Zootopia Thread: Absolutely Disgusting Edition Pastebin: ht

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>>3187829

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>>3187829
Off to a good start

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>>3187829

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>>3187829

im gonna shill my terrible honey/nick they-secretly-have-a-crush-on-each-other-but-wont-admit-it-and-are-fuckbuddies fic once more, then i'm probably never going to work on it again since i have zero talent for it

http://pastebin.com/Pke9ZMnY

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>>3187829
Gazelle is for tender group love making, not this shit.

>>3187894
someone edit that cake meme for a writefags.

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i was watching sledge hammer on hulu

>>3187823
>It's the Judy accidentally sends her parents nudes episode

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>>3187912

someone already posted the cake thing, but self depreciation is kind of my thing. I don't even know proper english, just kind of what I picked up from reading things instead of learning any actual rules. It's a wonder it's readable, desu.

>>3187939

It's a her parents accidentally send nudes back episode

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Any good fics like this?

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>>3187922
>mfw I've been asking for Sledge Hammer Zootopia since March

Anon, you're a god amongst men. Thank you. Have you considered drawing a picture of Bogo cheering "Go Bomb, Go!"?

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>>3187961
Who the fuck would they be trying to send it to?

>>3187985
The fox lover they met over Timber

>>3187985
Nick

Since it's reposting for a new thread time, what the heck.

http://pastebin.com/q96V84q8

Dawn and Judy. (I should probably come up with a better name than that, but eh, it's late)

>>3187985

Each other, obviously.

>>3187978
Half the fics where Nick+Judy are the main characters are this. Just look for those.

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>>3187939
>"Finnick accidentally starts a music career when an alibi is too convincing" episode

>>3187985
They wanted Judy to see them, but pretend it was a mistake

>>3188031
I could see that being a cartoon episode

>>3187991

>>3187983
It'll take me some time to figure out how to draw Bogo but I've been wanting to break out of Judy and Nick for a while.

If you wanted to, you could sub to my tumblr at http://fanartiguess.tumblr.com/ to see it sometime in the future.

>>3188031
>Finnick accidentally goes clean.
>Much more profitable than anything he's ever been.
>Start's to become too good to hang out with Nick.
>They have a falling out.

>>3187939
>Nick sexting the wrong people again.

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Who's ready to get comfy?

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>>3187961
They're sexting Gideon

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>>3188105

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Who draws the best lewd Jude?

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>Adventures in Little Rodentia

>>3187985
gideon obviously

>>3188114
OH SHIT YOU'RE BACK

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Are there any good Gideon/Travis fics?

>>3188092
Done and done.

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>>3188114
>>3188151

Cause shit is getting comfy as hell in here

>>3188016
>Dawn and Judy. (I should probably come up with a better name than that, but eh, it's late)

And it's DAMNED good, too!!

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>>3187829

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we need more of nick forcing the big hard predator meat inside judy
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11846858/4/Goodnight-Kiss

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>>3188120

Alec, bar none.

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Reshill for the new thread, I think

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Bellhopps mindbreak. This will haunt me forever.

I write sin.

>>3188217
Yeah more Nickdom please

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>>3188223
as the OR for your pic: Absolutely. Alec knows his lewd judes.

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Guys I need a name for a large Central-Park type park located in Downtown Zootopia

I'm writing a fic and I'm shit at worldbuilding pls help

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>>3188177
Holy shit, Nameless Lewder. Just holy shit.

>>3187985
In rabbit families, it's customary for friends relatives to send nudes of their loved ones. Judy didn't "accidentally" send that picture of her and Nick naked.

>>3188157
>good
>Gideon

>>3188226

Another total winner that needs MOAR!

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All I've wanted to do for the past 3 weeks is jerk off to some porn of Judy and Nick having happy+loving sex. And I can't. Fuck my brain.

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>>3188177

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>>3187896
I spamming honey got her more stuff than I nominate Gazelle and her dancers next.

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>>3188298
Because they're PURE

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>>3188292
ugh

I'll do it tomorrow.

You know I've been saying it from the beginning: BellHopps is hot as hell because corruption fetish is great.

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>>3188340
>not Gazelle and Bogo

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It's a 'Nick goes undercover at a gay bar to find a suspect and is forced to sleep with him when hit on so it won't blow his cover' episode

>>3188264

Setaria Park

Setaria is a genus of grass, foxtail grass is a part of it.

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>>3188267
>Nick is angry that Judy has been showing their sextape to her family
>"Nick, this is totally normal in rabbit culture. Look!"
>She pulls up a video of her parents fucking

>Nick has been crying in the shower for the last 2 hours

>>3188264
The Spruce Woods Park

>>3188152
Reminder people are sexually aroused by this

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>>3188359
PURE

>>3188380

No problem, Anon -- if that's all there ever is, so be it.

