Pokemon Fanfiction General and Writethread

>>28059848
Fic recap time:

an anon shared one hell of a rough draft involving some humans (names are placeholders). Looking for feedback. NSFW
pastebin.com/Mxm99Yfg

Someone was insane enough to make a fic involving Pallosand and some female lifeguard. NSFW
http://pastebin.com/8JFzykJm

An anon shares with us a drunk trainer who is bummed about losing a tournament. SFW
http://pastebin.com/1p5edkxq

Ee4ee delivered Ledian anon from evil and made a story about her trying to hold hands. Too lewd to rate SFW
http://pastebin.com/hGzptWX5
He also did a piece about some brooding romance between an Umbreon and a Jolteon. SFW for now
http://pastebin.com/qFtV6n3g
And then he went on to write about Roselia receiving fertilization that made certain parts of her grow. Suggestive but SFW
http://pastebin.com/JiCue8GK
And then he went on to make some drama with Latias. SFW
http://pastebin.com/mLSNMFyL

An anon began a draft of a female trainer jealous over her male Castform's...chest size. SFW
pastebin.com/bmXqA1Lp

Updated Fics:
Mimiga's Ears Sequel Chapter 2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oIu_5WIwa27RSXjoR6aAxCAnH1TgrQtDdY9iZtEDXTw/edit?usp=sharing

Unown's Fledgings chapter 39
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/39/Fledglings

An anon finally finished The Human Species.
http://pastebin.com/FXKfSp8p

Tell me if I miss anything

>>28060088
For future note, I'm not a 'he', haha.

Once more taking requests while I putz about with how I'm gonna do the next part of the Latias story.

>>28060295
My Gardevoir request still stands at >>27936103
Feel free to use that to experiment with smut.
as a plus big butts are my thing

>>28060381
>>28060295
shit I linked wrong
>>28013668
>>28014547

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>>28060295
Kind of want to see something with mismagius or misdreavus. There was this idea >>28045010 but I doubt you would want a long story. Maybe something with a trainer raising a misdreavus during his life enjoying playing together facing childhood problems ect. and it developing feelings for him when she evolves and he turns into an adult.

>>28059848
I wonder do you guys actually consult the idea bin from time to time? Is it useless to put ideas in there?

>>28060528
I have my own personal ideabin that I constantly fill with bullshit, so I certainly don't need to.

what's the oldest idea in the ideabin?

>>28060528
Miracles happen from time to time and someone tackles an idea, though in hindsight I haven't really updated it that often since I've been busy with other stuff.
Some people still browse it though
>>28060674
the closer to the bottom an idea is the older it is.
There's also a link to an even older idea list in pastebin format
http://pastebin.com/YBGv8k97

>>28060528
Speaking for myself: I check it every so often, but I haven't done anything from it to date. If I'm not writing an idea of my own, I'm more likely to pull ideas from the thread itself, like that lopunny with a shotgun image spurring the idea for a drabble.

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>>28060745
>>28060840
So should I just post my ideas in the thread instead?

I remember seeing an idea for a story about a young kid being raised in a hunted house by ghost pokemons.
Mismagius was the mother
Ducksnoir the father
gengar the cool older brother and froslass the overprotective older sister and misdreavus the childhood friend/crush.
I think sableye was the friend that would try risky things and accidently get the boy in trouble.

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>>28060295
I would love to read something comfy involving Zygarde. The guy deserves more love! What about a bunch of pokémon from Terminus Cave cheering up Zygarde after Pokémon Sun and Moon were announced?

Yes, I know the Zygarde forms will be available on the games, I'm pretty happy about it

>>28060745
Some of these have been done, I think? Pretty sure I saw the Kirby crossover one in the catalog.

>>28060491
>>28060903
I think this idea/these ideas deserve way more attention than I think I can give it in the 1k-2k one-shots I've been doing. I could see it being a good short series (and I'd love to read it if anyone gets around to making it)

>>28060903
I'll still be able to slap them onto the ideabin so you don't have to post the idea every thread (unless someone's taking requests)

>>28060987
I would really like to see that its and interesting a cute idea that I would really like to read. Probably other people too.
>>28061158
Go for it I would ratter see them in the idea bin so I dont forget the idea if anyone ever ask for an idea for a story. And to not have to repaste it like a spamming faggot in later threads.

>>28060295
Fucking london.

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Requesting love story with blind trainer and one of his pokemon helping him see.

>>28060648
Oh man, I know how that is. I've got a document with 17 story ideas, a couple dozen scene ideas, several excerpts that I thought were interesting enough to maybe build a story around or insert into one eventually, and a few started stories. I thought collecting all this stuff together would end up distracting and spreading my interests too thin over time, but it seems like every time I take a look I come up with a way to combine ideas I previously thought of as completely separate.

>>28062916
I just throw in ideas on the fly that I'll probably never do, simply because preserving the information is likely more useful than not. I've got ideas in there that are quite literally just one line along the degree of "Flaffy Mawile early exploration society inception mega-evo ship fucktastic"

>>28062813
have you found a request that piqued you from this thread or the last?

>>28062985
>"Flaffy Mawile early exploration society inception mega-evo ship fucktastic"
That sounds like a pretty hardcore idea and I'd read the shit out of it if you wrote it.

>>28063122
I compiled some ideas for Gardebutt anon that I'm pretty fond of, so I'll probably write it eventually, but I hadn't managed to actually get metaphorical pen to page and got fed up with the fact I hadn't written anything concrete in two hours, so i started the second part of the Latias thing I have yet to properly name. Hopefully it'll get enough of the writing juices flowing I can swing into it after. If not I might be able to get it done first thing tomorrow.

>>28060295
I'm late to the party this time, but my Scrafty request from the previous thread still stands.

>>28060528
It isn't usually updated, so feel free to add to it.

>>28059848
>Have you ever given much thought to the science of Pokemon technology? How far advanced do you think they are compared to our world?

While not really doing any fanfic stuff, I have thought of this a lot, especially with the way Pokeballs seem to work, pokemon centers, and PC transfers, etc.

The implications are incredible to say the least.

I sort of toyed around last thread with a concept of a Pokemon story that explores the technology of the pokemon-verse and basically set up a sort of Cyberpunk tale involving a Trainer and their faithful Rotom partner working as freelance corporate spies.

All this with cybernetic augmentations for humans and pokemon and other craziness and... I didn't get any further than thaty.

oddly, Mankind Divided held no influence on this idea.

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>>28060295
I know you already made a story about roselia but do you think you could make a story about a newly evolved roserade either being told her ass is big by her trainer. And her being embarrass/angry at her trainer. It could end with some butt play or roserade getting her revenge using her but tif that makes sense and not too stupid of and idea.. Or just the trainer admitting his true feeling to her at the end.

>>28062870
This is actually a good idea. Would the mon just work like a seeing-eye dog, or do you mean "helps him see" to be more literal, like a psychic putting images of their surroundings in his mind?
inb4 gardevoir

>>28063694
Ironically a gardevoir or kirlia would be the perfect pokemon for that kind of story.

>>28063672
>oddly, Mankind Divided held no influence on this idea.
did Shadowrun? It seems like a pretty classic cyberpunk idea. Also what if cybernetics overrode a pokemon's secondary typing to be Steel or Electric, if it wasn't already a steel- or electric-type?

>>28063676
Being totally honest? Probably not, unless I make it a kinda-sorta sequel to the one I wrote before, and idk if I want to go back to it just yet.

>>28063745
Maybe a Natu on the trainer's shoulder

>>28063825
Natu could work too.
>>28063825
Would it be more interesting if I were to change roserade to florges?

>>28063676
something like that kinda exists...almost. It stars a roselia instead though and was made during the bully era. Not very suggestive/lewd though.
http://pastebin.com/p57LYN4p

>>28064060
I already read that and its a good shot fic but mean bully fics are not really my thing.

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>>28063825
>did Shadowrun? It seems like a pretty classic cyberpunk idea

Yes.

>Also what if cybernetics overrode a pokemon's secondary typing to be Steel or Electric, if it wasn't already a steel- or electric-type?

Likely, sort of like in my earlier idea of a crossover between Pokemon and Fallout, I imagined most Pokemon who got dipped in FEV basically became fighting types. (living rock pokemon, construct-like pokemon, and ghosts wouldn't be effected for various reasons)

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>>28059848
I can't believe it has not been done before but I would like to request a story about a pure hearted human knight protecting his princess diancie. The reason why he's protecting her could be that the diancie line has been aiding the human city for generation by giving them gems so the humans being grateful would send a knight to protect the current princess from strange attacks or something like that.

>>28062985
>Flaffy Mawile early exploration society inception
Now I wish Super had Special Episodes. The one thing that could've redeemed Super's story overall would be a bit of exposition, best done through Special Episodes as shown by EoS, but we got none.

Maybe I'll have to write some (I don't know about a shippy fucktastic time; I'd probably go more in line with the actual mood and rating of the game) sometime. I'm curious how the Society came to be, and how they managed to get Jirachi of all 'mons into their ranks.

