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/TLHG/ - The Loud House General Give Yourself Edition >B

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/TLHG/ - The Loud House General
Give Yourself Edition

>Booru:
http://tlb.booru.org

>Fanfics:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=2

>Thread Archive:
http://pastebin.com/h2ZBJ3GS

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>Episodes:
http://pastebin.com/KM6yNJpe

>Extras:
http://pastebin.com/59KNQH3Z

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News:

>Paramount making The Loud House Movie due 2020
http://deadline.com/2017/03/spongebob-loud-house-sherlock-gnomes-1202054433

>New Books & DVD Announced
http://nickalive.blogspot.com/2017/03/new-loud-house-books-and-dvd-announced.html

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Upcoming Episodes:
PROMO: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AORppwwaQrs

Back Out There (6/12)
>Clyde, worried that Lincoln is hung up on Ronnie Anne, decides to try and cure his post-breakup blues.

Fool's Paradise (6/13)
>The Loud family believes that they are safe from pranks on April Fool's Day, because prankster Luan is away at camp.

Potty Mouth (6/14)
>After hearing Lily curse, the siblings worry about being a bad influence, and become determined to change their behavior

L is for Love (6/15)
>When a love letter shows up at the house addressed only to ``L,'' the family tries to figure out the intended recipient
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An older Lily is a cute Lily!
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>>9779758
and he is escalating down
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>>9779810
What does it mean, anon?
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>>9779891
just another /trash/ day
don't worry about that
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She's a treasure
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cute uncut lincoln log
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>>9780180
Fic where Anon asks for Tai Lopez's knowledge to get his favorite girl WHEN!?
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CCs you'd try to fuck if we had a meetup?
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>>9780181
What did this guy write again?
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>>9780229
Chris Savino
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>>9780229
He knows
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trans
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>>9780282
-parent
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>>9780233
Some shitty greentext from the last thread.
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>/tlhg/ meet up at a bar
>a few people are on their phones positing in the thread
>someone calls Luan worst girl in the thread
>"WHO THE FUCK POSTED THAT!?"
>"I did bro! You got a fuckin' problem!?"
>"Kill yourself!"
>"Suck my cock dude!"
>bar fight ensues
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>>9780229
The sad LeniXAnon one.
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>>9780332
Sounds like fun.
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>>9780332
>Every sisterfag has their own table
>Lisa's table is empty
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>>9780282
But would Rocky bottom for her?
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>>9780233
Oh, nothing good. That's for sure.
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>>9780332
>Someone says Leni is shit
>Some lenifag rips out a bomb and proceeds to yell lenibomb
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>>9780229
Puffinguy.
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Is it time to bully more CCs?
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>>9779758
>>9779891
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=63290697

http://img.booru.org/tlb//images/38/2f00caf0467ca6399f15a12c2502e074ef261ef5.jpg
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>>9780364
Nah, he'd put a cockring on her balls and fuck her ass raw while she begs him to let her cum, all the while loving the feeling of denial and being Rockys faggy little bitch.
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>>9780419
I could go for some writefage bullying.
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>>9780419
I'll bully you benis, you baggot
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>>9780428
I'm not even against lewd older Lilys
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>>9780428
I hope he makes more
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>>9780403
>The guy is muslim
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>>9780364
I guess you could say if he did that he would've really reached rock bottom.
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>>9780364
>letting a tranny top you
At that point in his life, you can say he's reached Rock bottom!
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Who is your favorite rapper so i can tell you why it's wrong?
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>>9780485
>>9780493
Stupid minds think alike huh?
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>>9780517
parapa
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>>9780419
>May
That's Sapphire, ya dingus.