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>>3188226
this is my fetish pls write more
pls

>>3187961
Turns out Judy's actually just really uptight for a bunny.

>>3188391
>He has to bottom.
>He has never been with another man.
>Leaves ashamed and violated.

>>3188391

You say that like nick isn't bi at the very least.

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>>3188239

I'm writing a FF based on his Judy in Bondage drawings right now based on the things I think he likes. Feels like the least I can do to give back.

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>>3188264
Red Wood Park

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>>3188449

>>3188389
Bongo is clearly gay for Clawhauser.

>>3188424
Buddy, these days, I'm sexually aroused by just about anything.

>>3187978
Well there is the ongoing comic that is from

>>3188449
>implying he doesn't leave confused and slightly satisfied

>>3188359
I really wish people would draw more of this AU

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>>3188468
Aw, you cropped out Judy.

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>>3188391
>"Nick, you could have just turned him down. Having the suspect think you were attracted to him wasn't important to the investigation."
>"Wasn't it though, Carrots?"
>"... no?"

>>3188486
Even the stories about it are mediocre at best.

>>3188499
>it's a "Nick's totally platonic best friend and partner Officer Judy Hopps helps him come to terms with his homosexuality" episode.

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FUCKING WHEN
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>>3188380
>Still nothing with Bellwether being dicked into a mentality of pred superiority

Hmph.

>>3188516
The animation?
Didn't the animator lose a chunk of work and is now delayed?

>>3188518
Sorry, I prefer corruption of characters I'm mortally aligned with rather than those that I'm aligned against.

>>3188510
>it's a "Nick really loves Judy, but now she thinks he is her Gay best friend" episode"

>>3188516
End of June, probably.

>>3188359
But that's what makes it so hot! I just actually can't jerk off anymore.

>>3188516
holy fuck anon

like, this comic already did great and terrible things to me

you're going to kill me

>>3188505
Thats the thing though, to me at least, the art would be better than the stories, just little snippets of the two being cute and happy
>>3188516
did we ever figure out who the VA's will be, or are they going to be dropped?

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>>3188538
I know but damn it my dick can't wait much longer

I need a new teaser at least

>>3188546
I don't mean from you specifically. I mean at all.

>>3188499
>Nick being not at all put off by Judy's incredulity and continues being 200% smug thinking he pulled off a great hustle

>>3188560
God dammit. I heard the music.

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Apparently the artist/animator needs a new tablet according to the tumblr

"Haha, thanks Carrots, I'm glad we could remain in a non-romantic, non-sexual, purely platonic relationship so that I can freely pursue my repressed homosexual desires"-Nicholas Piberius Wilde, Current Year

What did he mean by this?

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>>3188411
>ywn make loving sextape with bune gf
>she will never send it to her parents
>ywn never have your form constructively critiqued by her family of 200+
>ywn never receive supportive reminder texts to eat healthy and stay active so you can plow gf better
>ywn attend Bunnyburrow Bunny Bootycamp where you train with some of the Burrow's best to learn how to satisfy your gf in every sense of the word
>ywn receive energy from 200+ rabbits as you jackhammer their daughter/sister/neice into the floor
>ywn bring life into this world with the aid of 200 buns who all claim their tip/position/training helped the most

why even live?

>>3188673
He is too nervous to knot the bun.

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>>3188639

This is only somewhat related but, it seems like literally every single artist ever while they are making something needs a new tablet.

Do tablets just shit themselves after half a year? Do artists stab their pens straight through the tablets? Does their second pen come careening through the back of the tablet when they realize what porn they can draw? What the fuck happens that so many people need new tablets?

>>3188548
>It's the Nick has an internal debate over whether to tell Judy he isn't gay or continue to let her undress in front of him episode

>>3188692
Well in this case 4ball dropped his(her?) tablet on the floor.

>>3188692
The artist gets tired and needs an excuse to take a break without fans getting too angry

>>3188673
He is too deep in the hustle.

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>>3188177
>They kept the Judy Hopps inflatable just in case
>That wild hedonistic rush as they just get all over each other
>That incredible moment where all three finish
>THAT FUCKING COMFY-ASS SNUGGLE PILE where they all sort of take a breather and bask in the afterglow
>Judy probably falls asleep for an hour or so
>They immediately go back to arguing when she leaves

>Both of them know another wild romp is literally just next door should they ever want it

This is about as fucking comfy as comfy sex gets. They're all just so happy about it. I'm really starting to love PBJ.

