Write-Faggotry Thread #19 Last Thread:https://desuarchive.o

>>8703098
Ah fuck everyone fell asleep.
Well I'm shit at recapping so here's the stories made in no particular order:
http://luffy316.blogspot.com/
https://pastebin.com/R01v86hw
https://pastebin.com/mCxT14jQ
https://pastebin.com/qv5JJQ4A
https://pastebin.com/N1T73uFg
http://archiveofourown.org/works/10551320
http://archiveofourown.org/works/1407019/chapters/2951644
https://pastebin.com/dNUJRLes
https://pastebin.com/5Z0NFBFi
https://pastebin.com/PzX9E8T3
https://pastebin.com/a3Jqy6XA
https://pastebin.com/du0LST5M
http://archiveofourown.org/works/10587378

There may be more but that is what I see. Feel free to take a look, but assume all is nsfw

So should I focus on writing the story based off of my incomplete RPG setting, or finish the RPG setting so I could finally play a campaign I promised half a year ago?

>>8703230
The rest of the setting will likely come to you as you write, at which point you switch gears and focus on world building. Most people recommend that you work your setting out first, though.

>>8703230
Depends on what you want done to make the other easier.
Finishing the story would make coming up with a campaign easier, while coming up with a campaign can be used to flesh out what isn't covered by the story.

Personally, I say finish the story, since the campaign can be used to then worldbuild on the story after the events are said and done. Who knows, maybe you'll get another idea while working on it too

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Anchor posting for Bunny Mint story.

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To depressed anon, I'm still lurking and looking forward to Tina Story. Will post details/information again for your convenience. Let me know if you have any questions or clarifications about her (or magician's quest in general since I like talking about ded games).

Requesting a story based on this pic, in which Tina (Magician's Quest) gets sexually harrassment by pompadour anon throughout the school day, and no matter how much she strikes or fights he comes back to do it again to her frustration. It starts light with verbal talk and skirt flips, but gets into boob/ass groping territory, ass slaps, wedgies that show off said ass, and accumulate to him having her way with the wolf girl after school.

If you can think of more sexual bully antics be my guess.

As magician's quest game is pretty obscure, the context needed is basically that it takes place in a school of magic. Like animal crossing, there is only one human (pompadour guy) and everyone else is animals, plants, mythological creatures, or animate inanimate objects. Magic is used for convenience or pranks. That's more or less it.

I still have the game with her in my town.
The wiki describes her as studious, and she is often focused on studies and encourages (read: demands) others to study hard for their grades. A little uptight about it I think, and quick to critique.
Not sure if this helps much, but better than nothing I guess.
The soundtrack is basically classic music of various kinds for the US/JP version, so it helps the setting very much.

Up

>>8703098
Well damn, unexpected fall.

Although I don't think we've had any in-thread greens posted in the last one, so no call for caps.

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Not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here: http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions

>>8704999
Why not write it yourself? It's much easier to get help with your own writing than to find somebody who'll write niche requests for free.

>>8705195
From experience, doing it myself just doesn't give me the same level of happiness, not even a little bit.
Plus a number of other factors would hinder the story (no time, no experience in writing, etc.)

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For Djnn toxic:
Sakichan guy here again. As an excuse to bump the thread, have some sakichan pics I have saved if you ever find the time to tackle my request of her for related greentexting:
http://imgur.com/a/7wv3t

I could add more, though the remaining pics aren't quite as plump.

>>8703409
I was curious if this pompadour character is from one of the games or if he's simply a one-off for this image here.
I was also wondering if I should give him a proper name, since I've just been using the generic "Pompadour" for his actions.

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>>8706096
He's a one-off for the image mostly, though he would be taking place of the usual player character, making him the sole human there.

If you can think of any other delinquent-based name to give him, go for it.

Can someone repost that Tiff/Brit greentext pic?

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>>8708005

>>8708719
Thanks. Now I know what to prepare

>>8703098
One of these days the OP text will change for the better

>>8719732
Such as?

page 10

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>>8721869

If anyone is interested in giantess/vore content, I did an impromptu Bayonetta story over on /aco/.

>>>/aco/1273036

Next on the list is to flesh out the Tiff Crust story, which will be the last of the (currently finished) request stories I need to do so with. The rest are based on the daily picture challenge.

>>8723247
>>8706053

>>8723247
When did Bayonetta announced going to steam?
>enemies try flanking Bayo's booty
that doesn't usually end well, not at all.

Not into giantess stuff since it usually almost always ends in vore antics (not my kink), but the way Bayo played around with the (assumingly) death fodder angels was amusing.

While it might be rushed to you, at least it was done creatively so.

>>8724328
>When did Bayonetta announced going to steam?
On first april, in the form of an 8bit platformer version of herself.

But by now full proper port is already on it.

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>>8722805

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>>8706124
Almost done, although I don't feel as though 3000 words is enough.

Someone write stereotypical dirtytalk please

>>8727591
Just transcribe literally any porn video on the planet

>>8727606
but that is just
>Yur dik is sooh biig
>Take it you dumb slut
>Wrong hole
I want sensual stuff

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requesting /ss/ story between an anthro tribal rabbit and a voluptuous human witch

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>>8727658
>asks for stereotypical dirtytalk
>gets pointed to a source of stereotypical dirtytalk
>No, that's not sensual enough
Go read some written porn on [insert porn website of choice].

>>8727591

I don't have time at the moment to do write any "sensual" dirty talk, but I'd say the best approach is to not use any mention of any specific part of the body. If you must, don't use words like "tits" and "jugs." Use "breasts" or just "chest." For males, it's harder, because while "cock" and "dick" are the crude versions, "penis" just doesn't have that kick to it needed for smut. Use gentle, slow, verbs and adjectives, not rough and fast. There's loads of videos on pornhub, and even youtube, of women talking dirty to the camera (usually JOI). That might be a good source.

Here's a good example of dirty talk down sensually, while still referencing body parts (albeit with a man talking):

https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph57417917aea9f

>>8727966

Note, some of the lines in that linked video are incredibly cheesy and groan worthy. I'll leave it up to you to decide what is usable or not.

>>8727976
Why is porn dialouge so bad?

>>8729199
Talking while horny proves to be a difficult task

>>8727431
regardless of the limit that sounds promising! Jut trek on man

>>8729199

Because it doesn't have to be good.

>>8731945
>regardless of the limit
I wasn't clear, sorry. That's how many words I'm at currently, it seems so short and it's just about done.

Bwep

goodmorning page 9

>>8734809
Idunno, 3k+ seems like an okay size for a story?

Morning

>>8744591
yo

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>>8703409
Alright, I'll probably finish tonight (if I don't pass out) or tomorrow (if I do).

>>8742679
It just doesn't feel like enough.

>>8754610
oh boy cant wait!

write

>>8706053

I know I've asked for it a couple times already, so it makes me super embarrassed to ask again, but can you post up the request again? After I finish editing the Tiff Crust story, I want to handle this request of yours, finally. I recall parts of your request, but I want to try to not miss any details if at all possible.

>>8760509
That sounds awesome!
Combined everything into a pastebin now, so have a look.
https://pastebin.com/mT3g4wCn

If you have any questions feel free to ask

>>8762647

I'll start working on an outline tomorrow.

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Boop

>>8764895
Noic

If anyone's out there could you link me some stories or give tips involving sex with taller women? Nothing major but like a foot's difference.

>>8770512
taller woman?

Well in my view there is a small shift of dominance on bed for sure. Hell even in normal standards there is a bit of power loss for the man since he would be shorter than the person in mind. She could either use that feeling to her advantage or be ignorant of it and assume the 'what a cute widdle fellow' thing. That woman could easily put the man in very situational positions like pushing his head into her boobs even for a normal hug.

The short man would have to raise his head to be at eye-level with her; otherwise the first thing he sees on rest level would be her chest, and if she bends over, sometimes her ass too.

For sex, same applies, but she will have an easier time embracing the man with her thighs or body. Sex while standing up may be difficult, so she should be lying down or sitting so that he can pound her. His height may be able to reach her boobs only, so she may have to put effort into putting into a position so that the two may kiss during coitus.

Either way if you want man to take lead she has to let him do so
But that's just my thoughts.

Planning on writing a story about taller women?

>>8755061
Well you've only set yourself up for disappointment.

https://pastebin.com/z2Nw4hnP

I don't think I did the original request justice at all, and I didn't realize it until near the end.

I accidentally set this up on the pastebin account I was testing out. So I guess if I can figure out how to edit things I can fix it, though I doubt any amount of my fixing will help it.

>>8772033
So I actually begun reading this, and am surprised you knew about the type of spells being casted around, the names of the staff, and of the cloud hammock one. How much research did you do for this bit?

>>8772250
I watched several youtube videos to try and see what I can learn. I hate going off world, even in porn. Though I don't know if I did Ms. Strawe correctly or the other characters.

