JOI/JOE Thread #29! (Jerk Off Instructions, Encouragement, A

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>>8587618
We'll see about changing the thread title sometime, for now it'll stay the same (and I'm tired as fuck to think anything over).

For now: have some previous content.

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>>8587646

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>>8587653

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>>8587658

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>>8587675
Keeping the reposts simple. I'm a bit tired so I don't want to accidentally upload any(more) unedited captions that someone else wants to post later in the thread.

Speaking of which: I have a few myself I need to edit, I'll post them some time before I go to bed.

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Your choice if this is a twink or actual girl, it was never specified, but they need the sort of load only your human cock and deliver.

>>8587789
I remember someone here mentioning that canine spooge is watery and thin, this could be a fun comparison

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Alright, throwing out these edits before I go to bed.

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>>8587914

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>>8587920
I think this is alright, didn't have much brainpower to read through this too thoroughly but it seemed o-kay and good to go.

>>8587789
>>8587817
>humans have thicker, steamier loads that are more apt for putting out an anthro's heat than a canine with their own females
humanity fuck yeah /indeed/

(though having a knot is a big plus too)

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Requesting a caption based on this pic. Wonder how a girl would feel being trapped in a full Nelson position, her undies out to the world and delicious legs open for fun caressing.

Perhaps a few watchers can come and touch her as she struggles, particularly her leg, midriff, thighs and panties, making her squirm and struggle...

Girl's name is Blizzaria if I remember.

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Here's my "queue" so far, though it's more so a place to remind me of captions that I have my mind on (it gets flushed ever so often). Just so you guys know that I've been looking through your stuff and thinking about them.

Nothing is really set, since I hate doing that--as said, these are only things "on my mind"--but I'll probably work on the "cop-doggo" and "anthro best friend moving away" today so I guess those are the only confirmed ones. Oh. and the dalmation one too.

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Oh, forgot to repost my Maid Marian one. How could I? She's my waifu from another laifu.

>>8588090
err, should have mentioned that I //want// to work on those titled "detailed 1,2,3,4", but I'll probably only get one or two of them done in a day. They're pretty scenario/story based so I'll, as usual, do some "simpler" JOI-style captions and such on the side.

...You guys are great, keep it up.

Alright, I'm heading back to bed. Just wanted to wake up from a "nap" to give the bump-limited thread a reach around and pass out some edits.

morning bump

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jessie starts off rude and abrasive and slowly falls in love with the feeling of your cock between her cheeks

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Robin was a trap the whole time, using all sorts of tricks
i'd enjoy some play with her devil fruit or references to it but honestly i dont expect people to follow one piece

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Celly realizes that she may have bit more than she could chew

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>>8588055
Would you be interested in trying this one?>>8587658

It's been floating around for a while but many people didn't like the job that was done by the captioner, as it was their first time. You might be able to handle it better if you do this regularly.

>>8590333
oooh, this one is good too

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Turian pirate gets "punished" live on breaking news. She's a notorious figure, so I imagine the galaxy has their eyes on their screens.

>>8593382
>pirate
>not first contact prisoner
meh

>>8593382
>>8593926
Ooooh, I like that. I gotta find some human on turian smut somewhere for that.

Haha, so much for the editor-friend seeing a ton of new captions pop up when he wakes up--was feeling tired last night so I didn't spring anything new by the sunrise.

Going to be working later tonight, so keep on eye on stuff, gentlemen.

>>8593926
>>8593382
>>8594033
Human dominance in the ME universe is always welcome.

>>8594212

I'm sure the Editor will appreciate not having to burn through a dozen assorted captions immediately

>>8594522
Yeah, don't want to burn him out aha, been putting out a lot of content early in the morning recently.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NTSGp4UdEvQ

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Selkie inviting the viewer to play a game with her?

>>8594212
I guess I don't need to be too anxious about the archive crapping out then? Cause I don't even see my goodnight post, let alone anything after that...

>>8594573
>>8594522
Don't worry too much about me, though I really do appreciate the thought.

Guess I'll see if there aren't any images that strike my fancy while I wait for captions to trickle in.

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A world with both humans and anthros isn't always sunshine and kisses, here's some social tension in a few places. Fur Supremacist groups have started popping up in a few places, screaming about how all you damn bald apes are takin' their jerbs, calling for segregation between anthros and humans, vandalizing human own establishments all that jazz. You don't usually pay much mind to it, but tonight is different. As you were closing up the the little shop you owned and getting ready to head home, you caught this racist little shit spray painting 'MONKEY GO HOME' on your car. You caught before she could run and dragged back into the shop (it wasn't that hard, she's like 4 feet tall weighs about the same as a cardboard box) all the while she screams racial slurs at you. You were just going to call the police but you're pissed now, and decide to teach her a lesson in inter species tolerance.

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>>8596268
Wow, seconding this!

>>8596190
>Cause I don't even see my goodnight post
I saw it at least, editor-chan~

>>8596268
Oh yeah... I gotta try this. Any good excuse to give a racist anthro the hot monkey dick is riiiight up my alley.

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Any hope at all for the Scarlet ideas?
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/8489059/#8498094
(Desuarchive archive won't load the whole thread for the other one)

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>>8596268
FURRIES GET OFF MY CONTINENT! REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>8596190
>>8596408
Ah, shit... that also means those scenarios for the doggie cop and anthro best friend also got nuked.

I mostly got them in my head now, but it's a shame in case I need to go back to them for references.

I'll be sure to save stuff like that next time, because it's not like the archives do that well on.

>>8596611
Phew... never mind, panic mode over. Even when the archives bug out they DO save every post--they just won't appear on the thread directly. You have to search for them individually using their search tools.

>I mostly got them in my head now
thank god for this.

>>8596475
Yeah, it's in my "in mind" list that I mentioned >>8588055 here.

I think I'll re-read some of her pages and do a caption or two sometime in this thread cause you have some pretty lewd images on her.

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>>8596578

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>>8596763
That's great! looks like Desu's a bust, so I'll rewrite the other one.

>Scarlet is alone with Anon on the sofa.
>Anon shyly asks if she could do something for him.
>He wants her to lay back and open her legs. exposing her bare pussy to him.
>She doesn't get why but she's okay with it and fascinated when he starts jerking his dick.
>Anon gives her more instructions to play with her pussy, spread it and slip fingers in.
>Scarlet struggles to talk through the pleasure and cums with Anon.
>Some cute afterglow with Scarlet saying she had fun.

>>8596611
>>8596763
https://pastebin.com/Lrvv5nus

Went back to find my stuff, and popped it in here for future safe keeping. You're right, it does have every post so long as you know what to search for. That's pretty handy!
Did I miss any others?

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>>8596888
GET OFF MY PLANET!

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>>8597022

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>>8597773
EARTH BELONGS TO THE HUMANS!

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>>8597869
Peace and blessings, anon.

>Will stop to shitpost now, sorry.

>>8597949
>Will stop to shitpost now, sorry.
Heh, don't worry about it. The Canuck and Yankee writers are being nerds and playing sci-fi games anyway right now.

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>>8598035
Hehe, who said i was a captioner?

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>>8588122
>starts with rape
>transitions to comfy lovers in the last paragraph

>>8598035

You know just one goddamn thing about me you fucking Canacuck, and that's that being called a Yankee triggers all the Rebel in my southern blood, you motherfucker. Them's fightin' words.

Also, tonight will probably be another midnight delivery of porn, because vidyagaems.

>>8599146
Don't make me send Sherman down there

>>8599146
BOI, everyone's a yankee south of the border.

Alright, I'm back from getting sci-fi bones in KSP and Stellaris.

Time to see what I can cook up, been lazy today since construction around my house made sleep shitty yesterday... but I'll be back on my proverbial feet tomorrow.

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I return from my seclusion, imposed for the grave injury dealt my person by the slanders and viciousness of the Maple country.

First have an edit, y'all. (I kept gon' for text-space reasons.)

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Then I think this was a request.

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And one more request, with thick and dick on the side.

>>8601615

You know, if this one isn't liked, I'll go back and re-do it from scratch tonight. I wrestled with the colors a lot, which distracted me from the text, and the more I look at it the less satisfied I am with this work. But, then again, I hate everything I make, so I'm going to leave the judgement up to the professional masturbators.

>>8601602
>>8601649
I really liked these. Hope you do more

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>>8601749

Keep bringing me cute boys in girly clothes, and I'll keep making them talk dirty for you.

It's that simple. Bang.

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>>8601920
not the originalOR of the sharkboy one but how about a sequel? Sharkboy has become your fulltime girlfriend and you've been dating for a year, and on your anniversary they bought something special, but still are smug and demanding about sex and expecting you to appreciate it even though they used your credit card.

>>8602050

I like it. I'll put that at the top of my to-do stack. I'm going to absorb some more videogames for the now, but expect to see it coming soon to a thread near you.

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Welcome to WW3

Here's a topically Arab furry
Good luck out there!

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Taking it easy tonight on my end. Sleep schedule still a bit fucked up when I only got about 1 hour of sleep a night ago.

