Write-Faggotry Thread #12 Last Thread: https://desuarchive.

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Anchor posting for Bunny Mint story

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Beauty guy here.
As I was busting my nut, I thought of something to add to it to bust it harder. After the Spanking maybe the spanking could have had her pants sag some from all the shaking, making her panties and ass crack visible some. She could tempt him to reach down there for something, hand exploring the inside of the crank (and maybe poking her asshole a bit) before moving on to the ninjask bit. Just an idea.

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If anyone's up for this, go for it.

Requesting 3 lesbians going to a strip club. While they're there they get really drunk, to the point where they can't make good decisions. They also run their bar tab to a point where they can't pay, they are then told that they can work at the club to pay it off. They agree drunkenly, and unknowingly signing a contract that says that they'll work there for the next 2 years. Progressively they all become more slutty, starting from being embarrassed and shy, to being wild and being constantly lewd.

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Including my pastebin in case anyone wanted to see what work I've done so far in the past few weeks, and wanted to request something themselves:

http://pastebin.com/u/The_Mouths_of_Babes

I'll be taking fewer than last thread, so I can work on turning these greentexts into narratives, but that shouldn't take more than a few days.

>>7321292
Wanna try this? >>7319704

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If anybody's okay with writing from an story outline, there's this. Kind of the same 'messy sex' vein as that Scarlet idea.
http://pastebin.com/MD0ykDmx

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AVWxeWz7NOd8vryZAmnGZlwl128ra1_llN0FfDT-NLk/edit?usp=sharing

what do you all think about this so far?

>>7321292
did you see >>7318490

>>7321454
If no one else takes it up within the next few days, it seems like something I can do, yea.

>>7318490
I can probably fit that in. I don't know if her pants need to shimmy down, though. She pulls them down completely over her ass, so the whole thing is exposed (other than what's covered by her panties. Not sure what she could ask him to reach in for, though. If you have any ideas, let me know, and I'll find a way to fit it into the final draft.

>>7319704
>>7323913

Also if you have any preferences for body types, let me know. I can do anything from skinny to a little chub; I don't think I could write obese in a sexy way, but some extra pounds isn't difficult.

>>7323967
I think one should have chub, another with an hourglass figure but with a little gut, the other kind be flat but have a big butt

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>>7323913
Perhaps after the spanking she could make a note/excuse that some of the dirt got into her jeans, (dust cloud? Dunno) asking him to 'fish it out.'
Dunno if this is a good measurement, but her pants loosening to a length like this could do

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>>7324079
Ahh, alright, I see what you're saying now. I'll make a note to put something like that in.

>>7324028
Gotcha. No promises I'll be able to tackle it, but I'll mark it down.

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There we go. Misdreavus screencapped with a picture to match

>>7324216
>tfw desuarchive images broken
Anyone have the phosphorus story pic?

>>7323913
I admire you, Mouth of Babe. You're the writefag all writefags wish to be.

The productivity you have, even when faced with autist requests is a feat of god.

bumpo wompo

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>>7318004

I need some writing tips.
Badly.
My writing is shit, even though I have more than enough confidence to show it off like it's my dick.
It's been rejected wholesale many times.
Help, slowly submitting to depression due to shit artistic skill

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Alright enough waiting around. Starting part 2 of Mermaidyn Fish bullying soon. Updates will be inconsistent, so anyone else feel free to greentext your stories whenever, as I will take my time with mine. Pt 1 is pic related
>>7321292
You are doing based work by the way. Keep it up.
>>7326766
I know there was a stepanon that sometimes copypasta his thing for new/struggling writers, but desuarchive is being a slow bitch in loading it. Look through there and see if it helps out.
Otherwise, trial and error until you get something that works.

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>>7326929

>Trial and error
Nigga you have no idea

My main problem is over usage of deus ex machinas

And slightly fetishistically influenced jokes

>>7326929
>A bump on your dinghy made you jump up all of a sudden
>You fluster around for a bit until you learn you aren't in danger.
>A small breath later you decide to look around at your surroundings.
>It seems like you fell asleep waiting for a bite on your shitty boat
>The setting around you is completely dark, stars out and all
>You've literally been at this fishing shindig since morning
>You grit your teeth in frustration and stomp on the boat
>The rumbling sound of your stomach matched the sound of the stomp, if not even louder.
FUCK!
>You shouted at the water below, punching it with your arm
>An entire day wasted for the chance of a free meal.
>A few moments later you make yourself breath again to try and calm down
>However, it has done little to cool off the boiling frustation in your head
>In one of your exercises, however, your mind goes back to the weird mythology girl that you encountered earlier today
>Her name, what was it...Mermaidyn?
>You remember the annoying encounter and how she got into your fishing line twice
>Your body remembers your lesson you taught her for crossing you like that
>A small rise awakens in you, but you shake yourself out of it
>She's got the warning by now.
There's no way she would be that stupid again.
>After a day of no catches, you finally give up on catching something for the day and begin your trek back.

>>7327027
Alright. Elaborate.

>>7327027
Are your characters actually "interacting" or are they only talking to each other before getting shuffled to a new scene?

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>>7324452

I believe this was the Phosphora pic used to pitch the idea.

>>7324466
>>7326929

Thanks so much for the kind words, it really does mean a lot to me. Appreciation and feedback always keeps me going.

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so I've been doing a lot lately. pic related is me, also more of it posted on my commission blog. Did a lot of wrestling and catfighting for a while, but got into some bodyswaps and shortstacks lately

http://luffy316.blogspot.com
I also started up a Patreon for this kind of stuff. Additional stories for as little as a buck

patreon.com/user?u=4891726

also considering some of these ideas as greentexts, maybe the lesbian stripper unless something more tempting pops up


>>7326766
my biggest piece of advice is just keep doing it. keep writing shit for fun or no reason at all. I did it for years, even just narrating things in my head. Make sure you reread over what you write too. even if you think "Ew, gross. Why did I do that?" you can get ideas from it that you can salvage, or just make a note to never do that again

>>7328467
Referring more to the story cap of her

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>>7330205
I've got them all, was planning to repost with bumps, but here you go.

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Daum page 10

>>7332021
and another bump before I go.

>>7327386
>You were on your way back to shore only to feel a stronger bump on your dinghy
>You flinch again and jumped back, wondering what was going on
>You look around and find your fishing rod lying in the corner
>It appears as though the line has cast as well
>Perhaps the hook got tangled in with something while you were asleep
>You curse your bad luck before realizing something.
>If it got tangled, then it meant something was hooked and couldn't escape
>Which meant one thing...
>You caught something while you were sleeping!
Yahoo!
>You jump up and down in victory of your first catch.
>Sure it may have not been a normal way to capture a fish, but a fish is a fish
>Just then, something crossed your mind
>What if something nibbled on the fish while you were asleep?
>You make your way to the fishing rod and begin untangling
>Through knots and dents you finally rewind your fishing line and the hook is just below the surface
>For the piece de resistance, instead of winding it back up, you reach in the water and pull up the hook
Huh. Feels lighter than I imagine.
>Beggars can't be choosers however
>You are certain to make this fish count down to the bone.
>You pull up the hook
>The first thing you see is a red tailfin
>That's odd
>Salmon aren't in season to be red yet, and there are no red snappers in lakes
>You pull up more to reveal the fish's scales
>They too were red, but the shape of them are very...curvy.
>And then it hits you
Oh no.
>You pull up more and find a strange division in the water between the fish and the water
No way in hell.
>With one desperate pull, you pull the fish all the way out of the water with your eyes closed
>When you open your eyes, you see a very familiar face, seemingly asleep.
>...
Oh for fuck's sake!

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>>7328611
>Anonymoo roommate
>super sweet but clumsy and ditzy as fuck
>ass and tits get stuck in doorways around the apartment if she's not careful and you have to push at her soft body to get her out
>needs your help to reach things from high shelves or the back of the fridge because her giant tits get in the way
>get slapped by tits, ass or belly if she turns too quickly. get a big apologetic hug when she does
>tries to impress you by accidentally using memes incorrectly in conversation
>get a text one day
>it's a selfie of her in a cow print bikini
>immediately followed by "ANON! DON'T LOOK! HOW TO I UNSEND THIS!?"
>one day she seems moany and uncomfortable
>ask her what's up
>after some pressing because she's a shitty liar, she hugs her massive boobs and milk starts to leak out her nips
>"I... I can't quite reach the tips. Anonymom used to help me with it... I could use another strong set of hands, but I don't want to be a pain..."

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>>7333979

Oh OK then

I'll just Fap

Ngh

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>>7334024
>>7333979
glad to help, sir

>mess around with best way to do this
>end up with her in just her panties (stretched out like a thong; they were not originally) on the bed
>gets on all fours with her cute blush and innocently staring question mark like she doesn't realize it's sexual
>tits hang so low that they touch the bed and doesn't do you any good
>has to balance on her knees while you help her stay steady on her bubble butt
>plan to just strip the sheets when you're done as you start massaging and pulling gently on her Kit-Kat-sized nipples
>Anonymoo making all sorts of noises: cooing, whimpering, gasping, and of course, mooing
>ask her if it feels alright, and she nods like crazy
>finally pinch and pull enough that she gives a little shout and her milk comes out like you opened a tap for a second
>can't help but lick your fingers and she bites her lip
>asks if it's good
>super sweet and thick like a milkshake. tell her it's tasty as hell
>she blushes harder and bends her shoulders to thrust her tits out at you invitingly
>"Well don't stop, moo..."
>start to grope her rougher and firmer, and she just gets more excited and more milky
>mouth hanging open in awe
>take initiative and pop one into your mouth to get it right from the source
>Anonymoo starts breathing heavy and loses her shit
>falls over on top of you so that you're buried in her chub and tits, unable to breathe except by sucking on her udder
>"I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm so sorry!"
>"...but don't stop!"

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The final draft of the Skyla Spanking Story has been uploaded to two of my online profiles:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/TheDjinn/23166/Why-Use-Flying-Water-Type

http://archiveofourown.org/works/9410399

Use whichever you prefer.

I hope to do one of these a day, though some may take longer than others. More than that, I hope they come out to the OR's satisfaction, and no changes or additional details I add take away from the sum total.

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>>7334241

Oh god muh dick

Please continue

And for motivation

>YWN suckle on massive teats that give milk as sweet as ice cream, as cow woman moos and moans in arousal and pleasurement

Why Live?

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>>7335184
The more you suckle her teets the more you become like anonymoos.

>>7335204

Even better


>SKREE MAKE MORE PLEASE I MIGHT CHIP IN WITH MY OWN SMEXY STORY SKREE

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>>7335227

Fuck. Forgot the pic.

>>7335152
>http://archiveofourown.org/works/9410399
OR. I didn't know skyla was gonna get refined too. More love...or in this thread's case, skylabuse, for her! You have a few typos here and there, a Syla and a byy, but they're pretty minor. Godspeed.

>>7335330

I ended up making her a bit sluttier, yea, but in the end she's still be humiliated and punished, so I figured it would be fine.

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>>7335184
>>7335204
>keep chugging away at her
>she keeps wailing and moaning like she'll never get tired and milking like she'll never get empty
>can hear her sloshing as she pumps against you
>start to realize you have no idea how much you've drank but just want more
>she's so much taller and chubbier than you that when she groans especially big, you feel her gut bounce against your groin
>pull on one tit and suck the other like your life depends on it (it kind of does with her clumsily smothering you)
>"Mooo.... moooooore," she moans. "Drink me dry, anon!"
>drowning in her milk and fat until it feels like something pops in her and one last, huge wave gushes from her nipples as if she came from them
>bed ruined, clothes a mess, sweaty as fuck, and cum sticking your pants to her flabby tummy
>she tells you how much better that feels, and she sits up and her boobs even look a few sizes smaller
>that night she cooks you a nice big meal for thanks (even if she almost burns the burgers)
>have a soda with it but it tastes disgusting
>find you have some uncontrollable craving for Anonymoo's milk
>drink it with every meal and whenever she needs it from then on
>she shows you a special trick she learned online the other day
>for desert, she concentrates so hard she looks like she's going to wet herself
>instead, she plops her fat tit into a bowl and lactates ice cream
>covers it in chocolate sauce and caramel, the works
>tells you while you eat it that she realized she could do it when someone told her to cool her tits
>can also make hot cocoa come out of them
>only thing she can't do is make them smaller
>next morning, they're big as ever again

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>>7335790

OK. I guess I should return the favor. Any suggestions?

