/TLHG/ The Loud House General BOW BOW BOWWW BOWWW edition &

Leni is ugly

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Tell Luna your favorite song

Metal Edition

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A happy Leni is a cute Leni!

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I can understand when a thread is nearly on its end, but we have one up far away from the image limit yet.

Lunafags are the real cancer of /tlhg/, jfc.

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>>3979008
So instead of just deleting it entirely, you call attention to it even further.
You fucking dumbass piece of shit.

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>>3979532
And you're stupid too. This thread was obviously created to avoid the stupid discord drama, but now it's only going to propagate it.
Bitch ass motherfuckers, the lot of you.

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>>3979534

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>>3979452
bottom feeder by parkway drive

>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46MALEk-7cE

>>3979008
>No discord link
Thank fuck

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In light of what's happened recently, here's an image to brighten your day

>>3979534
>>3979570
why, my peenus weanus of course :) hahaha! its my weeeeeenus peanus! haha. my answer is, of course, my peanus weenus :D

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>>3979570
>Implying it wouldn't since we're at night /tlhg/

ffs, this Discord shit drove us to our end. Let's hope to get some faggot willing to draw shotas and lolis on /aco/ and SFW on /co/ and request from there so we can destroy the general instead of propagate the cancer on something that was called "The Loud House General" once.

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>>3979805
We have to keep this general alive autist

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>>3979830
Then stop stretching this shit of a conversation and ignore the fact that this drama ever existed already then.

Post cute!

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Question: has the Discord brought /tlhg/, as a whole, any good whatsoever?

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>>3979927
the what?

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Post Lucy!!!

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>>3979927
He's a MLP character I think

>>3979927
Back then, when the Discord used to be P U B L I C business. But it seems that some people don't like shitty drawings of underage cartoon characters either barely naked or even showing a fucking belly button.

>>3979927
I'm confused. I just got here why is everyone so.mad at the discord

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>>3979927
No. No it has not.

>>3979927
Nope. It's driving away content creators. I know at one point I wanted to start writing fics but apparently it's only for those with "quality" fics

>>3980061
They don't let non content creators in there??

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>>3980088
>>3980061
>>3980027
>>3980021
>>3979927
SHUT THE FUCK UP AND POST AND DISCUSS THE LOUD HOUSE

>>3979452
Not sure if it's metal or rock
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HORkT4a2MhQ

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>>3980106
Are you seriously saying that? In these threads?
Even disbarring the recent drama, when the fuck have these threads actually discussed The Loud House? And I mean the actual show.

>>3979977
And as usual, Discord brings utter chaos.

>>3980106
True true my dude. No point in making more drama.

Anyone else hoping they focus more on individual sisters? They feel like a unit right now.

>>3980149
I do hope that, but it probably won't happen. It's pretty much The Lincoln Show, with special guest your waifu/daughterfu/platonicfu.

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>>3980149
I hope they develop the Lucy.

>>3980272
I didn't like her whole thing about liking ponies. Goth girl likes girlie stuff is way too overdone.

>>3980303
And the goth girl likes me stuff isn't done enough.

:'(

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>>3980272
>>3980303
>>3980333
I want a goth girl that likes cybernetic organisms

>>3980333
>>3980398
I want to cuddle with a goth girl. She is emotionally needy, and I just want someone to cuddle with. Her or Leni would be the ultimate cuddlers.

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>20 images 'till all the fags migrate to this thread and start with the Discord shit.

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>>3980429
Cuddling with Lucy would be heaven

>>3980448
Shh just don't mention it. I don't even know what happened, and don't want to. Just ignore. They thrive off of (You)s, so don't give them none.

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http://pugavida.tumblr.com/post/147125915071/if-youre-attending-san-diego-comic-con-this-year

>>3980503
Someone from here needs to go there tbqh

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>>3980498
I know, it just is so sad that it will happen anyways.

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>>3980503
>>3980546
>mfw i live 2 hours away from San Diego
gentlemen, i have an idea

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>>3980597
NOW HOLD ON A MINUTE, PLAYAH

IF YOU TWO FAGGOTS ARE WANTIN TO LOVE EACH OTHER SO BADLY, WHY NOT TEST THAT LOVE IN A TAG-TEAM MATCH AGAINST RANDY ORTON AND LYNN

HOLLA HOLLA

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>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gs1Vw6i9NuQ

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>>3980722
Dress up as the Lucy.

