Undyne thread - No Goatposting Allowed edition
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*IMPORTANT*
If you have many or rare Undyne images, please consider sharing your collection too!
Resources:
Search Tips, Information, and Archives -> http://pastebin.com/AVdzDCdU
Comfy fish stories -> http://pastebin.com/Xf3GR6TA
1st for armordynes!
>>7294550
>>7294566
Gallery is still up on my end. Though I suppose we should archive the images... just in case...
These scans took some time to get.
>>7294589
Also, if someone could get the full size images and put them in a zip file or something, that would be great.
at least post the full comic
>>7294642
Wrong edition for that.
>>7294537
No goats at all?
>>7294642
Here you go >>7294731
>>7294682
I'll beep you through the line. This one is clean.
>>7294589
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/1019576/249142d799/
Tossing link in this thread too cause it came so late in the last one.
Just in case anyone missed it.
The undyne bit starts halfway through.
Requesting undyne holding up a sableye, saying it's the most adorable and cool thing she's ever seen, please.
Bonus points for her hugging it to her chest and the imp giving the viewer a smug grin from between the fish tits.
>>7296395
Speaking of Pokemon, what roster would Undyne have in her team? I suspect she would prioritize fight/water, so a Poliwrath would make the cut, though I can see her training with a Lucario or Blaziken also because Undyne would respect their raw physical power over diddling with things such as "themes"
>>7298451
A roster without Buzzwole is not an Undyne roster.
>>7298451
>undyne x blaziken
2fit5me
Would be interesting to see undyen dressed as the captain.
>hard mode
and genderless child as tintin
>brutal mode
temmie as dog
>european extreme
and alphys as the doctor or what's his face in the green coat
>>7299488
Heh, that's a crossover I've never thought of.
>>7299488
>Sans and paps as the suited tools
>tori as whoeverthefuckthatladyis
>>7299488
Tintin to the moon GOAT story.
>>7295136
Nice! I would've missed it.
That's probably the most canon looking Undyne I've seen in porn. I love the style but magical dicks in lesbian sex always feel so forced in my opinion. I'm pretty sure they don't need it and it doesn't make it any hotter for me as the viewer either.
What happened at the end of the last thread? Did everyone just receive their own Undyne or why is everyone dead?
>>7300905
Great style, got sauce on artist?
>undyne heard anon call for help in the next room
>she walked in and found him standing in the middle of the room holding the ceiling lamp
>what are you doing?
>i was trying to fix the lamp but now it's going to fall down, can you please hold it for a moment?
>undyne gave him a suspicious look
>please babe, i just need to go get my tools
>hookay, but no bullshit
>could never dream of it, he said with an innocent smile
>she reached up and grabbed the lamp
>anon let go and stepped aside
>well, go get your tools
>nah, i'm good
>then he walked behind her and put a hand under her shirt
>HEY
>easy now, don't let go of the lamp
>while fondling her breast he started undoing her pants with the other hand
>THIS IS BORDERLINE RAPE
>no it's okay shut up, he replied, trying not to laugh
>he got a hand into her pants and undyne gasped in her weird position
>anon started to lower her panties and in the moment she let go of the lamp to counter him
>he look horrified up at the lamp and undyne reached back up to cover her head
>but the lamp just hanged there like it was supposed to
>YOU, she snarled with poison in her voice
>ME, he retorted with a big grin
Hi all, let me know if you want a story written and I'll get to it when I have time.
Remember when I said I'd do another one this weekend? I lied.
Maybe this'll make up for the sub par blowjob request image from yesterday.
>>7301294
Sadly no. I saved it from /utg/ like a year ago.
Seems a little dead here today.
Hey! I would like a funny story about anon trying to date the canon boulder suplexing crazy Undyne who's just completely oblivious to his advances. Not trying to criticize your earlier stuff. I'd just find it amusing.
>>7302433
>bending a dick like that
please no
But the mid pic is spot on, nice job.
>>7303122
The dick is supposed to be soft already in the last image. It wouldn't even bend like that otherwise. It's after the fireworks.
>>7303180
Soft dicks have no place in porn besides the start.
>>7303252
A matter of opinion. I wanted it to be more sensual.
Isn't that exactly where you don't want to have soft dicks? Wouldn't the end make much more sense? You know, after the act when he's not completely limp yet but kind of going soft?