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>>3188572
"It's not gay if it's a hustle"

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>>3188696
this actually seems like a fun thing to see now

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I want to boop her nose

>>3188692
Ive had my 50$ tablet for something like 4 years now.

>>3188480

what is the comic?

>>3188798
Exhaustive list of things you can do to the bunny:
>Boop
>Smoosh

Look's like you're good to go, anon.

>>3188781
>"How about my new dressing"
>It's the Judy reveals her fetish for pretending to be a salad episode

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>>3188424
If that tire was a paw, it'd be over

>>3188692
A lot of the time, these tablets wear out because people move them around a lot (usb wearing out, lots of unplugging and plugging too). Artists are also really forgetful and sometimes lose or accidentally break their pens.

Even with that, I've had my Wacom Intuos 3 for 8 years, and my monoprices for 4 years and all three work fine still.

>>3188080
So this won't be lost when the old thread falls off the board.


I bet red nails are a predprey signal. What would other ones be?
>prey wearing red ties/scarf in clubs
>preds shaking/waving paws with claws out
>preds inviting prey to "running" clubs

We know that artists from the real world exist, in animal form.

Is Gazelle their Shakira, or is Shakira someone who sounds exactly like Gazelle in our world?

>>3188177
I love Judy watching them in the third panel. Its my new fetish.

>>3188888
>shaking/waving paws with claws out
That might be kinda weird because there are plenty of predators that can't retract their claws at all.

>>3188899
>Shakira someone who sounds exactly like Gazelle in our world
this one

>>3188516
Easily top anticipated animated epics of all time.

Fuck Finding Dory, I can't wait for this.

>>3188798
BOOPLESNOOT

>>3188888
W A S T E
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>>3188837
you forgot
>knot

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>>3188888
>Furfag gets the get

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"For the moment"

>>3188971
heart-wrenching reunion scene fucking confirmed

>>3188177
Yessss!! Is this the end?? Moreee!!

>>3188675
Because VR might get really good

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>Tfw no heartbreaking pic of Zootopia characters doing this.

>>3188516
WHY HAS SWEATING_JUDY.GIF NOT BEEN MADE A THING YET

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>>3188854

>>3188986
Reunion with a gravestone maybe

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>>3188965
bune too small for knot

but you can bet she's bouncing all up and down that foxe shaft

>>3188996
On it

>>3188999
She's confirmed alive, nigga, get with the times

>>3188888
the quints will remember my contribution...

>>3188988
My suffering will not be for nothing

>>3188999

nah

it's canon on twitter mrs. hopps is still around, living in Nick's old apartment.

>>3188998
STOP MY INVINCIBLE SON

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>>3188970
>furfag

>>3189014
>implying bune isn't basically elastic anyways
man, bunnies are fuckin' weird. I bet she could take a bigger knot than most vixens could.

>>3189049
>>3189014
Does a knot appear as soon as the fox is aroused? Or does it appear the longer they go on?

If the latter, couldn't she take it to the root and wait for the knot to inflate inside her, and then say she took the knot?

is comicanon dead?

>It's a Judy learns that Mr. Big forced Nick to swallow a traitorous rodent alive so that he'd never betray him to the cops episode

This is because critiques were requested of me (>>3187057)

>subway station..
extra period

>Neither were the images burned in his mind that he turned to the bottle to get rid of. It didn't help that the ZTA picked today to start track maintenance.

This is good as is, but my advice is to articulate his painful images "burned in his mind". It would sound a little more like this

>He was hungover from last night, trying to drink the demons in him to sleep; his hangover wasn't getting any better, and neither was the construction.

THAT is noire-grit expose. At least, is how I'd do it to make it more fluid, because I feel like you've got a "neither was" play on words here you could use, going from deeply serious to menially troubling. Noire fics do that a lot

> “...what?”
Capitalize. Also is Loftis a reference to Corey Loftis?

> his composure. .
Remove second period.

>“He doesn't the relationship you have with your squad.
He doesn't have

>“Every time. Every God-damn time I think I've seen the worst of this city, that nothing else it does can phase me, it spits out something new. And I'm no better, am I?” He tapped the ashes into the tray. “The city is starting to hate the predators who have protected it for years, and here I am: gladly accepting a promotion riding on that hatred. Lamb on the Cross...”

This is a very, very self indulgent bit of prose here. Not saying it's bad, but it's very, very cliched. It's a lot of introspection out of our new Captain that feels there only as a setup, placed by our author (in this case, you lad), to artificially build tensions. I LOVE everything else, it's so beautifully written, except this part right here. I see what it's trying to do, but that's the thing- I shouldn't, as a reader.