>>28064340
Well the Society is pretty much the first place where a bunch of nerd-ass cartographers came together to start mapping stuff, right? Jirachi's an astronomer, she maps the stars. Even legendaries might want to go to where they fit in best, right?

>>28064463
Nearly every legendary in the canon PMDverse kinda fucks off and does its own thing, right? Jirachi has the power to grant wishes, and in previous titles just kinda hung out immeasurably deep down in some cave waiting for someone ballsy enough to come wake her up.

Maybe Flaaffy (or Mawile) did their research, learned of Jirachi's power, and journeyed into Star Cave with their wish in mind being to help them start the Expedition Society, or something like that? I wonder if they mention at any point in the game when exactly they recruited her, or who the founding members of the Society were. Were I writing it, in this case, I'd want to supplement canon rather than rewrite it, so of course I wouldn't want to step on its toes either in that regard.

>>28064616
Oh yeah, I forgot about the wishes thing. That could also be a good reason for Jirachi to come down and map-nerd with a bunch of other map-nerds. Surely hanging out in a deep cave is more boring than having the biggest telescope in the world and studying celestial bodies.

Guys I'll be a bit busy for weeks, so I decided to work on it on weekdays.

>>28064830
Male florges forgot my name

>>28064243
seconding this, but with a modern-day, bitter, cynical bastard as the newly inducted knight

>>28064243
>knight
>implying a historical/period setting
>costume porn in literary format

This concept pleases me

>>28059848
Tech in the pokemon world goes mostly unexplained in my prose because I think it far exceeds our own in a tremendous way. I haven't gotten around to investigating all the shit you could theoretically have given the existence of things like pokeballs and the PC system, much less those two things themselves - they imply a great deal about the ability to transform matter in that world. Teleportation itself is a massive talking point, with the whole preserved consciousness angle, the concept of preserving the original or reconstructing it flawlessly, etc.

Shit like that has entire discussions and theories you can cook up dedicated to it, and I haven't seen a reason to shoehorn it into anything I'm working on at the moment. It is indeed interesting though.

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>>28062870
>>28063694
I'm not doing a love story as you described, but I have a blind character. Basically, seeing eye dog type thing to answer your question.

I have a deaf character who had Psychic-types help her learn to speak well, though.

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Almost done.

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>>28065921
honestly, funniest thing about Pokeball tech is that there doesn't seem to be any reason you couldn't use it on humans, given the vastly different makeups of pokemon and incredible discrepancies in mass and volume.

I think the biggest factor might be that pokemon stop struggling after a point and anything but a willing human just may keep struggling and breaking out.

>>28066024
This does lead to another question: how do most authors here look at psychic types in general given their apparent ability to interact with humans?

I had kicked around the idea of one trainer and his Delphox being able to talk to eachother through telepathy, but it was NOT a common ability without being a trained psychic oneself (like Sabrina or other gym leaders), their bond was the result of an emotional connection that is the power of friendship.

And a really really dumb accident involving the Delphox suffering from Confusion status and hitting his own trainer with Psychic by accident.

>>28067990
>This does lead to another question: how do most authors here look at psychic types in general given their apparent ability to interact with humans?
For me this depends on the pokemon. In the Gardevoir thing I'll probably write later for big booty anon, she's only capable of sending and receiving emotions.

Latias can read but NOT send emotions (as informed by her dex entries), and telepathy would require the forming of a specific bond. She can influence surface thoughts and perceptions but anyone paying attention would be able to protect themselves from it, even without any psychic talent, just by sorta mentally blocking out the 'noise'.

I'm planning for Latias to be able to receive telepathic signals through those bond-channels by the non-psychic human in question subvocalizing the thoughts they want to send, something I'm shamelessly ripping off of one of my favorite book series.

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>>28067990
I'd reason that pokeballs are specifically tagged with something that is unique to the human genome so that they won't work on people. But that would imply that a pokeball can read genetic information near instantly upon brief contact with organic matter. But this is in a world where teleportation exists.

Psychic types are, along with ghosts, my favorite types to write for so far, given the intelligence endemic to the former (typically anyway) and the implications that exist for the latter. I treat telepathy as a pretty common thing, but how effective it is comes down the pokemon and trainer dynamic as well as the species.

For instance, I gave the Ralts line the ability to pick up and learn human language and speak it telepathically, but things like tone don't exist if you aren't emotionally bonded with the pokemon (which is why Viola's voice sounds cold to everyone but Jo, who perceives it as musical), while the Natu line possesses the ability to speak the human tongue and switch between otherwordly booming tones in realspace or headspace. Meanwhile, the Beldum line can pick up the ability to properly understand human speech, but their capacity for speaking it is limited to incredibly short responses.

This just sort of scratches the surface though, as there's also all sorts of extra little peculiarities to communicating with psychic types (like emotion bleed when Viola loses her composure) or vision sharing (which is what d'Artagnan will eventually do.)

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>>28068113
>>28068179
oh, I do like how each of you give it a particularity depending on which pokemon it is in questions, not to mention bond strength.

So I'm curious: for each of you, which psychic or ghost pokemon do you feel would be completely incapable of human-levels of communication regardless of bond or even the trainer being psychic themselves?

>>28067990
Psychic types can be made interesting by giving them all sorts of crazy abilities: telepathy that breaks the language barrier, mind reading, future sight, teleportation, mental manipulation, etc. I'm not really a fan of those things being abused because it not only has serious implications for how the world operates, but also makes non-psychics mostly irrelevant. Unless I am using those types of abilities as an central focus of a story, I default to having psychics doing simple telekinesis and headache inducing type attacks/abilities. Likewise, I would write psychic humans as cocky spoon benders, if I ever felt the need to include them. People who write overpowered psychic types are genwunners in denial.

>>28068253
I think that question might be better interpreted as "Which pokemon have minds too alien to effectively communicate with" Now, understanding that you're basically asking me to headcanon up a lot of shit and with the disclaimer this is all hypothetical stuff I'm pulling out of my ass...

I'd say Unowns, Deoxys, and MAYBE some more mundane but strange Psychic-types like Starmie, Solrock and Lunatone might be too alien. Some pokemon like Malamar or Sigilyph may be too mentally hazardous to try and establish communication with, but would theoretically be possible and there's already a sort of foundation in place. Ghosts may fall anywhere from this latter category to totally mundane, like the rest of psychic-types.

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>>28068253
I'd go with Unown, maybe Shedinja too. Unown's can communicate, clearly, but do so in a way that doesn't actively attempt to allow humans to better understand them, they simply create either electromagnetic or telepathic frequencies that can be picked up and listened to, maybe interpreted. Their name is aptly chosen.

Meanwhile, with Shedinja, it has a some superstitions that surround it, along with intense mystery - it just appears in a free pokeball you possess, it doesn't breathe or blink or flap its wings, and while logically you can see what it came from (the shell of an evolving nincada) it doesn't make sense as to why it exists in the first place.

>>28068413
Shedninja would be the case of the ghost type that doesn't give a shit about the world around it or how it came to be. He's perfect for defying logic and reasoning

>>28068253
>deoxys
>elgyem
>beheeyem

Ayy lmao

>tfw try to anal probe the planetoid's natives but they disintegrate your atoms and force you to cock fight with animals

>>28068728
>>tfw try to anal probe the planetoid's natives but they disintegrate your atoms and force you to cock fight with animals

This seems ripe for turning into a one-shot.

>>28068413
My two cents on Ghosts in particular is that, for the most part, Ghost-types are like spooky Pokemon. Some of them have uncanny moves (Curse should always be written as being extremely unpleasant), but for the most part, they're just kinda shady. Then there's Sheninja, Spiritomb, Hoopa, etc., which are grouped underneath the Ghost type because they do spooky things, but are far more uncanny and do much nastier/more inexplicable things.

>>28068691
Tidal wave? Shedinja dgaf. Earthquake tears open the ground? Shedinja dgaf. 8 million jigowatts get launched? Shedinja dgaf. Rip apart the fabric of space? Shedinja dgaf. Bite it out of desperation? Shedinja packs up and goes home.

I love the little critter.

>>28068809
Shedinja is a baller. Bonus points if you write him so he doesn't register on cameras, can't be transferred to another pokeball, and pretty much can't be proven to exist beyond the fact that he's right fucking there.

Also, bullying bug ghost is super effective because the only way to hurt him is to hurt his feelings (which is why only super effective attacks work, it's because they scare him).

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>>28068691
>>28068862
Completely aloof shedinja sounds like a pretty great little quality. Confrontations featuring one would be pretty god damn funny to witness, and they can be written in such a way that really nails the whole "this thing actually makes everyone really uneasy with how precious little we know about it and its existence."

>>28068781
So far, the ghosts I've featured in ACPC are the products of: lingering negative emotion produced by people and pokemon in their death throes, spirits and memories of the past, and agents of the reaper.

