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/TLHG/ - The Loud House General It's The New Edition, C

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/TLHG/ - The Loud House General
It's The New Edition, Charlie Brown
>Booru:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=all

>Fanfics:
http://tlb.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=2

>Thread Archive:
http://pastebin.com/h2ZBJ3GS

>Episodes:
http://pastebin.com/KM6yNJpe

>Extras:
http://pastebin.com/2pn4SWiH
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News:

>Season 2 green-lit for 14 Episodes:
http://variety.com/2016/tv/news/nickelodeon-loud-house-2-1201782479/

>New Animated Short Coming based off of "Deuces Wild"
https://www.instagram.com/p/BHFX8RshVUT/

>Lincoln Loud Instagram QnA:
https://www.instagram.com/p/BK58yl-hV2Y/
https://www.instagram.com/p/BLByTgTBpv2/
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Upcoming Episodes:

The Price of Admission/One Flu Over the Loud House (Saturday:10/15 - 11:00am)
>After seeing a scary movie his parents told him not to see, Lincoln gets traumatized and is unable to sleep / When the house gets hit with the common cold, Lincoln believes his sisters have become zombies.

One of the Boys (Monday:10/17)
>When Lincoln wishes he had ten brothers instead of ten sisters, Lisa gives him a glimpse into that reality.

Cereal Offender (Tuesday:10/18)
>The Loud kids make a trip to the supermarket to do grocery shopping for Mom, but Lincoln has some other plans.
DL link: https://mega.nz/#!JJRmjJoQ!__UrGizjEGHJD-ENx8YKUmmrewVf2XpAWPrN3YoTwGc

Raw Deal (Wednesday:10/19)
>Lincoln becomes a hypochondriac when Lucy predicts his day will "end in disaster".

Study Muffin (Thursday:10/20)
>Lincoln gets a tutor that all his sisters instantly get crushes on him, making it impossible for Lincoln to study.
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A happy Leni is a cute Leni!
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A happy Lisa is a cute Lisa!
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Probably going to get scrolled over, but: What are all the yurifics, if any?
All I know are Game Changer and 4Loko™.
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A angry ruler is a productive ruler.
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>>5712986
There are none... its all about the Lincoln Log, no matter what form it takes, even if that form is gay shota
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Be sure to feed your Lola plenty of milk each day so she grows up big and strong.
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I want to breed with Luan and drink her sweet breastmilk.
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Is Lynn Peppermint Patty?
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>>5712986
I've got the first chunk of a Luna/Luan story about ready to post sometime tonight.
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>>5713070
Whoops, gave her too much.
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>>5713070
>drinking straight from the jug
Nasty bitch.
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Aaaaaahhhh that's it...
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>>5712986
Thanks for mentioning me. Besides the two you've mentioned, there's I Love It Loud, Break Up Literally Break Down, parts of Ronnie Anne VS The World, Stretching Out, Persona, Shower Time, Lori's Leash, Lynncy, Lynn/Luan, and Bath Time. That's every at least decent yuri fic I can find on the booru. Still, we could use more.
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>>5713220
muh jug
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>>5713246
>I Love It Loud
Oh damn, I forgot about that.
I think I named that one.
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>>5713236
>censored
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>>5713301
It's a good name. I requested Lori's Leash, so I'd recommend that one if you're into something kinky, and Persona is a really fancy dramatic story if you're into some Ingmar Bergman shit.
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>>5713236
Source?
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how does this make you feel
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Why does Bobby stay with Lori?
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>>5713350
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>>5713354
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>>5713354
Sweet, sweet, gringa pussy.
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>>5713320
>>5713341

http://i.imgur.com/Ppl8565.jpg

Here you go m8s
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Have a Lynn. She's cute!
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>>5713395
Too old for me.
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worst content creators
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>>5713536
Ur mum
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>>5713536
me
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>>5713536
Actually me.
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>>5713536
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>>5713536
abuse guy drawfriend moondaffodil
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>>5713536

Me.

I haven't updated my fic in two months.
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>>5713603
Abuse"""""guy"""""
Draw"""""friend"""""
Moon"""""daffodil"""""
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>>5713536
Dave
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>>5713603
Real talk, Abuseguy and Moon are pretty awful
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>>5713733
the""""""""""Man""""""""""inthecouch
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It's Sunday, anons, why aren't you in church?
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>>5713733
Zomby""""""cow""""""
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>>5713536
Wrightfag, Abuseguy could be better if he wasn't being dragged down by him
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>>5713536
I know people think these are meme answers, but I really don't like Wrightfag, Drawfriend, Moondaffodil, and AbuseGuy
They cause far too much shit just from existing sometimes, and in the case of Moondaffodil and Wrightfag, it's mostly mediocre garbage.
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>>5713760
I am the church.
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>>5712986
>>5713120
Did I say tonight? I meant right now. This is the opening blurb to a Luaa thing I've been mulling over for a while. These two are kind of uncharted territory for me, but I'm doing my best.

http://pastebin.com/h0rsZwiW

As always, I'd love to hear whatever criticism anyone has for me.
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Fic when Luna gets caught up in a romantic, incestuous relationship with Lori when?
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>>5713760
Cuz I would burst in a ball of flames if I'd even come close to one.
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>humiliated sisters on the internet
>jacked sister's bike and lost it
>exploited his sister's job to suck up to a boy
>does good when he's trying to get something, gets caught, or gets guilty

Linc's one of the biggest assholes for sure.
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>>5713840
Fic where Luna gets tossed hard by Lori and she doesn't understand how someone she bore her heart to could do this to her when?
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>>5713840
That's a pretty obscure ship. I'm not surprised it has been touched much. I don't even completely understand the appeal.
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>>5713753
>>5713798
Mind explaining it? I feel it's about time for some criticism anyway.

It's Moondaffodil, by the way.

Offer is open for anyone really.
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>hey anon, during the garage sale you bought all my panties, but..I kinda need them back because I don't have any others
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doing requests
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>>5713882
You care too much about what shitposters think of you.
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>>5713768
>>5713798
Ayy, Wrightfag here. I won't deny that I'm mediocre, but if you have any suggestion you have that could fix that I'd really appreciate hearing them.
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>>5713840
I'm considering doing one where they have a drunken one night stand.
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>>5713890
Loricoln foot stuff
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>>5713915
>have any suggestion you have
Ugh, I've been up too long.
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>>5713890
obscure ship of your choice
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>>5713881
It's not a favorite of mine either, being honest. I guess it's the duality of oldest blonde x oldest brunette, ones a vulnerable rocker the other's a much more mature but emotionally stunted teen/adult. I suppose they look cute together, but I can't see much for interactions without stretching.
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>>5713890
Any cute Luna and Luan interaction.
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>>5713890
r63 Ronnie Anne acting shy while on a date with Lincoln.
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>>5713906
I care too much about my quality, really.
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>>5713886
what's your offer?
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>>5713915
just because a shitposter goes more indept doesnt mean theyre any more serious
wattch this, theyll reply to you with general criticism youll ask them to explain further then theyll disappear into thin air with the "last laugh"
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>>5713830
I don't really like starting off with dream sequences, but the writing itself is good. Is this going to be lewd later?
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>>5713890
Lori casually sitting on the toilet
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>>5713760
>Implying I'm not

Does your church not have 4G or something?
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>>5714032
Seconding
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>>5714005
Ayy, I know, but at this point shisposting criticism is the only hope I have of getting any at all, I'm afraid, so I'll gladly bear it.
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>>5713965
Seconding the hell out of this.
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>>5713760
Church is for faggots.
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There's too much damn negativity around here. Who are the BEST content creators?
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>>5713986
you really shouldnt need any further validation you know people like you
its kind of sad your so insecure about your own work
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>>5714063
Me
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>>5713915
>>5713882
this bait is put out at least once a day.
shame on both of you for falling for it.
Just because a shitposter puts 'real talk' or 'seriously though' before the meme doesnt make it any less of a shitpost.

this anon >>5714005 is right on the money.
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>>5714063
Still not me.
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>>5714065
Dunno. As of late seems people haven't been liking it. God forbid I want to make sure I'm at least somewhat trying to improve.
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>>5714063
Moon Gaddafi
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>>5714059
He who speaks blasphemy lives numbered days.
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>>5714063
Radish
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>>5714063
It's just as bad saying the best because it still singles out the ones who don't get named and still make content

Be grateful we have more content creators than any other fandom.... just look at /sug/, their fic section is non-existent
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>>5714019
Yeah, I was a little shaky about the dream sequence opening, myself. What you see there is actually toned down from my initial plan, into something that I think I can pay off later. Also, I don't plan to go into a full on sex scene, but it'll get pretty heavy, before the end.
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This has been a day of sin, and all must be held to account. Speak, ye who have held their silence.
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>>5714094
moon, was that you this morning? please don't delete your stuff if it was...
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>>5714104
If god was real he would've smote my unholy ass years ago.
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>>5713890
Lola panties.
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>>5714137
We've already had confessions today father, please take the rest you deserve. Even a man of God must rest.
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Tell Luna your favorite song

anime edition
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>>5714186
Ye
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>>5714193
I also think incest is gross as well
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http://protect-the-loud-house.tumblr.com/
Why do you look at literal child porn of Lincoln having sex with his sisters? Look at American law, it is ILLEGAL
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>>5714094
>>5714246
Ayy, sorry to repeat from last thread, but that was a hell of a fic back there. You right an excellent hedonist Lincoln!

Also, if you happen to talk to your to-be partner at some point today, could you let him know I asked after him?
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>>5714239

>that stain

did she pee herself?
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>>5714259
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>>5714247
I knew it. Thanks.
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>>5714127
Alright, then. so how about we give it another shot:

Content creators who are fairly new/unfamiliar but on whom you see potential
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>>5714183
Favorite anime song? Absolutely Maigonu to Ame no Beat.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OasBTTMxa_U

Asian Kung Fu Generation are gods.
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>>5714223
Don't, they get their due praise when they release their fics/pics

No need to be a shitbag and bring unnecessary drama when it's unwarranted
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>>5714259
Try and stop me, law man
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>>5714239
Snuggle with her and grind my clothed, erect penis against her clothed bottom, just to see how she reacts.
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>>5714227
>U2
Get outta here.
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>>5714239
Hug her right in the pussy.
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>>5714259
We are degenerates here.
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>>5714259
Actually, it's not illegal because they're fictional characters.

For a drawing to be deemed illegal, all of your peers must all simultaneously agree that said drawing has absolutely no artistic value or does not make a statement.

Everyone who has been incriminated for 2D images had the 2D tacked on as a minor infraction to the more serious crime of having lewd pictures of real children.

Learn US law.
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>>5714279
Burgerboy, that kid is going places.

Voiceanon, if he fucking posted shit than once a week.
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>>5714296
Seriously. You a af
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>>5714336
I meant -----You a fan?
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>>5714260
Sorry, must've missed it. Thanks a ton Wright!

As for MiC, do you mean you want to collab or chat with him? Either way, I can get a hold of him and shoot him over here, whenever he gets free!
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>>5713890
Requesting These male versions (Rule 63 or Genderbend)

of Lynn, Leni And Luan (The Loud House)


as if they were players of the 3 Canadian teams of the MLS (Major League Soccer)


Montreal Impact Toronto FC and Vancouver Whitecaps FC

http://cruelladevil84.deviantart.com/art/Lance-Crowd-620075292


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vancouver_Whitecaps_FC


http://cruelladevil84.deviantart.com/art/Lenny-Crowd-620074733


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Toronto_FC
http://cruelladevil84.deviantart.com/art/Lamar-Crowd-620075106
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Montreal_Impact
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>>5714246
>God forbid I want to make sure I'm at least somewhat trying to improve
you were getting snarky
knock that shit off around people who like you
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Lauvernie, he's got potential. GangLoud is both ambitious and well-written, so I gotta give props to him.
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>>5714352
You're welcome! I'd like to chat, thanks in advance for getting us in touch!

