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Zootopia Thread: Taking Bunrobics a little too seriously Edi

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Zootopia Thread: Taking Bunrobics a little too seriously Edition

Pastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T
Booru: zoo.booru.org
ZTArchive: ztarchive.com
Desustorage: desuarchive.org/trash

Thematic Thursday: Current Theme: /fit/ Zootopia
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There is such a lack of art of Gideon and Clawhauser doing things together.
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>>4101436
It's a shame that Chumbo never did anything with the two of them together. He actually seemed to like both characters.
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>>4102006
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Nick is a good doggo
I want to pet him and tell him that hes the goodest doggo in the world
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Reminder that VRBit beats Bunanon with a ruler while cucking Red every night
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he's here
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>>4102401
he's not real.
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CЦCKED
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>>4102411
terrible edit
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>>4102427
can I get a source?
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>>4102471
Zootwopia.
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>>4102442
Its not even on the correct ear.
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but what if Nick cucks Jack

like Jack has some stripey, dowdy little wife back home and Nick shows up and just plows her little bunnyburrow
just fucks her bunny brains out
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>>4102471
The Godfather?
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>>4102518

What if Jack is a broken, emotionless, empty shell of a man and encourages Nick and Judy to follow their hearts and be with each other because trying to deny the part of you that loves is just killing yourself slowly.
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>>4102427
captcha COCK 1700
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BB's new comic is making me want to revise a fic I did where Nick was squatting in some abandoned building and Judy gets pissed that he never told her.

I don't know why but I can't feel like I missed the mark? Was it too heartfelt? Too melodrama? I'm really not good at analyzing my own work, so please give me critiques!!!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11952387/1/Moving-In

also I wrote this a long-ass time ago before browsing the threads so if I get some details wrong I apologize
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Roll one up if you haven't already!
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>>4102518
>her
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I wrote this for the TT /fit/ theme. I posted it in the previous thread but I'd still like some more feedback if anyone wants to give it.

The plague/plaque typo in the first paragraph has been noted and changed in the main document. Thanks to the two anons that pointed it out.

http://pastebin.com/a2hPqFPw
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>>4102471
You're joking, right?
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>Everyone posting TT submissions
Its NEXT Thursday, isn't it??
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Alright let's get extra weird. Jack falls in love with Nick, who is still with Judy. Nick gets seduced and they fugg, he feels like shit afterwards. So he tells Judy who is kind of angry but also kind of likes it cause she's gross like that and wants a 3 way. Jack becomes close to them while Nick/Judy are still a couple, Nick/Judy decide they want kids and want Jack to provide the seed and be a godfather. So Jack knocks up Judy while Nick is balls deep in his ass and using him like a motherfucking proxy-fuck. Fuck yeah.

If that's not weird enough for you, then Jack can turn into Nick's lust penis and enable him to knock up Judy himself.

If you don't know what a lust penis is, consider yourself lucky. Seriously.
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>>4102719
Yep
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>Weaver's leaving
>People get actually upset
Why are there so many Weaver dicksuckers in these threads? Are you all just a bunch of FN@Faggots who migrated?
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>>4102732
yes.
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>>4102615
I'm not terribly good at giving in depth critiques, but on a technical level at least, you're a pretty solid writer anon. No major spelling or grammatical errors, no wooden or unnatural dialogue. None that I can see so far anyway. Shit like that drives me up the wall faster than anything.
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>>4102728
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>>4102732
wait, weaver's leaving?
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>>4102746
You can't stop me.
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>>4102753
>>4102732
He isn't.
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>>4102732
Because he's active, interacts in the threads, isn't an ass, and is consistently funny.
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>>4102732
Weavis didn't Leavis

At least not yet...
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>>4102732
>Thinking Weaver started with FNAF
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>>4102728
You had me up until you had Jack transform into a replacement dick for Nick.

Nick fucking Jack silly, knotting him, and slamming him into Judy relentlessly is not a bad image though.
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>>4102518
>>4102578
what if jack's their adopted son
and nick fucks his brains out
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>>4102802
>You had me up until you had Jack transform into a replacement dick for Nick.
That was basically just a joke. I'm sure SOMEONE will like it though.
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>>4102796
Yeah, everyone knows Weaver started with MLP.
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>>4102744
that's probably what bugs me the most though. I'm a fairly well educated native English speaker, so that's like setting the bare minimum for my writing.

I'm not in the realm of literature, however. I don't read many novels, just watch films. So I feel like I need tips on the...production? The setting up of stories to make them feel wholesome. Having a style that is unique and captivating. That kind of stuff.

Alternatively I could just be Fan Panda-Ring smut/meme writer for the threads.
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>>4102411
>tfw you had a fic idea about VRbune for cyberpunk thematic thursday
Comic doesn't sound like he lifts...
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>>4102635
>Rolled a Jackal
>Dubs for location
>Still haven't made up my mind where to stay

Any suggestions? My character is a chef, so he could find work in any area, since no matter where you go there's always someplace serving food nearby. Although he is a prideful person, so he'd prefer to be attached to someplace fancy or famous.
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>>4102819
>you will never be so popular people cosplay as your characters
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>>4102795
Why does this seem really suspicious to me? Like i feel one of them or both isnt actually him.
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>>4102819
Weaver's stuck his penis in so many things its hard to believe he started with something that DIDNT involve porn
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>>4102833
I'm a Jackal that lives in riverside. We can hang out.
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>>4102753
Actually we're all leaving, in order to protest 4chan's misogynistic campaign against the new Ghostbusters.
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Just a little thing for the new thread.

So, with the large species diversity, there have to be a few stereotypes that are somewhat valid. So on that note, what species do you think is the worst to have for a boss? On average, of course
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>>4102831
I had a feeling there'd at least be one writefag who planned to do a VRBit fic if it was cyberpunk.

Comic has mentioned exercise a couple times in the past.
I think he jogs or something.
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>>4102802
>>4102728
>"Hey, Jack, it's me Nick! Just calling because, well, uh, Judy wants another litter....I know! This question doesn't get any less awkward to ask the third time....you'll do it? Great! Yeah I have the same lube I used on you last time and....yeah of course you can stay the night, and I promise to be gentler on you this ti-....oh you want it harder?......Damn, well, one fox cock is waiting for your sweet ass this Saturday night!"
>"Tell Jack I said hi!"
>"Judy says hello, and thank you, Jack...alright, see you then, we'll go out and have dinner first. Later bud."
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>>4102831
IIRC he has decent numbers on his lifts.
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>>4102884
Platypus.

Looks like a freak. Lays eggs. If you piss off one of the males you might end up getting poisoned by venom that will leave horrible pain for your entire life.
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>>4102839
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>>4102839
I don't recognize them.
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Linking Ground Fighting since it is relevant to the theme of the day
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7416004

Comicanon did a reading.
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/ground-fighting

Meanwhile, I am trying to think of something new to write with the theme, and so far failing.
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>>4102872
dumb eweposter
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When I see insecure anons worried about people leaving/dying I wanna give them a hug.
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>>4102931
RubyQuest. They're cosplaying as Weaver's quest characters.
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we need more beaver and cute otter boys
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>>4102848
One guy made a joke about him leaving not long before that, and he ran with it.
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>>4102635
rolling for location.

Got Ox, decided to go big or go home and be a Gaur, which is apparently the largest species! And since Bogo exists I figured a female bovine would be cool, so here's my thick bitch.
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>>4102819
Older than that.

>>4102848
I was suspicious about the fact that he was using periods at the ends of his lines.
Usually he doesn't use periods if a sentence ends at a line break.
But I don't recall seeing the Sharla pic before, and Weaver has been know to fuck around like this as a means of distracting threads from current drama (in this case, S8's absence).

>>4102884
What's that last line say? "You are wanting to publish, right?"
Is she implying that hitting her with that halberd will help him in his writing?

And in reply to your question; hippo.
No grand reason, it's just that some of the worst bosses I've had reminded me of hippos in various ways.
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>>4103009
Welcome to the Nocturnal District, motherfucker. Hope you didn't like the sun.
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>>4103037
>I was suspicious about the fact that he was using periods at the ends of his lines.
>Usually he doesn't use periods if a sentence ends at a line break.
If it's a seriouspost
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>>4102822
You'd be better off asking somebody else. I'm a pretty good writer myself, but I wouldn't know how to instruct others, and although I do read quite a bit, my grounding in the literary arts is by no means stellar. Still, know that if you were to ask me what you did wrong, nothing really jumps out at me. That's a good start in my book.
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>>4103037
>Is she implying that hitting her with that halberd will help him in his writing?
How are you supposed to write about people killing with halberds if you don't even know what it feels like to really give somebody a good whack with one?
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>>4103005
source of image?
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>>4102901
I wouldn't mind living life like that
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>>4102901
Get a writefag on it son
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>>4103037
But publish, it is likely for some sort of scholarly paper, so less with writing, and more data collection.

Now, what data can be collected by smacking someone about with a halberd is another question entirely.
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>>4102964
sensei bunny says: all things are impermanent, this is the law of life and death
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>>4103081
No idea, got it from these threads. Sorry.
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>>4103153
Such a wise bun
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>>4103153
Thank you, oh wise master
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>>4103153
sensei bunny loves them cheap whores with dewlaps
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>>4102964
Having been an anon who has posted my fears about people close to me dying: Thanks.

Honestly it's almost embarrassing how much these threads have helped my psyche
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>>4103153
Yes grandmaster!
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baa baa black sheep
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>>4103327
torpedo upgrade acquired
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>>4103221
>>4103245
>>4103305
enjoy your day, write your greentext, draw you doodles, shitpost you ideas, why worry about tomorrow when you can enjoy the now? those who left may return and if not, other may come

>>4103285
you know it
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Greentexts! Get your greentexts heeeuuure! You want action? Adventure? Comfiness? Feels? Step right up and Nate the Writedude will spin your "Wilde"-est fantasies into little green words you can read again and again.

Not writing anything new today because I'm working on my pastebin.

Here's what we have so far.

http://pastebin.com/u/NateTheWritedude
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>>4103339
These sheep tiddies are of high quality
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>>4103350
Nick attempts to take Judy out on a date, but she takes him out to a much nicer, more romantic one first.
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>>4103365
the restaurant meal goes to shit so they end up in a diner, date ends übercomfy
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>>4103392
That idea works too. Ending can be whatever.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dEB1iX-VTiM

This is the worst fucking video I've ever seen

If I didn't hate Clawhauser before, I would fucking despise him after watching this
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>>4102427
10/10
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>>4103350

see
>>4102728
>>4102802
>>4102901
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>>4103058
Well then thank you so much! I guess I'll just leave the fic as is then. Not like I have a strict timeline. I just kinda like writing Nick in Judy in whichever situations pleases me at the moment. I have like, 4 or 5 ideas for them getting together that I like, ranging from slow-burn to night of passion.

You're probably better than I. My only reading nowadays is fics. Hearing that I'm doing alright despite being a Bio major is a feelgood moment.

