Undyne Thread - Waiting for the Writefag edition
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>>8721291
>>8721110
>Hi all.png
kek
>>8721414
desu that might be a little too much teeth
>>8721420
>too much teeth
HERESY
>>8721387
totally accurate
>>8721420
Can never have enough teeth
>>8721443
the fish can't suck dick with teeth like that
>>8721491
Fish is not for sexual.
>>8721491
Anything is possible, Anon
>>8721533
Do you realize where you are?
>>8721533
Fish can do both
>>8721489
>540
Please remember to always change this to 1280 so you can get tumblr's highest res!
>>8721533
In the spirit of proving this guy wrong, what's your favorite lewd fic? For me it's Undyne seduces a swimmer girl.
>>8721578
Thanks for the tip!
>>8721611
No problem! You can also get the source res for an image on twitter by changing :large to :orig in the image url
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/C9OLfuIU0AARzCC.jpg:orig
>>8721533
>>8721649
Thanks! Boy, /trash/ sure is a lot friendlier than I expected. No wonder the fish threads are so comfy
>>8721693
>>8721693
This is unironically the best thread on /trash/
>>8721693
>>8721699
>>8721595
Writefag's story about undyne and sharksis on the beach with sharkfriends was 2lewd5me.
i dunno bout u guys but i'm just waiting for a scan of this beaut
>>8721799
There's been one.
>>8721807
wheeeeeeeeere
>>8721812
In the archive somewhere
>>8721821
You know if there's a translation?
>>8721830
There isn't as far as I know
>>8721830
Nope. We don't have anyone who can speak Japanese, unfortunately.
>>8721840
>>8721853
Oh well. Maybe some day
>>8721754
>>8721874
I just wish we had someone in Japan. There are so many doujins that seem to be con exclusive.
>>8721921
god that sans is so smug
>>8721889
I think these might be too low res, and the scanner said he skipped pages that were just text with no images.
>>8721921
We need a deep-sea fisherman, preferably a bilingual one
It's weird how we seemingly got NOBODY or very few on the inside in Japan
Hell, even the "Everyone's Determination" which revolved around UT event barely got some scans
And that's mostly from more well known artists if anything
>>8722058
I don't think there are any on /utg/ either. Dunno why.
From a drawanon on /utg/
Goodnight.
>>8723197
Night Anon
Is there a list/collection of all doujins scanned so far?
>>8723419
Basically only the ones here
https://e-hentai.org/?f_doujinshi=1&f_manga=1&f_artistcg=1&f_gamecg=1&f_western=1&f_non-h=1&f_imageset=1&f_cosplay=1&f_asianporn=1&f_misc=1&f_search=undertale
This is only a small fraction of all the Undertale doujins that have been made (most of which are sfw, believe it or not)
>>8723478
Oh cool, the injection one is there, I was curious about that one. Thanks.
Too bad none of the more tamer ones were scanned. Like Sweet Monster Girls.
>>8723528
>Too bad none of the more tamer ones were scanned.
It's a huge shame. There are some by some really great artists.
> Like Sweet Monster Girls.
There were like 4 doujins in that series, some r-18 some not, and none of them have been scanned. Extremely frustrating.
>>8723590
Wait. Mado's in this one? That's an artist from the West. Same goes for Ana I think.
>>8723898
Yeah, they're sisters. Nise is also not from Japan, I think they're in china.
>>8724427
Wow! This is new one to me. Looks good.
>>8723590
why is broken english so cute
>>8724954
Because you know they really tried.
Have there been made a story about anon trying to teach undyne to speak english?
>>8725020
No, but there was one about anon 'helping' Undyne study for a test.
>>8725040
Was it an oral exam for human reproduction?
>>8725085
There's actually a completely separate story like this one too
>>8725133
https://pastebin.com/NQEEczzD
>>8725189
Marjorie > Brill
>>8726436
The top one looks like the face girls make when you lift their chin up with your index finger and thumb
>>8725125
>>8725133
God damn we'll need like a full time archivist to sort out through the writefags stories soon.
>>8726643
THE MADMAN
DELIVERS
>>8726643
why is the phone a bone
>>8726697
You just couldn't resist could you.
>>8726767
Papyrus gave it to her.
>>8726779
>>8726790
>>8726697
The only thing that really grinds my gears in this image is how Undynes pussy is so ridiculously high. It's reaching her god damn waist!
>>8726812
>>8727314
is that oc
>>8727314
>>8727399
>>8727411
>>8726812
Anon, please control your polar bear fetish and take it to another thread.
>>8727399
>>8727411
>>8727733
the bear is not for sexual
>>8727782
This is how we spend our free time.
