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Thematic Thursdays Theme: Valentine's Day
Submissions Due: Feb 16
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War never changes
[shameless repost]
I just put the brakes on a big story that I really want to tell but I don't know how to tell yet.
I feel like I've lost my writing voice and my ability to characterize and pace events, all overnight.
I know it's temporary, but it's got me feeling down. Anyone have romantic wildehopps prompts I can maybe prep for TT instead? I need to focus on something else.
>>7673882
I fucking love Jack the pred addicted bun, such a cutie.
>>7673883
Cute
>>7673894
[shameless re-request]
Nick gets darted by a perp who got the weapon from a corrupt officer on valentine's. Gets all treatment and etc and is sent home, Judy offers to help despite both of them wanting to take the relationship slowly. Lightly drowsy Nick loses all restraints (speech wise) and they have a romantic moment.
>>7673864
>>7673894
Nick and Judy start marking each other but trying to do it without the other realizing it. It becomes something akin to a prank war with the office taking bets on who will mark who the best per day.
>>7673962
>>7673720
>>7674112
>>7674140
>>7674112
>>7674140
Thanks, I have enough of them now.
And thanks to the anon for the music
>>7669989
I want to start off by saying thanks you for liking my characters enough to write a fic for them. I don't think I'm good at 'reviewing' things as my reading comprehension is pretty shitty, but I'll see if I can point out positives and flaws in a healthy manner.
First of all the flow of the story was very nice. I had difficulty understanding a lot of the idle movements described, but I think it's more on my end. Like I said reading comprehension isn't a strength of mine. Even then the story didn't feel like it was dragging at any point, at least not to me.
I have to say, the characterization is very well executed. For what I've shown of each of them you've got them pretty down pat. Minor nitpicks include Percy's delivery feeling unlike him, but the things he says seem entirely in his character. I imagine his tone always having a hint of unease, and I didn't feel that in this. Again though what he says is entirely fine and it's a nitpick, not an actual problem.
Also minor, but Clancy doesn't drink. I've only mentioned it once ages ago so it's not like it's commonly known. I do feel if he did though, you described it just fine.
All in all I really liked it, and I thank you for writing it. The ending was very strong in my opinion. Not overly happy, but realistically so. The scene with Hugh and Caitlin was probably my favorite. I think you wrote her exceptionally.
I probably wasn't particularly helpful, but I at least wanted to say I enjoyed it. Thank you Hasty!
>>7674085
>When she tug the knot
>>7674085
scribble-anon's new fic was good.
i could probably edit it to be better, as an actual writer, but i liked it.
Ñick
post comf, guys
>>7674085
>>7674496
comfy is subjective
>>7674505
I can't give much away, and it is Zoop related, but I need to ask: Any good nicknames for Rudy?
An anon asked me a while ago if I'd colourise some of Pelag's amazing portraits of Pack Streeters dressed as historical figures, so here's one for now.
>>7674523
I Also still wanna git gud at drawing. Any really simple non-lewd requests?
>tfw valentine's is coming up
https://youtu.be/w-Mjx4WY2xM
>>7674406
>>7674505
That's a nice ship.
Not nice as WildeHopps, but still
>>7674521
Ruru?
>>7674540
Nick and Judy icecream date
And I say goodnight /ztg/!
>>7674540
Anteater eating a tube of go-gurt, only it's full of ants instead of yogurt.
what happened to that webcam chat comic between nick and his sister, and neither know it was the other
>>7674577
Ruru is cute. Thank you. My only other one is Rudes... or something like Rude dude or Rude tube. Idk
>>7674609
Weaver only ever did two pages
>>7674659
another shill for you lovely anons
http://pastebin.com/MBKd7wsM
Nick x Bellwether sexytimes
>>7674673
I ship Bellwether's spine with a tyre iron
Did you know that despite making up less than 3% of the population, foxes are responsible for 27% of all crime?
Just thought that was interesting
Has Sharla gotten any real characterization? I was thinking of writing some Sharleon for TT, but I realized I have no idea what Sharla's character is.
>>7674673
Aw fuck yeah I've been waiting for this, I must've missed the first shill
>>7674737
None of them have any character mate
None of them
>>7674729
Thats not controlling for population densities. Of course in places that have mostly foxes will have mostly fox based crimes.
>>7674540
Gideon and Judy.
>>7674729
Did you know that hippos are responsible for the majority of spousal abuse in Zootopia?
>>7674752
Of course, rabbits make up much more of the populace, yet their crime rate is significantly lower
hmmmmmmmmm
>>7674729
Wrong. That is just another one of the lies that the media is perpetuating.
>>7674729
really activates my almonds
Reposting this as I work on something SPECIAL.
>>7674540
We could always use more Judy dressed as a Pooka.
>>7674788
That's because they're all cowardly dumb bunnies with no willpower to do anything more than fuck, kill their kids, and grow carrots.
>>7674729
They need to be locked up with lots of snuggles
>>7674841
don't forget the poop eating.
>>7674788
That's because they handle almost all of their crime "in-house" and don't release their statistics.
>>7674841
>being a felon is a sign of bravery
You're the problem
>>7674841
rabbit infanticide isn't even counted as a crime, so that helps lower their numbers
>>7674496
7/10 expected lewds
WHICH ONE DO I SHOOT
>>7674737
There has been one greentext where she became NASA (ZASA?) flight director overseeing space shuttle launches and married a pilot who later became an astronaut
>>7674881
Wow, are you dense?
Being a criminal is not a sign of bravery, but it does take some guts to commit crimes at the risk of being caught and jailed as it does with anything that has life changing negative results.
The fuck did you come to that backwards ass logic?
>>7674908
It was made when Becky was still a thing.
Also it's heavily implied yo, can you even pick up on subtext?
>>7674737
RF did a fic that explores the idea of her failing in her dreams to join ZASA and ends up stuck in Bunnyburrow.
It might be a place to start looking at possible interpretations of her.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7932799
The species with the most number of cases of recorded cannibalism is lions, yet we let them walk around without leashes
Should be no surprise considering they control the movie industry...
