Zootopia thread: making the world a better place edition Pa

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>>3572051

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First for comf

I wanna fuck Gazelle!

Need some moon translators on this.
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>>3576250
Anon, I think we had a chat about this. You get desustorage, I get the threads. Kindly delet.

>>3576250
A lie repeated often enough becomes the truth

>>3576229
Sorry I had to be the one to break it to ya. Don't take Furchan as a representation of normal.

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I have to go in a minute here, so here's a preemptive

>Schalke

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>>3574815
I'll take your suggestion, but the bad thing is I'm not a really good writer. Here's an example from god knows how long ago: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/176962/the-last-sparks

Anyways, with that in mind, I have a big problem... I don't know where to begin.

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>>3576236
First time I saw that episode, I remember thinking, "okay, so he's gonna rip his eye off."

Nope.

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>>3576236
>in an alternate universe, Judy trains so hard to become a police officer she can defeat anything in one punch
>She unfortunately becomes bald
>Also, Nick is a cyborg for some reason

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Oh, come on, we both know how much curiosity and the desire to "Try Everything" are powerful influences. It's beyond a minority of boys being needy. It's a gigantic number, maybe even a plurality, thinking of how good it would feel to have a large, strong mammal gently and warmly cradling them to sleep while whispering about how much of a cute treasure they are.

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>>3576284
Someone will be here to pick up the mantle worry not.

>>3576298
Nobody cares about your edgelord murderer sparkledog. Figure out how to write the fic and come back with something substantial, or shut up about it please.

We don't care about your history of fic writing. Really.

>>3576283
Here's the thing though.

If you assume both pred and prey follow the idea of sleeping with their own kind 99% of the time, that still leaves 1% on each side.

But of course 90% of Zootopians are prey. So for every pred looking for prey, there's 10 prey looking for preds.

>>3576283
There's over 10 million bunny females out there, seriously, at least one of them would probably like to at least meet that guy.

>>3576244
>Honestly you've probably been better at it than the guy I pay, you don't even flinch when you call me a "little rabbit cunt"
>I... what?
>Are you looking for employment?

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Never once have either of these bunes done anything to harm one another

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>>3576254
Gimmie a HUUG, bun!

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7247398

Shocking expose of Beaver experimenting with Pastor! Is anyone safe from this menace?

>>3576352
And there's no way it's as much as 99%. No way. Not with the way that Timber and other websites are so popular. Not with the pred/prey bars that seem to be booming all of the time.

>>3576365
Depends if you mean whether he used to trunk to get her off or if he just knotted her.
Judy would probably get off harder if she roleplays that it's Nick's son.

>>3576363
>oh yeah, sorry about murdering your friend.
>I would have said something sooner but it seemed like all this was helping you work through your issues.

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>>3576332
that's an uncommon reaction to OC among anons. Times change I suppose.

>>3576236

>One punch man as recommended
>no you see, he's practically dr Manhattan, so there's none of that usual shounen power level or other boring cliche stuff

>Watch the show
>Introduce side characters to do all the cliche power level bs and "ironically" have long as back stories and the general plot is seemingly designed to deny you any satisfaction as the Japanese have depressed boners for unrecognized and uncelebrated heros

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Prey and predators live together in Zootopia, but it can be somewhat safe to assume that this was not always the case. In our own world, while there were multi-ethnic territories and nations even in classical times, there were smaller and more ethnically homogeneous cultures as well. So, knowing this, it is not unreasonable to assume there there were mono-species cultures, or single species dominant cultures, in Zootopian history.

So on that note, do you think there were any long lasting rabbit kingdoms, or not? Could such a nation be economically viable? Would such a nation be militarily capable, or would it be soon annexed by a different culture?

>>3576332
No, (You) don't care. Don't get ass mad when someone wants to improve shitty OC.

>>3576411
They've been posting and reposting it and about it for like a week now. It's edgelord shit. It brings nothing interesting to the table until they do more with it and shit out pictures and whinge about how nobody else will write about it for them

>>3576399
>Oh, he's not dead, he just left me for a rabbit boy after your massage, said he couldn't get the idea of soft rabbit paws on his knot out of his head
>But I broke his neck!
>You know you're a rabbit, right?

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>>3576389
Yeah, I was just grabbing a small percentage to show that even if you assume it's just one in a hundred for each of them, the chances are actually still good.

It's alright Bunner, no need to be so sad; go find your foxy toy so that he can make you glad!

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>>3576417

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If a bit of shilling is okay, then I'd love for you guys to take a look at my tiny weasel on big fox story thing:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7243201

Male on male romance with size difference playing a big role. Any commentary about problems, weird things, or anything else please post. Thanks guys.

What the fuck is this Officer Content bullshit going on in this thread?
It's supposed to be comfy dammit

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>>3576323
Exactly right

>>3576417
It's actually a thing in the wild where, if a fox loses it's den to a cave-in or similar, it will sometimes move in to a rabbit burrow. And if it's getting enough food and feels secure in it's food supply it won't even try to eat the bunnies it's now living with.

