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Someone added this to the old smut list on 1d4chan; I don't see any reason not to repost it here.

Heretical smut #22343
https://pastebin.com/e6mk3uk2
Tags: m/f, f/f, bdsm, HERESY, vague incestual subtext, HERESY, femdom, breeding, mild homoeroticism

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http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch-4-page-39-414290765
http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch4-page-40-414856423

In these chapters Autzen, an autistic buizel, needs to use the bathroom, but is too scared to use the airplane toilet's loud noise. Despite wearing a diaper he doesn't want to use it, instead holds it throughout the entire plane ride, all six hours of it, even when he's sleeping during most of it, and makes it to the bathroom.
Can someone rewrite this page(s) so that Autzen ends up having an accident in his diaper, perhaps it happening during or shortly after his nap? Read the previous chapters to understand how he'd probably react to it.

Help a fellow autist out please.

Snek going at the speed of frozen mollasses

>>11288474
jesus christ kill yourself already

>>11288489
You first

>>11288506
even if I was somehow more retarded than you to do that I still wouldn't because then I wouldn't get to laugh at how pathetic you are every thread
No one's ever going to do your stupid request

>>11288538
Kys

>>11288538
Dude, just report and ignore it like an ordinary human being so your stupid ass doesn't get the thread deleted AGAIN.

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>>11288483
I had to farm Hydroid Prime, I'm about half way done with today's update.

>>11288568

You spend so much time on warframe, yet where the hell is our warframe based gentle femdom huh?

Huh?!

>>11288560
you're the one spamming every thread with the same shit

>>11288560
>reporting things
>on /trash/
The only things that get deleted are lolicon, shotanon, or thread spergouts (drawthread/tlhg board spam that kills pages). Everything else just gets you banned for false reporting

>>11288422
Is there a place to show people scripts I've written so they can give their thoughts on it?

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>>11288612
the garbage

>>11288600
Someone write a fic with the diaperfag and his obsessed hater already, at least then we'll get something decent out of it.

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>>11288584
Oh yeah, I gotta do some Ember or Valkyr femdom one day, would be really fun to play around with the lore.
I got full sets of both Hydroid and the Nami Skyla in one session, RNG was on my side today.

>>11288612
You could try unlisted pastebins or discord for more 1:1 sessions

>>11288685
I prefer 1:1, personally

>>11288698
I'd chat with ya on discord then, but it's nighttime here and I have class later tomorrow. I can share the info to send a friend request on that program when I get back if you're curious.

By the way, are you the same one that came up with the pitch of that insane asylum girl cartoon idea? How'd that go?

>>11288761
I actually am. If you want me to share something I wrote about it on Discord with you, I can as long as it's privately

>>11288761
>>11288824
just fuck already

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>>11288422

Hey everyone I've been writing a Hyena biker gang green fic. Thought id post here since /yeen/ died.Just updated the 7th chapter and currently working on the 8th. I would greatly dig any feedback. Thanks


>Anywhere But Here [human(m)xmultiple hyena(f),violence, femdom, smut, pseudo-penis, intersex, romance, drug use]

https://pastebin.com/u3k83bNp (PART 1 CH1-5)

https://pastebin.com/NefkP7gz (PART 2 CH 6-
UNFINISHED)

(General Profile, Teether)
https://pastebin.com/u/Teether

>>11289200

Give us some tags you silly goose

>>11289200
just read the 7th chapter, needs work

>>11289373

Ignore this guy, he says this to everyone and doesnt actually read anything.

>>11289404
I don't need you to tell me that tyvm

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2000 word update, new content at "The same change fell over the rest of them"

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
>no new tags

For some reason my spellcheck tools have stopped functioning, so please forgive any errors. I'll do some troubleshooting tomorrow.

I am not really happy with the whole interview scene, but I completely lack the experience necessary to make it sound genuine. I'm going to need to do some rewrites and some extensive research, if any of you guys have any advice or any anecdotes that I could use for inspiration, that'd be really useful.
I've never been to an interview that didn't involve being given a hardhat.

>>11289200
I adore this in concept, but I can't get over the pseudo-penis aspect. Have you ever considered doing some minor edits and providing multiple versions of the same story? I do it with stories that feature gay or bisexual scenes, it's fairly easy to edit the scenes down and make them palatable to straight people.

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AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>11288422
>OP Dubs, a favorable omen for this thread!

New chapter of Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves up. 2900 odd words.
>Schoolyard antics on the morning after Lapiz discovers Loba's secret. Great powers meet, and names are finally given! This chapter is heavily influenced by reader feedback and suggestions. In particular, contains real-time interaction of the characters rather than a dialog describing what happened, as well as more focus on how Loba and Lapiz act around each other.

Tags: Male(human)/Female(werewolf), school, fighting(fists), blood(minor)

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, original work, slice of life, school, nature

Content Tags: M(human)/F(werewolf), tomboy(female), artist(male), childhood friends, transformation(werewolf)

Fetish Tags: Kissing. (More to come!)

Summary: In a world of magic carpets, clay houses, and verdant forests, the cities of man's empire are protected from corruption by vigilant investigators. But who, or what, protects the forests from threats within and without? As one boy grows from childhood to an adult, he learns that one of his schoolyard friends is perhaps more than she seems. The old myths tell of wolf-people who stalk the forests and devour those who would ruin the beauty of nature. But werewolves are myths. If they weren't, his yellow-eyed tomboy friend and her quaint nuclear family would have found out about them by now. They live in the woods, they'd warn him if those myths were true... right? There are more important things to worry about, like if he likes her as much as he thinks he does, and if she likes him the way he likes her, and why she keeps having those twitching fits during class now that they're going through adolescence.

(1/3)

>>11290328
Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves Chapter List
>Chapter 1: Leave it to Loba...
https://pastebin.com/ePr6xUp3
>Chapter 2: Family Fishing
https://pastebin.com/wSLjuicX
>Chapter 3: Adolescent Confidants
https://pastebin.com/erPVrvWy
>Chapter 4: Teenage Lessons
https://pastebin.com/MxwaZMPz
>Chapter 5: Big Questions
https://pastebin.com/1SvKeWhk
>Chapter 6: Morning After (NEW)
https://pastebin.com/jXss3KbL

Apologies for delay in updates. Other matters demanded priority. Personal sleep schedule was cut down to four hours a night, all recreational activities were eliminated aside from physical training as stress relief, and situation was made unnecessarily complicated by others failing to communicate in a prompt and clear manner. Fully intend to meet all currently active writing commitments. Intend to update either Northlands Garrison (officer and maid) or Plate and Scale (knight and lizardgirl) next. Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves seems to receive the most views on average per chapter, so it was prioritized.

Regarding this latest chapter: Believe it is in keeping with the tone and quality of the rest of the story, but it developed from a small chunk of the outline that was originally supposed to be an end-note for another chapter. Interested in feedback on story pacing. Hope that readers do not feel this story is being bloated, as occurred with Northlands Garrison, or losing focus as Plate and Scale did. However, if this is the case, quality feedback is always appreciated.

Current outline of Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves calls for another chapter of schoolyard antics like these, followed by a time-skip of perhaps a few years to an older version of Loba and Lapiz who are dealing with the pressures of high school social life. Since they will also be "legally able to marry", there are plans for a lighthearted bit of erotic exploration between the two.

(2/3)

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>>11290355
The characters' inexperienced amorous advances toward each other are more exiting in their eyes because that is taboo among Loba's kind, and also because they have grown emotionally distant while still remaining friends due to separate social circles.

Loba, now a beautiful and athletic young woman, has to her dismay become popular and is surrounded by people who have decided they are her "friends". While she enjoys the attention and appreciates the applause whenever she's at an athletic competition, the cliques and gossip-mongers are pulling her apart in ways that mere physical attacks never could. Worse, she's now legally able to be married in the empire, and is constantly being petitioned by boys who only care about how she fills out her school uniform. Lapiz is enjoying success with his art, while not enjoying the hangers-on that come with such success. He's also painfully aware that most of the people who clap for his expositions and pay for his art do not actually like it. They see him as a flavor-of-the-moment novelty, and dismiss his work just as quickly as they embrace it. Though both have never officially confessed their feelings for each other, they are still firm friends and confidants. When the stress is too much for both of them at the end of a school day, they wind up growling at and kissing each other.

Feedback and suggestions from readers on currently posted chapters and this future concept would be greatly appreciated. Intent is to make the smut component "cute" at this phase of the story, leaving any more hardcore elements for later in the relationship. Goal is to show the characters' youthful, experimental phase while still maintaining their affection for each other and underscoring that they are compatible mates. A tall order, but hopefully possible with the author's limited abilities.

(3/3)

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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here: http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions

>>11288654
Needs more prime access. Gotta get those sardine primes so you can go full fish.

>>11290653
Hey, got an idea for y'all, for the high school chapter(s)
Our protagonists trying to set the only two actually nice classmates of theirs who have crushes on them, up with each other, which is not only funny but also would would let them talk about sappy stuff without extinction-level awkwardness

>>11289200
Hey teether, I like it, even if I kinda skip over the smut. You got some cool characters.

You think of where you want to take this story? It would be really cool to see some of these characters find some sort of redemption in this terrible world.


With that said, I'll going to repost my story in hopes of feedback. Last thread died right after I posted it except for >>11289373 posting his incredibly insightful comment.

https://pastebin.com/AFGqErU5

Sci-fi non-smut starship troopers meets avatar was how one guy put it in the /yeen/ threads.

>>11288856
Too lazy for fugs

>>11289797
The interview seemed way over the top. I don't work in IT so maybe I'm off base, but I'm a mechanical designer which is pretty white collar.

Most interviews I've been to involve two people at most, the majority of questions are directed at experience and capability, not personality. And sometimes, when I had less experience, I've had a small CAD test to see my skill level.

That's about it, usually shorter then an hour.

