Post your narrations /x/
here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YktEq-J1fP4
>feedback is much wanted
OI MATE WHAT SAY YOU AND I GO MEET THE LADS AT A PUB FOR A BIT OF THE OL BUBBLE AND SQUEAK?
>>18142753
I don't understand.
>broight whoite loight
I couldn't even follow the pasta because your accent is so distracting.
shoulda binned that knoife
>>18142744
Well. I can't change my accent, other then that is there anything else I can work on or improve?
Is this original copypasta or did you find it online, OP?
Good effort, OP. But it sounds like you're mostly reading and not acting.
That's what narration really is. Acting.
Also, you don't seem to have a narration voice.
I'm coming from America, so your mileage may vary. Our best narrators always had a very distinct SOMETHING about their voice.
Don Lafontaine with all of his movie and TV trailers, Peter Thomas with his Forensic Files narration, Charles Aidman with his 80s Twilight Zone work.
You're not there yet. But keep trying. You need to find your niche.