>>3979452
https://youtu.be/rwrmt0DG6QM

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>>3980597
OTP

The Louds take a trip to the Grand Canyon, what happens on the trip there, and what happens when they finally get there?

Also how do Mr and Mrs. Loud take it?

>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FOCPi9bkvOA

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>>3979754

>>3980764
Lucy and Lincoln fall in love.

>>3980725
What is it with you and tag-team matches, Teddy?

>>3980690
Constructive criticism,woo!

How about I shift focus between interaction every ten parts? Would that make things better?

/r/ing Star laughing at Luans puns.

>>3980764
>what happens on the trip there
Wacky hijinks at the expense of the American Heartland

>and what happens when they finally get there?
A burrow tour goes horribly awry
>Also how do Mr and Mrs. Loud take it?
Mr. Loud will gander at the wonder that is the Grand Canyon.
Then he will turn to Mrs. Loud and say "It reminds me of yours."

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>>3980722
I see just what you're getting at Leni. I think it's time to plot a course!

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>>3980787
WHO YOU THINK YOU TALKING TO, PLAYA?

I KNOW

HOW ABOUT I PUT YOU ONE-ON-ONE WITH THE UNDATAKAH IN TONIGHT'S MAIN EVENT

HOW'S THAT SOUND?

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Rejected character names

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>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_kCNfXRGFo

>no new eps

I need my comfy dose. kill me

>>3980838
Lauren

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>>3980809
>reminds me of yours
good shit

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They might disagree on a lot of things, but I think the whole family loves Clint Eastwood

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>>3980838
Liberty

>>3980793
Interaction and violence/tension*

>>3980838
Lobo

>>3980503
>It's a 'Linc goes to a Con' episode
But seriously, I want to see this more than the things we'll get.

>>3980825
...Okay.

>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6SgEzZ1RD0

>>3980855
how would a western themed episode play out

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>>3979394
Before they could continue with the storm of questions Lincoln raised a hand, signaling his sisters to stop and let him talk.

"I never told you because I know you would've found a way to screw it up somehow. As for all your other questions about how does she look you will have to wait a little until she comes"

"She is coming here today?"

"Yep, I called her and she agreed to come, so i need you to be in your best behaviour"

"You don't have to worry Linc, we will not do a th-Luan drop that bucket right now"

Lori commanded the little trickster whe she saw what she was planning to do

"Awww, I just wanted to give Linc's girlfriend a WARM surprise

"...Is that water boiling?'

"Maaaaaaaaybe"

"Luan, you could seriously injure someone with a prank like that"

"Hey, that sounds like a plot for a Cartoon episode"

"Stop fooling around. It feels like we only go backwards with the topic. Lincoln, please explain everyone else the reason you decided to call your girlfriend"

After Luna said that, the sisters turned their heads towards their brother expecting what he had to say about the situation.
Inhaling some air, Lincoln started speaking

"Im sick and tired of everyone saying I have a 'Sister Complex', so i got a cute girlfriend to myself. Now you will finally stop mocking me"

"Lola, what is a 'Sister Complex'?" Asked Lana confused

"They talk about how Lynn and Lincoln are in love but they deny it"

"Oh, cool...wait, isn't that illegal?"
"Not in the South I think"
"They really like to keep everything In the family down there"
"Are your kids going to end like Leni Lincoln?"
"What did she mean by that Lori?"
"Ackshually inbred Children only have a 3% extra of chance of birth defects"
"No seriously, what did Lola meant by that"
"She meant they are going to end up literally cute like you"
"Nice, Im going to be, like, the best aunt ever"

"Shut up!"

"Way harsh, bro. Why you gotta be do rude? Don't you know we are humanos too?"
"That was just MAGIC"
*Highfive*

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>>3980764
>Kids who is ready to go to the Grand canyon
>then luan stands up ''But Dad we all have been there already''
>Yeah, you at least Eleven times if not more, he hehe, get it.

>>3980793
Do you have a link to the fic? All I've read was that update you posted and I'd like to read it all so to give you more in-depth feedback.

>>3980838
Landre

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Luanfags represent

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>>3980856
you liked that shit didnt ya, bitch.

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Take this rare Luan /tlhg/. It's just for you and no one else!

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>>3980927
I did

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you guys think the loud siblings fights get out of hand sometimes?

>>3980838
Lacy
Lara
Laya
Leia

>>3980929
>her legs on the left
>the rest of her on the right
Did she get cut in fucking half or what?