I liked it, just trying to give feedback, keep it up.

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>>11289359
But....I did
>>11289797
Huh...I mean I probably could. I spend enough time just trying to write the original story that I never really thought of that.

I kind of hate the idea of splicing your work into multiple version but I dunno. I get that a lot of straight people aren't into it obviously. The thought of mutating the original story leaves a bad taste in my mouth but I might do it since enough people have complained. Its almost enough to dissuade me from doing anything but straight in the future because of the response.
Thanks for the feedback everyone

>>11292183
Being a guy who cares little for the idea of pseudo-phalluses, I think you should keep it in as is with no other alternatives. Especially considering that's the one thing everyone knows about female hyenas and their weird sort-of-schlongs. That, and how they violently explode when giving birth.

It would ruin the main gimmick behind a female hyena, I feel, you know?

>>11292183
Don't change your story just because someone didn't like it. There is a difference between taste and criticism.

Btw, Mace is the coolest character by far.

But hell, I'm reading your story for the characters and world and not the porn so what do I know.

That said, I'm glad you're getting feedback, I feel like I'm fishing for attention for my story (>>11291210) everytime I ask for feedback at this point. Seemed like I got a good bit of interest in the hyena threads but maybe it's not working for this crowd.

Oh well, I'll still keep it up cause I like writing it.

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>>11291210
>>11292299
Hah, I was actually the one who told you it was starshiptroopers/avatar and gave you feedback last time.

Sorry man I was giving your story a quick read over. I think your imagination is definitely spot on and it shows in the world and characters your trying to create. That so far is your strong point with the story but it has some flaws with flow that need addressing. I think you need to focus on trimming down and consolidate your writing.Always strive to explain the most in your writing with the fewest amount of words.

EX.)

>"Carried on by her toned legs with claws digging into the soft overgrown ground, teeth bared in a massive smile across her muzzle she was the epitome of horror given form."

(maybe try shortening it to something like this)

Her toned legs tore into the overgrowth as a horrific smile spread across her muzzle
(here’s and example of jumble and run on):

>"One collapsed into a heap while half it’s gut splattered the ground behind it while the other lost and arm and half it’s chest."

(remove repeating words for better flow, there are two “while”s in this sentence. Add more visual words and cut it down slightly into something maybe like this)

Both demons screeched in pain as bullets tore through their bodies, their tar-like guts spilling onto the dirt

(and just punc that makes the dialogue flow better)
>“What, mad I did the work for you?”
(rather)
“What? Mad I did all the work for you?”

(try to acknowledge unnecessary writings that repeat something that will be discussed again later on….EX)
>”the disfigurement from the horrendous torture she endured from the monsters that conquered her world before they met”
(Instead of this, describe what the scar looks like on her body, you end up revealing that they come from torture later in the story)

>>11291210
Yeah, right, first of all there's no way in hell I can read all of this in one go. It just keeps going. For god's sake think about breaking it up into multiple pastes. One per chapter, maybe.

As for what I did read, it looks okay aside from a few rookie grammar errors. Stuff like writing "she released the creature as *it’s* hands grabbed at *it’s* throat". Supposed to just be "its", otherwise you're writing "as it is hands grabbed at it is throat".

Also I don't really like the main character, this Mithra. She's a bit of a dumbass, taking out her earpiece *in a warzone* and then getting angry with her superior because she makes fun of her for it.

And, maybe it's something that gets spelled out later on, but why the choice to make the protagonist this, sort of, dog-like creature? Is that your fetish, or some actual in-story reason for it?

>>11292491
(cont)
Noticeable improvements:
-Glad to see you gave the gnolls a species name
-You added a lot more detail and it shows. It definitely adds more to the story. I have a better time seeing the characters and setting in my mind
-Happy to see Mithra and some of the others characters seem a little more fleshed out now
Issues:
-Punctuation still needs work, look over where your commas and periods are going
-Your trying to cram in too much plot along with your descriptions, I would try separating the two. Avoid run-ons and cramming
-Still having problems with flow. Read over the story to yourself out loud. If it doesn’t sound like it flows well then rewrite it

(feedback for chapter 4)
I feel like this is so far the weakest chapter out of the bunch. Maybe its just me but I felt very confused trying to find out what was going on.
-why did blowing up the tower(walls?) cause the cities’ power to die? Was that discussed ‘off-screen’
-why did Xavier start laughing maniacally and losing his mind? I didn’t get the feel that this character was very unhindged. I felt like he was suppose to be very cool and smooth. This kind of rubs me the wrong way and I got weird joker vibes from it (I dunno maybe its just me)
-why are the residents ok with mindlessly piling into convoys of people who just blew up and destroyed their city?
-The scene at the end with the “demons” had me a little confused. Were you trying to explain the city showing up from their prospective? It might be better to show a quick outside prospective instead


The whole thing just had me kinda lost. Trust me, actions scenes can easily get out of hand and are usually a bitch to accurate coordinate.
Overall,I like the direction your taking but I think your writing needs more clarity. I would suggest maybe plugging ahead and keeping the writing to rough draft status until you get a better idea of what your going for. Then you can sit back and refine the whole thing later.

>>11292491
You're my new favorite person, thanks.

This is good stuff man, I'll definitely incorporate this into my next round of revisions. I'll keep pressing forward until I finish the story arc involving the city as a lot of stuff is about to happen. Afterwards I'm going to go back and rewrite a lot of stuff from the beginning. I feel like a lot of it needs some help.

This kind of stuff keeps me motivated, thanks.

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>>11291210
>>11292491
>>11292660
Overall, don't stop writing if you enjoy it. I think all you need is to spend some more time writing and refine as you go. I would plough through and just keep writing a rough draft till you get to the end of your story then go back and rewrite it all. That will help you get more practice while you take a breather for proof reading. The most important tool for proofing is rereading out loud. It almost always does wonders for writing


Keep it up Templar

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>>11292689
No problem, keep it up Templar

>>11292577
(not Templar but I read the story)

-Mithras not the main character even though it starts out with her as far as I can tell the main cahracters are Enyo and Xavier (you might want to give that more clarity Templar)
-Mithras supposed to be a brute so the earpiece thing does fit with her character
-Templar is a /yeen/ reugee so all the creatures are like scifi gnolls

hope that helps

>>11292577
There is an in story reason for it. Not necessarily that it's dog like creature, but that she is not human.

And she is a dumbass, also inexperienced with the level of technology she is using. Also not the main character but I was attempting too start the story with an alien point of view, for kicks I guess.

>>11292577
>>11292660
Yeah, I need to get a better word processor, the one I'm using has a terribly shitty grammar and spellchecker. Also I'm not fantastic with writing to begin with so I need the help.

>>11292660
Chapter 4 is going to get a massive rewrite here soon, I was tired when I wrote a lot of it. Needs more smoothing out and exposition into why certain things are happening.
I kinda just ran with it because this is one part of the story I was most shaky on. I know where it's supposed to go from here but getting there was tough.

I'll plug along until I finish the the entire bit with the city, then rewrite it, I'm already seeing how lots of things I need to have set up just are not connecting with its current status.

Thanks guys.

>>11292827
>I need to get a better word processor
LibreOffice is probably the best free option:
https://www.libreoffice.org/
It's the continuation of OpenOffice under a different name, after everybody abandoned OpenOffice because Oracle bought it, and nobody likes Oracle (it was later donated to Apache Foundation, but too late because everybody had already moved to LibreOffice). OpenOffice shouldn't be used at all because it has known security flaws. Details:
https://lwn.net/Articles/729460/

>grammar and spellchecker
Best free option I know is LanguageTool. You can use it online or download it for offline use:
https://languagetool.org/

>not just using notepad++
>needing grammar checkers

>>11292915
You're a godsend man, will do once I get home

>>11293369
I design machinery and robots for a living. If you have ever been around an engineer before you would know it's a miracle we can even spell our names.

>>11293427
Why are engineers such a weird bunch? I have a close friend who's an engineer and the way he talks about everyone he works with it sounds like most of his day arguing with people who act like a bunch of autistic cats rather than adults

Ehh maybe its just because you need to be analytical instead of visual to be a engineer. they seem to struggle with concepts not deeply set within completely rigid guidelines. Excel on the problem solving front. Bad on the creativity front

>>11288474
>>11290917
where's my $10,000 autismos

>>11293830
They don't understand social cues which is why they'll argue with anything and anyone like the retards they are

>>11288474
I'll do it for $100

>>11293862
>>11293888
Would you fuck off already?

>>11293923
>>11288474
you first sperg

>>11293941
Kys

>>11293961
>>11288474
you first diaperfag

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>>11293862
>>11293880
>>11293888
>>11293923
>>11293941
>>11293961
>>11293984
>this sperger-induced shit flinging
>my sides

>11293999
(You)

>>11288474
$10 and I'll do it

>>11294076
No

>>11288474
$30 and it's yours my friend

>willing to shit up every thread for weeks demanding people write literal autism for free
>unwilling to pay 10$

>>11293830
Templar writer here.
Not all engineers are like that, but a good number of them are. There is also a lot of pride involved. Some dudes can't take it when you point out how bad their design is and will throw shit fits about it.

I've actually been physically assaulted by an old program manager once, but that was an extreme case.

>>11293880
I'll admit, there is a good number of them that fit the bill there, most guys I've worked with are alright but some are downright autistic.

The individual culture of the workplace also makes a massive difference. I've worked on the F-35 and it was terrible, its where a 50 year old PM threw a fit that resulted in said fist fight.
Then I move to making glorified refrigerators and because of the culture alone I enjoy the job more.

>>11294608
>job that lets you get away from human interaction
>filed with people unable to understand human interaction
makes sense

>>11294593
>demanding
Where in my request do you see me demanding it to be done? It is just that, a request. No one is forced to take it nor am I shoving it in anyone's face. There's a filter button for a reason: use it if you don't like it.