The Latias Thing continues, now with a real name
http://pastebin.com/A2g44T1A
In today's episode: Latias Fucks Up.

As usual, feedback is greatly appreciated, along with basically any sort of response whatsoever.

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>PUT YOUR COOKIES INTO ME MASTER
>COOK INSIDE OF ME IT'S TOTALLY OK
>I'M NOT MOANING WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT

>>28068305
Excellent thoughts on the subject of psychic pokemon.

>mind reading
The odd way I tend to nerf mind-reading for the most part is that reading someone's mind, especially if you don't know them and they aren't willing tends to produce a lot of vagueness. For example, you know they're going to attack, you might know from where, but you don't know exactly how and such. Or you might be able to tell a guy likes a girl, but you can't pull up the girl's phone number from his head.

Basically, not just with pokemon, but with psychics in general, I tend to treat reading a mind as something actually pretty fucking hard because most people have trouble understanding and reading their own thoughts.

Similarly, mental manipulation is trickier unless you're crazy powerful like Mewtwo. You can suggest certain moods to a person or create a sense of a mood. (Like making them suddenly feel really uneasy around their own mother and press the 'fight or flight' button hard) but you can't actually give them the lucid command "would you kindly take the wrench and put it to the wench?"

Though future sight and teleportation? That shit I completely forgot about.

Though my inner gewunner still holds that "OP psychic" basically is Mewtwo's whole schtick. If I wrote Mewtwo, pretty much nothing really stands a chance short of Mew or some equally broken legendary.

>>28069143
STOP GIVING ME WEIRD FETISHES

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>>28069174
>MASTER I HAVE WATER STUCK IN MY HOSE
>CAN YOU SUCK THE WATER OUT MASTER
>PLEASE SUCK MY HOSE WHILE I WASH YOUR STINKY CLOTHES MASTER
>SO DIRTY TODAY

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>>28069174
>YOU'RE SO HOT MASTER
>PLEASE LET ME BLOW YOU
>JUST TURN ME ON
>YOU'RE SO SWEATY

>>28069222
>>28069290
thatsmyfetish.gif

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>>28069174
Now someone needs to write about someone fucking their entire kitchen with the assistance of Rotom

I specify kitchen to leave Rotom-Mow out of the equation, because I can't see how that would end well

>>28069006
Michael is clearly deranged. Who names an ice-type Spark?

So this guy just rolled up on his boat and moved himself into a random house that seemed abandoned? Did I read that wrong? Someone's gotta have legal ownership of the house right?

Latias seems to have a couple of not-so-bright ideas this chapter. Considering disguising herself as a person Michael knows and is attached to seems like a pretty bad idea for a first meeting, and using his own ripped up letter to introduce herself is pretty bold, especially considering she can sense how much emotion he'd put into writing on it.

Errors:
>her movements may have seen aggressive
seen -> seemed

>even well-trained sprinters would be able to keep up with
not be able to?

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>>28069756
(pic related)

>>28069807
She discarded the idea to turn into the woman Michael knows at the beginning of the chapter. She used a different appearance later, one she's used before. Sorry if that wasn't clear. The previous chapter established that the bought the house. Spark isn't that Ninetales' full name, but is most of it.

I'll look over those errors now, thanks for the heads-up!

>>28069844
> The previous chapter established that the bought the house.
Sorry, correction: beginning of LAST chapter, IE the first one. It's in the fic recap post near the top of the thread, and there's now a url at the beginning of this chapter to it as well.

>>28069844
>She used a different appearance later, one she's used before. Sorry if that wasn't clear.
Nah, it was clear. I was just commenting on her original idea for an appearance being a little iffy.

>>28069905
Oh, yeah. I wanted to paint her as a little deaf to that sorta stuff. Forgetting that the scrap may have been marked up was an oversight on her part. I don't want to have her get stuff right all the time, and there's going to be some miscommunications at first. Did it come off too much like a pure comedy of errors?

I added a sentence at the end of the relevant paragraph to clarify that anyway, since looking it over I could see how other people might get confused, and also made those alterations you pointed out.

>>28069756
>Implying the same result won't come from the blender

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>>28069844
MY METAL BOY!

anyone got gardevoir fics?

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>>28070234
If you want you can read Second Autumn: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11293393/1/Their-Second-Autumn

It's NSFW for the first three chapters or so though.

>>28059848
After reading the fanfic about florges. I know have a thing for her, thanks /vpwt/. I knew I shouldn't have visited this thread.

>>28070429
I'm asking for gardevoir fics NSFW is a plus of course.

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Is there anything that Fighting Types can learn from humans? Such as human fighting styles like judo or karate or even CQC, or anything that can disable an armed opponent? Or is this already written in Fighting Pokemon's genes?

Another partially NSFW question unrelated to the first, for any of you that dabble in lewder topics or not, do you ever get inspiration from any pictures you have seen? I find that they slightly help, since I find it easier to put pictures into words over whatever I could come up with with my imagination. It's weird, being able to describe things much more vividly if you have a picture to lift rhapsodic tales of.

>Do we have any fics of a dinner date? How awkward would it be, or get?

>>28071115
Pics help more than you think

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>>28071115
>do you ever get inspiration from any pictures you have seen?
A few times, to varying degrees. Pic related wrote itself.

>>28071115
Has there ever been a story inspired by that pic?

>>28060088
Think you may of forgotten me
http://pastebin.com/LDEeWrdL
Or am I just not worthy

>>28073218
Ah, thought your chapter 3 was unfinished. My bad

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>>28073720
I did post it in the last thread. It was somewhat obvious, but i'm not going to piss on you about it.

>>28073786
>i'm not going to piss on you about it.
It sounds like you want to.

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>>28073887
Sorry that'snot my fetish.
Unless you give me $20 for a golden shower.

>>28073012
So was Magdalene just wearing a stylized version of a court robe the whole time?

>>28074275
I more imagined it like a big ole' wizard's robe, large enough to cover her entire body and then some. It would probably be rather unwieldy, if it were real, but it's not, so that's not really a problem.

>>28071115
Inspiration for lewds comes from one part imagination, one part experience. Images help sometimes but I don't use them for it usually.

>>28070730
Ah alright. Hope ya like it.

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>>28074275
The whole time, Magdalene wore a fur coat that grew through her skin. Being hypnotized, Manny interpreted what he saw as whatever it needed to be to convince him that she was a woman.

What this means is that whatever you imagined her appearance to be is identical to how Lilith would appear to you were you likewise hypnotized.

>>28074976
Gonna go with a cute court robe then

(bump)

Reading it over again, holy shit chapter two was messy. Chapter 3 might be a little messy too but I'll try to firm things up. Also; end on a high note. Hopefully I can bang it out tonight. Even if the magic's gone I hope you still keep reading and give me critique

Might put this breakneck pace on pause to figure out where to go next, because I've been flying by the seat of my pants and that's one reason chapter two (and probably chapter three) are way weaker than chapter one. I might fulfill Gardebutt anon's NSFW request tomorrow but otherwise not do much while I try to lock this thing down. There's an actual plot somewhere, I swear, not just making a pokemon and a human miserable.

>>28076224
Gardebutt guy here. Looking forward to it!

>>28071115
Although not NSFW, a mienshao wearing clothes brought up a one shot about the Mon being curious about them a few years back.

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Moving at a good pace. I feel a little better about this chapter than the last one, at least.

This board is really scooting along today it seems.

>>28079316
Oh, I remember that. Good stuff.

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I'm running out of Latias pics for bumps

>>28069756
Would you let him whack your weedle?

>>28069756
Rotom Garbage Disposal.
>…stepped out of his bedroom wearing his tight pants—an outfit he outgrew in high school. Its fabric strained against him and within seconds he strained against it, and thought to himself a prayer that the stitches would hold just a moment longer. Striding into the kitchen, Rotom smiled and giggled, and descended over his sink, flickering and vanishing as it conducted through the metal. The time had come. He strode forth and mantled the counter-top. Gripping the sprayer and turning the knobs to just short of scaling, he gave Rotom a few quick squirts. Grinding with delight, Rotom activated the garbage disposal. Holding the trigger, he thrust his pelvis forward, forcing through bursting seams his proud pipe cleaner into the sprinkling stream. Shivering with excitement as the warm water and cool air clashed, he dared to put all faith in his sense of balance as he shifted his left hand's grip from his faucet to his faucet. Pressing it downward—against nature's intended angle—to aim for the whirring plumba dentata below, he chuckled and spoke to his tool. "What's it they say, 'Everything but the kitchen sink'? Cowards."

>>28082900
The wordplay slays me. 10/10

Question for writers: do you ever find yourself just writing gibberish, total nonsense, even in the middle of a document and hoping that you get the swing of something mid-stride and can write your way out of a block?

Occasionally I lose momentum on a scene and just sorta freeze, and I wonder if writing anything at all even if just to erase all of it later would help get out of it

>>28083737
I don't write gibberish, but I will cut to another scene, preferably a side-plot. I believe it's better to jump more than you want to but to stay interesting than it is to have a lump of boring yawns connecting the good parts.