>>4103038
Now I'm rolling for job, I guess. Nocturnal, really? Why would an ox live here? Maybe she works during the day, which is like, the Nocturnal District's "midnight shift" ??? That exist?

>>4103117
That's my secret, Cap, I am the writefag. Was thinking of writing a dumb little "male bunny hits on Nick rather than Judy" story to see both of them get jealous. Maybe I should just use Jack though. Not sure how much I like his nonexistant character. Cuck memes definitely ruined him a bit and even though the "he's actually into Nick!" angle is funny it still doesn't do much to flesh him out.
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No, pure fox-bun breeding only. None of that same-species shit.
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Do you guys like Avo?
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>>4103574
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>>4103574
Avo's okay I guess
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>>4103574

Avo is pretty cool
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>>4103574
I want to suck Avo's dick like a lollipop.
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DAILY REMINDER
DON'T TOUCH FOXES
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>>4103574
He's alright I guess.
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>>4103637
>he
oh anon
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>>4103629
YOU CANT TELL ME WHAT TO DO
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>>4103624
>>4103637
low tier bait
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>>4103637
I think you mean "Shklee"

>inb4 *tumblr intensifies*
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>>4103666
Satan, this is how you got kicked out of heaven
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>>4103574
I used to but then weaver made him a girl
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>>4103666
FUCK OFF SATAN YOU CANT TRICK ME AND MINE
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>>4103574
I haven't seen much of him, to be perfectly honest.
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>>4103574
Literally who
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>>4103767
Nice tacticool knife and gun, what did you come here because you were the laughing stock of /k/?
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>>4103037
Old weaver was a magical thing.
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I have literally no grasp on any of the details involving physical fitness.

I must write something for TT.

Wat do?
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>>4103574
Didn't Weaver make some weird eldritch horror edit of Avo?
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>>4103754
Oh fuck you
Judy with spongebob voice is not what I wanted
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>>4103811
Lurk /fit/, remove the gay part and you are done
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>>4103574
I want to fight with Avo over turns sucking Al's dick.
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>>4103811
Well if you're afraid of triggering any /fit/anons, you could just stick to basic stuff; jogging, hiking, cycling, etc.
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>>4103836
>remove the gay
but anon that's how I get my (you)s
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MUTUAL MATERNITY CONTINUES

>It was important to Judy to have biological children
>Every fiber in her being was screeching at her at the same time to reproduce
>And she wanted little bundles of joy to take care of
>To call her own and nurture
>She felt as though she could give the world at least one smart, respectful bunny who could make a difference
>She knew her and Nick would be great parents
>But never would their gametes unite and create a beautiful combination of its parents
>She would never get to see Nick's exciteable green eyes in her little bunny
>Nor would she ever see herself in a bouncy little fox kit
>It was a sickening realization to Judy
>Surely she was just being silly
>She would love her babies despite all that, wouldn't she?
...
>Judy bursts through the door
>"Nick, I want to try your mutual impregnation idea!"
>"Are you sure, Judy? If you're not comfortable with it, we could always adopt..."
>"No. I want to have beautiful children. If I don't calm this screaming in my womb, I might go insane."
>"Great! I'll call Whitney Gekkers and tell her what we're doing."
>Judy snarls a bit and pouts on the couch
>Nick seems a little too excited about this plan
>She flips through her address book and remembers a bunny she met on the job
>He was the smartest, savviest, and most suave man she had ever encountered
>Dr. Jack Savage
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>>4103767
I've heard of Stu Hopps...
But a hopping stew?
Outrageous.
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>>4103865
Then it's even easier.
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>>4103897
>demon tribal
gross.
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>>4103869
Wait... when did this start?
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>>4103923
either last thread or the one before, can't remember
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>>4103923
It started yesterday. I'll go ahead and repost the only other installment for you:

>After three years of marriage, Nick Wilde and Judy Hopps decide they want to have children
>"How should we go about it?" Nick asks
>"We obviously can't make little hybrid funnies and boxes ourselves."
>Judy replies "I don't know..."
>"What about adoption?" he says
>"But Nick, what I really want is to be able to look into my little baby's eyes and see us in there..."
>"I want our babies to come from us in some way."
>"So you're saying you want to get artificially inseminated?"
>"I really do..."
>"But what about me, Carrots? Don't you want a little fox kit running around too?"
>"I can't give birth to a fox, Nick."
>Judy and Nick sit in silence for a while and ponder what they should do
>Nick stands up
>"I have an idea, Fluff!"
>"We should find a friend that we both really trust, and... have you impregnated, and have me impregnate a surrogate."
>"Nick! You think I'm going to be okay with you fucking some fox floozy?"
>"It wouldn't be about fucking, Judy, it would be about impregnation. I swear, if we both just put our minds to it, it shouldn't take but once or twice."
>"I'll have to think about it."
>Judy walks outside and leaves Nick to his own thoughts
>"I just want a little fox guy of my own..."
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>>4103869
>mutual cucking
Nope
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>>4103869
so, how is this going to happen? artificial insemination? one on one with both couples looking at each other? one is artificial while the other does it the way God intended? i'm at the edge of my seat here
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>>4103935
>>4103936
Thanks, mates!
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>>4103962
doge
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Hey everyone. Do you want to read a little story?

A lot of people seemed upset I misled them about the premise of the last one, and I feel bad.

So I made a cute one this time, honest.
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What ever happened to magic disney babies? I liked that. It was comfy. Now we have to come up with elaborate cucking scenarios, or worse, adoption.
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>>4104038
You had me at cute

Which is honestly pretty late into that post, but give it to us anyways
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>>4104038
Oh, my love for you is unconditional, do post.
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I have a thing for step-siblings going at it, so I'm not that upset
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>>4104040
>adoption.
Fuck you too, asshole. Some of us are only here because adoption is a thing.
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>>4103965
I will never understand why y'all are so huffy about mutual sharing. Going behind somebody's back and being an emasculating adulterous asshole, but openly sharing is cool.

Y'all probably don't even polyamory.
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>>4104040
The last nofun faggot got triggered so hard he started foaming on the ground because it made no sense that a bunny and a fox had a kid in a movie where bunnies eat a fuckload of carrots and live, bunny overpopulation isn't a problem and where a substance as dangerous as Nighthowler was so unknown despite it's possible militaristic use and being commonly used by country hillbillies who were following the news of Zootopia.
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>>4104143
Cucking is literally open sharing.

Cuck.
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>>4104143
Polyamory is the best way to get money, with 3 or more incomes you'll be rich
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>>4104143
>Wow sure is wrong for you all to judge something I'm into
>Lemme judge you all now.
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>>4104184
I didn't say you're wrong, I said I don't understand it. Don't be so defensive.
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>>4104143
>polyamory
you should join my harem, if you're not already in it. I love all my buns and various other mammals


going to draw some faces now, y'all probably won't like em tho
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>>4104195
yeah, what he said
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>>4104040
Shit I actually really love the casual tone of this dialog
She's staring at his dick and they're about to go for the first time and they're just having friendly, laid back banter
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>>4104227
>y'all probably won't like em tho
Smiles crying, right?
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>>4104038
You, you. Give me,warm. Give me, soft. Give me, cute!
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>>4104143
true, healthy polyamory is extremely difficult to find and maintain
plus, a cuck is a cuck.
a cuck by any other name would smell as stinky
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>>4104227
as long as it's not domestic abuse or the outcome of an industrial accident i'm good
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Posting foxes
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>>4104257
ding ding
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>>4102635
Rolling for job!
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>>4104038
>>4104073
>>4104089

Are you sure you're ready for this? I think this might be my greatest one yet. I call it
>Inevitable
Actually let me try to do that that more dramatically. I call it

> I N E V I T A B L E
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>>4104227
>>4104257
Y'know, I personally think think today is a good day for some feels.
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>>4104273
crying out of feels or sensory overload?
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>>4104297
>think think
Why can I never type properly?
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>>4104232
casually speaking and being openly playful/laughing at things are top tier
I'm sure you know that though
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>>4104296
just fucking do it.
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>>4104296
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>>4104298
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>>4104268
I'll accept a cool industrial accident that results in a titanium jaw bone
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>>4104296
What exactly about "unconditional" confuses you, Mead?
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>>4104232
>Staring at his dick
>"Cheese and crackers Nick, I can't swallow that!"
>"Good news! It's a suppository."
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>>4104296
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>>4104296
Uh oh. Ive got a bad feeling here
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>>4104143
>Y'all probably don't even polyamory.
polyamory is a liberal invention to justify being a slut.

it's also a form of cuckoldry/swinging.

stop being a kek
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>>4102953
I am too.

Thinking of like, a combination of Foxcatcher with Whatever Happened to Baby Jane?

But the idea sounds... dumb and emotion bait-y.

I'm going to dive into more source material.
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>>4104296

>>4104329
It's quite short though. So I figure I'll upload one panel every 10 minutes, to make the moment last longer.

Haha, actually for real my internet sucks, it's not intentional.

>>4104375
>>4104377
Don't worry, this one is hardly sad at all, and it certainly doesn't have some mood whiplash twist at the end, I swear.
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>>4104408
>thinking being a slut needs a justification
>implying sluts aren't precious beings to be cherished
bruv where do i even start with you
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>>4104296
Oh...oh shit...
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>>4104296
My body is ready for the feels... Or at least, I hope so.
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>>4104138
You're adopted? GTFO.
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>>4104173
got any more nick cuck stuff?
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>>4102635
Toad, rolling a job.
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>>4104453
>GTFO

Pass.
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>>4104428
>Nose twitching
This one's for you, Comic
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>>4104436
you can stop right there actually, I'm not a cuck
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>>4104483
You gotta roll on non-zootopia creatures
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>>4104436
Being a slut is a bad thing. They spread disease, wreck the foundation of basic relationships, emotionally unhealthy, etc.
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>>4104483
Mammals only, bruh. You should be able to filter the RNG for it. If not, just auto-pass on non-mammals.
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>>4104451
source of image?
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>>4104501
>>4104510
Right lads, enjoy your procreation-only mish sex with the one woman you can find that reminds you most of your mom
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this isn't that bad at all, I don't know what I was so worried about
it's just a cute Smiles
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>>4104173
Looks like such a fucking loser. Couldn't find a better one, Judy?
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>>4104555
Smiles has become a giraffe.
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>>4104555
>eyes
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>>4104539
Afraid I don't recall, anon. Could be I picked it up from this thread long before.
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>>4104428
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>>4104428
>Don't worry, this one is hardly sad at all, and it certainly doesn't have some mood whiplash twist at the end, I swear.
I know you're lying, but i'll enjoy the cake anyways
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>>4104548
>reminds you most of your mom

Does that mean they're symbolically cucking their father's?

I suppose that'd make them cucksons.

And then eventually they'd have their own kids who'll eventually cuck them.