Also, write* I'm butchering the English language today, sorry for that.
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>>5714183
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pffz3UqKnWU
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>>5714372
They should look cool.
On the other hand----those male Louds look----not right. As in the male Leni screams-----faggot-----as soon as you see him. The male Luan screams----beat the shit out of him----as soon as you see HIM.
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>>5714279
>>5714394
Fuck, meant to be in reply to this. I always screw up like this.
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>>5714259
>>5714323
>blog even states the definition of what makes 2D illegal
>it's own defition shoots the whole argument in the foot because porn, no matter how poorly drawn, always falls under the definition that protects it from criminal infraction

Muh sides
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>>5714183
Anime edition? Then it has to be Great Days, the new opening for DiU. It's so damn catchy.
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>>5714183
Blues Brothers is my favorite anime
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=79vCiXg3njY
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>>5714183
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aw3fN3OPk3A
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>>5714279
Burgerboy, DisenfranchisedVoice, Lauvernie, JosephStar-anon (hope I got that right) and Voiceanon. They're likely the Fourth Wave, if you will, and I'm looking forward to what they plan to bring to us in the future!
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>>5714422
Have you seen Great Chase yet?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fjRUTwcxLI0
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>>5714388
Jesus anon, chill out. A little but of snark smug never killed no one.

>>5714399
's all good, he should be here soon!
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Someone summon me?
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>>5714394
I like you joseph guy but expect to get shit from shitposters as soon as you come out with a really successful fic
just warning you
it not about your writing its about your presence especially with how nice you are youll be an easy target
just a heads up fa m good luck out there
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What kind of fucking bullshit is this?
How in the fuck is pic related loli/shota, literally the eldest of the sisters? How the fuck is pic related worth banning for three fucking days?
>>5713830
Anyway, rant aside, it's sweet, and I look forward to it.
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Threadly reminder: Xwedodah is the sacred union of incestuous marriage in the ancient Persian religion of Zoroastrianism.

"In Zoroastrian Middle Persian (Pahlavi) texts, the term xwēdōdah (Av. xᵛaētuuadaθa) is said to refer to marital unions of father and daughter, mother and son, or brother and sister (next-of-kin or close-kin marriage, nuclear family incest), and to be one of the most pious actions possible. The models for these unions were found in the Zoroastrian cosmogony. The meaning and function of the Avestan term is not clear from the contexts.

To what extent xwēdōdah was practiced in Sasanian Iran and before, especially outside the royal and noble families (“dynastic incest”) and, perhaps, the clergy, and whether practices ascribed to them can be assumed to be characteristic of the general population is not clear (see, e.g., Mitterauer, pp. 235-36). Evidence from Dura Europos, however, combined with that of the Jewish and Christian sources citing actual cases under the Sasanians, strengthen the evidence of the Zoroastrian texts. In the post-Sasanian Zoroastrian literature, xwēdōdah is said to refer to marriages between cousins, which have always been relatively common (see Polak, I, pp. 200-1; Darmesteter, 1891, p. 367; Givens and Hirschman; Herrenschmidt, 1994; Bittles et al., p. 75). When Anquetil Duperron visited the Parsis in the mid-18th century, he was told the term referred to marriage with cousins (see below), and, according to James Darmesteter (1891, pp. 366-68), it was rare for a Parsi to marry out of the family; incestuous marriage (a marriage made in heaven) was both practical and normal."
http://www.iranicaonline.org/articles/marriage-next-of-kin
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>>5714476
The mods are retarded faggots, more at 11.
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>>5714467
Thanks, Moon!

>>5714469
Ayy, how's it going? I'd like to offer you some critiques if there's a particular work you were concerned about, though I know I'm in no position to cast judgement on anyone else's work.
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>>5714469
Get out of here. You belong in a garbage can
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>>5714465
I have, but what's the significance of having the video reversed?
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>>5714467
excuse me for trying to help you out
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>>5714137
By choice, this general, it's content creators and most importantly the show itself are all i've got and care about in life, whatever it's lifespan may be.

As to why that is, i live in a small town in a 2nd world country that can't possibly offer me anything good.
I maybe play some video games once in while but my enjoyment in them is in a permanent state of near death.

What i hate the most is the people that i see sometimes here that want to see this general go up in flames.
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>>5714460
>Burgerboy
Gee. Thanks Anon.
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>>5714510
anon, if you want me to write more green about you getting gangbanged by the content creators you 'hate', all you have to do is ask.

>>5714506
I'm always accepting critiques. Is there something you wanted to tell me or are you asking me to give you some fics to go over?
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Lori has gone to Freddy's

http://lueduartvartworks.deviantart.com/art/Lori-s-Nights-at-Freddy-s-R-18-PREV-638693766
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>>5714501
yeah can you not spam this every thread
thanks
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>>5714259

http://www.firstamendmentcenter.org/pornography-obscenity

>The PROTECT Act, which was signed into law in April 2003, amended child- pornography laws in several ways. First, it created a new definition of child pornography to include pornographic pictures of children that are “virtually indistinguishable” from actual children. It also requires defendants to prove that the images they possess or distribute were not made with and do not depict actual children.
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>>5714475
Thanks for the concern. Don't worry, I'll probably never write anything really popular.

While I'm still shilling people, I'll second that Burgerboy recommendation and also - The Lad is more popular than the other guys I've mentioned, but he's probably been the biggest influence on my writing style, so I'd like to thank him too.
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>>5714521
It has to do with the final fight and an ability called Bites the Dust.
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Dear Mr. Loud, may I please have your permission to marry your daughter Luna? I love her and I will take good care of her.
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>>5714558
I was just letting people know that incest was once considered holy, so it makes no sense to consider it disgusting now
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While I'm here, I pastebinned that gay fic and intend to potentially expand on it, because it was initially going to be a 'haha funny prank' Where Lincoln robs those boys after where I left off, but I pussied out.

Anyone have any good names? For now I'm simply calling it Gay. Because it's gay. Really gay. I swear I'm not gay, o-okay?

As always criticism is greatly appreciated.

http://pastebin.com/qsLVju6a
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>>5714557
I like the art and animation, but... why Lori? And why R18+? Are the bots gonna fuck her or something?
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>>5714557
WTF I hate Lu now?
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>>5714394
>>5714460
Gee, guys. I don't know what to say. Feels nice to know that people have faith on you.

Thanks a lot!
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>>5714581
The Egyptians considered it Ok----mainly for the Pharaohs, because of Osiris and Isis. That was two thousand years ago, though
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>>5714571
Thank you, especially for keeping your reply low on spoilers.
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>>5714562
>Hey dude, can you prove that you didn't use a real kid to draw this?
>"Yeah mate, got a pen and some paper?"
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>>5714582
Village Bicycle
Loud Riding
Bicycle Race
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>>5714259
How are you any better? She ships harem marco.
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>>5714553
I was jut curious if you had anything you wanted an opinion on. I apologize if I was too presumptuous, but there was only one person I could think of whose stuff I've constantly seen described the way that was mentioned in the last thread, and I'd like to help out if my presumption was correct. If I'm wrong with all of this, though, please feel free to disregard all this rambling.
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Reminder Leni was in the pool every single time there was a "fecal incident"
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>>5714597
No. Just showing a cool thing I found---sorry. I'm still a Lunafag.
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>>5714543
Ronnie x Lucy fic when Burgerboy?
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Did doodleanon get banned or did they just leave us forever?
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>>5714582
Oh god the fact that someone besides me potentially browses this general and /mgg/ fills me with so much job.

Or maybe im just looking too deep into your picture of choice.
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>>5714634
just* ssssssssssss
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>>5714646
Doodle left I believe, I'm certain they moved to the Star Vs threads. Much less hostile there, I'm sure.
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>>5714615
What difference does the time period make? Sure, we know today that inbred children can be born with defects, but the answer to that is don't procreate in an incestuous relationship. Besides that one issue, there is no moral argument against incest.
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>>5714644
Fucking never.
Never ever.
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>>5714646
Doodleanon is a cancerous piece of shit who deserves to be burnt at the stake for his so called "art". Good riddance
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>>5714576
only if you can beat me in combat
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>>5714644
Seconding
>>5714646
Switched over to Star Vs fandom.
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>>5714460
Joseph-anon is shorter, but call me whatever you want.
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>>5714676
Whoever drew this, please do society a favor and never draw again. Thank you
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>>5714634
wait wait wait. Did you think I was the guy saying he was gonna delete all his stuff earlier today? Because that wasn't me, and I wouldnt do that. If anything I'd keep it up out of spite.
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>>5714670
Ok. Just saying incest was accepted two thousand years ago-----does not mean it should not be reaccepted today.
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>>5714646
Left after getting hate and part of his dox posted
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>>5714672
Wew man

Breaking my heart over here
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>That episode where Chantelle fell in love with all five of Liberty's older brothers
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>>5714619
No problem anon. Hope you're enjoying the Part 4 anime
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>>5714699
I laugh everytime I see that pic of Leni with that rifle on top of a building. She looks so boss.
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>>5714716
>>5714677
>>5714674
>>5714669
>go to /co
>it's true

Wow. Gay.

They were actually starting to improve, too.
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>>5714634
Also if you'd like to give feedback, I'd love some notes on What You Wish For.
http://pastebin.com/aE5k2pCg
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>>5714279
Epikyur, disenfranchisedvoice, skull panda
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>>5714267
Excitment.

Not that I know anything about why little girls get wet when excited.
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>>5714696
go back to writing your shitty fics scott
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>>5714696
I actually like it. I get that it's supposed to be Senator Armstrong, but it kinda reminds me of pic related.
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>>5714409
ok
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>>5714476
Hey, thanks man. And yeah, fuck the mods.
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>>5713350
I want to fuck that.
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>>5714630
Poly ships apparently aren't problematic.

You can have 100 girls to fuck all day long, but if one of them is 17 you are pure evil.
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Glorious Luna----to prove I'm still a Lunafag:

http://lueduartvartworks.deviantart.com/art/Luna-Loud-637444903
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>>5714751
Oh Toontown, that brings back so many memories. Good times
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>>5714501
Threadly reminder: Zoroastrianism is a heathen religion, and incest should only be practiced among cousins, as stated in the Qu'oran

Surah 4 verse 23
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>>5714751
Holy shit, I used to play this game all the time.
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>>5714536
No, I appreciate ya for looking out for me famalam.
I just want criticism to improve. You're good.
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>>5714699
Err, yeah, so it appears I did jump to conclusions, and I apologize for that. 'Mechanically sound' is a phrase I saw often that people used to describe your work, but it looks like I made the assumption that yours was the only one. I'll try to be more considerate, sorry for that.

>>5714731
Ayy, I'll respond to this separately, if that's alright?
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>>5714751
I still remember my old Black Cat main. Silly Whistlebumble, you will not be forgotten
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>>5710890
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>>5714696

What seems to be the problem?
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>>5714723
I am, actually. Okuyasa is my favortie Jobro.