As mentioned, should be fine by tomorrow, and I have to make it up to you guys for not doing my typical "finish the thread strong" thing I normally do.

Thankfully, an American is around to bail out the Commonwealth again. And thanks indeed, love these new captions~

>>8601602
>I return from my seclusion, imposed for the grave injury dealt my person by the slanders and viciousness of the Maple country.
What are you going to do? Come up here and fuck us up? Psshssh~

>>8602951
Ah, this chick again. Quality semon demon.

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this, your best friend welcoming you home from work and cancelling your plans with everyone else for a private day in your sisters lingerie

morning bump

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>>8603360

>>8603360
Alright, I'm up again (but won't be around for a bit later today).

I'm pretty sure I've edited everything so far, so with a clean slate I'll see what I can write today. I'm hoping for a lot.

>>8590333
>tfw you will never ruin sun hoers for other stallions

There is no hope, only pain

>>8602050
Andrew staph

boomp

>>8603360
Getting my cock or balls kissed is always super fucking hot. Just like in the caption, I'd probably cum immediately.

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Chubby cat girl wants you to mount and cum deep inside of her

How do I learn to make these?
Do I just start and keep try and try again until I produce something decent?

trying and trying again*

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>>8596268
This. Fucking this. Dumping usable pics.

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>>8608608

>>8608537

Two options.

Look at what other people have done. Try to make something that looks what they did.

Or

Try to get in touch with someone makes or made these and ask for help.

Whatever you do, it really isn't that hard.

I'm uupppp~

>>8608608
>>8608617
I'm going to get it done sometime. Trust me, I want to do it. These bunny has always got me going and writing about giving her the HMD is straight up my alley.

>>8608537
>>8608548
>Do I just start and keep try and try again until I produce something decent?
It is a tried method to get good at something.

>How do I learn to make these?
The other anon gave good suggestions, so I'll only apply some tips that may be useful. I can get pretty in-depth with a writeup if needed... buuut, I'll keep it simple.

>play to common erogenous themes like bareback sex, the mating press, facials, and whatever works.
Even the most degenerate of us here think fucking a woman in the missionary position with our eyes locked together is still hot.

>speaking of themes, double down on the themes in the image. They're like props in a play.
Have a schoolgirl image? You better take advantage of that with something: maybe have her fucking her teacher or best friend on her desk. Your character is a queen? You better involve her noble worth somewhere, maybe even mention that your common seed is going to knock her up or w/e. Themes like these normally do most of the work and prevent your caption from looking like "point a meets point b." It's just roleplay, but through a caption.

>read smut
Trials in Tainted Space, Corruption of Champions, stuff from literotica and sofurry, etc.
It helps give you ideas and can expand your erotic dictionary with phrases and "positions" such as "balls-deep", "nose pressed up to your crotch", "feet digging into your back as you cum inside me", etc.

>experiment
experiment.

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Requesting this

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Today the porn arrives on time.

First some unsolicted edits.

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Ye oldest Tricke Inne Ye Booke

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By popular demand, more shark-trap-girlfriend with a side of findom and shit talk.

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And some R34

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>>8610974
>>8610979
>>8610986
>>8610996


Dude, i can't afford a second round to my benis now.

stop

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>>8611165
I sure can though.

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>>8610979

Ignore that, this one has it's typos fixed.

I SAID IGNORE THAT ONE.

Going out for a walk and back, if I don't die or something I'll work on some stuff.

>>8611333
>I SAID IGNORE THAT ONE.
lol no way fag

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You are a knight resting at an inn after a battle.
The inn has provided you with a Draenei wench for the night.She is very eager to please a night of your stature.
You have never been with a draenei before and always wondered what it would feel like to get a footjob from one with their hooves.

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>>8610986
>>8601602

I'll be revisiting these for weeks. thanks, senpai

>>8610466
>we got
>Soda
>Oj,
>Purple stuff.
>Sunny D

>>8610996
>Leg lock
>Impreg possible
>Female anthro
>Entertaining
This shit good

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>>8602951
I'm giving it a week or so
No one cares about sand people that much (nor should they)

>>8610466
I've got something cooking for this one

>>8613343
nigga i aint reading all that shit

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You're a security guard for a top secret government facility. The scientists are here working on a special project, splicing human and animal DNA to create super soldiers. They're fast, strong, and have senses superior to any human thanks to their animal heritage. The problem is that while they're intelligent enough to speak, they still tend to act on instinct, which makes them difficult. One of these super hybrids has escaped her holding cell and is now running loose in the facility, so all security personnel have been given orders to locate and capture her. You commander orders your team to split up and cover more ground. This sounds like a retarded idea, considering your target is an 8 foot tall wolf woman that can rip a man in half like wet tissue paper, but you're not about to voice that to the people who sign your paycheck. You end up running into her, and surprise surprise! Turns out one dude is useless against a super strong, super fast giantess. She easily disarms you and destroys your radio, so you cant call for back up. You at first think that this the end for you, but turns out she has other things in mind. Prepare for snu snu.

>>8614305

Sweet jesus. muh dick

>>8614305
Mhmm, in the process of writing something atm but I may take a look at this tonight.

I don't think I quite wrote anything like it before.

>>8614305
unf

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>>8614305

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>>8610466
Applebottom~

>>8612094
I just had to, it was too hard not to.

>>8610974
>WhenYouHaveTesticularCancerAndOnlyYouHave3MonthsButYouDontWantToDieVirgin.jpg.mov.png

>>8601615
I was gonna pat you on the back and say it ain't that bad, but the red outline or whatever that is on the left side is straight up cancer. It's better on the right. I'm guessing you turned it off? Something happened between the left and right.

LSP1: OK, you're going for some kind of act here, right? I'd suggest a different font, or maybe just italicizing the entire paragraph, cause it's really disorienting to read that. It's bad, but that's the point. Still, try and make it obvious to us if you'd please.

P3: Holy run on sentences Batman!
"So, unless you want to get hurt, you're going to take your dick out, stare at my breasts, and pretend that I'm offering you payment for helping me while my clanmate picks your pocket. Then we're going to help ourselves to whatever you might have left lying around."

The "burglar" thing is really awkward unless this is some kind of RPG world where that's a class/profession. I'd also suggest breaking up the paragraph where I did. It's an insult to injury kind of thing this way.

P4: "...two big, burly motherfuckers will make /you/ a mother, if you catch my drift."

P5: I'd stretch out the Thaaaat's it, but that's just me. Uh, why does she want us to look confused? This just sounds strange.

P6: I don't get the question mark at the end of the 2nd sentence. Repetitive "bet"s too.
"Start off nice and slow. That's right. Someone hasn't had a lass in quite a while, am I right? Bet you're still losing less coin than what a lay would cost you."

RSP1: Again with the acting. Should probably be "your" reward, regardless of if she's being retarded.

P2: What the fuck? WHAT THE FUCK?

End: "into" Stop breaking it up every time man, this is your kryptonite at this point. It looks really weird for some reason. This is the thing I'm probably least certain of, but I'd recommend a change regardless. At least see how it looks and reads for me.

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Pls do one with this pic.

Hottest shark dickgirl.

>>8601649
>>8610974
Thank god I read ahead in the thread and didn't post this yet!

P3: I'd still italicize "on" here, if we're rubbing a load ON to them.

P4: Whaddaya say?

RSP1: All day and all night? Otherwise maybe italicize the "and"? "...we've got all afternoon, /and/ all night."

P3: Oh fuuuuuck that's hot. Love me some fishnets too.

>>8601718
Yeah, I'd touch it up a bit broheim.

>>8603360
LSP2: You has one "has" too many.

>Trixie ever using the first person
Ya dun goof'd
;3

RSP2: I wouldn't go with "cream her cloak in femcum" here. Either you want "cream her cloak" full stop, or you want a different verb, like cover or coat or soak. Cause cream is really just another way of saying cum, right? And you wouldn't say "cum her cloak in femcum." Capiche?

Not bad, but I can't help but feel like the scenario works better for Twily. Since when does Trixie do science experiments?

>>8610986
LSP?1: Maybe drop the first "Honey" since it gets kinda repetitive only being a few words apart?

P7: There's something wrong with the first sentence, but I can't quite put my finger on it. At the very least, it should read, "That got you going, didn't it?" but I'm still not sure that's 100% right... You tried to go with, "That has got you going, has it not?" but condensed obviously, and it doesn't really make sense. Dunno. It's definitely wonky as is.
I wouldn't use gon' again either. Sounds way too country, which is a problem I had with the last one. You should have room here.

>soory
Is that a shot?

>>8616130
OR here, it's perfect. Thank you!

>>8610996
Oh christ that image. I really hope the caption's good...

LSP7: Feel like to [verb] or feel like too? I'd suggest "too" here.

RSP1: I wouldn't use imaginative here. It's right, but it sounds so out of place. You're trying to tie in to the "hard" thing, but I don't think it works out. You've got a big imagination, and a big dick? I've got nothing...
"...where you come from." What did she mean by this?