For blocks, I just stop writing for a while. A while may range anywhere between one hour and one year.

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>>28083737
Nah, I just do something else. Play some vidya, read something interesting - as long as I distract myself and give it some time to mull things over I can get back to writing at some point. But that's for blocks.

The issue is sometimes mid-work I just flat out feel my muse die and I don't have it in me to bother kicking her awake again for an indeterminate amount of time.

I'm thinking about putting a NSFW PMD fic that features a salandit and its partner together. I was thinking about making the partner a snivy, but I'm not too sure. Suggestions?

The partner cannot be weak to water, by the way.

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>>28086249
Do whatever you wanna do, you little bitch. Don't let a bunch of fags manipulate dank-ass porn of your favorite pokemon.

>>28086249
I do not condone lewds of my favorite starter, so I can't suggest anything to you. Godspeed anon.

BS2F Chapter 3, for the Latias story, is done!
http://pastebin.com/yx3kvwgs
Like I expected, I feel better about it than Ch.2, but not as good as Ch.1

I tried to give the two Ninetales some characterization here, while providing both their full silly names.

Please leave feedback, critique, or comments!

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>>28083737
>>28084638
I do a combination of both of these things. With my increased productivity these past few months, I've found that sometimes just forcing myself to write shit even when I'm not feeling it is loads better than just dropping it for two years waiting for the perfect words to spring out of the ether. It's much easier to write something half-assed and then edit it to be good later than to spend ages waiting to write everything perfectly the first time.

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So, this is a question that's been on my mind, and I'm sure many other minds, for quite some time. There are countless instances of more forceful methods of courting and copulation in the animal kingdom. While this may be the norm for an animal species, rape in humans is obviously indicative of mental illness in the perpetrator, and causes lifelong distress in the victims. So how do we apply this to Pokémon? This essentially returns us to the age old question of how animalistic Pokémon truly are, which at this point is entirely up to headcanon. Since Pokémon-on-human action is the flagship subject of this general, I imagine everyone has turned this over in their heads at some point in their writerly career.

And remember, it's not rape if you like it. Pic wholly relevant

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>Haha master, what are you doing with that toaster
>Toast in the bathroom? You're so hilarious master!
>I'll be in the kitchen baking you some birthday cookies!

>>28087077
Nice chapter, not much to say.

Errors:
>He simply shrugged and went in herself
himself
>She was actually looking forward to it know
now

>>28088666
Fuck off with your sad imagery satan

>>28088700
>Nice chapter
Thanks!
>not much to say
Anything you might be looking forward to then?
Any sort of feedback would be nice, even if just the handling of some unimportant side details or general story direction crap

Errors fixed, thanks!

>>28088708
It's okay, there's no electricity available in the bathroom because Rotom forced its trainer to get their power shut off. It insists on powering all of the trainer's appliances personally and gets jealous if they try to use things like the power grid or batteries.

>>28088656
Chances of it happening are probably dependent entirely on species (and for the sake of drama in the case of a work intentionally exploring something about a pokemon that got a bit rapey) so your question has a spectrum of answers.

Aggressive species that are clearly driven more by instinct or have a penchant for being nasty would be first up on the list, and depending on how aggressive they are, how nasty they are and even how strong they are, you could just end up dead.

It then just mellows out from there - more passive species, those capable of understanding empathy better, and the incredibly intelligent start to become (at least in my head) less likely to do something.

Until you hit the incredibly intelligent types anyway, because now you can begin to toss out the idea of "well, what if this Alakazam realizes that it's not only unbelievably intelligent, it is far more intelligent and powerful that its trainer will ever be and because of this it can just have its way with him/her whenever the fuck it wants."

But even that's a really dumbed down response - there's a huge variety of behavior across species, and things like aggressiveness, intelligence and increased capacity to be sympathetic/empathetic only go so far when exceptions and stuff like the above start to get factored in.

>>28088793
>it is far more intelligent and powerful that its trainer will ever be and because of this it can just have its way with him/her whenever the fuck it wants."

I agree with everything but this point; I think that this will come down to personality, just as it does in people. I'd think that the more intelligent the creature is the less sheer power plays a role in any dynamic, more and more overwritten by the personality of the individual (except in cases of a personality that strives for those power plays).

This does remind me of another interesting question though. Do you think pokemon that are far more intelligent than humans (who are themselves more intelligent than the vast majority of pokemon) have some sort of code? Humans have a lot of moral and ethical elements to interacting with animals IRL and pokemon in canon, do you think the higher-order pokemon would have similar codes with regard to people?

>>28088858
Yeah, that applies, prolly shoulda mentioned it but I was scratching the character limit.

Not too sure about codes. I'd imagine yes, if you're that intelligent, there's nothing to particularly stop you from developing one, unless the intelligence you bear is one that cannot produce culture, ethics and morals - a purely pragmatic, entirely antiseptic view of the world, for instance.

That is in itself a sort of code, but to most humans it would be seen as cold neutrality. Alternatively, if you're that intelligent in a traditional sense, as well as emotionally intelligent (to bring the whole concept of multiple intelligences in) then you could very easily create a code, and higher-order pokemon would likely have them, especially if they come to recognize what their interactions with humans has produced in the past, or what their interactions could potentially produce.

This really just scratches the surface though, kinda like my last response did. It really gets about as detailed and in-depth as you're willing to go since you're in the realm of (informed) speculation.

>>28059848
Hey /vp/ are you guys okay with me throwing an OC in my story that I'm making? I think it's gonna be pretty good but I just need permission.

>>28089003
Git gud and you can make fakemons with three megas for all I care. You shouldn't need permission to do shit, it's your story.

>>28088858
Having pokemon more intelligent than humans is a bit of a tricky thing because it's not really just dependent on basic mental ability, but requires enormous time investments in learning and access to information that simply would not be available to them except through humans. If they do find themselves with some sort of ethical code, it's more likely to be based off of information learned from humans, if only because pokemon would not have a significant cultural background to draw ethics from.

>>28089091
Unless they somehow gained intelligence through external influence, I don't see why species with human-equivalent or greater mental capabilities wouldn't develop a culture of sorts. Their culture might be strange or "primitive" by human standards, but not nonexistant.
While such species might not know much/anything about humans, they would probably have some ideas of what should be considered 'normal' when encountering creatures they've never met before.

>>28089207
Alternately: pokemon like Sigilyph, Claydol, or Bronzong could have inherited from older cultures they were associated with, which then developed in ways different than human society once they lost contact with the civilized world?

Special case: Yamask

>>28070429
It's okay so far btw some minor grammer issues he calls her a him a couple times other than that it's pretty good.

i'd love some more fics though.

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>HAVE YOU USED FERTILIZER, OR IS YOUR LAWN JUST HAPPY TO SEE ME?

>>28088772
>you get sued by National Grid because your jealous Rotom attacked one of their electricians fixing the power lines on your street

I could work with this

>>28089035
And here I was about to ask about how people felt about daemons myself.

Though this leads me to a question I asked in a failed thread of mine: what about regional forms?

Allan forms have opened kind of a wonderful world in my mind, but before trying to apply it to a new region, I'd like to imagine things like Unovan, Hoennese, Sinnohnite, or Kalosian forms of pokemon.

Your thought?

>>28089848
If it is presented well and in good prose, has enough logic behind it that it is sound to the reader, and makes sense within setting without being too pushy with the concept, I see no reason that it wouldn't work. At some point most come to realize that it is typically not an idea which is flawed, but the way it is dealt with that makes it seem so. I could probably write about homosex aliens that want the planet's reserves of hotdogs if it is well-written enough.

>>28089916
>I could probably write about homosex aliens that want the planet's reserves of hotdogs
So that's what that "Sausage Party" movie is about?

>>28091505
ugly pokemon

>>28088858
>>28088953
>>28088793
>>28088656
Warning: major autistic faggotry here!

In an old fic idea I had, Mewtwo actually explains this to a trainer as Pokemon generally being 'submissive' towards 'proven humans' (any humans whose managed to catch a pokemon, even if it's like a level 1 Rattata) because Pokemon instinctively see humans as a way to actually channel some of their more latent destructive tendencies. High intelligence pokemon are more acutely aware of this and it boarders a constant existential crisis for them while less intelligent pokemon feel it as a constant nagging in the back of their mind. The end result is why pokemon, creatures of such incredible powers, will listen to humans: because they are so powerful they often don't really know what the hell to do with said power besides fighting eachother in random skirmishes. "Luckily for a majority of pokemon, you humans seem to have a neverending list of things that 'need' to be done and never want to do it yourselves. Keeps us in employment."

Side note: mewtwo himself even acknowledges he's not entirely above this as in such a fic he would have been spotted more than once willing to fight for 'powerful trainers'. More as a summoned monster than being kept in a pokeball or anything though.

>>28089693
Overly feminine rotom.