>>3980943
More Leni abuse WHEN?

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>>3980929
Take this rare Luna /tlhg/. It's just for you and no one else!

>>3980897
I dont get it

>>3980943
>>3980954
Fuck all of you, the Louds are not for abuse.

>>3980943
I doubt it
Lori would put a stop to it, seeing how she would be blamed for it

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Doing requests

>>3980927
It fits way to right.

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>>3980813

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>>3980943
Nah, she likes it.

>>3980957
its like some kind of high art

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give me requests

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>>3980943
i'm sure they don't want to hurt each other THAT bad
r-right?

>>3980961
She is calling her moms vagina a grand canyon.

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>>3980838
Leno

>>3980985
Lucy going to Comic Con with Lincoln and Luna.

>>3980970
Lola singing while Linc climbs a ladder.

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>>3980921
Represent!

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>>3980985
Lola as Sam Hyde

>>3980686
More ear piercing action coming your way
>Lucy braced herself, ready to accept the oncoming pain
>Lucy probably experience the most painful day of her life
>In an instant, the burning sensation of the hot needle spread all over her body
>Lucy let out a scream as the needle burned her ear.
>"Quit squirming. It can't be that bad." Luna said as she pushed the needle. If Lucy could, she would've slapped Luna right then and there
>Lucy held onto the couch and gritted her teeth. She could get through this. That's when she felt the needle go through.
>Luna had managed to pierce the first ear
>"Wasn't too bad. Now onto the second ear"
First time writing anything involving the Loud House. More?

Lana is cute

>>3981052
Go for it, mang. I briefly considered getting a piercing, but I'm a huge pussy and also worked in an office at the time, so an 8-year old getting one is brutal compared to that

>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QBzd8yMUs1k
No really, this is (from a) metal (album)

>i always forget about lucy
>story of my life
the delivery of this line always makes me kek

>>3980889
The White Rabbit (Lincoln) strolls into a town that 8 different bandit groups are fighting over.

The town people beg him to help end the war between

>Long Haul Lori
>Lughead Leni
>Last Stand Luna
>Last Laugh Luan
>Leathered Lynn
>Lost Lucy
>The Lunatic Twins
>And Learned Lisa

He settles it peacefully

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>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyhrYis509A

>>3980813
intercourse

>>3981052
Do more, this is great

>tfw waiting for more episodes

>>3981136
>The mastermind behind all of it, the one pulling the strings, there is Lustful Lily

>>3981172
I know who's sucking the dic

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>>3981198

why is this thread so empty?

>>3981251
it's late at night

>>3980838
Lammy

>>3981198
>tfw can't find a doctor to put me in a medically induced coma until new episodes start airing

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>>3981251
>night time
>no new episodes
>even that comic thing was novel for about a day
>stupid drama rubbing people the wrong way
>people doing their own thing

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>>3981273

>>3981205
>implying Lily isn't the useless town sheriff

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>>3981262
Is cute! CUTE!

>>3980895
I like this but I had to reread those quotes to figure put who was who

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I draw something before bedtime. It's not finished yet....

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Fool that you are, for you trust the chemicals in your brain to tell you they are chemicals. Will you fight? Or will you perish like a dog?

>>3981282
Personally I like post-shit nighttime /tlhg/, I can follow it at a reasonable pace while also devoting most of my attention to writing.

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>>3981300
I like it.

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>>3981289
you know it

luna/lammy fan art when? they're almost practically the same character!

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>>3981273
>Clyde's BBC
The only thing she might reach in all her life maybe.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z7aj9H9gPI0

>>3981300
Is she invoking the dark powers?

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>>3980895

All groaned at the joke, even though nobody got it they could Imagine it was a shitty reference.

When they all calmed down Lori aproached Lincoln and put a hand In his shoulder reassuringly

"It doesn't matter now Linc, the important thing here is that you finally went over your sick incestual complex"

"I never had a Sister Complex to begin with Lori"

"Whatever helps you sleep at night bro"

"What about those weird japanese comics about older sisters under your bed?"

"T-those mean nothing...they are called 'Manga' btw"

"I don't really care Linc. What about that one time you dated a complete copy of Leni, but with 11 years Old"

"I really miss being, like, Lincoln's favorite" Said a dejected Leni

"At least you got to be Lincoln's favorite" Said a sad, and cucked Lucy

"I already told you guys that my ex didn't look like Leni at all"

"Uh-huh, what was her name again?"

