/TLHG/ - The Loud House General
It's Not A Bait Edition
>Booru:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=all
>Fanfics:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=2
>Thread Archive:
http://pastebin.com/h2ZBJ3GS
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>Episodes:
http://pastebin.com/KM6yNJpe
>Extras:
http://pastebin.com/59KNQH3Z
News:
>Season 3 Green-lit for 26 Episodes
http://variety.com/2016/tv/news/nickelodeon-animated-hit-loud-house-1201893212/
>Season 3 Premieres Summer of 2017
http://filmschoolwtf.com/the-loud-house-season-3-release-date/
>The Loud House: "There Will Be Chaos" Available for Pre-order on Amazon
https://www.instagram.com/p/BM1oJEIjo4x/
>The Loud House Available for Free Comic Book Day, May 6th, 2017
https://www.instagram.com/p/BONxApojuAo/
>The Loud House Nominated for GLAAD Awards
http://www.glaad.org/blog/and-28th-annual-glaad-media-awards-nominees-are-glaadawards
>The Loud House Nominated for Kid's Choice Awards
nick.com/kids-choice-awards
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Upcoming Episodes:
The Whole Picture (Tuesday: 2/21)
>Lincoln accidentally erases all of his old childhood photos, so he and Clyde try to recreate them before Lincoln loses his memories.
Lock 'N Loud (Wednesday: 2/22)
>The Loud kids take home security to the next level after getting in trouble for always leaving the front door open
Vantastic Voyage (Thursday: 2/23)
>The Loud kids are sick of their family van always falling apart, so they decide to try and trick their parents into buying a new one
Making the Grade (Friday: 2/24)
>When Lisa gets put into Lincoln and Clyde's fifth-grade class, Lincoln's social standing is at stake
Cheater by the Dozen
>Lincoln and Clyde think Lori is being cheated on, so they start an investigation
Patching Things Up
>Lana and Lola try out for Bluebell Scouts, but they soon discover that one of them may be more suited for it than the other
>hugs his pillow
DORK
>>7724438
FROM WHERE DID YOU GET THIS MANG? TUMBLR?
So, how do we make this general great and fun again?
>>7724546
>The general was good meme
>>7724438
Jesus that jew nose.
>>7724546
the first step? leave
second step, fuck off
third and final, lynn is shit
>>7724546
It already is great and fun, faggot.
>>7724573
You are right, post Lynn
>>7724608
>lynnfags are retards that can't read
just like Lynn, wow
Man, I feel sad today
>>7724608
>>7724640
What's happening anon
>tfw when Loud Crew confirms ships
http://theloudhouse.tumblr.com/post/157238854429/happy-valentines-day-loud-crowd
I don't see any loudcest there, what now fags?
>>7724640
jump off a bridge, it'll wash your problems away
>>7724640
Be happy then. Do something that improves your emotion like playing videogames, watch shows, whatever makes you happy as long as it isn't fucked up.
Stop being sad. It will just fuck you up deeper.
>>7724667
It's just one of those days that I remember how much I fucked up my life
ANON - Update and New Chapters List (MO4444R!)
>http://pastebin.com/DMPFQ29u
HIGHLIGHTED FIC OF THE DAY
>>Good Things Come In Threes <<
Author: RedditAnon/Joseph
WIP – http://pastebin.com/LL6XqMnC
Last Update: 16-12-2016
>Christina gets a change of heart about Lincoln but Ronnie Anne already has her eyes on him.
NEWS & Q/A
>With this update, leni and the jetts is finished. New stuff on line 1681
>Thanks for sticking with it for those who did, and I hope you like it!
http://pastebin.com/m70XN3hT
Leni and the Jetts
themaninthecouch
>updated
>new shit on line 91
http://pastebin.com/dHM42Hqr
Not out of love, but of control (wip) (NSFW)
hypnobob
>Last lines are at 796.
http://pastebin.com/HGuUTV0U
GangLouds, Chapter 2: Loud-mouthed punks
Lauvernie
>Hey guys, I'm here to post 3 fics I did, just in time for Valentine's Day!
>I hope you guys like them, and thanks for reading if you do!
http://pastebin.com/HNX9DXxv
The Bathroom Stall Secret (POLLY LEWD)
http://pastebin.com/xyvPjgCx
Whori the Choco-holic (LORI LEWD)
http://pastebin.com/weHb8U3p
Lana's Perfect Valentine
AlchyHolic
>Happy valentine's day!
http://pastebin.com/CsiTeSAJ
http://pastebin.com/LHUDXGap
Valentine's Victim
a guest
>NL 205
http://pastebin.com/4Z2MH5bh
Livewire (WIP)
truebleu
>...idk what to call this fic yet
http://pastebin.com/VHj5xRQA
Untitled
FumaFam101/Sir Page
>it's an easy, simple fic
http://pastebin.com/QB3xQ7ft
The Ingredient of Love
a guest
>Bleh. This whole thing left a bad taste in my mouth.
http://pastebin.com/uNvnSJCe
Trans Lucy is a horrible meme
wheatgrass
>Hey /tlhg/, have this dumb, melodramatic thing I wrote.
http://pastebin.com/2c48Lp4b
Punctuation
Emmay
>>7724733
suck my cock dude
ded
>>7724733
Fuck pedos off
>>7724766
Just like my relationship with my dad
>>7724768
Dude suck my cock
D E D
E
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It's Black History Month everyone! Post Clyde.
