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Undyne Thread - You can do it edition

Previous thread: >>8484374

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And goodnight.
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You're at a bar with your girl when undyne slaps her on the ass.
What do you do?
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>>8552336
Threesome.
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>>8552332
Good night.
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>>8552336
Challenge her to an ass slapping contest.
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gibe undyne in classic tomb raider gear
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geez, these threads movie pretty fast now
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today is the day boys
this long story better be good
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>walk into the kitchen
>undyne is sitting on the floor with a watermelon between her legs
>crushes the melon with her legs
>looks at you with a winner smile
>help me clean this up?
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>>8554488
these are getting weirder
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>>8554492
>walk into living room
>Undyne is sacrificing a goat for our dark lord Baphomet, ruler of hell
>asks you to participate in a blood orgy
>sharktits inexplicably shows up
>satanic threeway
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It's my birthday today, are there any pics of Undyne wishing the viewer a happy birthday?
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>>8554675
Doing anything crazy today then?
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>>8554806
nah, just going to get some lunch and watch logan with some friends
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>>8554868
Neat, you have a nice day.
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>>8554892
thanks!
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Bumpin
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Undyne and sharksis double teaming a killer whale girl.
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Hi all, sorry for the delay as usual, but here's almost 5000 words of Fuku being cute: https://pastebin.com/uU3hWwP3

I'm pretty pleased with this but I'd have liked to have spent even more time on it, honestly, I think I kind of rushed through the second half and it shows. I put a lot of effort in on this and I'd love to know what you guys think, so please let me know!

>>8554675
Happy birthday!
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i'm here
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>>8554675
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>>8556504
Wow. I'm really impressed with this, it's published book quality, I think.
The beginning hit fairly close to home for me, I feel like I've been in Fuku's situation quite a bit recently. It was kind of heavy, but the fun little details like showering with gas helped balance it out.
The second half does seem a little unfinished like you said, I hope we didn't rush you! I like Undyne in this sort of role, as someone who is sort of an uplifting presence for other people.
All in all, I really liked it.
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>>8556504
I'm gonna be honest here, adding new characters out of the blue like Fukus sister is a little jarring. I can kind of see why though since the story needed some kind of catalyst and you did make her an interesting character, if a little morbid. I do like them both in your style. Sometimes I do feel like they're a bit too... "human" in a way. It's easy to forget they're supposed to be monsters that lived underground for a long time.

While it's really cute slice of life stuff, it does clash a bit with your previous "can't touch things without burning them" thing what with all the ordinary sounding house objects and clothing they're wearing like sweatpants on Blaise for example. I guess you did it to make the story more simple but I would've loved to see you try to invent your way around everything in a fire friendly way. You did kind of play with it in the mall thing but it just leaves me wondering what their house and clothes are made out of.

>“Yeah, I’m going to surprise my girlfriend Alphys, it’s her birthday in a few days,”

OUCH! Haha, didn't expect that twist in the middle there. Especially since it's after the showers thing. Your dislike for Alphys is shining a bit through Undyne there with her cheating. Not that I care all that much, it's just a little harsh in my opinion.

All in all it was very adorable and you made me care for another new character you bastard. I don't know if just any writer could've made me care about Blaise like that.
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>>8558779
>It's easy to forget they're supposed to be monsters that lived underground for a long time.
I think in this "AU" the monsters were never trapped undergound. Not sure though.

>it does clash a bit with your previous "can't touch things without burning them" thing
I'm assuming from the previous stories that all of their household objects are fire retardant and they use gloves when touching things in public.
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>>8557726
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. You guys didn't really rush me, I just literally don't have the time to stretch this out to the 10k+ words it'd need to be fully fleshed out, so I compromised with all those scenes in the mall rather than constructing a continuous narrative. I think the quality of the second half didn't suffer too much...

>>8558779
I felt like adding a new character like that wasn't entirely unwarranted just because we know basically nothing about Fuku, so that really gives me free reign to do whatever I want with her, more or less. I think it really fills out her character to have this older sister that she cares for, it transforms her into a much more dynamic figure imo.

Like >>8558891 said, I'm pretty much going with the monsters never having been trapped underground. As for the whole fire-retardant materials thing, there's only so much of that you can do before it starts bogging the story down. The best way to handle it is to have a few details be radically different to remind the reader that these people are literally on fire, like the showers being gas showers, and then having it just be assumed that all their clothes are fire-retardant or whatever. God knows I've used the phrase 'asbestos-lined panties' enough for people to get the gist of things, I think, and I don't want to keep repeating myself more than necessary.

I actually wasn't even thinking of being mean to Alphys, honestly, I just threw that in there as a way to ground the story chronologically but that does raise some issues, you're right. I think probably I'll go with the cop-out of it being an open relationship or them having some relationship troubles right then or something, but that was just a case of me not thinking things through completely.
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>>8558891
>I think in this "AU" the monsters were never trapped undergound. Not sure though.

