/TLHG/ - The Loud House General
Hot Scoop Edition
>Booru:
http://tlb.booru.org
>Fanfics:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=2
>Thread Archive:
http://pastebin.com/h2ZBJ3GS
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>Episodes:
http://pastebin.com/KM6yNJpe
>Extras:
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News:
>Paramount making The Loud House Movie due 2020
http://deadline.com/2017/03/spongebob-loud-house-sherlock-gnomes-1202054433
>New Books & DVD Announced
http://nickalive.blogspot.com/2017/03/new-loud-house-books-and-dvd-announced.html
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Upcoming Episodes:
PROMO: [Vimeo] New Loud House Episodes 6/12-6/15 Promo (embed)
Back Out There (6/12)
>Clyde, worried that Lincoln is hung up on Ronnie Anne, decides to try and cure his post-breakup blues.
Fool's Paradise (6/13)
>The Loud family believes that they are safe from pranks on April Fool's Day, because prankster Luan is away at camp.
Potty Mouth (6/14)
>After hearing Lily curse, the siblings worry about being a bad influence, and become determined to change their behavior
L is for Love (6/15)
>When a love letter shows up at the house addressed only to ``L,'' the family tries to figure out the intended recipient
>>9739630
Hello guys can I be first?
She's totally awesome
>>9739646
Yes
Yes you can.
My future wife.
>>9739630
Is that a shiny Lynn?
>>9739666
My current dump
My current wife.
A world without her is like a world without the sun, and that's just no fun. How about rolling out of bed so we can get this awesome day a-rocking? Not too loud though, the little one is still trying to catch some Zs.
Who in the Casagrande family will take care of her frustrations?
Or has Bobby been taking care of that?
...zzz...
>>9739680
You are man enough for a woman. Stick to Leni then work your way up.
>>9739717
Those bags under her eyes ain't from working double shifts I'll tell ya that.
>>9739775
Night Shift Nurses with Maria when?
>>9739717
Of course it's Bobby
It's not cheating if its with your mother
ANON - Update and New Chapters List (MO4444R!)
>http://pastebin.com/DMPFQ29u
HIGHLIGHTED FIC OF THE DAY
>>Lincoln and Lars<<
Author: AlchyHolic
Hiatus - http://pastebin.com/2gNYBra0
Last Update: 03-02-2017
>Lincoln is quite surprised at Lar's journal contents.
NEWS & Q/A
>I made a small update on second date starts on line 113.
https://pastebin.com/zGPBgrRQ
Second date (WIP ha ha in progress)
JestSumguy
>New chapter.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12431581/10/The-Prodigal-Lincoln-Stigmata
CaptainDarko2.0
>Line 855
https://pastebin.com/r9WcBUYR
Linc vs Lynn: The Ulltimate Loud Showdown
Mike-the-mic
>New stuff starts on line 49:
http://pastebin.com/edAUhL73
Yandere Lily (WIP)
Yaridovich23
>done for now, heres the paste, new stuff on line 205:
https://pastebin.com/xa10CnSg
The Loud that Leapt Through Time (WIP)
hypnobob
>A story I'm writing at 2 am hope you like it
https://pastebin.com/AQdtvVem
Lily's Crush
hospice-writer
>Here the paste is for now. Will continue here in a bit.
https://pastebin.com/gMJHYxx0
Lynn is a Slut (WIP)
a guest
>continued from...wow 10 days already
https://pastebin.com/tQUSfYdG
All for Him (Title WIP)
a guest
>It's exactly what you think it is. Okay, not really. (Prev. "Welcome Back")
https://pastebin.com/Sfq2ApMY
Making Love With Leni
AbuseGuy
>There isn't much in the story right now, but I plan to add a giant chunk by tomorrow.
https://pastebin.com/uYuDsAtn
The Gauntlet *LEWD*
smallface
>Small update to Lily's crush
https://pastebin.com/AQdtvVem
Lily's Crush
hospice-writer
>holy shit did not expect this to get so long or so gay. dumping this in my greentext paste and calling it "Linka".
https://pastebin.com/TDMtCYrp
"Linka"
Various Leafy Greentexts (contains NSFW)
hypnobob
>>9739812
kys spammer
>>9739812
Thanks!
>>9739818
kys eme
>>9739666
My future spouse
>>9739812
kys spammer
>"Kame...Hame......HAAAAAA!"
How can someone so gorgeous be so cute at the same time?
>>9739949
I think the same thing when I see Ray Romano.
>>9739948
Louds who are pure in heart enough to ride the Flying Nimbus?
>>9739959
Lincoln.
>>9739948
Wrong
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y8Qc_ElOUYE
>>9739959
Leni, Luan, Lincoln, Lana, Lily.
People need to see the light and ask for/do more Luancoln, Lunacoln and all three together, be they lewd or cute
>>9739983
>Luan
Kek, good laugh anon.
>>9739990
I'd like to see more cute Luan/Lunacoln.
>>9739990
I'll make some for $30.
