JOI/JOE Thread #25! (Jerk Off Instructions, Encouragement, A

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>>8186135
>mfw I didn't make this the "It's Hip to Fuck Bees Edition"

Shit. Welp, time to post some past-thread content.

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>>8186192

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>>8186205

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>>8186215
I agree with the anon in the last thread, Gem impregnation is oddly arousing.

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>>8186229

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>>8186243
Dragon on Humey from the other anon.

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>>8186254

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>>8186268

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>>8186277
>>8183387
You're right, Roo saying "child" over "human" makes more sense. I should consider that next time.

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>>8186304

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>>8186092
edited edition

>My pussy is for your eyes only
F-Fuck, that was a good suggestion. That's so strangely hot. I have so much to learn from senpai.

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>>8186145
another edited one

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Can we request?
If so I want some buttstuff related stuff with this image

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Renamon begging you to take them away from a life of forced prostitution and stripping, wanting to be with a real man that will make them into a proper wife. emphasize the kind of emotional pain they're in and how they didn't choose this life.

After the cumming part put in an epilogue about "where are you going? aren't we going together? WAIT" and crying.

(by popular demand a happy ending version about you buying her freedom orwhatever plot device you want would be nice)

Was working on the Ventuswill caption but I got damn too horny. Probably going to sit on it until the morning, but I WILL work on it, don't worry~

>>8186693
Yeah, you can pretty much request as much as you want here, desu. Just keep it within reason.

>>8187131
I need to touch this one too. Damn hot.

>>8186431
Well that escalated quickly.

One of the best from last thread for sure.

>>8187131
>her

I'm kinda dumb and can't tell if this is supposed to be a twinky dude renamon or if you actually want them to be a female with a penis and referred to as a she?

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Teacher livestreaming herself getting bumped by students

>>8187610
Either really, I think if he's being used at an underground abusive prostitution ring his masculinity has been broken completely. That's why I implied it wants to be someones wife and lover. This is my other part from the last thread I forgot to copy paste

I know the bad end is hard to swallow but I'd like one with it because that's for me, feel free to make everyone else happy though. If you don't mind, include it thinking of all the happy times it intends to share after you take it home, cooking dinners, cuddling in bed, playing vidya, all to be broken at the end when you leave without them.

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>>8187199
Thanks for letting me know, dude.

Am excited to wait!

>>8187199
>got too horny
That doesn't bring out your best?

Anon who wanted that really big titted girl getting the D in school showers or something from last thread, I haven't forgotten you, fear not

>>8187724
It's just, damn. I wanna do what the requester asks, but damn. I gotta think on this some more

>>8188043
I understand, which is why I'm totally down for a happy and fuzzy love ending and not just the misery heartbreak I want.

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Bimbo/mind-break caption, perhaps?

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>>8187199
Also here's a gif version of that image, for all your guy's fapping needs~

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You work in a business that was shemale only and to help workplace relations you are going to be given instruction on fucking shemales' prostates and how to have a prostate orgasm. Your instructor looks forward to teaching you both

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your girlfriend is horny and it's pretty obvious what she wants you to do. everyone in the lunchroom is staring and it's not helping since that turns your girlfriend on more (there can be a futa/shemale ver where she wants to fuck you in front of everyone but it's not essential)

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>>8188748
Well, let's finish this story.
Requesting the last orange girl of this image...


Her friends told you she will be on the nude beach, you found her doing some photos and she recognize you, angry for what you did to her friends, she insults you a bit, then she blush to see you naked and want you to finish what you started, maybe that blowjob from the first caption and then anal to punish her until she faints up by her orgasm?

I hope i live enough to see this finish!

>>8187813
It does, but sometimes I get TOO horny. It kinda' slows me down a bit to the point that I can't get things done.

>>8189055
I get that, I just like the idea of you bringing out your most primal thoughts when writing these...

>>8189090
Oh, it does happen, trust me~

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Nyotengu femdom

Morning bump

bump again

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Requesting a caption based on this pic. Wonder how a girl would feel being trapped in a full Nelson position, her undies out to the world and delicious legs open for fun caressing.

Perhaps a few watchers can come and touch her as she struggles, particularly her leg, midriff, thighs and panties, making her squirm and struggle...

Girl's name is Blizzaria if I remember.

There NEEDS to be more in Heat captions for evey type of Anthro character begging to be seeded
by a Human "bull" "Stud" what hav you just get to it
plz

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Bomp!

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>>8186229
Oh man, I don't suppose I could get something with impregnation?

>>8193145
my nigga

https://discord.gg/uhheUAu

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I have an odd request.

Jenna's a movie star, with Balto among her top roles, and you won a contest to have dinner with her. In small talk you learn she has a role coming up, where she's the romantic interest of a lost human in the woods, and she needs your help with something. Seems there will be a love scene, and she doesn't know the first thing about how humans mate, and that's something you could show her, which you gladly do. (mutual licking, fondling, and her being multi-orgasmic, if possible)

Ending has her asking you to cum inside her. Afterwards has her telling you she could get used to human mating, and asking if you if another round would be possible, "Err, strictly for professional purposes, of course."

Alternative, in-universe idea for anyone that wants it, would be Balto telling her about his antics with her owner's wife, made her curious about the males. Unfortunately the husband wasn't as comfortable with the idea, so that's where you, the neighbor, come in.

I wouldn't be able to thank you enough, if you do either one of these. I tried myself, but it was just frustrating.

>>8194110
Sorry, I'm just unable to imagine having dinner talk with an actual dog with a straight face

cant wait to see more furry stuff yehey

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two women fighting to be your mommy

>>8188361
Lewd

>>8194268
Well, I did say it was an odd one, and that's part of why the alternate option was there.

>>8186254
i can barely read this.

>>8186135
https://discord.gg/Pfuebv6

Here's a proper link to our discord, it should work otherwise tell me.

Alright, bumping.

Gonna work on some stuff in a bit, just playing some vidya atm.

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Wouldn't mind some feet stuff with Tali

>>8186268
Rough fucker!

>>8193145
Yeah, I'll check this out.

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Looney enjoying her first anal romp

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Overwhelmed Looney sucking dick

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Some ponk would be nice

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One last ponk for the road

>>8202289
>>8202226
>>8202209
>>8202193
stop

>>8202322
As said, I think one ought moderate themselves a bit and not post so many requests at once

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>>8187199
>>8187753
>>8188361
Sorry for the slow day, was doing a bit of spring cleaning with family and had to do runs dumping old furniture.

Ventuswill seems pretty cute, I might do a direct followup where "You" move onto anal with her and get more lovey-dovey.

>>8202503
It's really good, but
>not anal
RIP

>>8202738
That's next RREEEEEE

>>8202791
Really though, just keep up the good work.

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>>8186135
not enough bees

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Human on Dixie.

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someone able to caption this? incest is highly preferred, son/father or brothers

>>8202503
LSP1: "...so I was hoping that you would visit me today!"

P3: Hidden feelings for each other? The hidden desires thing is wonky m8. Like, you wouldn't have desires towards someone. You could desire someone, or maybe even have desires FOR someone, but TO someone?
Just want to double check, but did you maybe mean, "I know you daydream about ME" by any chance?

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The "Renamon" caption from last thread.

>>8203923
>Like, you wouldn't have desires towards someone. You could desire someone, or maybe even have desires FOR someone, but TO someone?
Riiight, I get you, that makes sense. I'll fix this in a bit.

>>8203306
You're damn right. I need to work on some more.