>>28092354
She is cute. CUTE.
doubling as an anchor too

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>>28093266
>Warning: major autistic faggotry here!
Where do you think you are? No need to spoiler yourself, anon. Let it all out. You're among friends here.

>>28093266
That's not autistic. That was actually a really cool idea. Why don't you write it up?

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>>28095899
partially because it was just an idea for that one scene and I wasn't too sure what else would come from it.

closest might just be a "talking" fic of Mewtwo sharing tea with a somewhat terrified trainer who has no fucking clue what to make of this pokemon they stumbled into.

Dammit, ideas are brewing.

would it be bad to headcanon that in-lore terms, Mewtwo (and a rare few other legendaries) are capable of mega-evolving at will?

>>28095268
Wow, thanks for that reassurance.

>>28098919
>closest might just be a "talking" fic of Mewtwo sharing tea with a somewhat terrified trainer who has no fucking clue what to make of this pokemon they stumbled into.

That's fucking hilarious and now I want to read Mewtwo just bombing random trainers for teatime once a week totally out of the blue and they have no idea what's going on

He just judges the trainer's interests with a quick mental sweep and then starts talking about what he things of that particular subject for the week.

Each time just as the trainer's warming up and actually getting into the swing of the convo, the session ends not much later.

Bonus points of the more quick-witted ones have time to ask him for a mailing address and it's revealed Mewtwo has a P.O. Box full of pen pals and spends his afternoons replying to interesting letters they send him

>>28099031
But how to engage in tea time with strangers with such a high profile? By looking for secluded houses?

>>28099266
It's Mewtwo. He can literally just fall out of the sky on top of some Trainer romping through the wilderness with a magical picnic basket

>>28099031
damn, that's kind of a funny idea, might use that to an extent.

>>28099266
>>28099295
I figure if nothing else, Mewtwo also moves around a lot.

One idea for his little conversations is that it's actually canon he's worked with every generation of PC trainer. Though usually only got called on take on other legendaries. This includes pretty much everyone from Red to Serena. And the stories he'll tell about them.

"So lemme tell you about the one time Red tried to score and Pikachu kept cockblocking him..."

if most fanfic writers didn't characterize mewtwo as a whiny, narcissistic asshole (probably based on its portrayal in the first movie) I think it would have a lot more interesting relationships with humans in the stories its featured in. as it stands though most times I see mewtwo in a story I expect a paranoid rage-fueled hermit who busts out the cliche "pokemon training is evil" simpleton arguments every time they deem a trainer worth talking talking to while for some reason considering a boring ass life sitting around in a cave as an acceptable alternative.

that being said the idea of mewtwo casually befriending or at the very least chatting with has been done before, not specifically as a tea party or the like but certainly with some similar themes. these two stories come to mind:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7309323/1/To-Further-His-Goals
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7350767/1/Shades-of-Conversation

>>28099468
I'd read it.

>>28099922
>if most fanfic writers didn't characterize mewtwo as a whiny, narcissistic asshole (probably based on its portrayal in the first movie) I think it would have a lot more interesting relationships with humans in the stories its featured in. as it stands though most times I see mewtwo in a story I expect a paranoid rage-fueled hermit who busts out the cliche "pokemon training is evil" simpleton arguments every time they deem a trainer worth talking talking to while for some reason considering a boring ass life sitting around in a cave as an acceptable alternative.
And if you needed any reason, write it just to defy this cliche

>>28098919
>mega evolving at will
I doubt anyone would complain. I haven't really seen anything interesting done with mega evolution in fanfiction since it was released regardless. Personally I like added layer of depth requiring a human adds to mega-evolution considering how hostile Mewtwo is usually portrayed.

>>28099031
>>28099295
I really like the idea of a mellow/suave/amicable Mewtwo as opposed to the tradition angry/angsty/reclusive portrayals. This whole scenario sounds funny and interesting. Would read.

>>28100031
I'm in the process of creating something brief with such a labcatte. Just because it sounds funny.

I cannot believe I'm actually writing this.

Let’s start again, what did you say your name was?

Once more, even if he obviously could have heard it from her thoughts, but seemed to wait until she said it out loud. “My name’s… It’s Selene.” After a beat where she was sure her thoughts were probably loud enough to be heard by non-psychics she asked aloud: “What- I mean… Who are you?”

The strange Pokemon turned his eyes to her.

I am…

He let that hang in the air melodramatically as he turned with all his dining utensils orbiting in the air around him.

Mega-Alakazam Y!

And bent every single utensil in his psychic grip.

>>28100442
>even though he obviously could have heard it from her thoughts, he seemed to wait until she said it out loud.

dammit.

>>28100442
make sure to pastebin the story rather than dump it!

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>>28100779
got'cha.

just randomly throwing out a snippet. Also, how do you feel about Mewtwo not using quotes or anything?

I mean I'd use italics if they were available on stuff like pastebin, but in general I wanted to do something to kind of stress that psychics like mewtwo don't physically talk.

Actually I'd almost want to have Mewtwo talk in all caps like Death in Discworld but formatting for that isn't in the cards either.

>>28100848
all caps is an option, but that implies yelling (kinda like the PMD legendaries). I think some people use brackets [text] for telepathic speak in some works, but I'm not sure if the same can be said for formal stuff.

You got single quotes, brackets, and a couple of others, but the most important is to remain consistent when you pick one to use.

>>28101136
I've seen people use <angle brackets> for it but absent italics I'll probably just use single-quotes for my telepathy stuff and mention it in the actual narrative that it's telepathic speech, IE
>'blahblahblah' droned Insertnamehere telepathically.
Simple is good, so you don't clutter up your text with too many nonstandard symbols.

>>28100848
>>28101690
The grammatically correct method is to use quotation marks for telepathic speech, and no quotes for thought.

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tomorrow

>>28102414
I'd like to see the grammatically correct way to write telepathic speech be discussed in a scholarly setting.

The only rule for things like this is to be absolutely consistent throughout the entirety of your work. For instance, if you choose to use unquoted italics to represent thought, you do the same exact thing every time you're writing someone's thoughts.

I've seen published authors use italics, capitalization, just line breaks with no further punctuation at all, all sorts of different things. The reader will figure out what you're doing if you're 100% consistent with the way you convey something to them.

>>28103133
Oh they will, but scholarly texts point to using quotes for "spoken" thought, ie telepathy. Using italics and what not becomes a matter of styling. It looks nice and conveys what you're trying to illustrate, but it's not strictly "correct."

>>28103545
That's because your concept of what correct means is not how linguistics works, but whatever. The closest thing you'll find on something like this is a university issuing standardized guidelines for how their papers should be published but those aren't going to cover telepathic speech.

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Gallade fic faggot here.
How do you fix writers block?
I'm at the point in my fic where the human character is about to move to one of the regions, but yet I have no idea how to go about doing it.

Should I have it follow the character as he goes over a few educational videos about life there? And how this character would be forced to adapt to his new environment?

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Where's the impreg at?

>>28104173
Yes, linguistics is a mutable thing that evolves constantly, that's why is said "correct" and not correct.

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>>28104216
You could have him talk about the regional differences with the local professor? And as for moving to said new region, you could do a call back to R/S/E and have him move to wherever your character is going in the back of a moving truck. Just my two cents

>>28104581
Well you see i'm going the autistic route and this character is from "our world" as in the regions do exist along with our continents.

Kinda like how cge did things.
Perhaps too much like his

>>28104667
I'm not too familiar with crossover things like that.
>Should I have it follow the character as he goes over a few educational videos about life there?
I think this is the route you should go then. Maybe going with some form of youtube, used for the express purpose of trainer tutorials and regional information.
I dont know who/what cge is, should I? o.O

>>28104834
I don't think I ever saw you post in this general before, so probably not.
the tl;dr is that he's a pretty damn good (possibly professional) writer that did a few pieces that really resonate with some people here.
Notable work is Love Lost and Waterlogged

>>28104834
>being in writethreads
>Not knowing who cge is

Pretty much what >>28104885 said.

>>28104885
>>28104902
Well I wont deny the fact that I'm new to these types of threads. I had an idea for a fanfic, and wanted to come see what the community was like.. and I like what I see c:
>Love Lost and Waterlogged
I'll check them out.

>>28105029
Welcome, I take it you have read the OP and know the rules around here?
That being said, feel free to post your ideas, people will tell you how to improve it.

>I'll check them out.
I say do it, Love lost was the whole reason as to why I am on this thread to begin with.

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>>28098919
>capable of Mega Evolving at will

Already has a "canon" basis in at least one context, so you should be able to pass it off just fine.

My explanation was that Mewtwo was recaptured and experimented on even further by a second group, causing it to develop the Y form and the female voice. The changes made it unstable and it eventually learned the X form, which has its original male voice, and can use all three forms at will[

Also, Diancie created its own Mega Stone in its movie, and the Latios, Latias and Fug in the Hoopa movie all did it by themselves too. So you should be fine, the idea of a very select few legendaries being able to do it alone is something people already know. Not saying the anime should necessarily be seen as anything of quality, just that the idea you present isn't unfamiliar.