"Lenisse"

Lori made a face like 'Nigga, you retarded or what?'

"I fail to see the connection Lori"

"Nevermind Lincoln, keep living In denial, see if I care"

It was no use arguing now, he only had to wait some couple of hours before he could rub his girlfriend to their faces.
----A couple of hours later----

The ringbell started ringing, calling all the house members towards the door to see Lincoln's girlfriend

Lincoln made them a sign to call down and Stay behind the door and In a whisper he said

"Remember, best behaviour, no bullying"

Lincoln opened the Door and then SHE finally appeared

"Yo"
.
.
.
"Why is Lincoln dating Lynn 2.0: Electric Boogaloo"
Said Luan In a hushed voice

"Jesus Christ Linc"
"At least we can see why she is RELATIVE to your interests bro"

>>3981289
is that from a lewd pic? If so could you post the full image?

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>>3981282
Fic of Lincoln stealing Bobby's underwear when?

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>>3981282
i just want July 18 to come already

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>>3981307
You callin' me stupid?

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>>3980106
I for one want to see some fleshed out Lori. Besides just the usual "text Bobbie" shit.

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>Do a lincoln kissing Lynn and her going nuts or really blushing
I made it a gif, hopefully it turned out ok.

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Okay, does anybody (anybody at all) have the Luna/Lincoln fic from last night?
I'm gonna be so mad if no one saved it.

>>3981420
We have the episode coming up where she gets a job, we'll see if her responsibility at home translates to anything in public.

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>>3980699
>Lincoln puts each girl through conditioning
Which sister would be the hardest to break in?

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>>3981432
amazing

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>>3981080
No she isn't.

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>>3981432

>>3980943
>Damn, Leni. You didn't have to gut that biker just because he said seafoam was tackier than fuschia

>>3981432
cute!

>>3981439
Leni tbqh, since she wouldn't even conceive of what he was trying to get her to do.

>>3981367
Maybe
I will finish another day, I have work tomorrow at 7AM.
>>3981330
Thank you.

>>3981435
What was it about? Push come to shove, it can be screencapped.

>>3981251
These threads suck ass and drove people away. It's also late.

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>>3981451
Yes she is

>>3981472
Leni seems like she'd be easy.
Get her to sit for a smoothie, get her to shake for the latest fashion magazine, etc.

>>3981439
Lisa would be hardest to mentally break

>>3979452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1vo5Rn4dwhs

>>3981451
She's disgustingly cute and cutely disgusting.

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>>3980793
I just read through some of the first part and I have to be straight with you.

This story is a mess; though keep in mind I'm trying to offer constructive criticism.

Firstly, you have to fix your grammar and sentence structure. Semicolons are a thing, use them when you have two thoughts but not enough words to create a sentence around the second; essentially just tack on an incomplete yet related sentence. Also you are adding commas when there shouldn't be any, it causes the sentence to look very broken and jarring

Secondly, paragraphs dude; you have to use them. Once again, the lack of paragraphs make the whole story look very broken. While it is true that you should create new paragraphs for a new subject, try to merge any semi related thoughts into one paragraph, even it means rephrasing it.

Thirdly, I've noticed a lot of typos; spaces in the middle of words, missed capitalizations, and spelling errors. Even if you're writing in green text, take your update through some kind of spell check before adding it to the paste bin.

Fourthly, don't use things like "1)" or "(Lucy's POV) find ways to integrate those into your story. Instead of

>While he decided he kept the thing in the attic, and ever since two things have been happening.

1)weird banging noises have been coming from the dank,dark area.

2)Lucy had been going up their at nights far more often then she usually would.

Get rid of those numbers and change them into full sentences. Change it to how I'm doing it with "firstly" and "secondly"

Also on the note of the latter issue, find a way to let the reader know who is narrating the story in a natural way. Instead of saying whose perspective is taking place like "(Lucy's POV)" narrate it in a way that the reader can know who is telling the story.

Lastly, please, please keep your tenses consistent; it's one the biggest things that bothers me and it's a very common mistake. Don't write in past tense then switch to present mid paragraph or idea.

>>3981501
Cute!

>>3981432
Top tier

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>>3979927
You motherfucker I was playing KOTOR just a few days ago.

What build should I try for my next run?

Lincoln is targaryen.
Lincoln incest.

>>3981505
You'd think so, but when he goes to try and get that behavior without the rewards she'll immediately lose interest. And then when she does go through with the proper behavior, it gets all fucked up anyway.

