Zootopia General: Caring for your bun Edition
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second for why not
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oFEn0NRKw6s&list=WL&index=93
3rd for handsomest fox
>>6860161
Here's your (Ewe)
I
Want
To
Stick
My
Dick
In
Nick
>>6860198
Do
It
Quick
Thank you for the tt everyone, was amazing. And thank you tt anon. Going to sleep now, Love you all!
Added the mask. Because why not?
>>6860227
Love it
>>6860195
Anyone has the original version of this comic strip? or a template?
>>6860210
souce?
Also...something I might finish with RF.
That's right, folks, actual Beav lewds may be in the future.
Don't get too excited. Because I know how you all have been viciously hungering for this.
Ha ha...ha...
The ride never ends
>>6860240
No idea, I just saved it from one of these threads a while ago
>>6860123
>implying a dude can't powerbottom a strap-on.
>>6860227
It's a Christmas miracle!
>>6860249
O-oh, uh... Ooh my...
I shouldn't have looked at this post after drinking so much mulled wine; now I'm really starting to warm up...
>>6860249
I like that beav is chunky, he looks really huggable and squishably
Wheres the porn?
Dubs and drink this Nyquil
>>6860315
Porn is haram. Platonic affection only.
Reposting for the new thread!
Its beginning to look a lot like Christmas... in that nobody is in Gideon's shop. This time of year is always bad for business, and the lack of company is always bad for the pie fox's mood. However, he might just not be the only black sheep of Bunnyburrow this year! Will Gideon be able to have a happy holiday with his beloved? Will the rest of the burrow be okay with him and his partner? Does nobody realize the secret to fruit cake is to put it in a toaster and butter it? Are you all that basic?! Find out in The Fruits of Winter, by Raccoonfag!
Text here:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8953522
Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/the-fruits-of-winter
>>6860315
dubs+ kill myself
New TT blind read through!
Judy's having a wonderful time in Zootopia, but it'd be better if she had a fox with her! In the back of her mind, she thinks that Nick might be in the same situation as her! Is Nick really okay this Christmas, or is something weighing on his mind? What can a bunny do to help a fox? Is Benjamin actually working at that mall, or did he just... dress up as Santa and show up? Find out in Christmas TT, I Guess, chapters 1 and maybe 2, by AutismoSupreme!
Text here:
http://pastebin.com/dbMwvPfp
Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/christmas-tt-i-guess-ch-1-and-2
>>6860315
>>6860356
Heya Comic, currently listening to your read-through and hearing you fret over my terrible typos.
New TT blind read through!
Bogo's working late at the station. For him, its a special night, because he's going to make it special for everyone else. Will he be able to stave off seasonal affective disorder for his crew? Will everyone appreciate his gesture? What if the boxes were laced with NIGHT HOWLER SERUM?! Find out in The Stars Were Shining Brightly, by FoxyProf!
Text here:
http://pastebin.com/LxyWzQQa
Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/the-stars-were-brightly-shining
>>6860427
There aren't too many :P
>>6860436
>There aren't too many :P
Yeah, but right now it's the "she scuttled" one.
I can never figure why late night writing sometimes causes me to swap gender identifiers like that.
>>6860278
uh... well fuck.. i didn't think of that
>>6860295
>>6860313
Don't you just want to bury your face in that plush rodent belly?
Brief break as I digest, but how is everyone doing tonight?
Super comfy stories so far, and I have Canidae's coming up!
>>6860447
I STILL SAY GIDEON ISN'T A SCUTTLER!!!
Hey, I had uploaded this before and shilled it before, but I want to mention it again:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8943220
"Christmastime for all of the mammals both in and around Zootopia means the opportunity for a lot of close bonding. A certain fox and a certain rabbit spending time together in the snowy woods are no exception." - Synopsis
Trying to do something sugary and sweet, purely comfy, for TT. Please take a look at this. I'd love to see comments. Thanks.
>>6858850
Weird name, but who am I to judge. Welcome aboard.
>>6860453
I-is that a trick question..?
>>6860468
Well on the one hand, he has short legs and isn't very graceful looking, but on the other hand, "scampered" maybe could have worked better.
>>6860468
Doing good.
Thinking about Lewding the VRbit again and stuff.
Probably just going to have a heavy drink and watch Daggerfall LPs on Youtube.
>the things i do
>for (you)
Yes i already have die hard.
>>6860468
[Spoilers]To be honest, I'm thinking that this may be another Christmas of hatred-filled Christmas arguing and so depressed right now I want to like fucking kill myself, God.[/SpoilersDon'tWork].
How are you?
>>6860468
Who are you digesting?
>>6860468
>>6860527
>>6860436
>>6860539
>>6860506
Have you seen the GDQ speedrun of Arena?
They clear the entire game with pretty much one glitch, but it's hilariously insane how it works out.
>>6860505
Insects scuttle. Cowards scuttle. Slaves scuttle.
It's all about what they're scuttling on-- thin, spindly legs or morals too frail to support them.
Gideon has fat legs. I will fight you Raccoon.
>>6860506
AND I WILL FIGHT YOU BEA--
>Daggerfall LPs
...You're on thin ice.
Also what do you mean, end my fucking like? Do you hate Facebook?
>>6860525
Doing good! Don't kill yourself!
>>6860527
Half a pound of meat, two servings of fried yams, a salad and three carrots!
>>6860539
THIS IS TAKEN OUT OF CONTEXT! I WANTED TO PUNISH ALEC, NOT LEWD HIM!
AND I WANTED TO PUNISH HIM BECAUSE HE THREATENED TO LEWD ME!
>>6860563
This is my lament.
