Zootopia General: Another Out on the Road Edition
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first for nick
First for wake the fuck up you malingering louts
2nd for totally not gay.
Fourth for reposting for the new thread!
Something's eating Clancy, but he just can't bring himself to tell Percy. Percy's feeling eaten up about it, too. Will the two be able to reconcile the past and get back to the present, or is their future unclear? WHERE DOES HUGH WORK?! Find out in Poor Form, by Hasty!
Text here:
http://pastebin.com/iKb93tZ5
Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/poor-form
You Are
Safe Here
>>7838862
Especially if you literally can't tell one from another
>>7838879
Don't worry, this is the last time I'm gonna post it for a while, I just love the pic so much.
6th for smug
>>7838829
i want nick to lift me by the tail and drop me into his needing maw
i want him to send me down into the pits of his hot, wet stomach
i want his juices to completely submerse me and make me one with them
i want to become a layer of flab on his soft belly
>>7838837
Let me die
>>7838879
not even remotely true
>>7838895
man, this comic is fucking great
>>7838895
>OH MY NOG?!?!
>>7838897
Negative. I thrive on the suffering of others.
>>7838895
Everything in the 2nd panel kills me. Especially Judy's hat with Texas on it.
>>7838862
No it's gay
But they don't mind
I'm going to bed. When I wake up I expect this post to have a bunch of (you)s.
Good night you nerds
>more c-radical when
>>7838980
Sleep tight, bunner!
Foxe
>7838980
I can supply half a you in this economy.
>7838980
Fight the power
https://e621.net/post/show/673247/
Typical Swinton voter.
>>7839020
Porn of the Hyena Vegan when?
>>7839020
this is messing with my brain and blurring the lines between canon and fanon
>>7839020
Nick ruthlessly fucking Canidae fic when?
I like Wolter
>>7839121
BETTER NOT BE IN A GAY WAY OR WEAVER WILL SUE YOU
>>7839121
wolter is worst pack street
literally not even a character
>>7839121
well if you're a guy, wolter definitely doesn't like you
sorry anon
>>7839130
but... I love him both as a character and as a gay sex object
>>7839121
Not gay but I'd fuck his mouth.
>>7839114
Anon, as charming as Nick is, even I'm not crazy enough to touch that hornet's nest of fandom retribution.
>>7839158
not gay either but I'd cuddle with him in bed while stroking his ears
>>7838862
>that saliva trail
Wew
>>7839130
W-will he send Spin's fanbase after me?
>>7838895
I've seen this image for nearly a year now and I still don't get what the joke/reference is supposed to be.
>>7839219
Have you ever watched a cartoon?
Hello, all!
I'm shilling a new Pack Street fanfic - "Sinner's Circle", starring Avo: http://pastebin.com/sg23SGbZ
A night in the life of Avo, spent with Betty. It's before Remmy moves in. It's rather dour. SFW.
Thanks to Weaver for making these characters, and thank you so much for reading! Any and all commentary, criticism, abuse, and acts of domestic terrorism are greatly appreciated!
>>7838877
Thank you so much for the readthrough, Comic! I've been working on this all day, so I just saw this - I'll listen to it right now!
I'm sure you have a backlog to work through at this point; if you wanted to give me some comments on this new one, I'd love to hear them, but I don't want to prevent any newer /ztg/ writers or less-frequent readthrough requesters from getting airtime.
>>7839229
Your timing leaves something to be desired anon, but I'll give this one a read before bed.
>tfw going to have nightmares about losing my thesis again
Good night /ztg/
>>7839317
Are you draw it or not?
>>7839317
At least you're not me, constantly having multiple dreams about going to a convention and forgetting pieces of your cosplay.
>>7839317
Use Dropbox or another cloud service, damn.
Goodnight
>>7839317
Good night
ill shill this for the final time i think
please enjoy
pastebin.com/bhJaVweC
>New fanfic
>Nick and Judy have been married for thirteen years
>Last few months they have been fighting
>Judy being quick to anger and breaks things
>Character tags have "OC" in them
>"Will Judy see that Nick still loves her?"
It is almost too easy to guess what the OC is...
>>7839317
Then back it up you doofus. In multiple locations and services.
>>7839437
>Plot twist!
>It's Boom the Hedgehog!
>>7839407
I did before, I will again.
>>7839437
Is it Mitch Midwife? The most handsome black bunny ever?
>>7839469
>Must cuck quick!
one more ewe before bed
>>7839490
>show me your bicc
>>7836348
He who controls the boners, controls the world
Also it's fuckin weird to think I've actually given people fetishes like
How
>>7839437
Meh, It's by the same author that had Nick get cancer in his last story.
102k words he was able to stretch it out with, even though you already keow he was going to die.
And the end of it had Nick wanting Judy to make Zootopia a "UTOPIA" in his honor/wish. You know. An impossible wish that is going to destroy her trying to make it come true.
Just dismiss it, and move on.
...I REALLY wish FF had a way to blacklist author's and/or certain Fic's so they don't even show up in the feed.
So it could just be out-of-site-out-of-mind.
>>7839550
you didn't give me this fetish, V, but you haven't helped one bit
>>7839550
People look at fetish stuff some times on accident sometimes not and sometimes something awakens in them, something dark, and thus a fetish.
You merely expose people to them. Guaranteed one will take hold.
Good night thread, have a Nick.
>>7839592
Fuel? Nobby?
Sleep tight, bunner.
>>7839592
Source?
>>7839601
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/8440329/Ande883
Luckily he hasn't done much, yet others still liked it for some reason. Probably just people that get off on poorly done Tragedy Porn.
>>7838877
Nice
>>7839574
>102k words he was able to stretch it out with, even though you already keow he was going to die.
Fucking hell I am seeing that right here, what in the world? How do you make a story like that without it eventually getting boring?
Good morning /ztg/!
This evening I will draw cutie patootie (pic related) and also one of the other new characters of the game, who should this other one be?
>>7839437
Hey, Jake M. Wolfestein is a more than legitimate OC with no edge at all
Sorry for the silence: I'm a bit distracted going through the threads I missed.
>>7839229
Glad you found it, buddy! I'd be happy to check this out, too! Avo doesn't get enough love...
>>7839407
Heya buddy! Did you manage to see your read through, by the way? Just checking to make sure it got to you!
>>7839399
I'm glad you found your drive, Waga! Its super scary to lose your work like that...
>>7839490
Sleep tight, Ewer!
>>7839706
Good morning A_Sig! The Crime Files has a ton of fun characters. Glad you found a special one you like!
Heck, why not draw her with your other favorite character-- Raccoon DMV girl?
>>7839706
Are you going to draw her getting dicked by your 'goose?
>>7839706
>morning
it's 2 am in freedom land, sexy italian goode boy
>>7839639
I roughly skimmed through it back when it was still going on, intirgued with how EH it couldbe.
But it's pretty much like this.
>Nick and Jduy have been in a loving relationship for a few years now.
>Nick is diagnosed with heart or lung? (I can't remember which)
>2 Month's left to live.
>They try and do as much as they can.
>Visit to families on both sides.
>Nick proposes to Judy (Since he might as well do it, you know? He's going to die, better then that then never.)
>Nick gets worse after his days close up, I think some flashbacks happen or something. I can't remember.
>And Nick passes away, depression and sadness with Judy trying to move on.
>Takes a shrink asking what Nick told her in his final moments, that I already talked about.
>She learns to deal with his loss, by doing the impossible.
And I like to think she gets herself killed being a reckless idiot, or something equally as poor.
The thing is though is that his writing isn't have bad, and he can evoke some solid emotions. But since he can only do that through "Stock Drama!", it falls flat.
>>7839146
Wolter likes guys
Just not sexually
>>7839794
Well, someone's gotta be the other side of the Eiffel Tower.
>>7839114
>That 'other' Scoutmaster Nick green
can some please tell me why do people like this because i really want to kown
>>7839829
Like what? Being a shitlord of forced, stupid memes?
You'll have to tell us, Anon.
Can't read bad fanfics if you don't read at all.