https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Sapphire_(Adventures)
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>>9780364
If Rocky truly loved her he'd let her top him.
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>You thought it was going to be one of the sisters.
>But it was actually him, Dio.
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>>9780419
BULLY THEM
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>>9780538
hmm, you know, maybe it's me who is wrong.
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>>9780549
jokes on you I got this from a gts doujinshi
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CCs who are NOT for bully?
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>>9780563
MUDA
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>>9780485
>>9780493
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>>9780563
Epic JoJoke, dude.
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>>9780589
the weird ones who sit alone at lunch
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>>9780485
>>9780493
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>>9780355
>the Lynn and Leni tables are massive
>Luan table is trying to be just as relevant as them but they're bullied by the bigger two
>Luna guys are all stoned out of their minds
>Lorifags sit quietly until someone throws a bottle and a fight breaks out
>Lucyfags are strangling the transposter and apologizing to the other tables for his interrupting behavior
>Twinfags share a table and debate best sister
>Lisafags stand in a corner because there is only three
>Lilyfags run around the whole bar causing nothing but trouble
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what if a sister caught RA sniffing Lincoln's undies
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>>9780640
Pedozilla is the only one at the lily table
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>>9780563
Unf, nice.
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Dios mios! I have cancer
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>>9780643
lori would ask her if she wanted more
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>>9780332
Do CCs get their own table?
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>>9780669
I'm sorry, you didn't get it sooner. :^(
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who else curbs their friends to waste away alone? i feel so bad, but i just really want to die desu
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>>9780706
they get the vip lounge
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>>9780706
Yeah, but all they do is stroke their own egos, and let other people treat them like gods.
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>>9780669
calvos sexuales sovieticos
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>>9780332
I'd love to see this.
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>>9780332
What a lovely meeting.
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>>9780738
That doesn't sound right.
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>>9780738
Sounds pretty accurate
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I saw some fanart for a fic where there were two Ritas sitting on Lincoln's bed, does anybody know the fic?
Seems like something I could fap to
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>>9780801
>all the literal who CCs have to sit in the back
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>>9780738
You're aware that not every CC acts like that, right?
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>>9780835
Did I say every CC acts that why?
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CCs who don't have an ego
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>>9780868
Most of them. The main one that does is Ultra.
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>"H-hey Lincoln. What do you think of my glasses? They aren't nerdy, right? Ha..."
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>>9780868
None of them
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>>9780923
Lynn becomes a fucking nerd when?
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>>9780923
>>9780943
BULLY HER
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>>9780943
second this
lincoln makes her feel better about it
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>>9780835
Nope they think all of us are cunts if we say anything negative we're shit. We say anything positive we're just sucking up. There's some exceptions but for the most part anons don't want to here us talk. That's why someone says they like what I post I say glad you enjoyed it. If they give criticism I'll listen and usually respond. If they tell me I suck or should kill myselfi ignore it, unless they add something that can help me better myself like actual criticism.
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>>9780923
>I told you not to show your face around here unless you bring me your brothers undies you fucking nerd
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>>9780866
Yes, actually.
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To the guy who wanted more Luana, here's some, but
http://img.booru.org/tlb//images/38/0f063488022943522a389608190db1b46c2b8c9a.jpg
>Palcomix
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>>9780969
Then please go ahead and show me where I said that "That every CC acts that way".
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>>9781026
>Yeah, but all they do is stroke their own egos, and let other people treat them like gods.
Never said any DIDN'T act like this. Lack of omission.
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>>9780967
You're a fuckin' nerd too.
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>>9780364
Seeing that Lucy was only attracted to Rocky for his looks, it's safe to to say once he ages and starts looking like his brother Lucy will stop lusting after him. Rocky won't even get the chance.
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>>9780923
>>9780943
>Lynn has to wear glasses
>Somehow manages to instantly become much weaker than before
>Is now mediocre at best at all sports
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>>9781078
not my taquito
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Quien mas cree que Chris Savino tiene huge incesto fetish?
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>>9781072
Yes any CC that would go to the table that's only for CCs to be at, all of those CCs would is start stroking their ego.
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>>9781109
You can speak ching chong all you like as long as I can understand "incest ferish."
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>>9781131
That makes sense.
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>>9781091
I thought it was also because he spooked her and because he liked her fake blood.
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If Bubsy was able to come back, do you think one day Ronnie Anne will?
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>>9781157
Nope it was lust at first sight.
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>>9781131
That don't make no sense
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does she love Rocket Power
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>>9781171
Who and who?
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>>9781171
>Alolan Meowth
...Yeah, that works. How does she feel about it's evolved form, though?
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>>9781197
Then why else would a bunch CCs sit at a table for CCs only instead of being with everyone else? To not stroke their egos? That's very unlikely.
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>>9781219
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RHdrmZsNs0
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As a CC, i can pretty much confirm that all CC's are mentally ill.
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>>9781171
>If Bubsy was able to come back
citation needed
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>>9781272
>Implying anyone who posts here isn't mentally ill
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>>9781272
even me?
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>>9781171
Forget Ronnie Anne, I want Bobby back.
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>>9781283
yes :/
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>>9781253
Did they really bring back Bubsy become of the hype he got in Sonic Forces?
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>>9781283
Especially you.
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>>9781310
>>9781332
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>>9780923
>>9781078
There's a fic hidden somewhere in these two pics.
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>>9780332
>Post yfw it's revealed that the fag who keeps posting the Luan hate pasta is Nicolas Cage himself.
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>>9781274
>>9781253
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>>9781091
>Cheerleader Lucy
I need more of this.
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>>9781363
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>>9781363
I guess he shitposts on /tlhg/ instead of accepting bad roles now
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>>9781091
It looks like two ghosts are sucking the life force out of her head and two fluffy monsters are eating her hands.
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Reminder that Luan is confirmed best girl and no pasta can contradict that.
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>>9781387
Do we agree that he was great in Kick Ass, right?
pic unrelated
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why is she so sad
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>>9781440
>>9781378
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>>9781363
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>>9781460
Isn't that from the fic where she got raped? I remember the rapist killed her lizard in that.
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>>9780979
>Palcomix
>That nigga has 10 years as artist
>It's still shit
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>>9780923
>>9780943
>>9780962
Yes please
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>>9780979
Nice, I like what he did to Luan's hair antenna.
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http://www.strawpoll.me/13143385
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>>9780332
>someone says that Lynn is shit
>everyone laughs and agrees while a few spergs plan to murder the entire bar
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>>9781546
You know, yeah, that's actually pretty neat.
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>>9781588
You wouldn't see me there, what if some sperg brings chlorine gas?
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>>9781588
See I feel like you'd go to that and end up coming home and be too disgusted to even come back to /TLHG/
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https://twitter.com/JaredMorgan/status/872869890209624064
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>>9781368
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>>9781628
Christ
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>>9780517
Sean Daley
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>>9781628
The_binding_of_Lincoln.jpg
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>>9781628
this guy's art is cool
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>>9781667
One image is never enough.
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>>9781669
Not even his weirdest Lincoln
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>>9781755
unf nice
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>>9781691
god loves ugly is and the early atmosphere are great yes, but i hate the direction he's gone in, especially the instrumentals. Ant needs to get back to grimy samples + drum machines
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>>9781738

http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=Lucy_Loud%2C+cheerleader
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>>9781883
Best image
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>>9780640
>Luna guys are all stoned out of their minds
Good thing I'm a Lunafag, I'd love this.
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>>9781833
I agree with you on that. Fishing blues wasn't his best work. Hell, half of the singles he's released in the past few years have been hit and miss.
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>>9781966
truly it would be the best table
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>>9780332
Glad I'll finally go one on one with each one of you degenerates. I will fucking sword the shit out of anyone.
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>>9780868
I'm considered a literal who writer but I do not. I just try to have fun with whatever stupid crap I write.
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>>9782128
Your sword is shit compared to superior GUN
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>>9782172
Then I will get an upgrade
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Please keep it down. Ronnie is trying to sleep.
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>>9782203
Crossbows don't count.
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>>9782209
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>>9782209
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>9782209
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>>9782240
Fucking kek.
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>>9782240
Love it.
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>>9782240
My sides
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HOLY FUCK
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smelly loud feet
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Could someone write some Lana abuse?
I actually like Lana I just want to read some incredibly edgy shit
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>>9782376
poorly drawn feet
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>>9782209
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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>>9782209
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V4jH0WeV67I
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>>9782376
Why are some so simple and some so detailed? Compare Luna's to Luan's for example.
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>>9782376
unf that lily
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CCs who would block you
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>>9782376
Lucy's are cute.
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>>9782445
earlier episode vs later episodes
same season
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>>9782464
Don't be fooled. Those are trans feet.
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>>9782376
>lynn's got two left feet
worst sister and deformed. holy shit
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>>9782467
Same episode and Luan's feet still looks better.
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>>9782509
what if im gay tho
oWo
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>>9782526
kill yourself
LYNNCOLN STRONK
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>>9782526
And yet she's still a sport prodigy, Lynn is the best.
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>when your GF's fetish is bondage and you're just not into it
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>"Hi Anon. So, change of plans. I'll actually be able to come visit later tonight! I just wanted to call you before I started driving. That's not too short notice, is it?"
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>>9782240
kek
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>>9782686
>when your side-girl is into it too
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>>9782717
I want Lori to drive for hours just to meet me halfway at a hotel.
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Lana with a vore fetish when?
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>>9782765
Fuck, now I want to see dom Leni walking around in public with a completely immobilized in bondage gear Lincoln as her purse.
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>>9782908
As much as scat disgusts me, I actually think scat would fit her character better
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>"Come on luv, don't be scared. I'm just getting rid of competition that's all."
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Lincoln's nen abilities: he would have a very basic enhancement fighting style. His emmission and transmutation abilities would focus more on defensive things.such as giving his aura the
properties of springs or some durable material. Or making nen barriers.

Lori:?
Leni: leni would just enhance her vision as a means to pick good materials for her fashion projects.

Luna:she would probably just use her abilities to manipulate sound waves. Or electrical gear

Luan: she would transmute her nen into having the properties of springs, or other bouncy things.

Lynn:?

Lucy: ?

Lana:?

Lola:?

