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Write-Faggotry Thread #13

Last Thread: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7318004

Write stories, share works, ask for critique, post requests, you name it.
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Ground floor pastebin link to requests filled and personal side projects.

http://pastebin.com/u/The_Mouths_of_Babes
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>>7389727
>>7389762
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>>7389774
>Thread wars
Oh for fucks sake
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Well, this one was here first, so I'm sticking with it.
-Book guy
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>>7389727
Pschyzomalexts: Part 1 of 4


Organization in the Hierarchy of Living

I know, this is a normal day to read about the fire. I feel free! I spiral; I usually falls in the form of a circular, at least, monother fliked speons. I came to the realization that I am an alcomation.
When I came to death, for his glory, I remember this; I will never forget what happened in the company.

Do you want to see?
... And as you can see, this is good and easy.

Select all of the elements of culture simulatory:

>God: hidden in the basement of animals in our society
>The problem: the depression, the brain of the artist dictional
>I know that many people have a picture of your friend
>movement, painting, saving money, pain, death, death, death

This is not a competition, but a book when it's hot, and that is why I hope I wrote her own success.
Die like a fairy tale, life in spite of the fact!

In the meantime, you can set the volume level of this happiness and love.

This world is very strange...
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Anchor posting for Bunny Mint story
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>>7389763
Holding out hope for Queen sectonia request if you decide to give it a whirl. Details at
>>7345661
>>7345706
>>7354105
>>7357705
>>7354334
>>7352768
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>>7391640
Dude, trash doesn't have an archive, those links will stop working once the previous thread slides off. Pastebin them while you can.
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>>7391745
I use desuarchive a lot which allows for redirects, but a pastebin can work too I guess.
>>7391640
>>7389763
http://pastebin.com/CDLGJMe3
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>>7391880
>I use desuarchive a lot which allows for redirects
while yes, that's a thing, it can occasionally have stability problems too, so pastebin is more secure.
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>>7389727

WriteFriend reporting for duty.
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>>7392261

Bump!
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>>7392261
What kind of stuff would you hesitate to write?
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>>7392891

Anything including

>Gore
>Scat and watersports
>Human (Give or take)
>Using Liscensed characters

Anything else is fair game
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>>7392941
Including?
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>>7392956

Bondage, vore, slob, inflation, hyper, and lemme explain human.

I can write for characters aged 18-26 for human

Any younger or older is off the table
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>>7392970
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4203531/#4223994
[spoiler]Ssh.[/spoiler]
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>>7392941
>Using licensed characters
How about obscure ones?
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>>7392998

It contains gore

Denied.
>>7392999

Not with those digits it's denied

As much as it pains me, I will grant you one green.
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hello my friends i have a story request for you
Requesting 3 lesbians, of any species, going to a strip club. While they're there they get really drunk, to the point where they can't make good decisions. They also run their bar tab to a point where they can't pay, they are then told that they can work at the club to pay it off. They agree drunkenly, and unknowingly signing a contract that says that they'll work there for the next 2 years. Progressively they all become more slutty, starting from being embarrassed and shy, to being wild and being constantly lewd.
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>>7393021

After I do
>>7392999

I will do you
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I'm asking this again. Are any Writefags open to requests or commissions?
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>>7393015
Something with lachuikippu then. She's got a decent pair of bird tits and a good pair of wings to put to use along with child birthing hips for egg making.
Plotwise, I imagine a hunter gathering Harpy eggs, only to stumble upon her in heat. He uses the opportunity to try and 'tame' her for a steady egg supply. Of course by tame I mean fuck her silly.
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>>7393061

Nigga it's me >>7392261
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>>7392970
>hesitate including
Wait. Misunderstanding on my part. My bad.
The gorey part can be left out. But I understand and accept my defeat.
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>>7393068

POV?
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>>7393082
Hunter's POV
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>>7393086

Anything else?
Also, fill me in on the what is in use. I.E.
Steampunk like FF7
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>>7393117
Technology wise it'd be the likes of those fantasy worlds with a swords n bows n magic, with some familiar technology in busier places (manual, gear machines).

The hunter in mind probably has a crossbow with varying arrow types, and probably some traps on his personal, for example.
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>>7393117
As a final scene, she could be laying an egg, but has trouble, so hunter fucks her ass to help pass the egg.
Leaving wifi place, so the rest is up to you. I'll keep an eye out for you.
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>>7393071
Cool! Do any of these look doable? I can give detail if you need it.

Who likes any of these ideas?

A fully intelligent male dragon with thick hips and a nice ass starts dating a human BF. Lots of cuteness and sex, with the dragon being dominant in a friendly way.

Series of short writings about a trap with a lot of control over when he cums involving orgasm denial, Monstergirls, masturbation, and some really rough sex. It would go Masturbation --> Female on male rape --> Male on female sex and orgasm torture --> Female and male on male orgasm torture.

Another one about a trap and Monstergirls, this one about a guy who works selling food and has to orgasm in certain ways as part of his job. Monstergirls feed on the energy in human semen, and that energy tastes different depending on how the human cums. So he'd have to orgasm in a lot of extreme ways.

A straight male is hired to work in gay porn with Monsterboys, because anyone gay cums in seconds. The straight guy still cums almost immediately because of how good it feels to fuck a Monsterboy, and eventually realizes he probably isn't straight.
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>>7393184
>traps and monstergirls
Oh niiice, I hope somebody picks em up.

Although, if a guy has a lot of control over his orgasm, how does that fit with the denial?

Although with that progression
>trap faps, edging for a long ass time
>girl peeks, gets flustered, waits for him to finish
>he ain't finishing
>girl barges in and fucks him
>she cums, he still doesn't, keeps going, forcing orgasms out of her
Something like that?

MGE fastfood idea is hilarious and lewd.
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>>7393117
Ah, quick spot. One last thing: she can talk
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>>7393265
That's basically it. I was thinking he can not cum for a long time, but if he does for too long he'll have a really long orgasm that he can't control at all.

The masturbation part would be him doing a cam show to get better at edging himself. He'd have the camera pointed at his bent over ass and dick, with a vibrating fleshlight just underneath his dick that he can thrust into. Then a second camera on his face, where he's looking disinterested.

He'd alternate between actively humping into the Fleshlight and pulling out just before he goes over the edge, until his coinpurse balls are practically blue. Eventually someone would pay him to ruin his orgasm and then stick his dick back in the Fleshlight and make himself cum.

He'd fuck himself really hard for a few minutes, then pull it out and not move it. Cum would start to drip from the tip, followed by his cute ass clenching. He'd be making a really lewd expression the entire time, because he still feels the pleasure from edging and sex even if he doesn't cum. Eventually his dick would explode, shooting out a river of cum without satisfying him at all. Eventually it would stop, leaving him completely unsatisfied and still hard. He'd reach back with one hand and spread his ass, playing with his balls with the other. And offering to show everyone watching what an edged dick looks like before making himself cum instantly.
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>>7393415
The next ones would be him fucking a Monstergirl who tries to make him cum, him being used to break Monstergirls by fucking them for a long time and then cumming outside of them, and then being forced to cum repeatedly by a bunch of really powerful Monstergirls.
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>Akra, the ice giantess, queen of an ever expanding kingdom of humans, strolled through her countryside, heading toward the impossibly tall forest in the distance.
>Farmers came out of their houses to wave to her, which she happily returned in kind.
>The half dozen nude women and men poking out of her cleavage struggled to free themselves, as well as struggled to come to terms with the idea that no one seemed to care that they were clearly going to be lunch soon.
>They each had seen the queen eat citizens before, but, like most others, didn't not pause in their day to day business when it happened.
>The blonde, who introduced herself to the queen as Tel, sat on the giantess's shoulder, holding onto the bra strap to keep herself from slipping off.
>Akra pulled a squirming human from between her bouncy, bountiful, breasts and held him before her mouth as she spoke to Tel.
>"So, Tel, what were you doing so close to the forest's edge in the first place?" she asked.
>"Well, I-" she was cut off when her queen tossed the human into her maw and began to audibly suck on the screaming man.
>"I was picking wild berries and flowers near its edge," she explained, as she had some time earlier during her story.
>"I know that," the queen said with man in her mouth, her words slurring a bit while her tongue wrestled with the human. "I mean why pick them in such a dangerous l-l-" she was struggling to speak the word clearly, so rather than savor her treat further, she swallowed him.
>Tel had never seen a man get swallowed up close before. The bulge in her throat was quite visible, and did not move as quickly as she had hoped.
>The people in Akra's cleavage watched the bump in her throat move as well, stirring them further.
>"Why such a dangerous location? There are berries and flowers all over the land," she said, gesturing to those very same plants that scattered the wide green expanse they walked through.

(cont.)
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>>7394156

>"In truth, my queen, I find my life quite boring," she freely admitted.
>Akra cocked a brow at Tel, curious at her meaning.
>"It is my job in my family to harvest berries and flowers. And I am happy to do it!" she was quick to add. She worried the giantess might be offended that one of her citizens found life in her kingdom wanting.
>"It's just...I crave excitement! Action, adventure, thrills and chills," Tel excitedly said. "My father trained me to fight, to defend myself, but the kingdom rarely sees crime, or attacking hordes. You protect and rule us so well," she made sure to add.
>Akra smirked at the obviously forced compliment. She was surrounded by those who worshiped her every move, and they were right to do so, but it was somewhat refreshing to have someone who showed just the slightest bit of contempt for things under her watch.
>"So, I do things to make my job more exciting, like choosing to harvest from the forest's edge. I grew bolder and bolder, and eventually was punished for it," she said in reference to the infertility curse the spider woman placed on her.
>"And did you find excitement within the forest, when the creature confronted you?"
>Tel thought for a moment, and feared the queen could easily see through her lies if she uttered one, so she dared not try. "Yes."
>"And was it worth it?" she added while plucking a woman from her chest.
>The next meal looked a lot like Tel, and she thought how she was in her position less than an hour before.
>"Yes."
>Akra openly bellowed, causing her chest to shake and disrupt her snacks even more. "Well said!"
>The queen came from a race of warriors, who lived in harsh climates and dangerous conditions. She could empathize with a need for danger in one's life.
>For this morsel, the queen slid her into her mouth feet first, and closed those plump lips around her stomach.
>The woman squirmed with fear, but soon with pleasure.