>actually reading the comment section on the booru
haha what the fuck is wrong with Lynnfags in general? are they insane?
d
>>7724438
>He can smell when Rita is ready
Lynn Sr. Is quite the pussy hound.
e
>>7724847
4
c
>>7724841
>>7724868
What the hell is that?
>>7724846
They have to be wrong in the head to like a cunt like Lynn in the first place
>>7724887
President Funny Valentine's Stand.
Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap, or D4C for short.
>post Clyde
>this is the only one I have saved
ok
>>7724846
>DF and Hot-Dog are both Lynnfags
UHM REALLY MAKES YOU THINK HUH?
>>7724913
>>7724919
>No aftermath
>>7724841
love and understanding, familia!
>>7724935
JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Steel Ball Run.
The main antagonist's power that lets him travel to parallel dimensions.
>araki sez he doesn't want to make super godly stands
>is the first thing he does
ONE JOB YOU STUPID FUCK.
hello
>>7725007
I love you
>>7724954
This part has my favorite JoJo but my second least favorite antagonist.
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2443
>>7725019
You do? But you don't know me anon
>>7725033
You think?
>>7725025
Like Clyde could fit anything but a baby carrot in those tight, dick strangling pants he's always strutting around in.
Any fanart of her in this outfit?
I need it for science.
>>7725024
>This part has my favorite JoJo
You my friend have the best taste.
>>7725020
nah :^)
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2254
>>7725051
Do you?
>>7725062
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=alternate_outfit+Leni_loud
delivery from last thread,
doing more requests
>>7725084
>Just one pic
at least it's drawn well,
If any draw fag is out there please do me a solid.
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2951
>>7725070
>cuckshit
Jesus Christ, why do you fucks have to ruin otherwise totally innocuous interracial porn with this shit?
>>7725150
hey man you're only one who's mad here. chillax
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2270
>>7725141
Can you do Luna on a motorcycle?
>>7725174
So, Lynn is going to keep Lincoln's baby
It's a shame Lacy content dried up
>>7725141
Nice, This with Lucy please
>>7725150
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2323
SIENTO QUE ARRANCO LA CARRETERA
VOY ENFERRADO POR LA COSTERA
MI TROCA CASI SE ME DESPARPAJA
PERO PURA MADRE SE ME RAJA
LLEVO UN FLETAZO PARA EL OTRO LADO
Y VOY A GANARME BUENA MARMACA
>>7725192
Why is he so perfect?
>>7725192
No la kcho
>>>7725186
what is the little animu girl sayin?
>>7725192
calmese compa que lo va a escuchar el Trump
>>7725204
he's a male character in a harem cartoon?
man, what the fuck? you need some Bose in your life
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tt_orX1N6no
I do admit that the true patrician mexican music are the really old ones
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1805
>>7725204
The perfect bro for a perfect shoto.
>>7725264
I wish my sister's boyfriend looked at me like that
>That episode where Lincoln worked for El Burro.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dI8g6N4zRZQ
>>7725264
why does Dipper always fucks up Linc's head?
this dude gets better results and his shit is not posted enough in the thread.
>>>7725058
He does a good tuck job I guess
>>7725311
I think you are retarded
Is this a loud house thread or the chimp and spic thread? Ooga boogas and Juans need to leave.
>>7725346
Why don't you leave? You're the one complaining.
>>7725346
shut up, Moon-an and play the damn song
>>7725324
Every morning, Clyde fucks his own ass as he desperately squeezes into the tight pants his parents insist on buying him.
>>7725346
relax dude, it's a liberal wonderland here.
>>7725355
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H3iQeUT_1bQ
>>7725355
Nigger you need to get the fuck out and leave the white man alone. We're tired of you and your smelly feet. Get your free gibs at nigger island
>>7725401
What are you even saying?
>>7725367
Skinny jeans were a mistake.
>>7724919
Fic of Clyde raping Lincoln when? He got a mental breakdown maybe?
did we self-destruct? it got quiet
>>7724868
I should have figured. I guess that explains why there are so many Jordans around Royal Woods.
>>7725532
Today I barely posted because I didn't know what to say most of the time.
>>7725532
It's past most of the posters bed time. Now we sit in comfortable silence.
>>7725532
It's 4 AM here
>>7725560
whiteland?