>>8772321
then I must say that is pretty damn admirable, so I'll give a kudos to that. Still reading it.

Want any feedback, or any specific thing you want info about?

>>8772646
Whatever you care to say.
I doubt I've improved before, or will ever in the future.

>>8771858
Planning to but lord knows if I actually will. I feel pretty stumped on how to get them kissing during sex which while I think is cute and erotic when he's going to have a facefull of breasts is something I'd like to work in. I suppose sitting sex and having her hunch a bit could work, right?

>>8772321
yeah Ms. Strawe is a living scarecrow. Magic.
I will say you made the pompadour fellow pretty fun, and he knows his prioritizes despite the pain: keeping his hairdo perfect. Reminds me a lot like Johnny Bravo if that makes sense. Plus he's a quick healer.
>>8772740
I will say that character dialogue is improved a bit more (or at least occurs more naturally flowing) compared to the few of your other works.
That man is going to become a future masochist for sure.
>>8775298
yeah expect a bit of sitting/hunching/whatever it takes to get her down on eye level to be present for kissing, unless he stands on a chair or does a jump cheek kiss or something.

>>8779964
>a jump cheek kiss
That sounds pretty cute. Thanks for the advice anon.

The Tiff Crust full version is nearly finished. It's fine to upload in its current state, but it feels a little bare, so I'm adding some more to it.

>>8783349
Woah shit you're expanding the Tiff request I made a few months back at you? That's pretty cool of you dude.
If you need something to add, how about some more detailed jiggly ass spanking on Tiff before Andrew fucks her ass, or even during the ass fuck?

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>look for femdom teacher stories
>Find one, summary seems fine
>read it, it starts pretty good
>character mentions their sister was eaten nonchalantly
>what
>eventually dissolves into consensual mutilation and vore with the teacher cutting parts off of the student and eating it until she rips off his junk and he dies but he's completely fine with it
make sure to read ALL of the tags kids.

>>8784429

By expanding I mostly mean giving each scene more detail, more thoughts by the characters. I don't think I'm going to add more scenes, but that's not off the table. I'll be sure to add in more ass jiggling (I mean, more than I've already added in this expansion).

>>8784745

I've been down that road before. Where you're reading a story, it's really good, and then here comes a fetish to ruin the mood. Sometimes I stop there, sometimes I steer around it by imagining something else happened. Rarely works, but if the story was good enough up to that point, I'll try it. Throwing a veil over cannibalism, though? That's a hard task.

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Idea bump: The older brother to a generic Magical Girl starts a romance with her little Anime Mascot mentor figure, after the Magical Girls become fairly self-dependant. Is there anything you Anons think would be something interesting to explore or just happen in this little skeleton of a concept?

>>8784745
Reminds me of the time I found some furry /ss/ with a robot tag.
And the robot was a children's toy they learned how to have sex with, then it subliminally condition them to love someone else in order to ensure the propagation of their race.
That was a trip.

>>8786786
looking at this brings up a number of questions in my head:
Did brother interact with mascot before magical girl was a thing or before she became self dependent? How did they meet?

There will usually be that strange taboo/humor/drama talk about a guy getting along with mascot, possibly jealousy with little sister (whether her being jealous about older brother's attention or mascot's attention), and whether he too possess magic potency.

Or in general, him having to learn about her magic world in order to further understand his interest in a relationship with the mascot.

There's also the optional smut piece, so that include size difference, different kinks/things that turn on mascot, and other stuff.

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>>8785194
>>8788006
The worst part is that the author specifically mentioned that in their world there was an app run by the government that "prey" could use to look up predators that would eat them and the kid fucking looks her up and gets nothing, so because I was a retard I thought
>well maybe this story takes place in the authors universe where vore happens but in this specific story it doesn't and I just won't read any other stories
Haha nope when the kid realizes he's been drugged and is gonna get eaten and asks why she didn't show up on the app turns out the teacher got divorced and the government hadn't updated her information
>mfw

>>8719732
Agreed.

>>8786786

The Anime Mascot Mentor's (AMM) relationship with the Magical Girl usually goes from mentor to dear friend. What often happens, too, is the AMM feels unnecessary and unwanted once the MG reaches a point where the AMM has nothing to teach her anymore. You could either:

A) Have the AMM wallow in this feeling, and the brother gives her comfort, because he knows what she's going through. He, too, felt unnecessary in the lives of magical beings and creatures (assuming he's not also magic), and can empathize and that's what brings them together, or...

B) The misconception that the AMM is not wanted by the MG anymore is actually real, and the AMM is desperate to get back into her good graces, and tries to get her attention/make her jealous by getting romantic with her older brother.

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>>8783349
>>8784429

The full version is now finished! You can find it here:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/TheDjinn/24054/The-Butt-of-Ridicule

http://archiveofourown.org/works/10647198

I hope you enjoy!

>>8793115
OR here again. Wew lawd you weren't kidding about adding/expanding the story. The drumming bit added for the spanking is golden. Thanks for fleshing it out!

>>8796409

Glad you liked it!

Who's up for footfaggottry?

>>8779964
>Reminds me a lot like Johnny Bravo if that makes sense
I didn't even think of that, oddly enough. Though the resemblance is very fitting.

Book

>>8804534
sup

>>8784745
>make sure to read ALL of the tags kids.
At least there ARE tags.

>look for inanimate TF stories on a TF stories site
>it's overwhelmed with sissy shit that consider "at one point the sissy is strapped to a table and fucked" sufficient grounds for the tag

>>8793115
Just read this.
I am getting some PTSD from the nerd's position, though mostly because I went through a similar situation back when I was younger in middle school.

Honestly can't think of much to say, though Brit is quite the voyeurist. The scenes are hot and the characters are pretty much lewd bullies. Cum scene is a bit more impactful compared to some of the earlier stuff. Don't remember too much about those two from the show, but they do love tormenting the main character so it fits. Ending is...interesting to say the least

>>8808608

Never watched the show myself, so I was constantly worried I wasn't going to be able to capture their characters. Still not sure I did. The cum scene I did intentionally want to put more detail into than in my other works, since it was kind of a "I've officially humiliated my bully" moment, and I didn't want it to be a quick sentence to try and reflect that.

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>looking over my story
>alliteration everywhere
Wat do?

>>8812071
Get your adjectives and thesaurus ready

>>8808987
Also begun reading the rest of English sinners. Will add more feedback when I finish it up

>>8812071
Depends. What are you writing?

>>8819943
A first person story of a man getting his paycheck.
For example I have a sentence that goes
>Jim was a sallow, middle-aged, blonde haired man nervously tapping his fingers on his paper cup of coffee while humming a hauntingly familiar tune
And there are other instances of the same type of thing. I've not written much so I feel like it's a problem that I should try to nip in the bud.

>>8820532

I think there's enough going on in that sentence that you'd be fine with leaving haunting and humming in there.

>>8820678
Huh well that's a relief. Would it be that as long as I don't go full "Sally sells seashells by the seashore" I'm ok? Assuming of course I've exhausted all other ways of writing the sentence up to and including paring down to bare minimum?

book

>>8820839
Pretty much, yea. Honestly, until it hits three words with the same first letter, I don't even consider it alliteration.

>>8821690
>Honestly, until it hits three words with the same first letter, I don't even consider it alliteration.
Same. It needs to be getting really excessive to start feeling forced and a couple coindcidental words don't count enough.

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bumparoo with random image

>>8763467
I hope all is well for you bud, and if you're enjoying what you got so far.
(Need an excuse to bump)

>>8826036
They must've known about all the new sexier mons this gen.
There's no way they didn't, especially with Salazzle.

>>8829220
Things are progressing slowly, but steadily. Considering her personality, it's all about balancing the sexy with the fun(ny). Right now I feel like putting in a scene where she Mikey-Mouse-Ears the ice villain.

Also got a good personality and motivation for the ice villain, as well, now. If all goes well, this should be a very cute and sexy romp.

If you want, I can try to whip up a snippet to post on here once I get back.

>>8821690
>>8822664
I know it's super late but thanks anons. It's always the little things that plague me.

>>8832080
>Mickey mouse ears
I like it already. I'd say hold the snippet for now until you get a halfway point or it's done.

>>8703098
I have lost my way in a sea of infinite joy and mishap. My body is but a canvas for each day to decide what becomes of it. My mind knows only simple actions and consequence, and thy soul has abandoned resolve. As a man left only with his ignorance and arrogance, i begin to wither

~anon~

>>8839702
What bizarre creatures

>>8839903
Majestic.

Oh wow, page 8 in 1.5 hours

>>8841069
I really wish they'd let us have this thread on /aco/. That place moves slowly enough that bumping wouldn't be a constant worry.

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Bumping with an old fic to share.
I should really stop being lazy and finish her up (4/7) chapters done so far.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10375670/1/My-Mischievous-Florges

Or at the very least polish up the chapters again.