(cont.)
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>>7394203

>Akra was using her tongue to pleasure the human.
>She found that she occasionally enjoyed the taste of a freshly climaxed human.
>Their bodies covered in sweat and sexual fluids.
>Muscles relaxed and at peace before they met their end.
>Plus she considered it a minor charity she granted every now and then.
>The human found herself forgetting about the danger below her hips, and focused on the pleasure.
>She grabbed at Akra's upper lip and lifted herself up, pressing her breasts against the blue tier.
>The food treated the tongue like a lover; wrapping her legs around the tip, squeezing it desperately close while she ground her hips against it.
>Tel couldn't peel her eyes away from the terrifying and tantalizing scene.
>She even felt herself become aroused at the sounds the doomed woman was making.
>It didn't take long for the woman to essentially marinate herself for her queen, her body then become relaxed and face happy.
>Akra reminded her of her fate, however, when she used her fingertip to slowly push the morsel the rest of the way into her mouth.
>It was only as her lips started to approach her face did the woman come to and start to panic, reaching a hand out to Tel before disappearing forever.
>The sound of the gulp was the most terrifying sound in the kingdom.
>Akra stopped for a moment, because like Tel, the moaning woman had gotten her worked up.
>From the collection between her breasts, she selected a man.
>Instead of raising him to her mouth, as he was resigned to accept, she lowered him toward her fur bikini bottoms.
>The hem pulled out, showing Tel and the man the queen's most intimate areas.
>First she rubbed him against her dampening lips, then slowly began to insert him inside.
>Once his cries were muffled, she pulled her hands away, and continued her stride, as if nothing was amiss.

(cont.)
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>>7394304

Actually, make that the end. Want time to develop the next part.
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The first chapter of the Cia Giantess story can now be found here:

http://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6470
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My namea bump
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WHERE IS WRITEFRIEND?
WHERE IS MY BUSTY BREAKNECK?
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We got the first images of Busty Breakneck, thanks to the OC drawthread!
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>>7397180
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>>7393271

I'm back, just saw kingsmen. Fucking rocked, and thus I'm feeling generous.

Any requests? Is OR to linked post related still out and about?
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>>7397190

Holy shit.

Looking good.

Saved.
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Could someone do a story based off of >>7389073
? Preferably with the MC waking up transformed after having sex
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>>7397877
Still here
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>>7399145
seconding
Mal0 is a cute
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>>7399219

One last thing before I begin writing then,
Where does this take place? A forest?
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>>7399488
An oasis gets my vote
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>>7399544

If you're OR, then sure.
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>>7400283
Yep I'm the OR. Not sure how I can prove it, so have a few pics
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>>7400860

You're a mobile user too?
Damn, lemme ask you a question. Since you know obscure MMORPG's, do you know Archeage?
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>>7401997
I've heard about archeage, but I haven't played it. When I was active in obscure MMOs I was more into the anime styled RPG ones.
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>>7402045

Well Archeage is a Korean Made MMO, so you'll like it a lot.

I'll get to the "Harpy Harvest" now.
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>>7402245

>Note to self : Bring more water than whiskey next hunt
>Day one: I've been hunting in the desert for some time now, looking for Harpy eggs, as I hear the locals treat them as a delicacy, and they sell for quite a bit.
>So far, all that's in the desert is rocks, sand, and even bigger rocks, with some dead shrubbery mixed in.
>Nothing on the hunt as of yet, but I'm confident.
>Day two: still nothing, and it's blisteringly hot.
>Day three, I'm about ready to give up, but I saw an oasis in the distance, and began my trek onwards. This might just be worth it.
>Day four: the place is filled with ponds, rivers and lots of trees. Bound to be game here.

Am I doing good so far?
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>>7402366
Huh. Didn't expect a journal entry esque entrance so far. Looks promising, so go on...
Will also take a look at archeage gameplay when given the chance
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http://pastebin.com/bmYjVJuW

Loud House. Lincoln and Lucy are in an S&M relationship, with Lincoln as the dom ... but it was all Lucy's doing.

I know, I know, but The Loud House thread is too busy talking about some CYOA thing that another writer is bringing back, so at least here people will actually read this fucking thing.
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>>7402525
>so at least here people will actually read this fucking thing
You sure about that?
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>>7402585
You read the post.

That counts.
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>>7402525
I'm not reading that, sorry.
You're welcome to leave it here tho, all writing is welcome.
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>>7402634
Did Loud House threads really piss people off that much?
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Did anyone save the dragon king vore stuff? I missed it last thread.
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>>7402652
I know I did. And not just because of that one shitheap who kept spamming threads.
Those threads are never on any page besides 1 unless they are past bump limit, cause someone keeps bumping them up if image was reached, but bump was not.
They're too fast for /trash/ and needlessly make all the slower threads suffer.
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>>7402724
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7318004
Make sure to always check the OP for the last thread

>>7402747
As much as I despise them for ruining my cozy trash, I can't blame them since they technically cannot be on /co/ and have just as much right to be here as anyone else. If anything, direct your hatred towards the mods there.
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>>7402820
A lot of the pictures seem to be broken.
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>>7403006
Oh that's right, they were having picture troubles earlier, my bad
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bump

>>7402652
I'm only pissed that you guys have generals with active nsfw writers and artist. It feels like there's nothing like that for some shows and comics.
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>>7402525
Loud House-liking Anon.
Can you explain why this series has its folowing? The times I was there I couldn't really discern what was so special.
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>>7402724
>>7402820
>>7403006
>>7403400
I've got all the fresh greens on my phone and home PC so will post them in a bit, but I didn't save the previously posted dragon king stuff that inspired them.
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>>7391180
workin
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>>7407343
Oh good you're still alive.
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Who else really loves male orgasms? I have a ton of requests, but most of them one or more guys cumming a lot.
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>>7407343
By the way, how goes the sexual harassment so far? Need any help with anything?
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>>7408060
It's coming along nicely I'd think, lot of revising and editing to get everything right

Original first revision I posted of the intro looks archaic now, but I don't want to tease anything until I'm closer to finishing it
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>>7407342
I got that.
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>>7408541
OK cool
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>>7408487
That sounds pretty good. Can't wait for the final product!
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>>7402366
Still there bud?
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>>7399145
Thirding this
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beep beep I'm a
personwhocan'tbebotheredtowriteanythingatthemoment

bump
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>>7410057

I'm still here.

I'm gonna continue soon.

Shit happens.

Sorry.
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Page 5 bump
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>>7412171

Page 7 bump
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Still holding onto hope for hot male inkling and female octoling action
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>>7413904
Well, don't get your hopes up, because even if I finish it today (most likely), as I said it will be OK at best.
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>>7413974
Okay or not I still get to read some decent Splatoon smut.
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>>7389763
If you're there, requesting a oneshot about an anon out on the beach with his milfy Roserade lover, both of whom are very horny for each other. They try to enjoy the day and not be horn dogs, but each attempt at doing average beach things end up lewd, such as applying lotion on Roserade leading to some heavy ass groping and buttjob, or burying anon in sand leads to her facesitting him until she climaxes. Or even him helping her learn how to float/swim, leading to boob groping and thighjobs. It all accumulates when they play 1v1 volleyball, where they can't control it and bone right there, with him going BALLS DEEP in both holes.
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>>7402366

>Day five: I've set up camp by the largest pond, and I've set a couple snares for safety, and-
*Whoosh!*
>What? That must've been one of my snares!

I'm back, and ive managed to scrawl that much. Will do more soon, apologies.

Btw, how articulate is the Harpy?
Human, hooman, or hoomin?
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>>7416820
Welcome back anon. I say hooman, but just has issues with pronunciation. Otherwise can speak normally
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Did another chapter of a vore interactive I frequent. It's a dragonite girl voring a mega-houndoom with her ass. I'm a bit of a vore fiend, and it was a quick hour of writing to get this most recent part done.

Contains: Anal Vore, Forced breast milk feeding, anthro, female on herm.

http://pastebin.com/swYT0zxn

And here's the original entry if you'd rather use writing.com to do it interactive style on writing.com

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2029451-Pokmon-Vore/map/1332121122112111122112212

I'm looking for critique if anyone is up for reading it. It's long.
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>>7417185

Thanks.