>>6860542
Its a super comfy story, isn't it?
OH MY GOD MY ROOMMATE IS AT THE "NO MAN CAN EAT FIFTY EGGS" PART OF COOL HAND LUKE I'LL BE RIGHT BACK!!!
>>6860587
>Gideon has fat legs. I will fight you Raccoon.
Now now, no need to get all worked up.
>>6860587
Woo that's a lot.
Remember to eat carbs though, can't make gains without the insulin it generates!
>>6860581
Nah, I don't usually enjoy glitch speedruns because some deep part of me gets angry at people not enjoying the game how it's meant to be played. Kind of silly, but I always get upset watching glitch speedruns.
>>6860587
>Do you hate Facebook?
Of course I do, I can't post how I truly feel there without my family knowing what a weirdo I am.
Plus my aunt keeps sending me farmville invites, it's horrible.
>THIS IS TAKEN OUT OF CONTEXT!
Yeah, just like Blear's murder, this is totally not what it looks like! ;^]
>>6860634
THIS BULLYING WILL NOT STAND!!!
>>6860680
Fried yams! Plus I had a half cup of oatmeal and toast earlier today! I love carbs!
By the way, deadlift is up to 335 1x5! :D
>>6860697
Blear's murder was totally what it looked like.
Mostly his fault.
>>6860587
>Doing good! Don't kill yourself!
It occurs to me that this one specific quote is probably the perfect summation of what VRbit does for the thread-- try to spread his own native feeling of joy to the joyless.
It's seriously wonderful.
>>6860739
>THIS BULLYING WILL NOT STAND!!!
It can be taken while laying down if it please you.
>>6860697
Fair enough.
>>6860525
Please don't.
Please don't.
Please don't.
Reshilling, as a long time honored tradition, my TT entry.
Also, among everything, I forgot to tell the story of the fic that should have gone with it.
It is the first Christmas after the meeting of Judy and Nick and the fox doesn't know what to buy for Judy as a gift, since with her enormous family she can have pretty much everything.
So wacky shenanigans happen while he search for the perfect gift for her doe.
Finally, looking at her extensive plushie collection, he realize that the only thing a horde of bunnies will never gift to another bunny is a fox.
It should have been pure, undiluted comf but well, it will be for another time. If someone wants to use this prompt to make a delayed TT entry feel free to do so.
And now, since I didn't do it yesterday, I'm gonna (You) every single CC so hard that they will feel like a little Weaver.
>>6860227
>>6860249
Good choice Beav, the mask is necessary for the raccoon identity. Also is the censor bar big enough?
>>6860356
>>6860403
>>6860436
Adding all these to my reading list. It's gonna be a comfy Christmas.
>>6860587
>I WANTED TO PUNISH ALEC, NOT LEWD HIM
Meerkats are mongooses, so I know that everything Alec did was pure and just.
Bad bun.
>>6860832
Yeah, I don't want to, but I badly don't want this to be another Christmas of seething frustration and arguing and feeling like shit because how dare I choose a deviant bisexual lifestyle-- Christ is so unhappy.
You know?
Zistopia just updated
>>6860978
I like the mask in the first panel, but the second one kind of looks like mud...
>Raccoon identity
Gotta respect that brave badger standing up to society and showing the world that he's a raccoon where it counts.
>is the censor bar big enough?
He's...uh, he's a grower?
Also that's adorable.
Nick hugging Judy and she hugs a mini-Nick, awwww.
VRbit, if you're still around, hoping that you've jotted down the link to: >>6860472
I'll love to see what you think of this piece.
>>6860990
Yes, we know. You've said the same thing every day for the past week.
Can you repeat 1/10th of what we've told you? Cause nobody thinks you're listening.
Welp, it's 7:20am here and I've not slept yet. Seems like as good a time as any.
G'night /ztg/
>>6861134
Sleep tight, bunner.
>>6860978
Hello A_Signature!
I love the story that goes with it: it makes it all the more magical...
And you have no idea what Alec was saying! He deserved the punishment I had for him! Far more so than these buns >>6860816, who I'm pretty sure did nothing at all!
>>6861078
Will do!
>>6861134
Sleep tight, bunner!
>>6860978
Thanks for making this, great work
https://twitter.com/izumimonmocomon/status/811943911178452992
All I want for christmas is for beaver to continue his otter stuff
>>6861212
HOOOLY SHIT THATS HOT
>>6861224
Haha, You and me both, bud!
Shame that I'm not creative and constantly struggle with the barest of storytelling structure, prose, and flow.
I'm going to go down another drink and probably stuff my face with chocolate sweet before passing out.
Night all, I love you gays!
>>6861275
Night Beavity-bopity-boo.
>>6861045
>>6861275
>I like the mask in the first panel, but the second one kind of looks like mud...
This is because a raccoon's mask follows the muzzle, so it stretches along the cheeks.
I have problems myself drawing this. Here, this drawing by Waga should be the best example.
Also you use the same software as me and Gerardson, Clip Studio Paint, right?
If you have a pressure sensitive tablet I suggest to use the G-pen, give it a try.
Good night, Beav, don't be too harsh on yourself.
>>6861171
>He deserved the punishment I had for him!
I'm pretty sure he is innocent. Lewding the VRbit is a just thing to do. I think I will do it myself
>>6861174
Thanks!
>>6861275
Sleep tight, bunner!
Ahh, this bun has to go to bed.
Tomorrow I have Canidae and PseudoFox's fics to read. Remember, TT has no deadlines: send your fic over if you'd like it read!
>>6861314
>Lewding the VRbit is just a thing to do.
YOU MEAN CRIMES ARE JUST A THING TO DO?! BECAUSE YOU'RE BREAKING THE RULES!