>>5714730
I'm sad too, but the CC hate gets fucking stupid sometimes here. Some people would prefer to greener glades to it.
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>>5714787
Sorry to say this (and sorry if this is a mod post):

But Mohammed was a child-diddler. He married Aisha (his most famous wife) at age nine. He desired her at that age.

Just had to answer this post. Sorry but I am NOT a Muzzie.
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>>5714777
Man, there should be more harem/poly/threesome fics. I get why people don't do it, because it gets exponentially more difficult to write love scenes the more people get involved, but when you pull it off well it's really great. Sleeping Booty is one of my favorite lewds.
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>>5714787
Do you need to get crusaded again?
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wabbit
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>>5714831
I meant also that he was in his fifties and she was nine.
Imagine.
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>>5714807
cute
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>>5714812
>the CC hate gets fucking stupid sometimes here. Some people would prefer to greener glades to it.

I fail to see why people come to 4chan when they can't handle the banter. There are two things you can do. First, you can sperg the fuck out and leave, or second you can join in on the fun and shitpost back at the shitposters without going fully autistic and making it clear you're just having a good time.
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>>5711202
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>>5714798
It's all good man, no need to apologize. I do get 'mechanically sound' a lot, which I don't mind. I've been writing for years, I'd hope I'd be mechanically sound by now.

and yeah, you can reply separately if you want but I posted both replies, so however you want to do it is fine.
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>>5714857
Good point.
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>>5714722
>That episode where Chantelle forced Liberty into the utility closet and had her way with her
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>>5714882
KEK
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Let's have some real criticism hours since it seems a few people are going to do it.
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So, haven't had one of these in a tick. What are you:

>WATCHIN'

>PLAYIN'

>LISTENIN'

>WRITIN'

>DRAWIN'

>WHATEVERIN'

>And who's your favorite sister?
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>>5714860
Louise is the second worst Belcher, only better than Gene

Bob's #1
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>>5714677
>>5714730

Maybe he'll be back when the hiatus is over? I guy (or girl or whatever doodleanon is) is allowed to draw fanart for more than one show you know.
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>>5714878
Clearly Doodleanon can since they're still on 4chan, just at /co/ now. Others can too, they just don't like getting crucified every time they post content they made for fun.
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>>5714731
Is English not your first language?
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>>5714882
BEAUTIFUL
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>>5714860
Where's that picture of Louise asking Lincoln if his family is like the Duggars?
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>>5714882
Leni can taste the unfashionable on your skin.

She knows if you wore white after Labor day, or the last time you wore socks with sandals.
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>>5714934
Louise is the most fuckable Belcher though.
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>>5714932
It's not 11PM yet anon, we always do these 11 PM EST.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN'
Phineas and Ferb binge
Red Dwarf
South Park
>PLAYIN'
Forza Horizon 3
>LISTENIN'
Gorillaz, to get hyped for the new album
>WRITIN'
Nout
>DRAWIN'
See above
>WHATEVERIN'
Fapping
>And who's your favorite sister?
Lynn
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>>5714943
That's basic banter though. You yourself should be your own worst critic, and moving fandoms because you can't handle banter is just retarded.
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>>5713747
FUCK DAVE THAT FUCKING SACK OF SHIT
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>>5714183
Cruel angel's thesis
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>>5714978
Hey, it's 11 PM somewhere.
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>>5714731
>>5714890
The mood throughout the fic was dark without being edgy or melodramatic, and that really services the ending and beginning well. I'll admit that I didn't see Lucy's heel turn coming until it arrived right near the end, and that's because her characterization prior to that point was handled very well, I think!

If I had to say one thing was handled a bit oddly, it was the matter with the doctor, but I know you've heard about that and explained why it panned out that way before.

The ending was handled in a believable way, which can be a challenge when you're dealing with a 'it was all a dream' scenario, and that's a credit to your skill, I think. It definitely ranks among my favorite Lori stories, and all of the other characters (concerned Luna and Lola, antagonistic-turned-tragic Carol and Bobby, and of course Lincoln) shined besides!
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>>5714932
Lana shouted 'Sic Semper Tyrannis' as soon as she leapt on the stage after shooting Lincoln. He-heh.
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>>5715005
my nigga
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>>5714945
Que?
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>>5714980
Difference between shitpost banter and doxing.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN
this thread
>PLAYIN
nothing
>LISTENIN
batta chase
>WRITING
nope
>DRAWIN
something for a write fag and colorin this sketch i did
>WHATEVERIN
watchin football right now

Lori is my fav man
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN'
This thread, tg, and jp
>PLAYIN'
Nothin atm
>LISTENIN'
https://youtu.be/nI0lEpK6onE
>WRITIN'
Another dumb yan fic of mysterious background QTs
>DRAWIN'
NOTHIN'
>WHATEVERIN'
Got some dank ass cookies from 711
>FAVORITE SISTERIN'
Luan probably. Though Lucy is pretty nice too.
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>>5714980
Dude, there's banter and then just getting irrationally shat on whenever you show yourself. It's real easy to call someone else a pussy when you've never faced the same vitriol they have.
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>Lunch time at Royal Woods High
>As usual Loki was sitting with his girlfriend Roberta and younger brother Loni, along with a few other friends.
>And as usual, they were there too.
>Sitting at the table behind Loni, some twisted around and others leaning on the table on their elbows.
>Loni's fan girls who tried to follow him everywhere
>That was just a fraction of them that got to sit near him though.
>Loki found himself looking at them from time to time.
>Might as well have hearts in their eyes
>Then he looked at Loni, who'd cut his hotdog in half and was using his forks to move them like they were feet.
>"Hey Loni"
>Loni looks up from his dogfeet and smiles at his older brother
>"Just say hi to them" Loki says gesturing to the Loni club.
>The younger brother turns and all of his fans simultaneously gasp as he looks at them.
>"Hi!" Loni says with a wave
>All sixteen of them swoon and faint at once, creating a circle around their table.
>Loni turns back around and gets back to playing with his food as Loki smiles in amusement
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>>5714912
>WATCHIN
Some stream highlights

>WRITIN
Gonna write either Rump or 4loko. I dunno.

>WHATEVERIN'
I found out I have the next two days off. That's hype.

>Favorite sister
Luna, no doubt.
Freckle punk a cute.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN'
Not much. Lurking in this thread, I guess.
>PLAYIN'
Terraria.
>LISTENIN'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLs09J_x6-c&
>WRITIN'
Uhh... Drifting in and out of a fic in progress.
>DRAWIN'
I can't draw.
>WHATEVERIN'
I love the rain.
>And who's your favorite sister?
Take a wild guess, buddy.
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>>5714932
>>WATCHIN'
Ol' west simulator.

>>PLAYIN'
Outlast 2 Demo. Spoopy.

>>LISTENIN'
https://youtu.be/uirF6FDKxSU

>>WRITIN'
Not even reading much.

>>DRAWIN'
I should.

>>WHATEVERIN'
I want to get wasted but I'm short on cash. Kill me please.

>>And who's your favorite sister?
Loud. Lola Loud.
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>>5714932
>watchin
thread
>playin
with boogers
>listenin
Venetian Snares
>writin
outline for WWII fic
>drawin
can't
>whateverin
no
>fav
Lori-Leni rotation, have soft spots for Lynn but not Lynnfag
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>>5715070
Go with 4loko first. Luana is kino.
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>>5714831
There is nothing wrong with marrying women at age nine, for women are desirable at any age, and men are unable to resist their temptations and control their members towards women (except the prophet, who had control of his member so he would not lie with Aisha for three years after marriage). Incest, however, is immoral, and goes against the word of Allah.
>>5714857
We held off every one of your crusades into our land. And soon your lands will be part of our Ummah, infidel. Western culture is decadent and will never threaten Islam as it once did.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN'
Jewtube
>PLAYIN'
Nope.
>LISTENIN'
My playlist full of non mainstream 80s shit
>WRITIN'
Not right now
>DRAWIN'
I've had this opened in shoop since yesterday and I haven't done shit on it.
>WHATEVERIN'
Depressed yet again, took a nap because I was literally bored to sleep. I'm out of things to do or games to play, and the OW halloween event can't come soon enough.
>And who's your favorite sister?
Leni, of course.
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>>5715011
Thanks! Yeah, the doctor was originally supposed to provide a bit more depth for the story, but I didn't want to make this a hugely long story.
My biggest worry was that people would see Lucy's element coming a mile away, so I'm glad that doesnt seem to be the case.

And yes, the ending was another thing I stressed a bit over. But I'm glad it didn't come off as overly cliche, even though the 'none of it was real' concept is cliche as hell.
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>>5714932
>Watching
/tlhg/
>Playing
Naw
>Listening
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nN54QBFCed8
>Drawing
Never again
>Writing
Velvet Fist - Act VIII (I swear it's getting there rework edition); criticism hours
>Whatevering
Ayy
>Favorite Sister
The best sister, of course. Pic related.
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>>5714932
>Watchin'
Star vs the Forces of Evil
>Playin'
Darkest Dungeon
>Listenin'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cM0UwnZ0TQg
>Writin'
Aint a writer, though I am thinking of trying it out with a AU fic idea evolving Lynn Lincoln and Lucy, and another one that involves Lana and Lynn
>Drawin'
Doing sketches, mostly battle-scarred Lucy shit and right now trying to do Borded Lynn
>Whateverin
Trying out recording shit and putting it on youtube. Is fun to do I found out
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN
nothin
>PLAYIN
nothin
>LISTENIN
blues brothers
>WRITING
shitposts
>DRAWIN
nothin
>WHATEVERIN
being fucking worthless
>>
>>5714819

>Lily is taller than Lisa
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>>5715112
once a hack, always a hack
>>
>>5714183
https://youtu.be/9vx69Pe7Ncs

Northern Lights and Change The World are some great classic ones too.
>>
>>5715092
I so disagree with you about Aisha, but I am not get in an argument with a Muzzie, particularly since you think men cannot control themselves from raping nine-year-old girls.
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>>5714912
If i had anything to criticize i would've done it by now but i liked pretty much everything i've read from many content creators including those who are not really talked about currently.

Or maybe, which is more likely, i'm simply not good enough to criticize someone's work, to find their mistakes and help them improve. The more inexperienced you are in something the less likely you can find mistakes in it.
Makes me sad, really wish i could help them improve, should that be the case.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN
Megas XLR
>LISTENIN
Great Days
>WRITIN
Trying to think of what I want to do next.
>WHATEVERIN
Reading /tlhg/
>Favorite Sister
Gotta be Leni.
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>>5715070
Rump in the Night please. You said butt stuff was gonna happen, right?
>>
Why can't Coop finish Get the Message? he was just banned from 4chan and not Pastebin. What's stopping him from completing it?
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>>5715168
He left, get over it anon.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN'
Mat and Patt's Shitstorm

>PLAYIN'
I might play Postal Redux later.

>WRITIN'
>DRAWIN'
The first part is ready so I'll post what I've done tonight. I hope it's good enough for the people here.

>And who's your favorite sister?
Tie between Luna and Lola.
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>>5715032
Laugh it off and realize that no one on the internet will actually go through the trouble of doing anything with that information.