>>7839652
You know, I don't know how to feel about this picture. On one hand, Nick/Violet has been a guilty fantasy. On the other hand, Judy looks almost...sad about the whole thing.
>>7839483
>Is it Mitch Midwife? The most handsome black bunny ever?
You mean Hare/Wolf hybrid, right?
>>7839706
Personally I want to see more of Wayne the Warthog, he seems like a fun guy to hang around.
>>7839773
I almost want to read the fic for the sheer amazement he stretched that out for over 100K words. I don't know if that is talent, determination, or desperation.
I came to the same conclusion about his writing from the first chapter of the new fic- his writing overall is good, now if he didn't pick a plot that is predictable as hell...
Anon's, I have something for you.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12378572/1/Parody-The-horrible-fandom-of-Zootopia
I don't even have words for what I just read, I did laugh quite a bit though.
What about you all?
>>7839848
>lvl 15
How?
>57k monies
How much did that set you back. I almost wanna send you coffee money for this though
>>7839879
Crime Files Canidae here.
I cheated.
I lost my data and didn't want to spend weeks getting it back to access the new cases so... Yeah.
Anyone got the zootopia map for rolling living/work place?
>>7839903
I'm telling Disney on you!
>>7839829
Because when /co/ mods hate something, it gains traction.
>>7839592
BEST VIXEN STRIKES AGAIN
>>7839754
Good morning Comic!
I was thinking more about separate images of the Crime Files characters, but if you want raccoon on otter action so much...
>>7839757
N-no!
While I enjoy mixing OCs and canon (the world of Zootopia is one, right?) I try to give them separate storylines and keep the interactions to a realistic minimum.
Also, who in the world would want to see that?
>>7839772
Then fix your Sun!
>>7839848
>Wayne the Warthog
Seems an idea.
Also muzzles like that are not easy to draw, it will be interesting training.
>>7839849
Oh my, what a word salad.
Have another parody:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTVFrMP0tG8
>>7839917
One second
>>7839829
Because it's got genuine non-tryhard humor and a well fleshed-out world that draws you in, along witha protagonist duo that has extremely good chemistry.
>>7839985
>Also, who in the world would want to see that?
Literally everyone here who enjoys both your art as well as porn.
>>7839917
Here you go!
>>7839849
I get that its intentionally badly written, but I cannot even comprehend that garbage.
>>7839829
We're mostly kept going by contentfags, this would probably be over if it wasn't for writefags and drawfags
>>7839829
Because the world, characters, and community are all for the most part good.
Also theres never any sparkling furry OCs. Our OCs have fucking lives and jobs, and have more of a personality than: "Oh (s)hes a good lay"
Also jokes and memes here are good, and I hear the film isn't bad either.
I would to see more CharliexMarty lewds
so /ztg/
are jerboas the most ugly and degenerate species in zootopia?
because goddamn they are atrocious
like, what the fuck even are they?
some kind of fucking mouse-aroo-bbit?
give me sadness and ill give you music
>>7840200
there are people itt right now that believe wildehopps is canon
>>7840177
Here you go anon
>>7839999
Why has no one checked these quads of truth?
I agree, anon, and appreciate how you've blessed this film
>>7839999
The perfect quads.
>>7839020
wait,i though that canidae was an OC
is this shopped?
>>7840294
Nope. Canidae has connections.
Don't step outta line, anon.
>Judy buys a gift for Nick's birthday
>Knows he likes sweets, and decides to roll with it
>Thinks chocolate is still dangerous to canines and vulpines even after millenia
>Finds a special brand of chocolate online that apparently caters to foxes, sold by Sextz
>It really just has a handsome, winking fox as a mascot, and with a foreign sounding name
>A few days later, the case of chocolates arrive, with a complimentary bottle of what Judy thinks is strawberry-scented hand sanitizer
>Before she visits Nick she takes a few, just to taste, and finds it tastes just like normal chocolate
>By the time she makes it to his door, she's feeling strangely hot and bothered, given it's a rather cool day
>That morning, to her, it was suppose be a special night between two close friends watching corny movies on the couch
>After he told the unusually fidgety bunny what she'd purchased, and what was happening to her after eating the chocolates, she decided on a change of plans
>Judy lay against the cushions of the couch, a chocolate between her lips
>Nick lay ontop of her, opening his mouth to take a bite of it
>That couch had new memories tied to it that night
>And various stains
>They still watched corny movies, though; porn with bad plots
>>7840294
Anon, are you suggesting that we'd edit images? Here? On the INTERNET, of all places?
Shame.
>>7840338
Well, I'm sold.
>>7839985
Have another parody; one that will never be finished. Which sucks, because it had pretty good visuals to go with it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i6VeqqkjL-g
>>7839999
Truth, Super Australian Satan
>>7840002
>Literally everyone here who enjoys both your art as well as porn.
Are there many people in this intersection?
>>7840177
I need to discover the way Alec makes such pretty drawings with so little lines.
I will steal his power
>>7840186
>They didn't see naked mole rats
>>7840200
I'm interested. Here you go
>>7840386
That is a good one. Really a shame it will not be finished
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fgXmvzMqI1U
>>7840325
Poor innocent country bunkin.
Hey there /ztg/, NeoTT here!
I come bearing news!
Next TT will be abooooout... TEENAGE YEARS!!!
this was a close one, very exciting!
Scent-play was second by two votes!
thank you all for voting and suggesting this week's themes!
I hope you all have a chance to participate!
>for those wondering the tumblr post will be done during the weekend, I know you're expectant to see it done, and so am I!
>>7840428
Very nice
Thanks, Neo!
>>7840428
Sure is gonna be jailbait up in here.
>>7840438
is that a promise anon?
>>7840428
Damn, I was hoping for Scentplay...
Well, the anons decided
I’m doing something big and I need details on the Pack Street apartment building. Here’s what I got so far. Tell me if there are any corrections and help me fill out the blanks. Provide sources for the details if possible.
REMMY
>FLOOR: 3rd?
>TYPE: Studio (living space, bath)
>FURNITURE:
-Single bed
-Closet
-TV
-Armchair
-Small dining table w/ 2 chairs
-Kitchenette
>DÉCOR/ROOM AESTHETIC
-Sparse
-Slightly worn-down
ANNEKE & WOLTER
>FLOOR: 3rd? (across from Remmy)
>TYPE: 2 bedroom (2 bed, bath, living space)
>FURNITURE:
Bedrooms
-Single bed
-Closet
Living Space
-TV large flat screen
-Large couch
-Coffee table
-Small dining table w/ 2 chairs
-Kitchenette
>DÉCOR/ROOM AESTHETIC
-Messy, clothes everywhere
CHARLIE & MARTY
>FLOOR: 2nd?
>TYPE: 2 bedroom (2 bed, bath, living space)
>FURNITURE:
Bedrooms
-Single bed
-Closet
-wall mounted shelves
Living Space
-Loveseat
-Armchair
-Coffee table
-Desk
-Bookcase
-Small dining table w/ 2 chairs
-Kitchenette
>DÉCOR/ROOM AESTHETIC
-Clean, organized
-books on tables
I heard there's been some trouble on the set for Zootopia 2
>>7840404
>Bellwether as the black woman
Ok, that got a more of a laugh out of me than it should have. I really would have liked to see who they picked to be the Chinese woman...Bonnie? Mrs. Otterton?
Also I enjoy both your art and porn- I am not saying I want to see you do porn. Just stating facts.
>>7840470
OZZY
>FLOOR: 1st
>TYPE: Studio (living space, bath)
>FURNITURE:
-Single bed
-Closet
-Coffee table
-Guitar stand
-Small dining table w/2 chairs
-Kitchenette
>DÉCOR/ROOM AESTHETIC
-Papers everywhere (music related)
-Worn-down
AVO
>FLOOR: 4th?
>TYPE: 2 bedroom (need confirmation)
>FURNITURE:
Bedroom
-Single bed
-Closet
-End table
Avo’s Sex Den
-King Size Bed
-Pandora’s Box
-Full body mirror
Living Space
-TV
-Loveseat
-Coffee table
-bar-like dining space
-Kitchenette
>DÉCOR/ROOM AESTHETIC
-clean and orderly
-has a bowl of candy somewhere
-lots of decorative art pieces
AL (& V? does she live there?)
