Undyne thread - Firm Butt edition Previous thread >>72

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>tfw the thread is going to die and I can't bump because I'm the OP

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>>7358938
I'm pretty sure you can self bump /trash/ threads, or you used to be able to at least.

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>>7359025
well butter my butt and call me a biscuit

i was worried for a moment

>>7359039
>>7358118
>tfw you will never butter that butt

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Just wanted to say that the prospect of more longer stories is exciting!

>>7359149
meant for >>7356486

>>7359102
>tfw you will never eat undyne

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>>7359557
Fish are friends, not food.

>>7359557
>>7359773
>eat undyne
>out

>>7359862
i wonder what it would taste like

>>7360220
Fruit loops

>>7359862
>>7360220
Like human.

what if undyne ate strawberry mousse

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>>7360220
salty fish and coins

I have about enough time for one more story tonight, so give me a holler if anyone wants one written.

>>7360604
I'd kind of like to see another story with Brill, but I don't know what it would be about.

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>>7360604
Undyne gets carried away and injures her BF/GF then freaks out when she needs to decide whether she wants to play it off cool or "drop her shields" and show genuine concern to them.

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>>7360900
I've done one that's kind of like this but it ended up going in a slightly different direction. http://pastebin.com/GLX6FpaX

>>7360604
I'm sorry, I'd love to read another story but I can't think of anything...

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>>7361036
Hey, it's not a big deal. I do have a life outside of these threads so if I ask for requests and nobody has any don't feel like you have to try and think of something, I'll survive without it.

At the same time, just so people are aware, I'm committing to at least one story a day, so if nobody comes up with anything I'll write one myself in the evening.

Is it strange that I think Undyne should have a German accent? She reminds me of every German woman I've ever met. Headstrong, and sporty af.

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>>7361435
No, I can definitely see it. Or, well, hear it.

Question for anyone who wants to answer it: How long have you been posting/lurking in these threads?

>>7360321
>tastes like human, which tastes like chicken
>smells like human, which smells like fish

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What would Undyne's favourite meal/dessert be?

>>7360604
seems appropriate for a cunnilingus lewd

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>>7363447
>Alphys and Undyne Write: Human and Monster Reproduction 101
>Chapter 7: Aquatic Monsters and You
It would literally just be them making shit up and Alphys occasionally tasking Undyne to "study" Brill and/or Anon.

>>7363611
That's actually a cute/funny idea.

>>7358938
>TFW I'm going to stay alive and I can't do anything about it.

>>7363740
Nevermind, reading all the cute stuff people have written has improved my mood.

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>>7363792
It's good to hear that, anon!

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>>7361435
I know it's cheesy as hell but I always imagine her voice more like the singer here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8lKYdrL-AAw

Tough and passionate but not in a pretty way, you know?

>>7362094
Cute. I just wish her hands wouldn't be such ridiculous sticks.

>>7362833
Not long. A month I think.

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>>7364072
Inspirational Undynes are the best Undynes.

>>7364139
That's a good sample for Undyne's voice. I kinda imagine something simiilar. A very tough and almost raspy sounding voice. Not feminine in the slightest, but pretty in it's own right.

>>7362833
About a month, though I'm not sure. I did a greentext meme that inspired the writefriend's new year's story so that places it at least a bit before new year's.

[supersecret]I found this thread from /aco/[/supersecret]

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>>7364139
>undyne's voice
I always had a lot of trouble imagining her voice.
For the other characters their text noises sound pretty close to how I imagine their tone, but Undyne's text noises are very low and soft, while her dialogue makes it seem like she'd be loud and brash.
I think that video isn't a bad example of how I'd imagine it.

>>7364241
Clearly her voice is censored for being too b-brutal for a modern audience.

>>7364241
Yeah the text bleeps are pretty good at conveying a sort of tone of voice for the characters but for some reason I just pull a blank on Undyne. I just heard it in my head with my own voice.

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>>7364306
>Undyne goes Undying
>Her voice

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ba0K-4D1Lj0

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>>7364240
>[supersecret]I found this thread from /aco/[/supersecret]
[fakespoiler]I'm glad my post there worked[/fakespoiler]

>>7364496
cute! CUTE!

>>7360604
When you're next online, any of these would be awesome.

Undyne asks Anon to fuck her in her sleep.
Undyne cuddles with Anon in bed.
Undyne wins the gold medal in Olympic Javelin Throwing.