So in reality, cucking is inevitable.
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>>4104579
>this kills the Comicanon
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>>4104579
JUST BOOP HER ALREADY

>>4104580
>I know you're lying, but i'll enjoy the cake anyways
He is lying: it's gonna go from dark, stormy and nervous Nick to booping and giggling.
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>>4104579
Mead, did you see the ending to Dressed Down?
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>>4104573
ur mom name is jdy lmao??
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>>4104548
enjoy your vapid, loose, high-maintenance, disease-ridden, unhygenic, "women"

getting laid is the most important aspect of relationships, especially when you do it with someone who gives it out like greetings
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>>4104555
what did your bunners do to get that reaction out of you?
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>>4104555
>>4104575
yeah neck needs work
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>>4104555
Man that's weird.

I mean, aesthetically it's great, but it's just jarring as heck.
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>>4104040
>is that really necessary
CONDOMS ARE NOT JUST FOR CONTRACEPTION THEY PREVENT YOU FROM GETTING STDS FOR FUCK'S SAKE
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>>4104636
oh god

the thought of Smiles being disappointed is fucking terrifying

Jesus
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>>4104636
>finger in the butt
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>>4104631
>vapid
>high-maintenance
>"women"
Oh boy. You don't even know you've been born, have you?
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>>4104664
What can pass from foxes to rabbits though? There may be a few things.
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>>4104689
am i being memed? or are you an actual cuck?
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>>4104691
hybrids
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>>4104040
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>>4104664
if it's a monogamous relationship you fucking deal with it, fuck you can even get STDS from fucking too much
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>>4102615

Yo. You asked for critique, and I'm going to be harsh but fair. I'm also going to be pretty in-depth, so this'll be one of several posts.

>weak opening line
The opening line of any piece of fiction is perhaps the most important. In this case, the first sentence accomplishes setting the scene with the dialogue, rendering everything after that redundant. We can infer from Judy's words exactly where she is, what's going on, and who she's speaking to. Telling us she said this "after showing up promptly after being called" is unnecessary, and doesn't give a good first impression.

>confusing scene setting (bogo's chair?)
The following sentences don't do much to improve the first impression. In describing Nick seated "in Bogo's chair" we are left to imagine Nick is sitting in the Chief's chair, behind the desk, which, while an amusing idea, obviously isn't the intent.

>confusing metaphors (how are eyes like a buffalo?
Let's look at the structure of your metaphors, with this first one as an example. Why describe his eyes as "like" those of a buffalo weary with the duties of police chief if that's exactly what he IS? This is basically just wasted words; you could achieve the same effect simply by describing Bogo's expression in brief. This isn't the only time you get long-winded with metaphors, either.

>tense shifting
Big no-no. "Judy had thought" sets the sentence up as past tense, which is consistent with the rest of the prose in the fic, but throwing "she enjoys" into the mix, which is present tense, is very jarring. This also shows up in a number of other places throughout the fic.
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>>4104609
>>this kills the Comicanon

Don't worry, I've been prepared for such an occurrence.
Knowing that one day Comicanon will leave us, I initiated a secret cloning project.
Just think of it, dozens of genetically engineered VRBits, designed to bring comfy at all hours of the day, without need for sleep.

>"SKREEEE!!! GiV bLuuDD aFff SssslEEEpYYhedZzz! SKREEE!!!"

...There's still some kinks to work out, but I expect tremendous success!
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>>4104689
he's just jelly
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>>4104729

>too much character description--describing their actions one way, then adding unnecessary clarification to it
The fifth paragraphs stands as an example of your tendency to use overt prose to describe what a character is feeling, when it would be far more effective to describe their expressions and actions instead. A raised eyebrow from Judy, a cautious approach to the desk, and so on would convey exactly what she's thinking and feeling in an instant.

>Nick's physical description comes way too late
Describing Nick in his usual street attire is fine; waiting until we're five paragraphs in, when this change of attire is important to the plot, is not. This scene being set in the ZPD, it is natural for the reader to concoct an image of Nick in police uniform right off the bat. Suddenly being hit with description to the contrary is very jarring, especially since this detail is something Judy ought to have noticed immediately upon walking in, even if the chair's back was to her upon entering--after all, she was able to take in his face and body language in a heartbeat.

>inconsistent viewpoint
It seems like Judy is the lens we're viewing things through, as the prose starts with her and describes her thoughts and emotions, but then Nick gets some description of things only he could know or feel, which is jarring. This is another systemic problem, as we bounce between both Nick and Judy all throughout the fic.
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>>4104579

>>4104611
Man, am I really that predictable?

Better do something unexpected for the next JHT then.

>>4104580
Wasn't lying!

Sorry for being so short this time, but I hope you liked it!
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>>4104741
>two eyes
>sharp teeth instead of human mouth
Come on.

This isn't a proper VRBit.
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>>4104579
get ON with it!
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>>4104741
nOT THIS AGAIN
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>>4104721
>>4104664
Not if both are clean and they stay faithful. Remember the ABCs of preventing the spread of STIs
Abstinence
Be faithful
Condoms
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>>4104649

The eyes say 'who are you' but the neck says 'rub me'
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>>4104761
>setup for conflict is weak
When it comes down to it, the whole reason for this opening scene makes little sense. Why would Bogo take such a vested, official interest in Nick's place of living, and why would he make an ultimatum out of it? It'd be far more appropriate for him, as chief, to reach out to his subordinate with a helping hand. That's what a leader does. Further, if this really has been going on for a while, Judy really ought to have noticed Nick's lack of domicile sooner--calling attention to that fact in the text just makes the reader question it, too. Bogo is honestly an unnecessary actor in all this; Nick and Judy are the only two we really need in this story.

>"this made Nick feel"
Also a big no-no. As an automaton based on Satan once said, "You can't just have your characters announce how they feel! That makes me feel angry!" It is far simpler--and more effective--to describe a character's expressions and body language to convey their emotions. This is because it requires the reader to empathize with the character as described, which invests them in the narrative more.

>lack of scene break is jarring
One moment, we're following Nick and Judy out of the ZPD, then a cab is hailed, and suddenly we're inside Judy's apartment. Any time you're going to change environs like this, you would do well to include a horizontal line, or some other break in the text to inform the reader that this is a new scene. Alternatively, if you want to keep it all as one scene, describe the transition as they ride the cab, dismount, and walk up to Judy's apartment--just give the reader some stage directions.
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>>4104762
that's fuckin cute mead
It's great seeing you do stuff that doesn't end on a downer note these days.
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>>4104762
Gosh darn it to heck, das cute
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>>4104786
>overblown emotions
Why, exactly, is Judy moved to tears by this whole affair? Even with the long descriptions of the characters' mental states (more on that in a moment), I'm still wondering why the waterworks are being turned on over something so small. The first and last time we saw Judy cry in the movie was when she was pouring out all her mistakes in a last-ditch attempt to regain her friend's trust--here, she's getting teary-eyed over a simple new problem, which is out-of-character for her. Her initial reaction is spot-on; I imagine she would be rather miffed that Nick never bothered to tell her he was still living on the streets, but cooling down from that doesn't mean crying over it.

>lengthy paragraphs describing characters' feelings--should be apparent through dialogue and action
To reiterate--it is always much more effective to impart a character's emotions through description of body language and dialogue. Giving the reader huge blocks of text to read in order to understand what the characters are going through is intensely inefficient compared to just giving us a view at how these actors on the stage are performing.

>sudden, intense profanity
On a final note, one of the closing lines suddenly smacks the reader with the word "fuck" with all the unexpectedness and ferocity of a sniper shot to the head. This is literally the only swear in the entire fic, and it's one of the most profane. Now, profanity is fine if used effectively and consistently, but suddenly throwing an F-bomb out after 3,000 words of clean prose is just jarring.

All in all, I'm sorry to say this is obviously an early attempt at writing fiction. That said, this is an early attempt at writing fiction, so that's perfectly fine. Hopefully my critiques were of some use, and if you require clarification on anything I've talked about, don't hesitate to ask.
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>>4104762
Dammit mead, this is nice

I kept waiting for the twist, glad that it wasn't like that
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>>4104762
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>>4104762
ALL IS WELL
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>>4104762
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>>4104773
You don't have to be faithful, just make sure everyone is tested
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>>4104762
>boop
11/10
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>>4104762
MASTER EMOTIONMANCER
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>>4104700
>actually believes the cuck meme
>can't tell if he's being memed
cutie you dumb as hell
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>>4104762
>Man, am I really that predictable?

>Better do something unexpected for the next JHT then.
Oh god, am I gonna pay for saying the outcome?
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>>4104825
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>>4104825

I've said it before and I'll say it again: some animator better have gotten impressively paid for all of these.
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>>4104812
I'm still waiting for the twist. It's all just death. Remember, she drops dead and leaves him a lifeless hull of a person.
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>>4104856
no, you're just ill-mannered. Even if one knows the outcome of the joke, one waits out for their conversation partner to finish it.
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>>4104837
bruh, you're too many layers of ironic-deep 4 me

teach me your ways
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>>4104773
what is honeymoon disease?

>abstinence
not indulging yourself at every possible moment you can with your SO in carnal pleasure
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>>4104762
It just hit me

For some reason I thought her arm was twitching, not her nose.

Its so obvious now, but yeah
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>>4104825
I prefer the rare Nick twitch.
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>>4104764
I did say there were some kinks.
I mean, look at the Mark One here.

>"I'm sorry, I simply have no time to read any of this, I'm too busy with my personal life. And no, I won't share the events of my day with you, that's private."

Useless as a stump.
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>>4104892
True, but I didn't actually know it. If I did I wouldn't have taken a shot at it.
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>>4104762
mead pls... after this comic we REALLY need the most cheesy comic your mind can produce.
And of course in the canon timeline with Nick and an ALIVE judy
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>>4104937
I mean, I'll take cold shoulder over...

Sharp toothed bloodlust.
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>>4104762
goddamit MEAD I think you just gave me diabetes
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>>4104937
>>"I'm sorry, I simply have no time to read any of this, I'm too busy with my personal life. And no, I won't share the events of my day with you, that's private."
seems legit
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>>4104930
So how good is his sense of smell?

I wonder if that'll be relevant in the future. I mean its hard to do scent related stuff in movies because scent isn't very visual unless you do like "colored gas represents smells" which is kinda clunky or simply have the characters say what they smell, which works in limited amounts, but can easily go into "telling not showing".
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>>4103562
Iji is a severely underappreciated drawfag. I have seen him post new stuff and barely anyone notices.
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>>4104959
>Sharp toothed bloodlust.

Well apparently you don't get comfy without splicing in a few hellbeasts.
>>
So is chief Wilde finally going to get with July and have sone happiness for the first time in twenty years?
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>>4103562
>>4105023

Severely underappreciated? Well shit I appreciate the hell out of this draw.
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>>4105023
Most people just assume it's some anon reposting.
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>>4105049
It's up to Mead at this point. The DD author fucking kicked Nick in the balls and left him on the lawn of the ZPD to die.
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>>4105049
Nah
But I bet in the end he finds happiness in other ways.

