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dead at 575, shame edition.

Do you have a question about a Japanese visual novel or a translation of it?
/vn/ is ready to answer it. We are not them.

>Developer Resources, Getting Started:
http://pastebin.com/7LsCvtq3 (embed)

>Recommended Reading:
https://vndb.org/v/all?q=;fil=olang-en.tagspoil-0;o=d;s=rating
http://pastebin.com/zGVSpH0B (embed)

>For Developers. Huge collection of guides on everything:
https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewforum.php?f=42

>Ren'Py Download:
http://www.renpy.org/

Last thread: >>151202237
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What are your progress goals for this weekend?

What do you plan on doing to ensure you meet them?
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>>151577783

Finish editing this scene

Finish editing this scene
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>>151577783
>write

>uninstall 4chan app

I hope I do it.
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Should I bump today?
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Maybe not.
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>>151581979
Why not anon? Were you touched when you were a kid?
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>>151582506
It's dead right now. The lesbos aren't here as well, yet.
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>>151577783
To become my own artist

Draw 5 hours a day for the next year
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>have cute OCs
>no story for them that isn't a paint by numbers trope

sad
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Hey you guys know Renpy right?

I tried to modify Just Deserts but I keep ending up with this thing. Any idea what is causing it?
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>>151577783
>What are your progress goals for this weekend?
I wrote a script for the engine I'm making, using some features that it doesn't have yet. I won't get all of those implemented in just a couple days, but I'll work on some of them.
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>>151583905
Hey, those gals are cute. I have to play this game now.
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>>151583905
What version is this senpai? It looks like a totally new developer tool.
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Get one commission a day.

I need to live. ;_;
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>lower-right abdominal pain
>too sudden onset for appendicitis
>didn't migrate from the bellybutton

I was worried I would have to stop writing and go die but it seems to be okay

nailed it
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>>151584441
Portfolio please.
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>>151584441
How do you shill yourself?
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>>151584897
I try to lurk here to see if there are devs looking for an artist. So far not much luck. Too rekt to function in social media so I'm trying to help out over here.

>>151584606
>tfw no proper portfolio because most of my works are not supposed to be released publicly.

I'm currently finishing this one person's work if they allow me to post it here I'll show it.
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>>151585054
What are your prices?
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>>151584441
>1 per day

I just sent my client a background + night variation.
Finished sketch for 2 different draft.
Currently doing line art for a CG project, suppose to finish 5 of these linearts today and if one of the draft I just sent earlier got replied I will get back to it.

>>151584897
Shamelessly.
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>>151585153
How do you get into background art? I want to get into it, but I'm not really sure what people look for.
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>>151584596
>not writing until death anyways
Come on, it's like you don't want to make it
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>>151585054
>Work
I mean character. My brain is melting with all the saliva and boobs I'm highlighting atm.

>>151585115
80-100 per cg. Depends on how complicated it is.
120 for nsfw anything (except furry not that I hate it but I just can't into it)

Price set of 400 for a a character's sprite, including character pose changes and expressions.

>>151585153
I envy your prolific routine anon. Good for you.
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>>151584134
I have no idea. I just downloaded it from IGG-Games.
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>>151585789
>Price set of 400 for a a character's sprite, including character pose changes and expressions

That seems like kind of a lot honestly, but you may be doing more poses than I'm imagining
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>>151585902
I really depends on how many poses a person want on that character. Also depends on what kind of poses.

I'm pretty flexible.
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>>151586015
You sound like a pretty good artist.
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>>151586065
You decide on that anon. I just gotta finish this one first and maybe ask permission on the owner if I can use it as a sample.
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>>151586172
It's interesting you can get work without a proper portfolio. You doing it for a pal's pal or something?
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>>151585789
>400
I have never seen anyone in the evn scene charge that for a sprite, so I really want to see this art now.
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>>151587070
I don't recall someone charging 400 right off the bat by the time I was doing the sprite prices study, but then again, it might be a custom package for that particular commissioner lol.
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>>151586626
No. I just drew what they wanted on the spot to see if they liked what they saw. They liked it. So I decided to finish it for them. They already agreed on the price so I'm trying my best to make it worth their money. Honestly they were easy to talk to, they know what they want and I like that in a client.

10/10 will draw for them again.

>>151587070
I'll try to ask permission later anon. If they won't let me I'll put up samples of my own. Which, btw, really should have been done first. I'm pretty stupid like that.
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>>151587070
I've paid that rate before, although in my case it was mostly my naivety and not the quality I was paying for.
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>>151587070

Decided to check lemasoft for sprite prices.
It's not that uncommon apparently.

https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=62&t=39849
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>>151585054
That's what you get for not finishing your milf vn
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>>151587663
>implying it's not another yuri vn
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>>151587728
milf yuri vn
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>>151587663
>not saints vn
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>>151587558
that clearly says 6 sprites with 5 expressions each. $400 for a single sprite is crazy unless there's a lot of outfits and poses.
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CANNOT CONFIRM 400 USD PER SPRITE.
I have failed, /evn/. Tell me to go back coding shitty RPG frameworks.
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>>151588230
>including character pose changes and expressions.
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>>151588403
>ren'py "coder"
>shitting on artists
Never change.
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>>151588230
I worded that wrong. I meant that I will do different poses for one character, meaning it's variations, not corrections. It's not just one sprite. Fuck it. My brain's too fried atm sorry for that.
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>>151588572
Please. I am a writer, programmer and an artist. I can shit on whoever I want.
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>>151588403
Not per sprite. It's a misunderstanding because of poster's shit engrish. >>151588594
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>>151588572
Would scripter be a more appropriate term for someone who's trying to control what Ren'Py is gonna do on runtime?
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>>151588594
What kind of tablet and program do you use I wonder
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>>151588667
>not a composer too
pleb
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>>151588667
Post your story, your game, and your art then, fag.
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>>151588793
Yeah, never tried music and shit. It looks like way more work than the other three though so it's fine, I guess.
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>>151588762
copy-pastier would be the correct term.
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>>151588974
Tracer-senpai is that you?
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>>151589018
Cheers luv
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Draw me some slavic waifu squatting.
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>>151589541
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>>151589541
i can draw gaping asshole with anime eyes?
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>>151589672
Up to you senpai.
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So, what's the future for /evn/?
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>>151590128
create games that at least allow me to pay my mortgage until i die
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>>151589541
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>>151590213
i came
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>>151590128
Prognosis based on recent trends indicates our future is to become a lesbian hook up service.
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>>151590168
post more elves
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>>151590356
>tfw no lesbo dev to lesbo dev with
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>>151590505
Will you be satisfied with my boipussy instead ?
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>>151590573
but you poop from there!
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>>151590505
Oh please anon. I was practically begging in the last thread. No one wants a puffy haired weirdo lesbo like me. ; _;
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>>151591070
post your hair
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Oh no, what have I done...
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>>151591070
Are your eyebrows thick too
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>>151591226
>summoning the thirsty dykes
I hope you get sodomized by a pig
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what's puffy hair? black afro?
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>>151591161
>>151591275
>>151591460

I'm starting to give up hope anyway. I guess all I have left are muh 2d waifus
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>>151592273
Post some lewds with your waifus
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>>151592273
Oh hey! I recognize that color, density and stroke!
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>>151593392
name and shame?
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>>151593392
But anon this is the first time I used this color and setting.
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>>151592273
are you ayano from harem protag
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lonely, horny, developing visual novels
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Should I become bread anon?
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From https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=61&t=28513

> $333 per episode
> 50,000 ~ 70,000 word count

So about 333$/60,000 words = $0.00555 per word or $5.55 per 1k words.

Holy fucking shit.

How can I get writers for that cheap myself?
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>>151595320
>https

Anyway, maybe they'll drop somewhere along the way.
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>>151592918
I want a waifu who will teach me vn and programming stuffs. ;_;

>>151594632
No. Unfortunately.
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>>151595447
We only have lesbos here and copy-pasters.
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>>151595320
why are you looking at some old ass thread like that?
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>>151595447
This made me smile. You will find your dev waifu one day, anon.
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>>151595447
>who will teach me vn and programming
I'm still offering my professional ren'py boipussy
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>>151595828
That is my only wish. Well, that and make yuri games with her. That would be fun.

>>151595971
I'm sorry anon.
>Inb4ciscum
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>>151590505
>>151591070
Goddammit people, go be thirsty somewhere else
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>>151599190
But where else can one go to find lonely evn devs?
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>>151599296
>>>twitter
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>>151599296
Why would you want an evn dev from a place where everyone regularly shitpost one another into the ground? You'll hook up, show them your work, and on the outside they'll say it's amazing, but on the inside they'll wonder why, out of all the devs, they had to hook up with YOU.
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>>151599657
>tfw I'm a sincere dweeb who just want to make games with another grill.

I really don't come here to shit post. I'm just here to shill and look for THE ONE.
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>>151599863
>VN
>games
HERE WE GO
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hi
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>>151599657
>Why would you want an evn dev from a place where everyone regularly shitpost one another into the ground?
Because shitposting is fun? Especially with someone you love.
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>>151603458
Love me
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Why is writing the script so slow. Feels like I've been writing this one forever and still not even 40k words.
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>>151603928
wait until programming, you will ask yourself: "Why is copy-pasting so slow?".
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>>151604213
and before that is editing the script, trying it make it sound even somewhat good.
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>>151603928
put tons of inane filler and long descriptions of the sunset and what the main character thinks about god and the universe as he gazes into the sunset
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>>151604668
How much of inner monologue is too much?
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oo
stripper with a booger
oo
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I've been wanting to write a VN for a long time now. I'm not an actual writer, though that's what I wanted to do as a kid, growing up I kinda just stopped thinking about that. Most of the writing I did was in school. In the last few years I've tried a few times but I usually give up after a while.

I fear I'm a bit overambitious with my idea for how much experience I have, but at the same time when I tried doing smaller stuff in the past I've always stopped because I felt like I was just wasting effort and time on something I didn't feel motivated for in the first place. But at the same time I feel like even if I proceed with my big ideas, my lack of experience will make me produce something not very good and after a while I'll give up.

I'm sure this is common for many would be writers. Anyone here has advice, experiences etc to share about this?

This time I'm thinking of just going balls deep into this idea I have and see how much I last (of course, in case it was not clear I don't work with any team or anything, just writing stuff by myself).
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>>151607391
Just become ren'py programmer.
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>>151607391
Read a lot, then start writing the story you really want to tell. Once you hit 300k words, go back and fix all the amateurish mistakes you made at the beginning. Be critical with your own shit but also fair, or you'll end up rage-deleting everything like a shitty 14 yo throwing a tantrum.
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>>151607391
It's alright. You can do it anon. BELIEVE.
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It's not dying.
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>>151612383
Yeah, that would be extremely shameful.
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>>151612494
I'm now conflicted as I wish to be shameful.
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>>151607391

Don't start with a VN.

4/5 VN projects go nowhere because 1 or more people on the team don't pull their weight, and no one takes charge kicking them. You don't want that.

Spend a while learning the basics of how to write - showing characterization, avoiding purple prose, and chopping out boring and unnecessary fluff. It'll make you a better writer, and it'll show you whether you have the passion needed to keep at it. If you quit after four weeks, you've avoided wasting other peoples' time on a real project.

Once you're happy you have some ability, go and find a team to join. Odds are high it will fail, but it'll give you a grounding in the most important part of making a VN - realizing that your team mates are shit and how to deal with that (spoiler: kicking them). There's usually 2-3 good people on a given team, so use the opportunity to figure out who they are and make some connections.

Your project lives and dies by your team - if half of them don't work, your project fails. Find good and reliable people who don't create drama, and cherish them. Then get to work.