>one-up me
Ehhhhhhhhhhhhh...

Not your best work.

>>8611333
Well fuck, I didn't read far enough ahead...

LSP2: Should be, "neither gold nor goods to trade" and the rest of the sentence doesn't really make sense. Is it supposed to though?
Again, consider either a slightly different font or italicization for the acting bits.
Good work fixing that red shit though. Much easier on the eyes now.

P3: Again with the "burglar" thing. Lifts your coin and wares? What? There's gotta be a better way to say this.
"...while my clanmate liberates you of your coins and wares." maybe? It's kinda funky.

P5: What the fuck? Where is this accent coming from all of a sudden? Ne'er? Why?
"Such a cock like yours" is wrong too. A cock such as yours, or maybe just a cock like yours, or even such a cock as this! Though that last one's pretty janky too.

RSP2: You might want to flip it so it reads along the lines of, "do the work I would, if I were more wild of a girl."

P4: Why "sex"? OKAY, here I know for sure it should be "into" and that's not just my autism talking. Maybe go with, "...would moan so loud for you that the whole woods would hear my ecstasy." Otherwise, it's like, does she not ever moan otherwise? It's something special she does for guys?

Janky ass piece nigga.

>>8611941
>night
k
>hoofjob
It would feel like pain.

>>8616130
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LSP7: I'd go with This's here to keep the country twang strong and to make the flow and readability better.
Miss Sparkle? Meaning Twi? You'd need to drop the S.
I'd also go with "will" and not "would" here. Like, X WILL have to suffice.

RSP3: "Keep on stroking to the sight of my ass stickin' out at ya with my tail flipped over to one side so you can get an /ample/ view of my /thick/ curves..."
Not perfect, maybe, but I think you're a little too clinical as is. Bottom? Presenting? Not sure AJ'd sound like that in this situation.

P6: "You wanna know somethin'? You could come over here, pull down my cotton panties, and put a foal inside my by the time the sun comes up... I wouldn't stop ya neither. Heck, I'd be beggin' ya to press your tip against my womb when you pop~"

"The hard part'd be gettin' away from Big Mac when he finds out ya' knocked up his little sister."

A little tame for my tastes, but good overall. Fits the latenight theme/image. Nice work.

>>8617019
>Not bad, but I can't help but feel like the scenario works better for Twily. Since when does Trixie do science experiments?
Yeah, I went with the "magical semen" approach and went down the science route as opposed to the magic route. Woops. Shame too, Trixie harvesting your human cum to begin a ritual sounds hilarious.

>Trixie ever using the first person
Hehehe, I flipped between the two because it sounded weird. Though, I should have stuck to the canon for the sake of not going even further OOC.

>>8617559
>BackgroundPonyRaidsTheFridge.png
>BackgroundPony
You're not wrong.

>A little tame for my tastes, but good overall.
Yeah, I tend to bite my lip a bit when I stick with tame scenarios but they're nice to pop out every now and again. Thanks.

I'll edit these prolly tomorrow, will continue working on maybe two more tonight before calling it a night. I had wanted to work on a /bit/ more, but I forgot that my family was celebrating a meme tonight with beer and well... it took up some time.

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>>8616725

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>>8617949

>>8618254
>>8617949
>>8616725

Nigger, wat ar u doing

>>8618341
posting material for more captions/keeping the thread alive.

>>8616725

I'm claiming this. Expect muscular pornography.

>>8618254
>Sharp teeth and tongue

I'm tempted lawd

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Best stories are interspecies breeding

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>>8618254

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>>8614305
/trash/ station needs better countermeasures for monsters that escape.

>>8618721
>>8619141
I think I can do stuff with this.

>>8618721
>>8619294

"Just like we discussed honey, for the next three days - until my heat wears off or you pump a baby into me - I'm all yours. You know where to find me."
Your wife's worst heat yet was well under way. She'd managed to tough out the first few days, but this- /this/ was something else altogether. You'd both agreed, that for her safety and yours (mostly yours) she'd have to be leashed in place at all times.
Not that either of you were complaining really. A hot, wet pussy ready anytime day or night? You knew, and she had told you - screamed it to you a few nights ago - that you could /fuck the shit out of her/ whenever you wanted as long as she was in heat. No permission needed - just walk on up, grab her tail, and pump her needy snatch full of your thick, sticky cum.
And you had. Three times yesterday, five the day before that, and twice today. That was just before breakfast mind you.
You hated seeing her like this. You /loved/ seeing her like this.
Somehow - and you figured it must've been your scent or her sense of smell - she knew when you were in the room. Her dripping folds seemed to track you as you walked. She always managed to present straight at you - tail raised, legs spread, pussy on full display and practically begging for you to walk on up and mount her. It was exhilarating, but exhausting all the same.
Your muscles are aching and screaming for a break. Hers are screaming that they want you to break her.
God you love it when she's in heat.

>>8619141
>>8619294

"/Lick./"
It's a command. A request. A desperate plea.
As strong as he is - as easily as he could bend you to his will (or just bend you over) he'd never do that to you. Behind the scales, and talons, and horns, and teeth, and... well, all of the /other/ things that could easily mutilate you, lies a heart of gold. So he asks, begs, pleads.
You won't keep him waiting long. It's intoxicating. The smell, the taste, the knowledge that /he/ is asking /you/ to pleasure him. That you /can/ pleasure him.
His powerful balls pulse and churn, desperately crying out for your mouth. You love to tease them. Rolling them around in your mouth, licking them up and down, and sucking on them like you want to swallow them coax out the /cutest/ noises from him. The disparity is half the fun really.
You know every vein and bump on this powerful cock. You know what it feels like in your mouth, or in your hand when you mount him from behind and reach around to milk a giant load out of him. You wonder how many loads you'll milk out of him tonight...
Guessing is half the fun. Time to go to work. It feels good to be on top, in more ways than one.

:)

>>8619342
I'll swear if that's you, editor-chan...

JUST imported the image into GIMP. It's a bit spooky.

Anyways, do you want me to import and format what you have as is, or do you want me to use your scenario as a base or w/e.

Because it's pretty good. It makes me (and probably will) go back into writing more descriptive stuff again.

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>>8619141

>>8617383
It's not like she'd be stomping on it.

>>8619294
Jesus, as someone who's worked both security and infantry, if someone ordered me to split up while tracking down a monster than could kill me, I'd just fucking shoot them
Good fap tho

>>8619500
Well I wouldn't want to make you swear, but...
https://pastebin.com/Lrvv5nus
Updated to include the new ones on the off chance the thread gives up the ghost or you don't get to it until later.

What I wrote is entirely in your hands. If you truly believe it's good, then feel free to edit it so it makes sense and slap it on the image. Hell, if you want /me/ to edit it, I can do that tomorrow since I'm pretty tired right now.

Otherwise, know that I almost always intend for my stuff to be inspiration. A jumping off point. If you like the scenario, let your creative juices flow and write something entirely or only partially new.
I'd love more feedback from the readers honestly. I like it as scenario set up, but I'm not sure it's fap worthy. I could always try and write more dialogue in future? Occasionally it comes to me. Not always though.

You've got a blank check on what you want to do. Just know that I'll always be with you, my ghostly hands on yours as you type... Or do other things...

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>>8619775
Alright, you're the best, bud. I'll look things over tomorrow too after some rest.

>Otherwise, know that I almost always intend for my stuff to be inspiration. A jumping off point. If you like the scenario, let your creative juices flow and write something entirely or only partially new.
And thanks. That's good to hear, because sometimes I see a scenario/prompt like the nurse one and I'm like "this is pretty good, I'd hate to finger around with it too much if you thought it was good enough too." Thought with your blessing, I'll have some fun with these new ones then. I quite like them.

>Just know that I'll always be with you
BAKA! D-Don't say s-such things... especially in public!

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>>8619920
>Though with your blessing, I'll have some fun with these new ones then.
Go forth and be fruitful my child.

>I quite like them.
I kinda like 'em too. Means a lot to hear they're not garbage. I wasn't too sure about the images at first, but they kinda grew on me.

Yeah, if you like something of mine to the point that you don't want to fiddle with it, just let me know and I'll do my best to make it coherent and caption worthy. I occasionally skimp here or there.

Speaking of, I think I've got one last one in me based on an image I came across:

I really love the "drunk" look in his eyes in this one. I imagine she'd be in charge, guiding us along the way, getting us high on her supply as it were.
"Look into my eyes. Just focus on me as you thrust your hips. Mmm, keep going. Fuck me hard and deep sweety. Don't stop sucking either..."
We'd be like a slave to her. Her scent, her taste, the way she grips our cock with her pussy. We'd be so safe and warm...
This is truly fucking on auto-pilot. Letting our base instincts and impulses take control of our hips as we suckle at her teat. We'd blow a fat load inside her too, and hardly bat an eye. Just the way she likes it.
"Keep on going. There's no need to go soft. Keep fucking me until you can't anymore."

