Write-Faggotry Thread #4 Last thread: http://desuarchive.or

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/r/ a story of like a random young catgirl dressed similarly like this who has the runs and is rushing to the bathroom, and her just BARELY making it (or not)..

Regardless, let there be some sort of "damage" on the rear of her panties.

>>5107363
Is this gonna be the thing of write threads like those other requests on draw threads?

>>5107408
Hope not. I'm not going to repost my request and just ask that people check the archive link.

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Working on this, barely have anything, but I want to catch any mistakes in the overall concept/structure before I continue

http://pastebin.com/bn9YTSf5

/r/ the female soul survivor of fallout four getting brutally raped by the gangs of nuka world with a shock collar on

>>5108108
you have a bit of a case of run ons/comma splices in your sentences anon. There are places where no commas are needed (whether they should be removed outright or replaced with a period and/or semicolon). Take a look at http://www.butte.edu/departments/cas/tipsheets/grammar/run_ons.html to help fix that up.

hello world

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>>5112757
goodbye world

>>5107191
I need to get back to writing

>>5107408
I always feared reposting a request might look stupid, so I don't do it unless there's some open for it. Maybe I'm a little opportunistic, too.

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I used to have an absolute repulsion for the mind control fetish, but a while ago someone in the Gardevoir thread brought up the idea of mind control being used between two partners that fully trust each other.

The idea was a Gardevoir's human partner (Garde thread, what did you expect?) letting himself be controlled by her; letting her do stuff like controlling his body to play around without any input from him, or bringing to his mind exotic experiences he could never feel otherwise (fantasy landscapes, pokemon x pokemon, Gardevoir orgy, etc)

As much as I dislike mind control, I have to admit that idea is pretty damn hot. Would anyone around here be up to making something out of it?

>>5119314
>As much as I dislike mind control
Why's that?

>>5119498
Mainly 'cause I don't like forcefullness in my porn. If the involved aren't willing to do it and enjoying it then what's the point?

To make it worse, most of the mind control things I see are outright rapey. Didn't even consider there was a chance for willing mind control before that anon brought it up

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Bump

Have some bug love for that Illumise Pokemon
http://pastebin.com/cLXZMQgz

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holy fuck
HOLY FUCK
FUUUUUUUUUCCCKKKKKK

>>5119498
Not him, but plenty of reasons why people might not. He explained it below, but my is bit reversed. I like forcefulness and domination, but dislike MC because it usually takes just reduces the character into a robot - a masturbatory aid. It's just uninteresting to me.

What do you guys do to make time for writing?

>>5130508
I have no other hobbies, simple as that.
After work I do absolutely fuck all other than watch TV, but even that's just for background noise.

Anybody considered any of the prompts in the last thread?

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> want to write an mlp fic about pic related
> based on a dating sim game featuring them
> story would feature hand holding, hazing and no homo moments
> drama abound

I dunno if I want to dive into this faggotry. I just really like these dragons right now

>>5132811
No harm in trying unless you lack arms to write with.

>>5108108
>>5110472
>>5124202
share more pages and greentexts so that we can learn from one anothers.
>>5132811
do it.
>>5115571
do it, but don't force yourself.

>>5107439
>>5117157
I was just messin' around because it reminded me of a similar thing in drawthreads, request all you want, these threads move as fast as molasses going uphill.

>>5137246
you're good.

on an unrelated note: if someone happened to break their hand, how would they write stories without spending almost half an hour on a post?

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>>5138281
Loudly speak out your pornography to a friend, family member, or coworker to write it down.
Hire a smut butler.
Train a monkey.
Say it in a courtroom so the stenographer gets it.
Use your tongue.
Slam your head against the keyboard.
Scream until a neighbor helps.

Or just get a cheap voice recognition program on your phone.

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/vp/'s new favorite waifu Wicke just got a lewdfic involving her and two guys. Sharing here.
http://pastebin.com/raZTdmpF

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>>5108108
Continuing work on this, trying to figure out where to go with her daughter's trashy clothing. Anyone have any suggestions?

>>5110472
Fixed this in the current draft.

>>5140327
Daughter's trashy clothes turn out to be from her mom's clothes she used to wear in the past or something.

While I'm not into transformation/body augmentation I love me some large ass crack when a lady tries fitting into a tight pair of jeans (or doesn't bother with a belt and let the pants fall to an extent).
>>5140033
and now here's another piece with the Team Skull enforcer getting dommed.
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/sheepsnooze/21820/The-Aether-Foundation/56171/Chapter-0/The-Mother-of-Foundation-Aether

>>5140515
and now a body expansion story about Wicke.
Man is she popular
http://pastebin.com/300Vfvtj

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>>5140938
God damn it doesn't seem to be stopping for Wicke the Thicke
make that 6 now (or 7 in this case).
http://pastebin.com/kj3rBeVF
This one involves lewding a trespasser
http://pastebin.com/K8n1ER6X

And a bonus lesbo scene with Fennel and Wicke.
http://pastebin.com/y0ymZtH5

>>5143754
The question is, what if Wicke captured miss spraypainted sheetmetal for hair and started thickening her up into a proper woman?

>>5140515
Already working on a shopping montage for the latter.

>>5140033
Atrociously good looking.
>>5140938
This pleases me.

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>>5143754
aaaand one more with a gangbag in mind, in a train.
http://pastebin.com/4kuaDAdf

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>>5108108
>>5140327

Thread needs bumping, so have another WIP:
http://pastebin.com/q5t6vWtP

I'm just gonna stare at the wall

>>5107363
Please?

>>5147406
once more Wicke piece, this time with groping shenanigans during the work day.
http://pastebin.com/eu68ttj5

name a pokemon 2 lewd-e-mon
>writing is better than punning
>i am a retard

>>5132915
>>5136051
Ok.I just wrote down the basic outline for the events I wanna do

S-should I link the pastebin?

