/ztg/ - Zootopia General: Fetish List Edition Threadjournal

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Well since the last thread just died. Reposting fresh and new. and with that, also going to bed. G'night folks.

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I haven't posted anything new for these for like three whole days but I'm feeling precious today so I'm gonna reshill anyway and nobody can stop me.

Boney M here bringing you a story I've been working on where Remmy gets intimate with literally everyone in the pack. The first version of the story in the SFW sense of the word, the second in the very much not SFW sense.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/9710354
http://archiveofourown.org/works/9789005

>>8586847
'Nite!

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>>8586847
Goodnight nude deer, and thanks again!

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>>8586869
Hey Boney i recently finish the Betty lewd chapter and it was one of my favorite chapters yet. Keep up the good work!!!

>>8586922
I am still kicking myself that I didn't include her tail wagging.

Hi guys, I'm new here and I just want to say that I totally love all of the OC around here!!!
Though there is ONE thing that I do have to complain about, and that is the lack of pencil and paper drawings!

So this may be out of the ordinary or just plain weird, but I would absolutely love it if I could just get a happy picture of both Judy and Nick drawn on paper.

Thanks all!

>>8586973
We have a few people who are traditionalists who might be able to help you.

I'll go ping one for you, buddy.

>>8586954
You can always write another one like you did with Al and Velvet or edit the tail wagging into the chapter. Otherwise, the chapter is perfect as it is

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Oh, fresh thread, perfect!

Some of you might recall a fic I wrote a while back called House of Memories.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/8315704?view_adult=true

To those of you who missed it, a brief summary: Judy Hopps and Nick Wilde attend a charity dinner celebrating the Mammal Inclusion Initiative, where Judy meets movie star Jack Savage. He invites her to his place for drinks, and she takes a quick liking to him. Jack's intent and methods, however, may be less wholesome than they appear.

Now, onto the fun part!

I've finally wrote a proper chapter 2 for it. I warn this is a first, rough draft, but this chapter is more of a transition to the next chapters (Up to 5 or 6 total chapters, depending on how I go about it) so it's not a huge deal if it's a little weaker when you read it. Later chapters will not be released in as rough a state, as they're much more crucial, but I'm just eager.

I present House of Memories, Chapter 2. It has been a few weeks since Judy's incident with Jack, and she's finally being released from the hospital ward she was in. Things are a little less than good.

https://pastebin.com/SgaRuT7M

And as for that subtitle, that's just the mood-music I was writing to. I Don't Feel it Anymore (Song of the Sparrow) by William Fitzsimmons

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mld3NLHNebw

Sorry for the radio silence lately, as well. Had a week long trip, and then a week of stress over life, but I'm back in a writing mood now.

(I feel as if I'm forgetting something, sorry if I am.)

>>8586973
>lack of pencil and paper drawings
Well, Famished usually draws on paper, as Pen & Paper anon. Rose seems to like the medium and Inky as well. Also Lulu/fujodeer manly works with paper, so we have some anons that work with traditional

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>>8587006
Glad to see you returning to writing, Alabaster!

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>>8586973
>>8586985
I'm currently not home, so I can't make a new one, but here's one for you.
plus ink

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https://kulkumshappyplace.tumblr.com/post/159252281373/as-promised-this-is-part-1of-2-for-this-chapter

https://kulkumshappyplace.tumblr.com/post/159252501868/as-promised-this-is-part-2-of-2-for-this-chapter

...I feel like I am reading a comic with sexual harassment, only academy cadet Judy doesn't mind it coming from fellow cadet Nick Wilde.

>>8587006
Good to see you back! I look forward to diving into the story.

>>8587035
Holy shit, is that Le Eh? I haven't seen him in years.

>>8587031
Not that anon, but the the double tails from the outfit and their own is such a fun/adorable touch

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Ahh, today and tonight was super comffy! Lots of exciting things planned, and I can't wait to see what you're all planning as well!

Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads. I hope, when you're away, you can always look back to your memories here and feel the same comf you felt all back then!

>>8587006
Oh I know what I forgot

The end of the original is entirely out of touch with the beginning of this new chapter and the direction it's headed.

I'll fix that soon enough, but not tonight. It's 5AM and I should be sleeping.

>>8587074
Goodnight!

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>>8586869
The Omega belongs to the Alpha and Beta (but mostly the Beta)

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>>8587035

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>>8587122
This is true

>>8587006
Glad to see you writing more!