Hmm, it could even work for a semi-JOI I suppose. Work in some light hypnosis elements.
"When I reach 0, you're going to reach those big strong arms around me, force your tip past my cervix, and /knock/. |me|. /|UP!|/ Alright honey? As I rub your balls, make sure you pack 'em full and churn me up a hot, thick load that'll stick to my womb and guarantee I'm gravid for /months/. 10... 9... 8... ZERO!"

Anywho, g'night and have a pleasant tomorrow!
-EI

>>8619990
Oh this image! I saw this yesterday I think in an... album or something? It's striking sparks in my head but no connection aha.

Alright, I'll read through this tomorrow too.

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>>8619534

>>8619990
>gravid
Does this word ever NOT sound jarringly out of place in a JOI?

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>>8620463

night bump

>>8619920
>friendliestgeneral.jpg
aww

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Sent to her class for low grades she has other plans for you. Turning you into a slutty makeshift mare for the whole school.

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valentines day is here and the "girl" you asked is happy you want to have sex with "her". "she" asks what naughty things you want to do first (get/give blowjob, rimjob, boobjob and whether you want to fuck "her" or get fucked). you have all night and the bed is going to be ruined ;)

>>8619990
Please stop using the word gravid. How about "heavy with <plural of whatever kind of baby it will be>" instead?

Gravid is the kind of term I expect a doctor to use, not something someone getting railed casually uses.

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Gerudo Link cumming at the musk of your giant cock, letting you use his lips to thrust your manhood through, admitting you made him cum like a bitch pls.

>ywn have link bitchboi falling in love with your cock

why even live bros

>>8619294
>"Your strong scent made chasing you through the station and dragging you back into an empty room kicking and screaming so simple."

Might I suggest restructuring that sentence? Something along the lines of:

"Stalking you through the station by your strong scent and then dragging you back kicking and screaming into this empty room was all too simple."

Also the monster seems to use why too familiar wording with her prey saying things like:

"But I had to stop and hunt after your tempting stench"

Would probably be better along the lines of

"But I had to stop and hunt after such a tempting stench"

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Hey can anyone do an /SS/ caption with this please?
Story is that a woman is alone in a bath house with a young boy.She asks him to come closer and sit down between her legs.
The boy is very shy at first and keeps trying to cover his penis with his hands.
But she sees his erection and tells him that their is no need to be shy and that she can help his penis.
So she gives him an underwater handjob.
At first she's slow and gentle but progressively gets faster and rougher until he bursts all of his seed into the water.
Also she let's him suck on her milky breast while giving him a handjob.

>>8620669
Yes, when it's used in dirty talk revolving around impregnation and pregnancy.
I suppose it's not really for instructions though. More for encouragement and scenarios, but I don't really care for JOIs anyway.

>>8623542
Ohwow two posts?
Sometimes you only want to use one word to cap off a sentence, but I understand your concern and the suggestion. Sometimes you can use "full of your puppies" or "heavy with a strong litter" but those have their own connotations. If I just want to say "pregnant," but don't want to keep using that word, gravid is a viable alternative. I'm sorry you don't like it; I don't use it very often (I don't think) but I'll try and be more conscious of it. Best I can do.

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Bomp

>>8626498
noice

>>8616888
second

>>8596268
Dew it

>>8627941
RREEE I WILL

>>8625481
Eh, I think gravid is fine. It's a pretty good word when you want to go above typical impregnation play.

Though it does sound a bit weird with human woman, I suppose gravid is a more animalistic word in my head.

>>8624430
Ah. /ss/, sweet. It reminds me of that Nidalee caption I forget to do. Woops.

>>8623877
I'll do this/make the other writer do this. It's pretty hot.

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>>8628123
Second

>>8618254
>>8628123
more of her would be great

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Requesting this one. Might be too big of a request, but it's worth a shot.

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>>8603360
>>8617019
Time to post my edits and new stuff now. Wow, I've never worked on captions this early in ages. It feels good. I can even do more now tonight (assuming I don't use this as an excuse to vidya all day).

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>>8617559
>>8616130

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>>8619294
>>8623986
Thanks for the help here. I had a hard time starting my writing for this caption. It was... clunky to say the least.

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>>8631876
Woops, forgot something minor in LSP2

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>>8619342
>>8618721
I leaned towards turning this into my typical style from your amazing prompt.

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>>8619467
>>8619141
And I kept this caption roughly to your original prompt. I quite like it. I've never seen male assworship and ballicking so... romantic and sensual... I think those are the words I'm looking for?

Might have to edit it again, to make it fit better (especially the one or two paragraphs I added) but I'll post it here in case you want to edit things yourself too.

>>8588055
yo post that raptor picture senpai

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>>8632236
Was thinking of captioning this, but most likely going for something descriptive to maintain the "feralness" of the image.

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>>8631952
It'd be hot if the wife didn't make me want to shove a sock in her mouth to shut her up.

Sorry but you wrote her to be as obnoxious as possible with that level exposition in the first four paragraphs, and the 'Honey' thing was especially grating. Once is cute, two times is getting awkward, three times...OMG I will paddle your ass with a spiked blackjack if you don't shut up bitch!

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>>8631952
>>8631938
>>8631908
>>8631888
I have no idea why human on anthro turns me on this much.

>>8587658
Could someone please redo this?

>>8633354
Because human on anthro is perfection

>>8633354
It's the most patrician fetish after all

>>8631888
Clean

>>8631908
Ugh, I think I need to pastebin this one...

https://pastebin.com/Rf4GL3jd

Lots of minor errors, some weird phrasing here or there. Hopefully you get why I did things a certain way so that if you don't like what I have, you at least see what I was going for. Why would she be talking about the tightness? Wouldn't that be him? Shouldn't she be commenting on his size? Etc. I think I kept the tone and scenario in tact, but again, feel free to surgically take what you like and leave the rest.

>>8631938
RSP1: Fuck me, I love it when this happens. Beautiful deepthroat and then she licks the balls. Instant diamonds.
Clean, but the "tests" thing is still distracting. Eh.

>>8631952
Gonna pastebin my edits for this one too.
https://pastebin.com/Wg25LWuM
Some minor things here or there.

>>8632115
Clean! I like the addition. If I have to critique myself, I don't think it's very spicy. Sensual, maybe, but it's not the usual raw hotness I like. Eh, if others like it though, that's all that matters.

>>8623877
>>8616725
>>8616078

Alright. It's the American here. I'm putting on my JoI pants. I'll be working on knocking these + edits out soon, you'll probably see something in twoish hours or less unless I pull an extreme lazy.

>>8632499
Hmm, would this work as an internal monologue, or would the first person perspective fuck it all up?

FUCK, it smells me! Oh god, it's getting closer! I don't have a hope in hell of outrunning it, plus their vision is based on movement, so if I just hold still it should pass right by me...
Christ, of course it would smell me! I'm such an idiot, I'm sweating up a storm over here!
Shitshitshit, it's smelling me! THOSE TEETH! Uh, just lie down and play dead! That's it!
(Of course that doesn't work)
ARGH, those claws are razor sharp! Gotta stay still or it'll rip right into me! Oh? It's trying not to hurt me now? Dammit, get a hold of yourself man! It's nothing more than a dumb animal! I'd shoot it right now if that didn't mean potentially wiping the species out, and I am NOT going to be responsible for a species going extinct!
...
Good god she's beautiful... The perfect specimen. I can feel the power just looking at those jaws, legs, and scales. Unf, and those /LEGS/. Oh christ, there go my pants. Is she... sniffing me?
"Easy girl, I'm not gonna hurt ya-"
OOF. WHOA she's heavy! And oddly warm for something that's supposed to be cold blooded.
What in the world is she- OK I KNOW WHAT SHE'S DOING. I never thought they'd mate outside their species! I can't believe she sees me as a potential mate! I CAN'T BELIEVE I'M THIS HARD!

[Initiate feral breeding]

They gotta follow us around like a puppy afterwards, drop off dead prey as an offering every now and then, and then crawl into bed with us to lay her eggs. It'd be the scientific discovery of the century! No, millennium! Of course, that'd mean studies and separation...
Maybe we could just "disappear" instead to raise our young- I mean, her young. Gotta document everything! We definitely need to see if the results are repeatable...

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yes, they are a guy. but it doesn't matter because you are going to fuck them anyway. boastful trap saying how attractive they are and how they make every guy gay and intends to make you fuck them in public like a depraved homo. do a good job and they keep you, bad job and they train you and keep you any way. no matter what, you're going gay for them

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>>8634516
>>8631908
This is good now, thanks

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A new system has been put in place to discourage crime and encourage law-abiding citizens to keep a clean record. Criminals get put into chastity and can't get sexual relief for extended periods of time. Someone with a clean record (the viewer) get assigned an attractive officer to have frequent sex with to encourage continued good behavior. Although your officer is not feeling well, you have been given an eager stand-in until your officer is feeling well

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>>8634516
>>8631952
Thanks again!

How did you feel about this one? I mean, as an adaption from your prompts (and I guess from the lewd quality too).