Tl;dr trainer has to deal with a very flirtsy Florges after an accidental evolution.

book

>>8844482
shan't

What do people think of 1st person perspective? If I write some m/f male POV for a primarily male audience, isn't that a bit gay? Maybe I'm overreacting, but it seems too obvious that you're fapping to a story told by another man. 3rd person makes it more abstract. I had an idea that would work well with 1st person narrator, but I think maybe it should be 3rd person like normal. But then again, some people write 2nd person, and that's fucking weird, so what do I know. Any opinions?

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>>8846479
>If I write some m/f male POV for a primarily male audience, isn't that a bit gay?
wuh

>>8846544
Third person is more like watching a movie. First person makes you think too much about another man. And third person is most popular, so I wonder if that's one reason why.

>>8846574
I... suppose? I think third person is more popular simply because it's just weird to write things with "I" all the time.

Regardless, I don't think you should stress too much on the sexuality of your story, especially considering where we are.

>>8846479
I disagree. When first person is taken into consideration: you are in that guy's point of view. You are that man who is going to bang that girl. Mostly for self insertion purposes anyway. Second person is a bit more strange though since I haven't encountered too many like it.

Truthfully at the end of the day you're fapping to something written by another person. Not too much thinking going on for me personally.

So yeah I think things are being overthinked. Though it might be better to assume those that read third person are into voyeurism for watching other people have sex :^)

>>8846479
>Maybe I'm overreacting, but it seems too obvious that you're fapping to a story told by another man.

I can see how you'd come to that conclusion, but I don't think that's going to be the common perception people have when reading a first person story.

Yes, you are reading the inner thoughts of someone else, but if it's a m/f story, then they should still be describing the woman, primarily. Unless you're writing things like, "After she took off her top, I starting stroking my turgid cock, raising and lowering my hand as if I were hoisting the mail sail on the mast of a pirate ship of fuck," you'll be fine.

It's likely the person who's in the first person seat won't be describing themselves that much. Most likely they'll give the reader the details while commenting on their appearance in a mirror, but that's it. Unless the protag is Superboy, freshly awoken from the clone chamber, and he immediately starts fucking the nearest scientist, discovering both her body, and his own, for the first time, your character is going to focus on the details of the other person.

I've only written one 1st person story, and it was difficult just because of how it limits you. With 3rd person, you can show as much or as little of the thoughts and motivations of any and all characters as you want. You can either dedicate a paragraph to each character in a scene, describing their actions and their thoughts on the matter, or only focus on the thoughts of one character at a time.

In first person, you're only allowed to map out the protag's thoughts. This is great for stories in which you want that character to become entangled in a mystery, surrounded by people with unclear motivations (that's why I made that one story a first person type, at least). It's also great for getting the reader to feel immersed in the story, rather than acting like an electric eye.

tl;dr Don't describe the protag's dick more than the female's tits, and it won't be gay.

>>8847702
>I've only written one 1st person story, and it was difficult just because of how it limits you.
I almost exclusively write 3rd person limited, which is practically 1st person with the pronouns switched, so I don't have any concerns about that.

I suppose I'll request weight gain and force-feeding featuring Fionna and Prince Gumball from the Adventure Time cartoon.

>>8832785

The outline is finished. Sorry it's taken so long, so my goal is to start writing it tomorrow, though of course I can't promise that.

>>8861336
Ooh sounds exciting! Looking forward to it!

>>8859776
Huh, bubblegum feeding?

>>8854791
Oh man I remember this back in /b/. Still hot stuff.

>>8862969
Yeah. Whatever premise, but
>Fionna getting filled up with candy and stuff
>Gumball getting his gumballs off to how far he can push her and turn her into a fat love-toy

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>>8864353
Forgot pic.

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r/ a story of like a random young catgirl dressed similarly like this who has the runs and is rushing to the bathroom, and her just BARELY making it (or not). Regardless, let there be some sort of "damage" on the rear of her panties.

Have the setting take place at school during class or something.

>>8865394
Ah, was wondering when you'd show up. An anon shared a story of a catgirl going through some of what you wanted last thread. Might not be the exact same catgirl, but does take place in a school (magic) setting, and she barely makes it and has 'damage' like you wanted.

pastebin.com/mCxT14jQ

Warning: does contain farting

boop

>>8866073

Interesting.

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>>8706053

>A security guard shivers in place, one hand holding a flashlight forward, and the other gripped around the handle of his gun, only half way pulled from its holster.
>Only his eyes are allowed free movement, as the rest of his body is frozen nearly solid, icicles hanging off his chin, nose, and arms.
>The only thing colder with him in the room is the laughter of the fiend who froze him in place, slowing his heart rate to near death.
>The tall, thin, man walked confidently through the darkened museum halls, knowing exactly where his prize was.
>His tall black boots stepped briskly into the large room with the priceless diamond, the size of an orange, sitting on display in the middle.
>Halfway toward his goal, the darkness and silence are pierced by the loud and explosive entrance of a woman in red, floating off the ground with red wings.
>After the fire in the air around her extinguished, her proud super hero pose turned more relaxed as she looked over the new villain on the scene.
>"Well well well," she purred, floating closer despite the man's icy stare. "I haven't seen you before. I know this because I would remember a face as cute as yours," she teased, her wide eyes becoming more lustful in their survey of his lithe form. "What's your name, cutie?"
>The villain smirked, having prepared for this very moment, the stage set for him to introduce himself to who may well become his arch nemesis, but most likely just a stepping stone on his rise to power.
>"What's my name, you ask? Hmph, I'll tell you." As he spoke, he clasped his hands behind his back, resting them at the small of his back, and kept his chest puffed out as he walked around the devil-themed super hero.
>"All my life people have excluded me, ignored me, rejected my efforts to be in the sunlight with them? Why? Because I was weak!" he recited, gesturing fiercely with his hands, causing the icicles on his frozen epaulets to fall off in tiny pieces.

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>>8877500

>"But now I have the power!" he went on to say, holding his gloved hand aloft toward the sky. "And with it, I will not join society, instead I will reject it, as it did to me! I will forge my own path! Now it is I who is giving the world...the Cold Shoulder!"
>He basked in the momentary silence after his reveal, but after it proceeded past what he assumed was the normal time for someone to recover from fear of his commanding presence, he shot his bright blue eyes at her and arched a light blue brow.
>"Sooo...what's your name?" she asked again, arms crossed over her large breasts.
>"I just told you," he nearly stuttered out, his body dropping out of his stiff power pose.
>"..."
>"...It's Cold Shoulder..."
>Another moment of silence as she blinks, her purple lids flicking behind her domino mask, and then the nearly empty room was filled with the sound of her boisterous laughter and its accompanying echo.
>"That's your name? That's ridiculous! I know there's a lot of ice villains out there, but wow, that's all that was left to work with?"
>"S-shut up! It symbolizes my-" but he couldn't continue with her continued mockery.
>Fed up with her bullying, he thrust his hands forward, sending a barrage of icicles toward her.
>She didn't even flinch as they sailed, as she knew her aura of heat would melt them before they could make contact.
>The resulting steam parted, and Cold Shoulder saw the world famous Saki-Chan squeezing her body lovingly, twisting lightly in her own embrace.
>"Ooo, so nice. It's like being in a hot spring. I may have to keep you," she says before licking her lips.
>To seal the deal she made for them, Saki-chan glided over to him, and planted her pink, plump, lips against his pale blue cheek, letting a little steam rise up from the kiss.
>"My goodness, you're so cold," she said, stating the obvious. "You're making my nipples all hard," she whispered into his ear before floating backward enough to let him take a peek at the proof.

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>>8877610

>Being the young guy that he was, upon hearing the word "nipples," he had no choice but to look down toward her chest.
>Sure enough, the red latex was being pushed against by two nubs on her slightly bouncing breasts.
>"You came looking for this, right?" she asked, bringing his attention back up and toward the diamond she cradled in her gloved hand.
>Cold said nothing, merely lunged for it, arms outstretched, but Saki was too quick to react, too quick to move, and all he managed to get his hands on were her tits.
>He pulled his hands away, embarrassed, her amused laughter not helping.
>"I know you're new to this, but even you should know the basics. What's a jewel heist without a booby trap?" she asked, and then filled the silence between them with the tortuously slow sound of her zipper being tugged down, pausing for half a second after each click, to build anticipation.
>Her pink flesh tried to force its way out of her tight suit, taking advantage of the suit's snug embrace being lessened by the moment.
>Finally she stops, the exposed cleavage stopping about half way down her breasts.
>Given how large they were, that was still a lot of tit flesh being exposed.
>While he watched, she placed the jewel on the shelf of her chest, and then pushed down on top of it, sinking it further and further down between her mammaries.
>The gem was now completely gone from sight, but Saki still begged him to find it, leaning forward so he could look straight into the meeting of her luscious breasts.
>"Better hurry, the police could arrive at any minute," she teased, shaking her body back and forth a bit to cause her tits to move and the gem to slip further down.
>His hand is shaking as his fingertips graze the top of the space between her tits.
>She refuses to take her eyes off of him, so he focuses entirely on the task at hand, and begins to dig his hand down into the crevice.
>Saki shivered and cooed at the cool touch being rubbed against her warm breasts.