>>7674998
>>7675015
Literally cuter than bunbun
>Her face when she sees your Nick & Judy Rim Job folder.
>>7674920
charlie is for living and cuddling remmy; shoot the one on the right
>>7674920
the left one
>>7674819
I need more yeen
>>7674920
the imposter
>>7675028
Wonder why Sharleon became a thing over Sharla/Bobby or Sharla/Jaguar. You keep the same predophile kink while at the same time keeping Gideon pure and gay.
>>7675088
Yes but... Which one is that?
>>7674937
No excuses for criminals, entire species of scam artists and fraudsters.
In fact, if we were to get rid of the foxes overnight, we'd see 37% decrease in petty theft, 12% decrease of instances of fraud, reduce prison population by almost 7%, can redirect those extra nocturnal district patrols to other parts of the city and could spend entire "disadvantages species aid" budget somewhere it's actually needed. This is not to mention significant decrease in government expenditure on miscellaneous benefits, tax reliefs and reduction of youth unemployment by up to 15% in some districts.
Debate this. Oh wait, you can't.
And don't bring in this stupid "I have a fox friend", this simply means you'll get conned later or they're using you to get to other victims.
>>7675075
>"Why is it such a small folder?"
>>7675101
>pure
Sodomy is a deviancy
>>7674920
both, foxes are worthless
>>7675086
More Yeen is coming..
>>7675107
What about that fox cop.
>>7675107
>He actually thinks foxes benefit from government anything
no please continue proving that you're in your first year of college. First time off of Herd Street?
>>7675086
>>7675146
Forgot to repost this haha.
While we're on this topic, does anyone else really hate giraffes?
Fuckers make everything twice as expensive to operate
>It's another "/ztg/ RP's and world builds" episode
These episodes are always super fucking comfy
>>7675214
I just wanted to be racist
But if we got rid of all the foxes, we wouldn't have anymore delicious pie from Gideon Gray's Good Baked Stuff, made with 100% organic Hopps Farms produce.
>>7675076
>>7675088
alright, done. wait...
>>7675143
excuse you sir, not all foxes are beggars on the streets
>>7675198
Giraffes are pretty terrible. They are completely unaware of their surroundings.
>>7675230
o shite
>>7675228
>buying pie from a fox
Fucking, just, no.
>>7674521
Aroo?
>>7674998
source?
>>7675257
Go die of a heart attack you fucking pig
>>7675198
>>7675236
>>7675214
>It's another /ztg/ is arbitrarily speciest episode
We've probably seen this exact same string of comments literally every time it comes up
>it's another "le edgy racism" episode
>>7675329
We can pivot. Maybe talk about life in the districts instead.
>>7675198
agree, I think they're pretty much the worst. At least rhinos or hippos are very self-aware, always minding their surroundings and are polite and civil about it while giraffes just stroll ahead without looking, head in the clouds and 9/10 are extremely arrogant. 0/10, would not be friends with.
>>7675130
Gideon is gay as fuck though. Plus with Bobby or Jaguar you could have so many cute wool and yarn jokes.
>inb4 "Foxes are horrible oh shit oops wrong pic how do I delete the picture of a handsome fox!"
i've made a huge mistake
>It's another Nick secretly watches Japanese Toku shows episode
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ewWOSqyF9mQ
How about not biologically plausible and defendable speciesism but speciesism based on your home biome
>snowtiggers from tundratown keep bitching about how hot it is
>its 60F
when will we deport them
>>7675230
lol, take that
adorable little bunny dicks are my fetish
>The first thing people search.
What the fuck /trash/?
>>7675371
>charlie not carrying at all times
>>7675399
>Google suggests things based on what you have searched for recently
Got something to say, anon?
>>7675166
it shows ZPD is going down the drain. First a loose cannon carrot farmer cracks the case by complete accident (media lie, I'll send you a ewetube vid with a real version of events later). If ZPD's finest couldn't solve this case, but some hick could, what confidence can we have in our police force? And this fox probably used forged documents or illicit connections to get there and even if not (which is unlikely), he'll probably start taking bribes from day 1.
In fact, it wouldn't surprise me the police is utterly corrupt. You really think it's this good-for-nothing chief of police was searching for anyone? He and Lionheart are both friends and the police were probably involved in the cover-up ops.
>>7674819
are those drinky bird eyes?
>>7675426
I need help man, I need help.
>>7675390
LEWD
>best animal discussion
Obviously tube dudes!
>>7675405
Charlie doesn't care enough about her life to bother.
>>7675465
I do love tube dudes, especially barrels of them.
>>7675329
fuck off dumb hick
>>7675405
sorry
fixed
>>7675390
...oh
>>7675469
pshhh
>>7675438
Drinky Crow, yes
>>7675485
Who wouldn't want to get buried in limousine mice though???
>>7674577
Sorry for the delay, Important RL stuff came up so this is the only request I can do tonight. Also, sleep tight tuber!
>>7675465
>>7675507
that's one way to deal with savage mammals
>>7675465
>>7675671
World needs more flying tubes
>>7675648
violence isn't the answer
except when it is
You fuckers better appreciate the suffering I'm putting myself through for this TT.
Pic completely unrelated.
>>7675731
She's pretty close to her target.
Won't splash damage be an issue?
>>7675749
>unrelated
That is a shame
>>7675772
She has to be that close or else she can't see
>>7675772
She has friendly fire turned off.
>>7675772
nah
she might get hit with a few chunks of fox meat, but that's certainly never hurt anyone
>>7675835
some people would enjoy getting hit by fox meat
>>7675790
>>7675791
Hi mammals,
Last thread I took a greentext requests. One of the requesters got dubs, so I did that one.
In which Judy plans a surprise party for Nick:
>"He's going to be here soon!"
>"I can't hang these decorations any quicker!"
>Jack is standing on Skye's shoulders, and she grips his ankles as he hangs up a row of paper cutouts shaped like foxes.
