/TLHG/- The Loud House General
Cosmic Horrors Edition
>Booru:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=all
>Fanfics:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=2
>Discord:
https://discord.gg/gvs7Xx7
>Thread Archive:
http://pastebin.com/h2ZBJ3GS
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>Episodes:
http://pastebin.com/KM6yNJpe
>Extras:
http://pastebin.com/59KNQH3Z
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News:
>Season 3 Green-lit for 26 Episodes
http://variety.com/2016/tv/news/nickelodeon-animated-hit-loud-house-1201893212/
>Season 3 Premieres Summer of 2017
http://filmschoolwtf.com/the-loud-house-season-3-release-date/
>The Loud House: "There Will Be Chaos", New Books & DVD Announced
http://nickalive.blogspot.com/2017/03/new-loud-house-books-and-dvd-announced.html
>The Loud House Available for Free Comic Book Day, May 6th, 2017
https://www.instagram.com/p/BONxApojuAo/
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Upcoming Episodes:
>Kick the Bucket List (Monday: 4/10)
Lincoln and Clyde had their whole Spring Break planned out but it turns out they only have one day to accomplish everything on the list.
>Party Down (Tuesday: 4/11)
When Lori is able to manage a great party for her friends, they end up having other plans.
>Fed Up (Wednesday: 4/12)
Bored with monotonous meals, the kids sabotage dinner to get pizza, but they are caught, and therefore, forced to prepare the food for the family.
>Shell Shock (Thursday: 4/13)
Lincoln and Ronnie Anne have to deal with an egg at school, but Lincoln does not trust the chaotic Ronnie Anne to take care of the fragile egg.
>>8405107
What?
Who drew this
>>8405124
skeluigi
>>8405122
Lucy's got a weird circle of friends
Threadly reminder that Niggers practice sex crimes on White women (rape, sexual assauot) way more than White men do on Nigger womyn.
Holy shit its dead here.
Look Anon I got a badge!
Just made this.
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=31928
>Party Down
On a scale of 1-10, how much Lori suffering will there be?
Who drew this?
>>8405180
enclave
>>8405152
Is usually is a 2am
Mostly cause I show up
did a ritacoln lewd in the last thread. gonna do an epilogue at some point
https://pastebin.com/UwZ03c1e
>>8405167
>Carol's party is way cooler
ANON - Update and New Chapters List (MO4444R!)
>http://pastebin.com/DMPFQ29u
HIGHLIGHTED FIC OF THE DAY
>>I Don't Need Relationships<<
Author: Nito/fishnchipz
WIP - http://pastebin.com/4kTEqEgw
Last Update: 10-02-2017
>After an intense break up with Bobby, Lori's entire life is changed but with Lincoln's help, she might not waste away to nothing.
NEWS & Q/A
>done, put it in my greentext bin. called it Not who he Seems:
http://pastebin.com/TDMtCYrp
Various Leafy Greentexts (contains NSFW)
hypnobob
>the new chapter of the saga titeuf with the louds
http://pastebin.com/3Yf6Y8aQ
la gran boda loud y situacion de rehenes
cartman6x6
>Update
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12299756/25/The-Prodigal-Lincoln
CaptainDarko2.0
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12399806/5/Earth-Loudest-Heroes
jedssm
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12153129/145/One-shot-collection
nightmareking
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12419122/1/
Finding A Loud
Omega Ultra
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12248853/6/Lincoln-s-First-Love
B. Bandit18
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12081598/18/Requiem-for-a-Loud
UnderratedHero
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12201839/23/Stories-And-Tales-From-Dimension-63
Omega Ultra
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12408533/4/Lucy-and-the-Phantom
Ybarra87
>and thats all for this one. might do a sequel sometime.
http://pastebin.com/YeNj5WjC
Escarmargo
hypnobob
>Next and final session of Chapter Four will be next Sunday at 9:00 PM GMT-3 or 7:00 PM EST
http://pastebin.com/pyfS1LAq
Godless Sound
Yourhead
>guys, thats gonna do it for now. i'll add in an epilogue another time.
http://pastebin.com/UwZ03c1e
Skivvies
hypnobob
>I did some shit I guess
http://pastebin.com/iwn32yLE
In the PRANK HOUSE! (NSFW)
AlchyHolic
>Update
http://pastebin.com/j2Tqkd1z
Mama Lori
shinjithethird
>>8405212
>tfw even her siblings would rather be at Carol's party instead
How will Lori ever recover?
>>8405229
>Suicide is painless
>It brings on many changes
>And I can take or leave it if I please
- Suicide note of one Lori Loud (2000-2017)
>>8405167
I can't wait to see all the "not alcohol" at the party.
>>8405245
terrible haiku. only the middle line follows the rule
>>8405261
Lori's a failure through and through
Have you ever seen the face of perfection?
>>8405261
Now THIS is a terrible haiku. You stopped after the first line, also the syllable count is all wrong. You can do better than that anon.
>Mfw I just read the OP
>We're finally getting a RA episode
>It's the episode from SpongeBob where Patrick and Spongebob take care of an egg.
MY BODY IS READY
>>8405272
forgive me, anon. i spent the last three hours or so writing a ritacoln lewd. my brain is shooting sparks
>>8405263
The Louds didn't get a good daughter until Luan.
>>8405281
So who's the wife and who's the husband?
>>8405289
No no no anon. What you meant to say was "The Louds had good daughters until Luan."
Rita delivered a better joke that day at the hospital than Luan has in her entire life.
>>8405281
Only if we get a montage of how Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan and Lynn handled their egg and/or flour-sack babies.
>>8405341
>Whori
>Retard
>Talentless Slut
>Successful girl
Naw Luan wins.
>>8405385
Don't forget
>Unfaithful
Luan wins in almost every other way!
>>8405229
>Even Bobby goes to Carol's party
>Carol sends of selfie and Bobby having the time of their lives to Lori
>>8405107
I just realized, if the description for the episodes is genuine it will mean we get to glimpse at Lori's circle of friends.
I though she only had Bobby kek
>>8405437
The last shot of the episode is gonna be a zoom in to Lori's phone, where it's got a pic like this
>>8405281
"Two kids/teens have to take care of an egg and pretend it's a baby" used to be a somewhat common plot device in cartoons. I don't think it's used too much these days though.