Hmm I may have exaggerated the angle of the dick.
I could technically switch the position of the first and last panel and clean up the goo.
>>7302433
UNF
Now that's what I'm talking about.
>>7302849
>>7302861
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/FVSE4nky
You said a sad story, right? Not a funny one, right?
Either way, this isn't exactly what you asked for but I think this was the stronger direction to take, there's a better narrative this way.
>>7303638
OH GOD, MY HEART
>>7301294
Here you go
http://geckostuffs.tumblr.com/post/139065170142
Also by the same artist
>>7303931
>>7303638
jesus christ dude
>>7303638
I feel like I could have read that in a book somewhere, that was really good.
>>7303638
I was not ready for those feels.
>>7304052
>>7303998
>>7303950
>>7303874
Hey, glad you guys liked it. I figured people would think it was too maudlin or whatever.
>>7304482
caaayuuuute
Underwater woman
Underwater lady
No one on the shore
Will ever know
Whats in her heart
I'm really late this time, sorry.
>>7305453
>>7304146
Jesus, I kind of want to request a sequel to that where she accepts just so I can feel better about myself.
But it's really good as it stands, so I'll leave it at that. Instead, can I request a game of truth or dare with Undyne? I feel like we've been lacking in lewd lately.
>>7305665
>truth or dare
This has potential. 15 minutes in heaven with anon? Kissing Toriel? Undyne getting jealous when anon kisses X?
A lot of lewd potential here.
>>7306025
>Kissing Toriel
>>7306025
TOO LATE IT'S ABOUT BRILL
although I guess I could start over if you asked me really, really nicely
>>7306096
OR here. Brill is qt. You do you, writeanon.
>>7305925
WAIST
HIGH
PANTS
>>7306096
RRREEEEEEEEEEEEE
(actually, this is fine)
Though it has given me an idea for a story with Brill and Anon with it, though I can't think of a premise atm.
>>7305665
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/cWW3P3ma
Warning: find some spare pants beforehand
>>7306299
You rang?
>>7306460
Ayy I don't know how I feel about that but I can't see myself ever getting them together, go for it.
>>7306460
> I can't see myself ever getting them together
That's the problem. It's like the Mettaton and Anon story. I wanted to see them together but in reality I wouldn't be able to make it work.
Mostly just musing over a thought, it's most likely an idea to be shelved.
>>7306587
>and Brill lets out a breath, shaking lightly at the end
it's been a while since I felt that
>>7306587
I have an idea for a story. Undyne hugs a femanon. Very lewd.
>>7306709
Me too, living vicariously through fictional people is my only recourse.
>>7306830
Wow dude I don't write just literal smut, come on now. I've got standards.
>>7306587
Fuck, that was so hot and cute. Loved it!
>>7306925
>>7306830
>Undyne holding hands with Brill
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH
>>7306830
>COMING FOR THE BOOTY.gif
>>7307055
I saved that one as "prowling for the booty.png"
>>7306925
pls I just want to feel the fish's love
Long time no see!
Time has passed and I'm still gay.
>>7307173
>>7307050
>>7306830
Because you asked so nicely: http://pastebin.com/QE6B4VMX
>>7307382
>"My hand's lonely,"
I started tapping my feet like crazy there
>>7307382
I got an idea for lewdish story: Undyne daring the reader to skinny dipping before joining them.
>>7307537
Unfortunately I'm going to have to bounce soon, you'll probably have better luck asking me tomorrow.
I think I just died from cute overload.
>>7307594
meant for >>7307382
>>7307382
It is known that Undynes wear armor to protect themselves from lewd humans holding their hands.
so uh
what are the odds the writefag will ever actually do any seriously fetishy shit
like vore
>>7308774
Not very likely. I'm pretty vanilla though, so that's ok with me.
>>7308774
She's done feet and armpits, I think, but they were very, very understated.
>>7308774
>>7308870
They also did the gill stuff
>>7309719
I still don't get why that would feel good
>>7308870
You think he's actually a girl?
>>7309837
Shush! Don't kill the lewd.
(I suppose you could argue that it's sensitive, though not necessarily erogenous.)
>>7309980
...yeah? Why wouldn't she be?