>I went outside my luxurious tent, to see that one of my snares had caught a Harpy! Jackpot!
>But it seemed pained, and there was no blood.
>"A-are you OK?" I asked it calmly.
Could hooman let me down? Hahn...
>It groaned loudly, and I felt bed for the poor thing.
>As I let it down from the trap,.It was as if it had placed full trust in me.
Does hooman have food? I'm hungry...
>I didn't know how to respond, and it's stomach was bulging unnaturally, so at first I was reluctant to oblige.
>Eventually I caught it a fish from the pond and cooked it, and it ate it with no hesitation. Perhaps it didn't know I was the one who set the trap...
Thank you for the feesh, could I slept here? I have no nest...
>This was my chance! I could wait for it to come home with me, and I'd have an endless supply of cash!
>I let it sleep by my tent, and not much happened for 2 more days. Until late at night...
Uh...Nnng...Ahn...
>I awoke to strained voices coming from outside the tent.
>I grabbed my lantern, went outside, and found it by a tree bending over.
>It was trying to lay an egg! Just my luck!
>But it was then when. It saw me, but it was scared or worried.
Could...Huh...Hooman help? Ahn...
>Help it give birth? I'm not a bird expert, but I agreed anyways.
>It turned it's hindquarters to me and spread.
>I knew what I had to do.
>I pulled down my pants, and carefully inserted into its delicate rump, being careful not to harm it or the egg.
Hooman so big... Eeh...
>I gently began thrusting back and forth, slowly easing the egg out with my hand as well.
>Eventually I caught it with a mightu "pop" and the Harpy and I collectively orgasmed.
Thank you, hooman...
>It said meekly as it passed out into sleep.
>Perhaps I should stay here a little longer than expected.
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>>7418183

PHEW I worked hard on that.

Like it?

I'm thinking I have time to make a fetishgreen of my own, if that's permitted.
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>>7418368

Bump.
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Where could a guy go to host his writings in order to entice commissioners? I'm doing it for free when I could be getting peanuts for smut.
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>>7418368
Whoop, sorry, fell asleep on the bed.
Felt a bit quicker than I imagined, but it makes for a decent start of some fun in the future. Thank you man (and may RNG bless me with more numbers like that in the future).
No one is stopping you from making your own, so go for it.
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>>7420939
You have tumblr, Ao3, take a chance with FFnet, or even go to hentai foundry (HF). They're the common websites for smut I think.
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>>7421580
Is there any reason to not go for all of them at once? Also deviantart, depending on level of lewdness.
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>>7389831
>>7419414
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>>7418368
>I'm thinking I have time to make a fetishgreen of my own, if that's permitted.
"is it permitted to write fetish greens in a thread about writing fetish greens" what kind of a question is that?
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>>7421644
Ao3's audience seems to favor m/m and f/f pairings, while tumblr has the whole stigma thing. FFnet has iffy things related to smut (you probably won't be banned, but as it is technically not allowed groups will tattle to mods on that site to ban you). HF has a quality check in mind so it may take a while for a story to show up.

Personally the more you use the more complex it is, but nothing is stopping you from using them all.
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>>7421752
I see, I see.

Oh also furaffinity. Yes thar be furries, but it is another smut venue.
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Page 10 bump
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>>7421699

Actually, it's the specific fetishes that I need ask are permitted.
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>>7420939
>>7421580
>>7421644

No reason not to try them all at once, as they each have their strengths and weaknesses.

Archive of Our Own (Ao3) is the island people swam to after the Adult Fanfiction ship started to sink. It's relatively new compared to other writing sites, but the user base is very large. It has a great system for uploading, with auto-completing tags and other handy features. It's not all smut, however, so you're sharing real estate with fart joke adventures and teenage romance.

Hentai Foundry (HF) is one of my favorites. Very easy to use for uploading, and searching. Its categories exist due to popularity, though. So while you likely won't have a category for a story about 30-30 nailing Judge J.B. McBride that's more specific than just "Cartoons," you'll have ten different Batman categories. You know a fandom is popular when the pairings are big enough to get their own category. Users also go to HF first for the pictures, as those are front and center on the site, with writing something you have to look for. Even so, the writing community continues to thrive there.

Tumblr I would recommend using most as an advertising space than a retail one. The face of tumblr might scare off some smut writers, fearing super scrutinizing readers, but beneath that layer you can get a lot of good stuff. Tumblr's layout is garbage, though, and does not lend itself for writing longer than a few paragraphs.

Literotica is where I got my start, and remains the highest quality smut you'll find. Also makes it harder to get noticed and noticed well. Anything you submit goes through a review process that can take a few days. I've never had something rejected for being low quality, though. Just once for "You can't feature copyrighted characters that have been aged-up from their initial appearance." So Finn as an 18 year old? It's a no go. Profiles are almost never used, so hard to post up commission offers, just work you've done.
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>>7424082

I've also been using Pastebin as a quick and dirty means of showcasing my greentext commissions, then links to the final drafts on sites like HF and Ao3.

Best place to set up shop for commissions is right here, though. They come in freely and easily, and most are open to anyone who will take them. They're a lot of fun to do, and you'll get feedback from others besides the OR. Doing them got me back out of my writing slump, I'll say that.
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>>7394304

>Akra and Tel had reached the forest's edge, finally.
>The trees lived up to the name of the Colossal Forest.
>Even Akra couldn't stand above the tree line.
>"She's in there," Tel reminded her Queen.
>Akra said nothing, just got down onto one knee and closed her hand around Tel.
>The blonde was set down onto the ground, staring up at the giantess.
>"Go in and find her, and bring her to me," she instructed.
>Tel knew it was unwise to question the will of the giantess, and she had already been shown mercy once before; it was unlikely she would see it again.
>But the request was so odd, so impossible, she instinctively protested.
>"Bring her out here? My queen, there is no way I can do that! Can't you come in and grab her?"
>Many silent moments passed between Akra and Tel, leaving the human unsure of her fate.
>Again she found the human's bold nature amusing, and so she explained herself.
>"I cannot. Have you ever tried to catch a spider in your home? They are fearful, they run and hide. She will likely do the same," Akra explained. "Go in, find her, and lead her to the edge."
>Though her reasoning had been explained, it did not make the task seem any less impossible to Tel.
>Sensing her continued apprehension, blue fingers reached between her tits and pulled out a sweaty, naked, human man.
>He was set down, stumbling to his knees beside Tel.
>"He can help you," she said. "You evaded capture once, you can do so again," Akra reassured.
>Knowing there was no use in arguing further, Tel took in a deep breath, waiting for the man to get up so he could follow her into the forest.
>Tel was more cautious with her steps, the forest floor rough on her bare feet, and the dangers that lurk in the shadows ever present.
>The man was even more fearful, and he didn't even know what they were searching for.
>"Let's just run!" he begged Tel
>"Where?"
>"Anywhere! Away from that monster of a queen," he pleaded.

(cont.)
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>Tel considered the idea for a moment. It seemed rational, they had been given a second chance at life and in a world this unkind, it was always best to take any angle given to you.
>But she knew better.
>"It'd be more dangerous out there," she said.
>Tel was born and raised within the kingdom, and had no knowledge of the vast untamed wilds the humans were born into. But she had heard stories.
>It was these stories that reminded the humans under Akra that though they might die at any moment to her casual hunger and lust, their chances were exceedingly higher with her than alone.
>"She's just going to eat you when you get back, IF you get back," he said to her, trying to argue his point further.
>He likely wasn't wrong. She had been let live for a distinct purpose, and if she succeeded, it was finished.
>Akra had no reason to keep her alive. The reason she was in the line up to begin with was she couldn't bear children.
>"Just...shut up and keep moving," she tried to silence him with, frustrated in the sense he was making.
>The deeper they went, the more noises the forest created around them. Sounds they knew to be that of other creatures, possibly those with empty bellies.
>At least Tel could hang onto the fact that they were getting close to the spider's nest. However much comfort that could afford, that was.
>The man didn't have such securities, though.
>When the sounds became too much, he started to run past Tel.
>"Wait!" she yelled, hoping to turn him around before he ran right into the spider's nest.
>Regardless of her actions, he wouldn't make it to the nest anyway.
>Down from the treeline the spider woman fell, landing with a crashing sound that demonstrated just how heavy her spider half was.
>The man had fallen onto his back, and while scrambling to his feet, the spider woman grabbed him and lifted him up; holding him by his wrists with one of her black, clawed, hands.

(cont.)
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>>7424632

>"What this?" the giant spider woman queried, running a tongue along her fangs. "Have I been brought a snack?"
>Tel could do nothing for that man, even though she did want to save him. In that moment, all she could do was think of how to save herself.
>The monster ran her razor sharp finger tips down the man's impressively built frame. He winced when his prick was pricked by her studying touch.
>"No, even better," she said, amused. "You have brought me seed."
>"So strong, so virile," she mused. "My brood will be very strong with your help."
>He wasn't sure what kind of help he could offer, but he knew it wasn't something he wanted, no matter how alluring the human half of the monster was.
>"But, first," she broke her many eyes from the man, to snap the red glowing orbs at Tel. "I must eat to gather my strength."
>She still didn't have a plan, but there was always the one that she could always fall back on: run.
>Tel was given mere seconds of a headstart, as the monster had to take a moment to bind her catch in webbing and stick him to a tree.
>The blonde had scurried through the forest before, and knew the area well; but the spider was faster, nimbler. Tel hoped her knowledge trumped that.
>It didn't.
>Ten feet from the edge she was tackled to the ground by the overbearing spider woman.
>The victor lowered her body, laying her busty upper frame along the naked woman's back.
>"I remember you, human," she spoke into her ear, her saliva dripping with venom she could inject at any moment. "I shall enjoy digesting you for weeks," she promised.
>Tel felt the searing hot venom dripping onto the back of her neck, and the hissing sound the monster made as it opened its mouth to bite.
>Before her life could be ended, Tel proved yet again she was the luckiest human in the world.
>A giant blue hand broke through the forest's edge and grabbed the spider woman, pulling it out without delay.