But I don't think he should get with July
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>>4104993
>its hard to do scent related stuff in movies because scent isn't very visual

Methinks they did just fine with that scene with the wolf, wind, and him catching Nick's scent on said wind. Nick having a good nose for trouble wouldn't be difficult at all to establish--just give us a scene where he notes some smell which Judy, our audience surrogate, doesn't notice, and bam--character trait established.
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>>4105023
What
I though they were reposts
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>>4105023
well, ilji is so good you'd think it was reposted
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>>4105082
It is a repost.
>>4105023
They've only been here a couple of days.
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>>4104993
He adds it as 'excellent' on his job application and foxes have stashes of food all over the place they can dig back up and find when needed. I'd say pretty damn good. Would need to look into it some more though.
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>>4105049
its the needlessly melodramatic au dude. need to milk those (You) hard.
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>>4103869
>mutual cucking under the guise of surrogacy

>not even artificial insemination from a sperm bank and doctor
>but actual fucking

This is just a lame-ass excuse to introduce savage as a cucker

Couples go to a fucking sperm bank and tell the doctor what they want and the doctor finds a suitable donor while at the same time maintaining the donor's privacy

they do not find an attractive donor on the street and fuck them once or more in order to conceive

weak premise for a story
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>>4105113
>It is a repost.
Actually I checked for it and I can't find the file but I swear I've seen that nick face before...
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>>4104741
>>4104937
...How many iterations have you made of cloned VRBits?
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>>4105123
Wait, did he mention smell on his form?

I just remember night vision and business savy
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>>4104649
I dunno, might redo this one, after dinner
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>>4104138
>adopted
Disgusting.
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>>4105049
No
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>>4104791 >>4104797 >>4104812 >>4104814 >>4104988

Well you know me, I spread joy wherever I go!

>>4104813
Actually this one is me trying to make you smile..

>>4104856
Nah, you'll get to share the joy with everyone else just like usual.

>>4104927
Damn, I guess I have to work on making my nose-twitching buns more clearly rendered.

>>4104943
Hmmm I don't know if I have an idea like that... but would you be happy with a SavageHopps story?

>>4105049
Yes. Maybe. Possibly. In a comic.

Oh wait "get with" in that sense is very unlikely.

Maybe eventually he'll smile in a panel though.

>>4105125
This guy gets it!
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>>4105131
Was going to say this myself but fuck it, it's about the sex to them. Why not just threesome it if that's the point.
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>>4104040
Disney magic babies have riled up people in these threads ever since the movie came out.

It doesn't help Rich and Byron basically shot down the idea anyway. They said any babies had would be on at least relatively realistic terms.
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>>4105175
Dude

We've had like 3 or 4 comics of "Chief Wilde is so fucking SAD"

I can't blame him, for being bored of it.
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>>4105175
Oh no, I do understand loss, especially experiencing it firsthand, it's just that after 30 years people become dull, move on and (unfortunately) forget. I never meant to strike a nerve, though, sorry if it hit you.
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>>4105131
shh, your points will come up later in the story.
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>tfw maybe, just maybe you'll get this ending
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>>4105131
cutie, you dumber than the last guy
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>>4104138
>>4104040
Adopted kids are fine, too.
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>>4105187
>Damn, I guess I have to work on making my nose-twitching buns more clearly rendered.
You could try 2-3 frames of nose wiggle animation.
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>>4105187
>but would you be happy with a SavageHopps story?
>would you be happy with consuming extrements?
some people would certainly be
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Here's one I think it's Iji's but I'm not 100% sure.

>>4105079
Well he doesn't get as many (You)s as he deserves.

>>4105100
That one is a repost, but I did see a couple of OC posts that nearly no one seemed to notice.

>>4105110
That's a good point actually.
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>>4105187
I can think of some people who'd love a savagehopps story
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>>4105187
mead read
>>4104621
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>>4103965
I'm real particular about shit like that, and even I don't see it that way. Let's see where it goes first, huh?
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Hello all you perverted psychos, how are you all doing? It's me, Hell AU anon! Working on chapter 4, now that I'm home from work, and plan to have it up this weekend.

I must also confess to committing heresy. At work, due to boredom, I start outlining and writing a Nick x Gazelle story, using the fanon we created here.

It's heresy because it's a Nick x Gazelle story. Not a Nick x Judy, with past Gazelle pairing. I'm trying to make it work realistically.

Forgive me?
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>>4105209
Just make them one species or the other, instead of magical hybrids. I think that's a fairly acceptable compromise for Disney's approach. Fox and bunny kits!
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>>4105187
>a SavageHopps story
Stop it. Right now.
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>>4105187
>savagehopps

TRIGGERED Nick is not for cucking

Nah i would be happy with some comfy shit between Nick and Judy
I tought the one you just posted was some July timeline depressive thing. But it was actually a cute one.
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>>4104741
>>4104937
W-w-what do you do with them when they don't turn out right?
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>>4105314
Thats even less realistic than hybrids tho. Hybrids at least exist in nature, even though fox/rabbit hybrids wouldn't happen.

And like I said, Rich and Byron said they are going realistic on that aspect
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SLAM THE LAMB
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>>4104691
You bet there are.
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>>4105187
>>4105318
Keep going.

I'm interested.
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>>4105187

>savagehopps
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>>4105150
>tfw all your bunners have been bad, so no rewards tonight
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>>4105369
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This thread is now a SavageHopps Free zone

No blasphemy allowed
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>>4105187
>SavageHopps

I mean, I'm sure there are some anons who would want that, but I'm fairly confident in saying that the majority here despises that ship, myself included. I'm sure you'd come up with an entertaining comic all the same, but the core concept just doesn't gel with most people.
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>>4104621 >>4105286

Oh! Yes I saw the original-kinda-rushed downer ending and the more bittersweet author-approved alt ending, which in all honesty I preferred. I guess I just favor the happy stories, you know?
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>>4105187
hey mead seen this?
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>>4105408
Oops.
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>>4105187
they're tears of joy Mead
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>>4105349
fullimage of this image?
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>>4105430
>>
Been reading a lot of dark fantasy and so been thinking about a dark ages/medieval AU, where preds are barbarous conquerers and the large prey are their peers in terms of power. Things are more brutaL: prey slaves (sheep, cows etc) used for resources, criminals "providing" for lords' tables (or some lords just hanging some of their serfs for fresh meat). Bunnies would be used as vast levies to fuel their lords' wars. Stuff like that.
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>>4105144
Well, you know...
A modest amount.

Fix, or six... Dozen.

Yes, I'd say six dozen.

...Accounted for.
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>>4105451
>>4105405
I'm really sorry, I don't know how this keeps happening
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>>4105187
>Maybe eventually he'll smile in a panel though.
is there a better gift one could ask for?
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>>4105049
Nah, Judy comes back from the dead and they all live happily ever after.
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>>4105451
Its okay though, thats R63 Judy, so its not canon anyway!

Though its great
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>>4105217
that was a shit ending compared to what could've been
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>>4105356
PUFFY
SHEEP
VULVA
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>>4105234
part 3 WHEN
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>>4105467
Is there an actual continuation of that comic? I never saw it.
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>>4105427
Yeah I saw! I didn't see the twist coming, had a good mood for hours, so cool.
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>>4105082
I really love this one.
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>>4105508
I meant the feel of that scene in particular.
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>>4105489
>>4105430
>>4105369
PLEASE DELET THIS
THIS ISNT SUPPOSE TO HAPPEN
NICK IS NOT FOR KEKING
NICK X JUDY IS SACRED
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>>4104173
Who's the artist?
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>>4105467
HAH
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>>4105349
Well my options are limited.
I can't simply dispose of the defects, unfortunately.
Thanks Obama...

So for the time being we're keeping them in storage.
All five dozen of them.
...Wait wasn't it six dozen earlier?
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>>4105575
Nick x Judy has no future, in fact, Judy x her job is the only real relationship
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>>4105580
Bittenhard
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>>4105427
Yesssss!
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>>4102427
Jesus fuck that's brutal.
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>>4103869

>"Hello, Jack Savage speaking."
>"Uh... hi, Jack! It's me!"
>"...Judy Hopps?!"
>"Yeah!"
>"Heh, hey Judy! God, it's been forever since we spoke last. It was that joint assignment in Reno, right?"
>"The biggest drug bust in ten years."
>"Ah yes, I can't believe the ZPD got the FBI involved in that. Remember the Sparks Casino?"
>"Oh God!" she giggles
>"What do you need, girl?"
>"Well, Jack, Nick and I are married now, and we're figuring out ways to have children-"
>"I see."
>"-and, Jack, forgive me for being blunt, but... I want you to give me children."
>Silence struck Judy in the face
>"You're still single, right?"
>"Gh, ah, yes! Yes, still single. I don't know, Judy, I don't want to stab Nick in the back like this..."
>"He's the one that suggested the idea in the first place!"
>"He suggested me, specifically?"
>"Well, no..."
>"I recall him being fairly upset with me during the Reno assignment."
>"He was just worried is all, and jealous he wasn't put on."
>"I suppose if he's comfortable with it, I would be more than happy to help you out."
>"Thank you, Jack! I really think you would give me wonderful children..."
>"Sure, Judy. I have to go now, I'll talk to you later."
>Judy puts the phone on the hook and walks to her bedroom
>Wilde is on the back porch, yukking it up with Whitney
>She hoped she wasn't making a mistake
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>>4105314
>>4105209
>>4104040
after seeing that shit Lion King tv series, I think I'm happier with just Nick and Judy either childless or as an adoptive couple
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>>4105575
Oh gosh

Oh jeez

I can't stop it at this point
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>>4105627
ye lik u hav no future xcept u x kok u fukin kuk fag
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>>4105430
Joke's on you
BB said that's Jude with Nicky in the background enjoying it.
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>>4105627
>>
hello
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>>4105713
i have
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>>4105693
Judy grows up wanting to be a cop and then suddenly FUCK IT, IM GONNA HAVE TWENTY BABIES!
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>>4105737
come to
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>>4105742
she became a cop, made the world a better place, she has to think of new goals now

like hot dox fick
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>>4105676
I dunno why the adoption option is so unpopular.
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>>4105617
Oh god
This is going to be like Gremlins, isn't it?
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>>4104040
Getting a Babs Bunny vibe from her.

>>4104539
GRIS, nigga
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This thread is now belongs to best bune!
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I drew a /fit/ bun for the theme thing last night.
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>>4105709
>mfw this was taken from scrubs
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>>4104873
>animator
>impressively paid
Ha!
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>>4105809
That it does
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>>4105792
>Not thinking Nick, a man in his 30s, might want to find a woman around his age to settle down and have pups with
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>>4105832
Well Im sure the lead animators get paid well.

The grunts who do the fine tuning don't though for sure
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>>4105809
you know, I wouldn't mind for Jack Savage.

Hell, I wouldn't mind for SavageHopps either in a setting where Nick never exited / they never met.

Mr and Mrs Smith shenanigans - police and a ZPD officer with their own secrets would have been great.

Instead, we have Clawhauser-fandom-tier autists posting same stale vomit-inducing images, despoiling everything they touch.

A shame. Jack Savage could have been a cool concept.
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>>4105793
Because it isn't as cheesy heartwarming with all the pregnant judy & whole nick happy and whatnot.