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>>7335822
well big on women wrestling or wrestler women... big gals especially, so muscle or chubby. lesbian always fun, and milfs and straight shota

>>7335893
>milfs
>chubby
YES

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>>7335893
>>7335822
ideal mashup: washed up wrestler of a mom, now gotten weak and chubby from being a housewife. young son makes her feel wanted the sexy way

>>7333979
and now I just keep thinking about Anonymom and what she's like

>>7336145

Alright. Sounds neat.
Perhaps added sex?
Or maybe furry?
Or should I just leave it at that.

>>7336182
Hear me out, a human milf and a fur milf let their sons have a playdate and while they're gone they get sexual. The sons come home and fur son bangs human mom and human son bangs fur mom.

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>>7336182
sex great

fur I can take or leave, so no harm if you'd prefer

>>7336209

>Human
>Furry
>Same universe

I prefer one or the other.
Heh.

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http://pastebin.com/DjbvXwm2

Also thread (with pics) is here.
>>>7307116

>>7336216

Alright.
I'm on it.

>>7336262
Also, any thoughts on which direction the story should take?

>>7336262
>>7336323
not too sure what's going on. A man stumbles upon a clan of giant land squids? From the direction this is going it seems like he is about to learn a bit about how the squid society works. Dunno if you want to keep it observational or get him involved with some of their daily activities, but there are a few potentials for branches

>>7336145

>I used to be famous.
>They called me the Foxy with moxxie.
>Every piledriver, suplex, hell, even clotheswire I did, they would scream my name.
>Garganta tetona, the busty breakneck.
>Then, after I became undefeated champion 4th time in a row, I found a nice guy.
>We settled down, I retired, and we had a family.
>Sure I've gotten a couple of love handles, but that doesn't mean I've lost the "breakneck" strength I used to have.
>Nor the "busty" part I was known for as well.
>It was a Saturday like any other, my 9th grade son was busy playing videogames, and loafing around as usual.
>I occasionally got him up and working out, in the hopes he'd follow in my footsteps.
>Then one day, when he was rummaging through the attic, he came to me with some old tapes.
Cont.

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>>7336454
definitely hot so far~!

>>7336454
Wonder if the tapes he found were wrestling gone sexual?

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Here's something I wrote a while back.

Wardogs, military science fiction piece about a near future military unit that wears shapeshifting canine power armor. Armor affects their minds and keeps them in a 'working dog' headspace, so the story features a fair bit of mind control and petplay themes.

>http://archiveofourown.org/works/7418635/

Feedback much appreciated.

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>>7336425
Well, he was following a giant land squid, but then he found a clan of gibbon-sized tree squids. The giant squid tried to eat one of the tree-squids, so he helped them but ended up getting injured in the process. However, they seem to be friendly.

>>7336454

Gotta go for a bit, will continue eventually.

>>7336978

I'm back.
And to >>7336580
Thanks!

>>7336454

Hey mom, what are these?
>The box they were in was labeled wrestling memories.
>Fuck, he wasn't supposed to find those until college!
Can I see them mom?
>Uh, no, those are adult tapes, you d-
Aww... Come on mom, it's wrestling, whats so adult about beating people up for money?
>Then he gave me those big, baby pleading eyes, and my motherly instincts took over.
>"Oh, fine. But just one."
>He popped one into the VHS player, and those memories started flooding back.
>He gazed in awe at the old, well toned, undefeated champion me.
Mom, is that you? You look hot in that costume!

>>7337739

>"Y-yes, that's me..."
>And then the crowd chanted my name.
>"Bus-ty! Breakneck! Bus-ty Breakneck!"
Was THAT your stage name? Heh, how demeaning.
>"Not when I was champion. That name invoked fear, and sometimes arousal. Everyone wanted a shot at beating me. I was a goddess among women."
Well, why aren't you champion now?
>"I settled down with your father and had you."
>I pinched his cheek.
Woah! What was that move?
>I flipped on my back, bringing the challenger down with me.
>"That, dear, is called a suplex."
Can you teach me how to do that?!

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May as well post this here too.

Vore stuff from another thread.

Premise is a dragon who's been the king of a realm for centuries, he's brought so many good things that nobody tries to stop him from eating people as he pleases. Mostly nonsexual casual vore.

>>7338088
Pretty damn good. Just wish it was a female monstergirl, or amazon, something large, instead of a male dragon.

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Howdy all, I've got an idea for a hucow story

A young adult women and her mom find a free trial for a 'breast enlargement pill' on their doorstep. They decide to try it and immediately both of their breasts start to grow and lactate. They both have orgasms and then pass out, when they wake up they're soaked in milk. Soon they start buying cow print clothing, milking themselves with milking devices, and start putting moo into regular sentences. They aren't becoming cows, but their mental state is more cow oriented, they can still talk and do human things. They've become addicted to the pill and are starting to lose money to pay for it. So they contact the company begging to be workers there, get offered a job as cows, and accept it. Flash forward two years and they have a stable income and free pills. The two are happy with their new life as hucows.

>>7338264
Thanks. It came out of a dragon thread over on /tg/, hence the monster choice, and I'm bi so male preds are fine by me. Glad you like it.

>>7338088
>>7338842
I'm up to write more of it, it's just I kinda ran out of ideas, if anybody has a suggestion I'll write up a scene.

>>7338065

>My own son, wanting to learn how to suplex.
>My heart melted just from him saying that.
>"Well, first, you wrap your arms around your opponents legs..."
>I grabbed him by the legs, and he started to squirm.
Aah! Mom, what are you doing?!
>"Then you flop on your back, taking them down with you!"
>I fell backwards, and he was none the wiser.
Mom! Nooo!
>His head fell onto some pillows, and he was giggling like a schoolgirl.
Heh! That was fun! Do it again!
>"How about a piledriver instead?"
A wha-woah!!
>I turned him upside down, and rammed him headfirst into the bed, and he was breathless from laughter.
>I had never felt so... Alive before.
>"And That's why they call me the busty breakneck!"

>>7339156
>inb4 lying about a move to have sex with him

>>7339214

Fuck. How did you know?

>>7339227
because I want it to happen.

>>7339156

>"There's another move I tended to use, and it's what got me my name."
Really? What is it? Show me!
>"First, I use my rack like this!"
>I tackled him, tits first, pinning him on the bed, and he wriggled about helplessly.
Mom! Hahaha, stop!
>Then all of a sudden I felt a poking at my crotch.
>My son was turned on. Just as I suspected.
O-oh, m-mom, I'm so sorry...
>"Don't be. I said this was how I got my title. Heehee..."
>I pulled down his pants, and surely enough, he was fully erect.
Mom, what are you doing?!
>"Reliving you of your stress.~"
>I pulled up my bra, and soon enough his cock was between my mighty rack.
>I began to suck, and give him a boobjob.
>To show my appreciation for his interest in my career.
Mom... Oh...Yes...
>He came in less than a minute. Faster than I expected. I swallowed every last drop.
>For protien.

>>7339690
FUCK MOMMY
FUCK MOMMY'S TIGHT ASS

>>7339767

You got it.

>"Come now, you gotta let the woman have some fun too."
Wh-what?
>I flipped around, and spread myself.
>"Come eat your dinner dear~"
G-gladly...

Sadly, gotta go for a bit.
Be back to conclude this tale of tails.

;)

>>7338399
>cows
>stable income
oh you

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>>7340101
At least someone got the joke

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>>7335790
>end up sitting in her lap, sucking on a nipple like a baby while sharing a laptop
>call someone a faggot on /trash/ and she breaks out into jiggly giggles every time
>still get instaboner whenever drinking from her
>"Okay, my turn at the keyboard!"
>she decides it's polite to return the favor and she sits on your lap
>Anonymoo is soft and squishy so it's not as crushing as you feared
>she pops your dick between my meaty thighs and rubs them back and forth
>reach around to hold onto her belly and big hanging boobs to help you grind into her
>so soft and warm that you nut in no time
>she either likes it or ignored that she has your cum all over her thighs
>keeps rubbing your cock poking out between her hug legs
>"Oh that's funny! I was just looking at the futa thread anyway!"

>>7340070

>He begins eating me out, blushing madly whilst doing it.
>"This, is called cunniligus. This is how you pleasure a woman after *ah* you've came, without having them orgasm. Take *hng* note."
>This continues for about ten minutes, without him breaking a sweat.
>"Oh, sweetie, your father never made me feel this good..."
>He finished got up, and dismissed the situation as if it never happened. But not before thanking me.
Mom, tonight has been the best night ever. Can you show me more of your wrestling memories tomorrow?
>"Sure thing sweetums."

And, scene.

Like it?

>>7341472
Yeah, I love it.
Maybe the next day when they do it she gets in her original wrestling outfit that tight on her now?

>>7338088
Some new stuff.

>"So... you want me to eat you?" The king asked.
>The girl in front of him nodded. "Oh yes!"
>Dragon leans in, sniffing dubiously. "What... are you poisoned?"
>"No!"
>Dragon looks around at the little crowd, everyone wearing white robes and smiling.
>Weird. Was this another religion he'd started?
>"You don't smell sickly." He pointed out.
>"I'm offering myself freely!"
>Dragon cocks his head. "Why?"
>"Because, because you're my lord! And this is how we show you our love!"
>All the people nodding.
>Dragon looks confused, cocking his head.
>"You're really not trying to trick me?"
>"No my lord, we are for you, your loving servants!"
>Dragon cocks his head, considering, before he lay down to be on a more even level.
>Tongue whips out, grabbing a young man from the crowd and slurping him into the maw.
>Dragon watches the human's reaction as he rolls the human around his mouth, before the soft 'ulp' puts him away forever.
>Girl trembles a little as she watched. But she smelled pleased.
>"So..." The dragon said once the bulge had vanished into his belly. "Tell me more about this little group of yours."

XXXXXX

>It had been a frustratingly long negotiation, but he'd finally bought the island chain.
>Cost him a minor fortune but they gave out in the end.
>He'd recoup the cost by building a resort here in any case.
>Lovely islands too, flying by beneath him.
>Smoke from a campfire, a little village.
>Oh right these islands are inhabited.
>Well better introduce myself.
>Land in the middle of the village, humans screaming and running.
>Guess nobody told them they'd been bought out by a dragon.
>Flick the roof off a grass hut and lean in.
>Family of five, how lucky.
>Make mental note to encourage breeding to avoid extinction.
>Ulp... Gulp... Slurp...
>Wonder how they'd taste dipped in chocolate?
>Gulp... Gulp....
>Take off, have two more islands to inspect and daylight's burning.

>>7341515

I could do that.
Could you pastebin that? And last story?

>>7341577
Oh, feedback and suggestions for other scenes would be much appreciated.

>>7341642
I'll pastebin the wrestling story for ya

>>7341642
>>7341879
Actually, do you have a name for the story?

>>7341906

The breakneck family

How bout that?

>>7341934
Yeah that'd work

>>7341934
Here's the pastebin
http://pastebin.com/FSdbQTyk

>>7341988

Alright, post link and I'll continue.

>>7342150
>>7342034

>>7342192

Whoops.
Alrighty then, how should I play >>7341515
Out?

Should it end in sex?

>>7342227

Also, dub me as WriteFriend.