>>5715038
Maybe i'm extremely desensitized to the whole situation because nothing anyone can say to me online will ever be as bad as to the real life shit i've dealt with my entire life. Even the most extreme banter here seems mild in comparison to the shit i've dealt with.
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>>5715070
Write rump, 4loko is a garbage drink
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>>5715142
I know how you feel. I am TERRIBLE at giving criticism. I'm actually part of sort of a writing circle - nothing to do with /tlhg/ - and everybody there knows that all I can say is "it's fine" "it's good" or just some little nitpicks.
>>
What do you think of Lincoln's friends?
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>>5715112
Ayy, you're welcome! I've been looking at your work a lot recently in trying to determine how best to pace the ending to VF, so thank you for indirectly helping me out in that regard!
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>>5715129
I love you too anon. Why dont you tell me some promising story ideas so I can ruin them for you?
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>>5715192
They look REALLY overexaggerated. Like, they actually look like clowns. Liam's alright, though.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN'
The thread, forced to watch the debates soon because my coworkers are dicks.

>LISTENIN'
Sabaton's newest album, fucking killer stuff

>WRITIN'
I should get back into writing, I owe to my friends and myself.

>DRAWIN'
Little sketches because I'm bored

>FAVORITE SISTER
Leni, the girl with the golden heart.
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>>5715198
>see image
>can't help but think that linc is combing lice outta her hair
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>>5715198
Strip poker. Just throwing that fic idea out of there.
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Transparent vector of this when?
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>>5715087
Maybe, maybe. I do love me some Luan/Luna.

>>5715155
Yeah, Rump is going to have some ass content.
Luna has the perfect butt for it after all.

>>5715184
But 4loko is paying me the bi-
I mean, yuri content!
But you may have your wish, seems more want Rump than some Loko.
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>>5715192
Gingers
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>>5715192
they look like they need to be filtered
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>>5715234
He probably is sniffing a lock of it occasionally though.
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>>5715198
Lincoln butchering Luan only for Lynn to appear and the three of them to engage in a wild orgy
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>>5714912
If we are on criticism hours, does anyone have anything to say about my first two fics? I'm going to try and finish a third one later tonight if I get the motivation.

http://pastebin.com/bzMjJycW
http://pastebin.com/3BEiQwL1
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>>5715133
Calling me a Muzzie and insulting my beliefs is very bigoted and hateful of you. I expected better. But do not worry. Soon your lands will embrace Islam, and you will see the light..
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you faggots are so annoying
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>>5715304
we love you to, doodle"""""""""""""""""""guy"""""""""""""""""
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>>5715304
We're a bunch of annoying fags, but we're probably the only friends each other has.
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>>5715300
And threatening to overrun my lands with your religion only proves that Islam is not a "religion of peace."
Convert or face the sword, like the hadiths and Quran says, right?
Never.
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Which is the character limit per post in this board?
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>>5714807
that's cute af
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>>5715300
>>5715092
>>5714787
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>>5715338
2k
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>>5715348
Yes, he is.
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>>5715298
These are fantastic. Kinda funny, kinda arousing. Especially for your first two stories- you've got potential. What's your name, guy?
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>>5715379
Ballio is what I've decided to be known as.
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>>5715112
Personally i saw Lucy's signs.
However my mind kept going towards "something tells me that's a red herring" because how you handles the actual red herring signs pointing towards Carol and that helped with the ending's impact.
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>>5715428
I'll keep the name in mind.
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>>5714740
Go on. Seriously, go on.
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>>5715298
Ayy, you've got quite the gift for visualization, something I'm glad we're seeing more of now! Also, very good on keeping the tense consistent, that seems to get the better of a lot of writers on their first attempts. Lincoln's enthusiasm is almost tangible, and the scenarios he thinks up are true to that enthusiasm. On a constructive note, the barrage of modifiers can be a bit to chew through at times, but they don't take away from the experience at all.

I'll have to work through New Mama, but I'm expecting good things from it!
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>>5715335
Of course not. Soon you will see how your culture is killing itself with decadence, and realize the truth of the Quran. Just look at how women's rights have destroyed your men.
Islam puts peace above all else, and when you realize your errors we will gladly give you our peace.
>>5715348
I do not follow.
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>>5714032
>>5714041
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>>5715092

Islam is a lower IQ creed for Dindus and Durkas. Like Christianity actually.

And here we see a Durka with delusions of grandeur.

By the way, there are no grounds to believe in any "god."
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>>5715483
Nice
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>>5715428
Next time Pheebs comes around, you should ask him for an ohayou.
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>>5714239
>that nervous piss stain

HNNNNNGGG

I LOVE YOU LANA
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Color for whoever requested this from last thread
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>>5715258
Lori is the cutest Lincoln
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>>5715476
There's women's rights that have been perverted and not treating women like animals, like Muslims do.
No way.
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>>5714183
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4w8qEmqUBac

The DR anime adaptation was bad but the ED was god tier
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>>5715194
No problem bud, I'm glad to help however I can.
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>>5714239

Kiss her on the cheek and tell her to come back ten years later and please still have a crush on me then.
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>>5715298
Oh i read that Lucy one yesterday was it? Or two days ago?
I definitely liked it, it was cute. Haven't read the hot glue one but that's because hot glue ain't really my thing
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>>5715298
Hey, that Lucy one was absolutely adorable man. Looking forward to seeing more from you!

Didn't read the lewd one because that's more of something I need to be in the mood for, but I have no doubt it's excellent as well!
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>>5715469
Thank you; I hope you enjoy New Mama as well, it's double the length of my other fic I believe.
You're right about the modifiers too. I'm just trying to pack in as much content as I can due to the overall shortness of my fics.

>>5715555
I forget when I posted it myself, but I don't blame you for not giving the other a try. Both of my fics have been requests for fetishes of a more niche variety, hot glue and impregnation.
I was surprised at just how cute the Lucy one turned out myself. Much less lewd than what was originally planned.
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>WF handling the criticism hours solo
Talk about irony. Stay strong, bro
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>>5714183
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xrjUj-FRorY
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>we live in a reality where 2D does not exist and cannot exist in our universe
>the Louds will never be real
>we will all eventually die, never to know what it would be like to embrace them
>to love them
>to care for them
>to grow old with them
>to see your children you made with them and their grand children
Maybe if there is an afterlife I can simulate being able to exist in the Loud universe
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>>5715625
>solo
Not sure what you mean by that, he's definitely doing a much better job than me, of course, but i'm trying too.
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>>5714239
Tell her to shave her 'stache.
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Well hell, I guess I'll bite the bullet and ask for some criticism of my stuff.

Here's a Leni x Bobby lewd thing: http://pastebin.com/aP16ent2

Here's a comfy thing with Luan and Luna: http://pastebin.com/F16eYF7x
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>>5714907
>WATCHIN'
Thread
>LISTENIN'
http://youtu.be/j0naRFSK2hQ (Yes, I am aware that I'm edgy as hell.)
>WRITIN'
Nothing, but have a bunch of projects including Lacy Story
>DRAWIN'
We'll see.
>WHATEVERIN'
Chillin' I guess. Look forward to the debacle of a debate tonight. $20s says Hillary will say something about Trump grabbing pussy.
>And who's your favorite sister?
Luna.
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>>5715678
THEY ARE BLUSH MARKs


DO YAUO NOT UNDERTSAND

ARTISTYIC LIBERTIES
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6LEVhxjtds
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>>5715467
Have you ever played with little girls? They can't control their bladders well and end up wetting themselves when getting excited.

Or that's what I've heard, yeah.
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>>5715698
Are you kidding we?

Meant to reply to >>5714932 don't know how that happened. Sorry.
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>>5714239
ask them if they are an undercover cop
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I'm actually curious, what artistd snd writers do people always look forward to updating or posting new work?
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>>5715600
Ayy, I'm back! You've got a really strong grasp on Lucy's character, and the way you envision her feelings is some of my favorite descriptive writing I've seen yet! The modifiers even out a bit here, wish is a good sign, and the lewd section is handled with about as much love as can be reasonably expected (plus I'm biased toward vanilla romance, so you got me good there). A very comfy and feels-y fic that stands under its own power for the relative length.

>>5715625
This anon >>5715667 is right, I'm not the only one. Besides, I know what you're referring to, and I've accepted my fate.

>>5715685
I'll hit these up momentarily!
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>>5715304
You're not even that good drawing abuse and you want us to cringe at it, I just cringe at your fucking artstyle sometimes because it cannot be possible for a human being to be this garbage doing something.

Poor Tumblrina, go back to your shitty hugbox at /sveg/ if you think we're that annoying. Why still browsing this place if you think it's that bad? You cannot even realise that you're on /trash/ of all places, searching moral and equity like all your stupid millennial generation, jerking each others off on /co/.

Or even better, take a sip of this, you'll feel better soon, even at peace with yourself. Just, begone.
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>>5715752
>wish
which*
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>>5715644
There is a theory-----there is a universe somewhere for everything that man has everything that man has thought of/dreamed of----so why not for what you say?
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>>5715685
I just started your Leni/Bobby thing, and I can already tell you have trouble with punctuation. You overuse commas when you should learn where to apply things like colons, semicolons, or even just plain old periods.
Check out this infographic. I find it very useful.
http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon
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>>5715698
Is that woman on Deviant Art?
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>>5715758
Holy autism, Batman!
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>>5715772
Like Chalkzone?
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>>5715520
thanks
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>>5715748
myself
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>>5715801
Yeah
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>>5715783

I can see it. The sentence that starts with "But" is especially rough. I'll work on that stuff in the future.
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>>5715644
She may never be real in this life, but I strive to make myself the sort of man who would be worthy of her. Should I ever find her in a mortal guise, then my soul will know peace, and if not, then I lived a life worthy of her.
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>>5715772
He is becoming self aware, we need to dispose of him
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>>5715758
Shit, DoodleAnon. You gotta leave before this anon right here gets a coronary
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Opening music for a live-action Loud House show?
Maybe Love Runs Out by OneRepublic?
(Will never happen but one can only dream---they did it somewhat for FOP).
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>>5715796
ikr this place will be the future for shitty pastas across all 4chan.
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>>5714932
>WATCHIN'
Dragon ball super
>>PLAYIN'
Bioshock
>>LISTENIN'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y-C3T83mUpc
>>WRITIN'
can't write
>>DRAWIN'
can't draw
>>WHATEVERIN'
Fapping

Lucy
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>>5715828
Me or him?
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>>5714932
W>>5714932
>>WATCHIN'
Some five nights at freddie's videos
>>PLAYIN
FNAF
>>LISTENIN'
Ben Folds
>>WRITIN
Lincolns Tiring Day'
>>DRAWIN'
I don't draw
>>WHATEVERIN'
Pretty fused from my alcholic birthday stupor so the finale might be tommorw
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>>5715685
That Luan/Luna fic was great Jojo. The sweetness between the two was adorable; you managed to capture a loving sibling relationship perfectly.
I also enjoyed the overall simplicity of the premise too. It really felt like I could be reading something straight from the show itself.

The overall grammar though is a bit patchy, though. Your dialog though is a strong spot for you, keep at it.

>>5715752
Thanks man, Lucy and Lincoln are my favorite Louds so I wanted to do them justice, you know?
Thinking of the analogies for Lucy's confession was my favorite part. Was fun trying to get them spooky enough for her character.