>>7725560
OH BOY 4AM
>>7725548
If Jordan isn't the one with D4C and bringing the copies in, then let's hope that the Jordans never meet. Things would get pretty messy.
>>7725572
Chile
>>7725532
No buttfucking in sight
>>7720484
>how well hung are our black CCs?
>>7725576
ok. it's 1 my time.
>>7725582
kek
>>7725551
Geez Linc, you're always cumming at me loaded.
>>7725582
Why are you still up young lady?
While those anons sleep. Let's post some unf worthy loud nudes.
>>7725582
Bless you.
>>7725659
Krunkle this you homo
Friendly reminder
>>7725711
I know it's a cartoon, but that dicks looks fucked up because of how curvy it tis.
>>7725711
This one came out very well
>>7725825
At least it's not bent.
>>7725186
>>7725830
Hot.
>>7725835
What's wrong with a bent duck?
>It's a worst sister episode
>>7725893
this is cute.
>>7725931
Calling it now, Lisa is gonna somehow become even worse than she is now in this episode.
>>7725924
I want to open Bob's safe and read the medical report of how he bent it.
I bet it was barb.
>>7725931
aren't they all worst sister episodes?
>>7725575
Jordan's Bizzare Adventure when?
>>7725931
Why is she wearing a dead money bomb collar?
>>7725972
that's how she'll die in that ep.
>>7725972
She's learning the let go
>>7725970
What if all the Jordan's in Royal Woods are decedents and they each have their own adventures?
>>7725963
Yes
>>7726006
I love Lola
>>7725992
>it's a running man parody
>>7726006
Im glad I spent valentines fapping to her
>>7725962
>Tfw you masturbate for the first time and bend your dick with a towel violently
>bombs used to be monday through friday
>became monday through thursday for the longest
>the one next week is tuesday through friday
but y tho
>>7726073
The scariest part about that safe is it had Bob's gun(s) in it. If Chris finds the combo I wouldn't want to be anywhere near a GameStop.
>it's a modern technology episode
>>7726115
I cant believe Clyde took that photo with his penis
Good night /tlhg/!
>>7726115
Cute.
>>7725993
God. That DLC was the tits
>>7726129
Goodnight
>>7726128
>he doesn't take pictures with his prehensile penis
How new r u?
>>7726128
The weirdest part is its uncircumcised.
>>7726158
Sorry meng I've only been here for 3 years, I know some of you old fags go back decades
>>7726106
Wait Bob had guns?
>>7726004
Jordan's extended family goes from a small town in America and stretches as far as Russia. Each subsequent Jordan tries to live a normal life, but eventually finds themselves embarking on a life or death adventure as their bloodline dictates.
>inb4 the Louds are the Speedwagon equivalent to this Jordan
>>7726225
Yep, if they have got that safe open I'd imagine Barb has pawned them already. If not it's basically a time bomb waiting until he inherits them.
>>7726227
Maybe the Louds could be like the equivalent of Zeppelis or something?
>>7725582
>Lola's still waiting on those black CC dick pics
I KEEP GIVING BAD PEOPLE GOOD IDEAS
>>7726375
she'll get white anon dick pics and like it
>>7726405
I keep giving myself bad ideas.
>>7726375
I'd show her my dick but I'm too shy. Plus I don't want a picture of my dick on the internet.
>>7726427
I keep all the good ideas to myself unless people join my Accordian group.
>>7726317
BUT THEY ALL DIE
>>7726457
there's like a billion and a half dick pics online, how would you know it was your dick?
>>7726553
What the? How could I ever confuse my dick for someone elses?
>>7726543
Sacrifices have to be made. Or it can be like Diamond Is Unbreakable where none of the main cast die. Except for Shigechi, so just replace him with a character who is expendable.
>>7725582
Sorry, forgot the frills.
>>7726571
If I post mine for Lola will you post yours for Lola?
>>7726599
Sorry buddy, I'm just not brave enough.
>>7726578
I just don't like the idea of any of them dieing. Thought I do like the heroic death, it would still be a damn sad moment.
>"Lincoln. My father gave me the name Lincoln Loud."
>"Do you know what a bug bite fetish is?"
>>7726645
we need more lincoln jolyne art
>>7726597
I know you have a pixiv. Share it so that I may finally be able to see your Lola stuff
guess who's drunk?
>>7726645
It's sad the guy doing this stopped midway through. It would have been awesome to see a Kira Lola and a Josefumi Lana.
>>7726687
Fair enough, tried to convince ya, you said no, I don't
wanna veer into forcing you or nothing.
>>7726687
QUIT BEING A FAGGOT AND SHOW US YOUR DICK NOW
>>7726694
Yeah I can see where you're coming from when it comes to not wanting them to die. But like you said, heroic deaths have such an impact.
>Jordan, I leave the rest to you.
>>7726733
Guess who's getting a beating?
>>7726780
You wanna see mine?
>>7726750
you think Josefumi is Joesph's illegitimate son?