>>7342227
Yeah, most likely in sex.
I'd be like while the son is at school she gets the idea to surprise him by dressing up in her old wrestling costume. When he gets home and goes to his room his mom steps in and then they 'practice' more wrestling moves. Maybe like a regular move where she can also give him a handjob?

>>7342247
Alright, but since I'm a guest I'll have to make another pastebin.
Here's the version that credits you as WriteFriend.
http://pastebin.com/rLmPn6Q8

>>7342316

Oh whoops.
Heh, sorry for the hassle.

>>7342259
Sounds good.
I might need to span this over more than one thread, if this gets full blown.
>Inb4 full BLOWN

>>7342316

The Breakneck family 2 : "Coaching"

>It was Friday, and I was on my way to pick up my son from school, to take him to wrestling practice.
>And I had a little surprise in store for him.
>I rolled down the window, and called to him.
Hi mom! Ready for practice?
>"Ready as I'll ever be. Are you? I've got a special ring, fitted out just for us."
>I winked at him, and he gazed slack jawed with excitement.
>Today was gonna be an early birthday for him.

>>7342547
WHAT WILL COME NEXT?

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>>7342547
>>7341472
original idea guy/Anonymoo/Sandcastles here, and great! also like to actually see her in action, whether from the tapes showing her matches or her deciding to get back in the ring. maybe with her handsome little partner at her side to see if she still has what it takes in person (tag partner or manger)

also, ever decide what species they are?

>>7343492

Fox.
And I'm eventually gonna work up to that.
Good things come to those who wait.

>>7343840
always good to know you've got plans! and gotcha, so she's that kind of "vixen"

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>even more green
All this fiber will do my dick well. Good work everyone.
>>7321292
Hey, I have a request if you're open to it. Queen Sectonia from the Kirby series decides to summon a human (anon) to be her pet in her world. Of course anon rejects the idea, but not even her threats and demands could phase his disinterest in being her pet. As the mirror only had power to summon just one human, she takes some advice from her servant (Taranza, be nice) and tries alternative, lewder methods to get him to agree. Per rule of queen, she's got good pair of bee tits and a big fat abdomen she could flaunt, and may have a way with words to help too, putting her 'beauty' to work. When it doesn't completely work (not used to being rejected), she could even let him touch her, or her hug him as a 'sample.' Although aroused, he still refuses. Each day passing she uses more desperate measures to get the anon to agree, to the point of degrading herself for his attention, up until she's the one wearing the collar, just when he couldn't take ignoring her any longer either. Insert hip to fuck bees song here.

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>>7345661
>>7321292
pretty much pic related is the last attempt.
Also forgot to attach Queen Sectonia's bio if you needed it.
http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/Queen_Sectonia

>>7341577
>>7341696

Liked the island scene better, but that's because willing prey does little for me. Don't have many ideas for what else he could do that you haven't covered. But the majority of what I would suggest would be sexualized, and involve a giant female lamia. Rival kingdom, perhaps?

One possible scene for dragon king is he returns to that island, to see how his breeding initiative is going. Most are happy with this new law, but some are against it or unable to land a willing mate. And since they're breaking the law...

>>7346273
Eh, not much of his prey is really willing, just that they are calm around him until he decides he's hungry, like how gazelles are calm around lions at watering holes. They're not currently hungry so there's no need to make a fuss.

Trying to avoid oversexualizing it to enjoy the casual nature of it, but I could go with some sexual stuff as long as it's not too overblown, what did you have in mind? I'd be at least curious to hear your ideas. And yeah that one does give me a thought.

>>7333686
>At this point, your teeth is grinding in pure anger.
>Just as you feared, it was the annoying Yo-kai from the other two times you reeled in something.
>Unlike the other times, however, the hook has gone through the end of her tailfin rather than on her jet black hair, leaving her dangling in the air.
>In addition, her itty bitty nipples were uncovered as well.
>Seems like she hasn't found them at all since your last 'lesson' with her.
>But why should you care about that?
>Just looking at the sight of her calm appearance boils your blood
>This is literally the third time she has cocked blocked you out of a good meal
>And you are sick of it.
>Time to teach this bitch the last lesson.
Now what was it that those doctors do to newborns?
>You remember and raise your palm.
>You wait for gravity to rotate her until her little fish butt was facing you
>And you let it all out in one swing
>*THWACK*
>"Kyaaaa!"
>She had one hell of a jump, one that almost made you lose your footing.
>She looks around frantically for a moment, rubbing her butt from the impact.
>It seems that despite your spank she's still groggy and unaware of your presense behind you.
>A few moments later and she finally lets out a sigh
>"Phew, I finally got untangled from that monster's line and boat.
Yeah but now you're out of the frying pan and into the fire.
>Her entire body froze upon you saying those words
>Her neck slowly turns to face you, man to woman fish person
>You snort
You've got some nerve showing your face here! Have you learned nothing from last time?

>>7346305
Oh, no I know the prey isn't willing, overall, just was referring to that group in the scene above the island one, with the woman offering herself up to the dragon.

As for sexual scenes, can't think of much concerning a male dragon. Or a female lamia, for that matter, other that breast and insertion stuff. Honestly, what you have going is fine without sex. Focusing on the casual consumption is great on its own.

>>7346410
Righto, sticking to this general theme, mostly just need sparks of inspiration for individual scenes. Let me know if you come up with any?

Though you did already give me one.

>>7346464

Maybe something like he's inspecting the new batch of troops, or guards. Pops one in his mouth. Mentions something along the lines of, "You're training them too hard. Need more fat to go with the muscle."

Show some examples of why he's so beloved by his people. Taking care of invading barbarians, quickly settling in-kingdom disputes by easily removing one of the arguing parties with a gulp. More interactions with dragon or monster kings/queens from other lands, like with the chess game.

Is there a general consensus on an evolution of character traits that make a character into a badass?

>>7341577
>It's been a year since visiting the islands last.
>Time flies when you're having fun.
>Instituted a breeding program on the islands.
>Island people are a rare breed with tanned skin and a... unique flavor.
>Must ensure population growth or I'll eat them into extinction.
>Heck I could sell some of them to my neighbors, they'd be a rare treat.
>"We have done as you commanded, oh great one."
>Oh right, this human is talking to me.
>"You have abolished all marriage practices?"
>"Yes my lord."
>"And put the fertility potions in the drinking water?"
>"Of course your magnificence."
>"And the breeding ceremony is held on schedule?"
>"With each lunar cycle, your grace."
>Human seems pliant enough, and marginally competent.
>"Right, you're the new chieftain."
>"Thank you your magnificence."
>"But one more thing. You won't need nearly as many males as females considering how you humans breed. The surplus males can be put to better use."
>"Better use?"
>"Don't worry, I'll take care of everything."
>A flick of the tongue drags a trembling male into the dragon's maw.
>Gods above these people are delicious. Going to make a fortune from the other dragons.
>They panic and flee of course. Silly humans, it's an island, where is there to run to?
>Snatch up another one as he beats his great wings.
>Okay, I'm only going to eat a third of the males.
>Pops the latest morsel in his maw and shudders.
>Alright, alright... two thirds.

is the anon here last thread that was reviewing my story Missed Beacon?

Is anyone here open to commissions?

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>>7344938

I'm back, from sleep.
Gonna continue soon.

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>>7338088

Taking over your story gave me some inspiration to try out a story of something similar. Short, focusing on the gigantic, voracious, ruler of a kingdom. Hope you don't mind, but if you do, this tidbit will be the first and last.

>A party rages in the market square.
>Merchant stands have been moved away to make room for the throngs of guests and revelers.
>They are celebrating the saving of their people by their powerful ruler.
>Their queen lounges near the back of the square, her immense size requiring ample space.
>She rests on her side, resting one arm on a nearby roof, causing the occasional buckle and groan, and her other hand on her raised, nearly bare, hip.
>Her subjects dance and sing, and grow fat and happy on the ample supply of food and drinks.
>The party is brought to a silence as the master of ceremonies introduces a recreation of their majesty saving them from a most terrible fate.
>He tells how the people came from a land in the desert, where life was difficult and harsh.
>Food was scarce, water was so severely rationed that thirst was a high cause of death.
>The greatest cause, however, was the Millennium Worms.
>A large costumed puppet, requiring at least a dozen people to operate and move, slithers out of the shadows and into the town square.
>The tooth-lined mouth flaps open and dives down on a group of four terrified actors.
>The narrator reminds them of how the Millennium Worms would rise up out of the sands and devour entire homes in a single gulp.
>In its belly they would be kept alive by its cruel biology, just so it could feed off of them for 1,000 years, hence the name.
>Of course the victims would expire by around 200 years, twice that of a normal life span, but they were not a pleasant two decades.
>Large thumping is made with the big drums, and an awesome shadow is cast over the puppeted worm.
>The loud man speaks of how the giant woman brought down her battle axe, cleaving the worm in twain.

(cont.)

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>>7350626

>The actors inside pull a rope that tears the paper exterior of the worm, right down the middle, and collectively they make a death screech and gurgle as the worm lie still.
>The MC tells how their savior destroyed every worm she can, then took up the villagers and helped them settle in a lush, verdant, land that became their kingdom.
>The people cheer, and the giant warrior woman whistles and gives a thumbs up.
>"Well done," she compliments. "You forgot one minor detail, though," she reminds, as she has to every year.
>The queen reaches down to the puppet and takes one half in each hand back with her.
>The people stay silent as they watch her pour out the actors inside into her mouth. A lump in her throat travels down with each gulp.
>She licks her lips happily once the tail is emptied, and says, "I devoured their insides."
>Then she tips the other half into her mouth as well. Some actors cling to the wooden supports inside, to keep from falling.
>She easily removed them by lapping her tongue inside and sucking them between her lips.
>The last one the people see struggling to climb out from between her plush red lips, only to be slurped into her mouth, swished around for flavor, and gulped down to meet with the rest of his troupe.
>The queen pats her belly and lets out a happy burp.
>The party goers near her can hear the cries and pleading of the actors inside.
>To drown it out, the music plays back, and louder.
>It was still better than the Millennium Worms.

>>7350626
>>7350656
I like it!

If you like we can set both these in the same setting and maybe play off each other a little bit? Figure it makes sense that the world is so dark and dangerous that people are relieved to be protected by these monstrous rulers because they're a far lesser threat than all the things they've defeated.

>>7350713
Sounds fine by me. Glad you liked it!

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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked herehttp://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions.

>>7350729
Yeah it was nice, fits with the same theme of casual consumption and of a people who just look the other way and try not to think about it.

Could say that my dragon's kingdom and your giantess' kingdom are separated by a bit of distance, maybe a put in some political relations with a hint of romance into their relationship? Perhaps she's a relatively (in dragon terms) new player and he just hasn't gotten around to meeting with her yet?

>>7350729
Any ideas?

We could set up a kind of rp too.

>>7350315

>We drove to a more lively part of town, and went to a gym, but strangely enough he was silent the whole way.
>Until we went in.
So, where do we practice?
>"I managed to pull some strings and reserved us our own wrestling mat. And a little something else."
Oh boy, what is it?
>I chuckled softly. "You'll have to wait and see..."
>Once we got out on the wrestling mat, I told him to wait while I did something.
>After a couple minutes, I came out, in my spandex costume, blasting "Don't stop believing" on an old boom box.
>He was speechless.

Guess who?

>>7351189
Hey my man
Welcome back

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>>7350741

I would wager her kingdom is relatively new, yes. Going back and forth on whether or not to make her an ice giant (which would just be her having blue skin and white hair), to add in some monster element to her.

Distance makes sense, I doubt she'd set up near another one, initially, though she's probably trying to expand, somewhat. One of the reasons her people love her is that, because of her large size and strength, she can quickly and easily help to build new walls and buildings, set up farming land. All of this so that her people can thrive and her food source remains consistent, but it works out for them, too.

Dunno if she'd feel romantic ties to a dragon, though. Chiefly that part of this position's appeal is the power she has over them. Among other ice giants, she has to compete with them. All by herself, she has total domination.