>>5715758
That's not Doodleanon I hope you know. You wrote all that over someone who really wasn't even pretending to be them.
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>>5715879
I think that I'm getting lazy on the punctuation just because it's a greentext and not prose. Any specific issues with the punctuation I should correct? I already got called out for using too many commas.
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>>5715698
What if you could be with your waifu, but only to the extend of Sic Transit Gloria?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOHg1rKzWuE
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>>5715812
At some point in the past I thought of something similar. Like an universe where all artistic works of illustration resides. From sticks and sketches to pieces like the Vitruvian Man and Gioconda. Think of something out of Dali's mind.
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reposting from ded hours
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Not even trying to start shit or meme or circle jerk, but are we the harashest general to CCs or is there a worse one out there? Only asking because people always refer to other generals like /sveg/ as a hugbox.
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>>5715879
I like to write cringe for the (You)s. Just lmao-ing a little bit.
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>>5715923
One of my new favourites
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>>5715923
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>>5715298
>>5715428
Well damn, Ballio, add yourself to that list of up and comers with potential. I'm really looking forward to seeing a lot more of your work! Godspeed, dude.
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If we're doing criticism, I'd be down for some for...well, any of my fics really.

Milkshaken I know has some problems but that's due to me changing what the fic was very suddenly and on a whim.

http://pastebin.com/u/Moondaffodil
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>>5715929
We're up there, but it seems like everyone who couldn't take it has been weeded out already, everyone getting meme'd on now is old guard
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>>5715931
Good effort, take it my friend it's all yours
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>>5715929
/sveg/ just doesn't have any regular CCs.
/sug/ is pretty rough on CCs too.
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>>5715906
>ywn have a relatively negative experience losing your virginity to Luna
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>>5715864
Do people actually play FNAF? Outside of Lets Players that is.
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>>5715975
Ten year olds do. I'm not even joking.
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>>5715929
Not at all.

Keep in mind that we probably have the most CCs while others barely have any. And most of the stuff here that look like harassing are shitposts and falseflaggers and we all know that.

I think the general that's simply the worst with their CCs, in any meaning of the word, is /sug/, which are also most of the falseflaggers here.
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>>5715929
>people always refer to other generals like /sveg/ as a hugbox.
Maybe because it is, indeed, a hugbox?
Trust me, people like us will never fit in on a place like that.
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Go ask her to dance with you, anon. She looks awfully lonely.
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>>5715975
Yeah I do. It actually really freaks me out. I haven;t felt this scared since the first time I played Silent Hill 2
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>>5715963
>>5715995
>/sug/
What the fuck is their problem?
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>>5715996
How is it a hugbox?

t. /sveg/ regular asking
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>>5715999
But Ronnie Anne, Leni's surrounded by a bunch of people! She probably doesn't even know I exist...
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>>5715999
>Touching a spic
Ew
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>>5715999
Nah

But do you know where's the cookie cute at?
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>>5715037
>Luan and Lucy
you are my man.
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>>5715917
Cool thought. With melted watches.
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>>5715999
Why do that, rather take her away and go and play video games desu

sounds way better
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>>5715999
Nah i'm good
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>>5715975
As incredible as it sounds, yes.

Hell, even this Scott Jewtton is still lurking with the franchise with the new one, idek if it's about the original argument of the first three games anymore.
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>>5715947
Ayy, I'll try to hit you up shortly, Moon, right after I finish up with Jospeh's stuff. You've heard me on DD before, but are you looking for input on Milkshaken or anything else in particular?
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>>5715942
Jesus fucking christ i nearly destroying my computer i was thrashing on the floor laughing so hard at this. Have a (you) for the fun!
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>>5715999
Hey babe, nice trips
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>>5716031
>not touching spic
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>>5716056
Joseph*
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>>5716074
Fred has seen some shit
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>>5716068
Lincoln does; take it up with the Lincster.
Must be deluded?
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>>5716017
Wasn't he a gay?
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>>5716056
Hmmm, how about a bit of a change of pace and look up on Rump in the Night? That's probably the fic I've put the second most effort into since DD, and would like to hear ya thoughts on how it is so far.

Either that, or something more complete like Underhanded Mexitactics or We're a Family would be fine too!
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>>5716015
Oversensitive to anything - they're part of a fandom that drove someone to suicide because they've drawn a fat chick skinny, butthurt because of ratings, among other things.
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>>5716101
Alright! I'll be with you as soon as I can.
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For Lunafags:
Oh. Dear. God.
http://t03.deviantart.net/jRgPflqAGDRawScUWgkQ_R-1Zrg=/fit-in/700x350/filters:fixed_height%28100,100%29:origin%28%29/pre06/9e88/th/pre/i/2016/161/a/b/luna_in_her_swimwear_by_mcaleah-da5pkjz.jpg
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Do you think Lori likes to get spanked?
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>>5715758
Okay, that's a bit extreme
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>>5715716
Tell me more.
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Someone draw them giving a double titfuck or I'm blowing up this entire thread.
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>Lane's attempts at escape only led to him being cornered in one of the few spots a teacher couldn't save him.
>The boys bathroom
>The comedian freshman had been chased in by three juniors, the leader of the group now holding him up against the wall.
>"Where do you think you're going freshie?"
>One of the lackeys was watching the door, the other was just standing behind the leader.
>"Just wanted to freshen up." Lane laughs in his face
>"You think this is some kinda joke?!"
>"Well you certainly are."
>That really upsets him and he turns to his cohort, almost catching him laughing.
>"Check the toilets, we're gonna put Mr.Comedian's head in the nastiest one."
>The henchman does as he's told and Lane actually starts to worry.
>The bathroom door opens
>"Can't come in-" The one at the door stops mid-sentence followed by running out in the hallway.
>The leader turns around again to see a tall blonde boy enter the bathroom.
>"Found it m-" The other one comes out of a stall but stops before running out the bathroom himself.
>"H-Hey Loki, s-something the matter?" The leader releases Lane Loud and turns to face Loki Loud
>"You must be literally insane."
>"W-what? W-we were just messing with this freshie?"
>Loki pushes him up against the wall like he had Lane a minute ago.
>"You mean my brother?"
>The junior literally pisses his pants
>"Come on Chet, really?" Loki says as he creates some distance between himself and the pissboy.
>"He's your brother?! I-I-I swear I didn't know! Please don't hurt me!" Chet breaks down in tears and pee
>"I don't know, what do you think Lane?"
>"Let him go, he realized his piss-take
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>>5715975
FNAF is actually a great game. It's a pure, uninterrupted jumpscare festival with no bells, whistles, or pretensions. It works, even if it can sometimes be nearly luck-based at higher difficulties. Also, I really admire how the dev has tried to switch up the formula every installment rather than just have the same thing over and over again.
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>>5716116
Ask Bobby-Boo-Boo-Bear.
He knows everything about her.
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>>5716148
spotted the underage
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>>5716116
>"Why do you even have a butt if that's ALL you're gunna do with it?"

-Lori 2016
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>>5716131
das sum good shit mang
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>>5716136
YOU'RE NOT THE BOSS OF ME
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I hate to shill myself twice in the same thread, but if it's real criticism hours, I'd love to have the first chunk of this Luaa thing looked over.

http://pastebin.com/h0rsZwiW
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>>5715999
No thanks, I'm forbidden to come within 50 yards of children under the age of 14 for legal reasons.
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>>5714239
I don't like girls who piss themselves
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>>5715854
the one who spoke the theory
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>>5716167
There's such a thing as abusing your butt, Lori, even if you were blessed with a lot of it.
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>>5716023
I've been lurking 'till the hit of the hiatus. Back then we've had a ton of writers and drawings were around the corner everyday. But it was very friendly at some point. There were no actual criticism about the writer's work or the art, always worshipping them for every content they were throwing at us through the window, like with Cell here in the early days.

Don't get me wrong, sometimes it is good to see people holding up a civilized and coherently conversation, but there were times where it went full autism and circlejerking.

I left the general when the hiatus was too oppressive for the community, and then TLH appeared in my life.

Not that this place is any better, but it is clear as light that people make an ass of themselves just for the lulz here.
>>
Question: How do you write in green text?
Cannot figure it out.
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>>5715999
I would ask Shy qt to dance instead.
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>>5716004
Don't the jumpscares get stale after a few tries? Have you discovered any easter eggs?
>>5716023
>/co/

'Nuff said
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>>5716193
Ok.
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>>5716199
You put a ">" in front of the beginning of your next paragraph.

>Like this.
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>>5716116
She doesn't just like it... she craves it.

>"What what do you mean you can't make it?"
>".....your grandpas funeral? Ugh... fine... I get it. You know how I get though if you don't..."
>"....ok. I'll talk to you later Bobby BooBooBear.."
>Lori hung up full of disdain.
>Shivers ran down her spine, all the way to her loins.
>She was looking forward to to Bobby and her usual... routine.
>She needed to get spanked, NOW.
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>>5716194
>There's such a thing as abusing your butt
Now this I want to see.
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>>5716041
Artist?
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>>5716115
>http://t03.deviantart.net/jRgPflqAGDRawScUWgkQ_R-1Zrg=/fit-in/700x350/filters:fixed_height%28100,100%29:origin%28%29/pre06/9e88/th/pre/i/2016/161/a/b/luna_in_her_swimwear_by_mcaleah-da5pkjz.jpg
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>>5716199
Why not try writing first?
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=sites&srcid=ZGVmYXVsdGRvbWFpbnxicmVhdG9uc2V3YzR1fGd4OjQ1MmU3OWFiNzAzZTk2M2M

Strunk's books is really helpful with writing. Learn to write first, kinda simplify it, than boom. You have greentext m8
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>>5716228
>Thank you.
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>>5716131
I'd fuck her
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>>5716199
>>5716228

At least tell him to go read the rules and faq.
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>>5716230
>"Lincyyy~"
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>>5715975
Don't think so but who knows.

And even the LPs of it are cringe as fuck.
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>>5716230
Fic about Lori getting Lincoln to spank her when?
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>>5716248
>I learned just now.
Thank you for the link, though.
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>>5716148
But jumpscares are the lowest form of horror
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>there are unironically people this new
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>>5716174
Oh really now.
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>>5715975

>tfw we will NEVER EVER get a Desolate Hope 2.

Bio-Beta a best derelict

>>5716305

No problem, it has lots of helpful tips on how to use chan for newfriends. If you know about scripts, try googling 4chan-x and installing it to enhance your 4chin experience.
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>>5715685
Ayy, sorry for the crazy wait!

For your BobbyxLeni fic, while >>5715783 covered a valid point, I wanted to add that you handled exploring Bobby's thought process well, including his justifying to himself a moment of weakness with Leni, who was also portrayed well. That ending begs a continuation, perhaps, but it was a strong fic!

As for 'Such Great Heights' again someon beat me to the punch >>5715879 The dialogue was excellent, and you did good work with showing the kind of effect nerves might have on Luan's sense of humor. As for construction, unless there were some outlying factors it's a bit of a leap for a 12-foot fall to break both legs, though I've been fortunate to never experience that situation so I may be in the wrong here. The follow-up scene merits that plot point, though, so it works in the end!

>>5716101
Alright, onto the next!

>>5716175
I've been waiting for this, man! I'll hit it up after I take care of Moon, if you'll be around for a bit?
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>>5716286
You're already using it like a dumbass.

Look newfag i'm done ranting about you all but for god's sake do me a favor and lurk.
The main problem people here have with newfags is that they don't lurk and they start posting like cancerous teens texting.