>"Great view, really, just a great view right here." Skye teases.
>Jack's knees buckle as he laughs, and he can barely hold himself upright, balancing atop Skye.
>"I could just look up and..."
>"Can you two not?" Judy scolds, looking up from the oversized card. There inside it were the signatures of nearly every mammal in precinct one. Even Bogo had penned a message:
>Don't mess up this year, Wilde. - Chief
>'It's better than nothing.' Judy thinks to herself as she puts a pen to the card's surface.
>Then the door bell rings.
>Skye ducks down low enough to let Jack hop off her back, and Judy jumps to her feet.
>"He's early! Way too early! Stall him! The cake isn't even here yet!"
>There's a bang on the wall.
>"Shut up in there!"
>"Hey, can't you see she's planning a surprise birthday party for her boyf-"
>Skye and Jack answer the door, opening it and closing it before Nick can blink.
>"Wilde! Fancy meeting you here." Jack walks around Nick to the other side of the hall.
>Nick turns so that his back is facing the door to Judy's apartment.
>"Hi, Nickie." Skye says, patting him on the shoulder with a friendly smile. "We were just having a late dinner with Judy, did you get the invitation?"
>Nick shrugs. "I was working late, she knew that." He gestures to his uniform. "Guess I missed you too, huh? You're not staying for dessert?"
>As Nick speaks to Jack and Skye, Judy manages to slip out the door behind him.
(1/4)
>>7675971
>She bolts downstairs to find the delivery mammal staring at the map of the building.
>He's a painted dogp; tired look in his eyes and wearing brown shorts and a matching button up shirt.
>"Hey! That's the cake!"
>"Woah, woah. Woah. Okay. Lady. Look. This cake is for someone's birthday party. See? Okay?"
>He holds out the cake. It's under a see through plastic lid.
>"See, there's a picture of a fox on it. Are you a fox? No. You're a bunny."
>Judy stops herself before her foot starts thumping. "I've got the order number right here. 29THD0... 3. Huh."
>The dog looks at a slip of paper. "Oh, yeah, okay. Weird. Enjoy your fox cake, bunny."
>Judy rolls her eyes and accepts the cake. She stares at it for a moment to make sure it's all spelled right before darting back up stairs as carefully and as quietly as she can.
>"-for us because he's smaller than me. He fits just fine." Judy catches the tail end of something Skye is telling Nick. Jack is nowhere in sight.
>Skye sees Judy approaching with the cake, and the two share a knowing glance for a moment.
>Skye leans back, swishing her tail, and a wrench drops from a pocket on her blue overalls. She nudges it with her foot and sends it few feet down the hall.
>"Oops! That was clumsy of me. Hey, can you-"
>Nick makes a face. "No problem, it's not like it's my-"
>The sound of a door closing startles him, and he spins around. "Jack? Judy?"
>Inside the apartment, Judy finds Jack blowing up a balloon. He looks blue in the face. The balloon is mostly flat.
>"Jack, do you even know how to do that?"
>"They don't teach clowning in the ZIA."
>"Just put it down and set the table."
>Jack drops the balloon on the floor with a sigh of relief and gets to setting the paper plates out.
>"Hey, what are you-" The muffled sound of Nick's voice emanates from behind the door seconds before it opens.
(2/4)
>>7675175
I still say 9/10.
The only way to overcome the cuck...I've got to nut to this pic
>>7675997
>Skye, paws on his shoulders, shoves him in.
>He half-falls but manages to keep his footing. When he looks up, Judy tosses two pawfuls of confetti.
>"Surprise!" They all shout in unison.
>Judy can swear she hears Bucky and Pronk yell it at the same time.
>"Hey, Fluff, what is - is this for me?" Nick is dumbfounded.
>"Happy birthday! I couldn't believe the chief made you pick up a records shift on your birthday, so I thought that when you got out you deserved something special." Judy can't help but throw her arms around Nick's waist.
>"She really put her all into this. There's homemade turnip stew in the fridge - she even grilled some fish for us." Skye smiles appreciatively.
>"And the cake!" Jack adds, gesturing to the table. "Look!"
>Nick does look, and his nose detects the aroma already in the air.
>"Blueberry filling Nick, your favorite. Now have a seat and let's eat some dinner first!"
>Nick, flabbergasted, takes a seat at the table.
>Judy gets to serving the food, and then seats herself next to him.
>"We got you a few presents, too." Skye says across the table, squirting a lemon onto some crispy-skinned fish filets.
>"Mine's the best." Jack grins, pulling out a small wrapped box.
>"At the table?" Nick asks incredulously. Judy nods.
>Nick unwraps the present with a hint of kit-like eagerness. "This is... Jack. Fox repellant?"
>"Jack!"
>Jack leans away from the table defensively. "No, no! It's a gag. See? It looks like fox repellant, but it's actually a flask."
>Nick's lips twitch into a smirk. "Guess I'll have to keep this in my utility belt, eh, Judy? Wouldn't want any foxes to maul me or anything..."
>Judy elbows Nick before Skye reaches across the table and gives Nick her present.
>"Hey, how did you know I wanted new sunglasses?" Nick's eyes widen.
(3/4)
>>7676017
>"Are you kidding? You have more sunglasses than anyone I know. Let me guess, you like it when mammals can't tell where you're looking, huh, huh?" Skye chuckles under her breath.
>"Well, it's good when you're talking to a suspect in the field. Uh. They look good too. Thanks, Spanner."
>Judy pipes up, "I've got a present for you too, Nick! Just, uh, just lean in."
>Nick does, and Judy whispers something into his ear, the inside of which flushes pink.
>"Judy, I- That is just too good for me, let me tell you."
>"Nick, nothing's too good for you. Okay? Stop saying that."
>"Sure thing Judy. Now... about the cake?"
>"After dinner. It'll be great, Nick. You'll make a wish, and I'll grant it."
(4/4)
This was a lot of fun. Thanks to the requester.
Is it bad if I can't tell the difference between Weaver's doodles and his regular art? :^)
>>7676071
Bitch ain't got no depth perception
>>7676039
yeah. it must be so hard for you, what with being blind and all.