When did these fish threads start?
How many are we up on now?

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/ring/ fishfu wearing black saiyan armor, please.

>>7363332
Me

>undyne thread
>like sticking you dick into a bucket of eel

>>7358118
Jesus christ, how autistic do you have to be to write that many stories?

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>>7365930
Ayyy there it is. No Undyne thread would be complete without someone from /utg/ coming to flame the writefag.

>>7366001
What? I just happened to click on the pastebin and wew that's a concentrated amount of autism. You don't...actually like those, do you anon? You might want to get that checked out...

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>>7366043

Need writefag to write a short story about undyne being a japanese high school student who meets the hentai protagonist who can fuck for an hour and cum every other minute.

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>>7365123
I did the first one: http://pastebin.com/n6eZ9kpC

As for the second, I have done one with Undyne and Brill cuddling if you'd accept that too: http://pastebin.com/zhttLcnj

As usual let me know what you think.

>>7367494
Do you have some sort of library where one can see all the stories you've made?
Feels like all the stories are one and done, never to be seen again.

>>7367526
look in the op my dude

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>>7367530
This is gonna take a while.

If you were a grill what would you want to do with the fish?

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>>7368093
Write stories about her and leave them around for her to find (^:

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>>7368119
hmm...

>>7368119
Can see the appeal but goddamn that's gay.

>>7368189
be nice to writeanon

>>7368243
Well writeanon is pretty gay too, so...

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Does your family and friends know you're a virgin, anon?

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>>7368273
f-fug

[superspoiler]when's my "tough biker grill sweeps me off my feet" episode?[/superspoiler]

>>7367494
The one about fucking her in her sleep was perfect! Thank you.

Who's Brill? I just started reading these threads.

>>7368536
Could be the player character, not sure myself.

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>>7368536
>>7368604
She's basically the female self-insert. We do have a few femanons here, including the writefag.

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this is my oldest fish

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>>7368536
>>7367494
I almost missed this one! Glad I didn't!

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>tfw writeanon never really describes Brill but you still imagine her being really cute

>>7370146
I imagine her being short, white freckled skin, red hair and green eyes. God knows why.

>>7370253
>>7370146
iirc she's described as being blonde in one of the stories

>>7370544
I'm a bit behind on the stories, haven't been here in a while

>>7370146
If I'm remembering correctly she's described as being short (at least compared to Undyne), slender, and having brown hair, green eyes.

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>>7368093
fug

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Underwater woman
Underwater lady
No one on the shore
Will ever know
Whats in her heart

I'm late again, sorry.

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>>7365388
Uh... Ta-dah...?

This is why I don't color my images. It took me two hours to color this. TWO and there's not even that many colors in it.

>>7367494
That was some INTENSE loving there.

>>7368119
I think she'd find that intensely creepy. I would if I found a bunch of gay stories that some friend of mine had been writing for a while of me.

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>>7371244
>Uh... Ta-dah...?
>This is why I don't color my images. It took me two hours to color this. TWO and there's not even that many colors in it.
I think that actually looks quite good, the color adds a lot to it.

>I think she'd find that intensely creepy. I would if I found a bunch of gay stories that some friend of mine had been writing for a while of me.
I hope Alphys password protected those fanfictions she was writing.

>>7371244
If you want, I could color your stuff.

>>7371392
Well I won't stop you. You're free to do whatever you want with my drawings. I've been holding up this secret hope that one day I'll practice coloring on my older drawings but I can never bring myself to do it. They always look like ass.

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>>7368977
>>7371244
Glad you guys liked it; I try to go for intense stuff when I'm writing smut cause that's what excites me, so obviously I just apply my tastes to everyone.

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mspg drew a rare non-musical fish.

>tfw writeanon had to go back to work and can't post as much
>tfw she used to write like 5 or 6 stories a day
>tfw you can't think of good ideas any more but you want and need more fish stories
>tfw you don't know when she'll get time off or if she does if she'll want to write stories
>tfw you can't go back and read the same stories again cause they're getting old

it's a complex feeling

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>>7373517
>tfw you had to go back to work and can't write lewd stories for your favorite thread on your hungarian throat-singing discussion forum
>tfw you don't have any good ideas either but haven't written about anything but a cartoon fish in ages and you've gotten into a habit
>tfw you check your pastebin views every day and smile thinking about all the people reading your stuff then wonder if they really like it
>tfw you wonder if the same cartoon fish that you're using as a surrogate for actual emotional intimacy with a real human being is healthy for you and whether you should quit
>tfw you just want to write more fish stories but end up too exhausted and drained to think of anything good

truly a complex feeling

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>>7373758
>mfw I want to fug a fish
A feeling most complex, yet most simple.