Please lurk.
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>>5716321
What is this? What is this? No seriously, what the fuck is this supposed to be?
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>>5716288
Normally, I would agree, but the FNAF formula is pretty unique. I mean I thought it was jump scares until I actually played it. The mood and sense of doom plays heavily in the horror factor of the game.
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>>5716359
I think its male Luan.
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>>5716353

This. I lurked for months before making my first post on 4chan. But no people come in straight from the booru or tumblr or reddit and don't even lurk for 5 damn hours.
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>>5716353
Whatever
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>criticism hours

Didn't know those were a thing.

http://pastebin.com/u/princessloud

I'm already aware that everything past Coronation of Princess Loud is shit. Also, Daddy's Little Secretary isn't on my Pastebin yet.
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>>5716230
>Lori knew that this behavior was getting out of hand but what was she going to do?
>Would people expect her to also stop eating and breathing?
>She accepted it as part of her nature long ago.
>"What's wrong, Lori?" Leni asked, fixing her nails.
>"Nothing... I just have a problem that I can't solve on my own." She replied, fidgeting in place.
>"Oh? Is there anything I can do to help?"
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>>5716346
I'll be around all night, wright.
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>>5716346
Thanks. I'm glad to hear that the problems aren't too severe. About the twelve-foot fall breaking both legs, I'm bad at judging that stuff. I was intending for the climb to be higher, and probably should have had her go farther up. Still, thanks for the compliments. Also, I hadn't even considered continuing the Bobby x Leni idea. I'm not a big sequels guy, but I'll keep that idea in the back of my mind.
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>>5716346
Wrightfag is velvet fist chapter 8 ready for release yet? I've been hotly anticipating it.
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>5716359
>It's a Don Patch baiting episode
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>>5716448
SB99 GET ON THIS
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>>5716444
Trips confirm
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>>5716315
>I think im getting worse everytime

That means you're progressing, dude!

I wish I could give anything constructive, but myself not being able to draw for shit, I can only tell you that there's a noticeable difference between your older and newest stuff.
Don't give up, Vinnie. I believe in you!
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>>5716315
You have a few wonky drawings but the quality has increased over time no doubt! Keep practicing anatomy and poses and you should be golden!
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>>5716346
pls work on We have eachother
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>>5716462
I honestly wish I was using a script for this
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>>5716315
You've always been one of my favorites, Vinnie. Sorry if it seems like you're getting less attention lately. You deserve a ton.
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>>5716239
The tag in the picture says dop, check out the Booru maybe.
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>>5716315
Your older stuff looks like you put more effort into your shapes that make up your total drawing.
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>>5714882
You did it! Thank you.
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>wrightfag doing criticism hour almost entirely by himself
All the shitposting against him makes me loss faith in human decency.
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>>5716440
You're welcome! You've come a long way since joining us, and you're getting better every time!

>>5716444
I apologize for my tardiness, anon, what I envisioned as a small rework ended up encompassing the entire chapter. I know my word is pretty much meaningless at that point, but I'm really anticipating a release within the next day or two, and I don't dare to ask for anything more than just a little bit more of your patience.

>>5716462
And it looks like KEK is intent on forcing my hand. I'll do as much as I can to make it a reality very shortly.

>>5716495
I'm looking forward to it, anon, but only when my partner's ready!

>>5716529
I'm not doing it alone, there are plenty adding in!
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>>5716315
I really dunno what to say to you. I too am no good with proportions, nor perspective. I try to make up and disguise with shitty details and brushes. /ic/ doesn't help cuz I've fucking attention span deficit and fucking can't stand staying glued in front of my PC.

Wish someone with actual knowledge shows up and be of help to you.
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>>5716409
>Lori immediately froze in place.
>Did that thought really just cross her mind?
>She's been getting spanked as long as she could remember by boyfriends.
>It was a sexual thing and she knew it all too well.
>Leni spanking her was insane!
>Right...?
>The thought would not go away as a small wet slit formed in her underwear.
>Curse this stupid fetish of hers.
>She tried to hide her shame and placed a hand on her crotch.
>Touching herself was a bad idea; she was already extremely sensitive.
>"Aaaahhhiiiiiii- I don't need anything... thanks.." Lori managed to say with a shiver.
>Leni looked positively worried.
>Her sister was in pain!
>She needed to help her!
>"Come on, Lori! Let me help You! You seem like you're hurting."
>Boy was she right about that.
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>>5716400
Boy, your lewdfics are tastier than black liquorice stuffed with pepper-marzipan. Just keep doing what you're doing.
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>>5716462
Slow down with the buzzword, newfag.
Anon asked something. I know '>le repeating digits' are a cool meme, but these trips aren't confirming shit.
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>>5716495
He looks kind of busy at the moment, but I'm sure we'll work on it again pretty soon. Maybe not tonight, but who knows.

Thanks for showing concern!
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>>5716558
I've been telling SB99 to draw more thicc Lucy
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>>5716333
YEAH

WHAT YOU GONNA DO ABOUT IT

HUH
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Anyone know where I can find the Lucy anal fingering fic?
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>>5716400
Dude, post your newer stuff to the booru. Your new stuff isn't bad, and I hate it when pastebin stuff isn't on the booru.
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>>5716315
You really are getting better with the proportions dude and i'm surprised you don't do more shading, i think it's something you're quite good at. Though i guess shading can be taxing and time consuming.
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>5716450
>It's a Gary Johnson makes a fool of himself in front of the USA episode
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>>5716544
I really just want to read what you have written. I'm willing to wait as long as it takes just so you know. I really just don't want this to be an unfinished fic.
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>>5716558
M-more spanking
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30k+ word Jojo/WH40k crossover Lynncoln fartfic WHEN
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>>5716400
So, I was reading The Winning Game, and it isn't written badly, but holy shit it went from 0 to 100 like nothing. Lynn grabbed his junk and all of a sudden they were fugging like animals. What's that all about?
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>5716623
Delet this right now
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>>5716577
Ayy, there you are! If you were interested in doing work tonight I could honestly use a break from everything going on, I'll try to wrap up after I get Moon and fee done with. If you hadn't planned on it tonight, though, we can always do something later!

>>5716633
Never you worry, man, as long as it's taken me and as bad as I am, it won't go unfinished.
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wew
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>>5716214
Not really, at least for me. I just think the atmosphere is really oppressing. I know there are jump scares, but waiting for them is the real part of the game. At least I think so.
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>>5716590
>>
lad
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>>5716741
Is that lad as in "the"?
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Artists/writers you like?
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>>5716681
I wanted to watch the debate, but we could try to throw around a few line until then. Otherwise, I'm available later later or basically whenever tomorrow.
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>>5716761
You.
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>>5716761
ALL
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>>5716782
later tonight*
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>>5716746
No he meant
"wew lad"
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>>5716761
Drawfriend
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>>5716733
I can understand the game itself being fun, but are the jumpscares a good game mechanic? Would the game function as well without them?
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>>5716761
John Webster---playwright of Shakespeare's time
Edgar Allan Poe
Nathaniel Hawthorne
R.L. Stine
Stephen King
J.K.Rowling
Robert Galbraith (J.K. Rowling)
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>>5716761
Caencer
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>>5713760
I was, earlier today.
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>>5716761
George RR Martin (stole this guys >>5716836 idea)
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>>5716761
Right now? Draven, Abuseguy, Wrightfriend.
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>>5716793
I like you too, anon.
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>>5714183
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h_SxVtf6Nk0
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>>5716547
>"A-alright, Leni."
>Was she crazy?!
>She was literally about to ask her sister to spank her.
>She wouldn't possibly go through with this.
>"I- I'm pretty stressed with Bobby not coming over..." She said quietly.
>"Oh! So you need a massage? I know how to give them!" Leni said with an innocent smile on her face.
>A lightbulb went off in Lori's head.
>With her legs fidgeting, a hand still between her legs, she said "Y- yeah... I think I do need a massage."
>"It's no problem at all!" Leni said walking over to her bed.
>"But..." Lori said, making Leni freeze in place.
>"I have a lot of stress...." Lori sighed.
>".... on my butt."
>She felt disgusted to lie and take advantage of Leni this way.
>"Really?" She asked.
>"Yep... haven't you seen those shows where people slap their backs for all that stress? It's the same thing."
>"Oh no!" Leni said, visibly worried.
>She continued, "I'll do whatever you want to help you."
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>>5716465
Thank you m8 i appreciate i really do
>>5716490
yeah i notice that too, id like think that the reason why they look wonky cause i rush through them, really should stop doin that, but thank you ill keep that in mind
>>5716508
thank you m8, i feel like i dont warrant the love, but thank you
>>5716521
I think that the reason for that is because i had to be more careful cause i was doing things in pencil, couldnt fuck up as much. I should take more effort from now on
>>5716545
i do know some people that could help, but i would feel guilty in asking and bothering them for help
>>5716604
i wish i caught it sooner with that pic, but her porportions are off, wish i caught that sooner, and honestly havent really done that much shading until i did that pic, so it helped understand shading a bit better, so thank you for that opportunity, drawing that pic helped out

Thank you guys the input really helps
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>>5716852
>Steven "too many books" King
kek
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>"Yeah babe, just give me a sec, going to use the bathroom real quick." Lori said into her phone as she walked into the Loud bathroom.
>Ever since they'd gotten that second toilet, things had gotten a lot easier for the family.
>"How you holding up, sis?" Lori said as she looked at the chained, kneeling visage of Luna.
>Her stomach was bulging with the mass of feces and urine that filled her gut, dried vomit caking her bottom lip and chin beneath her blindfolded eyes.
>She didn't speak. After all, toilets don't talk.
>Lori calmly peeled down her tight shorts and panties, and unceremoniously sat her ass on her throne, making Luna's head crane back.
>Luna's mouth was rewarded for its diligence with the stench of a freshly baked fart exiting Lori's behind.
>"Ugh, that Mexican from Jean Juan's didn't agree with me..."
>Just as the last of the fart disappated from Luna's mouth, the tip of a rancid turd met the tip of her tongue.
>Luna wasn't shy at all with using her tongue, swirling it around the tip of the hard, cracked shit as if it were the tip of a dick.
>"Unf... You really want that shit, don't you..." Lori said absently as she swiped through her phone, slowly pushing the rest of the turd into Luna's awaiting mouth.
>Luna wasted no time in savoring the succulent bowel movement, cupping the thick turd above her waiting tongue, ensuring every inch of her tastebuds received a rich serving of shit.
>The crackling sped up as Luna eased the turd out of Lori's asshole, the rancid taste now coupled with the thickness as it began to slide down Luna's throat.
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>>5716761
vinnietwoshoes, moon, and wright
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This with Lincoln when?
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>>5716836
This is so much shite taste it hurts
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>>5716889
Oh, it's this story! I can't wait for the sequel to this.
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>>5716101
Alright, here we go (and sorry for replying to this same post like three times). While I can't speak much to being drunk, Lincoln definitely behaves like my drunk friends, so you've handled that realistically! That said, he's got an insane alcohol tolerance for an 11-year old, though this is also something I can't really speak to from experience.

Linc having the upper hand on a sister is an interesting change of pace, and of course it's got interesting implications ranging from where it's stopped at the moment. Her dialogue is pretty on point, too, which can be a challenge, but you've always written an excellent Luna. The last thing I can think of is that it's a bit jarring to see Ronnie Anne referred to by her entire name at every mention, but that's more of a pet peeve than anything. I'm definitely looking forward to more, man!

>>5716414
Alright, sorry for the wait! Queuing you up now!

>>5716782
Ah, we can wait, then, I'd completely forgotten that we're only ~2 hours out from it. No worries, we can take a crack at it tomorrow if you'd like?