>“Well, I need to go see to my new unit and find out what new horrible crimes the city has for me today."
I'm assuming this was sarcasm but the lines I highlighted earlier make this seem authentic (which is NOT good)

Thoughts in the next post

>>3189090
Knots are smaller before they're inside, and once they're inside they inflate larger.

>>3189091
they're chatting in the stream so nah

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>>3189017
>>3188996
here (You) go m8

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>>3189102
Okay, my thoughts and opinions:

As far as mechanics go, you're leaps and bounds ahead of me, and I love to read it. I was getting the sense that Bogo has a lot more respect for Fouriner than he does anyone else, and I could feel some complex character interactions taking place in their exchange. The prose is addicting, easy to read and so, so smooth it reads like professional writing.

In short, I really, really do love this. You have a penchant for scene writing, that's for certain,

Now, my gripes:

So the tone is grit and almost Noire, which is fine, but it should read that way. I pointed out a few spaces where you could improve and play with some words, but overall I'd go through it again with a comb and pick apart places that need a splash of whiskey and some cigarette burns.

Bellwether's Dialogue is pretty flat, exposition heavy and pretty much only to convey the plot to the reader. I KNOW you can write damn fine dialogue and make those mouths move (metaphorically speaking), so I would be interested in seeing you touch up that portion.

Otherwise: Aces man, absolutely 100$ aces

>>3189092
>It's a Judy learns that Nick constantly goes back to Mr. Big to satisfy his newfound vore fetish episode

>>3189146
Not him, but saved. Thanks m8.

>>3188772
Thanks! Im glad everyone was cool with me continuing TnT. PBJ is fucking rad and Id like to do more at some point, but I might take requests at some point soon

>>3189146
Perfect beyond words.

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>>3189102
Not exactly. Loftis was the name of one of the two rams Bellwether had in on her conspiracy. He was certainly a reference to Cory Loftis, but the character I'm using is the sheep.

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>>3188391
>>3188499
>>3188572

I think I'm gonna fuck off for a while. Maybe one day I will return to try to write a fic about Nick falling in love with Honey, 'cause he thought he could have sex with someone and not get attached. (He couldn't)

One day, I will be good enough to be a writefag. I'm gonna fellate all the words, you hear me?

>>3189240
you can fellate my words anytime bb

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>"Your badge, please."

>>3187922
That's awesome! I'm sure he knows what he's doing.

>>3189102
>>3189156
>all those punctuation errors and misspellings
sudoku.jpg
>everything else

I think I might be building too much off my first fic. I wanted to get across that even with how much he hates the job and his city, right at that moment he hates himself more for accepting a promotion that he knows he probably didn't earn. I'll try and reword it so it's not as self indulgent.

I'm not really sure how I can go over Bellwether more. While she is pretty exposition heavy in that portion, what she's saying is true. Behind the scenes she had already ordered his promotion; if he hadn't gone along with it she would have demanded his retirement as well. She was just trying to win him over with "facts". I was trying to capture the air she used with Judy in the movie. It's a little too early to break out the Hitler charisma with her.

Thanks again for the compliments. I'll see what I can do to unfuck the bad parts before I start on the next chapter.

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Nick is for BEEG

>>3189466
He looks like Crush from Crash Bandicoot

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>>3189466
Bun is also for BEEG

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>>3189429
And to re-shill once more in this thread, the fic in question:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7045009/chapters/16023343

>In a city gripped with fear and unrest caused by predators randomly going savage, the ZPD has found itself on the wrong side of public opinion and trust. Walking into this powderkeg, the newly promoted captain of the Arson desk has to balance doing what's right for his city with doing what's right for his predator subordinates.

>>3188223
>>3188120
As a fellow drawfag I am crazy jealous of how well Alec does lines and his anatomy in general

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>>3189488

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>>3189488

Fuck guys, I'm listening to this song on repeat and thinking about Bunanon and Red and I'm crying. I gotta stop caring so much about a sly fox and a dumb bunny

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>>3189491

He's got such a clean line and a great grasp of anatomy.

I can't draw for shit, but I can recognize talent when I see it.

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>>3189573
>He's got such a clean line and a great grasp of anatomy.
I WANT IT

>>3189573
I think hes one of the best at drawing Judy.

Shame I don't really care that much for BDSM.

Nick's balls.

Is there still a mega link to the Blu ray leak?

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>>3189650
Nick's knot.