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>>28104216
>educational videos about life there
My next pokemon fic briefly features one of those, since the protagonist is a canon-regions traveller coming into Ocimene. However, I'm not spending too much time on it; the video isn't the story. If you want to make that worth going into detail with, ensure you've established your character enough that the reader will immediately recognize conflicts as the videos suggest them.

>>28104667
>the regions do exist along with our continents
>too much like his
They don't exist *along with*, although all do exist.

>>28104834
>I dont know who/what cge is, should I? o.O
Like an alpha-radiation source, cge is interesting to think about, but dangerous to be near and fatal to ingest. Wear gloves and a respirator.

>Getting rec'd
ITT: Me feeling ashamed that I haven't gotten around to flushing out the typos still in the online version of LL.

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>>28104885
Waterlogged is pretty fantastic IMO. Hits a weak point of mine; I love altered writing styles reflecting themes or characters

Also pic related for my current project.

>>28105327
Is that what I think it is?
Sweet.
Do you plan on keeping her proportions like in the pic I had with the request?

>>28105404
I hope I have decently described the decent dimensions of her delightful derriere

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>>28105444

>>28104292
I briefly toyed with the idea of a male Dephox flirting and eventually scoring with a hex maniac. Didn't really consider "preg" a thing though.

Admittedly, give that we know pokemon can be VERY closely related to humans, even possibly formerly humans, what does that mean for cross-species romances and even sex?

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>>28105327
Does this mean i actually get some gardevoir fics?

>>28106906
If I can remain coherent enough to finish this tonight. Taking a break at the moment and I'm flagging.

Won't hit my wordcount goal for the day, due to circumstances beyond my control. Feels bad man.

>>28106906
Yeah, and whenever I manage to get to Jo and Viola showing up in ACPC you'll have that too.

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>>28106991
lol i actually have your profile from fanfiction bookmarked.
i really enjoyed the viola stuff a little confused by you saying some other stories was in there universe but yeaah.

man i would really love some Jo and Viola stuff was there second Autumn the only story with them?

>>28107252
Glad to hear it mate!

The other in universe stuff just indicates what stories take place in the same continuity. That's why Summers End gets noted as being an independent work with no bearing on the other three works mainly because the nameless trainer and Gardevoir in that story were the molds I based Jo and Viola on and I didn't want people assuming they were the same couple.

I might do some light hearted side work with them and their time in Sinnoh as a way to take a break from the heavier stiff in ACPC, we'll see.

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>>28107431
Yeah i was hoping for some sinnoh stuff honestly i feel some slice of life romantic comedy would be good with them.

also if you ever need a prove reader or anything i'd be more than willing to help i noticed in the first chapter or two you replaced "her" with "him" etc

Status Update: I'm not sure, but this might count as a psychic pokemon being hypnotized completely accidentally by their trainer/themselves

>>28103030
Maybe not my circuits are gay
We'll see

>>28093266
While that's kind of autistic, it's canon. They already confirmed that the reason that Pokemon submit themselves to trainers and let themselves be captured is because they see those trainers as able to bring out the best of their potential.

While Pokemon just thrashing around are pretty powerful, being directed by humans more analytical mind is what brings them to their fullest potential.

>>28106596
The science in me tells me that humans and Pokemon are too genetically diverse to breed

However, in the Pokemon universe, traditional genetics and the theory of evolution is thrown out of the fucking window.

I'd say humans are probably in the 'human-like' and field egg groups, but I could be wrong.

God I'm so awful at smut. Here's your Gardevoir thing, hope you can enjoy it. My first time putting nsfw out into the internet
http://pastebin.com/rxEUe5g4

I tried to paint the emotional connection in terms of light and color instead of the wave/pulse/draw dynamic I've been using in BS2F. It was pretty fun but I think I got carried away.

The whole big butt thing kinda got lost in the mix, but it comes up a few times here and there. If you were requesting anal I wasn't going to write that even if I was aware you specifically wanted that, sorry

Feedback and all that fun stuff pls.

>>28108946
Also, as stpuid as this sounds, I only just now realized you might have wanted something from the trainer's perspective, hah. Ah well, all my stories so far have been from the POV of pokemon, why change that for this

So which of these do you guys think I should start writing first?
A) Trainer + Lopunny go on journey to be the strong.
B)Eevee goes on a quest to evolve and gets existential on the way.

>>28108403
That's what I am going with, but like Ditto they can't have a human with a Pokemon, it just produces another of the Pokemon, but human/Pokemon pregnancy is also extremely rare.

>>28109278
>but like Ditto they can't have a human with a Pokemon, it just produces another of the Pokemon

>Ditto is actually an artificial pokemon that was an attempt at creating a human with pokemon abilities, a pokemon with human DNA, and it failed horribly and escaped.
Alternately
>It was a pokemon that originally mimicked humans specifically, but generalized over time

>>28109331
I could believe that Ditto was a failed attempt at creating a clone of Mew. I mean, they are the only other Pokemon that knows Transform, not even Mewtwo knows that one.

In the fic I am writing, Team Rocket finds old research notes about this and decides to attempt to use Ditto in a new way for their Pokemon stealing. Instead of transforming, Ditto merges with the Pokemon they desire to catch. The merged Pokemon doesn't look any different then normal, but the Ditto controls them, thus making it have to obey Team Rocket without having to retrain them.

The lead scientist working on it has a change of heart and steals the prototype Ditto, runs into a trainer and asks for protection from the pursuing Rockets. Things don't work out as planned and the trainer and scientist get beat up, just when the Rocket grunts are about to take back the Ditto, the scientist orders it to merge her and the trainer along with itself. The mass of flesh convulses and falls over and the Rockets assume it dead and go back to base to report.

A land slide carries the mass into the river and the river carries it to the nearest town where it finally cracks open, revealing the newly emerged futa. Being combined with a Ditto allows them to get any Pokemon or themselves pregnant and Pokemon that normally wouldn't find themselves attracted to humans seem to find them irresistible.

>>28108946
Hey, emotional feedback loops. I had fun playing with that too, it's a fun little thing to explore. I liked the color/emotion motif, made for a neat read.

I was taken aback by the sudden use of box though. Not my cup of tea as far as word choice goes.

>>28109693
>feedback
It is a pretty cool concept! I hope I didn't tread territory TOO familiar for you though.
>word choice
Oh, wow. Sorry about that. I'll avoid it in the future. I hope it didn't detract from the experience too much.

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>>28109836
Word choice for smut is a personal choice, I think, I just prefer to leave "crude" words to actual dialogue. Don't change on my account.

>>28105444
10/10 wordplay

>>28108946
OR. Finally woke up to this beauty here.
You should really have more confidence in your writing ability, as it came out just fine to me. the color emphasis confused me a bit, but I got the hang of it after rereading it a second time.
While I do think it would have worked better lewd-wise from the trainer's perspective, I am pretty happy with what you have written.

With all of these works being made, here's a reminder for authors to submit what they've done into the catalog so that other anons can find their works/be sent some links should they be looking for anything in particular. The bigger the catalog the better!

>>28112941
I'll take a qualified success. Thanks for going through it.

I'm still getting ahold of how much or little to include the mental components of psychic pokemon interactions, and I thought I got a little carried away this time yeah. Definitely something I'm still working on finding a happy middle ground for.

Still not sure how much lewd I want to do but it's a foot in the door at least. As for POV, I'm just having tons of fun writing from the pokemon's perspective. I'll make sure I make that POV clear when I ask for more prompts.

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bumpu

>>28106906
There are tons of good gardevoir fics already in existence, stop being a faggot

>>28109103
A. Fuck Eevee.

>>28099922
>Kayasuri-n will never write another Sword and Shield fic

>>28115255
>Fuck Eevee
L-lewd!

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>>28114218
Could we get a cute/happy floette story?

>>28116060
Never
:^)

>>28108946
That's was pretty good, hope you try smut again in the future.

Are there fics of stereotypically male Pokemon like Gallade or Chestnaught participating in Contests in Cute and Beauty categories and growing slightly more feminine over time?

>>28108403
I not sure about that. Pretty sure mewtwo is suppose to be a mew/human hybrid, not saying that the scientist actually had sex with the mew but they probably impregnated it with modified human sperms or something similar to that.

>>28117018
>mewtwo is suppose to be a mew/human hybrid

Was that in the games or was it just the anime/pokéspe? The dex entries don't say or imply anything about it having human DNA.

>>28117590
Its a little fogy but I think it was in both actually.

boop

>>28091505
I actually hate this one. and the male variant.

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Think I'll do this next.

