'm with the second one. The illusion of choice is present, and thus consent.

>>6640164
Thanks man. Hahaha interesting to see that somebody thinks that the transformation was horrifying, it seemed tame but really sexy to me, the women undergoing a TF without knowing it's happening trope gets me diamonds, even moreso when they find out. Glad it appeals in a different way to different people. Also, new to this stuff, please explain "munchkined" :/

It's definitely hard to follow what position they're in, but it's a complex fetish in practice (if it ever were to actually be) and the contortions and twists are nuts. If I could illustrate that would help a ton.

He definitely fucked up by not considering her own fetish, and you're right that it could be a point of contention. I plan to bring it back up in the future, like when she wants to try something he's unsure about, she can easily dangle it over him in a "you owe me" sense.

You read my mind. He's gonna end up real scared that she can get anybody she wants, but lucky for him she's gonna make that possible without ever leaving him, if you catch my drift.

Much appreciate the feedback, I'll post the next chapter here when it's done if anybody is interested.

I'm the anon that was writing that centaur fic, so here it is. Please, give me some honest critique on it.

>http://pastebin.com/kqCkcgyq
M/M, Centaur Male/Human Male, cock worship, face-fucking, happy endings, fluff

I literally hate trying to figure out the exposition for a smut short.

>>6643453
Kinda? I'd prefer for actually TG if you could work that in to the prompt but I can still write about a crossdressing aspect

I'm currently in the process of writing a story about femdom and amazons and I have a bad case of writers block, how do I break it?
Also, critique and advice would be appreciated if you have some.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/5737978

Woah when did titanpad get updated?

>>6643558
Write smut first, or at least outline it, puzzle out what came immediately before and after next

>>6643825
Normally I just force myself, maybe by writing an outline and begin filling in the blanks

Also, will review your story in the morning, should have been in bed an hour ago

>>6642780
Don't forget the link to the drawthread for cross-traffic

Can I request stories. If I can I would like to request a yandere goddess raping a human male.

>>6644212
A more detailed request would be a lot more likely to get worked on. Flesh that fucker out.

>>6643863
Neat!
I'll try to force myself and see where it goes.
If you do find time to review, my native language isn't English which explains the grammars. Working on that to my best ability.

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>>6642862

So
>Writefags, consider pastebin/titanpad rather than dumping for long stories. You can also use 1d4chan for /tg/-related smut.
will go under the "this is the go-to place ..." line
>our unofficial gathering:
>http://flockmod.com/tgwst
will go under the requests document
>https://titanpad.com/v7k2vcJRS8
will go under Master smut lists
>to keep the thread alive
will be added after "when possible"

>>6644113
Sure, I'll ask them if they're interested in doing this.

>>6644342
You might be interested to know that it's "to the best of my ability" and grammar, respectively, then.

If you feel the way you use the english language is awkward at times, you can always ask for someone to help you with editing.

>>6644662
The /d/raw threads use an anchor system, where an anon creates an anchor post for drawfags to link when they get a delivery done. This way it is easier to spot deliveries, rather than browsing the entire thread.

We may want to have something like that here as well.

>>6644787
Yeah, but they have a problem in that their requests usually also have attached images for reference, so you can't easilly distinguish what is a request and what is a delivery. We can just ctr+F for pastebin.

Note that I'm not opposed to it on principle.

If you feel it necessary we can always use the OP as an anchor. So every writefag making a delivery could also quote the OP.

>>6644797
How does that anchor stuff work, exactly? Is it as simple as linking to the thing your request is answering?

What do you guys think of captions, assuming that the writer has a decent grasp of English?

>>6645031
As a rule, I just don't like text added to an image file. If they want to put it in a greentext on the side, that's cool, but I just don't like them hard-coded into the images.

>>6645031
Can hotter than text alone. Of course, Sturgeon's Law always applies.

>>6644738
I really need an editor who can go over and edit my texts after I'm done.
Even when I'm writing in my first language it's hard for me to spot my own mistakes.

>>6644342
>>6644738
Sorry, in the morning became after work

Lets see,
First paragraph
>ascendent
Don't think that word means anything in that context, what are you trying to say?