>>9739983
>Luan
>>9739630
Haven't seen the reporter in so long.
>>9740007
I liked the part when Raymond showed up to aid the Loud family.
>>9740007
Are you in love with Flip?
>>9740015
Robert was there too, remember he got a day pass from otherworld?
god i love this qt
>>9740172
Oh? I doubt that I honestly do.
>>9740198
thems fighting words faggot
>>9740217
Yeah well you're lying by the hairs of your chinny chin chin little piggy.
>>9739880
I never understand what's going through people's heads when they "roleplay" like that in the booru comments.
Good morning guys! Any plan for today?
>>9740277
Go to class, cry, and then volunteer. May or may not have an update for something between those three important things.
>>9740277
Whack it, go to work, come back from work, whack it again, sleep.
>>9740277
Preparing for a road trip. Should be fun but I won't be back in time for E3 or the new New Loud House episodes
Have a Lynn. She's cute!
Where is the guy that was writing that Lynncoln green yesterday?
>>9740342
Gone forever, hopefully.
>>9740342
Probably asleep. It's 8 AM, dude.
>>9740338
So damn cute
>>9740338
She's cute?
>>9740402
They don't have to, they're the cutest in their own way. It's all the other characters and basically everybody else that can't compare to the perfect Louds
>>9740338
I doubt you really think she's cute. You don't need to lie here.
>>9740444
The only person who doesn't think she's cute is Ronnie Anne, but she's blinded by jealousy.
>>9740439
She's hella cute!
>>9740444
Of course she's cute. It's pretty obvious.
I really feel bad for every other cartoon character, they don't even come close to Lynn.
>>9740255
hows about you fuck off, rose. it's over. stop stalking me.
>>9740471
You're supposed to be dead Charlie.
>>9740452
Those trips say otherwise, liar.
Lynn confirmed for an ugly.
>>9740481
Get off of 4chan Ronnie, it's been proven Lynn is a cute multiple times.
>>9740277
Set up gym equipment,unpack some more boxes, pay the fire place guy, take care of dog, call to reschedule interview, cook dinner.
>>9740486
If Lynn is so cute why dosent she have a boyfriend?
>>9740498
She does, Lincoln.
>>9740498
He's been in like every single episode I'm pretty sure, idk how you missed him.
>Lynn and Lucy both dress up as Lincoln as they fondle each other "for practice"
>>9740533
Dude, Lincoln is a fucking catch. He's the best trophy anyone could ever earn, and Lynn is #1, he belongs to her.
>>9740527
Fic when?
>>9740535
That's simply linclone trying to ruin lincolns life, Lincoln would never cheat he's a Cinnamon roll
>>9740542
>Lincoln is a catch
For someone like Lynn, yeah. None of his classmates want him, and his dates for the dance (including one that Lynn set him up with) were happy to drop him for other guys at the first opportunity
As bad as Lincoln is, he can still do better than Lynn, who no one voluntarily spends time with
>>9740572
Are we just gonna let this guy bad mouth best Boi?
>>9740579
He's clearly autistic, who cares?
awoo~
Lincoln is QT
>>9740603
I bet Lynn's breath smells absolutely horrendous. You can practically see Lincoln trembling in fear as her halitosis haze wafts toward him.
>>9740624
unf
>>9740603
>“When will these urges to kiss her go away?!”
>>9740556
So what you're saying is that Linclone is dating Lynn and Lincoln is dating Leni? So you agree Lynn is a shit.
>>9740277
Procrastinating
>>9740644
You're more delusional that I thought
>Fave Loud
>Do you prefer jacking off to manga/anime art style (see: the manga and doujin section at sadpanda) or western/not-anime art style (see: Zone, SB99, etc.) in general?
>Lucy
>Western
>>9740665
Luna, Lynn, Luan
Both
>>9739717
Perhaps Carlos, or one of the boys.
>>9740665
>Lori
>Either
>>9740624
somebody fucking draw this
CC's who are part of the rebel alliance and a traitor
CC's who dodged the draft
CC's who'd drink all your beer and never bring any of their own
CC's who would drop everything to pick you up when your car breaks down in the middle of nowhere
CC's that aren't you
>>9740907
None of them they'd drive by and throw crudely drawn pictures and crumbled up stories at you.
CC's who smoke crack
>>9740918
All of the good ones.
>>9740907
Abuse guy, bievos
>>9740944
They wouldn't.
CCs that make content
CC's who would let you cum inside them
https://pastebin.com/d1MngwzV
>>9740954
I believe in them with all of my heart
CC's who would ask to borrow your copy of San Andreas for the PS2 and then return it 2 months later, covered in scratches and claim it was like that when they got it from you
>>9740997
Aw shit, you still alive?
Neat dude
CC's who don't think piracy is theft
>>9740997
Pretty good dude. I don't think it was too much cause all that stuff, with Lola and Lana and everything, they were a fun little read I really liked 'em. I'm not really into father-daughter though so the whole act wasn't for me but it was written well
What if she actually had a cutesy innocent personality?