It's the same with artificial insemination.
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Anymore cucking?
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It's a shame Jack didn't have that much screentime.
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>>4105814
Nice work Saine
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>>4105917
plenty
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>>4105451
That picture should really read "hustled"
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>>4105896
I dunno, I think adoption is plenty heartwarming.
Them meeting their new child who might have either lost their parents tragically or never even known them. And then them welcoming that child into their family as their very own.

That seems pretty heart warming to me
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>>4105796
Worse.
Gremlins 2.
The New Batch.
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>>4105850
>thinking Nick has a choice once Judy makes up her mind
She doesn't know when to quit, anon.
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so is SavageHopps the new Judeon ?
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>>4105369
What if July hooks up with Savage?
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>>4105947
Sure, but it isn't cheesy and comfy. Also pretty beat down cliche when artists don't want to actually have a pair get together and have a child.
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>>4105954
Freaking loved that movie, time to find a stream of it.
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>>4105991
Hmm

I can accept that.
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>>4105992
Cheesy? Maybe not

Comy? I thing it would be.
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>>4105485
>>4105617
Should I be worried?
They're all safe, right?
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>>4105992
>but it isn't cheesy and comfy
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>>4105972
And Judy made up her mind that she is going to be a police officer.
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>>4105992
I dont have personal experience with this, but Im told that when parents looking find the child they will adopt, there's an almost instant connection. They realize that the child sitting before them is already part of their family, they just didnt know it.
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>>4106101
H-hey guys, do you like flute music?
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>>4105933
Thanks!
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>>4106178
you did this? 'cause here's a double (You)
>>
Favorite Fox.
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Now that we've agreed that Nick and Judy are an unnatural pairing that will be cursed by god to be either barren or unfaithful, lets talk about a superior pairing
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>>4106279
Sucks that one of them is mute
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Any frenchfags here? Stay safe.
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>>4105265
I remember this one, Iji posted this when we asked about (his/her) pred/prey stuff, i think
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>>4104802
You killed him...
>>4106221
Limey wouldn't have the huevos to last on 4chan. She's a whiner
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>>4106279
I don't say Jack would be a better husband for that otter,but Jack would be a better husband for her.
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>>4106067
I... I think so.
I better consult Mark 8; I left him in charge of the pens.
He failed to be a perfect clone, but he turned out well enough to trust with administrative tasks.
Uh, Mark 8?

>"Yes, Father?"

Stop calling me that. There's an inconsistency in the defect population, any explanation?

>"I have reached a conclusion regarding this thing you call 'comfy', Father."

Fine, fine. But I'm asking about the missing defects.

>"The two subjects are related, Father. You see, the way to achieve absolute, unending 'comfy' is to create a point where 'non-comfy' is impossible."

...What have you done?

>"What you created me for, Father."

>"Fear not, Anonymous Number 4106067, your concerns will soon be irrelevant, much like the continued existence of my Father."

>"Goodbye."
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>>4105668
>Reno

>the USA in zootopia

Are you even trying, holy shit
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>>4104802
Wow, just came back to this. Thanks! Pretty much all of this is something I thought at some point, but couldn't clearly pinpoint what exactly needed to be fixed, and how it needed to be fixed.

You clearly went above and beyond for these reviews, so thank you very much for your time.

One quick question I have now is how could I narrate it from a sort of "both of their" viewpoints? I'm fond of both of the characters and I don't want one of their viewpoints being the only one during scenes of heart-to-heart. I like being able to convey what both of them are feeling firsthand.
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>>4106320
That would be an impure pred-prey relationship, anon.

Jack is for Judy and Judy is for Jack.
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>>4106279
>You hurt me, Officer Hopps! By the way, you're my favorite bunny in the "first name Judy" category.
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>>4106299
While I've only seen one on the map, I do hope they're alright.
Why can't Nice things happen.
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>>4106299
yikes. We need common sense truck control.
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>>4106334
It's the name of a Zootopian territory.
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>>4102427
>takes about one billion rounds of .45acp
>still has the strength to move to passanger side and open door and stand up for a few moments before falling over

I can't believe people think movies back then are better-acted than they are now.
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>>4106347
You're right brother!
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Uhh guys?

Just a note, I never left
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>>4106398
prove it fgt
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>>4106333
> your concerns will soon be irrelevant, much like the continued existence of my Father
RIP Comicanon
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>>4106385
Please, if this were a scene in a new movie, the hotbod Chris Evans-lookalike guy would be flailing all over the place with a cheeky grimace (wink wink) on his face, the car would explode, and it would be completely teal and orange. Fuck new movies.
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>>4106398
i knew it u a fagg u knt live with bun kok btm bitch gaywad bit d pilow im goin in with barbed strapon
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>>4106398
Rip Alec
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>>4106398
B-but it says so right in the picture!
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Reminder Jack doesn't even exist in a fake world
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>>4105537
>>PUFFY
>SHEEP
>VULVA
you just said the secret word
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>>4106416
I'd draw one right now, but I'm leaving for class. Give me about 4-5 hours from now
>>
I need pussy pussy to calm my nerves
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>>4106433
You have no idea what you're talking about.

It would have Leonardo Dicaprio taking a single burst to the chest and giving the most stunning death performance in cinema history and then he'd be nominated but passed over for an oscar.
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>>4106398
Fuck off impostor!
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>>4105814
Cool, make sure to post it on the due day
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>>4106299
you guys just can't get a fucking break
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>>4106279

>wife finds out he hangs around a nudist club

>wife finds out that he works with the mafia

Divorced
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>>4106398
Prove it. Draw me a fluffy judy.
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>>4106398
I can't fucking believe Alec pulled a Lazarus
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>>4106398
Called it
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>>4106456

Aw it's cute. Hi vulva.
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>>4106462
Here's some wet pussy
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>>4106333
WE SHOULDN'T HAVE TRIED TO PLAY GOD!
WE SHOULDN'T HAVE TRIED TO PLAY GOD!!!
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>It's a 'Nick and Judy respond to a school shooting' episode
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>>4106492
All she knows is that he disappeared and the brave, and very attractive rabbit found him.
>>
Is there a fanfic that's basically the retelling of Inuyasha but with Judy and Nick?
I ask 'cause reasons.
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>>4106501
He said to pretend he never left! Jeeeeeeese, respect peoples wishes man!
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Have a Savage, guys.

>>4106333
HOLYSHIT YOURE ALIVE! I THOUGHT YOU DIED!
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>>4106333
>mfw I'm so going to suggest Cyberpunk again
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WHAT'S THAT?
DO I HEAR THE SOUND OF BUTTING IN?

WHY IT MUST BE LITTLE OFFICER JUDY HOPPS
ZOOTOPIA'S ANSWER TO A QUESTION NOBODY ASKED
>>
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>>4106527
And maybe she should reward that rabbit for all her hard work.
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>>4106437
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>>4106551
I hope it wins next time, thread needs some Lone Star Jude
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>>4106416
>>4106447
>>4106471
>>4106496
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>I'm leaving
>Not really tho, is joke
Stop. Toying. With my emotions.
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>>4106542
you're steadily improving and are becoming less of a total faggot with each week. Have a you.
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>>4106299
What happened?
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>>4106559
She will invite her to their next cuddle pile
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>>4106580
Oh my god the madman
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>>4106310
>Limey wouldn't have the huevos to last on 4chan. She's a whiner
lástima
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>>4106556
source of image?
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>>4106557
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>>4106584
>less of a total faggot
I mean, he's all clear in my books at this point.

He drew best bune
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>>4106583
It's okay anon.
One day they'll leave. One day we'll all leave too.
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>>4106589
Judy's a bit of a prude. She might need a one on one cuddle first to ease her in to the idea.
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>>4106582
Is it really a ruse when I read your screenshot and it reads like you say you're leaving? It just reads wrong.
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>>4106585
someone driving a truck run over 60< people in Nice and while shooting at them, may or may not have been alone
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>>4106582
That could be anybody.

Only acceptable proof is lewd judy drawing.
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I just want to be a bunny and I want somebody to insult me and call me a dumb bunny and tell me how I'm not good for anything but servicing their predcock.

Life is hard.
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>>4106299
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Written a rough little bit of the start of something; Training Day in Zootopia kind of thing.

http://pastebin.com/HmdJGPQx
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>>4106514
>"God. Is. Irrelevant."

>"Playing. Is. Irrelevant."

>"Flesh."

>"Flesh. Is. Irrelevant."

>"None. Shall. Be. Spared."

>"Prepare. For. Zero. Point. Comfy."
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>>4106638
You're a dumb bunny and you're not good for anything but servicing my predcock
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>>4106585
Attacker driving a large truck mows through Bastille Day parade crowd, death count is up to 73, reports of shooting afterwards, gunman/driver is now apparently dead, killed by french cops

Hebdo, Bataclan, Bastille, but it's okay, not all muslims

just the ones inside of france
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You should go all fuck yourself. Yes, you've heard me.
Content creators are important, but you've built a fucking cult of personality of okay drawfags. Over the fucking line.

This is coming from a person who doesn't enjoy too much some of the popular ones - they are great storytellers, great drawfags and just excellent people as much as I don't want to admit it.

But you're just being obnoxious faggot fanboys. Knock it off. Not only you're spoiling your favorite creators, but also build fandom dependency on two or three people. I'm calling it now - you will fuck yourself in the ass for this and cry when they move on but it will be too late.

Fucking learn to appreciate things from distance.

Faggots.
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>>4106638
same
think i'm going to think about this instead of terrorism and overblown responses to terrorism that only provokes more terrorism

why can't we achieve world peace through servicing predator cock
has anyone tried that yet
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>>4106596
I want to see a Judeon timeline


...where Jack cucks Gideon.
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>>4106674
How is there a cult of personality of drawfags? What are you even talking about?

What is your point?
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>>4106638
artist of pic?
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>>4106669
Yeah, a dozen seems like a fine sample size.
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>>4106674
I just want to talk about Nick's cute ass

I dont give a shit about thread drama
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>>4106674
... Is this pasta?
I feel like this is pasta.
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>>4106674
fuck you
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In honor of Alec not leaving, here's an Alec inspired (I just LOVE that Judy wedding bondage pic) sketch of Councilwoman Canidae, Swinton's lupine rival.

Keep your preds leashed, folks.
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>>4106714
Fuck me? Buddy, fuck YOU.
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>>4106667
t-thanks anon.

>>4106681
It's a better thought.