Lisa: simple enough, she would just conjure vials of basic chemicals or tools for her mechanical endeavours

Lily:?
Lynn sr:?
Rita:?
Bobby:?
Ronnie:?
Clyde:?
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>>9782938
What is this?
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>>9782947
owo
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>>9782929
Stop calling me "luv"
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>>9782947
Hunter x hunter crossover ideas.mostly for their abilities.
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>>9782961
Oh. Carry on.
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>>9782717
>"Not at all, Lori. The sooner you and Bobby get here, the better. it feels like ages since you two have come over to visit."
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Goodnight
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>>9783017
gn
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>E3
>new episodes
GET HYPE
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>>9783040
Can't wait for the former, to be honest. I wanna see what Nintendo's got up its sleeves this year. To be honest, I'm hoping for more details on Pokemon Ultra Sun/Ultra Moon.
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>>9783111
>I wanna see what Nintendo's got up its sleeves this year.
Likely just ports of 5 year old games, that will anger their fanbase
Even though Nintendo fans desperately want a port of Pokemon Sun and Moon
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>>9783009
Thats what i got thus far
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>>9783111
Personally, I was hoping for Diamond and Pearl remakes. Haven't played any Gen VII games yet.
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>"What's wrong, daddy?"
>in a sweet effeminate voice
>daddy
F-fuck.
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>>9783040
This pretty much. It's going to be a great week.
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>>9783249
>you will never be a co-worker of Lynn Loud and see this qt on TYDTWD
why even live?
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>>9783249
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>>9783249
Clearly Lincoln is the superior Loud.
He can be whatever you need him to be.
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>>9783249

I want to unload myself in trap Lincoln's boipussy.
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>>9783437
>Superior Loud
>Doesn't have a vagina
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>>9783436
I really wish ManiacPaint didn't have such a rough sketching style.
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>>9783457
>not lusting after that sacred boygina

What are you, gay?
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Today I bought this masterpiece and Watchmen noir.
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>>9783249
unf
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>>9783559
Loud House is better
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>>9783249
What would Lincoln want you to do to him? Asking for a friend, of course h-haha.
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>>9783249
transvestite linc is best linc
>>
non-lewd ideas for fics?
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>>9783706
Leni and Lynn exercising.
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>>9783706
None that matter.
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>>9783559
>Greedy Suit: lets reprint/color correct some comics/movies in black and white and call it "noir", I'm sure some hipsters will buy it
>people actually fall for this meme
Tsk, tsk.
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>>9783706
RA bullying one of the younger sisters
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>>9783706
Ronnie Anne is Lincoln's half sister, drunk lynn sr fuck Maria
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>>9783706
Lincoln taking Lucy to a comicbook convention
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>>9783706
Ronnie sneaking into the Loud House to steal Lincoln's victory undies (or setting up a prank) and having to avoid all the sisters
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>>9783706
>non-lewd
Disgusting.
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>>9783706
Lana and Lola are lost in another city while Lincoln took care of them. Now lincoln needs to find them before her parents or sisters notice it
>Lola and lana had a fight
>each one is lost in a different place
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>>9783796
Seconding
>>
>>9783796
Thirding.
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>>9783706
Lincoln becomes a Pokemon trainer and his sisters are Gym Leaders
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>>9783796
fourthing but only if she comes out as trans at the convention
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>>9783706
lana fucking dies
>>
drawing ideas for the game characters?
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>>9783706
>Bobby and RA get deported
>Lori, Lincoln, Bobby and RA need to act as a young family to cress the boarder back to the states
>but not before they get in deep with a drug baron who provided them with fake passports in exchange for drug mule services
Source: TLH Season 9
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>>9783882
Fifthing but only if you kill yourself at the end of the story. Would be the happiest ending possible!
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>>9779741
Im bored /tlhg/ gimme some thicc fics to read.
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>>9783873
Lincoln engages in a Pokemon battle with Lisa and defeats her. She gets salty and starts obsessing over trying to defeat him.
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>>9783918
Lincoln and Clyde ERPing with each other after Clyde convinces Lincoln it's okay.
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>>9783706
Carol playing an mmo with Lincoln and luring him into a secluded area
he tries to keep his rape a secret
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>>9783706
>Lincoln starts asking Leni for advice on things he would usually ask his other sisters
>The sisters, upset that Lincoln stopped trusting them with help, try to figure out how Leni remarkably manages to help him out no matter what he asks
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>>9783706
Lincoln trying to teach his sisters to LARP
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>>9783706
I'm not writing these by the way, this is for anyone who wants to do it.
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>>9783154
Anyone got ideas for nen abilities
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>>9783918
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/9422798/#q9425518
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>>9783627
That's the joke.
>>9783770
I'm inking a friend's comic, so I bought this just to compare it to the normal version and know more about the use of ink.

Also, I'm not a big fan of the color in the original and it was really cheep for a hardcover.
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ANON - Update and New Chapters List (MO4444R!)
>https://pastebin.com/DMPFQ29u

HIGHLIGHTED FIC OF THE DAY
>>Lincoln Quest (CYOA)<<
Author: feebop
Hiatus - http://pastebin.com/e6me3Mdc
Last Update: 23-11-2016
>Lincoln attempts to perform quests for his sisters, despite increasingly lascivious and sinister intentions forcing their way into his mind.

NEWS & Q/A

>He's Back
https://pastebin.com/d1MngwzV
Thicc And Tired
The-Lizard

>Updates
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12465927/5/Avoiding-Estrangement
Twisteddarkness225
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12201839/33/Stories-And-Tales-From-Dimension-63
Omega Ultra
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12468002/8/Lincoln-s-Addiction
TormentedRaven2000
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12153129/193/One-shot-collection
nightmareking
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12464961/12/Psychopath
Synth Red
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12429877/16/The-Legend-of-Dragon-Domain
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12399806/19/Earth-Loudest-Heroes
jedssm
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12454018/7/Loud-Pack
zachlor16
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12491630/4/Colossal-Encounters
Dalek Prime

>Update on line 86... c ya
https://pastebin.com/jyEr8RaQ
LINKA
AlchyHolic

>Trying to forcibly fix my rust, but hope you like it so far.
https://pastebin.com/g3L2Gkvt
Clinging On (WIP)
Perimity

>Update
https://pastebin.com/PB1E3Hig
Muerte de la señora y el chico de Chicago
Fattiuspattius

>another update to Lily's Crush
https://pastebin.com/AQdtvVem
Lily's Crush
hospice-writer

>Okay, coming back with this. Got a Pastebin here of everything so far:
http://pastebin.com/c2Mw046J
Pure Luna's Helping Hand
Yaridovich23

>Here's the pastebin version.
https://pastebin.com/c3f3EY7m
Bored Lynn In Rhyme (Lynn) 553
Greentext Compilation
AbuseGuy

>Hope you enjoy it.
https://pastebin.com/DYQsAr4W
Brownie's New Adventure
Dignitias
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>>9783944
Fuck you
>>
TB H I actually think that godzilla avatarfag is pretty helpful, I generally don't stay up to date with the newest fics
I admit that he should just make a pastebin and link that instead of making a massive post here, however
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>>9784154
>>9784206
kys spammer
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>>9784233
Want me to gather up some Leni pics and do a good ol' Lenibomb? Because this is how you do it
>>
>>9784008
Seconding
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>>9783918
we need lewds of that elf
>>
>One day Lincooln and

does anyone want a continuation of this fic?
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>>9784312
Second.
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>>9784325
Me
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>>9784325
This fic needs art made for it
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>>9784325
I'm riveted
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>>9784325
Please continue
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>>9784233
die
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>>9784325
>Ronnie Anne ate each other's assholes
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>>9784405
Lewd
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>>9783706
I've suggested this before but basically the Louds pull an all nighter while talking about their feelings.
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>One day Lincoln and Clyde touched tips.