>>9741195
It'd make all of the sex seem a little odd
>>9741213
>Odd
What are you, gay?
>>9741213
She'd just be blushing and embarrassed all the time but then she'd get lost in lust and squeeze you dry, with half-closed eye lids while drooling
Guys I had a dream about Luna. It was nothing sexual., she was just kind and wanted to be my friend. It basically involved us sitting together in a college lecture hall talking and working on some type of project. We even made plans for later. I hate these dreams, they make me so sad when I wake up.
>>9740907
The sad LeniXAnon poster
>>9741276
AH FUCK I HATE THIS KIND OF DREAMS.
WHY EVEN WAKE UP?
>>9741195
>>9741213
>>9741275
I can't believe Lincoln taught Ronnie how to break the fourth wall
Can't wait for the occasional Ronnie Anne episodes
>>9741320
I would send Savino a bag of my own shit if they start doing Ronnie Anne episodes
>>9741378
Because you love it?
How you taken the time today to appreciate perfection?
A Lori/Lincoln episode would actually be plausible to air now. Either she maybe tries to force herself in Lincoln's activities to get her mind off Bobby being gone and at the end they realize they actually had fun together, or Lincoln sees she's down and wants to cheer her up
>>9741484
Will it lead to rape?
>>9741495
Not if they're both willing
>>9739646
There is a disturbing lack of Carlota porn.
>>9741599
Blame Leni.
>>9741466
Every day.
I can't believe they completely buried Ronnie to push Rusty as Lincoln's secondary best friend
>>>/co/93020129
>It's a "blatant ripoff" episode.
>>9740997
good job
>>9741669
I feel like I have no air when I see that pic.
>>9740997
Thanks, this is great.
>>9740277
I'm watching these threads like a hawk, enclave said he was doing an idea of mine today
>It was a rainy day in the city but you could still the bright white light of the Casagrande Market shining in the dark from a mile away.
>Above the market is an apartment complex where the Casagrandes lived and recently, their family increased by three
>One night, while Carlos Casagrande was wandering around the house with his eyes glued to a book, he heard something interesting coming from the former hall closet.
>"Come on Lincoln just let me see it!"
>"No it's embarrassing" Ronnie Anne's boyfriend's voice sounded like it was coming out of a tablet
>Now Carlos's ear was glued to the door and the book was closed, this was much more important
>"I promise not to laugh, just show me"
>"Alright"
>Carlos can hear some shuffling coming from the device and he's not sure what he should do here.
>"Woah man that's way too big!"
>Should he call her a mother? No she turns her phone off at work.
>Get Bobby? He won't get up here in time to do anything
>"Well I'm sure you can still ride it"
>It was up to Carlos!
>With one kick the professor sends the door flying open to see...
>Lincoln holding a very crudely made clay skateboard and a very surprised pair of preteens
>"Hey Uncle Carlos, Lincoln was just showing me his art project"
>"Hi Mr.Casagrande"
>"Right, sorry about that I... tripped"
>Carlos quickly scurries away, closing the door behind him and leaving the confused kids to their chat
>"That was weird"
>"Yeah, oh well enough art, whip that dick out Lincoln"
>>9740277
Gonna study and complete my exams.
Then I will start my long distance LoriXAnon fic.
>>9740928
I would if you were in trouble, anon. It's what friends do.
lewder version of this when???
>>9742172
Poor grant.
We should have noticed sooner, that he was basically a chew toy for those Shota hunters at nick.
Is anyone interested on Lynn x Carlota?
>>9742299
Are you offering anything or just being a leech?
>>9742065
Kids these days, whippin their dicks out like it aint a big deal
>>9742065
Where that art of Ronnie and Lincoln sexing online, people?
I thought you guys liked Ronnie
>>9742299
how did she even manage to fit that whistle on with her giant ass head?
>>9742299
No
Only if it's lewd
>>9740944
I'd help you any day, anon
>>9740342
the hypnosis one?
idk, hope he continues
>>9742411
I knew I could count on you
>>9740277
Bury a dead baby bird. And wonder why I remain at this house.
>>9742484
>Luna burying a dead baby bird
When is she going to go through her goth rocker phase?
>>9740277
Something compelled me to write a green about ThiccQt yesterday. I'll admit it was kinda nice.
I'll be busy at work most the day, but I'd like to see if I can finish tonight.
>>9742549
Did you pastebin it?
>>9742484
how'd the bird die?
>>9742573
No. What I had finished at the time was only a paragraph or two, but once it's done I'll pastebin it.
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=63251423
>>9742599
The pure volume and intesnity of the Rock and Roll completed disintegrated the bird.
>>9742659
ugh "rock and roll" is so cringe. no one fucking calls it that
>>9742701
>>9742701
He just did
>>9742599
No clue, but all I know is I lost the thing I've been talking to for the past few weeks.
>>9742729
>>9742746
Pic related
>>9742706
he should know better. rock and roll is like chuck berry blues riff shit. don't be plebs
>>9742729
I'm sorry man, you can talk to us.