>>5716855
>>5716891
Ayy, thanks guys! I like all of you too, even the mischief makers!
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>>5716833
To be honest probably not, if it didn't have jump scares it would not be a good game and I would not have returned to it. But sister location is actually really good.
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>>5716907
Ok. Who are your favorite writers?
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>>5716880
How can a writer have too many books?
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>>5716873
There's no shame in asking for help, man. Do it for your art, your passion.
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>>5716889
>As soon as the turd was pinched off, Luna swallowed the turd with gusto, as if she'd practiced the motion many times before.
>This was followed by a nice load of soft-serve, the formless shit filling Luna's mouth with the delectably debaucherous taste of rotten eggs and mud.
>Luna was almost tempted to try and rub her own clitoris, before she remembered that toilets weren't allowed to masturbate.
>Beneath her, Luna's own shit began coiling under her ass and her piss began spraying in front of her spread legs.
>"Ugh... Toilet's leaking." Lori said as she fanned the air in front of her to rid herself of the stench.
>Finally, a slew of semi-liquid shit was ejected from Lori's chocolate starfish, flowing out onto Luna's eager tongue, who lapped at the liquid-spewing orifice with glee.
>As the flow finally slowed to complete liquid, before tapering off, Lori stood up, taking a few sheets of toilet paper and wiping her sore asshole with it.
>She shoved the toilet paper into Luna's waiting mouth.
>Luna herself was shaking profusely, her stomach contracting more and more frequently.
>Her head leaned down, vomiting every ounce of Lori's recent shit onto the floor beneath her, as well as some partially digested pieces from the other siblings.
>Chunky, foul smelling bile fell onto the floor beneath her, mixing with the urine in a sickening display of decadence.
>"Damn, clogged again... Oh, I almost forgot."
>Just as Luna's vomiting degenerated into dry heaves, Lori forced her head back up once more, as she pulled her tampon from her cunt, soaked to the thread with clotted blood.
>She unabashedly pushed it into Luna's mouth, forcing her to swallow it.
>With that, she left the toilet to her duties. The day was still young, and there would be many more uses for her after that...
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>>5716946
You run out of good writing. If you write too much stuff it becomes by-the-numbers.
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>>5716855
Thanks man!

>>5716932
Tomorrow sounds fine with me. Thanks for understanding.
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>>5716932
Thanks a bit Wright! I'll be honest, I may of been projecting a tad bit when writing this, I have a bit of a high alcohol tolerance, so I 'fix' that for myself by pounding them back.

May change that whole scene a bit to be a tad more realistic. Thanks for that!

Bless ya dude! Good luck in everything ya do!
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>>5716864
Please continue
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>why do you keep going through my dresser? I thought you came over for a jam session, you can play an instrument right?
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>>5716761
Karmakaze
VinnieTwoToes
Caencer

BurgerBoy
Lauverne
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>>5717025
>a bit.
How does a phone get 'bit' from 'bunch'?
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>>5717032
Yeah, I can play the kazoo
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>>5717032
>no, I can't. just want to look at you, luv.
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>>5716761
Vinnie, he drew fanart of my fic.
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>>5716864
>"Ok, Leni. First I need you to sit down on the edge of my bed."
>Leni immediately did as she was told, happy that she was going to help out her sister.
>Lori got up, shakily making her way over to Leni.
>"So now what?" Leni asked, awaiting instructions.
>"Well, the best way to sp-- give me a massage would be for me to lay down on your knees."
>"Lay down on my knees?"
>"Y-yeah! That way my stress area is exposed, giving you a chance to massage it."
>"Oh, well that makes sense."
>Leni straightened up, putting her knees together, readying them for Lori.
>Lori slowly bent over, leaning as she relaxed her stomach on Leni's knees.
>Her legs were so soft, it felt better than Bobby already.
>"I should tell you, I've never tried any of these massages before." Leni said with a bit of worry on her face.
>"It's ok, Leni. I know you'll do great." She said, inhaling with a shaky breath.
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>>5715294
So, Chandler's friends are also Lincoln's friends?
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>>5716932
I appreciate the fuck out of it, Wright. And good on ya for tackling all these crit requests!
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>>5716761
Ultrahand.
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>>5717025
>>5717048
Ayy, you're welcome! Good luck to you too!

>>5716873
Sorry I couldn't offer any input, Vinnie, I'm no artist and I never will be. I appreciate that you do what you do, though, and that you're as good to people as you are while doing it!

>>5717080
You're welcome, man, and it's no trouble; real criticism hours come by once in a blue moon!
>>
Content creators that betrayed the general and why
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>>5717078
They could easily just say that Chandler's relatively new in the school as he transfered and those two went on to befriend the "cool kid"
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Is Wrightfag /ourguy/?
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>>5716976
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>>5717118
He is indeed /ourguy/. Can confirm.
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>>5717118
Yes. And he and Abuseguy are /ourgays/.
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>>5717118
Wrightfag belongs in a garbage can for collaborating with AbuseShit
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>rob Paulson is voicing lane
A while back an anon said something about lane as Carl wheezer from that one scene. Not too good but I had a lot of fun making it.
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>>5717112
I've done it like three times
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>>5717112
>something something drawfriend
>something something discord

Memes aside? None. In my opinion, people can come and go as they feel and post what they feel. They don't owe the general shit
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>>5717168
His name is robert paulson.
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>>5717175
Hi moon!
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>>5717056
Link?
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>>5717112
Don't worry, I'll be the first to do it. But it'll be for the good of all of us, anon. Trust me.
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>>5717078
I think it's more Lincoln and Chandler float in the same clique.
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>>5717162
your mother should have aborted you
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>>5717182
His name is Robert Paulson.
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>>5716315
I think you're just fine. Full disclosure, you made some fanart for a collab I'm in, but despite that I still like most of your work. Is there room for improvement? Honestly yes, but I'll say you're definitely a more consistent artist since when you first started.

Sorry I didn't see this post earlier.
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>>5717112
This >>5717177
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Is Draven here?
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>>5717202
http://pastebin.com/PakwVbcD
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>>5717208
I wish she did. Then I wouldn't spend every fucking minute of my life at this stupid general
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>>5717198
I haven't betrayed this general.

Yet.
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>>5717198
Wrong answer
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>>5717262
>Yet.

What did the clynnloving cuckmeister mean by this?
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>>5717262
Cease to exist
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>>5717206
I know it would be astronomically autistic, but I want a fucking Metal Gear crossover.
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>>5717294
I want a Jojo/LH crossover that's longer and more involved than Velvet Fist. We all have our autistic things.
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>>5717232
Oh snap.
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>>5715476
>Islam
I'm glad we're bombing your children into oblivion, goatfucker.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ATep0Sf5M18
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>>5717232
why dont you quit being a pussy and take the easy way out?
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>>5712358
They're Creepy and they're Kooky,

Mysterious and Spooky,

They're altogether Oooky,


The Loud House Doesn't Rhyme


*Snap* *Snap*
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>>5717377
Your obsession with the Addams Family has gotten out of hand JDF
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Best Loud with the best ass?
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>>5717080
Ayy, I'm back! That was an interesting beginning, and there's something to be said about analyzing dream sequences. As always, there's a clear vision of everything that's going on in that room at the moment, I'll always admire your ability to set a scene. Luan's puns are on point, and Luna getting in on the act is a nice touch as well! For constructive purposes, I'll simply say that it'll be good to see the next update to build on the scenario that's been laid out for us now, it feels as if it reads with an assumption that we already know about Luan's new situation—this, I say, because I'm guilty of the exact same thing. That being said, everything reads beautifully, man, and that update will handle any concerns readily, I'm sure!

>>5717162
I'll gladly live in the garbage if it means getting to write with the people I admire and enjoy hanging with!
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>>5717406
Princess butts are the best butts.
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>>5716891
>putting me next to some of the best writefags
thank you
>>5717035
thank you, i dont think i come even close to those other artists and writers but thank you
>>5717056
Joseph Anon that you? it was an honor doin art for you, have to admit i would like to see a cute fluff Ronnie/Lynn story, mostly because i tried doin a comic on that and have failed at it so far, but your Leni/Bobby was nice keep up the great work
>>5717106
Thank you WF, that means alot comin from you, love your work btw
>>5717213
This abuseguy? Thank you, and youre right my work has alot of room for improvement, hopefully with more time i can provide something better for you guys. and thank you for the input means alot
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>>5717406
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>>5717406
This is not up for debate.
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>>5717284
That wasn't betrayal. That was planning.

>>5717287
Not yet.

>>5717294
Funnily enough, me and another writer were joking around about that.

Boy was it fucking autistic, but it was fun saying who was who.
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>>5717202
Here you go friend http://pastebin.com/PakwVbcD
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>>5717439
Ok.
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>>5717364
God wills it, anon
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>>5717406
Rita Loud: the only woman alive with an impregnable butt.
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>>5717435
>>5717439
My deputy lads
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>>5717433
>abuseguy?
Yes sir! Hey, don't be too hard on yourself. I'm just saying that practice makes perfect. I've already made a lot of progress. Your increase in consistency is proof enough of that.
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>>5717433
Ayy, you're welcome, Vinnie, stay strong and keep doing you, man!
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>>5717077
>Lori gasped as she felt a sudden sensation on her butt.
>Leni placed her hands on Lori's ass, gently rubbing and caressing her cheeks.
>"L- Leni! What are you doing?" She asked, almost out of breath.
>The sensation felt amazing, but it wasn't what she needed.
>"Oh, I just thought it'd be good to soften it up first but Lori, I gotta tell you; Your butt is very soft. Doesn't seem like you have any stress at all."
>"I - I do! It's just, ahh, you have to hit it to release the stress."
>"Well ok. Seems like you know more about this stuff than me."
>Lori only grew wetter with Leni's actions.
>It was getting unbearable.
>From her position she couldn't see what Leni was doing.
>That was part of the fun of getting spanked.
>You didn't know when it was coming.
>SLAP
>Lori bit down on her lower lip, a moan nearly escaping her.
>"Are you ok?" Leni worriedly asked.
>"Y-yes... Keep going please." Lori pleaded.
>Leni took that as a sign that it was working, so she raised her hand once more.
>SLAP
>Lori's breathing increased, her underwear getting soaked.
>"S- sorry if I sweat..." She lied.
>Her hand immediately reached down inside her shorts, rubbing her clit, letting out barely audible moans.
>Leni kept working as Lori shamefully pleasured herself.
>"My hand is getting tired, Lori" Leni whined.
>"T-that's ok, Leni. I think I relieved all my stress." Lori panted, her voice cracking.
>Lori got up, her legs barely able to stand.
>"You weren't kidding about the sweat. I think you got some on my dress!" Leni exclaimed.
>"Sorry, Leni.. I'm gonna take a shower. You can go in after me."
>Lori walked off, her legs buckling as she headed towards the bathroom.
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>>5717440
>it was fun saying who was who
Was it just for one game of the whole entire series? Also, I'm curious to see who as who.
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>>5717439
I just want to squeeze Lori's butt and bury my face in it until she farts right into my mouth.
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>>5717425
Thanks for that, wright. I always appreciate your feedback. And yeah, the next chunk will do plenty to show what's going on with Luan. I realized we're sort of en media res, and I don't plan to leave it hanging like that.
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>>5717462
Amen to that, anon.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_SztYG6XFAo
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>>5717517
You're welcome, fee! You can bet I'll be keeping an eye out for it, I'm glad to see you tackling this!

Does anyone have anymore requests?
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>>5717501
It's not over

Tell me it's not over
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>>5717364
Such violence. if you were to see the light and follow Islam you might have children of your own instead of bombing us. After all, many of those whose children are bombed come to your countries for revenge.
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>>5717511
We kept it mostly contained within MGSV because that's what he had played, but has expressed interest in the other games.

All I know is one of Clyde's dad's was Huey I think. It's been a long time since that conversation.