>Making a coughing sound, the propeller start turning.
Doesn't sound quite right, something like
>As it made a coughing sound, the propeller start turning.
Would be better in my opinion

Still reading chapter 1 and while some of the wording can be taken as awkward, I don't see much actually wrong with it.
It's also very hot so far

>>6645031
I like them, but they're not the sort of thing I'd want to see in these threads
Also I think the /d/ mods hate them

>>6645044
Sorry for the delay,
>Even when I'm writing in my first language it's hard for me to spot my own mistakes.
Yeah, same here, I probably won't catch all but the most glaring

>>6645031
Some are good, a lot are poor, but that's the same for most everything

But captions threads tend to disappear really fast on /d/, I'd be a bit worried if these threads ever became caption heavy

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>>6645020
Someone usually posts an anchor post and all of the drawfags link their posted drawings to the anchor post. We could do something similar with stories.

Here is an example >>6639369

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>>6645031
I'm with
>>6645035
>>6645071
>>6645071
>>6645080

It's more trouble than it's worth, and writing a full fic based on a picture instead of a caption jammed into the margins of said picture really lets you do far more in the long run.

>>6645090
Sounds like a good idea. In this case, the OP itself would be the best anchor.

I've thought about writing stuff. There are a lot of particular ideas in my head, and specific fetishes that I have not been able to find in any real amount. Tentacles are everywhere, so that's rarely an issue. TG is plentiful, but it's all dried out and shitty now. There's some aphrodisiac play but it's rarely actually good. Shit like that. There's a bunch of other stuff, too, but those are my arguably my top 3 in no particular order. Rarely do they come together.

I have a few stories, both incoming a demon. One idea is sort of what I posted at the end of the Cursed thread (don't want to cross post).

I've started writing a story for /d/, but I can't help but feel like maybe I bit off a longer narrative than I should have. It's like the length of what is ahead gives me a writing block, so I keep pausing.

Well here is my first attempt and first draft for you guys. Dragon transformed into a dragon-girl and then fucked. Don't be too upset if it's mediocre, I'll get better.

http://pastebin.com/sLD5n7h5

>>6645293
I'll have to look at it later, thanks.

>>6645293
Tag it.

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>>6643271
>>6643282
Just had idea of this, with enchanted fake ears that turn the user into an elf maiden the longer without orgasm but the wearer cannot remove the ears or pleasure his/herself.
Or they could be the opposite, and they can only be removed by going WITHOUT orgasm for a day or so. OR each orgasm turns the wearer more elven, and the ears can only be removed when fully human which occurs naturally.

>>6645118
Do it in chapters, that's what I'm trying to work on.

>>6645090
Heh, anchor puns

>>6645104
Don't be shy, those are perfectly fine to post here. Go on.

>>6645104
Post what you like, anon. I'd assume that we're mature enough to not just be mean, and can offer constructive praise or advice.

Guys, I'm in a bad place.

I've been dealing with a lot of difficult criticism with my work, it basically boils down to the idea I want to base a story around being one that a lot of people don't agree with.

I want to try and actually do this idea, but after all the shit that I went through with people tearing it apart, I can hardly bear the thought of starting again.

What do I do?

>>6646189
Ignore the hateful comments but take the advice of those that offer constructive criticism. At the end of the day you're making new content and that's what really counts

>>6646202
I try to ignore the one that's just attacking me, but what if he's right?

>>6646209
>what if
As someone with OCD, that question leads to nothing but anxiety. Ignore it, and don't let yourself be your worst enemy

>>6646209
If he doesn't even bother saying what it is that he's attacking and why, his comment is nothing more than shitposting.

>>6646228
He does. That's why I'm afraid he's right.

>>6646232
So you're getting well-argued dissent over something you're writing with the goal of generating dissent, and you're not happy with that?
Or am I misreading
>I want to base a story around being one that a lot of people don't agree with

>>6646239
I never wanted it to generate any dissent. Its just that I'm worried, based on this guy's reaction (and the reaction of a few tentative probings I've made) that it will.

And I'm finding it hard to get myself to actually go on with it because of this.

>>6646244
What does a story about, what are the complaints, until we know the answer to these two questions we can't really give you any more than general advice

>>6646253
The idea I want to implement is something that will put the characters in the story through a lot of stress (drugs/medical procedures mostly, that have some unpleasant side-effects) and the thrust behind this guy's criticism is that he feels I'm making it needlessly edgy by making things harder for them, because he believes things are hard enough for them as it is (they're basically going through boot camp).