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>>8877929

>Although he tried to keep his eyes forward, he couldn't help but glance at the movement that crossed his peripheral now and again.
>Her tongue sliding across her lips before the bottom one disappeared between her clenched teeth, only to be released moments later, looking even plumper.
>Her hands reaching back and squeezing her own, juicy, ass, her tail flipping back and forth at an increasing speed.
>Finally he managed to get a solid grip on the gem, to which he shouted, "I got it!"
>"And I got you," she replied before zipping her suit back up, and making his hand be even more snuggly held by her chest.
>"What the- let go!" he said with anger and panic, trying to yank himself free but finding the confines of her suit simply too tight to make any real progress.
>CS released some of his powers into her suit, hoping to freeze her enough to force her away in pain, but again all he managed to do was make steam, to which she continued to squeal and squirm over.
>Eventually, he managed to yank the diamond free, just in time for the police to arrive and catch him with the gem in hand.
>Saki-chan blows him a kiss as he is pushed, handcuffed, into the back of the police van, specially designed to limit the use of his power.
>Though he would of course go to prison, the laws were lax and new enough to not handle super villains well.
>It was required that he first break out of a normal prison to prove that he required a higher security measure to lock him up.
>Of course, he took full advantage of that, and within a week had broken free from his prison cell, and was ready to take another crack at crime.
>This time he decided to rob a bank, complete with hostages.
>As he began to bark demands at the scared staff and patrons, he felt something land on top of his head, and rest there; something heavy and warm.
>"Look everyone!" Saki-chan shouted excitedly, "It's Mikey Mouse!" she exclaimed with her tits resting on top of Cold Shoulder's head.

(cont.)

I will continue the rest tonight, but right now I need to take care of a few things that have come up (no not that).

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>>8878086

>Immediately the atmosphere CS had cultivated in the room was shattered; any power he had over everyone was sucked out of the room.
>Things got even worse when he did his best to push her away, and once more managed to find his hands pressed against her breasts, pushing into them as she refused to move away with the force of his push.
>The crowd took in a collective gasp, awaiting to see how their beloved, if sometimes a little naughty, Saki-chan would react.
>Much to CS's surprise, she blushed and looked away, ashamed and embarrassed.
>The crowd rose up against him in a chorus of booing against the man they now saw as a perverted sex offender.
>Once more, the distraction Saki created with her curvy body kept CS off his feet long enough for him to get captured.
>Sure enough, this time CS was placed into a higher security prison, with cells specially designed to house each individual, super powered, inmate.
>Also according to the law, part of his rehabilitation was forced weekly visits from the hero who captured him.
>True to his name, CS did everything he could to ignore her during their "sessions."
>"Oh, my sweet little popsicle!" she'd cry into the phone that allowed them to speak to each other while separated by the bulletproof glass.
>"You know," she'd continue, tracing heart shapes on the glass with her fingertip, "I could put in a request that our visits wouldn't need to have this little barrier between us, or any guards watching, unless you're into that," she'd add with a wink.
>He continued to stay silent, refusing to react to her behavior for the required 30 minutes each week.
>"Don't ice me out, my sweet baboo! You've been without my touch for so long! Here, put your hands on the glass," she cried before unzipping the front of her costume.
>Although that did cause his eyebrows to twitch, he held strong in refusing to get her more fuel to her game.
>The hero threw herself up against the glass, flattening her tits against the surface.

(cont.)

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>>8879489

>"Do it! Touch them! You need human contact!" she pleaded, laying it on rather thick.
>CS just blinked at the sight of pink flesh trying to burst free from the red latex as she moved her body up and down, sliding those admittedly alluring assets against the glass.
>Part way through her performance, the timer goes off, and without missing a beat he hangs up the phone and begins to walk away.
>"Same time next week!" she calls after him.
>Although his cell was designed to house him, every villain worth his salt could find an opportunity to break free if they were clever enough, and CS had found his moment.
>He was barely outside the prison yard when he ran headfirst into Saki-chan's heaving breasts.
>He'd noticed she kept her suit unzipped whenever around him, to constantly tempt him with a balcony you could do Shakespeare off of.
>"Dammit! What are you doing here?!" he yelled, saying the first words to here he'd said in months.
>"Don't you remember? Today's our scheduled visit! I guess you got a little excited and just couldn't wait, Gold Standard?" she teased before grabbing him behind his head and thrusting his face once more against her jiggling breasts.
>CS pushed himself free again and yelled, "Dammit, you know my name is Cold Shoulder! Stop it!"
>Saki-chan, as part of her continued playground teasing of CS, had started to purposefully say his name wrong, just to get a rise out of him.
>It was finally working.
>"Y'know, you should just become a good guy, then you wouldn't have to worry about prison, and we could be together all you want," she proposed, floating around him and letting him get a 360 view of her plump form as she slowly turned herself around in the air.
>"You wouldn't have to quit cold turkey, either. I'd still let you be -bad- with me," she promised, emphasizing her meaning by spanking her own ass, letting CS watch as it managed to quake even under the tight embrace of her suit. "What do you say, Cold Turkey?"

(cont.)

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>>8879575

>CS screamed with anger and lunged at her, the surprising attack bringing her to the ground where he tried to pin her down and then, well, he didn't know what next.
>He just knew he wanted to shut her up.
>Unfortunately for him, Sakichan couldn't just fly and control fire, but she was also very strong, and so was easily able to pin him down instead.
>"So forceful!" she gasped. "I like that," she added, whispering it against his ear before nibbling on it.
>CS could only squirm and kick, trying to get the busty beauty off of him, while the prison guards made their way to them, seeing only Sakichan holding him down and waiting for them to take him away.
>Another month went by, this time CS being prevented from visiting from Sakichan as punishment.
>He found it to be rewarding, even though he still was unable to stop thinking about her.
>About her curves, both large, like her breasts and ass, and small, like the little rolls of baby fat that collected around her hips and stomach.
>It also afforded him enough time to come to some revelations about himself; revelations that helped him to once again escape.
>Returning to how he began, CS set out to collect diamonds for himself, this time in a jewelry store.
>Sure enough, as if she were stalking him, Saki showed up, floating proudly with her chest thrust outward.
>"Out again, I see? I would have figured they'd have put you in a stronger cell," she theorized aloud. "I don't think even my good word will let me visit you when they catch you again," she added with a pout, which slowly turned into a devious smile. "So I'll have to make sure to get in as much fun with you as I can before then."
>"You're right, they did strengthen my cell, but it's designed to handle ice powers, and I learned something about myself, Saki-chan," he said with a kind of confidence she hadn't seen in him since they first met.
>"That you're in love with me and will let me sit on your face?" she openly hoped for.

(cont.)

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>>8879672

>He completely ignored her comment and went onto explain, "I learned that my powers aren't just making ice out of thin air, not really. My power is to sap heat. Which means you hold no power over me," he taunted.
>"Oh you're so cute when you get all bravdo-y! Okay, let's play this way!" she accepted before throwing a fireball at him.
>Just as she had stood there, unflinching, when he threw his first ice volley at their first encounter, so too did he stand unwavering in the face of the elemental attack.
>Before it could strike, he held out his hand and the flame extinguished in the air.
>While she was still aghast, CS narrowed his eyes and send forth a piercing knife of ice in her direction.
>Still confident in her own abilities, and partly due to her shock at his new understanding of his own, Saki-chan didn't bother to dodge, and the ice attack, rather than melting before it could hit her, managed to slice across the arm of her suit, causing it to split open and let just the tiniest bit of arm fat bulge out as she gasped.
>"I'm still new to this aspect of my power, so I don't quite have enough control to completely sap you of your over abundance of heat, but I think I can pull out enough so you don't have that super heated aura of yours."
>After shaking off the initial shock, Saki-chan gets serious, fearing her crush for the first time, and began their first proper super hero duel.
>It was a clash of ice and fire, leaving wakes of steam when they clashed.
>Saki-chan's suit was continuously being damaged, causing more rips to form and more of her body to be revealed.
>CS too took several hits, overestimating his own ability to trump her, and his clothes were singed and burned off in places.
>Despite their frantic fighting, eventually there had to be a winner, and for the first time since they had met, it was him.
>CS pins her to the wall, and readies the final attack to get revenge for all the humiliation he had suffered at her hand.

(cont.)