>>28119779
>tails intertwining
DELETE THIS

>>28115483

just one more item on my long list of pokemon fanfic disappointments:

-FalconPain never finishing Legendary Athlete
-Gamerfan411 abandoning four PMD/transformation stories in a row all taking place in the same universe
-PMD: Silver Resistance jumping the shark
-The numerous authors who have ruined perfectly good stories by making all of their psychic characters/Pokemon horribly overpowered Mary Sues

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>>28125173
>Still successfully not in someone's disappointments list

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>>28125173
>Sword and Shield
If I recall, these were mostly self contained without major overarching plot-lines, so it's not too terrible that there won't be any more.
>Legendary Athlete
This was a tragic loss.
>Silver Resistance
Temporal Tower? I'm almost 700k words deep into that monster and I'll follow it to the bitter end.
>OP psychics
Learn the warning signs and bail early before you get your heart broken.
Psychics specifically mentioned in the summary? Bail.
Human psychic? Bail.
Only a single pokemon protagonist that happens to be psychic? Bail.
Of course, these all apply just as well to aura.

>>28126161
You've got two psychics, one of which used to be a mew, so consider yourself on watch for OP psychics.

>>28126161

mimiga I'm still waiting to find out all the secrets of the universe that Arceus told Panne and Vallion in Field Journal

and don't give me any of that "deliberately ambiguous" crap either I don't play that game

>>28126507
>Only a single pokemon protagonist that happens to be psychic? Bail.
p-pls...

In all seriousness, someone slaps me if that starts creeping in re; Latias

>>28126507
I'm much more partial to OP ghost types, which is definitely a thing that is going to happen within a few hours soon. Ghost types in real life can be pretty fucking broken.

>>28126528
But you are neither of them, they are not your secrets to know. And they are not my secrets to know, either.

>>28117590
Seems to be a Pokéspé-specific thing. It is mentioned that it has some of Blaine's DNA in the least, and that somehow causes Blaine's arm to hurt.

Have never seen anything regarding human DNA in games!Mewtwo, but I wouldn't rule the possibility out.

>>28126781
Content creation and subtly

http://pastebin.com/CxvMPcFY
I wrote a sort of inverse to the Umbreon/Jolteon thing before, about the other pair I'm sticking in that group. Still not sure where I want to go with it after this, maybe a set of them getting crossed over?

>>28126781
>why does /b/ shit keep getting deleted???

Probably the same reason RP threads aren't allowed. Not every flavor of "autism" is equal, m8.

average bump

>>28126639

are future Panne/Vallion going to take over the world and finish what Alexander started

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>>28128311

____

>tfw writing a textbook entry on duskull and reaper's cloth

oh god helpi'm bullshitting at maximum speed

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>>28129450
you kno it

I, too, am partaking in the bull of shit

>>28129407
Hey Ee4ee, how interested are you for doing short crossover requests with Pokemon if you take prompts again in the future?

>>28129830
Gimme the prompt and we'll find out

>>28129477
Like this

Cherish 2 chapter 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oJ7JCGvkRAiGw9ALI7U6sYJdgcwIBDFOeSAOnq7wTdI/edit?usp=sharing

>>28130079
>tfw still editing au coup par coup chapter 2 with my angry cuban editor

at least it's _technically_ done

>>28130140
I don't even keep the tab open after I feel it's been adequately shit on. Whenever I close it, not sure if I'm just a retard, but it turns off from suggesting back to editing.

>>28130174
That's kinda odd. So people with comment access gain edit access?

On an unrelated note for those that care: Au Coup Par Coup, Chapter 2 is now live:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12009986/2/Au-Coup-Par-Coup

Now to feverishly plan what the fuck I'm going to do for the next one that justifies that ending.

>>28130255
Yeah, just shits itself whenever I leave the page. Not that it matters much right now, it seems everyone who roasts me is asleep because I've been too busy and not-having-power all day to finish up my editing until now.

I've got at least 3 more chapters before I'm lost as to what to fucking do, so I can probably think of something to get from A to C.

>>28125173
-Game of Champions will never update
-Nor will I Am Lucario
-Pokemon/SAO crossovers are (almost) always shit
-The Sun Soul exists
-There will never be enough Tales of Flame

>>28126507
>it's not too terrible that there won't be any more

Ok, you should be able to tell me where I can get my fix of well-written mewtwo buddy cop dramas. Heck, just point me in the direction of well-written mewtwo.

>>28130440
mewtwo would be kinda fun i've avoided them due to the one and only fic i've seen of it was written by some young teen and cringed me the fuck right out.

>>28130752
Go and read the Sword and Shield series. Then feel angry because we'll never get any more.

Morning bump

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>>28130255
Aw yis, my son makes his entrance in this chapter. Will Ignace's Pokémon be actual characters, or just mute battlers who might sometimes speak to the OP psychic? Charles already a best.

>>28059848
i hope trevanent Roots Her

>>28133855
I'm mulling over what to do with Charles. I'm thinking of developing his character more through action, along with the odd conversation with d'Artagnan. Maybe I'll actually attach dialogue to one of those conversations to give people a look into his head.

The arcanine and drifblim are going to act closer to just battling pokemon.

Taking requests to be completed tomorrow

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>>28136561
Crossover guy here. I was wondering if you're open to a short quip about Luvdisc having a disagreement with Casanuva from Yo-kai Watch over the concept of love and how love should be treated.
Here's his bio should it help you out.

This narcissist makes every lady he sees fall in love with him, regardless of appearance

Think possessive love (ownership is love) vs observant love (best to watch and let free).

Have them both be men, with Casanuva trying to hit on the poor fish after all is said and done.

>>28136693
With neither knowledge nor interest in Yokai Watch I'm gonna have to pass on it, sorry. Maybe someone else will take it up though!

>>28135689
Not sure how much feedback you're willing to take from spoiled fans, but I can't see Charles' character expansion as having anything but a positive impact on the story as a whole. Either way, good luck with the next chapter. I'm eagerly looking forward to it.

>>28136561
a lopunny trying and failing to get her trainer romantically/sexually interested in her, dumbfounding her to no tomorrow. Whether he finally notices or catches her off guard with his own affection is up to you.

Did Ledianbro ever get his fix?

>>28137303
he was released from the chaos
http://pastebin.com/hGzptWX5

>>28136561
starter pokemon get jealous of his trainers newest catch. They start competing for the trainers affection. The trainer is oblivious to this.

>>28137742
I'll have to find a way to do this in a OS but I like the concept

>>28140030
A properly maintained Gardevoir requires minimal service. If you discover that your Gardevoir begins needing abnormally frequent or repeated pumping to sustain expected functionality, please consult your care manual for further instructions.

>>28140440
Warning: Pumping your Gardevoir too rough could cause serious damage to your Gardevoir or to yourself. Please make sure to pump only as firmly as necessary.

>>28140440
>>28140479
Hush, the both of you. That trainer isn't even doing the pumping themselves, there's the actual danger.

>>28140673
I don't know what you're drawing that conclusion from, but I suggest that you get your mind out of the gutter and quit imagining unauthorized service personnel performing a hydraulic flush in a manner inconsistent with best practices.

>>28140761
Hey man, do you know how many "unauthorized service personnel" horror stories I've caught wind of? You can't blame me for my paranoia.

>>28140951
There's a shiny foil label that clearly reads, "Warranty void if seal is broken." After that, they're on their own.

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>>28136561
How about a female combee being caught and then treated nice, being pampered ect. And her feeling confuse since she's not a queen and this attention given to a lower class worker bee, is not something she's uses to. It could end with her evolving and having feeling for her trainer and needing him to "mate" so she can start a hive.

>>28137181
>>28137742
Thinking on it, I could probably mash these two together you guys don't think it'll break the spirit of the thing. New catch could be a Lopunny and POV switches back and forth

>>28142101
This might work, although you might end up making it quite long.
As the OR of lopunny thing I'd rather see it stand alone, but it'd be up to you to have the final say.

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>tfw only one good greninja story on the entire internet
inb4 >write one urself
I am, but I'm currently 4K words into the first chapter. My pace isn't bad, but I'd like something to read in the meantime.

>>28143030
I know there's a shitty Greninja fic you can catch on TV once in awhile, if you'd settle.

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>>28143094
I know but Greninja comes next season and I want to watch everything in order.

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Here's my chapters

Male Florges
Prologue:
http://pastebin.com/F80nzPA6

Chapter 1:
http://pastebin.com/cPUxxV9K

Chapter 2:
http://pastebin.com/Ba9RaDnx

Still havent finished chapter 3 yet

>>28145434
What a majestic, beautiful creature

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How closely do you guys stick to pokemon sizes described/shown in the pokedex/anime?

>>28147001
I just use the sizes as an average height, mostly because size variations are guaranteed to happen, considering that nature is not perfect.

>>28147001
I've typically taken Pokedex to be the most sensible dimension (since it's clearly sometimes height of head, height at shoulder, length, diameter, etc.) and as the mean size of a wild pokemon. Kept pokemon in Ocimene have a marginal advantage, owing to a more robust and varied diet, although outliers on either side are by blood or chance. The authorized media is wildly variable, so it's sensible to let artistic license adjust sizes to make good stories as they do.