>FLOOR: 4th? Or 5th?
>TYPE: (don’t know, help?)
>FURNITURE:
-(I have no idea what he has in his apartment. help?)
>DÉCOR:
-(need suggestions)
THE GROUND FLOOR LIVING ROOM
>FURNITURE:
-Big TV
-large couch
-armchair
-Coffee table
-magazine rack
>>7840467
Ya I was hoping for scent too, oh well maybe we'll get some more adopted teenage Nick and Judy out of it.
>>7840476
Kek
...now I want this
>>7840476
>SkylerxJenny
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
SKYLER IS FOR JACKIE
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>7840325
That was a pretty adorable green, simply yet effective.
Gave me a smile for the night, that I needed.
>>7840500
I guess Jackie is finally the one being cucked.
>>7840428
God
DAMN
it.
Teenage bullshit?!? Don't we have ENOUGH pointless angst, drama, whining, and overreaction here from the likes of Spintherella?
>>7840476
I DIED
>>7840496
>>7840467
>>7840510
>adolescence
>the time when hormones rule
>not throwing scents in there
it's like you guys don't even two cakes
>>7840476
A well deserved (you) Weavy
>>7840519
Spidey knows whats up
>>7840476
>Jackie is the complete opposite of enthusiastic Judy
>She looks almost disgusted, at either possibly having to take her top off or take the dox fick is up in the air
>Skyler is a ball of energy
>Skyler's face in that last panel
>Jenny is fandom's porn version of Bellwether, hungry for pred
I need more of this parody.
>>7840537
>>Jenny is fandom's porn version of Bellwether, hungry for pred
I think she's just hungry for Skyler.
>>7840476
>Skyler
Don't you mean Skyeler?
>>7840476
I like how Jackie is totally unfazed about the prospect of a sex scene so long as she doesn't have to show her chest.
>>7840476
Why are you so charming and funny weaver?
Where did you learn your humor?
>>7840476
i need to draw more lewd sheep
New draw from FF
>>7840581
not circular enough to be lucius
>>7840470
>>7840481
Oh hey I actually pieced that together for Winter Snuggles: Pack Street. It's a three story building.
Al, Remmy, Anneke and Wolter, and Charlie and Marty are on the second floor. Al's across from Remmy. Avo's on the third floor, above Anneke and Wolter. Ozzy's on the ground floor.
Avo does has a second bedroom, it's a mystery what's in it.
>>7840476
SKYLER ON JENNY PORN WHEN
is anyone else having trouble posting or viewing images sometimes? Or is it just me?
>>7840627
Me too. Must be the ayylmaos.
>>7840476
Now I need to know how the rest of the cast is; is Clawhauser still as flamboyant as he is in the movie? Is Bogo more soft-spoken? Gideon without the country hick accent?
Finnick is probably the same.
>>7840428
>>7840438
>Nick convinces Judy to do a little roleplay before sexytimes.
>Fox homeowner comes home early after a hot day of working construction, to find his teenage house-sitter caught red-handed rifling through his liquor cabinet.
>The fox, tired after a long day of work, lets it pass and doesn't need to convince her to share a little drink as long as she's quiet about it.
>The bunny, anxious for her first taste of booze, is slightly put off by the fox's rather careless attitude when it comes to underage drinking, but as the glass keeps refilling, her eyes keep glancing at his gleaming, damp pelt under his unbuttoned shirt.
>He's barely finished his first glass, while she's on her fourth. His kind words and the way his muscles move under his fur as he stretches both keep her alert as she downs another glass.
>Eventually, they're standing in his livingroom, and she's dancing to some music that's playing. Their bodies are together briefly, and she can feel the heat coming off of him in waves, and she can smell the distinct, violet musk as her face pressed against him when she occasionally slips when his tail gets in the way.
>Each time he catches her, his paws move further down her body, until finally, as she's falling, he grabs her by the paw and they fall to the couch.
>She can feel his heavy breathes as she rests her face against his bare chest, and his arm is resting on her back.
>As he offers her another glass, a large paw rests on her waist, running a thumb against the hem of her pants.
>He holds the glass to her lips, and tilds it back as she drinks. A small stream drips down the corner of her mouth, and he moves in and pressed his lips to her chin, and drags the tip of his tongue up against the small bit of liquor.
>The young rabbit brings her paws up against his chest, beneath his shirt, and sluggishly slips it down her shoulders while trying to maintain eye contact.
>Then, he makes note of the time, and tells her that it's well past her curfew.
>>7840519
I know, but it is something completely different from what I had in mind in the case Scents won.
Teenage years doesn't attract me so much because for example I will have to replace the usually collected Nick with an angsty version of himself.
I mean, I will do something, but I don't find the theme particularly inspiring, mainly because it is difficult to not have predictable plots and characters
>>7840581
Nice one Finnickfag, it is a little different from your usual style
Is anyone still up? I'm thinking about going to bed.
>>7840612
>SKYLER ON JENNY PORN WHEN
You'll have to wait for Zoo2
>>7840611
>Al's across from Remmy
Anneke and Wolt are across from Remmy. Al is upstairs on the third floor.
>>7840709
Charlie and Marty live next door, Anneke and Wolt are across.
>>7840428
Hurray! Teenage years will be a super fun TT!
>>7839985
Look I just thought they were your favorites! And I didn't know you were taking lewd suggestions! Remove me from the list! Remove me!
>>7840581
Dramatic Lucius!
>>7840476
Zootopia as a movie in Zootopia is a confusing AU...
>>7840679
I'm still up, buddy!
>>7840662
>>7840653
>Nick convinces Judy to do a little roleplay before sexytimes.
I mean, it's right there anon
>>7840728
>Zootopia as a movie in Zootopia is a confusing AU...
It was a promotional video for the city that went out of control.
>>7840724
Actually that makes sense, Charlie and Marty take up less space than most of the other apartments so there's enough room for a studio left over on their side of the hall. Two full-size apartments on the top floor, foyer and Ozzy's on the ground.
>>7840670
>working through an art block
Ah, that sucks. But probably it is a phase where you are adjusting you observing skills to match your drawing ones.
I suggest you take advantage of this by exercising your lines and doing some anatomy studies. Nothing too complete, just sketches.
For example, that last drawing has a more elaborate pose than your usual ones and a better sensation of volume
>>7840679
The day has just begun...
Also nice to see more from this artist, their art is top tier, especially the lightning
>>7840728
>Look I just thought they were your favorites!
Oh they are. Love them small girls.
>And I didn't know you were taking lewd suggestions!
I didn't. It is your dirty bunny mind thinking of them. For example, I never included you in the list, still you included yourself. This speaks a lot about your hidden desires...
>>7840733
I didn't think of that, maybe I could do something out of it...
Re-shilling one more time:
It's time for my third Zootopia fic. I decided to try something a little different in terms of formatting, so in addition to plain text, it's available as a more nicely typeset PDF (the Mega link).
An Old Family Recipe
by Biscuit
http://pastebin.com/6zv8UpbF
https://mega.nz/#!rdIHkJ4S!Yoilc7pXWXFa9UNmzdD0S35ZTw0G37n9CdB3r9WLJIA
Nick helps Judy deal with the worst ailment known to mammalkind - the common cold. The idea was conceived for the illness TT, but I didn't have a chance to write it until now, so consider it either unrelated or very late. My first WildeHopps effort (of probably many). Enjoy, and let me know what you think!
>>7840428
Teens, hmm? For some reason I have a hard time thinking in that direction, but maybe inspiration will strike (the day before they're due, and/or when I have no time to write, of course).
>>7840653
>A clearly-plastered bunny sits up and quickly turns to the clock on the wall, and frets that her parents would kill her if she came home drunk.
>The fox, kind as he is, tell her that her parents would understand that if he, himself, called to tell them that their daughter would be staying the night.
>As he offers her just a little of his own drink, he gradually sits up, and slips a paw over the button of her pants, undoing it.