Do you think they'll mention Ronnie Anne transferring to the class at the start of the episode, or are they just going to act like she's always been in Linc's class?
>>8405442
I think she talked to someone who wasn't Bobby on her phone once or twice.
I wonder what kind of friends or relationships outside of their family all the Loud kids have.
Lori: Bobby, ?????
Leni: We see her friends in the sleepover episode
Luna: Friends in sleepover episode too, Chunk, Tabby
Luan: Giggles, her subscribers for her channel on notyoutube
Lynn: Polly Pain, her teams for the various sports she plays
Linc: Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Zack, Rusty, Liam. The last three seem to have been established as Linc's core group of friends besides Clyde. Linc had other friends in Save the Date and the Sleepover episode, but they seem to have jus been throwaway characters.
Lucy: Haiku
Lola/Lana: no named friends
Lisa: No known friends
Lily: a babby
>>8405567
One of Leni's friends is a Jordan. I'm
Half expecting the others to know one too.
>>8405567
Dorky preteen Lori is cute as fuck.
Kill fuck marry?
>>8405774
In that order.
>>8405903
I agree with anon
https://pastebin.com/AG4r5PEN
Got bored and wanted to try something with Liberty.
Good morning guys! Any plan for today?
>>8406035
Might put up the next couple of parts for Pokemon Loud Version today - my internet finally came back on following a series of thunderstorms that damaged a few nearby phone lines.
Also, should Lincoln be a nicknamer or not? If he is, you guys will get to pick the names for him...as long as they aren't overly ridiculous.
>>8406035
Waiting for a friend to come over, we were gonna do some cooking but I'm tempted to ask her to bring her switch...
>>8406051
Stop avatarfagging.
>>8406063
My knee jerk reaction was to get pissy, but you're right that post really didn't need it.
>>8406076
You need to talk to someone about your problems. Someone telling you not to do something shouldn't instantly make you lose your cool. I think you might be bipolar or something.
>>8406154
I actually think Gundam Guy has some signs of being on the autism spectrum.
Before you roll your eyes, I've taken several mental health courses, and he falls right in line with what someone with autism can act like sometimes.
>>8405774
Kill all three and every other non-Loud character that isn't Bobby or Ronnie Anne
>>8406165
Fucking everyone and their cat has autism these days, can't someone just be a jackass?
>>8406011
>>8406063
>>8406076
>frogposter avatarfags while talking about cringy unrelated shit 90% of the time and nobody says anything
>You guys still take these people seriously who tell you "stop avatarfagging"
>>8406214
...I don't get it.
He's right? Are you upset he's right?
>>8406226
Yeah but my plans for the day have nothing to do with me posting a new fic, it was an irrelevant post.
>>8406233
>talk about how r63 is lazy after shitting on people for enjoying it in a thread
>make Liberty fic
Not him, but it's kind of funny
>>8406195
No, because most of the time it actually has something to do with a jackasses mental health to make them the way they are.
I highly suggest Gundam Guy seek out a psychiatrist and get screened. It could get him the help he deserves for his possible autism.
Does Linka's Bean boyfriend smack her?
Morning
>>8406248
He's not autistic, just Canadian.
>>8406253
>mistreating a girl with 10 overprotective brothers
>>8406261
What's the difference?
>>8406245
Read the fic, Liberty is Lincoln's cousin.
I'm trying to actually make them different from one another.
>>8406248
Not gonna get into it, but I'm not too keen on mental health professionals.
>>8405451
>That proposal rehearsal Bobby had with Dana wasn't for Lori. It was for Carol.
D E E P E S T L O R E
>>8406280
Almost no one is. That said I think you should consider it, just for the screening.
>>8406280
>I'm trying to actually make them different from one another.
>>8406262
And when they're married?
>>8406282
>rehearsal
Sure, that's what it was
>>8406310
Dude, I can dislike r63 Loud House and still try to do something with Liberty.
I'm trying to solve all the problems I have with it, I guess. Like at least Liberty was given some traits different from Lincoln when the community made her.
>>8406340
Yeah, but she looks exactly like Lincoln, except with long hair, just like Linka. It's pretty dumb.
Not to mention any storytelling opportunity can be expanded upon by changing the characters to your needs, writers have done that all the time. All those stories we've enjoyed of them going at each other are way out of character. So objecting to that over the R63 stuff, and then taking a character who looks exactly like Linka and doing what you claimed was silly, makes you look silly.
d
>>8405124
Duskull
>>8406371
Kudos for making me sit down and think about my position in this.
I dislike how a lot of people aren't willing to put the work in to make the r63 characters interesting.
Like yeah, anything can be interesting when it's well written. But the source material was still handled poorly and I struggle to think of anything made by the community using Linka & the brothers that ever really appealed to me.
>>8406475
So yeah, I'm trying to do something interesting with Liberty. I still hope that I can get around to that other idea I had where Liberty would effectively be the xenomorph in the loud house version of aliens, but that didn't really pan out so let's see how far she can go as an annoyingly clingy cousin.
>>8406495
How clingy are we talking here?
>>8406483
for what purpose
>>8406531
Gotta eat big to get big.
>>8406503
So clingy the siblings had to draw straws ahead of time to see who got "stuck" with her for the day.
I want her to come off as something that all the Loud kids see as a "chore" to deal with, but as the story progresses Lincoln sees her more and more as an actual little girl with feelings who just wants some attention. She'll probably be an only child with boring parents.
>>8406539
No one sets out to be that way, though, regardless of whether they become alright with it when it happens
>>8406483
Getting more and more grottesque every day
>>8406565
>No one sets out to be that way
>implying Leni isn't a permabulking mass monster
What you don't see in that drawing is her crushing 4pl8 deadlifts for a warmup.
>>8406553
Sounds kinda boring.Like it's going to be a forced feel bad for her story but the lesson at the end will be she does it to herself so you pity her but realize you can't help her until she helps herself kinda thing.
>>8406597
You're half right and I really can't blame you for feeling that way.
It's not so much a "Lincoln apologizes" thing as all the Loud kids have to learn that they treat her shittily despite only wanting to spend time with her family.
>>8406531
>muh fetish
>>8406641
If I drew my fetishes it would be all footjobs and thighsex in thigh high socks.
tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=31923
>>8406684
It's fun, man. And the fact that there's some people saying "Normally this shit makes me vomit but you made it look okay/great/oh god why I just jacked off to this", that's encouraging.