>>7373758
fug

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>>7373758
Fuck all this sad introspective shit. I come here to ignore my problems and jerk off to an anthropomorphic piranha woman. Can I request going fishing (heh) with Undyne out on the lake?

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>>7373517
>>7373758
I CAN"T TAKE THESE FEELS

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>>7374395
I'm sorry, I've got to go to bed. Ask me tomorrow, I'll be on around noon.

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>>7374658
Goodnight!

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>>7374658
No problem. Goodnight writefriend!

>>7373803
Why is this complex? Why wouldn't anyone fug the fish?

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>>7375527
Because she does not exist.

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>>7375583
delete this

>>7373758
I felt like killing myself yesterday, and reading your stories made me feel better. People do like them.

>tfw you wonder if the same cartoon fish that you're using as a surrogate for actual emotional intimacy with a real human being is healthy for you and whether you should quit.

In my opinion, that depends. An easy way to tell if something is unhealthy is when it causes you clinically significant stress or impairment. Is loving Undyne keeping you from enjoying emotional intimacy like you otherwise would have, or is it making it harder for you to be emotional with a human? If so, it could be unhealthy. If not, at least it wouldn't qualify as a mental disorder according to the DSM.

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>>7362833
I'm late af, but... Like 3-4 days?

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>Come to thread to get more more fish material because I love her so much I just can't get enough
>Find FEELS
>>7373517
>>7373758
AND PAIN
>>7375583

Why can't I live in a different dimension or AU where I'm happy with Undyne?! Why doesn't /trash/ have spoiler tags so I can secretly tell the writefag that she's awesome; that her stories are some of the best stuff I've read in a long, long time; that they brighten up my day and that she's one of the coolest people on the planet without me sounding like a humongous faggot?

WHY MUST LIFE BE THIS HARD?!

Where are the drawings of undyne hand-fucking femanon silly with a spear-shaped blue plastic dildo?

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>>7376275
This is the only Undyne x femanon drawing I'm aware of.

>>7376275
>undyne pushes femanon down into the bed
>she's holding her custom made spear dildo
>bite the pillow, bitch
>femanon hugs the pillow and raises her butt into the air
>undyne sits down on the bed next to her and firmly grabs femanon's ass
>teases her lips with the tip of the spear
>are you ready~?
>n-no?
>too bad lol

Requesting teen Undyne playing MW2 and talking shit.

>>7377213
>gamur gurl undyne
please no
muh dick

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>>7364139
I always pictured her voice to be like Rev from blacklagoon.
Rough and somewhat harsh but still feminine.
The English actress obviously

Asking some fish request for tomorrow

>>7377718
You mean ideas for the writeanon?

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>>7372654
>Undyne will never sit on your face and force you to eat her pussy/ass

I'm fed up with this world

>>7377795
>undyne will never milk you completely dry and drink it together with her protein shake
Why even etc. etc.

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>>7371392
It just occurred to me that you might not even be one of the regulars here and you probably don't even know me. You could try your hand at http://imgur.com/a/Pkb7U if you want. They're at least easy to start with.

I think a part of the problem is that I think with shading but I can't do it so flat colors always look like less than what I want it to when in reality it might not be so bad.

>>7373233
Always good to see canon Undyne pop up now and again.

>>7375583
aaa AAA!

>>7376275
I've been thinking of doing a femanon x Undyne thing but I'm not sure how to draw a femanon. Even Brill is left undescribed for the most part in the stories since it's a self insert although I do remember it being mentioned that she has blond hair so it makes me think of this blond ponytail cardiobunny type girl.

>>7378149
Femanon is just anon but with a ponytail/short hair and tits.