>>8726643
>pic
Awesome.
>God damn we'll need like a full time archivist to sort out through the writefags stories soon.
There are tags on the ones that have been posted to ao3, so that should help a bit.
>>8729544
The writefag has an AO3 account now?
>>8729662
Yep. They're adding interesting writer's notes to the stories, too.
http://archiveofourown.org/series/699639
>>8729711
>One thing that would come back to bite me later that I did in this story was I made it obvious that I was talking about the reader as being Undyne's partner in this. An idea I was kicking around during the wedding story I wrote earlier was that after all of these stories, I'd write the end to it and have it be Alphys and Undyne getting married; in fact, that's why Alphys says she should duck out first during that story, so that she could be there ahead of Undyne, because Alphys being the man in the relationship is cute.
mind = blown
>>8729879
>writefag's final story was originally going to end up with her getting married to Alphys
There would have been dozens of (you)s
>>8729879
See, she totally hates Alphys and thinks Alphyne was a mistake guys!
/s
>>8729984
where did that meme even come from
>>8730035
Soriel
I always get more excited for the stories when she works on them a while like this one.
They're always my favourite.
The Valentine's Day one is still the GOAT though
>>8730609
Which one is that again?
>>8730685
http://pastebin.com/aPnchQ87
>>8731298
>>8731065
>licking Undyne’s small sweet breast in slow circles as she jerks you furiously, little whimpering noises birthing themselves in her throat and you have to strain not to come and she is naked, stark naked, lit only by the moon and you tell her she is beautiful and she rolls her eyes lazily, too turned-on to focus, still slowly stroking you but still distracted by your attention to her breasts and she tells you god I want you to fuck me please fuck me and you ask her if she’s sure and she growls at you in a feral voice heavy with need that yes she’s sure you punk and then she is on all fours in front of you waggling her ass back and forth, a long slow drip of her arousal running down her inner thigh
holy shit
>>8731320
I wish I could go back in time and make that entire thing my highschool yearbook quote
I wasn't in the last thread.
What's the special about? The one the writefag is currently doing I mean
>>8732043
This was the request
>Winter break
>Asgore is gone for the week on official business
>Teen Undyne refuses to have any sort of sitter because she's practically a woman god fuck off dad I can take care of myself geez
>invites her boyfriend over to stay at her place because rebellious fishgirl
>they do the type of shit teens always do when they experience complete freedom for the first time; walking around naked, drinking more than they can handle, sleeping in a bed together for the first time etc
>>8732110
Can already tell it's gonna be cute
>>8732908
what in the fuck is that anatomy
>>8733009
I like how she has two left shoulders
Hi all, sorry I haven't been around much in the last few days, it's a combination of being busy with work, having to some things for my girlfriend, and so on. I just thought I'd drop by and give you guys a progress report on the latest story - right now it's a little over 3k words, and I'm aiming for my usual special length of 5k words, so roughly five times the length of a typical ordinary story. I'm going to be doing a little more work tonight and then finishing up tomorrow, so you guys can definitely expect the story tomorrow at some point, probably earlier rather than later.
And aside from that I'd just like to say that I really, really appreciate you guys. I think it's incredibly sweet when you guys make photoshop images making fun of me or talk about my stories, I'd never expected them to be this popular and I feel like I'm really contributing to something that we all love by being able to write for you guys. I'm really glad the thread has lasted this long and I'm going to do whatever I can to help keep it alive in the future...so mostly just write stories haha.
Okay, anyway, back to work. I hope you all have a good night!
>>8734613
We love you too writeanon!
>>8734613
>>8736694
>>8736122
>Undyne in a wetsuit
>>8734613
god I love this thread
writeanon I'm going to sound like an idiot but you are seriously something special. you're a crazy good writer and you decide to write 150+ fics for us? you're literally exactly what this thread needed to keep it alive. so yeah like what everyone else said we love you too.
>>8721880
>can't show this on Jesus Blog
http://embed.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm29673721
Goodnight.
>>8742313
>That grown up man voice on Frisk
Kek. I thought the voice was kind of cute on Undyne at first but in the middle it turned way too high pitched.
>>8727782
God bless this general
hi all, writefag here. good news and bad news, the story's done and it's got probably the hottest sex scene I've ever written, but the powers out here and I can't post it right now. so I guess we'll just have to be patient. I guarantee you guys are going to love this one though so hopefully it'll be worth it.
>>8745215
I'm on the edge of my seat!
>>8745215
You can't just come in here to hype a story like that and then not give it to us! Now I'm looking forward to it.
>>8745215
You don't understand.
I need it.