Should I have done it a different way? Stuck closer to the prompt and skip the action-y sex bits or went further away? Just trying to get a feel for different styles that I can adapt to your scenarios.

>Clean! I like the addition. If I have to critique myself, I don't think it's very spicy. Sensual, maybe, but it's not the usual raw hotness I like. Eh, if others like it though, that's all that matters.
Yeah, I was tempted to go full-out mouth-to-balls erotic with this one with a huge emphasis on massive cumshots and musk (which I can still give a shot) but your original was quite good in its sensual way, so I left it in (and also to experiment with another way to adapt a scenario).

>Clean, but the "tests" thing is still distracting. Eh.
Eh. Shame, but I know what you mean. There's next time I suppose.

>>8634771
Oh, and I forgot to add:

Yeah, I can work around with this. I think a first-person perspective would be pretty neat to do. We'll see. It's something kinda' experimental.

>>8635078
This is hitting my buttons in just the right way. Might take a crack at it tonight with some other stuff.

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Re-requesting from the previous thread
Incest femdom foot fetish
Your older sister is rewarding you for doing all of her homework.
So far she has never let you touch her feet only jerk off to them but now that you helped her she is rewarding you by letting you fuck her sweaty pantyhose feet.
She wore her shoes all day so her feet are really sweaty.
She mocks you for how much of a slave you are to her feet and that your fucking them like some kind of animal trying to impregnate them.
In the end you cum all over her pantyhose soles.

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Don't know if anybody watches Wakfu, but a Yugo pov of him waking up to Amalia doing it, would be sweet.

>>8634893
This pushes all my buttons, awesome job!

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someone please do pic related

>>8636373

Goddamn I love Gideon. I'll see what I can do.

>>8635084
I liked it. I think it works just fine with the left side being a build up, or teasing encouraging us to get hot and steamy, and then we get it /on/ in the right side.

Don't worry about the action, I haven't been trying for that. It's my greatest weakness I think. As hot as a set up may be, I don't go into any real detail. It needs action a good portion of the time.

>Yeah, I was tempted to go full-out mouth-to-balls erotic with this one with a huge emphasis on massive cumshots and musk
I really like the sound of that, and I'll leave the ball in your court. Maybe as a V2 or alternate?

>>8635138
Glad to hear it, I wasn't all that confident in it by the end. I'll throw it in the pastebin later on as per usual. Feel free to experiment or just adapt it into something 2nd/3rd person.

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>>8616078

Boom. Blaxploitation.

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>>8616725

Pumping dicks and iron.

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>>8623877

I was bullied in to doing this by a Canadian. Send (sexy) SEALs to rescue me.


Sorry I don't have any edits in hand atm, for those who need HIGH QUALITY SEXUAL GRATIFICATION, just couldn't motivate myself to overcome the "blugh this is tedious and I'm very lazy" today.

Also, there's some great requests and ideas here. I invite all amateur or aspiring captioners who want to try to well, step up and try.

Do your part, make porn today!

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>>8636373
>>8636444

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>>8637336
>cis-species

What

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Hope at least one of our writer friends are cool with younger furry characters. It's all fantasy fake shit anyway and lots of fetishes here as is.

Simple JoE request. She notices you looking at her, she's a bit embarassed as she fucks around with her clothes but notices your junk and wants you to whip it out for her, fap for her, etc.

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>>8637414

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The school bell rings and you dismiss your. Everyone eagerly files out, except one. One of your less promising students, a well known trouble maker, lingers. She tells you her parents are coming down hard on her for her piss poor grades, they've already taken away her driving privileges, if she wants to see her car keys ever again she has to come back with all straight As by the end of the week. You wearily tell her that if she'd just, ya know, FUCKING STUDY, then maybe she wouldn't be in this mess. She shakes her head and tells you she has much a better idea. You get to use her young, tight body however you want, and in return you give her a passing grade. Fair right?

>>8637336
RSP2: "Beat yourself off" maybe? Beat it makes sense, jack off makes sense, but beat it off?

>>8637347
LSP5: I'd either go with "right under everyone's noses" or "behind everyone's backs". You've got a weird mix here.

P6: "Well, if you can even call it 'fucking.' A pair of girls can only do so much to each other, and trust me - we've done it all at this point."

P8: I'd drop the "conversation" since "heart to heart" already covers it. "Us three need to have a little heart-to-heart."

>>8637405
Clean, but I'm a bit confused...

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>>8638254

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Your cute little preggo rabbit wife is trying to make dinner but you keep pulling her aside for a quickie.
Except you already gave her multiple creampies in both her holes and she realizes at this rate she'll never get dinner ready.
So in exchange for holding on a little while she'll give some jerk-off encouragement while you fap over her cute butt.

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>>8639234

Gonna pump out a few more then go to bed, sit tight.

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>>8635078
This one is a bit shorter than I anticipated, but still meaty enough.

I didn't want to go too action-y and in-the-moment because the picture doesn't really work for that... but I hope it's erotic enough.

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>>8638426
And something that came out a bit longer than I planned.

>>8637405
>I was bullied in to doing this by a Canadian
Don't believe the American. I would never ask for something so lewd.

(thanks~)

>>8636594
>I liked it. I think it works just fine with the left side being a build up, or teasing encouraging us to get hot and steamy, and then we get it /on/ in the right side.

Alright, thanks. I wasn't too sure about it despite it's erotic nature.

>Don't worry about the action, I haven't been trying for that. It's my greatest weakness I think. As hot as a set up may be, I don't go into any real detail. It needs action a good portion of the time.
Hah, and I sometimes wonder if I put in too much action and I need to stay back and kinda be more subtle/descriptive as opposed to "Fu-Fuck me harder, senpai!"

Maybe it's just me, but I get off enough on your scenarios aha, or maybe your ideas are that erotic~

>Maybe as a V2 or alternate?
Speaking of liking ideas, did that make you hard, editor-chan? /How lewd./

Yea, I'll see what I can do. The subtle approach was nice for a change of pace, but nothing beats good ol' rough stuff I guess.

>Glad to hear it, I wasn't all that confident in it by the end. I'll throw it in the pastebin later on as per usual. Feel free to experiment or just adapt it into something 2nd/3rd person.
Yeah, it's gonna' be interesting to see how this works. The image is hot, but getting across our thoughts might be a challenge. Well, as long as I have you guiding my hands it's going to be fine.

Man, I talk a lot. Anyway, I'm shutting down for tonight. I'll hope I can produce better content tomorrow, cheers lovelies!

night bump

>>8642538
thanks :)

morning bump

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Not so little Red Riding Wolf is traveling to grandma's house through the woods when she encounters the not so big bad human.

She's courteous and polite offering to share from her basket while they introduce one and another and eventually the human finds himself unable to resist filling her 'basket' in return, in fact he feels compelled to as the wolf seems to encourage him sensually. While fucking her hes surprised to discover the knockout wolf is a virgin making him hesitate but the wolf legs lock him so hes forced to finish what he started

Afterwards 'little' Red chuckles admitting that the basket wasn't really for her grandmother at all but for any unsuspecting man stupid enough to converse was a strange nearly naked wolfess in the woods. She then goes on to explain that when times are tough and there aren't enough males to go around in the pack, females sometimes go out and tempt human males with drugged treats so they can trick them into marrying them.

For wolves marriage is a simple arrangement, take a wolfesses virginity and they are forever considered your mate.

She then taunts him calling him husband and saying he can't complain after accepting food from a strange wolf in the woods and better not back out of his responsibility as her father is an Alpha and an imposing lumberjack with a huge axe.

Requesting some little red story like that, The wolf acting like innocent red, and the man like the big bad wolf only for little red to be the 'bad' one

>>8645305
The role reversal stuff is awesome

>>8645305
>>8645341
Perhaps she could have had her eye on this human for a while now? Why else would she choose to get hitched to a human she's only just seemingly met?

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You work for the estate of some wealthy anthro tycoon. Your boss is a bit racist towards humans, but the pay is just good enough that you're willing to put up with it. He has a daughter. She's his little princess, the apple of his eye, and also a complete brat. One day she orders you to her room, she says she has task for you. She heard from some of her friends at school that human dicks aren't like anthro dicks, they don't have knots, or barbs, or even sheaths. She orders you to drop your pants and whip it out babe. And if you don't she'll see to it that you can fired. You grumble and comply, exposing anon junior. She marvels at how different it is, as well as how big. She then starts jerking you off. Her father would have stroke if he could see this, his little girl on her knees, jerking off some filthy monkey dick, waiting for a fat load to splatter her face and tits.

>>8646175
>get* fired

Fuck, I need sleep.

>>8646175
>>8646191
Sounds interesting could evolve into a deprivation JOI where taunts the guy into holding back on cumming less he cum all over her face and tits leaving a scent on her that her father would definitely pick up on, and promising if the anon can endure 5 minutes she may consider letting him cum inside her so he wouldn't be found out (of course knowing the way shes jerking and teasing him there is no way he'll last that long)

>>8642666
>>8634771
I had a little stroke of genius and realized this would work perfectly as a series of diary entries! That way "we" can record what happened each day over a series of days and slowly escalate what happens before ending off with the-
Fuck me, I'm an unoriginal hack. I /literally/ just realized as I was typing this where I've seen it before...
https://exhentai.org/g/952572/971a0a2727/

Well shit... I mean, I guess it could work either way?