>>8587006
SHE DID IT

THE ABSOLUTE MADBUN

Maddoe? I think madbun sounds better though

we need more marty lewds

there are almost none

>>8587006
>https://pastebin.com/SgaRuT7M
wow, this is heartbreaking

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Hey thread, I think I'm gonna start my TT submission today, this evening (6-7 hours from now), since it will be a big thing, but I hate to not post any content, so I was thinking of doing a pinup pose before starting.
Question is, who would you prefer? Zoosonas, secondary characters, OCs, lewd, not lewd, tastefully lewd, preferred poses, all is fair. Please tell me your preferences

>>8587373
Honey, as lewd as you can make her please.

>>8587373
I'd love to see Dora, in any state of lewd.

We need more buff tigresses being sexy.

>>8587373

Marty pinup, dick out.

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>>8587491
Different anon, but nice work

>>8587491
S I G N I T

Right theres a cute bunner and foxe

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I continue to not be proud of this.

>>8587602
I'm sorry, but this isn't /5naf/.

>>8587602
i dont blame you

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>>8587006
honestly this is some pretty poor writing. The sentences have no real flow to them, and the presentation is just... dull. Sorry to say...

>>8587562
Well I wanted to fix one of Nick's eyes anyway.

Praise el Byron

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>>8587692
Fuck me I forgot the picture

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>>8587383
>>8587406
>>8587429
All three seems good. I guess I'll roll.
Well, if more suggestions are done in the meantime I'll include them in the roll too, that's obvious

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>>8587871

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>>8587875

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>>8587880

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>>8587885

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>>8587796
Lewd crossdressing Terry putting on a show for Hamilton.

>>8587896
Literally who?

>>8587896
You damn hyena
But a promise is a promise, added to the roll

>>8587910
Terry is my mongoose
Hamilton is Famished sona (a gray fox), with a crush on my sona

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>>8587936

>>8587936
that sounds pretty autistic, but I'll look passed it

>>8587796
More prey grilling cheeses for their preds, dealers choice of characters.

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>>8588069
Lewd

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>>8588069
It's difficult to make a pinup of this... whatever added

>>8588031
Actually I haven't decided of the sexuality of my dude yet.
Also have this

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Seems to be an absence of tigers today
We need to fix this

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>>8588125
I only have this old one

>>8588130
>Not downloading the original at 666x666 resolution

>>8588183
>>Not downloading the original at 666x666 resolution

Where is it?

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>>8588226
https://replytoanons.tumblr.com/post/159238936065/zootroplsldf

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I know that this pic got colored (I think) recently but I can't find it.

Anyone got it?

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>>8588420

But did this one ever get colored also?

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This was on its way to page 10, on page 3. Why bump it to pretend people care about anthro furshit #35524?

>>8588436
Thanks for the bump :^)

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>>8588420
There you go, it was posted a couple of threads ago.
Also the other got colored, but I don't remember when it was posted

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>>8588454
>>8588426
Ah, I'm stupid
I only needed to search on Pawstun (Coloranon) Tumbr
http://pawtsun.tumblr.com/tagged/Zootopia

>>8588481
What happend to pawtsun?

>>8588494
Nothing?

Not sure what the last thing they colored was but I mean it wasn't that long ago.

>>8588494
Look at the Tumblr, they are still colouring, last coloured Judy was from like 5 days ago

Anyone got pictures of Proto Judy, preferably in the coveralls?

>>8588183

>filename

who doesn't?

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>>8588523
What proto Judy do you want?

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>>8588523

>>8588550
I'll take two number 9, a number 9 large, a number 6 with-

>>8588553
this one!

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>>8588553

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>>8588557

>>8588512
But not on the thread

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>>8588567
Actually they posted it in the thread

>>8588566

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>>8588563

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ProtoJudy here is cooler and more composed than Jack. I mean look at her - calmly checking her weapon. ProtoNick just doesn't give a fuck - these two spent their lives in a literal hellhole and nothing phases them.

Now look at Zootopia Nick and Judy - soft donut-munching city cops from a place where flower shop robbery is a big deal. Not equipped to deal with anything when shit hits the fan.

Patoot is cradling the rifle, but can't probably shoot. She'd probably know how to fix a gun, but that's clearly not her situation. Jack probably relies on guile, analytical work, infiltration and soft skills to get job done.

In other words, they're screwed. ProtoJudy will probably go down as last because she seems to be the only person in the room who knows you're supposed to take cover.