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>>5156775
a request for a mon to be lewded?
I got a few.
Roselia (recommended)/Roserade for large insertion fun, maybe with some buttjob on the side
Leavanny, with an emphasis on messing around with her silk-spinning spinneret and to ram all four holes in (mouth, vag, anal, spinneret).

>>5157101
a pastebin can work

Morning world

>>5153402
This is starting to get good

A bump? Why sure!

>>5157131
Can you believe that they painted it? To conclude the wall's character arc like that is ridiculous.

/trash/ archive is dead. Use https://archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/(number) instead

>>5166692
Alternatively, archive.moe

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Why aren't you writing anon?
Why?

Go on, DO IT

>>5169879
I wrote some things once
They were awful

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>>5170190
Yeah well you ain't gonna get any better sittin' around saying how bad they were

>>5169879
I'm too busy fapping to porn fics My hand can't stop!

>>5169879
Stuck on details:
>How many dicks is she sucking?
>Is it prostitution? An orgy?
>Is she nude or are they jizzing on her clothing?

I just don't know, anon.

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>>5171644
Send some of that hormonal lust towards creativity for more fitting fap material that you like to share with others.

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>>5171774
>>How many dicks is she sucking?
Roll a d20
>>Is it prostitution? An orgy?
Check the d20 then decide whether or not you like women selling themselves.
>>Is she nude or are they jizzing on her clothing?
Do you have a fetish for women scrubbing out semen stains? If yes, clothed, if not, naked.

>>5169879
Ight writing scenes sporadically. During the ideas in order like a puzzle

Anyone else do this¿

Am I the only one who appreciates shorter stories? Reading takes time, so it's better to enjoy a story quickly than to spend a long time to see whether it's gonna be worth it.

>>5174044
I mostly read one shots as I do not have the time to sit down and read numerous chapters in one sitting

>>5174044
I'd say it's a balance. I like a good build up for how two characters get into a situation where they fuck but multiple chapters of sfw make me tempted to skimp and outright skip them.

I think it helps if the lewds are in small doses that start early on. Like one character seeing the other in a private moment, some sfw of the repercussions and relationship with the odd bit of lewd until the Big Fuck.

>>5170190
Write more.
Read more.
Then write more.
>>5130508
>>5171644
Find what you can stop doing and you'll suddenly have time.
>>5171774
>details
Think of the end and of the beginning; the story leads from the start to the finish.
>>5173036
>Ight
>¿
Learn English.
>>5174044
Short stories are excellent for smut, longer writings if you want to show something.
>>5107191
I suggest, in addition to archiveanon and guideanon, to include references for stories people would like to read.

t. Stepanon who's stuck with researching.

>>5178515
Forgot to write "Stories are puzzles of scenes like pieces of art are puzzles of design elements, but have to complement each other." for >>5173036.

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>>5107191

New here - I wrote this one a while ago.

http://pasted.co/a59af8e4

It's underage incest, so be warned. Feedback is welcome.

>>5179018
are these OCs or characters from a franchise? Either way it is hot, although you got a couple of run ons going when the MC retells some of the lewd

>>5179342
OC's. Thank you, and it's supposed to have run-ons and somewhat bad grammar - it's trying to sound like a ditzy girl's voice in your head. Appreciate the feedback!

archives are down. does anyone know any replacements?

>>5182069
>>5166692

Bumproll
0-5 get off my ass and do something
6-9 google nooses

>>5184254
Fuck, I'm gonna have to find something to do with the rope and chair I bought

http://pastebin.com/Y9i8wY8A

Continuing WIPs because fuck it, this thread always needs a bump.

Also, is it bimbofication if only the body's changing and their thoughts were always roungly in the same place?

>>5184731
Fetishes are deep man, I always assumed the bimbo part leaned more on intelligence but looks are also pretty integral.

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Since we have mind control and bimbo, what about characters with sudden uncontrollable lust? Like a furry or alien going through 'heat'.

Can lead to them going to other characters for help or try to take care of it themselves first.

(Admittedly another idea for Gunnerkrigg. Since Antimony's heritage makes having a kid so important, she probably has a strong libido that's hard to sate alone. Cue best friend Kat as volunteer hand.)

>>5157119
i think i'll write about a pervert trainer aquireing a levanny and then trying to seduce her

>>5184731
I'd say bimbo is a mental state. http://de.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=bimbo
>>5186619
>uncontrollable lust
sounds vanilla compared to what we had for requests.

>>5184731
Bimboification also needs intelligence modification. Body modifications are a plus.

>>5184731
>>5195352
>>5193704

I was curious because the thing I'm writing has more of a confidence change, if anything.
Also, arguing semantics keeps the thread bumped.

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>>5193704
>Vanilla.
I don't think you understand. I'm not talking girls feeling a little 'in the mood' and seeking some casual sex. I mean them being horny beyond rational thought. Practically begging for release or taking it by force.

I guess you could have an outsider causing it by sleeping them some sort of super aphrodisiac to have sex with them but that sort of plot is meh to me.

>>5196096
>Slipping them

oops fixed.

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I cannot write therefore I bump

That's what descartes said right?

>>5196096
by vanilla I meant we had rape requests in the first thread.

request and hope someone's up for it, or try to make some yourself like me and hide it from your roommates.

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If anyone is taking requests, I still have that Florges farting request here.

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart

>>5156736
>"Y-you too"
you fucking nigger I lost it right there.

>>5182103
thanks!

keep on trucking

>>5210452
Shit I keep forgetting to come back and delete these.

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http://pastebin.com/SYMtjkrL
http://pastebin.com/H7XGBWDF
Lusamine finally gets some love

>>5107191
do y'all think too much requests or too little requests are worse for the life of the thread?

>>5213465
i dunno. I'd rather read the posts about peoples progress than look at requests honestly

>>5213465
It doesn't matter, it's better than seeing droves of "bump" or similar.
I like seeing ideas anyways.

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>implying this can be made into a serious, non-parody level story

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Yeah bump, whatever

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Dawn notices Lucas staring at her backside, which he denies, and being self-conscious about her small chest and big butt, she thinks he's joking when he asks to grope her butt, and maybe do even more.