MGS is fun and I like it.
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>>5717551
I request that you have a good night, dude. You've earned it.
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Should we move to >>5717438 or make another thread instead?
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>>5717561
>>5717501
Sorry bro, it's over


http://pastebin.com/ZNZ73r9J
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>>5717531
Take pride in this anon: we've killed far more muslims than their terrorist actions could ever hope to. The new crusades will come, except it won't be on horseback. This time we arent evenly matched. This time we've got the tech to wipe that heathen religion from the face of the earth. Time to restore the Holy Roman Empire!
DEUS VULT!
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>>5717516
Are you me?
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>>5717206
>Says that
>Doesn't post The Boss
One job.
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>>5717581
Sorry, anon, I've still got work to do!

>>5717586
I'll lurk for a bit while I write, but if anyone needs anything don't hesitate to hit me up! Thank you for looking out for me!
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>>5717589
NUCLEAR INCEST
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>>5717562
>Implying we are going to allow a single mudslime alive after the next Crusade
You might breed as fucking roaches, but we are going for a mass genocide.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PC24qjAAOUw
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>>5717629
FUCK.

You got me anon. I don't have that much art work of her saved though. I need to change that soon.
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Screw the debate am watching No Mercy
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>>5716761
When it comes to artists, honestly a lot for their style, but I'll name a few:

Radish
Ultrahand
Skeluigi
Caencer
Blargsnarf

And many more.

>>5717406
Luna freckled butt, hands down. Though, Rita's genes make it hard to choose just one sister.

>>5717168
I'm very curious to how Lane would sound. I'm still happy that Rob Paulsen's voicing him.
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>>5717644
And yet we make up 10% of the population of Europe. We could destroy your people at will, as some who have strayed from the Quran have already done. Your women and your castrated men are in no shape to launch a crusade. Embrace Islam and save your people before it is too late.
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>>5717589
No, you retard, it doesn't even have a related OP.
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>>5717551
>>5717631
I don't write, but thank you for doing this wrightman, you're fucking based
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>>5717620
No, but us Lorifags know that you can't love the Fetish Queen without willing to get down and dirty with her.
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Genderbend Time XD
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>>5717714
You're welcome, anon! And that get was a total fluke, but I hope some of those writers got a bump from it!
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>>5717702
Why don't you embrace Christianity and save your people instead?
Pic related
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>>5717775
Can we have Genderbend Time without it turning into Gay Time?
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>>5717792
Because Christianity has grown decadent. If you had embraced Islam already New York would still look like this.
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>>5717806
I want more selfcest. Luan/Male!Luan selfcest pls.
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I haven't forgotten what you told me, Lori. We have no tomorrow, but there's still hope for the future. In our struggle to survive the present we push the future further away... Will I see it in my lifetime? Probably not. Which means there's no time to waste.

Someday the world will no longer need us. No need for the gun, or the hand to pull the trigger. I have to drag out this demon inside to build a better future. That's what I... huh, what WE will leave as our legacy.

Another mission, right Lori?
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>>5714051
This makes me really sad now
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>>5717551
even though its a meme at this point, I would appreciate your opinion on live house.
http://pastebin.com/YSMVPQzb
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>>5717828
No matter what Islam radicals do, I will never embrace Islam, for the glory of Jesus

Besides that, on a blacker note, the New Freedom Tower looks 10x better anyway
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>>5717806
>Lynn Loud was not like most girls.
>By that I mean most girls couldn't sack a 250 pound man.
>That's what made her announcement that she had a boyfriend so shocking.
>Most of her siblings laughed it off, the ones who didn't were happy for her.
>Both sides of the argument wanted to meet him though.
>So Lynn invited him over, and the family anxiously waited to meet this guy that Lynn wouldn't shut up about.
>Lynn stood in front of her family, by the door.
>"Alright everyone, are you ready to meet the strongest, fastest, toughest guy I've ever met?"
>Lynn pulls open the door to reveal...
>A boy who looked exactly like Lynn, but with shorter hair, even had the same number 1 jersey.
>He stood smiling proudly with his fists on his hips.
>"Everyone, this is Lynn!" The girl excitedly yelled.
>"Yeah but what's he call himself?" Luan cracks.
>"Lynn Lad, can you believe it? I meet the perfect girl, and she's got such a cool name too!"
>The Lad lad gives the Loud girl a kiss on her cheek, making her blush hard.
>She playfully punches him and calls him an idiot.
>"Well, Lynn, why don't you stay for dinner?" Rita asks awkwardly
>"I'd love to Mrs.Loud, but I already invited Lynn over for dinner and my family really wants to meet her."
>"Especially my sister Liberty, I mean, she's the only girl in a family of ten boys."
>The whole Loud family tenses up when they hear that as Lynn and Lynn start racing away.
>Lincoln looks at Lisa and points accusingly.
>"Did you have something to do with this?"
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>>5717896
It's going to take him days to read that, couchman.
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>>5717828
And if you had embraced Christianity your average city wouldn't look like this shithole
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>>5717926
yeah, but he did say he was taking requests. I dont mind waiting though.
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Id actually love to get some CC if i could. I find it really tough to see my mistakes in pictures until the next day with some o my pictures.i flip the canvas alot too but i just end up blind to errors.
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>>5717910
>>5717952
A testament to your downfall, that you use empty boasts and twisted truths to justify your straying from the true path. If you'd embrace islam, your nations would not be in such sorry states.
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>2016

>muh sky wizard is real

Ever notice how much more intelligent the non-faithful are? Islam and Christianity being such a hit with Niggers should really show how full of it they are.
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>>5717775
I ran out of room in my grid journal but I decided to post lewds for once.
>dick is cropped because I'm only working on drawing cocks
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>>5718086
all christians, and i mean every one of them should be purged from the world. this planet would be miles better without any religion.
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>>5718110
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>>5718038
I will die fighting for my country, my people, and my faith. I do not fear you, nor shall I ever. A true patriot shall not fear to be called a martyr.
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>>5718110
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>>5717896
>>5717993

Ayy, of course! I tried to back when it was first finished, but now I can go for a more fleshed-out response.

Things were a little rocky at first—don't get me wrong, I don't have any kind of issue with Lynncoln, but that fact that it dominated the early section of the fic left some concerns. I was glad that the rest of the cast appeared toward the middle and later sections, and that each of their unique off-set personalities was handled with care and consistency.

'Lincoln' and 'Lynn' are the focus, of course, and their relationship is explored with the attention to detail and description that I've come to expect from you. 'Lincoln's feud with her is of course fertile ground for both some of the comedic and dramatic points of the fic, though not nearly as dramatic as what we begin to see later on with the split and their pursuing their different paths. The situation with 'Lynn' and tha manager and his son sets the mood from her decision to flee and ultimately step away for a while, and 'Lincoln's feelings regarding all of it are relatable.

The ending sees them together in what could be considered a cliche/ fashion, but cliches are what they are for a reason, and I think it works well for the story you wanted to tell. It's definitely not a fairytale ending, considering all they went through, which was I good choice I feel.

Sorry if this all sounds too general, I can try to deal with some specific scenes if you'd like; this is easily the largest fic I've tried to critique, and I know how strong that desire can be.

After everything, it's one of the strongest Lynncoln fics, handled by one of the most capable writers, and I appreciate you accepting my input on it!
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>>5718110
Don't expect that to be without resistance.
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>>5718086
where'd this comment come from, I'd expect to be a reply to a post or in relation to something recent, doesn't seem like something that would be said unprovoked.
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>>5717896
Not WF but for what it's worth, coming from a casual reader, i fuckin loved it dude. Didn't care about reading fics for a while when i got in this general months ago but i think yours is what got me into it.
I guess some people don't like the fact that it's about actors but i don't think that's a problem.

I think that it still has it's place as a Loud House fic because thinking of them as "Lincoln", "Lynn" etc. helps with the visualization(?) or whatever the term may be, and it does a really great job as a 'what if'.

I loved the drama and i felt all kinds of things reading it: happy, pissed off, scared, anxious.
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>>5718093
>HONK
but good work man, ive enjoyed these keep up the good work
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>>5718159
ONLY ONE TRUE GOD

IT IS THE MONOLITH
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>>5718149
feud with her father* ffffffffffff
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>>5718038
>Sorry states
How? Degenerates and trannies barely make 1/10 of our population. Our political views will change, and we will get rid of them.
Meanwhile your lives include acid attacks, stonings, allahu ackbars and terrorism almost daily.
In 50 years our countries will have progressed, our people will be healthier, happier and wealthier.
In 50 years your countries will be the same: dangerous, dirty shitholes where daily tribal wars take place.
And remember the next time you see a mighty bomber in the sky about to destroy your brothers and sisters, you will be reminded of the superiority of Western Civilization.
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>>5717221
I'm your favorite now?
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When the image limit is reached, go here >>5717438
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>>5718093
Keep drawing cocks, eventually you'll like it.
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>>5718220
nope
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>>5718216
Wow, my greentext got another great piece of fanart! I'm not really familiar with the drawfags; what's your name, so I can properly thank you?
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I have no time for debate with words, but rather the best way to reason with heretics and heathens is with bullets. I will proudly die fighting for my country, my people, my ideals, and my faith. I know not the meaning of surrender.
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>>5718274
Karmakaze
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>>5718038

>keeps losing in war against a Jew country

>has lagged behind in the actual sciences for a long while

>is going full Gamma Male

Hey Achmed.
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>>5718216
i likes yours way better than mine, cuter and on model, amazin job
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>>5718314
Karmakaze. Great. Thank you for the wonderful fanart.
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>>5718314
The guy loves doing fan art. He's the best.
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>>5714819
so, is Lincoln telekinetic now?
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>>5718220
Just stop.
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>>5718171

I see you're ignoring the chimpingout by Christfags and Muzzies.
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>>5718215
> Degenerates and trannies barely make 1/10 of our population.
They do not exist in ours, except for the heretic Shias.
Acid attacks and stonings are the punishments for the worst of crimes. They keep our society ordered, something you have forgotten how to do.
>In 50 years our countries will have progressed, our people will be healthier, happier and wealthier.
In 50 years your women and your young will have driven your cuntries into the ground with their degeneracy.
>In 50 years your countries will be the same: dangerous, dirty shitholes where daily tribal wars take place.
It is a sad thing when a man still clings to his bigotry in spite of evidence.
>nd remember the next time you see a mighty bomber in the sky about to destroy your brothers and sisters, you will be reminded of the superiority of Western Civilization.
Do not make me laugh. Your bombers protect our country's interest, for we have oil. How easily you betray your values.
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>other thread is already shit
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>>5718468

WE
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>>5718547
WILL
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>Two new threads still up
STOP
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>>5718559
At least it's not as bad as July.
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>>5718468
>talks shit about Christians
>whines about """bigotry""" when Christians talk shit about Muslims in return
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>>5718468
LMAO
Cry harder faggot.
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>>5718178
>>5718149
thanks guys. I'm glad you stuck with it.
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>>5718266
>>5718410
>>5718584
I wonder who could be behind this
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>>5718468
Triggered much, Achmed?
Christians are glassing your huts, kikes are raping your countries daily. Just should mass suicide and save us time and effort.
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>>5718573

BE
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>>5718764
VICTORIOUS
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>>5718889
Lincoln's got some wacky waving inflatable tube man genes in him, I see. Otherwise there's no way his body would be able to bend like that.
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>>5718913
and have you seen his tighs, twice the size of his torso
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I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible.
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