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>>8879763

>But as he stared into her big doe eyes, he realized two things.
>One, her mockery of him was purely affectionate, as he saw no hate in her eyes for him in those moments, just a sense of betrayal.
>it was as if she didn't understand why he felt this way toward her, having always assumed he was just playing the same game that she was.
>Secondly, that his frustration with her wasn't over being constantly defeated, at least not entirely.
>His frustration was due to his unwavering attraction to every aspect of her, from her body to the constant attention she afforded him.
>"...God dammit," he says as these realizations coalesce in his mind and direct his next action.
>Saki-chan lets out a surprised squeak as soon as his mouth landed on hers, pushing her back even more against the wall, before she melted into his touch as it turned from angry to hungry.
>His hands roam all over her body, and as the kiss continues to become more involved, their tongues dancing between their mouths, moans filling the air, he reaches a hand up and begins to tear away at a hole that was formed in her suit, directly over her left breast.
>A chilly palm cups over the warm tit, blue fingers sinking into her pink skin, causing her nipple to harden and press into his palm.
>Saki-chan pushes him back, causing him to fall back onto the floor, leaving him a moment of confusion and fear he took things too far, before beginning to unzip her suit in front of him.
>Once both breasts were exposed, she pounced on him again, straddling his lap and holding her tits above his face.
>Saki-chan lowered her chest onto his face, making sure a nipple got into his mouth, and let him nurse on her hanging breast.
>While he suckled on one, he massaged the other, and would trade between the two at random intervals.
>Eventually he wanted more, and took control again and rolled them over, planting her on her back, and moving to straddle her, his crotch pressed against the bottom curves of her tits.

(cont.)

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>>8879837

>SC bit her lip as she watched him fumble with his fly, and fish out his painfully erect cock, before moving it between her mammoth mammaries.
>While he held her breasts together from the sizes, she played with her nipples, pinching, pulling, and flicking, demonstrating things she'd like for him to do later, all while he thrust his hips forward and back, pumping his cock into her cleavage.
>CS's endowment was nothing to be ashamed of, but even with his size only his cock head was able to poke out from between the tops of her huge tits.
>Saki kept her tongue out, letting the cock head bounce off of the wet surface whenever it poked out from between her tits.
>When he grew tired, he would keep his head out, so she could close her lips around it in a little kiss and suck on the tip.
>Reaching his limit, Cold Shoulder pulled back into her tit's embrace and let out the first, of what would be many, explosion of cum, against the inside curves of her tits.
>When he pulled back, she looked down at the delicious mess he had made on her.
>Before she could dip a finger into the tasty sauce, she was flipped over again, and her hips were grabbed and yanked up, forcing her ass up into the air, where she felt the cool breeze intense on her backside when he exploited the holes made there during their fight.
>Her pussy was pretty, puffy, and pink, he thought.
>It was beset on either side by her thick and shivering thighs, and above were her plump ass cheeks, jiggling just from the soft swaying of her hips.
>The cock head is rubbed against her soaking lips a few times before he pushes into her, fighting against the tightness of her wet insides.
>He continues to thrust into her, as she throws her hips back against him whenever he pulls back, until her pussy is fucked hard enough that he can bury himself all the way to the hilt inside of her.
>Her ass jiggles and smacks as it bounces off of his stomach whenever he throws his hips against her.

(cont.)

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>>8879977

>Although he made her ass shake and jiggle more and more with every thrust, he did take efforts to lessen the quakes across her flesh by reaching forward and grabbing her swinging tits, squeezing and playing with them while they fuck like animals.
>Two orgasms' worth of girl cum coating her thighs later, Cold Shoulder pulled out and decorated her pink, now slightly reddened from all the abuse, backside with a white load.
>Even though he felt he needed a moment to rest, Saki disagreed, and before he can catch a second breath, she straddled him again, not wasting a moment to stuff his dick back into her pussy and began to ride him with wild abandon.
>Thankfully he didn't have to be an active participant in that position, so he could just lie back and watch her huge tits bounce up and down, and shake side to side, as she writhed on top of him.
>Tired though he was, the sight invigorated him at least enough to reach up his hands and grab those bouncing breasts, massaging and playing with them while Saki-chan lost her mind in pleasure while riding him.
>They went back and forth like that for the rest of the night, changing positions mere moments after one or both of them came.
>At one point they were both lying on their sides, with CS thrusting into her from behind and lifting up her leg to spread her more and go in even deeper.
>Another time she had bent herself over a display case and pressed her chest into the glass, testing the strength of it while Cold Shoulder pounded into her from behind.
>Whenever one got tired, the other would find the strength to go down on them, letting them just sit back and enjoy the pleasure as they made up for lost time.
>Cold had found himself with his face both between his thighs, and then later between her cheeks, as he ate out either of her two holes.
>Saki played with his cock a lot, and always utilized her breasts, whether by putting it between them, or just grabbing it and poking her own tits with it.

(cont.)

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>>8880127

>By night's end, they were both completely spent, but by the time the sun was beginning to rise, the only one left conscious was Cold Shoulder.
>As he dressed, he stood proudly over the conquered hero, and then turned his gaze toward the prize he had originally broke into the store for.
>But as he pondered how best to steal the gems as quickly as possible, his attention also darted to the resting Saki-chan.
>Back and forth he debated what to do, but finally came to the conclusion that he couldn't, in what little conscious he had left, just leave her there to be found by the store owner and/or police.
>Her reputation was that of a playfully lewd hero, but certainly not so much that she had been seen with a shredded costume and covered in cum.
>Plus, his DNA was certainly everywhere, and he'd need her on his side to help convince the cops that he wouldn't be caught.
>But really, though he didn't want to admit it just yet, he just really really liked fucking Saki-chan, and just generally being around her, and wanted that to continue.
>So, rather than taking a duffle bag full of gems out with him, he instead lifted up Saki-chan and carried her out the back door, hoping to at least get her back to his lair before anyone saw him.
>If not, he'd just drain them of their energy until they fainted and would awake later, assuming it was just a dream.

(end)

>>8880176
Whelp, there it all is! I hope the exceedingly long wait was at least somewhat worth it, for the OR. I know it was a lot of fun writing. I know the sex might feel somewhat rushed through, but keep in mind this is more or less an outline and a half. If/when I turn it into a full text, there would be a lot more detail. It'd also probably be split up into two chapters, like how I did with the Tiff Crust story.

In any case, I hope you all enjoy!

>>8880215
>Cold shoulder
This man lacks creativity for names.
Also didn't expect those kind of Mickey mouse ears. Always thought they were called boob hats. Hostages must have had one hell of a kek.

OR. This is pretty damn good down to a T. You captured her personality pretty well, and cold shoulder's responses fit nicely, if having quite the over the top introduction. You weren't kidding about a funny sexy romp. Glad you had time to do my request!

Damn now I can't wait for this to be made in a full story. The amount of lewd that would be happening would make it one hell of a hot read, especially considering their stamina.

The outline have me an idea for a scene if you don't mind adding something when you convert the story to full text: perhaps she should use the jail request (without his consent) to sneak an embrace on him from behind in his cell (of course, rubbing her chest on his back), spooking him to use his powers that only come off as water due to the hindering cell, drenching her some for wet boob cleavage, and then she makes a show of eating some long, phallic tempura to dry herself off before leaving behind a spicy kiss to his cheek, or lips.

>>8882195
>This man lacks creativity for names.
Its traditional for capes, both heroes and villains.

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Requesting anyone make this thing into a reality

>>8886323
>That last poster
LAAAAAAAAZYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

What's the deal with facesitting versus regular cunnilingus?
Is it just a power thing or can a shy woman be coaxed into enjoying it?

>>8886989
The concept of facesitting seems poorly defined. With her facing towards you it's just cunnilingus with her more in control of positioning, but facing away your nose is right next to her asshole, which seems a completely different fetish, and one I don't like. I wish there were different words for the different versions.

>>8882195
I will add that suggestion to the outline so I won't forget it. Glad you enjoyed it!

>>8886989
Cunnilingus, the woman is standing, but most likely sitting down somewhere. With facesitting, she's shitting on someone's face, rather than a chair or bed. As soon as she leans forward, taking weight off the person's face, and starts giving them oral, it becomes a 69.

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>tfw added a few sentences to my story today
>realized I'll have to rewrite a large chunk of another part because I'm not happy with it and it didn't go well with the rest of the previously established set up
Fuck. At least I got what I want to do down instead, now it's a matter of salvaging what I already had and if it'll fit in the rewrite. Gotta fight that laziness.

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>>8893039
>Gotta fight that laziness.
I'll be cheering for you!

...while I'm doing nothing!

Requesting a foot worship fic based on >>8891344 and >>8892662

I'm feeling rusty
Anyone want a greentext request or two?
Give references if you want.

No scat or watersports, no vore, no futa, no snuff or vomit. None of that inflation or fat worship shit either.