>>8203047
Hey no problem, friendo~

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>>8202503
Thank you ever so much anon, I really appreciate this. You nailed her personality as well, I could see her saying this during sex. (Especially this faps)

>Ventuswill seems pretty cute, I might do a direct followup where "You" move onto anal with her and get more lovey-dovey.
Oh, if you did end up doing that, I'd love it. Ventuswill is a qt waifu, and deserves to be loved.

>>8205049
LSP1: "Surprised to see me dressed like this? Ahaha, somehow I don't think you mind very much. I've seen the way you stare at Renamon, How you get all hot and bothered whenever she bends over to grab something and gives you a flash of her pretty pussy~"

RSP1: "S-see, human pussy is pretty good too, right?"


Now this is the hot and heavy content I love.

>>8203306
NOT THE BEES

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Fifi seducing you

>>8206776
THEY'RE IN MY EYES! MY EYES!!

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I feel like this one is prime material.

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Someone requested this pic in a previous thread.

I don't recall the specific request, but here you go. I can recaption it with more legible text is Naziese gets between you and your boner.

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Someone wanted a Temmie prostitute caption.

Someone made a Temmie prostitute caption.

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>>8202503
>>8203923

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>>8205049
>>8205573
>Now this is the hot and heavy content I love.
You're damn right.

>>8208651
I love this. I need to find some moreNazi-girl pics to caption, I quite love the theme.

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She's teasing and encouraging her webcam audience to pleasure themselves, dirty talking and such. Hinting at all the filthy things she might do if she gets a big donation.

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>>8208818

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>>8192081
Couldn't sleep, wrote this. You might enjoy this, though I'm planning on doing some heavier content sometime soon with this theme again.

>>8208202
Plague of Gripes is my spirit animal. If only I could be noticed by someone so grossly perverted.

>>8208818
>>8209926
Let your dick decide. I wouldn't even question it, I'd be tapping that dog(?) thing in a second.

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>>8208818

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A guy invites a girl to his hotel room and she revels she's a succubus and will drain him dry and to just give into pleasure and forget and all that matters is cumming

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>>8209034
I like this one a lot

Neat stuff

>>8200661
Seconded

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When you break into the park during heat

>>8208818
I'd fuck Tem any day.

She's a complete idiot, so I could make her believe anything I want and exploit the fuck out of her.

I could make her the perfect combination of loyal wife and cumdumpster.

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>>8208818
I don't know how I feel about this.

>>8194823
seconded

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The reader is a pimp that owns these two prostitutes and you order them to fuck each other to inspect their skills at fucking.

>>8213468
YES! seconded

>>8209978
LSP1: I'd recommend going with "Professor" over "Mister" here. While it's clear from the context later that this is a teacher, I can't help but read it as a sultry "Mistah" at first. Would a student refer to their teacher as Mister? Normally it'd be Mr. Surname right? If we can't go with that, you need another one word title that keeps the anonymity.

LSP5: The "from a bad heat" line reads awkwardly here. Essentially, you want to say that the heat is making her a little slutty, or act a little slutty. The "from" doesn't really accomplish that. Either "with" or "in" might work better.

"You seem surprised that I'm being this forward with you, but even a good girl like me can get a little slutty in a heat this bad."
or
"You seem surprised that I'm being this forward with you, but even a good girl can be a little slutty when hit with a heat this bad."

It's kind of a weird thing to dissect, honestly. She's a "good girl;" she's in a particularly strong, or bad, heat; and, she's acting a little slutty because of it.

"You seem surprised that I'm being this forward about it, but even a good girl like me gets a little slutty when a heat this strong/bad hits her."

Scavenge what you can...

She "didn't" want to get knocked up, or she doesn't want to get knocked up?
"I don't want to get knocked up by some brick-headed boy, so I came to you..."
Tenses.

RSP3: "You're even bigger than the anatomy books said you'd be!"

P4: Maybe swap out nethers here? I don't really like the word in a "personal" place like this. She's not some alien or neutral third party. Would she describe her own bits as nethers?
Also, I guess we're doing it face to face is she's able to see it happening, so... dunnolol
Maybe, since you describe the bits next paragraph, stick with something like "hips smack together" or something similarly tame, to provide a contrast?

1/2

>>8215678
2/2

P5: "C'mon, you don't need to go easy on me. Ravage me! Thrust deep inside me and feel every muscle tugging at you, trying to milk you and make you cum HARD!"

P6: Maybe change up the "cum inside me"? If you don't like the previous suggestion, you'll still have an "inside" from the thrusting line just a sentence ago.

"I need you to fill me up and put out this fire inside me! Keep slamming your hips against mine and drain those aching balls inside my fertile pussy! Forget that I'm your student, grab me by the throat, and hammer into my pussy like an unrestrained beast!"

Now, personally, I'd love a bigger finish here. What you've got is hot, but it almost doesn't feel like a finale compared to the previous paragraph. We need a really big climax.
This is just a suggestion - as per usual - but how about adding on a little bit more where she's almost delusional and begs us to knock her up? Breed her and put a litter inside her? Obviously that wouldn't be possible, but if you can play it up as an almost drunken, satisfaction driven trancelike state, I think it could really push this one over the edge. Don't forget to let us know that she's cumming too. It's always nice to know we did a good job.

"U-unf, yes, RIGHT THERE. I'msoclose... [small]Fuck me, breed me, knock me up! ... Mmmph, I need you to get me pregnant![/small] FILL ME UP, I'M CUMMIIIIIIIIIIIING~!"
Or something.

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>>8215678
>>8215860
>>8209978
Last paragraph is pretty hawt now. 10/10

>>8216175
RSP4: Should be "our" hips that slap together. You have "your".

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>>8216175
>>8216324
>>8209978
Riiight, smacking your hips together must be hard on the pelvis.

Thanks for catching that, I saw it but I didn't think anything about it when I did aha

>>8216409
That's what I'm here for.

>>8200661
This

>>8213468
This please.

>>8216717
>>8216697
Yeah, I'll hit up the Tali and Raptor one today, I think. There might be another one I promised, so I'll look through the thread too.

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"high class" interactive art exhibit

>>8208651
>>8209034
I like everything about these two; easily the strongest entries in a few threads. Fantastic stuff!

>>8216912
Alright, eating some dinner. Gonna finish up a caption and keep working on more.

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>>8213468
This seems alright, it got me worked up writing it, that's for sure.

>>8189090
>>8187813
I think you're on to something... This was pretty... animalistic.

>>8220757
That's the good shit right there anon

>>8220757
LSP1: Made "sure" to sway our hips. You use "show" by mistake the first time.

Pretty clean otherwise, nice job.

>>8220757
See, I knew you could take advantage of that mindset to up your game. Great work.

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>>8220757
>>8221422
Thanks!

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No one asked for it, but I made it.

Space is a lonely place.

>>8222179
Very bottom of left side: You better ber jerking off?
"You'd better be jerking off."

RSP8?: Looks like there's an extra space between "in" and "to" that shouldn't be there. Just "into".

The fuck is the repetition of "I need you to do it" supposed to be? Is it bold, is it italic? Is it all caps? It's basically impossible to tell. If you want to repeat, I'd recommend changing the colour instead. Something that'll contrast, so maybe orange? Good ol' blue and orange.

Seems like there's an extra space between the "I" and "N" of "cum in me please".

This font tho.

>>8222179
I'm shitfaced and thought this was written in japanese at first

>>8222418

I noticed the typo "Ber" typo.