>>8588638
ProtoJudy is callous, and probably going to get someone else and possibly herself killed because she's not a team player. ProtoNick doesn't give a shit, probably actually has a deathwish. Jack is professional, but concerned. Patootie either has no fucking clue what's going on or this is just Tuesday for her, hard to tell. Nick could kinda go either way; he seems determined, but hampered by his injuries. Judy clearly isn't trained for this sort of situation and is really affected by Nick being hurt, but will probably be more worthwhile to the team overall than ProtoJudy because she'll be willing and able to take orders from Jack.

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good point, but patoot is clearly uneasy.

either way, I'm imagining the situation here is the group pissed of the government somehow and got a small zombie apocalypse coming up with TUSK team hanging back to mop up whoever is left

>whoopsie, they went savage as well fancy that

>>8588659
I dunno, to me Patoot's expression is closer to "what should I have for dinner?"

>>8588638
ProtoJudy seems to have some kind of paramilitary training, she's used to these situations. ProtoNick seems used to this situation too, but without weapon training, only because he is following ProtoJudy.
Jack seems to have some spy training, he knows how to shoot, however being entrenched is not a situation he is used to deal with. Juding by the bag on her shoulders Skye is more for transporting food and ammo, the rifle used only for self-defense and support.
Nick and Judy have police training so they are not complete novices, however they are not used to be in such dangerous situations.

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>As a part of expanded franchise, Disney eventually releases Savage Seas
>In an unexpected twist, Patoot is revealed to be the villain
>Your reaction?

>>8588727
Two times in a row?

>>8588727
>Patoot.
Who?

>>8588816
Patoot is a butchered form of patootie, as in "cutie patootie"

Skye, the female fox, is the cutie patootie in this case.

>>8588816
Y'know. Patoot E. Skye.

>>8588776
It'd be too obvious that no one would expect it.
They'd set her up like Bellwether but with a hint of sadness/seriousness to make her appear sincere and fully fleshed-out.
Then they'd hit us with the twist and we'll feel like idiots falling for it again.

>>8586869
I swear Boney, if you leave me cold and not do chapter 2 where Remmy goes savage on that pussy and rams her in the shower, I will be your end.

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reposting for anon who asked for Nick holding fox kit

>>8586869
>>8588853
This is what he gets for spilling all that Sex Panther on his clothes.

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>>8589011
Is that his inbred kit with Mrs. Wilde?

>>8589045
Yay, a new brother, or is that son?
Uncle?
Cousin?

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So, did Sci-Fi win the TT?
Just gonna throw this up there anyway...

>>8588853
There's four different pussies you could be referring to. Six if I factor in the possibility that 'pussy' can refer to hyenas. Seven if you're holding out for a Pandora chapter. Gonna have to narrow it down a little.

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>>8589045
>>8589061
>incest kit
please no

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>>8589123
With all the fooling around with his mom, something was bound to happen.

>>8589093
Betty's pussy.
The best pussy.

Teasing a shower sex and not delivering is a crime.

>>8589284
Source?

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Okay, here's a deal

>you get transported to zootopia, becoming a wealthy (top 10%) mammal of your choice. Your love life is great, money is not an issue, you're top talent in the hobby of your choice and if you want to work, you're working your dream job in the best company in the industry with really cool colleagues.

But here's a catch.

You can never, ever under no circumstances enter the goat tower.

COULD YOU DO IT

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>>8589325
Fuck.
This is an hard choice to make

>>8589325
what is the goat tower and is it really that good?

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>>8589325
A life with no goat tower is not a life worth living. So no, I wouldn't

>>8589325
Even if I'm a goat?

>From Pack Street: Stray

"So Al's got power, respect. When he talks, we listen," Betty continues. "But he earns it. Stands for something. He's gotta be the kinda wolf that deserves it. He watches everyone's backs, makes sure needs are taken care of."

"Needs?" I reach a hoof up to my throat to massage it. "Like, like what kind of... needs?"

"Like the kind that life kicks you in the ass with. If the law comes knocking, the Alpha's the one who tries to settle things while they can still be salvaged, but he also does his best to keep his pack in line. Someone's kid getting shit at school and the faculty won't get their paws dirty? The alpha puts a stop to that. Some mama wolf in the pack whose deadbeat husband fucked off doesn't have money for formula or diapers for her pup? Alpha makes it work." She fumbles around in her pocket for another cigarette, but stops just short of lighting it after looking at my face. "He can't be everywhere at once, and obviously he's not everyone's provider, but when he's really needed, Al finds a way."

So, who in the pack has a kid?

>>8589383
rules are rules
no exceptions

>>8589306
A smart phone and a computer screen !

>>8589325
I don't get it, what am I missing here?