Good luck.
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>>151615517
Wow, you sounds so wise.
How many vns you've made ?
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>>151615743
Not them, but I stand by everything they said and I've made three VNs so far. A lot more projects that didn't get complete due to the exact reasons they mentioned.
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>>151615918
Steam link to any of your vn?
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Link to any of your steamy VN?
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>>151616083
>>151616137

Not that anon, but

>need to have steam to make vns

Is this some sort of new meme I missed after months away?
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>>151616257
How'd you sell your vn? itch is a joke.
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>>151616362
humble bundle store :^)
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>>151616362
Can't someone just make a VN for the sake of making a VN?
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>>151616496
gog
:)))))))
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>>151616496
How do I register as a developer on Humble ?
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unrip
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Let's see - today on the menu I have some coding, minor effects and I'll probably start drawing a bigger cutscene. I'm not going out this weekend, so I will hopefully acomplish all my goal. Gods of VNs, please give me the strenght.
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>>151621850
>ren'py
>coding
Post minor effects at least, copy-paster.
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New trailer for HRP just dropped.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=TD4GtZLkUcQ
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TD4GtZLkUcQ

Why doesn't your EVN have a proper japanese OP?
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>>151624003
i'm a racist
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>>151624003
How does a team jump from americana to weeb shit in a single release gap?
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>>151624003
>>151623995

>Brags about their unique setting and not doing a Japanese High School
>Features Japanese High School students with a generic Japanese OP

Nice.
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>>151622392
By minor effects, I meant graphic effects.
Coding may be a bad word for this, but it's still a chore to type all those lines and dialogues in. I hope I'll type in at least 5 pages of script today
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Is stock music ok
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>>151623995
>bothering to make a new trailer for a shitty, free game with mostly negative reviews
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>>151625784
Anon, HRP isn't Driftwood
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>>151625913
sorry im very high
i wanna make a meme pic for HRP now
but that would involve actually playing the demo
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>>151626025
I don't advise doing so, their demo was not very well written. I believe they've learned since then though, so I hope HRP is good.

(concerned backer)
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>>151609185
Thanks, and yeah, that's what I was thinking too.

>>151609625
Thank you anon!

>>151615517
I said in my post I don't (and don't plan to) work with a team for this reason. I don't want to be part of a team to make a VN. I want to write my VN. You don't need a team to complete a script and put in on ren'py.

The only time I'm gonna contact other people for art and other stuff is after I've finished writing, if I get to that point (hopefully it happens this time!).
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>>151626370
>I believe they've learned since then though

You must not have read Highway Blossoms.
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>>151626370
>their demo was not very well written
which is why it needs to be given proper tribute
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>>151626645
>The only time I'm gonna contact other people for art
Oh you poor, sweet summer child. Enjoy your journey into the depths of Hell.
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>>151626862
I don't think there were any horrible lines like there are in Driftwood, it was just boring. Maybe I'm forgetting them though.
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>>151627040
Explain?
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>>151627042
I heard they used cringey outdated memes in it?
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>>151627205
They had memes in their joke mode of Highway Blossoms but I think that's it
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>>151627187
There is no way the only time you're going to have to contact others is to hire an artist. This is what starry eyed nodevs think. There are going to be things that you cannot possibly achieve on your own, that you will have to rely on others for. There will be circumstances you cannot control, no matter how much you may want to. Take it from me, I used to be just like you before I actually started development. It is nothing but a ride into Hell, and the only way is downhill.
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>>151627668
Also trying to find an artist that isn't scum is impossible, the sooner you accept that the easier it gets. There are only different kinds of scum, so pick your poison wisely.
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>>151627668
Well, can you make any examples to make me understand?
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>>151627813
does everyone have horrible experiences with artists or why do you always talk about them like they are cheating bastards?
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>>151628096
>does everyone have horrible experiences with artists
Personally, I've had lots. I can count on one hand the number of times I didn't have a bad time with an artist.
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>>151628096
The delusional, overconfident ones are cheating bastards. The rest have crippling psychological problems (depression, social anxiety, bipolar, etc.) where they suddenly stop working and disappear off the face of the earth.
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>>151624003
because it has a proper goth rock OP.
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>>151628096
reminder that ML anon had to switch artists because the one who did the first sprites had an identity crisis, changed sex and disappeared from the internet.
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>>151627882
Alright, you asked for it:
>figure all I need to start project is an artist, I can handle everything else myself
>find one, pay them, assume I have nothing to worry about now
>but they're slow as fuck
>I'm talking takes 6 months to deliver on 3 singular sprites slow
>development is crawling along at a snails pace because of this
>talk to them about it and they tell me that I can't rush them if I want good quality
>go into denial and tell myself they'll pick up the slack when it comes to the CG work
>they take 2 months to deliver a single CG
>all this time I've been searching for a replacement artist which was an uphill battle in its own right
>finally find one
>pay them
>coming up to a month now and they're still working on the first CG
In comparison to this, finding the background artist/musician/programmer/GUI artist was relatively painless.
But I could have just as easily experienced any multitude of issues with all of the above. There's just no guarantees in game development.
It's like trying to climb a hill whilst constantly having things thrown at you to make you fall back down. You either pick yourself back up
and start climbing again, or you give up and call it a day. That's the way it is.
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>>151629126
Well I understand that but I don't get how it's related to what was getting talked about before.
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>>151624003
Do they have a different artist for the male characters?
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>>151629704
Well then I'll look forward to your project in 20XX.
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>>151629704
The gist of what they said it "working with freelancers is hell because you have no idea on how things are going and no way to enforce a schedule regardless of how much you pay, and even those without obvious red flags could turn to shit at any time".
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>>151624003

>1:18-1:19
>Two drastically different styled CGs right next to each other
>Using Doomfest's work in the very beginning of the trailer despite him not being involved at all
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>>151627042
The usage of some sort of drug by the MC was very odd, that's about all I remember that may have been cringey. It's definitely far above Driftwood quality wise.
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>>151630168
what will be the next driftwood of evns?
screencap this post, I'm calling dizzy hearts.
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>>151630413

Probably the Driftwood dev's next game. Funnily enough, it's futa elves.
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>>151630562
>Driftwood dev's next game.
You're assuming they're going to secure the $45k funding needed to make it. Not going to happen.
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>>151630738

His parents will front the rest, I'm sure.
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>>151630814
>borrowing $20k to make a free game
no idea how he managed to convince them
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>>151630963

He's a high upper-class white child who managed to live in one of the most expensive parts of the country for a decent period of his life, how do you think he managed to do it?
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>>151631067
>most expensive parts of the country
where the fuck does he live?
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>>151630019
>>151629917
I get that but it would be the same if you contacted them sooner, no?
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>>151631164

Martha's Vineyard, which is why Driftwood took place there.
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>>151631293
It sounds to me like they just lack experience hiring people. If you took your time and weeded out the blatantly shit blabbering artists it's not too hard to fine one that commits, and if they don't, you move on quickly, get a refund and don't wait months.
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>>151631741
Yes, I was a first time baby dev. I had no idea what I was in for. Which is why if possible I'd like to warn people against taking the plunge if they aren't 100% committed that what they can create will pay off.
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>>151631741
Yeah, every time that guy posts about his artists I think the same. It doesn't even sound like he set a deadline for his new artist.
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>>151631741
>If you took your time and weeded out the blatantly shit blabbering artists it's not too hard to fine one that commits, and if they don't, you move on quickly, get a refund and don't wait months.
It's like you're not even reading the posts because they don't align with your personal experience. If you seriously think getting a refund rather than waiting is always viable or possible, you just haven't dealt with a lot of freelancers.
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>>151632024
I have, but what can I do when they don't stick to it?
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>>151632162
You stop working with them. If someone's ignoring your deadlines and taking one month for a CG it's time to cut your losses, even if you can't get a refund.
I hope you're paying per piece completed and only half up front too.
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>>151632086
I have pretty much always been successful in a refund. If you give someone a deadline and they agree to it it's quite easy to get a refund from paypal, and if the artist truly isn't scum, they are usually nice enough to refund you anyway. Put your deadline and product details in the PayPal description when you pay by the way. It's not 100% bulletproof but you sometimes need to just move on.
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Post your lifetime artists stats

Mine:
1 reliable, 1 slow, 2 disappearing scum
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>>151632832
5 reliable
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>>151632832
0. I'm my own artist :^)
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>>151632832
3 reliable, 1 slow
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>>151632832
2 reliable, 1 disappeared
Only the GUI designer flaked, I don't think he ever made a sketch or anything.
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>>151632832
7 bad dog, 2 slow, 1 good
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>>151633731
>7 bad

I'm so sorry anon...
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>>151629126
>Artist is so slow it took them 6 months to deliver THREE sprites.

Nigger. You have no one to blame but yourself. There are good artists out there. You just gotta find them properly.

>tfw my artist always reports to me and they don't waste time on twitter or steam
Feelsgood.jpg
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>>151633602
GUI designers charge a whopper too. Hope you didn't lose money.
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>>151633995
>just like doesn't get raped lol
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>>151634070
>GUI charge a whopper
How much do they charge exactly? I was thinking that this was actually the cheaper part of the game.

>>151634198
No one forced you/them to get that artist. You/they had a lot of options. Not like the artist grabbed their head and fucked their mouth with brushes.
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>>151634343
Not him but I paid $300 USD for mine.
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>>151634343
For actual quality (unique, detailed not most of what you see on lemma) a couple hundred to be honest. 500 for mine, and it is quite painstakingly detailed.
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While you diss artists, my artist life is finally (probably) starting off soon! It's a free project but whatever I just wanna be part of something.
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>>151634343
>>151634474
Some one, post yesterday's GUI for $300
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>>151634990
Can I steal you for my free project instead anon
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>>151634990
you'll be just like the rest in no time
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>>151632832
1 slow snail but does bg, UI, cg, animation, sprites, and trailer video, so everything matches at least
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>>151635172
sure as long as it's not porn

>>151635419
You mean scum? I could never.
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>>151635729
>not porn
fag
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>>151635729
>no porn
you're already halfway there
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>>151635856
don't you mean 'pure soul'?
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>>151636215
he meant fag, fag
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What's everyone working on?

Alternative question: How long ago should you have gone to sleep?
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>>151640327
>What's everyone working on?
I was working on some concept art that I probably won't use
>Alternative question: How long ago should you have gone to sleep?
I'm trying get back into the right sleep rhythm and I'm almost there. It's about 8:30pm now so I'll probably go to bed soon, that's late enough.
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>>151626760
Highway Blossoms was fine though. Miles better than the HRP demo.
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>>151641905

It dragged on just as much and was as dull besides.
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>>151640979
I respect anyone who has the fortitude to maintain a proper sleep schedule with what we do.
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>>151642498
>the fortitude to maintain a proper sleep schedule
aaaaaaaahaahahhahaa
nah man it just constantly drifts around whenever I don't have anything specific to wake up for.
I've given up trying to keep it normal in the long term by now. A week or two at most is the best I can do.
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Why do artists tend to be scum?
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>>151640327
>What's everyone working on?
the thing that should have come out for yaoijam but I was too sick to finish.

Also, starting to panic over ML.