>She doesn't notice a thing, as she's hauling down the last of his drink.
>He steps away, calling her parents, and her eyes glance over to the television.
>There's a rather dark and somewhat blurry bunny on the screen, and she's rather risque-
>Her shirt is undone, her bra is hiked up, and her fly is undone, revealing her pink panties, and the fur along her neck was matted.
>She'd say the bunny looked rather inebriated if she could even think out how to say that word at the moment.
>And then, out of the corner of her eye, a fox came on scene, and it showed his almost sculpted back and shoulders as a shirt landed beside her.
>A pair of paws suddenly took her own, and she found herself dancing to a low, vibrating beat, grinding and being ground against as something tangled around her legs.
>Shaking her legs, she slipped out of whatever it was, and she suddenly felt a cool, almost refreshing breeze.
>A pair of strong arms wrapped around her waist, and she felt the fox's body rub against her back. Her own paws reaching up to hold and pet against the muzzle pressing against her neck.
>She was spun around, and she reached for the fox, managing to grasp around his neck as he brought them down to the floor.
>Sweat dropped down their bodies, and she felt her nose twitch as she took in his scent.
>It was so very foxy, she told him, in a drunken slur. And it became stronger as he wrapped her in his arms and pressed their lips together.
>A heat spread all over her body as she pulled him deeper into her drunken kiss.
I'm full of food and battling some virus, so I'm going to rest and let my body do its thing.
>>7840792
My dirty bunny mind is nonexistent!
...I'm not saying I don't have a brain, I mean!
>>7840796
Hello Biscuit buddy! You're up next for read throughs! Can't wait to check it out!
Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads. I hope you get Skyler and Jackie's autographs at the premier of Zoot2, and even Jennie's if you're a fan of her.
>>7840855
Sleep tight bunner!
>>7840855
Have a good night bun bun, dream of comfy predators to cuddle for warmth.
Hey guys, CC in need of advice regarding character design. I can draw faces fairly well by now, but bodies still give me a hard time. What are some essential tips and exercises I should regard to do those quick and good looking?
>>7840855
Sleep tight bunny!
>>7840653
>>7840801
>>7840909
>>7840909
>>7840930
>>7840801
>As he started grinding his hips against hers, her legs crept around his waist.
>She pulled away from the kiss and took in a gasping breath that was soon muffled by his neck.
>His hands pulled out from under her, and with a quick movement, one slapped on the ground above her head. Her eyes watched idly as the other snaked its way down between them.
>A snap and a zip, and she felt something hot and firm press between her legs. As she tried to look further down, his paw came back up, and cupped against her face.
>It came with it a stronger smell, one her tipsy mind quickly forgot as he spoke. He wanted to ask her if she wanted more to drink; something different, this time.
>She let out a soft groan, uttering the word 'yes.'
>Suddenly, she felt cold, and the fox that was on top of her, keeping her warm, was hefting her up from under her arms.
>He slipped and tied a tie over her eyes, and told her it was a came. She gave a bubbly laugh, and nodded her head, her hears flopping back and forth.
>Seeting her on a cushion on her knees, he guided her paws to his upper thighs, and she breathed in a strong, musky odor. Letting out a breath, she breathed in deep, bringing her face forward.
>He laughed, and told her not to get too anxious, as this was a game that was best played slow.
>After a moment, and with the sound of a bottle screwing open, she felt something slick press against her lips. With his word, she opened her lips and jaw, and took in the hot, thick warmth.
>She smiled, and hummed; she knew what he was doing, now.
>What she didn't expect was the taste. It was dull, almost earthy, and when the hot length pressed against her tongue, she could taste something almost fruity.
>She found herself wanting more, and forgetting his advise, she took more.
>She pushed forward until she felt his sweaty fur against his face, and then she suckled gently.
>After a deep, vibrating groan from the fox, she felt a pair of paws wrap around her ears and the back of her head.
>>7840909
>>7840943
>>7840476
kek
>>7840909
>>7840951
>>7840909
Anatomical studies are a must.
Look at bodies (maybe scenes from the film), visualize an internal skeleton, connect it with joints, draw on it.
Kam is a drawfriend here particularly keen on this subject, you can see some of his art here, it could inspire you https://kamdrawings.tumblr.com/
Another good source is Rose's Tumblr, it contains many good tutorials http://briskby.tumblr.com/tagged/ref
Also I see another anon here is dropping good tutorials, follow them
>>7840909
missed this one
>>7840947
>After a gasp, and the shuffling of hips around her head, she felt him pull around her.
>She could feel his balls rubbing against her chin.
>Her face was buried further into his crotch, and she felt his dick press against the back of her tongue.
>As the taste faded, he pulled back, and she felt a small drizzle against her tongue, and it returned. She continued sucking at it, trying to draw more out of it.
>At that moment, something clicked in her mind. Breathe.
>She pulled back quickly, with the fox's paws quickly letting go of her head, and she took in a gasping breath.
>She moved to take off the makeshift blindfold, but her paws just fumbled around at the clearly-too-tight knotting.
>Another laugh came from the fox, and she felt the blindfold tugged free. The sight before her made her grin.
>A drizzling cock, and a fox with his mouth open, panting silently.
>She moved her head forward, and licked up the glistening stream drizzling down his red length, stopping at top.
>Taking the tip into her mouth, she sucked in as she felt it throb, and with it came a small burst of his slick juices.
>After a moment of her tongue dancing around his tip, she remembered where she had left off. So she buried her face back in his crotch, and felt his length poke against the back of her throat.
>Another burst of juices leaked down her throat, and she tried to swallow; the large obstruction along her tongue kept her from doing that.
>So she tried, and tried again, feeling the tip of his prick rub back and forth against the back of her throat and tongue.
>His paws came to grip at her ears, and she could hear his slowly rising panting all the way.
>She took him to the back of her throat again, and tried to force herself to swallow, and then she felt it-
>He left out a quick breath as she felt his balls and shaft twitch.
>A hot, thick burst hit the back of her throat, quickly oozing down.
>She pulled back fast, as another burst coated the roof of her mouth and tongue.
>>7841063
>He let out a breathy groan as she stopped at the tip, swallowing during bursts, and trying to suck more out between them.
>Her paws found their way around his shaft and balls; fonding the orbs and pistoning her paw up and down his length while her lips locked onto the tip.
>He was suddenly crouching over her, one of his paws on the back of her head while the other squeezed at her ass. She could feel his hot breath on her neck.
>And again, a creamy burst filled her mouth as his hips shook.
>A paw grasping her rear had fingered its way under her panties and was rubbing away at her slick pussy.
>And as the flow stilled, she just kept sucking, hoping to draw out just a little more.
>The paw working her mound had pulled back, and a moment later she found her head hurting as she was on her back.
>The fox, breathing heavily, was on top of her, pulling her panties aside as he pressed his dripping cock between her other lips.
>She tried to let out a groan of approval, but instead felt something thick dribble down the corner of her mouth.
>She forgot to swallow.
>But the fox's face was then against hers, and she felt his tongue drag along her lips.
>And then lock with hers, as his tongue invaded her mouth.
>As his lips pressed forward, and his slick, firm length found itself at home in her burrow, both of their tongues and mouthes passed his creamy necter back and forth.
>They parted their kiss for a moment to breathe, as long, dripping strands of seed linked their mouthes like threads. She watched as his own seed was dripped down his chin, and she felt it splatter against her face.
>He came down again, hunching over her as their lips locked back together.
>She was greedy, though, and licked and swallowed at his seed.
>Too lost in their kiss, she suddenly felt him flare inside her, and with it came the intense, almost sobbering feeling of his knot stretching her wide.
>He broke character, calling her by name, telling her that he loved her.
>>7841123
What art program are you using?
If you use Clip Studio Paint there is a Mannequin tool for trying the poses
>>7841190
Good idea, anon, I didn't think about that at all! Thanks!
>>7841171
>She broke character, too. She moaned out his name, and told him that she loved him, too.
>And together they layed there, tied, sweaty, stinking of sweat, and sex, and Finnick's special brew of liquor.
>Nick wrapped his arms around her, and carried her over to their loveseat.