I didn't realize how absolutely same-y "all caps" looked in this font when I started it. I tried to play around to make it a bit more intense toward the end, so the spacing between I and N in that last "cum in me" was intentional.

I like the idea of changing the font color, but I'm not sure if it 'works' in a general sense. I'll see what it looks like.

Thanks for the feedback, you caught me being sloppy.

>>8222471

Nani~!?

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>>8200661
I've been doing some feet stuff a bit lately I noticed.

Though, for Tali, that's no problem.

>>8222179
You and me, we're going to be breaking dicks together.

>>8223016
Isn't she in the suit because of immune system issues? Or so I heard, anyway. Haven't played it just yet.

Also, consider "Captain" for self-insert purposes. While I don't object to "Shepard," there might be some people out there that want to waifu her.

LSP2: The "seeing" should be see.
Remove > See. Tenses.

RSP1: Soles maybe? I honestly don't know though, is it supposed to be pads?
Ah, you use soles later too.

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>>8223451
>Isn't she in the suit because of immune system issues? Or so I heard, anyway. Haven't played it just yet.
When it comes to porn I think the general consensus between Talimancers is that "it just works."

Riiight, captain works better too, I suppose for those that don't self-insert as Shep.

Oh, and I think pads sounded kinda' nice. And I guess you can say that whatever she's wearing has pads there.

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Oh, and some Switch doggy from the discord.

>>8186693
pls
I want some Lilligant related JOE about putting it in her ass

>>8223807
Fuck, Japan's declining birthrate was an inside job! Damn you, Nintendo!

Also, it's clear.

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While on a late night walk, you get the urge to rub one out. While taking care of your needs, she see's you sitting on the ground, back against a tree, with your cock sticking out of you zipped open pants.

Wasn't there one with a tech-support anthro fox-girl helping a client use an onahole over a phone connection? Don't suppose anyone else has that one, do they?

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>>8225007

>>8225060

Bless you, Anon. You truly do the Lord's work.

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>>8224851
I like this one...

>>8224851
Rikki anon here, claiming

>>8224472
Ah! They're finding out! Shut it down!

>>8225826
Ah, I remember writing this one. Was pretty fun, I liked the theme the anon gave me.

>>8225954
Ah, sweet! I can't wait!

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>>8226192

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>>8226459
Awesome! Loving this.

>>8226459
Anon who requested this, thanks man! I love the overall feel of the dialog, it's kind of a more natural and casual thing going on. It's gonna be a long day at work, waiting for some free time at home, lol.

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You're a security guard who catches her trespassing, she gives you a very good reason to not call the police.

>>8222179
Thar font is horrible
Otherwise I like it.

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You were the only one on that lonely beach, until she came by. Your frequent glances her way have not gone unnoticed. Bonus points for having her getting a kick out of wanting to feel your dick running though her fluffy chest tuft.

>>8227404
Seconding hard, this character is amazing to me

more furs need chest tuft

>>8227431
Yeah, something about drives me crazy

>>8225060
I've busted several good nuts to this picture.

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>>8227298

Too right. So I did it up with a new font and some new text.

This should be about 300% easier on the eyes.

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youve said your last short joke because now she is gonna fuck you up. she is gonna make you cum everyday everytime you see her. shes gonna train you so she can make you cum in your pants by smirking at you.

>>8227733
ps: she will make you cum in your pants in public to humiliate you. hard to make short jokes when your jizzing in your pants

>>8189033
>UNF

Can't wait to see that bitch punished

>>8187037
i want an entire fic of this

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>>8208818

>>8189033
Seconding this

Nudist panda twins

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>>8221498

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>>8228998
Whops, forgot the image

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>>8229174
Anon... Those are koalas. I'm sure you know that though and just had a brain fart.

Incidentally, their names are Annabelle and Isabella Ryan

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looking for the other rikki caption

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>>8229470
http://joi.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=371

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>>8229490
>theres a booru for this
im gonna be here a while

>>8229490
>>8229519

Same. Every day has something wonderful hiding in it, doesn't it?

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>>8229696
Hiding? The link is right in the OP. Has been for several threads

>>8229461
Oh shit, once the image, then this.

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look at those eyes begging for some wet hot monkey cock/human breeding
will you quench this kittys Heat Joi/Joe?

>>8231246
Yeah, I can't wait to do this one. I love human breeding. You guys are pounding us with good requests here, awesome!

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>>8208818
Holy shit, I was fucking kidding but good work regardless

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>>8232178
you like? have another
i'll keep with just two a day or how often you prefer

>>8226459
ParkTheCarInBostonYard.png

LSP1: I'd recommend changing "chick" to someone or anyone. Is she implying he would've been cool with a guy finding out?
Try "nut" instead of "nutting"
"Not the first time I found a guy desperate for a good nut around here. That's why I started doin' nightly rounds in this here park."

P2: Hmm, maybe try:
"Damn, chill out! Do I look like some local prude that'd tell ya to zip it up? In case you couldn't tell by- Pfft. Pants? Why would that be a problem for a furry?"
The next line's a little messy.
"When was the last time you saw Bugs Bunny with pants on?" or,
"Since when did Bugs Bunny start wearing pants?"
I'd also capitalize the S in 'sides, even if it is a shortening.
'Sides, it's just that much easier to casually take some dick with no clothes in the way.

Much as I like the least expectin' it, not sure it really fits here. Maybe work in an easy access bit somehow? The first part makes it sound like she's on the prowl, but the next bit makes it sound like she gets surprised now and then. It clashes just a bit.

RSP3: Is "Sound tight?" something the kids are saying these days? With their fleeks and dabs and whatnot? Otherwise I'd suggest going with the classic, "Sound good?" or maybe even a "Sound good to you?"

Finale's bretty gud, but I don't understand the drawing out of "and". Maybe throw in a "there she blows" and finish with the cum on my tits as her giving him directions on where to aim?

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>>8227404
>>8227431
>>8227440

Hope you fellas like this.

Alright, back, gonna eat some dinner and do some writing in a bit.

>>8234767
Wanna take a whack at >>8191823?

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>>8233620
Ten out of fucking ten

>>8233620
Guy who requested this, I love it. The part with her being marked by human musk was a good touch. Thanks for taking that on.

>>8235644
I probably won't crack it tonight, but I'll work on it soon.

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A friend asked me to make this, then asked me to share it with the world.

Enjoy.

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Last thing from me for today.

Happy Saint Pat's.

>>8233620
By the by, that colour on that background is a little hard on the eyes. Font ain't all that pretty to me either.

P1: "This is kind of weird, but... Look, it's just you and me out here"...

P3: "Just let me lie down, get my top just so... Pass me my cooler bag. Thanks. Now drop 'em. Come on. I'm the one with their tits out - too late to be shy. Show me that dick."

P4: "Please? I know this must be weird, but thanks." or
"Please? I know this must be weird, but... Thanks."

>>8238133
Again with the fonts. Better colour this time at least.

LSP2: "Don't worry, I've seen my share of male anatomy" or probably, "Don't worry, I've seen plenty of examples of male anatomy. Though few quite like yours."

It needs to be "few" by the way. We're talking quantity here.

P3: I'd throw a "just" in here. The chains are just a formality. Assuming she's actually trying to put us at ease.

P4: Ugh, why break up a word here like this? Don't you have word wrap? Just put it on the next line. This looks terrible. You should also probably start with a No here.
"No, I haven't been wearing anything under this cloak." It's sort of a "Do you mind?" type scenario as far as I'm concerned. You actually want to answer with a No to convey the proper meaning.