- Lucas oggles Dawn's ass
- she notices he's staring when she isn't looking, but he denies it
- later, feeling down, she wonders when her boobs will grow
- catching him the next time he stares, she angrily asks about what's so special about her "huge" ass
- she gets surprised by his request to grab it
- shocked, she asks what's wrong with him, liking (supposedly) "big butts"
- after a while, she half-heartedly agrees
- she sighs heavily upon contact
- while getting grabbed she seems to enjoy it more and more
- maybe men like backsides, too
- reluctant at undressing, she tries to give him a show
- she may get surprised of his later motives (including spanking, her shock at liking it, and surprise butt fun)

The writefag reserves the right to story progression, whether vanilla or half-depraved half-consent.

>>5213465
Anything's better than "bump"
Request something, argue, do something.

>>5196096
would be interesting to see this done, heat or rutting in general.

No WIPs this time, as I've made no goddamn progress.

>>5166692
we need some more, or at least one with a search bar

>>5222724
>argue
Make progress ya git, we don't need more sittin' around and talking about how much we hate bumps.

Idon'tmeantoberudethiswasjustabump

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Here we are again
Page 9

Does anyone have that one Starbound story? Floran wants to know what 'fish' tastes like. Involves breast and ass expansion

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How would you guys rate this two paragraph something I wrote in the Shygal thread >>5088041 (>>5149727)?

>As if time stood still, every living being present would've sworn their hearts fell and stopped beating the moment they heard that portending slash
>Birds present flocked from the trees en mass, instantly, flying away from the created tear in space before them that was seemingly consuming the space around it to warp into a perfect circle
>Sighing, you float elegantly through your creation- made at just the perfect height you desire- beholding the scene before you as your impossibly-dark circle dissipates into something less than nothing behind you, as if it were never there.
>Keeping your scythe under your bust and held with both hands, you scrape it against your clothed tits, raising it to your nipples, your body shivering in appreciation as you prod your right nipple, tweaking it upward before releasing it. Biting your lower lip under your mask, you feel your clothing around your chest tighten whorishly as your feminine need expresses itself, your nipples now painfully erect and taut against their fabric prison, even leaking your personal milk, soaking your already blatant nipple bulges as if to show yourself off even further. You can't think of a more shameless outfit to wear...
>Still wanting to at least tease your other nipple, you raise the appropriate end of your scythe across your tit's flesh to finally touch your left nipple's areola... Pressing deeply against it, you suppress a moan and breathe slowly, your heart racing as you slowly stimulate yourself...

>>5229022
>Prodding against your nipple, your tits eagerly leak their milk in appreciation of the attention. A steady stream of milk drips through your clothing and onto the wooden handle of your scythe, darkening its color from the touch of your womanly, life-giving nectar.
>Shivering openly now, head down and eyes half-lidded, you press hard against your nipple, eliciting more of your milk as you finally release the pressure on your tit, your nipple flipping straight ahead as your tits bounce freely, happily spewing their milky contents all over the ground before you in powerful streams, as if in orgasm. Holding your scythe close to you, against you, you can only exhale raggedly and straighten your back as you swear your nipples twitch and wobble underneath your dress, overstimulating yourself and leading to an ever messier paroxysm of explosively painting the world with your milk...
>Sighing as your event comes to an end, you bow your head and lower your arms, pressing your scythe into the fatty area above the girly bits between your legs, absently rubbing your bare flesh through your thin dress, wishing for...
>But, just as quickly as that thought came, you blush, and straighten your back yet again, head up and eyes on the world before you. You had a job to do, of course...
>Wiggling your tits side to side for just a moment, happily losing yourself to the sensation of stimulating your needy, milky nipples, you hold your scythe with one of your clothed hands, tugging on your dress at the sides, at the hips, purposely causing the fabric to bunch-up just above your butt, as if your dress were sitting on it, your body entirely nude below. smiling to yourself as you consider the eyes of men and women alike being drawn to your shapely ass and massively-wide hips, you hold your head high as you go off into the world to drag but one perhaps unfortunate soul down to the place unknown to living mortals, from whence you came...

end

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>>5229029
I'm no writer so I can't properly criticize, but I liked it.
>Short and simple
>Descriptive
>Pretty delicious descriptions at that
>Lotsa mixed up vocab to remove it from being stale

>>5229630
thanks

i wanted to write something others could enjoy, first and foremost. Thanks for the feedback and for reading, but someone who replied to me earlier said something like "keep trying" and it was "pretty good" without any elaborating, which made me feel super bad about it. i thought i was missing some horrible mistake i made and someone would just reply to my story with "autism" or something. i still think i am, but i'm nervously happy you liked it. i'm happy. Thanks. Cheers.

>>5231124
Hey, I'm the guy over on the shygirl thread who said all that. I'm sorry I made you feel bad in any way, I really think your story is good.

Along with what >>5229630 said: Short and sweet, descriptions are great and no repetition with words to keep it fresh.

I'd love to read another story of yours if you're up for making more. Again, I'm sorry I made you feel bad friend.

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>>5232279
well geez, now i'm sorry for my saying i felt bad about what you sad about my fic. but, it's just as what i said in response to you asking me how i thought you fic was.

it's just, i'm super-obsessed with logic, right. like, sprinkled throughout the shygal threads are me trying to be subtle about proposing the logic behind why i ike things, but... it's not subtle at all... it's just the same ideas- the body vs. the world otherwise- and i respect the content, right. and i try to express that without addressing PUSSY which is ALL I CARE ABOUT, EVER. i try to say "i like your mind" instead of "i consume your stuff as if it is the poetry of me; here is who i am". but... it's not.. really... possible... without leaving others in the dark...

it is really stressful, rly. i hate this meta of emotiomal expressiom being seen as cancer- defending opinions being seen as cancer. i see expression as being fuckin, kissing and sloppy sex, but everyone treats it as prodding one-another with sticks. i hate it. i guess it's fine when you LIKE the prodding, but, when you don't, it just makes you realize how shallow the non-communication of socially-acceptable expression really is in how it doesn't elaborate on anything. why is "i like it" ok but "i dislike it" is passive aggressive? they're both the same philosophically.