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>>11288474
I will do this service for you goyim
but I require 40 shekels

>>11294593
Hard proof he's just a troll, no one can be that determined but unwilling to dish out such little cash.

>>11294674
>posting it first thing every thread
you're more autistic than the buizel you written about

>>11294812
First=/=demanding

>>11293999
There are actual autists here who are wondering what the hell is wrong with that guy, no doubt.

Also, to the guy requesting it: it would be a dozen times faster to just write it yourself. If nobody has been willing to write your request for a fucking year, then that should be an obvious sign that you need to take matters into your own hands.

>>11294835
It does come off as very needy. Like he has nothing else to do in his life but request autistic buizels shitting themselves. Plus, given that said buizel is visibly underage anyone who did write about it would be receiving a visit from the partyvan.

>>11294674
Dude, I'm not trying to start a fight but seriously, if you have been asking for this for as long as and people said and still no one picked it up it's obvious it's not happening without some cash changing hands.

>>11294869
The request isn't pornographic so it's fine

wow I sure like scribbling stuff out to make stories

>>11294937
Still, the point is that absolutely nobody wants to write it. Not then, not now, and almost certainly not ever. You are going to keep requesting it until you die of old age at this rate.

Are you really too cheap to pay for a commission?

>>11294961
Why else would I be here? It did nothing wrong before, and it has done nothing wrong now.

>>11294996
If you took ten seconds to look at everyone who begs to differ, you wouldn't be saying that. The very fact that people want it off should be a clear warning that it isn't welcome anymore.

Do it for their sakes instead of thinking only about yourself for a change.

>>11295034
I'm not going anywhere

>>11294996
Literally no one is on your side man.

Seriously, why not write it up yourself? You obviously know what you want to happen so why give writing a try? It's literally the point of this thread?

>>11295086
Can't you look at other places to see if they write this crap first? Asking multiple times isn't going to make people do your request more, it's going to make them hate it and you.

>>11295115
Isn't it obvious? He's lazy and unwilling to contribute anything other than justifications.

>>11294996
There's a substantial difference between asking for something, and asking for something again, and again, and again. That tends to piss people off; slowly at first, but it tends to ramp up quite rapidly. If you're as big an autist as you seem, this may not have occurred to you.

The biggest problem is that the thread population does not change much over time, so you are just repeatedly asking the same group of people who have at first indirectly (by ignoring you) and now directly told you they have no interest - repeating the request at that point is pestering, and that's obnoxious.

>>11295126
>>11295156
Maybe we should remove the "Make requests" from the OP?

Supplying a prompt is one thing, beating your hands against your high chair is another.

I seriously want to know why he won't just write it himself? Would take so much less effort, and as I said is the literal point of the thread.

>>11295156
Don't like it? Filter and hide it. Otherwise fuck off

>>11295307
Wouldn't go that far, just say "make requests, but don't repeat them too much- once every other thread is more than enough".

>>11295325
can you say "buizel" every post so that nobody has to see anything you write?
thanks

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Fun fact: that request has been around longer than these writethreads. Someone found it on the /vpwt/ request list: it was two years old.

Wow.

>>11295325
I'm literally asking a question man, what's the issue?

Why won't you write it yourself?

>>11295325
Do you actually want that thing written? I'm genuinely starting to doubt it.

>>11295483
Likewise, I saw the source material and it's like weaponized boredom. And no line breaks.

>>11295368
There was a request in the /aco/ writethreads that literally was repeated for their entire lifespan.
Hasn't popped up here, yet, though

>>11295502
I know, I tried reading a little out of morbid curiosity and it's basically wall to wall THIS IS HOW TO WRITE BADLY

It's horrifying even without the faintly creepy subject matter

Honestly, why argue with crazy? If you ran into someone on the street who was drooling, raving and literally shitting their pants, would you go up to them and start an argument?

>>11295502
>opened the dA links to see
>guy's journal says he's a Texan, was in the storm path
>Harvey didn't drown him
FUCK
truly we live in the worst of all possible universes

>>11295896
No, but if that guy starts hanging around my house I may take offense.

I'd almost be tempted to take up the request and write it short and shitty just so people could say "your request has been fulfilled, pay for a commission or GTFO", but I don't really want my name associated with the subject matter in any way.

>>11296021
Texas, where everything, even their autism is bigger

>>11296337
Use a fake name, take one for the team.

You'll be a hero

>>11296337
Christ, don't encourage the whining for shit nobody wants to write and perpetuate this.

The cretin needs to learn that when nobody takes up your request in one place, the course of action most likely to result in you eventually getting your request filled is by going somewhere else and asking different people, and moving on until you find someone somewhere who actually is interested. Not by endlessly asking the same people who have already ignored you for ages because they think your request is fucking putrid.

>>11296924
He's had two years to learn that. Clearly we need to take desperate measures. This isn't for him so much as it is for US.

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>>11295502
>>11295630
>open the links to see what all the fuss it about
>begin to read the "story"
>nope out after a couple paragraphs

>>11297103
"Paragraphs"? It's more like one monstrous superparagraph by someone who doesn't know what the enter key does.

>>11288474
I'll do it for free
>be Buizel
>shit in diaper
done

>>11297265
10/10 masterpiece of our time.

>>11297103
I have a feeling that it's an autobiographical story meant to correct some trauma in the sperg's life, and the peripheral characters are broken, hollow mockeries of real people. It makes it all so much worse.

>>11297167
The pages I looked at had paragraphs, they just made very little sense. Whatever bizarre criteria are being used to determine where they break, dialogue is not included which is a pretty elemental cock up.

>>11297393
Do you get the feeling that the requester is actually the original author? I can't imagine anyone else being a fan of that...thing.

Good lord, you people have talked about this garbage for most of the thread. Shut up about this autist already.

>>11297465
>shut up about this autist
I found Buizel

>>11297465
if you haven't shut up for the last 2 years about it you can bear getting shit on for one thread to the point where you stop requesting it

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>>11297494
Fine, shit up the thread about this faggot, whatever. It was better when this thread was dead, thanks for shitting all over everything /d/.

>>11297516
I'm pretty sure these retards are from /aco/.

>>11297516
/d/ never had anything like that jackass.

>>11297527
Probably. I know the threads there had a problem with perpetual highly specific requests, and they're letting their mad out now that those requesters don't outnumber them anymore

>>11297265
>by e.e.shittings

Seems like we still /trash/ drawthread now

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Say what you want, but this shit is entertaining. I'm crying with laughter over this.

Seriously though, we should all collectively ignore him and hide his posts. Unless someone breaks down and gives him his story just to get him to go away. Then again that could backfire and fuel his autism more.

Maybe flaming the hell out of him is the answer, idk.

I'll go back to writing now

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How to write a femdom scene from the pov of the woman, thread?

>>11297831

Ah, I'm a bit decent at this. The absolute number one thing you need to focus on is emotion > physical sensation.

It's one thing for a woman to step on somebody's balls, but what you should focus on more is the power and mental satisfaction the woman gets over stepping on some balls.

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>>11297894
Ah, okay. The scene I've got in mind is where she gets fed up of her male friend's constant needling and passes at her, so she basically drags him into an alleyway, shoves him down, and mashes his face into her pussy. Shut him up, and gets her off.

So, I think her frustration would figure into this a bit, as well as the domination thing?

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>warframe smut
>not even time honored ember futa cock
You disappoint me snek. If you put taters I'll come for you.

>>11298030
Have her consider or explain to him how this will change the dynamic of their friendship, especially around mutual friends.

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>>11298080
Ah, okay. Though, of course, an option could just be for her to command that he doesn't reveal any of it.

The thing I'm mainly wondering about is how to turn what started as basically a way of shutting him up into a semi-regular thing for them. She may have dominated him in the first encounter, but afterwards I feel like she'd be mortified at actually caving to this guy.

Maybe she could be more aggressively dominant to compensate? I'm kind of new to actually writing about this stuff, so I'm feeling my way forwards.

>>11293830
>>11294608
Had a one off convo with a psych and based on his experience headshrinking engineers, he described engineering as "more of a medical condition than a career", which is fairly apt in my experience.

>>11294943
Me too.

>>11298030

>So, I think her frustration would figure into this a bit, as well as the domination thing?

Hell, that would probably be the driving force of the entire encounter. Make sure you get in some nice verbal abuse while this dude is force-eating her out.

One thing that is confusing me is the setting. Why an alleyway?

>The thing I'm mainly wondering about is how to turn what started as basically a way of shutting him up into a semi-regular thing for them. She may have dominated him in the first encounter, but afterwards I feel like she'd be mortified at actually caving to this guy.

You can maintain the frustation angle as a driving force. Also, consider character motivations.

Girl:
+ Needs an outlet for her stress and frustation. (Maybe from work or something? Idk)
+ Even if she hates the dude, it must be nice to have somebody willing and able to sexually serve you.

Guy
+ Eating out is a hella nice thing to do.
+ Being able to not have the demand of being the sexual provider is one of main draws of femdom, I think.

>>11298174
I might have gotten the wrong impression. Does the guy actually enjoy being dominated? If not, the most straightforward way to shut him up would be to blackmail him into silence, It really depends on where you want this to go.

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>>11298318
>more of a medical condition than a career

thats amazing

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>>11298399
>Why an alleyway?
Because they're walking down the street when she finally cracks, and she drags him into an alleyway so nobody sees them or fewer people do, anyway.

As for maintaining the frustration, it's one thing to drag a guy into an alleyway just so he will shut up for five seconds, quite another to work towards setting up another encounter when you're in private together.
>>11298406
As I see it, the guy kind of sees the entire thing as a bit of a game, and he feels like it's worthwhile for being able to fuck the girl. So yeah, I guess he enjoys it.

>>11298639
>Because they're walking down the street when she finally cracks, and she drags him into an alleyway so nobody sees them or fewer people do, anyway.