>>9740997
>"The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the fact that Leni is not real." Arthur C. Clarke
And stopped reading.
the public discord dispeared?
>>9742848
Good
>>9742848
the public invite link was at least
supposedly some autistic guys from /hg/ raided them
>>9742880
It was a bunch of anons from here.
>>9740277
It's my birthday, have plans for this weekend.
>>9740277
go to dentists, get copies for house keys. either do another update to leapt through time or start on a sequel fic to full reversal like that one anon from last night suggested. get through tbfp parasite eve 2 playthrough
>>9742841
It was originally supposed to be a Leni only story but then shit happened
>>9742701
>ugh
>cringe
What are some completed fics you want to see some kind of sequel or continuation for?
Can we get this with Lincoln?
what do you guys think Savino listens to in his free time? He looks like he would enjoy BURZUM.
https://twitter.com/Nickelodeon/status/872131490867552256
>>9742841
The only good part of that shit.
>>9743129
Cheesy rock music
>>9743114
We did already?
>>9743113
This shit has gone too fucking far
4 DAYS
>>9743113
Disgusting
>>9743114
It was already done a few days ago
>>9743220
>tfw idort
Sony has this shit in the fucking bag, though. Can't wait
Another thing in retrospect, Bobby could be in the bodega, rather than just one of his random jobs.
>>9743224
UNF
>>9743097
Welcome to the golden I guess?
>>9743097
A Rump in the Night
Mime if I butt in
Extra credit
Another shot at Overprotective would be neat, maybe without the Saints Row cameo
Underhanded Mexi-tactics
Emmay to write some more Lynncoln and Ronniecoln, or some other sisters...
>>9743322
> without the Saints Row cameo
but thats what made it great tho
maybe im just biased because of nostalgia
>>9743097
Not any of yours
>>9743277
That would explain why Lincoln didn't go straight to Ronnie's house when he got the call from her
>>9743359
Booru's a mess, so even if it was posted I don't think it'd be easy to search for.
>>9743351
Good thing I'm not a writefag then.
>>9743277
Somebody needs to edit this so Bobby hangs up after the first "No, you hang up first" and the last five panels be Lori reacting to it.
Let's see how long she sits there in disbelief. (Feel free to add time references.)
Remember when "Lacy" was just a /tlhg/ thing.
>>9743350
It was nice itself, but it made things too cluttered. Maybe if he would've just focused on older Lincoln being the way he was and him dealing with the various ways the sisters thought of him he could've built something from start to finish
>>9743402
She still is.
>>9743411
You haven't seen the leaked time skip episode?
https://donutq.tumblr.com/post/161511151940/boneax-request
>>9743434
I always get that confused with the leaked "kids meet their parents as kids" episode. (After that one I bet the twins won't even consider having sex until they're in their forties.)
>>9743483
Haha yeah I could see how you get those mixed up. Lisa inventing that time machine really changed up the show.
Who's obsessed of Lori's makeover?
>Lincoln Loud was minding his own business on the couch
>He was reading his comics as usual, enjoying the unusual peace and quiet
>The only thing bothering him were his allergies
>Snot and coughing and all the "fun" that came with it
>He was going through tissues like a madman
>As he was blowing his nose, Luna came into the room, strumming her guitar
>After exchanging greetings, Luna sat down on the couch, quietly playing a tune
>Lincoln felt the urge to sneeze come upon him
>But...there were no more tissues!
>But it couldn't be stopped!
>In desperation, Lincoln dove into Luna's crotch, under her skirt and into her panties
>At that moment he let out a thunderous sneeze, into Luna's vagina, causing the rocker to practically jump up into the air
>Lincoln then retracted his head, blushing heavily
>"E-Excuse me..." He muttered
>>9743575
It's a good design, but I like regular Lori more.
>>9743589
>Do it again
>>9743589
This is the weirdest premise for a fic I've seen in a while, continue my boy.
>>9743575
Lori is perfect as she is, or at most minimal makeup
>>9743575
She looks better with less makeup.
>Lincoln was enjoying a nice snack on the couch, watching "ARGGH!"
>His sister Luna came down, garbed in nothing but a bra and panties.
>This surprised Lincoln, giving his log a jolt.
>"L-Luna! What are you doing?!"
>Luna looked down at Lincoln, smiling brightly.
>"I just wanted to give my lil' bro a reward~!"
>A few hours later, they were both intensely fucking on the couch, Luna in a doggy pose, with Lincoln ramming her tight punk-hole with his log.
>Filling his sister's ass with his Linc-seed, he collapses onto her as they laid snug on the couch, Lincoln's cock snugly fit inside her ass.
>>9743097
124 Decibels.
>>9743702
>punk-hole
I wanna write a fic too!
>Lincoln was sitting on couch
>Lana came in the living room
>"Hey Lincoln! I wanna show you my dab!" she said as she struck a a sweet dab pose.
>"You know who'd like that? Clyde!"