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So how do you guys usually think up a plot for a Pokémon fic? Do you think of your favorite Pokémon and decide you want to write something for it? Or do you get a burst of inspiration for a basic plot you want, and then think of how Pokémon would fit in it?

For me, Pokémon as a series is so different from real life that there are many plotlines that only fit within its borders.

Also, unrelated: hail satan, Suwa has acquired a chug-o-rific laptop. More frequent publications, maybe? We'll have to see what Accounting has to say about that.

>>28147001
I basically start with the premise that, like other things related to the Pokédex, it's a good theory but done wrong in just the way enough to be funny. Some sizes (and weights, for that matter) pretty much don't make more sense than a creature capable of skipping Ayers Rock in a single bound.

Even then, as with any official measure, they're closer to averages, or rather average *records* than anything else. Like, *most* Pidgeotto or Staravia would not really be used for flying people, so there needs not to be a bias to record the largest and most fitting ones.

Speaking of, yeah. For many Pokémon I alter the "average" sizes just enough that they make more sense for the riding component of, well, Fly and Dive. Double important for things like being able to Fly in NFE bird mons, and sizes of dragons, who should by all merits get larger and thicker as they age instead of whithering away like the rest of living creatures.

So most of those adjustments tend to be.... utilitarian, to call them somehow.

Others are there to fit better with the lore. Creatures like Kyogre and Groudon are made larger, in particular in their "true formes" in order to have actually looked their part in lore. While I don't go kaiju size, much as they do deserve it, I do feel like Canon 'dex size for Kyogre and other Legendaries is just "worst roommate Kyogre" kind of boring.

I have to wonder though... does anyone make their Joltiks *smaller* for extra cuteness factor?

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>>28147475
Discussion here gets the gears turning, along with images, but typically plots are born out of my interests, be they in specific pokemon or in a current interest in a particular genre (hence the whole mystery/occult thing I'm dabbling in.)

Generally, I get a single sentence into my head and just build up a story around it. In addition to what I'm currently writing I'm also mulling over:

>a zoroark "dies" and takes the form of a banette that sequesters itself away atop a Pokemon Center, avoiding social contact and eventually relenting to a very persistent behaviorist that was called to figure out why its up there
>Jo and Viola do cute shit in Sinnoh/become acclimated to how unrestricted they are in that society
>A very determined Sinnohian (F)Trainer) is trying to get into Kanto and ends up getting an (M)Ranger to relent and allow her to spend just enough time in the region to visit her ill grandmother and leave; he falls for her and winds up having to come face to face with the very reason Kanto passed anti-Sinnohian legislation

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>>28059848
odd question: what pokemon do you guys feel loan themselves well to a Wild West-themed region?

And, also, just tossing out music on my mind:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u6mYGcNgKn8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=999RqGZatPs

>>28148458
I dunno, probably should think Orre pre-Colosseum with lots of imported bullshit that can survive decently well in a wasteland. That region is basically as close as we've ever gotten to a wild-west, anyways.

>>28148458
Well, first off, almost anything Ground-type or Rock-type would fit, I think.

Besides that, probably Pokemon based off animals often associated with the Wild West: Tauros (cattle), Ekans (rattlesnakes), Sandshrew and Sandslash (armadillos), that kind of thing.

Equines like Ponyta and Rapidash, or Mudbray and Mudsdale, would work too, due to the whole horseback cowboy image.

Vullaby and Mandibuzz would work as well, due to both the bone imagery and the fact that they're vultures.

...And that's all I can think of.

>>28147727
If joltik was any smaller you'd need a magnifying glass

>>28148592
cacti pokemon, pokemon known for needing little water, scorpion pokemon...

Do we have a fic starring a Steve Irwin-esque person with the fics following a sort of televised format as he introduces various wild Pokemon to viewers?

"Take a look at the amazing size and regalness of that Serperior as it slithers around in search of who knows what. Its kin, maybe a mate or just simply food. What a beautiful species to see around here."

Do you guys have any recommendations for Pokemon crossover fics?
If not, what franchises do you think would make for a good crossover?

>>28150630
I feature one in LL and E/V for brief moments, although he's more about living in the wild than goofing off in natural conditions.

>>28147756
Oh shit, that last description.

>>28152216
Well, it's not a fanfic, but we've gotten a crossover with Nobunaga's Ambition.
http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_Conquest

As for other good crossovers, lately I've played with the idea of a Pokemon: Fallout Green, so long as one doesn't take things too seriously and plays more the black comedy angle.

>Wandering Trainer with a Pip-Dex
>"Team Raider's blasting off again!"
>FEV mutated Pokemon
>Brotherhood of Steel with a crippling weakness against fire-types
>Team Enclave
>Faction Leader HOUSE wants to battle!

>>28154167
Yeah, I want to get working on it soon, but I haven't quite decided on how I want the Ranger to handle the ordeal, or how the Trainer reacts. Making him just passively accepting of it is tacky and a cop-out, but he also isn't exactly portrayed as being completely for the legislation that passed. Maybe this puts him over the edge. Or maybe I'll just break him.

Someone make a story bout a cute boi called Cocoa and his almost identical sister Koko. They are both having sexual discoveries, and they try to do various things with their Pokemon to please eachother.
Wincest is Bestcest.

>>28155535
>Boku no Pico

>>28155475
Even if he isn't completely in favor of legislation, encountering it firsthand could shock him beyond expectation. He could find it utterly repulsive up close. Unless he has a cuck fetish.

>>28156970
Yeah I was considering the whole repulsed angle. Just not sure if he would toss her out or let her finish her journey. Sort of leaning towards the latter, in a vain effort to prove to himself that he's "better than her" but I'm not too sure. Definitely gonna be repulsed by it though. Garchomp dick ain't nothing to fuck with yo.

Bumplocked thread official chapter post that was already posted

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7771954/chapters/18069190

>>28157307
Looking forward to it, mang. It's a topic I enjoy exploring as well.

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How do you guys handle experience gain in writing? Is strength purely based on strategy and species or could a battle hardened dunsparce take down a legendary? Maybe just somewhere in between those extremes?

>>28159989
I motion that be the next TOTT, since we're at 308.

>>28159989
In between, definitely. For example, no matter how powerful it is, a Lopunny would end up butchered if it got stabbed by a Pawniard enough times. Its higher level would manifest in the form of its superior speed and strategy.

>>28159989

The difference between a lv 1 and a lv 100 Pokemon is like the difference between a 5 year old and Floyd Mayweather. Just because in the games you don't get to see the physical improvement in muscle/reaction time/energy control doesn't mean its not there... except it's probably even more disjointed because pokemon can evolve and seem to have some genetic capacity for improving their potential well beyond what humans are capable of. I imagine pokemon training allowing them to improve themselves in ways humans simply aren't capable of- toughening skin/scales to the point it can shrug off cutting attacks for instance, or developing a stronger sense of eyesight. Evolution helps, but can't replace intense long term training and proper technique. It isn't unreasonable that a significantly trained Dragonite or Charizard might be borderline bulletproof.

It's easy to underestimate the effect of training since it's generally pretty damn easy to cap out levels on Pokemon in the games. EXP manipulating items such as the Lucky Egg and EXP Share are nonsense in my opinion and I spare no grief to any story that decides to do away with them. I also do not believe it is possible to get a Pokemon that strong after a weekend of battling the Elite Four over and over again even though this is perfectly possible in the games themselves. Also, since the regional champions tend to have Pokemon that cap out around lv 60-70, I imagine that this is around the region where Pokemon tend to be considered the "apex" of their species. Any Pokemon with measurable strength beyond that (such as Red's Pikachu) would be considered supernaturally powerful by local Professors- for all intents and purposes a freak of nature- and would practically be considered legendary in their own right. These sorts of Pokemon could very well take on a true Legendary in a battle, since their power isn't comparable to what is normally considered "normal" for their species.

>>28159989
You battle, you gain experience. Not a discrete or even measurable quantity, but rather a quality of being prepared for things plus a combination of improvements in certain physical and psychological thresholds.

Levels as a discrete statistic are but a videogame interface convenience and I don't really see a proper place for them in fanfic that portrays a "real world". Levels as a comparable and diferentiable concept however are of more interest: you can say that a level 80 Dunsparce is more "tuned" for combat than a level 70 Dunsparce, or than a level 50 Articuno.

The difference however is that the Articuno can take much more punishment and needs to exert much less effort to wreck a Pokémon of similar level or higher. Plus Legendaries in general have their own kinds of weird powers.

So if it was a standarised exercise or demonstration of power, like the Pokémon equivalent of weight lifting, then yeah, a "battle hardened" Dunsparce is likely going to do well against an Articuno at natural "wild" level. But in an actual battle? No way. If an Articuno saw a horribly overleveled Dunsparce heading its way, past the initial surprise, there would just be no reason why the Articuno can't just kick up a city-covering snowstorm or flat out initiate protocol Sheer Cold. "Levels" just don't help that way.

>CAPTCHA
>Arre CONEY