>As for maintaining the frustration, it's one thing to drag a guy into an alleyway just so he will shut up for five seconds, quite another to work towards setting up another encounter when you're in private together.


I can dig it. Maybe the whole "public sex" angle unearths some of their kinkier feelings.

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>>11298854
Possible, but some of the things I'm considering, bondage-based mostly, wouldn't really work with that in mind.

Actually, I'm not really sure of what sorts of sex scenes you could _have_ with this theme in mind.

>>11298030

I would like to read this

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>>11299069
Thanks. I'm just struggling a bit with how to get the girl's "voice" down right. The guy I can do, he's basically like me just with a British accent as done by someone who has only ever heard _of_ British accents, but the girl is more complicated.

>>11299171

I would also like to mention that if the girl isn't larger or stronger than the guy, she's not going to be able to do much without him letting her

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>>11299210
Oh, that's not a problem, trust me.

>>11299238

Any chance you could share some details on that?

>>11299482
<_<

Are you trolling me, or just thick?

>>11299579

Extremely thick. You don't have to answer if you don't want to

>>11299615
Fine.

It's about Bayonetta (the woman in all the pictures attached to my posts) fucking Loki (the sort-of shota with the dreads up there).

Clear enough for you?

>>11299649

In my defense I've never played those games or recognized the characters :c

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>>11299669
Fair enough, I suppose. Like I said, I've got Loki's voice nailed down because he's a gobby twat with an upper-class accent, like me, but Bayonetta herself is more difficult.

Since she gives off this whole "refined, elegant lady" vibe and yet curses like a drunk at throwing-out time.

Also, it's not even funny how few good pics there are of her.

>>11297641
>>11297657
>>11297679
can this be written into a story?

>>11298062
While futa ember is great, in the spirit of the new prime what we need is some hydroid on nezha action. There's a criminally small amount of twinkframe smut out there.

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>>11299917
>>11297641
>we bust in yo house
>we rape you
>>11297657
>we eat your cat
>we keep bustin up your house like we did your pussy
>>11297679
>keep raping you and bustin up your house for like 12 more hours
>no more stuff to bust in the house but we keep goin anyway
>all our dicks our brokin from rapin you for 12 hours
>we keep goin anyway


there you go

>>11299727
>Also, it's not even funny how few good pics there are of her.
Bayonetta is one of the few female characters I consider far too cool for porn. Which is very odd considering how she acts during... well pretty much everything.

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>>11300336
The really annoying part is that what little there is, practically all of it is of her subbing.

I've not even played the fucking games and I know that Bayonetta does not sub! Fuck's sake!

Hence why I want to try and set the record straight by having her dom the chav out of Loki. Though I'm not entirely sure how, I don't really know many of the usual... procedures for this sort of sex.

To say nothing of all the cool shit she could do with her hair and him.

>>11300443
>I've not even played the fucking games and I know that Bayonetta does not sub! Fuck's sake!

Kamiya himself said as much when he took a look at what was out there. Which does beg the question of why he didn't just prep a cease and desist like anyone else in his situation would do.

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>>11300473
Same reason the guy who did the new Nier game told people to send him all the porn when they told him about it.

And then patched in a button that makes whatshername's skirt fall off when you press it.

>>11300542

Proof? I heard that happened but it sounds like bullshit. Talking about the dev, not the button

>>11300634
https://twitter.com/yokotaro/status/818064875456843780

It says: >“Due to the 2B butt controversy, many outrageous drawings are being made. Collecting them to share individually is a pain. It would be great if we can group them together to make it easier to distribute them every week.”

Never played the game, but I like this man.

>>11300731

Damn. That guy is awesome.

>>11288761
So I'm guessing you're no longer interested in reading? That's okay, I'll just look elsewhere

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>>11302254
And prior to this, he created this very special g...character. Yoko Taro is the madman we all want to be.

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2000 word update, new content at "I...don't know, that's kind of a hard question to answer"

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
>no new tags

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>>11292082
Yeah I definitely need to secure some kind of resource so that I can make that whole scene more believable. I feel like it will be jarring to anyone who actually works in that environment.

>>11292299
>>11292183
I'm not saying change it by any means, just maybe provide an alternate version. I do the same with my stories, the bisexual/gay version is usually the original story, and then I make some minor changes to make it palatable to a wider audience. For example, changing the gender of a love interest, editing out references to anal sex and replacing them with vaginal, you'd be surprised how little work it takes to completely transform the content of the sex scenes, and in doing so double or triple your view count.

I know I'm not the target audience, just a suggestion, I would certainly like it if I was into hyena pseudo-penises, I'm just a sucker for biker chicks and there's so little content for that.

Sorry if I failed to respond to any posts, Jesus the thread has exploded.

>>11304185
Snekguy, do you think you will ever get Nahash art?

>>11304560

If he finds someone who will draw it you better believe I'm bankrolling it

>>11304560
Who?

>>11290355

I am madly addicted to your character and worldbuilding. I dont even care about the sex anymore, oh god

>>11304185
I wouldn't say jarring, just a little extreme. Cut it down to 2 or 3 people besides the main character and it should good.

Keep it up man

>>11290328
>>11290355
>>11290653
Hey. OR here, 26 hours later.
I completely understand the delay, just glad you got any spare time period for this stuff.
Newest chapter is good, like the interaction between the fathers, doesn't feel like it's slowing the story down. Upcoming timeskip from middle to high school age is a good idea, advances story without bloat.
Have a couple ideas for the next few chapters; maybe in either the next pre-skip chapter or the one immediately after, add some interaction between lapiz and loba's family. Maybe invited to dinner?
If other ideas come to mind later, will post them

hey fags
I'm one of the writers for /awoo/
but because there's no /awoo/ and hasn't been for like a week I'm posting my latest filled request here
>turned into a werewolf by cum
that was the request
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/24659975/
https://d.facdn.net/art/perfectmetis/stories/1504217015/1504217015.perfectmetis_predator_of_the_leather_bar.pdf

>>11312527

The fuck is /awoo/ ?

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>>11311987
>No one believed the warnings. They were here among us, had been for decades. Responsible for inspiring many major technological developments, and suppressing far more. They didn't have an army, they were here to replenish their numbers, but the invaders didn't need one. Humans would gladly destroy each other if only given the tools. Hate, lust, and greed would do more damage than an asteroid, reliably whittling the human population down to a more manageable size. All that they needed to do was incite what already existed.
>For all their advancements, the invaders had a strangely primitive outlook. Eat, breed, conquer. Our philosophy, our varied languages, and most of all our appreciation for art terrified them. They were one culture, one race, one scaly fist, without deviation or creativity. We could have outsmarted them, freed our progress from their influence, turned the invaders' tools to our own uses. The stars could have been ours.
>We were too many, too conflicted, too eager to doubt what we saw and heard. Brother killed brother while slitted eyes watched from the shadows, technologies that could only result in the doom of mankind were gleefully investigated, and superficial differences were used as justifications for pointless wars. The invaders were one. But they were not patient.
>We killed each other too slowly for their tastes. The timetable had to be accelerated. In the deepest jungles of our world, beneath canopies of plants that fooled our sophisticated satellites, they began. Male humans were used for forced labor, subjugated to cruelty for the sake of cruelty, and terminated when no longer useful. More could always be bought from other men who were all too glad to sell their own as slaves for a few kilograms of white powder or poppies that would further enable the destruction of their race. The invaders had no long term plans for male humans, none at all.

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>>11313315
I believe it's gay werewolf stuff

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>>11313385
>Females were needed. The reptile-like invaders were a slow-breeding race, a fact we could have exploited to ensure their demise and our ascension. With perverted science, quite at odds with the primitive markings they daubed with paint onto the bodies of the tortured women, they fashioned incubators for their young from the wombs of chosen captives. While their captors marched about, hissing into their communicators and prostrating themselves before the holographic projections of their superiors, the women were reduced to less than animals. Expected to have a mind, but to use it only to better their compliance to their reptilian overlords, they were denied even the lack of understanding that a mistreated beast might use for refuge.
>Whipped, marked, gagged, pierced, and drug through the mud, unable even to fend off the jungle insects that landed on their skin to gorge on their blood, the chosen women envied those who had been found wanting and put to death. Trapped in a haze of unwanted sexual arousal from the aphrodisiacs in the savage markings that had been smeared onto their skin, the women found their bodies always at an agonizing almost-orgasm. Soon each, no matter how determined of mind, found themselves squeezing rhythmically on the pseudo-phallus that plugged their moist hole whenever one of their overlords was not planting his seed deep inside them, hoping for an orgasm that would grant a moment's solace from this living hell.
>No such mercy was permitted. Only when a reptilian took one of them did they feel the release of climax. Denied the ability to speak, their mouths ungagged only to suck the ridged lengths of their captors, and arms constantly tied behind their backs, their humanity quickly fell away. Civilized thought was destroyed. The need to find shelter and sustenance atrophied since their overlords provided for their survival. They were not women, they were wombs, just as the men were reduced to nothing more than strong backs.

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>>11313434
>Some came to enjoy the reptilians' cruelty, others despised it to the very end, but that mattered not. All were bred, all bore new reptilians, each scaly infant just like all the rest. They were one, and we were many. This pleased the invaders. They made plans to expand their operations, to process this entire world sooner rather than later. More and more humans began to disappear, vanishing into the jungles, yet no one listened.
>The reptilians laughed. It amused them. For, in the end, they were only doing what they had learned from us. They were not a creative race, they had copied patterns of cruelty from mankind. Instead of men working other men to death that they might build pyramids so great they would outlast both gods and empires, or women being taken by conquerers, now it was reptilians holding the leash and carrying the tazer. Even at their final victory, when they revealed themselves to the world and took the weary remains of humanity by force, men still turned against one another instead of facing the true threat.
>Our legacy was a few final generations of women who screamed in pain or pleasure as their overlords willed, men buried in mass graves once they could work no more, and a strangely silent world full of curious structures that would outlive their creators. The invaders left as they had come, quietly, their numbers greatly bolstered. If they had the creativity to think it, the diversity of thought to contemplate irony, one among their number might have noted that instead of "Humanity, Fuck Yeah!" the true fate of the hairless apes was "Humanity's Fucked, Yeah." None among them thought such a thing. They were one, we were many, and we were no more.
>Their outlook had proved stronger than ours, their unity superior to our diversity. Eat, breed, conquer.