>"Ok!" Lana said, running over to Clyde's house.
>She got hit by a truck and was dead in the dab position.
>Clyde later came by and raped her.
END
>>9743113
>Marrying Lynn
You don't marry a cunt like that. You shoot into her butt and don't call back.
>>9743753
>lynn walks in
>Lincoln had come home from a long and hard day's work.
>Lincoln had become a police officer, much to his delight.
>"I guess reading all of those Ace Savvy comics really paid off!"
>Lincoln tiredly made his way up to his room, which was reorganized to fit his needs.
>His new room was the room that used to belong to Lori & Leni, but because of them moving out together to get an apartment, they left it to Lincoln.
>Lincoln made his way to his room, when he noticed his door was jarred open.
>'That's odd.' Lincoln thought. He could've sworn he locked his door before he left.
>Now that Lincoln noticed, he could hear a distinct fleshy sound.
>What the fuck is going on...
>Slowly, he opened his door, making sure not to let it creak.
>Holy fuck....this can't be happening....
>On Lincoln's bed, he could see his little sister Lily, playing with herself.
>He could make out what she was saying, calling out for her big brother...
>Lincoln opened the door all the way, exposing Lily herself, to her big brother.
>Continue?
>>9743857
yes, lily is a pre-teen slut?
>>9743857
>Continue?
Yes
>>9743589
pure gold/10
>>9743857
Lily isn't for lewd
>>9743857
unf continue
>>>/co/93020722
>Lincoln Loud & Harvey Beaks appeared in back to back scenes on Anerican Dad last night.
>Both roasted the shit out of Steve.
>Lincoln's VA voiced the kid that told Steve that he kissed more girls than he did
>And Harvey's VA voiced the kid that called Steve desperate, and told him to get help
>>9743948
>>9743589
>>9743676
>There was an awkward pause in the room
>Neither Loud moved or said a word
>That is, until Luna broke the silence with a single word
>"A-Again."
>Lincoln snapped his head over to look at Luna, bewildered
>"What?"
>"Do it again, bro..." Luna muttered
>"Uh...Really?" Lincoln asked
>She couldn't be serious...
>"Yeah, do it again, bro!" Luna urged
>She knew it was sick and wrong, but that sneeze sent a jolt of lightning through her
>"I...Well...I guess so, when I need to sneeze again..."
>And the two sat in an even more awkward silence, Lincoln awaiting the urge to sneeze again
>Soon, he felt the familiar pressuring building up in him
>Lincoln once more dived under Luna's skirt
>He pressed his nose into Luna's panties again, letting out a body-quaking sneeze into her again
>Luna jolted again, tidal waves of pleasure soaking through her
>"A-Again!"
>Lincoln felt rapid-fire sneezes coursing through him
>A sneeze, and another, and another into Luna's clothed snatch
>After the fifth sneeze in a row, Luna felt a knot in her stomach snap and she was hit with a massive orgasm
>The two siblings sat there, a panting mess, Luna's panties absolutely soaked
>After composing herself, Luna muttered...
>"Unf, nice."
>>9743857
>randomly says out loud about reading his comics as if that's the sole reason for being a cop
>looks like it's gonna be a lewd so what the fuck does him being a cop matter?
No, in fact never write again
>>9744030
Because apparently being related was already not reason enough to not be attracted to your youngest sister.
>>9743976
>ywn give luna a sneeze job
HOLY FUCK
>>9744030
>so what the fuck does him being a cop matter?
Oh, I dunno, maybe it's because it's the reason he's out so late? It's the most solid and basic setup.
>>9743960
>collin Dean
>>9744130
>only cops are ever out that late!
>other jobs/hobbies don't exist
>>9744077
YES
Fic with Luna sharing her 'special' brownies with Lincoln when?
>>9744150
Why are you so bothered by such a minor detail... If it doesn't matter, if there are more jobs that can get him to be late, what does it matter if he's writing him as a cop?
Is it your autism because it doesn't satisfy your headcanon of whatever job you want Lincoln to have?
>>9744278
why is lincoln a manlet/Luna a giant?
>>9743930
>Lily isn't for lewd
>>9744280
His job is as a house husband for his successful athlete wife Lynn.
>>9744077
Is she fat or preggo.
>>9744315
why not both
>>9744299
>implying that Lincoln marries Lynn
>implying that he doesn't marry Leni or Luna instead
Can I get Lucy wearing this dress, or similar?
>>9744280
In that sense, why question or critique any fic.
>>9744396
Leni and Luna are gonna wait in the back of the line like the rest of the sisters.
>>9744396
Why not all of them?
>>9743113
>>9744420
...Can we get someone to draw/write a fic about this?
>>9744420
>>9744433
We need art of Luna getting a sneezjob first.
>>9743948
>>9743960
>>>/wsg/1725897
>>9744433
>They argued over who marries him since he was young
>They all decide to marry him when he turns 18
>>9744413
Because you critique something that changes something in the overall fic, or at least the current scene. If any other job would work, like he said, then it doesn't matter if it's a cop or whatever else. At that point it's just personal opinion whether you like a certain something, not critique
>>9744413
Don't change the subject, fag.