>>8642538
P1: Avoid the repetition between "serve" and "service" by just saying: "...and the government has assigned me as your Service Officer." You could also just change it to, "...me to BE your Service Officer."

P2: You don't need the "can" here.
"You have no idea what an S.O. is? I understand; the new system works on an 'opt-out' method. Basically, anyone with a clean record gets assigned an officer they can have on-demand sex with to encourage further good behaviour."

P3: thirstyspongebob.jpg

P4: "You seem somewhat surprised. I suppose having a policewoman come up to your house and give you permission to fuck her brains out is a tough thing to take in all at once."

P6: You absolute madman! How could you ever wonder if it's erotic enough!?

P7: You're trying to kill me aren't you!?

P8: I think you got this a bit garbled.
"Uhm... I may be getting distracted here... A Service Officer is a public servant, and it's my duty to please you in any way I can." For example. Really, the issue here is "public service". Either the SOs PERFORM a public service, or they are PUBLIC SERVANTS. Either it's their job to please us, or they owe us pleasure. Ya dig? Hot damn though, this one's going in the spank bank for sure...

>>8642666
Ohgod. Why did I think that was a guy? It's got boobs! What's wrong with her faaaaaaaaace

LSP2: You'd expect something FOR your money here, not from.

P3: The stuttered wait is a bit confusing here. I'd go with a "what" instead. "W-What? They warned you..."

P4: Maybe, "Come on, can't you think of another 'D' you'd rather give me instead?"

RSP1: Haha, I almost read this as "Mr. Rodgers."

P6: I don't understand what you're trying to convey here. Instead of exchanging sex for grades, they now want "us" to fuck them anyway, on the regular, and in exchange they'll study?
"Mmmph, tell you what teach: if you cum inside me, I'll be a good little girl and actually start studying for a change. We can forget about that little arrangement we made earlier. Mmm, it'll be so worth it - just imagine what it'll feel like when I tighten around your cock as it pumps its rich seed inside my unprotected pussy."
Something like that? It just needs to be a bit clearer that she now wants the D, and she's bargaining for it.

>>8647240
>>8647096
Oh sweet thanks. I'll edit these in a bit when I fully wake up.

>Fuck me, I'm an unoriginal hack. I /literally/ just realized as I was typing this where I've seen it before...
Uhm... Thanks for the link, aha. Haven't see this before.

Yeah, I'll give it some thought. Unoriginal or not, it fits the theme.

>>8646175
Mnnph, I'll check this out today too.

>>8645305
And perhaps this too. I like the idea quite a lot.

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>>8645305
Perhaps this picture could be a follow up or set in the same world as your one?

>>8649162
In the stone age, Wolves didn't even bother with deception to attract mates, they just pinned them down and raped them in the open before dragging them back to be made in their personal sperm banks

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At a 'questionably nude' beach, you find May and Marie sunbathing, May calls you a creep for checking them out and makes a bit of fun of you, pointing out your bulge, Marie is a bit more tender and tells you if you don't want to be called a pervert for life back in school you better whip it out. May agrees and is rude about your cock, while Marie ogles it and loves it, both of them enjoying the show. I was thinking a sort of back and forth between the two, May calling your cock small or saying it couldn't please them, but Marie telling her to shut up and that she'd love to be split in half by it. A sort of sisters arguing while you jerk off until you eventually give them a double facial.
I don't mind this being long.

>>8637405
OR here, you are the best

>>8646175
>>8645305
Alright, I'm back. Gonna see what I can do with these today and do some of the ones from last thread that editor-chan gave prompts for.

>>8651696
Maybe this one too, not sure yet. Seems not, gonna' give it another read over. Maybe the other captioner might try it out.

>>8653166

You triple-nigger, I have so much shit to do already.

>>8651696

But yeah, I'll put this on my list.

>>8652832

Glad you enjoyed it, sorry I didn't take it right away when you asked for it on the Discord, I just had to do some thinking (therefor work, therefor effort, therefor I'm lazy) to make it in to something.

Porn later tonight.

>>8644247
pmub

>>8649162
Maybe this one could be about the history of human male/anthro female relationships? Like its written as if its a documentary.

>>8654926

I like this idea a lot.

>>8654926
>>8654967
Oooh, I like the idea. Might tackle this too, maybe something on the side since I'm doing that raptor thing sometime too.

>>8655087
>>8653166
Back for realsies this time (assuming that I don't have dinner in a moment, which I probably do). Had to play some vidya with some friends.

Gonna see what I can do with these human x anthro pics today.

The documentary ones are a neat idea. For the wolf and human one I might consider a David Attenborough approach with an erotic edge to it. Perhaps a documentary or something to explain why anthros love the hot monkey dick so much with mentions of human scent, their penises, etc.

>>8646175
unf

>>8642538
I think I have a fetish for cops now

>>8656061
looking forward to it.

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>>8651696

Hope this satisfies you, kind requester!

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>>8636373

Moo.

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Some short OC.

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And only High-Security Personnel can view this porn.

>>8660622
LSP3: Uh... If we don't do it, everyone will know we're a pervert? Does this mean people will see our bulge so we need to jerk it to get it to go away? Cause I wish you'd explained that instead.

P6: What? This doesn't make any sense. You want to say something along the lines of, What kinda creep would jerk off to a couple of girls right in front of them, right? Right now it doesn't make any sense. It almost sounds like he's jerking it to other (possibly uglier) girls and they're upset he isn't using them as fap material...

RSP1: Balls of yourS. Plural, belonging to us. OurS, YourS.

P4: There's gotta be a better term than "little dicked". You also want to say, "Man enough for both of us" but you kind of muddle it here.

I'm confused more than anything.

>>8660637
LSP1: So is it nighttime or early in the afternoon or something? Maybe slip in a line about missing her milking? Thanks for coming out on such short notice, as opposed to so late?
What the hell is this accent?

P4: I'd go with two m's in Lemme. Otherwise I read it like a name, strangely enough.

P5: So we're suckling from her breasts right? Is that where the milk is, or is there milk in both sets of udders?

Is there even any buildup here? It kinda feels like everything happens in the second to last paragraph. I mean, I get that you're pressed for space, but... Eh, I can't really complain all that hard because this isn't really for me. Just think it over, yeah?

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>>8660659
Those look like leopard or jaguar markings. Cheetahs have distinctive small spots, as opposed to larger splotches ringed by dark dots.
Considering her size I'd go with jaguar as they're the larger of the two with that pattern.

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>>8661074

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>>8661115
fak you

jk luv u

>>8660637
thanks man

>>8660659
LSP1: What's with the tense here?
"Excuse me, but where do you think you're going /thief/? Did you really think that you could outrun a cheetah? Honestly... humans...

P2: I'd use a hyphen for a more sudden break in speech. The ellipses is a little too passive here, as if she's trailing off. Feels more like she's suddenly interrupting herself.
"Well, hand over those aphrodisiacs you damn- NO, DON'T SWALLOW THEM!!! Did you really just...?

P3: Already taking effect, maybe?
"Well... Well! Dammit. It looks like they're already taking effect. Oh wow, and what an effect they're having!"
Also, no S in "keep your X off me" Your hands. Not "YourS hands"

P4: "Shit. You, Me, Alley, Now." Or something. I'd drop the "in" altogether.
Show him a beating? You mean give him a beating? It can still be a double entendre that way. I'm surprised there's suddenly a crowd as well...

P5: Alright, I had to double check before, but now it really feels like you're overusing "damn". And then you reuse the monosyllabic order grunting thing again too! You'd need to trail off at the end of the paragraph as well, or have it suddenly break into her coughing to cover it up.

Again, lots of building almost out of nowhere. I don't think this scenario will work with a short caption, sorry. Then again, I didn't really think the image would either.

>>8660680
Suddenly ship AI?

Bottom, Left Side: You can drop the "to" and just say "helping relieve poor men..."
Can I also suggest a different font while I'm at it?

RSP2: What does 30% breeding material even mean? What's the other 70%?

P3: BrowseR history? Or maybe browSING history?

P4: Where's this prime mate thing coming from? At the very least I'd use "a prime mate" even though that sounds kinda monkeyish. That's sort of the problem really.

P5: Or well what? You don't even trail off here with ellipses, it just comes to a sudden stop.

End: "...how fuck you are"? FuckED you are? I can still read it there...