So why not a two-species culture?

>>3576451
That's another issue. Assuming every mammal who brings up that you guys are pretty shitty towards prey suddenly wants to fuck a pred. It's possible to field an issue without irony.

>>3576440
have they? I must've missed it because I quickly skip over context I don't find interesting - lurking around these parts teaches one how to filter out context on almost subconscious level.

Harsh feedback is also very useful however, so I hope the anon takes it well.

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>>3576474

>>3576363

>Jack has literally just been lounging around in this guys house for free, wearing his clothes like oversized pajamas and drinking and eating anything he wants in between hard, furious power bottoming sessions
>Calls the Bureau (Burrow) of Defense on his wristwatch like at the end of campy spy movies, half naked and with a glass of wine in his hand to report on another mission well done
>Such is another day in life as the country's most dangerous, openly gay spy

>>3576471
>I normally eat bunnies but you guys are cool.

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I want to lewd jude

>>3576464
The only 'Officer Content' going on is towards some character that's been posted over and over and over again over the past few weeks by the same person, and as far as I can tell it's only character trait is that it is a murderer.

Being critical of bad things is not being Officer Content.

>>3576496
That is a different kind of gay

We've already established the thread's feelings on pred/prey stuff. But where do those who are both predator and prey fit into that?

>>3576498
I always imagined Jack as some absolutely hedonistic bisexual who's willing to fuck and be fucked by anyone who asks.

>>3576460
>Shilling with an OC in the thread
You're a brave sole anon. But I'll read it.

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>>3576440
>whinge about how nobody else will write about it for them

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>>3576489
You have a point, I should apologise for that.

Have some prey and prey stuff instead to make up for it.

>>3576511
>Being critical of bad things is not being Officer Content.
agree

>>3576411
In the past thread, there was one 'meh', one constructive criticism piece, and one 'just piss off' in terms of response. I think.

Which actually seems like a standard, full spectrum OC reaction.

>>3576526
Omnivores need to stop pretending and pick a side.

>>3576526
Omnivores are viewed like bisexuals.

"Oh, you're not really omni, you're just ashamed to admit you're a herbivore."

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>>3576467
I love these boys.

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>>3576264

>>3576417
>unreasonable to assume there there were mono-species cultures

it's literally completely irrational to assume there ever werent

i know this is the modern age where shame on you if you try to imply that trans interracial pangender muslim relationships are "normal" and fuck anyone who says otherwise but seriously especially since difference species can't interbreed there have to be straight, same species couples as the overwhelming majority just to continue the generations, especially considering the "losses" to death and decadence

>>3576215
>two (embed) s


REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>3576575
I wonder how devastated that bunny's burrow tends to be after a weekend of rough breeding from his boyfriend.

>>3576584
>Nick doesn't skip leg day

>>3576584
I'm not a fox I can't get off to this.

>>3576552
>>3576567
No, not like that. Bears are omnivores and yet pretty clearly preds.

I'm talking otters, weasels, stuff like that.

>>3576594
Way to reading comprehension, /pol/lack.

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>>3576607

>>3576366
Cutie had brought VRbune down to her special spot at the beach, hidden away enough where no one else could see
>"Like this!" Cutie rose a wave right up next to him
>VRbune was not getting the hang of body surfing, and his next wave sends him tumbling into the surf
>Cutie laughed while VRbune was submerged
>She sneakily took the opportunity to take off her bikini bottom and held it under the water in her toes
>VR sputters up and Cutie catches hold of him
>"G-guess I lost my balance!"
>"Oh no, I lost something too!"
>She slowly guided his hands under the water onto her buns
>VRbune blushes crimson
>He starts looking around frantically
>"I'll find it!"
>He dives away and starts struggling to swim around, desperately searching the water
>Cutie giggled and licked her lips. He was cute when he was flustered
>VRbune suddenly has an idea
>He rushes out of the water, quickly dries his head, and puts on his headset
>"Just stay there, I'll be right back!"
>Cutie watches as he runs off and tries to call out to him
>She's alone in the water
>The beach is very empty. The nearest people are specks in the distance
>She hastily puts back on her bottom
>Breathing heavy, she gets out of the water
>She can't decide whether she should stay or try to find him
>She hadn't told VRbune how she couldn't stand being alone
>Cutie closed her eyes and started crying
>She needed someone to find her before it was all became too much
>"You found it!"
>Cutie opened her eyes and saw VRbune out of breath and holding a brand new one piece bathing suit
>"That's-*huff*-great! Consider this-*huff*-a gift then!"
>VRbune's headset flies off as Cutie tackles him into a tight hug
>She laughs as she rubs her face close to his, her tears disappearing in his wet fur
>VRbune chuckles in surprise.
>"Uh, I'm glad you like it!"

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>>3576366
VRbune's neglectfulness has hurt her feelings and made her feel unwanted. He has hurt her more than he realizes because he fell for the fucking VR gimmick.

But he's not to blame. Blame Pony Electronics.