>>8589440
That isnt helping and you know it

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>>8589448

>>8589448
You're right, my bad :(

>>8589386
Theory has it that the white faced pup is Betty's. Would explain why she has her mom nature and why she is so angry/gave so many examples of Alpha dealing with these child problems.

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>>8589325
> tossing away all those luxuries to hang out with filthy hoofers
Are you nuts

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it's not finished. also i am creating patreon soon. if there is anyone interested. i'd like to hear your opinions

>>8589602
this is really fucking neato

I really want comics like habits and entire sing crew incorporated into Zootopia

>>8589573
too fuzzy, yeah she's furry but right now she looks like she got shocked and has more fur than an angora rabbit. nose bridge lacks definition. highly detailed fur clashes with low detail underwear and scenario.

still fucking hot especially due to the lighting and those eyes.

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>>8589045
there's an easy solution to that problem

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>>8589623
thank you for critique. appreciate it. here is my patreon banner with more flufs

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>>8589646
Visiti pls

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>>8589655
abort that baby like i aborted my comic

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>>8589666
>666
>Visiti is satan
It all makes sense now

>>8586807
>that fucking comic
Can't count how many times I've busted to it.

>>8589291
I don't have any more Betty planned right now, but it'll be a really easy story to revisit and insert new chapters. I'll keep the idea in mind. No promises, though.

>Judy fucking a pregnant Mrs. Wilde with a strapon.
someone write this pls

>>8589573
>>8589654
Pretty bad, to be honest. You should improve your basic shapes.

>>8589783
cuntiest poster of the thread award goes to you

>>8589694
I like the comic once it gets to the car sex scene, but the beginning still puts me off a bit due to it basically being rape. Just the normal "rape the girl until she likes it" deal. When I read the part where Judy says "you can touch me...just a little" I figured it was going to be something like Nick teasing Judy until she is begging him to fuck her. Not a page of an unseen blowjob, followed by rape.

The art itself is still so fucking good.

>>8589654

Fuzzy.

Have you tried working with clean lines?

>>8589573
I agree with the anon about the shocked fur, but it's obvious that you have the talent to fix it.

>>8589805
which comic is it?

>>8589794
>it's cunty to offer critique of an artist
>who is far better at rendering than they are at setting a scene
>or constructing the lone character in that scene
Sorry for calling out an underlying issue with the art. Was I supposed to be more flowery and vague, or offer nothing but empty praise instead? Fuck you.

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>>8589325
Newfags won't get this.

>>8589896
it's cunty to act like a cunt, not voicing the critique, but a sperg like you wouldn't know good manners if they slapped him in his neckbearded double chin

>>8589907
>everybody needs to be nice
Get over yourself.

>>8589911
>"yeah, I'm an asshole so what no mom I dont wanna dinner"
look at this edgy teen

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>>8589854
https://e-hentai.org/g/979885/d7b6e2279a/

"What Does the Fox Say?"

>>8589920
You should probably go back to your patreon if you don't want people to critique your art.

>>8589920
I don't see it. They offered their opinion, were called a cunt, and called the person a cunt back.
Either you're shitposting or getting way too hurt over this.
Neither are healthy in large doses.

>>8589929
>god-tier art
yay
>rape
aaaand it's shit

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>>8589713
>Judy entered the room, it was dimly lit, Ms. Wilde and Nick sitting facing one another. The space between the bed and the chair was small, but the distance between the foxes in the room was endless. The rabbit felt the pressure of the room almost crush her, there was no colors, no smell, no light.
>She went next to the tod on the chair, he turned his head to the other side. Judy held his hand, he held it tightly as he felt another knife on his chest. "It's alright Nick, we can make this work. We can make anything work, alright?" - the fox held back pained breaths.
>Judy approached Ms. Wilde, "Ms. Wilde?" - said the bunny. The vixen looked crestfallen at the ground, responding only with a faint smile, she traced with her eyes the body of the bunny till they met eye to eye.
>With a sudden movement, Judy held her face with both paws. The vixen eyes shot wide open and for a brief moment as they stared deep at each other eyes. "Ms. Hopps?--", Ms. Wilde was suddenly interrupted by Judy's lips meeting with hers.
>Nick's eyes who were locked on the ground now were held in disbelief at the situation. "J-Judy?" - the reynard exclaimed - "What's - what are you doing!?"