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God bless the saved

>Fic where Nick and Judy have a really bad break up apparently and Nick tries to kill himself by jumping off a bridge
>Judy is in bunnyburrow when it happens, she gets called by the hospital and drives back but somehow gets in a head-on collision right next to the hospital.
>Next chapter Nick somehow wakes up during the middle of fucking surgery even though the previous chapter the doctor said they didn't think there was much hope for him, then he knocks the surgeons the fuck out and runs only to see Judy getting carted into the hospital

Holy shit this is so bad. I admit I kinda wanted to know what was gonna happen next even if it was pretty cheesy, but after the most recent chapter, I don't think I care anymore.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11905849/3/Regrets

>>3189704
>Wakes up in the middle of surgery
>Kicks the shit out of the surgeons and escapes

That's actually pretty hardcore

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Is it bad that I like to spend a lot of times on these threads?

>>3189728

Only because they were better last month and you're wasting your time now

>>3189554
I know man, I'm just sitting here waiting for the next update

>>3189726
Definitely, but it still makes no fucking sense.

A:Someone is probably getting fired if a patient wakes up during surgery.
B:Apparently they had tranq guns ready in case this happens because one of the doctors was about to shoot him with one

>>3189752
There's still plenty of magic left on this ride

>>3189756
>A:
Well duh they get paid a lot of money for that exact thing to not happen
>B:
THIS HAPPENS ALL THE TIME?

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>>3189752
waaaaaah the threads are deeeeeaaaaaad waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

That's you. That's what I read your post as. Stop being butthurt and be the change you want to see in the thread.

>>3189781
Zootopia doctors are kind of retarded I guess.

>>3188986

>Nick meets his mother for the first time in 16 years
>"I'm not going to forgive you for molesting me"
>Judy goes to wait in the car

>>3189781
Anesthesiology is more an art than a science, especially with that much variance in size.

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>>3188888
I was inspired so
I did a piece on this

I'm aware it's crowded word-soup but
A) It's supposed to be like one of those sensationalist articles in a pop magazine
B) I love worldbuilding concepts like these
so I make no apologies

this was fun to work with actually

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>>3188999
Even your sick trips doesn't stop you from being wrong

>>3189828
inb4schalke

>>3189090
Wow it's like he's never jerked off a dog before

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Need more tsundere bune

>>3189824
wow.

>>3189756

>Implying it's so fucking easy to quickly and accurately sedate any patient between 1lb-2000lbs at the drop of a hat in the midst of other critical conditions

Take it easy on the syringe , better they wake up early than not a all

>>3189820
Oh yeah
Damn, I wonder if they have different anesthesiologists for each body size category.

>>3189824
Dem deets

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>>3189828
>schalke

>>3189846
They better fucking BE ready for any situation, imagine waking up during the middle of like an open chest surgery.

They don't get to just say "Well it was an accident"

>>3189855
>a full minute and 24 seconds between posts

Slacker

>>3189798
Has weaver ever said at what age nick's mom started diddling him (in that timeline, at least)?

>>3189855
Ur ass got beat>>3189836

>>3189824
hah, Weaver you big nerd
that's really good

>>3189798
>Judy leans that Mrs. Wilde is still in town
>Judy suggests Nick meets with her now that he's a cop
>"You're right, I mean, what can she do to me now?"
>Judy thinks this is strange, but let's it go.
>It's probably related to some hustle he was on.
>Judy surprises Nick by driving up to the apartment building where he grew up.
>>3189798
>Last time Judy tries to meddle in people's lives on a non-work basis.
>Judy slams head on steering wheel and the air bag explodes, rocketing her into the back seat.

>>3189855
What's the origin of this meme

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>>3189824
Yes, give me more world building pls

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I had to make this is after that amazing edit Anon made last night

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>>3189892
>>3189902
Fuck you, I was shitposting on /o/ about British Engineering.

Look at it. LOOK AT IT. YOU HAVE TO DROP THE REAR SUBFRAME TO SERVICE YOUR BRAKES. WHAT THE FUCK, JAGUAR.

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>>3189906
>that ending

>>3189847
Nah, probably just spend more time checking their measurements and have a few different drugs lined up for any major differences in metabolism. Voles and other rodents are probably a bitch because you could easily overdose them, but them metabolize very quickly.

>>3189824
Physically chased as foreplay

Goddamn, I was actually just reading a fic that brings that into play, but it stops before it actually does it.

I should see if it updated.

>>3189932
I hope "pussy like the garden of eden" becomes a meme

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>>3189932

The fact that she isn't instantly revolted at what she sees means she has to be somewhat into it.

>>3189906
>airbag explodes
she'd have shrapnel embedded in her
those things are fucking dangerous

>>3189932
I dunno, if I saw a video of my boyfriend fucking his mom, my reaction would probably be stronger than "wat"

Also, who wins? Judy's vice like pussy or Mrs Wilde's garden of eden pussy?