I thought it all took place after the events of the game since Alphys and Undyne were dating and everything. Nothing has implied otherwise.

>I'm assuming from the previous stories that all of their household objects are fire retardant and they use gloves when touching things in public.

Yes, we assume but it isn't stated anywhere in the story so it's a little odd.
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>>8559177
>I'll go with the cop-out of it being an open relationship
Alphys would probably be into that.
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>>8559177
I think you did well with Blaise but she hasn't been mentioned anywhere before even though we've already had multiple stories of Fuku so it felt like she dropped out of nowhere in my opinion.

> I'm pretty much going with the monsters never having been trapped underground.

Alright then. I don't see why though. There's nothing in your stories in my opinion that would go against it in the end.
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>>8559210
It isn't stated anywhere because of the audience. There are very few people, I imagine, who started reading my stuff with this story. I know you guys have read everything, so you already know that Fuku and Blaise set things on fire if they touch them. If this was something I was going to try and get published, yeah, I'd have to explain that, but otherwise there's no point repeating the same stuff that's been established in other stories if you know your audience is reading all the stories. Otherwise you get something like the novel version of 1Q84, which was serialized in a magazine first, so every 20 or 30 pages you get a recap of everything that's happened in the story up to that point and boy does that drag.

At any rate I'm really not handling the fire thing as realistically as I 'should' be, considering that Fuku doesn't die if her fire goes out or that Undyne can give her a massage without any harm. It's just a device to explore the character with, that's all. It doesn't have to be played completely straight.

>>8559413
Ha, right? Either way I'm not going to bother with it until I have a story that takes me into that part of the timeline.

>>8559436
That's really a symptom of the roughness of the format. I could always go back and edit Blaise into those old stories but...not much of a point. We all know that I just made her up for this story and if she's in more in the future, that's another thing. We're collaborating on art that is probably never going to get published, so it doesn't have to be 100% polished. As long as you guys know what's going on and can look past some after-the-fact roughness I'm okay with it.

As for the never having been trapped thing, it's just so I don't have to deal with realistically depicting human and monster interactions after they get out. I imagine there'd be a lot of prejudice and mistrust and that feels so played-out and old to me that I never wanted to bother with it.
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>>8556504
>Undyne almost ended up being a masseuse
wew lad
me fokn coq

Also, if you end up writing again later, /r/ing;
>You and Undyne make a bet over something
>If she loses she has to give you a lapdance
>she has no idea what lapdances are, because that's mostly a human concept that monsters haven't heard of yet
>doesn't want to seem dumb for not knowing what it is, and figures its just a goofy dance so she accepts
>freaks out when she finds out, but begrudgingly does it anyway even though she's shy about it
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>>8559657
Unrelated question, but have you considered making an Archive of Our Own account (I think that's the preferred fanfiction site these days) or something to put your stories on?
I think it would be cool if your stories got more recognition, but if you'd rather not I understand.
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>>8556504
There's something about Undyne being so nice yet also enough of a monstrous asshole to cheat on Alphys that feels really weird.
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>>8559676
I can't today unfortunately, I'm beat. Ask me tomorrow or Thursday.

>>8559848
I hadn't really thought about it, I don't know whether people would like my stuff or not. /utg/ is really the only other community have to go off of in terms of reception and it's been decidedly mixed there. Does it have a large userbase? I really know nothing about it.

>>8560002
see >>8559177
it was really sort of a mistake on my part, I'm actually thinking about going in and getting rid of it. Opinions?
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>>8559657
>Pic

That neck is MASSIVE. It's hilarious.

Hm, I guess I just always think of your stories from someones perspective who knows the characters from the game and nothing else. It's fine really. I certainly wouldn't want you to repeat yourself. I was thinking more along the lines of those little details getting more and more inventive.

Yeah the prejudice thing would be pretty drab but I kind of expected it to not be as realistic and that the monsters integrated into society awfully well like at the end of the game without much problems. Your stories could simply take place after such an integration has already happened so there's no need to show off human/monster interaction too much. I mean it's been touched upon a bit in the stories where Undyne wonders about the readers human features.

I just like to think that Undyne was a super serious royal guard but once she doesn't have to be she just wants to teach gym to kids and that's why she's so famous with the monsters like Fuku and Octavia. Doesn't it raise another kind of problem where you now have to invent other ways for these characters to have met each other and for why they know each other?
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>>8560169
>Opinions?

If you're willing to take it out then it would improve Undynes image a lot in the story. Maybe she just mentions a "Girlfriend" without any kind of name given just to make an excuse even though she's not going out with anyone at the moment?
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>>8560370
It is done. That was a pretty egregious oversight on my part anyway, I think it's better like this.

>>8560276
Well, you caught me, I kind of want to have it both ways - I love talking about my stuff and I really can't help myself, but at the same time I don't want to make any big defining moves like that before I've thought them out or if I don't have a story to write that deals with them. Personally I'd rather just leave it a mystery and have it be ambiguous, but I just really didn't want to deal with all that integration stuff I talked about, so I guess the real answer is...I dunno lol.
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>>8560492
>I dunno lol.