>>7726785
>3am
>in a thread on life support
sure. why not?
Nice JoJo spoilers, cunts
>>7726812
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nCKxp2yMa2c
Luna seems to be a common name for abuse victims
>>7725931
>>7726006
these better have heartfelt resolutions and teach a lesson in family values
>>7726822
Cute
>>7726822
God why
>>7726837
Glad you think so, Anon.
Thanks.
>>7726822
oh jeez I'm sorry
manscape that shit and it might look bigger
>>7726822
Well, you did deliver you pasty white motherfuck, have a meme
>>7726820
>not being caught up
>showfags
>>7726837
>>7726822
>>7726837
>>7726853
Make a discord or something and be faggots in there. Stop bringing this shit here. No one wants to see this fucking degeneracy that has nothing to with anything.
>>7726822
You got guts kid. But now you made me feel bad.
>>7726908
Why?
>>7726906
I'll agree with you that this has nothing to do with the Loud House and should be taken somewhere else. However, you are kidding yourself if you think no one wants to see this stuff. Didja miss the last thread? 80% of it was talking and dicks and boy pussy.
>>7726822
I feel like I should post a dick, but I don't have any dick pics kept since my old phone died.
but I do have some saucy stuff like this
>>7726822
and this
>>7726911
That someone of your size can be so hold. Not a care in the world. Guess size really doesn't matter.
>>7726945
Dude if you feel uncomfortable don't do it!--
>>7726954
That's a nice ass.
>>7726961
I just have a fetish for people seeing my dick.
I appreciate the sentiment, anon.
>>7726962
I would, but dammit if chocolate milkshakes aren't tasty
>>7726969
after what? my last meal?
>>7726973
I'm not uncomfortable, I'm drunk.
>>7726975
IS THAT YOU POSTING DICKS AT 4AM? WHATTAYA DOING DON'T YOU HAVE A COLLEGE REPORT EXAM TOMORROW!
>>7727005
I.. Alchy?
>>7724438
>Mating season in the loud house
>Lynn Sr. doesn't immediately wake up, hoping to continue his dream.
>A futile endeavor, he knows it never works, but if he stopped trying maybe he'd miss the one time it would work.
>His thoughts on pursuing the ever elusive happiness get cut short by an exceptionally sweet fragrance.
>Lynn's nose twitches, as if by reflex.
>'The knows knows' he jokingly submitted, trying to make light of the situation.
>He steels himself, mentally reeling from what he was about unwillingly take part in.
>That was mostly not a lie, but in recent years his only son, the one with the white hair, has been aiding him in relieving the perhaps most mentally and physically taxing day of the year.
>The White Haired Life Saver, a nickname Lynn ceremoniously dubbed his son, was proving more and more to almost be literally that.
>He wasn't sure how many more years of this he could handle, he wasn't getting any younger.
>Lynn slowly breathes in, gathers his previously diminishing strength and performs the first herculean task of the day.
>He gets up.
>>7727015
I wish. I don't have Alchy's skills. I'm a different drunk
>>7726820
The best thing about jojo is that even if I were to post spoilers things make sense in and ONLY in context. Trust me when I say you've got nothing to worry about.
>>7727025
Still, hot cock, dude.
>>7727044
no problem, matey. just doing fun shit I'll regret later
>>7727074
You sound a lot like me in terms of regret.
Holy shit I just rubbed my eyes and they burn like alcohol was poured on them when they were closed.
Why so drunk, dude?
>>7727098
tonight's my friday and my folks are going out of town tomorrow so I have the house to myself for a day and a half
don't talk to me or my son ever again...
>>7727201
Since when did Leni have a kid?!
>>7727214
since you stopped caring about lily
>>7727129
Home alone, I get it.
>>7727021
Continue?
>>7727201
I want to make a caramel coloured baby with Leni
>>7727231
yeah
>>7727238
pls don't. she won't be able to see the kid with her sunglasses
>>7727201
lol
*upvotes*
>>7727244
You seem not to keen on it?
>>7727257
you're a reason why cancer is contagious
>>7727259
oh no, I'm keen, it's just hiding my drinking is a hard thing to do
>>7727270
Here's hoping you get drunk enough to post more penis.
>>7727256
I want Leni to sing mulatto butts to her infant.
https://youtu.be/pbquDj3mkGc
>>7727021
thanks anon but I'm not a writer, that's all I could muster
>>7727289
ok
>>7727289
>>7727262
*upvotes*
>>7727360
>fat dude in woman's underwear posting pictures of his junk in a cartoon thread
Are you Chris-Chan?
>>7727366
*thumbs down*
>>7727425
*swipes right*
>>7727409
what was your first guess, niggerfaggot
>>7727517
so is Lupa the hot new meme OC thats actually old as shit?
>>7727533
yes. but now she's popular again. make sure she fucks everyone
We posting nudes?
Guess which CC I am!