This is my magnum opus
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>>9784233
fucking kill yourself nigger
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>>9784472
you're a fucking faggot
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>>9784488
and you're a leni poster :/
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>>9784477
>>9784488
Truly, Lenifags are the worst
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>>9784472
nice
>>
>Leniretards shitting up the thread
Like clockwork
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>>9784626
>Singular
They all have the same naming convention, it's one particular shithead.
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Are there any drawfags that can tell how long they have been drawing to get their art to be at least decent. I've been drawing for about 2 and half years now and I'm seeing no improvement.
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>>9784472
>"Lincoln, I don't think this is something friends do"
>"yes they do, I saw Bobby and Lori do it!"
>"what did you say?"
>"they touched tips because they're a couple, if we do the same it'll be proof of our friendship!"
>"Lori.... touched tips..with Bobby?"

Lincoln in a trans house fic when?
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>>9784663
Bust out fundies and draw everyday. Go to /ic/ and steal the books and whatever content is there.
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>>9784154
kys spammer
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>>9784663
What do you suck?
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>>9784694
clydes fucking peanut brittle brain just imploded
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*Dabs your path*
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Leni a shit and fake Lenibomber is a beta how can't get it up.
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>>9782961
We've done this before with stands just replace stand with nene and there ya go.
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>>9784663
It depends on a lot of things how much does it take to improve.
I'm one of those who've been drawing since I was a kid, but that drive just can get you so far. I started taking drawing a bit more seriously like four years ago, and I was improving by practicing my fundamentals and such. Then I abandoned drawing for a long while, and I sucked, then goot a bit better, and now I'm stuck again because I have no time to sit and draw, and when I do I'm pretty complacent.

In short: It's fucking complicated, and the only way to see any real improvement is by being constant with your work. If you really want to draw like the best guys (say, JCM), you'll need to make a lot of time dedicated just to this.

Such is art.
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>>9783918
Clyde having his elf say literally all the time and Lincoln telling him to stop he plays these games to get away from his sisters.
>>
>>9784781
*Running Man overs your face*
>>
Reminder Pedozilla has sworn to spam us until the end of time because he was thanked once months ago and he no longer even comes to these threads and just immediately closes the tab after spamming to avoid seeing the backlash.
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>>9782686
Someone should do something with the guys cheering. You know what I mean, right?
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Spoil me about The Loud House.
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>>9784938
Incest.
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>>9784867
What an autistic loser.
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>>9784823
I'm just trying to get decent, I'll never be as good as JCM
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>>9784867
When confronted about his spamming and to cool it down, he gets defensive and says "I'm doing this for the people" like if he's doing some sort of fucking charity
>>
>>9784938
Lynn is best
>>
>>9784807
? I somehow dont remember this.
>>
>>9784989
He said spoil, not lie.
>>
>>9784989
That's common knowledge if he doesn't know that by now, he's slow.
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>>9784938
It's Loud

VERY LOUD
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>>9785012
How LOUD?
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>>9784154
Thank you, QU4DZILLA, for all your hard work. Your posts are extremely helpful, and I love you.
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>>9784938
Lynn is shit
>>
>9785037
try harder eme
>>
>>9784964
Well to get decent it's the same way but not as long.
As that other anon said, it'd be good if you take a bit of advice from /ic/. It's a bit overwhelming at first, but you get used to it.

And remember to take your time. You'd literally have to slave yourself away to get good in a short time (and 2 years is a short time, believe me)
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>>9785041
Whoa, where is all this lies and anger coming from, anon?
>>
>>9785003
You don't remember us discussing the louds with stands from jojo? Just replace that with the nen abilities in hunter hunter. Example Luna sings or plays a song that gives you vertigo she can also play a song to calm you or make you angry three cords one calms you down one enraged you and one gives you vertigo.
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>>9785041
Yeah, I already know that. Give me REAL spoilers.
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>>9784938
Luna has a breakdown no one could help her recover from.
>>
I'm bored.
Give me a fic to read and I'll give critique about it.
If you want to.
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>>9785041
Neck yourself, nigger
>>
>>9785041
Shut your whore mouth.
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>>9785118
Just pick something of the spam list.
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So, how was your thursday? Did you do everything you wanted?
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>>9784694
this is great
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>>9785041
Lynn eats shit
>>
>>9785188
I meant it as for people who wanted critique on their stuff.
>>
>>9785219
Most Writefags don't stick around after posting a story anymore.
>>
Friendly reminder that, despite the shitposting, here in /TLHG/ we equally love each other.
>>
>>9785249
It's true... this place hates CCs so much we just post our shit for the people who still even care and then leave
>>
>>9785275
>>9785249
Pretty much. Any kind of conversation of the slightest bit from a CC that isn't just a story link or a drawing engages a shitstorm.
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>>9785274
No we don't I hate a lot of people here.
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>>9785190
My Tuesday sucked dick, ass, and balls. I'm just going through my days until E3
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>>9785295
For example

Quadzilla
Cedric
Drawfriend
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>>9785311
Quadzilla isn't a CC in fact he's one of the reasons people hate CCs
>>
>>9785296
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH
>>
>>9785311
Pedozilla doesn't generate a shit storm because he's a cc (yes he actually wrote some god awful short story) it's because he's spammed us multiple times a day for months. Then he autistically refuses to even consider people don't universally love his spam and doubles down on it to spite is.
>>
>>9785249
Hey now I'm a CC and I still post. Just that I don't make it a deal unless I'm updating on something.
>>
>>9785311
>Quadzilla
>CC
Yeah, no.
>>
>>9785249
I do.
>>
>>9785328
How? Would you hate the people who made the brick someone threw into your window? Of course not
>>
>>9785328
He made one thing that literally nobody cares about and got into the CC discord

Now all it is is "soup bruz" every time he shows up like some sort of goddamn shitty catch phrase, completely unaware everyone hates him and it.
>>
>>9785295
CCs can't even ask for critiques on their stories ITT anymore without stirring needless shitposting. I miss the real writing/critique hours that we used to have.
>>
>>9785334
Oi you, ya out of order
>>
>>9785372
FUCK YOU
GET OUT OF HERE AND KILL YOURSELF
>>
>>9785374
CC's suck his cock 24/7 in the public discord and encourage him to spam here. The ones who don't he blocks and blacklists from his "featured fic" thing.
>>
>>9785362
I said most not all, no need to be a special snowflake. If you're looking for attention though post a link to this guy
>>9785118
>>
is jerking off to tracer normie shit?
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>>9785394
They used to be good, and a ton of writefags posted legit stories to be critiqued, good ones from people like Abuse, Maninthecouch, Perimity

Now we're stuck with shitty, bottom of the barrel writers like sadwriter because he practically held the public discord hostage with his shit until he got a peanut gallery and thinks everyone loves him
>>
>>9785431

>tumblrwatch
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>>9785417
Yeah I know you didn't mean all, but I wanted to make the point that most CC's not coming here is not very true either. Granted me and that other guy who said the same is not enough proof so I apologize for the lack of strenght of my argument.