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>>8589983
>They were locked like that for few moments, Ms. Wilde surprise shock slowly easing as Judy's short tongue explored her owns. Eventually she responded with her own tongue exploring the little bunny mouth, in ways Nick never did. "Mom! Judy!", Nick gekked, standing violently and toppling his chair. The lovers broke their kiss with a large strand of saliva, before Judy composed herself enough to reply, "I'm making this work, Nick!"
>Judy pulled something from her bag: a large wolf sized strap-on. The vixen eyes shot even wider than before, her eyes locked on the large bulb at the bottom of the toy. "They only had wolf model." - said Judy, while placing it on herself. "Judy, wait, hold on a moment!" Nick intervened again, "That's my mother y-"
>"Come on, show me how bunnies do it.", said Ms. Wilde, panties strapped around one of her legs as she lifted her dress with her teeth. Her unborn litter making a slight round mound on her stomach revealed by the lifted dress. Despite Nicks protests, Judy hopped on the bed between the vixen's legs.
>Placing it on her already dripping entrace, Judy slowly inserted the colored toy inside the vixen, her releasing a soft moan with every inch. Judy positioned herself and held the vixen hips with her paws. Heavily breathing, the vixen offered a silent nod to Judy, which she complied.
>Using her toned muscles and bunny physique, she started working Ms. Wilde cunt like a piston. The speed and force sending the vixen into an orgasm quickly, another following right after as Judy changed angle to pound her.
>Ms. Wilde tongue lolled to the side as her eyes crossed, her breathing and spasming signalling Judy she was doing something right. Judy grabbed her even tighter, her head laying over the bulge on Ms. Wilde pregnant tummy.
>"Oh Hopps! You're so much better than Bogo!"
>"I KNOW RIGHT?"

This will be five (You)s plus interest.

>>8589953
I'm not the artist, just calling out on bullshit of a conceited trolling cunt.

Since he's retarded, I'll break it up in a way he'll understand - not only the "advice" is generic and useless without examples, but was also worded in a provocative way.

If you want to hand out wisdom like "get over yourself", you little shit, I recommend you start with yourself and give your """"critique""" in a constructive manner. Don't cry like a little bitch for being called out on your bullshit. got it sweetie? :^)

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>>8589573
Let's see...
Like the other anon said, she is a little too fuzzy. Fur moving like this is something I expect right after drying with a cloth. You still need to follow the flow of the body (e.g. like you have done in the center of the back).
You should adjust a little the reflection of the mouth on the right part, otherwise it seems that the lips are continuing and she has a scar. Be careful near her left shoulder and left arm, you can see some traces of the Blend tool on the wall and a little "arc" of red near her shoulder.
You should raise a little her nose and use a more velvety-like texture.
Her right inner ear require a little toning down on the red, otherwise it seems like a strong light is shinning behind it. Talking about the inner ear, use a more uniform color, since is it basically skin.
Judy's irises are not blue, they are violet (see pic). The white fur above her eyes should move in a arc around her eyes, again flow of the body.
The head is a little more squashed.
The reflection of her left shoulder should be a little more rounded.
I hope it helped.

>>8589896
Not that anon but, if you say that they need to improve their art you really need to improve your ability to critique.
Because when someone asks for help in a drawing and you say "No, it's bad, go back to basics" it's not helpful neither useful.
I'm not saying be nice, but basically saying "you suck" it's not the way to do critique. Offer helpful, targeted advice instead.

>>8589958
Not either of the anons but I will agree on that the original post was bad, "Pretty bad, to be honest. You should improve your basic shapes." This is pretty vague; you can tell someone to work on the basics but what specifically is wrong? Is it the heads? The snouts (which seem kind of odd to me, especially Renamon where it almost looks like she doesn't have one.) The extreme fuzziness of everyone, which could be a bit distracting?

>>8589975
Yeah; it is suppose to be amusing that the comic turns around from Nick forcing Judy into sex all the time to Judy completely draining Nick. The rape at the beginning just seems really awkward.

>>8589573
>creating patreon
enjoy the piracy

>>8587006
Man the prose alone does a good job of showcasing Judy's mindset.

>>8589655
>>8589666
We're missing Mrs. Wilde abuse for being such a bad mother.

>>8589992
>>8589983
the first image and second filename sum up my feelings of the original request and the result perfectly. Stilil got a laugh out of me at the end, here's your (you).

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Friendly reminder that Pandora x Remmy is a best.

>>8590040
what do you mean?

>>8589654
>chromatic aberration

Gonna point out that's a crutch you should definitely ditch right now.

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>>8589805
>Zootopia comic
>well detailed drawing
>not expecting it to go full retard at some moment

literally an universal constant.

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>>8590048
She's tried her best with what she had, anon, pls no hurt her

>>8590070
Fucking her own son and then getting pregnant from it? How is that her best?