> artist working as fast as humanly possible, still not done
> casting director hasn't gotten back to me
> everything is in a nebolous "soon" stage.
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>>151642969
same here. i was going to bed at 11pm for a while but now i can't fall asleep until 4am. it also takes me a really long time to finally fall asleep, i stay in bed for three hours sometimes
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>>151644297
>Casting director
Why?
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>>151644424
I tend to put podcasts on, sometimes I use the same one like 3 times because I miss half the content from falling asleep. It works nicely.
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>>151645660
because it's a real studio and they wouldn't let me do it myself?
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>>151644424
Get yourself a boyfriend, after an hour of sex you will sleep like a Sleeping Beauty.
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>>151646067
What if I'm a guy though?
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>>151646587
and?
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>>151646587
fag
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If you fujoshit niggers just learned how to draw, you lot wouldn't have these problems. Acquire an actual skill, instead of just thinking you can write and throwing your money around. You might actually go places.
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>>151647304
show your art
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>>151647304
Why would you ever want to do every job? Unless of course you are okay with it taking a literal eternity.
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>>151644424
go to the gym and get a workout in the evening, then pass out in your bed at 10 pm after taking a cold shower. ez pz
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>>151643745
Hipster trashcans who essentially spent all their time in school drawing instead of talking to/trying to make friends since they're supreme edgelords who believe they're better than everyone else.
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>>151646067
>implying i want a penis creature in my room
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>>151577783
>pick up ren'py porn game again
>pick up ren'py porn game again

i'm just going to end up playing battleborn all day instead. feelsbadman
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>>151647748
Fuchur created the art, the script, the music, and the programming virtually by himself and in two years produced arguably the best eastern vn to date. For free.
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>>151649340
Meant western
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>>151649340
Googling that name only gives me the long dog thing from that story that never ends
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>>151649724
Must be the name of UAB dev.
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>>151649340
> virtually by himself
> 3 people

???
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>>151649281
>playing battleborn
What the fuck dude
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>>151649971
>virtually
He had a bit of assistance and a few proofreaders/editors, but everything was created by him.
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>>151650352

dude, the official page lists the author and the artist as different people.
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>>151650885
Those were the assistants. Anne Frank, aka Fuchur, was the author, artist, programmer, etc. He even translated the entire thing into English. The only thing Fuchur didn't do was make that web page.
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>>151650345
/v/ shitposting aside it's the best MP game i've played since pre-suicide TF2
also the reason why i haven't done anything productive in A FUCKING WEEK
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i've been getting quotes to have VA for a small game of mine. it's not as pricey as i originally thought, but still impossible to justify since VA does not seem to lead to more profits.
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>>151651845
are they actually good or nyanners-tier screeching beasts
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>>151651845
Post samples
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>>151652702
>good
>english VA

>>151653303
why...?
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>>151654162
>>good
>>english VA

> implying some english VAs aren't god tier

they're all expensive as fuck, though.
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Reading all those anons above I'm so happy I can draw and do all the other shit on my own. Fuck teamwork (if I could only clone myself to do everything at once I would be so happy).
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>>151654162
Why post anything here
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>>151655843
>god tier
yeah maybe if you have a cartoon show on or a AAA vidya game where the budget makes all evn look like macaroni craft cards.
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>>151657217
>if I could only clone myself
No, you don't want that. You will be either arguing with yourself all day or fucking yourself all day.
You will still be a evn nodev
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>>151657526
You have a point there. Back to the slow progress, I guess.
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>>151657468

Well, obviously. More money = better assets.
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Does Violet Hill dev still hang out here? Is your project still alive?
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>>151660506
I still think its weird how from demo to demo the entire project changed
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>>151660817
I've only tried the latest demo, how were the others?
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>>151661136
I haven't played them, I only read their blog post about it:
http://redlattice.tumblr.com/post/137529352398/january-2016-update
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>>151661402
Oh that. To be honest the background locations in the demo looked so western it didn't feel like japan at all.
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>>151662035
But really, if a demo has 5 different versions and the developers still aren't done with it, it's fucking dead in the water. Abandon all hope, its never getting finished.
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>>151662550
Just found it out its a free, volunteer based project. I don't know why you had any hope for it in the first place.
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@Omega_93
>I'm done with visual novels. No one keeps their word. Scene full of fucking flakes.
>I really don't understand. What do I do wrong? Am I a cunt and just don't realise it?
I think that's a dev working on violet hill, RIP.
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>>151662917
Well I guess there is my answer.
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>>151642094
Did we play the same game? The only scene that dragged was that weird trucker scene.
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>>151662917
>"The bad news....

>...is that we were back to the drawing board with the script. That's right, for reasons yet unspecified Alex_Omega

has left the team and we were left without a DEMO script and without anything to replace it."
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>>151643745
Because you try to enlist ones who can afford to do stuff for free, and those tend to not be particularly competent/reliable/available people.

DESU most of /evn/ would do better if they made something small with limited assets to prove they're capable of finishing something, then MAYBE start a Kickstarter for something larger. /evn/ makes the mistake of starting with THE GAME THEY ALWAYS WANTED TO MAKE, 80+ HOURS WITH HUNDREDS OF CGs.

Related: Is most of /evn/ underage/unemployed or something?

You can do what Dischan did and fund an entire game with your student loans.

I will never get over the fact that he actually admitted that. He did it, fine, it is what it is. But admitting that's how he funded his stuff hurt his image.

I don't even remember his fucking name.
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>>151664942
says the nodev
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>>151664942
>He did it, fine, it is what it is
Is it? Dischan burned down to the ground and he's out of an education and a job, no?
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>Never written an EVN, no interest to
>Browse /evn/ for curiosity
>All these generic, uninspired stories
>No time spent developing a premise/solid foundation
>Cookie-cutter characters and narrative devices
>"W-well it's not the same thing as writing a novel, w-we can be generic and people will still play for the art"
>No substantial planning
>Memes, memes, memes
>Artists are scum

98% of you will never produce anything of value, in /evn/ or in the real world, and that's actually a good thing.
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>>151664942
Most of /evn/ talks about paying people, so I don't think so.
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>>151665790
No one posts anything, not even generic shit.
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>>151665790
you forgot the thirst
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Take a screencap of your vn, no matter how barebones it is and post.
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>>151665760
Wait, did he actually finish his education? I assumed he did.

Ouch.
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>>151665790
literally nobody has posted anything from their project in this thread
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>>151664942
>writing text-based ren'py porn game
>only limit is my lack of motivation
reeee
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>>151665885
>Most of /evn/ talks about paying people, so I don't think so.
You guys should really go through a website that will guarantee (a) you get what you paid for, when you paid for it to be done or (b) your money back.

Giving paypal bucks to Deviantart kids is just not smart.
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>>151666454
I've never had a problem. I also hire people after doing research on them, so that's most likely why.
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>>151665790
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>>151666031
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>>151666031
Placeholders. Placeholders everywhere.
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>>151665989
Progress post summoned.
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>>151667305
Nice to see you again, incest loli dogfucker anon.
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>>151667727
Someone doesn't look happy.
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>>151666031
currently resizing on screen sprites for the 50th time because i don't fucking know
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>>151668080
How tall are the other characters compared to him? Is he a main or side character?
To be honest his hair is so close to the edge of the window it'd be better to move him down or let the window cut him off.
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>>151668080
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>>151668680
He's a main character. He's also the tallest thankfully. Yaz is painfully short though, like literally eyes to his shoulder. It leaves me with little room to move things without it bothering me.
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>>151668890
>still not furry edition

What did you mean by this anon?
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>>151669402
>like literally eyes to his shoulder
Cute! But yeah, height differences like that are tricky.
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>>151669879
it's a reference to a /d/ argument about CoC being furry
i argued it's not due to a majority of the characters not being furry
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>>151595447
That is adorable!

Unfortunately the last time I swooned for a fellow dev, the end result involved the police.
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>>151665790
Nothing has value, you dumb cunt. Especially not entertainment.
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>>151667914
>incest loli dogfucker anon
>incest
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>>151666031
I'm just a passerby tho, don't browse /evn/ often so please don't eat me alive.
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>>151671115
the girl is cute
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>>151671020
I took your feedback on board.
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>>151671115
Maybe it's just me, but the dialogue box feels a bit cluttered with that texture and it hampers the readability somewhat.
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>>151671634
I'm surprised anyone remembered that. Are you AA dev? Your art is looking as impressive as always.
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>>151671589
Thanks

>>151672095
It does look off when there's no character indication, but I still don't really know how to resolve this, so I'll probably leave it this way unless I'll get other inspiration.
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>>151667001
You're making progress, keep doin' it.
>>151667305
This looks pretty cool, I like the linework so far. I would suggest improving the sprite lines, keeping in mind to play with line weight. The closer something is should have a stronger line for example. I assume you've got a choice to do something with the girl, and the layout looks nice for it.
>>151668080
I think I'm with the other anon on reducing his height a little since it's pretty much at the top of the screen. I'd try and leave a small gap. You could try moving him behind another sprite when you want to show size comparison maybe. Otherwise I actually like the gui, very simple and the colors are pretty nice to look at. I'd suggest playing with the quick menu though, try something different, it feels too big and eyecatching - could be just me.
>>151671115
Looking pretty cool. Agree with the other anon on the text box, can't point my finger on it. You could try change it's color and the text color somewhat or reduce the texture opacity on it. The shape overall is fine. Also, just a heads up, if the male is meant to be looking away from her, no problem, but if he's engaged in conversation it'd be better to have him look at her/player, so switching the characters place would fix that.
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>>151673728
>You're making progress, keep doin' it.

I would post more but it wouldn't be wise

I'm doin' it
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>>151672593
Being given a name here is a nice thing, so I didn't want to disappoint you. I am, and thanks! I'm always impressed that you're able to be a one man band dev.
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>>151666031
Still working on interface. It's mostly placeholders now.
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>>151673728
Oh, thanks for the feedback mate. I've already colored that sprite, but I'll keep the advice in mind for the future. My build is all over the place and infested with placeholders that I've neglected to update. Nearly everything is black and white.

>I assume you've got a choice to do something with the girl
Yeah, the girls freely move about the house and backgrounds doing various things in real time. You click on them and, unless they're preoccupied, those options drop down. Talk, gift, "headpats", and leave.
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>>151675212
It might sound like I'm joking with a name like that, but it is actually a nice feeling.

>I'm always impressed that you're able to be a one man band dev
It's not that impressive really. I'm envious of those who work well with others and can make really nice looking speedy progress. I'm slow, and if something trips me up, I flounder on the ground for a really long time.
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>>151676331
>Yeah, the girls freely move about the house and backgrounds doing various things in real time.

Why does this sound so spooky. That's really amazing though. Did you make your own engine for this?
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>>151673728
In this particular scene he's annoyed with her so he averted his gaze. Great idea with opacity, I'll play around with it, thanks for the advice.
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>>151666031
I'm solodevving for now, so the BGs, sprites and GUI are just cheap placeholders ripped off from other games. I'm making flowcharts because lately things are getting messy.
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>>151677968
What program is that?
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>>151678220
http://pencil.evolus.vn/Features.html
It's free.
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>>151678358
Seems useful, might use it, thanks.
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>>151678424
I would also recommend https://realtimeboard.com/
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>>151677249
Nah, I'm using Ren'py, and I routinely have to beg a friend of mine to tell me how garbage my code is and how to fix it. I've re-purposed some code for a timer and combined it with a few functions that take that time into consideration, along with various stats (a few of which are also affected by time), to determine where they'll move to next.