Really it's more like other anons said. CCs do post here but few make it known since any mention of them can trigger a shitstorm, or they themselves get shitposted to death.
>>
>>9785374
Quad posts his spam so much people get annoyed at it. To the point where writefags can't repost recent stories since it's already on the spam list if they do they're re spamming. He bitched and moaned for fanart that people get annoyed the the drawfags that encouraged him to spam more thus telling CC's to fuck off.
>>
>Pedozilla is now crying the CC discord asking for "Lenizilla pics to make me feel better bros.."
>>
>>9785412
Proof?
>>
>>9785451
nice!
>>
>>9785464
Wasn't it only Joseph doing the critique most of the time? Speaking of, what the fuck happened to that guy? He suddenly disappeared
>>
>>9785431
Well, since she's the only good thing about that shit game, nah.
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>>9785451
Didn't expect anything to come out of that, especially that quick. Glad you liked it though, man.
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>>9782686
DON'T TALK ABOUT HAVING A GIRLFRIEND REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>9785520
He left after dealing with Quads shit.
>>
>>9785464
But Abuse, and I think Perimity are still around. And couch is just away in the army, he seems to plan to make a full return one day.
>>
>>9785539
Just get a girlfriend than faggot. I mean come on there's multiple CCs that have GFs.
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>>9785451
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>>9785539
I'll be your girlfriend anon
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>>9785451
>>
>>9785520
Joseph did a good thing there desu, even if it was a bit uneffective.
I doubt many CCs like the guy. Not hate him either, just... tolerate him. But he could use more people talking to him into changing this habit.

Granted, telling him to kill himself won't work.
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>>9785464
Well at least the "bottom of the barrel" writers are trying.
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>>9785576
>Just get a girlfriend than faggot
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>>9785501
Proof?
>>
>>9784964
>>9784663
The talent to draw isn't gifted to everyone. Some can learn and others can't. I learnt that the hard way, wasted about 3 years trying to learn.
>>
>>9785606
lmao kys sadwriter
>>
>>9785576
CCs you would like to have as a girlfriend?
>>
>>9785652
Not him I never get mentioned.
>>
>>9785464
The Age of the Content Creator is over

Now all we have are hacks desperate for attention
>>
Honestly, how many people are left in this general? How do we get new blood?
>>
>>9785649
The talent to dank isn't gifted to everyone. Some can dank and others can't. I learnt that the hard way, wasted about 3 years trying to dank
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>>9785576
>Convincing people to be normies

We have a better chance sticking with waifus.
>>
>>9785677
Oh please, we still have a few decent drawfags and writefags. You're exaggerating a bit.
>>
Worst CC's
>>
>>9785118
how bout mine? always looking out for crit of my shit.
https://pastebin.com/xa10CnSg
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>>9785680
There is no way.
Tuck this thread in and let it die.
>>
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>>9784781
>Dio activates "THE WORLD" and walks around Luan.
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>>9785680
/tlhg/ is dead. Bury it
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>>9785037
Thank you Bro
this really made my day
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>>9785772
>However, DIO didn't know that there was a Stand User near who had his a similar Stand
>>
>>9785104
Nen functions under a different set of rules
>>
>>9785755
Will do. I'll come in a while with something.
>>
>>9785727
Sadwriter, Smallface, purplechaos, jestsumguy. To name a few.
>>
>>9785822
And on the drawfag side of things?
>>
>>9785804
Not really.
>>
>>9785844
Well there are different nen allocations. Nen abilities are personalised. There are many basic and advanced techniques to nen.

Effective nen use is basically a martial art
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Mabes'.
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>>9785780
kys pedozilla stop spamming
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>>9785925
Fuck you bro, people love me yuo asshole
>>
>>9785955
kys spammer
>>
>>9785892
Fucking terrible
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Why not tell us watcha
>WATCHIN
>PLAYIN
>LISTENIN TO
>DRAWIN
>WRITIN
>WHATEVER-IN
>>
>>9785780
>he thought I was serious

Haha, I'm kidding pedozilla
Fucking kys you spamming pedo
>>
>>9784663
Learn perspective
>>
>>9785882
Not really diffrent magic powers with diffrent flavor so there ya go.
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>>9785837
Only Ultra.
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>>9784663
Everything in this world has 4 sides.
A head is just a box, and the eye sockets are just boxes within boxes.

If you can understand this, you'll increase 10x fold.
>>
>>9784663
>>9786041
Also, all of this applies to lines as well (hair, etc)
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>>9786006
>WATCHIN
The Venture Brothers
>PLAYIN
TF2
>LISTENIN TO
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GzJGWAfmBco
>DRAWIN
stuff
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>>9786033
Don't forget SB99, and anyone who makes Clyde pics solely to cause drama.
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>>9786006
>>LISTENIN TO
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qg1YhYATr3Q
>>WRITIN
update to leapt
>>WHATEVER-IN
>>9785812
cool cool, take yer time man
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>>9786021
:/
I dont think you get it. Their abilities would have to match their natural apptitude for nen
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>>9785822
Weird, you named some pretty good CCs.
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>>9786108
kys combination of pedozilla, the green homestuck guy, misha, lynncolnfag, misha, sb99, clyde, and all the rest of our scapegoats
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>>9786129
kys angry lenifag
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>>9785576
Don't remind me.
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>>9786137
kys sadwriter
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>>9786129
That'd be a weird fusion. Let's just settle on EME.
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>>9786009
>tfw someone pretends to be me so they can shit on someone

That is some serious 'tism at work.
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>>9785955
No they don't there just nice to you because they feel bad for you.
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>>9786108
No I didn't I named nobodies and shits
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>>9786164
>lying to defend pedozilla
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i'm starting to think all this kys pedozilla is just from 1 salty anon
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Damn boi, these CC haters sure are boring.
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>>9786106
Nen is a made up bullshit magic martial art that reflects personility with ability you pick and train to use stands are a physic manifestation of your will power there pretty much the same magical bullshit man. Luna once again for example could have a nen guitar with three cords that each do a diffrent thing or a stand of the same thing there pretty much the same thing. Don't believe me look at the mad Bonner in hunter hunter and Kira from jojo pretty much the same power. Touch something make it a bomb.
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>>9786260
t. a CC of your choice
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>>9786202
Not really. Purplechaos made one of the better fics out of this general, Small face and Sad both have written great stuff, and Jest has been consistently more active and improving all the time.
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>>9786248
What was your first clue?
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>>9786287
>Purplechaos made one of the better fics out of this general
And that would be...?
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>>9786248
N-NANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
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>>9786287
Nah some of those shits don't even have fanart so that's proof they suck.
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>>9786322
HOOOOOOOOOORY SHEEEEET
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>>9785755
>https://pastebin.com/xa10CnSg
I like this fic, is well written and the louds are in character. Still don't get why Lisa didn't inform the other sisters about Lincoln.
Also, try to write more than two paragraphs in each update.
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>>9786363
Hey, leave that kind of stuff to me, alright?
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>>9786398
Kys patch we don't need a shitty avatar fag to tell people they suck.
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>>9786417
You love me and you know it.
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I wonder if that shitty Kys Lenifag is a spic.
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>>9786450
We do know he's a confirmed Lenifag.
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>>9786417
what about one telling people they rock
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>>9786441
I love you as much as I love Pedozilla another shitty avatar fag that dose t do anything and expects us to suck his cock.
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>>9786450
Lenifags are often spics.
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>>9786006
>WATCHIN
Kenan & Kel