Not to bully anyone... but, i love emotion... I want to hear of your emotion contested against my content. When I please you I'm glad, but I don't know why and where I plese you when you inhibit your expression to me. I'm just qqing about the emotional distance and fundamental lack of sympathy between myself and others everywhere, even in expression, conventionally. Also, i bounced from the Shygal thread after i made that post in it to you i speak of, for i was scared of anyone hating me for my wanting emotional expression... sorry if this post sucks... no one has to acknowledge it- it's fine. Cheers.

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>>5232629
Well
You definitely care about it, I can tell that much

>>5232629
not this guy, I have difficulty understanding your point

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we had plenty of Skyla rape, didn't we? how about we give her some nice time.

/r/equesting a happy fun time between Skyla and the generation's male protagonist.

http://pastebin.com/Art4sZDR

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>>5239033
>http://pastebin.com/Art4sZDR
I think this is a spoiler for the new Persona game.

Made this for the Belly thread.
http://pastebin.com/tv3g1MjQ

Warnings: fat, weight gain, scaly, perversion, feederism, navel fucking, anal, extreme amounts of cum, cum everywhere, cum inflation, probably some other shit.

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Recent unfinished sketch from the last Gunnerkrigg thread gave me a prompt idea based on the 'Annie in the Forest' side comics.
(A quick read on http://www.gunnerkrigg.com/extracomics/ but the main comic is neat)

"Khepi orders the kids to take a bath and Annie gets roped in with them. Going to some enclosed spring/pool alone or with some other elf folk there and realising they'll be nude."

Simple setup of a shy girl being flung into a situation and eventually coming out of her shell. Being a pink skinned girl amongst the green makes her a novelty to the forest folk too, I guess.

>>5243337
Could also go into sex at some point. Once Annie opens up and stop hiding herself, there's a mutual 'interest' rising between her and Kamlen until Annie sees him half-mast. Either they go off to do something in private or the whole groups in and encouraging it. Whatever floats your boat.

>>5239066
It probably is.
...
It is.

reanimation

I'm the writefriend over on the shygirl thread on /trash working on some stories around them. So far I have a completed 2nd person vore story and a much longer in progress adventure story with more in the works.

Shygirl Adventure: http://pastebin.com/uFiqBtwV

Shygirl Vore: http://pastebin.com/G35Qjksu

Gonna make a transformation story, foot fetish story, one with a shyspiergirl plus more.

Meant to post this last night but fell asleep.

bwoomf

Well I'm bored

Oh right: Bump

Oh for fuck's sake

>>5245827
Reading now.
(Is it bad that I requested 2 of the things in your post?)
Will give my critique on the not-vore one in a bit.

Have a collection of Wicke fics /vp/ has made during the character's popularity

>>5255758
and I forgot the link
http://pastebin.com/KpvPszZx

>>5254741
Thank you very much! I'd love to hear your thoughts on it! I'll try and have it fully completed before I head to bed tonight so expect some extra content soon.

>>5255946
Thank you very much friendo.

>>5254741
>Is it bad that I requested 2 of the things in your post?

Not at all, you're fine :)

>>5186619
heat is very much hot

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>>5148609
Another WIP
http://pastebin.com/P9YBXu7s

Been sick as hell lately, just trying to get over whatever bug I got.

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That image made me wonder if people know 'My Life With Fel' and would write for it. Kenno loves fan work and all that.

Fel/Bonnie would be a fun prompt, though their relationship is more aunt/niece and doing something along the lines of http://trashdump.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3558 on the sofa.

>>5257520
>Have to sleep
I'll finish reading it in the morning, but thus far, I must say I am very happy with it, sans grammar issues, but those are passable.

>>5258419
>>5258571
>My Life With Fel

I never knew about this. Heck I'll be reading up on it and maybe try and make some content if the creator loves fanwork.

anyone like enemas? /r/ing some stuff with that, if it's ok and stuff

>>5258419
Coming along really well from a non-writer's perspective. Just been popping in to check on it after you said you'd do something based on my drawing of the bat mom and daughter. Loving it so far.

>>5259040
Glad to hear you're enjoying it so far! Added about another page and a half of content for you to read when you do tomorrow.

Let me know where I made the grammar issues when you see them and I'll fix them as soon as I'm back up tomorrow!

>Page 10
Utter shame.

>>5260196
Line 24, sentence 2, thought should be though, fuding should be funding.
Same line Sentence 4 He should not be capitalized, same with sentence after it.
Line 26, 2nd sentence, replace thick with dense for good word variety.
Same line last sentence, "seal them away in special vacuum" add an "a."
Line 28, the entire last sentence feels totally out of place. Consider changing it to something along the lines of 'Toadsworth was insistent I get enough shots to kill a Boo so maybe I’ll be-” but Anon's thought process is halted as another dozen mosquitoes descend and bite him all over.'
Line 32 sentence one, add event before now.
Line 40, sentence one, don't capitalize someone.
Same line, sentence two, Looks is Look with a comma.
Line 42 sentence 2, should be anything instead of nothing.
Finish reading later, I'm slow as fuck and I got a test to go take.