>>7727569
SB? Ultra? some other faggot?
>>7727569
I'm not even posting nudes. I was posting Lewds. there's a difference, dick face.
>>7727622
I mistook one of your numerous stretch marks as nudity.
>>7727569
>Filename
You're Nigger.
>>7727630
chubby porn is a lucrative market, after octopus porn and Amish tits
remember when this thread wasn't dead
>>7727707
in the loud house
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i6MpT7lLwls
>>7727533
If this leads to fappable R34 content I'm not complaining
>>7727724
What does it mean?
>>7727732
we're all garbage for watching a show for kids?
Good morning!
post saucy or sexy, pls
I need some sexy
>>7727777
(You)
>>7727777
good morning
Good morning everyone
>>7727777
>>7727831
>Morning
Good noght
Nice quads btw
>>7727778
Take this
>>7725024
Really I love the villain in steel ball run and johnny is ok but honestly I liked her bro jo more than him.
>>7727979
This picture makes me want to punch Lynn in the stomach.
I want to tease her with an hour long foreplay by rubbing all her erogenous zones with my hands, tongue and dick and then fill her up with my cream
>>7728055
I just want to eat her pie.
>>7728020
Makes me want to shoot a load inside her stomach fedge.
Lisa!
>>7727724
That stupid fucking earworm is the reason I watch this show.
Something I wanted to start sooner, but couldn't do it.
>http://pastebin.com/v2tmzvFV
Tell me about grammatical mistakes or errors you find, or how you'll improve it if you decide to read it.
Have a nice day.
>>7728165
How do you feel about the credits song and the Christmas jingle?
>>7728294
Credits song is stupendous. Haven't seen the Christmas episode yet.
You faggots wanna get intrested in reading?
https://books.google.com/books?id=4uw1umONgB8C&pg=PT9&dq=a+brother%27s+price&source=gbs_toc_r&cad=3#v=onepage&q&f=true
A brother's price,
>In a world where male children are rare, a man is a valuable commodity—to be sold to the highest bidder…
>It isn’t easy being the oldest boy in a house run by women—especially for Jerin Whistler. The grand-matriarchs of his clan are descended from soldiers, spies, and thieves. That’s partly what’s kept their family alive in the wilderness. But it also means Jerin’s doomed to marry the girls next door—a fate he’s convinced is worse than death. But Jerin gets in even worse trouble when, in the process of a daring rescue, he falls in love with a royal princess who’s as high above his station as it’s possible to be.
Discuss, I was thinking of a fic along these lines with Lincoln and Carol, with QTs sprinkled in
>>7725346
The Lenipedros are getting desperate.
>>7728213
>Line 130
asume
>Line 161
"Acting as if no one else has problems of their own." would be better.
Other than that, and possibly more that i didn't see, I loved the portrayals of the characters, good job
>>7728313
Spoilers here's the Christmas song
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Lo0sEYw0L6Q
>>7728504
Warmed my cold pallid heart.
>>7728532
Now this is a whole other level of incest.
I love the Christmas song. It's very catchy.
ded
>"Hey Lincoln, you got a minute?"
>"...uh, sure. Yeah."
>Luna started to walk away, and Lincoln needed a moment before getting the clue to follow her up to her bedroom.
>"Have a seat. Anywhere."
>By now, he no longer felt clueless, he picked up on a certain vibe. The beanbag would be too difficult to leap from in case things went south, so he chose to sit on Luan's bed.
>Luna carefully positioned herself before she free fell the last few inches and bounced her brother, her thigh spreading far enough to press against his leg.
>"So, dude, I'm gonna ask you a question that I think I already know the answer to, but I want to be nice and have you give your answer before I point my finger at you for anything, you cool with that?"
>Lincoln could already feel his head beginning to warm up. "Yeah, yeah. Right."
>Luna looked him straight in the eye and gently squeezed his hand.
>"You've been havin all kinds of erections lately, dude, plain and simple." She watched his eyes widen and his jaw drop. "And I feel like it's happening around me the most. Is it because of me?"
>Lincoln clenched his teeth, more than a little upset at this point, and having been thoroughly embarrassed. "Why would you even ask that? What, you thought if you did, it would just stop happening? That's not how it works!"
>"Whoa whoa whoa! Chill, man!" Luna brought her hands to herself, scrambling to keep the mood mellow. "I'm actually pretty stoked that you're big on me like that!"
>Lincoln's shoulders loosened, and he let off a long sigh, still shaken. "Still, why?"
>"I was just curious, dude. And, not to pile it on, but... from my point of view, this only started happening like six weeks ago, when you saw me slam that entire pizza down-"
>"That was over something else." Lincoln tightened his hands into fists, but just for a moment.
>"Oh come on, dude! Over what? Lisa combinin' that science stuff? Don't deny it, bro, seriously. I wanna do you a solid."
>"...how?"
>Just a sec, I'll be right back!"