And that's perfectly fine with me. That means I get to pick and choose my own thing for this unimportant detail. This all started with me saying that your characters are a little too human but really it doesn't matter if the alternative is literally changing the world and setting. It's not like it's a mistake anyway.
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Fat Undyne is best Undyne.
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>>8560169
>Ask me tomorrow or Thursday

You got it chief
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>>8560906
>>8560875
where did that come from
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>>8561062
https://twitter.com/ketori_UT/status/849291932727558144
https://twitter.com/ketori_UT/status/847656206659342337
Birdtale or something
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>>8560922
holy shit lmao
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>>8557085
>>8556504
thank you, fellow fishlovers.
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>>8560770
is this by the same dude that does those fat doom monster rule 63?
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>>8560922
I don't know if you've ever done requests before, but do you think you could maybe whip up an Undyne GET IN THE BAG picture?
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>>8562538
Give me like 15-20 min my dude
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>>8562652
Ring a ding, baby
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>>8563019
holy fuck
thanks
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>tfw /utg/ used to be cool but there's nothing to talk about any more and people are getting mean and petty
>tfw those posts about abusing baby Muffet bring me to the verge of tears and idk whether that's good because it means i still have a functioning sense of empathy or bad because i care about stupid shit like that
>tfw this thread, this fucking thread, has an incredible drawfag, a great photoshopfag, and probably the best writefag i've ever read
>tfw everyone is so nice and chill and laid-back and there isn't constant shitposting
>tfw this thread will die someday and i will have to go back to face reality without my dumb fucking cartoon fish waifu

hold me
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>>8563637
>implying writefag won't be here providing fine literature until the eventual heatdeath of the universe
>implying the drawfag will ever tire of bringing delicious sharktits to life
>implying photoshopfag will stop making weapons grade fish memes
>implying I will ever stop fishposting and allow this thread to die
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>>8563920
I hope you're right. I hope the writefag makes a tumblr or an AO3 account or something though, I don't want all their stuff to get lost.
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>>8564019
[fishspoiler]I'm saving them all on my hard drive in case the pastebins ever go down[/fishspoiler]
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>>8563019
>Fuku Nebby
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>>8563637
Regardless of what people tell you, being sensitive is never a fault as long as you know how significant things are and you're still able to function. I get sad when I kill bugs but I still kill them.

>>8564019
I would, I'm just a little leery of what sort of reception I'd get. What's the community on AO3 like?

>>8564075
I have them all saved too, don't worry.
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>>8564193
I honestly don't know about AO3, I don't use it, I just know that it's the big thing in fanfiction right now.
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>>8563637
>hold me
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>>8564709
>ti~t
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>>8564193
>Regardless of what people tell you, being sensitive is never a fault as long as you know how significant things are and you're still able to function.
Amen.
>I get sad when I kill bugs but I still kill them.
[fakespoiler]I always try to put spiders outside[/fakespoiler]

>I would, I'm just a little leery of what sort of reception I'd get. What's the community on AO3 like?
I don't really know much about it except that it's popular with people. I did a quick glance through of comments on some Undertale stuff, and I doubt you'd get a hostile reception as long as the stories were tagged appropriately. You might get a lot of "why isn't thing like game" type posts, though.
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>>8563637
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x6LovY_DdEE
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>>8564193
I would definitely put your message to /utg/ as a preface but I could definitely see your stories doing well on AO3.
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>>8564819
Hey, what the hell, I guess I'll make one then. I can always use more buttpats. If anyone has an invite that'd be cool. Meantime I'm going to bed, night all!
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>>8565622
Goodnight!
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>>8565622
>If anyone has an invite that'd be cool.
If the numbers on the request invite page are correct it looks like it would only take 3-4 days to receive an invite from the site.
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>>8566382
presumably they don't want to wait 3-4 days.
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Goodnight.
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>>8563637
>tfw /utg/ used to be cool but there's nothing to talk about any more and people are getting mean and petty

You're delusional. I've been on /utg/ since the beginning of 2016 and it's actually a lot calmer than it used to be. It just used to be so insanely fast that there were more differing opinions and you wouldn't even notice someone like soriel shitposting in the middle. There used to be so incredibly many shitposters in the general when every thread had over 100 IPs that calling them mean and petty NOW is just funny.

I admit that there's a bit of a slump in the posting since people seem to be slowly getting tired of Undertale but there's no real horrible shitposting anymore like the Barbosa stuff, Asgore cuck stuff, Every single horrible thing the skeleton fandom has created and all the horrible fetishes like bloodplay and lobotomy that we used to have constantly. There's no more catfucker (most of the time), no WORSHIP or stuffit the Muffet fags, entire threads worth of vore shitposting or Toriel scat and Asriel abuse. The only thing Soriel has achieved is that now everyone ignores any kind of arguments or differing opinions because they assume they're being trolled.