>>8406708
There's one person saying that. It's sb99.
>>8405107
>Lincoln and Ronnie Anne have to deal with an egg at school, but Lincoln does not trust the chaotic Ronnie Anne to take care of the fragile egg.
Finally, a Mexiloli episode (Where she might get a decent amount of screentime.)
How do you guys think the episode will turn out? I just hope the egg doesn't get broken and Linc winds up taking the blame for it if RA was the one who broke it, or have it ironically turn out that Linc breaks the egg after having spent the episode keeping it away with RA.
>>8405203
holy fuck yes
>>8406725
>Lincoln is the neglectful dad
>>8406011
Kampfher is pretty much the mono eyed masterpiece of the UC timeline. Nightingale is over designed and Nu Gundam is way too technical and relying too much on the paint job. The only thing come close is Unicorn Gundam and Crossbones Gundam because its got a fucking cape
>>8406837
I've never understood how people can watch two robots fight and enjoy it. If a character isn't alive and can't feel pain then there are no inherent stakes at risk and there is no drama for me. Without blood, sweat, and tears I can't get invested.
>>8406280
Excuses excuses. You shit on rule 63 but you like Liberty so you realised that you going to eat that shit back so you ended up with more excuses.
"Oh nooo she's his cousin so it's completely different than rule 63, really guys stop looking at me like that!"
You're worse than Zabi family supporters in denial
>>8406725
Lincoln just afraid that Ronnie going to throw la chancla at the egg
>>8406877
Well there are people inside the robots, but basically it's just about action that you can't have on an average human scale. Usually the drama revolves around the political stuff going on around the robot fights, but each installment handles the politics differently, some better than others.
>>8406837
Kampfer is easily my favorite "one-off" Zeon model, I think the gouf custom is better, but it's also a modified standard model so...idk, I like to think they're two completely different beasts.
>>8406877
Pilots die in the gundams all the time, and newtypes get psychic feedback shit. But you do have a point that the stakes aren't really that high for the pilot. Like if a robot loses a limb it doesn't really mean anything.
>>8406888
I consider "rule 63" Linka and the brothers, Liberty got benched by most of the community when that episode came out.
also fuck you man, Feddie 4 life
>>8406877
The fight was more about the pilots tho. Since the minovsky particle pretty much cut the battle tactic into close range insanity the interaction is pretty much more intense.
For example, people care more about ReGZ unit when it was piloted by Amuro before Nu delivered to Lond Bell. When it was handed to that blonde pilot girl no one care that much when she got murdered except for Stoneage but that because they are a couple.
For me the robots are all about the cool factor design
>>8406926
Liberty got benched because of her poor design and the fact that our fan base are not really that creative compared to pony fans
Feddie for life? Like when they create Titans the space SS or when they lost their shit and lost everything in the end?
To be honest I don't mind countries like Zanscare kingdom or old Side 3 smooshed their victorious ass on feddies since they are mostly bunch of incompetent bastards
>>8406969
I know it's shifting goalposts but I actually really disliked Zeta gundam.
Camille is easily the worst gundam protagonist in the UC timeline, and the entire series felt like they were trying to fix non-existant "mistakes"
Aren't we getting a little off-topic here?
>>8407012
A little. What do you suggest we talk about?
>>8407012
Fine, fine...okay, Loud House
Aside from the general issues of making original/OC characters, what is it that's stopping people from making up an interesting character that really takes off?
>>8407022
Oh, I dunno...the Loud House, maybe? That's what the general is about, isn't it?
>>8407031
The huge opposition to anything that's not incest, for starters, which rules out anything that's not an existing main character.. People use qts as a workaround for that, but there are still people that hate it because it's just an OC personality in a background character.
>>8407031
Lack of fan numbers since we are in trash, the shadow board. Also some retards autistically hating on CCs for no apparent reason and the fact that most discussions are about who the best sisters is all the fucking time? Loud house got many potential for AU storylines but most autists here prefer to talk about which sister going to fuck who in daily fucking basis!
>>8406696
Would be better if I didn't already know this was just easing up to them fucking Lincoln.
>>8407079
A part of it I've considered is how desperate people are for more representation of characters that already exist in the show, so when people propose OCs it's like "Hey i'm going to give even less time to characters you like"
which is a shame because some stories need characters that simply don't exist. Like if I wanted to do..."Lincoln falls in love with Clyde's hot cousin", I'd have to invent a cousin.
>>8407112
...This is...I don't know what to say about this.
>>8407104
I agree that OCs are alright in certain contexts, though having them be a major focus in a story always has its risks. Using them as an asset to develop relationships between main characters is a safer route, but still a bit limiting.
>>8406011
>with Liberty
W-what?! Holy shit what?!?
unf
i love farting louds
unf
i love shitting louds
unf
i love louds with stinky feet
Feeling kinda lazy today, so I'm not gonna post the new parts here on the thread. I did update the pastebin for Pokemon Loud Version V2, though. Enjoy.
https://pastebin.com/p51KMZY2
Also, as I asked before - should Lincoln be a nicknamer or not?
>>8407223
Yes, all the nicknames should be from noteworthy figures from the american civil war/war for independance
>>8407242
Well...what I had in mind was letting you guys pick the nicknames as long as they weren't too ridiculous.
I don't want everything he catches to be named 'DICKS' or anything like that.
>>8407130
It depends to how you use them, I absolutely agree with that. The problem comes from the knowledge and experience many of us already have with them.
OC is based off existing character but has one difference, used as a projection or self-insert for the author most of the time, and primarily ONLY for autistic shipping(as if there's any other kind).
It's not like we don't have our own, plenty of those exist, but kinda like our dumb memes some idiot, me, needs to push it enough for it to become a thing.
Anyone else remember Jesse?
>>8407256
Have that be gradual, like he doesn't come up with them right away.
>>8407278
Maybe after he gets to know them a little better, perhaps?
>walking down the street
>you brush past your favorite Loud
>you hear them say under their breath
>"unf nice"
>but you are unsure if they said it towards you or not
How do you respond?
>>8407307
Yeah. Something like that. He considers giving them names, but spends a good portion of time thinking about appropriate ones.
>"C'mon Steven! No that doesn't feel right."
>"Johnny. I like Johnny, but you don't really look like a Johnny to me..."
>"Ugh. Why is it so hard to pick a good name?"