Imagine if I said that in court when I was charged with killing Blear! I bet my defense wouldn't have been any better for it!
...couldn't have gotten much worse, though...
Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads. This is the most amazing TT yet, because I get to have two Christmases this year!
I was traveling so this is a bit late, but that's been a theme with my TTs lately.
Christmas dinner is an important event for Judy Hopps, even now that she's living on her own in the city.
She really wants to give Nick that special experience, too.
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/6727384/chapters/20515402
>>6861275
Sleep well!
>sheep weigh 99-350lb
>wolves weigh 40-140lb
explain this pack street
>>6861368
Sleep tight, bunner!
Have a cute SwedBun.
>>6861389
two thirds of that weight is on Remmy's big dick.
>>6861389
heavy wool
>>6861368
Don't worry bun, you will find that lewding the Vrbit is not a crime...
Also sleep tight bunner!
>>6861378
Adding this too, damn this TT is full of fics (better like this).
Also I see the number of hits and congrats Falke. Thinking of doing something special when you hit 15000?
>>6861398
I love the style that adds only the outline. Also those are big buns.
>>6861447
This artist tends to draw them very tall specially Jack.
>>6861457
That's a pity, one of the things I like the most about Zootopia is the size difference and how to play on that.
>>6861115
I mean, I still feel pretty terrible, but going into the 23rd, 24th, and the big day what I'm trying to focus on is: Even if your family says and does bad shit, you can and should decide to focus on the cool shit said and done by friends.
And the family that's actually nice.
>>6861494
The swede bun? I'm not too keen of hairs on Zootopian mammals but I can try.
Not now though, since I'm at work.
And yes, the colors are pretty.
>>6861447
Oh, I hadn't noticed that was getting close to a milestone.
I don't know yet if I'll mark it at all.I figure I'll just keep going and see what happens.
https://plus.google.com/u/0/104476803638200754245/posts/d4zdNKiXMoe
Would you rather AU where big buns or bunlets?
>>6861772
bunlets
>>6861756
>Early concept Nick
Still he was never a dog. Strange because Gideon is drawn much better
>>6861772
Against the popular opinion of big bun AU best AU, I prefer small buns to cuddle like plushies
>>6861772
only if the buns are six feet tall
>>6861772
So big Judy AU is entirely possible.
>>6861829
It's not, the flemish giant is a domestic species of rabbit.
>>6861849
domestication occurs through targeting specific characteristics during cross-breeding.
A big bun could still occur as a result of random breeding among different bunny species. They would be extremely small in population size relative to the rest of bunnydom, but they could still exist.
Not good 'nuff.
>>6860169
Has there been any story or images of Jack thoroughly roughfucking Skye into a mind melting orgasm?
https://twitter.com/Willow_Fox/status/763456433522413568
>>6861907
>Jack
>rough fucking into mind-melting orgasm
>not the recipient
you were so close too
>>6861975
I like smol guys big gurls
>>6861989
jack savage is not for straight
>>6861967
>god I wish that were me
>>6861907
The closest I've got is the one green where Jack find Skye changing her clothes, slipping and accidentally fucking her. I've lost it though.
The others I did were with Jack taking or he not being able to satisfy Sky(e), like pic related
>>6861975
>>6861967
>those dead eyes
>booze section
>he drinks to forget
>>6861907
No, but if we could start posting Skye that would make me happy! C'mon anons give me some vixen engineer smiles to protect!
>>6861894
Not good enough either, but it is what it is. Put on some tunes and get to writing!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ri3kDiWaZFc
>>6862036
Fuck yeah, post some Skye.
Lookat that smile, she fucking loves that bun.
>>6862043
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KKwsKcmWUvQ
>>6862036
>>6862028
>>6862036
Vroom vroom vroom
>>6862099
Good luck, the only story that gave me the hots for Jack is Savage and the Savage, and that guy's gone. Damn shame.
>>6862102
>>6862151
Have you tried the Otterly story?
>>6862151
>>6862043
I mean hell, it's my second in the volume!
I just hope it's good dawg.
>>6862021
Also I feel the need to shill the fic created from my green. I will never thank the writer enough
https://archiveofourown.org/works/8393506
Have some more SavageSky(e)
>>6861907
>>6862021
Fucking someone (or getting fucked) into a quivering puddle of ecstasy is my fetish, anon.
>>6862202
>A Christmas Fucking Miracle
speaking of, post Christmas jams to close out the night
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQ5rI461KNE
>>6862273
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Sepqr4h0wc
>>6862250
Well, I like the dom aspect of it, I have made many of this type.
Have a role reversal, now Jack is dominant
>>6860516
Add Krampus to that list.
>>6862202
Oh, hey, it took me a long damn time to find it, but here it is: http://pastebin.com/7pcVkFfb
Fucking hot stuff involving Savage being dicked and loved good.
>>6862202
>thought he just did Pack Street
reeeeeee
but a fair assumption
i should probably label my stuff, huh
>>6862003
Stop being a big gay, you big gay.
>>6862354
no
jack savage is for big pred cock and nothing you say will convince me otherwise
>>6862354
>Straight anons become gay for the fox
>Gay anons become straight for the bun
Truly a magical place
Also more bun ass pls
>>6862411
Buns licking ass, you say?
>>6862420
You're a cheeki breeki, aren't you?
>>6862380
Why not both?
This thread needs more threesomes anyway.
>>6862354
Source?
>>6862453
I... may have to consider this.
>>6862451
Can't help it if buns are cheeky.
>>6862453
I really wish we had more of Nick bottoming, though.
Not counting pegging.