Power just came back on! Here it is: https://pastebin.com/rUEReDMn
I'm a little conflicted about this one because I think this is seriously one of if not the hottest sex scenes I've written so far, but I ended up getting so worn out from it that I couldn't really get to the rest of the request afterwards. I think that might actually be advantageous, though, I think that sort of teenage impulsiveness is kind of perfect for a story like this. It also ends on what I think is a really sweet note.
Anyway, I'm sorry it took me so long. I put a lot of effort in so I'd love to know what you guys think.
>>8746621
The first half did things to my heart
The latter half did things to my penis.
5 stars
>>8746621
>her boyfriend doesn't say I love you back
>>8746621
All of the Teen Undyne stories are your best work. I look forward to them the most. I think this one is my new favourite story of yours, with the previous one being the Valentines Day special
>>8748240
Whoops lmao. Fixed and I think it's even cuter now, take a look and see what you think.
>>8747925
>>8748574
Thanks you guys. I'm always slightly nervous somebody will be like 'no this is shit' but hearing that you liked it is really nice. I agree, my teen Undyne stuff is pretty good, but idk what my favorite would be, probably something with Brill.
>>8746621
>you start to stammer out something about how you think about her too, when you j-jack off, you mean, and Undyne laughs
y-you too
>>8746621
I find Undynes family highly amusing to imagine.
>She's got the braces with a slight lisp
Aww.
Oh no, You is an idiot! Who even goes walking around the house with a morning wood! Since he drives a car I assume he's at least 2 years older than Undyne which makes him sound a bit like a douche but luckily he seems alright otherwise.
Wow, I'm not sure if it's the BEST you've ever done but I would say it's definitely among the top 3 sex scenes you've written. Kind of hasty but I guess that's the whole point since they're teens. It has that feel good vibe in it.
Sometimes the language you use in these makes me laugh. Like "handful of ass" and "you push forward into her like a spear of lightning". Just cracks me up while trying to imagine the scene.
>>8748240
Eh I imagine the kiss drives the same purpose. Just imagine him saying it afterwards.
>>8749291
Wait, I thought they were the same age? Since he's in Undyne's grade and everything. What's the problem with him?
>>8749291
You know that you can get your drivers license when you're 16, yeah?
>>8749441
If Undyne is 16 but You drives a car over to her place then I assume he's at least 18 and therefore at least 2 years older than her, no? How do the laws work in America for driving?
>>8749504
You can get a permit at 16 that lets you drive first with adult supervision and then alone with no other kids in the car (but that only really matters if you're pulled over) and then you can get the full adult license at 18.
>>8749176
That part cracked me up when I was writing too haha.
>>8749291
Yeah, I want to do more with Undyne's family in the future, I think there's a lot of potential there.
What is the problem with 'you' exactly? Just that you thought he was older? Because I don't think I've ever said it explicitly but I'd always imagined them as 16 or 17, which is old enough to drive in America. I wasn't meaning for there to be an age difference at all considering that'd make Undyne like 14 and I don't want her to be that much of a slut.
Are there any specific issues with the sex scene? I'm not sure what you mean by hasty, I think this one was definitely the longest I've done aside from that one threesome story. There's sort of a fine line between eroticism and taste that you have to straddle.
Maybe it's a language difference but I don't really see anything wrong with those phrases you're quoting? Like, they're unconventional, maybe, although the first one I've definitely heard in other places, but I don't really see what's funny. I'm not doubting you, I just don't get it.
>>8749527
In most US states you get your full driver's license at 16, so they'd be the same age. I think the writeanon has said stuff about them being in the same grade as well.
>>8746621
>she has braces now
>lisp
HNNNNNNG
>>8750501
I think it was inspired by this
>>8749693
There's nothing really wrong with 'You'. He acts a little derpy and Undyne keeps calling him an idiot. I did think he was 18 throughout the story and that was my mistake.
>Are there any specific issues with the sex scene?
No. What I meant by hasty was that the guy literally woke up, walked into the other room and they immediately had sex. I think that was the requesters point though so it's fine. I actually expected Undyne to fuck him as soon as he got there with how eager she was.
>Maybe it's a language difference
Maybe but language like "Grabs a handful of ass" or "Push forward like a spear of lightning" sound like... gallows humor in my mind (I don't know if that's a correct translation to what I mean. I mean it sounds like it's being told by a raunchy older man or like a dwarf in the witcher books and I find it hilarious). Don't get me wrong it's not a bad thing and there's usually like one or two at most in any longer story. I wouldn't mind more of them.
>>8750734
Maybe you find it funny because of all those over the top porn ads which say similar stuff and you associate it with them?