(cont.)
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>>7424719

>Tel slowly emerged from the forest, and saw that her queen had the spider clutched in her hand, and her latest human treat kicking from between her lips.
>Akra held the spider half between her fingers, turning her around in the air, studying her kicking, sinewy legs, and the curious human half to her.
>The human was rolled over to sit between her cheek and teeth, so that Akra could speak; the human's yells occasionally accompanying the queen's words.
>"So, you are real after all," Akra mused. Tel was certain the giantess knew all the beasts of the forest, but apparently this one was new to her.
>"Of course I'm real, now let me go!"
>The spider-woman was bold, even in the face of certain death. Perhaps she had never faced a predator before.
>Akra ignored the plea and spoke directly.
>"You cursed one of my citizens with infertility. Remove the curse."
>The woman spat translucent green saliva at Akra, though it didn't even faze her.
>The ice giantess opened her mouth wide, showing the forest-dweller the human that had been moved back to her tongue.
>Keeping her lips parted, she began to make her tongue do little waves, upending the human and causing her to slip down into the deep, dark, cavern.
>Akra gave a deep gulp, then let her heavy breath wash over the spider. "Do it, or you're next."
>She must have been confident in her unappetizing appearance, because she just resumed shouting obscenities at the giant.
>The giantess was happy with this decision. Now she just had to decided where to start first.
>Turning her around, Akra moved the spider's large backside into her mouth.
>She had decided that since the creature was half beast and half human, she would chew up the beast half and swallow the human half. No reason to break with tradition.
>Strong incisors pressed down onto the hard shell, causing a crack to tear across the heart-shaped design that had naturally formed on the shiny surface.

(cont.)
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>>7424777

>"Please, please don't!" the spider yelled, begging for her life for the first time. "I am the last of my kind!"
>Tel was surprised this gave Akra pause, and watched as the creature was pulled back out, and turned to face the blue visage again.
>"The last of your kind?" she repeated, making sure she heard correctly.
>After a brief moment to recover from the pain, she confirmed. "Yes, the last. Thanks to you."
>A thin blue arch raised over Akra's eye, curious as to how she drove a species she never knew existed toward extinction. "Me? How?"
>"By taking all the humans, of course!"
>Judging by her face, the panting woman saw that the giantess was truly clueless to how she had damned her kind.
>"I need humans to breed with, and to eat," she began to explain. Tel could not hear what they were saying above, aside from the bellowing words Akra let out, though they didn't offer her much context.
>"But they were all led out of the forest by you, to be selfishly kept behind your walls. So my kind began to die out. I had to turn to consuming berries and small woodland creatures to live this long, but it won't be enough. I cannot produce offspring like this. The wildberries even make my eggs smell appetizing to other creatures, so any that could be born are eaten, and the few that aren't are born weak and don't live more than a day."
>"How would humans help you breed? Do you not need spider...men, to have sex with?" Akra asked. Ice giant and human reproduction worked the same, more or less, so Akra assumed this was the case for everyone else.
>"There are no male arachne," she revealed, stressing the name of her species. "We use the semen of other creatures to produce our offspring. Humans are the best for this," she revealed.
>"And yet you eat them, too," Akra added.
>All she could do was shrug and smile, "What can I say? They're good lays, and good snacks."
>Akra had to agree with that.

(cont.)
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>>7424830

>"Aren't they a little big for you, though?" Akra asked, never considering that humans can just be cut up and eaten in parts. Though it seemed the arachne hadn't considered that either.
>"Normally, yes, but curses are not all I can do with magic," she said with a grin. "I can shrink them, for a moment. I swallow them, and they regrow in my stomach."
>She smiled and rubbed between her stomach and her pussy, the last bit of human of her before it the spider half began, as the thought of eating a human made her both hungry and horny.
>"Mmm, I can keep them alive for weeks inside me," she happily shared. "I swallow berries for them to eat while inside. Their survival instincts refuse to let them just give up. Their determination and will creates for very strong offspring," she added.
>"I wish mine lasted that long," Akra said while rubbing her stomach, feeling that her snacks were already growing weaker and not struggling as much. The two non humans shared a laugh.
>After the laugh, Akra narrowed her eyes and repeated her first order. "Now remove the curse from my human."
>The arachne peered down at Tel and sneered. "I can't. I would if I could, but I can't. Curses don't just wash off," she revealed.
>Akra pondered for a moment. She had come to remove the curse, but now it looked like she failed. She shared a laugh with a monster, but she'd rather have a fertile citizen.
>As she thought, her thumb stroked against the arachne's torso, feeling the find black silk that covered very little of her pale white skin.
>Even what little she could feel, it felt divine, sensual, and warm.
>"These clothes, where did you get them?" Akra asked, unaware how inappropriate it was to be pressing her large thumb against the arachne's huge breasts - not that she'd complain.
>"I, mmm, I make them," she said, trying to keep a clear head while the giant massaged her with just one finger.

(cont.)
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>"Could you make clothes for me?"
>"Y-yes, oh goodness, yes I could. Though it would take time, and energy. Neither of which I, mmm, which I have much of."
>"Then I propose a trade," Akra said when she cruelly removed her thumb. "I shall bring you humans, a few, for you to survive and thrive. Though I suggest you breed some, support them so they can produce in greater numbers. Sow the seeds, so to speak," she began to offer.
>"In return, you create these fine silks for me."
>Arachne found the proposition most agreeable, and the two settled on the arrangement before the woman was set back down.
>"Here is your first shipment." The remaining human was plucked from her breast and laid down before the new ally.
>It was a woman, young and svelte, and too exhausted to try to run away.
>It was true what the arachne said before, about needing her energy, and so rather than take it from Tel, she offered up a show to Akra of how she ate.
>She was lifted up and was forced to wrap her legs around the arachne's human waist.
>Surprising to all, she began to make out with the human, passionately.
>Hands that looked like they could eviscerate a cow ran delicately and loving over the human's sweaty body, leaving a trail of dull purple runes on her skin.
>The human surrendered to the pleasure, even lifting up a hand to grope the spider's giant tit.
>The runes set, they began to hum with a purple glow. Gradually the woman began to shrink, until she fell, 6 inches tall, into the spider's palm.
>She was swallowed, inch by inch, into the spider's hungry mouth. The bulge in her throat squirmed as she forced her prey down.
>The arachne moaned as the human regrew to full size within her, and began to pound on her interior walls. "Oh it's been too long," she said with a sigh. "Now, I shall get started with that male I captured earlier."
>Akra spoke up, knowing which she referred to, "Him? Oh he won't do, he's sterile."

(cont.)
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>>7424987

>The woman looked back with a grin, reassuring Akra with, "Do not worry. We arachne are very fertile. He will be able to breed with me."
>Before the spider reached the forest's edge, Akra called out for one last thing.
>"Tell me, arachne: you can shrink people, so can you grow them too?"
>The creature just smiled and winked before returning to the shadows of the forest.
>Tel let out a heavy sigh, glad she had survived at least her second encounter with the arachne. Now she was unclear about what Akra would do, who was staring down at her with icy blue eyes.
>Akra opened her mouth wide, but not to swallow, but to moan. Eyes rolled back, and the ice giantess fell back to lay on the grass.
>Tel watched her queen undo her fur bikini bottoms, revealing her throbbing pussy.
>Strong blue fingers pumped in and out of her intimate area, causing more juices to dampen the ground beneath her.
>Tel covered her ears when Akra let out a deafening roar of climax.
>When she opened her eyes again, the human woman saw the human Akra had stuffed into herself earlier being pulled back out.
>He wasn't moving much, but he was moving somewhat, and coughing.
>As he was moved up, he was treated to the sight of his queen groping her nude breast in the after glow of her orgasm.
>She thanked her toy by sucking him clean, and letting him finish on her tongue, before swallowing him down with his load.
>Redressed, Akra picked Tel back up and planted her on her shoulder, then started back for the kingdom.
>They walked in silence for a time, Tel unsure of her fate, until Akra finally broke the tension.
>"You did well, Tel," she complimented. "You survived against the odds."
>"Thank you, my queen," was all Tel could say.
>"I think I shall keep you around," she thought out loud, smiling. "I will give you the life of excitement and adventure you dreamed of.
>Tel wasn't sure if this was a good or bad thing, but she was excited all the same.

(end)
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>>7421565

Thanks. I think I might do more.
Of "Hands on Study". That a good name?

And then when all are present more Breakneck family.
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>>7426000
Well I can't think of any better name so that can work.
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>>7426103

So, what should happen this time?

Since we've reached an agreement.
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>>7426150
While he did manage to encountrtbone that probably had an egg in her, it could be likely that she is more wily/wild after laying it, now that there is no burden inside her. Hunter will have to find a way to calm her down a bit, or at least enough for her to share the egg with him. Breast fondling/suckling come to mind
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>>7426264

Perhaps feeling pity for the poor thing, decides to raise a family with it?

Ooh, might be fun.
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>>7414887
Sorry I passed out when I finally got home, today is probably more likely.

>Decent
uh yeah, sure, "decent"
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>>7421672
>>7389831
>>7426418
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>>7420939
I'm been looking for someone to commission for days. Where are all the writers hiding?
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>>7427051

I'm here, waiting for >>7426264
To come back though, so in the meantime I'll do a commission for you.
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>>7427087
Cool! Do you have a Discord account I could add or any stuff written I can read?
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WHERE
IS
WRITEFRIEND?
WHERE
IS MY
BUSTY BREAKNECK?
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>>7427109
...Yes...? Why does discord have to be involved in everything.

>>7427152
You rang?
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>>7427162
HUZZAH
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>>7427162
>...Yes...? Why does discord have to be involved in everything.
Not him but probably just wants to chat about details at a speedier pace and without eating thread space?
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>>7427162
It doesn't have to be, I just like using it to talk back and forth about writing ideas, pricing, and lots of detail that would clog up the thread.
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>>7427206

I don't price my greens. Just add all the detail in one, clear, thorough post. I'll supply the best I can. My phone's slowly dying.
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>>7427180

Yes, Huzzah. What is it? My phone's dying, so make it quick.
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>>7427248
How about this one?