>>6862472
Goddamn.
I need a Jack rimming Skye pic. Fucking love it when girls love getting rimmed.
>>6862453
A threesome where the bun is sandwiched between a strong, big fox and earthly goddess rabbit? Being fucked silly from both ends?
Who would want that?
(stop, no green, you're at work, nooo...)
>>6862479
I have a green for every occasion
>>6862411
Only if I get dubs too.
>>6862501
I love it when girls love rimming.
After some days, *cough*
http://pastebin.com/DeQ1NA0D
bam.
>Write something /comfy/ with a bittersweet ending
>VRbit reads it
>He points out that it lacks a fundamental drive and that more conflict would make it better, including having a sadder ending, because it's maybe a bit boring and listless right now
>Feel like he's right
>Really not want to revise the story to make it less happy even if it would probably improve the quality
GOD DAMN IT
>>6862464
Not at my computer at the moment so I can't. Sorry.
>>6862472
On the cheeky I concur. Cheeky and squishy.
>>6862508
Don't worry anon, you will
>>6862547
Nice to see more from you
>>6862559
Do it as an AU, an alternate ending. A Sliding doors fic
>>6862559
I know that feel, there was a fic I did back in Sept where Comic spent around forty minutes telling me what didn't work, but I never got around to fixing it with his advice because I just moved on to the next piece.
>>6862570
That could make sense. I wonder if I should have it as an additional chapter on AO3 or maybe even do it as a whole other upload. On the other hand...
I suppose it gets into the question of why write a sadder version if it will be really not fun to do.
>>6862580
Comic did a personal read through for me.
I haven't touched it.
I feel like I betrayed him.
>>6862542
Source image?
>>6862580
I really appreciate all that comic's done for me, but it's really hard for me to actually listen to his reviews.
Maybe it's because of my horrible self-esteem issues; if he praises me, I feel like I don't deserve it. If he criticizes me, I blow it way out of proportion. As such, it's very hard to implement his advice.
/blog
>>6862588
Rose
First time she ever drew lewds, too.
>>6862542
Why rim when there's a nice, comfy vagina RIGHT THERE?
>>6862570
After constant slamming of it, multiple sheets of paper deleted, and an ungodly amount of Overwatch, finally it came thru.
>>6862566
Ok Thanks
>>6862603
...anon
those are balls
>>6862603
Rimming's fun. Its naughty and nasty and taboo and perverted and feels really weird in a good way.
Ever laugh, but instead of exhaling with every laugh, you inhale? That's what rimming does. Its wild.
>>6862591
You're not alone.
A lot of writers who hear his read-throughs of their works say they get pretty worked up over it.
Myself, I generally start feeling like anything I write is garbage by the time I post it, so if he praises it, I feel better, and if he picks it apart, I just shrug and say "that's fair".
Doesn't work for everyone, but that's how I approach it.
>>6862587
I used to write bullshit when I was really drunk to send it to him just to fuck with him but he just kept sending me recordings and taking it really seriously so I stopped
>>6862586
Sad is tricky. It is not fun to write, but, sometimes, I use it as a vent for everything I need to. I did like this for a fic in the previous Winter TT.
>>6862580
That is personal taste. I also prefer to fix grammatical errors and nothing more. Still the critique is very useful for future pieces.
>>6862587
Well, do it now.
>>6862591
This is only normal. Critiques and praises are hard to take, the worst critic is ourselves.
>>6862651
>Still the critique is very useful for future pieces.
Very true.
With each blind read he does of my stuff, I take those notes and apply them to my next TT, and have been improving every time since then.
>>6862608
>>6862677
Man, how many guys have you fucked without realizing it?
>>6862591
That's true for me too. I get super worked up.
It's not really a bad feeling, at least not mostly, but I'm like too into it and emotionally invested.
>>6862677
This is just typical Remmy. You see a naked pred and already you want to ram some vagina.
>>6862688
>Accidentally gay is a tag on e621
If Judy is going to arrest a Zistopia preddo, what do you think would be a gripping and interesting way to have it happen?
Lets assume that she views the collars as maybe necessary but doesn't like the law so much.
This could be Finnick, Honey, or whatever other character, I suppose.
>>6862591
It's really hard to listen to his blind read-throughs. Part of it is hearing your work performed aloud, part of it is hearing your mistakes and knowing other people are listening, and part of it is simply the anticipation as you listen. I did a Writer's Workshop with him where I just gave him a google doc of my story to work through and leave comments on, and that was much less of a trial. It doesn't take as long, there's none of the anticipation of an audio review, and you've got all the notes for stuff to look at right there when you're ready to start editing. It really worked out for me, especially if the positive response to chapter 1 of Lure of the Wildwood is any indication. Give it a try.
>>6862712
Well, an idea can be that she tries to overpower them physically.
If it doesn't work, and the pred didn't accidentally activate the collar in the fight, she feels resigned to activate it remotely.
Does anyone have a invite link to the /co/ discord?
>>6862722
I like the beginning of this. Could it be that she thinks that she can overpower him, he manages to shake her off embarrassingly, and a colleague has to keep her from being kicked unconscious by an oddly serene but criminal preddo?
Has Comic actually heped people be better writers? Ive never lestened to a thing.
>>6861701
>Panel 1
>すごいよっぱれた
Extremely drunk
>どこにもおけれい
TN: Not 100% sure what おけれい (okerei) is, based on research the closest I could find is that's derivative of オケる (okeru) which is slang for "going out to karaoke". With that in mind, the best translation I can think of is "wanted to go to karaoke anywhere".