I stopped reading the Muffet abuse posts quickly after they appeared months ago. I'm fairly certain that anons only motive is to see where and when the Muffetfag is going to break. They're just mindless abuse and easy to ignore since you know it's always one of the replies to him. Occasionally I'll see what he's come up with this time out of curiosity but there's no point getting upset over them since they're not meant to be actual abuse to the character but rather a way to get the spiderfags attention.

>>8563920
>implying writefag won't be here providing fine literature until the eventual heatdeath of the universe

Kek.

>>implying the drawfag will ever tire of bringing delicious sharktits to life

I like to think that Undyne is my purpose here and not sharktits.
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>>8569641
>The only thing Soriel has achieved is that now everyone ignores any kind of arguments or differing opinions because they assume they're being trolled.
I think this is the main problem. Whenever someone tries to get a game discussion going soriel inevitably tries to hijack it, turning it into a characterfag war.
/utg/ also has weird hangups about speculation/things that aren't 100% obviously canon, so there's really very few "safe" things to actually talk about.
(Sorry for the metadiscussion)
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>>8560770
How fat?
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>>8560770
Gross. I guess the idea is like corruption where you take a slim and fit character and make her super fat but I still feel like it goes against what Undyne is like.
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>>8560770
/Fit/ Undyne is the bestestest.
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Requesting a drawing of a pool seen from above with undyne relaxing with her head back, arms resting up on the edge and body floating.
And then sharksis drifting just under the surface of the water towards and between undyne's legs.

No homo.
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>>8570115
that is very homo anon
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>>8570115
>jaws
>more like tongues amirite
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https://pastebin.com/VJv1q3SC
>“Alphys, do you remember why we broke up?”
>“Because I was getting too dependent on you.”
>“You didn’t hang out with anyone else, you didn’t go see anyone else. You were either by yourself or you were with me. Meet different people. Spend a weekend outside of your lab for once"

W-wait, doesn't this basically mean that Undyne abandoned Alphys when her mental illness became inconvenient for her instead of even trying to support her?
No wonder Alphys is such a wreck, holy shit. She probably can't even think about trying to get into a relationship with anybody else after the one person she did get lucky with just threw her away.
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>>8572709
The writefag hasn't written enough about Undyne and Alphys's relationship to make any sort of judgment like that on it, but by all means feel free to try and stir up shit
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>>8572801
Don't respond to the /vg/ mods favored anti-Undertale shitposter.
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>>8572801
>>8572811
I don't know what you're talking about. I found this general, looked at the writebin thinking there might be some cute fishlizard stuff I've missed, and one of the only two fics that even mention Alphys is like this. How else am I supposed to react?
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>>8572811
As much as I like the writeanon's stories, this has always been my main gripe with them. It seems like she does have some vendetta against Alphys. I understand the viewpoint that Alphys shouldn't be forgiven so quickly for her past actions, but she doesn't really seem to hold Asgore to the same standard.

It just feels like writeanon is always really quick to kick her while she's down. Between that one, the dating app one, the spin the bottle one, etc. I dunno, it just feels entirely unnecessary.
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>>8572709
god, this sounds like part of my break-up
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>>8572862
>>8572923
You guys can always request stuff with Alphys, you know.
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>>8573401
But if she hates Alphys so much, wouldn't she just have an awful time being forced to write her?
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>>8573553
https://pastebin.com/VxJc8rtL
https://pastebin.com/wJsCnV4b

Clearly not. IIRC she's said in the past that while she doesn't particularly like Alphys she doesn't have a problem writing her if people request it, it's just that people don't request it.
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>>8573401
>>8573592
I don't even like Alphys all that much. It's just kind of off-putting that she gets shit on so much in situations that don't really need to involve her.
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>>8572923
I think all this stuff about Alphys comes from me not really having thought out where I was going to go with things in those earlier stories where Alphys does get really beat on. There's also the fact that I was sort of assuming people would request more stuff about Alphys than not and I figured that I'd have plenty of room to flesh out that relationship, but that didn't really happen.

Back in the early stories my train of thought was that if Undyne isn't with Alphys any more, something obviously had to happen to break them up, and rather than go with the Alphys being a shallow whore who breaks up with Undyne out of nowhere, which I've seen other people doing, I figured that a more interesting route would be to have them splitting up due to Undyne being concerned for Alphys. Maybe that wasn't a realistic choice or whatever, but my reasoning was that Undyne would tend toward quick, sweeping judgments without a lot of foresight, and that when you're in a relationship with someone who's genuinely dependent on you, there's really only so much you can do before it becomes glaringly apparent that the only thing you can do is split up, because otherwise there's no chance of improvement at all. Maybe that was the wrong choice, but that was the one I made and those were the reasons behind it.