>>8406214
Is anything about the sisters so gender-specific? I can only think of Lexx, since Lola is a feminine beauty pageant contestant which doesn't translate if you want a somewhat masculine character. And yeah, Lori as well. Otherwise, we pretty much know as much about the Loud boys as the Loud girls.
>>8407315
unf nice
>>8407346
Sounds good. I'm still letting you guys pick the names, but I'll implement them when I feel the time is appropriate.
The only exception to this will be his starter. I've already came up with a nickname for it - 'Lucky'.
Did anyone save the Tyrone x Lynn fic?
>>8407267
Self-insert and shipping are definitely the pitfalls that give them a justified stigma. Jesse was guilty of that, but I wouldn't say it exactly got out of control at all (other than the meme surrounding the creator).
In the fics I've written and am considering writing, OCs mostly take the form of friends of the sisters that are used to help flesh out their lives outside of the house, and they're usually relegated to fairly minor appearances. So far it hasn't caught flak, but it's always a concern when they show up.
>>8407104
Hey. Sort of joining mid conversation, but speaking from experience, sometimes you do need a certain role to be filled, either by an OC or a character acting somewhat out of character.
In We Have Each Other, there are two OCs in Act 1. One that is Lori's boss and another that is Lincoln's school counselor (although we will probably change that to Dr. Lopez retroactively next time she comes up). The story benefits from characters in a role of authority or experience over Lori and Lincoln because otherwise the audience is just being thrown into a universe with little to no exposition (and exposition is not inherently a bad thing so long as it's subtle). OCs can and should be used to make a story more interesting, and limiting one's self to a set cast is just that: limiting one's self.
All that said, I can understand people's distaste for OC. Let's just say that through the entirely of all fanfiction, they have a pretty bad reputation.
>>8405774
That is a cute black loli.
>>8407345
>walking down the street
>shooting people that I meet
>fully loaded tommy gun
You mirin brah?
>>8407381
It's a concern cause people make it so. While it might seem like a cheap work around to have a convenient OC appear, it is at times a necessity for a writer to use as to avoid having an actual character OOC though it's arguable what is worse.
There are actually quite a bit of stories that exist that are rife with them, it's just that their roles are so minor they're here and gone before you even know it.
Either that or it's a heel. Some opposing character, like Chandler or another OC that makes the real characters look good. Like with that "Corner Flag" fic.
>>8407433
Define perfectly
>>8407433
Oh?
>scoop a bowl of vanilla icecream for breakfast
>it tastes like someone mixed in vodka when the made the ice cream
Should I keep eating it?
>>8407628
Go for it.
>>8407628
>wake up at 11AM
>decide to eat ice cream for breakfast
>doesn't taste right
>post about it in /tlhg/
You should look at yourself in the mirror and think long and hard about your life.
>>8407696
>judging someone else while posting in /tlhg/
Glass houses
Good night!
>>8407778
It's morning you fucking asshole.
Do I smell... cummies?
>>8407783
Let him sleep. I need some too.
>>8407825
PB andJ cummies are my fave
So i've been writing that beauty and the beast lynncoln fic and I have the first part done so take this shit
https://pastebin.com/09AquMZx
i'll write some more soon
>>8407827
>people find her attractive
>>8407880
I can fap to screenshots of her from the show.
Her appearance alone surpass porn for me.
>>8407880
She's beautiful and you know it.
>>8407913
>eating out the back of Leni's head
UNF nice
>>8407844
Thanks anon, looking forward to more
>>8407915
That goes without saying
Should i ship those two?
>>8408079
You're right, that was pointless. About as pointless as you are.
>>8408104
>Leni
That's clearly Fritz. I fucking swear you newfags will be the death of me. How the fuck do you not know somebody's name and still ship them?
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=31962
UNF
>>8408228
>>8408238
http://sketch-toons.tumblr.com/post/158872316218/some-sketches-for-a-new-story-still-no-name-and
>>8408104
>tfw you are now aware that thanks to that side by side comparison we can make an educated guess of Leni's bust irl
So based on Fox's instagram, we can assume she's about a C cup. Since Leni is clearly bustier than her, we can say that if Leni were real, she'd be bordering a D cup.
>>8408228
>waitress luna
cute!
I hate Thicc QT x Lincoln after Ultrahand made this weird cartoonish thing: http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=31542
Why not he'll draw Thicc QT with Lynn?? (Or. SB99 Should do it..)
>>8408316
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ql4JgBBgHA4
>>8408316
>Thicc qt
>Not recognizing Leni
"Thicccccoln" or whatever it's called is still the superior ship faggot
What was Savino trying to convey with this part?
Lori has a huge weird boner.
I'd stuck it in Rita any day tbqh lads
>>8408404
does it smell?
>>8408291
Truly she is the full package.
>LYNN IS CHEATING ON LORI FOR DATING THICC QT.
wtf..
>>8408387
>Leni wanders through her life aimlessly
>All around her are familiar places and worn out faces
>It all ends up blending with itself and becomes unrecognizable
>She walks down a path seperate to her siblings and pays them no attention
>Next thing she knows Luan has moved on, Lola is in middle school, and Lucy is in shock from a miscarriage
>It's all happening so fast Leni doesn't know how to react
>>8408464
That's deep mane.
So when are we getting a fic of anon being Rita's neighbor and being invited by her to come to her yard while she sunbathes alone?
More RonnieLeni fanart when?
>>8408490
You can't do something alone if you invite other people.
>>8408387
I dunno but it remind me of a dumb green I wrote and forgot about. Just because of Leni and Luan.
>One day Leni got out of the shower
>Luan who was waiting next in line saw her accidently close the bathroom door on the towel wrapped around her body.
>As Leni walked away it relieved her glisteningly wet features.
luan's heart skipped a beat as she makes a crack at her "bigger" sister.
>"Hey Leni nice assets!"
>Leni looked confused at Luan.
>"Oh thanks it's a new conditioner. Hey is it really cold in here?"
>Leni's nips became hard like the penis Luan wish she had right now to plow her big sister.
>Luan's thoughts were a war zone of bad jokes and incestuous thoughts towrads her Leni.
>Luan was drooling a bit lost in her own perversions looking like that dead-eyed kid you see at the farmers market.
>Leni just waved her hand in front of Luan a bit and walked away to her room.
>At the slamming of her door, Luan snapped out of it.