>>5262635
Line 50 last sentence, there needs to be a comma after asleep.
Line 54, first line, you have speak when it should be spear.
Same sentence, belt around the dress sounds weird, consider belt atop her hips or something similar, since the dress is a relatively non-descriptive area.
Line 56, sentence 2, that.. I'm not sure what's wrong with it.
Sentence 3 same line, "slave covered hands" should be "hands, hidden beneath her over-large sleeves" or just replace slave with sleeve-
Same line, last sentence, look should be see.
Line 58, sentence 1, needs her before belt, and a comma after view, in the leg, not on the leg.
Line 58, sentence 2, scrawl down his chest towards his pants.
Sentence 3, the rational part instead of embarrassment part, you also have "to continue to go on" take one of those out or add a comma.
Sentence 4, take out pull them down.
Line 62, sentence 2, "and her exposed her pussy" shouldn't have that second her.
Line 64 sentence 1, you are using both first and third person.
Line 68, last sentence, be should be been.
Line 74 Sentence 2, too many spaces between roof and is.
Line 81 last sentence, "he here" should be "being here,"
Line 83 sentence 1, "how used to Shyguys they are"
Sentence 4 should read more like "He tried to shimmy up the Chieftan so that she laid on his legs, but it was too late"
Line 85 Sentence 1, his should be him.
Line 87, Sentence 3, who's should be whose.
Last sentence zipped should be zipper.
89, comma between eyes and but, they're should be they were.
91, sentence 2, last half should read "she looked down to see his face, its expression a mix"
Sentence 3 either needs exposing replaced with pulling or take out "out" and add a comma after meaty.
Line 93, sentence 3, chef should be chief.
Line 97, sentence 2, take out the.
Line 99, sentence 1, a comma after teats.
Sentence 3, With should be While, a comma after busy, and it's tit-fucking, not tit fucking.
107, last sentence, take out the walls before cushioned.

>>5263664
109, sentence 1, add an a before fine.
115/116, you forgot a line break between them.
122, sentence 1, should read "he asked, seeing her turn around around and nod
124, sentence 1, watched should be watching.
128, sentence 1, you have didn't notice twice.
Sentence 2, Anon's cock.
Last sentence, replace cum with semen for word variety.
136, sentence 4, bodies should be body's

Excusing all the errors, it was really good though.

>>5262635
>>5263664
>>5263889

I'll have those fixed really soon! Thanks for taking the time to read through the story and letting me know about the mistakes, I now it must have been a lot to ask but its deeply appreciated!

If anyone else has any requests, I'll do my best to attempt them.

>>5186619
I need to read a good bimbo story really. Would anyone be willing to do a bimbo story or share any good ones they have on hand?

Also characters going into heat is interesting with how they think thought it. Asking a close friend seems like a decent idea if you don't have a boyfriend/girlfriend/spouse.

>>5265768
No problem. I'm here to help everyone I can. It's why I started these threads after all. :^)

What variety of third person perspective does /trash/ prefer?
Objective?
Limited?
Subjective?
Omniscient?

>>5266843
>third person
All of them.
Something I don't see often enough is 2nd Person.
>You (narrator) are person in story
>But you are tagging along/stalking the main character/it is a series of events around that person from your perspective

>>5266890
2nd Person has been so prevalent in chan culture but nearly absent in common literature.
>>5266843
Variety is the best thing we humans need.

>>5266890
IMO 2nd person only works for interactive narratives. Or maybe mind control fetish except I don't like that.

>>5266843
I much prefer writing and reading in 1st person (the character expressing what they see and describe in their point of view using "I"). And 3rd person (being the overarching viewer who describes in detail about what is happening in the story, characters and how said characters are reacting to the events).

Mostly because I was taught to write that way in school but I'm still much more comfortable writing those and have had a lot more experience with them. Not to say 2nd person doesn't have its fans. I'll need to try it here and there just for the fun of it.

>>5266890

Variety is the best thing. Its how we grow, understand and see beyond what we perceive.

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>>5266514
Just letting you know that I've done all the corrections you listed on the story. Thanks again for letting me know where I messed up! Can't get better without tripping!

>try writing porn
>get boner
>stop to fap
>no longer want to write
How does anybody finish a story?

>>5271728
You write something you're not normally into.

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>>5271233
If anyone is interested, I have a foot fetish oriented story with Orendi from Battleborn (RIP).

http://d-littlelibrary.tumblr.com/post/147750034376/orendis-servant

>>5271728
For me, I write it so I can let others enjoy what kind of thoughts turn me on. Of course its hit or miss but I'm still happy to have made something that I like and others may enjoy.

Focus that sexual energy into words that play out in your head. That's how I do it anyway.

I've opened myself up for commissions recently, but other than two friends, I don't forsee myself getting any takers considering I'm so small on FA. Am I allowed to shill myself?

>>5272171
This thread is a dead slug, you're allowed to do anything you want

>>5272171
Sharing works/fics is a common thing to do here, although I'm not sure how fic commissions are treated here.
What things have you written though?

>>5272616
Literally nothing beyond roleplay and a small sample of my skill (or lackthereof), actually. A number of people have told me I'm breddy gud at writing, though, and have encouraged me to give this a try.

I'm no god, I won't pretend, but I will at least agree that I have some potential, if nothing else.

>>5266843
I write in 3rd person limited so fucking hard that I basically might as well be in 1st. It's the most comfortable format that I've settled on.

>>5272792
That's a good mentality. Never think that you know everything their is to what you're doing/making while at the same time, thinking you're decent at it.

>>5273016
1st person is fun to write in for intimate details. What helped me really get into 3rd person was just reading a lot of stories that did it and I tried doing it in practice. Not telling you to do so, do what works for you of course.

>>5169879
Doing my best (and vomiting blood from trying so hard but still going)

To any write friends around: what made you want to write? Weather it's smut or not.

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>>5277238
I can't for the life of me motivate myself to git gud at drawing or music, so I've instead latched onto one of the only skills I actually have and wish to embrace it.

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>>5277238
I started out writing by first making a narrative for a Skyrim RP I was doing. Not like, an ES tabletop thing, I mean literally just me being autistic and roleplaying in a single player game. It's something I had done before on console when my computer hit the shitter and it took a week for the replacement parts to get here. As the RP went along, I was inspired enough to start writing out scenes from it as if it were a novel. Those scenes were expanded around, and soon enough I was writing more than I was actually playing the game. Of course, it was shit for all 50k words. We all are a little shitty when we start off.