In my more recent stuff, I don't think I've really beat on Alphys all that much. In the teen Undyne stories, my general idea was that if Alphys is a complete shy nerd like I've been writing her, of course she's going to get the short end of the stick more often than not. What I had always figured was that Undyne and Alphys would get together after this short little thing with 'you' after prom, that things wouldn't work out with that and that that would go for however long, years, until it's time for those earlier stories. That was part of what I was trying to do with that little mention of Alphys in that story with Fuku yesterday (cont'd)
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>>8575261
...I was trying to hint at the timeline I'm envisioning for this whole thing, tying all these stories together, which goes something like this:
(youngdyne goes to live with asgore) > (teen Undyne goes to live with her dad and Akhy, teen Undyne stuff happens) > (things with 'you' don't work out and Undyne gets together with Alphys) > (things with Alphys don't work out) > (stuff with Fuku and Octavia) > (Undyne gets together with a different 'you' than from high school) > (Brill happens somewhere in here) and then whatever happens next.

That's the vision I'm working towards now, but a lot of this roughness comes from not having that all clear and planned out when I had started writing. Obviously there's some gaps in that timeline where people just haven't requested stories that fit in yet, but I'm confident that if I keep this up long enough it'll all fall together.

Anyway, the one other story, the dating website one, I've never really been too pleased with, since it relies on Undyne acting like a total retard. I didn't write that one well at all and it's always bothered me a bit, but I haven't really seen a way to fix it other than just deleting it, and of course I don't want to do that because someone requested it.

To get back to the original question, I think the reason there's so much about Alphys getting beat on in these stories is because there's a big oversampling of the areas around her and Undyne's relationship and not enough of the actual relationship. I've said before that I didn't really like Alphys in the game, and I stand by that, but I don't mind writing about her and I really don't have a vendetta against her, or at least I'm not trying to have one. I just wasn't expecting there to be so few requests for her and Undyne doing things together. I hope this answers the question.

Anyway, let me know if you've got any stories you'd like written and I'll get to them when I can.
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>>8575329

Hey,
could you write a story where either Undyne or you are talking on the phone with someone, then the other one starts doing sexual things to them while they're stuck on the call?

The person that's calling and the context of the call itself could be up to you.
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>>8575261
>>8575329
I'll just say this much: Alphys and Undyne are my favorite characters in the entire game, and I'd love to request fics featuring the two, but there's a bunch of caveats here.

First, an official timeline where Alphys will always end up getting dumped in favor of some random schmoe, which means that any fic featuring them, no matter how cute, will always have that feeling of dread and future despair on it, doesn't make me feel very welcome to make a request.

Second, for all your talk about how you don't beat on Alphys, there's still this massive feeling like you hate her so much that you project it onto Undyne. For example, the argument that when someone's dependent on you you have to split up: Consider that we're talking about Undyne, the straight up hero who never gives up, who made a promise to Alphys to help her improve as a person and who has a great interest in making things better for her.

The way I see it, if Undyne actually decided that she loves Alphys, I don't think she would give it up for something like her being mentally ill. I think she'd help her get professional help, I think she'd help her improve, I think she'd do everything in her power to make sure she gets better and that they can live a happy life together. And I think that because you hate Alphys, you made Undyne conveniently make a split second decision, and I think that if it was the reader character, you'd never write Undyne acting like that. And that doesn't make me feel welcome to make a request, either.

I don't exactly want to stop you from writing or anything, you do you, but from how much hostility you seem to have for Alphys any any pairing with her, which you seem to be greatly projecting to both Undyne and your writing, it just feels like anything I'd request would end up just being painful to read and hostile towards me, too.
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>>8576057
could you be any more melodramatic lmao
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>>8576057
If I'm going to be brutally honest I think you're being rather silly. I personally am a huge Alphyne fan and I've never gotten the impression that the writeanon hated Alphys. I agree that Undyne splitting up with Alphys seems out of character, but I think they explained that fairly well in the posts above about how there wasn't any overall plan, just trying to fit requests into a timeline.
The only reason I haven't requested any more Alphys stuff is that I don't have any interesting ideas.
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>>8575374
Delivered: https://pastebin.com/4VkPwY3u
Predictably I chose Alphys to show how much I clearly don't hate her :^)

>>8576057
Okay, you can go write your own stories exactly the way you like them, then.
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The Miku image someone requested with Undyne and sharktits in the last thread doesn't load properly in the desuarchives. If you're still here could you throw it here again so I can save it for later?