It could be a little spooky. I can't animate this movement, so girls will have to fade in and out as they move from place to place.
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>>151678916
you should put some easter egg in there, where like 1 in 500 the sprite changes to some bloodied freaky mess.
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I'm working on a dating sim for /agdg/'s Lewd Jam. Should I post updates about it here?
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>>151679392
If the interface is VN-ish, sure.
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>>151679512

The interface will be VN-ish, but it will have stats like True Love too, and it's not going to be as long as some VNs.
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>>151679143
Oh man, the entire reason I'm making something like this is because I want it to be as replayable as possible. If all goes well, you can expect a lot of variation and surprises.
God knows when I'm actually going to be able to finish this thing though. Even when I'm mostly focusing on only one of the heroines, its a lot of work.
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>all these devs posting and everyone talking about progress
>no funposting
Keep it up /evn/.
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>>151679706
Stats and not lengthy is fine. I think it's okay to post here.
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>>151679706
I don't even know if what I'm doing even qualifies as a VN, but I still post it here. Mwahaha
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>>151680778

My thoughts on this were, this game would have narrative and dialogue in the vn aesthetic as one of the primary mechanics, so why not /evn/.
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>>151681027
>this game would have narrative and dialogue in the vn aesthetic as one of the primary mechanics
I'd say you'd be just fine here. And probably the various other /vg/ porn generals as well if it's ero.
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>>151624003
>>151623995
>Sayaka Sasaki
A+. You can talk shit about HRP all you want but they got a legit singer for their OP.
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ont die nao
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>>151666031
6 bgs down, 12 left to go. Need to narrow it down somehow.
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>>151685945
You can do it anon! I believe in you.
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>>151685945
berry nice birb
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>>151686338
Thank you, I'll do my best
>>151686354
Had to ignore anatomy and flying ability in favor of rotundness
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>>151685945

> that cute bird

10/10 would hug.
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>All this progress-posting
Okay, here goes!
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>>151688938
That expression either works really well or really poorly depending on what you're going for. Other than that, not bad at all.
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>>151689260
I'm going for 'shit-eating grin' so hopefully it works for that.
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>>151687029
We both believe in you!
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>>151689587
She looks more like she's going to eat you, literally. You might want to try closing the eyes a bit more and tone down the mouth quite a bit. I'd also remove the dimples entirely.
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>>151689587
it looks more like a terrifying skull smile
8/10 would fear again
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>>151688184
>>151689950
Thanks senpaitachi
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>>151690064
it really does look like she's going to eat you, kek. Otherwise it looks fine for a sprite, just needs that expression fixed.
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>>151692945
Is this any better?
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>>151693164
It actually does look better, what does it look like with her lower half?
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>>151693586
Mmmmm yeah it looks better. Still a /little/ scary but probably won't come across as such with color. Definitely looks more shit-eating grin. It gave off a vibe of one of those titan things from attack on titan with the original.
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>>151693164
Definitely on the right track.
If it helps, here's my take on it.
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>>151695416
Maybe a bit too much on the smug side, but thank you!
I'll play around a bit more and try to iron it out.
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7kpp alpha is sooooooooooo good
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>>151696508
>too much on the smug side
No such thing.
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>>151696508
>too much smug
I wish all my girls were that smug
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>>151696741
Well she's more about taking gleeful delight in having someone wrapped around her finger than being smug about it.
Smug girls are pretty good though I won't deny that.
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>>151697231
If you give her back her angry eyebrows, you'll probably get the expression you want.
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*eats shit*
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wake up!
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Everyone asleep? I thought you were night owls.
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Anyone participating in the upcoming lewd jam??
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>>151705357
>lewd jam
Are you trying to trick me
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>>151706807
https://itch.io/jam/lewd-jam-2016
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>>151706924
>tfw your writing would probably be too lewd
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>>151707816
Sounds like you're just making an excuse so you don't have to try.
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>>151706924
What if I had a lewd game in dev before this and said I made it in two weeks, how would they know?
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>>151708294
from this post
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>>151708294
who cares, just give me lewd nigga
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>>151708294
Why would anyone cheat game jams? Sound so stupid.
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>>151708497
I'm just asking since it said there was a prize. I don't and won't participate in any game jams.
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>>151708007
considering i'd be literally /d/ if i actually went to /d/
i dunno mate
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>>151706924
But can I make a lewd loli game
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>>151667305
>>151676331
Can I sex that loli?

>>151667727
>yurishit
Wasted potential.
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>>151706924
https://itch.io/jam/lewd-jam-2016
Professional Ren'py programmer looking for a team to make lewd milf-trap-elf game.
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>it's the forcing your character to murder someone they don't want to murder part
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>>151711546
Pic related

>yurishit
>Wasted potential.
I'm not really into yuri either, but I'm still looking forward to it. That art is bangin' man, and the premise is neat.
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>>151713942
Post your blog, or lemma thread or something, don't want to loose that loli
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>>151714567
Would do, but for now I'm only posting a bit of stuff here every so often. I plan to create a blog once I get closer to finishing a demo or proper base for the game where things can start progressing a little more efficiently from then on.
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>>151715689
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>151715689
Will you sell that game, or it will be patreon paywall, or it will be free?
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>http://forums.fuwanovel.net/blogs/entry/1381-some-thoughts-on-highway-blossomss-writing/

it's rare to see someone actually review writing.
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>>151713942
What premise? It's basically a typical harem protag but with female lead instead. What sets this apart, really?
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>>151717394
Does this game contain scissoring ?
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>>151715725
Sorry mate. A lot of the stuff I'm doing isn't at all exciting progress wise. I would want to ensure that the blog is worth checking up on before I cook one up.

>>151716127
It'll be free. However, I'm a poor pauper who would really like to be able to afford assistance at some point to speed things up, and possibly allow me to afford things like original music, so at this point I am taking patreon into consideration. I don't know what kind of incentives I would have to provide in order to make that successful, but I wouldn't lock any actual content behind a paywall. The worst I can see myself doing is offering up a tier where I create scenes based off of backer suggestions.

>>151717498
Judging by the bios the main character shares quite a few similarities with Rance, and a brown muscular female Rance is pretty swell in my book, especially if some of those little side characters I got a glimpse of before have scenes of their own. Also, each heroine's route follows a certain genre, such as sci-fi and slice of life, so if for whatever reason one route doesn't do it for you, you can get an entirely different story from another route. At least one of which is bound to hit home. And with that art and those characters, it seems like a pretty worthwhile deal to me. Also, wincest.
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>>151718830
I found pic from your game in archives from 4 month ago.
How much progress you did since then ?
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>>151718918
I make sure to work on it in my spare time every day, so I would've come quite a ways. Mostly I would've been working on the intro, navigation, backgrounds, and figuring out how to get the girls to move properly.
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>>151719606
Why don't get yourself a professional Ren'Py programmer ?
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>>151719606
Also working on a minigame that I really, really shouldn't be until much later on. Somebody stop me.
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>>151719650
Money mostly. I have a friend who has been exceedingly patient with me and helps out a lot as well. Also any attempts to accept people interested in helping has resulted in them inexplicably vanishing the moment I ask anything of them. May they rest in peace.
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>>151719986
You should pay them with lolis, and they will work for you.
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>>151720127
Hey, if it comes down to that, and my friend just gets fed up and kicks me to the curb, I might just have to.
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>>151720467
I curious, you said you've accepted interested people, but how, if you don't post any contact info, and don't have a blog?
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>>151720596
Just by posting here over time. I posted once on hachichan as well and that got a handful of people after someone asked if they could help and I dropped an email.
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>>151721173
drop en email then.
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>>151721610
Why not
[email protected]
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>>151721902
>that google result
Dude.
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>>151721902
>Suspected child abuse content has been removed from this page. Report child abuse content.
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>>151721902
Hahahaha hoooolyshit dude.
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>>151722031
>>151722127
>>151722217
Guess that's to be expected. I posted it on hachichan after all.
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>>151721902
>>151722336
Do you write your story outside of the ren'py and then copy-paste it in game? Or do you write into script from the start?
I'm professional copy-paster if you're curious.
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>>151722465
I write it into the script from the start. Saves me from having to copy paste everything over. Though the script right now is rather barebones as I work on the more programming intensive aspects.
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>>151722625
But I wanted to copy-paste for you ;_;
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>>151722336
Hm, I should probably just get a new throwaway because that does look pretty bad. I guess something happened to the loli board over there.
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>>151722819
Wait until my message arrives.
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>>151722870
Are you
>>151722805
?
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>>151723456
yes
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>>151577631
Grisaia no Meikyuu 18+ patch when
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>>151723595
You might want to try /vn/ mate
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>>151723567
You send it off? Haven't seen anything on my end yet and I'm probably gonna crash in a few minutes.
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>>151724149
No, I'm composing it. Go to sleep, and be sure check it once you awake.
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>>151666031
barebones you say
>tfw it took me better part of the week to figure out how to make hitboxes
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>>151724454
I just created another one
[email protected]

No need to send anything fancy. It looks like I'm going to be up for a little while longer.
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>>151725452
No, I will send to original posted email, just incase you are fake.
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>>151725751
Too late bro, I deleted it. I didn't really want to sit on a dead throwaway with google results like that, even if it's just me being paranoid.
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>>151725820
Then post another screenshot from your game, just to prove yourself.
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>>151725918
I'm getting the feeling I'm being taken on a ruse cruise, but if you insist.
This is just more placeholders and fiddling around with naming the player.
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>>151713942
>>151718830
Thanks for going to bat for me, I really appreciate it. If you do set up a patreon I'd be happy to support you.
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>>151726214
fukkk, you really deleted that email
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>>151727080
Appreciate the sentiment. And no problem, keep it up!

>>151727342
Whoa, you did actually send me an email. Your proposal is interesting.
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>>151727802
Waiting for your reply :^)
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>>151732108
Now we all know what you do instead of making progress.
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WAKE THE FUCK UP
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>>151735526
for what purpose?
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> art looks good
> personalities are the same we see in every female-targeted game

Why. I mean, they are popular types, but is it really that hard to at least make them SOUND different?
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>>151710128
/d/ is tame as hell these days.
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>>151732579
Aww what did I miss?
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>>151736826
something about some unrelated game
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>>151736826

Hearthstone
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HSVN when
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how do I concentrate and do shit
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>>151739745
by closing your browser and doing the shit.
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>>151735696
it's trap that makes you think they are a cliche character types when they are actually something else. Or so i hope.
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>>151735696
What is it?
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>>151740047
inconceivable
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>https://itch.io/jam/lewd-jam-2016
>+2 in 10 hours
How's joining?
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>>151743894
eh, maybe I'll shit out something since it begins in September if I'm reading that correctly
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>little midge shits keep landing on the monitor
REEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>151743894
Plus me, but I don't want to associate my real account so I haven't "officially" joined but I'm game.
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>>151743894
>lewd mystery prize
Take a guess /evn/
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>>151748518
Onahole from J-List to share with your team members.
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>>151748518
A Bad Dragon product of your choosing
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>>151748518
Dragon Dildo
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>>151748708
>>151748723
>>151748896
used
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>>151749246
by me
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Post cute guys from your game before this is dead.
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>>151753094
shit, I should add at least a single male character
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>>151753094
Is Eric cute enough?
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>>151753604
Yes, bonus points for the silly hat.
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>>151753094
all the males in my game are antagonists
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>>151753094
I really should learn how to draw male characters that don't look like little girls.
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>tfw find cheap, very high quality gui artist
>he'll do sketches, wait for approval and then finish
>will give me file for completed thing when I pay
I took the bait, I hope it's real.
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>>151754304
add pair of bara tits and thick eyebrows and you're done.
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>>151754346
If he's cheap, I hope he has a record of past work and other clients. Otherwise you really are just rolling the dice.
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>>151754661
He has some pretty high quality examples from some mobile game stuff he's done. It sounds real, completing before I pay should indicate that, right?
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>>151754304
No, you shouldn't. There's no good trap EVNs. Be the savior.
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>>151754979
Critical Hit in 5 days
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>>151755202
There will still be no good trap EVNs. Be the savior.
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>>151755620
savage
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tfw I tried to avoid giving my shota the typical shota haircut but after too many hairstyles he ended up having it anyway.
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>>151756210
give him braids, be a little rebellious
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bumping, while waiting for cute trap evn
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concerned bump
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Sorry Ebi, but the artwork for This World Unknown is unappealing as hell.
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>>151761494
she unfortunately picks some really bad art for her VN. the style that artist normally uses isn't that bad, so i think it has more to do with ebi-hime's taste than anything.

i wonder who she's making do her lewd VN
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>>151761896
That's Adyrn, isn't it? I really like her "normal" style, even if it's a little stiff at times.
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>>151761494
Those BGs
Is she poor or just cheap?
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>>151761494
The art style isn't that bad, really. The problem is they're chibi-like characters that are supposed to be late teenagers or even adults.
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>>151722031
>com
>>151762446
I hope those are placeholders. A commercial game shouldn't have photo filtered bgs.
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>>151761494
That's the only reason I gave it any sort of attention. It has an odd charm to it. I'm not in her target demographic though, so that might not help her.
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>>151764774
Didn't mean to reply to >>151722031 please ignore
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>>151725109
This looks cool as fuck.
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>>151761494
Oh shit, I only saw some screenshots before. I thought it was going to be a modern high school comedy the whole time.
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>>151766037
I'm upset about this character art, dialogue, and the unnecessary brightness of the right side of the text box.

