Sorry that I'm spanning my art for a while. It's just

>>33212299
You really need to understand how to create the illusion of volume and other fundamentals. Have some resources. Your head construction is off.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D_W9sZ8S7RM&list=PLtG4P3lq8RHFRfdirLJKk822fwOxR6Zn6 (the basics of the basics. understand these before you do anything else. This channel also has a lot of good stuff on anatomy)
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B3GiCtv0swalQktaZHFWaUpBMjQ (Anatomy for sculptors, perspective made easy, scott robinson's book, especially)
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
http://sub-light.deviantart.com/favourites/63208549/FunkyMonkey1945-notes

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Only her belt looks like it might be somewhat related to pokemon, i like her hair, i suggest you add something to her design that makes her look more like a pokemon character, something that stands out more than the belt buckle, maybe even make her look kinda like one ?
Anyway, keep it up dude, here's a cute birb for your work

>>33212299
I want to marry Kneiva

>>33212392
Elaborating on the head construction: her eye are way too low. Realistically eye are at the 1/3 mark of the face, but instead yours are between 1/2 and 1/3 and end on her cheek. Way too low. Addtionally, your eye placement doesn't take the direction of the the face as a whole into account. Instead it looks pasted on.

I want to battle her

This is good! I think for now it would be best to focus more so on proportions and how you format everything, I think some work on the head and practicing torsos and joints will help a lot! Your colors are fun too but never be afraid to break out of your comfort zone anon! Keep it up!

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>>33212498
I re-adjust her eyes in this sketch. How is it now?

>>33212621
Much better! Her expression translate a lot better too!

Stop trying to draw in the official art style. Focus on learning the basics first.
Can't build a house without a foundation.

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Here's the lineart.

No one gives a fuck about your shitty, uninspired gym leaders; if I see you post these abominations one more time, I'm gonna go absolutely BANANAS.

make a DeviantArt account and go away

>>33212299
Much better.

>>33212299
Make more topics please we need to a new one for every little "change" you make

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>>33212299

>>33212299
There's too many stars, makes her design look too busy. Try shaving off most of the extraneous details and add some of the blue from her helmet into her outfit. Also I think she should be wearing the helmet instead of holding it.

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>>33215581
>even the hair's giving a handjob (hairjob?)