>>8576057
The truth is that it doesn't really matter. These are all fanfics made from a single persons viewpoint and if you request Alphyne stuff then there's no real need for you to think of it as a part of some timeline or anything. Just consider it a one off that doesn't have anything to do with the rest of the writefags stuff.
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>>8576737
>https://pastebin.com/4VkPwY3u
Aw, that was really cute!
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>>8577058
This one?
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>>8577482
No no I mean they posted an image with anime characters with one of them holding up a doll and requested Undyne and Sharktits drawn the same way. I can't get that image now because desuarchives isn't working with me.
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>>8577889
Oh sorry, that one was broken too.
Here, I think this is it
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>>8577977
Yes, thank you.
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why do people take such offense to the writefag just making shit up
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>>8576737
Hey, if you still have time to write one more I'd like to second this request
>>8559676
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>>8575374
>backwards hand
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>>8579652
She's a fish monster.
I don't have to explain shit.

b-bully
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>>8559676
Ugh, of course, I'm sorry. I'm really drained, I just can't tonight. I think I need to take a day off, honestly.

I wish I could write all of the stories for you guys but I guess I'm only human. Someone's emailed requesting something too, on top of that, although I honestly don't know if I'll do that one. So I think I'm going to just not even touch Microsoft Word until Friday, and then I'll get started again. Is that cool with everyone?

I mean, of course it is, I'm the one writing. You know what I mean.
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>>8580352
Of course it's fine! We wouldn't want you to get burned out.
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>>8580352
No rush at all my friend. Go take a vacation. You deserve it.
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>>8580942
Thanks. I think part of the problem is dealing with all of this Alphys stuff, I don't have it in me to just not care what people think and not give any commentary or whatever, I always feel the need to explain my side of things and how everything makes sense to me. I want people to like my stuff, of course, so it's a little exhausting when people can't see things my way, or aren't willing to, or whatever.
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>>8581430
You can never make everyone happy. There's no sense in letting it get to you. Especially over something that's meant to be recreational.
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>>8581430
Not trying to pour gasoline on the fire, but the Alphys criticisms seem a bit ridiculous in my opinion.

Someone can ask for happy Alphys stories, and you've said that you're willing to write them. That's where the argument should end.
It's hardly your fault that you personally dislike the character.

This thread is for Undyne anyway, not necessarily Undyne+Alphys. If people want that so bad they can go literally anywhere else.
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>>8581932
>Someone can ask for happy Alphys stories, and you've said that you're willing to write them. That's where the argument should end.
This. And even though I like Alphys, that doesn't stop me from liking all the other pairings that you've written, too.

>It's hardly your fault that you personally dislike the character.
I hope all this stuff hasn't worsened your opinion of Alphys even more. She's not a bad character, and I think she shares some traits with other characters you've written, even your Undyne sometimes.

But please, enjoy your break so you can come back refreshed.
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>>8582339
>That alphys
C U T E

but who killed Undyne's dad?
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>>8582428
Reader-sama, obviously, all according to his keikaku to get Undyne to have crippling daddy issues he can take advantage of later in life
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>>8582428
>>That alphys
>C U T E
That artist does an adorable Alphys.
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>>8582487
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>>8582523
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>>8582487
>ywn be worked to death by undyne or look like a star athlete next to alphys

ngah.
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>>8582450
>ow my chronic asspain
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goodnight (:
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>>8582937
Goodnight!
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screw alphys, I want more brill
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Brill is good, too!
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>>8583228
Meant for >>8583177
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>>8583239
The anatomy on that one always looks a little off to me.
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>>8577058
Those teeth are out of control but great work nonetheless, awesome.
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Goodnight.
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>>8583398
That's probably because it is. Like her left breast and that whole hip situation and Undynes torso would be too long compared to her legs. It's why I don't ever post that image. Have fun never being able to look at it again haha.

>>8584723
Yeah but I think it's ok for Undynes teeth to be a little out of control. Especially when it's just a joke image. Nevertheless, I touched it a tiny bit. Maybe this won't be as jarring to you.
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>>8587518
eyo drawfag sensei, hit me up with some stick figures of undyne and sharkie comparing or battling on different things to see who's the best.
>bust size, shark wins
>swim speed, tied
>strength, undyne
>sexual partners, shark wins
>best hair, undyne
>best teeth, shark
>best cook, undyne, somehow
etc etc
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>no pictures of sharktits trying to /ss/ teen undyne
Or is it /hs/ when homo?
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WHO UP
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>>8590374
REAL

FISHERMAN

HOURS
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>>8590374
I'm up! It's nice to have a day off of writing, I usually don't get a chance to do much with the thread other than that.

>>8590854
POUND DAT MF FISH PUSS
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>>8590854
NO WHALES ALLOWED
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>>8589511
/ll/
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How do you test how strong a woman's inner muscles are?
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>>8590867
All that pounding will soon lead to a strong smell of sushi.
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>>8590930
I'm ok with that
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>i hope undyne-chan notices me today
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>>8589057
Anon what the fuck I can't draw stick figures. That shit's an insanely hard. I'm pretty sure you can do it better than I can.