>>7310020
There aren't any girls on the internet.
>>7310043
That really isn't what that means. Besides, if she's a guy, that would just make the writing more impressive because the female perspective she writes is really good.
>>7310043
Ebin reference my fellow Redditor
>>7310069
Oh yeah? What's it mean then, fag?
>>7310113
'Don't give people on the internet special attention just because they say they're women'
>>7310131
Isn't that exactly what people are doing?
>>7310157
no
>>7310157
No, people are giving her attention because of the stories. How often does she bring up that she's a girl? She's admitted to it a few times when people asked, that's all. IIRC she asked people not to bring it up because it wasn't relevant to the thread.
>>7310131
wish I had that without the watermark
Oh brother, not this conversation.
>>7310389
>Oh brother, not this conversation.
It's a living.
>>7310722
For some reason I thought that was a blunt first.
>>7310817
Heh, it's a good thing the artist labeled it.
Good night.
>>7313230
Good night m8!
>>7313230
Stupid gay fish
Boop.
>>7303638
>Ask for a funny story
>Get stabbed in the heart
T-thanks...
For real though. Paragraph 29 actually made me laugh out loud. I feel like this story, while not what I requested, is actually one of your better written ones. I often struggle with the same thing when I draw a request and I get an idea of my own while doing it. I usually at least try to stay loyal to the original request though.
>>7307382
Adorable.
Guess I'm the only one here again.
>>7316336
Not really, i'm working so i can't bump as often as i want...
Morning all, I have some things to do so I won't be able to get to it right away, but if anyone wants a story written let me know.
>>7315829
I agree, I went for a more character-driven approach there, which is why most of it is dialogue. I thought it turned out well. Sorry for not going with your original request, but I think the end result was a better story than it would have been otherwise.
>>7316585
I'd like to request skinny dipping with Undyne on behalf of that anon that asked yesterday
>>7316585
It's alright. While it would've been amusing, I feel like it achieved something it might not have if it was just my request.
>>7317022
I can definitely do that, I'll be able to start in about an hour, so expect the story in around two hours.
>>7317136
I might get a little flak for this (or I would if anyone was here) but I've always viewed these requests as more jumping-off points than anything else. If I end up writing something that matches with the request (which I do most of the time), then that's cool, but if I end up exploring something different but that I'm more interested in, that's cool too. My focus is very much on the story rather than fulfilling the request to the letter and I think the format of this thread makes that sort of indulgence acceptable.
what if undyne ate jello
>>7317022
>>7317601
Thanks. Cant wait
>>7318734
UNDYNE EATING JELLO STORY WHEN
>>7318810
>>7317022
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/0f7dMgNF
I tried not to just copy Jingo and while I think I succeeded the result is perhaps less inspired than I would have liked. Let me know what you think.
>>7318884
oh damn
We're a bit slow today, though I imagine many of us are/were watching the inauguration.
In the spirit of things, where would the monsters go when they leave the Underground? Canada? They have some room there. And what would Undyne do in the human world (aside from being lewd with Brill and Anon)? People seem to have the idea they she would do normal. mundane jobs despite the fact that being Captain of the Royal Guard sounds like a sweet deal, not to mention her relationship with Asgore.
>>7318884
The was beautifully written. I really am at a loss for words.
>>7321742
Hey, come on, it wasn't that good. I'm glad you liked it anyway.
>>7321212
I've been writing her as doing normal things because it makes her more relatable. I think realistically she'd probably just keep the same job as she had.
RIP /aco/ Undyne thread, 2016 - 2017
>>7322496
taken too soon
UNDYNE EATS JELLO YUM YUM
>>7322217
Hi writeanon! If you're still up, can I request Undyne going on 4chan and finding our Undyne threads? I feel like that would have a high potential for keks.
If that's too meta, maybe Undyne trying to hold in her rage at the DMV.
>>7323694
They actually already wrote one about her being shown these threads
http://pastebin.com/tfKfN3YF
>>7323779
Pfft. How have I not seen that?
In that case, maybe just the DMV one. I can't think of any good lewd topics at the moment.
>>7323916
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/xNTrm52T
Another one from Undyne's POV cause I haven't done that in a while. Really refreshing to write. Let me know what you think.