>>7676071
When are you going to make babies with Terry?
>>7676037
This was cute. Love these comfy stories.
I love you Anon.
>>7676039
Probably.
>>7676137
I platonically adore you, Gerardson.
>Judy loves Nick's scent so much she can't help but rub her head against his neck whenever they hug.
>>7676239
What does Nick smell like?
>>7676239
That are JUST FRIENDS.
>>7676239
>>7676137
You are a cool fu man chu pupper Gerard.
>>7676264
are you sure anon
>>7676257
violets and foxy love
>Jerboas competing in rodent long jump
My first jerboa... I suck at this.
Think i need to make my requests more simple and fluffy.
More pages of Zootopia: An Adventure in Zootropolis
>>7676285
>>7675997
>That order number
>>7676283
In your opinion, what do you think you need to improve on most? Maybe you can specify requests to aid in the areas you want to practice more, like "Give me Judy requests" or "Give me OCs".
What pack street comics are cannon. I told my friend I'd show them to him. But I've completely forgot
Hello! It's Hasty. I'm reshilling something new.
"Poor Form", a Shorty Squad Percy/Clancy centric fanfic:
http://pastebin.com/iKb93tZ5
Percy and Clancy have relationship problems, and talk about them. Caitlyn and Hugh are also invovled. It's lighthearted, mostly.
This has no sexual content. I was too exhausted writing the main plot. I'm sorry.
Has anyone else written a Shorty Squad fic? I've been looking around, but didn't find one yet.
Any questions / comments / feedback / systematic abuse is greatly appreciated!
>>7674264
Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it, and I really appreciate your feedback on the writing and characters. (Percy was a sonofabitch to write). I really like Shorty Squad, and wanted to give them some detail I thought might be harder to capture outside of a full story. Thank you for giving me the opportunity!
>>7676034
(i don't know how to draw giraffes)
>>7676107
when i 'persuade' him to go out on a date
>>7676037
That was really cute, I enjoyed it.
>>7676037
No no, thank you for doing it!
Seriously, this is really sweet! (And nice inclusion of the painted dog from the concept art)
>>7676298
>>7676339
Whoa, that is a painted dog.
The legs are longer and thinner than I thought...
>>7676339
painted dog pride
>>7675343
>it's a Bogo and Clawhauser have a weird relationship where they clash at work but hang out as besties when their off the clock episode
>>7676339
Reminder that Wilddog society is the reverse of Hyena except less violent.
A bunch of males and only a few females.
GAY DOGS
AYDOGGSE
>>7676327
nice
>>7676280
Yes. They did what they did because it was the right thing to do, not because they wanted to fuck each other.
where is the small bun and big tiger pictures at?
>>7676399
>Hyenahurst is home to both all four species of yeens, and painted dogs.
>That little desert suburb is full of so many strange cultures.
>>7676309
>In your opinion, what do you think you need to improve on most?
Improve my resources and buy a tablet, or change the smartphone for a paper and a pencil.
In the meantime, i think i can go simple since i'm still learning.
>>7673864
What do you people even talk about anymore? Are you just so caught up in your fandom that you are completely removed from the movie itself or what?
>>7676453
Emmitt Otterton: Zootopia's Last Enigma
>>7676453
How cute the main characters are.
>>7676453
Little of column A, little of column B.
What do you want to talk about anon?
>>7676453
mostly telling stories in the movie's setting, which was it's strongest feature imo
>>7676453
World building, OCs, AUs, TT, comics, fics, how to improve as artists. We're still deeply rooted in the movie as the central resource.
>>7676478
>Cotton "I like scat" Hopps
>>7676420
here you go
>>7676502
>>7676037
>comfy WildeHopps with Jack and Skye
Oh my fucking God, what a way to end Sunday. I fucking love this.
>>7676502
I love you.
>>7676323
I am furious, Hasty. Not only because I wanted to write the first Shorty Squad fic but because you absolutely deserve more (You)s.
Your prose is very beautiful, and this was a sweet story. Caitlyn and Hugh talking about the laundry winch (and the rest of their exchange) and the ending stood out to me as high points.
I'd say that the first few paragraphs are a little...big. Intimidating, I guess. If you wanted to change something, maybe find a way to break them up? Ease the reader in a little. Totally your call, though.
At line 205, it says
>Percy took the high road. “I’m sorry for being a blasé little twit.”
I think you mean Clancy.
Other than a few broken up sentences that I'm not sure were on purpose or not since they kind of worked, I have nothing else to offer in terms of feedback
All in all, very nice. Hope to see more out of you, Hasty. Why don't you have a pastebin account?
UH-OH, watch out motherfuckers, we've got more OC posting going on over here
>Scene of him first asking her out
>>7676567
Hasty's damn good. His Illness fic was great, and I liked the rap he did with A E S T H E T I C .
He should totally get an account.
>>7676677
Who dis and why should I care about their love life
>>7676677
What a couple of cuties
>>7676677
That's cute
I like the wolf with the face full of metal
>>7676677
daaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
>>7676560
love you too anon
>>7676071
PUNISHED CHARLIE FOXTROT
>>7676741
I want to fuck that fox roughly in a city hall bathroom stall while I sloppily stuff my fingers in his mouth to stifle his moans.
I-I mean, I love you, anon?
>>7676677
>Coffee disappears from the pot in the third from last panel
WHERE DID THE COFFEE GO, VISITI? (Nice to see more of those too as well)
>>7675835
>>7676781
God damn it Reply
>>7676781
BEST DAY!
>>7676677
Her thumb is on the wrong side in panesl 5 and 6
>>7676567
but will caitlin smell my finger?
>>7676781
Now this is how you capture Skunkly's personality
>>7676704
>Who dis and why should I care
I made them and I can't even tell you who or why
Essentially, the lynx was a bg character in a porn pic that someone requested be given a wolf girlfriend
There's like a single person here that keeps requesting more art of them
That's literally it.