Also how do you draw a bust size contest on stick figures? I'm honestly curious. I couldn't think of any decent way to show it.
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>>8590903
You ask them to crush food objects of increasing size by flexing.
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>>8593445
two circles
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>>8593501
Holy shit you're right. Maybe you should be a drawfag.
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>>8593580
>>8593591
peni hard
whao
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The mods' greatest ally is bitching about the writefag again.
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>>8593734
Let's try to keep it in /utg/, please.
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>>8593775
TOUCH FLIPPY FIN
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>>8593909
You will perish.
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>>8594293
what if she likes it tho
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>>8593909
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>>8593591
Also that wasn't meant to be a mean jab or anything if anyone was wondering. I honestly am bad at drawing stick figures.

I'm not really drawng anything right now because I don't have a lot of free time. It might affect the quality of my drawings in a bad way but I'll have more time this weekend and next week when easter hits so I hope I can make up for it a little.
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what the fuck is wrong with /utg/ lmao
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>>8594607
Please, let's keep /utg/ drama on /utg/.
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>>8594607
You know what the really ironic part of all this is? When I was writing that Christmas special story, it was the first story I wrote for this thread that was explicitly erotic. That's why I was hyping it up so much, because it was the first actual porn I was writing. I wanted to keep the quality high though and not have it just literally be porn, so I was trying to think of a good way to get a scene with Alphys in without doing anything to Undyne and 'you' and their relationship, so I had the brilliant idea to have Alphys to miss Undyne so much and be so desperate that she comes up with this retarded plan to try and split Undyne and 'you' up. I was originally going for Undyne having this sort of predatory tone and really kind of taking advantage of Alphys to teach her a lesson or something like that, but really the most like basic reason was because I wanted to have a sex scene with Alphys and not have to throw out 'you' afterwards, that was it. I wanted to keep Alphys around too, that's why I had that whole thing about Undyne breaking up with her because she was so dependent. And I stick by that, I think that there's really only so much you can do when someone's that dependent, and the final step is just removing yourself from the equation; I thought that was more reasonable than Undyne trying to baby Alphys and coddle her or whatever because even though she always sticks with her friends she's pretty big on self-reliance as well, and I thought that that was a reaction Undyne would actually have.

Maybe that was the wrong choice, who knows. I think if I'd known the reaction I would probably have done things differently but at the time people really hadn't made a big deal about it, that's all been more recent.

>>8594882
Those boobs look weird.
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>>8595178
>Those boobs look weird.

It looks like they've been tacked on her chest instead of being her actual breasts. They're too defined with that white outline.
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>>8595178
>>8595435
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>>8595496
Looks better to me, at least.
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i love this fish
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>>8597553
Me too.
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I hope this thread picks up in the summer, you guys are super chill.
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>>8598095
Me too.
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>>8599608
>>8599360
Where do you find all these pics? I've never seen most of these before and I assume you're the same guy posting every day.
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>>8599757
Hah, yeah it's mostly me. The majority of the images I post are from twitter (like the ones you quoted) and I also find a lot of stuff on pixiv (like this one).
But I get images from pretty much everywhere else, too.
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>>8599890
Well either way I really appreciate it and I'm sure a bunch of other people do too!
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>>8600064
Aw, thanks anon!
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goodnight (:
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>>8600782
Goodnight!
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MORE STICK FIGURES
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goodnight
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Requesting undyne strapped into some bondage gear while sharksis is hand-fucking her silly with a dildo.
Undyne begging her to stop, riding on her 5th orgasm.
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>>8603754
Man you are relentless with those requests. Feels bad when I don't have any time to even try them.
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>young undyne enlisted in the monster army
>world war 1 tier trench warfare against the humans
>undyne's group preparing for a night assault
>the run across no-man's land only to meet a group of humans
>they fight in the dark and undyne gets a knife in her shoulder
>falls to the ground just as she hear mortars being fired at them
>this is the end.adele
>someone grabs her arm and drags her into a small trench
>the field is shelled but they survive
>you saved my life, undyne exclaims while pulling the knife out, no big deal
>the someone turns on a lamp to see in the dark
>it's a human guy
>they look at each other, undyne still with the knife in hand
And then sex.
BOOM, give me that fucking oscar.
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>bunch of sexy sharkgirls on the beach
>undyne on the right
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>this thread
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Hi all! I had a nice day off. I'm about to go get lunch but when I get back I'll start in on that one lap dance story people had been asking for, so just a heads up on what's going on.

>>8607141
Please, it's not dead, just slow.
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And here it is: https://pastebin.com/CLk02sDr

I think this is particularly cute, it's supposed to be during that stage with Teen Undyne where she's slowly getting more comfortable with 'you' and isn't being quite as dorky and tsundere. Let me know what you think...if anyone else is here, I guess.
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>>8611056
Why is she so upset?
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>>8608793
I'm the one that asked for it initially a couple days ago.
Thanks, it's perfect.

I didn't even ask for Teen Undyne but Teen Undyne is coincidentally my favourite so everything came up Milhouse
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>>8611229
Hey I'm glad you liked it! I'm sorry it took me so long to get to it.
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>>8608793
Oh I don't have a life either. Just drawing stuff.

>Alright, what’s a lap dance?