>>3576417
I'd say 'fairly' mono-species cultures have and still do exist. Bunnies and other large-scale breeders are the most likely to form such a society.

For Zootopia itself, I sometimes headcanon that while not numerically dominant, wolves basically had a Roman Empire founded on the land at some point. For full grim dark, they even enslaved and bred many ungulates like pigs and sheep, thus why those two animals seem to have their domesticated forms.

on the note of heacanon'd Zootopian history, I also headcanon:
>Nick (actually a lot of foxes in the Zootopia region) descends from a famous, vulpine pirate hero ala Lafayette.
>Mammoths died out slower in this world, but they still died out, the last mammoth;s chronicles is basically the Zootopian version of Beowulf.

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guess the animal!!!!

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>>3576618

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Any drawfriends around?

>>3576625
Capybara?

>>3576528

bis are just gays who do a chick too somethimes

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>>3576627

>>3576622
D-do an alternate route where they fug

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>>3576633

>>3576388
I don't want to see like a dick, but is there any chance that you'd check out >>3576460 because I think you'd like it a lot.

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>>3576639

>>3576594
>it is not unreasonable to assume there there were mono-species cultures

I suppose I could have phrased it better, but come on man, you missed the start of the sentence. Work with me here.

>>3576417
Rabbits would make excellent pikemen (pikemammals?). One of the most important things to have in a pike formation is numbers, and you just brace the butt end against the ground, so small size and lower strength isn't a disadvantage.

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>>3576646

>>3576645
I've just started the second chapter, buddy.

>>3576627
>"Ma'am, you don't work here. Stop molesting the other guests, or we'll have to throw you out again."

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>>3576639

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>>3576644
...some sort of seal?

>>3576635
Are you implying that Jack is so desensitized to pussy that given the choice he'd always take the rough, violent rutting from a larger mammal so that he can orgasm as he feels his partner hammering against his prostate and bathing it in hot, thick cum?

>>3576642
>and den dey fug

>>3576594
Woah anon, chill out a little bit.

>>3576474
source?

>>3576489
Pfffffff, ribbing on prey when it's clearly not serious is no big deal. Especially when most of the guys here spend a huge chunk of them also getting into how much they want a cute prey to come home to, sloppy kisses at the door and all.

>>3576652
Personally, I am in love with the idea of rabbits and small mammals in mixed arm formations, with larger animals forming the bulk, and having rabbits fill in the gaps of a formation to try and get at ankles or fallen foes in the melee

>>3576318
Would furless Judy be cute? Or terrifying?

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>>3576627
>>3576639
>>3576646
>>3576655
So when are we gonna come up with a name for this midnight-hued bombshell?

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>>3576528

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>>3576631
Maybe

>>3576529
Thanks.

>>3576677
Sadly, unknown.

>>3576646
I want to hold her body close to mine, my hands sliding over her back, feeling her fur pass through my fingers.

>>3576697
Stoots!

>>3576702
Boy that Nick sure is purpley.

>>3576635
What if I'm a bi who's just straight but would do a dude too sometimes?

>>3576526
If your kind mostly used to eat other mammals, then I suppose it's clear-cut that you'd fall into 'pred'. So, bears are 'preds'.

>>3576725
you're gay

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Semi-writer fag here. I have been in these threads for months now, and even contributed a few things anonymously a couple of times. I have had this fan theory for a very long time, and is the only time I legitimately shipped two characters together like this. Probably one of the more autistic things I have done as well, but I have a feeling some here will like this.

I believe Dawn Bellwether and the Ottertons were lovers.

For Emmitt Otterton, it would have been for getting a hold of the Night Howlers since he is a florist. I also think there was something between Dawn and Mrs. Otterton beyond a simple friendship. When Mrs. Otterton leaves Bogo's office after Judy forces herself onto the case, she had only been outside the office door for about twenty seconds before Bogo opens the door again to have Judy say that she was not on the case. We see Mrs Otterton and Dawn holding hands and talking face to face, which would mean that the tww had only enough time to see each other, Dawn to run over, hold hands in greeting, and Otterton to give the good news to Dawn. That is not something a simple acquaintance does with a person who might not have much knowledge of your husband's disappearance. The two had to know each other very well, with Dawn not only having first hand knowledge about the missing otter (which is more clear obviously later in the film) but of Mrs Otterton as well. And once Dawn ensures that Judy is permanently on the case thanks to a phone call to the mayor, the sheep and otter leave together. I even saw Dawn give Mrs Otterton the sexy bedroom eyes before the two walk off screen.

I will continue in the next post in how I think this all comes together.

>>3576725
Bullshit, homo. Don't lie about liking chicks just so you don't get beaten up.

>>3576540
Indeed.

>>3576739
*you're

ftfy

>>3576683
Naturalist.
Panther.

>>3576526
What about predators who historically only eat bugs? Like anteaters?

>>3576744
I thought Mrs Otteton was in a secret lesbian tryst with Judy

>>3576683
Penny

>>3576601
Probably true, but then they're both lovingly caring and use a ton of lube.