P5: Why mayfly? Also, consider:
"Foolish mayfly, how did you think longevity infusions worked?"
or
"Foolish mayfly, how did you think a longevity infusion would work otherwise?"
Either call into question our lack of knowledge, or correct our incorrect knowledge, if you catch my drift.

RSP1: "Feel free to roll your hips; to try to thrust. The more arousal you feel, the more potent the spell will be."
or
"The spell will be all the more powerful according to the arousal you feel."
It's wonky as is, and definitely needs some kind of correction. Feel free to salvage.

This is quite the mess if I'm being perfectly honest, but it can definitely be saved. Hope you're up to the task.

>>8238668
Text's a little close to your top and bottom borders.

Maybe something like, "Yeah, I'm fuckin' Irish, so kiss my Irish fuckin' ass!"

Wait what? You cover it with the arse bit, so why the repetition in line two?
You're going a little overboard with it honestly.

Not bad overall. I feel like you might've missed the easy opportunity to throw in a small, "I fuckin' love bein' Irish..." at the very end, but to each their own.

>>8238678
>>8238798

I'll see what I can do tomorrow. I might pass on editing tuftjob, since it seems to have satisfied it's target audience, but I had a hunch Semencer wasn't going to enjoy contact with you.

Thank you for the time and effort.

>>8239036
No worries. I provide a service, so to speak, but it's up to you if you want the piece to be the best that it can be. If you're happy, having pleased your audience, then that's OK. I can't force you to hold yourself to a higher standard, but I do what I can. Ha ha!

Regardless of whether or not I like the content of a given image, it loses points if it has easily fixable mistakes. That's what I'm trying to do here. Hopefully someone else, somewhere, feels the same way I do, and if it means I can make it more enjoyable for them? Then it's all worth it.

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Siamese if you please

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>>8238668
>call me a dirty fuckin' slut. Shut up, fuck you, I'm not a slut. I just dress well.

>>8239174

I respect your attitude and contributions. I'm a hard-ass when I edit work, so I'm glad to be held to that standard.

Not to sound flippant, but I do honestly try to pass off some mistakes when I know I'm being lazy. So again, thanks for keeping me honest.

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>>8231246
Nothing says St. Patrick's Day like being unproductive and drinking a lot. I'll make it up to you guys by doing a lot of stuff tomorrow, I hope...

Luckily, another based writer wrote some goof shit today!

>>8232834
Yeah, that'd be great. I love having new requests pop in, especially ones with this theme, it gives me a wider array of things to work on.

>>8238668
>"Kiss me I'm Trish."
Damnit, I need to check my eyes.

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this trap catches you getting hard for them and teases you about being a faggot. they tell you to give up on the straight act and just fuck them, saying that they will have a turn fucking you too

>>8241812
loads of gay shaming please

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Here's another nazi-esque image if you're still looking for some
e621 is shitty with tagging this stuff

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Pet goodra

On your mark
Get set
GO!

>>8240121
LSP3: Whoa bro, that's a REALLY sudden and sharp shift. You might want to ease into it a bit. Uh, maybe have her rub herself against us without really realizing it? Since she's a cat? Or... in P1 have her try and downplay the estrus, then in P2 have her thank us for taking the day off work (only to mistake Sunday for a weekday) and then jump into it in P3?

LSP5: "Needed" can work instead of "need," but only if we're already inside her. So maybe have her ask us to thrust insider her /harder/? I just can't tell if we've already penetrated or not, that's all. If we haven't, it should be need. If we have, it should be needed.

RSP3: "means to achieve orgasm" makes me think of Marx and the means of production. While the means of reproduction is certainly hot, in a proletariat overthrowing the bourgeoisie kind of way, you might want to phrase this a little differently.
Maybe something like, "...use me as nothing more than a way to get off/drain your balls/satisfy yourself/get your rocks off!" Y'know what I mean?

Heeeeeey, I recognize that final paragraph! Hehe, well shucks. I'm honoured!

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>>8240121
> tfw hot monkey cock

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All these good requests, I love you guys. I hope I can do something neat-o when I sober up from St. Patty's today.

>>8242210
>>8240121
Yeah, thanks for pointing that out there. I knew the naughty bits were rushed, so I'm glad I went back to edit that.

>RSP3
Huh, I thought the same when I wrote that but I figured it was some dumb thing that popped into my head and would **never** be caught by someone else. Funny, huh.

>Heeeeeey, I recognize that final paragraph! Hehe, well shucks. I'm honoured!
You're my top war asset, comrade!

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Something foot fetish-y

Maybe something along the lines of her making the anon worship her feet at a spa while she does her nails, after which it turns into a footjob

On another note there is seriously not enough paw stuff with this character

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>>8243777
Higher res image

ahh, morning bump

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Something chronicling Carmelita's misfortune after Sly pulls a prank that effectively makes leaves her assets bare and on display. Maybe Sly teasing said naked Carmelita and laughing at her as she becomes increasingly furious and embarrassed. (Feel free to add anything you think would go along with it.)

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Bumper to the rescue!

>>8243620
OK, gonna post a mass edit of left side since I think I won't have the room to ask all my questions and point everything out.

Good morning, sweetie. Do you want some bacon and eggs, or maybe some pancakes? Hmm? Haha, I think you’re pretty h-hot too! Oh, that wasn’t what you meant? I guess I am burning up a bit… You shouldn’t be worrying about my estrus though, it’s nothing a shower or some toys can’t fix. Really, you don’t need to worry about me, dear, you’re gonna be late for work at this rate!
Unless of course you’re skipping out? Th-Though I’d be really happy if you took the day off to spend some time with me I wouldn’t want- W-What? Today’s S-Sunday? Oh… I thought it was a weekday… Ha, ha… I guess I was a little, uh, distracted? Looks like I really could use some help after all… Maybe you want to, you know, do me? Please? Come on hon’, don’t make me beg!
I… I… “I want you to have sex with me!” Was that good enough? N-No, don’t go away, I can do better! Nngh, I want you to come over here, tear off my dress, and shove your hard human cock inside my unprotected pussy!
Ahhh, yes, give it to me, you beast! *RIIIP* Just push my head against the ground and FUCK ME! Come on, thrust that cock into me! Nngh, you have no idea how badly I needed this! Mmh!

Needs the italics and whatnot where they were before, of course. Just threw open a notepad to make it a bit easier on myself.

OK, now, for RSP2, you accidentally the space between "having" and "a" in "...go insane without having a strong man..." It was OK in the previous version, so dunno how it changed.

Yeah, relatively minor stuff overall, but I kinda feel like you lost some things between the two? The "I guess you didn't mean to stay home and help me with my heat" was what threw me off the most. Hopefully what I posted helps explain what I was going for in terms of edits. Try and maintain the scenario early since we get to heavy stuff quick, but make it clear what's happening.

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>>8249185
>>8243620
>>8240121
>It was OK in the previous version, so dunno how it changed.
Ah, I had to expand the caption to make room for more edits. I imagine that was a text wrapping failure.

Alright, playing some vidya for an hour or so. Gonna work later today and pump out some captions.

bump a rump

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Maybe some freeuse Tali pls?

Sorry for the delay, was last turning it with some friends in Civ 5.

Gonna eat some dinner and come back.

>>8252416
seconding this, more tali is awesome

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This has given me some nice faps.

Thanks op.

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Deleted and reposted it again, I saw something immediately that I wanted to fix.