>"Heh heh seltzer bottle."
>Luan noticed she was leaking a bit from excitement and carefully moved over to the towel in the door frame and tucked it between her legs and entered the bathroom.
>Once inside she stripped down locked the door turned the shower on to block the noise and furiously flicked the bean while sniffing Leni's towel like crazy wrapping it around her head making her look like a sex crazed jehad.
Loni x Lane when?
>>8408509
Well she's tired of being alone
>>8408530
>mother of 11
>tired of being alone
when when when?
>"I'll keep it hypothetical until I get an answer I think you'll be happy with, then we'll talk about it."
>"Thanks Lincoln." She smiled then walked back to Vanzilla getting inside.
>Lincoln hit Luan's name in his contacts, putting the the phone to his ear.
>"Hey Lincoln, what's up? No cereal?"
>"No--"
>"Our second choice of snack is ice cream, maybe something with graham cracker in it."
>"I know.. But hypothetically, what if I found Lori and Lily."
>"Well you'd tell us, then we'd tell mom and dad.. Why?--"
>"Why do we have to tell mom and dad this instant?"
>"You found them didn't you?"
>Lincoln halted his words, he had to think of something and fast.
>"This is all hypothetical, Luan--"
>"Lincoln either you tell me what's up or I call mom and dad, now."
>"Okay.. But we're adults you don't have to threaten me with that.--So please don't."
>"Then tell me everything."
>"I'll do one better, we meet you, but on one condition!"
>"What's that?"
>"Lily is Lori's daughter, not our sister, got it?"
>"..Let me talk to Luna."
>Lincoln heard a rustling and muffled speaking followed by an audible "DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE", he heard more rustling, and was greeted by Luna.
>"You found them dude? Oh man! Look, yeah I'll be an aunt! I always wanted to be a cool aunt!--Luan we'll do it, right? Well I wanna see Lori again, please?--Yeah Luan'll do it, but she's a little upset, bring 'em over to the bus, Lily's gonna flip!" And with that she hung up.
>Lincoln took a deep breath and got into the van.
>"So is everything okay?" Lori's sweet tone changed quickly as she followed with "UN-CLE LIN-COLN." she looked angry
>"Yeah.. Mind if I drive?"
>"I do actually just tell me where they're at."
>"The Wal-Mart parking lot, so not too far away."
>"So.. You're my uncle, huh?"
>>8408547
SHE CAN'T GET ANY ACTION OUT OF THOSE. FUCKING ANONS I SWEAR TO FUCKING CHRIST JUST LET ME HAVE SOMEONE WRITE THE GOD DAMN FIC YOU STUPID SON OF AT9H89NUNFEIREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I still want male versions of characters x female sisters. What are some you want to see? Any by the way, it's a lot hotter if you think of it as "these characters have the same relationship and history, they just have a dick in this universe."
>Lynn x Lucy or Lynn x Lars
>Lori x Loni or Loki x Leni
>Lane x Luna
>Loki/Loni/Luke x Lucy or Lola
>>8408560
>"That's right, cutie."
>"So Uncle Lincoln how's Michigan?"
>"It's good but you gotta stretch your legs once in a while.. Leave for a bit, you know?" He chuckled nervously.
>"Like the time me and mom went to Nevada! That was fun, but nothing beats good old Paradise, Arizona." Lily smiled and sunk into her seat as she said this, eyes half-closed, as if she got some odd pleasure saying the name of her hometown
>Most of the ride was in silence, save for one brief conversation.
>"Why'd you run from me at the super market?"
>"I thought you were a pervert."
>"You knew it was me."
>"Can we talk about this later?"
>"Sure, but later I will ask again."
>After ten minutes they pulled into a Wal-Mart parking lot.
>"Where's this b--Nevermind." Lori scoped the lot, but was assaulted by the shiniest glam-rock, Jerry Seinfeld looking bus ever, it looked like if a rock band's bus from the 80s attended a bunch of comedy shows in dive bars during the 90s, there was no mistaking it, this was their bus, outside were the two sisters in foldable lawn chairs, Lori parked next to the bus.
>"Lily, let me fill you in, that's Luan." She pointed to the woman with buck teeth and her hair was down, rather than the usual ponytail. "She makes The Big Jokes, but they can get annoying.." Lori bit her lip regretting she said this "Actually they're not annoying at all, and you'll miss her jokes, you'll miss every stupid knock-knock, or dumb pun she makes."
>"That's Luna." Lori pointed to the woman with short hair with a lightning bolt painted on her face like David Bowie "She makes great songs and if you're ever in a jam will bust her hump to get you out of it."
>"You ready Lori?"
>"I miss my family, of course I am."
Who's this anus?
Just waking up~ How are you guys doing today?
>>8408594
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRGH
>>8408594
Beastality isn't allowed here.
>>8408574
I like this
>>8408594
This from last year get some new material
>>8408547
Fic where Rita is the aggressor? I can get behind that.
Someone post Some sexy Lana pics.
>>8408267
I don't think it's a ship, but Dana is the baby sitter.
>>8408596
look around you, it's best to go back to sleep & pretend the weekend never happened
funniest fics?
>>8408682
When are we getting a Clyde x Rita fic?
>that very special episode where Ronnie Anne got her period
>>8408690
Apologies to the Irwin family
>>8408596
>Sing-song "~"
Ultra's not putting out, is he. You've got to come to us to get your fix.
What happen If Lincoln has a crush On Hugh in "Study Muffin"?
>>8408714
i don't mind being his onahole
>>8408700
link?
>>8408719
Just switch the roles for Hugh and Ms Dimartino
>>8408731
Good for you, you usless slut. Hopefully he throws you out, too.
>>8408714
Oh no, I'm just feeling a bit lewd.
I had a drawing idea, I just need to choose three girls. Booty related of course.
>>8408736
http://pastebin.com/b2T32uCg
Bobby dating Lincoln instead of Lori.
>>8408771
Ultra is Leni gonna get any action with Lincoln in Going Away Present?
>>8408574
where's the paste for the whole thing?
>>8408787
Degenerate, heretic, disgusting and abhorrent.
fics that try to be funny but aren't?
>>8408771
How about Lori, Lana and Leni? Or to mix it up, maybe Thicc, Kneesocks and Carol?
Regardless, never a bad time for butts.