>femanon fingering undyne to orgasm
>busted undyne saying "wow that was great thanks"
>femanon giving thumbs up with text "femanon delivers"

>over the shoulder view of undyne looking at naked anon and femanon
>next panel, a sad anon as undyne is running off with femanon in her arms

>>7378149
>description of brill
iirc, Brill is described as having a skinny/athletic build, wide hips, smallish breasts, green eyes and is about a head shorter than Undyne.
(For some reason I thought she had brown hair but I can't find a reference to her hair color anywhere)

>>7378614
Huh, I could've sworn there wasn't a detailed description. I'll have to look through it again.

>>7378661
It's spread out over a couple stories. The first swimming one describes her build, and the later ones add some more details like eye color.

>>7377718
Undyne gives you a much better blowjob than she usually does.
What it's like to lay in bed with Undyne after sex but before sleeping.
Meeting Undyne in a strip club with no idea she exists.

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>>7375957
I was just being selfpitying, I'm fine really. I'm glad my stories made you feel better though.

>>7376247
Hey, quit it, you'll make me blush.

>>7378149
>>7378614
If you want full disclosure I've been modelling Brill off of my ex-girlfriend, so the Brill I'm picturing when I'm writing is short, blonde, hair down to her shoulder-blades, lots of freckles, ovalish face, really slender in general, green eyes, one of those cute little cat-type noses, and a habit of doing her makeup so she looks like a lion.

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Needs pictures of the power couple sexing each other.

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>>7378955

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>>7378955
I want to sex both of them together!

>>7378775
that's actually really cute

>>7378985
If he fucks Undyne I'm burning him alive.

>>7379010
One day someone will make a > 30 seconds sfm video of them fucking each other and it will be great.

>>7379010
anon...
http://pastebin.com/QezBUkrF

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>>7379096

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>>7379112

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>>7379096
But don't forget the sequel
http://pastebin.com/F8dqjNC6

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goodnight

>>7379192
Alphys confirmed greedy.

>>7379136
>anal
>huge cumshot
not even going to read it, i'm already heartbroken

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GOTTA GO FAST

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>>7379321
I promise it's not what you're expecting.

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>>7380040

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>>7380503
Just read it. It's... um... interesting.

>>7380737
Oh wow. You were right.

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I have some time now, so if anyone wants a story, give me a shout.

>>7379007
I think it's rather pathetic honestly but I'll take what compliments I can get

>>7380737
>>7380952
I forget how the request put it but it was asking for something like 'immediate revenge' or something like that, and I figured a young teenage Undyne would be very into the eye for an eye concept. Personally I think it's more valuable for the exploration of her spears and things.

>>7381385
Following up the request from last night about going fishing with Undyne out on the lake. Also, side note, that pic probably has the most similar proportions to how I imagine Undyne in your stories.

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>>7378775
>Hey, quit it, you'll make me blush.
That's the plan

>>7381385
>if anyone wants a story, give me a shout.
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH
Uhm... I forgot what I wanted to request. Hmmm... Maybe cutesy stuff, like going to the movies, or a fancy date. I'm a sucker for cliché stories. Work your magic when you have time

[totallylegitspoilertag] By the way, I just read the "Camping with Undyne" story, the one that says "(don't read this, it sucks)" next to it. I read it because 1. Fuck the rules and 2. Fuck the rules
I must say... It didn't suck, at all. It was so sweet to see Undyne like that, I kinda felt it was one of the best stories tbqh. Reassuring her when she feels so weak... Oh god that's gorgeous. Nice ending for it as well. I don't know why it would suck at all [/totallylegitspoilertag]

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>>7381534
I'll get on that. And I agree, that Undyne is maybe too toothy but I still think it's a pretty good representation of what I'm picturing. Here's another I like.

>>7381575
The reason that one sucks is because it's developed very poorly. I tried to cram too much in to one small story when really it should have been two or three times the length, that and the ending is really shoehorned in. I've done the whole reassuring Undyne thing way better in other places.

fish dick

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>>7381676
no

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>>7381670
Very high standards you have I see... Keep up the good work, writefag.
You are good, really good

>>7381676
At least make it "musical fish dick"

>>7381744
Alphys is waaay too lucky. Life's so unfair

>>7381756
I thought I left that meme behind in utg

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>>7381798
We did. Shit like musical fish dick/t. Alberto Barbosa/hero cop Manny Pardo is probably the main reason this thread exists in the first place.

Make a strawpoll on which story is the best so far.

>>7381871
there are like over 70

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>>7381871
>strawpoll with 80 options

Also I just realized the writefag's pastebin has about the same file size as one of their average-length stories.