I'm strictly against drawing off model
Lincoln with a bean head or an anime chin just triggers me so fucking much.
>>7728335
so like a skeevy romance novel parody where the sisters are trying to sell off lincoln and keep him from getting gotten by low level qts? i can dig
that sort of thing with the dominance between men and women being skewed reminds me of this doujin:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/831979/2f024c556a/
where a guy finds himself in a world where women are complete horndogs and men are chaste, so he whores himself out wholesale to make money.
>>7728213
Not bad, overall, as far as the story goes.
You should try to avoid combining dialogue with long narrative in the same line like
>"Character says something" [insert long narrating paragraph right after]
This works when you just have a small description of what the characters are doing or what's happening while they say something
Put the narrative on the next line of paragraph.
>"Character says something"
>[Narrative]
This makes the dialogue easier to read.
There are some typos but quite a bit of grammar mistakes. At line 161 it should be "Acting as if no one else had any problems" and, while not a grammar mistake, I think that "fucking" is a bit too much there even if she's angry.
There are more starting with 173. "Hurted" should be "hurt" and "It hurted him that not deep down", that "not" shouldn't be there.
"who succumbed" should be "to succumb" and "shutted off" should be "turned off".
There may be more but too much to just post here. You need to work on your tenses and give it a reread yourself.
Why did the blackedposting stop?
>Ooh, I'm such a bitch haha
>>7728771
They got deported.
>7728771
Because people can only shitpost for so long
>>7728776
Fuck it. If you can find a way to enjoy golf you might as well.
>>7728782
>he gets his friends to act like his sisters to recreate the photos instead of the girls themselves
>>7728804
>>7728782
Puberty was not kind to lucy
>>7728795
>lusting after her father now
Will she ever stop?
>>7728833
>>7728817
>Lynn Sr will never be your father
>>7728661
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ICkWjdQuK7Q
>Lincoln couldn't help but stand, anticipating her to do something crazy. Sure enough, within a moment she emerged from the closet, and in his panic, assumed she was naked.
>"Check it out, bro! An itsy-bitsy-teeny-weeny-yellow-polka-dot-bikini! You know that song, right?"
>Lincoln fought so hard not to look down, but Luna's eyes were too big and inviting to be comfortable to look at. Eventually, his eyes went down, just in time to see her big poochy belly turn away to reveal her big bubble butt, and back again to her paunch.
>"Uh-ohhhh, somebody's gettin excited~! That's nothin'! Check THIS out!"
>Lincoln felt his knees start to tremble when she pulled out an entire pizza, still pretty warm. He THOUGHT the room smelled different.
>"Pleeeeease stay, Lincoln?" Luna slowly swayed her figure. "We're not gonna get caught, everyone else is out right now! It'll be fun!"
>Slowly, but surely, Lincoln made his way over to the beanbag and sat, his dick now angrily fighting against his jeans. "O-okay..."
>Luna licked her lips before fiercely tearing into the first two slices of pizza she stacked together, her moans exaggerated from her efforts. The next two slices were gone even quicker, until she finally murdered the last half of the pizza by picking it up and folding it in half before taking bites as large as she could manage.
>She reveled in watching her cute little brother try to hide his enormous bulge. And how something like eating could help crank up the intensity. And how he liked HER body the most, despite her two older sisters being much more svelte.
>After another five minutes, Luna gasped for air after swallowing the last chunk of pizza. She let out a belch, and her brother's response was immediate. She saw his crotch throb and heard him let out an involuntary grunt. Despite her stomach being painfully tight, she trotted back over to the closet and broke out a two-liter of pop.
>"Hey, help me wash this down!"
>>7728840
>Lincoln reads the booru's comment section
>>7728666
wew than you must hate me satan, and thats fine
>>7728804
>>7728808
I'm in love with Rita's spinning top bodytype.
>>7728817
>loved by a thicc wife and 11 beautiful kids
Living the dream
>>7728817
Margo comes back!
I can't wait for these new episodes.
What if Lynn raised her leg and the marked you as part of her territory?
>>7728782
>potential to have some wonderful brother-sister moments as they want to recreate some memories
>he does it with his retarded friends instead
FUCK THIS
FUCK YOU
SULLIVAN DID YOU WRITE THIS
>>7728817
>Bobby's sporty lolis squad
hnng
>>7728916
I hope that legitimately bothers you, cause I love when they use the friends.
>>7728916
Hey, dummy. He has to hide the fact that he ruined the photo from his family. Them not knowing is a big part of it.
>>7728790
what is he recreating? one of Lynn and Rita's SM sessions?
>>7728925
>I love when they use some ugly ass characters nobody cares about instead of the cute sisters
You might as well brag about eating shit
>>7728934
They'll sure love it when they see the pictures and they see some other kids dressed as them won't they?