He is pointing out that there is no reason to be upset with the cop thing.
You can critique a fic for the way the story is told and stuff.
>>9744444
Checked
>>9744444
Quints fucking demand it.
>>9744444
what the hell is a sneeze job?
>>9744461
Kek
>>9744459
>no reason to be upset with cop thing
>you can critique a fic for the way the story is told and stuff
>>9744460
Is the first Luna, Luna if she never got into rock and roll/Pure Luna?
>>9739834
cii's art is so fucking bad
>>9744663
Looks like it, Inwonder what music she'd be into; I'm betting on classical.
>>9740217
Those fucking donkey faces god damn it
>>9740665
>Luan
>Weeaboo shit
Why are people so afraid to criticize stuff in fics? Is it because people will jump on anyone for "shitposting"?
>Ronnie Anne and Lincoln finally had some time alone
>They agreed to start exploring each other's body
>The two sat shirtless, Lincoln staring at Ronnie Anne' chest
>She didn't really have anything, but it still mesmerized by it
>"O-Okay, enough just staring..."
>She started to remover her shorts, blushing up a storm
>This was it, Lincoln's first time seeing a vagina
>With both shorts and panties down, Ronnie Anne covered her eyes in pure embarrassment, spreading her legs wide to give Lincoln a good look
>There it was, before him...
>The first look the boy had of a real vagina
>"Um...H-Hi..." Lincoln said, mind going blank
>Ronnie Anne uncovered her eyes
>Did he just talk to her vagina?
>"H-How are you doing?" Lincoln said
>He wasn't even looking at Ronnie Anne anymore, solely at her vagina
>"I've never seen someone like you before."
>Ronnie Anne didn't know what to do, her boyfriend was talking to her vagina
>"You look a lot different from a penis, huh?"
>The spic loli didn't know how to react...Did she interrupt him or what?
>>9744689
She'd play cello and idolize Bach
>>9744716
Complaining that Lincoln is a cop isn't criticism, it's just you not liking it. Get over it.
guys I think something's wrong with my Leni
>>9744732
>Lincoln droping spaghetti
kek
>>9744741
I'm not even the anon who was talking about that. I'm just saying that people seem to try to snuff out criticism for stories here as fast as possible. I've seen it happen before, and I'll probably see it happen again.
RIP boybox
Killed by a fag called Dipper
>>9744716
Probably. It's not difficult to differentiate criticism and shitposting, but people don't really want to deal with the later at all.
>>9740665
>Lana
>East for longer stories, West for single pictures
post lucy
>>9741669
Lana has shit tastes in Hallowen costumes.
>>9744790
K
>>9744763
What are you even talking about, I've been criticizing fics and greens for a while now myself.
Are you sure you're not confusing "criticizing" with shit like "fuck off" or "no one cares" or whatever?
Can you even give one example?
>>9744741
It is criticism... They just wanted to know if it will add anything to the story beyond a throwback to Ace Savvy and that's it. What's so different between him being a cop and just saying Lincoln was out later one night?
In the story he's what I'm guessing over 18, not unusual for them to be out just partying or maybe in Lincoln's case out playing video games all night which I wouldn't question.
This was literally, "Lincoln is a cop, something something Ace Savvy... so anyway Lily here..."
God, whatever happened to real criticism hours? People are too scared now to criticize fics because of assholes like you who can't learn the difference between criticism and shitposting, and because of that we have shit writers like Sadwriter who is literally nothing but his peanut gallery defending him
>>9744790
>"Did someone say my name? oh boy, i hope they don't notice my budge"
>>9744763
> I've seen it happen before, and I'll probably see it happen again.
No, you haven't, because people don't read fics here anymore. Those that do are just fap fics that don't need to be good.
But even before when people actually read shit there was criticism. It's just that a vast majority of it was actual shitposting and nothing useful.
>>9744790
Wasn't it weird when Lucy got the sudden growth spurt when she turned 11 and Lynn didn't change at all?
>>9744805
We also can't have critique hours because fics will just be told "lol it sucks" these dyas instead of anything real. I'm not saying that's what going on here, but it's still an issue.
>>974479
Meant to >>9744770
>>9744732
top fucking kek mate
>>9744732
Flick it, flick the bean.
Maybe the other bean too
>>9744806
Shut up lars
>>9744805
>>9744030
>>randomly says out loud about reading his comics as if that's the sole reason for being a cop
>looks like it's gonna be a lewd so what the fuck does him being a cop matter?
No, in fact never write again
Yeah bro, that's some real constructive criticism right there. Sure is helpful.