>DRAWIN
I want to draw Marsha from "Billy Dilley's Super-Duper Subterranean Summer" next.

>WHATEVER-IN
My video got blocked. Should have seen it coming, really.
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>>9786041
My brain simply cannot fathom this. I don't have what it takes.
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>>9786278
But she doesn't have a conjurer personality, she would instead use a normal guitar. And would use it to maniputlate emotions rather than anything else.
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>>9786472
Who said anything about cock sucking? I think you just have hidden homosexual urges, man. I don't do what I do for praise, I do it because I enjoy it.
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>>9786496
>Kenan & Kel
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>>9786539
Make it a vocal thing than man or change it I don't fucking care.
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>>9786496
>Asses
>No stupid ideology of a 16 year old having a more developed body than a 17 year old

Oh yeah, mr Krabs.
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>>9786545
Or so you have the same shitty aspirations as most writefags than.
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we need more content about Clyde and his harem
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>>9786586
So if you want praise, you're shitty. But if you don't want praise and do things for fun, you have shitty aspirations?
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>>9786389
thanks man. im trying to get more and more out, but it comes down to me getting tired since i start writing later where im at. just gotta get started earlier.
as for lisa, the bit with the lincoln doubles would make her word to them not really holding water regarding their brother. though i guess i should have had a bit of dialogue explaining why she doesn't just text the others.
which would be better: going back to a previous scene and adding in a line or addressing the issue in a future update?
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>>9786613
His gay dads cats or do you mean that dorky girl who with clydes luck probably Is allergic to sheep skin, seamen, and latex and the chuck queen of the undead?
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who the fuck keeps on making Cleni pics
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>>9786621
I've heard you say these things about writefags. Saying they should quit since there no good or that there just attention whores looking for yous and fan art so yes.
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>>9786502
You do.
Little kids have it, and you do too

Check out Perspective made easy.

http://www.storytellerartist.com/documents/Perspective_Made_Easy.pdf
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>>9785755
>>9785812

First things first, I didn't finish reading, but I don't want this to take too long either, so forgive me ifI miss something or if the problems I point out are "fixed". That said,I think tehre are some issues with your writing that are more pervasive than some mistakes here and there.

The one problem I see in your writing is description. You do a good job at creating the image, like a photograph. You're good at constructing a physical environment. HOWEVER you seem to have trouble increating an emotional/psychological one.Your descriptions are cold, and when you use a more flowery rethoric to explain emotions or thought it tends to not fit the mood of the scene. Physical description is good and sometimes helps to set a mood, but in writing it's not enough; it misses things that other media does (like framing and color theory in film, cartoons or comics).

You resort to dialogue to form this, and that can be a problem when it comes to writing, because reading does not pace the same way as, say, a film. Emotional bits lack weight when the description doesn't last long enough. A moment of tenderness like Lisa's hug should be long, but it doesn't get to linger enough to make a lasting impact.

Which obviously brings me to the subject of tone. The tone is not very cohesive at first because of these issues, and although it manages to set itself, it has a weak foundation.

An example of this is around the beggining: Lincoln seems to take a pretty short time in getting over the realization of being missing for so long; and obviously, given what happens later, he isn't, but since you don't give a clear picture of the characters' psiques (except through dialog), it doesn't seem like it until you make him talk.

This also ties a bit with some pacing issues I see. It's pretty mild, and in part this issue stems from the previous one I pointed out, so I won't delve too much in this.

You have talent and an interesting premise, so don't feel discouraged.
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>>9786573
I WANT THAT KRUSSY

AND THAT OUSSY
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>>9786006
>LISTENIN TO
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=nWnUuosQwZY
>DRAWIN
Nothing
>WHATEVER-IN
Goodnight /tlhg/
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>>9786687
I never said anything about them being attention whores. My major policy is if they have no fan art they should not even bother anymore.
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>>9786736
You're not the real don patch than.
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>>9786747
If you say so.
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>>9786736
So if a writefag writes for fun he should stop if no one made fanart of there work?
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>>9781481
Link
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>>9786624
Adressing in a future update, could be one of the sister asking why she didn't tell them or telling why they didn't believe her anymore
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>>9786765
That was an old fic man check the booru for it.
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>>9786690
I'll give it a read, but I'll doubt it'll help, are there any exercises I can do, or will this book provide some?
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>>9786573
Leni's tits are bigger in that picture, pay attention you bloated Canadian turd.
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>>9786655
It's a hell of a lot more charming than Clori.
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>>9786736
How do you feel about people like sadwriter who guilt tripped patanu into making art of his fic
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>>9786496
Is there a dependable place to find your other stuff or do you just cast it willy-nilly into the ether.
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>>9786811
He does what he must to get art for his fic, It doesn't matter how you get the art, as long as you get it.
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>>9786765
I don't think there's a Pastebin of it, so this is all I can give: http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/3016044/#3017154
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>>9786807
at least Clori makes a little bit of sense since CIyde has a crush on her
Cleni is just so random and i don't think the artist is drawing it to piss of Lenifags
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>>9786811
The sqeeky wheel get some the grease. Say what you will the attention whore angle works.
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>>9786811
I don't know what kind of shit goes on in what I'm assuming the discord. If that's true, then that's just pathetic.