Numbers

The given problem was, "find the indefinite integral of ∫ (x^2)/(1+x^2 ) dx.“ And I was eager to. To change this rank and disgusting abnormality into divine perfection.

I have… I guess you might call it a… “peculiarity.” Ever since I began puberty, around 13 or so, I found myself… attracted to solving math equations, numbers, any and all kinds of proofs and mathematical logic. I haven’t talked about it to anyone.

I began to develop an obsession with solving problems, and soon excelled in math. My peers thought me abnormal for having such skill, and I suppose it is. But to explore formal proofs is to touch the face of God, and find joy there. I’m majoring in mathematics for this reason.

I was in my room, solving the homework that is due on Monday. This was the best part of the week for me. It was my deepest sorrow that no one may know about the love I feel, the hope, the beauty, every single day. Truly, I lived a blessed existence!

My pen quickly moved across the surface of this white canvas. “∫ ((x^2+1)-1)/(1+x^2) dx," I begin. Already I had separated the equation- no, the challenge- into separate parts, like how God made a firmament between Heaven and Earth on the second day. I had now indicated a hidden number, as part of a grand and wonderful plan, a path to salvation. This excited me terribly. The logic cannot speak, or know, or love, or be anything besides itself, but I embraced it as a companion and a friend. I had changed it, and made it better, and it knew my devotion.

I continued. “∫ 1 + (-1/(1+x^2 )) dx.” Already I was shaping this, like how a sculptor carves a block of granite into a beautiful reflection of Man. But there was even more to be found after this.

My heart raced at the thought of what came next. The Answer. The Revelation, the information which shows an aspect of the Divine, one tiny aspect of the laws which govern the universe. I lived for moments like this.

x - arctan( x ).

I came.

>>6646264
The libarts major reading over my shoulder just went into convulsions.

GJ.

>>6646264

>>6646308
fuck, forgot the pic.

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Latest recap:

>Writefags, consider pastebin/titanpad rather than dumping. You can also use 1d4chan for /tg/-related smut.
will go under the "this is the go-to place ..." line
>our unofficial gathering:
>http://flockmod.com/tgwst
will go under the requests document
>https://titanpad.com/v7k2vcJRS8
will go under Master smut lists
>to keep the thread alive
will be added after "when possible"
>For drawing requests check out the /d/raw thread
will be added under "this is the go-to place to discuss" since the people over at the drawthread decided to mention our general in their OP, after all.

and

I have no idea what to say about anchoring. Maybe:
>Writefags, quoting the OP when delivering a story will make it easier for everyone to find (and critique!) the new stories posted in each thread.
under the "this is the go-to place" paragraph, or under the "we thrive on criticism" paragraph?

Also I will try to make the DISCLAIMER line a tad bit less negative to make it clea requests make the world go round, and may use some combination of the old

>People especially appreciate it when you give them meaningful feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so.

with the "we thrive on feedback" line to make it abundantly clear we also want critiques.

Finally, will add:
>writefags, though not mandatory, you are advised to try and tag your stories so that people know what they're looking at. This is likely to attract more feedback from people who are interested in the themes you're exploring.
under the anchoring line.

>>6646391
Sounds good to me.

>>6646260
I couldn't tell without actually reading the story in that case, but just on the surface it doesn't sound like it's too bad, but it could be something not in some people's tastes

>>6646391
>>For drawing requests check out the /d/raw thread
The /d/rawthread draw pretty much only /d/ related content, it have little to do with our own thread.

>>6646462
We have already signed the mutual defence pact, anon.

>>6646469
>mutual defence pact
But what will be the price, anon ? What will be the price ?

>>6646473
Only our souls, anon. But the prize will be global domination.

First /d/, then 4chan, then the internet, then the globalized fetish civil wars. Winner takes all.

>>6646260

More extreme situations strain suspension of disbelief. So when you want to write extreme stuff, its a dilemma. You can try to balance elements in your story to acccount for this. There are two quick ways: balance and tempo.