>>3576318
>>Also, Nick is a cyborg for some reason

Oh god, if someone drew Nick as Genos my dick would instantly turn into diamonds.

It's fangs, fangs = preds

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Some fella asked me for variants of that one Weaver pic a couple of threads ago, after I left to sleep. Dunno if he's reading it, but here they are.

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>>3576633
correct :DDD>>3576697
>>3576697
now this one!

Holy shit

Chekov is dead

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>>3576747
But I can't resist these hot buns

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>>3576783

>>3576657
Alrighty cool.

>>3576678
I feel like it's two different parties. One in denial about swinging at least a little bit in the homo direction, and the other ranting about how lonely they are and how much they wish they had a prey to come home to, when really they don't care whether it's pred or prey.

>>3576757
those are prey because they don't eat meat from other animals

>>3576757
http://youtu.be/sjRZXJ1o0LE

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Otterly here. Getaway updated.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11951807/4/Getaway

For those who were here last night, I'm sorry for being such a faggot. It was disturbing to me how glaringly obvious some of my bullshit was and to think that I had no idea until I was at the shilling stage was scary. I felt like I had lost control over my own writing.

On another note, I want to get a one-shot out by tomorrow. Can you guys help me pick a prompt?
>Nick and Judy perform an exorcism
>Wolford and Snarlov investigate noise complaints coming from an abandoned building

>>3576770
What about a last name? I like Silverton. Penny Silverton.

>>3576786
I know, huge bummer. I thought he was great in the last couple movies.

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Fin.

If Femanon in Zootopia could be an actual thing, do you think that Gazelle would actively seek her out for weird, freaky lesbian fun?

>>3576298
If you want feedback on your sparkledog, I suggest hitting up the Comic anon. Hes taken every fic or lewd or post on here dead serious, so hell not flinch at your donut steel

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So I saw this image and thought about Nick and Judy running a room clearing drill in their new TUSK equipment.
I tried writing it and concluded that what I was writing was absolute ass, so I'm just going to stop and put this out here for you guys.

>>3576811
>>Wolford and Snarlov investigate noise complaints coming from an abandoned building
I dig this one more.

anyone have a stitched together version of this?
>>3569770

>>3576680
I'm guessing both hot and weird in a "Damn it, Boner" way.

>>3576803
Bugs are animals.

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>>3576785
It looks like a sad hippo, anon.

>>3576786
Some crazy, tragic shit, man. He was two years younger than I am, too. Spooky.

>>3576816
I can dig it

>>3576785
tear with hippo

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>>3576744

Now before Judy was even in the police academy, Dawn started to visit the flower shop that Emmmitt worked at. In doing her research, she got to know the otter and soon became friends with both him and his family. Now for the /trash/ part of my mind to add to this. Emmitt is documented in going to the nudist colony just for yoga. This makes it reasonable in thinking that he might be kind of the 'free love' mindset and open to having an open marriage, and that he would marry another otter of the same frame of mind. Thus, Dawn becomes a third lover of the Ottertons in order for her to try to get what she wants while also enjoying having some real friends with benefits.

Dawn did genuinely seem to care for Mrs Otterton in the short time they were shown together. The reason for Emmitt Otterton to become a victim of the Night Howlers was because he knew too much and figured out what was happening with the missing animals, he just did not know Dawn was the master mind. So Dawn had him shot while he was on the way to an unrelated business meeting, to later discover that he had gossiped the information to the limo driver right before he got shot. This is why Manchas knew of the NightHowlers and was also targeted.

Dawn could have also just had Emmitt shot just to remove a possible future problem. Or wanted Mrs Otterton to herself....

>>3576816
They can only be lesbian tho

>>3576460
>>3576645
Finished it, left feedback on AO3.

>>3576786
I thought you meant the original, weird way to go.

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>>3576526
>>3576552
>>3576567
>tfw people won't believe that you're a herbivore

>>3576816
>>3576857
>>3576866
We're doing Lord Byron's work, anons.

>>3576788
>Hot buns
>Implying men can't have hot buns

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Is it time for smugbun yet?

>>3576847
bugs are insects and don't fall under the same category as animals

>>3576870
Is there an edit of this with male Nick?

>>3576786
r.i.p poor young guy

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>>3576776

>nick: i want a gun arm
>doc: ok

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>>3576865
>>3576768

For more /trash/y thoughts, I will add that its possible that Judy was invovled in this relationship too. Dawn is there to help ease Mrs Otterton's worries while Emmitt is missing. Then Emmitt and the others are found and Judy passes out the hateraide to all of Zootopia on the news. Now Mrs otterton is having to see her husband acting like a savage animal, and with herbivores looking at her oddly for not only being a predator but for being the wife of one of the predators that went savage. She would of course seek help and council with her friend and lover, Dawn, as well as the rabbit who found her husband. And since Judy is on good speaking terms with the new Mayor and not seeing Nick at this time, she is likely invited to more than one dinner with them to talk about how to deal with Emmitt's condition, as well as the others, while trying to cheer up Mrs Otterton. After a few drinks and feeling lonely, it should not be hard to see Judy being involved with this shipping. This will explain why Judy was there more than once with Mrs otterton in seeing her husband, even being there at the very moment he woke up. This would also add to Dawn being seemingly shocked in Judy quitting the police and leaving the city.