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>>11304560
I would very much like to.
I wish I could get a hold of the guy who draws these 'Lucy' comics, I wonder if he takes commissions and would agree to draw a book cover/character art. His work certainly inspired me to make a move on the succubus story.

>>11313448
David Icke what are you doing up so late?
That' actually surprisingly well written, check out 'Rakka' by Oats Studio on Youtube, I think you'll like it.

>>11288474
here

>there once was an autistic buizel named Autzen
>one day he realizes he's a huge faggot
>he blows his brains out
>The end

>>11315538
You forgot the most important part.
>After he died, he shit himself.
>Because that's what happens when you die.
>The end.

REQUEST FULFILLED.

>>11315538
>>11315879
Kys

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Templar(Grand Marshal) writer here.

While plugging away on chapter 5 I ended up rewriting large parts of chapter 4 and parts of chapter 3 due to the fantastic feedback from here.

Should have Chapter 5 done soon but the thread seems slow so that's why I'm posting my rewrite now.


Big thanks to whoever recommended Libreoffice and language tools. My stuff is still kind of rough, but should be a good bit better now.

Also, I broke each chapter into separate pastebins and renamed it from 'Templar' which was always a working title anyways to 'Casus Belli'

Chapter 1:
https://pastebin.com/AFGqErU5

Chapter 2:
https://pastebin.com/hKRRzm64

Chapter 3:
https://pastebin.com/ea7v4Hgr

Chapter 4:
https://pastebin.com/0j5QEPwG


Pastebin account:
https://pastebin.com/u/GrandMarshal

thanks,

>>11317044
I have no idea what a possum is in this context, but I say you ought to follow your gut.

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I got a question for you writefags. I recently pulled my back severely enough to have to get PT. During this time I fell off my SSRIs and had a mental breakdown. I Fell into a couple weeks haze of drinking and smoking weed. Eventually, I came out of it but by the time I had sobered up I had been fired from my shitty job. I wanted to die every day I worked that job. The job made my suicidal thoughts unbearable and losing such a shit job just made it worse. I got pretty close to eating a gun.

Instead I decided to start writing. I've been writing stuff here on trash and pastebining etc. This is the least suicidal I've felt in a longtime. I actually feel kinda good.I feel free. Its always been my dream to be a writer but I put it off because I never thought Id make any money. I don't think i really care anymore seeing as how working a job that actively makes me want to die for money that I use on drugs to make me forget about work is a toxic cycle.

I am thinking about dedicating all of my time to writing and trying to use patreon like a tip jar. I don't really eat and my costs are already as low as I am going to get them. I have a little money saved up to skate for a little bit.I am a city hermit with no intention of having kids or a family so no big money commitments. Iam not looking to make big bucks, just enough to cover food and rent so I can keep writing. So far this is the only thing I can imagine living for.This is the first time I might actually pursue something I enjoy instead of just doing what i think I should do. Do you writefags think I should follow my gut and devote myself to writing or am I just a loser who should off myself?

Iam going to bed now. goodnight fellow writefags

>>11317261
See >>11317080
Follow your dreams and all that.

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>>11317261
Absolutely, I'm in a similar situation to you, albeit a lot less dire. This is my big chance to make this my job, and to be able to do what I love for a living, and in doing so avoid having to get a shitty job that eats up all my writing time.

You could follow the same route that I am.
Cast a wide net, get your stories up on as many sites as possible, ensure that lots of people can access them.

Direct people towards your Patreon, or a Ko-Fi page, use it as a tip jar so that people who enjoy your work can support you.

Use the money you make from that to produce ebooks, book covers, character art, maybe hire editors, try to produce presentable products that you can sell.

Then try to get them published, or put them up on sites like Amazon, maybe earn enough to live on.

I'm not making a living yet, but I do have substantial support on Patreon, and I've seen people who do what we do and have managed to make minimum wage through that alone.
I'm hoping that I can get by through ebook sales eventually, but if you're really passionate about it then it will show in your work and people will support you.

Best of luck!

>>11317261
Write for sure man, if that's what makes you happy it's what you should have been doing all along instead of the drugs.
Maybe try to get a job writing for a local newspaper or something, idk. I wouldn't expect to get enough to live off of from patreon alone.

Years ago I found myself in a bad situation, not so bad I was doing drugs and thinking of suicide but close.
Eventually I decided to get a job doing something I enjoyed, it was really fucking tough but worth it.

Now life is much better. There are still shitty days for sure but for the most part I'm happy.

I know it's clichéd but if there is a will there is a way. As long as it's within the realm of reason, you make your life what you want it to be.

Let me know what your patreon is if you do set one up, I'll hit you up next paycheck or two.

Hang in there man. I might be a stranger but I feel for you.

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>>11317627
Woah. This is a good feel thread.

Not the same anon.

Anyway, has anyone made the obnoxious sterotype furry fursuiter gf story? I remember requesting one, but didn't seem to get a respond.

>>11315455
His page on tumblr is Stedilnik. His lewd stuff is on his alt page Hladilnik.

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>>11317741
Thanks man I'll get in touch with him and see if he takes commissions.

>>11304696
That would be awesome Shiny.

>>11317784

Paying for it is easy, finding someone who can do it and is actually free is the hard part. If you can do your part, I can certainly do mine

>>11317261
Well, what have you written, anon? Do you enjoy producing something through mental labor? What drives you in life aside from a need to escape reality?

Your post reads less like a question of if you should dedicate your life to writing, and more like you are trying to find value in your life. This problem is not unique to you, it's something that many others have struggled with. Not just in modern times, but throughout history. I know people who, though well into their twenties, lack a driver's license and are still completely dependent on their parents for food and shelter. I know others who, though given every advantage in the world and close to achieving their Master's degree in mechanical engineering with a double major in CompSci, are borderline suicidal due to breaches of trust in long-held romantic relationships. I mention these people because they seek solace in alcohol, in skinner-box MMOs like World of Warcraft, or in isolation. Their situations appear similar to yours.

A very wise man I once knew, who had done everything from football and wrestling (tournament wrestling, the "real", unscripted pro wrestling) to digital art and massive works of graphite-on-sprawling-canvas, had some very good advice for me about art. He told me that if I enjoyed art, I should go get a job at a bank. During the week, cash people's checks and help them with their accounts. On the weekend, go out into the countryside and paint a lake. This would keep my love for art fresh, and provide money to pay for my artistic interests. That's advice I've taken to heart, because I've found it to be true. When art is your profession, some of the magic vanishes. You're under pressure to produce, even with just a "tip jar", since you want to keep the money coming in.

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>>11318187
By all means, write and post your work! We always need more content creators. This thread is full of reasons why that's true, and I shall say no more on that in the interest of keeping the peace. But when I read:
>I don't think i really care anymore seeing as how working a job that actively makes me want to die for money that I use on drugs to make me forget about work is a toxic cycle.
I don't think that taking up writing as a career will help you. Take control of your life. Find a source of employment that does not proverbially or actually "drive you to drink". Rinse the drugs out of your system, and establish order in your surroundings. The pain you're describing is a symptom of a deeper problem.

I've seen a lot of Patreons. Art, video game development, videos and streaming, writing, online radio shows, and even more esoteric things. The vast majority don't bring in money. Remember that Patreon also takes a cut, not to mention whatever payment processor is involved, and many people will "pledge-then-cancel" or their pledges will not go through when billing comes, meaning that the $50 a month you think you're getting might be significantly lower when it hits your bank account. Your small savings will quickly be eroded. If you love writing, use that as a motivator to find employment that will let you write. Treat writing as your stress relief.

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>>11318201
I hope it is clear from the time I'm putting into this that I write these things without malice, anon. I do not know all the specifics of your situation, only you do. But I have heard your story before, with some of the details changed, and I do not like to hear it. "There, but for the grace of God, go I," and all that. By all means, write and post your work, but if you are a lurker of this thread you know that now is a terrible time for 4chan writers.

The writethreads began in /tg/, were exiled to /d/ and also /aco/, and now are on the unlisted /trash/ board. Readership is low, many authors post their work but never receive responses, and successful authors use this as just one of many places to promote their work. I want you to succeed, it is to my benefit that you succeed as a writer since more quality content creators will improve the general atmosphere and hopefully attract more interested readers, but your problem appears more fundamental than just taking up writing.

>How often do you sit down and just bang out two-to-four thousand words, even if it's garbage, then feel better about the world afterward?
>Are you constantly making little notes about your stories and archiving them for later review?
>How would you rate your grasp of writing mechanics and your knowledge of story archetypes?
>What about characterization and dialog?
>Have you ever used your writing abilities to design or customize a setting for a tabletop campaign?
>What about fanfiction, ever written a story in an established setting and received compliments from others that your depiction of those established characters was in-line with their personalities as shown in the original material?

With the best will in the world, get your head right. Learn to deal with stress without drugs, that will likely be the hardest part. Get clear of any chemical addictions you might have, and fight the mental addictions that you develop from "lesser" drugs.

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>>11318222
A friend of mine was addicted to painkillers in his early teens because he was hospitalized for a very long time. The doctors intended to keep him on painkillers for the rest of his life. He broke the addiction, and is in the same boat as you, desperately trying to find a stable job that will allow him to still have some fun. It's hard. But it's your life, and it's the only one you've got as far as we can find.