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Your anthro neighbors invited you to dinner. That in of itself doesn't seem so strange. But when the missus greeted you wearing nothing but a robe and holding a glass of wine, you knew something was up. She invites you to come inside, and against your better judgement you do. You awkwardly try to tell her you don't want to do anything that could ruin her marriage with her husband. She laughs and tells you that her husband is exactly the reason she's asked you to come here. Fifteen years of love and commitment, and what does he go do? Sticks his dick in some college bimbo with fake tits and no brains. Like all of a sudden she's too old, and therefor not good enough for him. He's on a business trip (Hah right, "business". Probably busy plowing some some other 19 year old slut. Probably does it to make himself feel young again.) and she's going to give him the divorce papers once he's back. But before then, she's going to get back at the bastard. You're such a strapping young man anon, but she's never seen you bring a girl home, that just doesn't seem right. And she's heard all sorts of rumors about young human men and their virility.

>>8661875
fund this

>>8661875
>>8661979
Fine nerds~

>>8660622
holy fuck this is amazing

>>8596268
I'd like to throw down one more request for this
>>8646175
and this

Y'all do good work.

night bump

quick bump~

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Sorry for holding back on my shit, was a bit busy today and forgot that my family and I had plans.

Well, I could have posted my stuff earlier, but I wanted to post everything together so I'm not bouncing back between the thread and other activities.

Consider this... a morning surprise, if you would.

>>8642666
>>8647240
Here's an edit, I think. *reads through it* Yeah, okay, I did edit it. Good.

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>>8642538
>>8647096
>You absolute madman! How could you ever wonder if it's erotic enough!?
Haha... I guess I spent some time on it trying to decide whether I wanted it to be longer, more direct with the action, add more exposition, etc.

You're right, it is pretty spicy now that I think about it.

If anything, the fact that it's as long as it needs to be helps the most in my opinion. Short enough to not be too drawn out, long enough for someone to linger on it.

I should follow this caption as an example for some of my newer captions from now on.

>Hot damn though, this one's going in the spank bank for sure...
You honour me with your spanking. Aha~

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I don't know how I feel about this one. It seems alright, but I dunno. Feedback would be appreciated, I guess.

It might have similar issues with my unedited Maid Marian one is what I'm worried about.

>>8645305
The treats were a placebo, you see. With tits and ass this good she doesn't even need to use drugged food (it just makes you feel less slutty for banging her)

at least, that's my fancanon for my own caption

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>>8646175
This one is alright I think, might be too long for most tastes, who knows. I'm pretty tired aha.

I do quite like the whole "fucking racists furries" theme. It has a nice... vibe to it.

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>>8649162
>>8649379
>>8654926
Uhm... Consider this a joke caption, I don't think it's especially erotic aside from some lewd historic talk.

The picture is pretty hot tho, so I'll probably consider a real caption with it sometime (reverse roles/rape is always spicy).

I guess I can return to the documentary approach. Maybe something more direct, like an anthropologist's aide that gets captured by a native and has to appease her so he doesn't die or w/e. We'll see.

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>>8661875
You have some good scenarios, whoever-you-are anon!

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Alright, I'm going to be a bit busy today but I'll probably be back around the later afternoon so I'll be around to write some more captions.

gonna be heading to sleep now, night thread~

Oh, and this is my main lineup for tomorrow: the racist bunny, the cop doggo, and the teary-eyed best friend ones. Don't worry editor-chan, I was saving those two prompts for a good time~

I might do some more if something pops up in mind, and I probably will, but this is what I have planned.

>>8666392
Dialogue needs a bit of work, besides a few spelling errors it seems a little bit awkward at times especially when shes explaining what really is going on and threatening him with her father, guess its understandable though since you've been writing JOI's all night

>Uhm... Consider this a joke caption

It totally was, I didn't mean for it to be taken seriously

>>8666594
I mean I didn't mean for my 'wolves didn't bother with deception, pinned down and raped men' comment here >>8649379 to actually be featured in a JOI

>>8666594
Ah, my spelling is usually pretty good unless it's grammatical. Shame.

>bit awkward at times especially when shes explaining what really is going on and threatening him with her father,
[supersecretspoiler]I know it's bad, I should have left it out or fixed it but I'm too tired. Decided to let the editor do it for me aha[/supersecretspoiler]

>It totally was, I didn't mean for it to be taken seriously
I figured. Though I added the addendum in case someone came in wondering why David Attenborough started captioning in /trash/

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Requesting Peacock teasing you

Alright, I'm heading out. See you soon thread.

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A wolf showing her best friend why human dick is the best dick on the campus

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Sith captures and seduces innocent young Jedi.

>>8666430
I liked the way you had a time to cum that lasted longer than the image itself, though obviously you opted out of it. I can last a while, so I always find myself reading through multiple images before I finish. If you'd like, I'd like to see more captions that tell the reader to cum a little while after the text itself ends.

>>8668319
Reading this on my phone, I'm an on the go degenerate now!

But yeah, I see what you mean, and I'm the same way too. Perhaps some teasing based images where the character encourages you fap and not finish? I'll see what develops from this when I get back.

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>>8593382
Holy shit that ahegao.
Fucking hell HNNGH

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>>8666456
This is great

>>8669157
>when the seed hits the womb just right

>>8669078
Ikr? I want to caption it but I'm not too sure where to start. Captured pirate works because the headline, but someone suggest first contact prisoner and that's unf

>>8667799
To expand upon this: You're a Jedi padawan that has been captured by the Sith and brought before their leader. She senses that you are strong in the force, but still inexperienced, so she wants you for her new apprentice. You hold your chin high and tell her you will never turn to the dark Side, no matter what heinous torments she subjects you to. She simply laughs and says that she will turn you, but not through torture. To your shock she then starts removing her clothes, exposing her voluptuous form. You try to turn away, but she just chuckles and asks you if this the first time you've seen woman naked. It probably is, judging by the tent you're making in your pants. She takes her seat and has you kneel before, she opens her legs, revealing her wet pussy. She says that your first lesson is to pleasure your new master. You refuse, but she simply uses the force to shove your head down between her legs, pressing your mouth against her sopping wet cunt. You try to remain strong, but her juices leak through your lips. Oh Force, you've never tasted anything so good, with a moan you finally open your mouth and begin feasting. And just like that, years of Jedi training and discipline melt away, as you are consumed by a lust you've never known before, all while your new master smirks proudly down at you.

>>8670328
Mmm, the image was hot enough but this is pretty tempting...

Hey you 2 remaining flawless!
When one of you inevitably falls will you if you're the victor drop out the day after? Just to put an end to it

how long tell next thread?

>>8672400
long way to go anon

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>>8672400
Anon...

>>8666467
>I'm mad at my husband
>I always wanted a baby
>I like the sound of your surname
ABORT ABORT ABORT
TOO MANY RED FLAGS

>>8666467
nnnnf, this is pretty hot

>>8670968
>Come back after 2 days
>see my post got a reply
>it just someone begging the writefags to caption it
I mean thanks for the support buddy but don't get my hopes up like that

>>8675346
I want this more than I thought I would.

>>8661875
That's really more of a champagne flute.

>>8666310
Herp, now I know what I couldn't verbalize before - The "As" thing in LSP2 should read A's to better implying it's a plural. It looks like a miscapitalized as at the moment.

P3 should be school's as well I realize now. One school, singular possessive.

>>8666354
It's clean, but I'm not sure how much longer I can say that about my pants!

>>8666430
LSP2: I'd go with "you people" as opposed to "these people". Haha, you could even italicize /people/ cause double pun. Since we're real people. Y'know, humans.

P3: Last sentence: "They said you guys don't have barBs, or sheaths, or even knots!"
Har har bards. Let me sing you the song of my people.

P4: Maybe go with a "You guys really don't have knots?" to differentiate it from the previous as if we'd just answered her question.

P6: No E in sheath. Otherwise you'd have the verb sheathe, like to replace a blade within its covering.

RSP1: The nub thing wouldn't really happen unless we were doing it doggystyle since the clit would be at the top if we were doing it belly to belly. Was that the point, or did you just overlook that fact?

P4: I nearly sperged but then I finished reading the thing. I still think dear old Dad'd smell it if we came inside, but whatevs. Bretty gud overall.

>>8666456
>biological interactions
u focking wot m8?

Intermingling, interbreeding, plain old interactions, just about anything else - joke caption or not - would be a better way to start this off.

P2: "Since most human tribes during this period were lead by males, and the majority of their warriors were also men, wolves instigated..." Male leadership doesn't really have anything to do with male warriors. You'd need to draw a distinction between male and female physiology or something for this to make sense as is.

RSP1: What's a "strench"? I think you wanted stench. With THE intent of arousing me and making me erect.
You probably also want to swap the comparison. Saying she can't compare to human women makes her sound inferior.
"The women of my tribe could not hope to compare to this wolfess. She took me in ways I never would have imagined possible. When she took my member into her maw, I experienced depths so deep that my orbs bounced against her chin!"
Ways (plural) implies WERE possible (plural)

>>8666467
LSP2: "Ship" has sailed.

RSP2: Headboard? More recognizable than bed board.
Messy tenses on the last woman thing.
"How about fucking me into my headboard like I'm the last woman you'll ever see?"
It's a question/offer so it needs a question mark I just realized.

P4: "Since his poor swimmers couldn't do their duty, it only makes sense that..."