You could also say they haven't met yet. Be a good way to set up the back and forth between them.

I'm still working out her appearance too. At the moment, I'm thinking she wears tunics or just fur bikinis, given her massive size requiring a lot of pelts, and my own perversions, they would be revealing. I'm fond of the idea of her armor being made from the Millennium Words she slew. Again, revealing, but less so than her casual or regal attire.

Was at first thinking something like picture attached, but that looks a bit too demonic for either an ice giant or just a giant woman in general. Maybe the rulers of a rival kingdom in the south, but I'm getting ahead of myself.

>>7351076
Could be something to try out in the future. With my adapting some greentext into narratives and filling other requests, time is tight, so I think for now the best thing is for us to continue throwing out short stories, occasionally involving the other's OC.

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>>7348096
100%. Sandcastles/Anonymoo guy, and posted my blog/patreon up there.

my basic commission menu's here
http://luffy316.blogspot.com/2016/11/luffy316-loose-commission-chart.html

>>7351302
Alright, makes sense, see how it goes from here. I'll drink some coffee and try to come up with some new ideas to write about and something to involve your character with as well, though it couldn't be too involved considering I can't write your character, so probably just long distance stuff.

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>>7351335
Sounds good. Yea, I need to do a few scenes, myself, to build up what her characteristics are.

If you need to reference her kingdom, it's at the foot of a mountain, at the edge of a large forest (that is home to other voracious creatures, such as lamia, driders, and other assorted monsters and monster women.

It's no doubt minuscule compared to the wide expanse of the dragon king's. She really only expands her kingdom when the current confines become too cramped for her subjects. She wouldn't want the population growth to slow down. Kingdom might have garnered a culture of promiscuity to help fuel this.

>>7346738
>The dragon scowled as he soared over the army below.
>A legion of gnolls invading his kingdom? The nerve.
>Pillaging towns, raiding caravans, burning crops, slaughtering peasants.
>They were damaging his kingdom's functioning.
>And those peasants weren't theirs to kill.
>He swooped down, raking his talons through ranks of warriors, shredding them like weeds.
>Tedious really, not even a decent magic user among them.
>A gout of fire reduced a few hundred to charred remains.
>He might have to track them to wherever they'd come from and make sure their people understood how things worked.
>He landed amidst the battle and started shoveling gnolls into his maw.
>An acquired taste, but not bad.
>Might have to take some for breeding, they'd probably taste decent if they were cleaned up.
>Who wants mud on their food? Yuch, but no time to cast his usual cleaning spells.
>Oh they're retreating now, not letting them off so easily.
>Flying after them, swooping down to snatch up prey and gobble them down.
>They probably think I'll get tired and leave them be.
>Not with them to swallow down, gnolls are high in calories.
>Heh, ironic, fueling their own destruction.
>You don't need that many to send a message home anyway.

>>7351189

Wow! That's so cool! Those still fit?
>"Kinda, they chafe a bit, but I'll be fine. This isn't the best part though."
>I clicked off the music, put down the boom box and showed him his own custom made wrestling costume.
>Wide eyed, I'm pretty sure he started welling up with tears.
>Shining in red, gold and white, it was like a smaller version of me.
C-can I try it on, mom?
>I smiled at him, and tossed at him. He caught it and bolted for the locker room.

>>7351331

Hi anonymoo guy, perhaps for development purposes you could sketch busty breakneck?
And her son in costume as well?

I'm fine if no.

>>7351883
Seconding this, we need busty breakneck!

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>>7351905

If dubs and confirmed dubs anonymoo has no choice

Make it happen

>>7351969
Close enough

>>7351994

I'm not greening until I get that sketch

It's unanimous

We need it

>>7352114
Yes! We do need it!
But maybe we should detail it more? How they look, what the suits look like.

>>7351883
>>7351331
oh, just do writing commissions myself! I can barely doodle on Paint

>>7352150
Well, maybe we could get someone on the drawthread to draw it if we get a ref together?

>>7352166

The suits are your stock wrestling suits, no capes. Red, gold and white. Busty breakneck is an e-cup and her son is 5'11" and she herself is 6'2".

Feel free to add some chub on Breakneck.

;)

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>>7352247

Found a somewhat good luchador mask design. Just swap the maroon with gold, the yellow with red and the other red with white.

That should suffice.

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>>7350656

>The teacher was instructing the students on agriculture, morality, and the glory of their great leader the queen. A typical day in the 5th grade.
>What was not so typical was the appearance of one of the school's headmaster.
>With a beaming smile, he spoke to the whole class, saying, "I have a big surprise for everyone. This class has been selected for a very special ice cream party!"
>The children let out a frantic cheer, thanking the glorious queen for the luck bestowed upon them that day.
>Their teacher spoke to the headmaster briefly, but after he made it very clear to her that this class was going to the party, he led the children out into the hallway, where the finely dressed royal servants took over.
>Cries of joy could be heard all the way from the school up the slopes to the castle that had been built into the mountain face.
>Not only were they being treated to an ice cream party, but now they were getting to go to the castle? Nothing could bring them more joy.
>The servants led the class into the kitchen, where a large bowel filled with ice cream was being prepared.
>They looked for their spoons, but were told that they would instead be allowed to literally dig in.
>The various castle attendants helped the children up over the lip of the bowl, and let them slide into the ice and whipped cream.
>Each child cheered between mouthfuls of cold sugar and milk, as the bowl was pushed along on its wheeled platform.
>The large doors opened, and they entered into the throne room of the great queen.
>She sat impatiently upon her royal seat, but when the children and ice cream arrived, she perked right back up.
>The bowl stopped at her feet, and the children looked up in awe and wonder.
>"Your majesty," her royal attendant said, "as you requested: a bowl of vanilla ice cream, with whipped cream and..." he took a moment to clear his throat, averting his gaze from the happy kids, "...sprinkles."

(cont.)

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>>7352257

And don't forget, they are foxes.

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>>7352247
I was thinking that it would be like mika from street fighter, but I like your idea better. Also chub is good.

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>>7352262

>Without hesitation, the giant woman grabbed the bowl and lifted it up, to be met by her spoon.
>The first scoop held just one "sprinkle." He held out his arms, saying how much he loved the queen and how wonderful she was.
>She found this sweet, and gave her treat a sweet kiss with her full lips.
>The child laughed, and wiped the lipstick off of his face, so he could again open his eyes to see the approaching cavern.
>He was too young to comprehend what was happening. Why the light of the castle was being replaced with darkness. It was at least nice to have her humid breath warm him up.
>The 10 year old looked past her lips and down to his friends, who were all cheering at their lucky classmate.
>He gave them one final wave before the tiers closed around the spoon.
>Outside, the children listened to their queen let out a satisfied moan. When she pulled the spoon back out, all of its contents were gone.
>They were confused, but by the time the next spoonful took two more, they understood.
>They tried to climb out of the bowl, but the edges were too slippery and wet.
>One by one they were taken into her hungry mouth. Strands of saliva and melted cream dripping from the roof of her mouth.
>She treated them to a warm embrace by her tongue, rolling it to give them a fun ride, before sending them down the last slide of their life.
>A few managed to survive long enough to be found swimming in the melted treat.
>The queen simply tilted the bowl toward her lips, and let the few sprinkles left flow into her mouth and immediately down her squeezing throat, to join their classmates.
>She wiped her lips clean and gave a firm pat to her screaming tummy.
>"Attendant," she called down to the bald, well dressed man. "Prepare some prisoners for me. I have another hunger to quell," she ordered while cupping her mighty breast.

>>7352262
>>7352412

Starting to think this one might have been a bit too dark. I'm not sure.

>>7352560

Yeah.
It kinda was.

Any updates on the busty breakneck ref?

>>7352579

Yea...Well, maybe I'll change it, in post, making the children dwarves. I just know I want to keep the ice cream with "sprinkles idea."

And I am not the busty breakneck guy, though given how well received he is here, I'll take that as a compliment.

>>7352560
Part of the appeal of this is that it's a dark subject being indulged in with casual carelessness. Exactly how you want to play it is up to you.

Don't think my dragon would go out of his way to eat children, he'd probably wait for at least mid teens so there's more meat to them. That said if he just happened to desire a snack and the nearest edible thing was a child, or he was eating a whole family, then he'd do it like he did with those islanders.

>>7352599

I am the busty breakneck guy btw.
Call me WriteFriend.
As of art, I myself have no time to make a decent ref.
Which is why we need some help with that.

>>7352607
Yup. Part of posting my stuff publicly is to see how it is received. Gotta make sure the content and writing is quality if I ever want to start taking paid commissions (I probably won't, regardless).

Gonna delete it for now, rework it.

>>7352636
Nope, post too old. My shame shall be forever.

>>7352634
Will do, WriteFriend.

>>7351302
Where do you find all this time to fit it so much stuff to do? I'm a bit jealous.
By the way, did you see >>7345661 >>7345706?

>>7352634
Well, if we're gonna make a ref, we gotta get some ideas together first. I think we should focus more on busty for now. We got this so far >>7352247 so now we just got to give examples of those to put in a ref

>>7345661
So like, she tries to make anon her pet but in the end she becomes anon's pet?

>>7352743
pretty much. I got the idea when I saw a few pieces on how women...don't take rejection very well, especially the beautiful ones.
The wiki contains all of her info and an idea of her personality if it helps.

>>7352708

And do we do it on here or on
>>>7338975

>>7352768
That seems cool, but also I'd want to see them also be in a relationship at the end.

>>7352776
I'd say lets get a reference pic together here, then well post it on the OC thread.

>>7351781

>Dragon clicks his claws together thoughtfully.
>Crumpled balls of inkstained paper all over the floor.
>Finishes writing the last tweaked syllable and rings the bell.
>Trembling peasant girl comes in, gives a little bow.
>Oh good, the guards already stripped this one.
>"Y-Your Majesty."
>Hello there, I need your help with a little project of mine.
>"My, my help?" She looked surprised.
>"Yes, come here."
>She tiptoed over, gulping.
>"I'm just going to try out a bit of magic on you, it won't hurt."
>"Magic? I've never known anything about"
>The spell is a long word in draconic, the ancient language of power.
>Peasant cries out and wobbles on her feet.
>A scaly hand picks her up before she can fall over.
>Girl covered in a sheen of moisture like a sudden heavy sweat.
>"What, what is happening to m-"
>A broad tongue licking across her whole body muffles her.
>Dragon scowls and starts crossing out and rewriting the draconic text.
>"Majesty, what are you, aaah!"
>Another spell cast, more sweat-like slick, vaguely reddish this time.
>Another lick, pursed lips this time. "Better, not quite right.
>He revises the spell again, the peasant girl squirming and hyperventilating.
>This time she shrieks as the magic makes her sweat a deep red liquid.
>The dragon groans as he licks her, before popping the limply squirming girl into his mouth.
>He closed his eyes and moaned, rolling her around his tongue, licking the flavoring off of her, delighted to find she kept sweating more.
>Finally a soft 'Ulp' sent the twitching farmer's daughter to his belly.
>Smiling, the dragon looked to his spellbook.
>Traced a finger down the entries on the page.
>Apple... Pinapple... Orange... Caramel...
>He wrote down the final spell under 'Cherry'.
>It's been a very productive day!
>He started a new entry labeled 'Lemon-Lime' and rang for the next peasant to be sent in.

>>7352809
Probably going to add in male prey as well, I'm bi so it's all good for me but I tend to assume most readers would prefer female prey.

>>7352663
Any thoughts on how to bridge our stuff at all?

>>7352784

Alright. Who's going to do the ref?
Not me, as previously stated.

>>7352880
I'll do the ref, just provide pictures and I'll shove it into a mspaint pic like most refs.

>>7352784
a king does sound like a nice title for the lucky man. I wouldn't mind it, though I think it would be cool if they still butt heads now and then, leaving for more bedtime fun afterwards.