>>7676812
What a legitimately terrible mistake. You'd think I was an amateur or something
>>7676775
IT'S STILL THERE JUST MUCH LIGHTER IN COLOR
but thanks to new technology we can see it much more clearly now
>>7676853
Error fix ate this repost
goon dight
>>7676876
Stop. I am getting diabetes this is so cute.
>>7676899
Goooooooood night g!
Dream of piefoxes bud.
>>7676940
Would you believe me If I tell you that I dream with Gideon once and he was actually my father? literally my father, not the "daddy" thing... It was a nice dream tho.
>>7676964
That's a good way to never sleep again!
>>7676964
>If Gideon were my dad things would be different around here.
>>7676964
did you still want to fuck him
>>7676420
What were their names again? Ellie and someone
>>7676964
All I get by that dream is that you want to fuck your mother.
you guys like inflation, right?
>>7676997
yah
>>7677026
>hot_stuff.png
>>7676964
That's both adorable and sad. I wish Gid could be dad
>>7677026
yes
>>7677026
some of us do
>>7677026
Janet Yellen plz go
>>7677026
some of us dont
>>7676567
Thank you so much for the feedback, dawg! I'm glad you liked it!
I tried to break them up, but couldn't find a way to do it, or a way to communicate the same information (Percy's forward-thinking orientation and tendency to abstraction) without those passages. It's a lesson I'll try to learn for the next fic, because as it stands it's like serving steak before the drinks are out.
...I actually meant that to be Percy. It's not my finest in-character moment.
I tried to make an account on Ao3 some time ago, but something went haywire. I need to try again.
I'll keep a lookout for your fic!
>>7676691
Thank you so much, dawg!
>>7676741
I just wanted to say thank you again for your tutorial faces project, senpai(ished). I've been practicing with it and it's really useful. How long do you have until you ship out?
>>7677148
>>7677148
He's barely a balloon
>>7677148
the face of satisfied contentment
>>7677087
>Nick brought a souvenir from the burrows
>>7676774
im okay with this
>>7677089
not sure yet, just did my oath of enlistment friday. also you're hasty, right? have you rolled a zoosona?
>>7677208
oh, you want more?
alright
>>7677026
Cum inflation
holy shit, I'm so sad today.
>>7677026
I only like it if it's minor cum inflation. Beyond that it becomes unsexy to me.
>>7677026
i do
not sure about everyone else though
t. jerboa
>>7677268
>not sure yet, just did my oath of enlistment friday.
I'm going to miss my fox buddy.
>>7677287
Me too, anon. Laid in bed most of the day instead of being productive. It sucks.
>>7677287
No bun to cuddle?
>>7677268
>im okay with this
Added to my to-do list.
>>7677268
I'm hasty, yeah.
I rolled a marten some time ago, but haven't done anything with it; I'm trying to learn to draw first.
Best of luck, man - my brother's a Marine, it's tough sometimes but he's become an incredible mechanic.
>>7677268
Don't let anyone find out how flamboyantly homosexual you are.
bluh, still wish i could draw shit
evens - line practice
odds - fap
dubs - finish writing a green
>>7677367
Have a nice fap, anon
>>7677382
2 is an even number, anon.
>>7677087
>look at Skye go on that fox dick
Evens - I try to draw
Odds - Game
Dubs or more - I attempt the project homework I have due tomorrow.
>>7677327
>>7677352
well i guess i'll post this thing now. i drew it to celebrate my officially being sworn into the USAF reserves. (i'll switch to active duty once i ship for basic). i don't know when that will be, but i've got a couple weeks with you guys, i think. i have to go back to meps this thurs/fri for further testing because of my asvab score
do you have a pic of your marten, hasty? i'd like to add them to the zoosona wall when i get the chance (along with a million others)
>>7677365
it's not me, i'm straight
it's my zoosona that's gay
>>7677514
Take care not to break your foot. I hear the forces throw you out for that, man.
>>7677087
>It takes Judy til 2am at night to come home from whatever she is doing with Jack
>Nick is just sitting there, waiting, while getting blown
>>7676853
>single guy
I thought I was, but now there's more of us.
Congratulations, you have once again made a cute vanilla ship while trying to make more Wildecest content.
>>7677614
Well he doesn't wanna actually fuck Skye until Judy's around to hear it, obviously.
>>7677688
>>7677514
Love the pic.
I will miss you, man. I hope things go well for you. You'd better make a goodbye post when the time comes!
>>7677688
too much
>>7677627
>you have once again made a cute vanilla ship
Wait was there another cute vanilla ship I've made?
>>7677695
>What are their names again?
*SWEATS NERVOUSLY*
but seriously thanks to everyone who said it was cute or otherwise. I don't usually dabble in OC like this so it's nice to know it has at least elicited /something/ out of people.
>>7677736
>Wait was there another cute vanilla ship I've made?
Young Nick x Judy.
Would you ride Skunkly A Bear (into battle?)
>>7677736
The Gilded Age.
>>7677714
don't worry, as long as i have enough time to prepare, i'm not leaving here without a bang
i will definitely miss you knight, as well as everyone else in these comfy threads
>>7677723
huh? what's that? more? ok
sorry, am a bit hard of hearing
>>7677762
AHHHHHHHH
>>7677778
Oh, yeah, that mistake
I kid. Gilded Age will always have a special spot in my heart
>>7677736
NAMES JIMMY
I NEED THE NAMES
>>7677636
>>7677768
Will he give me good deals for rides?
>>7677647
to be fair he tended to only stop by and say hi every once in a while since before he shipped off
>>7677794
oh yeah, whoops
i actually meant to say "not enough"
please continue
>>7677877
This probe is headed for the edge of the galaxy
>>7676239
>tfw you will never get to bury your face into Nick's side after he gets back from a long, exhausting day on the force
>tfw you will never bask in his manly sweaty smell
>>7677877
>these deals are out of this world
>>7677877
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KYYVrBX4v0
>>7677877
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G_80PQ543rM
>>7677768
>Weaver has dropped his fursona
RIP ZOOTOPIA FANDOM
>>7677952
Whoever made that gif is a fucking genius
>>7677952
this never fails to make me laugh
>>7677963
Did someone say its time to doom post!