And I actually didn't include that other one when I made my pastebin account, I figured people wouldn't really care about it cause it was so short.
>Undyne thread
Hello? Is this Heaven?
>>7325025
wait until you see how many stories there are, friend
>>7325025
>>7325082
The image collections are pretty good, too.
(The first mega link is dead by the way, someone should remove that.)
>>7325082
Like, the Undyne x Reader fics? I'm reading them. Undyne-related stuff is my drug and those fics are next level shit.
My Undyne folder has ~250 pics not counting lewds. I. Need. MOAR.
>>7325182
Yeah, they're pretty much what kept this thread alive. The author's really good and they lurk the thread pretty consistently too.
>>7325350
>>7325364
Yoooo, this looks good.
>>7325265
They are so damn good, I swear to god... I could read them in a day or two, but shit, I don't want to run out of this sweet stuff.
So... is this place active or...?
Post more porn you faggots
>>7325432
>So... is this place active or...?
Well, I dump fresh art whenever I find it/have the time, and writeanon is here almost every day.
>>7325503
>Thread almost died
That's not gonna happen again. Not on my watch.
>>7325508
But anon, I'm only into...
handholding and consensual sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation...
>>7325508
>>7325540
The thread is active "enough", it sure doesn't move quickly but I like this speed. It's comfy enough, especially when we get to talking about something.
>>7325508
>>7325541
Do you wanna live forever or not? Show me a fish getting speared in her holes or else your thread's going to die.
>>7325599
They should all be readable. I don't recall any ones that I disliked at least.
>>7325625
Oh no! Spooky!
>>7325625
>>7325646
>>7325540
I'm gonna have a comfy time in here, I can feel it
>>7325625
I refuse!
>>7325687
Also, if you want to do more image collecting, the pastebin has links to all of the archived previous threads.
>>7325625
fish on fish?
>>7325776
Fish on fish on fish.
>>7325745
Perfect! Will do, many thanks!
>>7325792
MOST LEWD
>>7324808
I'm a little late I guess but I really really love when you write in Undyne's perspective, you really give her a lot of character and no matter what /utg/ might say I really like how you're developing her.
>>7326937
>>7326978
I'm glad you like it, it's really kind of strange because I've never been into journaling but that's what I imagine it must feel like, so much so that that's what I've made the excuse for those stories into, it's just entries from Undyne's diary. I think it's a difficult balance to strike between letting her be too weak and needy and letting those moments of strength show through, but I think that considering it's a diary having that sort of internal worry is perfectly appropriate.
To quote Chekhov, "When a person expends the least amount of motion on one action, that is grace." I think that really exemplifies Undyne in a way, because my whole sense of her is that she's trying to give off the appearance of being graceful, in that sense, but on the inside she's working very, very hard to maintain it.
>>7302433
Can you post the other pics you did? Please?
>>7328549
Not that anon, but they posted this earlier
http://imgur.com/a/ZCPzi
>>7328572
There was some older blowjob ones?
>>7328600
Nevermind found it.
>>7328631
>that middle image
kek
>>7308870
can you link the feet and armpit fics?
Footjob
http://pastebin.com/nj6A2HjG
I think this is the armpit one (it's cute rather than lewd)
http://pastebin.com/y0hikiv0
From petra
sleepy
goodnight
>>7330445
good night, fisherman!
>>7328572
That was just the recent stuff I've done with Undyne. I feel like everyone who cares has already seen this too http://imgur.com/a/Pkb7U.
It includes most of the same lewds.
If you want, you can go look at my older stuff too. If nothing else it'll probably make you laugh. I wasn't very good in the beginning.
http://imgur.com/a/fFJmF part 1
http://imgur.com/a/dOwVo part 2
http://imgur.com/a/5SEOw part 3
http://imgur.com/a/T1wrS part 4
I should probably make like an imgur account so I don't have to make so many of these collections.
>>7328631
>>7328669
It's a parody of the Hellmouth comic by Morbi. It's a cute comic. I recommend it. It was just a funny idea that came to me when /utg/ was talking about Undyne giving head and how dangerous her mouth would be.
Request from /utg/.
Hi all, just letting you all know that something's come up and I won't be able to be around until this evening. I will have time to write then, though, so if you want a story, reply to this post and I'll get around to it when I have time.