>>8193145
I didn't play up the impregnation bits until the end, so sorry about that. I couldn't think about a proper theme at the time to go with... though... thinking about it, I just came up with one right now.

Something about Pearl wanting to "connect" with humanity so she demands a breeding or something. Oh well, next time~

>>8256505
No problem, friend. I love making these, though I do admit that I've slowed down these past few days since St. Patty's.

I shouldn't drink. It encourages my laziness.

>>8256565
I wonder if the gem impregnation requesters are actually snuff fetishists given what we know from the show?

>>8256639
Ahh, maybe it's best that I haven't seen the show yet. I'd hate to find out that human cum melts them or something, aha.

>>8256684
You're not too far off. The gems are essentially hard-light holograms projected from their actual gems. They can shapeshift at will, and Rose Quarts shapeshifts herself a womb in order to have sex with Greg Universe and get pregnant. She somehow manages to conceive Steven, and then when he's "born" she essentially "dies" by becoming a part of him. He inherits her gem, and is half human.

>>8256638
LSP1: I'd change "house" to temple here for show-accurate-flavour. Not really necessary though.

P4: Again, for show flavour, I'd drop the "someone inside me" bit, and instead change it to her bringing up sex being between two people that love each other. Kinda takes this in a different direction though I guess.

P5: ..."I didn't say you COULD tear them apart!"

RSP2: I'd change "mate with so much savagery" to "mate with such... savagery!" instead. So much changes to such.

Pretty much clear afterwards.
Hmm, now that I think about it, gems would provide the ultimate breeding fantasy wouldn't they? You couldn't get them pregnant unless they wanted to, they could shapeshift their pussies however they/you wanted them to, and if they did get pregnant, they'd be giving up their lives for "your" kids. Hmm, would probably be worth becoming a single father for. Pussy game ridiculous.

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Does anyone have where it's guy on girl? For example, "you like the way my cock feels inside of you don't you little slut, that's right, I want to feel your cum all over my hard cock" etc.

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>>8256919
>>8256638
Jesus, that's kinda hot in some weird, alien way. They're literally willing to die to get knocked up by you.

>>8256947
I don't think I've written something like that, but I'm totally game for it. I know some of you nerds would love to take the knot, for example.

>>8257083
Oh, and I forgot to mention. Correct me with P4 in regards to matching some show-related context if it needs changing.

>>8257083
If you wrote me something about getting knotted I'd love it so much, I've been so low on good stuff to get off to

>>8257083
Well, the gems are essentially genderless spacerocks. She is, however, in love with Rose. To be more show accurate, you'd basically have to rewrite the entire thing, and do it as Pearl looking for a fuck to forget (temporarily) about Rose and try and get a taste of what Rose has with Greg. Trying out the local cuisine, if you catch what I mean.
I spose it could work.

Rose has Greg, and Pearl can't really have her. Rose is the target of her obsession, and Greg's nothing more than an opponent, or rival for her affections. Except Pearl wouldn't even really see him as a rival per se. It'd probably be beneath her. She doesn't really accept her "loss" until much, much later, despite seeing Steven and helping raise him. There's a whole episode about Pearl coming to terms with her "loss" and realizing that Rose chose Greg. Really, truly chose him. There's another woman - Mystery Woman, she's called - that strikes Pearl's fancy since she kinda sorta looks like Rose, but that didn't really go anywhere except as a one time joke.

So, uh...
1) Mindblowing sex with shapeshifting pussies for the purpose of self-sacrificial-reproduction of gem/human hybrids
2) Pearl trying to get a taste of what Rose has, perhaps seeing what all the fuss is about, or;
3) Pearl succumbing to human dick, perhaps thanks to instructions about how to mold herself and really enjoy herself.

Any one of those on their own could work just fine as a caption.

Oh, uh, gems don't really reproduce either. They're grown, essentially. Cultivated might be the better term.

So, yeah. It's a decent enough show that I'd recommend it. Unfortunately it's really slow in places, while others make up for it big time. Like, some good bites during a tasting menu. You want more of the good stuff, but have to eat the less tasty stuff along the way.

>>8257167
I'd also second the knotting stuff since I fucking love that too. Breeding, knotting, impregnation - right up my alley. Hot 'n' heavy.

>>8257846
Awesome! I should check out SU tomorrow or sometime.

And yeah, gonna' find some pics for knotting stuff.

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Be careful when you jerk off to muscular desert warrior-women.

Just saying.

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>>8238668
>>8238798

Also, for any interested in nailing an Irish rat, here's an edit.

>>8259092
good shit mate

>>8186693
>assfucking the flower waifu
I didn't know I wanted this

>>8259092
>>8259163
more trap stuff pls

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>>8208202
Based Plague does it again with this pic. I love his work.

>>8259092
It's clean, but I'd recommend a change in font, text colour, and background colour.
I think it could really shine with some minor changes to those.

>>8259163
I just noticed that watermark now... God, what have I become where I barely even look at the image anymore?
Har har, I just thought of throwing in a "Jesus, Mary and Joseph" instead of the Christ and God, but I think you're the Irish expert between the two of us. Makes me laugh with the imagined accent.
Very nice work. (Can't help but think it's still a bit close to the top and bottom of the image, but the change definitely helps.)

>>8259960
LSP1: REEEEEEEEEEE IT'S PEEKING. PEEKING. PEAKING HAS TO DO WITH THE TOP OF SOMETHING, LIKE ALTITUDE OR HEIGHT OR QUALITY. PEEKING HAS TO DO WITH LOOKING AT SOMETHING SLYLY. REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

P2: Drop the "the" in the last sentence and sub in an "a". "...pin down a woman and her what a man you are." Or perhaps, "how much of a man you are". I suppose you could drop the "what". "...and show her the man you are." Not as good in my opinion though.

RSP1: Whoa, savour without the "u"? Are you sure you're Canadian buddy?

P2: Maybe bold the "man's" for extra emphasis? Not necessary, just thought I'd suggest it.

P3: The "worthy" sounds a bit wonky, but I honestly don't know enough about the character to analyze her vocabulary.

P4: Just wanted to double check that you meant to say "anybody" here. Are we the first? Or does Callie (that is Callie right?) mean that she doesn't do it often? In that case, it should be "everybody" - implying we're one of a lucky few.

Ending's pretty good, but it seems like a slow burn to get there? Not complaining per se, I think it fits the characters and the scenario, just wanted to make sure you're aware of it so it's a conscious choice.

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>>8260408
>>8259960
>REEEEEEEEEEE IT'S PEEKING. PEEKING. PEAKING HAS TO DO WITH THE TOP OF SOMETHING, LIKE ALTITUDE OR HEIGHT OR QUALITY. PEEKING HAS TO DO WITH LOOKING AT SOMETHING SLYLY. REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
You peaked my curiosity with this edit, it's really helping me test my metal as a writer. :^)

>RSP1:
I don't know why I made the conscious decision to simplify it. I do that sometimes.

What do you mean by slow burn? As in, no heavy interaction between the characters? Don't get me wrong, would have loved some good breeding in there, but I don't think I could have made it work.

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>>8186693
Nothing story-based, couldn't think about one at the time, but I figured I should even today out with three captions.

Wanted to do more today, but I was feeling quite out of it. I hope tomorrow (today) is better, since I want to pump out some high quality stuff sometime soon.

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>>8260766
I fix'd a thing.

>>8260766
>metal
REEEEEEEEEEEEE!.wav
I sure as fuck hope this is intentional. 'Cause I could replace you in a second. You're a diamond dozen in this doggy dog world. Having someone of my calibre is a blessing in the skies.