>>9744732
Kekd
>>9744869
KAMINA
>>9744869
I was hoping they weren't gonna be retarded enough to have to literally spell out for them what they did wrong, instead of just highlighting the main points
It was my bad for forgetting I was on 4chan
>>9744803
>>9744816
I've seen people try to give criticism on certain fics, only for people to tell them that "no, you're wrong, it's great!" Not surprisingly, this is usually involved with certain writers that people put on a pedestal, won't go into names, so anyone who says that they didn't like it for x-reason is said to be a shit poster, even if it's a genuine complaint with the story.
>>9744920
You didn't give out an actual example, though. Just hearsay and stories about what you, as a biased individual, thinks they saw.
Come back when you have some factual proof that criticism, genuine criticism, not just faggots telling someone to kill themselves, is being stifled wholesale in this general.
The only kind I can think of is Quad refusing to listen to people's requests to stop, or at least lessen the size of his posts.
>>9744805
First of all, it's obvious nothing's gonna get built out of the fact that he's a cop, it's obvious that it's just there for being there and could be replaced with anything else. If it were a bigger fic almost any author would give it a thought beforehand: what job should he give Lincoln, how does it play out in the story. But here it's likely there cause it simply came to mind.
So that's why it's a minor thing, that doesn't change anything in that small green. Complaining about something so minor is preference not criticism
Second of all
>pot calling kettle black
You say people can't take criticism but look at what you're doing. Even if you give something ACTUAL criticism that doesn't mean everybody would agree with you. Some might fight back with some arguments why they don't agree or something like that, like we did now explaining how this cop thing is a minor fact that doesn't change anything, and you immediately take it as some attack.
If you criticize something, or at least you think you are, be ready for it to possibly turn into a discussion. We didn't just tell the guy to shut up or something, we told him how it's not really criticism because it's something so small in an already small green. If it looks a bit rude or something and you can't take that, then YOU'RE the ones who can't take "criticism", at your expense I mean
Like I said here >>9744803 I myself have been criticizing, pointing out errors and stuff like that for a while and I've receive absolutely no backlash, because I know what to consider criticism and what's my opinion
>>9744734
I wanna see what Luna would be like if she got hooked on Rock n' roll from a Drake Bell Concert, not a Mick Swagger one.
>>9745051
Unrelated question, Drake Bell retired from the music industry for an accident had with his hand, right?
>>9744920
When the hell did that happen, you didn't answer my question, that's no example. How do you say that to someone who's been criticizing himself and never received such replies?
>>9744460
>straight A student savant Luna (TL where Luna never discovered Rock and Roll)
>'SHEEEIIIIITTTTT' feral nig Luna (TL where Rita ended up fucking Clyde's dad)
>redneck kanker Luna (TL where Lynn divorced Rita and the Louds all lived in a trailer park)
>>9745129
Should be obvious which one's the best out of the three.
Current Luna's still the best of all though
>no more Lynnori pics..
>>9745163
Pure Luna is cute
>>9745203
All the girls are for Lincoln. ALL of them.
If he allows them some fun time with each other, then yeah, but only if he watches and can participate at will
>>9744445
>>9745129
>(TL where Lynn divorced Rita and the Louds all lived in a trailer park)
Could someone draw Lincoln wearing a 'ghost costume'?.. Please?
>"Oh Clyde, I hear you've spying on my sisters again..."
>>9744757
Yeah, she's TOO perfect.
>>9745163
>Luna "baby killer" Loud
>best one
what does sb99 look like?
>>9744732
>"I'm just not used to this..." Lincoln commented, continuing to look at the vagina
>There was a pause, a dead silence that filled the room
>"Uh...I..." Ronnie Anne started
>She jumped a bit as Lincoln gave a harsh "Shhh!" to her. "I know what I'm doing!"
>That just confused Ronnie Anne more
>He knew what he was doing?
>Has he done this before?
>Was this normal?
>Ronnie Anne had never been with a boy before...
>Maybe she should just watch...
>Lincoln had no idea what he was doing
>But as Lori told him: "Always be confident!"
>"Are you drooling?"
>Ronnie Anne felt her face going completely red
>Was this what sex was like?
>Was this what people really did with each other?
>>9745310
>>9745304
S-She would've been fine, dude.
Lily's a trooper
>>9745335
Handsome fellow
That new Ben 10 remake is awful.
>>9745331
Flick it a bit and move it around with a ruler while looking at it quizzically
>>9745310
>>9745331
>"Are you drooling?"
I'm gonna hire a hooker, use this setup and use this line you magnanimous bastard
>>9745310
>>9745331
>"Are you drooling?"
>>9745213
>"L-Lincoln, it's n-not what you think..."
>Lincoln gave off a deadpan glare to his little sister.
>"Yea, not buying it."
>Lily started tearing up, about to burst into tears out of embarrassment.
>Sighing in defeat, Lincoln goes over to his distraught sister.
>"Look, it's alright, Lily, it's okay. Bub's here for you..."
>Things started taking a turn for the weird when Lily started panting heavily into Lincoln's clothed chest.
>"Uhm....Lily....? You okay, hun?"
>"Y-yeah, I-I'm just a little s-sick."
>Lincoln picked up Lily, taking her to her room, when he noticed a dampness near Lily's thighs.