>>7678024
Kek, is that Master Chief?
>>7677952
>that night eventually led to this image
You guys are amazing and I love you
>>7678024
> Chief for R117
I knew you were a cool dude.
Fresh Canidae.
“Be a dear and hold that thought for a moment.”
>>7678065
Who drew that? Looks like Fuel.
So ztg, when did you have your "furry awakening"?
>>7678144
I read a Sonic the Hedgehog comic 20 years ago
Alternately I watched Thundercats when I was 2.
>>7678125
This is what happens when you try to fit 10 pounds of wolf into a 5 pound bag.
>>7678144
When I was 13 or so, browsing through a hentai gallery and stumbling into a "furry" folder.
Digimon porn was my gateway.
>>7678144
Like 5 years ago.
Thanks random japanese oekaki site catering towards Cave Story r34
>>7678144
The Lion King.
>>7678144
years ago.
zootopia made me realize what a big furfag i could become
>>7678125
>People do this to me all the fucking time at work
iktf so bad that I hate Canidae now
I mean at least there are tons of rape pictures of her to vent my frustration but still
>>7678183
way back when I was a little kid
>>7678144
Im not a furry. The day I draw a fursona is the day I jam my stylus through my eyeball
>>7678125
Well, it's still technically winter season floof
>>7678144
This movie.
>>7678125
yeah but
but
but
I wanted to tell you Gazelle just waved at you and left but you wouldnt let me speak
>>7678144
Robin Hood followed shortly by the Lion King
>tfw following in Lord Byron's footsteps
>>7678144
The late stake
Question for the writers here. What does your planning process look like? Do you plot shit out, or just wing it? How detailed do you get? Do you do character sheets?
>>7678125
Damn she thicc
>>7678233
I usually wing it entirely.
>>7678144
Freshman year of high school, when I discovered that a forum I frequented had a thread for dragons. It wasn't in an innocent way, of course.
>>7677963
Hopefully.
>>7677647
>man I wonder why chumpy doesn't come to the threads anymore
I know its rethoric but its pretty much spot on my thoughts, and probably chumpy's and other CCs who fled this shithole for discord or other communities. Even Weaver admitted he was living hell here.
I stopped coming a while after comic started getting attacked again, it was embarrassing. Now people are once again attacking chumpy. I hope the dude never has the misfortune to come here again, this place is seriously becoming one of the most cancerous fandoms out there.
>>7678233
I just fuckin' wing it.
And then I let Comic tear it apart in the aftermath,
The knows I don't outline and he hates me for it.
>>7678238
Thicc headed.
>>7678144
Ecaflips.
What sad beginning could the packstreeters have?
>>7678271
more bone than brain
more boner than brain too when you look at her
>>7678233
Depends.
If I'm writing something short, I just formulate a rough idea of how it's going to go, and then wing it.
If I'm writing something a little longer, I'll make a bunch of bullet points to plan it out, and then wing it.
>all this skunkly inflation art
hey, that reminds me!
i should start working on ellipses now!
>>7678271
She's not stupid, anon.
She can sit, beg, fetch - even roll over.
>>7678144
It all started when I got caught for the first time looking at porn. Then I stumbled across sonic porn and used it as a cover to not raise suspicion. Never recovered.
>>7678319
Furfaggotry seems to be exceptionally potent at corrupting the sexuality of impressionable young people
>>7678288
Avo mom asks avo what she wants for her 7 bday
She replies with snark and lolipop grungling.
Her mother shoots herself to give birth to such a shitty character
>>7678319
m8 I became a furfag a long time ago
>>7678233
My actual writing process is fairly loose and I don't write shit down as much as I should. But my planning generally goes like this:
>Come up with story premise
>Identify tone of story; lewd? comfy? feelsy?
>Identify primary themes; Family, restraint, young love, etc.
>Figure out where I want the story to end
>Work backwards; how do things get there
>figure out what the "pillars" of the story are; the beats that carry the most weight
>Struggle until I come up with a beginning
>Find my way through the dark to each pillar and make my way towards the conclusion
>>7677762
>>7677813
>New Officer Judy Hopps spots a young crying Nick Wilde at night outside of a Ranger Scouts building
>Comforts the young kit and helps him get home
>Nick never forgot the bunny cop who said he could be anything
>He dedicates himself to joining the ZPD
>15 years later, Officer Wilde instantly recognizes Chief Hopps
>He has to stop himself from hitting on the older bunny.
>>7678319
lol that's great, thanks for sharing that.
>>7678193
Go ahead, anon...
>>7678193
>>7678498
...You know what to do.
>>7678233
i outline the plot points i want to reach, individual scenes. Once I have enough, stringing them together is easy.
Of course, these days, i've run out of scenes...
>>7678460
Thanks for not making this rapey
>>7678319
that's because the human brain reacts differently to human faces then it does to animal faces
animals tend to be universally appealing where humans can be offputting. they aren't inherently sexually attractive, but they are aesthetically appealing.
>>7678563
It all makes sense now, so is this why i wanna fuck my dog?
>>7678589
it's probably why the thought of it wasn't immediately offputting. the actual corruption came later.
>>7678541
>Chief Hopps give him the worst time and keep trying to push him out of the force
>His angry expression
>His exhausted expression
>His sad expression
>All reminds of the guilt and hatred she felt for herself when she drugged and had her way with the little fox.
>>7678617
>>7676283
Nice! Thanks anon. Keep up the art.
>>7678632
>>7678799
>Teacher Wilde/Student Judy (college of course).
Weatheredlaw once wrote a short series like that
>>7678799
If the characters are older, is that still good? I kinda dig this too.
Harem Street starring Wolter when
>>7677400
Wow, you're actually retarded, Anon.
>>7678144
Robin hood when Maid Marrion kissed the rabbit kid.