My little Undyne can't possible be this innocent! She certainly got the hang of it nicely.


I couldn't figure out what she'd be wearing so now she's just butt naked. Enjoy.
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>>8611947
Undyne's face in the back is perfect
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>>8604625
>trench warfare
>201X
I have a feeling the monsters would get BTFO, but then we get monster comfort women
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>>8608793
I used this as a means to achieve ejaculation.
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>>8612413
Hey, that's what it's there for. I think it's kind of hot when people masturbate to my stuff desu, lets me know I'm doing a good job.

>>8611947
Adorable.
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>>8611947
>>8612118
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>>8612118
>>8612614
Thank you.

>>8612793
Hah. "What's going on in this threa..."
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>>8612614
Your writing gives you control of the anons. Use your powers wisely.

Also, requesting Undyne as a shoulder angel and Undyne the Undying as a shoulder devil.

>>8612793
saved lol
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>>8563637
This.
I used to really like /utg//and i still love undertale but with no new content it's dead. It's just imageposting and the same old things all over again.
The abuse of baby muffet make me angery but i just tell myself this anon is memeing. Same for Chara abuse (or other character abuse). The extremely detailed Chara abuse made me feel really uncomfy though. People can be fucked up.
I just want to protect all the characters even though i'm not really tall or really strong and roll them in bubble wrap.

Ontopic I think fishlady is a big dork and I would watch anime with her.
N-no homo.
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>>8613954
>I just want to protect all the characters even though i'm not really tall or really strong and roll them in bubble wrap.
Same here. The character bashing memes get old really fast.
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>>8583228
This. I request more Bril.
I would love to see a dom Undyne capturing a bratty Bril
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>>8614115
I can't really see Brill being bratty, but dom Undyne would be hot.
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>>8614141
psst
https://pastebin.com/qTbPpb82
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I-I want Swapfell Undyne to experiment [spoiler] lesbian sex [/spoiler] on me.
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>>8614168
Well. Now my night is made.
Bless you, write anons. You are all amazing and we love you.
Nohomo.
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>>8614239
>swapfell undyne
very scared
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>>8614274
Now that you put it like that...
But anyway, something about that version of her is so...hot?
And I hate swapfell. But "evil" scientist Undyne makes my knees weak
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>>8614354
That reminds me, Fellswap Undyne seems to be getting popular again for some reason.
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>>8614259
It's literally just one writefag by the way. She's written over 100 stories in like 3 months.
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>tfw want to post stuff but thred is almost ded

I hate the last hundred posts of any thread
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>>8614239
Would you settle for straight sex? https://pastebin.com/hiN4EjNe

>>8614762
Close to 150, actually.
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>>8614929
>this penis requires all of my attention

lel
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>>8614766
You could just repost them in the next thread, I don't think people would mind.
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>>8614929
Like most Swapfell stuff, disturbing, yet intriguing.
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I want Undyne to sit on my face.
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>tfw Undyne pushes you against the lockers and calls you ugly and you pretend that it's fine and try to laugh it off but as soon as she leaves you go to the washroom and attempt to cry as quietly as possible
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>>8616756
https://pastebin.com/MEKgcQDM
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>>8616773
I guess there is a now a writefag story for every possible situation that could ever involve Undyne
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>>8616756
>>8616773
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>>8616773
>>8616903
I fully believe this thread would have been dead a long time ago if it weren't for the writefag and idk if she's even still on, but thank you a ton for being so interested in this fish to keep things rolling for as long as you have.
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>>8616731
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>>8618057
Why does this kind of look like it's from a Wikihow page?
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>>8618218
Dunno. An anon here drew it and colored it a long time ago.
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>>8618377
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How about them waist high pants?
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>>8618675
See also >>8582937
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Hi, I've made an AO3 account. Here is the link if anyone's interested: http://archiveofourown.org/users/morefishplease/profile

>>8617368
That's really sweet of you to say but I don't think I've made a really huge impact, I've just made some peoples' days better reading some of my stories I hope.

>>8618675
most pants are waist-high anon

>>8618737
I was literally going to post that image lmao.
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>>8618779
>Hi, I've made an AO3 account. Here is the link if anyone's interested: http://archiveofourown.org/users/morefishplease/profile
Very cool! You might also want to add that most of them are requests to explain the widely varying subject matter. Maybe put the prompt in the description of the story too, if you can remember it.

>>8618821
lol
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>>8618858
Ha, yeah, I put that in the description of the series after I figured out how to use it. I've already got one kudo...whatever that is. It's really weird going to a website that's more like a traditional forum, I've gotten too used to 4chan. And god I couldn't remember the prompts if I tried, I won't bother with that. I'm sure it won't be too big of a deal.

Oh, and I'll make the new thread.
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new >>8619144
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>>8618779
ARE YOU QUESTIONING MY AUTHORITY?
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>>8622439
>>8622448
>>8622455
>>8622467
>>8622472
These are not fish.
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