Stop doing this to me because I will die from it one day.
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>>151764774
Why not?
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>>151761494
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zgj5gJDGz-k

Why do people make trailers like this? Do they work? No plot or setting details, quite lame character introductions "bratty little sister", "Very problematic" like, ok??
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>>151766861

This looks more like a teaser than a trailer, to be honest.

I like them when the vn is obviously set in a familiar setting, but this is fantasy isn't? It would benefit from exposition.
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>>151766861
>someone who doesn't into trailer making
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>most of the screenshots start with stuttering
Would this read annoyingly for anyone? It would to me.
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>>151766538
It doesn't match the rest of the game at all in most cases. I guess it would be okay if the entire game was filtered photos and that was the style. It looks unintentional as the style here, like they couldn't find a bg artist. Even a flat minimalistic drawn bg would be better, if they have a small budget. Imo they ought to invest in bgs if they want to sell the game at that price point.
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>>151768193
Stuttering a shit, it's always annoying. At least most EVNs aren't voiced.
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>>151768193
Yes, it's absolutely mandatory that your writing doesn't become repetitive in structure

Adding stutters at the start of every sentence, as well as overusing the same words, is a real issue
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>>151766861
Do good evn trailers exist?
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>>151768243
But lots of successful commercial JVNs have filtered BGs. Depending on how it's filtered it doesn't always look that bad. It does for this though.
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Why is ebi hime such a shitty writer?
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>>151768193
Looks okay to me. Just don't be an autist who nitpicks everything.
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>>151771470
Can I see an example that looks good? Just curious.
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>>151773321
>Katawa Shoujo
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>>151773414
>that looks good
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>>151773321
>>
>>151773321

I'm partial to the style used in Amnesia, and I think something simple like that would have suited TWU better.
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Novelist here looking to get into VN writing. I've been writing for 10 years now, finished three novel manuscripts, nearly sold my soul to a publisher (deal fell through in the later stages, nearly crushed my spirit back in the day). I think this is enough experience to write a VN, but honestly I feel as if being just a writer is a detriment to a team.

Is it? I also have programming skills, but for a VN programming is not a difficult process.

Having someone who only writes/codes, is that bad? Should I try and pick up music? For social media promotional stuff?

Halp pls. Need advice.
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>>151766861
Will there be yuri options?
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>>151774946
> being just a writer is a detriment to a team

ha ha ha
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>>151775121
It seems like it is. You hold large amounts of creative control and contribute less than the other team member if they are artist & musician.
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>>151775717
>contribute less
>write the entire script
???
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>>151774946
What do you want to do, join an existing project or make one yourself?
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>>151775717
I don't understand how you can write for 10 years and think something like that.
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>>151775890
Art is much harder than writing.

character sprites/backgrounds/CG + OST > script I believe
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>>151775956
Well he has a point.
What kind of evns sell the most?
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>>151775986
>Art is much harder than writing.

Is that why we still to this day have no exceptional writers in the VN scene?
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>>151775956
In pure man hours I believe the character spites/CG/Backgrounds + OST would take longer than a script draft. One should write roughly 1k words per hour, most scripts land roughly at 100k words. Then an additional 30 editing hours lands you are around 130 man hours to get a workable 1st draft of a script. Edits, redos, & other should add up to another 30 hours unless there are LARGE redrafts.

160 man hours is less time than the art would take. Or am I overestimating how long the art takes?
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>>151776293
n a i v e t y
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>>151776203
In just time art takes longer than script writing.
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>>151776434
For years I have written first manuscripts at 1k words per hour. When I started it was far slowly. It had both speed ups and slow downs. However a well thought out and planned section should move at that speed. Unless you're word vomiting you shouldn't go slower.
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>>151775986
It's not about what is "harder" or what is "longer", and I'd say that assertion is very debatable. It's easier to cultivate acceptable writing skills than it is to cultivate acceptable art skills, but great writing takes a lot of effort, and it's going to take you a pretty large chunk of time to write and edit your script unless it's really short.

Without a script, you do not have a VN. Writing is literally the most important aspect of a VN because without the script it's not a visual "novel" at all, it's just a picture book set to music.
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>>151775986
Then why are there so many good artists that can't write worth a damn?
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>>151776457
I could draw sub-par shit very quickly as well.
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>>151776203
Do we even have good writers?
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>>151776598

I think anon meant it as

> implying the amount of man hours equals the quality of the work.

Also, those 160 hours will become 300+ the moment you realize that unless you're being commisisoned or have a director, you need to DISCUSS things with your artist and director.
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>>151774946
>>151775717
Has Saitome come to troll /evn/?
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>>151777168
Does it matter? Art sells VNs.
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>>151776607
This. Writers are like programmers for normal indie games, they should work on their own stuff and pay others for assets
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>>151777327

Art sells it, writing keeps it from getting refunded.
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>>151776598
What's your plan? Are you going to join a team for free or direct your own project?

If you can shit out that many words an hour, assuming your content is actually good, you should just do commissions.
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>>151775717
>large amounts of creative control
That's normal if you're writing and commissioning the rest, but how is it for hired writers?
The one time I worked on a free project the writer always discussed how the plot and characters should be with the rest of the team. So it didn't feel like she had a lot more control than the rest over the whole project considering the writing is the most important thing.
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>>151777850
I have an artist/musician friend I am partnering with.

>>151777273
We are 2MAing this. I cover writing/programming, he covers art/music/promotion.
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>>151778732
>I cover writing/programming

Then what the fuck are you worried about? That's how most teams are split: writting/programming (unless it needs extensive gameplay) + other assets.
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>>151777434
Is this true? I see complaints about length, which is sort of writing, but not really about writing quality.
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>>151779190

Yes. Imagine a VN illustrated by your favorite artist but all the text "Is writen... liek this..."

People expect at the very least, a game that has no spelling mistakes. And if it's boring as fuck, they aren't going to sit through hours of that, either.
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>>151778732
So you're not paying the artist? I hope he's a really close friend or you may end up in dev hell.
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>>151779190
boring story
annoying characters
spelling errors
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>>151779724
I'd say pacing as well.
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>>151779441
I've known him for four years, one of my best friends.
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>>151779998
I can see why you feel how you feel then, if he's an artist/musician.

Will he be doing all of the art direction as well? Such as which scenes will get CGs/character designs etc.
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>>151780431
I am giving him character profiles and am trusting him for character composition. I am also making suggestions for what scenes should get CGs, but we're going to talk about it extensively.
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>>151766861
the only thing that wasn't complete shit was the music and it was literally ripping off PoPoLoCrois
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>>151780864
Your involvement sounds adequate. I'd focus any remaining time you may have into PR if you've polished as much as you can on your end.
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>>151777168
>mfw his writing does not Dostoevsky-length speeches about the problem of morality
>mfw his story doesn't even attempt a meta-analysis of absurdist fiction in light of western post-industrialized capitalism using Durkheim's functionalist theory of Anomie.
How do evn writers even plan to compete?
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>>151783817
Durkhaim was a hack. Go Weber or go home.
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> steam greenlight
> hur durr the publisher is sekai, I don't know anything about this game and I have no intention to buy it, but I'll bet it willl be censored

why are people so retarded?
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>>151777168
There's me.
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>>151785107
people love to hate sekai
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>>151787978
No one is saying the game is shit, just that sekai is shit and does not deserve to be patronized.
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>>151788345
Is DEVGRU-P a better alternative to sekai?

/evn/ as publisher when?
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It's the most important expression.
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>>151788761
DEVGRU-P is two 20 or so year old dudes with no experience or connections
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>>151789476
Seeing them respond to the minor criticisms they got in their fuwa thread was amusing though.
Optimism does not cover up incompetence.
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>>151789767

the reddit was amusing, too.

> why wasn't our blalant disregard of someone else's trademark 't received with applause??
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>>151790936
I haven't seen that, link?
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>>151790936
You guys are way too upset over people doing a parody.
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>>151791690
Being parody doesn't mean it's not a product. Some quality standards apply regardless of genre.
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>>151774358
That is not a photo. Look at the lines
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>>151792074
I never said anything about quality. People were acting like they were scum of the highest caliber just for doing the parody at all.
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>>151792265

The word parody wasn't mentioned once in the KS.
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>>151792769
Maybe because it's as blatantly obvious as something called Harry Pothead.
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>>151725109
Teach me senpai, so I can have real-time sheep burning.
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>>151793305

The standard for parody is "Would a non informed person confuse this for official?"

They even asked a lawyer about how far they could go with the parody, everything they have done makes them sound like they are either assholes or being intentionally misleading as a cash in.
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>>151769925
I actually liked the HRP trailer
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>>151795556
Hi Raithfyre
>>
uguu
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Based on their demo, Is Queen's Crown the best written Otome in the scene right now?
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>>151800768
Demos don't count.
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Is this kind of textbox EVER acceptable?
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>>151801595
I don't see why not, honestly
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>>151801595
For a CG? Depends. Certainly not for usual dialogue though.
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>>151801595
If you're writing in japanese.
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>>151793585
I don't know if it'll help, your engine is written in a much less retarded way kek. Basically in the overlay "battle screen"
>for each i in enemies_shown list
>add imagebutton (which is just a rectangle about the size of the enemy sprite with 0 alpha)
>and its "action" returns enemy's id/list position/whatever we need to apply our attack to it
also to position those imagebuttons over enemy sprites (which I show as regular images in battle label) there are parameters in the transform that can be used to increase offset for every next button generated
christ you could probably do something better t b h, I'm not even using classes
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Initiate shameless shilling
https://picarto.tv/Aimlessart
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>>151802136
My god I don't want to miss this.
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>>151802115
Hmm returning IDs and positions...
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Is it possible for a suspense/thriller VN to do well? And by well I mean for just EVN standards.

I only ask because I tend to see most successful VN's (at least on the "indie" level) be mainly about Romance or Otome or some other form of love story.

Not even wanting to make a lot of hypothetical money, I just wonder if there's even any sort of audience for such a thing at this level.
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>>151805101
There's that indon based VN that managed to get a sizeable fund on Kickstarter.
The audience is there, but like any other EVN, you gonna need a solid presentation to grab attention regardless how unique your premise and concept is.
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>>151805101
sure, just make it good
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>>151805101
Same kind of people who like things like Remember11, 999, Danganronpa, and Root Double would enjoy it
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>>151805258
>>151805775
>>151806051
Thanks for the answers guys, I appreciate it.
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>>151808005
if there's still a 'body', it's not 'horror'
>>
Hmm, should I join the growing idol game bandwagon?
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>>151809447
What do you want to do exactly?
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>>151809447
Yes, but for the love of god, include explicit lewds.
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>>151809929
I have no idea. The thing is, me and my partner are moving away from two different game ideas because flakers and shit skejfk'kasdfkasj anyway, we're looking towards a smaller project, with 2.5D integration, dunno what to do though. We've been making drafts here and there.