Man, I wish they gave her a first name because I am getting tired of typing Mrs Otteton over and over

>>3576811
>>3576842

>Nick and Judy decide to have a quicky in an abandoned building
>Wolford and Snarlov investigate noise complaints coming from an abandoned building

>>3576894
Is it ever not?

>>3576883
>These canines are held loosely in their sockets, with their movement controlled by facial muscles. The buck can draw them backwards out of the way when eating. In aggressive encounters, he thrusts his canines out and draws in his lower lip to pull his teeth closer together. He then presents an impressive two-pronged weapon to rival males. It is due to these teeth that this animal is often referred to as a "vampire deer.

Best roll so far.

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>>3576891
They can, but that's why both are good.

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>>3576911
Good point.

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how do you pronounce "EWE"

it's pronounced :=

' For (you)'
:)

that's ur grammar lesson for today!~~

>>3576907
This is painful to look at. You can't ensure a smooth gun barrel like that. The thing would blow itself apart.

>>3576883

>evolve fangs to tell preds to fuck off
>now people tell you to fuck off pred
>need to spend another 20000 years unevolving this shit

Are there stories and pics about young rabbits actively evangelizing to other bunnies about "predator meat" and then there's like a whole clique of obsessives that form over it?

I'm thinking of like the "you're the one straight guy in the gay bar" scenarios when in a certain circle not having a predator is considered uncool.

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>>3576904
you stop that now

>>3576758
That's a cute vixen, KK. Got a bigger version?

>>3576907
Fight for JUSTICE!

>>3576902

how would you edit that into male nick

what line would you change

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>>3576702
Right, hi. I think there are more lurking quietly for fear of being bored with requests, but that's not quite it.

To foster creation of new content and have fun, how about we parrot Korean/JP twitter weekly challenge, maybe strawpolling a theme one week in advance and agree it gets posted on Thursdays?

like
>Thematic Thursdays
or something suitably autistic. Nothing special, any doodle would do as long as everyone is having fun! Possibly limit the selection to non-lewd themes because not all artists are comfortable with it, so more people participate.

>>3576844
http://imgur.com/a/swe1Y

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>>3576811
>"Nick and Judy perform an exorcism"

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>>3576883

>>3576964
Remove the eyelashes

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Post your favourite bits of heresy.

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>>3576908

And to explain why Dawn would even be in a relationship with a predator. She simply does not hate predators. Dawn never states in any way that she hates predators, the closest to that being when she mocks Judy for saying it was genetics. No where in the film does it show she actually hates predators. It was only a means to get into power and that was all it was.Which is seemingly more evil now that I think about it...

If she has a hate for anything, its towards bigger animals in general with her constant comments about how the little guys need to look out for each other.

Hope you guys enjoyed this little fan theory and minor analysis.

>>3576708
Ok thanks

>>3576910
Oooooooooohh

>>3576950
thanks but nope thats the size i made it in

>>3576987
I'd enjoy it more if you had some greentext of one of their illicit hookups.

>>3576811
Why do you use fanfiction.net and not somewhere else? Wondering.

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>>3576969
I'd be down for something like that. Sounds fun.

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>>3576969
>seeing Fournier smiling
>remembering that my happy days are long past as well
>hello darkness my old friend

>>3576980

open mspaint

it's quite easy, let it be your first edit

>>3576997
...can you make more of her?

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>>3576982
This one I don't hate, actually.

>>3576847
I'm pretty sure that they're not in the 'animalia' category.

>>3577019
sure, its supposed to be mrs wilde btw

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>>3576947

>>3576935

>vampire deer used to be the edgi, bad boy, practically a pred way of relieving that itch for little prey girls
>now that you can fuck a tiger without grandma dropping dead of disappointment they are rapidly losing their special status

>>3577014
http://youtu.be/u9Dg-g7t2l4

>>3577016
I'm not him, just saying what the difference seemed to be

>>3576997
>thats the size i made it in

are you using a mouse computer

>>3577038
She looks pretty young for Mrs. Wilde. I wouldn't have pegged her to be over 35.

>>3576757
>>3576803
>>3576847
>>3576899
BUGS COUNT AS PREY

PANGOLINS ARE ABSOLUTELY PREDATORS

>>3577047
BUNNY IS FOR FOX ONLY


ree

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>>3577067
yes
>>3577069
how old was she in the flashback?
also check'd

>>3576873
Glad you liked it and thanks again

>>3577025
They are, actually.

>>3577025
Er yeah.

Class Insecta
Phylum Arthropoda
Kingdom Animalia.


And strictly speaking bugs are Order Hemiptera within Insecta, but people use bug as a synonym for all insects.

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>>3576902
I got you.

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>>3577084

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jackajude

>>3577084
>>3576474
Bunny is for Fox and panther

>>3577120
I want to fuck this jude.