>>7334191
Who's this semen demon?
>>7334282
almost undyne but not quite
>>7331665
>Here we enjoy higher level stuff. Like imagining life with Undyne.
You sir, have some fine taste
>>7333483
Splendid work there!
>people can actually draw this
>I can't draw a goddamn stick figure
Thank god there's people like you
>>7334225
Don't worry, do whatever you have to, we'll wait
>>7334282
Chloe from Kuroinu, apparently
>>7334225
Here's an idea for a story, Alphys fucking dies
>>7333483
Hmm I purposefully put her tuft of hair more in front of her face to convey a sort of ruggedness and the fact that she wears a helmet most of the time but now that I look at it, it is kind of silly. Is this any better?
>>7335484
>people can actually draw this
>I can't draw a goddamn stick figure
First of all, I saw your Undyne Toriel in the last thread so you're proven false. Second of all did you check the part 1 of the imgur I linked earlier? I could barely draw anything either.
>>7336469
She has written one where Alphys and Undyne have a pretty huge falling out
>>7336527
>Undyne Toriel
Oh god, I forgot about that lol. I mean, I'm shit at artistic stuff, so I make shit like that to make fun of myself a bit and maybe make people laugh a bit.
You improved quickly though, you probably enjoy doing what you do and you're damn good now. I wouldn't have the patience to practice that much, you're more... DETERMINED than me
>>7336527
I love your Undynes! You are definitely serving as an inspiration for me to get back into drawing, though I might want to wade out this cold first... it makes everything I do a bit more miserable.
>>7336692
Haha, I used to draw for that purpose originally too. That's why I posted all those shitty MSpaint things in /utg/ originally. Back then the threads moved so fast that it didn't really matter that much either.
>I wouldn't have the patience to practice that much
Ha... those are only the finished drawings I've done. There exist more in the form of failures and some non undertale related ones although the Kadabra I did to practice coloring managed to get lost into one of the collections too.
>>7336942
I'm flattered although that particular drawing you posted didn't go so well. It's one of the last things I did with a mouse.
Go for it anon. I actually used a lot of the time I was sick this year to draw stuff but that's just me. I can't say it doesn't affect the end result. I feel like it can't be that hard to surpass me since I'm so lazy and can't be bothered to learn anything drawing related but still somehow got here in a few months with a mouse and a free program.
>>7337274
It's still a cute drawing. And thanks for the pep-talk! :3
>>7337274
We are very similar then. Maybe you're me from the future (or from an AU), how's my life going, future me?
You've spent a lot of time practicing, right? You sound like you've been in the fandom since the very beginning. Tell me more stuff about you (this is /trash/, small talk ain't forbidden, right?)
Also, I wonder how those failures look like
>>7337292
You're welcome.
>>7337896
Here's an old example. It makes me want to scream when I look at it but it is kind of funny at the same time which is why I've kept it. They're not all Undyne related though. I don't actually practice THAT much. Since digital drawing is so easy, most of the time I'll just hit my head into a wall until it looks like something. Keep undoing and redrawing every line that doesn't look decent until it's done. In a way, every single image I've done is practice.
While I'd love to talk about me, me, me all day, this is the Undyne general and while not forbidden in /trash/ I'd prefer to not derail the thread too much. I'm just an anon that sometimes draws stuff. My anniversary for being in this fandom is about to come up in a couple weeks so I wasn't there in the very beginning.
>>7338318
If you feel like drawing, maybe something from one of the writefag's stories?
>>7338368
Perhaps tomorrow. It's late here and I'm going to go to bed.
>>7338318
>funny
It's ADORABLEEE OMGEEEE
You've put quite a bit of time into your art, it shows.
Well, okay, mostly Undyne talk then. Again, thanks for your art, fampai
>>7338468
Goodnight!
Evening all. Hope everyone's enjoying their weekend so far.
>>7334225
What do you think it would be like to get into a prank war with Undyne?
>>7339028
>Undyne drops a boulder on you
>"Aha, a boulder! Get it, anon? Anon?"
>>7336469
I mean, I could if you really wanted me to, but I don't really see the point.
>>7339028
I think probably a little like these two stories I've done:
http://pastebin.com/GLX6FpaX
http://pastebin.com/WD8MWvt0
in that order.