>>8590067
I was kind of hoping porn comics would be exempt from that Law of Zootopia Fandom, but I guess it affects all comics equally.

>>8590067
More like:
>porn comic
>great art
>terrible fetishes

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>>8590048
the abuse is her son walking out on her life

>>8590070
>>8590078
she can't help it, its in her dunnah

>>8589929
>nobody will ever redo this translation
>stuck with Engrish
>terrible font choice
>and amateur-hour typesetting
>forever

>>8590111
visiti

why kill regret

It was nice.

Ms. Wilde x Nick is pretty great senpai.

Kinda wish Burrow Sharing Policy was a complete comic and that Weaver did a variation of it with Nick and a 'Mother sharing policy'.

>>8590118
You know the old saying, Anon? "You want something done right, do it yourself"?
It still holds true today.

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>>8587666
Can you give some specific examples of what you mean?

>>8587281
>>8587229
>>8587050
>>8587024
Thanks!

>>8587365
I, uh, I think I left a happy ending somewhere around here...

>>8590045
That was part of the hope. I wanted the fact that she's a little broken at this point to show through in the writing. That might be part of >>8587666's issue? It wasn't exactly meant to flow, at least not in the former half.

>>8590125
Because he wants to punish Mrs. Wilde by denying her the ending she deserves.

>>8590118
To be fair, translating from Mandarin is fucking terrifying

I have trouble translating Japanese fluently, and that's like the "Babby's First Language" version of Mandarin

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>>8590125
>nice
EHEHEHEH
>stuck with an art style i dont particularly care for anymore
>with a story that had no proper setup or context
The issue mainly lies in the inception of Regret, by trying to turn a doodle in the beginning of an entire comic
As it stands, continuing Regret would be a waste

>>8590153
in the end, every zootopia comic is a cuck comic

>>8590191
Aw, that's a pity. I really liked how you drew Mrs. Wilde in it.

If it is really and truly dead, could you at least tell us how it was going to end?

>>8590213
Probably with Nick and Judy raising the kid.

>>8590062
He assumes that you will use it as a paywall, so only patreons will see your work (everyone else will have to get it from your patreons who "share" it here or on some other site)

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>>8590213
>I really liked how you drew Mrs. Wilde in it.
Well now I gotta know who you like better
Mrs. Wilde how I drew her in Regret, or pic related

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>>8590322
I want to fuck Mrs. Wilde how you drew her in Regret, or pic related.

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>>8590322
Hm, that style with the old coloring would do best, I think. Frankly, you drew her best in the "old style" in your Gilded Age stuff.

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>>8586973

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>>8590376
>>8590394
>Preferring the older design
I was honestly not expecting this

>>8590432
Perhaps try the new style with the old cheek tufts? They were a nice detail.

>>8590435
wud de fug

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>>8590191
>in the end, every zootopia comic is a cuck comic

Judy gets cucked by Mrs. Wilde, as it should be.

>>8588622
>>8588619
That there is a big bun

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>>8590506
>that dialogue

HNNNNFFFF

>>8590513
4u

Post cute and sexy fluffy bunny feet.

>>8590539
bunnies dont have feet

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>>8590539
>cute and sexy
Redundant

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Never forgetti

>>8590595
>''''nick''''

>>8590595
why are there cracks on his nose?

>>8590619
Cocaine abuse

>>8590595
Has this guy even seen the movie?

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>OCs that went too far

>>8590640
It's jack/skye's child and Nick/judy's child. Neither of them own a brush and one of them is either really short or really tall.

>>8590640
M A X M I D N I G H T

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>>8590640
>not posting the coloured version for ultra-shiteness

>>8590614
>>8590619
>>8590635
Look mfers. I got bunny feet and fox!nicks. You get one, or the other. Greedy bastards...

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>>8590640
>ziel dead stare wide eyes with tiredness bags under them

>>8589325
>A reference to surpass oldfags

Ah well. I'd easily do it, cause I wouldn't know what I'd be missing. That'd also make it easier to erect a sex empire.

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Hmm... now that I think about it.

>>8590660
A great example of why hybrids must be exterminated.

>>8590660
Could someone point out design flaws? This picture is raping my eyes, but it's difficult to nail down what's exactly wrong with the characters.

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>>8590678
...you're right. Both times we saw Clawhauser leave his desk, he was running.

>>8590640
>Was literally about to post that picture

>>8590657
I am assuming that Nick/Judy's daughter is just taller than a normal bunny, and Jack/Skye's daughter is short for a fox. So it evens out the height.