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>>3189824

>>3189824
>tfw Weaver is inspired by your shitposting
truly blessed

>>3189954
I remember that one. It just updated a few days ago, so it'll probably update again sooner or later

>>3189824
This is some good shit. I wonder what Byron thinks of all this? I mean obviously Gisnep will never touch on it ever, but surely he and his crew have thought about things like sex and subcultures in zootopia.

>>3189975
New pussy unlock: vice of eden

Which would make a great subtitle for a japanese video game sequel

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>>3189975
>Also, who wins? Judy's vice like pussy or Mrs Wilde's garden of eden pussy?
Nick's penis

>>3190006
I really thoroughly enjoy the world building we get up to in these threads.

Predator-prey relationships, bounce houses, now fashion sub cultures for the former. This is my favorite part, really.

>>3189975
W O O L W O M B

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W

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>>3190036
I wonder in the shock collar world they would actually decorate them or something

>>3190013
Well, obviously, it gets pampered by pussy left and right daily.

>>3190036
>Predator-prey relationships, bounce houses, now fashion sub cultures for the former.
ALL WEAVER.

Can someone post the good end to the Mrs Wilde comic?

>>3190054
I imagine prey-dominant preds would, but the whole idea of the collars being activated by strong emotions makes most kinds of bdsm impossible.

>>3189824
Oh man this is great. I love these sorts of things.

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>there are only THREE images of travis on e621

>one is porn

>it's a cub piece by carrot

>It's not even gideon/travis


RAGE

>>3189936
Didn't Jaguar get bought by Ford?

>>3190036
Mine too, this what I love most about it is how one stupid idea can lead to an avalanche of content and fun.

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>>3189932
>I had to make this is after that amazing edit Anon made last night
>anon
hi visiti

>>3190076

bounce houses?

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>>3190048

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>>3189824
Hey weaver, think you could make this zootopified?
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MZ35SOU9HTM

>>3190100
Travis is not sexually appealing.

>>3188572
>thinking
knowing*

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>>3190100
You gotta capture the imagination of drawfags if you want content.
Or at least pester them until they toss you a bone.

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>>3190116
>he missed the bounce house threads

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>>3190116
>bounce houses?
you called?

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>>3190113
evil influence +1

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>>3189932
Visiti, I'm really happy you got active again. Your art is gorgeous. I will say though you'd get more hits on your tumblr if you tag your stuff.

>>3190081
Gotchu fampai.

>>3190127
Better than weaselton who has a shitton of porn, and not even an obvious ship


Hey weaver, you should do something with travis


Not even porn necessarily. Just you doing travis art will serve as a beacon for the other drawfags

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>>3190116
Bunny culture has a different understanding and use of bounce houses; they instead use them as places for younger bunnies to explore romantically and sexually. This idea also seems to have moved to the cities, where homesick bunnies could meet up and relieve stress. Bounce houses then grew beyond the species boundaries, such as the Chomper Romper, a holy ground for the Pred-Prey lifestyle.

>>3190193
>weaselton who has a shitton of porn

I've seen maybe 6 pics of him I'd call porn.
Of that, only two had him with another character, and one of those two was just Judy molesting his junk.

Jack Savage has more porn than Duke.

>>3190205
>Can I just write anything here
Haha, it didn't show up when I saw this on my phone.

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>>3189824
>a red pattern necklace on a predator can indicate a prey-dominant seeker
Wait, I thought it would indicate a predator-dominant seeking prey.

>>3190157
>>3190168
>>3190247
Was it ever made clear exactly what happens in a Bounce House? I get that part of the fun is that it's a little ambiguous or mysterious, but surely it's not just a big orgy pile.

>>3190205
damn this gave me a bigger boner than the original

>>3190184

I missed a comic anyone have it?

>>3190269
It's literally just a big orgy pile.

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>>3189824
it is a fashion among kewl preys

btw come on people join in https://aggie.io/bw2dx0111x/

>>3190269
Of course not, it's much better organized

>>3190269
>but surely it's not just a big orgy pile
they're rabbits

>>3190269
I imagine it to be sort of like a swinger's club. There's probably some group stuff going on (or at least being set up), but mostly it's individuals or couples looking to explore their secuality and have fun.

>>3190264
>Wait, I thought it would indicate a predator-dominant seeking prey.
No no see
The red necklace is meant to look like a claw/bite mark on the neck. So its meaning depends on who's wearing it: A prey wearing it would want to a pred to dominate/bite them, but a predator looking like she's been bit is indicating she wants to be on the receiving end.

>>3190171

Will we ever get a Judy's revenge comic?

Also it's nice to have my greentext appear in a screencap.

>>3190247
I wonder if Bunanon's first time was in a bounce house...?