>Panel 2
>こういるチスは平気
TN: Once again running into weird vernacular (or just misreading since it is slightly scrawled), but チス (chisu) doesn't have any meaning here that makes a ton of sense. I'm guessing it's another way to spell kiss? Anyway, best guess translation is "This kiss was very calming"
>よっぱらい
Drunk
>Panel 3
>。。。するのか?
Nick: "... You sure you wanna do it?"
>するー する するー
Judy: "Let's do i--t let's do it, let's do i--t
>Panel 4
>するつもりだった
Thought they were gonna do it
>>6862748
He's great at pointing out grammar issues, mistakes with spelling, misplaced words, and the like. I'm not sure that it's made me better as a writer that much really, but he's helped a bunch in terms of improving actual stuff.
>>6862715
Whatever works, I think.
For me is easier because usually there are not many suggestions to change the contents (except a couple of readings from the last TTs) and the main critiques are because of grammatical errors.
>>6862745
Can be. The idea came to me from pic related
>>6862748
It helped me, even in my short career as a writefag.
>>6862743
/co/ has a Discord?
How shit can that be?
>>6862770
I like this idea.
>>6862775
No, it's a Zootopia discord
>>6862820
So really shitty..?
>>6862699
>>6862839
>obviously traced/sampled from other works
>but it might be an intentional edit just for humor
>>6862910
>that leg thump
yes
YES
>>6861701
>>6862754
morning thread
i found out this is TTanon's last one and realized i never made a proper TT submission
here we are
donkpedventures update soon, i swear! finals are over and work is lax, so i have more time than ever before.
also sorry vaw, i just had to do it
>>6862927
Source?
>>6862947
Nice one Moped!
>Does it feel like we've been here for months to you?
Kek
>>6862961
Artist's name is on there, Jman0525
>>6862688
>>6862696
>>6862947
This is fucking fantastic.
I'm sure you'd hit me if I said romantic, so I'll say it's pretty bromantic instead.
>last panel
kek
>>6862973
Admit it, Inky. This just adds more fuel for your RemmyxCrossdressing Wolter ship.
>>6862973
Man, imagine the Christmas miracles.
Remmy seeing a pred vagina.
RF hitting that Beaver ass.
VRBit getting lewded.
Nobby, Rose, Chumpy and weaver drawing lewds of other CCs...
>>6862989
>Betty kidnaps Remmy to give him to herself as a christmas present
>>6862989
>>6863011
Well it would be nice gift from Weaver to give us finale of Remmy's predophile evolution.
>>6862968
>>6862975
thanks anons
aight ima see if i can have the next page done tomorrow
goodnight thread
>>6863029
Good night!
Hey so even though I'm still working on chapter 2 of Looking for Group, a friend has graciously decided to create an illustrated version of my work for everyone to enjoy.
>>6863026
Only count on Nobby for that, Weaver loves them blue balls
>>6862981
I prefer him with Anneke, but I won't complain either.
>>6863016
Damn it.
>>6863011
>
>>6863055
It would be honestly disappointing if Remmy doesn't get laid once by the time we reach the end. Even if it is with an ewe, god forbid.
>>6863074
It's not important for Remmy to get laid.
It's important for Remmy to grow as a person.
Him getting laid would just be a bonus.
Fan comics I was initially very excited for have really been circling the drain lately.
Disappointing. Ah well, I'll stop getting my hopes up for some decent fluff since it seems like most of the fandom seem to be wangst and drama whores.
>>6862036
>>6863079
I agree, I just want him to get some romantic relationship. Some love. We get all this sexual build-up, flirting and most of all we see Remmy grow to accept that he is attracted to predators. Yeah I've heard "That's just Weaver fucking with us.". But Remmy having a relationship with one of the girls would be a great plot point. We got past all the drama of sheep moving into pred neighborhood, so what now? Obviously we will get something revolving the whistle, Bellweather reveal will involve some drama (which will be another round of Pred vs Prey). The argument that "No ship should sail so that fanbase can fill the gaps" is fucking stupid, if they want to fill the gaps themselves why do they continue reading the canon story and not just imagine the rest. Remmy learning how to live with dating a pred, moving in with her, reaction of friends and family etc. would be an interesting read. And if he decides to not give Remmy a relationship and leaving it open, he could at least get a fling so all of that can get at least some payoff.
>>6862910
>AU where everything is the same but nick has an irrational fear of the brush
>"Nick, come back here this instant" her yelling could probably be heard by their neighbors
>Nick crashed open the door from their bedroom looking desperatly for a hiding place
>deciding to hide behind the couch he cowered in fear as he said "get it away from me!"
>The little bunny step through the frame from their bedroom, the vile item in paw
>"Nick, we been through this. it's just a.." Judy started saying while holding the brush high
>" "It's the devils weapon of choice, that's what it is!"
>"come on, Nick. We need to brush your coat or it will be all in a knot later" exasperation leaking into judy's tone
"A thousand knots are better than suffering it" his only reply.
>this went on for another hour until he surrender by force. This happens every morning before they get ready to work
>>6862748
yeah, he helped me a lot with pointing out what mechanical elements should be present in the things I write to make the story "work".
>>6863187
I like this
>A thousand knots are better than suffering it
I'm ruined, I only have lewd images in my head
>>6863179
>The argument that "No ship should sail so that fanbase can fill the gaps" is fucking stupid
I can agree with that to an extent. Leaving it open ended does lead towards longer shipping periods in the aftermath and we're not obligated to see a romance, but I also feel like letting canon interfere with shipping in general is pretty stupid, and payoff can be satisfactory.
> Remmy learning how to live with dating a pred, moving in with her, reaction of friends and family etc. would be an interesting read.