>>7336469
That would be a sad story.
>>7340717
An aborted genocide runs brings more feels to me than a full run.
>>7340393
Shit, there's too many stories. I've lost track of what you have and haven't written about.
Hmm. Maybe a quiet midnight walk with Undyne? I'm in need of some comfy but it can get lewd if you want it to.
>>7341141
tell me about it. I let her kill me about 14 times while crying
>>7340393
>>7341514
http://pastebin.com/xSuPq0bg
This one could also count as Undyne pranking you. A favourite of mine.
Friendly but firm reminder
>>7341514
I like that idea, I'll get started.
>>7342009
I had totally forgotten about that one, that's true too.
>>7342177
Friendly butt, firm reminder
>>7342218
>Friendly butt, firm reminder
>>7342257
THOSE GILLS UNF
>>7342257
>>7342326
>be fugging the fish
>you notice the tell-tale pressure building up inside her from the expression on her face
>you reach over and nibble and lick at her gills
>she clamps down on you. HARD.
"Everytime."
>>7342840
Come to think of it. They're more fins than gills.
>>7341514
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/FPUAA37u
A little on the short side but there are some nice passages in the middle I think, I was aiming for comfy and I think I nailed it. Let me know what you think.
>>7342988
Aw, this was super cute. Nice job as always!
If you're still up, I was thinking we could get a bit lewd. How about Undyne texting you while one or the other is out of town?
>>7343357
>pic
OH FUCK
THERE WE GO
>>7343357
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/i02g1CPU
I think that the writing styles might be too similar but it's whatever. Let me know what you think.
>>7344301
Aw, that was cute.
The bit about the green panties reminding her of anon cracked me up.
>>7344301
Whew. This is fucking top notch. Bonus points for all the grammatical errors and pauses.
You're gotten pretty good at writing from a guy's perspective as well. There were a lot of times in your earlier stories where you can tell you were keeping it vague on purpose. But the way you write the anon is a way that I could see a guy actually talking. I'll give you props for that, because god knows how awkward I would sound trying to write as a girl.
>>7344301
>
oh my god
>>7344722
>>7344684
Huh, I thought it was kind of uninspired honestly, but hey if you guys like it I won't complain.
I think the vagueness was due more to me not really knowing where I wanted to go with things overall, I don't think I've really improved much at male characters, my methods haven't changed anyway. Thanks though.
>>7344684
kek, I didn't even catch that.
>>7345166
Either way, there's still a noticeable difference. Even if you don't think you've improved much, you're still at a pretty good starting point.
That was my last request for tonight, but I'm off all day tomorrow. If you're around I could probably rapid fire some requests to help fill up your novella.
But right now I'm about to pass out. G'nite folks.
>you had been on a date with undyne and was now lying in bed, alone
>the day had mostly been about "cooking" and completely destroying her kitchen
>then some full metal alchemist before calling it a day
>now you were trying to sleep in the guest room but was way too horny to get some rest
>fuck it, you thought and slipped out of bed in the middle of the night
>on three legs you sneaked over to undyne's room
>ever so slow you turned the handle on the door and opened
>the room was dark, only a streak of moonlight running across the bed
>for a moment you stood in the opening and waited, listening for her breathing
>the only things you could hear was your heart and dick pumping
>swallowing you pressed onwards
>finally standing at the bed you found what you were looking for covered in moonlight
>the sexy fishgirl, who apparently sleeps in a cute white pyjama with small spears all over it
>on your shoulder a little shia labeouf with horns was screaming DO IT in your ear
>>7346621
>like putting your hands into a burning fire you reached out to her from the edge of the bed
>undyne was kind of sprawled out and with the blanket just reaching her waist
>she was sleeping
>you started to undo the buttons in her pyjamas
>it was like defusing a bomb but with patience and sweat of your brow you got the job done
>you opened the pyjamas and angels sang
>god, those tits were perfect
>and her six-pack, looking prominent even in this resting state
>you couldn't help it anymore
>with one hand you tried to calm down your manhood but it only got worse
>with the other hand, shaking, you reached back over to undyne
>like trying to touch a flame directly you touched her breast
>fuuck it was soo sooft
>you ran your hand down to her abs
>fuuck they're so hard
>lost in the moment and ecstasy you buckled over and shot a big load
>oh god, you completely covered her face in your semen
>a few seconds passed
>oh fuck, you completely covered undyne with your semen
>>7347282
>that tongue
>those fucking teeth
Decisions, decisions.