Now I write things for fanbases I like that I want to exist but didn't previously. I don't even read at all, I hate forcing myself to get into literature, so it's pure addiction at this point that keeps me trucking. The responses I get are almost always positive (if sometimes constructive because I'm my only editor). I don't write much nsfw, though, especially with the project I'm working on now. I just lurk around here.

>>5119314
Oh that's a fun idea.
Hell could be even that he wants to sex the garde, but is held back by thinking she wouldn't want that, Garde reads his mind and learns that and then makes him free to express his desires.

>>5266003
>Would anyone be willing to do a bimbo story or share any good ones they have on hand?
This guy's stuff is gold http://kotep.xyz/post/bxbi/ http://kotep.xyz/post/bxbi-2/

Also overlaps with the second half of your post.

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>>5277425
That idea sounds really hot too.

Whichever version would be fine; I want to see some willing mind control without rapey bullshit or turning the mind controlled into a glorified sex toy.

>>5277238
I remembered how once upon a time I had loads of fun participating in many roleplays.
But then fell off a them for years due to sheer apathy.
Some-fucking-how I managed to motivate myself to write even a little and it's fun when I manage to sit down to it. But it's still slow as fuk going - had just about three halfhour writin sessions in a week.

>>5277238
I was bored

>>5272792
Sounds like you should build up a portfolio before beginning commissions, for experience and reference

>>5259348
Glad to hear, been thinking about it fo awhile now.

>>5279850
That's my plan for now, to just keep on writing all sorts of content and when I feel up for it. It would be nice to be commissioned but I'll think about the money after I have more suitable content.

>>5277238
For me it goes back to my days of reading fabrication after school. I found the stuff and remember being so amazed at this thing I didn't know of until I stumbled on it. After about a year or so of reading I decided to give it a shot and wrote my first ever lemon Pokemon fabric.

Going back on it, it's still pretty bad but people loved the story and that made me feel a bit proud. I didn't believe I had any skill but those reviews pushed me to try more. After the FF purge, real fond memory there, I left FF and just bounced around, doing RPs and eventually going around learning to write better, other stories, and even wanting to try making my own original content.

And I'm learning to draw (literally nothing but lines right now) for fun but who knows where all I'm learning leads. Just gotta try. Dony ever need to be the absolute best, just make doing what I like.

>>5280908
>reading fabrication
>lemon Pokemon fabric.
Dude rein in your autocorrect

>>5281746
Sorry sorry, was on my phone when I typed that. My bad.

>>5124202
My dude... Thank you!!

>>5277335
>>5277380
>>5278339
>>5278613
>>5280908

Glad to see my question got a good response. Another I have is for anyone who writes nsfw stories: how did you learn to write about them? Or what do you like most about writing those kind of stories?

>>5280908
>reading fabrication
shouldn't have kek'd this hard.

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>>5280757
Who the fug are you and why are you replying for me? Are you trying to be passive aggressive towards me?

>>5279850
I never thought of that. That would probably be the best of ideas.

>>5282656
>How did you learn to write about them

Certainly not from real life

>>5283385
>Who the fug are you and why are you replying for me? Are you trying to be passive aggressive towards me?
Maybe it's another aspiring writer describing what he's doing in agreement with the anon advising you to build up material.

Also, you can always post your samples for more opinions.

>>5282656
reading a bunch and picking things I like and don't like to eventually try it out myself

>>5282656
>how did you learn to write about them
Reading other stories and RP logs on similar topics.

>Or what do you like most about writing those kind of stories?
The "OH YES THANK YOU [presumed vigorous fapping]" reactions.

Also why I start on the nsfw rather than sfw.
I think the reaction is much more visceral and involved when there's boners on the line, and I like that.
Also I'm a flippin perv.

>>5271846
>write 3000 words of setup in an afternoon
>get to the lewd part
>progress slows to 500 words in the same time
This must be why most porn fanfic writers are female.

>>5258419

Thread needs bumping, so have another WIP:
http://pastebin.com/J07M9WFu

Incest/bimbofication/group sex, etc

>>5286296
I like getting to the lewd parts, those are the really fun part if you ask me. Getting to every little detail I can while still keeping it nice and dirty is the best.

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Here's Waluigi breakdancing on Wendy Koopa's shell to keep the thread up.

bleh

kabewm

That's three (3) bumps!

Is the alien thread/guys around still? this is the only writefag thing i seen so yeah i'm asking.

>>5278147
Personally i'd rather see
>>5277425
take on it i've honestly seen enough of the mind rape stuff and some of the others that use the premise he states were frankly cringy often at times.
like it would be good enough but nothing i'd want to re-read.

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Does popularity influence your writing? I graphed the popularity of videogame fandoms on AO3 and got a classic power law long tail. The difference in popularity is even bigger than it looks because of duplication, eg. Dragon Age - All Media Types is number one and those works are listed again as specific Dragon Age things so multiple top ten entries are Dragon Age.

>>5302016
I made joke fics that i really only wanted under a 100 people to see and the one i actually put up on a site that kept track of numbers had something like 3k views was pretty embarrassed honestly.
i was doing all that during a period where i felt i should try and improve my writing and grammar overall and figured greentext and stuff would be good.

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>>5108108

Finally finished, missed some editing notes in the previous post. Any feedback is appreciated.

(M/F, Expansion/Augmentation, etc)
http://pastebin.com/FZncvP9N

Here I am again to bump
And then I bumped for that is all I do

Bump before I sleep.
I'll probably write some more of that Sophie story tomorrow.

>>5309587
>>5311668
Dude, at what page depth do you usually bump?

>>5312949
A small group of people bump but usually from pages 9-10, I don't think you really realize how dead this thread can be

>>5315343
would reposting a request be better?

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>>5315778
I don't have any requests though, unless you mean those of others, in which case I might make a list of those.

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>>5315778
Well we didn't want it being like the drawthreads where people keep reposting the same thing over and over but I guess it's better than bumps.