>>8408691
right now...in your head movie theater
>>8408811
https://pastebin.com/j2Tqkd1z
>>8408816
Fuck you.
>>8408604
>>8408608
>>8408647
I'm gonna post it anyway
The boys Goes to contest ticket where You Can join a dating game show which has Carol Pingrey.
They want it so badly.. even Leni has a contest ticket.
>>8408838
I miss you Harambe
>>8408791
>Ultra
Boy, have I got news for you.
Download this image to die instantly.
>>8408888
Wasn't it him that wrote it? I'm not sure if I remember wrong. Or are you implying he is gonna keep that cucking shit up?
>>8408917
Nah, that's SB99. Ultra is the author of GAP, but that ain't him.
Download this image to have a good day instantly
Lana give Lynn a sexy kiss.
>>8408940
Oh right I just noticed I replied to SB99. Fuck that was dumb
>>8408835
much obliged
Story and interactions are rough, you set up for a conflict that doesn't seem to be happening as it's happening. It doesn't seem like it's going anywhere but I enjoy the concept.
You might also want to explain Lori's motivations, it isn't really clear why she left or why she's acting the way she does. Same with Lincoln and Luna/Luan. Shouldn't Lincoln be more shocked to see her? Angry? Upset? Sad even? He's had 12 years to rationalize their disappearance and since we know they all think Lori and Lily died his reaction is pretty underwhelming.
>>8408946
>Luan
I'd rather die
*downloads poser baby*
Leni awkwardly crushing On Carol.
>>8408946
Alright I take this. After all that shit I need this to be better that the weekend at least
>>8408875
Sooooo funnNNy xDDD someone take a screencap anon got BTFO
Lynn awkwardly crushing On Luna.
>>8408946
>>8408596
>It ain't going to suck itself
>>8408691
I had an idea for it but it wasn't so much Rita x Clyde and more Rita praying on young shotas. Clyde was definitely first on her menu.
>>8409135
We need some Rita x Anon where she preys on an unsuspecting anon.
Where's Drawfiend?
>>8409191
Who's that?
>>8409191
right here ama, also I forgive you /tlhg/
>>8409266
Draw Lynn x Lana.
>>8409266
are you going to take over the discord again?
>>8408898
hey fuck you, I' still alive.
Alright fuckers. Check em.
>>8409266
Why did you put GG as discord leader
>>8409339
Failure kys
>>8409306
I think you're looking for someone else.
SB99 if you're still here and need 3 asses why not do the teachers? Johnson, Dimartino, and Shrinivas?
>>8405357
> Lori actually takes care of it well, and she and her partner decide they are perfect for each other because they're so good with kids. It doesn't last.
> Leni is doing well until she thinks there's a chicken trapped inside and so tries to free it.
> Luna barely does anything and so her partner has to carry the team.
> Luan has to finish the project as a single mother after her partner snaps from the amount of egg puns.
> Lynn gets hungry and fries the egg.
>>8409310
>>8409345
Just an FYI, but GG said he'd never give back the Discord.
>>8409347
Let me redeem myself pls.
>>8409303
I honestly think its awful if the guy insists on continuing it he should really use this as a reference.
https://pastebin.com/rRCzS6Cs
>>8409370
Oh fuck, that's an ass.
>>8409376
Kys my man
>>8407242
What if Lincoln is named after Andrew Lincoln?
>>8408243
>She's a treasure
Nice meme.
Thicc QT accidentally sitting On Lynn, and then she (Lynn) got nosebleed.
>>8407223
Nah, it would make it harder to follow.
>>8409467
Which reminds me, there was a greentext where Lynn got sat on by Rita, and I think it had some sort of save state theme.
That was neat.
Imagine If There's more Thicc QT x Lynn fanarts..
>>8409463
>Implying this heaping pile of garbage is anywhere near a treasure
>Obese Ms. DiMartino when?
>>8406725
>its either going to end with him breaking it and him apologizing to her, basically another dipper moment
or
>it ends with both of them breaking it, they apologize to each other and learn they need to work together
I still don't like Ronnie Anne, but I'm hoping this might be a decent episode
>>8409514
Hopefully never.
>>8409528
Obese Luna when?
>>8409514
Soon, maybe?
>>8409374
Primarina exists.
Hopefully SB99 Will draw Thicc QT x Lynn.
>>8409547
I know
>>8409514
speaking of Obese has anyone ever done a fic or pic of Obese Agnes Johnson?
>>8409578
Not to my knowledge.
>>8409371
I want art of a sad single mother Luan with her egg-baby (maybe crying)
>>8409526
>not liking Ronnie Anne's tough love no-hugbox attitude
fucking pleb, I bet you waifu the sisters.
Hyper realistic feet contrasted by simple looking bodies
unf
>>8409540
we need more
>>8409659
>anime
not even once
>>8409679
I want Luna to be my chunky monkey.
>>8409704
This is sick.
>>8409704
Fic with Luna and Lincoln drinking some Brass Monkey when?
>>8409767
You saying you don't want more Loud lumps to love on?
>>8409689
absolutely nothing wrong with anime and anime feet
>>8409821
I'd love all of Leni's curves but that is too much you sick fucks
>>8409767
Agreed, might as well go all out, right?
>>8409849
>ultrafag draws aesthethic fat bodies instead of realistic fat bodies
if they're gonna be fat make them fucking fat.
>>8409882
>Fat
>Aesthetic
Off yourself
>>8409882
I think he mentioned how he does that before, and he said that it wouldn't look good.
Chaotic Ronnie Anne mega titties
>>8409936
Bless this artist
>>8409897
>not even fat lovers love fat people
Slutty Louds
This sucks
>>8410089
What sucks
>>8410087
>>8410114
Most anons, going by how much people like to talk about dicks.
ultrahand is a good storyboard artist.
and nothing else.
We need more Rita fics
>>8410181
Make one up right now
You're being put on the spot
>>8410132
but anon, this is /dick/chan. Where you are a dick, have a dick or talk about dicks & request dick pics
>>8410230
Ay link
>>8410164
more like he's a.......POOPY HEAD!
>>8410181
I'm working on one.
>>8410269
Nice, what's the concept?
>>8410258
who's feet are those?
>>8410285
no clue senpai
>>8410164
Quiet you, I love ultrahand's art.
>>8410258
unf nice feet
*sniff*
so stinky unf
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P7iMftLqbeI
December, come to me
I hope I can see
You not just in dreams
I will let you be
Why can't you believe
How much you really mean?