You know, like "20 pounds of pussy&ass" and the like.
>>8751016
That is pretty funny admittedly. If someone said something like that during actual sex I'd probably lose it and start laughing or at least grin like an idiot.
>>8750559
It was actually!
>>8750734
I get what you mean about it being hasty but most of that comes down to me just not wanting to make it ten times longer than it already is just so there's a proper arc. The point of these stories is always porn, either emotional or literal, so I figure it's probably better to just get on with it. I think I could have given them a better reason to not have done it as soon as they got there, I think that would have actually been more realistic desu, when you're a dumb horny teenager you want to fuck all the time anyway, that's what I was thinking when I wrote the entire reason for them having sex being Undyne noticing his morning wood lol. But I did those two halves over two different days so that's probably the reason there's that little break in the logic.
As for 'you' being dumb that's kind of his character, he's just this dumb inoffensive nice guy so he can set things up by being ignorant and who never gets impatient or upset with Undyne or has any real character of his own. Sometimes I might play that up too much but really he's just an excuse to have Undyne have a boyfriend without having to flesh them out at all.
I get what you're saying about the language, I get you now.
>>8751258
https://youtu.be/Ub-QJjjFZso
>>8751451
>Fuck my big black ass
Holy fuck haha. I could watch that guy slap those fake asses around all day while talking in that matter of fact manner.
>>8746621
Worth the wait
>>8752584
desu idk if the writefag has ever written a bad story for us
maybe some mediocre ones but never something actually bad
>>8746621
Absolutely loved it. And even though I usually prefer female/female sex scenes the way you described the one in this was just incredibly and intensely hot.
Also I really like the little descriptive touches, like describing Undyne's dad's jaw as a lanternfish jaw, that made me laugh.
>>8754001
>tfw no qt swapdyne to bully
>>8754892
>>8755698
Holy fuck. I think I'm going to be sick
Keep your cannibalization porn on your deepweb german fetish boards
>>8755764
>>8755698
she's just so pumped about it
I HATE fish kisses.
Please DO NOT post images of fish kisses.
>>8756054
Oh okay.
Well, I was going to post all of them but I guess I won't now.
>>8756376
):
I mean g-good. I didn't w-want to look at Undyne k-kissing anyone.
>>8756054
>>8756450
>>8757261
>>8757310
>>8757343
>>8757358
>>8757404
>>8757608
>>8757789
o-oh no
all these things I didn't want
whatever will I do
I'll have to save them to uh
make sure it doesn't happen again
yeah
>>8757917
I'm starting to get the impression that you're being disingenuous
>>8758025
I don't know why you'd think that
>>8746621
>>8757917
Whoops!
>>8758760
>>8758771
>>8758839
>>8758871
>>8759079
>>8759404
I thought that tear in alphys's eye was her pupil for a sec and she instantly became ultrasmug
>honey will you go check if the baby is sleeping?
>sue thing
>hey baby are you sleeping?
>undyne is best girl
>nah she woke as fuck
Would this work with undyne and asgore?
[fakespoiler]has drawfag even drawn asgore yet?
>>8759559
I laughed
>>8759659
>has drawfag even drawn asgore yet?
Possibly. I think I remember that they draw a pretty good Toriel.
>>8746621
>oh boy a new story
>open the page
>"undyne rolls her eyes"
SHE CAN'T KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THIS
>>8759978
Well her dad rolled his eyes as well, so at least you know who she got it from now
>>8760681
>tfw Undyne was self conscious about her left eye being a full inch lower than her right eye so she tore it out
the untold lore is heart-wrenching
>>8761033
>:thinkingemoji:
Could you not
>>8761303
lmao
>>8762103
Sunburnt shoulders is a fucking meme
but it's a cute meme so I'll forgive it
I brought you guys a gift from /utg/
Enjoy!
>>8762664
Unreal tournament general?
>>8762884
From the way they go at each other, it might as well be.
>>8762664
DO NOT cuck the lizard
>>8763046
Sorry but its canon
Who can we add to the thread team?
>>8763598
The drawanon is bi I think.
>>8761303
new reaction image
>>8763598
photoshop fag
>>8763766
Who dat?
Goodnight.
KINO
>>8762664
Also from /utg/
>>8764889
Now we just need undyne saying alphys is utter trash while anon tells her to open the door so he can throw alphys out.
>>8764946
That your fetish?