I still have this prompt and layout for an 'accidental voyeur' thing. Still don't know if it's helpful to writers or if they prefer something vague.

>>5315908
Forgot the link
http://pastebin.com/GFwjXKmx

>>5315778
Anything is better than an empty bump.

Hell, going through previous threads and reposting random requests would still be better.

>>5315343
Thread's deadness is very apparent. What's less clear at a glance is the boards's sinking rate.

>>5316330
From what I can tell, it's only generals and drawthreads that have much activity. Problem with the latter is anons seem overly keen to make the next thread, so the board gets spammed with multiples.

>>5316499
Ah, so no habit of having hyperactive threads ride autosage to page eight, always gotta be on the front?

>>5316330
>dead
we just have special interest in being eloquent fellows. just because we're comfy doesn't mean we can't get up.

i want to take requests but i'm so busy it'll take a long time to finish them

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Random request bump #1

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>>5320780
What kind of requests?
I got some good ones. But only for those with strong nerves.

>>5324036
i wont write scat or vore, i'll consider pretty much anything else

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>>5323437
Oh geez, I only made that second post in jest. I'm not so keen on girls being made to repay favors that way but if somebody likes it, that's cool.

Original image from that first post.

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>>5320780
There's >>5243337 but if the whole nudism thing is too big, you could just go for Annie and Kamlen having a casual fuck somewhere. There's not much straight Gunnerkrigg fanfiction.

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>>5107191
Requesting a story about a lonely mantis girl desperate for a loving husbando who isn't completely terrified of her (because of that head eating thing that was debunk a few years ago.) She can only get a date by pretending to be a moth-girl on dating sites and catfishing dudes an when they finally meet in person almost all of her dates run off (some times screaming) as soon as the truth is revealed
the ones that stay for the date out of pity always ghost her afterwards.
Maybe some Anon could give her a chance an end up with her after finding out how nice and cute of a girl she can be. Or maybe anon is one of her childhood friend that also can't get a date because he's human and bug girls are just scare/not interested in a huge guy like him.

>write porn section
>can't immediately start next porn section, male refractory period is a thing
>write filler section
>realize I have included both "fluff" and "angst" without consciously intending to

>>5324617
*insert timeskip here*
or just ignore logic. Many writers do it.

>>5324326
i'm not very familiar with these characters, but i can try

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>>5326630
The side comics aren't very long and should give you enough about the character personalities for some simple fucking. I doubt events from the main comic or special powers are required for that. Would be nice if it's Annie's first and Kamlen eases her into it.

Though the author hinted that women in her bloodline feel compelled to have kids, so maybe she's all polite and stoic until an offer of sex brings that mating instinct out of her. Not to the desperate degree mentioned in >>5186619 and >>5196096 but enough to make her more agreeable to mounting the dick of some guy she's only known for a week. (having a crush on him helps too.) Just an option though.

>>5324602
sounds adorable

I'm kinda curious, what's the overlap and what's the separation between this and /tg/-/d/'s smut writing thread?

>>5332063
I think /tg/'s smut weekend smut threads got the boot actually, unless I missed something.
I don't think there's any strict separation of write threads, though the difference here is that furry is allowed.

>>5333590
>I think /tg/'s smut weekend smut threads got the boot actually, unless I missed something.
Yes and they moved over to d, ergo "/tg/-/d/" I said.

And yeah, the more wide fetish is obvious. I was more curious if this thread is spontaneously genesising from the wilds of /trash/ or if it's a shoot-off.

>>5333617
spontaneous, someone wanted to know if a write thread was viable
we are like a flower blooming in a pile of garbage

>>5324036
What do you consider "for strong nerves"?

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Random request bump #2

>>5333701
I think it has to actually be alive for it to be blooming

>>5339263
it's monday anon, monday

>>5339320
Ohhh don't act like it isn't slow every day

>>5339320
Got to agree with >>5339320 I think its been three days since the last time I looked at this thread and it barely moved at all. Its probably dead I think your writers are all just back in college.

>>5339532
>>5339354
w-well i have been writing but it is very slow. there's no reason to keep a thread going if just one person is participating
thanks for sticking around though, hope we can have them again someday

>>5339532
college is a bitch desu

>>5339263
>insert poetic picture of a flower breaking through asphalt here

>>5334369
I assume said requests contain more of the extreme fetishes

mkay so the previous threads are
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4787574
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4676403
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4415258
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4203531
and I'm not missing any, right

>>5350906
Nope, that's all

>>5345902
Oh please, we're not as slow as Haydee threads but those still exist, stop being so melodramatic and get back to writing.

>DragonMILF raising young prince, wants to be a proper mother and will take extreme measures to do so
Will contain /ss/, MILFdragon, MILFdom, longterm unbirthing, and halfdragon TF

>>5352927
I'm confused, is that a request or something you're doing?
Sounds great either way, I mean I'm not much for unbirthing but still.

>>5320780
If you're still taking potential requests, I would like to see >>5119314 >>5277425. Any of the two scenarios.

>>5358976
I would forget about that request. This place is deserted no request here will end up being made.

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>>5360108
I have faith. Writing takes more time than art.

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>>5360290
Considering the other write threads gets something new everyday I doubt request here will end up being made if you look at the condition the thread is in.

>>5360337
True, Fandom generals have the benefit of a common interest. People know the characters better and want to write them in situations.

>>5108108
>>5124202
>>5140033
>>5140938
>>5143754
>>5147406
>>5148609
>>5156736
>>5184731
>>5213272
>>5245827
>>5255946
>>5258419
>>5271810
>>5307122
>>5315929

All the stories in the thread
most are repost an fics from other boards only two were actually made here and are new.

>>5360539
Okay?

I don't really see what you want out of this. Things are slow but it's better than just giving up.

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>>5360648
Just linking the story's if anyone wants to search for them but I will say since I've mostly been bumping this thread to not let it die and its been on the verge of dying multiple times I wonder if it would be better to just let it go and wait until the writers are ready to post to make a new thread.