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>she will never throw you into bed and demand the d

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I have a question for y'all. What's with Undyne's eye? I mean, I'm either missing something or there's not much information about her other eye, and it's come to a point where every time I see in a fic something about "Undyne's eyes" I feel like it doesn't fit.
Again, maybe I'm not well informed, so I apologize if the eye thing is something obvious

>>7382171
>tfw you'll never suddenly hear Undyne's voice behind you saying "Okay, let's do it" with a smug grin on her face

>>7382240
Dammit anon, I wanted to spend a day without crying

>>7382496
iirc the writeanon has said that she only writes eyes in the plural because writing it in the singular seemed like too much of an affectation or something.

>>7382525
Fair enough. I thought I was missing something. So, we don't know jackshit about her eye then?

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>>7382496
It depends on the fan.

Some say she wears the patch to cover up a damaged or missing eye.

Others say she wears the patch purely for shits n giggles or to make her look tough.

As >>7382525 stated writeanon just does it as the plural of eyes because saying just eye is odd. Even if it is appropriate in this case

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>>7381534
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/WF7vuGNT

Sorry for the delay, some things came up and I had to go deal with it. Overall I'm pretty pleased with this one, I thought it turned out well. Let me know what you think.

>>7382496
>>7382623
For what it's worth, I have referred to it as 'her ruined eye' a few times and I try to make sure that whenever Undyne's talking about her own eyes it's always in the singular.

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>>7382638
Pretty fukken adorable imo. Not sure I'd want to kiss someone who just speared a raw fish with their teeth but it was still super cute.

If you still have free time, can I request a 1 on 1 sport with Undyne? Like tennis/racquetball/ping pong or something. I feel like we don't see enough super competitive badass Undyne.

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>>7382835
Delivered: pastebin.com/TDXGP33d

A little short cause I have to go do things, but I think it's cute. Let me know what you think.

Also it isn't like she was really giving him a choice.

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>>7383012
Hot damn that was quick. I really like the decision to have them play something less physically intensive. The close contact and character interaction are some of the main reasons your stories are so good.

Go take care of your business and I'll try to think of something lewd by the time you get it back. Need to shake it up a bit, y'know?

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>>7378775
Hmm..hmm... I'll have to see what I can do. I'm not sure I want to make a detailed human female for my dumb porn. I'm not all that great with humans either. I have a really cartoony style which is probably the result of learning how to draw entirely with Undertale characters.

Well that and this http://imgur.com/a/ZqbN4

Still. I might give it a shot as a challenge at some point. Might be a bit awkward if it's based on a real person.

>>7382496
In my mind it prevents her magic from spiraling out of control. Like she has an eye underneath but magic keeps shooting off out of it. Kind of like the mask cyclops wears in the X-men. When she turns Undying it comes off and spears keep shooting out of it constantly.

>>7383012
Wow that was quick but the text and dialogue feel natural. It's not long but still kind of impressive.

>she presses against your hand like a cat

I didn't know I needed this.

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>>7383127
Oh god, please don't, I was just giving a description cause people had been asking.

>>7383257
Well I was asking it for a drawing but I'll be glad to take the lazy way out and just go with some kind of generic faceless femanon for now.

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>>7383984
I kinda want to see more Undynes being shopped into the realworld. Like cutesy situations and such.

My heart may not take the feels, though.

>>7384234
if you've been reading writeanon's stories you've been inoculated, you're safe

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>>7384377
Oh, sweet! May even try my hand with some of these, though I've never done shops of these kinds before.

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>>7384377
A lot of the time I feel like people give me too much credit but I don't want to whine about it. I also feel like I've scared off the other writefags and that just makes me sad.

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>>7384654
>too much credit
No such thing as "being given too much credit" when you are able make people happy using only lines of text
>I also feel like I've scared off the other writefags
A truly talented writefag writes no matter what, competition or not. You didn't have many followers when you started writing, right?

>>7384234
I didn't know I wanted this. Now I do. I want this.

>>7384654
People give you a lot of credit because nothing can be expected from anons on 4chan, much less /trash/ of all places.

If the writefags want to write then they would probably do it regardless. They should at least. The only thing you might have done is inflate the market a bit. I wouldn't mind reading more stories from different viewpoints though.