Balance means writing a variety of situations and motives, like putting in moments of humour (e.g. sarcasm can be hilarious in a first-person erotica story) or emotional relief (e.g. praise from a normally critical character). Tempo is about making the extreme moments happen at the appropriate time and place in the story. For example, if you were writing an erotic love story about chastity, but then change it to an erotic enslavement story, it will disrupt the suspension of disbelief if you do that without some explanation that people can see.

>>6646239

Yeah, I think you misread it. But that form of sentence is infamously ambiguous. See: "George wondered whether Scott was the author of Waverley"

I think he meant that he 1) wants to do a story about idea X. 2) it is the case that there many don't like idea X.

As opposed to: 1) I wanted to write a story about idea X. 2) I want people to disagree with idea X.

>>6646301

Well I personally think that logic is the true face of God, so while I want to fap to that story, I'm running into theological issues.

>>6646509
What, you can't fap to God? What the fuck are you doing here?

>>6646509
Only Lilith can shlick to God. She spoke its true name.

>>6642749
Ah! Danke for the criticism stranger! I'll make sure to take it to heart!

I am a simple person. I started writing erotica since 2004. By then, under the form of fanfiction or smut. I wrote pretty much anything; to see how far i could go while improving myself. I never thought i would live of it and truth be told it is harsh.
The market is mostly female and what the readers want, the writers write. It isn't easy to stand among thousands Amazon publishes everyday and even harder to actually sell for Amazon as a freelancer.
The three basic searches most women seek in literature is romance, character and foreplay. The setting is far more important than the description of the act and, believe or not, the only thing women want is weird sex with dinosaurs.

The worst part is that women in their whole have a far stranger range of philias than the common man. Believe or not i have read books about women having sex with cars, yes with cars, their cars such as Wheels of Passion. Or best sellers like Helicopter Man Pounds Dinosaur Billionaire Ass are, has it implies very serious stories.
And no, i am not making this up.
There also Homo Thug which even received an award.

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>>6646546
For some reason, there's an unusually high demand for erotica featuring billionaire dinosaurs.

And that's actually normal compared to a ton of other stuff you can find on Amazon. Just look up anything by one Chuck Tingle and you will see for yourself.

>>6646546
>>6646553
Why are you telling us this? This isn't your blog

>>6646553
And they sell! And they sell my boy.
There's even lesbian billionaire raptor turned me bi
Or Ghost raptors.


Please, what excites women when it comes to dinosaurs?

>>6646561
Long story short.
I want dino erotica.
Write me dino erotica!!

>>6646565
That's more like it, and perfectly credible.

Tell us what kind of dino erotica you want, and someone might pick it up.

>>6646568
I want something with utahraptors.

>>6646570
Are they sapient raptors that drink tea with the protagonist before engaging in romantic intercourse respecting enthusiastic consent standards with the heroine, or are they mindless monsters that rape some unlucky adventurer?

You need to be more precise.

>>6646572
Remember that bbc episode where some strange ass bird started to hump the cameraman? I want a woman recording actual natural behaviour based on the latest geological and paleologic theories about behaviour intelligence and form until she is shagged by one.

>>6646579
Ok, so. You request a story about a young paleologist who is recording the behaviour of raptors in their natural habitat until she is discovered and raped by them.

Sounds fairly simple. Any Writefags willing to take this up?

>>6646511

More like an inter-denomenational issue

Is anyone interested in writing a ballbusting story about a guy who can't have his balls completely destroyed for some reason (allowing for all kinds of crazy shit) and gets off on cbt?

Would anyone be interested in writing anything expansion or mtf gender transformation related?

>>6647529
It'll have to wait until next thread, we're near the bottom of the catalog now.

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>>6638596
>I gotta lay the ground work for the rapey half-veela in my hp au fic. Good smut doesn't just arise out of context-free situations.
Hell, this is what makes consensual Daemonette on Sororita smut so damn hard; You need to set up how they're together and NOT trying to purge one another...
>>6645626
>Or they could be the opposite, and they can only be removed by going WITHOUT orgasm for a day or so. OR each orgasm turns the wearer more elven, and the ears can only be removed when fully human which occurs naturally.
The latter two sound more erotic to me...

NEW THREAD:

>>6648056

>>6648056

>>6648056