>>7352932
Maybe they'd act all royal in public, then in private they'd bicker, makeup, and then have sex.

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>>7352893
this is why names are handy...

Sandcastles: I keep imagining her as this kind of build

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>>7353071
though this is probably more that the writer was thinking, by my guess

>>7352979
Yeah, but that would be after the accumulation of >>7345706 taking place, bondage fun and all that. Thinking in terms of a one shot for the most part though, so don't know if the bickering royalty would fit.

>>7353100
This looks more like what the writer wanted, plus the chub. So we got the bodytype, now what about the wrestling outfit?

>>7352893
Then refer to
>>7352289
>>7352302
>>7352257
>>7352247

That should work.

>>7353071

Yeah. That's a good body type.
Just remember that she is an e-cup

>>7353210

Shit I didn't meant the Mika thing disregard that one fuck

Can someone make an edit of the mask so that it fits the description? >>7352257

>>7353210
Alright, so far we have the body type pic, but we need a pic of the wrestling suit, what should that look like?

>>7352697
My job allows me to choose what days I want to work.

I did see the request, but I don't know if I'm right for it. It sounds like a really cute and sexy story though. Just imagine the two interacting, and both walking away after the failed seduction attempt, with Sectonia thinking, "It's so hard to seduce him!" and the human thinking, "It's so hard to not get seduced!" At least I think that's the tone you were going for. I just don't write beast creatures very well.

>>7352839
Not much, yet. Once I start building up how her kingdom works and the surrounding area, some ideas might come up.

Only one I have so far is the dragon is flying over the lands, looking for snacks. He comes across a small farming village and decides to harvest. The village belongs to the giantess, and she assumes the dragon is some primal beast there to take away her food source. So she armors up, takes her trusty battle axe, and goes on the hunt. Yada yada yada, they end up laughing about the misunderstanding over some humans.

>>7352809

>"We need that river to irrigate our crops!"
>"But without the dam and mill our town will die out."
>"Without these crops you'll die out anyway and our people will starve!"
>"We needed to expand the sawmill to meet growing needs, yours among them, I may add."
>The dragon rested his chin on a scaly hand, listening to the two mayors bickering.
>He had to attend these meetings, his subjects did have needs as well.
>Much as he'd like to just ignore them until he got hungry, his kingdom didn't run itself.
>"It occurs to me that you don't actually need the river."
>The gathered humans looked up at him, the first time he'd spoken.
>"You just need a water source."
>"My lord, there is no other water source in this valley..."
>The dragon rose up and looked around.
>"Wait a moment."
>He took off, buffeting the townsfolk as he flew up over the town.
>A few roared words of draconic and the ground rumbled, redirecting an underground river until it burst into a new spring.
>The humans were cheering as he came back down.
>"That spring should be more convenient than the river, it's closer to the town."
>"Thank you my lord... I should have known you would have the solution."
>Dragon shrugs. "It's my duty as ruler. Though it will take time to prepare a new irrigation system based on that spring.
>The dragon tapped his chin, doing some mental math.
>"You'll face a die off in winter, you won't be able to meet demand."
>He rose up and started walking over to the town square.
>"Select... twenty adults to sacrifice, that should be enough to balance things."
>"My... lord?"
>"You have one hour to decide. Take longer and I'll pick my own morsels... and it will be thirty."
>He licked his lips and got cozy. "Tick-Tock."

>>7353872
That sounds like a fun scene.

My suggestion is have it be a flashback where at the end it's revealed that they're sitting around laughing about how they first met while idly snacking on humans in some banquet hall.

>>7353734

Your stock luchador costume, minus cape. With the mask too. And bra. All Spandex.

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>>7354012
I've found a few different costumes that she could wear, sorry for quality.

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>>7353872
I still think you'd do fine for the story (plus she's a giant wasp bee thing, not a beast :^). ) I've seen what you've done with character interactions and I think you can nail this one down well if you wanted. In terms of lewds, bee boobies and shaking around some big thicc abdomen can take you pretty far I think. I wont force you though.

>>7354105
two words:
lactating honey

>>7354083

Far left ought to do.

>>7354171
Alright, also I don't think I got which one of these bodys you liked better. This >>7353071 or this >>7353100

>>7354212

The one with dubs, but with a little more flab.

>>7354137
Not a bad idea at all thinking about it.
>>7353872
That tone sounds about right, with her trying harder each fail. Not sure if you are into bondage, but you think you can slip it in as the finale if you take it on?

>>7354322
Alright, so far we got the bodytype, the species, what she's wearing, and the colors of her outfit. Anything else we need before we start compiling into a ref?

>>7354352

Nope. Make it, and see if you can scrounge up a good thread, as the normal OC one is slow as shit.

I'll continue the story soon.

>>7354370
Real quick, what colors should be swapped to gold, white, and red on the suit? >>7354083

>>7351854

Gonna continue now.
>>7354426

Doesn't matter at this point, do what you want.
As long as it looks good.

>>7354334
>>7354105
I'll think it over, and if I can come up with some good ways to describe the sex between a giant queen bee and a human, I'll give it a shot.

>>7354491

>He dashed out and did a somersault onto the mat, and there he stood, posed heroically, his suit fitting like a glove.
>"Somebody seems excited to practice."
Heck yeah I am! I wanna be able to beat people up for money! That's like a dream come true!
>"Now now, It isn't all just fighting and posing dramatically. It takes a certain finesse. Like this!"
>I grabbed him by the legs, and flopped backwards, all within one motion. I still got it.
Mom! No! Not again!
>With a mighty thud, he landed on the mat face first.
>"Hope you didn't forget your mouth guard!"

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>>7354491
Alright, I got this for the ref
I'll post it with the request like:
Requesting a fox milf in a wrestling costume and wrestling mask like in the ref (change colors according to ref) She's doing the pose like the woman is in the ref.

>>7354567

Sounds good. Can't wait.

;)

>>7354576
Alright, its posted! I don't know if it'll get done today though.

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>>7352262
>>7352412

>Summer was here, which meant school was ending for the year for most, but ending for good for the elder classmen.
>The students assembled in the village square for the graduation ceremony, where they would be celebrated for their pursuit of knowledge and efforts to become better citizens.
>A few would go onto become scholars, others guardsmen. Most would work in the business of their families, but some would not go on to do much at all.
>This group were those students who failed to meet the standards of their time in academia. They were also generally disobedient, unruly, and overall had no promise of becoming good citizens.
>Such students were waiting inside the school, tapping their fingers on desks, marking school property with their names; living up to the image they helped to cultivate.
>They would not be graduating today, but that didn't mean they weren't going to have a place in the kingdom. No one was ever allowed to do nothing, to be a sponge.
>So for these students, they were told to wait inside the classroom, and after the graduation of their peers, they would be given work assignments.
>Eventually a person of authority arrived to direct them to follow him up the path toward the castle that was built into the side of the mountain the village sat under.
>This didn't surprise them. As they understood it, most "degenerates" were sent to work menial jobs in the castle.
>Of course, they knew the queen had certain appetites, but they were teenagers; confident in their immortality.
>The group of teens was led through various rooms and corridors. They were annoyed, but not surprised. Servants' quarters were typically out of the way of the main castle, so that guests wouldn't see them walking around, unless they were coming out to serve food.
>Finally through the kitchen, they entered a simple, but large room, in the middle of which was a pool.

(cont.)

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>>7354687

>They all cheered, ignoring their escort's pleas for quiet. A nearby guard had to get them in line, and quite literally. Roll had to be taken, so they were certain no one had wandered off.
>Of the group, three were selected: a boy and two girls, and led outside the pool room.
>The rest were told that, due to their poor performance, they were to become servants for the queen. However, she is not without mercy, and has offered them a pool day to enjoy, before they begin adulthood.
>Again they started cheering, and once more had to be silence so they could be told to strip down to just their underwear.
>Immediately after stripping, they leaped into the pool, splashing around with delight.
>When they got in, they found the water a bit gritty, but oddly sweet tasting. It didn't hinder their fun any, though.
>After around 10 minutes, they were instructed to get out of the pool and head out the door to "serve their queen."
>They complained about the short time they were allowed in the strange water, of course. >They complained more as in the room they entered, they were being pushed, one by one, down a slide into a dark pit.
>At the end of this slide was no grate to stop them. Instead, they were deposited into a large bowl of vanilla ice cream, topped with whipped cream, and now them.
>The slower students were annoyed, but now delighted and began to gobble up the treat.
>The slightly brighter students realized what was next, and tried to scramble free.
>The dessert was too thick, and difficult to move in. The bowl's sides were too slick and steep to climb out of.
>Servants came in to push the bowl on its wheeled platform.
>Some students tried to get the help of others to escape, but they were too busy swimming in ice cream, now.
>Soon the bowl was pushed into the large throne room of their ice giantess queen.
>She sat, lounging on her throne, tapping a spoon impatiently upon her arm rest.
>When she saw the students, she perked up.

(cont.)

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>>7354786

>The bowl stopped before the queen's sandled feet, and the bald, well dressed, attendant stepped forward.
>"As her majesty requested, a bowl of ice cream, topped with whipped cream and sprinkles," he announced.
>As the bowl was being lifted up by the busty giantess, several of the students realized what they had been swimming in was sugar water, to make them sweeter.
>One teenager poked his head up out of the ice cream he had buried himself in, finding himself being lifted up to the plump blue lips of his ruler.
>Her pale blue tongue pushed past those thick lips, coating them in saliva and giving them some extra sheen.
>"No...no no no! I'll do better, I swear! I'll try this time, I really will! Just don't e-" but his pleas were cut off by the hungry mouth sealing behind him.
>Despite being an ice giantess, her mouth was just as humid as any other's. Her tongue bucked and hugged the student, slid him along the roof of her mouth, and rubbing him against her cheek. It all felt very nice, but he couldn't enjoy it, knowing what was next.
>Accurate to his prediction, he was then swallowed, a strong gulp echoing in her chambers.
>The rest were dealt with in a similar fashion. Most one at a time, but a few went in pairs.
>One girl managed to pull herself free of the cream and fall off the spoon, landing on the ice woman's mountainous breast.
>Despite how sticky she was, she could find no purchase when trying to climb the tit she was now sliding down.
>She managed to slip down the front, slipping into her fur-made bikini top and stopping herself thanks to the pressure of the fabric, and the pebbled, dark blue, nipple she now rested upon.
>The queen gave a surprised face, followed by an aroused one. She would let that bit of dessert stay until she finished the others.
>That time would come soon, as the rest of her classmates were slurped into the queen's mouth, flowing down the melted ice cream and into her throat.

(cont.)

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>>7354970

>The pesky sprinkle was pulled free of the breast, and dangled in front of a large, wicked smile.
>"Saucy little topping, you got me all worked up," she scolded before feeding the teenager to her mouth.
>She was pressed against the tongue by her ice cream sticky finger.
>With both sucked clean, it was the girl who would slip down the throat, to join the pile of students that lay sobbing in the suffocating dark of the queen's stomach.
>Dessert finished, the queen decided to treat herself further, thanks to that naughty student.
>"Attendant, prepare some prisoners for me. I have another hunger I wish to quell."

(end.)

Decided to go back and change up the ice cream story. My original plan was to make it more succinct, but true to form I kept adding details. However, I think it came out better, all the same.

As you can see, I have committed her to being an ice giant. I figure humans should remain human size, so their queen was made into some kind of mythical monster. Just one that looks pretty much like a human, save for different skin tone and more muscle tone.

>>7355014
I quite like it.

I think I'll write a sequence that sets up for the thing you were going to write, with your character finding mine eating her people.

>>7354687

You had summa your fun, now me.