Yeah only Sullivan can write something this retarded
>>7728782
>lincoln's friends in dresses
Woof
>>7725711
more like the lewd house
>>7728949
>THIS JUST IN! 11year old boy in a cartoon does something retarded.
Nice work genius you cracked the code.
Cartoons are silly. Who'd thunk it?
>>7728865
>Luna sashayed over to the beanbag, squaring her hips over his legs. "Let me just get comfortable... HERE." Before Lincoln could protest, Luna sat her big ass right on her brother to pin him down. He just froze when she pulled off his shirt before she handed him the giant bottle.
>"Luna, I-" was all he could say before she shushed him.
>"We'll get out all the lovey-dovey stuff later, for now, let's just roll with it, okay, dude?"
>Lincoln slowly nodded, entranced by her hooded eyes.
>"Just pour this whole sucker down my throat. And feel free to let those hands run anywhere they need to to help me get it all in me, you got it? Okay, let's DO this!"
>The bottle hissed, and Luna began deep-throating the opening, gulping as noisily as she could to keep her brother's dick twitching against her swelling stomach, now taut from the pressure of having to hold what normally would have been less than a fifth of what she usually ate.
>She tried to be cool about it, but even she couldn't take down a drink that big in one swig. She tapped Lincoln's hand, and he relented, the bottle popped out from her lips.
>Lincoln's hands went right for her tummy, his hands clawing into her velvety flesh. She leaned her chest into his chin before revealing her neck to blast a belch that shook the dust off the ceiling.
>She felt his dick twitching even faster than before, and she hurried to unzip his pants and expose his boyhood in time for him to unload.
>They wrapped their arms around each other and tensed as Lincoln let out spurt after spurt all over his sister's underbelly, which was being propped up by the head of his penis. How he managed to do that, she couldn't even begin to know. But she loved it.
>Now sweaty and sticky, she collapsed on him and dragged her gut across his ribs to force her tongue in his mouth. He was unconscious, but she didn't care, she was still riding out the last of her own wave of pleasure.
>"Thanks for the awesome time, you little pervert."
>>7728940
fuck you, asshole. Rusty is /ourboy/
where the FUCK are those gifs coming from?
>>7729000
Instagram maybe?
>>7729000
Poland
>>7729000
Source on the booru, gifs used for promotions and such.
>>7728985
This is just beyond retarded, though.
>>7727777
TLHG BTFO
>>7728782
Pic of those shotas in sisters clothing getting buttfuck when?
>>7729111
trips don't lie
can I at least get a get?
>>7729091
Have you not familiarized yourself with Lincoln, by now?
Protip: He isn't a womanizing lady-killer that everybody wants to fuck, he's a dumb kid that occasionally knows the right thing to do, but more often doesn't even do that.
>>7729070
A sultry Luan is a sexy Luan
>>7729136
Which Lincoln?
Sullivan's Lincoln or the Lincoln showed in most other episodes and 2 most recent ones, Baby Steps and Back in Black?
>>7729136
No you FOOL! Lincoln is a God among men! How can you not tell? Oh, I get it you actually watch the show, don't you?
>>7728916
>>7728949
>>7729180
>muh sullivan
>>7728817
Hol up, where's Polly?
>>7729265
Sullivan's working on the van episode? That's...odd.
>>7729292
Kicked out of the team
Got too close to Lincoln
>>7729265
which episode is everyone looking forward to?
mines lock n loud
>>7729335
All of them
>>7729335
The final episode.
>>7729335
Whole Picutre might be fun, but Lock n Loud should be really good.
>>7728795
>>7727021
>>7727236
>But this year was going to be different in more ways than one.
>A telltale sign of this fact already manifesting below the covers.
>After dreading the day's highly questionable, but ultimately necessary, activities not moments ago, Lynn finds himself quickly filled with with an uncharacteristically renewed vigor despite such a brief night's respite.
>His bloodshot eyes dissipated in mere seconds and a rush of blood coursed through his body, preparing him for what needed to be done.
>He turned a glance to his partner's bedside, finding nothing but a mess of the cold covers hastily thrown off to the side, a glistening trail leading out the bedroom door.
>"Looks like someone wanted a head start." he chuckled, his mood completely lifted.
>"I could use some of that head myself right now, get it?" he mused to himself as he glanced down to his three legs.
>"...Now hold on a just hot minute."
>This wasn't what he was normally used to, he might have been of respectable measurements, but he was pretty sure that he wasn't a literal pun in that regard.
>The delectably delicious scent once again filled his nostrils and he turned towards the scent.
>He had missed it the first time, but there was someone administering puffs of pink sweetness throughout the sunlit room from a heart shaped, bejeweled container.
>Someone of unexpectedly short stature.
>"I shee my formula worksh," the girl spoke with a hot breath and a rare, sugary timbre. "...remarkably well." she punctuated.
>Lynn gulped, normally the girls would be about Lucy's age before they became part of the unspeakable chaos.