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>>3577096
Lessee, Nick was 9, so 23 years younger...somewhere in her late 20s/early 30s.

you cheeky little shit I swar on me mum

>>3577047
Does she even have a vagina here? It looks like his dick is just clipping through her.

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Why is just thinking about Jack Savage having his bunny ass crammed full of thick semen so appealing?

Can I see Jack Savage gay lewd images please?

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>>3576950
Got you, senpai.

>>3577155
I want to see Jack Savage fics.

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>>3576999
Nice trips.

I wish I could but I suck at that stuff. I am way too descriptive and feel restricted. I had a hard enough time working with the confines of the regular reply boxes here.

And I have not written anything pertaining to this idea. Like I said, this is the first time I shipped characters like this and not sure I can do it justice. Some day I might.

Anyone else is welcome to it though.

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>>3577047
IMPURE

>>3576887
Now we need more of her

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>>3577010
Awesome! One down, few dozen more to go.


Does anyone have any idea how to get the suggestion across to other drawfriends, if only to gauge their interest without being regarded as an obnoxious shill?

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>>3577050
>Preds who are into pred/prey stuff don't want something that has fang-looking shit in it's mouth
>Prey don't settle anymore
>Even if you do get someone into bed, they do shit like hang onto the tusks like they're antlers or something, practically yanking them out of your mouth
Interspecies stuff sucks for water deer

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>>3577177
*purification in progress*

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>>3577047

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>>3576982

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>>3577014
FUCK

>>3577007
There's not much of a reason, actually. I just started the story on FF.net for some reason.

Next chapter is the end of 'act one' so to speak. Once it's released I'm planning to get it up on AO3, maybe ask Comic to do a reading. I don't know. We'll see.

>>3577025
>>3577102
Well... SHIT

>>3576624
Rome seems particularly fitting for wolves, if only on the basis of the Roman founding myth

>>3577188
Nah, just be an obnoxious shill. Stuff like community draw events are something that most people can get behind. I wouldn't do it more than once per thread though. Directing artists as you see them to posts earlier in the thread is probably fine too.

>>3577047
The webm version is hot as fuck. Not really into this at all.

>>3577194
There's gotta be some weird niche outfoxing kink for you, right?

Can't be all desolate. There's a lot of kinks on the scene.

>>3576971
Saw the Conjuring 2 last night, thought that the main characters fit WildeHopps pretty well. Starting thinking of possibilities during.

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>>3576950
>>3577163
>>3576997
Waifu 2x is a wonderful thing. http://waifu2x.udp.jp/

(hope you don't mind KK)

Can i get a link to the blueray download? Still watching the jap one.

>>3577194
Have you tried paying alec for hot bondage sex?

>>3577102
>>3577080
>There's a weird grey area for mammals that ate other animals, but not mammals
>Most don't care anymore
>Some are still speciesist towards them
>Others are speciesist, but think that those mammals are badass enough to fight off preds wothout being a real danger
>Those in this group try to get a bunch of them as friends

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>>3577188
>>3577242
Oh, and it would be good if the prompts could include writefags too. It would be better to include all are content creators rather than just the drawfags.

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>When you should be happy for the other writefags but feel even more insecurity about your own material.

>Fuck.

>>3577171
I think there was some stuff about Judy and Mrs Otterton before, can't remember if it was greentext or discussion though.

>>3577294
>"Oh you're not one of the *bad* preds

>>3577266
I also saw Conjuring 2 last night. Sadly I was too bored to consider any Zootopia crossover. Shame, I liked the first one.

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>>3576982
It's just too heartwarming

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>>3577240
Pretty much why I went with wolves. Plus, pack mentality probably would mean they'd be the best at organizing themselves to form legions.

I actually imagined this "Romulan empire" would have accepted other preds but otherwise treated prey as second class citizens at best. Slaves at worst.

But that's fanfiction grade bullshit. And because I like imagining some of the ruins are still down there beneath modern Zootopia, beneath the nocturnal district even... Adventure and treasure still awaits those who would brave the sunken ruins of the mighty empire.

>>3576680
that's probably going to very much depend on one's tastes.

I find naked mole rats cute, others do not.

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>>3577163
We can do better

>>3577307
I had somebody tell me they didn't enjoy my fic.

They said it wasn't my fault, they just couldn't get a connection to a show out of their head

It still stung a little.

My ego...

>>3577290
Are you kidding? Alec would do it for free.
But only because he hates it so much that he'd never take money for doing it.

>>3577307
>two cakes

For the people here currently / formerly into MLP, do you read any of the story things at all? If you've written them, do you repost them other places? I'm not sure to what extent AO3 even has an MLP following.

>>3577370
Don't we have fimfic

>>3577369
Where did the "two cakes" meme start anyways?

>>3576460
>>3576529
Well, im heading on to chapter two. Could be my like 90 minutes of sleep but im finding it hard to read.

Only real note is maybe cleanup the online chat to make it more distinguishable. So far notbad/10 full notes when done

>>3577370
I wouldn't know about AO3 but I would assume most people into mlp fanfiction use Fimfiction.