>>7354563

Ooh...Ow...No, I forgot it, am i ok mom?
>I picked him up and inspected him.
>"No cuts or bruises. Legs are fine, no broken bones, arms are intact, nope! You're good. Let that be a lesson to you."
What kinda lesson? Ow...
>"Expect the unexpected. Always size up your opponent. Sometimes you have to outrun, outsmart, or just outright beat them to the punch."
Well that's a good lesson. So, what's on the agenda?
>I dragged over an old training dummy I used back in my glory days.
>"Your technique needs improvement. This here is Bernie burlap, he used to be my training dummy, now he's yours. Think of it as a family heirloom."

>>7355228

What do I do with an old sack of flour like that?
>"Bite your tongue! He's a sack of sand. He's supposed to be like your average Joe. Lean, mean, and wants your belt. Your not going to let him have it."
Well, what first?
>"Try to keep him off you!" I tossed it on him, and he got pinned to the mat.
Aah! Get offa me you lousy no good sonuva...
>"Less trash talk, more fighting! Roll on your back! That'll get him off you!"
>He tried helplessly squirming to roll him off, but to no avail.
>"Come on, aren't you lightweight champion in your class or something?"
He's...*gasp* too...Heavy!
>I walked on over, and peeled the dummy off him. "Well then, we'll have to try something else to practice..."

>>7353954
>The Dragon threw his head back and with a 'gulp' that sounded across the room sent another human to its doom.
>He fidgeted on his throne, the human just wasn't satisfying to him.
>His advisor looked at his notes, the familiar faint scent of fear on him.
>"Are the trade deals in order?"
>"Yes your majesty."
>"And the borders are secure?"
>"No incursions since the last incident, lord."
>The dragon sighed, shifting his wings. He reached into the cage and pulled out another human.
>The scream was short lived, going from the sound dampened cage to his muffling mouth.
>He closed his eyes and tried to focus a little, rubbing his brow as he rolled the human around his mouth.
>He squeezed and licked his prey, trying to let the familiar taste of wriggling flesh sooth him.
>Didn't seem to help,
>"Is something troubling you my lord?"
>The dragon tilted his head back and the bulge sliding down his throat signaled the demise of another of his subjects.
>"Bah, I am restless, I can't figure out why."
>"You have been very busy with ruling the kingdom sire... perhaps you require a vacation?"
>The dragon cocked his head. He popped a young male in his mouth as he thought, sucking on the human's toned body before swallowing.

>>7355521
>"You may have an idea there."
>Yes, that was it. He'd gotten so used to his life here that the prey had become... familiar. Wheeled to him in silenced cages to be plucked at his leisure, and all of the tastes familiar. He needed fresh meat."
>"I think you have the right idea there, I'll head out for a while, stretch my wings."
>The rest of the prey in the cage breathed a collective sigh of relief.
>"I'll be out for a while, message me if something happens."
>He picked up the cage and opened one end, pouring the rest of the humans in his maw, taking a few moments to swallow them all down before he took off.
>Out over the fields and then out of his kingdom he flew, soaring over hills and then over the ocean.
>He flew for hours before sighting shore, following along it until he found a fishing village.
>Last he'd checked this was unclaimed territory, no great lord to protect these people.
>Mmm, maybe he could force them to join his kingdom.
>The dragon swooped down, landing in the town square. It was evening, lots of humans gathered about.
>"Don't mind me little humans." He said with a smile.
>"I am but a weary traveler stopping by for a meal~"
>As they started to realize what was happening, he shot his tongue out and dragged a screaming, wriggling young woman into his maw.
>He enjoyed her struggles for a moment before gulping her down.
>With a wave of his hand and a few magic words a dozen human's convulsed and dropped to the ground, moaning as fruit flavored juices started seeping through their skin.
>They lay helpless as their nervous systems overloaded, keeping them docile with pleasant sensations as they became little more than living candy.
>The rest fled or tried to hide. Total chaos.
>The dragon chuckled. Enough idle grazing and ritual sacrifices. Tonight he would feast.

>>7355306

Why not just practice with you? I bet that might work.
>"Oh, I might just crush your ribcage or something..."
Oh come on mom, I can take ya! Try me!
>I smirked. "Well then, let's see if you can dodge a clotheswire!" I hung back on the ring, and lunged for him.
Woah, not this time, busty!
>He jumped off to the side and I fell flat on the mat, and then he got on top of me.
One! Two! Three! I win baby! Woohoo!
>"Beginners luck, next time won't be so easy. Don't get cocky." I said as I got up to my knees.


And here is where I meet a writer's block.
No idea how to transition into the sexy bits.

Any suggestions?

>>7355628
Maybe they do a move and the son falls on the mom in a sexual way? Mom starts doing the sexy stuff from there.

>>7355740

How about I try a clotheswire myself?
>"You sure about that little guy?"
Yeah! I bet I can sweep you off your feet faster than a hit knife through butter!
>"Well then, l'il man. Let's see it!"
Don't call me little!
>He hung back, and lunged right towards me. And face first into my rack.
>I had no idea how to respond, but he still kept his momentum, bringing me down with him.
>He bolted off me, his face redder than a tomato.
U-uh... I'm so sorry I...
>He was hard, and I could tell. Spandex isn't good at hiding those kinds of things.
>"Alright, let's get this over with. Pull down your tights."
Wh-what?!
>"You heard me. Pull em down. We wouldn't want your puberty in the way of your career."
O-ok...
>He slid them down, sat down and then I started to jack him off.
>He started lightly moaning, as I work my way to my tits.
Oh mommy...
>I started going down on him, and he squirmed with arousal.
>He lasted only 2 minutes, longer than last time.
>I swallowed, got up, and pulled his pants up.
>"Now then, let's try that again, without the faceplanting in my breasts."

>>7355935
Will you continue tomorrow?

>>7357242

Perhaps.
Things have gotten awkward with personal life and public life.
I might, I might not. Just keep archived, and well bumped.

>>7357564
I've got all of the story saved up and the pastebin link for the first one.

>>7355014
Any last questions you have for me to answer before you write something involving my dragon?

>>7357643

Nice. I got school too, so expect me after roughly 1:30.

If no deliveries occur, schedules would have fucked me over.

>>7354506
sounds good. I'll help out any way I can.

Also a bit of extra lore: Although considered a queen, she technically doesn't give birth to troops; they are made of magic instead, so she may as well be a virgin queen despite her beauty if that helps.

>>7357704
Sounds good, you get some rest now, you've done a lot of writing.

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>>7355014

>Akra, the ice giantess and queen of her human kingdom, was strolling through the market square, watching the throngs of people step away from her casual stride, lest they be crushed.
>All the food vendors would run up to their queen, offering her a taste of their newest recipes or harvests.
>To be selected to supply the castle with food was a huge boon, so any vendor willing took the risk to stand before the queen, surrounded by delicious scents, for the chance to supply their family enough money to ensure no one had to worry about coin for generations.
>The queen, dressed in black and white furs, stitched together from hundreds of beasts, and formed into a loin cloth and bra, knelt down in the middle of the vendors, so she didn't have to keep bending over to take their samples.
>Watermelons, apples, spiced boar and all manner of foods she tossed into her mouth, swishing it around and considering how it would pair with one of her subjects.
>One such flavor caught her attention. It was a special blend of honey, cream, and a sprinkling of wild flowers. It was savory, feeling heavy on her tongue even in that small dosage.
>What really caught her attention was the serving girl. Beautiful hair done up in a bun, full breasts straining against her low cut dress (as most woman were encouraged to wear to arouse and encourage frequent breeding), and the sweetest dusting of freckles across her button nose. Like chocolate chips on her caramel skin.
>Akra asked the young maiden to lead her to her cart, which she all too happily obliged.
>The queen asked the merchant of the two of them, who brewed up the sweet treat.
>The serving girl's father stepped up, announcing that it was he who came up with the idea when his daughter brought home some wild flowers, along the forest's edge, that smelled so heavenly.
>Akra confirmed that he was the one who made the cream, and knew how to gather the ingredients. When he agreed, Akra asked for all the barrels he had with him.

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>>7358597

>The man supplied her with all four barrels at his cart.
>One by one the queen took a barrel and crushed it between her finger tips, letting the cream spill over her tongue, though did not swallow.
>Her muscle sweetened, she picked up the man's daughter and yanked off her dress.
>The poor stitching made it an easy feat.
>The merchant wanted to cry out, but knew better than to question his queen.
>The busty young maiden screamed as she was settled into the queen's mouth. The big blue lips hugging around her hips, sucking on her long, creamy legs.
>More and more of the woman was pulled into the hungry and sweet smelling mouth. By the time her heavy breasts were knocking against Akra's bottom lip, one of the queen's attendants came running up to her.
>"Your highness!" he cried up to his queen. "A fishing village, 20 miles west, on the coast, has been attacked! Over half the population has already been devoured!"
>She swung her eyes up, trying to remember if she had actually been the one who ate up the fishing village. When it rang no bells, she knew her kingdom had been attacked.
>Meanwhile, the young woman had freed her arms and was trying to push against the plush surface of the queen's wet lips. Before she could make any sort of progress in her escape, the queen reached up with one finger and pushed her into her mouth.
>She was only swirled around briefly, coated in some of the remaining cream, before being swallowed down into the groaning stomach.
>Akra ran to her castle, where she would adorn herself with her armor made of the thick scales of the Millennium Worms. Black and purple corset, ranging from just below her belly button, to 3/4s of the way up her breasts. The loin cloth she wore replaced with a longer kilt made of the scales and teeth that gave her such deep and tight cleavage.
>Grabbing her large battle axe, its blades made of magical Ever-Ice, and a chain from the hilt to her other hand, she set off sprinting to the coastline.

(end)

>>7358597
>>7358803
>The dragon groaned, his belly pleasantly filled.
>It was rare for him to feel full, though he was hardly ever sated. He was an insatiable creature.
>Many of the humans had scattered to the four winds by now, dozens of them rested in his belly, creating a gently squirming mass inside him.
>The dragon sighed, sniffing through the village.
>He was careful not to do too much damage to the houses. Humans bred back naturally but houses took longer to repair.
>He smiled, nosing a window open before sliding his tongue inside.
>Guided by scent he found the cowering human and dragged his wriggling form out, clothes sliding off as if by invisible grease.
>The dragon wiggled the human back and forth on his tongue, watching him squirm, before flicking him high up into the air.
>The dragon sat back, opening his maw and letting the human fall into it, hitting his gullet perfectly.
>Another deep growl of satisfaction as the human slid down to his belly to join his fellows.
>Hmm? The dragon felt a trembling in the ground and looked up, wings arching up a little, ready to fly if needed.
>It felt like... thunder, but there were no clouds.

>17 posters
Hmmm

bump, anyways

>>7360795
probably it is 17. We got greentexts that make up a good deal of post count though.

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>>7358964

>To add to the sound of thunder he was hearing, the swirling torrent of wind could be heard rapidly approaching.
>Akra was swinging her chain that was connected to the ax head to her right.
>It created a swirl of gleaming grey and bright, shining, blue.
>The village now within her sight, she could see the fat and happy dragon laying out in the center of the village, rubbing its gut full of her people.
>Meanwhile, in her stomach, the poor milk maiden was being tossed around mercilessly, being forced to mix in with the acids and cream she now regretted showing off to the queen.
>The same had happened to her mother, years ago, in fact.
...
>Her mother was a bar maiden back then, sweet and beautiful as her daughter would grow up to be.
>It was during a festival celebrating the queen's defeat of the worms, many years ago.
>Her mother's job was just to refill the mugs of ale for the humans, she never had to approach the queen at all; she was perfectly content staring at her gigantic beauty from afar.
>However, while taking a fresh plate of libations to a rowdy group of men, she found herself being plucked from her path, and hoisted into the air.
>The drinks dropped on the people below, who gave only a momentary halt, only to start up again, happy to have been showered with beer.
>Akra had plucked her out of the crowd as if the square was a plate of treats for her. In truth, they may as well have been.
>Half way up her ascent, the giantess used her other hand to peel away the bar maid's revealing clothes.
>She screamed and screamed, but could not be heard over all the music and revelry, not that her pleas would have changed anything if they reached even the most merciful of ears.
>The woman was carried over to a small saucer that rested on a roof. In it was a shiny red liquid, though it did not move in any way.
>Aka stuck the woman head first into the shallow dish, coating her in strawberry jam.