Welp you fixed the show her, so I took that out.

For me anyway - since I don't have much of a connection to the characters - it didn't get especially hot or raunchy for me. Compared to other dual character captions, there wasn't much competition or egging on either. While it isn't necessary, I find it hot. Y'know the Jameski/Pyro caption on the booru? I'm not especially into either, and it's a 63 caption to boot, but having the characters competing and actively trying to turn me on is great motivation. That one's a starter, this is maybe a finisher? You kinda already have to be over the hill, in my opinion.

That or the image just isn't hot enough to carry it? Don't know what to tell ya m8.

>>8261015
I know what you mean. Competition and "egging on" tends to be my modus operanda for duo captions, so I'll try to maintain that in the future too.

I agree in that it's too tame too, but it might be good enough for someone. I think it's fine, but it doesn't make use of my standard raunchiness that I put into my writing.

Feel free to be honest with the overall "hotness" of my future captions too. It's like lockpicking for me. I'm trying to find the "sweat spots" that trigger people nice and hard~

>metal
I'm surprised you didn't mention that I used "peaked my curiosity wrong too" :^)

>I sure as fuck hope this is intentional. 'Cause I could replace you in a second. You're a diamond dozen in this doggy dog world. Having someone of my calibre is a blessing in the skies.
What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I’ll have you know I wrote novels that have surpassed Fifty Shades of Grey in booksales, and I’ve ghostwritten for not one but three different acclaimed authors, and I have over 300 published books.

>>8261173
>"peaked my curiosity wrong too" :^)
Fuck, I haven't used pique in ages. You're right. I should probably go easy on y-

>"sweat spots"
You MOTHERFUCKER.

>Feel free to be honest with the overall "hotness" of my future captions too.
Eh, I'll try. To each their own though. My fetishes and whatnot might not rub everyone the right way, so who'm I to judge?

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Curious is the trapmaker's art.

His efficacy unwitnessed by his own eyes.

>>8261669
LSP4: Zippers, plural, implies yourselves, not yourself.

P5: Grab some pole? Maybe something like, "Someone's showing off!" to imply she's good at grabbing poles? Or, uh...

RSP2: Are you still talking to a crowd? You need pornstarS, plural, if you are.

P6: Put your hips into what? "Hips into IT" usually. Like, "Put your back into it!" Maybe something like, "Put your hips into it! And your dick into 'it' too!" since I think you're trying to be punny. Otherwise, something like, "Don't be afraid to put your hips into it, and really stick your cock in her!"

P8: I'd drop the "to" in the "halfway 'to' done" bit. Just, "...and our guy isn't even halfway done I bet!" or "isn't even halfway there"

I'd change the last bit to "Who's up next?" instead of using "Now it's your turn!" Weren't we already up there? Or is the "you" supposed to be someone else in the audience? Cause that could use a little clarification. It's probably better to just imply it's us, and maybe change the end?

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>>8259077
Didn't realize the other anon wanted to take the knot, but hey - to each their own.
Was thinking this might be a good one to try. One of my favourites for various reasons, and flares are kinda like knots. Perfect for ensuring a "successful" session if you catch my drift.
It's perfect for:
Getting deep,
Hard, animalistic rutting,
Equine muscle control, plus magical control/abilities,
Going multiple rounds and using up all the condoms, and;
Wedging ourselves in her and flaring to make sure we pump - no, flood - her fertile womb and knock her up.
Fucking hell... I'm gonna write it. Can you create it for me if I give you the script?

>>8262049
Yeah, why not. And yeah, flares are like knots too. Unf breeding material.

morning bump, see you later, requesters

>>8262049
>>8262069
Fuck me, it's actually too long for a single post...
Feel free to cut it down or space it out. I don't really consider myself a writer, but I went with what I thought would sound good and what I'd personally like to see in a caption.
So, if it needs a little massaging here or there, feel free to rearrange, or supplement where necessary.
Background can probably be the dark pink, text could either be a black, or blue, or whatever looks good. I'll leave the font to you - the standard you use looks pretty good.

Aight, part one:
C’mon dude, don’t pretend you don’t wanna. I saw you eyein’ me up on stage /all night long/. I might be in between sets right now, but the party doesn’t stop until /I/ say it does, ya feel me?
As a DJ, I know a thing or two about laying down a funky beat, and I saw you really shakin’ it out on the dance floor. Y’know how they say that the way you dance reflects the way you fuck? Well I dance faster and harder than any mare you’ve ever met before, and the way you dance tells me you’re gonna be one of the few guys that can keep up with me.
Haha, I knew you’d be interested! I can already see you poking outta that sheath! Oh wow, and it just keeps coming, and coming and… Hell yeah, mama’s getting’ some good dick tonight!
Haven’t seen a cock like this in /at least/ three shows. Hell, maybe not even for the whole tour! Mmmpm, let me wrap that up for you. Wouldn’t want to make a mess, right?
Damn, only got one left in your size big boy. Here, let me just slip it on for ya real quick… Voila! Ain’t magic great? I can help warm you up at the same time too. A couple quick strokes from top to bottom, just a little ball action… Really get that blood pumping... Unf, not that you seem to need any help in that department.

Gotta cut it here I think, for clarity. Next post'll have the rest.

>>8262273
Alright, enough teasing: go to town stud. I’m not like other mares, so try and make the first round count. You won’t believe how good I can feel when you’re sheath deep in my pussy. Have you ever been with a unicorn before? Two words: complete; control. Sure, some mares can tighten up and stroke you, but you’ve never really been /milked/ unless you’ve been with a unicorn…
Mmmph, hot damn stud! That really got you goin, huh? Mmm, yeah, I wanna feel that rubber bloat inside me when you bust a nut.
Well, not that you need the extra motivation, but can you keep a secret? /I’minheat./ I’m guessing you can already tell, but I know how hearin’ it drives you guys wild. It’s also why, after you’re done fillin’ that condom fit to burstin’, you’re gonna shove that big, fat, HOT dick back inside me… RAW.
I want – no, NEED – to feel every bump and vein of a cock this good. I know what I said, but /heat schmeat/! I’m telling you to pop that cock back in me and rut me like the dirty, filthy little filly I am. I need you to rut me like I’m the last pussy you’ll ever see, and then I wanna feel you flare. I need you right up against my womb, wedged inside me, ready to /breed/ me when you pop.
Yes, I-I’m almost there! Put a foal in me already! I’m cumming~! FILL ME UP!
[sm]Hahaha, don’t worry dude – I’m on the pill. Jeeze you really took it to heart huh? … Do you think anyone’ll notice if I get back up on stage sloshing with your cum in me?[/sm]

Again, feel free to nip/tuck as necessary, and be harsh. I can take it, and I want other people to be able to "enjoy" it - as creepy as I now realize that feels and sounds.
Thanks again caption-kun~

>>8262273
>>8262283
Awesome, I'll put this into something when I get up

>>8228741
You're right too, btw. I need to work on that thing sometime.

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>>8187037
>>8227713
More Anthros in Space!

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>>8208818

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Trainer gets a raging boner and has to relieve it quickly. The only female Pokemon he has available to help him out with his boner problem is a tiny, innocent and inexperienced Ribombee.

>>8260800
Wew
Thanks anon

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Trying to entice the whole tavern to run train on her.

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So I saw an instruction with this picture some time ago. Pretty sure I saved it, but can't seem to find it anywhere. Was hoping anyone here could post it for me?