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>>3981477
It was in pastebin.
It was something about Lincoln seeing something on a TV show that was saucy and went quickly to his room to rub one out and Luna giving him the talk. And there was gonna be more, but the writer wanted to finish it before posting the rest.

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>>3981373

http://pastebin.com/9DeHsPiP

There it is, bin updated.
I plan to end it by tomorrow or Sunday.
If my grammar is even more fucked than yesterday blame the Vodka.

Man, writing puns When English isn't your first language is hard

I don't know what i will write next, I have two ideas:

Luna x Reader

r63Leni x Reader (Ye, faggotry)

That is all, going bed now.
Have some comfy Spanish music to sleep

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hAxiPFE6pqM

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>>3981562
BEST
HAREM
ANIME

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>>3980793
(Cont.)

While there isn't much left to say, I just wanted to add that I couldn't get through it, it's too jumbled. Hopefully once you clean it up, I can look at it again and help you with the direction thematically, but you have to fix the technical problems first.

I'm sorry if this sounds harsh, but that's just how it is. I hope this helps.

>>3981590
But none of them are trying to get into his pants or smacking him for having a penis.

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>>3981624
not yet

>>3981432
Exquisite

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>>3981523
Update for only son when man?

>>3981571
This?
http://pastebin.com/dp48Nd0v

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>>3981637
who let that chimp out of its cage?

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>>3981432

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>>3981669

>>3981680
QUICK AND NIMBLE

>>3981584
Getting some F.R.I.E.N.D.S. vibes from your story man. Lookin' forward for the conclusion and the Luna x Reader story.

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post her face when she sees your junk

I was just reading a fic where Lincoln gets adopted whered it go

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>>3981680

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>>3981680
SHE

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>>3981694

>>3981695
WE WUZ

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>"Ugh, I literally rented this for six dollars! Why did you pick THIS for family movie night?"

>"Am I the ONLY one who understands the complexities of this ambitious cinematic masterpiece?! This movie ISN'T stupid! YOU'RE STUPID!"

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>>3981704

>>3981713
HAS

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>>3981664
YES good lord, thank you!
Really hope he posts the other half.
>>3981669
>>3981680
BEADY ANGLO EYES

>>3981662
>that pic
Finish that drawing anon

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>>3981662
I made a post the other day saying that I've got a lot of real life shit going down and some other personal problems, so I'm taking a small break from writing just so I can get shit sorted out and collect myself.

I'm not sure when I'm coming back to write again, but I will come back; I just need some time.

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>>3981713
HAS

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>>3981704

>>3981720
Stay rekt, Lori

>>3981720
OH THAT'S PERFECT.

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Lana, sucking Lincoln's dick and wiping off all of his delicious smegma and enjoying it as a tasty snack.

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>>3981704

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>>3981771

>>3981720
Please pass the egg salad.

>>3981720
this reminds me of Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy, is it Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy?

>>3981773
DONT YOU LAUGH AT IT

>>3981720
Dat reference. HAHA

>>3981786
imagine clyde sniping lola from a parking garage

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>>3981816

>>3981798
It's referencing exactly that.
>>3981792
RAGGLE FRAGLE

>>3981553
>White hair
Why has no one made this connection before
>implying his sisters arent NTRd by the Knight of the Smug Tree

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>>3981733
Not mine familia, some drawfriend made it but couldnt finish it so he gave me this and im happy with it
>>3981739
Thats too bad bruh, take your time to get better.

>>3981838
AHHH, somebody help me

>>3981828
cute

CUTE

>>3981695
Does Clyde have freckles?

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Lucy should smile more.

>>3981816
I second this.

>>3981798
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sTIdOL77XKc

>>3981911
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1esrEb9p0Wc

>>3981911
thats the one, the chupacabra episode

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>>3981720
>>3981792
>>3981815
>>3981873
>>3981838
>"Whachu want lil lady? Dracula can't always be takin time out of his day for autographs. He gonna miss his free breakfast at the Senior Center!"

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>>3981911
>911
noice

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Does Luna smoke weed and grind her pussy with other girls

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>>3981739
Not him, but take as long as you need man. I like when you update because it has the right amount of fluff to keep a nigga satiated. I really loved your ending to the match making fic.

Would it be alright if I could ask for some critisism on my fic I got going on? It is a fic about Luna and Luan getting high and I plan to write it based on real stuff. I want to know how it reads because I feel like my dialog could use some work and I don't know where to start on that. It is a bit silly, but silliness really works for me.