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>>7384234

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>>7384654
I mean, I'm not sure how many other threads on /trash/ have active writefags that are actual writers. You might not think these stories are great compared to what you normally write, but they're better than just about anything else that gets posted here.

Regarding the other writefags, I'm technically one of them, and I've requested a good chunk of the stories you've written recently. If I like an idea, I'll just suggest it to you instead of writing about it, because you'll do it better. There's no shame in that. I'm in here to find new Undyne content, not compete with anybody.

You like writing about it and we like reading it. It's a win-win for everyone involved.

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>>7384912
Talent isn't really commensurate with bravery, unfortunately, and it can be really discouraging to see someone tangibly more talented than you doing basically everything with a given topic that you want to work with.

>>7384990
>>7385068
I suppose you're right, though, and it's not like I'm going to quit. I just keep feeling like I'm hogging the thread or whatever and I guess I am in one sense. It just feels very unreal to me. I suppose I should stop complaining, it's just a very strange feeling. I feel kind of like Oliver Twist or whatever.

>>7385258
If they really want to work with that topic I encourage them to do so.
I'm just one reader, but I can promise I'll read whatever the other writefags write and give my opinion if necessary.

Don't feel bad for getting a reputation around here. You've earned it, right? Feel good for what you've accomplished, even if it's in this Taiwanese basket-weaving imageboard. Also consider writing a book or something

>>7385258
That's a nice fish butt

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>>7385258
Hogging the thread isn't necessarily a bad thing. If anyone else could put out quality content as consistently as you can, I would encourage them to do so. The other writefags stopped writing of their own accord, not because you drove them out.

Also, you're allowed to complain here. Granted, I'm not sure how honest the feedback will be, considering how many of us rushed to your aid the instant you said something self-deprecating, but still.

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>>7385810
>>7385374
Yeah, you guys are right. I think I'm just sort of down in the dumps cause I can't write as much lately. My Undyne stuff is ironically much more successful than the other stuff I've been writing lately, but the timescales are different too.

Anyway, I guess my point was that if other people want to write things they can and ought to, I don't have a monopoly no matter how nice it might be.

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>>7387207

I need some fishy emoji for discord :c

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>>7387212
Dadgore :3

Always reminded me of my father... though without the child murdering.

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>>7387418
What kind?

>>7387479
Hm...Yes! Thats it! Thanks.

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>>7387492
I've got a couple more like that. Most of them have Korean text, though.

>>7387513
ohh. Thanks. Thats nice. <3

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>>7387613
Hopefully that should be enough.

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>>7387625
Thank youuu~

>>7386373
>>7385258
>>7384654
get over yourself you big faggot
nobody cares about your stories, they're shit anyway

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>>7387889

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>>7386373
Write anon, I love you. You've made this general a much better place. I don't know what's going on in your life but please don't feel like you aren't wanted here or like you're being a hassle. If you don't have time to write stories you don't have time, that's fine. I know for sure myself and plenty of other guys here will wait until you do have time. Your stuff is good enough for that.

Please don't ever stop or doubt yourself because you're a lot better than that, and you've made a lot of people very happy just by writing those stories that you don't seem to think much of.

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I wanna see the fanfic about Undyne+Tomoko. heh

>>7388247
alphys acts a little like tomoko in the christmas special i think

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>>7387889

>>7388307
Yeah but Alphys is Alphys and Tomoko is Tomoko.

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>>7387889

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>>7388504
Do people still make flipnotes? That was my shit in like seventh grade.

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>>7388699
Yeah, people made some Undertale ones. I don't remember any Undyne related ones, though.

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>>7387889
rude

>>7388237
edur

goodnight, will write more tomorrow

>>7389391
Goodnight!

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>>7389391
Goodnight!

>>7382496
Cumshot gone wrong.
Dick never again.

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>>7390314
>cumshot gone wrong.

She got lucky and didn't end up like pic related

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>>7390314
>>7391287

>>7385258
While you mean well and while it MIGHT be true, I'd advice caution with lines like:

>"to see someone tangibly more talented than you doing basically everything with a given topic that you want to work with."

It smacks of arrogance and can be used against you.

>>7389439
That's a bit too much hair. She's not supposed to be cousin IT.

>>7393083
Spoiler that shit, anon.

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>>7393106
You can't do spoilers in /trash/!