Requesting Undyne having a dildo tea party with her stuffed animals.
>>7347522
>DOES THIS LOOK LIKE THE FACE OF MERCY?
From angstrom
>>7347522
Seconding this but with teen undyne smiling so you can see her braces, please.
>>7348729
Calm your tits, Asrielle.
>>7348729
I fucked your mum, princess.
>>7347522
>dildo tea party
Someone please soil these virgin ears and explain this.
>>7349158
It's just something girls do in their early teen years. Sexually experimenting with new things together together with old friends.
>>7349282
O-Oh... that sounds l-lewd.
It's not like the thread is getting sidetracked or anything.
>>7349876
Now das lewd.
What if undyne was a girl?
>>7350335
?
>>7344722
>>7345166
I don't think there's that big of a difference in whether you're writing a girl or a guy. Women might be a bit more emotional but it's not like they act all that different at least in this day and age. If you're going for a stereotypical woman or man then it might be different.
>>7348434
Not bad.
>>7350352
... why is male Undynes face so much cuter?
Looks like the writefag updated the pastebin.
>I've been getting some complaints about how the Undyne I'm writing 'doesn't act like Undyne' and so on, and she doesn't. I've taken a much more literary approach to Undyne because I believe that if you limit yourself to just how she behaves in the game you're basically forcing yourself to write about an autist who's never going to develop or get better. I find it much more interesting to write an Undyne who's a real human being with flaws and worries and anxieties but who copes with and conceals them by being (or pretending to be) tough as nails. I've been trying for an Undyne who develops greatly as both a character and as a person going through these stories from start to finish and I think for the most part I've succeeded, but I don't take any pains to make her act how she does in game except for small hints and suggestions of it, because you need to tone that down to be able to do what I want to do with her.
>If that isn't something you like, I fully understand, but I would ask you to look at these stories through an interpretive lens rather than one focused on whether or not Undyne chucks spears, suplexes boulders, and eats spaghetti, because there is very little of that in here and you're destined to be disappointed if that's what you really want.
not so fast
>>7350928
Cool, now we have something to copy paste whenever /utg/ visits
>>7350928
Someone's observant!
Morning all, I'll be around most of today if anyone wants a story written.
>>7351927
Morning writeanon! Don't know if you saw my post last night, but would you be up to do some rapid fire requests today? I'm off for most of the day myself and don't have much else to do.
>>7352133
I hadn't actually, I'd gone before you posted. Unfortunately I do have a few things to do today so my normal sedate pace would be better.
>>7350928
>>7351651
It's pretty much what they've said a couple times in here already but it's good that it's part of the pastebin now since it's been linked outside of this thread a few times.
>>7352814
what even is this image
>>7352642
Sounds good. Let me know if you ever do get a chance for something like that.
In that case, can I request visiting a waterpark/theme park with Undyne?
>>7351927
I've been trying to think of new story ideas because I like your writing but your previous stories cover up so many topics already that it's ridiculously difficult to think of anything anymore. Everytime I sort of have an idea I look through the pastebin and there's already at least two stories that are either already exactly that or something similar. The variety of stories you've done is so vast that it's hilarious to just look at the pastebin in general. Something like "Undyne gets fired" or "Teaching Undyne to play Stalker", it's mind boggling how you've managed to make stories out of these things. If I didn't know these were all requests I'd say you were completely insane.
There is one topic you might have covered in some other story but it didn't catch my eye in the pastebin. I'm actually surprised there isn't a story dedicated to it already.
Undyne getting married. You can add a honeymoon in there if you like.
>>7353062
http://pastebin.com/Fi6sDJ04 (^:
>>7353088
I haven't covered that, actually, and I'm a little iffy on whether I should as I don't really understand the process very well. I'll still do it, though, but I won't be able to get to it for a while. Who do we want her to get married to?
In the meantime, you might want to read this: http://pastebin.com/sS5aNizj
>>7353132
I requested that one too actually lmao. I meant like, a place with rollercoasters/waterslides and stuff. I was thinking Undyne would be trying to ride all the scariest shit possible and anon is just getting dragged along.