December, won't you come
Back with snow, even sun?
Don't say that it's done
I will carry you home
Take you from the loneliest place
You have known
I will carry you home
Take me from the loneliest place
I have known
*dabs*
>>8410338
>>8410284
Without giving too much away. Rita is forced to sell her body to pay back money she owes.
Rape fic
>>8410374
Oh God no anon not that type of fic
Hey Anon, don't forget to do all those things you said you'd do today!
Episodes you always come back to?
>Ties that bind
>Suite and sour
>Lock n loud
>>8410483
If you insist.
>>8410483
Masturbate and cry?
>>8410492
Cover girls.
>>8410492
>toads and tiaras
>Project Loud House
>That one episode where Lola is topless
>>8410527
>>>727074076
Someone started to post all the loud sisters in a HG thread. fucking kek with the salty
>Only lincoln is mine
>>8410543
What the fuck is going on here
>>8410492
Project Loud House
Driving Miss Hazy
Old and the Restless
>>8410565
LEGS is what is happening my friend
>>8410527
At least this is better than their garbage adult Luna.
>>8410360
I'm gonna ship Loni x Lola
>>8410709
the sisters? none because they're not into that vidya gaem nerd shit, only Link is and he is two generations behind because that's all his parents can afford
>>8410543
some say he could do the stanky leg, dougie and nae nae at once
>>8410736
Luan at least has a gameboy, with her only quarrel being sci-fi garbage.
>>8410726
>>8408973
there's a certain vibe i'm aiming for, Lori's trying to stand firm, as she always did, Lincoln just wants to get the family back together
Luan is upset because "Shit, why'd she leave, she made us worry all this time and here she is literally momming it up."
Luna is excited because "Oh snap they're alive!" and doesn't want them to leave
>>8409132
>>8409382
dude, look, i get you're not into it, but /tlhg/ hyped it up, whether it's bad or good, or something in between, i'm going to do my best to make it a fun ride, i literally can't make it the way people expected so i'm kinda going my own route with this
i'm not gonna promise you it's gonna be really good or anything
i can promise i will make it fun, if you let it be fun
>>8409370
I like that very much! Got it sketched out so far.
>>8409540
Not obese, but pudge. Been looking at real life refs recently.
>>8410780
legend has it, he can walk in every direction at once
>>8411006
>i can promise i will make it fun, if you let it be fun
It won't be fun because you're dealing with kidnapping and abandonment. That shit's not just gonna fly, either with a family or even legally. I know you're not going for a big drama or anything, but some of the feelings and consequences should at least kinda be grounded in reality
Lynn is gay
>>8411069
Thank you, Big Daddy V...but aren't you dead?
>>8411089
I came back
>>8411064
I do have to agree - if I were in the same situation, I wouldn't be taking it as easily as Lincoln is right now.
>>8411111
And to great numbers
>>8411111
checked
>>8411111
HOLY SHIT QUINTS OF RESURRECTION
>>8411013
Bless you child, bless you.
>>8411166
>Trips and dubs
Holy shit he really is confirmed to be alive
>>8411006
It's not suppose to be fun it's suppose to be a serious story with feels. I mean who's this causal about kidnaping and abounding there family. If you wanted fun you do the story about Lori raising Lily without getting caught. That or just the family being a happy family. This tone you have for the story is garbage it dosent fit. This is being treated like a little kid who ran away for a day. The tone isn't all wronge.
>>8410780
Killing the game.
>>8411320
i know i'm going to be called a hack for this but, maybe i am a hack
don't we have enough feelsy fanfics as is? if you don't like it, i get that, you don't have to read it, dude
>>8411013
>tfw you've got a paunch but literally everything beneath your waist is solid muscle
I know Luna's pain. Can't wait to see how the teachers turn out, though!
If dubs Rita would let me stick it in her.
>>8411006
for me my biggest problem is that Lincoln was suddenly ok with it, I feel the more logical route to prevent Lincoln from trying to reveal the truth to Lily would be how it might affect her after years of being raised by Lori so thinking thinks of Lily first, either way I still appreciate that you are going through with it though
>>8411408
>ignoring consistent feedback about the same issue
You do you too then. For some of us there's just no way to enjoy something that shits on any real characterization
>>8411408
I don't have anything wrong with a good vibe story this isn't the story for it. You're not even being a hack with this you're just being stupid. If you want a happy story pick a diffrent by subject like Lynn teaching Lana how to play baseball. Maybe Leni gives a small Lola her first make over. This isn't the subject for happy good times.
>>8411408
This is stupid. We literally don't have enough feelsy fics, for one, but this just isn't the kind of story that's supposed to be happy. Kidnapping isn't fun, and you're being stupid trying to write it as is.
>>8411006
I think you could hit that vibe if you're establishing that earlier so readers know what to expect by anchoring the characters' relations and motivations before the conflict, ie when they meet up. Like how they were taking Lori kidnapping Lily, came to the conclusion that after twelve years and complete radio silence that they might as well be dead. Then you set up their individual motivations, Lincoln wishing the family wasn't split etc, until they all got over it enough to go back to their lives. Doesn't have to be especially in depth or serious, whatever tone you want to set is fine, but at least touching upon it lets the reader settle their minds on what they might be expecting further down the road.
At the moment it reads like rapid fire jump cuts akin to a youtube vlog trying to put out as much surface info as possible in as little time as possible. Like that twelve year jump is either ballsy or insane. It doesn't really pay off though since the tone isn't set to begin with, so all the reader is left with is their own expectations which makes the confrontation with Lincoln jarring. Especially since Lori reacts to seeing Lincoln by calling him a freak. It's literally right out of left field. Nothing sets this up.
>>8408180
Poor Fritz will never get her own fanfic
>>8411619
>No Leni x Fritz fic yet
>Not even a drawing
Why tho?
>>8408291
That's why Lori always said that Leni stretched all the clothing Leni borrow from her
>>8408316
>Hating on a shipping because of a fanart
Kys faggot
>>8411691
>Liking a shipping because of fanart
>>8408291
We need more big boobed Leni
>>8409633
I don't waifu rats
So what did you guys think of the new Luna Loud album?