Old-school Thundercats solidified it.
>>7678799
>Why you do this.
Why do we fall, Bruce?
>>7678144
Maybe a day or two after my first time fapping, I discovered furry porn online. It's all been downhill, since.
>>7678975
>Courage the Cowardly Dog was canon in proto-Zoot
What were thy thinking?
>>7678988
Woah. I just finished watching that today. Are you spying on me, anon?
>>7679008
Thy are creative af
>>7678975
that nick looks pretty feminine
maybe he's a reverse trap that looks like a regular trap
>>7678799
>no Teacher Wilde/Student Judy (college of course).
There's a fanfic with this premise.
No, I can't remember the title.
>>7679008
You're not perfect.
>>7679056
>>7678731
I tried another request, but got worse. I guess i need more practice on basic shape and drawing technique. I think i'm not participate on this TT (i was doing something, but i was having troubles too). Art is hard for beginners, and i know too much frustation is not worth it.
Thanks you so much for the words, anon, i was going to bed feeling a little bad for not being able to realize a decent draw today. I promise i will try harder next time.
Do you think Zootopians stick gerbils up their ass
>>7678144
I didn't. I don't want to be a furry animal. I never have been, never will. I just REALLY want Nick and Judy to fuck, preferably after marrying.
Also I find attractive feminine features on anthro animals to be hot and I whack it to them. But I don't want to BE one.
>>7679092
That scene still gives me the creeps to this day
>>7679134
Fuck off jerboa
>>7679134
haha
>>7679133
Are you kidding me? My art is fucking garbage, but I still post it here because I'm trying to improve. Please don't apologize for practicing something you like to do.
>>7679184
Haha do you think smaller mammals get larger ones to vore them haha you know as a joke haha
>>7679204
If ever there was a drawfag who was up for it I'd like to see Skunkly shouting he'd make Ramses a deal from the front porch.
>>7678840
>Weatheredlaw once wrote a short series like that
...How did I forget that series? "something like prayer" gave me a fucking roller coaster of emotions, with the college AU being a near bittersweet one that ended happy.
>>7679053
An actual fanfic or part of a series of one-shots? I remember "Different Tails" had like two chapters of a high school AU with teacher Wilde, first was the basic introduction, and the second was Nick going "It would be highly unprofessional, despite my own...well...I plan to still be here next year after you gradutate, so hit me up then 'Officer Hopps'".
>>7678849
Preferable if the characters are at least legal adults. The age difference is the main shtick, being older isn't an issue.
>>7679241
>whatdoyoshiseggssmelllikehaha.jpeg
>>7679231
Weaver?
>>7679262
God damn. I'm not even Weaver, but I still got burned by that. Nice diss, anon.
>>7679248
>Skunkly appears, shoving Eustice aside.
>"Why have a slab, when you can have this BRAND NEW MEMORY FOAM MATTRICE FROM SKUNK A BEARLY'S MATTRESS EMPORIUM, formerly skunk a bearly's mattress expo,"
>"NOW WITH AN ELDERLY DISCOUNT!"
>>7679133
don't feel bad. you improving will only make this general better.
i am doing drawabox.com
i just finished this and i have to show it somewhere. i apologize for off-topic.
Ozzy once hooked up a mouse to a water hose and watched him explode during a violent episode
No one has ever connected the crime to him, but the memory still haunts him
>>7679357
Woah that's fucking sick.
>>7679371
>ozzy is an inflationfag
i'll have to keep that in mind if i ever decide to write about him.
>>7679376
thanks, it was pretty tedious
>>7679371
Charlie twice stole meds from elderly that she would later see on the news dead due to not having their prescriptions
No one has ever connected the crimes to her, but the memories add to her depression and lack of self-worth
>>7679433
You got a website that I can find your art at?
>>7679327
>Whats eh?
>Hey! What if 'I' want a comfortable mattress?
>YOU'RE IN LUCK SIR! TONIGHT AND TONIGHT ONLY I'M HAVING A TWO FOR ONE SPECIAL!
>NO DOWN PAYMENTS, NO HASSLE, AND SKUNKLY A BEAR CERTIFIED TO BE EGYPTIAN CURSE PROOF
>>7679441
>shifty fox is untrustworthy thief
not really original
make them untrustworthy in new ways
>>7679475
Well its kind of canon that shes a thief.
>Charlie sometimes ties the wool blanket around her neck and furiously masturbates, imagining it's Remmy choking her out.
>She's only blacked out once.
>As long as Marty doesn't bring it up, noone will know where Martina sleeps.
>>7679475
She a fucking snitch that gotta pay for getting Jesús locked up to cover her own ass
>>7679499
it's canon she's a pickpocket and lockpick
if she's a thief is debatable, since she more or less immediately gave back what she took once she was done with it
>>7679475
Charlie is untrustworthy because when she was 7 she told her best friend that santa isnt real, but that was a lie so she's really untrustworthy
>>7679509
Charlie has existed since the Roman Era and has been conning, stealing, lying, and betraying those around her for thousands of years to sustain her immortality.
>>7679525
That monster.
>>7679527
i kinda like the idea of charlie being a vampire
>>7679371
Anneke and wolter once were caught having sex by Avo. she never buys any more lollipops
>>7679525
>like RemmyxCharie
>a bit upset that MartyxCharlie is canon
>see this
fuck that, Remmy's too good for her
>>7679443
not at the moment, no
i post frequently here
>>7679514
In the charlie-cide comic she calls herself thieving but it was just self-deprecation so how true that is is debatable. I guess it is just mostly speculation that shes an actual thief then. huh
>>7679525
santa IS real
the whole magical-fake-memories thing is pretty weird but you know, you serve presents for a few millennia he probably knows best
>>7679562
Please make a blog so I can follow you, anon. I don't think I frequent /ztg/ enough to see you.
>>7679371
Rex installed a glory hole inside his bug burga and makes use of it during his breaks
Good night thread, thanks for a crazy day
>>7679632
>implying we wouldn't happily suck Rex off through a gloryhole
>>7679652
gn friend
>>7679607
you should stay...forever.
but for real, i'm sorry. i'm considering it, but unrelenting dumb anxiety has stopped me so far.