(cont.)

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>>7362285

>The human was swirled around in the sweet coating, covering half of her body in strawberry flavor.
>She shook her head violently, to rid some of the jam from her face so she could see and speak. Perhaps it would have been better if she hadn't.
>The next thing she saw as the giant's face growing larger and larger. Those electric blue eyes weren't even looking at her. She wasn't registering her as a human, a living thing. Just a bit of food.
>Like her daughter would be, she was stuck half way into Akra's mouth.
>While the lips were still parted, light flooding in, the bar maid could see another party goer still inside her mouth, trying to push against the tongue that was rolling him against the wrinkled roof of her mouth.
>Seeing her, he reached out, trying to grab her hand in hopes of freedom. Just as the lips closed, the world went dark, and the woman heard the stranger yell as he was tossed back down the throat.
>Hearing her gulp, from within the mouth, was horrifying.
>Her entire upper body was sucked clean, molested by the invasive tongue. She hated herself for enjoying it somewhat, to have her breasts, face, and stomach be caressed so lovingly, in a way she had never felt, even with her husband.
>The bar maid felt a moment of hope when she was pulled back out with a pop. It was short lived, when she saw she was just being re-coated.
>This time she was tossed into the giant's mouth, to be swished around, choking on the saliva, and strawberry and sugar mixture.
>At least she knew she tasted good, judging by the deafening moan that was bellowing up from the throat she would soon meet.
>The lips parted once more as Akra laughed, unintentionally giving her snack one last look at the village below, continuing on as if she weren't being eaten alive before them.
>The world went dark again, and then she was tossed back, to meet the stranger again, along with several others.
...

(cont.)

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>>7362401

>Now the milk maid knew what her mother had gone through, what her final moments were like.
>For years her father told her that her mother's death was honorable; to be selected by the queen for nourishment was the greatest gift one could receive.
>She now know that was a lie, as she was flung up again against the stomach wall.
>Though dying to a Millennium Worm's stomach was far worse, at least you wouldn't feel betrayed when it happened, she thought.
>Meanwhile, Akra was gaining on the village fast, and once she was confident about the distance, she flung her chained ax far away.
>The weapon crashed near the dragon, dangerously close, and dug itself deep into the ground.
>Quickly approaching was its wielder, who had just leaped into the air, and was ready to slam her fists down onto the beast.

(end)

>>7362467
>The dragon cocked a brow.
>Curious, he wasn't aware of ice giants in this area. Not much of a civilization existed here because of the worms.
>He beat his mighty wings and rose into the air to avoid her fists, though not by much.
>"What an odd coincidence, running into an ice giant so far from the frozen wastes."
>He darted around her, picking up speed despite being weighed down with his gluttonous rampage.
>"Were you coming to feed? There are still some humans left. Or... oh, were they yours?"
>He didn't seem to feel that threatened, keeping his distance and putting up defensive magics.

>>7362814
>>7362467
Sorry I guess I slipped into 'roleplay' mode there, I didn't know what else to put. I was thinking that you'd be 'taking over' for writing the dragon's actions in your story bit rather than waiting on me.

I don't have a problem with that, considering only half of the OC was written by me anyway and the character was equally formed by whoever else was writing the greentext along with me.

>>7363453

Quite alright. I can write some of his parts in the next post. For now I have to turn in, but tomorrow I'll start posting more.

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>>7318004
I would like to ask for general criticism on past "stories" I wrote.

The majority are requested Ghoul School ideas I created on the fly during the Halloween /co/ threads, and some I spent a few days working on to be posted on a later date.

I understand they're not of high quality or an actual coherent story like the other works here, but I would still like to improve and make better material. I do these for fun, but that doesn't excuse poor quality.

Any criticism is accepted. I only want to improve. Any of these are fine to be criticised, though the Wendigo is incomplete, I'm sorry to say.

http://pastebin.com/u/Idontwantthis

>>7335152
Do you have a list of changes made when making the final draft?

>>7360795
I posted from at least 3 or now 4 different IPs. Phone you know how it is.

>>7365159
A list? No. But I think I can remember what they were.

>Skya's internal thoughts more fleshed out, resulting in her seemingly enjoy the spanking more than in the rough draft.
>Trainer now tries to stop the punishment twice, before starting again (the second reason that he asked for the money but she didn't have it).
>Skyla tries to regain some control of the situation by removing her clothes in a slightly sexier way, in hopes of getting him as aroused as possible, so he would take less time to cum.
>Skyla thinks in more detail about what other trainers had done to her in the past as punishment.
>More references to Skyla's body.
>Skyla cries when it's first discovered she doesn't have the badge or money, but she is now also aware that her tears might work in her favor.
>Revelation that Skyla, in the past, delighted in how people would react to seeing her so with so little modesty.
>Further clarification that this is the first time she's felt aroused by spanking and humiliation, though she's still 95% upset it was happening at all.

So those were the specific changes I can remember. Most of it was just giving Skyla some more to do than just react.

>>7366069
Was referring to list of changes you would make while you convert the greentext to narration (like a note/reminder) with the other works.

>>7366118
Oh, yes, I have the specific notes the ORs gave me for their respective stories. A detail change here, an added scene there. Anything else usually I decide on the fly, then go back once over to see if it works.

This time around, I'm going to do my damnedest to keep the the tone of each story the same between the request, the greentext, and the narrative. Preserving what the OR envisioned is the most important.

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The full narrative of the Cia/Minish Cap Link story I made on another thread is now finished.

As you might expect, it contains giantess content, including soft vore. If that isn't your speed, probably best not to read.

I might try to work on another greentext, that I made here, to flesh out. Probably either the Misdreavus or Phosphora stories, just because they're already so close to being narratives that it's rather simple to edit them there.

>>7366593
Misdreavus guy here. Sounds good to me! I'll be keeping an eye out for you.
In case you need a refresher of what to add https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7168074/#7317086

>>7364122
I'll give a few of these a read when I get back home.

>>7364122
In general I am not too fond of how jumpy scenarios transition within the greentexts. It would make sense if they were all pasted on their own merit, but joined together under one pastebin makes keeping track of them difficult without labeling as such (though some do work a lot better than others, especially with sibella's case).

Phantasma's interactions, though, do have some great potential. A ghost girl with spunk that seems to be affected by the realization of how ghosts are made, but was able to put it aside, can lead way for a good dramatic impact, especially if she ends up bottling her emotions until she can't take it anymore.

Also just me, but it seems like the Winnie/Sibelle one, the anon is...just there for the most part just to act as the love interest. Perhaps more can be done to get them involved with the story.

In context, I read the Winnie, Sibelle, and Phantasma pieces.

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>>7362814

>She landed on the ground with a mighty crash, kicking up enough dirt to cloud her kneeling form.
>From inside the cloud the ax shot out again, but once more it missed the dragon's form by mere inches.
>He was smarter than she had anticipated.
>Dragons were frustrating beings to hunt because of the wild variations between them.
>Some were as dumb as beasts, while others were as wise as ancient sorcerers.
>Judging by the curiosity in its eyes, that thirst for knowledge, she figured she had stumbled upon the latter.
>The ax yanked back aggressively, the short hilt being caught without a second though.
>"You have defiled my lands, beast!" she bellowed out, puffing out her chest and holding her arms out to make herself seem more intimidating.
>"You devoured my people and food supply!"
>The dragon considered her words for a moment. He also had assumed this ice giant would be dull witted, as most giants were; despite her aggressive and brash attack, she did exude an aura of intelligence.
>While it was true he did have a belly filled with human lives, he did not recall eating any of their supplies of fish, or any farmed goods they had in their homes.
>"I've never known a giant to have human subjects, and while I did help myself to them, I did not eat any of your food supply," he countered, his mighty wings keeping him aloft and out of her reach.
>"Those subjects were my food supply!" she elaborated.
>The king was surprised at himself for not realizing it sooner; perhaps all those humans squirming inside him had made him sluggish and dull for the moment.
>Of course the humans were her meal. Ice giants enjoyed the taste of humans a lot. Many found it to be a delicacy, since the tops of blizzard-bombarded mountains are a welcoming place to humans, so the giants that lived there so rarely had a chance to eat one.
>"Oh I understand now," he started with a chuckle. Before he could finish his apology, he was cut off.

(cont.)

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>>7368220

>Akra leaped a short distance into the air before she swung her ax, the chain fully extended, in a horizontal arc toward the dragon.
>Seeing how he had just been dodging left and right before, she hoped he would get caught up in that pattern and fall prey to a move where that didn't work out.
>The chain swung behind the dragon's neck, the blade nearly cutting either of his wings. Perhaps it was his care taken into avoiding that, that allowed him to be caught by her snare.
>The ax came back around, and she gripped the hilt as it returned. With the long metal chain in both her hands, she let herself fall back to the ground, using her weight to yank the dragon down with her.
>His wriggling belly hit the earth hard, disrupting the contents inside. If he weren't so full, it might have hurt more.
>While he had been caught off guard, and had to admit the woman was strong, dragons were not known for being weak, and intelligent ones, like himself, could be quite adept at magic.
>A simple enough spell was all it took to blast her back and off her feet, allowing for himself to stand upright and stomp angrily over to her.
>"As I was going to say, this was just a misunderstanding. I did not know these humans were under the watch and care of someone who was keeping them for food," he apologized while rubbing his neck, some of the scales ripped off by the chain, but not enough to leave a lasting mark.
>Akra was distrusting of anything she couldn't eat, but decided it was best not to challenge the dragon further, and accept his claw helping her up.
>The dragon king introduced himself, and the ice giant queen did the same.
>He explained where he came from, and why he found himself on her shores. She admitted she probably would have done the same, were the roles reversed.
>And so started a friendship between the two rulers, and Akra would soon be invited to sit among the other monster rulers who kept their humans safe in exchange for snacks.

(cont.)

>>7368279
Didn't want the thread to feel like it was being bogged down with giantess pictures, so I switched to just posting art of monster girls I may add to my story later. I know I want to add arachne and lamia to the forest that borders her kingdom.

I'll leave the next part to you, >>7362814, which will most likely be them back in the present laughing about the story they just remembered together, while feasting on humans from either of their kingdom (the one visiting brought a sack of humans to gift the other, and the host had some ready for the guest).

>>7367984
Thank you kindly.

The jumpy scenarios are because they're mostly one-off stories with no connection to the other. Someone requests an idea, I make a single post for it. Usually anyway.

I thought about putting them in their own respective pastes, but it'd be a lot of individual pastes for only 2000 characters of material. I understand your note though and I'll consider organizing them more thoroughly.

The story about her realizing she's dead is another request, and I didn't intend on continuing it. In hindsight, I should include the post requesting the greentext in the paste for further clarification. That's why I called them "stories", because they're just short, non-connected gobbledygook for random anons on /co/.

And yes, that is his purpose. I intended to keep the details vague and avoid specific characteristics, mainly for the waifu-fags of the Spooktober thread.

Although, if it's that noticeable, I need to find a better way to write him without feeling like a placeholder character for a single purpose. I don't want to add in too much detail and make it unlikeable or an assumed self-insert. Though, the greentexts being what they are, I suppose he is "self-insert"y, just in a different definition so that others could insert themselves into the character.

Anyway, thank you kindly for the information. I'll look into organizing the pastes more effectively and possibly retrieving the request-posts from desuarchive to better explain what they are.

If there's anything else you can tell me, it'd be much appreciated. Thank you again.

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>>7357781


YOU DONT KNOW ME

BUT IM WRITEFRIEND

IM BACK FROM THE DEAD ONCE AGAIN

So I'll continue soon.

>>7369666

SHIT I GOT SATAN TRIPS

SOMEBODY HAS TO BE MY SLAVE

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>>7369666
SO I SAY LET IT GROOOOOOOOOW
Welcome back.

