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I'm not really sure what kind of criticism you're even after or what you're even going for with those videos
I mean, are they actually supposed to be scary? If so your tone you need to adjust your tone and maybe work on your intonation. It's like you're just casually speaking into the mic, which isn't how spooky stories should be narrated. It ruins the entire atmosphere. Some sound effects might be nice too. I'd maybe look up some other narrations of creepypasta or something of the sort, so you can get a better idea.
And if you're wanting to do this seriously, I'd also suggest making speaking a bit clearer.


On the flip side, if this is just a bit of fun, then it's fine