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>be me
>live in a rural area basically in the middle of nowhere
>around 12:00
>look out my window
>see a semi bright light
>assume it's just my brother with a flashlight checking on our animals in our family's barn as he was told to do
>he is just standing there
>yell at him to get back inside since it's dark and it'll be raining soon
>still stands there
>assume he's just trying to take a piss and couldn't make it inside to use the bathroom
>still haven't heard him come inside after a few minutes
>look out the window ready to cuss him out
>notice he's gone
>panic
>decide to take my flashlight and take the shotgun my redneck of a dad owns and look outside to find him
>decide to walk up to the spot my brother was standing before and look for his tracks made by his shoes
>instead find a puddle of red liquid near where he stood
>scream and begin to panic even more
>run towards the barn to hopefully find him and the animals safe there
>look inside the barn but the lights we had installed will not turn on
>take out my flashlight and immediately notice all of our cows, pigs, and chickens we kept lying on the ground, dead
>the chickens looked to be decapitated with some of their wings ripped off
>the pigs and cows have teeth marks in them and large holes going through their bodies
>throw up
>notice a light shining behind the piles of my family's dead precious animals
>it's my brother, dead
>he was only 13
>...fucking 13
>can't contain my tears anymore
>throw up again while crying my eyes out
>what monster could've done this
>immediately call the police after crying and puking my guts out for a few minutes
>also call my best friend from work because my parents and I-
>my parents
>sprint into my house and begin to call out for my mom and dad
>can't hear them
>finally find them
>dead
>they have scratch marks and more gaping holes and teeth marks all over their bodies
>cry
>the police and ambulances finally show up
>my friend comes soon after
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>tell both the police and my friend what has happened
>the police search my house and barn
>my friend tries comforting me while also in tears
>"no human being could have made any of these holes or bite marks"
>after a long time of officers and other people asking me about what happened my friend offers me to stay with him
>while I drive to my friend's place I notice something running across the road, while looking at my car, in front of me
>the glimpse I caught of it was a dark figure with long legs and what may have been red, human like eyes
>I jump in my seat and almost stop my car
>I begin to hyperventilate all the way to my friends house
Was that the monster?
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Do you have a news article to back this up
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"My brother died when he was a kid, I should tell this story in greentext"
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>>18829980
>around 12:00
>look out my window
>see a semi bright light
Sees sun at noon = MUST BE PARANORMAL
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0/10
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>>18829980
Complete failure of a story
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>>18829980
3/10 ropeplay story
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Are you ten years old or just that stupid??
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if you're gonna do creative writing exercises at least make it in anyway sound. Give us enough information to get immersed, thats why ARG's work so well. Also, try story telling from a present tense, that way we can live through the story with the character.
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>>18829980
Yea man this was pretty shitty. Better luck next time.
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Why the fuck would you vomit if you saw dead animals? lol
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>>18829980
You're that dude that tries to post oc, right? Last one was about dating the laughing girl with the hatchet?
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>>18829992
this
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