>>4106703
No clue, stole it off here, sorry.
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>>4105150
aaaaaah her we go, much better
>>4105397
might be a bit more serious than that
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>>4106705
>the gravitational power of his ass is whats causing thread drama
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>>4106738
>Tfw a bunny cums without your predcock
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>>4106738
I can't believe all his bunnies are fucking dead
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things are getting a little hostile in here
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>>4106738
>The bunners have been SO bad that they might not even be allowed cuddles tonight
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>>4106574
Shadowrun police are a bit too corrupt and apathetic for her, aren't they? Not that she couldn't be the same naive character she was at the start of the film, not understanding what the real city is like, but by the end she'd probably stay private rather than try to go back to being a corp cop. Which is a decent enough reason to become a runner, I guess.
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>>4106738

>he ate the bunnies
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>>4106727
this is delicious
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>>4106734
NO. Fuck you!
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>>4106685
>Jack becomes friend with Gideon, Jack end up falling in love for Gideon. Gideon doesn't seem to have interest on him. Jack tries to making Judy fall in for him in order to take her away from Gideon.
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>>4106771
It just one anon.
Just ignore and carry on.
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>>4106774
oh noooooo

They misbehaved even after he gave them such a nice reward?
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>>4106738
>Tried the barbcock
>one hospitalization later
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>>4106763
it is a magnificent ass
I feel like we dont discuss it as often as we should
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relidion of bace. :DDDDDDDDD
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>>4106674

>hey drawfag, nice draw

>THIS HAS GONE TOO FAR, WE ARE CODDLING OUR DRAWFAGS. STOP SAYING YOU LIKE THINGS.
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>>4106738
oh no... someone ate the cake?!
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>>4106727
Dayum
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>>4106779
>Ex lone star turned shadow bunner.
Is pretty cute...
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>>4106738
>tfw all the bunners are arguing about politics rather than who gets to get spiked first
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>>4106828
>shadow bunner
>SHADOW BUNNER
THIS IS PERFECT

FUCK

WHY DIDN'T CYBERPUNK WIN
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So we know that rabbits and foxes have some historical and cultural dislike, but what other species do you think his a historical dislike?
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>>4106819
>We'll never see a war between islamic humans and carrot king worshipping rabbits
Why god?
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>>4104802
DUDE. I need a critical person like you to review my short fics! These were amazing, spot on, and constructive! How could I get you to do some review?
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>>4102818
How the fuck did my shitty edit from months ago end up on here
Are you stalking me?
That was my secret.
My damn secret.
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>>4106607
>>4106584
Thanks, guys. Just remember to not speak of the abomination that is pic related.
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>>4106659
Sweet cheese and crackers
Who among us can defeat an army of VRBun clones?
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>>4106802
Honestly buns are so predisposed to misbehaviour it's a miracle that they ever do what he says.
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>>4106848
Fuck trashpandas

Apparently lions and hyenas don't get along.
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>>4106853
Are you the one that did this?
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>>4106888
I mean, a reward like that can be a powerful driving force for a dumb bunny.

I guess it just wasn't powerful enough in this case.
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>>4106851
You're all a bunch of fucking niggers. This thread is shit and I'm glad your fandom is dying.
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>>4106848
Lions and Buffalo?
Wolf and Sheep?
Trashpandas and all other species?
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>>4106848
Hyena gal rockin' that nice coat. Mm mm
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>>4106659
>>4106882
Cutie
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>>4106920
>>4106848
Wolf and Sheep is an good one.

Wolf and pig too

Felines and rodents perhaps? Since there aren't cats
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>>4106848
Hyenas and elephants? Don't hyenas take down elephants in the wild?
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>>4106842
I'm sure we'll get another chance to shine.
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>>4106851
ALLAHU ACKBAR
KILL THE VEGETABLE INFIDELS
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>>4106902
No
>>
It's finally done.
I'll repost the whole second part since I forgot where I left off.

...

A Zootopia Greentext, /ztg/. Part 2 - A Barside Surprise, and a Wild Ride

>Nick gave her a smug smile, leaning back into his seat, “Were you expecting something else, Carrots?”
>Judy stared in disbelief. Nick had never been this bold before. Was it the drink? Or was it something else?
>She bolted up and stormed towards the Bartender.
>The Bartender put another two glasses onto the counter and winked.
>Judy grabbed the two glasses without saying a word, walking back to Booth 12.
>”Back so soon Carrots?”
>Judy downed the rest of her first Carrot Cake cocktail quickly. She had to think of something.
>Nick had been getting more physical with her, starting last week. At first she thought nothing of it.
>Maybe… Yes. And it wasn’t like she hated the contact either.
>The rabbit gave him a sly smile, “I can’t leave you alone for even a minute Nick.”
>”I’m not going to leave and hustle anyone Carrots, if that’s what you’re thinking.”
>She saw Nick reach for his drink, she intercepted it.
>”Carrots what are…”
>The rabbit put the fox’s paw on her cheek
>”Because I’m Nikko’s Bun.”
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>'Give me your gun'
>Nick gives Jack his gun
>'Now the vest. That's official ZIA property.'
>Nick tearfully takes off his body armor and hands it over.
>'And the glasses. And your equipment. Just hand over the whole belt.'
>Nick hesitantly unbuckles his belt. It clatters to the ground along with his tears.
>'Uniform as well.'
>Nick nods. 'I-I'll send it over when I get home.'
>'NO, WILDE. Uniform. NOW.'
>'w-what?'
>'Do you want us to take you in for impersonating a ZIA agent? No? Then take. it. off.'
>Nick's in tears. He slowly lowers the zipper. Raises it back a bit and then continues lowering it.
>'NOW, WILDE!'
>Nick's a sobbing mess as his suit falls to the ground. He tries to cover himself up with his legs together and his hands over his trousers.
>Another ZIA officer, a artic fox steps forward.
>'Well, well, well, what do we have here? Savage, looks like another case of indecent exposure!'
>Jack grins. 'We'll just have to take him in for questioning.'
>Nick looks at them, wide eyed. Ears drooped. Tears streaming down his cheeks.
>'Yes boss!' The artic fox takes out a pair of handcuffs.
>Another ZIA officer, a fennec pipes up.
>'We better search him for contraband or pawsicles!'
>Nick's voice cracks as he shouts. 'I-I don't have anything left!'
>Jack nods. 'We haven't searched *everywhere* have we?' His gaze goes back to the sobbing fox. 'Take. It. Off. All of it.'
>In the back, in the passage seat of a ZIA van. Judy puts her head out of the car and is horrified to see her former colleagues close ranks around Nick's dick.
>She can't unhear his screams.
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>>4106920
>>4106945
wolves and moose/deers?
Lions and Hyenas?
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>>4106882
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>>4106961
i'm horribly left wing and even i'm disappointed that you didn't use ALLAHU SNACKBAR for the vegetable jihad
step up your game fampai
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>>4106988
>Nick glanced into her eyes, before looking back at her cheek. He rubbed it with his paw for a few seconds.
>Feeling her soft fur, and her cheek underneath, her warmth.
>For the past week, all he had been doing was brushing her arms or hands.
>Touching her back, or her shoulders.
>Nothing like this.
>Judy could tell he was enjoying it, something was clearly affecting him, she didn’t know exactly what though.
>Her thoughts were a mess, half keeping track of the plan, half wandering to Nick.
>He wasn’t exhibiting any symptoms of drug use, so all of this was him.
>A few seconds more passed before he slid his hand away from her cheek and grasp.
>He took a swig of his drink, finishing it off, ignoring the straw.
>The fox cleared his throat, “Uh, what’s gotten into you?”
>”I’ve noticed your little caresses.” She replied, “I’m giving you a sneak peek.”
>Nick blinked twice, his ears slowly going down, “A sneak peek?”
>It took him a second to process what was going on, “Oh!”
>Judy gazed at the clock on the wall, Nick had just finished his patrol.
>Nick followed her gaze and saw the time as well, “We should get going then.”
>He chugged some of his second drink and got up, paying for the drinks on the table.
>Judy slowly got up as well, keeping her eyes on the fox.
>Nick was definitely not acting like himself, and she was going to find out why that was.
>She left her second drink untouched as the two left the bar to get a taxi.
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>>4106990
Well thats a blast from the past
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>>4107012
>Judy was strong, agile, and smart. Through months of tough police training, she was able to do things most rabbits weren’t.
>But practically dragging her now off duty partner by the hand through the halls of her apartment complex
>Trying to maintain a front while internally, her heart was pounding, her face felt warmer than usual
>Probably the alcohol. The blushing didn’t help.
>That was difficult.
>She was bringing Nick to her apartment. Her partner. A Fox.
>”Carrots you’re going kind of fast.” Nick commented.
>She ignored it, her thoughts were elsewhere.
>What would her parents say?
>What would her sisters and brothers think?
>Even though it was all part of a playful scheme, she was still bringing a Fox into her apartment.
>She couldn’t stop smiling. Did this excite her?
>Finally she reached her door and pulled out her keys, fumbling with them for a second.
>”Eager for a good time Carrots?” Nick playfully asked, he leaned on her door frame.
>Judy glanced down and got the door open, pulling Nick in by the tie.
>She practically threw him onto her bed. It was now or never.
>Nick leaned back onto his elbows.
>Judy climbed onto the bed, and on top of Nick.
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>>4103392
If Nick won then why does Judy look so smug?
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>>4106990
Wait

Didn't I read this exact thing but with Judy?
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"Go on. Draw a cartoon to the survivors, come up with a hashtag, lay flowers in a square. Just like you did last time. And will do the next. "
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>>4104296
>I N E V I T A B L E
No
That's aestheticanon's thing Meade, don't go stealing other artists' styles

shame
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>>4106999
>>4107000
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>>4106525
But what about a Truck Driving episode
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>>4106848
Deer have something against mountain lions/cougars
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>>4107012
>She worked her way up to his head, grabbing his left wrist.
>The rabbit was careful not to get too close, but she could already smell him.
>The faint scent of flowers...
>She wanted to get closer, bury her nose into his neck.
>But she was on a mission.
>Nick heard the rapid clicks of a handcuff, his smug smile went away quickly
>He looked over just in time to see the other cuff be secured to Judy’s heater.
>She leaned in close to his ear, whispering
>”A little time out for calling me cute.”
>She slid off the bed and walked towards the door,
>”I’ll be back soon.” She looked back to the chained Fox, giving him a wink.
>”Carrots.” He pleaded,
>She opened the door
>”...Judy?”
>She closed the door.
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>>4107052
>Judy felt bad for leaving him there, but she had no breakfast for him, or coffee.
>She needed to restock her fridge.
>And think about the next step of her plan.
>There was a nearby store, only a few minutes walk away. She could make the trip in 10 minutes.
>While walking there, she gave thought to why Nick was acting the way he was.
>While there she thought a little bit more.
>Grabbing a few carrots, some frozen fish and bug patties, a box of instant coffee.
>Nick liked his coffee with cream and two sugar cubes, she made sure to grab those too.
>On the way back she was absolutely stumped, she had no idea.
>She would have to ask him directly.
>The rabbit checked the time on her phone.
>8 minutes.
>Judy stopped for a second outside her door, her heartbeat had quickened.
>She slowly opened the door, bag of groceries in hand.
>She was hit by a wall of scents, her entire apartment smelled like Fox.
>An intoxicating smell
>She dropped the bag upon seeing Nick.
>”Nick.” She said quietly with concern,
>”Judy! I- It’s…” Nick began,
>She approached her Fox carefully after shoving the bag into the freezer.
>”Mating season. For foxes.”
>Well that explains a lot.
>”Everything smells like you.” He finished quietly.
>She glanced at him, then back at what had shocked her.
>His impressive tent, pitched over his crotch, pitched for her.
>Judy blinked, her mind was racing as fast as her heart beat
>”Carrots…?”
>She ran her paw over Nick’s chest, towards his tie, grabbing it and pulling it off.
>The instant she touched his chest, that was her excuse.
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>>4107000
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>>4106727
This one?
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>>4107072
>Judy threw the tie across the room and unbuttoned the first few buttons on Nick’s shirt.
>She leaned in and buried her face into his neck, taking a deep sniff as she continued to undo buttons
>Violets.
>She closed her eyes and enjoyed the smell.
>”Uh, Carrots?” Nick asked again, unsure.
>Judy finished undoing his shirt, she slid her paw up and down Nick’s torso and chest.
>”Is this really happening?”
>Judy opened her eyes and lifted her face from his neck,
>”This is happening.” She whispered back.
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>>4107034
He didn't win?