Looking back over this rambling, mildly incoherent soapbox speech, I don't think it's very persuasive. I'm sorry, it's all I've got. Maybe it'll help you, maybe it'll help someone who's lurking, maybe I'm wasting my time. If you're of a mind to, talk to a pastor about your problems. Not a cult leader, not a televangelist, someone who's in one of those little churches that seem to get scarcer all the time. They're cheaper than psychologists, and they're used to people coming to them with life problems. Might help.

Finally, in the hope of proving I'm not some deranged autistic who escaped /r9k/, here's a few videos from far more successful/intelligent people regarding the issues you've mentioned. First, this is Ross Scott, creator of Freeman's Mind (a long running series of machinima videos based on Half-Life) talking about living lean and patreon: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ohyB8V7Na_0

Secondly, Doctor Jordan Peterson is a professor of psychology at the University of Toronto. He's not a quack. He has some interesting videos about bringing order to your environment, why that is good for your mental health, and how that idea is largely overlooked in modern times even though it was critical to older, successful cultures. Here's a short one on "What to do if I don't have any goals": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EBgugeKaJa8

May you find some of this useful, anon.

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>>11318176
Yeah we're gonna have to scratch that, he says he doesn't take commissions.
I swear I'm starting to think these artists are allergic to money.
How is that people can get art done of shitting dick nipples but I can't find artists willing to work with me?
Grim said he'd take on another book cover project but I've not heard from him in a week, and the guy who was supposed to be doing Nazka character art flaked on me.

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>>11318276
This is probably a dumb idea, but...

Have you tried asking the artists who are willing to draw shitting dick nipples if they would be degenerate enough to draw wholesome Amazon-friendly femdom book covers? Serious question.

>>11318386

Yes he has. The ones who draw that get flocked to by everyone and commission queues longer than snek's request list.

Snek, please hurry. I need my daily fix.

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>>11318525

I'll give him some motivation with these bugs

>>11318386
I must have contacted thirty people at this point, and gotten a reply from maybe five.
It's a rare courtesy for an artist to even inform you that their commission slots are full or that they're not interested in my experience.

So far I've only met three people who will actually complete their assigned work. One of them is understandably never available because he's a pro (though he still found the time to do some free fanart for me, that guy's awesome).
Another went AWOL after completing a couple of projects for me and hasn't updated any of his pages in months.
Then there's Grim, who is a fucking miracle worker and produces the best art I've seen yet, but is frankly bad at communicating and will go for weeks at a time with no progress updates.

If there are commission guidelines then I follow them, I don't haggle and I pay what's asked, I usually give artists a choice of several projects to pick from, and I'm not asking for soul-destroying fetish porn. I don't know what I'm doing wrong.

>>11318525
Editing the update now.

>>11318659
What about the guy who did the Raz piece?

>>11318788
That's Morppus, he was a pleasure to work with but he stopped replying to emails and his FA and Tumblr haven't been updated in ten months.

>>11318831
If I stopped posting creative content online for that long, I think it would be reasonable to assume that I have died. Even if I can't put a piece of written work out by my deadline, I try to keep my readers updated on what's going on with my current projects.

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>>11318525
2000 word update, new content at "He pulled a measuring tape from his pocket "

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
New tags:
>kissing, long tongue

>>11319029
It seems to happen fairly frequently, I'm always hearing complaints that someone's favorite artist went AWOL for months, or up and deleted all of his work with no explanation.

>>11319065
i did that with my old pen name
i really would rather not be associated with a porn handle i came up with when i was 16/17

>>11315879
No. he was too much of a fag to shit himself

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>>11317261
Well fuck,Thank you all for the heart warming and thoughtful responses. I am might as well go ahead and say that I am Teether
https://pastebin.com/u/Teether
These are the first greens or stories I have ever written on a scale from 1-10 how horrible are they? I am going to switch to paragraph format soon because greens are a pain in the ass to write and I really don't like the whole line of perspective. Its too chunky
>>11317390
Thanks, I dunno if thats good advice for me but thanks for the support
>>11317486
>Amazon
Is amazon really a better market place than patreon? I thought amazon was flooded with garbage?
>cast a wide net
How would you suggest doing this? What websties work best for people starting from nothing?

Also, I really would like to do non-furry and non-smut stuff as well but I feel like thats the only way someone with no support behind them can get any readers. Should I make two accounts and two different pen names to keep furry/smut and normal stuff separate? Or is the world nicer than I believe and it wouldn't hurt to keep them together as to not split readers?

>>11317627
Thank you. I just turned 26. had severe depression since I was 13 so I am pretty use to this feeling. I just want to do something that makes me feel ok with life.
>>11318187
Thank you for the long post my fellow writefag.
>what have you written
see above
>Do you enjoy producing something through mental labor
As long as its creative and whisks me away. If its programming or excel than no
>what drives you other than escaping reality
Nothing really, escaping reality has kind of been my life. Ever since I was a child I spent most of my time reading books, playing video games, and day dreaming. I would spends hours and hours living in my head. Now I have pretty severe maladaptive daydreaming that I would say consists of 50-70% of my day
>job that doesn't make you suicidal?
was thinking about walking dogs since I love dogs though I wouldn't make much

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>>11319065
>demons are my fetish
What is this story about? Is it about demons? What are the other tags?

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>>11322672
It's about demons.
Tags so far are size difference, large breasts, kissing, long tongue.

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>>11322696
excellent. I knew being a lucy/shan/demoness poster would pay off at some point

>>11321784
Hey teether, its templar/grand marshal (>>11317627 me) and I know this might not mean much, but I'm praying for you.

I'm 27 myself and made hundreds of poor choices along the way. The best thing that happened to me was losing my job which forced me to finally gain the determination to improve my life instead of just surviving.

Like >>11318187 said, I would use writing as a creative outlet, not a day job. That said you need to find something you enjoy. Maybe walking dogs is the ticket for the short term until you figure things out.

And btw, I like your writing. I usually skip the smut so the fact I still look forward to your biker story goes to show how much I like your characters and world-building. You're good, and you've been a great help for me too.

My grandfather was an author, actually was friends with Tom Clancy. It took him years before writing could keep him afloat but once he got there I know he wouldn't trade it for the world.

Dreams can come true. It takes hard work and some sacrifice but don't give up man.

If you need someone to talk to let me know man. I'd love to be there for you.

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>>11322795
Thank you Templar. The response means a lot.
>instead of just surviving
ehh as cliche starving artist meme as it sounds, I am honestly happier not having much. As long as I have food and a place to sleep I am pretty content. Most of my entertainment is free or mostly anyway besides the internet (meditating, gardening, writing, listening to music). So I can do fine on a little for a long while. I am pretty much living on oats, eggs and coffee right now and I am pretty content with that.

>drugs
Unfortunately I really love drugs. Quitting drinking was extremely hard but I am doing ok. Everything else I do is not addictive (weed, MDMA, Shrooms) except for amphetamines (but those are harder to come by now and I am too lazy) so I am not too worried but I am trying to take a long hiatus. Drugs are great but they also can become wayyy too easy of a mental crutch and I want to stay away from that

>creative outlet, not a day job
The only problem I have with that is that I have told myself that multiple times. Each time I get a job my depression and suicidal thoughts significantly increase and all my motivation and creativity dies. Unfortunately, I know my mind and it is very All-or-Nothing. I either do something and I do it right or not at all.
I hate to sound like a whiny child but I really do have an a very visually crippling and lucid mind. I think it helps with the writing but it cripples me in day to day living like I said above. EX) I just came back from taking a shit and the whole time I was having a full on two way conversation with someone in my head out loud. I never really realize that I am doing this and often catch myself mid conversation to remind myself that its not real just like the constant day-dreaming. Maybe I am just being a child but this shit makes it hard for me to grasp and care about most of reality. I've been confused and lost in my head my entire life. I am just thinking maybe I should put one of my onlystrengthstouseevenifitispathetic

>>11323083
sorry for the ventdump y'all

>>11323083
>living on oats, eggs and coffee right now
Add some frozen vegetables so you don't get scurvy. They're easy to cook in a microwave.

>>11323083
you ever try acid? only drug i've tried, but it clears up my depression.
and microdosing helps with my concentration a bit.

>>11323083

>whole time I was having a full on two way conversation with someone in my head out loud.
Holy shit, I do the same thing. Pretty embarrassing when you get caught too.

Anyway, by day job I mean a day job doing something you still find enjoyable. Maybe something non-intensive and part time where you can still jot down notes for ideas as they come to you or whatever.

Ultimately though it's your choice. Just make sure you're happy, life is ment to be enjoyed.

Keep writing man, I'd love to see what you put out.

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>>11323205
This. They're also cheap as fuck.

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>>11323207
Yes I have done acid a couple times. Last time I got I used it was Nbomb and i had really intense flashbacks for about half a year pretty constantly and everything tasted like burnt popcorn and melted death.

I don't do acid anymore. Its too risky because of all the mystery chems now in days just like the xany pressers and I am too lazy to use test kits.

Dude don't microdose acid. Acid's great but there comes a point where it begins to really affect your day-to-day. I've know enough people who microdose and they can get through life just fine but there personalities are completely out of touch with reality ex)crystals, chakara, spoopy fairy shit. Not a great idea. I did micro dose for a while with shrooms but I felt like I couldn't feel strong emotions anymore so I stopped.

Being high constantly is not a great idea in the long run. Its a bandage, not a solution.

>>11323228
>life is meant to be enjoyed
I've spent too much time hating myself and my life. I think I need to go at this full force. I have hope in myself that if I fail I will adapt. I might want to die constantly but I always am willing to adapt. Thank you once again. I am hoping to have chapter 8 of ABH out either by tonight or tomorrow. Luckily for you the rest of the story is pretty much going to be plot and moving scenes until the end. I don't really plan on putting in anymore smut scenes as It would be really out of place. Hopefully, I can make it worth everyone's time and attention. Regardless, thank you

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>>11323308
i was doing that for a while but frozen broccoli and vegmed get old really quick.