>>7393415

If that doesn't work, I have another.
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>>7427255
I AM ASKING FOR AN UPDATE ON BUSTY BREAKNECK.
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>>7427300

I need a ring name for the son. Then I'll write it soon.
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>>7427263

And all preceding posts, I'll do it. Just need species.
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>>7427386
Holy shit, that would be incredible!

The girl he breaks could be a MGE Lizardgirl. The girls who break him should be Demons from MGE. The whole thing is pretty much The Obscene Training of Maika except with a Trap rather than a Futanari.
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>>7427428

MGE?

What's that?
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>>7427455
Monster Girl Encyclopedia. It's a setting with a lot of Monstergirls. Although Lizardgirls are just girls who really like to swordfight, and Demons act exactly like you'd expect. You don't need to know the setting exactly.
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>>7427479

So a dickgirl lizardgirl streaming masturbation?

Sounds good.
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>>7426417
Sorry for the delay, was swept away by work.
Yeah that sounds good for the future, but it would be a while before the egg hatches
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>>7427520
Oh, sorry. The guy masturbating would be a human. He'd fuck a Lizardgirl, then be fucked by two Demons.
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>>7416134
The proportions in that pic suck but I think I get the idea, make it a maybe from me
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>>7427557
Oh. OK. So a guy streaming an orgy?

And shooting cum everywhere?

Like a chain orgasm?

And what's the POV?
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>>7427586
The PoV changes depending on the scene.

When he's masturbating,. it's his PoV. It's just him in the room.

When he's fucking the Lizardgirl, it's still his PoV. But he isn't in his room livestreaming anymore. They're somewhere else.

When the Demons fuck him, they kidnap him and take him somewhere else. It's both of them fucking him. The PoV is of someone observing the scene, not a particular person.
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>>7427727

So... A series?

Sounds... Doable.

It'll be really spaced out due to my phone dying.

But never the less, doable.

Can I have the lizard girl be the GF?

Sorry if I invoked TFW.
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>>7427831
Exactly a series! I don't mind if it's spaced out.

Sure. She can be the first girl he fucks.

You didn't invoke anything negative! I'm thrilled you're writing this.
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>>7427971

So, should the demons be dickgirls?

That's that last thing I'm asking.
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>>7428172

They'll be like scanty and kneesocks, for comparison.
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>>7428172
Why not? I like dickgirls.
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>>7427348
maybe like
brawlin' breakneck or something that starts with a b?
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>>7428224

OK, wait a little bit to part one.
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>>7428668

Brawlin breakneck sounds good.
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Is there any way to make myself known?

I'd like to write smut for others, but I'm unheard of so naturally that's difficult.
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>>7428903

Just project yourself.

You will get know.

Perhaps get some publicity here?

I.e. take requests?
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>>7428933
Sure, I'll open myself up to requests.

I'm kind of picky, though, I will admit.
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>>7428975
what things do you like writing about?
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>>7427559
Thank you for the consideration man.
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>>7429046
Furries, or monstrous sorts of things as a whole are probably the most prominent thing. I'm not interested in writing about humans and although I'm confident in my writing abilities, I wouldn't want to tackle canon characters, either, as I would inevitably ruin their personalities.
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Finished the final draft of the clown transformation story.

The only major change I made was changing the characters' names.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/TheDjinn/23233/Hijinks-with-Hilareola

Sorry I haven't been able to do any requests in this thread, but as I finish off more of the last ones, I'll become more free.

>>7429152
There was someone requesting a story done about monster girls and boys, though it revolves around them fucking humans, so not sure if that's past your limit.

There's also several pokemon-related story requests, if you consider those furries and/or monsters.
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>>7429299
YES
YES
YES
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>>7407744
If you're still around, feel free to post them. Perhaps there's at least one that I'll have interest in.
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>>7428224

>"She's gone for the day, so I figured I'd have a little fun with her toys."
>I said to the camera holding a fleshlight in one hand, and my gf's buttplug in the other.
>"I'm thinking, 500$ Gets me to cum today."
>I looked at the chat, it was more furious than last time.
>With comments like "This is breaking so many terms and conditions XP" or "This again? I would report you if you weren't so goddamn hot."
>I was a rulebreaker, I didn't care.
>I got on my hands and knees, and popped the plug into my ass, and started to Fap, with a camera on both sides.
>"Ungh, Looks like today might be your lucky day, I might just do 250$."
> I edged myself, over and over again, waiting for that "generous donation."
>It wasn't till 25 minutes later, that I got a message in chat.
>Seraph 209 (Admin): Here's your 250$, Asshole.
>Wow, the admin gave me money? Perhaps I could milk this a little further.
>"Perhaps you could spare a little more, seraph 209?"
>Seraph 209 (Admin): Oh, you'd like that, wouldn't you, you prick? Just get finish and offline already, you motherfucker.
>I orgasmed, and said in a smug little voice to the camera, "You got it, Cupcake."
>Seraph 209 (Admin): Don't Call me cupcake, queefbreath.

***

Part one.

Like it? It's a setup for sure.

;)
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>>7430001

Hello?
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>>7430458

Anyone here?

OR?
OP?

WriteFriend is getting lonely...
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>>7430458
d e l e t e
t h i s
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>>7431183

Hi! That you OR?
I'm getting lonely.
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>>7431194
No, I'm a procrastinator
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>>7431140
Not OR, but I'm Harpy guy here. What is your time zone? I'm EST over here
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>>7431329

I'm Arizona. We don't acknowledge daylight savings time, so it's 7:25 for me.

About >>7426264
And >>7426417

Would that suffice?
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>>7431720
Did you see >>7427527 ?
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>>7431836

Oh, sorry. No I didn't.
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>>7429152
could you do >>7399145
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>>7431887

>Day 53, I've set up a Harpy sanctuary at the oasis, but only for research purposes. I've grown attached to this place. Ever since she laid her egg, she's been more erratic.
>It's strange, how one minute she's eating her favorite foods, and then the next, screeching and flying all over the place the next. I need to find some way to calm her down.
>Day 55, all my attempts to tranquilize her have failed, and it seems like nothing can ease her unless she's by her egg 24/7. Perhaps I give her what she wants.
>Day 56, I've made a makeshift best with linens, and put her and the egg in it. She seems far calmer, but still somewhat feral.
>She still trusts me to bring her food, and other things, and I've been teaching her to speak more fluent English, so it better to know what she wants at a moment's notice, whether it be food, water, or time alone.
>Day 60, she trusts me to be by her egg, but still holds tightly to it whenever storms pass over the oasis.
>All she does is lay by it, on it, and caress it possessively, and she seems to be gaining weight to the point where it's strenuous to lift herself off the ground, but she refuses to even move from that spot.
>Day 63, I've set her on a slightly more healthy diet, and have coerced to at least getting out of the tent to excersise, but only for an hour a day. She seems too sentimental about the egg...

Working towards Seduction. Baby steps.
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>>7432085
Looking good!
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>>7432269

Agreed.

>>7432085

>Day 65, nothing, and I mean nothing can get her away from that egg, and it seems like shes overly protective of the best now too, and I cant figure out why, but she seems to rub herself against it breast first, so that might help me figure out why.
>Day 66, I've attempted bribing her with copulating, but she seems to refuse...
No! I already have one child, I don't need another!
>However, I've seen that when she rubs herself against the egg, she starts to faintly lactating, as if it's uncomfortable not having her breasts being fed upon, like her egg was supposed to hatch by now.
>Day 67, i-
Uhh, human? Could you leave me alone for a second?
>"W-why, yes, of course..."
>I walked outside, this was unexpected.
>After a few minutes, I peeked back in, and she was rubbing herself against the egg again, but this was my chance to experiment with her.
>"D-do you need help?"
Aah! Go away!
>"Hey! I'm here to help! You look like you need it!"
Aahn... Just, be gentle... Don't hurt the egg.
>She got off the egg, sat down next to it, her breasts dripping lightly. She was in discomfort, and I could tell.
>I kneeled down, and gently cupped her breasts.
Ahhh, uhhh...
>She moaned in pleasure as her milk started dripping more. I got a bucket, and started going to work.
Aah! Yes! So good! Hahn...!
>She nearly filled the bucket full, when all of a sudden she had orgasmed, as if she was enjoying it.
Ooh! So good! Thank you human...!
>"M-my pleasure, just ask if you need any more help..."
I will, and now my titties feel less heavy on me!
>I blushed madly, I never expected her to use such wraunchy language.
>"O-ok then..."
>It was at that moment when she wrapped her wings around me, and hugged tightly.
I...I love you human.
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>>7432629

What a twist ending, Eh?
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>>7431920
Potentially. What is it?
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>>7432629
OR. All that milk better be out to good use. One of these days he should taste it from the source. Kudos
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>>7432817

Thanks. What next in "Hands-on Study"?
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>>7432629
>she had orgasmed, as if she was enjoying it
She clearly was enjoying it if she achieved orgasm. "as if" could be dropped.
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>>7432938

The hunter didn't know that, that's why that's in there.
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>>7432936
After the incident she could become more affectionate to the hunter (full trust and all that). The next 'milking' session comes sooner than anticipated, but she uses it as an excuse to get him to fuck her after he finishes sucking on her breast. After deploying his happy human sauce inside both of her holes, the next morning the egg hatches...And it isn't long before the incident gets her pregnant again. Seems like a decent stopping point afterwards.
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>>7433118

What do you mean stopping point?