>it's saturday over at undyne and anon's
>which mean weird sexual experimentation day
>alright anon, i want you to stand at attention right here
>you're not allowed to talk and have to ignore everything i do
>aw hell yeah, anon thinks, use my body, baby
>good, now i think i'll just sit over here
>u wot
>and play with myself for a bit
>THAT'S NOT FAIR
>>8764381
lmao
I don't know where all these content creators are coming from but this is good shit
>>8765882
I'm just waiting for draw- and writefag to wake up and notice me.
What does it mean in the monster world if you poke a girl with a stick of uncooked spaghetti?
>>8764381
>>8763598
Haha I love it! I think I might take a break from writing today though.
>>8766288
People are still recovering from the last story.
>>8763598
>>8763766
>>8763893
Don't worry, I like when people don't remember me. It reminds me of highschool.
And my mom not calling on my birthday.
>>8766978
What kind of stick do you want, my dude?
Don't really know what a photoshop looks like.
>>8767250
Not them but just put the photoshop logo onto their face or something
>>8767580
That's not good character design, need something he can wield.
Was thinking a paint bucket but eeh
>>8767682
A graphics tablet or a stylus?
>>8759659
I've drawn over a dozen Asgores. Most of them are fairly old by now though. They're all requests by /utg/.
>>8759688
I would say it's actually the exact opposite. I've drawn like two decent Toriels but Asgore is fairly easy.
>>8761303
>>8762659
I've been bested!
>>8763598
>Drawfag
Kek at that hat. I don't really consider myself an artist.
I'm bi but only for pretty boys. Sorry anon. I'd go so far as to say any kind of femininity attracts me even if it's a cute male.
>>8764381
My sides. You know it's kind of funny, your shark is probably closer to what the writefag describes in her stories than mine. I've never given her those dead beady eyes.
>>8769161
das art
>>8766978
Cheer up punk! You've got potential!
>>8769750
>tfw no youngdyne to love and cherish
>>8769773
Cute babby Undyne raises weird fatherly instincts in me I didn't know I had.
>>8769346
That kind of depends on your definition of art and what an artist is. I don't consider just any kind of doodle of mine art. That would be doing a disservice to actual art that people put effort into. Doesn't mean they can't be enjoyable.
>>8769386
Sue me.
>>8770283
Are the writefag's stories art?
>>8770469
In a way, yes I'd say so. They handle multiple aspects of that form of art well. I only draw but I can't color or shade really.
boy we are calm today
>>8773087
eeyup.
>>8769823
Put her in a better spot
>>8773879
oh my god
>>8773879
hnng
I have to head out and can't keep bumping.
rip
why is she so cute lads
>Undyne has no nose
>could kiss her without having to tilt your head
>>8779882
>Undyne thinks your nose is funny
>kisses it and nibbles it when she's making out with you
>>8779882
>Undyne sneezes through her gills
>>8780198
Undyne is self-conscious of how much she rolls her eyes but it's such an ingrained habit that she can't stop
>Undyne has lots of scabs from biting her lips a lot but it doesn't stop you from kissing her because you love her too much
>whenever Undyne gives you head she bites your dick a ton but she can't help it because her teeth are too big but she always feels really guilty and tries to just give you handjobs instead
>>8780376
>when the webbing between her fingers is wet, handjobs almost feel as good as blowjobs anyway
>>8780446
>Undyne's favorite thing ever is when you eat her out but she always feels silly because of the noises she makes
>>8780614
>because she's a fish it literally tastes delicious so there's no downside at all and you could happily go down on her forever
>>8780665
>she never believes you when you tell her that and she thinks you're making fun of her
>Papyrus making you dank-ass, bomb-ass spaghetti
Wrong thread my bad
>>8780762
>Undyne making you kind of bland, mediocre spaghetti, but you wolf it down anyway so she doesn't feel bad
>>8780940
>Undyne accidentally knocks the shaker of garlic salt into the spaghetti and fishes it out and pretends that everything's fine even though you saw it happen
>>8780999
>wake up earlier than Undyne, stare at her for 30 minutes and go back to sleep
>>8781074
>Undyne realizes you've been doing this and starts holding you tighter when she sleeps so you'll wake her up if you try
>>8781514
>Using Undyne's excessive amount of body warmth to keep you warm during the winter instead of using blankets or fucking with the thermostat
>>8781605
>you have to get up and open the window in the middle of winter because Undyne is too hot and she's making you sweat
>>8781731
>kissing Undyne's neck
>she starts to breathe heavily out her gills
>tickles your lips and you have to stop because you cant stop laughing
>>8781836
>Undyne smacks you and calls you a dork and tells you to hurry up and make the new thread
guys
seriously
THREAD END
WHAT NOW?
Mexican standoff of laziness
>>8782220
We wait for page 8 or 9 or some shit or mods will get us.
ill do it