I HIGHLY doubt that'd be in it. It seems incredibly irrelevant to the plot. That said I at least agree it'd be interesting to read. It just wouldn't mesh well with the story itself. Make for a nice fic.
>And if he decides to not give Remmy a relationship and leaving it open, he could at least get a fling so all of that can get at least some payoff.
I'd rather see a relationship form and fail personally, after just one date. It'd be a chance for him and whoever he goes out with to grow.
Not that I'm against a fling either. Just think the former would make for better storytelling.
>>6862036
>>6862748
He and Canidae have been super helpful to me.
Listening to my work get read and critiqued blindly helps me get a sense of what I'm successfully getting through to the audience and what I maybe need to make more obvious.
>>6863220
>It seems incredibly irrelevant to the plot.
What exactly is the "plot" of Pack Street? Yeah it is about Remmy growing as a person etc. But that is the only real plot there is. All chapters are just about small events in Remmy's life teaching him lessons, with bigger events like acceptance to the pack, all leading up to Bellweather reveal. Remmy is not following his dream, he is not on some mission, he is not revealing some conspiracy.
If the Pack Street is about Remmy growing as a person then his relationship is far from irrelevant. It would be a great source of drama and character development. I am not saying we would just read about his life with his gf, but having that in background would lead to some great interactions with others.
>I also feel like letting canon interfere with shipping in general is pretty stupid.
People ship anyone with anything. Canon should not step back so that people can ship. For example if there was genuine Ozzy x V ship in the fanbase, her relationship with Al should not stay hidden so that this ship can exist.
>I'd rather see a relationship form and fail personally.
This would be great awell, not after just one date tho, few weeks, month or two. It would be at least something and it would expand those characters. Remmy geting laid would be the bonus.
>>6862947
Sweet
https://www.twitter.com/saritaaaaaaa82/status/811969378220544000
>>6863373
Actually, speaking of the plot, now that he's a part of the pack I wonder if he's still inclined to leave? That's what he wanted before. To survive Pack Street until he could save up the dosh to find somewhere better to live. But now that he's forming these friendships and maybe beginning to thrive...would he still want to up and move if given the chance?
>>6863402
Yeah I was thinking about this. And we will probably get his thoughts about this in internal dialogue. But if these friendships mean something to him (and I think they do considering his fever dream and all that need of company). If he will move it will be only to a better appartment on the block. (or move in with Betty if that ship sails)
Was this translated?
https://www.twitter.com/mtttut/status/810096977581142016/photo/1
>>6863490
Nope, or, if it was, I've never typesetted it
>>6863635
Source?
>>6863373
>People ship anyone with anything. Canon should not step back so that people can ship. For example if there was genuine Ozzy x V ship in the fanbase, her relationship with Al should not stay hidden so that this ship can exist.
I agree with about everything you've said except for this. Crack shipping is a thing. I do agree that canon should be taken into account, but if someone did genuinely ship Ozzy with Violet her being with Al wouldn't matter much to them. And that's their choice.
Perhaps I didn't explain myself too well. I wasn't saying TO disregard canon, but that it WILL be disregarded for the sake of shipping, or even worked around. Not saying it's the right thing, but it's gonna happen. How people take that depends on how sensitive they are about canon or shipping.
I agree with your other points entirely, though.
>>6863673
>Violet
I meant Velvet. Damn it.
>>6863662
https://trashasaurusrex.tumblr.com
>>6863684
Thanks!
>>6860356
That was a sweet story! I'm not even one for this ship.
chu?
>>6862036
>>6863333
>>6860403
Aw shit, Comic, i just woke up. Gonna go do morning chores then ill have a listen
>>6862947
The cutest fagmo duo.
>>6864257
Incorrect.
>>6864285
I wish Bore wasn't killed when his mech's core overloaded... war is hell.
>>6864317
Nah, he's still alive. His tablet is confirmed KIA tho.
>>6864336
Sucks about his tablet though its nice to know he's still kicking.
Mornin' zoot.
How's yer day been dawgs?
Here ztg, have some Ozzy as Emperor Nero.
>>6864407
It's going good!
I'm practicing guitar, then going shopping in a few hours to finish up the list.
What are you up to?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v1AY-oLr2nY
>>6862754
Do you or typesetter give these to ZNN or is that a different crew of translators/typesetters
>>6864407
Pretty good. It's cold as shit outside and it looks like some big fuckin' storm is on its way, but I don't have anything to do today so I get to stay comf inside.
>>6864439
Slept, I finished "Photograph" at like, 5:20 in the morning, and I woke up at 8 to do some car inspection.
Now I'm feelin' good 'n just listening to music.
>>6864407
consumption of breakfast time
>>6864421
is very nice, accurate draw
>>6864468
Damn dawg, stay inside mang, ain't nobody got time fer freezin' outside unless y'need to be out.
Bundle up, be ready if shit gets real anon, y'dig?
>>6864520
You got it mang. Gonna wrap me some gifts then back to comfposting, all to the dulcet tones of Bing Crosby's Christmas album.
>>6864564
I've been enjoying this since it came out at 11 p.m. last night.
>>6863490
>Panel 1
>なあサベージ捜査官、もしこの案件から無事帰還できたら、
Nick: "Hey, Agent Savage, if we make it out of this safely,"
>最初になにする?
Nick: "What's the first thing you'd do?"
>Panel 2
>死ぬほどスカイを抱く
"Embrace Skye 'til death do we part."
>カシャン
SFX: kashan (ch-chk; gun cocking)
>Panel 3
>いくぞワイルド、敵が動い
Jack: "Let's go, Wilde, the enemy's on the move."