The Bunny's feet bother me, since they are on the toes of their feet. Also fucking christ that bunny tail...and pawpads. Huh.

>>8590666
There really is no replacement for a good old fashioned beating from a belt.

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>>8590678
>>8590697

>>8590685
Your personal bias in taste towards hybrid features is affecting how you feel about the picture itself.

>>8590660
Jack/Skye kid is literally skye with pink fluff (for some reason?) on her ears.

Like she could literally be just Skye that painted her fur.

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>>8590678
>>8590697
holy shit...

>>8590715
I was actually asking for a real opinion on design not some half-witted asshole trying too hard to be smug. But hey, you tried.

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>>8590684
Abort your hybrids.

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>spot the main character

>>8590726
I wasn't trying to be an asshole or smug, I was merely trying to point out how things like that can affect how you see an image; because I know that's one of the reasons I don't like looking at it.

>>8590740
That's kind of how illustration and storytelling works, though.

>>8590741
in that case I apologize.

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>>8590640
>>8590660

I think I'd prefer the offspring of Mrs. Wilde and Nick. How bad can it be?

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>>8586973
Here buddy.

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>>8590740

>>8590762
>traditional fuel

or, simply put, a fossil

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>>8590774
doggy

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>>8590774

>>8590760
I'm not sure you want that question answered, Anon

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>>8590678
>>8590697
>>8590723
IT'S TRUE!

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>>8590740
I still like Proto-Judy's design, almost as much as the final version, even when she isn't looking like this "sultry-ish" bunny.

>>8589354
A_Sig I wanted to say thank you for the request (Remmy getting the golden Ticket to the Bug Gurga Factory)

I thought that he would take Ozzy with him
But his journey wouldn't last long
Because Remmy in his greed nearly drowned in the Firefly Sauce River.

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>>8589983
>>8589992
ty :v

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Finnick running a successful legal business is my favourite fancanon now.

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>>8590786
It can't be as bad as a fox/bun hybrid. Those abominations must be destroyed.

>>8590791
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g9lmhBYB11U

Even in the teaser trailer for Zootopia, we see Clawhauser running across the screen. While everyone else is walking, with a few springing or trotting depending on species.

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Do even-toed ungulates in Zootopia pronk?

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>>8590816
Happy you liked it
And yes, Remmy would fail almost istantly

>>8590833
Armasyll, please tell me about your zoosona. The only info I have is from that Wynn picture where he looks like a species of antelope

>>8590853
Fire will raise

>>8590861
Damn, I'm lucky that I've only drew them running or, in that case of a not!Clawhauser cheetah, sitting

>>8590842
I bet Nick drew the logo for Finnicks buisness

Also it stares in my soul and creeps me out.

>>8590861
HOLYSHIT
O
L
Y
S
H
I
T

>>8590861
It's hard not to hear this trailer as Michael Bluth instead of Nick like it's intended.

>>8590842
I like it as long as it isn't comfy AU. I still want the japanese untraslated comic to shine some new light on Nick and Finnick. Maybe Finnick, seeing an old rival and former partner dropping conning in favor of becoming a police officer of all things, starts to think about his situation. He gets angry about it since Nick pretty much left his former partner but eventually realizes he can work a honest job and a business too.

That or Finnick and him weren't really ever that close (Business partner only tweet) and after Nick ditches him he gets a loan to build a small business by himself.

>>8590791
>>8590723
>>8590697
>>8590678
>>8590861
4Chan trash /zgt/ detectives at work again I see!

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Ah, I was forgetting.
The roll has been done. The subject of the pinup is decided.

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>>8590971

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>>8590760

>>8590760
speaking of nick fugging his mom
anyone got lewd wildecest ideas?

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>>8590774

>>8591095
Do you take commissions?

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>>8590884
It's a chamois. It looks like a refined goat with thin horns.

I fucking hate it.

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Can Remmy BEEB BEEP Like a SHEEP?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CZlfbep2LdU

>>8591108
>I fucking hate it.
Why?
Why didn't you reroll?

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>>8591108
I don't think it's that bad

>>8590883
Well someone in the doc say they based the gait of many species based on their real life gait. So I supposed that at least Pronk pronks.

>>8591146
it was my third reroll ;v

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>>8591157
who are you

>>8591095
>Traditional Fuel Boss
>"I've got a BONE to pick with you!"

>>8591171
That's pretty clearly Rose m8.

>>8591196
Ruse

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reminder to report any wildlife coming out of the sewers or drains your nearest guardsmen or inquisitor

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>>8586973

>>8591267
I love martens, they're so cute.