>As he laid back, he pressed her against his chest, and smiled.
>A moment later, his phone on the table beside him started to ring, and he glanced over at it-
>It was a text from Finnick.
>Figuring his best buddy was kind enough to text instead of call, he flicked open the message.
>'Closed your damn curtains, you're giving everyone a show,' it read.
>His eyes shot open, and he quickly tooked over to the wide livingroom windows-
>Finnick's van was parked out on the pavement, positioned just right to block the view of the street between a few bushes.
>He could see his friend at the driver's seat, looking down.
>Another text message. He opened it.
>'She really down that whole bottle? Shit, you better wife that bitch ;P'
>Letting out a groan, he picked up his phone and called the fennec.
>After one ring, he picked up.
>"You can come in, Fin', just don't mind the smell. And don't worry, she's out like a light,"
>"Yeah, yeah, kinda rethinkin' that. Bitch drink the entire fuckin' bottle. I told you, specifically, not to ler her do that. That bitch is gonna be ridin' you all damn night, now. I don't need to hear that shit,"
>Judy's stranglehold on his cock gave a tight squeeze. "Ah, fuck- Yeah- you could- ah-" again she squeezed, "Slip in the back, if you want?"
>A moment of silence passed between the foxes.
>Questioningly, Finnick asked, "You mean in the room out back, and not a three-way, right?"
>Nick let out a laugh. "If Judy were up to it, and sober, I'd say the latter. But no, you can take the back room tonight,"
>Finnick grunted, and the call ended. There was the soft bang outside, and a few seconds later, the was the sound of a distant door opening and closing.
>Nick closed his eyes.
>>7840653
>>7840801
>>7840947
>>7841063
>>7841171
>>7841319
Wew, that was fun :v no clue what I was doing after the first post, but I liked the outcome.
>>7840679
source pls sir
>>7841370
>Charlie and Marty are across from Remmy
No they aren't. They're next door. Anneke and Wolt are across.
>>7840611
>>7840692
>>7840723
>>7840753
Well, here's draft one of the Pack Street Apartments. I tried to keep it in-line with how it looked in the Wannabite comic.
Tell me if there's any corrections as I've only read-through the story once and may have gotten a few things wrong.
>>7841408
You think there's two whole apartments worth of unknowns in the building?
>>7841408
Keep in mind that most floor plans from fiction are generally impractical. This is my interpretation of how the apartment would look if it was an actual building which more-or-less follows building codes and design principles.
>pic related
>>7841370
Crossover with Doctor Who confirmed.
>>7841408
Well, the big thing is that you split the second floor into floor 2 and 3. Marty, Charlie, Remmy, Wolt, and Anneke are all on the same floor.
From No Good Deed:
>As I walk along the creaky floorboards, I run through my mental map of where everyone lives in this building. I know Anneke and Wolter are right across the hall from me, and Marty lives next door. I'm pretty sure Al is somewhere on the top floor.
Work's put me in a shitty mood tonight. Wish I was home drawing. How are you guys?
>>7841469
Charlie and Marty are smol and don't need much room so they can have a whole studio for Rem on their side. Anneke and Wolter are also smol but they like sleepovers with big'uns so they need full-side bedrooms.
>>7841514
Also they're siblings so probably not into sharing a bed[room].
>>7841504
I'm pretty bleh, course it's really late.
>>7841436
There's definitely a landlord. He was mentioned multiple times but never given an identity. Remmy also had a small run-in with another tenant in . Nothing more after that.
>>7841460
Alright, thanks. Guess each floor is gonna be bigger than I thought. Didn't seem like it from the comic >pic related
>>7841514
I realized that each building would probably be designed based on the mammals living there. Since Pack Street is mostly wolves and big predators (5 - 7ft according to the height chart) I based the sizes on standard human dimension because they are roughly the same. it's the same reason why Judy has a huge door and high ceilings for her apartment, it was designed mostly for mammals like Bucky and Pronk.
>>7841504
Doing alright, just about to head to sleep. Sucks work is getting you down, hope things turn around for ya.
>>7841504
Alright for now, lunch time.
Resist, anon, you can do it.
>>7841504
Sorry to read that anon. I'm in college, wish I could do the same rn.
>>7840428
hello Neo! now that we have a TT theme i'm gonna start running some ideas to draw and getting ready (this time i'm going with just one week) to see if i can do it faster than before. Glad to participate!
>>7840581
noice lucious
>>7840679
boner/10
>>7841504
Doing fine, trying to relax a little more
I don't want to dick the Nick, but his crossdressing makes it hard not to.
>>7841578
The landlord doesn't necessarily live in the building, though. Especially if he's a slumlord.
>>7841824
>slumlord
This is making me picture Al as a druglord for some reason.
>>7841798
Resistance is futile.
>>7841408
Would have to re-rad, but I thought Ozzy was on the floor above Remmy?
>>7841950
BogoWilde is best ship
>>7840476
GOLD!
>>7842009
>>7842021
Poor Nick
>>7839652
Was reading the green pages, nice story, obviously sad. I guess drift just happens?
>>7839399
The Horror!
>>7841824
What if that guy Remmy encountered was the landlord?
>>7840922
Love that tail wag!
>>7841984
The Sauce:
>It's not hard to find Ozzy's room. I managed to remember what he'd told me at the party: he's right under me.
>>7842073
Wouldn't Remmy have recognized him if he was?
>>7841504
Wishing the last 15min would go faster so I could stamp myself out.
EK here, what's up friends
>>7842096
Dammit. I have Ozzy's room on the other side of building to where Remmy is. Guess I'm gonna have to take some liberties. Weaver was right when he said he liked to keep it fluid
>>7842073
Remmy must have dealt with the landlord before. Getting keys and signing off papers.
>>7842113
>that tongue action
From some anon last thread:
( >>7837404
Alternately:
>they both climax
>Al struggles not to flop onto Remmy
>might suffocate the Ram if he did
>he breaks eye contact to take in the aftermath
>sticky wool
>sticky fur
>they were a mess
>damn, was the grazer that pent up?
>maybe it was just that good
>the thought brought a satisfied growl to his throat
>there's a moan
>Al whips his neck around
>Remmy is sluggish, but manages to look also
>Velvet is standing nearby
>nude
>she sits on the side of the bed, and looks at them
>"Ready for round two?"
>Remmy feels Al harden inside him
>Remmy's erection self-ressurects
>even messier threesome ensues
...I feel like I should just write stories at this point. )
Yes, anon. Yes, you should.
>>7842119
Errything is fine over here, need to splash my face and have coffee before heading out. And you EK? Having a good morning?
>>7838862
lets post the rest
>>7842227
>>7842235
>>7840428
aw man
now how am i supposed to write porn about underaged characters? I'm not Armasyl!
>>7842252
Isn't 19 teenage.
>>7840476
sigh
i guess i'll put this one right next to the Pack Street Actors AU I havent finished yet...
>>7842192
>>7842258
im not sure that's really in the spirit of the theme, anon.
>>7840476
https://youtu.be/MHhzpf4FgEk
>>7842274
>human dicks
and now I see why that one is edited.
>>7841408
>>7841578
This is very interesting.
But I have always imagined the layout to be like in dormitory. Long hall with rooms on sides. It would fit with how A+W live opposite to Remmy, how M+C live next to him, how Avo lives above him...
>>7842274
That's just perverted.
What I meant was that I am really sweaty and was hoping he could do a fellow canine a favor and help me out.
>>7842313
Comissions are commissions, anon.
>>7842229
>That message on the bottles
Always cracks me up
>>7842321
I'm well aware. That still doesn't make them fit the aesthetic of the picture, let alone the movie.
>>7842229
Mmmm. That cookie
Is the best Cookie.
Would not be against seeing more of that sort. Top/10 material.
>>7842387
I won't lie...
I'm vaguely tempted to do a fic series /chapters based off these fics called A Ram Of My Word
but i already have so much shit im not working on
https://twitter.com/do291010na/status/834649871458070528
>>7842436
getting gay vibes from this pic
>>7842408
MrE? Stop stealing other peoples ideas and do something original for once. You're like a leech.