Here it is: http://pastebin.com/wAAPfHQq

>>3980895
>>3981373
>>3981584

thanks m8

I really like these.

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>>3982013
>"That was one time, Anon!"

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I'm not the only one who wants to slowly take off her socks and give her a feet massage right?

>>3982074
Anon, I don't know how to tell you this, but I think yo may in fact be the only one.

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>Leni with a ponytail
wew lad

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>>3982074
I'd massage her feet if she really wanted me too to be honest.

>>3982104
Perfect for pulling while riding her like a stallion.

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>>3982097
Pfft!!! Next you'll be telling me I'm the only one who wants to stare at her butt all day right?

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>>3982067
Just enouugh to be a thing

>>3982125
Would you be her footsie friend? Her guy friend that she can randomly take her shoes off under a table with and start a toesie war?

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>>3982177
"Guy friend" that's a funny way to spell "boyfriend" anon, but yes

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOCw_7zd2q8

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>>3982173
>"You keep this quiet, you bloody mongrel. Snitches get stitches!"

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Can somebody put out the agreed list of rule 63 names?

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>>3982074
I want to. And I'm not event into feet. It's just an intimate thing.
Especially the undressing her part.

>>3981373
Ace pun at the end

>>3982177
Yeah I would

>>3980943
Fic where one of the Louds accidentally kills another in a fight?

>>3982227
That scene is so fucking jarring in an already out-there movie.

>>3982013
> smoke weed
when the occasion calls for it
> and grind her pussy with other girls
not yet but she'd be willing to try

>>3982223
> those panties
what the fuck, did she shit herself or something

>>3981373
>>3982240
It's supposed to be "relevant to your interests," unfortunately.

>>3982219
THAT'S NOT ME BRO
WHAT ABOUT MY HAIR BRUH

>>3982263
Someone please write this

>>3982074
> not fucking her with the socks on
I think your priorities are wrong here

>>3982273
Oh. Its a doggy dog world

>>3982199
If you're her boyfriend, you'd be doing a lot more than footsie. Hope you don't mind the unexpected toe-nibble now and then.

>>3982223
Lincoln is Liberty

>>3982284
The question is, who should it be?

>>3982308
> Luan will never nibble on your toes
I may as well just curl up in a corner and slowly die

>>3982323
I mean, who should be the Loud that gets offed and who does it?

>>3982318
But what about the rest?

>>3982345
Lynn roughhouses too hard and Leni accidentally pushes her down the stairs

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>>3982219
Really think i'd do that?

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>>3982308
Yeah, but footsie is still fun, you can still appreciate the little things inbetween makeout sessions

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLHio5xd0vk
If you want a good laugh.

>>3982363
Somebody get on this

>>3982074
god damn I need more lynn/luan stuff, makes my dick hard

I like how Luan and Luna were fighting for the remote, pushing against each other with their butts.

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>>3982376
>"C'mon... What do you want, eh? Can't have people thinkin' I'm some sorta carpet-muncher..."

>>3982345
Luan goes too far in scaring Leni with spiders that she run to a slippery floor and hit her head on the corner of the kitchen

>>3982434
The way they were situated, if Luna had any sense she would have put Luan in a full nelson with one arm and just grabbed the remote with the other. At that point Luan's lucky that the room was packed, otherwise Luna could have done anything she wanted with her.

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Isn't the real question though, what kind of weed does Luna smoke?

inb4 blue dream

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where can I post unforgiven lewds without getting banned? I fear that tumblr might kick me out and frankly, it's the most user friendly page I've ever used.

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>>3982470
What puns would Luan make at the funeral to lighten the mood?

>>3982504
Pixiv.

Found the list
Lori-Lars
Leni-Leny
Luna-Leon
Luan-Loyd
Lynn-Lyle
Lucy-Liam
Lola-Luke
Lana-Lane
Lisa-Luis
Lily-Levy

>>3982504
Tumblr will kick you out over Loud House Lewds of underage girls, they think animated characters have feelings

>>3982504
> that pic
oh jesus fuck a naked baby how horrifying

also right here will do just fine

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>>3982499
Alaskan thunderfuck

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>>3982461
I wonder

>>3982499
Speaking of which, what happened to the Anon that was writing that fic where Luan and Luna smoke weed?