>>7366593
Having the story on those sites wasn't going well, so I'm going to set up a GiantessWorld account and just post any related content there, though I don't expect there to be too much.

and i'm lying on the cold hard ground
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>7362814
>The dragon chuckled at the pleasant memory. It had been a long time since meeting his new... friend.
>It was odd, being around someone he couldn't eat, but cautious respect had blossomed into a friendship.
>Not the least helped along by their shared eating habits.
>"Here, my dear, a present fit for a queen." He bowed jokingly before handing over a squirming bag.
>"From an island chain off my main coast, they are a deliciously exotic breed, I hope you like them.
>The dragon had never been overly forward towards her, but his words often had a tone of flirtation to them, or perhaps that was simply how he ingratiated himself to people he couldn't eat.
>The dragon sat down before her throne, giving her a little smile.
>Behind him his tail started to curl around behind an unsuspecting servant boy.
>A quick flick of the tail sent the young man tumbling through the air before he vanished in a snap of jaws.
>"You know." The dragon said around his struggling mouthful.
>"We really should work out a trade deal for our humans. Your subjects are a delightful treat."
>A little 'Ulp' and another fatal bulge slid down his long, sinuous throat to vanish in his belly, a hot, moist, dark graveyard where countless thousands had met their ends in the acidic pits to fuel the dragon's magnificent body.

I need your help, Writefag guild or /trash/

I'm in the process of writing a story for the new /PoFg/ and may or may not have written myself into a corner. I would apprecate it if you would mind tossing ideas of where I should take this or if I should retcon the thing and start over
http://pastebin.com/edit/qNY9fC9J

>>7373669
not sure what the context is, but it seems like a premise was made from the info given so far: Girl is (probably) heartbroken and the 'adopted' human pet decides to comfort her, though her idea of comfort is probably something he wasn't expecting.
If you want to go for a longer piece I suggest rewriting a bit or indulge a bit more into the impending smut at the start and then dive into the backstory once it's over and how the relationship came to be.

If you want to keep it as a oneshot she could dom him a bit, or interrupt his thoughts with her rambling about this being better than whoever broke her heart.
>>7366593
OR of Phosphora story. Something amusing passed my mind and was wondering if you could add in an 'accidental' anal sex between Pit and Phosphora. As it is his first time, he may or may not know which hole to go into, but she'll probably wont correct him until he's halfway in there (or done, naughty boy).

>>7374578
Context is someone dropped a prompt and inspiration kicked me in the balls, so I quickly tossed something together without any forethought as to how I would get to my desired sequence.
and thanks for the tips, I'm just trying to figure out how to get people emotionally invested before my characters start fucking so it's not just another easily forgotten fapfic. It's been too long since I last made a green with substance beyond 'benis in bagina :DD'

>>7374578
I could definitely add in accidental anal. I doubt Pit is green enough to not know which hole to go for, but I can certainly see him aiming for the right one, but his accuracy is shit and it goes into the other one instead. She reacts surprised at first, but quickly shows her support so he goes along with it.

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Bump in the Night from page 9

>>7375183
>shit accuracy rate
story of my life

>>7374710
>I'm just trying to figure out how to get people emotionally invested before my characters start fucking so it's not just another easily forgotten fapfic. It's been too long since I last made a green with substance beyond 'benis in bagina :DD'
Doubly make sure to put an emphasis on the first encounter and relationship between the two, as well as the events that happened after she came home crying and the human tries comforting her. I think those scenes will be the make/break for investment.

>>7379193

Looks right to me. Though now I have to add to the list by starting up another chapter of the ice giantess.

Okay so what fresh greens to we have so far in here.

>>7327386
>>7333686
>>7346355
fishbully continued

>>7333979
>>7334241
>>7335790
>>7340405
Anonymoo, whatever the hell it is

>>7336454
>>7337739
>>7338065
>>7339156
>>7339690
>>7340070
>>7341472
former wrestler milf

>>7342547
>>7351189
>>7351854
>>7354563
>>7355228
>>7355306
>>7355628
wrasslemilf part2

>>7355935
part3?

.

>>7341577
>>7346738
>>7351781
>>7352809
>>7353954
>>7355521
>>7355541
Dragon king vore

>>7350626
>>7350656
>>7352262
>>7352412
>>7354687
>>7354786
>>7354970
>>7355014
giantess queen vore

>>7358597
>>7358803
>>7358964
>>7362285
>>7362401
>>7362467
>>7362814
>>7368220
>>7368279
>>7371413
icegiantess part2 and crossover with dragon?

>>7379199
Go riight ahead senpai. I'll get to screencapping soon-ish.

Hmm also judging by the pastebin I lumped some parts of your stuff together.

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>Akra was seated on the ground, one leg bent at the knee toward herself, lying on the ground, and the other with its foot firmly planted in the dirt, her bare toes wriggling against the soil.
>An arm rested on the upturned knee, while the other kept her upright so she could freely lean back in a relaxed posture without following.
>It was a somewhat lewd posture, her legs spread so wide, only her blue and white fur loin cloth protecting her dignity. It was made all the more lewd by the two dozen young, naked, citizens lined up before her.
>The 20 or so citizens gathered that day had turned of legal breeding age around one year prior.
>Today was their annual review, to ensure that they had been producing at least one child every year, and to continue doing so for at least five years. Any more, and the family was granted a bonus per child.
>While Akra had helped to cultivate a culture that honored and praised constant sex, with several partners if desired, it also helped she had laws written up that kept the breeding constant.
>Guards posted along the line, while a thin man in a heavy robe and tiny glasses approached each, one by one, to get their report of how many children they had produced.
>Most came as couples, though some had arrived alone.
>As expected, her fruitful kingdom was growing. Akra listened to her "accountant" do the inventory, yelling up to her the status of each citizen's fertility.
>While she listened, she reached down to grab an idly wandering cow.
>The beast pinched between her fingers was deposited easily, and prompted moved to her strong teeth for evisceration and then mastication.
>She would never chew up one of her people, that was too cruel. Each human was granted the right to enter her stomach alive, to see the glory of her body from the inside.
>However an animal was just a mindless beast, and she had no problem chewing them up for their meat and crunchy bones.
>Plus they could really hurt her stomach lining if swallowed.

(cont.)

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>>7379300

>Her humans were lucky. Where she came from, the other giants chewed their humans up just as they would with any beast they came across.
>Said humans watched as a spray of blood exploded from her mouth, coating her lips red and giving her cleavage blood-colored freckles; they contrasted heavily against her blue skin.
>Akra's daydreaming was broken when the man taking inventory yelled up that they had one who had failed to produce a child.
>Her eyes snapped down to the young man standing before her servant.
>Strong fingers pinched up his nude body and lifted him up to her mouth, still full of gore.
>Of course, he pleaded for his life, telling her that he could do better, he just needed another month, to find a woman who wasn't already carrying a child.
>His words went unheard and he was tossed into her bloody mouth, to be swallowed down with the rest of the chewed up cow.
>The inventory continued, with a few more citizens finding themselves lifted up to the giantess's mouth.
>She had licked them clean of the blood, but a trickle still existed from the corner of her lips, reminding them of the fatality of their situation.
>Akra still had one human in her mouth when the very next infertile youth was called out.
>She was a gorgeous woman, full breasted, with long blonde hair and hips made to bare many children. Akra thought it a shame she had produced nothing, but the law was the law.
>The blonde sat in her hand, waiting her turn down her throat, watching her queen play with the screaming male.
>From this close, she could hear him panicking and crying.
>However, this one was clever, and brave, and saw fit to try to prolong her life.
>"Please, my queen!" she called out, getting on her knees with her arms outstretched to the woman sucking on a man.
>Akra paused for a moment, her meal catching his breath in the dark and wet cave, while she listened to the human.
>She was certain she could not convince her not to eat her, but a boring day gave her a chance.

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>>7379354

>"It is not my fault that I have been unable to conceive!" she yelled up at the queen.
>Akra sighed, already bored again. She had heard this excuse many times before. No matter the reason, the result was the same, and the law was the same.
>The man had managed to push himself past the blue lips before Akra grew bored and tossed him back down her throat; mouth wide open so the blonde woman could see what fate await her.
>"Truly it isn't!" she continued to explain while being hoisted up to the yawning maw.
>The ice giantess tossed the woman up into the air, and aimed her mouth below her to be caught.
>Just as the citizen landed on her salivating tongue, she heard the woman yell, "I was cursed!" before the mouth shut.
>Now this was a new one, Akra thought. She had heard all kinds of excuses, but never a curse.
>The blonde found herself spat back into the blue palm, coughing up spit as her queen commanded her to explain.
>"I was harvesting berries, near the edge of the Colossal Forest, when a most wondrous sound began to lure me into the forest," she explained.
>"It wasn't long before I came upon the woman who was singing, if I could call her a woman at all. She had the body of a woman, elegant and beautiful, but it sat atop the body of a hideous black spider, shiny and terrifying."
>"She did not seem aware she had attracted attention with her singing, and all too easily left me alone with her nest of eggs."
>"I know it may be hard to believe, but they smelled wonderful, your majesty," she said, salivating at the memory. "It was her eggs, the size of watermelons, and covered in a purple slime; fresh. I knew it was wrong, but I was quite hungry, and entranced by magic, of that I was certain." She hadn't been, but she may as well have.
>"I grabbed one and ran away. I studied it for some time before I gave it a lick, and it tasted so divine that I couldn't help but lick it clean."

(cont.)

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>>7379394

>Akra could at least sympathize by being overwhelmed by taste.
>Not long ago she had been gifted a bag of islanders, far from her lands.
>They smelled divine, and tasted even better.
>It took all her discipline not to eat more than just two.
>The rest were relocated to the fishing village the dragon had turned into a ghost town.
>The ice giant was not a natural farmer, but the humans had taught her that if you were gifted a bag of seeds, it was better to plant them, then to eat them all.
>"I gel only made me hungrier, and I had to see if the egg tasted the same," she continued on with her story. "It didn't...It was even better!"
>"I had to get more to share with my family. So day after day I went to steal away an egg. I did not feel bad, the spider woman had hundreds, what was one or two a day?" The blonde looked down, her story about to turn dire as she began to detail her fatal mistake.
>"But I was greedy, your majesty. I was taking more every day, and soon the beast caught me. She was understandably furious, and said she was going to devour me then and there."
>"However, before she could unhinge her jaw, or tear off one of my limbs, I freed myself. My father was a guard, and had taught me how to defend myself. I do not think the spider was expecting me to be able to, so she was caught off guard, and I managed to get away."
>"Because of your great splendor and the fear you exhibit toward your enemies, she was too afraid to leave the forest edge, as I was now too afraid to enter it."
>"As I was running, though, I heard her yell out the curse. One that would punish me for stealing her young, by cursing me to never have young of my own, ever."
>Akra pondered the story for a moment. It was an interesting one. Not many of her subjects had stories to tell from the great forest that bordered them. It was far too dangerous to go in there.
>And as a ruler, she had grown a bit bored, with little adventure and battles in her life.

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>Whether or not the human was lying, Akra decided it would be best to investigate this mysterious creature. Hopefully she was telling the truth, and the giantess could sample some of the eggs for herself.
>If she was lying, then Akra would not only use her to lead her into the forest, but also back out and to her home, where she would watch her entire family be devoured.
>"Raiz," she called down to the robed man, "have you finished the evaluation? Are there any more infertile and sterile humans?"
>"None after the one you hold there, your majesty," he explained with a bow. "But I am not yet finished, there are still several more to account for."
>"Doesn't matter, I'll take them anyway. I get hungry when I travel."
>Before they could scatter away, the last five or so humans were scooped up into her hand.
>The blonde was seated on Akra's shoulder, so she could clearly hear her directions, and her provisions were dumped into her seductively large cleavage, which was to be picked from later.

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