>>8898089
I am as simple man so I ask for Tall female on short male. Make it sappy as fuck and lots of kissing.

>>8894466
Hey, >>8898089 here.

If only I had scrolled up before posting.
I'll get on this. But before I do, let me ask, are you into the physical aspects of feet or more into the body worship stuff?

>>8898124
>Tall female on short male
My nigga.
You got it.

Are we talking MILF status or do you want "sappy" college romance sort of stuff? What, if anything, should I focus on? The height difference itself or the two looking past that and just enjoying each other's company with some short and tall jokes throw in there? Also how sappy are we talking, and which perspective do you want it in? I'm thinking just a 3rd person sort of deal. Let me know.

>>8898124
Gonna work on yours first, just now realized the other guy's post was 2 hours ago

>>8898237
>Milf status
My nigga I'd love you for that. If you can I'd like to see a bit of both with height jokes and slight fumbling as they deal with problems from their different heights.
>how sappy
I'm not entirely sure, just go with what you feel. I'm a big fan of kissing nuzzling and hugging if that helps at all. Third person's fine with me from whatever perspective.
>>8898373
Thanks anon

>>8898387
>summer was finally approaching
>that could only mean one thing
>a fun filled summer at the beach getting wasted, having a good time
>and MILFS
>and so he set out, maybe not with the best intentions, but he figured he'd just chat for a while and see where things headed
>for quite some time now he kept his eyes on this one MILF
>mid 30's, amazing curves, brunette hair, and just how he liked them, tall. Jessica.
>fucking jackpot
>growing up he dealt with all the short jokes, but college helped him realize there are quite a few girls into that, time to put it to the test
>she was sitting at the bar, alone
>the sun was slowly sinking, the waves lapped up at the sand and a light breeze settled in, but the people were just as lively as ever
>So he walked up to her, trying not to stare at her swimsuit that barely contained her ass and breasts
>This was it, his moment, now or never
>He sat down, ordered something stiff and exchanged glances with her
>"Oh hey you, what are you doing here?" She said while leaning forward to show some cleavage
>"Just hanging around I guess, Jessica" he replied, "I enjoyed our talk the other day and figured I'd come back" he said while repeatedly adjusting his gaze
>"Oh how sweet of you, Anon" she said while sipping her drink.
>She leaned back and stretched. God damn did she know what she was doing
>She caught him looking and giggled, and bit her bottom lip
>damn
>She couldn't help herself now, and kept the conversation going, "Alright, let's just cut to the chase, our last talk was pretty...interesting, and now I just have to know"
>She leaned forward to look him in the eyes "Is it true that all short guys...like you...are secretly packing?"
>He almost started choking on his drink, and the bar tender gave him a quick thumbs up
>Now it was his turn
>"You'll have to find out for yourself" he said.
>She laughed and ended it with a sigh while playing with strands of her hair
>He could swear he heard a moan in there somewhere

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>>8899136
>it begins
>tanlines
Ye boi.

>>8899136
>If he played his cards right, she'd be moaning a lot more
>"My turn" he said, then looked up at her with a sly grin, "Is it true that taller girls are better in bed?"
>She giggled, set her drink down and adjust her hat again
>She looked down, thinking of an answer, caught one, and winked at him, "I'm not so sure about that, but, well, I am what guys would call a M.I.L.F" she took her time slowly pronouncing those four letters, waiting to see what he said next.
>"I didn't hear a yes or a no" he claimed, sipping the last of his drink
>"Well aren't you just adorable" she replied.
>She put one hand on her hip and finished her drink, while he placed his empty glass down
>"For someone as short as you, you sure know how to impress a lady" she giggled
>"Okay miss Amazon, how about we continue this talk somewhere else?" he said sarcastically
>"H-hey" she stuttered, "Amazon?"
>She started blushing, hard
>Jackpot
>She stood up to leave and he followed her, flashing the bartender a thumbs up

>You both got back to her house, drunkenly exchanging topics the entire way there
>She fumbled with her keys, and opened the door
>"Ladies first" he insisted
>"Oh you just want to stare at my ass" she laughed
>"Oh come on you can't even blame me for that, I'm practically right at eye level with your butt" he said, fully aware of what he was saying
>She laughed hard while drunkenly swaying up the stairs
>He shut the door behind her and laughed at his own shitty joke
>He got a great view of her tan-lines as she reached back and unlaced her top
>"Hey short stop" she paused to laugh, "catch"
>Almost falling down, he managed to catch it, only to look back up to see Jessica's hands behind her back, fully exposing her firm c-cup tits, tan lines glazing over an inch or two at most
>He stopped thinking for a second
>Then he dropped his pants right on the stairwell
>She caught a glimpse and gasped "Anon... hah..wow I guess the rumors are true..."

>>8899796
>Her last piece of clothing came off and she threw it at Anon's face
>"Well you proved me right, now it's my turn" she said seductively before posing with her hands on her hips "Let's fuck"

>She laid down and he climbed on top of her, rubbing her all over trying to get her warmed up
>Based on what she threw at Anon, she was pretty fucking soaked, time to get this started
>He slid into her slowly while wrapping his arms around her shoulders and burying his face in her perfect breasts
>she moaned as his cock slipped past her lips and inside her
>gradually stopping as his head kept bumping her chin
>"Okay wait a minute" she said "look I want to keep fucking, but this isn't going to work, you keep hitting my chin, short stuff"
>He couldn't help but laugh
>"Okay let's try something else"
>So she pushed Anon back on the bed and kissed him deeply before straddling him
>"I need that fat cock inside me" she whispered and even nibbled on his ear for good measure
>FUCK
>She brushed her hair out her face and sat on Anon's dick and started riding him
>The initial thrust was almost too much, she must have been doing kegels or something
>bouncing on his dick in a steady rhythm, she started getting into it, loving how his dick gently rubbed against her insides
>"Ah...ah fuck, okay Jessica hold on" he said, trying to catch his breath
>She slammed back down on him then looked at him, worried that something was wrong
>"Look, I've literally been dreaming about this for years, but this angle is hurting my dick" he said
>She leaned forward, locked her legs around his and held him up, "How about this then?" she asked
>"No, this hurts too. Damn it". Frustrated, he scooted away from her on the bed while thinking about what to do next
>They looked at each other for a while, horny as fuck and frustrated
>"I got it" she exclaimed

>>8900153
Fuck, sorry for typos.

>"Come here" she demanded
>He watched her partially lay on the bed and raise her ass in the air
>She looked back at him "Just fuck me doggy style!" she screamed
>Then she blushed and whispered, "please"
>Can't really say no to that
>It was a little awkward at first, he ended up putting his weight on her and leaning into every thrust
>"Just like that!" she moaned
>He eventually got the hang of it and got a good rhythm started, sometimes slowing down or teasing her with just the tip before slamming down
>For a second he wondered what her neighbors were thinking, hearing her scream like this
>He almost wanted to give her a pillow to scream into and decided to thrust into her harder instead
>Trying his hardest not to come, he started pulling out fully and getting balls deep with every thrust
>Overall, they fucked for about 20 minutes, and they didn't want it to end
>Her knees started shaking and her legs almost gave out as her orgasm started, clamping down on Anon's fat dick hard
>Like he was accepting his fate, he slammed into her one more time and laid on top of her, letting her screams push him over the edge
>He came inside her hard, shuddering almost as violently as she was, his legs went limp as his toes curled after he emptied his balls in her
>Satisfying to say the least
>He barely had time to pull out before they both collapsed, panting like they just got done with some intense cardio
>She spoke first, clearly shocked "Holy fuck, Anon that was amazing."
>"Any time, Jessica the Amazon" he replied, still dizzy
>Both of them laid there on the bed, panting before she brought him in close so she was spooning him and ruffled his hair
>"With a performance like that, we're gonna have to fuck more often" she whispered, lightly fondling his still sensitive dick
>He winced then agreed, as she leaned in to kiss his forehead
>He turned around and hugged her tightly, finding it strangely comforting

>>8900596
>"Wanna fuck in the morning?" she said as she rested her chin on his head
>"Of course" he said back while nuzzling into her
>They both drifted off, sleeping the best they had in months realizing that things would probably continue after a quick shower and some breakfast

>>8900700
God damn, didn't think it would take an hour to write on the spot.
Hope ya liked it though, Anon.

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>>8900941
You da man anon. I appreciated the position swaps and working to get the sex working in the best fashion.

alien fanfiction update https://pastebin.com/t48uWRVa

>>8898178
It's kinda a mixture of both, but ask the anon that's in the reference, I'm requesting this story for him

>>8898089
Gonna wing it with >>8704999 since it seems like toots aren't on the 'no' list.

man, I wish I could expand my fanfic writing chops

recently, I wrote my first fic, and it was a fuckin egg laying fic for Easter

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>Worked on roughly half of a TF fic months ago
>Haven't gotten around to picking it back up

Fuck.