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>>8266154
Anon...
>>8229490

Literally, less than 100 post above you.

>>8262827
god I need a continuation of this

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Dunno how you feel about hyper, but her design is cute, okay

I'd like to request this (Yu-Gi-Oh) Dark Magician Dragoness wanting her master to believe in the "heart of the cards" after a duel and give her a happy ending for battling so well.

Please make non-pornographic posts from now on >>8265999

>>8266319
That's the one.
I must be retarded or something. I'm sure I looked though this thread at least 2 times for that post. Anyways, thanks a lot.

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Juvia just discovered that the spell you cast on her turned her into a trap, and it even made her super horny, turns into pulling her panties to the side and creampie-ing her.

>>8266848
Delete

>>8265413
I didn't know i wanted it...But i do

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>>8262049
>>8262273
>>8262283
This was pretty good, it's going to be inspiring me for captions to come. I love it when captions and requests get all hot and heavy with breeding, knots, and all sorts of exotic naughty bits.

I'll be back in a bit to do some writing, but I'll leave this here for now. I hope I didn't miss any proper edits, kinda' in a hurry to get somewhere

>>8260800
Not sure how I missed this one, but it's clear anyhow. Nice job.

>>8268907
Fucking hell, it's gorgeous...
My Trojan Magnum Opus.

Anyone have this one?
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7404246/#7419250

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>>8272172
It's a really, really old one I made.

>>8252416
Yes please

>>8272212
Was the wrong one, Meant the Saiyan girl.
Thought I had seen one like that so I flipped through the archives after reading this fic while browsing /tg/s booru:
http://pastebin.com/1MuC9kfQ

Looks like they're doing something with the image servers so it should be back sometime soon I hope.
Thank you!

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>>8273200
Ahh, that was another one. Almost forgot about this one.

>>8270264
It's very good, def. gonna' want to do more harder ones now.

>>8248552
not to big on the actual incest, but i love mommydom stuff. THICC

Alright, finishing up a game of civ. Gonna eat some dinner and get to work.

>>8274826
Thick indeed, and mommydom is pretty good.

>>8273385
Thanks!
I really need to go back through the old threads and do a save run. Looks like I missed a few that appealed to me quite a lot.

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Mother asking for a nice, thick load from her son. Perhaps to help him deal with morning wood, or if he's having difficulty with homework due to getting distracted.

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Love is a trap. When it appears, we see only its light, not its shadows.

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Thanks for everything that you all do!

Hope this can inspire you

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>>8278864
Or this.

EP's SexyFur work is top shelf.

Any good weight gain or fat stuff JOIs or am I barkin up the wrong tree here

>>8278878

I might do this one some time, because slutty jerk-bait is always sorely needed.

>>8279454

Depends on what you're looking for. I personally won't do blubbery-hamplanet fat, but weight play, bara, etc. is fun soooo.

And ofc, there are always other degenerates around to fulfill your desires. Just ask, worst that happens is nobody answers.

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>>8227196
Some knotting fun. Don't think I've tried that before, so this is kinda' a bit of practice. Though I think it's hitting that heavy, animalistic thing that I like writing.

Wanted to do more today, but playing Civ5 from 5:00 to 10:30 took up some time. At least the match is over.

>>8265413
Khajiit drunk and horny for Big Nordic Dick? Sign me up, I can do this.

>>8278864
>Thanks for everything that you all do!
*finger guns you*
No problem~

>>8279790
>>8279742
I see you tryin' to be sneaky.

>>8279808
LSP3: I feel like this could have been an easy and obvious "backstage" joke. Haha.

RSP1: Maybe a little too much with the species specific stuff? Would anyone actually describe it that way?

Hmm. Don't get me wrong, I like the content. I really, really do. At the same time though, it feels really out of place. Jarringly so. The intensity almost doesn't belong here. I'm probably going too far by saying I don't think this image would work very well with a long caption, but I'll say it anyway.
My major problem is that you kinda gave up on the plot too early, and it sort of turns into a porno, if you catch my drift. I can buy the "teen at a concert" bit for about two paragraphs and then it gets really mature in about three paragraphs flat.

Last reference to "us" being a security guard is LSP5. Not that we need a constant reminder, but I thought you were going for more of a story on this one. This is kinda going another route entirely, but maybe you could work in some teasing about "us" being a security guard? "What did you flunk out of the police academy?" or something to that effect, you know? It doesn't need to be "pig" this or "pig" that, stop pepper spraying me, don't taze me bro, etc. but... I don't really know what else to say. Hopefully you get what I'm trying to communicate here.

Probably would've worked better with something like >>8278878 since that's almost pure sex. I've got another idea or two, but it would go in an entirely different direction than what the OR wanted. Blah, I don't know how to really help on this one.

>>8279955
>LSP3:
Backstage! That's the word I was looking for! I had to settle with "behind the scenes" as a replacement!

...

I know what you mean. I think the caption works on its own for what it *needs* to do, but I'll pump out another variant tomorrow and see what you think about it. I actually tried to stray away from something story heavy, but if it makes it better then... awesome! I was getting worried that people appreciated the porn aspect and not the storytelling that I do.

I already have ideas set up so it isn't a straight up fuck-and-dump porno.

Though I'm all ears for your ideas. It might make good inspiration that I can work into it.

>>8211285
Bumparino my Idearino

>>8279808
Requester here, I love how it turned out! Really like the idea of being an anthro in this one, adds some extra fun. Thanks!

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Can some make a caption for this?
Just Something about Red getting hypnotized and fucked by hypno

morning bump

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Caption idea: this noivern wants you to worship her feet, mentioning how plump her soles are
You start licking her feet, lapping up her sweat while she asks you how it tastes
She then notices your raging erection and offers giving you a toejob
The toejob starts and you eventually cum between her toes, then asking you to sniff her feet, wanting you to savor that rich aroma and wondering what they smell like with your cum

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While on a tourist trip to see the pyramids in Egypt, you wander off the beaten path and discover that not all the old inhabitants have left.

>>8281496
Seconding

>>8277350
or maybe she's just out of coffee creamer.

>>8283108
Ooh, that's a good idea too. She definitely looks like she wants that cum for something. And she's not undressed, so it's not going in her pussy.

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Simple jerk off encouragement request. She notices you staring at her naked bod from behind and her big balls. She wants to see you get hard and slowly whip out your dick for her, encourages you to stroke it to her and eventually blow a load on her. Cute feet as well, could mention that in there somewhere as well if you wish

Alright, I'm back from some work. Seems like the thread is ending today-ish, so I'll do the usual and try to help end it.

>>8280115
>That's the word I was looking for!
I had a feeling. We are now of one mind. There is only porn. Prepare to merge...

Fuck n' Dump can be hot too. Some of my favourite images from the booru are almost straight scenarios with very little instruction at all.
#s 540, 392, 436, 474, 475 and ESPECIALLY 448, and 473.

Right now, I kinda (mentally) divide them into instructions (stuff with countdowns or explicit instructions on how to wax the pole), encouragement (build up with character asking for it, begging, telling us what to do etc.), and scenarios (where we're dumped into a scene and things kinda happen naturally as a sort of in medias res).
Instructions are my least favourite, with scenarios and encouragement being closely related, but scenarios still coming out on top. Truthfully, the "instruction" aspect kinda takes me outta the whole thing. I don't really like it.

Again, to each their own. OR >>8280506 likes it, so I shouldn't try to impose my artistic or perfectionist ideas on it too much. If you're happy with it too, and it's free of grammatical errors, then my job is done. If you want to go above and beyond though? I'm happy to help.