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>>3982469
>>3982477
thats pretty cool

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>>3982461
I wanna munch on lunas carpet

>>3982469
is...is this actually done by Aaron McGruder?

>>3979972
I like how you portray Lincolns hedgehog dilemma. Can't wait to see how he comes out of it and on a sister by sister basis. Unlike his real sisters Lincolns love isn't unconditional or equal.

>>3982577
Yotsuba what the shit you're 5.

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>you will NEVER lie in bed and cuddle with her until you both pass out in each other's arms

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>>3982538
just HOW underage?

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>>3982016
It's pretty solid though there are some things you could stand to change.

For starters you've got a lot of broken sentences that can be fixed by added semicolons such as

>"Hey Luna you ready for tonight? We got a pretty sweet strain called Lemon Haze. It is a nice Sativa hybrid that can chill us all out,"

Change that period after haze to a semicolon as it continues the thought, as well as fix that comma at the end.

I personally would change "Dank ganja" into something that isn't too foreign to the reader. Using slang terms like that is okay, but it's more suited to dialogue rather than narration; use non-slang to describe something as to not confuse the reader, otherwise they have to go off of context.

Also there is a tense change in line one, it should be "was" instead of "is"

There were a few sentences where I was confused as to what you were trying to say; most notably in line 3.

The rest of it is more or less the same issues, some rephrasing might help as well as maybe using more contractions when it comes to dialogue. People often say "You're" instead of "You are" plus it makes the dialogue smoother.

I can't really say anything as far as the content goes since I'm not a marijuana user, but keep up the good work.

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>>3982549
>"Well well well, you're the dogs bollocks, aren't you?"
>"Pretty sizable... Hmm... How long've you been pent up for, luv? You can tell me~"

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>>3982548

>>3982623
Anything 16 and lower I guess.

They also hate loli, those bastards [spoiler] and you would get banned over Lisa leads because She's a shit character and underage

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>>3982639

>>3982268
When did this turn to Night Call all of a sudda

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>>3982579
no.
>>3982623
It really just depends on the type of user that decides to just randomly fuck your shit up.

>>3982654
I meant Lewds, not leads, damn auto correct

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>tfw no gothic older sister

>>3982509
sorry im not good with puns

>>3982345
Of mice and men with Leni strangling Lisa or a twin

>>3981681
I wish Bobby was my boyfriend

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>>3982695
No homo, right?

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>>3982499
do you think she listens to vaporwave

>>3982695
I wish Bobby fucks Lincoln

>>3982695
Lincoln pls

>>3982509
> I didn't mean to steal her away... but you said I cadaver! Ahaha!
> Do I miss her? Of CORPSE I do! Haha!
> What, tough crowd? You've ROT to be kidding me! Hahaha!
> What's wrong, Lincoln? You look like you've seen a ghost! Haha!
> I know you were just DYING to be here, Leni! Ahaha!
> Killer party you're throwing here, Dad! Haha!
[s] I'm sorry [/s]

>>3982469
>>3982477
One of the Louds is the second coming of Christ, but which one?

Goodnight folks. Buenas noche

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>>3982721
all bow down to our new lord and savior

>>3982528
>Lucy-Liam
I dont like it, id swap it with Lola

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>>3982713
>GET IT???? BECAUSE LENI IS DEAD. NO LONGER IN THIS WORLD, KICKED THE BUCKET, IN A BETTER PLACE, D E A D???!!!??! HAHA WHY ARE ALL OF YOU CRYING?

>>3982703
>her clan symbol is her sunglasses
CUUUUUTE

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>>3982703
I'm not some kind of faggaroni macaroni

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>>3982016
Also I want to say thank you for enjoying my stories so much! I was particularly happy with how I ended "Matchmaking" so it's nice to see that other people were satisfied with it.

Hopefully my post helps you out, but for the most part your dialogue doesn't feel all that stilted except for some needed contractions.

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>>3982713
>>3982764

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>want to write a comfy fic
>has never written a fic before
welp

>>3982713
>>3982764
sonofabitch

>>3982778
who do you want to write about?

start with the characters, and then think about a premise.

or go in reverse, think of a cute scenario and think about who would fit well in it.

have fun with your writing!

>>3982628
Thanks Papa Nito, I'm glad to have actually gotten criticism of the fic. This is the one I feel can entertain a few people if they stumble across it.

I'll be going to bed now but I screen shot your reply so I can set myself in front of my laptop and fix what I can before I actually continue. Again man I am super grateful