>'Looks like Rita wasn't the only one getting a head start today.'
>>7728804
God, I want to bury my face, while Rita wears that dress
>>7725893
Nice, thanks
>>7729070
be still, my bonum
>>7729409
I knew you could do it, young man.
hey, cuck meme here, would love to take your requests
What is Lily grew up to have a lot of anxieties and often clung to Lincoln for support?
>>7729538
Lynn sucking off Clyde in front of Lincoln
>>7728532
this kind the incest is okay I guess
>>7729538
Lincoln asking Lynn about how to please a young girl, then Lynn finding out he's fucking baby Lily.
>>7729545
Simple, she would have to marry him
>>7729538
Lincoln having "locker room talk" about all the depraved sexual acts he had with Ronnie last night, and Lynn listens on with envy. It's up to you, but I would prefer if you actually got into the specifics of what exactly those actions were.
>>7729265
>sullivan
death
>miguel puga
hells yes
when will savino write an episode again?
>>7729561
>it's an "I promised to marry you when you were five and you never forgot" episode
This trope needs to be used more in American cartoons.
NTW
Next Thread: >>7729626
>>7728733
Thanks for your help.
I reread it, but many things get past me.
>>7729545
>"Boy, those kids sure look like they're having fun..."
>"You'd have fun to if you let go of my leg and joined them, Lily."
>"What?! What if they play too rough?! They don't know me like you do, Linc! Can you come with me?"
>"You're getting too old for this..."
>Lily just looks up with sparkly eyes. Lincoln relents, as he often does, and gets weird looks from the parents as he plays with his sister on the jungle gym
>>7729551
lincoln learned a valuable lesson that day, that clynn is shit
>>7729745
>Lynn will never viciously blow you in front of her brother
I wish I was a bull.
>>7729745
>Lincoln shrugs and walks off, not giving a shit
>Lynn realizes that her plan failed
What next?
>>7729830
She fucks Rusty.
>>7729836
>Lynn tries to fuck Rusty next
>Lucy gets pissed off and picks a fight with her
>Lincoln still doesn't give a shit
And then?
>>7729858
Liam
>>7729869
She's really trying to trigger him, isn't she?
>>7729878
She just doesn't get it.
>>7729858
Wait, why would Lucy get mad?
>>7729883
>Lynn tries to fuck every male in Royal Woods and ends up ruining her reputation in the long run
>Lincoln still doesn't give a shit
>>7729892
Didn't she have a thing for him or something in 'Back In Black'?
>>7729780
>ywn bull for Lynncoln, but flip the script halfway through
>you suddenly sieze Lynns hair and call her a heartless bitch, wrenching her head around and spitting in her face as you continue to pound her
>you tell her that she sickens you for wanting to hurt her brother like this, putting him through the anguish and humiliation of having to watch her fuck another man
>you make her look at his tear-streaked face, telling her that he'll probably leave her over this, and all her family will hate her for breaking his heart. The only way to save her relationship with the man she supposedly loves would be if she's willing to endure the same, get cucked by him
>the fucking has become rough and violent, you only care about your own pleasure: Lynn isn't a person anymore, just a meat sleeve to be abused and thrown away
>she doesn't have the strength to resist, sobbing in pain and shame, realizing what she's done and accepting your abuse as the first phase of her punishment
Suicide sounds good occasionally.
>>7729916
That was his brother, Rocky
>>7729916
You're thinking of Rusty's brother, Rocky.
>>7729657
>Lily's first day of preschool
>Lincoln drops here off because she demands she wouldn't go otherwise
>They get to the entrance of the class, Lincoln holding her hand the whole time
>She hides behind his legs when she's introduced to the teacher
>The two adults give a knowing look to each other
>"So Lily, does that sound good to you? Playing for the other kids and your new teacher?"
>She merely shakes her head
>Lincoln whispers to her "Trust me, Lily. You'll be fine here. I would never leave you somewhere I didn't think was safe."
>"...O-okay, Linc."
>Then she gets picked up by Lincoln four hours later only to hear she just sat alone in the corner the entire time
>>7729926
Look I just wanted a beej from a confused woman. I didn't sign up for this
>>7729830
Lynn realizes she's stuck in a relationship with a guy she doesn't love because the one she actually does just proved he doesn't feel the same way about her
>>7728335
>qts
Ruined
ded
>>7729576
>>7729605
lincoln went the whole 12 rounds
>>7730118
Fantastic. I love you.
>>7728936
I love this, only thing that would make it better is a follow up of Lincoln and or any of the siblings writing in these requests.
>>7730118
You can really tell his only friend is black
>>7730264
What makes you say that?
>>7730282
>you want sum fuk
>the bitch
>I ain't
>bust a nut
All ebonics
>>7730313
I live in the south and I can tell you that
"the bitch"
"I ain't"
"bust a nut"
are things I heard every day by whites and I've never heard anyone say "want sum fuk" unironically