>シャッ
SFX: sha (shff; slight shuffle while getting up)
>>6864755
how poetic
>>6864755
"Who's Skye?"
>>6864847
Cynthia Walker
>>6864890
What the fuck are you talking about, Judy?
>>6863901
CUC
>>6865055
>>6864449
Typesetter anon here, they are different
>>6864449
Yeah, different crew
If you see a translated piece here and you don't see some sort of signature, there's a pretty big chance it was translated here
abloo abloo lil fox
>>6865296
Finnick deserves more love
I need art of Thinhauser.
>>6865312
not really, but I'll post what I have.
>>6865322
COMBO BREAKER
Daily reminder that Gazelle services a random fan before every one of her shows and sings a song for them with their cum drying on her chest.
>>6865421
>tfw yours will never be brought to life using start-of--the-art technology in a billion dollar film
Did Learned Helplessness ever update past part one?
>>6865425
Dotkwa should have put her teeth in, her mouth looks all soft and gummy.
Is this a TGG?
>>6865469
It seems so, unless someone tried to copy his style.
>>6864755
Thank you for the translation!
>>6865457
She had small teeth even in her test drawings.
>>6865469
Judging by that face and the pregnancy fetish, I'd say it is.
>>6865457
Given her current state, don't you think "Gazelle's mouth looks soft and gummy" might be appropriate?
>>6865500
That is what I am saying, yes.
really makes you think...
>>6865612
I like how they are trying to be accepting, even if they are kind of uncomfortable with Judy's relationship. They are trying so hard...maybe a little too hard.
>>6865457
I've added dotkwa to the cc list - what's his tumblr?
>>6865641
That's not it. It's implied that Bonnie's been fucking him.
>>6865647
It's simple enough. https://dotkwa.tumblr.com/
>>6865612
>half-rabbit half-bunny
But G-d forbid Fox - Bunny hybrids, Whatever Canidae initially was and Fox wolves.
>>6865680
>half-rabbit half-bunny
Meant half-hare half-bunny
>>6865612
When you look at the family photo, basicly none of the kids look anything like him.
>>6864407
Dad and me are watching Jerry Springer, soon to be Maury. Family friend's legendary Christmas party tomorrow. She's a tiny Italian lady who makes enough food to serve an army.
My death will be homemade ziti and cheesecake. I will die happy.
Every artist eventually devolves into cucking art.
>>6865702
Nah, I'm not into that shit; not even as a joke.
>>6865702
Never.
>>6865765
Not insecure, I just really hate seeing it.
>>6865702
No, there is another.
>>6865765
>i bet you also dont consider youself furry
I'm here so I think I am I guess
>or scorned furries once
I don't mind peoples preferences as long as they don't try to shove them down my throat.
>>6865657
>>6865676
...Shit, I was hoping to start off the morning with something wholesome and not cuck. Damn it all.
I still think at least Stu is trying his hardest to show he is accepting of Judy and Nick, even if we are going the whole Tom/Bonnie route.
>>6865702
I really can't stand cucking, in any form. Not in fanart, not fanfics. Gets boring real fast.
On the note of cucking, does anyone remember that fanfic with the OC Mary Sue chinese rabbit that Judy couldn't keep her paws off of even though she was in a "relationship" with Nick? The author wrote a oneshot of that shower scene as Nick playing oen of those "dating sims" games. I thought it was funny.
>>6865820
>Noir
>>6865612
>explaining Judy uniqueness through genetic determinism
At least it isn't Judy meets Bunny superspy that shits on her achievements.
>>6865843
>At least it isn't Judy meets Bunny superspy that shits on her achievements.
This. Seriously, unless it is a parody, Jack Savage and Judy Hopps just can not co-exist in the same universe unless you have some serious rewriting, Jack is actually a spy that no one has fucking heard of, or Jack comes in years later after Judy has done her thing in the ZPD.
>>6865841
That looks more like Lenin Nick Wilde tbqh.
>>6865080
We need art of casual ear hug bun.
>>6865900
...Shit, you're right. Predator Revolutionary Nick Wilde then?
>ywn be this happy
>>6865867
Actually if Jack was a Spy. Not James Bond with villains, explosions etc. but an actual spy that gathers intel and spies on people. It could work, I mean he would be small, quick and if he had silver tongue and wit, it could work. Judy was laughted at because idea of a small bunny facing street thugs and doing other things police does is just silly.
>>6865965
Upping the framerate like that makes it look too weird.
>>6865965
Good, the higher her spirits, the harder her fall.
>>6866004
A little, but I think it looks nice.
>>6865980
>If you seriously rewrite him it could work
Yes
>>6866052
I hate this artist. Everything they draw is horribly off-model and has the same body.
>>6866037
I think it's a difference in taste, I can't stand this.
>>6866128
Bulking season
ded thread
>>6866403
go home everyone
>>6866403
>Friday
>afternoon in burgerland
>almost christmas
Folks are probably working or spending time with family/friends. It's gon' be dead for awhile
>>6866065
she looks good in red.
>>6865296
>>6865322
>>6865325
>>6865348
>>6865364
why are they so cute together?
it's the colours, right?
>>6863161
d'awww
>>6866536
Her costume is red, anon.
>>6866668
>off by two
>"You're the baker, so tell me, what exactly IS eggnog?"
>"It's a mixture of egg and nog of course."
>"Right. Sure it is. And 'nog' is what?"
>"Traditional squirrel drink, made from ground acorns."
>"Really?"
>"Why d' y' think we can only have it once a year? It takes the rest of the year for th' poor guys to turn the acorn crop into enough nog for all us bigger folk."