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>>8903894
Well?
What are you waiting for?

Boop

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>>8903873
Don't let your dreams be memes. You can only get better if you practice.

>>8904712
I'm not sure myself.

>>8903873
>recently, I wrote my first fic, and it was a fuckin egg laying fic for Easter
share please, it sounds fun

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>>8908977
well...it's starring a character that I [spoiler]rp as, she's a shiny Quilladin from Kalos who works at a cafe in Unova[/spoiler]

pls no bully

https://pastebin.com/eXPPqKis

>>8894226
You get any work done anon? You can do it! I believe in you!
>>8909213
Dif anon here but the swearing takes me out of it. I think deleting or replacing them with something a bit less coarse. Imo it makes the story sound too much like inarticulate teen speak when cursing works better when used sparingly for effect.

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>>8909663
>You get any work done anon?
Nah, not like I had anything to do in the first place.
I mostly just bump this thread occasionally and lurk.

Keep it up

>>8921116
>3935 words
I'm trying mang. A hundred or so might be outline stuff but I'm not giving up.
Who do you people even write for aside from yourself of course?

>>8921342
It's just a hobby for me now, honestly.
Helps me deal with a lot of shit that's been going on.

The most recent Samurai Jack episode means I'm going to have to do some rewrites on my Daughters of Aku story. Might be tough, but I think I can fudge the details well enough.

>>8922556
That or I'll just put a disclaimer at the start of the story saying, "I wrote this back before ep 6." Depends on if I can come up with a decent rewrite.

>>8922841
The disclaimer is the better option. What happened this episode anyway?

>>8886323
Hey I did that screencap
>Original writefag never delivered
>Took it to another
>planned to write something but never delivered either
Am I destined to be perpetually cucked?

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>>8906886
Are you unsure of where to go with it or are you just not as interested in the idea as you initially were?

>>8893039
がんばれ! You're fighting the good fight. There's an apt quote from Carl Elliott that goes as follows:
>My general approach [to revision] is to delete all the parts that suck. Often this means deleting everything.

>>8921342
If you're writing with the intent to post the finished work somewhere, then the other people you're writing for would be your intended audience. You can't enslave yourself to your audience too much though, most of them don't know what the fuck they want.

>>8925030
If /vp/ has a writethread, that may be your best bet. Try to get someone with a good track record of actually finishing shit, if possible. Alternately, try taking a whack at it yourself. It feels good to be able to put content you want to see out in the world and not have to rely on others to do it.

Is Frontiersman still here?

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>>8909213
>Immediately, she grasped the egg and hugged it.
>…only to have it cave in a bit. Marron’s eyes bolted open, and instantly tears began to well up as her mind began to scream. “No, no, nononono, n-no! No! Nuh…oh, huh?”
>“It is…a chocolate egg?” Oh man, imagine that. Instantly, those tears dried up
Is it odd that I find this part actually kind of heartwarming?

Would you guys accept us lonely faggots from the /monster/ thread? We have a couple of writefags who mad some really cool stories.

Check this guy out before you decide:
http://pastebin.com/u/BaselineAnon

>>8929248
Anyone is welcome. I mean, not like we could be picky anyways considering the thread is slug paced and has to be consistently bumped.

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Content SOON

>>8924961
https://youtu.be/ZeviNGNgIVo?t=57s

Some revelations about her outfit which make (small) parts of my story not make sense. However, it opens up the way for possible even hotter scenes.

Small loan of a million bumps.

>>8929248
what is monster

Fuck it, I'll take another greentext request. Same anon from yesterday. Same rules from >>8898089 apply.

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>>8940662
Here's a random pic to get it off page 6

>>8903383
Haven't you been trying to get this request done for a couple months now?
Why would you even bother at this point?

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>>8940662
Requesting a foot fetish fic based on (pic related)
I'd like to see sweat and musk included too

>>8940662
>>8704999

So HF recently did a site makeover, changing the layout and color scheme of much of the site. Looks fine, I guess, but there's a major issue. All my stories posted before the change have their text set to black, as that's the color of the text in MSWord where I type up my stories before copying and pasting to HF. This was fine in the past when the background was grey, but now that the background is one shade removed from black, it makes all my stories nearly illegible.

Hopefully they come up with a fix quickly, because right now I really don't want to go through all my chapters manually to change the color, especially if it clashes with a fix that might come later on. For now, best option, if you're interested in reading my work, is to just use the AO3 profile. That's been the preferred method, anyway, since HF blocks certain content unless you're a registered member.

>>8941505
>>8941001
Look, I just realized how late it is here, and how I can't jump into these just quite yet.
I'll try again tomorrow, just not feeling it right now. Fucking writer's block. Also I'm going to need some reasons why you like these fetishes. I just need a better understanding of what you would want to see in a greentext because I don't get these fetishes desu. Give references if you need to.

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Slept on my arm wrong, or something, last night, and it has been killing me all day. Finally got the pain down to a numbness, long enough to finish up writing the full narrative of the Rogue/Jean mental fuck story (which was based on the attached pic).

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/TheDjinn/24156/Bedtime-Fantasies/63413/Chapter-1/Goodnight-Rogue

http://archiveofourown.org/works/10717335

>>8943973
Florges OR. I'm more interested in the reverse power-play when it comes to this fetish. Under normal circumstances farts are always associated with femdom, so I was aiming for a reverse of sorts, a gal embarrassed/humiliated about doing it, but the male persuading/enticing her to release more (against her will to an extent).
>Basically why be embarrassed? It's only natural, so let it all out and embrace nature, or something like that.

Up to this point I never considered the smell. I just assume that as a fairy type with association of plants, it would be like that sweet scent move, which could be what makes him decides that he wants more.

Specific scenarios, if needed, are in the pastebin should it pique you

>>8943973
And footfag OR here, sweat and musk are heavy turn-ons for me. I know domination is a major fetish associated with this however it is an absolute turn-off for me. Worship however, is a (minor) turn-on, as long as it isn't extreme (like worshipping someone's soles as if they're gods) I also generally prefer the soles and toes being focused on, although the entirety of the foot is fine.

Also here's a scenario idea if you aren't able to think of anything:
>you encounter this gal at a beach/ public pool and she complains that her feet are sore
>you ask if she wants a foot massage and she accepts gladly
>after you take off her sandals you notice just how sweaty and musky her feet are
>trying to ignore that, you start rubbing her sore, supple soles, with her possibly commenting on that you're doing well
>while she's distracted, you start taking a few whiffs of her musky soles, slightly getting erect from it
>she notices your slowly rising erection, and allows whatever you feel like doing with her feet
>once you confirm that she isn't joking, you start licking the sweat from her soles, making sure to get sweat trapped between the toes and wrinkles
>once that's done you then take deep whiffs of her smelly feet, her musk being rather potent
>you eventually just savor her feet for a few minutes, occasionally sucking on her toes like candy
>afterwards you're completely erect by the end of that, and once she notices she asks for the both of you to go somewhere private
>now that the both of you are alone she asks you to take your pants off
>you comply and she sandwiches your cock between her soles, starting to give you a footjob
>she occasionally rubs her soles on the top of your dick, making sure you savor this moment
>her pace quickens and you eventually cum between her soles
>as you're winding down she gives you her phone number and asks you to call, in case you ever want to visit

>>8945199
Just read this.
This Is something I'd like to call telepathic-aided masturbation. It is something I was interested in trying out in one of my stories, but was unable to really comprehend how it could be done. If you don't mind, I think I'll use this as a base should I ever get the will to continue it.

It is pretty detailed, though I think there is a bit too much TMI when it came to the bodyswap experience. Jean knowing what it felt like to have a throbbing erection notably sticks out and just weirds me, mostly because I'm not a futa kind of guy. Perhaps that line could be edited out or something.

I do like how the link made Jean cum just as hard though; that way both parties are satisfied

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>>8946925
Originally the story (as seen here) was a lot simpler, and didn't involve things like Jean getting feedback, or Rogue even disrobing. As I went to write a full version, I did feel compelled to of course add more, which in turn made me think of how telepathic-aided masturbation, as you call it, would play out for both parties.

I went back and forth on whether or not to have Jean experience Rogue's sensations as a man or woman; whether or not Jean felt whatever this "phantom Scott" was feeling or make it relative to her female body, because I'm honestly not into futa either (so sentences like "her throbbing cock" were new territory for me). Just for making the experience new and different, I think that aspect of the story works well. I did try to minimize how much I mentioned the connection between the mind-dick and what Jean was feeling from it, though, just so it wouldn't become, more or less, a futa story.

Tagging was somewhat of a challenge. Is it just solo, does it count as F/F, F/M, or both, stuff like that. I ultimately went with saying it was both, as it's "physically" a F/M pairing, but parties involved were F/F.

It was a lot of fun to write, though. Rogue remains one of my favorite characters to write about because of how I have to often work around her powers preventing her from touching anyone. Also because she's one of the earliest fictional-character-crushes I've had.