>tfw Bros being bros hasn't updated in ages

FinNiiiiiick I miss you

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>>3190102
Yeah, in like 1996. That rear subframe is from the XJS, which was born in 1976 during the years of British Leyland.

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>>3190327
I wish man.

Sorry for being away. Last thread was hot though. Posting caps I have from around.

>>3190338
Could make sense as to why she was so apprehensive about telling us about her first time. A first time probably shouldn't happen in a bounce house.

>>3190310

you guys have way WAY too much time on your hands if you guys have seriously>>3189824
created this fictional sub culture to this degree

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>>3189954
>>3189824
>physically chased as foreplay
>and then the brutal fucking starts when the prey is caught by the ferocious grip of the pred's claws and teeth a split half-second later

>>3190269
Never explicitly, but there's some heavy implications that it is very sexual. I can't speak to Bunnyburrows bounce houses, a staple of county fairs, but in the cities, they are more diverse with sitting areas, full bars, other activities, and more private areas available.

It's strange with the non-Leporidaen usage still common. Sometimes a father will get more than he bargained for when trying to rent some amusement for their son's birthday party.

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>>3190205

I WAN MORRREEEE¡¡¡¡¡¡

>>3190376
I mean, about 20 minutes, so roughly the length of a tv episode on netflix

>>3190356
Did you not see 2 fics spawned out of that?

>>3188016

>>3188226

it's good shit.

>>3190393
THERE IS MORE BUT I SOMEONE NEEDS TO POST IT

>>3190438
>Clawhauserfags

I didn't know you people still existed.

>>3190433

I fear what you all could create in an hours time.

>>3190338
Somewhere between 70-83% of Bunnyburrow bunnies had their first time in a bounce house, according to some zoological research.

>>3190471
What about the gays?

>>3190449

ok ok my fail.

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>>3190466
>I fear what you all could create in an hours time.
Don't tread on unstable ground

>>3190360
>>3190471
I've received sort-of conflicting answers. Do the majority have their first time in a bounce-house despite the taboo around it?

>>3189429
SORRY! I got distracted by Overwatch. This game.

Dude, it needs SO little work. It's already extremely functional and good. Don't beat yourself up too hard over this.

And I'm not saying you need to go full evl mode with your Bellwether, but what I'm saying is, her dialog is too stiff in that one scene.

Otherwise it's very, very good. Don't be hard on yourself. I'm not like the head of the writefag guild (tho I nominate myself dictator for life if there is one)

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>>3190471
>you will never go back to being young and fuck your peers to oblivion

>>3190494
nigga listen to me

TIMING
SPACING
EXTREMES
INBETWEENS

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>>3190494
Dat booty

>>3190310
>A prey wearing it would want to a pred to dominate/bite them
Yeah I can see that.
>but a predator looking like she's been bit is indicating she wants to be on the receiving end.
I was under the impression that color superceded the rest.

Also that text box is the only one where the color and function are inverted, I'm getting OCD over it.

>>3190376
Hello and welcome to 4chan

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>>3189824
>Be an omnivore that is alternatively predator and prey for different species
>Wear red and black
>be constantly confused why people keep talking to you are parties

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>>3190494
like this bro.

>>3190554
She's tapping to music, it's not supposed to be a smooth left-right

>>3190564
I think generally if you prey on anything you're lumped in as "predator"

>>3190278
I think this is the official album: http://imgur.com/a/n5YT3

>>3190516
No, you misunderstand. The title of the fic is Reichstagsbrand. "Reichstag Fire". Bellwether is going to be getting her Fuehrer on. I just don't know how I can smooth her dialogue out in that particular exchange.

How's this for fixing that paragraph near the end? Just cutting out the "I HAET CITI" part and leaving it as
>The city is starting to hate the predators who have protected it for years, and here I am: gladly accepting a promotion riding on that hatred."

>>3189824
Well now I just want to see Nick and Judy completely decked out in these clothes with one another.

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>>3190494
¡Mira como está ese OGT papá!

>>3190575
her tail's still fucked up and all retarded

and there's no bounce-ass

>>3190575
Did you have a song in mind when you made that? Cuz its 3/4 time

>>3190564
Honey had to wear a collar in ProtoZootopia. You're a pred, m8.

hey I'm the anon who ask if anyone could help me improve my story writing. I was wondering if anyone had read it? if, so I would love to know what you thought and what I can do to improve.

>>3190575
>>3190494
when moving right to left it looks great, but moving left to right it looks like the Tail is somehow leading, when it should be following after the butt

>>3190564
Omnivores are pred.
Sharp teeth= pred
flat teeth= prey, easy as that.

>>3190639
nigga have you even looked inside a human's mouth

>>3190617
a link or telling us what you wrote would help.