I just made some hobo stew with a bunch of old canned shit I found in the back of one of my cabinets.Cross your fingers it doesn't taste like shit but I consider myself a half-decent cook. Spices and condiments are life savors

>>11323315
i just use a grey market analogue which is relatively risk free
i think the problem is a lot of people use acid and let it affect their perception, ie they view what they experience as legitimate and meaningful

>>11323346
one of my favorite meals is rice with brocolli and cheese on top, microwaved
pretty good

>>11323315
Looking forward to it.

I myself might have chapter 5 of my own story out tomorrow, after redoing parts of 3 and 4 from your feedback it's coming along a lot better. Thanks for that.

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>>11323426
>they view what they experience as legitimate and meaningful
I mean it is legitamite and meaningful. Its just that tripping shows you abstract concepts that don't fit well with reality. Its when those people think that tripping is "the real reality" and everything here is fake that they really go off the deep end. Thats when you have people screaming that the machine elves are real and we just can't see them because were not woke AF

>>11323432
no problem


Do any writefags here know if you can do a cheap setup for something that won't destroy your back? I'd prefer to lay down and look up so my spine didn't feel like crumbling. Is there anything I could adhoc on the cheap (pic related but not related obviously. That shit costs way too much money)

inb4 "mmmm please sit on my face" and other grandma's boy references

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>>11323426
>rice, brocolli and cheese
no spices or sauces?

>>11323488
It really isn't. It doesn't show you anything, it just reduces you to an infantile state where you feel like everything is profound.
It's -useful- in that it mentally incapacitates you to the point where you can view things objectively, ie reform negative opinions on things, but it does not provide any new knowledge.

>>11323544
Just salt sometimes. I don't use a ton of rice, so the brocolli and cooked cheese (it kind of fries a bit) add a ton of flavor as is.

>>11323607
I think its less that it provides you new knowledge and more that it allows you to open up your perspective. It helps you see things from a lot of other angles hence the "Were all one living being man" feeling

>just salt
maybe my tastebuds are dead by that just seems too bland for me. I need shit tons of hot sauce to taste anything anymore

>>11323764
it kind of resets your perspective to the point where everything feels new and you're able to re-evaluate things
but all it can really do is change your feelings on things
there is no outside knowledge being gained - you will gain nothing that didn't already exist in your mind

>>11323488
Concerning the chair thing, the cheapest way to help is to get/modify a chair to support your entire back and head. Then raise your monitor up high enough you can lean back a little.

Do you have a desktop or a laptop?

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>>11323964
ehh. I don't think thats really true. I've definitely had some pretty earth shattering and pronounced personal revelations. Just because the information was in your mind doesn't mean you were conscious to it. Psych help make things you felt were complicated seem obvious and trivial. Its still teaches you a lot of things. EX) you may read the sentence "A crowded stadium full of millions of cheering people" and think that you understand what a crowded stadium is like even though you only know it superficially. Acid is like being actively in the crowded stadium and experiencing the enormity of the crowd first hand. At least thats what it felt like to me.

>>11324794
laptop. wouldn't modifying a chair just bring the same problems other than post-poning the pain for a bit because your bodies' weight is still laying on the base of your spine and ass?

>>11325370
>>11323488
Exercise to strengthen the muscles of your core and back will help reduce pain. Improving your posture also helps. It doesn't change the fact that you're sitting for X hours a day, but it makes it more tolerable.

>>11323083
>MDMA
MDMA's well-known for worsening or even causing depression. The mechanics are too complicated to describe here, but basically the way it creates its effects makes it so your brain needs to re-create a bunch of chemicals it needs, including several that are important for stabilizing mood.

I can't say that I know enough about your situation to say anything definite, but it couldn't hurt to use them less frequently and see what happens. At the very least, know that you're not alone and we'll be right behind you every step of the way.

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>>11317261
>>11317486
D here.

I'm trying to make this work while ALSO having a real job that eats up a lot of time. But /efg/ made me realize that I would sometimes go weeks without writing a word, and I didn't know why. Why was I avoiding something that I enjoy so much?

I might not have enough 'spunk' to actually write as a job. Sometimes, the words come in a trickle, and I barely get 250 out in a day. I want to give myself a daily word goal, but there are plenty of days where I can only bang out something fast before I go to sleep.

If I were to lose my job, maybe I'd focus on writing exclusively. But I've had a job consistently since high school. But lately, I've written 70,000 words in Grande Futapest Hotel alone, and that started in January. It feels good. I don't know if I want to make writing erotica my career, but it might be the only door left open.

Maybe it's a dream. Maybe I'll never get paid for writing anything but intensely silly smut. Maybe I'm hoping we can make some wishes out of airplanes.

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I have an idea for a story, possibly a multi-parter, about a pair of bisexual adventurer girls in a fantasy setting. They're long time best friends, but are not a couple. Their dynamic would best be described as girls who experimented in college, sometimes with each other, and have stayed close ever since. So, while they're not a couple and both prefer sex with men, they're open to anything that sounds like fun.
That being said, their sexuality and sexploits would only be part of their characters. I'd write it more as a fantasy adventure story with explicit sex than a smut story with adventure aspects tacked on.

My current plan is for them to both be humans in a world of elves, dragons, and orcs. They're from the same village and both left because a life of danger and excitement sounded better than getting married off to random villagers. In terms of skill, they developed their ability to kick ass after leaving home, so any story set soon after they leave will have them be awkward and someone incompetent.

Anyway, I'm looking for ideas as to what "class" or fighting style to give each of them. I want to avoid the usual warrior + mage dynamic, but I'm also worried about making them too similar. While I could always make their dynamic similar to that of Xena and Gabriella, I'm leaning much more towards them being equal partners.
So, anyone have ideas? Should either or both be magic users? Should they be a pair of lovable rogues (D&D class pun intentional)?

Maybe have one be a summoner (since they needed "help" when they first started out, also options for monster sex) and the other a ranger/sneaky type?

Also, while I do have a few stories planned out, I'm always up for plot ideas. Doubly so for side characters, pairings, and sex scenes.

Picture not really related.

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>>11288474
>>11295086
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4CThkYfEjcI
>I was chillin', chillin', like strawberry fillin',
>but you better change me now or I'll turn into a villain!
>I'll scream! I'll shout! I'll cry, and I'll pout!
>I'm stuck inside this diaper so let me out!
>You can tell that it's fresh,
>there's still a little steam,
>and I might have a rash so use the diaper rash cream!

>>11332632
Read "I Roved Out In Search Of Truth and Love", it's pretty similar to what you're after.

>>11332995
So it's already been done?
Fuck. That's really discouraging.

>>11333448
If you think about it, just about every imaginable story has already been done.

>>11333533
"Nothing new under the sun," eh?
Still, I don't ready want to do something singular to an ongoing, current work.

Snek, is there an update coming tonight?

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>>11334890
Yes, and every night!
I'm half way done, will probably be a couple more hours.

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>>11334951
Write faster snek, I need my fix.

I'm the one who posted that frost giant idea in the last thread. I'm still not quite sure what medium it should be, but I did flesh the idea out a bit more

I'm honestly surprised it hasn't been done yet, but Goddamn but I/a few folks could really use some futa!Zelda not even being able to handle Link's unreasonable trap outfits and delivering wholesome but gal-in-charge powerdrilling mutual defloation now that they're not on a timer or freeze
Outdoor stuff and cuddling would really be the best shit, FWIW

>>11335456
I could've sworn I saw several doujins just like that.

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>>11335289
>>11334890
2000 word update, new content at "S-So what happens now?"

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
New tags:
>biting

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>>11336158
>let me teach you to sin

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AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>11288422
Fulfilling request >>11206981 from T#31.
>I'd like to read a story about a female soldier visiting a beastman brothel and being ravaged by a pair of muscular beastmen. Please and thank you.

Title: Young Bulls in the Oldest Profession

Pairings: M (beastman)/F (human)/M (beastman), F/F (mention, human), F/M/F (mention, human)

Character/Appearance Tags: adventurer-warrior (female), muscle (male, female), piercings [ear, navel, tongue] (male), formal attire (male), armor (female)

Sex Tags: consensual, prostitution (male), foreplay, simultaneous penetration (vaginal, oral), pregnant (minor, non-main character), milking (minor, non-main character), footjob (mention), public use (mention)

Summary:
>A heroic female adventurer, frustrated by soft men and unsatisfying nights, seeks sexual fulfillment. When another female warrior tells her about a brothel whose beastmen have satisfied her every time, she is skeptical but willing to investigate. To her disappointment, the staff are polite, courteous, and well-groomed... leaving her quite surprised that they know their business!

Wordcount: 2850 odd.

>Link: https://pastebin.com/0HsXtGBp
Pastebin set to two-week expiration.

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>>11338577
Personally found request for consensual sex in a brothel environment with beastmen interesting, have not seen much content with that blend of themes in either graphic or text-based media. Attempted to show that the beastmen sex workers hold an air of professionalism. A beastly appearance does not have to mean a lack of the skill, good judgment, and polite behavior that is expected from a person who is trained to do a job well. Intended this concept as an inversion of usual attitudes exhibited by beastmen (dumb, undisciplined) while retaining their core traits (animalistic, aggressive). To the beastmen, rutting customers is a job.

Well, using Chris Rock's definition, this is a "career" in their eyes. For reference:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5gsFXZSxEr8

Retaining the beastmen's savage nature instead of presenting them as "elves in costumes" was a core focus. Challenging, also the motivation for taking this prompt. Originally had much more content planned, both sexual and character development. During draft review, realized this story could stretch closer to eight-thousand words if full outline followed. Due to other outstanding writing commitments, time did not permit this. Also, word was given last thread that the story would be delivered in this thread, and the thread is near over. Efforts were instead made to refocus the story on its core premise: Female warrior and two beastmen.