>"Lily, I know what you were doing..."
>Lily kept quiet. Quiet long enough for Lincoln to get uncomfortable.
>"I'll scream for you to get off me and stop hurting me if you don't take me back to your room, Lincoln...."
>Lincoln's heart froze. She wasn't serious, was she? She's only ten years old, she wouldn't understand, right?
>"A-alright, Lily, just don't shout, okay?" Lincoln hurries back to him room quietly, placing Lily on his bed.
>Lily bends over, spreading herself for her older brother.
>"You know what you should do, big brother. Put it in..."
>Lincoln's stomach grumbled in protest and disgust, his heart sunken into his gut from the realization that if he doesn't do this, she'll scream.
>Reluctantly, Lincoln pulls down his uniform's pants, cringing, seeing himself getting hard.
>He sighs..."Alright, Lily....it's going in."
>Lincoln pushes his hardened rod into Lily's pussy, making her moan.
>sowrongbutsogood.jpg
>Lincoln's cock is too big for Lily's snatch, only able to engulf three fourths of his dick, a good few inches still sticking out.
>For a good twenty minutes, Lincoln gives his little sister one hell of a time, stirring up her loli-puss.
>Lincoln's close to finishing, breathing heavier and heavier. Lily catches on to this.
>"Inside, Linky~!" Lily moans loudly.
>Lincoln passes out, with Lily on top, both falling asleep.
>>9745492
>A 10 year old crying rape
>>9745331
>"Are you drooling?"
it took me a second but holy shit my sides
/r/ Loki, Loni, Luke and Lane dressed as THE KUNG-FU TURTLES (and sitting nonchalantly like in the pic)
>>9745492
pastebin?
Which episode next week will be the best? Which will be the worst?
I did a thing a bit ago while on a break. I'm still on the fence if I should have the PC be visible or not at any point, or if maybe I should go with illusion tier MCs and have them be some sort of transparent color.
>>9745667
All sound good to me. L is for Love, though, has to potential to be either the worst or the best, depending on what they do to find out who the letter is for and what it really turns out to be
>>9745773
>It's just Clyde sending Lori a love letter
I can't wait for this episode to be completely unnecessary, and just to show the sisters having the capacity to like other guys.
>>9745773
>the letter is from an anonymous person to Leni
>You want to take me out on a date? But isn't it like, totes weird for a 3D guy to go out with a 2D girl?
>>9745203
Good. Lynnori is shit and so are you.
>>9745852
Wouldn't have it any other way
>>9745762
Lincoln obviously, unless you plan to make Linc fuckable in trap form. Clyde if you want to cause a shitstorm. Or just some random kid supposedly from Lincoln's class and never show his face so people can self-insert.
>>9745969
>Implying I don't self-insert as Lincoln, even though I'm over 20
Step it up. Imagining you're a 2D shota being taken care of by your 2D older sister or taking care of your 2D imouto or both is best.
That's the secret why we like Lincoln/sister boyos, it's not just the 2D incest
>>9745969
It's not a sisterxlinc thing, it's a Leni x Anon netori thing. Also there's the possibility I might do my bitchy leni x mentally unstable anon thing as an alternate route, too.
>>9745852
Don't worry Leni, I don't care what the 2D supremacists or 3rd Dimensionalists say. We love each other and that's what matters to me.
New thread?
>>9746119
>anon
Bleh. Just a reminder that anon as a self-insert character is only there for autismos who physically can't empathize with an established character.
>>9745773
>Letter arrives at casa del loud
>The sisters go nuts
>They arrange an emergency meeting at lori's room
>Lincoln is at the park with lily, the sisters at first want to wait for them but they can't
>Lori began to read the letter to her sisters
>But suddenly stop
>She keeps reading to herself, feeling uneasy
>She gags, and she tries to tear the letter
>All the sisters jump on her, recovering the letter
>The sisters began to read the letter, Lori tries to stop them, but is too late
>The sisters know why
>The content in the letter is the dirtiest thing ever writen
>It describes how the writer and her lover are going to perform the most heinous and disgusting sex acts
>Even Lori and Luna don't know half of those
>The ways the letter describes her lover aren't nice either
>Slut, cumguzzler, analstuffer, dick raiser...
>They feel dirty just looking the letter
>At that moment Lincoln and Lily arrive at home and go to lori's room
>Hey, whats up, says Lincoln
>The sisters says nothing
>Lincoln see the letter, and give a dirty look at her sisters
>Hey, You know you can't read other person's correspondency, says Lincoln
>The sisters gasp, they can't believe he is involved with that letter
>Lincoln takes the letter
>Lily, looks like another letter for your admirer
>Lily takes the letter, saves it in her diaper and crawls to her room
>The sisters stay atonished
>What, it isn't the first letter she gets
>>9745762
I cannot wait to see what Luna looks like.
>>9745832
OH BOY SEASON 6 HERE WE GO
>>9746119
That's awesome.
Better not make him visible desu.