>that last track
>>8411453
look man, i'm not the guy who writes feels, we get enough feels as it is, i'm sorry this was nothing how you expected
>>8411449
you ever experience something shocking and it takes a while to sink in? he's calm now but as things progress he's gonna panic
>>8411464
>you're just being stupid
you're right, and i'm not trying to blow smoke, i am stupid, i'm taking a serious concept people waited for the longest for and i'm making it satire, and maybe that's not what a majority of people want, but it's what i'm having fun doing
maybe one day someone will write a serious mama lori but for now can we enjoy this chinese bootleg i found in a hongkong super market for 99 china cents?
>>8411585
but i'm not aiming for happy?
>>8411595
so show the family's struggles with Lori and Lily's disappearances?
and she called him a freak to deter him, she knew it was lincoln, the only thing going through her mind was to run and maybe scream for help, like okay i'll try to expand a little on that, write a bit of a more expanded intro to show how the family took it, maybe what Lori went through to support Lily, i guess? is that the track you're suggesting
>>8408316
is black Leni
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4GPhnKj8t1c
>>8410337
That is a pretty song anon thanks for sharin
>>8411768
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x7yPhExdj3E
*dabs*
>>8411758
>i'm making it satire
The fact that nothing you wrote or said prior to this post makes that sound like damage control. It's fine if you don't want to write a feels fic but don't start throwing terms like that around after trying to defend it as a serious attempt
>>8411768
What if Lincoln wanted to be a G thing but his sisters laughed at him?
>>8411799
He'd probably smack some of them around and go do some hood shit with clyde
>>8411787
NP, i did not realize just how shit the quality of that video was though
>>8411793
okay? but i said it'd be fun, i never said serious, nor did i mean to imply this, but alright dude
>Be able to meet your favorite Loud
How hard would you drop the spaghetti?
>>8411754
Nothing will ever beat her debut in my mind
>>8411758
I don't get it there's a pastebin of ideas to choose for this fic and you make this garbage?
>>8411850
It would be impossible. Not even Lily would like me. They would see right through my attempts at wooing them and see how much of an autist I am.
>>8411850
forget spaghetti i'm dropping lasagna
>>8411839
Well you're having fun so that's all that matters I guess. Good luck with it
>>8411851
Did you listen to her third album or are you just a dadrock loving contrarian cunt?
>>8411850
>Leni
Thank God. She wouldn't even detect my spaghetti dropping, she'd probably befriend me.
>>8410726
I just hate that people keep calling it dab when in reality that pose already exists since the 80s and started in Japan kids shows
>>8411850
>Lynn
Not in a million years would she enjoy my presence
>>8411850
I wouldn't - I can keep myself under control quite easily.
>>8411945
>Lynn
Not in a billion years would I enjoy hers.
I think we need a new thread
>>8411977
You need a new wardrobe.
>>8411889
if i were to make a feelsy fic, like an actual feelsy fic i'd make it something simple that involves something i'm familiar with, like maybe lincoln hits it off with cristina and she can't into how she feels so spergs and scares him off, or something
with this it's such a extravagant thing, everything in my head is going "Make people laugh with this." look, whether you stop reading or not, thanks for hearing me out, you're a righteous dude, dude
i do hope someone writes a more emotional mama lori one day, and i hope it blows any and all expectations out the water
>>8411872
well we are on /trash/
>>8411991
you need an attitude adjustment
>>8411934
dab is just fun to say. Coach Z taught me that.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHODRaLjDJQ
>>8411898
I like the noise segments she did in her third but it's overproduced as shit and really poppy
>>8412010
You need a drink.
>>8412037
You need some friends.
>>8412044
You need some corn.
>>8412010
he needs an attitude of gratitude
>>8412062
he need some milk
>>8412062
you need some loss
>>8412020
>over produced
It's called polish. Know you, like not recording glad the songs on a laptop in a noisy house like her first album.
You lazy fucks
New Thread >>8412110
>>8412062
I hate corn
>>8412086
half not glad*
>>8412136
But it's good for you.
>>8412154
just like bananas
>>8411758
Not necessarily, it doesn't have to be explained in between or before the 12 year gap but the stuff you're explaining right now in the thread would be perfect to have in the actual story leading up to or around the encounter with Lincoln.
You could probably afford to shift the focus from Lori to Lincoln's point of view as you introduce him to the scene a bit, detailing how he got there and how he's holding up in life. Or you could do the same with Lori.
Right now the story is written with all punchlines and no setups. Lori screaming at Lincoln, sure, that's a thing she does, but wouldn't it be more impactful if we for example know she's been living with a pit in her stomach all this time but tries her best to hide it? Then when she sees Lincoln we can expect Lori to show that pent up stress by seeing Lincoln, screaming and trying to run away from her problem.
But again, the stuff you're detailing itt that you want to portray would be great if you could take what you wrote and just put that in the story. You just need to be clearer with your intent and make sure you hit your narrative beats. Set up, conflict, resolution.
>>8412189
Just let him do him.
No one else wanted to take this idea up because of this exact reason.
Someone else will take this idea up eventually and give it their own spin.
>>8412189
tl;dr
>>8412224
I just want to believe
>>8412271
You'll get the story you want one day.
No one wanted to do this and Shinji was the only one willing.
Someone else will pick it and make the story you want.
You know. Eventually.
>>8412224
i don't mind actual critique this is what i want so you can enjoy it to
i get what he's saying maybe explain somethings a little deeper, as one or two of the thing's he's mentioned is a one-off line
>>8412189
working on the first thing which would be lori's anxieties explained a little better
i'll try to better paint a picture with her reaction in the supermarket, it's gonna be a little hard to swap perspectives but i'll give it a shot
>>8412271
believing is what works
>>8412322
i'm not gonna make it feelsy, or anything maybe explain certain things i gave a simple one-off line
>>8412506
all accordion to plan
>>8412444
WF wanted to do it, now that he's back maybe he will. Shinjis isn't bad, just different
>>8412506
Do it. Wrightfag said multiple times he didn't want to claim the story for himself. You writing something about it will only open the door to more possibilities. If you write it, I'll take a stab at it too.
>>8412595
I already started Shinji you got my writers blood boiling again I should have something by Friday if this all goes according to plan.
>>8412692
hey, i'm glad to have done that!
but i hope you're not actually mad or upset with me or nothing like that
>>8412712
Quite the opposite I thought I was done but here I'm ideas bouncing in my head eager to leave work and and sit at my computer and write late at night.