>>151809938
How explicit, senpai?
>>
>trying to loop songs that didn't come looped
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>>151810378
Burn those calories real good.
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https://mysterycorgi.itch.io/advance-zine-001

Thoughts?
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>>151810202
Nukige explicit. Otherwise, for an idol game, it feels like blue balling much.
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>>151810202
>me and my partner
do you suc his dique
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>>151811694
>atrocious layout
>aliased font
>disgusting """""hosts""""""

It's absolute shit. Not wasting any more of my time on this.
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>>151812062
Can't call him a co-proprietor since we're not a legal entity lol.
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>>151811694
What the heck is that thing on the cover?
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>>151812643
Their mascot?
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>>151811694
i dont get it
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>>151812161
This is why so few people personally post anything here
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>>151811694
>http://advance.vnovel.com/
>Bitdefender anti-fraud filter has blocked this page
Okay, I guess I'll never know.
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how do i come up with similes and metaphors? i just used "sticks out like a sore thumb" unironically
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>>151814359
I struggle with this myself and end up wasting way too much time thinking about them.
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>>151814359
What's wrong with that phrase?
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>>151814359
comparing (similes): He's like Hitler.
equating (metaphor) He's literally Hitler..
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Who's going to wage slave today? It's going to be quiet today isn't it?
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>>151814359
How do you come up with similes and metaphors that don't sound overwrought and cringy?
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>>151815391
By not worrying whether or not it sounds overwrought and cringy.
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>>151815456
Look where that got most evn writers.
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>>151814470
For real
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>>151815486
They're all sacrifices for the 10% that make it anyways.
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What genre is least tackled in the evn scene?
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>>151816586
The same genres as any other medium really
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>>151816586
Granny dating sims.
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>>151816586
traps
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30 minutes before shift ends. Bye /evn/.
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>>151817085
Traps are the ultimate disappointment
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>https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/87885410/bunka-no-kenkyu-revival-of-queen-leyak
>written by englishmen
>set in bali and has nothing to do with bali beyond the logo
>japanese characters

i need an adult
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>>151821539
>https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/87885410/bunka-no-kenkyu-revival-of-queen-leyak
>17 days left
>1/7 funded
RIP
>check steamgreenlight
>it's a DEVGRU-P
THEY FUCKING DESERVE IT.
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>>151811694
Fookin' Hell
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Are there any evns in development with interesting premises? Getting tired of generic shit tbqhwyf
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>>151823920
Define "interesting premise". Yuri shit doesn't count.
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>>151824009
You need to get that hateboner checked out anon.
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>>151823495
What's so wrong about DEVGRU-P?
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>>151825475
they are as useful as a bag of sour potatoes
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>>151825475
If you just want to throw money away, there are plenty of charities around that need it more. If you insist on giving it to incompetent young people that will say dumb shit in public, you can just give tips on a stand-up comedy club.

They provide nothing that you need.
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Rather than asking what is wrong about any publisher, I'd suggest people here to try and find out if they're doing anything right. What can they offer you that is worth 30% of what your game will make, and has it made a difference to other devs?
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>>151826682
gee idk delivering sales for your game?
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All EVNs are bad.
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Question to all you devs out there.

What is your motivation for making evns?

Are you in it for the money? Do you do it for personal growth (be it in art, coding, writing, music, whatever?) Or is it just a hobby?

Genuinely curious.
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>>151828209
>https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/87885410/bunka-no-kenkyu-revival-of-queen-leyak
check that kickstarter, tell me about sales.
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>>151829016
>Full disclosure to be transparent about our relationship to the other dev team, we used our money from Panzermadels to help partially fund this game for them, and as such get a small royalty on sales made once it's done
Maybe the dev is poor af
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Finally finally finally done. My computer is dead, I am dead.

>>151828864
> Are you in it for the money? Do you do it for personal growth (be it in art, coding, writing, music, whatever?) Or is it just a hobby?
All three. I probably wouldn't work on other people's projects if I wasn't getting paid for it because usually others' projects just don't interest me (or I feel I can't contribute in a meaningful way). But working on other people's stuff is a good way to improve yourself as they'll ask you to do stuff you wouldn't otherwise. I wouldn't have written a lot of the music I have or made any of the BGs I have without others' projects being a motivation for them.

I also want to make stuff for my own satisfaction, things people would probably never ask me to make (for money or otherwise). And those things are emotionally important to me, for lack of a better way of putting it.
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>>151830542
And here's a comparison of the raw render vs. the final paintover. Oh right... you have to wait before posting a second time... 30 seconds 26... 23... 22.... please 16... 14... 7654321 GO
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>>151830659
Can I have that shader, which summons additional trees?
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>>151830542
>>151830659
Would look much better with more aggressive shadow.
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>https://twitter.com/StarbeamStudio/status/765008922017140738

huh.
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>>151830846
~ctrl+j in photoshop~

>>151830957
Probably. I've been staring at it too long.
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>>151830542
that saturation is hurting my eyes
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>>151831304
wew
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>>151830542
>>151830659

that looks slick.

is this how normally backgrounds are done in vns? I don't know much about the process of making art.
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>>151831304
jfc that twitter is annoying
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>>151823495

Sekai Project really has set a precedent that anyone can be a publisher. I see dark days before us.
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>>151834430

Look at HRP and HB - it's obvious that they are a capable publisher, they just suffer from a terrible amount of favoritism.
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>>151834856
I didn't mean to sound like they aren't an accomplished publisher, it's just that how they appear to the public is a bunch of unprofessional dudes doing shit on a whim. Although, it finally looks like they are making an attempt to clean up their well tarnished image.
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>>151834856
both projects by the guy in charge of EVN marketing.
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>>151835191

... Did you read the sentence? I know that, hence

>they just suffer from a terrible amount of favoritism.
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>>151834856
>it's obvious that they are a capable publisher,
To whom? It just seems like they can get funds from other projects (including repurposing fan translations through minor editing) in order to fund their own ambitions like >>151835191
said.
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>>151828864
>My motivation.
A chance to voice out an unpopular opinion, learning new things and moolah.
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>>151828864
I do it because if I didn't I'd probably kill myself.
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>>151828864
>What is your motivation for making evns?

Because The Duenkhy is taking so damn long to come out I decided I might as well make my own.
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>>151828864
Because I can't count on others to do the VNs I want to read, and at the same time, understand they're potentially profitable and worth investing time/money into.
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bamb :DDD
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Am I banned?
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>>151842186
Yes, go away.
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>>151842346
Nah I'm probably going to be banned again.
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>>151842186
Yes. For being such an attention whore. Please get a trip so I can filter you.
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>>151842795
;_; Welp, hopefully I can post progress tomorrow at this time. 'nite
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>>151842186
>red army choir
Commie scum.
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PSA:

artists are a pain in the ass, everyone in the working world knows this including artists. grin and bear it or get a salaried artist
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>>151843224
What happened? Another case of artist disappearing on you?

NAME AND SHAME
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>>151842186
hownewru
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So what's new after months of my absence here? Anyone here ever done with a project?
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>>151846279
Critical hit soon.
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>>151846279
we've decided that EVNs are trash, visual novels are trash and now this is a thread dedicated to lesbian hook ups
how big are your tits
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>>151846540

>EVNs are trash

Eh, that's the usual

>visual novels are trash

Well, Evn in particular are.

>lesbian hook

Girl Scout doing something funny again?
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Nlkhfddbjlhgfsyhbfddyj
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>>151846279
I'm on 80% of myfinishing game. Most of the work I have left is artwork and some translation/renpy copy-pasting.
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>>151823920
Yes, there are. 20XX is going to be mind blowing.
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Were there any anons this year that have finished their games and shown them here?
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>>151852001
yes
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>>151830542
mostly great, but that rock by the sign looks like plastic.
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Page 10 bump
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Do you play favorites with your characters?
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Not Recommended
4.0 hrs on record
Posted: August 11
Product received for free
Artsy, overpriced, rather average visual novel that should probably be free. Lasts about 30min if you read above preschool level. @Dev if you send someone a game to look at, Don't get upset when they upload a playthrough. Here, I'll save everyone 4 bucks. Better luck next time.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DJD8QXpXcrc
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2 fast
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>>151864580
Ouch.
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>>151860847
All my girls are great, but yes. There is a main heroine with more content than the others and a true route just for her.
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>>151860847
I included my favorite character in an arc she didn't need to be in just so I could write for her some more.
Though being fair, I needed an extra character or two in it anyway and by chance she was the only one that would fit logically. So it worked out. I just have to make sure she doesn't steal the show.
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I asked for some minor changes to this one. I think it looks better now.
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>>151869223
either the girls in the back look bigger or the girls in the front look smaller
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Hey, I'm working on a NSFW VN/Adventure/Action hybrid game called Reclaim Reality; I'd link the Patreon but that's probably against the rules, so just google that name + Patreon.

The character/sprite artist is Ge-B from Katawa Shoujo, the background artist is Badriel from countless other VNs, and the game will primarily feature yuri & tentacles for the fetishes. Genre-wise, it's a blend of psychological horror/mystery/romance/science fiction.

Note on the tentacles since everyone asks; they're not organic, they're robotic, the tentacle scenes can be avoided based on gameplay skill and even if you do trigger them, you can still skip viewing them. There is no futa in the game, either.

Gameplay is going to be similar to "999: Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors", but with much more features/action/depth in gameplay.

The main gimmick is the "brain damage" system, since the entire game takes place in the main character's psyche, depending on your actions/behavior, they'll suffer brain damage in the lobe/area of the brain they're in. This damage will alter the UI/mechanics of the game and be directly based on the real world brain diseases that affect that particular part of the brain.

So for example, things like having all the faces scrambled on the character sprites (Prosopagnosia), having audio/visual hallucinations (Schizophrenia), etc. with over 50 disorders programmed into the game. Also, to clarify, the player is healthy at first.

Brain damage can be healed through various in-game mechanics, including but not limited to sex, items, etc.

A few other features; multiple endings, over 75 songs, over 15 different women to get with, they all also have tentacle scenes too, each boss fight is dramatically different action or puzzle-based gameplay, so on.

Finally, the post picture is from the game showing some of the girls from the game; we have sketches of all the character designs done too, I would link but a few of them are kind of NSFW.
Feel free to ask anything.
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>>151869583
The girls in the back are older than the girls in the front, so they are meant to look bigger.
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>>151869869
Your shilling venture on /u/ was a bust, you were told to post in /d/ and you didn't. Why is your current $7k+ not enough for you? Why must you insist on getting the backing of 4chan users?
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>>151869869
herewegoagain.jpg
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>>151869869
Does that reverse trap have huge breasts she's hiding (please say no)
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>>151869869
hi
are you single
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>>151869869
Okay, but is there a reason you're posting it here?

Do you want me to purchase this?
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>>151869869
post sprites
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>>151869869
Oh, forgot to mention, the whole game will be voiced in English similar to the way games like Dangan Ronpa/Persona do voicework (emotes and short lines, that sort of thing).
Sex scenes will of course have moans/sex sounds and all that too.
Also, some backgrounds will be "explorable" by moving around the backgrounds, and items can be used at any time in any situation; depending on when you use them, you'll get some odd/interesting responses.
Picture attached is also from the game, two sets of spritesheets.
Expecting to get a demo out by December with the first full lobe of the brain playable, multiple sex scenes, boss fight, introduction to a few characters, all that stuff.
Music is going to be primarily done by two teams; one of them did music for Magic Matchup (a game I completed back in May), and the other is the musician who did the OP for Maggot Baits (extremely NSFW game, but look that up on youtube).

>>151869997
>>151870316
I did actually post in /d/ and this game was added to the pastebin. This is the board for english visual novels, and /d/ and /aco/ both recommended I post here, so I did.

Also, $7k+ is distributed among 7 people I'm working with as well as voice actors/musicians; I get $2,000 out of that across all games, and that's enough for me to break even. (Plus, this game is going to take a lot of money to make; we're not aiming to get rich here, we're aiming to make a good game. 4chan users aren't some sort of alien beings, they're people too, lol.)

>>151870068
Which one is a reverse trap to you?

>>151870398
this post has some
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>>151869869
Honestly I would be a lot more interested if it wasn't nsfw.
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>>151870474
>Which one is a reverse trap to you?
The one that looks like a boy?
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Remember when normies shilling was just an in-joke?
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>>151870793
Nope. There's always that one faggot dev whose first post here is when their KS launches.
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ITT: people that only come here to shill.
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>>151870474
So you're advertising?