Like enough for today?

Also, awesome idea.
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>>7433160
Y'know, the end? The conclusion? The finito? That stopping point.
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>>7433221

Oh.

That seems...

Whatever. Probably for the best, as I should do busty breakneck more soon, and finish >>7430001

If That OR is around.

And since I'm so damn generous, perhaps I could give you my discord and we make more lascivious greens?

I mean if you want to.
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Any advice for new write-friends?
Common mistakes and any general tips would be appreciated.
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>>7437428
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9661958/1/The-Ultimate-Guide-to-Writing-Smut-Fic
If you're writing smut this little diddy could help with what to do.

Some tips from my experience

If you are aiming for an audience, prioritize readability. A story with shit formatting will be an instant turn off. This includes (but is not limited to) the following:
Making sure to use the right spacing between paragraphs
Separating dialog appropriately, whether from 2 characters talking to each other or one who is talking for a longer period of time.
Know when to spot runons and knowing when to use commas and periods.

Afterwards you can keep an eye on technical things. For me, the biggest thing is deciding whether the story you make uses the past or present tense. It is highly recommended to choose one tense and keep it constant throughout (only a few exceptions are made when using both).
Finding a good balance between description and action is also recommended, as too much description of pointless things unrelated to the story will bore people (purple prose), but too much action will prevent them from soaking in the information provided.

From there to me it then boils down to story elements, like what happens in a plot, plot holes, the works.

If you are making a greentext story like >>7432629 and it has two characters, it is recommended that one of the characters do not have the (>) bracket when speaking to distinguish their speech from the rest of the crew. Normally the anon, or you, would not have that bracket, but it is not a 100% necessity.

But this is just my view of things
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>>7437700
Just looking through some of the stories I've done and I can already see some glaring issues and bad habits from what you've written. The smut guide and greentext note were also really useful.

Overall, everything you provided helped alot. Cheers.
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>>7428903
Find a name for yourself.
Post your work often and in dedicated places.
Post them so they don't go overlooked.

t. stepanon
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>>7438548
Oh hey you're here. Do you have the pastebin that contains all of your steps?
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>>7439133
Bump
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>>7389727

Don't know if the OR is still here, but I have taken the Beauty/Calem story I wrote and expanded it into narrative form, found here:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/TheDjinn/23238/Beautys-Bountiful-Bouncy-Backside

I wasn't able to find a way to naturally have Calem reach into her crack and fish around in there. However, I did include a line about how her pants had been pulled down a bit, from the fall, showing off her crack.

I did expand a lot more on the anal scene, including what was going on physically and mentally. I hope you enjoy it!

I believe the only greentext I have left to convert is the Misdreavus one, now.
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>>7433297

I'm back!

Any Requests?

I'll do 2 more today, then another long awaited episode of the Breakneck family
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>>7430001
I really like this! The only thing that would make it better is more detail, and that's because it's already so great.
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>>7441384
cough cough >>7393021
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>>7441603

Ah, yes.

I'll put you on a queue.

>>7441593

Thank you, and it's about time I finish it.
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>>7430001

Part 2 of this will come soon, I just need time.

;)
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>>7440901
OR here, the extra bit added to the anal is absolutely bootyful! A shame you couldn't find a way to get Calem to fish around inside her ass crack. Guess the 'dirt in pants' bit was a bit too lame of an excuse? Either way this is some amazing work! Thank you so much!
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>>7440901
Cool, she's next!
In case you need a refresher of what to add: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7168074/#7317086

Passing thought, but I remember you sharing your ginjika project a great threads back. Do you think Ethan will encounter the protag in your story?
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>>7430001
>There will never be a long series or Doujin about this trap working as a prostitute.
>He will never edge himself for hours to train his dick.
>Have cute emotionless sex with Monstergirls exactly how they pay him.
>Start fucking guys as well when he realizes how much he's into men.
>Generally use his dick like a tool and enjoy all the great sex he's having.
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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked herehttp://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions.x
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>>7441384
This might make a good greentext
>>7407291
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>>7442966
Requesting this but instead of Florges its two fox girls.
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>>7442613

Glad you enjoyed it!

>>7442768

It's certainly possible the protag would run into Ethan. They would have something to talk about, at least.
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>>7413904
http://pastebin.com/7MrBEpWK
Here it is so you an scoff at it.

Days of whining and this is the result, jesus what an insult, I'm really sorry,
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>>7439133
I think his steps were in an earlier thread.
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>>7442962

Speaking of which...

>It wasnt even thirty minutes after that stream where I heard a voice ring out from the front door.
Honey! I'm home! Didya miss me?
>"Of course I did, did you miss me?" The luscious lizard that was my girlfriend had just come home from an impromptu conference at work.
As Chivalrous as ever, and my parents said you were untrustworthy.
>Her parents did have a saying when she started dating, "No Scales, No Fun". They had preferred she date reptiles and only reptiles, but they were just paranoid.
>"Right this way to your room, I shall light some candles soon."
Why thank you, kind sir, I expected no less from a man like you.


Guess who's baaack?!

Sorry I took so long, I'm gonna split part 2 into 2 parts, for convenience.
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After seeing these posts >>7451470 >>7451649 >>7453075 , I'd like to see what a nullodom story would be like, if there'd be anyone up for writing it.
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>>7454816
I'll screencap the posts, pic related, in case the thread they're in will be gone soon.
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Requesting a short story about pikachu and lickitung. Lewd or not just as long as it involves licking
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>>7454847

Be careful what you wish for.

>Lickitung appeared!
>Go, Pikachu!
>Pikachu used thunderbolt!
>Lickitung fainted!

Hehehehehe
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>>7444815
getting caught having sex with the enemy, by the enemy. Well that is one way to go.
I don't know why you're so hard on yourself, this is still pretty good/ I did expect the octoling to be a little more resistant, but whatever work to get her insides coated with blue ink.
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Anyone got any links/suggestions for furfag romance? Read most of kyells and rukis stuff already.
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Where's the dude whose pastebinning Busty breakneck?
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>>7459702
Hi.
I'm reporting in.
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>>7459702
>>7459773
Did you need some pastebinny shit or...?
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>>7454816
>>7454828
Bump, featuring the reverse of what I have in mind.
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>>7460093

I just need the link to what you've put down for my story, for sharing purposes.
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>>7457047
>this is still pretty good
If you say so. It looks like incredibly boring cookie cutter mess to me.
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>>7463534
no bully
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>>7464707
You can't bully yourself
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Misdreavus story will be ready tomorrow, I hope.

I've started playing Tales of Berseria, and the main character checks all of my boxes. She is the best, in the worst way. Or the worst, in the best way.

Her name is Velvet Crowe, she's a super big edgelord who dresses like she fought her way out of a Hot Topic featured in an early Spawn comic. I love it. Game also features some other cuties, so I might dabble with some ideas surrounding them. I'm very early into the game, though, so I shouldn't get ahead of myself.
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>when a mediocre webcomic inspires your fetishes
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>>7464898
Isn't that the one with the implied /ss/ advertising scheme?
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>>7462978
http://pastebin.com/rLmPn6Q8 This is for the first part, I didn't make one for part 2 yet cause I think it isn't done yet, but I have it saved to where WriteFriend last left off.
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>>7469489
It is, yes. She likes the little boy so much because he reminds her of her little brother, but even when the little bro was around, she made some hints that she was the perfect wife material for him.
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>>7468322
I know the feeling
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wobble wibble
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wibble wobble
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>>7471525
>>7472977
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>>7473158
Get out, Mr. Blobby
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>>7473396
wibble wobble wibble wobble?
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>>7469527


WriteFriend here.

Part 2 already is done.
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>>7474416
Alright then, I believe this is would be part 2?
http://pastebin.com/b7KsPtbb
This as far as you wrote and believe the last paragraph is good stop for part 2.
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up
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bouop
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>>7470856
Then, I'll be certain to keep an eye out for any adorable /ss/ from you
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bluh
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>>7464898
>>7442768

Misdreavus story completed and uploaded here:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/TheDjinn/23256/Misbehaving-Misdreavus

I made all the requested changes to the story, as well. I hope they are to your liking!

>>7477453
I love me some /ss/, but I've never written anything involving it, really. At most I'll age the male character up, but still make him childlike in appearance and attitude. I may do the same if I ever do a story with her and him, or maybe I'll make an exception. Who knows.

Also, all the original greentexts have now been turned into narrative format! Unless I'm forgetting one, and I hope I'm not. Going to start looking into taking requests, again, as well. More than likely, I'll stick to keeping them in greentext form, unless I end up making them really detailed and it's easy to turn them into full narratives later on.

(Translatoion, right to left: "I need to calm down...! This kid is my brother...Not really." "Not blood related but he's become a brother to me now." "Not blood related though... Not blood related Not blood related Not blood related Not blood related Not blood related Not blood related Not blood related Not blood related")
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>>7480280
Is >>7391640 >>7391880 still intriguing enough?
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>>7481944
Hey.
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>>7480280
Just wondering but are there any other shows or comics you follow?
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>>7480611
I'm not ruling it out, but I'm still unsure if I have the right skillset for the story. Never written a character with that many animal features, is all.

>>7482974
A lot; might be easier to list the things I don't follow.

The majority of my comic knowledge comes from cartoon adaptations, if I'm being honest, but I've been known to jump into the comics from Marvel and DC. I've also read Saga, Tarot, Hack/Slash, and a bunch of others I can't pull off the top of my head.