>>7679652
>>7679666
i know how unrelenting, illogical anxiety can be, fried.
>>7679666
That's alright. I can give you the tumblr I use in case you want to contact me first if you get around to making the blog.
>>7679659
How do you know it's Rex and not some cute girl
>>7679652
That is a wholesome bun
>>7679689
sure thing.
>>7679691
>implying i personally wouldnt be even more excited to suck a feminine peni-
oh, wait, no. I see what you're saying now.
Al and Velvet are together
Marty and Charlie are together
Avo and Betty are clearly lesbians
Rex is married to his job
Wolter is straight
Ozzy will kill himself
Anneke will die of STDs
Pandora will go crazy with grief after finding out she killed people and seclude herself
Remmy will get together with no one.
>>7679540
>Throughout history Charlie has witnessed the cruelty of Mammals and gladly partook in it.
>Striking a bargain with a Demon which would sustain her life so long as treachery and deceit are upheld.
>Responsible for a a myriad of catastrophes throughout history
>Snitched on Jesus Christ for Thirty Silver Pieces
>Opened the Gates of Rome to allow the Barbarian Hordes to sack the City
>Allowed Plague infected Rats into Italy causing the Black Death
>Destroyed trust between the European Colonists and the Native Tribes
>Lead Cortez to the Aztec's Capital
>Altering the Treaty of Versailles
>The Modern Era finds Charlie in a place where mammals try to tolerate one another.
>That some people do believe one can be anything
>Befriends a Tiger and an angry Stout
>Pack Street is growing to accept a Sheep among their community and Pack
>The appeal of maintaining her role as the deceiver is fading and fading fast.
>Witnesses the Good losing their mind while she lives
>The weight of her crimes throughout history bearing down on her.
>>7678144
I awoke on /vp/ in April-May 2011
I can tell the seeds were planted before then from Robin Hood, Pokemon, Who Framed Roger Rabbit (Jessica Rabbit teaches pictures are aok!) and >pic related
I dont fucking know about the last one, I'm not even really a scaley
>>7679702
Sweet!
It's grossbarnacle, all one word. I look forward to seeing more of your art!
>>7679709
avo called two dudes over to celebrate no longer being the omega, though
>>7679709
sheep are for sheep
>>7679729
i appreciate the support despite my annoying self.
>>7679652
Goodnight, Visiti. Sleep well.
>>7679709
Marty is too small to satisfy Charlie. I will never accept them.
>>7679733
Clearly to watch them fuck each other while she had Betty pound her with an extra large strap on.
>>7679709
Marty becomes Martina full time and Remmy accepts her for who she is and they are together.
>>7679743
No problem, anon.
>>7679709
>Ozzy will kill himself
I have to deal with a mental illness too so I really don't want this to be the case ;_;
AAAAAAAAAARE YOU FOLKS EXCITED FOR TT?
BECAUSE I SURE AM!
>>7679709
>lesbians
does this mean avo and betty will have a three way with me on the bottom
>>7679867
no
i have no ideas on how to finish my entry
>>7679895
with them both wearing strap-ons while making out with each other?
>>7679895
Canidae?
Pfft no, Betty and Avo are clearly only into /fit/ bitches.
You'd have better luck with Anneke.
>>7679549
>>a bit upset that MartyxCharlie is canon
no it isn't
>>7679549
I prefer CharliexMarty anyways. That way, i can ship them and still have my Sheepdog.
ALL OF PACK STREET ARE GOOD JESUS-LOVING NON DEGENERATES WITH THE SOLE EXCEPTION OF AL WHO WILL ALL FIND A SAME-SPECIES OPPOSITE SEX PARTNER TO HAVE 2 CHILDREN WITH
>>7679933
YES! Oh my god.
>>7679935
What makes you say that?
>>7679952
I wouldn't be surprised. That dream comic did say alot about how Charlie views Marty
>>7680001
Because just because someone's a lesbian doesn't mean they'll automatically fuck you just because you're a lesbian as well, some mammals have standards, you know.
>>7679751
Marty probably has an entire section in the library on how tube dudes can satisfy vixens. Marlie will live when he learns how to get his whole body into it.
>>7680025
Like the fact that the though if kissing him shocked her awake? Or the fact that she found it weird enough not to write down. That really sounds like love.
>>7679895
Avo will find another Egyptian wolf named Cado, and they will have a horrible ship name together.
gnight /ztg/!
evens - practice more lines tomorrow
odds - start on ellipses
>>7678125
It's fine, I can wait.
pff probablyjusttweetingaboutgazelleagain
>>7680079
It's okay, daddy, I'll always pay attention to you~<3
>>7679717
>>7680115
I thought Canidae went bankrupt from buying all those cakes and Gazelle merchandise.
>>7680053
Wasn't talking about love but you can't dismiss the fact that Charlie has some "unresolved issues" involving Marty.
>>7680070
Lines you say?
>>7679717
>>7680140
......who told you
guess she'll have to lower herself to do things she never imagined get that money back
>>7679709
>Marty and Charlie are together
I support this 100%
Nick's first sexual experience was inside an unmarked van at 3 am in a Denny's parking lot
>>7680358
So that was before Finnick got the mural painted on?
Heres some weird charlie drawing i did testing some brushes. I have enough time for about one request before I hit the sack, any suggestions?
>>7680507
Very pretty charlie, how about a cute badger?
I think we should make a new bread
>>7680746
This is the hill we die on, anon.
>>7674523
Just waked up to find this.
Wow, thanks dude, this is amazing!
>>7680839
Fuck you its not page 10
>>7675591
Thank you! Saved!
>>7680857
No one has been waiting on page 10 for weeks now.
>>7680899
Fuck off
>>7680857
Every time we do wait for page ten it 404s almost immediately with no new thread
>>7678144
4 yo.
Fucking Space Jam of all fucking things.