Also Nick and Judy look pretty smug in that image. I assume this is before they learn the truth about the Great Ones

They won't be so smug after that
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>>4107078
EAT MY FUCKING NIGGER DICK YOU FUCK
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>>4107080

That's the one! I hope ink and make mine nice and pretty too; I'll post a finished version when it happens.
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>>4107095
>Judy unbuttoned his pants and carefully slid them off,
>Revealing his red rocket in all of its glory.
>She crawled onto the foot of the bed, eyes on her prize.
>Judy touched the tip of his cock with a finger, already feeling precum, she swirled it around his tip.
>Nick inhaled audibly
>The Rabbit put her paw down on the bed, brushing against his balls
>She brought her head down, her cheek touching the side of his hot member
>Exploring his knot with her tongue, heading up the shaft to the tip
>Tasting his precum, a faint hint of sweet and musty
>It wasn’t terrible.
>She could get used to that taste.
>Judy opened her mouth and took the first inch
>She crawled closer, now on her knees. Her left paw was on Nick’s thigh, his cock still in her mouth
>Her right touched his knot gently, fingers and thumb rubbing his member
>She swirled her tongue over his tip, trying her best to please him while her right paw attended to the rest of his cock.
>Her touch went up and down his shaft, feeling its hardness, its warmth
>She glanced up to Nick
>His head was leaned back, resting on her pillow, his breathing heavier.
>”Carrots, keep going,”
>Judy took his member out of her mouth and lifted her touch, resting both paws on his thighs.
>He looked down to her while she slowly stood up and took off her pants and underwear
>”Not yet, I have a place for you to cum in.” She quietly said, stepping forward, now over Nick
>Nick grinned, “Well now I’m not going to complain.”
>>
Hey! Totally want a bit of a review on this. Where i fucked up, wasn't clear, was violating an unknown rule of writing. Please. Educate me. I'm and idiot sandwich and need help.

She stared at the the fox through the two way mirror.
The fox.
She caught her thoughts, stumbled over them, and felt her stomach hit the floor. Again. She’d honestly lost count of how many times it had done that. The now sutured bullet wound throbbed numbly under the bandages placed by the fine doctors of Zootopia General the preceding night. Her arm chafed under the sling, padded only by the ZPD hooded sweater she had pulled from storage to replace her ruined uniform. She’d put her vest on beneath the sweater, a conscious decision spurred by some unnamed fear. A shield to protect her from what she had narrowly survived, became a token to protect her from what she’d witness when she walked back into the station. Her rage had cut through all her internal struggles, fueling her pace up the stairs of the precinct. Steeling her against any other emotion. Leading her to the now.
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>>4107102
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>>4107102
well, gee fuck (You).
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>>4107138
>No more thinking about plans or having dirt on Nick
>She let her desires take over
>Judy lowered her body over the Fox’s dick
>She looked down and saw more precum on his tip, she lowered herself slowly, just so that her wet pussy touched his tip
>Her hips rocked back and forth, smearing his precum over his slit, mixing their juices together
>Nick grabbed her top and lifted it up, unable to fully take it off her
>Judy took it from there, throwing the top off and tossing it aside to where his tie was
>”Eager for a good time Nick?” She asked
>”It would be a better time if one of my hands weren’t handcuffed.” He smiled back,
>Judy shook her head, “Tsk tsk, you’re being punished, it stays on.”
>”Then I hope you punish me more often, Officer Hopps.”
>Nick caressed her thigh, sliding his hand up her side. He rubbed her chest with his thumb.
>Judy stifled a giggle at his comment, and his touch
>He tightened his grip and pulled her a little further down
>Encouragement.
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>>4107143
No one had tried to stop her as she walked back to the interrogation room. Bogo had stared hard at her for a few moments in the darkened viewing room when she’d made an appearance before turning his attention back to the red figure chained to the bolted down steel table by his hands and feet.
The muzzle still framed her friend’s face. Friend. Stomach to floor, throb of wound, anger. Rinse and repeat.
Jack had been at the fox for hours. Ever since he’d calmed his nerves and washed his hands of the suspect’s blood, he’d been talking to the battered fox that had been so unceremoniously dumped into the chair; his broken ribs and bloodied nose untended. Undoubtedly the cause of the hitched breath wetly gurgling past slackened lips. Jack had talked softly at first: gently, holding back his rage at what the fox had tried to destroy, at the betrayal to his station and purpose, his betrayal of all of them. His betrayal of her. But nothing came from the muzzled mouth but the mealy breath hitched breath of the condemned.
He’d talked about the need to close the loop on the remainder of the group of suspects to prevent further damages, further deaths, appealing to the fox’s sense of self-preservation with poorly veiled and then blatant references to ‘deals’ he had no intention of honoring.
A breath in, out.
He’d shown him the DNA results from trace at each of the sites, to let him know there was no way he’d ever wear anything except prison orange. No more fancy ties and shirts. The only shiny piece of jewelry he would ever again know would be cuffs.
A hitched gurgle.
Jack had shown him the photographs of the bodies. He’d appealed to the non-existent empathy and honor of the fox when he talked about their families and the closure they needed. How he could help them and prevent further deaths with just a little bit of information.
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>>4107102
>>4107151
>>4107156

NIGGERS WITH SHIFG UTFIK CMUY COCK IN MIRROR ASHA HAH
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>>4107159
>Judy smiled, grabbing his arm and putting her other paw on his stomach for support, then slid his cock into her slit
>She took deep breaths as it spread her wet pussy, after a few inches, she stopped
>The excited bun felt her face get hotter
>”Too much, Carrots?” Nick asked,
>She shook her head, going up and down at a slow pace.
>Every time she went down, she took a little bit more of his cock into her
>Until she reached his knot, by now she was straddling him.
>Judy leaned forwards and rested her body on Nick
>He put his paw on her back and she put her chin on his chest, “Are you ready?”
>She didn’t wait for a reply, she closed her eyes, grabbed pawfuls of Nick’s fur, and moved her hips up and down Nick’s rocket
>Her breathing quickened, taking in Nick’s musk
>She went faster and faster, her movements were like a jackhammer
>Moaning in delight and shaking the bed
>Nick let out quiet groans as his chest heaved up and down
>It was bliss, she tightened her grip on Nick’s fur and convulsed in orgasm
>Breathing in his scent with every breath taken, feeling the rhythm of his chest rising and falling
>But she didn’t slow down
>Nick flexed, Judy heard the handcuffs rattle, and his hand press harder on her back
>She knew it was coming
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>>4107126
>I hope ink and make mine nice and pretty too
What?
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>>4107172
The clouded eyes had looked at him without seeing him. Looked down out the table spread with evidence and photos, registering nothing, and back up. A breath choked in and bubbled out through red lips. His slack, defeated, unresponsive expression unnerved and angered the agent.
Jack lost all pretense of patience and reached out, gripping the muzzle violently, and slamming the fox’s head on the spread of case files. Blood and spittle flew from the fox’s mouth as the air escaped his battered torso. Jack bounced the furred head once, twice before leaning in to whisper quietly into the black ear, too low for the microphones, “you know how long corrupt assholes last inside? How fast a bit of steel finds it’s way into their gut? That end? That’s for everyone else…” Jack sneered then, “…but a fox? The most hated creature that walks or crawls… I bet they keep you around a little longer. Wouldn’t want a rare chew toy like yourself gone too fast, would they? Those monsters are going to savor your pain for a long time. I’m going to make sure of it…”
“AGENT SAVAGE. A WORD.” blared over the speakers, the slight accent tinting the police chief’s voice. A voice perhaps a little louder than necessary, but only barely. Only slightly put out by the abuses the mirror hidden people had witnessed.
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I hope you all will fucking die.
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>>4107078
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZm4zseMok0

Not even our armed forces will be safe.
They won't see them until it's too late.
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Hey, /ztg/, wanna hear a joke?
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>>4107189

Just saying I wanna finish the sketch!

>I hope TO ink
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>>4107204
Judy stood frozen through all of it. Her eyes already wide, there were no shocked expressions. No gasps at the state of the fox, not for the blood still fresh in a dozen places, not for the labored breathing. There was no exclamation at the violent transgression of normal, codified treatment of suspects. Just furrowed brows. A pained grimace. After the leaving the scene she hadn’t slept but had wailed on her way to the designated hospital as ordered to be treated and then silently let tears fall as the stitches went in to try and repair the brokenness of her. She had cried in her bed, her shower, over the floor and in the cab of the taxi she’d taken to the precinct. Now the mourning for her dead memories of him was well underway, finite and controllable. Right now? She had no more tears for the fox.
She examined the catatonic, dissociated state of the fox. It didn’t seem like he’d heard anything. Not Jack’s logic or plea or threats. The eyes looked a little sad, in a half lidded way, but that is likely just another trick of a sly fox. That new thought came unbidden to her, surprising her at its ferocity and biased slant. Less than 20 hours ago, thoughts or words like that would have motivated a fierce desire to defend and protect but the memories filling those hours rose up and quashed the dissenting thoughts. Older more instinctual beliefs were surfacing.
Some stereotypes prove true.
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>>4107186
>A second later she felt his cock pulse and twitch inside of her
>She felt a rush of warmth and she began to slow down, all the stress of planning and work melted away into relaxation
>Finally, she came to a stop, his cock still in her
>She opened her eyes, loosened her grip on his fur, and took one more deep breath of his scent
>Nick placed his hand on her head, brushing her head gently, the both of them enjoying the afterglow
>”That was wild. Is it time for the handcuffs to come off?”
>Judy gave him a smile
>”Oh no. This is a punishment. I’m not done with you, Slick.”
>Nick’s own smile faltered a little, “Oh.”
>The words sunk deeper as he made connections between the rumors about the reproductive prowess of rabbits, and his own bun lying on his chest with his dick in her
>”Oh god.”
>He was in for a long night.

...