>>7842495
Do I need to remind you what happened the last time we tried that?
Dark times, anon. Dark times.
>>7842408
I had the same though, but the whole fun of Remmy to me is him being seduced into it, not being forced into it by some ill-advised wager.
>>7842533
you really think Remmy would do it if he wasn't interested on some level he won't admit?
>>7842538
God, yes. He's got a martyr complex a mile wide.
>>7842459
Here you go, anon.
>>7842209
Oh shit, I thought no one saw that.
Thanks anon.
>>7842657
Yes, good.
Write more.
>>7842621
nice
>>7842662
Aaah boy.
I guess I should say that I'm working on some Remmy/Wolter stuff, so we'll see how that goes.
>>7842346
is there anything more pathetic than OC self-inserts hanging out with canon characters? I'm sure there might be situations when it's possible to pull it off, but I've yet to see an example.
>>7842781
OC self-inserts fucking canon characters.
>>7842781
>is there anything more pathetic than OC self-inserts hanging out with canon characters?
Yes, OC created for the sole purpose of shipping them with MCs
>>7842781
Self-inserts getting rejected by MCs?
>>7842505
When did everybody suddenly start disliking this? I remember the Looking Glass series being pretty popular when he MrE first wrote it.
>>7842781
Human self-insert fucking and having a story with canon characters.
Beat this.
>>7842900
People probably just finally realized it's irredeemble shit and that E is a garbage writer who should fucking neck himself.
>>7842909
Weaver pls
>>7842900
the viciousness and suddenness of the attack seems to be someone is just looking to upset the person for no good reason, maybe it's the guy who gets kick of getting yous after attacking random ccs.
>>7842909
Tell me more, anon.
I think I liked it, in the beginning.
Since I'm pretty new here, I will ask this:
Who's MrE?
>>7842921
there's nothing to say
e is a shit-tier cc who clearly can't write anything original without copying whatever someone else did first
his '''writing''' is bad and anyone who likes it has shit taste
>>7842828
Literally Megan Foxe or whatever its name is
>>7842928
He's a local writefag. Used to steal the show in TT. Loves pack street.
>>7842928
a prolific fic writer who mostly builds off of other people's ideas.
Like, a fanfic writer who basically writes a staggeringly massive shitload of fanfics of other peoples fanart and fanfics of Zootopia.
>>7842955
Huh.
Is that a bad thing?
>>7842935
>there's nothing to say
I need objective points anon.
I don't like having vague feelings, so gimme some points so I can identify why it's so terrible.
>>7842960
It's called FANfiction for a reason, so no not really
>>7842928
Pretty cool duder. He writes well and is extremely productive, but I gotta say it's a shame he mostly writes pack street because I'd like to read his take on other subjects.
>>7842274
This being the original ruins the tongue one for me a little.
>>7842960
I don't think so.
If it was then how would drawing fanart of fanworks be any different? Y'know, besides the superficial obvious of one being a story and the other being a drawing...
Well.
This is something to come in on.
>>7842928
He's a CC here, writes. A lot.
During various TTs he drop a staggering amount of fics.
Here are the works he has done:
https://archiveofourown.org/users/MisterEAnon/pseuds/MisterEAnon/works?fandom_id=7782412
I found many of them to be rather nice.
And also it seems he has a troll and/or someone who has some kind of gripe with him now
>>7842969
I do have a wildemeyer fic about... 1/3rd done. A sequel to the first one.
Haven't finished it yet.
>>7842998
please with how much you seem to crave attention I wouldn't be surprised if youre the one who started the whole conversation
>>7843011
Shouldn't you be off pulling the legs off a spider somewhere?
>>7843011
I don't crave attention any more then any other writefag, anon!
Although, writefags do attenionwhore more then artists. It's more or less required; very very few people read in comparison to people who look at pictures.
Besides, I don't think anyone likes hearing about how they're garbage. I mean, I tell myself that a lot, but I try not to bring it up here since people've told me they don't want to hear it.
Post sexy buns
>>7843030
>>7843025
>filename
Already decided what will you do for this TT?
>>7843025
We don't, because it isn't true. I know you have no way of knowing this and probably wouldn't remember even if you did, but you and I have been over this before, and I know I'm not the only one who's told you not to be so down on yourself.
>>7843010
So...that Remmy x Avo fic... is it on the way?
Post ahegao faces.
>>7843062
Like this?
>>7843051
Nope. That's just the default filename. Not sure I'll participate this TT... I have at least two fics to finish right now I keep putting off, if not more I'm forgetting about. I don't think I could pull off ten fics based around teenage characters, since that limits what they can do compared to adults...
>>7843052
Yeah, well... Depression. That, and most CCs feel that way anyway. It's called Content Creator Symdrome for a reason.
>>7843057
I doubt it. Sorry, anon. You're probably the only one still interested in it.
>>7843072
Yes.
I want to see all the ahegao faces.
>>7843024
I would love to but spooderposter isn't around
>>7843025
please it seems like whenever someone posts about how long their fic is getting or something you always pop in with LOOK HOW MUCH I HAVE WRITTEN IN ONLY THREE HOURS I ALREADY HAVE FOUR OTHER FICS DONE TOO
you always seem to be having pissing contests with other authors or stroking your own ego over how much you write
>>7843084
I fail to see how someone reacting to a whole bunch of cakes by making even more cakes is a bad thing.
>>7843084
I said 'more then other writefags', anon!
Of course I'm proud when I finish a fic, or when I'm actively working on one. Once I'm actually done with it, though, and have shilled it enough that I'm certain everyone has seen it who's going to see it, I let it drop.
I can take pride in my work, but I don't drag it on forever and ever like a legitimate attention whore. You don't see my shilling my finished fics all the time, do you?
>>7843076
I know man, depression is a bitch. I can't personally relate, but my best friend has it pretty bad, and I've been helping him through it for years now.
Now I know we're still anonymous here, and in real terns you and I don't know each other from Jesus, but you seem like a good guy, and I and the others know for sure that you've got talent. We just don't want to see you beat yourself up.
>>7843099
Thanks, anon. I'd rather not get into it, though. I don't blogpost about myself.
It's being addressed, I'll leave it at that.
>>7842823
>>7843076
>You're probably the only one still interested in it
Not the only one. But don't force it if it isn't coming naturally.
>>7843082
It is difficult finding the tasty ones (aka without humans, deformed bodies, etc.) but I will try
>>7843082
>>7843101
Fair enough. Just take care of yourself, yeah?
>>7843114
Ah yes, the good ol' "if I don't want it, it means nobody else can".
>>7843102
It's alright Griv, there's plenty of OC's to lewd instead
>>7843122
youre really fucking retarded
I want his fics I just dont want to constantly hear about how many words he has done on an unfinished story because what does that do for me
likewise I dont want a drawfag constantly posting wips of unfinished drawings
this isn't /ic/
>>7843164
Source?
>>7843155
It isn't?
Shit, our community is so rich with artists I had forgotten.
>>7843197
yeah lots of artists here
shame you can count on one hand the ones that are worth anything
Punished Cormo when?
>>7843209
Oh, I see.
You don't have this one CC. You have a stick up your ass for all our CCs.
>>7843209
ouch
scathing
>>7843197
Anon, don't humor this idiot please
>>7843209
Oh shit, is that the real Officer Content?
Heeeeey, how you doing buddy? It's been a while!
>>7843209
I mean, I guess I only have a handful of favorites, but that doesn't mean everyone else is complete trash
>>7843155
>this isn't /ic/
Anon, this is /trash/.
We're every board, except with furries.
>>7842316
A dorm-like setup works, too. Probably the easiest way to visualize it. But I'm basing the designs on canon drawings as much as possible. Might do a dorm version afterwards.
>>7843171
Negative. I haven't really started posting anywhere yet.
>>7843010
I want dis. Plz finish
>>7843282
Unfortunately, I'm writing the remmy/avo one now, because apparently I have ADHD and the other anon reminded me.
>>7843248
Yeah. I understand what you mean.
I also with my imagination try to stay somewhere in the bounds of canon drawings, but let's be honest.