>>3190076
Furfags have been doing pred/prey stuff for years

>>3190656
Humans have canines.

>>3190076
Well now let's be fair, Anons did a lot of the legwork, Weaver just has the uncanny ability to pick out the best pieces of our conversations and give them life

>>3190579
>>3190616
>>3190639

Both reductive and racist!

But nah, that does make sense. That's how it was in the movie. And if we are being honest, prejudice doesn't often follow strict facts.

>>3190668
Yeah, but have they world-built on it

The answer is yes, but we're cooler than them

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>>3190269
>>3190303
>>3190392
Don't forget, it can be an important part of connecting with your own species.

>>3190668
NOTHING to the level and detail inspired by these threads

>>3190610
>her tail's still fucked up and all retarded
yeah, her tail was the hardest part and it shows
but fuck it, 30 minutes on that was enough to get the idea out, I'm not really gonna go back and fix it at this point

I do kinda wish fic writers would stop quoting lines from the movie. I mean I guess having a few 'injoke" lines are okay, but like nearly every fic does it.
Whether its X bunny X fox, Rabbits/foxes, so X, or, God forbid, its a hustle sweetheart (helps that half the time its not a hustle of any sort)

>>3190564
just wanna say dude, i love your drawings

keep fucking going

>>3190685
Not really. The red scarf thing for this latest "subculture fashion", sure, but the Late Stake's pred-prey fetishism wasn't brought on by anon speculation, and bounce houses were also entirely his doing.

>>3190583
That sounds much more jagged, at least in my mind. Though you should consider adding I HAET CITI because that's top notch prose friendo

>>3190617
Clunk here. I would, but I'm overwatch

>>3190700
Why 3/4 time though?

>>3190697
>>3190695
Have you ever actually read any of the stories they've done? I love the stuff Weaver does, but he hardly invented it. He just brought it to the Zootopia scene.

>>3188692
I dropped my tablet when I was cleaning my room, it still works but I have to move the cable around , and after that be very careful to not move it.
The tablet is actually fine , it works perfectly , it's the connector who got a little loose, and I don't want to fuck it up trying to fix it myself, as I read on the internet, this problem is more common than I thought, and a really easy fix is getting a wireless adapter.
Sad thing is I live in Chile and there is not tech support here that I'm aware of
>>3188516
End of the month probably
>>3188737
I'm not tired at all, animating it's relaxing to me

>>3190728
The bounce house was just a one-off joke that Anons fleshed out, actually

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>>3190682
They're onto me!

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>>3190639
It's simpler than that
- Predator: eyes on the front
- Prey: eyes on the sides

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>all these new lewd pastebins

>>3190777
Nailed it

>>3190777
I forgot about the eye thing too, thanks!

>>3190739
Why not?

Its always jarring when I'm reading a fic and then non-american slang pops up.

Not that I have anything against non-american slang, but I have trouble imagining Judy talking about snogging.

>>3190715
Thanks! I'm always doodling something or other lately, but I try to reign it back. A lot of it is basically just practice and OC bullshit. So I do my best to at least have it on topic or what have you.

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>>3190113
WHAT A TWIST

>>3190184
>Your art is gorgeous.
D'aaaw shucks, Anon
>tag your stuff.
I mean I guess I could. I'm not really in this for the "massive tumblr fame" but it doesn't hurt I guess

>>3190278
The imgur album will always be up to date, otherwise I announce updates on my tumblr

>>3190081
Gotta have the good with the bad my friend

>>3190353
Oh, I see. Ford sold Jaguar during the recession.

>>3190483
Did I stutter?

>>3190496
I'm going to stand by my answer. If I remember right, Bunanon was more apprehensive because she only dated that one rabbit and didn't enjoy it. It's also possible that she is among the 30% who did not lose their virginity in a bounce house, which may have left her ill prepared for her relationships later in life.

>>3190532
I know, right?

>>3190696
The cultural aspects really cannot be overstated. Most of Zootopia's prolific bounce houses grew out of tenement housing in Savannah Square. Happy Town's own Chomper Romper was started by second generation immigrant rabbits that saw an opportunity for a slice of home in the rent controlled predator areas.

>>3190658

Ah shit you're right.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11942461/1/He-fell-through-time

Any error, mistakes, or things that I can improve on is what I am looking for help with.

>>3190757
>The bounce house was just a one-off joke that Anons fleshed out, actually
Not really?

>>3190736
kek

Still, what I was trying to get through in that part was that he was disgusted at the outright racism coming out and disgusted at himself for taking advantage of it. I think I might just need to elaborate on that more.

>>3190803
Yeah it's always really obvious, especially when they have a character say "Mum" or whatever.