>>9786762
It'd be best for the community, yes.
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>>9786811
which pic
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>>9786861
>>9786877
>>9786736
who's this star man
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>>9786850
Not really Lori shows the opposite of interest for Clyde. There have been pity moments but that's it.
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>>9786877
Why? Are they not allowed to do stuff they like?
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>>9786895
that's more than any other sister has
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>>9786811
Who the fuck cares how he got the art? It's the fact that his fic has art.
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>>9786877
And here's proof that don is a shit posting hypocrite >>9786545
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>>9786624
>>9786784
Also, about the length of the update. It doesn't matter if it takes 2 weeks or a month for a solid update.
Shorts updates could make readers uninterested in the fic because the lack of advance in it.
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>>9786892
>not knowing bobobo bo bo bobo
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i'm starting to think all this pedozilla whiteknighting is just from 1 salty discordfag
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>>9786691
I have to agree with this guy here. I like the story so far, but it really seems like people get over Lincoln coming back after seven years with little issue. It took Lily about ten minutes to accept someone she physically shouldn't be able to remember as her cherished big brother. We don't really get enough of a look on what people are thinking when it comes to Lincoln and his sudden reappearance. I feel like that needs to be expanded on a lot more to make things more emotional.
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>>9786948
You mean pedozilla?
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>>9786923
Nah Lana had a friendly moment with Clyde and Lisa and Leni used him as a test subject. Lynn played with him and Lola gave him a make over.
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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>>9786933
Where?
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>>9786822
If you're okay with tumblr, I occasionally post there. http://sb99doodles.tumblr.com/
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>>9786959
Nope, he runs from this place after he spams. This person is an autistic washed up writefag who pedozilla keeps featuring in exchange for whiteknighting.
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>>9786978
kys autism99
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>>9786496
Yeah you gotta give Viacom their dues otherwise they'll take your stuff down faster than you can say fuck.
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Fuck off star poster
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what was the reaction when the science house came out? i used to think it was neat before i really knew who sb99 was.the song luna sings in it is weirdly catchy
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>>9787041
kys
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>>9786956
Eat shit and die spammer
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>>9787041
We all loved it, we literally spent HOURS talking about it, it was a pretty good time. Aaaahhh. good times.
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>>9787029
>>9787029
>>9787029
>>9787029
>>9787029
>>9787054
>>9787054
>>9787054
>>9787054
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEE
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>>9787031
but I don't wanna fuck off
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>>9786975
Oh sorry forgot part of that >>9786762
And than don said>>9786877
But ealier in this thread
>>9786545
>>
>>9787063
>>9787063
no u ,kike,now go suck your dick faggot.
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>>9787112
kys racist
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>>9787089
You will once Jackie claims Marco for herself.
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>>9787089
Yeah anon she can't even fuck on just ask Jackie and Marco!
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>>9787090
>Avatarfags and writefags should follow the same "rules"
Hmmm...
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>>9787089
Well I don't want you fucking on, so please fuck off.
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>>9786978
>Last art is from nearly a month ago

Fuck, you do mean "occasionally".
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>>9787089

Hey Star, I heard about Marco's little nickname: Nacho Boyfriend!

get it?
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>>9787089
Don't you have to watch Marco get fucked by Jackie or something?
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>>9787089
Don't worry, i still loving you
>>
>the discord autism force is in full shitposting mode tonight
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>>9787151
TO KILL HER THRIST
>>
>>9787130
>>9787130
>>9787130
>>9787130
GET OUT UNDERAGE AUTIST NIGGER COCKSUCKER SJW QUEER FATSO SCROTUM SWALLOWER JEW REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE TRUMP WON
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>>9787194
post proof
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>>9787089
Jackie >>>>>>>>> Star, and don't you forget it.
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>>9787151
I don't get it
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>>9787201
kys pedozilla
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I just wanted to talk about a fun cartoon Marco and I used to watch but you guys had to bring Jackie into this
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>>9787205
>>9787201
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>>9786691
>>9785755

Adding a bit more now that I read further:

Narration is important, but compression too. There's a bit of a dissonance between how much information you give to the viewer before and after.
At the start you don't give much unless the characters do it and further down the narration gives a bit too much. As a single long continuous work, it doesn't fit very well.
Compression is not only about how much info you give, but how you give it. Remember that old Hemingway six-word tale? The juxtaposition of certain imagery and the choice of words can give a lot of information in little space.
At the start you have a problem, and you kinda fix it with another. The creation of a psychological environment got better at the cost of more exposition-y narration. Not to mention that emotional reactions are still a bit wobbly: nobody gets over big sad things in ten minutes.

Don't worry too much about "fixing" it. In my opinion rewriting is a pointless effort better suited to create more and newer things.

Also some nitpicks, feel free to ignore them since it's not really part of the story's structure but more on formal aspects:

>Dots come AFTER the quotation marks, not before.
>I really dislike the meme arrow before each line
>I also dislike the lisp at the start, why everyone writes the slip as "sh"? IT ANNOYS ME
>I'd advise against onomatopeias and similar (Like the AAAARRGH thing). It's poor form IMO

ONCE AGAIN I say, you have something good here, but there are imperfections to shave off. I don't think I need to point out the positives because the views' quantity you get are more than enough of a proof that you're doing some things right.
>>
salt has ruined another thread.
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>>9787207
say it slowly a couple of times. especially the first word.
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>>9787235
I know right? I haven't seen pedozilla and his friends this mad before.
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>>9787207
IT'S A JOKE ABOUT HER BEING LONLEY AND RACISIT SLUR ON MEXICANS USING THERE FOOD!
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>>9787207
t. Leni
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>>9787239
I STILL DON'T GET IT
EXPLAIN
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>9787232
>>9787232
SUCK MY COCK DUDE LMAO
>>9787222
>>9787222
>>9787222
>>9787222
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>
I didn't feel the need to plan my weekend around 5 small gummybears. But if you fail to plan, you plan to fail. It began with a noticeable change in the viscosity of my saliva. Within minutes of consumption, my mouth had filled with a thick foamy slime. Though I was in a cool climate controlled room a salty sweat broke out, and I felt my heartbeat quicken as my body threw itself into fight or flight. The animal noises broadcasting from my pelvis were an ominous warning of the violent acts that were to follow. I shouldered my way into the bathroom, clawing at my belt, moaning with pain. The smell came first. It started sweet, almost tangy. That was quickly overpowered by a cloying chemical perfume. The first volley of feces hit the water like soda cans and nickles. The resulting splash drenching my bottom in foul brackish water, but this was quickly becoming the least of my worries. After another moment, the noises in my core hit a fever pitch and I was struck rigid with pain. The sweat was now running into my eyes, but the room had turned ice cold and my hands began to spasm. I felt an insidious burning flooding my escape hatch. I gasped. Hot yellow poison began spraying from my rear, changing in pitch and echo as the stream of diarrhea whipped around the toilet bowl, creating a nightmarish Doppler effect that can only be appreciated in hindsight. My legs fell asleep sitting on the toilet. I couldn't have stood up if I wanted to. Wiping was a no-go. Toilet paper simply became a vile paper mache'. My hands were quickly soiled. A full blown shower was needed, and all of my towels had to be burned. So happy with my purchase, would recommend to friends and definitely buying again!
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>>9787201
kys reddit
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>>9787268
kyskyskyskys
>>
I think is "Nacho Boyfriend" because in spanish sounds like "It was born a boy"
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>>9787270
WHAT THE FUCK YOU SAID ,I TRAINED 300 GORILLAS AND YOU'RE DED KIDDO.
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>>9786691
>>9786943
Thanks for giving it a read over man. The kind of stuff you pointed out are the more specific subjects that I wanted to refine and focus on. Some of the descriptions felt a bit wonky here and there, but I couldn't really pin down exactly how, so knowing what to look for from what you laid out is a real help.
I think I'll start doing updates in the paste and not post them until I have the scene down beforehand. I always did updates in the thread beforehand for this and most of my other works. It's good for getting quick shit out like greentexts, but for more prose based fics like leapt it feels confining, especially with the character limit. It also made me too self conscious about the time between update posts, my shit taking from half an hour to I think almost two hours, so it might had also made me rush through some scenes when I should had taken more time to read over everything.
>>9786784
Yea, explaining that later feels like the better option. I will try to punch up the descriptions in whats already there to make them fit with the tone, but I won't add full on story stuff to it.