The size difference between the house and the characters would mean Remmy's appartment is the size of a wardrobe.
And why, even if Remmy always says it is just a little bit run down and not the newest, the street looks like it was bombarded and is in middle of civil war, I will never understand.
But maybe the hall could run from the front to the back. with only four appartments on a floor.
Honestly it would be best if Weaver just gave us some quick sketch of the layout and we could do the rest.
Hey guys, how about a WIP? :^]
What does Trash /IC/ think? Would especially like opinions on the head/face.
I thought about writing a Human in Zootopia Story when I finally have time. But I'm not sure if the Plot is too good.
>>7843346
looks pretty good. no immediate or noticable flaws to the non-artist.
>>7843353
be careful. That sort of thing is very, very, very difficult to pull off in a readable way. The very idea is incompatible with zootopia, so a story about it would have to be equally as nonsensical and non-serious.
>>7843346
http://hubpages.com/art/how-to-draw-learn
https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
Try reading drawing with the right side of the brain(betty edwards) and fun with a pencil (andrew loomis)
>>7843353
>Human in Zootopia
It won't be good. Don't waste your creative juice on this, anon.
>>7843353
human in zootopia is garbage
anon in zootopia has potential
we all know those green question-mark-faced bastards are barely human anyway
>>7843353
Make the human feral, like a fox would be in our world
Just treat all apes as animals would be treated in RL
>>7843346
>WIP
dont trigger me m8 this board is a bastion of completed content, not /ic/ reeee
What's been going on in threads lately?
>>7843410
cucking withdrawal
you know what to do
>>7843421
>OhYoureSeriousLetMeLaughEvenHarder.Gif
Don't, then. You *cannot* do a serious human in zootopia fic without it being unreadable trash.
I've been thinking more and more about stuff involving long-time Pack Street parings.
I've got this little writing experiment here about a 'Good End' for Remmy:
http://pastebin.com/fAhjHX2B
Been working on it for several days now. Please take a look and tell me what you think.
>>7843428
Yea that might be for the best. I mean, I saw already some really, ah well not good serious Zootopia Fanfiction that involved Humans Especially if all the time the Human Fan Character is some Tom Clancy Special Agent/Cop
>>7843265
Tell us your name, mysterious artist
>>7843419
Ehh....
>>7843164
>>7843362
PUT YOUR SPUNK
IN THE SKUNK
>>7843346
Not bad, keep at it
>>7843421
Okay, I'm not trying to be insulting here, but really, "Humans in [universe with no humans]" stories are just kind of never good, as a general rule.
It's been done to death in so many other fandoms. 99% of all those stories reek of self-inserting bullshit, and the remaining 1% are either idiotic crossover shit and the occasional goldmine that is just taking a piss out of the very concept in the first place.
But as a general rule, I'd say NEVER assume that you will be good enough to pull this off. It's an extremely unforgiving idea in the first place, most people won't even read your story because of it, and those who do will be looking for any opportunity to hate it.
Nobody will truly give a "human in Zootopia" story a chance. *Especially* if it has your human interacting with the main cast of Zootopia (as opposed to a cast of good OCs).
The only way I can see it work, like I said before, is if it was all a gigantic parody of the concept of "human in X" stories in the first place. But that's not easy to do well
>>7843286
What kind of story is it?
>>7843215
But why though...
>>7843498
It's been a long time coming
>>7843488
I REALLY have to make my mind a bit clear because most of my storys in my head are like that scenario
>"Humans in [universe with no humans]"
And it drives me crazy that I moslty have only storys like that in the Head
>>7842195
Aw yes, love me some swaps.
>>7843481
She's looking back at the openness to role-play and bondage, hah...
>>7843507
I'm mad this actually works
>>7843467
I want to cum on her buckteeth.
>>7842195
That Judy has no neck and an awfully big head.
>>7843507
Damn, three total cuties in need of a hug.
>>7843030
SHOULD NOT WANT
>>7839047
>Hyena Vegan
Is she a spotted hyena? If not then she's a dead Hyena since all the others are strict carnivores and can't digest plant matter
>>7843490
the kind of story where remmy is aroused, mocked, humiliated, and then aroused again.
Is it bad that I find this kind of hot?
>>7843507
>judy and nick the same height
WRONG
>>7843594
That barely looks like Max Midnight, that looks like a dorkish black bunny with a head fluff.
>>7843606
pretty sure what's what max midnight looked like originally, before he went all One Winged Angel on us.
>>7843566
Zootopia was never keen on biology except on hybrids because Judy needs to become a breeding doe.
>>7843593
I can dig it
>>7843612
Nah, Max always had this edgy expression back on the first comics save few shots, he also had pitch black color that dragged all attention toward him and massive scars that made him even more "tuff guy". Tommy Twilight seems way too chill.
>>7843606
Max was originally a generic dark furred bunny boy that needed a good dicking, like all rabbits regardless of gender.
>>7843597
Which picture are you looking at? They aren't the same height, Judy is clearly shorter and Nick is leaning back rather then standing up straight. If he was, yes Judy would still be a little tall for her character, but Nick would still clearly be much taller.
Requesting any and all Martina things.
>>7843597
Pretend Judy is a Flemish giant.
>>7843432
Nice work. Really enjoyed it. But at the start I believe you sometimes misplaced Bathroom and Bedroom.
>>7843644
Judy canonically barely makes it to Nick's armpit in terms of height. Judy's freakishly tall in that pic regardless
>>7843655
>>7843326
i agree that weaver making an official floor plan would benefit the fans greatly, but doing so may limit creative freedom for all.
>>7843691
I'm glad that you liked it!
What's your opinion about the names? I keep fluctuating with 'Johnny' and 'Jerry' for the sheepdog son. Vivian just feels so natural for Al's daughter. Charlie and Marty's son, geez, I really don't know.
Also, yeah, I'd like to expand the opening bit a little, and I'll need to make sure that the two rooms aren't confused.
>>7843696
Good... good...
>>7840922
>Judy watching video of Nick's first time taking the knot
>>7839754
But i thought threads are deleted? how are you viewing them?
>>7840922
>>7843738
>dat twitching tail
>>7839652
So glad judy has such a supportive family
>>7842147
It turns out that nobody actually knows who the landlord is.
>>7843707
Well he could keep it simple.
Here is corridor. There are stairs. There are rooms. No details. Rooms would be just squares...
>>7843655
There's a shitton of pictures -I'll leave that for other anons to dump, since I don't save much of them. (I'd just lose them in my file system.) Here's all the martina-related fics I know:
http://pastebin.com/xikzJWrR
http://pastebin.com/thxPJuZg ,
which has a sequel, http://pastebin.com/u6E8mnd3
http://archiveofourown.org/works/9795260
http://pastebin.com/uSAHK7Wt
http://archiveofourown.org/works/9616475/chapters/21725465
and >>7839407, which is short but good.
There are more, I'm confident, but I can't suss them out at present.
>>7843644
>>7843694
>>7843768
i want to glaze martina sexually
>>7843750
http://www.ztarchive.com/
>>7843655
http://archiveofourown.org/works/9616475/chapters/21725465
>>7843566
Specifically she's vegetarian rather than vegan. Still probably needs the protein boosters though, since Spotted Hyenas are the most carnivorous type.
(She's also a nudist)
>>7843771
THIS
T H I S
H
I
S
>>7843769
>Gideon is a foxlet AND a fatty
Disgusting
>>7843655
From FF, with love.
>>7839407
>>7843768
This 'Just a Joke' piece is really nice.
>>7843783
Its clearly affected her brain, so thats to be expected
>>7843803
damn
more like from ff with lust
>>7843763
Violet has to make sure that the dox fick is safe for her baby sister. If has to get knotted to fully test all bases...well...she will leave to stones unturned.
I kind of want to make a greentext on that now, but I don't know how to without it seeming like cuck.
>>7843716
Well someone suggested Colin for Sheepdog.
I personaly like Victoria for the daughter.
And Oscar sounds good.