>>8948545
Nicely done

>>8948545
Well the explanation makes sense, but reading it over and over again I still get some really blech vibes from that section that dampens my mood. I'm not sure what can be done to fix it outside of removing that wee tidbit.

>>8951020
If I get enough complaints about it, I might be inclined to change it (I've had to do so before with an ending to a story), but as it is I'm most likely going to keep it, just because it's something different than what I've done before.

>>8949743
Thanks!

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Any update on that Winnie story?

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>>8945199
>that scott cucking

>>8943556
Anyone gonna write about this?

>>8929248
So... I guess the Monster writefags are moving over here?
k.

>>8959610
nope

I'd like to request breast and/or ass growth fapfics.

>>8786786
No ideas off hand but +1 do want

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>tfw haven't written any porn in a while, full of ideas but not sure what to write

I could write more thri-kreen porn or some kobold porn, I also had an idea for a story that's basically Enemy Mine except the alien is a chick and they eventually fuck, I have the beginnings of a female Predator fapfic gathering dust on my hard drive, and I also had an idea for an Elder Scrolls fapfic where an Imperial warrior-type hooks up with some Dunmer jailbait but that's about as far as I've gotten with it

I'm pretty sure this indecision is just another form of procrastination though

>>8963259
I suggest either making a poll or Kobold Porn.

>>8703314
Still workin

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>>8959610
Finding lots of fanart related to this new "canon," so I wouldn't be surprised if we at least saw a greentext.

>>8964119
Oh hey you're alive. How goes the story? Is it still about Bunny Mint being sexually harrassed by the new guy?

>>8964350
I"m thinking about just posting a greentext because doing one with actual thought is proving to be too complicated

>>8964434
Honestly at this point I'll take anything to get the story.
Not sure if this helps, but I'll repaste our quick discussion about the idea:

>Well, either way, requesting a fic about Bunny Mint (pic related) being sexually harassed by her anon partner during a spy/stealth mission, making her fuck up her stealth. Sex optional, but humiliation a plus.

>In terms of suggestions a place for a description of what she looks like could be added somewhere, either before or during the trainee's groping antics

>Otherwise I'll leave it up to you as to how the sexual harassment takes place during the mission(s?), though I predict groping, buttslaps, and foolplay in his lucky future.

>the sexual harassment can get pretty fucked up and into a darker territory.
>What are your limits?
>You speak my language, as I have no limits myself. Feel free to go all out if you wish.

If you end up saying 'fuck it's and going greentext, would you be willing to post the WIP?

>>8963259
>I'm pretty sure this indecision is just another form of procrastination though
Yes yes it is.

Up

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>>8925501
>Are you unsure of where to go with it or are you just not as interested in the idea as you initially were?

I have some idea as to go where with it, and I know some folks are interested in the premise, but for some reason I just haven't picked up the pen again despite having all the spare time in the world.

>>8968802
sup

>page 8
Unacceptable.

>>8959610
I'm currently writing about a fat gluttonous Wendy for any of you fatfags in this thread, however I feel like my writing lacks a good flow and impact upon the reader. I'm wondering if any anon could help me out with that.

Here's what I've got so far:
https://pastebin.com/JfEbv7VW

>>8977685
Also I just realized that Wendy's has Frosties not Flurries, so sorry if I was heretical for a second

>>8978010
Your heresy will be forgiven this once, Anon.

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>>8706053
>>8877500
>>8877610
>>8877929
>>8878086
>>8879489
>>8879575
>>8879672
>>8879763
>>8879837
>>8879977
>>8880127
>>8880176
Oh hey guys still here I see have a thing

>>8979492
>That filename
Totally forgot that sakichan should've introduced herself to cold shoulder

bzzzzt

na na na naaaaa na na

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>>8979492
Here have another thing cause I can

>>8979492
>>8979853

Oh shit, did I never have her say her name aloud? Fuck. I think in the back of my head I was thinking she was a known enough super hero that he'd know her name just from watching the news. Still, that's odd.

>>8983201
annnd another

Bump-a-rino
Any criticism with >>8977685?

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>want to become a writer in my free time
>big fan of science fiction and exploring new worlds, spaceships, autism shit really gets my gears going
>get heavily into the fanfiction scene because i fell for the "Tell stories you want to, for any universe!" meme
>come to the crushing realization it's just a bunch of tumblrites that want their favorite characters to fuck, and no one cares about interesting stories you want to tell

Well, god knows I tried with over 21,000 words published

>>8986988
>rested soundly a satisfying corner of the wrapper-laden table
'on a'

Wiggling toes does not sound like resting soundly.

>half-eaten Baconator. brought to her
Punctuation typo.

The style is too fancy IMO, but I see this kind of writing often enough that I assume some people must like it.

>>8986988
>>8987264
How is a table corner "satisfying"?

>>8987255
Sounds like you aimed at the wrong audience, doubling that on 4chan of all places to share, tripling if you're on a red board where everyone is hornier than a rabbit in a rut.
But yeah, a big stereotype for fanfiction these days is that they are assumed to always be shipping fics (the former tells a story in the universe while the latter has an emphasis on relationships in said universe than building it up in general).
You could write your own stuff, but attracting an audience for reading will always be a challenge for writers.
>Tell the stories you want to, for any universe
That's a first I'm hearing that describing fanfic goodies.

>>8987340
Taiyakisoba wrote for 4chan and his works are worldbuilding heavy. They're still popular, probably because they're well written:
https://archiveofourown.org/users/taiyakisoba/

>>8987340
What's a good fandom to write for then? Lord knows I've tried writing for the Aliens fandom, but all they want is predator/Xenomorph genital rubbing, and I've lost steam on my original story concepts due to the nonexistent reception to my works. I don't even care if my actual writing is horrible and got mass-flamed for it, I'd just be glad people noticed me.

I'll happily integrate with a different fandom that values stories being told over porn with different character cutouts applied to it.

>>8987476
I'm biased, but I'd you're looking for critique, the folks at /vpwt/ (Pokémon) have quite some authors with experience in writing who can review stuff. While there is a bit of a divide between what is requested and what is actually written (writers usually do their own stories), they go into a lot of detail regarding worldbuilding, interactions and stuff.

Notably, the sidegame, Pokémon mystery dungeon, gets most of the kind of attention that you seek.

You could also experiment with newer fandoms/franchises and see if you can get a market there, like NieR Automata. Sure the androids are hot (and I'd still like to see some 2B teasing 9S) but the worldbuilding potential is very evident, such as how the robots interact with each other, or if you're versed with the Yoko verse, what would happen if familiar characters are introduced in the settings and how much it would affect the overall system.

Just my thoughts though. By default regardless of fandom, sex sells, but new stuff made has potential to get attention.

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I just had some weird yet strangely detailed dream about an anthro city run by a coalition of Mafia families. Some film noir shit, had a bunch of different characters.

>had some super connected bear guy who kinda looked like Jet from Cowboy Bebop who was playing advisor to his fairly naive boss
>a well-meaning, but accident prone white cat
>some sort of lizard woman who used a combination of sex appeal and a strange mind-controlling ability to bullshit her way into running a family (her previous husband died under mysterious circumstances)
>a rat, who was a street enforcer with the same mind-controlling ability working for not!-Jet, who had an almost Judge Dredd-like resting face and a moto-boner for THE LAW

I can't remember the earlier parts, but the end part was the rat going to negotiate with the snake. They had already clashed before and there was some tension because of their similar abilities, some shit got said that put both of them in some kind of emotionally vulnerable state, to which the lizard-lady drops her dress and tries to command the rat to fuck her, to which the rat tries to command the lizard to put her damn clothes back on.
There's a moment where nothing happens, the rat proverbially white-knuckling the table, and the lizard bends down to pick up her clothes, at which point the rat breaks and throws her down on the table and, at least by implication, rapes her. The scene ended with the previously self-confident lizard shivering under her desk and the rat finding a quiet alley outside to vomit in.

I dunno if you guys wanted to take that as an inspiration for writing something, but I just wanted to tell someone about it because it played out like a god damned graphic novel and I don't have many people to tell that shit to.

wow /trash/ is active today

>>8983542
Thanks for the cap.
>>8988009
Sounds interesting. I'd read about the mob boss bear and boss or that bad luck white cat. I assume it's one of those stories where there all bumping into each other in universe.

>>8988009
Aside from the lizard, they were all working for the same family. I vaguely remember the bear being absolutely fucking ruthless. He wanted the cat killed off for fucking up so often, but it wasn't because the cat was incompetant or anything, it was just any time he tried to do anything, the worst case scenario would just happen despite his best efforts.

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Anyone have any fics involving digimon girls being fucked by guys? Rosemon preferred, but anything goes.
If not, I could throw a few requests or ideas involving them.
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