>start dating a cool tomboy
>bring her a present one day
>nice what is it?
>open it and find out ya dingus
>cool an eyepatch
>try it on loser
>heh okay
>now do your hair into a ponytail
>eh okay like this?
>yees
>are you okay anon?
>yeees

When the Writefag comes back, here's a request: Anon asks Undyne if she's ever made a vibrating spear to fuck herself with. She tries it and likes it, but after the first orgasm she's really horny rather than done. Then she fucks Anon.

>>7392650
you compare her writing and the few other stories people have posted it is pretty truthful

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>>7393473
It's a valid point to make. I've only written a few things for this thread but I've openly admitted that.

>>7393996
Have you written anything about falling asleep with Undyne?

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>>7393996
Nope but that's a good request for the writefag when she gets back.

>>7394209
Meant for
>>7394008

>>7394008
A lot of the writefag's stories feature stuff like that even if it isn't the direct focus, especially the early ones. This one in particular you'd probably enjoy http://pastebin.com/kFvQDn0k

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>>7392650
If you do something for long enough you get a sense of how good you are at it. I wasn't meaning to be arrogant.

>>7393453
If nobody else has a different request I'll do this one. I won't be able to start for another hour to an hour and a half or so, though, so if anyone has anything they want written, let me know.

>>7394008
Like >>7394349 said that particular story is probably exactly what you want, but I can do another in the same vein if you'd like something more specific.

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I wonder what kind of anime Undyne is into...

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>>7395888
No anime : the anime

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>>7358118
>You and Undyne sext on msn
Wow, MSN? That gave me a nostalgia trip.

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>>7393453
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/6vWRJhB1

Sorry for the delay, as usual, something came up and I had to go deal with it. Let me know what you think.

>>7396158
Ha, that was the idea. Although I tried to think of what I could do to make it actually seem like MSN rather than any random chat application and I couldn't come up with anything.

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>>7396375
This is pretty spicy. I like the way you described Undyne's eye, since everyone has been asking about it.

If you're still up, I'd like to followup an earlier anon's request for some casual pillow talk with Undyne after sex but before sleep.

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>>7358118
>(Porn) (Visiting your parents for Christmas)

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>>7397154

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>>7397015
Which request was it?

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>>7397385

>>7378736
and also maybe >>7394008

>>7393232
>Local man arrested after raping a woman for several days straight
>More news at 11

>>7397154
Sadly, the parents are not involved.

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>>7396158
>MSN chat.
>that fucking butterfly
>the sound of dial up connecting.

All these associated memories...

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>>7397729
>Sadly

>>7397881
did she kill the tem

>>7396375
As I sit here reading your little story with tired eyes all I can say is that it feels nice.

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>>7393232

>>7397934
Damn Alphys, wastin' opportunities... It's okay to be shy, but don't be dumb gurl!

>>7364139
>>7364241
>>7377502

She sounds like Joan Jett.

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>>7397015
>>7397628
Thanks, I have some time now so I can do that one if you're still interested. I can't help but feel like I must have covered that exact sort of thing somewhere but I can't find which one.

>>7397154
I like to think it worked out fairly naturally but it does look a little odd in the pastebin.

>>7398473
Glad you liked it!

>>7398620
At first I thought that too but then Undyne shies away too. I think it's actually a pretty accurate depiction of their relationship or at least how it was in the beginning. They're both incredibly shy even though they want to just do each other.

>>7398670
Now there's a cool woman. I just imagine Undynes voice a bit more raspy probably because of her cartoonish appearance.

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>>7398786
Falling asleep with Undyne has been a reoccurring theme in some of your stories but I don't think it's ever been the focus. I can think of something else if you don't want to write about it, but I was thinking it would be focused more on pillow talk than the actual cuddling.

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>>7399226
>"That was nice, anon..."
>"Remember that spinning thing I did with you?"
>"And that moonsault off the headboard?"
>"That was fucking radical."

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>>7399226
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/bsZyqmNv

This one is particularly cute. Let me know what you think.

>>7399566
Unfortunately I didn't think to make it that crazy.

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>>7400058
I wasn't expecting it, I was hoping for cute too.

I do like to entertain a radical undyne every now and again though.

we'll need a new thread soon

>>7400254
I have one all set, let's have a good last two posts

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>>7398670
>Joan Jett

new >>7400460

I love Undyne.