And with the rooms-
> "Yes!" He nearly hopped out of the bedroom. "I know that I really have—"
>"Our son!" Betty interjected, letting out a low moan. Remmy froze once again— only having taken two steps into the messy bedroom.
It sounds like he went from bedroom to bedroom.
>>7843812
Remember:
>
Maybe they can do something where after she takes the knot, giving her approval to Judy, she gets her messy pussy licked up clean by Nick while he's going at Judy or something.
>>7843820
>having a kid
>sleeping in seperate bedrooms
preddos are weird
>>7843812
That's because it literally is cucking
>>7843769
>>7843793
I always get amused when people always depict Gideon as bigger than Nick in every way, including height when he is clearly much shorter. Probably comes from them never being on screen together so there is no comparison, but Gideon is just so much closer to Judy's height than Nick's.
>>7843820
Victoria seems maybe too on the formal side.
And, yeah, I'll fix that bit.
Any ideas of other stuff to maybe have for Remmy and his family to do? I'm kind of uncertain, now. I'm tempted to take this short but sweet bit that I have now and put it up on AO3, plus have Comic read it.
>>7843812
Nothing wrong with a little cucking
>>7843694
What material are nick's pants
>>7843847
t.Jack Savage
>>7843852
Polyester?
>>7843847
Jack, pls go
>>7843852
They're like, khakis
>>7843858
>CashmereBLEND?.jpg
>>7843855
>>7843863
Nonsense, you cant post online from a shoe phone
>>7843836
They just need to find a better reference sheet.
>>7843868
>Jack, why do you have a shoe phone if you don't wear shoes?
>It's the ultimate disguise, Sky. Most mammals have never seen a shoe, let alone one that works as a phone too
Ingenious
>>7843877
>posting anti-gid propaganda
Here's the real, unedited picture
>>7843900
gideon, plz go.
>>7843845
Maybe a trip somewhere? Cinema, Theme par...?
The son could go somewhere and we could see Remmy and Betty's interaction after few years.
Also Remmy and son doing some sheep thing could be fun. Something like a soft headbutt fist bump kinda thing.
>>7843900
>>7843922
Going to a theme park sounds pretty interesting. Also, soft headbutt shenanigans... maybe.
Do you think that what's there right now is too short to put up on AO3 as-is?
>>7843900
Fuch you i hate shitty image edits
>>7843927
You alright? The eyes look like as he woould be on some acid trip.
>>7843934
Hell she can't properly satisfy Jack without a fox dick either.
>>7843812
>Judy is a complete virgin, never been with a buck let alone a fox
>Knows foxes are much bigger than rabbits
>Confines in her older sister Violet about her fears
>Violet tries to give advice; take it slow, use lube, be in a comfortable environment like her apartment rather than Nick's
>Judy, in her impulsiveness, asks if Violet will watch over the act
>Surprised and slightly uncomfortable, she agrees if it makes Judy feel better
>Nick is also uncomfortable, but agrees for Judy's sake and is slightly turned on at having her sister watching them
>Nick tries to prepare Judy with some foreplay while Violet holds her hand to reassure her
>Both does stare in near fear when Nick undresses himself, revealing the large fox dick
>Violet turns to Judy to see her reaction, only to find Judy already facing her
>"Why...why don't you go first?"
>>7843082
>>7843954
It's supposed to look shitty.
thatsthejoke.jpg
>>7843954
I hate kids with funny accents
>>7843973
I want to see Remmy make Betty do ahegao face.
Pretty please Mr.Reply?
>>7843980
Take it back
>>7844008
I hate you and your mon to
>>7843973
Heya bro just wanted to say that this pic is amazing. The passionate makeout with just the torsos in frame was hot as hell but then I noticed Judy's pants being down and HNNNNNNNGH
>>7844031
you know that's not nick she's with right
that's max 'handsomest hybrid on earth' midnight
>>7843973
Oh DAMN.
>>7843933
I think it could be a little bit longer. And with the headbutt, I imagined it could be like a "sheep thing" that everyone else finds wierd, like the wolf licking.
>>7843971
Aside from "Judy being scared thing" (because we know she'd probably charge and try to take the dick in one go) not that bad of a idea. Initially there for support, they all slowly get into it. Violet could get hot and bothered by Nick going down on Judy. The taller bun takes it in place of her smaller sister to show it is possible.
>>7843809
Well she's a nerdy out of shape programmer hyena.
Maybe if she had a buggaburger for once she'd make something of herself.
>>7843082
>>7844152
Remember to smooch your bun daily
>>7844224
Remember to smoosh your bun daily
hello this is EK, i have important message for the thread...
BENIS
>>7844180
I wanna pet this cutie colt
Trying to edit this bitch in paint was a struggle
>>7844261
and the perfect opportunity arises
>>7843973
This is fuckin' 10/10
Love how she's biting the hand
Pack Street Apartments: Floor Plan
Remmy said each floor's hallway is the same but the configuration of apartments could be different, e.g. top floor could just be 2 large suites. But I made these under the assumption that each floor is exactly the same. They may not be.
A lot of this is either inferred or guessed. The layout is intentionally vague so this isn't definitive but as far as I can tell complies with all the solid facts we know:
>Avo and Al live on the floor above Remmy
>Marty and Charlie are next door to Remmy
>Twins are right across from Remmy
>Laptop Wolf lives next to the Twins
>Ozzy lives directly underneath Remmy
>>7844286
>she
>>7843971
you continue this, right fucking now
>>7844297
I should add I also made this assuming the MINIMUM amount of apartments WITH each floor having the same number of apartments. We know of 4 sets of residents on Remmy's floor so that means a minimum of 4 apartments on his floor, for 12 apartments total. If the floors are different there could be fewer.
>>7844297
I kinda assumed the point of the apartment was to be intentionally nebulous in layout.
But this is pretty neat too.
>>7844269
Saved.
What was the original?
>>7844333
I assume so too, but since other people were drawing what they imagined I wanted to try to.
>>7844341
Martina is just Martin crossdressing
>>7844152
Yup.
>>7844352
Ah, I missed that part. It's what I get for sleeping and skimming.
>>7844362
this looks like a legitimate canon image to me
>>7844297
You cheeky cunt
>>7844464
What?
>>7844468
If you're not automatically scanning every 2x2 composition for Loss you need to step up.
>>7844341
It's unconfirmed in the story the character is from, it's been teased that it's just one character crossdressing, however it could also just be said character's twin sister.
The thread is hooked on the crossdressing idea, though.
>>7844314
Err, I didn't plan on continuing it, just made a green in response to the anon's question of "how to do this scenario without it being cuck"- you could probably still count it as cuck but eh.
If people really want it, I guess I could actually do a full on greentext. When I get back from the doctors.
>>7844491
thank you, anon
>>7844482
What?
>>7844482
That's not Loss, mate.
>>7844392
Judy is best princess
>>7844591
And now I really would like to see the loss.jpg scene with Pack Street Characters.
>>7844612
there has been a few, mostly with Ozzy.
I don't have them saved, though.
>>7844180
wynn? practicing with... watercolors? interesting
>>7844612
There was one with Ozzie and his mom.
>>7844392
>>7844588
Less of a princess and more of just dressing up for the awards
>>7844344
>>7844612
Anneke runs into hospital finding Remmy who ate her BugBurga slider.
>>7844643
Thanks!
>>7844404
I do love Jack the pred hungry bun but is Judy eating her pillow? That's freaking cute!
Page 10, someone get us a new thread before we all die.
>>7844849
no, accept your death
>>7844849
To rest... if only I could.
>>7844297
Nice. but where does it say that laptop wolf lives next to the twins?
>>7844392
source?
>>7844029
son of a bitch
>>7844891
>Nice. but where does it say that laptop wolf lives next to the twins?
In literally the first mention of him:
>Pushing myself to my hooves, I start to head up the stairs. A short, heavyset wolf exiting the apartment next to the twins' sees me coming.
>>7843776
oh thanks. but why would you go over previous ones? surely anything posted originally will appear again in another? (not done anything on 4chan before)
>>7845263
an archive of previous conversations and events to look back on
>>7844008
Omelette du fromage
>>7844612
yes
>>7845882
Same.