>>5360750
Hmm. Maybe.

/aco/ seems to hate write threads for some reason and the janitors there have been deleting certain fandoms, including requests in the drawthread.

Maybe it would be easier to make a thread for both those things? A non-fur draw and write thread? Only problem is that puts furry writing prompts in a pickle.

>>5360970
Bingo the thing is that this general was made for people who wanted to write stories containing furry or xeno characters (since they are not allowed anywhere else on 4 chan) but from the state of things I would say either they all left or are just not interested anymore. If other fandoms are added to the thread I think it will just start a war because the furfags will complain about human stories in the thread.

>>5324669
I think he meant he couldn't write more porn because he came to his own porn scene, and had to recharge before he could do another one.

I'm working on the following:

Annie and Kamlen Gunnerkrigg short.
Female gengar and trainer short.

>>5362612
And I will be thinking of them every waking moment

Someone i think had posted some temmie stuff anyone got more links?

>>5362724
there are several archives

spam sucks

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>>5361065
Could do with more furry stories.

Sequential Art prompt: Scarlet's been looking through people's stuff and finds Kat's toy collection. Kat investigates a noise and finds Scarlet riding her longest dildo like a champ.

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>>5365896
Crap, wrong image. It was just that and this combined anyway.

>>5361065
>If other fandoms are added to the thread I think it will just start a war because the furfags will complain about human stories in the thread.
There is no indication that it's furry only.
Hell there have been requests for human on human fics since the first thread.

>>5360750
Keeping it afloat still provides a beacon for any potentially interested writer to follow.
And a reminder for anybody that was interested enough to start writing something.

>>5187756
Did anything come out of this?

>>5107191
>>7037473

>>5367669
I think they mean that if we mixed a human drawthread with mixed write requests, we'd have people saying the furry write requests don't belong.

>>5368790
i'm working on other stories first

whoosh

Looks like somebody's spamming new threads again, so bump

>>5375690
I really need to get some more things to bump with

>>5377219
Tempting to ask for WIPs but I'd probably backseat a lot if it's my request being written. Which is probably more annoying and discouraging than it is helpful.

>>5377429
maybe post related images?

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>>5377969
I don't think there's any Annie/Kamlen pics besides >>5324326

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Another furry idea for Sabrina Online: Because of a laundry disaster, Sabrina doesn't have any 'pants' to wear for work. So she goes without, hoping her natural fur keeps things covered.

Link for the pants joke
http://www.sabrina-online.com/strips/SabOnline57.GIF

I guess like the other nudist stuff, she's starts out nervous but gets used to it. Could have instances where she's standing on a train in front of some stranger sitting eye-level with her crotch and having some fun with him.

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More drawthread spam happening, so I'm bumping again.

too much spam

>>5360290
>Writing takes more time than art.
Depends on how good you're at it.

Some guys can draw an amazing good picture in a day.
Some guys can draft up 5k words of a story in a day.

>>5381018
Depends on the flow too, I guess. Sometimes you know exactly where to go and how to write it and other times you're stuck for an hour trying to word the most trivial thing possible.

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>>5383577

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Random request bump #3

>>5392288
nice, checked

>>5392288
bub dubs checked, and seconded

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I'd like to see a humiliation/bully story involving Calem (right, male protag) blackmailing Malva (left) for all the bullshit she got away with in Pokemon X/Y.
Essentially she would be forced go out on a date with him the entire day and be subject to quite some media attention considering her status and hanging out with a male. All the way she'd be subject to him sexually harrassing her via groping boobs and that hot ass, public ass slaps, forceful kissing, maybe even pantsing to name a few. Those tabloids would go nuts. Him berating/taunting her is a plus.

It would all eventually accumulate to him hate fucking/raping her in a Luminose alleyway (virgin, vag/anal, spanking) before releasing her secret to the public eye, whether by news report or internet, leaving her a complete wreck and her haughty spirit broken.

If you need context: She is an elite four member and news/holocast reporter. She is also part of the evil team of the game (Team Flare). When all was said and done she outright tells the players in the post game via barganing with Galatic Police, with her being arrogant/smug throughout.

If you need Malva's idea of personality, see http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Malva

Bonus pic because why not: http://imgur.com/a/P7Raw

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http://archiveofourown.org/series/395008

http://pastebin.com/9MkaBcFW

http://pastebin.com/BtCenyjT

3 of the things I'm proud of. I don't have many that I can say that about.

>writing story
>nearly finish
>suddenly want to add on way more shit

>>5403305
Which story? If it's a request, you could always run it through here.

>>5403305
Finish and post it first, and then make a "Director's Cut" version with all of the extra shit.

>>5403405
generic guy gets raped by gengar

Boring bump

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Random request bump #4

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>>5408407
oh hey that was my request being used to bump. Kinda nice that it was chosen for a random bump

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Random request bump #5

>>5410408
Some of these are requests I really wanted to do, but I lack the ability to write anything I'm pleased with and in general cannot write worth a damn. So I'm hoping someone with actual talent can take a look at them.

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Random request bump #6

You guys are really creative when it comes to your fap material

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>>5415291
Hidden nudity is fun, like >>5379673

Another idea from years ago was a character going to a halloween party with a bodypaint skeleton suit for one reason or another. In this case with Kat from Gunnerkrigg, because of the nude beach headcanon.

Dumping before I sleep.
>>5417374
Thanks to Random Request Anon for giving me the idea for this OP update.

Would love to get a strange and fun request to work on tomorrow. Gonna go to bed now, but here is some of the stuff i've done.
Gay story about alien rape
http://pastebin.com/LwDnuJe0
Straight story with samus being cum inflated and a lot of space pirates jacking off
http://pastebin.com/w4wPSdi6
and cutesy kobold and gnoll lewd times story
http://pastebin.com/Ebi8Ak1E

>>5324602
Oh shit, i fucking love mantis girls. Gonna jump on it. I'm >>5417726 but i'll still take another idea too if it's something fun!