>>3577332
I can't get past the "eat their own shit", "evolve teeth that cause painful problems", and "make nasty noises" things for naked mole rats.

Although I do want to see them drawn in Zootopia just for fun's sake.

>>3577328
You don't think it was good? I actually thought it was a really great sequel and could even be pretty solid on its own.

Maybe I just have shit taste?

>>3577354
Why can't we just all find Alec in person and then all gangbang him?

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>>3577397

>>3577350
Ah yeah, that'd be me I think.

Sorry, it's just the recreating the first date thing was something the villain did, and it was just making me not trust Red and I didn't want that to happen so I had to stop reading.

The story was fine, it's me that's broke!

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Are they the same person /trash/?

>>3577467
I see.

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>>3577467

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>>3577307
I know that feel.
Best you can do is just soldier on, keep writing, and maybe your next project will catch more attention.
And when it does, it's because you stuck with it and improved.

Have strength, my fellow writefag.

>>3577474
That's racist, anon.

>>3577388
Oh, yeah, that's true

>>3577474
Bobby's a boy, though...

>>3577474
>canon camera
Can somebody make an animal pun on that?

>>3577470
Yeah, you said it wasnt to do with my writing. There's still something about seeing "I didn't like this" that stings as a content creator.

Honestly I've probably just gotten soft.

Hm. Since the thread didn't exactly get what I was asking earlier, I'll restate.

Is there a term for when a smaller predator, like a weasel, wants to be treated as a prey animal by one of their natural predators (such as a fox)?

Would stuff like "Grassbiter" apply there?

>>3577502
HRT

>>3577417
Two has the actual sweet size difference sex, though still awkward and trying to be sweet about it. Thanks, hope you enjoy that. I really loved writing it.

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>>3576844
>>3576969
Keeping in mind I haven't finished the previous couple of threads, I'd just like to say regarding the mandatory fox repellant, it's unlikely he did it in Judy's memory, because his coping mechanism is to bury the memory. It's more likely that Judy was killed by a fox. Alternatively, you can read subtext into it and see it as Nick telling bunnies to keep away from him.

>>3577496
Yes, indeed.

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>>3577474
>he knew Judy
>he was excited to cover her first press conference
>but then she said those things
>she said those things despite growing up with him and knowing they're not true
It explains why he was saying serious enough shit to freak out the moose sound guy next to him.

>>3577502
That's a cougar, anon. They just look like that.

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>>3577309
I saw some of those and enjoyed a few. The thing that got me interested with Dawn and Otterton was how it all fit within the film itself. The things I pointed out can be seen in the movie and fits in the time frames not shown. If you like the idea of sheep on otter lesbo loving with a rabbit joining in later, watch the movie with the details I gave in mind. Hell, might make the ending kind of tragic with Dawn turning on Judy and throwing away/losing those who might have loved her aside for power.

>>3577470
Jessica Jones?

>>3577502
>>3577520

I'm going to shamelessly request that if someone has the Gideon having a sex change image to please post it.

>>3577515
Isn't that what Meal Ticket is for?

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>>3577546
>mfw fell for a trap cougar

Hold me

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Shilling my fic again.

Hot and Cold, chapter 3, the Hoppsening
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7110964/chapters/16441063

I hope you guys like it. Its not super eventful but the next chapter will be more so.

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>>3577555

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>>3577252
Sure, but you still feel like the back up plan. The center of the kink is the difference between pred and prey. It's kind of weird not fitting completely into either side of that, as far as the fetish goes.

On the plus side, you can fill either roll in a longer-term relationship if that's something that you want to try out in bed.

But you're right, there's other scenes out there where things being interspecies isn't always the fetishized part of it and all of this doesn't matter as much.

>>3577290
Like with BDSM. I'd an Alec.

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>>3577546
Seriously, that moose looked like he was afraid the cougar was about to just lunge at Judy.

>>3577561
Meal ticket is just prey into preds in general.

>>3577557
Yeah.

>>3577555
>Not protozootopiacastingauditions.jpg

>>3577515
>>3577561
I like "appetizer" and "meal ticket" just generally being applied to anybody either prey or playing prey in contrast to "carnivore" and "prey chaser" applied to predators and play predators.

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>>3577242
>I wouldn't do it more than once per thread though
Oh, only once per week to make it as non-taxing and easy as possible to keep it light-touch and fun, with a following roadmap in my head:

>assuming the big day is on Thursday
>strawpoll a theme thorought the weekend to allow as many anons as possible to participate
>three days
>thursday is the day
>everyone enjoys new content
>maybe do it bi-weekly not to force drawfriends into fixed schedule and make it the day is awaited for

I cannot draw to save my life, but if it encourages more content creators to contribute, I'll add my ms doodles to the pile

How does that sound?