That was the gist of my question.
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>>151870529
The game isn't your normal NSFW game; not saying it's higher quality, that's up for you to decide, but I mean it's not "sex scenes every 5 minutes" and "whoops I tripped onto you and magically had my finger go up your ass and my dick in your mouth and it's A.OK!" stuff.

We're trying to make a game with the sex weaved into the plot in (generally) logical ways (even if it may not seem that way at first, plot points get revealed over time, etc.), so honestly if you were to play through the game, probably 5% of the time you're spending playing the game will be directly sexually related, and that's a really generous estimate, that's assuming you nail every single sex scene intentionally.

>>151870565
That's a matter of opinion though, but cup size-wise, from the left to the right, they're B cup, D, B, C, B, C, C, E.

>>151870793
>>151871185
>>151871219

Note I haven't asked anyone to pledge to the game, haven't linked the Patreon, anything else. I'm just informing people about an english VN on an english VN thread, so they can check it out if they want to. (I don't stop people from pirating the stuff I work on, I won't DMCA stuff, etc.)

Some people like Breeding Season might just sit on money and milk people or not really give a shit about making quality games, but we do; there's no way to really prove that because it's just my word, of course, which I do understand. We really do just want to make quality games though, but to make quality, people need to work on the game, and for people to work that are highly skilled, they're going to want money, so yes, we make money off of our games, enough to stay afloat, but definitely not enough to be rich or whatever else.

Also, multiple other generals told me to come post here, but yes, you can call it "advertising". You're still free to pirate the game and not pledge to it, and we post art like that spritesheet publicly.
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>>151871219
Why the hell are you being so coy about it? You know they are.
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>>151869869

Why do people think advertising a Katawa Shoujo dev is some holy grail of quality and interest? Having Weee on board definitely didn't help Highway Blossoms at all, and Driftwood had Rtil and the musician which was laughable. Using it as a bullet point in your shilling just makes me think you don't think your game can stand on it's own two legs and that you need some "celebrity" cred to get the attention you want for it.
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>>151871341
>We really do just want to make quality games though, but to make quality, people need to work on the game, and for people to work that are highly skilled, they're going to want money, so yes, we make money off of our games, enough to stay afloat, but definitely not enough to be rich or whatever else.
You do realize you're explaining how game development works to game developers right now, right? This thread is literally just people who make EVNs, not necessarily players. You're doing the same thing you did with /u/ and not even thinking about who you're trying to "make aware" of your project.
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>>151871341
Okay, so here's the problem.

You explicitly mentioned your Patreon with the undertone that you wanted people to support you because 7k wasn't enough.

If you want to talk about progress here, nobody's going to stop you, but if you come in with that kind of attitude you're going to be in for some shit.

Plenty of us are doing passion projects that we intend to release for free and expect no money from anyone for it, and that's the mindset you should be in as well.
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>>151871431

I want to second this, just because most people stuck to Katawa Shoujo because of "muh feels" which is a natural result of the writing. Bragging about nabbing an artist from a game known for it's writing is a joke.
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>>151871623
>This thread is literally just people who make EVNs
Incorrect.
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>>151871750
I agree people shouldn't come here to shill, but saying only free projects belong here is ridiculous.
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>>151871341
>"our game isn't like those OTHER porn projects! We're making high quality, classy porn so give us money because we NEED it!"
Also you're touting the fact that you plan to actually deliver on these projects as if its something to be proud of, not expected.
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>>151872028

I'd also like to remind you that Dischan had the same exact argument in regards to their h-content.

Dischan.
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>>151871750
>Plenty of us are doing passion projects that we intend to release for free and expect no money from anyone for it, and that's the mindset you should be in as well.
You're wrong, but I want this cunt gone too. Motivation is irrelevant so long as the only thing posted is progress. Shilling, especially as a first contact, is pathetic.
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>>151871750
I am under the impression that a Highway Blossoms wouldn't have done well without Weee's name.
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>>151871341
>not saying it's higher quality
>I mean it's not "sex scenes every 5 minutes" and "whoops I tripped onto you and magically had my finger go up your ass and my dick in your mouth and it's A.OK!" stuff.
Sure dude.
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>>151871431
Not that it's a holy grail, I just figured people would want to know who was working on the game, and if I just say "Ge-B is working on it", inevitably people would ask "who is that? have they done anything else before?".
It also shows that we're working with people who have worked on/completed games before, which in a "post Breeding Season" situation on Patreon, would give people more faith that we're not just doing this as our first project and we're going to abandon it two months down the road.

I can't honestly say I know who Weee is, or Highway Blossoms/Driftwood, but I do know Rtil and I had no idea they abandoned a project, which is kind of surprising.

Definitely not that the game can't stand on its own; I wouldn't be a part of any project that I thought was anything less than quality. (The number of game projects I've started up and never made Patreons for because I didn't have faith in the game being quality/being completed is pretty high; I only make a Patreon for something if I'm extremely confident the game will be quality and will be completed.)

>>151871623
I realize this, but I was replying to some of the posts that seem shocked that we need money for said game. Not everyone who posts in here is a developer (many people come to threads like this just to see progress on games), which is why I responded specifically to the people who got upset about "shilling", and not in a general message. Assuming that every single person that checks this thread is a game developer is insanity, honestly. Probably only 5% of the people who actually check this thread (not posters) are game devs.
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>>151872024
>>151872189
I never said that only free projects belong here, I said that was the mindset you should be in to post here because otherwise you're just going to come across as someone in it for money which really seems to be the case here
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Everybody's trying to make tasteful and logical sex but what the EVN scene really needs is more batshit crazy stupid nukige where semen is a lifesaving substance and the like.
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>>151872261
>I was replying to some of the posts that seem shocked that we need money for said game.
They're shocked you'd come here for advertising.

>Assuming that every single person that checks this thread is a game developer is insanity, honestly. Probably only 5% of the people who actually check this thread (not posters) are game devs.
If you want advice on marketing, here is some: take time to read threads and understand board culture before going any further. You're an outsider and speaking out of things you don't understand at all right now. Unless you're trying to get a "personal army" negative response to your project, cut it out.
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>>151872261

Just more proof that you have no idea who you're talking to. English visual novel development is a relatively niche audience and already know of artists like Ge-B without you needing to coddle us. Likewise, we're intimately familiar with other games released and know what we can learn from them while you remain blissfully ignorant on the matter. The fact that you know who Ge-B is but not Weee is honestly dumbfounding and it definitely tells me that you're in the wrong place to be shilling your patreon.
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Did breeding season really make people lose faith in patreon (for porn games) that much?
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>>151872562
When did /evn/ become a place for highbrow critical discussion and intimate knowledge of every game that's out?
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>>151871750
Where do you keep getting 7k from? Again, only 2k of it even goes to me, and that's across all games; those other games need money/work too. (Also never even mentioned/said "7k isn't enough"?) If you want to do free projects that's perfectly fine, but assuming you'll find a team of skilled musicians, voice actors, programmers, artists, writers, etc. that are all perfectly willing to work full time for free is ridiculous.

There are people who work for free who ARE skilled, but yeah, the chances of assembling an entire team of people who can afford to work full time and get a game out in a reasonable time frame are going to need money to survive. Katawa Shoujo took over 10 years because everyone worked for free AFAIK; we want this game done in under 3 years, which is going to take full time work.

>>151872028
It's not that it's something to be proud of, it's that the community as a whole always assumes the worst when it comes to anything on Patreon ever being completed. It SHOULD be the norm that projects get completed, and it SHOULD be expected, absolutely.

>>151872189
So if it's a free project, it's perfectly okay to post in here about said project for your first time? That honestly makes no sense and would directly indicate that "making money on a game is bad", when again, the money is to make the project come out sometime this decade and with high quality.

>>151872243
I mean, you're free to play the demo when it comes out for free, and then be the judge of if I've lived up to my word about this not being a fap-fest. I don't want to make glorified hentai galleries, lol.
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>>151872692
It always was. We just disguise it in bantz and lesbian hookup culture.
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>>151872708
You're out of touch to the point of absurdity.

Please stop and go back to being anonymous.
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>>151872708
>So if it's a free project, it's perfectly okay to post in here about said project for your first time?
Literally the opposite.

Making it real fucking simple for you: post progress, don't post anything that isn't progress. We don't care about anything that isn't progress.
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>>151872609
No, people still backed breeding season 2.0
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>>151869869
>>151870474
>>151871341
>>151872261
>>151872261
>>151872708

Advertising your game on 4chan is like the worst idea ever(not to mention its against the rules). Seriously stop, it will hurt you in the longer process. Sharing your progress and whining how hard devlife is acceptable.
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>>151872708
You keep mentioning Katawa Shoujo but don't even know who Weee is, this is making you look pretty bad.
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>>151872708
>Katawa Shoujo took over 10 years
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>>151872265
>If you prefer to get some money out of your passion project, you are a sellout.
Nice strawman, sweet summer child.
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>>151871341
>The game isn't your normal NSFW game; not saying it's higher quality, that's up for you to decide, but I mean it's not "sex scenes every 5 minutes" and "whoops I tripped onto you and magically had my finger go up your ass and my dick in your mouth and it's A.OK!" stuff.

>We're trying to make a game with the sex weaved into the plot in (generally) logical ways (even if it may not seem that way at first, plot points get revealed over time, etc.), so honestly if you were to play through the game, probably 5% of the time you're spending playing the game will be directly sexually related, and that's a really generous estimate, that's assuming you nail every single sex scene intentionally.

Okay yeah good for you but speaking personally it's not what I would want out of a 999-esque game. NSFW content would just be an unwelcome distraction from what makes that genre appealing.
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>>151872265
If we were in this solely for the money, we would be shutting down piracy as best we could, would put the free demo behind a paywall, would not show any of the art to the public, and definitely would not be digging into our own savings to hire musicians/voice actors.

We also would have a lot more "high paying" fetishes, like furry, bestiality, so forth in there that rake in the dough. We definitely wouldn't be doing the odd combination of yuri/tentacles either.

Right now, I'm just above $2,000 after I get the income from all three patreons in, while working 12+ hours a day, 6 days a week, which calculates out to below minimum wage where I live. The people working on this could be (and have made) obscene money on other projects; if we were really in it for the money, we picked a horrible industry and a lot of bad choices in terms of game fetishes to do it on, lol.

>>151872509
>>151872562
Again, multiple boards recommended it.
I'm fairly sure (as other posts have even confirmed) barely anyone who reads the thread is a game dev. People who post in it, sure, but you do realize that many, many people read threads without ever posting in them, right?
(Also, even if you are a game dev, does that for some reason mean you don't want to hear about other projects and possibly network with said other people?)

>>151872609
Yeah, actually.

>>151872809
I probably will, but do note that you are also out of touch; you're ignoring multiple posts in the thread that confirm that not everyone here is a developer, and not everyone here thinks projects need to all be free and such.

>>151872910
So you want people to post progress without announcing a project in the first place? How would you know where the progress is from?

>>151872916
Sadly, despite it being horribly buggy/badly designed, yeah.

>>151873073
Okay, will share progress, but won't whine about devlife, cause there are much worse jobs out there, lol.
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>>151873073
It's fine to a point, if you're one of us and post updates here and there in our threads you are very welcome here. We like to see sketches, finished art, WiP concepts. But if you hit and quit us, we'll remember it. It happens a lot.
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>>151872708
>musicians
Who's doing that? Didn't see anyone on the credit list.
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Where the fuck are the mods?
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>>151873302
Dude you seriously couldn't be more oblivious.

You showed up here, gave everyone a quick rundown of your project, then went 'o i have a patreon but i wont link it ;^)'

You cannot fucking expect everyone to react positively to this.