>>8591282
I can't believe Iji is fucking dead

>>8591278
Aww this is cute

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>>8591282
You died by the claws of a gutter mustel

Restart mission?

Does anone have that new Zootopia pic from Meesh?

>>8591102
I'm afraid not friend. I'd like to try one day but for now I really can't.

>>8590971
Come on grilled cheese...

>>8591314
Kek

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Just going to leave theses here.

>>8591314
They have such big and soft paws

>>8591328
Here
>>8588619
>>8588622

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>>8591367

>>8591367
I wonder how Nick feels about Judy hanging around with that wolf and rabbit while they have sex.

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>>8591377

>>8591371
Thanks!

>>8588619
>>8588622

i see where this leads
>"Ah,.. Clawhauser... you are so much better than the chief and nick...!"

>>8591420
>>"Ah,.. Clawhauser... you are so much better than the chief and nick...!"
>"Ah,.. Duke... you are so much better than the chief, nick and clawhauser...!"

>>8591450
>"Ah,.. Jack... you are actually pretty underwhelming, get out of my apartment."

>>8591379
I don't think he'd mind, looks like shes helping them stay in character for the "based on the real life story of Judy Hopps" movie.

I wonder if they got Nick to help out too even if they got a wolf to play his part. I hope he doesn't mind the historical wolfwashing.

>>8591367
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12283002/4/We-Just-Call-Them-Extras

The fanfic the picture is based off of, for anyone curious.

>Part 2: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12283002/8/We-Just-Call-Them-Extras

>Part 3-ish: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12283002/13/We-Just-Call-Them-Extras

Warning for the third one; it is a swinger scenario, Nick and Judy with the brown rabbit and a painted dog who they note is a bit bigger than Nick, but it never gets to the point of "Oh, you are better than Nick".

>>8591367
This artist looks like they seriously gave up on Nick's legs and feet.

>>8591457
>"Oh Gide- nope, I can't do it. Sorry, see ya later Gid!"

>>8590685
The first thing I notice is that they're really messy. When drawing fur, less is more, but they're just covered in this messy fuzz.

>>8591486
What's wrong with them

>>8591486
> both feet broken
> still banging

What a trooper

Did I miss the new thread or something

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Shoot me a character and an adagio request

>>8591882
Nobby, 4G

>>8591882
Al and g4, friend!

>>8591882
Dewey, 1E

>>8591882
Inky
G4

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>>8591825
They ended up making him extremely top heavy. So as to not mess with what's there, I just did some rotating of what we're provided into almost a standing pose to show what's wrong.

>>8591052
Nick's mom using sex as the carrot on the stick through his adolescence. Mowed the lawn? Blowjob. Birthday gift in lieu of anyhing since cash is tight? Share a bed for a week. Straight A's? Anal.

>>8591477
It is kind of funny; Nick and the brown bunny, Trisha, have had more sex together in all of these than anyone else. Nick fucked Judy once in the part 2, and didn't even finish in her, compared to him screwing the other rabbit in part 1 and 2, finishing in her both times. Same thing in the final chapter; fucking the OC twice while fucking Judy once, though Judy had sex with the other OC twice.

>>8591900
>>8591906
>>8591924
They should all be together, releasing their spirits into one big spirit blob

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>>8591906
I swear I don't remember him in this movie, but he's in so many cartoons these days, I might have missed it.

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>>8592075
ur 1 cheeky cunt i'll give ya that

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>>8592075
>movie

>>8591995
>B's? Still anal, but mommy Wilde wouldn't use lube with the strapon.

>>8592149
Things got a little meta when he was going down on her and she called him "Daddy."

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Damn, the pinup has been interrupted, sorry.

>>8591882
>>8592075
Any others?

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>>8592209
I mean the pinup, not the drawing.
Marty is pissed.
>>8587429

>>8592248

Yes, good. This pleases me.

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>>8592138

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>>8592248
Nice

>>8591882
>>8592241
Jack Savage H3

>Anneke has a nightmare
>Her, Wolter and Remmy are enjoying a night in
>When suddenly, a glass window shatters and Wolter falls to the ground
>She and Remmy start freaking out when Wolter spins around, mane sticking straight up, growling at them
>He first lunges at Remmy, tearing into his neck and tossing him aside
>Then he turns to Anneke

>>8592241
Clawhauser E1

>>8592274
You do realize he doesn't know offcanon characters, right?

>>8592307
who?

>>8592307
I did not know that

>>8591882
gazelle 2A

>>8591882
Fangmeyer A1

>>8591367
Can't duck the cuck!

>>8591882
Nick H1