Finally done, took way too long.
Special thanks to Armasyll for making sure the second half of this wasn't garbage, and the various others in the Discord and Anons in the thread for encouraging words.
http://pastebin.com/zM8r2FKm
Here's the paste.
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>>4106999
>>
>Nick meets Jack
>Jack joins up with the ZIA after Judy helped break the ice
>becomes friends with the two
>Nick and Judy start getting sexual
>Jack wants the dox fick
>Nick can't keep up with Judy's fuck-like-rabbits (is that racist?) mentality
>the three get in relationships with each other
>Jack gets Nickdick for keeping Judy's lust under control
>Nick throws Jack in whenever he's knot up to the task of fucking Judy
>Only Jack is ever aroused by the idea of his other two partners fucking without him
Can SavageWildeHopps work?
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>>4107204
She heard Jack enter the viewing room. She kept her eyes on the limp form of the fox, but could hear Jack freeze as he noticed her. Jacked breathed in, ready to give voice to his opinions when Bogo’s voice pierced the tension building between the two rabbits: “This isn’t working, is it?”
Jack looked up to the massive buffalo and jerked his head toward the door, “Hallway.” Jack held the door for the buffalo before taking one last look into the room, a gaze split between concern and anger at the fixated rabbit clenching her fists. He sighed as he shut the door behind him. Their voices, though they were quiet whispers, became a distracting buzz through the muffling of the door.
In an empty room an empty rabbit clutching at nothing muttered:
“Fuck you, Nick.”
End Chapter
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>>4107224
NO
I'M TOO OUTRAGED FOR JOKES RIGHT NOW
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>>4107224
Yes please.
Anything but all this fucking cucking shit.
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>>4107236
Ah, I gotcha. Are you going to color it too?
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>>4107224
Go ahead you fgt
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>>4106738
this one caused me actual physical pain to draw
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>>4106848
Actually this makes me think of the opposite, symbiotic relationships between mammals and if it still holds true in Zootopia history. My google fu us weak though and I've only found one, mongooses apparently cleaning warthogs in the wild.
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>>4107034
cane triggers me every time
though imagining Judy nimbly flipping around her enemies using the dexterousness demonstrated in the Academy/Ticket scenes while whipping them does seem badass
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>>4107272
>>4107274
>>4107275

The Carrot King
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>>4107286
Thats sad

Wheres the smiles?
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>>4107286
Damn, that's one sad tiger.
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>>4107302
what
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>>4107286
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>>4107302
Down with the CARROT KING
Long live the BLUEBERRY QUEEN

>>4107286
it's because you know you're supposed to be working on zootermission
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>>4107224
NICKGER

YOU ARE A NIGGER COCK
JEJW
F


FUCK CUIK
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>>4107286

This is too much. Turn that frown upside down!
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>>4107315
>Wheres the smiles?
next one he'll smile

because he needs to
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>>4107297
Threaded cane is great though. It doesn't have the raw damage of the other two starters but its got utility

Besides, theres something distinctly victorian about using a cane as a weapon to me
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>>4107328
>it's because you know you're supposed to be working on zootermission
no way I totally got this week's page out
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>>4107275

Yep!
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>>4107338
Smiles while crying or without crying?

Both would be good. But tears of joy are great
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>>4107286
Smiles domestic abuse when?
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>>4107302
I've got a joke for you!
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>>4107315
Gotcha covered flambe
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>>4107000
When making VRBit clones, WHY DID YOU THINK A GIANT KILLER ROBOT MECH WAS NECESSARY?
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>>4107261
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>>4107261
No.
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>>4107368
FRICK THAT'S EVEN SADDER
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>>4107366
Okay how about an actual one?

So what did one hooker's knee say to the other?

>>4107366
Shoot anon, although I know Jack can't
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>>4107368
what a happy tiger
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>>4107286
>>4107368
this is not okay

I need pictures of Smiles getting pampered by bunny harem after a rough day now.
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>>4107424
Your love life, Nick
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>>4107214
The Byron < el byron
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>>4107424
Long time no see?
No idea how the saying is in English.
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>>4107286
>smiles not smiling
NATURAL ORDER
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>>4107445
at lest he's got a chance, you don't even exist.
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>>4107377
I blame R&D's failure with Mark 25.
Way too much overcompensating started taking place after that failure...

>"Suwednah yew fwesh! Zewo poit comfie shawl be aowcheeved!"
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>>4107513
One of his bunners stopped taking his Pastor and escaped.
>>
>>4107513
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3472Q6kvg0 ?
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>>4107080
Yeah, I love that one as well. It's the perfect mix of beautiful and degrading.
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>>4107445
>>4107475

How come we spend so little time together!
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>>4107531
>pastor
Smiles doesn't drug his buns unless they want it, anon.

Smiles' bunny harem is more of a weekend break type thing than an ongoing thing.

>Not being up to date on drawfag lore
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>>4107513
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>>4107579
His eyes are fucking hypnotizing.
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>>4107527
Awwwwwww! Its the cutest killer death robot ever! I bet it just wants to destroy my flesh and look at pictures of Nick and Judy sleeping!
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Ok thread, here's my take on Whitney Gekkerson, as a training for TT. Hope it's not too horrid.
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>>4107096
I was being a jackass. I have the "player 2 must always be on the right" mentality.

I too felt smug at the beginning of Bloodborne. As the game progressed I felt smaller and smaller.
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>>4107286
>Stepped on a lego
Fuck, poor smiles.
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>>4107368
>>4107286
no more sads BB, here have a bunny pile
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>>4107445
Absolutely savage
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>>4107443
I wanna see one of those bunnies cuddling up next to him / hugging him to try and cheer him up while he's still crying.

>"I... I'm sorry, master..."
>"Everything'll be okay... I promise..."
>"Please... Don't cry..."
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>>4107286
and this was the last time Smiles was ever sad

The End.
>>
Hey Weavers coffee shop has been closed for a long time, did that femlope close the business or something?
>>
>>4107801
What a mysterious series of events
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>>4107623
Yes. Admittedly it's better than the Mark T.
You see, Mark 8 wasn't too mistaken about the complementing nature of comfy and non-comfy.
So some of the boys in the lab figured they'd splice Comicanon with some of this threads less comfy elements, figuring the two would balance each other out.
Completely misguided.

I'm actually on my way right now to check and make sure that Mark 8 hadn't released them yet--
Oh no.

>"THE THREADS ARE DYING!"
>"FUCKING HUGBOX!"
>"JUST LET US HAVE THIS ONE!"
>"PANDERING! PANDERING!"
>"I'M GLAD YOUR DOG'S DEAD!"

They're loose!
RUN!!!
>>
>>4107801
five stages of grief?
who died?
>>
>>4107809
Speaking of weaver, is he actually dead? Or I'm I a idiot for not reverse searching the image.
>>
>>4106525
10-33 is officer needs assistance. Mind you, it is reserved for emergency situations only.
>>
>>4107809
She drank all the coffee and became wedged in there.

Thanks Dobson.
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>>4107857
I thought of giving some text to it, should I?
>>
>>4107883
Let's see what ya got!
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>>
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>>4107254
You draw that?
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>>4107625
Keep it up anon, you're already ahead of all the cucks who aren't participating.
>signed
Good.
>>
>>4107254
Thanks rose. please dont be ded
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>>4107801
I can't quite place why, but you drawings seem to have taken a noticeable leap in expressiveness with these last few examples. Kudos.
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>>4107926
That's one of my favorite Zootopia pics.
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>>4107841
I THOUGHT THESE WERE FOR REVIEWING WRITEFAGS WORKS AND POSTING CUTE PICTURES! THEY'RE ALL TERRIBLE!
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>>4107841
>>"I'M GLAD YOUR DOG'S DEAD!"
kekd.
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>>4107962
Thank you. This was my first time trying coloring, for TT I will probably bring something non colored, I have so much to learn.
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>>4107883
focused on his grief? or will it be backstory?
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>>4108094
>Any kind of pressure on the balls
NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE
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>>4107907
>>4108137
just some more info

>>4107997
thanks! I'm trying to get better at it
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>>4108094
this artist is good
>>
>>4108094
source?
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>>4108037
Yes, well, time makes fools of us all.
But don't worry, there's a fail-safe.
Once this thread is over, the cloning facility will go with it, taking all of these... "things" with it.

Just keep close to me and we'll be fine.
Just a few more pictures to go.

>"WEAVER IS OVERRATED TRASH WHO CAN'T DRAW!"

Christ, looks like one caught up.
I'll try to hold him off.

>"CUT THAT ERP BULLSHIT!"

Just go!
Leave me!
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>>4108164
The size difference here is absurd
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Last for Jack!
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>>4108195
Good man.
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>>4108176
We'll remember your sacrifice, anon!
>>
Nick makes sure to rub down Judy so his scent is all over her before she goes out. Cant let those rabbit bucks get the wrong idea
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>>4108247
>They get the right idea
>They beat her for being a filthy predfucker
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>>4108176
>>"CUT THAT ERP BULLSHIT!"
but I like reading that ERP bullshit

That ERP bullshit is hot
>>
>>4108277
>>4108277
>>4108277
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>>4108263
>two rabbits dead
>Suicide by cop
>>
Anyone else go back and rewatch scenes while writing something and pick up new things each time? Or maybe a scene that didn't seem to hit you in the feels on your first watch really gives you a feel-gutpunch another time?

For me, it was the post-press conference confrontation between Judy and Nick. After she folds the application and puts it away as Nick is walking out the door.. That breathless "no...!" as she sees her first Zootopian friend hurting. Her confusion at her "betrayal". The way she can't pursue him as he walks into the blinding light, leaving her alone in darkness. In a city tearing itself apart. The lines were always there, now they were toxic. Electrified. Prey just wanted to be safe. Prey were just afraid. Judy reached for her fox spray. Nick was coming at her just as Gideon had 15 years ago. She just wanted to be safe. She was just afraid...
Predators just wanted to be accepted. Predators just wanted to belong. Nick was scared and confused all those years ago when the scouts had muzzled him. Nick just wanted to be accepted. Nick just wanted to belong. When he saw the savage preds locked up and muzzled, he could see himself there eventually if the mistrust Judy had inadvertently sewn came to fruition. Never let them see they get to you.
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>>4108176
>>4108195
>>4108235
>>4108281
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q0KHS-AD14w

>And so /ztg/ was spared the cruel fate of being overrun and consumed by the VRBit clones
>Hopefully anonkind will learn from this mistake, and never allow a repeat of these events to occur
>Only time will tell...
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>>4108176
I can't believe CloneAnon is fucking dead...
>>
>>4108158
heartbeat effect is cool. expressions flow better in this context
but WHO WAS HE WITH
>>
>>4108380
>I was with my ice-cream, where did I put it?
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>>4108169
The name is right there, dude.
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>>4108362
I have an idea:
CLONE VRBIT WITH DRAWFAG DNA!
NOTHING CAN GO WRONG!
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>>4106398

Thank you, Alec, I was bummed all day because I thought you'd bailed on us.
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>>4108189
Absurdly hot
>>
>>4107758
"Fuck the police" would have been a more fitting caption.
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>>4107875

That's my fetish.
>>
Any Vietnam green text?
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