Webcomics I'm less well versed in. I peek around Ma3 and Dangerously Chloe, in hopes of random bits of softcore, every so often. Also always up to date on K6BD, though I don't know what I could write concerning that one.

Cartoons I'm not as up to date as I used to be, but I have a good idea of what's out there. I know Loud House is popular right now, but I know nothing of that.

And anime I know very little about. The animes I've seen are Black Lagoon, FMA, Berserk, some Monster Musume, Azumanga Daioh (though I don't think i could write anything based on that series), and most recently JoJo.

If you have any properties you want to see get some lewd greentext about, feel free to list and I'll let you know which ones I'm familiar with and/or willing to do.
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>>7483145
Yeah, I don't want to be the one saying "read/watch this whole thing, just so you can write free porn for me". I would figure if a request interested you enough, you'd check up on the source material anyway.
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>>7483145
I'm not that guy, but please write about a Monstergirl asking to use a guy as a pillow while she sleeps. Then assaulting him while she's sleeping.
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>>7480280
Bumping >>7416134
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>>7426626
>>7482003
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abump
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Alright soo, this thread's greens are

>>7394156
>>7394203
>>7394304
Some more giantess vore

>>7402366
>>7416820
>>7417185
>>7418183
>>7432085
>>7432629
Harpy

>>7424519
>>7424632
>>7424719
>>7424777
>>7424830
>>7424904
>>7424987
>>7425098
More giantess

>>7429299
>>7440901
note to add to the previous screencaps

>>7430001
>>7448546
trap thingy
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>>7480280
Dunno if HF has anything about age, but Ao3 doesn't I think, as long as you label the story.
Also that pic would make for a great fic about her trying so hard to resist the temptation for the boy while he does things that accidentally riles up her list (being cute, saying touchy/adorable things, accidental gropings, hiding him underneath her cape for close quarters contact, etc).

Also if you're taking requests, how about something with one of the new pokegals?

Supposedly Olivia, one of the kahunas in sun/moon, despite her appearance, is very single. She has dressed the way she does (and is supposedly forward with flirting) in order to attract men, but supposedly all it does is scare men. So she may or may not be a desperate Christmas cake. Sun (male protag) could teach her how to attract men...by acting like a couple in broad daylight for the day (reasoning being that such a thing will make men envious). As she probably doesn't know a thing about relationships, Sun may have to show her the ropes, handholding, compliments, that kind of stuff.

But my kink is public affection, so there would also be boob groping, making out, ass slaps and squeezes, and general things that get people looking at her and him with envy. Soft brown/black skin is my favorite to touch. He could even push her shorts down during one of the makeout sessions to make a show of touching her bare ass.

The next day, to her surprise it actually works, with men noticing, talking, and flirting with her. But ultimately she turns them down in favor of Sun, to his surprise. Coitus ensures (not public) where he takes all of her first times (oral, vag, anal).
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>>7483387
>I would figure if a request interested you enough, you'd check up on the source material anyway.

Absolutely.

>>7483391
What kind of monstergirl?

>>7483453
Like with the Sectonia story, a Pokemon might be too far removed from human for me to write about it well, but I'll give it some thought. If it's a ginjika pokemon, though, that's another story.

>>7485190
I could definitely do something along these lines.
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>>7486193
Hmm, I always thought milfing up a pokemon would do for a ginjika, but let me see if I can find a better pic.
Does this work? Plantpenetrator's Roserade proportions are pretty lewd.
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>>7486193
>I could definitely do something along these lines.
Referring to Olivia or the /ss/ talk?
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>>7486880
Both, though mostly Olivia.
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>>7484851
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>>7487263
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>>7487286
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>>7487292
>captcha: street grangeneuv
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>>7487304
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>>7389727
Hello

Can someone please write a fanfiction for me?

Thank you
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>>7488123
On it
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>>7488215
Would you like to know what my idea for the fanfic?
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>>7488229
Nah I got this
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>>7488123
Feel free to throw your request out and see if anybody bites.
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>>7488272
Well, the idea my fanfic, is a story of Carl Gould. Rabbit boy From Arthur, who has Asperger's Syndrome.

As a boy from the decade of the 1970's


http://arthur.wikia.com/wiki/Carl_Gould


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nsmjwHW40ps
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>>7488305
That's a very specific fetish
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>>7488308
You know, I like to be specific with my requests.


If you need other characters, as I could suggest some


I also have oc's (original characters)
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>>7488305
And so, what does he do in the fanfic?
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>>7488400
Well, he moves to Elwood City.

And there is he has to learn how to fit into his new home.


Besides he would like soccer, and some would look weird


Remember that if you need more characters, I have some that I would like to be in the fanfic
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>>7408487
I'm curious about something if you're there. How many words do you have planned? And how goes the lewd bits?
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>>7483145
Well I'd you really are unsure about sectonia I do have another lady that matches her personality and could take her place.
Lillithmon from the digimon series. Smut with the female mons is hard to find outside of renaming, so something with her can help curve those odds. Just replace mentions of sectonia in that pastebin with her...Though she is probably not a virgin
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>>7491141
As hot as Lilithmon is, you seemed very interested in the Sectonia angle of things. If I'm going to start doing paid commissions, I need to learn how to write things that I haven't before, so I'm going to get the original request a shot.
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>>7491141
How big do you want Sectonia to be, relative to the human? Do you have an idea of where you want her bee-pussy to be?
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>>7492918
Oh cool thanks man. Mostly I just like the idea of giving underrated characters the smut they deserve.
>>7493062
>Size
I imagine her to be about maybe 1.75x to 2.25x the size/height of an average human. In comparison, her abdomen might be a bit taller than the human, though there is no official size sheet. Sure the size is big, but that's what bondage is for, to hit the spots that might be annoying to reach :^)
>Bee pussy
https://youtu.be/3vPV_WeQxV8
There anatomically, or pic related
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>>7493228

>Sectonia, a large queen bee, as powerful as she was beautiful, looked into the magical mirror.
>It was not her own reflection she was admiring, but that of another world: earth.
>She had grown bored in her royal splendor.
>Though she had every reason to be held on such a high pedestal, above all others, it could be lonely, even with her servant Taranza.
>So, Sectonia wished to gain a companion, though one she could still exact her will over; one that would naturally be subservient to her beauty and might.
>She wanted a pet.
>Earth offered up a lot of options, but the one species that she liked the most was the human race.
>They came in so many shapes and sizes, and they all wore such fun outfits.
>She looked forward to dressing her human pet up in many different outfits that would go with her own.
>Choosing just the right pet was time consuming, but important to be done right.
>The mirror could only bring in one human at a time, so she would need to choose the best.
>After an exhaustive search, she found one that fit her needs perfectly.
>Through further magic, Sectonia's mirror glimmered and the surface rippled.
>Out of the mirror came the human she had selected.
>He was a rather average human male, but, for whatever reason, Sectonia had determined that he was the best of the lot.
>The captured human looked around the lavish and bizarre environment.
>Though it was not nearly as lavish and bizarre as the gigantic queen bee that hovered above him.
>Sectonia clapped her gloved hands together happily, pleased with her success, expected though it was.
>Alien though she was, her beauty was immediately apparent.
>She admired her selection as well, he looking even cuter in person.
>Sectonia ordered Taranza over, to put the human in a collar that looked more expensive than the house he was plucked from.
>Taranza handed the attached leash to his queen, so she could drag along her pet with her.

(cont.)
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>>7495749

>The sound of the collar dragging on the floor echoed through the large chamber.
>Sectonia looked back, and saw that her pet had slipped free of his collar.
>She clucked her tongue, and this time put the collar on him herself, threading one end through the other, and locking it into place.
>This time she saw how easily the human was able to just undo the collar himself and let it drop to the floor.
>He was smarter than she thought; at least it meant he'd be easier to train.
>It took some convincing, but finally the human followed Sectonia out of the chamber and throughout her large castle.
>Sectonia goes on and on about how her beauty and splendor has brought peace and prosperity to so many lands.
>The human just nodded along, still dumbstruck, until she mentioned how she had been so lonely at the top, but was happy to now have a pet.
>he immediately rejected the idea that he was her pet, her property.
>Sectonia laughed, covering her mouth with her white hand, floating free of an arm.
>His disobedience was adorable, she thought.
>Only because she knew he would fall in line quickly. How could he not?
>It would turn out to be much harder to break him in than she had assumed it would be.
>Sectonia showed him to her bed chambers, and the large circular mattress in the middle.
>She stated that he would be sleeping there with her, curled up at the foot of the bed every night.
>He outright refused, and each night would just find slumber in one of the many large chairs and couches that littered the needlessly large bedroom.
>Sectonia was finding it increasingly frustrating how her new pet refused to accept that he was just that - her pet.
>So used to having people fall in line at the mere sight of her, she was outright vexed how this creature had resisted her natural charms.
>Taranza suggested that her beauty could still convince him to fall in line, she just needed to remind him of it, really drive home how gorgeous she was.