P5: "Becoming a mother was always something I hoped to accomplish with my marriage."
or
"I had always hoped to become a mother while I was married."
One way or another you're missing a D in hopeD. Past tense.

P6: pumping her to the brim WITH hot, human cum. Not IN. With.
This anon >>8674664 has the right idea. I kinda want it to be even more yandere though... I'm so lonely.

Woops, I missed this one. >>8666392 Edits coming right up!

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here. have something different.

>>8666392
LSP1: Hmm, maybe a, "My name is Red, and what may I call /you/"? Not too sure about my own suggestion, but something feels slightly off about the "what is yours" thing.

P8: I debated it, but the "whatsoever" does sound strange here, even if I can't find anything technically wrong with it at the moment.

RSP1: You either need to say "we can live happily ever after" or go with "we'll live happily ever after". It's not quite where it needs to be at the moment.

P2: Almost missed the misspelled "sometimes" here. You forgot the O.

P3: "...but you cock has only gotten harder" or maybe play off the scared to say his cock is still standing brave? The "nothing but" has to be changed though.
"You have a nubile female under you, and I know how you body must be craving to know me up." It's just a little janky near the end. You crave something, noun or verb. The "to" here kinda fucks with it. Can't really find a better way of explaining it right now, sorry.

P4: "...or I'll send my lumberjack father and his huge axe after you!"

P5: I'd actually drop the "fucking" here. Usually it's nice, but I feel like it kinda clashes with the piece. Heavy balls is more than enough.

P6: Maybe "and I promise to treat you right!" instead of "want"?

I didn't really feel anything for this one, but it wasn't bad per se.

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>>8676857
>not wanting to fuck a cuntboi in the cunt
homofag

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>>8676217
> The nub thing wouldn't really happen unless we were doing it doggystyle since the clit would be at the top if we were doing it belly to belly. Was that the point, or did you just overlook that fact?
Ah, I should have mentioned taking her from behind at one point there.

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>>8676525
>Intermingling, interbreeding, plain old interactions, just about anything else - joke caption or not - would be a better way to start this off.
You're right. I didn't like it too, but I guess I went with the most scientific term for it.

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>I didn't really feel anything for this one, but it wasn't bad per se.
Yeah, it's kinda' what I thought too. I think I could do a better job any other time. I wasn't feeling it that night.

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Gonna work on some stuff now. I don't think yesterday was all too special, except for maybe this caption in particular.

I don't think I was feeling it. Hope I can do better today.

>>8676525
>This anon >>8674664 has the right idea. I kinda want it to be even more yandere though... I'm so lonely.
Heh. You want a hot, mature woman to take you into her home and treat you like the son she never had and tease that she wants to tie the knot with you?

...Heh... tie a knot...

Anyways! I get you, I'll keep an eye open for some yandere-y stuff sometime. Heck, you can keep an eye open yourself for an image/scenario you want captioned.

>>8677351
Another case of, "Now I see it".

RSP3: "Do you think he'd say anything IF he SAW you splatter my face and tits with your cum, or IF you cockslappED my cheek?"
The "he would" is sort of a hypothetical future thing, so the tense has to agree with it. Especially since you start with the "if he saw us" thing.
Or, fuck I'm even more retarded than I realized, you just need to change "he'd" to "he'll" since the "he will" contraction also brings it into the future. Damn, that one cider is doing work...

Same thing in LSP4:
"Sure, there'll be a chance you'll knock me up and my father will get even angrier, but at least that way there'll be no smell to pick up on my body."

>>8677372
LSP3: This needs a full stop or just stronger punctuation.
"The wolves did not even bother with deception to attract mates: when they captured a human - warrior or otherwise - they pinned them down and raped them..."
The first bit either needs a colon or a full stop.
"The wolves did not even bother with deception to attract mates. When they..."
That's how it'd look with the full stop.

P4: Hmm, this should probably be, "oftentimes REQUIRING the assistance of another wolf..."

P5: "...a fact the wolfess wrapped around me took immediate advantage of." Maybe?

Hmm, maybe I'm sobering up afterall.

>>8677492
Fuck, I missed something here too.

LSP4: "...I'm going TO give him the divorce papers once he's back" or "I'm gonna give him the divorce papers..."
Fucking autocorrect in my head.

>>8677414
Ffffffffffffffff
RSP3: "...I know how youR body must be craving to knock me up"
You took out the R, and it doesn't work otherwise.
That or drop the "body" and just have her say, "...and I know how you must be craving to knock me up."

>>8677492
If I come across anything, I'll be sure to let you know!

And yeah, I absolutely want to get fucked into the mattress. Make those springs squeak and then wrap those hands around my neck and choke the life out of me until I pump that womb fit to bursting. I wouldn't have a choice in the matter, either. I wouldn't know whose libido was higher - I'd be on the phone one minute, and babbling the next as she took me balls deep. Probably cause she knew I was talking to a female coworker and she had to assert her dominance. Only /she/ can make me feel that good. Make me moan and squeal whenever and wherever.
I mean, waking up to a hot and sloppy blowjob every day would be great. Having to run to the office or catch a cab cause she wanted one last load after the first 3 "quickies" though...
She'd be even worse once I actually knock her up, too! Cravings for pickles and my cum, having to "comfort" her when she pretends she's not pretty anymore. God, it'd be the most amazing (but tiring) little tango. No point even wearing pants around the house, really. A brush of he tail, the feeling of her palm, and when I look she'd already be bent over, tail raised, dripping wet and ready to accept me. Who needs a gym membership when you get that kind of exercise?

I also had an idea for either a succubus image or maybe a public use one?
Basically, instead of being rough and callous, you gotta fuck her gently. A nice slow crescendo that she wouldn't be able to stand as you tease her to orgasm with the gentlest and most passionate lovemaking she's ever felt. Excruciatingly deep and slow thrusts, followed by an increase in tempo to a (still slow) but steady pace. Just feel her folds clinging to you and following your member as you have to somewhat forcefully drag yourself out of her dripping pussy. The first couple orgasms are all for her, until she can't take it anymore and decides to really force herself on you.

I'm a sucker for pure love, or taming the slut.

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>Another case of, "Now I see it".
Eh, no worries. Helps keep the thread going up to the bump limit. I rather finish tonight with making a new thread and dumping my new stuff in it.

>Damn, that one cider is doing work...
Hah! I can't blame you. Was trying out German dark beer when I wrote these, and I think it shows.

You ever want to suggest an idea, but you also don't want to spread autism?

>>8678541
i request stuff literally all the time that feeds my specific brand of autism

>>8678541
This is /trash/ though, we're all pretty autistic.

>>8678604
>just /trash/
you mean 4chan in general

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>>8678132
>And yeah, I absolutely want to get...
*licks his lips*
Mmmm... Y-Yes... Uhm, what were we talking about?

>I also had an idea for either a succubus image or maybe a public use one?
Ah. Yeah, this is pretty hot. The whole "bringing a succubus out of her element" theme is spicy. There was another request that pops up now and again about making a succubus cum in her panties by doing things like holding her hands and being a gentlemen. It always scratched me one way too.

Oh, and public use? How would that work in this scenario? Not that I mind, I love free use and all that jazz.

>I'm a sucker for pure love, or taming the slut.
Mmph. Same.

>>8678541
By autism you mean "wanting to request a caption where your waifu gets the dick" then you'll be right at home.

>>8678541
Not a problem if the idea's any good.

>>8678314
Frig, round 3? Yeah, feel free to make these edits and then just post the newest version next thread... I don't wanna bug ya too much.

Ugh, yeah, it's bothering me after all.
LSP3: It should really be "don't" if it's phrased like that. "They said you don't have barbs, or sheaths, or even a knot!"
Cause you really want a "do not have" here as opposed to "have none" or "have no". It sounds awkward otherwise. Yeah, I suggested "don't" the first time too... Did you really want to work with "have no"?
"They said you have no barbs, sheaths, or even knots!" maybe, if you really like that phrasing?

P4: While "show me it" works, I think, you'd really be better with "Come on, show it to me!" It's more of a command that way too.

>>8678429
Goddamn am I off the ball tonight...
LSP1: "...started as EARLY as the Stone Age..."

P4: Misunderstanding here?
"While most humans submitted to their captors, humans that resisted the mating had to be teased by rubbing their erogenous areas - oftentimes required the assistance of another wolf to prime their manhoods for intercourse."
You needed to remove the "with," and I think something like "prime" here works well in terms of getting their dicks ready. Cause you have entice, but entice to do what? You entice someone into doing something else, so you're missing a verb.

>>8678766
I think I'll flesh out that yandere idea in the pastebin. It's a little fragmented as is.

The succubus was mostly because of Ceraph in CoC. There were teasing moments when she transformed, but I wanted to be able to make /love/ to /her/, y'know? Purification is right up there for me. She doesn't have to become an angel, literally or figuratively, but making her a loving and loyal waifu was just, UNF.

The public use would be something like stockades or stuck in wall (but voluntary so she can come out and go home with us) where you get to take a turn with the girl before/after other people.

/r/ing anything involving wedgies and swirlies