If you want to talk about progress and get feedback, cool, go for it. If you want to advertise, which has once again been the undercurrent since you've shown up, you're in the wrong place because plenty of people here who post regularly are developing things and don't have a ton of money of their own.

You're just not getting it.
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>>151873073
Except we've had many people here advertise their games and post kickstarters/patreons/etc without such a visceral response, because they were regulars. People were even trying to devise wacky schemes to help advertise Walkerman's KS.
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>>151873079
Not having intimate knowledge of all the games in an industry doesn't = ability to make games. I did mention why I mentioned Katawa Shoujo in the first place, it wasn't for street cred.

>>151873130
Game started in 2000, was finished in 2012.

>>151873207
Understandable then.

>>151873398
Every thread I've posted in, I continue to post in it, with the exception of people who just complain when I post in it, so as to avoid causing stress for other people in the thread, I don't post on those anymore. I still post in /aco/, /dgg/, and /agdg/ as well as using the discord on agdg. Definitely not going to hit and quit, but will probably be on anon from this post onwards until more progress is posted.

>>151873530
A combination of http://www.cylightstudios.com/ and the guy who did the OP for Maggot Baits; I'd link it here but the video is NSFW, so just youtube it to hear the song/musician I'm talking about.
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>>151873302
As a game dev who was in the thread and replied to you on /u/ and here, you're going about this entirely the wrong way. You don't go into a general with the mindset of "how much money can these people give me", you either do it with the mindset of "I hope I can contribute to this community" or not at all. Also, only give out information when people ask for it, don't do it without anyone wanting it.
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>>151873680
>I'd link it here but the video is NSFW,
Are you new to 4chan? You can link NSFW content. There's literally nothing stopping you.
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/evn/ is so alive, almost makes me want to work
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>>151873302
>would put the free demo behind a paywall
How can anyone think this would be a good decision? I want to monetarize the fuck out of my stuff, and even I would never do something so counterproductive.

.
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>>151873680
>Game started in 2000, was finished in 2012.
That's fucking wrong, you retard. The illustrations were made in 2000. It was never going to be a game until 4chan started talking about the illustrations around 07.

If you're working with a guy from there, the least you could do is fucking ask them so you don't say stupid shit.
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>>151873302
>Yeah, actually.
>Sadly, despite it being horribly buggy/badly designed, yeah.
So where do you see people less trusting in patreon if even that got backed?
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>only 5% of the thread is devs
Really?

http://www.strawpoll.me/11001233
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>>151873302
>So you want people to post progress without announcing a project in the first place?
This is what every dev who first posted here has done. You post often enough and people will ask, and then you tell. Don't do it from the outset.
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>>151873680
4chan didn't even exist in 2000.
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>>151873660
he didn't link his patreon because it's against the rules
jesus christ the anti-shill paranoid brigade is out in full force today
he posted about his game, didn't ask for money. people see patreon and ignore everything else the person writes, god damn

>>151873769
he didn't go into here with that mindset, stop being a paranoid sheep. how can people ask for information without them announcing the project, my brain
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>>151873974
>he didn't go into here with that mindset, stop being a paranoid sheep. how can people ask for information without them announcing the project, my brain
He's been doing the same shit all over 4chan for about a week now. Are you falseflagging for them or just gullible?
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>>151873974
>how can people ask for information without them announcing the project, my brain

exactly in the same way as we have done with other devs?
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>>151873801
NSFW content is prohibited on blue boards >>151873852
That's still 5 years and with the designs started for a short as fuck game >>151873878 furries will buy anything
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>>151852001
I did.
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>>151874137
Linking to it is not, you idiot.
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>>151873936
Are you serious? Who are you? This is the dumbest shit I've heard in a long time.

>>151874091
And? I've seen it too, he's never asked for money. He just announced the game on the relevant boards. Are you just an anti-patreon person like all the other plebs?
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Why mention the patreon in the first post if not for money? Link us to the game's website or blog or even lemma thread.
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>>151874137
>furries will buy anything
So that project imploding didn't change anything.
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>>151874356
>And? I've seen it too, he's never asked for money. He just announced the game on the relevant boards. Are you just an anti-patreon person like all the other plebs?
He literally mentioned the Patreon right off.
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>>151874356
Put your trip back on, you samefagging to whiteknight yourself is even worse.
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>>151874137
Katawa Shoujo is many things, but short as fuck is not one of them.
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>>151874356
Are you his mom or what
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>>151874356
You guys need to get someone else in charge of marketing. You sound like you're from the same team and also have no knowledge of the thread. This is as bad as that BL game's advertising attempt. Turned me off to both games that I otherwise would've been receptive to.
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>>151875024
That BL anon better still be around, she promised me she would be.
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>>151874372
Wanted to clarify this; the game's Patreon IS the website for it. The only other place I could possibly link to where I post anything about the game is my Tumblr which is covered in NSFW content, and according to blue board rules I thought you couldn't even link NSFW content, but apparently >>151874218 indirectly clarified that for me.

Having a separate blog for every project I'm on would be a clusterfuck (having to have separate Patreons is bad enough), so I just post everything on http://hentaiwriter.tumblr.com .

Also, according to that strawpoll, while it's early results, it looks like that's a good deal higher percentage-wise of devs here than readers, so okay, I'll admit my mistake on that.

I'll only really post here responding to other people's games and won't mention mine anymore unless there's progress to post.

>>151874510
The above chunk of text is why I mentioned the Patreon; I figured linking my Tumblr was against the rules, and even if I did, it's covered in posts from multiple projects, not just this one. The Patreon is where a much larger summary of the game and it's mechanics/features are listed, as well as the main place content/updates for the game are posted, so that's my mistake in not clarifying that's why I linked it (and have done so for all other places I've posted it on 4chan).

Finally, going with the "ok to link NSFW things" stuff; http://imgur.com/a/Vyjxf is all the current character designs.
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Man, I should start a Patreon to afford an internet defense force for when I shill in development communities too.

Surely that's a great way to spend the remaining 4 hours of my day, after 8 of sleep and 12 of hard work on what I call vanilla yuri but has tentacle rape. I mean, why try and learn how places work before I post if I can just shit all over the userbases and make myself look like a cunt but someone defends me anyway?

and end my sentences with lol.
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>>151875168
I've seen sketches of dudes kissing posted here from time to time. I thought those were hers? I don't follow BL stuff, so dunno, maybe not.
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>>151875234
>I'll only really post here responding to other people's games and won't mention mine anymore unless there's progress to post.
This is how it should have been, if you'd lurked more before posting you could have easily avoided all this grief. Also, this is 4chan so expect everyone to hold this against you whenever you post normally from now on.
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>>151875234
Did you do the character design briefs and the artist drew them? I like the MC's outfit.
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Soo...uhm. Post your today's progress guys. Even if it's just a small thing.
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If I base my story on some scientific theory that was formulated by x guy in his papers, and obviously in the story I go on to explain the theory since the game is based on that, is that legally fine?

Like, there's no copyright on scientific theories, right? Once he publishes books and papers explaining stuff, I can just use it?
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>>151875374
Nah thats MLanon.
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>>151875274
>end my sentences with lol.
It's weird. I can put up with him antagonizing the thread with those long ass reply posts, but the lol part bugs me more than anything.
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>>151875686
there is not the slightest problem with doing something like that unless that paper is potentially behind a paywall and you're giving out the content they want to be paid for
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>>151875686
I'm pretty sure it's fine in Europe. Dunno about US, you can get a copyright claim about basically everythig.
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>>151875684
Not yet, our thread is almost at bump limit. May as well let this drama shit kill it before that.
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>>151875234
>http://hentaiwriter.tumblr.com
>infinite scrolling
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

WHY DOES EVERYONE HATE PERFECTLY FUNCTIONAL PAGES
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>>151875798
Well I mean, scientific articles are usually published on pay to read publications and even divulgation literature isn't free, so...
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>>151875686
That sounds pretty interesting, what's the theory about?
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>>151875684
Nah, already did yesterday. I need about two weeks to build up the strength required to embarrass myself again.
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>>151875686
Where are you pulling your source from? If it's a commercial game, you may as well just contact and ask for permission before hand.
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>>151870793
I want to go back
it's like my home country has been invaded
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Should have mentioned I'd also post if people asked questions, which I feel is fair as people mentioned that's fine here too.

>>151875594
Pretty much, but the way I design characters with the artist goes more like;
1) I do a basic writeup of the character, intentionally vague, just a general idea
2) The artist does an initial sketch/design
3) I take that initial design and refine the character's traits based on the design some, so the personality matches the design as much as possible
4) Then they take this new information and refine their design further
5) I do a few more character personality adjustments for this final sketch and we're done. Thanks for the compliment :)

>>151875686
This should be fine, yeah.

>>151875771
I do the "lol" thing because with the way I type, people generally think I've came off as a hardass or way too serious before, so it became a force of habit a long while back to show when I'm not entirely serious (or the person who I'm writing to needs to relax some, either one)

>>151875916
If there's some way to fix that on Tumblr, let me know, I'd be happy to fix it, because I don't like it either.
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>>151876106
Nobody posted anything embarrassing yesterday, anon. You're too self conscious.
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>>151875984
yeah, I just mean if it's a scholarly source and they really don't want anyone reading it

you know, like those generic accesses to websites that colleges purchase

if it's just a book or paper that's really out there, nobody's going to care
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>>151875993
>>151876135
Actually I guess theory is a bad word, though the case is similar. I've been thinking of writing a story set on mars and I've been reading up on proposed plans to colonize it to have an idea of the situation and setting.

I've read up on the Mars Direct plan and it sounds very interesting so I would like to use it as a base. Since that's the setting, and the setting would be one of the bigger points of such a story, I would have to go in depth abouth certain things as I've read them from the author of the plan in his book.

>>151876393
So it should be fine I guess.
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>>151876501
>Mars Direct: A Simple, Robust, and Cost Effective Architecture for the Space Exploration
Initiative
This one? If I've got the right website they link a full report pdf for free, so there should be no problem.
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>>151876393
Can't you circumvent it somehow? I mean, as long as you don't go into the specific math it should be fine.
If you need the reader to actually solve some quantum mechanics ecuations, you'll be my hero but probably nobody else would read your stuff.
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>>151876393
>>151876878
now kiss
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>>151876243
I think it differs between themes, I looked at mine and I don't even have an option to turn on infinite scroll.
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>>151876878
He could do it in the hard mode of the game, I guess.
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>>151876749
Yeah that's the one, or rather I read the book by the same author based on that for divulgation. I'm guessing it's fine then.
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>>151876243
iirc from my days of web dev, it's a javascript thing. The script detects when the user is close to the end of the page and loads new content. If you delete the part of the script that does that, you should be fine. Althought if you do that you'll need to add a navigation bar somewhere in your page for people to access you older stuff.

Unless tumblr doesn't allow you to manually edit stuff (can't tell, never used it), but I doubt it.
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>tfw you finally finish looping the songs that came unlooped
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>leave dead thread for 30 minutes
>some shill making more money than most devs do per game sparks 100 posts

i think i prefer dead
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Someone not on mobile make a new thread plz.
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>>151878154
are there any tricks to that? I'll have to do the same sooner or later.
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>>151878629
We all do. No posts = better than just shit posts.
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>>151878694
For some I couldn't find looped versions of, I just went into Audacity and meticulously pinpointed spots that sounded similar to accomplish looping within ren'py itself

For the others I used the original source
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>those long winded tl:dr replies to every single minicule post
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>>151879423
>accomplish looping within ren'py itself
>within ren'py itself
You mean, like, cutting the song at certain point and replaying from another point withing renpy, instead of editing it with another program?
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>>151879771
Yeah.

The way I've done it is cut the song off at a predetermined point, then use ren'py like this:

play music "<loop 30.897>music/file.flac"
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>>151880185
ah cool, must be a new thing I missed
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