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>>7495844

>At first, Sectonia tried to sway her reluctant pet with all the fine jewelry and fashions she wore, all in colors of gold, purple, and pink, and how he could share in that splendor.
>He rolled his eyes at the excess of it all.
>Then she realized that the human was too stupid to appreciate the finer things in life, that it was just a beast, which is why it would make such a good pet.
>And like a beast, she would need to appeal to his baser instincts.
>So rather than accent the beauty of her jewels and silks, she started to show off her natural beauty.
>Though primarily bee-like in her form, Sectonia did have several traits that were decidedly humans. Traits she could exploit to get her pet's attention.
>First were her eyes. Large pools of intense pink and white, that exuded mischief, grace, and elegance.
>He had to admit they were enchanting, alluring and nothing like he had ever seen.
>Yet, they belonged to a bee woman who kidnapped him and told him he was to be her pet.
>That was somewhat of a dealbreaker.
>Though she found it a bit crass, she had no choice by to demand he recognize her beauty and authority by flaunting her more intimate assets.
>She would occasionally buzz up behind the human while he walked, so she could press her enormous breasts up against his back.
>Her tits were so bountiful and large, they were almost always on the human's mind.
>Even though she was able to float gracefully through the air, her breasts still managed to give little hops and jiggles when her body moved decisively.
>He thought of what they must look like under that heart-shaped design on her royal garb.
>How they must feel as he would try to lift just one with both his hands, his size so diminutive compared to hers.
>Yet his will continued to overcome his desire.
>He knew the payment was to be her pet, her slave, for as long as she wanted.
>So he continued to refuse her increasingly lewd behaviors.

(cont.)
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>>7495973

>Perhaps it was her mind that could sway his will, she thought.
>In a rather un-royal display, Sectonia's words began the descent from flirtatious to downright pornographic.
>"Such a cute little pet," she would say, while rustling his hair.
>"You are simply the perfect fit for me," she would remind him when she got him pressed up to the wall, her intimidating chest pinning him to it.
>"Every inch of you looks so delicious," she would purr, sniffing at his neck and nipping at his ear.
>"Are you not enthralled by my beauty, pet?" she had to ask, only to be rejected outright.
>"Do my eyes not enchant? Do my breasts not have a pleasing shape?" Sectonia wondered while fluttering her eye lids and squeezing her desirable tits.
>He would always need to answer after a few seconds to think, because his initial thought was always 'yes.'
>Whenever he rejected her, she would huff and fly away slowly, allowing the human to watch her thick "hips" behind her rapidly moving wings sway gently from side to side.
>The frills of her clothing were not enough to cover up the pleasing shape of her backside.
>It was so large, yet feminine. He wanted nothing more than to explore every inch of it, to squeeze and nuzzle up against it. It was even big enough that he could sleep on it.
>Sectonia deduced that the human was less visual and more kinetic, and he had to feel her to really appreciate her beauty.
>She would grab his wrists and throw his hands up to her breasts, challenging him to keep them aloft as her cheeks reddened.
>She started to try to get him to bond with her by carrying him wherever she could, keeping him hugged against her massive chest.
>"Why do you fight me so?" she would wonder aloud, stroking his hair as he struggled.
>"Even stranger...why do I need your approval so badly?"
>Sectonia was growing frustrated, confused, with each passing failure, and the human's will was breaking, though she didn't notice.
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>>7496118

>Her entire worldview was beginning to crumble as this human refused to acknowledge her beauty.
>Even Taranza's reassurances were not enough to keep her mind from getting clouded further by lust and self doubt.
>She stopped bothering to dress in her fine dresses and jewelry.
>Sectonia flew through her castle, naked and yellow, begging the human to notice her bare beauty.
>Of course he did notice. How could he not?
>Her breasts were as perfect as he imagined, with nipples that looked so delicious his mouth watered at the sight of them.
>Her backside looked so plump and inviting; he wanted to bounce up and down on it.
>Her eyes that were once filled with smug pride projected only maddening desire now.
>Sectonia no longer saw herself as a queen, as something to be admired and respected.
>She had degraded herself to a more base, and primal state.
>The only clothing she now allowed herself to wear was the collar she originally tried to get the human to wear.
>One day, as the human was making himself something to eat in the large kitchen, Sectonia hovered in, her body low to the ground, her head hung low and eyes looking up.
>He watched her breasts sway with her movements as she approached.
>"Please," she panted, her breath hot on his neck, her hands gripping his shoulders as she tried desperately to keep him.
>"Please, take me," she pleaded. "See me as beautiful, want me, even a little. I will do anything," she said, her voice cracking with near sobbing.
>"I want you, I need you," she reminded him, her hands gripping at her curves, trying to quell their maddening cries for attention from his hands, her own making a poor substitute.
>"Tell me I'm beautiful, tell me I-" her desperate cries were silenced when the human had finally had enough.
>Since day one he had found her beautiful, but it was her attitude he found distasteful, so much that it eclipsed her gorgeous features.
>Yet he forced himself to reject her, for his own sanity. But no more.

(cont.)
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>>7496280

>His hands planted against her smooth cheeks, holding her face still while he kissed her deep, letting out weeks of repression.
>Sectonia was understandably shocked. She had been at the edge of her rope, staring into the abyss of madness, and suddenly she was yanked away from the edge.
>His mouth moved to her neck, letting her to whisper things like, "Yes, master, please."
>Being called her master was odd, but his mind was far too focused to let that slow him down.
>Sectonia carried them out of the kitchen, the wet smacks of their lips mixing with the buzzing of her wings as she took them to her bedchambers, to land upon her olympic-sized mattress.
>Naturally, he wanted to explore her breasts first.
>She was so large, her breasts so massive, he could wrap his arms around one, hugging it against his chest as he kissed at the flesh atop her tit.
>Sectonia bit her finger, trying to suppress her natural cries, but clearly any dams she had up were broken now.
>The human played with her nipple with his hands, his mouth, even his chest. He delighted in feeling the large nub rub up and down against his now bare chest, his clothes having been torn off during transit.
>Sectonia blushed at the feeling of his rigid member poking at the underside of her tit.
>She was growing so moist, soaking the blankets beneath the intimate hole at the base of her abdomen, which was usually covered by a decorate golden stinger. A symbol of fierce power that had, for too long, covered up a symbol of primal desire and love.
>The human explored over her abdomen, delighting in all the discoveries he made of her wonderful body, uttering the word "beautiful" between each appreciative kiss to her skin.
>When he reached the end, he got himself onto his knees, and hugged her abdomen to him.
>Sectonia looked down between her breasts as the human she once wanted as a pet looked at her with a commanding lust that told her that she was his pet.

(cont.)
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>>7496408

>Her vagina was certainly larger than anything he had seen on a human woman.
>Thankfully for him, Sectonia was completely virginal.
>Her canal was tight, and form fitting, accepting him greedily with its squeezing walls.
>The two of them moaned deep as weeks of repression melted away with each and every thrust.
>Sectonia was far too large to be moved much, even by the human's most excited thrusts, but her body reacted so fiercely, with such desire, that she was bouncing herself against he mattress.
>Her hands had to squeeze her breasts tight to her chest to keep them from bouncing too wildly.
>Sectonia felt a pleasure ripple through her unlike anything she had ever felt, or could have ever imagined.
>Conquering worlds, having legions of subjects cry her name in reverence, they were all hushed whispers to the chorus of pleasure she felt when her inner walls clamped down on the human's cock, and a spray of juices flowed out of her, stalled only by the human's body pressed against her.
>The far-too-long-build up of their sexy game of cat and mouse caused the human to let out more cum than he thought possible.
>The juices mixed together, and although she was twice his size, he produced twice as much cum.
>Thick ropes rested heavily on Sectonia's panting body; strips of white scattered across yellow flesh, flushed with red.
>He assumed she would go back to her royal demeanor now, her controlling state, but he was wrong.
>She still wanted to be his pet, and outright refused the idea of ever losing her collar.
>It reminded her that she belonged to someone, someone for whom she had to work for, strive to impress, and who forced her to free her true, primal, sexual beauty from under layers of pomp, jewelry, and elegant clothing.
>She didn't need all those things to be beautiful.
>The human sleeping happily, using her breasts as a large pillow, proved that.

(end)
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>>7496507
>>7391640

Finished! I'm not 100% satisfied with how it turned out, personally, but I think it's alright. Never written a character like Sectonia before, so I'm not sure how good a job I did delivering her beauty and sexiness. Still, I'm glad I did it because it allowed me to try writing something new, without it being so foreign that I was just stumbling in the dark.

And of course, I hope you enjoyed it!
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>>7496546
>>7496507
>>7496408
>>7496280
>>7496118
>>7495973
>>7495844
>>7495749
Screencapping before it falls off.

Can somebody go make the new thread please?
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So you guys like giants? Gulivette might be fun.
Her episode is http://kisscartoon.se/Cartoon/Dofus/Episode-022 but you can skip to 2:30 if you want.

Not so sure on prompts. The heroes get a front row sit to some giant vag fapping in her bath or bed or after an escape attempt, she locks the window and stashes the key in her bloomers, meaning Kerub has to go in for it.
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>>7496546
OR. Tis pretty good if I say so myself. I totally missed how big you made her tits, which would've made for a nice titjob before they fucked like wild animals, er, insects? Could use some bondage via using collar chain to wrap up parts of her lewd body to help do a bit of squeezing to make up size difference, but the prom came out nice to me.

On a general critique, I've read quite a bit of your stories and how you converted them into narratives. A reoccurring theme I noted throughout your stuff would be some of the odd timing you put into telling for the narrator. Might be my preference, but I'd rather let character interactions/dialog 'tell' how they feel rather than the narrator. For example, at the end, rather than narrator telling how she refused to go back and why, she instead could embrace him and tell him herself why in the narrator's place, if that makes sense.

Either way this came out pretty good, so I'll be sure to keep an eye out for you!
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Here is my bump. It's like every other bump but this bump is mine.
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Bump:
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>>7500112
and mine.
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NEW THREAD IS UP

>>7500991
>>7500991
>>7500991

Everybody come along!
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>>7498514
Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the critiques! Moving more into a "show, don't tell" style of writing is definitely something I want to work more on. It's easier to accomplish with a first person perspective, I've found. Sorry I forgot the bondage bits - there always seems to be one aspect of the request that I forget.
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