Thanks again, guys!
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Nacho Boyfriend.... it doesn't makes sense
Nacho Boyfriend... Nacho. NA-CH-O BoyFriend.
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>>9787316
kys jojo-brony
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>>9787275

GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>9787275
>>9787275

GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>9787275
>>9787279
>>9787279
>>9787279

GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>9787279
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0g6GhHvSjXM
>>
This is a quality thread
>>
Fucking Christ, new thread please?
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>>9787342
>>9787342
>>9787342
>>9787342
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEE
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I don't fucking get it, Nacho Boyfriend? wtf?
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>>9787344
kys yourself
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>>9787344
KYS SPAMMER FAGGET RRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeee
>>
>It's a "Pedozilla has a mental breakdown and becomes the kysfag." episode
>>
N a c h o

a N o c h

Ah fuck, it just doesn't have sense at all fuck you anon
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>>9787381
Leave her alone.
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>>9787394
What if the kysfag was actually just pedozilla the entire time?
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>>9787370
>>9787370
>>9787370
>>9787370
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEE
>>9787392
>>9787392
>>9787392
>>9787392
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEE
>>
kiss yourself
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i laugh at ppl like u. i send comments for a reason. u dont know who the fuk you r tlkin to because first of all im not blk. ur brain is jus as tiny if my comments got to u. u cant call anyone a nigger but ur damn self and ur worthless parents for teachin u such ignorance. they deserve to b just as dead as u. u have the nuts to send me a comment like that but i guarantee u wouldn't have enough of them to bring ur ass to 220 lobdell hwy in port allen Louisiana 70767. i just gave u my address so im about wuteva anytime anywhere. i will beat the fuk out of u. girl or guy. u can tlk about how poor blks r but oprah, obama, and all blk celebrities have more than u r ur trashy family or friends have. u will not get far in life thinking the way you think. and thats comin from someone with auburn hair and blue eyes. take a bite out of that one and stay the fuk out of my business and wut the fuck i comment on. if your name wasnt mentioned then it hasnt shit to do with u. wut i eat dont make u shit so get a life. i only do this shit cuz im bored at wrk. i have not a hint of racism in me but fuk wit me and you will hate ur own kind when me and my crew finish with u. now determine wut color i am bitch.
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>>9787369
>>9787285
>>9787316
>>9787396
>>9787266
Look at all of this tasty bait, don't mind if I do. Nacho Boyfriend = Not your Boyfriend
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>>9787413
>>9787394
FILTER THE WORD TO T BH F AM
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>>9787442
Ooooooohhhh
thanks
>>
fingerbang is a mistake
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>>9787415
>>9787415
>>9787415
>>9787415
KYS SPAMMER FAGGET RRRREEEEEE
>>
>Pedozilla is having an autistic breakdown now in the discord.
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>>9787554
screenshots pls
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>>9787554
pics or it didn't happen faggot
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>>9785033
What already existing stand would Luna have?
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>>9787554
Post link I don't go on discord
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>>9787564
Pedozilla is threating to post CP again and get the discord shutdown if any leak.
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>>9787554
Proof or you're bullshitting.
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>>9787554
What else is new?
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>>9787541
>>9787541
>>9787541
>>9787541
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEEE THIS THREAD IS SHIT THANKS TO FINGERBANG LIKE (You)
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>>9787554
Sad!
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>>9787554
pics or it didn't happen
>>
New thread please dear god almighty
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>>9787582
Proof?
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>>9787616
suck my cock dude ayy lmaoooo
>>
And now he's posting real cp again.


What the fuck is his problem.
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>>9787554
And then next you're gonna tell "Fire is hot". Get some real news.
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>>9787554
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>>9787596
>>9787596
>>9787596
>>9787596
KYS SPAMMER FAGGET RRRREEEEEEEE YOUR POST IS CAUSING SHIT THANKS TO FAGGETS LIKE (You)
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>It's a "anon lies about pedozilla freaking out in the discord for free (You)s" episode
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>>9787641
>again
He would've gotten the van the first time. Fake, and gay.
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>>9787675
He lives in some lawless south american shithole, the police sell the cocaine there.
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>>9787714
>>9787714
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>>9787641
Pics you fucking idiot or it didnt happen
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>>9787662
>>9787662
>>9787662
>>9787662
GET OUT UNDERAGE REEEEEEE YOU LIFE IS CANCER THANKS TO KIKES LIKE (You) top lel(You) desu senpai(You) XD (You) :v) (You)
suck my dick goyim and die fag

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>>9787771
kys racist
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>>9787737
Because it isn't happening. This faggot pretends pedozilla is having a freakout in the discord all the time but never posts proof.
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>>9787675
but gay is (You)
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>>9787791
What else is fucking new
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>>9787791
-t. pedozilla
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>>9787790
>>9787790
>>9787790
>>9787790
GET OUT UNDERAGE AUTIST REEEEEEEEEE AND GO BACK TO POL NIGGER AND GO TO SHILL FINGERBANG
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>>9787819
Then post proof.
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>>9784663
>>9784964
If this is the best you could do with 2 and half years of practice, you might as well give up. To get decent at your current level will take at least 4+ more years.
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>>9787233
I get the reasoning you got behind not going back and rewriting shit. It does sound like a waste of time when you can just create more with that energy instead. My only argument for doing some rewrites after the fact is so it doesn't clash too much with future scenes where I implement some of the points you made. I think that the overall fic would be brought down if the differences between how it was done beforehand and how it was done later was that striking.
I dunno, what do you think?
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>>9788432

It depends on how long you plan to do it. If this ends up a 50-100k words story then the failings at the start won't be very noticeable and just be you getting adjusted. If the fic were to end somewhat soon then maybe a rewrite would be good for an overall better feel.

However, I'd leave it like that anyways for three reasons:

1) As a learning experience: It's important to be able to see what were your mistakes to improve on them, and it's harder to do so when you "erase" them by a rewrite.

2) As proof of your progress: You'll probably cringe at your past work and with good reason, but is good to have proof, just so you can see your own advancements in time.

3) As detachment from your work: One of the worst things any artist can do is to be too attached to his/her own work, and going back many times to fix one thing just feeds into it. It's better to leave a thing be and see it and understand it as part of your process as an artist and not as such an integral part of your ouvre.

That's me tho.
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>>9788578
Good points, especially the third one. I had the first two in my head already, but I never thought that rewriting would be a sign of over attachment. It really does clash with those two points when I start thinking about it. Thanks for catching it before I got too deep man.
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why is there no s2 episode 12 and 15?
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>>9787381
I read it, so I guess I was caught.
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>>9787381
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