>There was a Christmas tree. And presents. And eggnog too of course. Gideon was lying through his teeth about it, but it was seldom he was trusted as an authority on anything and his own mother had convinced him of the very same thing back when he was but knee high, so he felt an obligation to pass it along, like some sort of family tradition.
>Only one thing was cramping the holiday spirit, and that was the fact that the air conditioning was on, keeping the temperature chill enough for both mammals present to wear warm winter clothing. Zootopia's climate control was a double-edged sword; on one hand they lived in an eternal summer in that particular part of the city, temperate temperatures all year round, never a foggy autumn morning or soaking spring shower to be had. On the other hand though, no colorful falling leaves, no spring blossoms and no white Christmases. But they made do as best they could, this year they'd sprinkled flour over the windows; if you squinted you could almost imagine it was frost on the panes.
>"So should we start opening the gifts? Y' seem to have a lot..."
>"They're all carrots."
>"Nah, can't be."
>"Carrot soap, carrot chips, carrot cookbooks, carrot perfume..."
>"Awww c'mon, y' pulling my leg."
>"Hang on... this one, Auntie Alice... aaand... Eau de carotte,'For the cosmopolitan bunny'"
>"Huh. Your family has issues."
>"Exactly. Let's go to Tundra Town and build a snowbun."
* * *
>>6866705
>having loudhouse whining about fucking digits again
I'll pass, thank you
>>6866723
>Two figures walked hand-in-hand down a snowy street enjoying the biting cold and fluffy, heavy snowflakes that drifted slowly through the air. The city had cranked up snow production that week, another advantage of climate control. Already the sounds of snowballs flying through the air could be heard far and wide.
>"Hey Gid, up for a little snowball fight?"
>"Nah, I'd only win 'n embarrass ya."
>"Excuse me? I'm faster, I'm trained in combat situations and I'm more agile. I can hand your tail to you any day of the week."
>"That may be, but y' rely on the wrong strategy. All y' can do is bring the snow to the bunny. Or fox."
>"And the right strategy is what exactly?"
>"Bringin' the bunny t' the snow."
>There was a surprised yelp followed by a muffled crunch as a rabbit was bodily tossed into a snowdrift. Gideon fled, staying off the footpath to avoid slipping on ice, relying on his head start as Judy pulled herself free.
>And to his credit he got quite far before she caught up to him.
bought any merch?
>>6866753
I'm not 12.
>>6866768
>I'm not 12.
Yet.
>>6866768
you want that sequel or not?
>>6866741
This was funny and comfy. I like it.
>>6862559
So I just listened to his readthrough. Where did you get that he said it should be sad? Seems like he said the ending is just unsatisfying.
>>6866961
I thought the same <3
>>6865612
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNqFhyNeibs
L E G S
>>6867124
>still no PI AU
Bleak Christmas
in a medieval context, how far above a mammals weight class can they fight with any hope of victory?
>>6867211
small groups, three, two million at a time.
>>6867211
well a small rabbit can kill an elephant if they can cut the artery on the inside off the leg. probably bleeds dry within minutes
>>6867164
>>6865965
>Naive little anon on his first day on 4chan
>>6867211
When size difference would appear, smaller mammal would just have to make up in agility and precision.
>>6867355
or quantiny.
Is there a master list of all the CC's in /ztg/ ?
>>6867530
read OP for once
>>6867547
Hey, what's the TT Theme?
>>6867266
It hurts...
Is it too much to ask for bun turned away from ZPD becoming jaded and hard but opening up her own private investigation firm in the city?
>>6867626
yes.
enjoy your no AU.
also, nothing is stopping you from writing a greentext yourself.
>>6867266
JUDY/OTTERTON LESBIAN ACTION WHEN?
Hello thread! It is I, NewDonk, having returned. I caught a drawfriend doing a picture of "When Remmy Met Charlie" a few threads ago, wanted to say thank you! I snagged one of the pictures before it died, haven't been able to say thanks, so tell whoever it was (As I don't know their name!) means a lot to me.
>>6867626
There's a fanfic called Dangerous where that happens to Jack Savage. It hasn't updated in a while.
>>6865965
The fear for the blood tends to create fear for the flesh.
>>6867724
Yeah, I guess.
>>6867547
Oh, sorry.
That wasn't there the last time I was in here...
>>6865680
>Whatever Canidae initially was
I... don't remember either. All I remember is she changed it to Jackal to better fit the universe (as jackals can indeed crossbreed wolves)
>>6867825
no worries Anon.
>>6867832
Pupper and desert pupper is all that matters.
>>6867696
Link?
>>6867878
Link to recent fic?
>>6867832
It was initially something like half-fox. But as you said, jackals can crossbreed wolves, so that works much better.
>>6867938
Oh, my Christmas TT?
I guess I should be shilling more often.
Here it is, thank you for asking! Comic is doing a readthrough today, I think.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8967352
>>6867963
Thanks
>>6867924
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7569895/chapters/17221501
>>6866100
>Thought it was peeping mice and Judy from thumbnail
My disappointment is overwhelming
>>6866741
Do not turn me into a judeon degenerate
>>6868105
>page 9
someone want to get a new thread ready?
>>6862947
I like it
See you next week, thread
>>6868206
Those are some very sweet cuties.
>>6868195
Nah
>>6866071
Nick is clearly melting in this picture. Look at his bottom lip!
>>6868229
You called?
>>6868206
Adorable
>>6868489
This artist needs to learn how to draw vaginas better and it would be perfect.
>>6868520
and boobs
and faces
and legs
and arms
>>6863373
>Remmy is not following his dream, he is not on some mission, he is not revealing some conspiracy.
Welcome to Slice of Life.