I'm a shit tier drawfag, but I thought bewear's pre

>>27657913
Would you take helpful critique?

>>27657950
Sure

>>27657913
Preevo bewear looks cute the way you drew it. Persian looks very long and disproportionate. If it helps, draw the ground beneath your subject first to see where the feet will lay. As you have it right now, it's as if it's climbing a slope while simultaneously falling forward, which looks unnatural. Paws lay flat like a human's foot; the "ankle" is what's off the ground. That being said, the body looks stretched and thin. I get you were trying to go for Persian's sly and lithe appearance. You can still achieve that with proper anatomy. The back should be more flat and not bowed in, the chest should be deep and gracefully made slimmer through the stomach as it reaches the back legs, instead of looking unhealthy and thin. Overall, the length of the torso should be much shorter. Imagine the bones in the spine and try to match the length of that for a proper body shape and length.

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I'm on my phone so this is nowhere good enough, but it's a small shitty example, at least.

>>27658291
*nowhere near
Oopsie

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>>27657913
well. atleast you are a drawfag. im just to lazy to pratice

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>>27658291
Those were very helpful. This is going by your tips. Thank you kind anon.

>>27659114
3x better

>>27659114
Looking much better! Try not to give a cat-like creature too boxy and long of a muzzle, though. Goodluck!

>>27659114
Looks a lot better now, anon

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Shitty finger drawn cat faces, if it helps, lol. Don't be afraid to use "cross" framework to map out the facial features and angles, OP. It really helps!

>>27659675
>deviantart
>shitty anthro warriors tier cat facessation
Kill yourself fampai

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>>27659840
Don't you dare insult warriors. Shit was cash.

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>>27658985
I don't think I did it any justice, but here anon