>>3573935
>Nick was in a panic, plain and simple.
>A moment after Judy took the picture, he heard her ring tone in the other room.
>His heart was pounding in his chest, his vision was slowly fading.
>Then he noticed that he couldn't hear the pounding and squealing of the blaring video.
>'Oh god, I'm having a panic atta-'
>He heard a door open, and the sound of soft feet running.
>'Okay, nope, but God, please-'
>He heard a knock at the door.
>'Save me from this,'
>Judy spoke up, answering, "Ellie, come in, don't mind the musk,"
>Nick's breathing hitched at that, his eyes dialating, focusing on Judy.
>In his mind, this something finally made sense, 'They're both clearly overpowered by my musk,'
>The door cracked open, and Ellie's little twitching nose was the first thing he saw.
>And it quickly dissapeared, followed by the sounds of coughing, and then her voice,
>"Whoa, okay, you were right- don't mind the musk," she said, loud enough so they could both hear.
>Nick's blush blended well with his fur, and he started trying to shift from under Judy.
>She was about to respond, but he opened his mouth and spoke,
>"Listen, Judy, please, you need some fresh air, you're musk-drunk-" and was immediately interrupted as she locked her mouth on to his.
>Nick was trying to move his head away, but she quickly grasped his face in her paws, getting some of his precum on his face.
>Ellie walked in, and Nick could see she was bare from the waste down.
>She was wearing one of Judy's pink plaid shirts, with the buttons undone.
>She was leaking.
>So was Judy.
>So was he.

>>3577565
Honestly, if I ever ran into a trap that I passed so well I couldn't tell I'd probably suck their dick on the spot.

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>>3576982

>>3577577
Sheeeeiiiiit

>>3577463
Just found it too slow and not tense enough, but I also didn't like the fact that the monster was initially just an old guy who died. The whole nun thing was forced and annoying, so when that showed up as a stinger it just killed any interest I had left. Don't get me wrong, there were some good spook scenes in it, but I wasn't it or the characters enough to really get me hooked in, you know?

My friend said the same, boring and too long, but it's much more likely that we're the ones with shit taste.

>>3576783
>>3576792
/r/ here, thanks!

>>3577610
Eh, maybe if I was the recipient instead.

>>3577464
Because we'd never be able to agree on who gets to do what to which part of him, unless we roshambo for it.

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>>3577588

>>3577574
Going to read this on my flight, glad I checked before take off <3

>>3577577
>577 577
nice work

>>3577609
Wait, why was Nick wearing one of Judy's shirts?

They'd be too small!

>>3577606
Oh I meant only shill it once per thread, not make a new prompt every new thread. Also: >>3577306 to reiterate.

>>3577643
Aww thanks

>>3577643
ComicAnon, is that you?

>>3577646
I gotta see an image of nick stuffed into judy's outfit now

>>3577643
Fly safe comicanon!

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I finished this yesterday, could I get some feedback?
Kinda rushed nick in the last panel.

>>3577646
shit, where does it say that

>>3577464
>>3577637
We can roll dice and take turns.

>>3577641
Anyone else wonder why the polar bears play so much more of a prominent role in the film than any other species of bear? I mean I get Mr. Big's goons being polar bears, but why the drill instructor? Or the "Bearberry" ad? Etc.

>>3577188
Reminder that the age gap between them makes this picture impossible.

>>3577657
It's me, but I'm just taking off!

7 hours to France. Lots of fics to read till then!

Love you all!

>>3577670
The eyes could be drawn to a better scale.
Looks alright.

>>3577625
Androgyny and crossdressing are top tier fetishes for me and being bi makes me open to happy to give and receive.

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>>3577641
Looks like the news about preds going savage was more than he could bear.

>>3577679
Because they were much more important in Protozootopia's plot, so they already had models made.

>>3577662
This actually was drawn, but I haven't saved it.

>>3577679
Visual design is more culturally appealing. Hence why we have Coca-Cola bears etc.

>>3577679
Many are White Emigrees from the USSR.

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>>3577591
I failed in not changing the picture name. Damn me. Have double the adorbs.

>>3577673
I missed the line about Ellie leaking, so for a moment it looked like they were all wearing Judy's shirts. And I figured it was amusing enough to post under that impression.

>>3577670
It's cute, I like it.

>FIc where it turns out Nick has scoliosis
>And then gets shot in the spine
>But somehow his scoliosis saves him from straight up dying
>But now hes a cripple

>>3577677
But I want him to cum from getting his tight little Meerkat butt tongued before he gets stretched out

>>3577694
Sweet, good luck with everything!

I've already chatted about this, but if you could bookmark and blind read record Police Saga that would be so awesome:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7208780

Anyways, I'm glad that you're being all successful and productive!

>>3577720
HoneyxEmmet when?

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>>3577707

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Love will survive.

>>3577523
Overall not bad. The writing was intresting. While you conveyed messafes a lo clearer in chapter 2. I found some lines to just be out of place.

Personal notes i can check off size play as something id ever be intrested in. While it was sweet the charcters persinality made me cringe. Thats not a knock it sounds like it but its not literally they feel like cringe theead quality people. So 10/10 for giving them that much depth in short space.

>>3577701
Maybe make them bigger? Not shaped right?

>>3577186
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