>>7353531
I guess my sort of kneejerk reaction was that it'd be a little too similar to that one, but I can see where you're coming from. I'm going to go with the marriage one, though.
>>7353633
I won't be able to start writing for a while but what I'm leaning toward is not actually revealing who it is and just focusing on Undyne as she gets ready and everything.
>>7353756
>and just focusing on Undyne as she gets ready and everything.
I kinda like this approach. I imagine seeing how Undyne handles the pressure and build-up to her "important day" would be fun to watch.
More so than a ceremony, though it does have some cutesy potential.
>>7353864
>>7353809
>>7353633
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/u2YvcEJi
I think this turned out nicely, there's a lot of nice dynamics going on here. Let me know what you think.
>>7354670
Aww adding in Asgore and Alphys made it pretty adorable.
I have to admit, this feels like the opening to another, longer story. It's cute and I like the way Undyne acts but it is pretty much just them thinking about her jewelry in a funny way. I would've really liked to see what happens next. Now it just kind of ends right as it's getting to the good stuff.
I do like that you kept the one she's getting married to a secret although having Alphys there is a real kick in the teeth for her character in the game. So much so that I found it kind of funny in a cruel way. Doesn't really matter though. It's not like your stories were ever about canon. I liked the story. I'd love a continuation for it.
>>7354878
Yeah that was mostly the idea, although I don't know, I think proceeding would kind of kill the mood maybe but I really hate overly sentimental stuff like that so I'm probably just biased.
>>7355064
>Really hate overly sentimental stuff like that
But you've written tons of fics with sentimental stuff like that in them. What's so different about this one? What mood is going forward with it going to kill? More likely it'll give the reader catharsis.
I suppose the only thing that'll die is the mystery of who she's marrying and if you're not sure how to handle that then I can see why you'd abstain from writing it.
>>7355354
I didn't explain myself very clearly. The problem is mainly twofold, it feels like a very final sort of story and, as you might have noticed, I like to keep as many things up in the air as I can to give myself a lot of options for continuations and stuff like that. It's particularly transparent here but I'm really very loathe to actually go through and marry Undyne off to whoever because that's a pretty big step in her character and not one I'm really ready to take yet considering all the things it'd change. Of course you can argue that it doesn't matter since I can skip backward and forward however much I like but even so, just for my own sake, I feel like it's something I'd be better off writing toward the end of my tenure here.
On top of that, I think naturally the best way to end it is with a lot of fanfare and pomp and sentiment, more so than my other stories. I can stomach it up to a point but in order to write something really gloriously happy like that I find I have to plan it all out beforehand, which I hadn't done and didn't really want to do with this.
I hope all that makes sense as to why it was sort of cut short. I agree with you that it isn't really satisfying as it is.
>>7355540
I see. I was under the assumption that your stories aren't really connected to each other and therefore it wouldn't matter. I can understand wanting to go out with a bang. In that case let's instead hope you don't have to continue the story too soon...
Planning it out beforehand is probably better. I think the text would gush out less during the actual ceremony part in that case.
>>7355734
It isn't particularly obvious or really even essential, but I try to throw in little references now and then and I imagine that if anyone asked I'd say that reading them in chronological order was the best option. There are some outliers though
>>7355540
...you're not leaving any time soon then?
>>7356388
No, definitely not. The only reason I'm not able to post as much is that I'm back at work and, like >>7353088 pointed out, we're starting to sort of close down on the number of possible things to write about.
I think in the coming months we'll probably see a shift from one-off ~1000 word stories to longer stories in the same vein as the 'specials' I've done in the past for Christmas and New Year's, which I don't entirely mind. Either way, though, no I'm not going anywhere, don't worry.
From /utg/.
>>7356486
That would be nice. The New Year's Special was a great read, and stories like Undyne defends Devil's Reef show that you have the ability to set up a longer story with a deep and interesting narrative.
Honestly at this point I'd read anything you wrote. I'm (and probably a lot of us here) are getting really attached to your writing.
>>7356486
Thank goodness! I'd be very sad if you left anon!
>>7356811
>>7357259
You guys are sweet. I don't think my writing is anything particularly special but if you guys like it then I must be doing something right.
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