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Join the army they said.

It would be fun they said.

Jerk off strange people they said.

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Stick a bad dragon dildo in a bad dragon fleshlight for maximum immersion on this one.

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This one was requested by certain a Canadian writer here.

Alternative title: Toronto 2019, Colorized

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Last but not least. I figure, statistically, 50% of you have to like Socialism, and 50% of you have to like Nationalism.

So I'm compromising with another National-Socialist one, that should satisfy 100% of you.

This one may get an alternate caption in the future.

>>8287129
>I wrote each one except the first one, which is pretty much a massive inspiration for me.
Phew, at least I have what it takes to make editor-kun happy.

I like how you divide these captions. Having at least three "styles" is going to make things easier too. I can enter writing a caption thinking that "I want to do an encouragement" for example, and stick to that method.

I kinda' divided my "styles" into masturbation, everything-but-sex, and sex. So sometimes I dip between instructions, encouragement, and scenarios in the same caption. It gets a bit convoluted.

Thanks, editor-chan! This general has been a much better place since you showed up!

>>8288171
Just subdivide.
Three larger categories with three or more sub-categories of "content."
An instruction that uses sex, a scenario that uses everything but sex, encouragement that uses masturbation and sex, etc.
Don't be limited by categories, they're just archetypes for identification and such. Though, really, that's sort of useful in itself. "I want to write an X that features Y and Z. What are the elements of each? Have I included at least a little of each? What's my pacing like? Do I give the reader explicit instructions/is the scenario realistic/is the encouragement hot enough?"

>Phew, at least I have what it takes to make editor-kun happy.
Yeah mang. Gimmie dat good shit. N-no homo, you BAKA!
>Thanks, editor-chan! This general has been a much better place since you showed up!
Bueno. That's always the goal. You be sure to let me know if and when I get overbearing though, OK?

Should I go through these:
>>8288052
>>8288015
>>8287646
>>8287609
?

>>8288581

Sure, if you'd like.

The only one I'd really say, "don't" on is the slutty cat one, because I already put it on my re-do stack for a cold day in the future.

Don't knock yourself out though.

bumping, gonna work on some stuff before or after dinner, so in a bit.

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Requesting an aftermath of Wakfu S2E13, where Amalia and Pandiego have a bit to drink and mess around in the corner of a busy bar.

I think it would be mostly descriptive but they might talk and whisper during it.

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What the fuck is happening to discord?

>>8287609
"What're you gawkin' at? Ain'tcha ever seen a guy's dick hangin' out before?" or
"What're you gawkin at? Ain't ever seen a guy's dick hangin' out before?"

Rumour needs a "u," but maybe the 'murican audience likes it better that way.
The don't ask don't tell bit feels wonky.
Maybe, "Maybe this is where 'Don't Ask, Don't Tell' don't matter." or
"Maybe this is where you don't need to ask cause everyone can tell..." hurr puns.

Pretty clean, though it's not my cup of tea.

>>8287646
Skipping this cause you said to.

>>8288015
I'd change "maple-leaf" to just "leaf" for extra kek points. "The Leaf behind every shitpost!"
Ah, and you use "leaf" later on too... Hmm, maybe throw in a "hoser" somewhere? Something to do with hosing down the concrete to wash the blood off?

Only steers and queers come from Texas! NOW SHOW ME YOUR WAR FACE!
>implying we'd lose a war against the US

>>8288052
Supa gay, but clean.

>>8290420

They added Rus servers, then a blowout happened

We're all STALKERs now.

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>>8290471
I was prepared for this.

>>8287646
Noyce
any chance for some human stuff with her?

>>8290455

Thanks for the prompt feedback, glad to see taking my time with quality control is paying off.

I agree with you on those awkward wording charges, both for >>8287609 and >>8288015

I'm not going to fix them right away, because it's a pain in the ass imo, but I'll probably repost a slight modification next thread.

As for >>8288015

Don't worry, the G.I. is surely just talking big. I'm certain there are some mighty strong holdouts in the hoary north, fighting the good fight for Uncle Trudeau.

Also, why would an American talk with your funny foreign spellin', boy? He's got FREEDOM in his lungs!

>>8290562

I can see what I can do the next time I set myself to it. If it seems I forgot, just remind me.

Uploaded all on the booru, i know there's still some images for edits and missing tags, but well, tomorrow is another day for me.

>>8189033
And it's a bit sad this don't get some love, maybe in future threads...

But this was a good thread, good night!

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I am scared, hug me.

>>8294297
Despair, but also despair. It's clean.

>>8281527

I'll probably have this done soon. I like the idea, and have a soft spot for Egyptian aesthetic.

>>8189033
>>8292236

I'd do this myself if it didn't feel wrong making a sequel to someone else's work. It's not canon. reee, etc.

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Alternate title: Raiders of that lost ass.

Remember kids, say your prayers.

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Alternate caption where an old Nazi veteran bangs you.

Remember, it's not rape because you're his property.

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>>8203443
Some hard and heavy human on doggie.

>>8295768
AH! Another pseudo-religious caption! We must be awakening the FAP GODS! AWAKEN MY MASTERS!!!

>>8295768
LSP1: As a proper noun, Nile should be capitalized.
P4: "Breeches" sounds really awkward here. Maybe just go for robe or something?

RSP2: "One such as I", or else just go for the easy, "...to know that I crave your pleasure?"

>>8295950
LSP9: Minor, but I'd throw an ellipses at the end of the paragraph.
"You cock loving little whore..."

RSP3: So much tightER. Though I'm not sure this paragraph makes sense. Pure and natural? Why not just say he really wants to feel it? That the friction and "our" pain brings him pleasure? Dunno, it just sounds a little odd. Not even having "us" lube him up with a quick BJ?

>>8296176
LSP1: While I understand this paragraph, it's a little stiff.
"Well hello there, big boy. Mmm, yes, I am rather attractive for a dog aren't I? I can tell you're interested - it isn't much of a surprise..."

P2: I'd probably drop the first and here.
"Hehehe, you're quite attractive too... For a human. I'd bet those strong arms of yours could really hold a woman down when she's thrashing around on your dick... or maybe, a needy bitch in heat while you pound her?"

P3: What does she mean by this? Is she referring to us, or is she expressing her own curiosity about fucking a human?
"I mean, sometimes you just gotta try something outside your comfort zone... or species! Am I right? Whaddya say, sport?"

P4: Why they're /really/ man's best friend maybe?

P5: "all the way" inside her? Shove her "to" the ground perhaps?

RSP1: Not necessary, but maybe:
"Your ancestors must have domesticated mine with their hard dicks! I'd gladly become a pet if it meant getting fucked like /this/!"

P3: While I love the hot monkey dick meme, maybe qualify why it's better not to have a knot? Something simple like adding "in seconds" at the very end - to imply that we can go multiple rounds very quickly, as opposed to waiting for a knot to deflate.

P4: You already used the balls on cunt thing, sort of, earlier. Maybe consider something else? NBD tho.

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Awesome! I'll put the edit in next thread.

Speaking of which, making the next thread.

>>8297261
LSP4: "how about" is usually a question, rhetorical or otherwise, so you need a question mark at the end of this sentence.

Mmmph, shortstacks though. Delish!

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Took your comments on, reworded that paragraph in general to make it more dominant and stop exploring Nazi ideology frivolously.

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This should also read slightly better.

Into ze concentration camp, humies!

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