Hope this work is satisfactory to the requester. Feedback much appreciated, particularly regarding the erotic content in this story. Am currently editing the erotic content in other stories, so critique on this work would strengthen those as well.

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>>11318525
>>11335289
>Snek, please hurry
>Write faster snek
>I need my fix
Why does this bring Chuck Berry's Run Rudolph Run to mind?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4UyaFRhs7U

>>11312527
>because there's no /awoo/ and hasn't been for like a week
>>11289200
>since /yeen/ died
Are these other writethreads with specific purposes on /trash/? Were they sunk or deleted by moderator activity, or simply pruned due to lack of interest? This should be of interest to this thread, since strengthening the case that writethreads result in new quality content is always beneficial... and also, if these threads were deleted even in /trash/, they may be canaries in the coal mine for this thread. Perhaps it is paranoid to think that writethreads might be evicted even from /trash/, but personally believe that greater vigilance is needed now, not less.

Also, welcome to all new writers who trickle in from these no longer active threads!

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>>11336158
Wew, the whole buildup of this story made this part 10x lewder.

>>11338607
some threads on /trash/ have generals to which writefags hang around in moreso than here (usually specific fandoms like /tlhg/, /pfg/) and so forth, though they're not specifically for writers. They come and go, but sometimes a general will die because of declining interest, so they pop by here. Since this thread is for all writing purposes and not just a specific fandom, it usually gets slower rep.

I'd advise against advertising the thread on other threads in /trash/ though. While shilling may not be banned, it does get people mad, especially if unasked.

beep

>>11340707
it is definetly the former.
See uh, oh the sticky on /d/ is gone.
See http://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/7509079/#7509079

>>11340707
That is the most horrifying image I have even seen in my entire life. It chills my spine and sends rivets of cold sweat falling line rain across my flesh. My eyes dilate as though I stare at the sun, but like a Lovecraft character locking eyes with a cosmic horror, I cannot look away. Vomit induced by disgust and fear threatens to choke me from the inside out even as my sphincter tightens enough to barely contain the roiling mass that is my loosened, quaking bowels. Never before and hopefully never again shall I witness the terror I now see before me. The mere thought of this image shall haunt my nightmares and waking days for all eternity. No pain or trauma or shock could ever hope to rival this Stygian horror, this Chtonian abomination, this blight against God and man.

I now welcome the calming embrace of oblivion, or even the warm comfort of the deepest pit of hell. Truly, the end is nigh and the apocalypse of Armageddon cannot come soon enough. There is no use in prayer, for we are already lost.

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>>11289200
Teether here. I just updated chapter 8 on ABH.Hopefully I'll have the ninth out in a couple days.From this point forward until the end of the story, the plot is going to focus mostly on action,plot, and movement instead strictly on smut. I hope thats ok with you all and I hope I don't disappoint anyone with the direction of the story. Would love to hear your feedback or just general questions. Thank you all

>Anywhere But Here [human(m)xmultiple hyena(f),violence, femdom, smut, pseudo-penis, intersex, romance, drug use]

https://pastebin.com/u3k83bNp (PART 1 CH1-5)

https://pastebin.com/NefkP7gz (PART 2 CH 6,7,8-
UNFINISHED)

(General Profile, Teether)
https://pastebin.com/u/Teether

You never know. I went to high school with one of the penny arcade guys. At the time, I didn't see how you could make money with a comic that only video game players would get, need an expensive computer and Internet connection to read, and they gave away for free. I was wrong. So there's hope.

Are there any other amateur writing outlets/forums on the internet that are worth your time or have a non toxic community?

>>11338607
there isn't enough gay or straight werewolf art to justify a constant /awoo/

something that was decided while I was out, which is cool but I wish I was there to see it so I wasn't confused.

if anybody has any requests involving werewolves I'm still looking for a request to take.

>>11288474
NEVER EVER

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>>11333448
>>11332995
Coincidentally also the title of my upcoming autobiography.

>>11342466
>if anybody has any requests involving werewolves I'm still looking for a request to take.
How about an extremely lewd human girl taking advantage of a gay werewolf couple's heterocuriousity to seduce them into a hard core bisexual threesome?

>>11338577
What other things are you working on at the moment, may I ask?

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>>11343560
One bisexual knotting coming up soonishly

>>11343914
You probably have this in mind already, but I'm gonna specifically ask for the girl getting knotted in both holes and being stuck in a cuddle sandwich between the boyfriends as a result, if that's fine with you

>>11343907
A shockingly wholesome werewolf story, a slow burn war romance, and a story about a guy and a lizardgirl finding love despite the spectre of communism that is haunting them in particular and their world more generally

>>11344234
no I was actually thinking of finishing them M>M>F with the more masc woof knotting the more subby woof who is in turn knotting the grill but I will change my plans to that instead

>>11344273
I see. Keeping busy, then.

There anything that particularly influences what requests you take?

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>>11343914
You don't have to post cropped porn on /trash/ mein neger.

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>>11344675
it was the closest thing I had to hand

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>>11344754

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>>11344840
the thing has a plan

soon it will exist as a full story

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>>11335289
Please refrain from haranguing creators for new content, especially if they're one that updates frequently anyway. It's nice to let creators know that you appreciate and look forward to their work, but when you get to the point of begging it's obnoxious.

>>11335456
90% certain I've seen a story or two like that on AO3. Try checking there.

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>>11338590
>>11338577
It's nicely written, no obvious grammar or syntax issues, good usage of language and some amusing phrases. Occasionally analogies drift on a little too long, but it never feels too unnatural or in need of change. My main problem with it is that it's so short. Exposition takes up so much of the story that it loses the chance to build all the eroticism and intimacy that a smutpiece relies on. It abruptly cuts from the backstory directly into the middle of sex with no chance to be worked into it, and since the exposition portion isn't exactly arousing, I didn't find myself particularly invested in the sex.

More pointedly, the sex scene was too much 'tell' and not enough 'show' for my tastes, and felt too rushed to be properly enjoyable. Only five paragraphs in the last third of the story with no real shown foreplay or seduction means there's simply not enough space to draw the reader into the sex itself. Similarly, what is there doesn't focus on any one act in particular, trying to fit as broad a description into the space it has, but doesn't have enough room to make any one thing especially memorable.

If it had been closer to the 8k mark, I think it would have had enough time to flesh out the actual smut portion of the story and build more depth but, as you said, time is the enemy and not every story can be as long as it wants to be. As it is, there's just not enough there to satisfy me, but it's well written enough to bring me back if it were ever expanded.

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>>11288474
>requesting the same thing for 2 years
I... I didn't know it was possible to be THIS autistic.

>>11340877
I like where this is going.

>>11342388
seconding this guys question.

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Anyone feel like writing a slicefic about a sexy anthro Dalmatian male who's just moved into an apartment complex of a busy city?
I've got some ideas of my own but it'd be p cool to get someone else's take on it.

>>11340877
One nitpicky thing though, when the main character goes to fire the uzi, instead of
>click click click
it would only "click" once. Automatic weapons like the uzi use the recoil of a fired round to actuate the bolt. so if it's unloaded or doesn't have a round chambered nothing is going to make those extra "clicks"

Even then, pulling the trigger on a weapon that presumably already has the hammer down/decocked/whatever usually doesn't make any sound really. especially an incredibly simple open bolt design like the uzi.

Hollywood makes the same terrible mistakes so it's not like most people care, but still.

Sorry for the autistic rant. Good stuff man.

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>>11336514
>>11339113
2500 word update, new content at "She locked him in an upside down kiss"

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
New tags:
>blowjob, denial, teasing

>>11349001
There are/were requests in the drawthre/a/d that have been posted every single thread for years too. IIRC there was a request about Kaiji and the girl from Escaflowne that showed up for something like 2.5 years before it finally got filled. Then there's the autists who get deliveries and continue to request the exact same thing, often without thanking or even acknowledging the artist who delivered for them. They're universally reviled. New drawfags usually fall into the mistake of delivering for them and the whole thread gets pissed off because so and so got a picture of his waifu in a striped bikini for the fifth time.

>>11349125
>slicefic
Is that supposed to be a weird shorthand for slice of life?

>>11350115
>weird
well the only other thing I could think of was solfic but I don't wanna jinx myself into being shit outta luck if ya know what I mean haha
but yeah it's a slice of life

>>11349964
https://exhentai.org/s/decee3e027/914118-161
from page 161 to 186 should interest you and be relevant

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>>11350541
That link seems to go to the Spanish translation of MORAL HAZARD ~Haitoku no Kyoudan~. Pic related.

>>11350690
that seems to be a you issue because the link is going to the right place for me

>>11350690
Link works for me too.

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>>11350690
>>11350705
>>11350719
Alternate source: https://hitomi.la/reader/914118.html#161
DOGGYMAGGY by kemonono

>>11332632
Just because something has been done before doesn't mean you shouldn't try to make it new. I like the stuff you've written so far and I can already see a bunch of new ways to take the story. So feel free to take any bits of my insomnia induced brainstorming and do what you want with them.

>Summoner
When I read this I thought of the summoner as a sort of aged up Megumin from Konosuba. She has incredible summoning abilities but can only summon one monster per day before she uses up all her mana and passes out. She usually tries to summon small monsters but due to plot reasons (too much magic in her system, not understanding how her magic works, ect) the spell gets out of control and she summons something way bigger than necessary but still equipped to handle the job. Said summoned beast, hero, or other being will follow her instructions most of the time, but depending on their experience or skill they might turn the summoning magic against her.

Since this is a lewd story you could have the summoning spell cause the caster to instantly become intensely aroused, resulting in dickings from the summoned monster. Heck you could make it funny by making the summoner's default personality prudish but once she summons a monster she becomes aroused to the point where she tries to force herself on the monster, despite it wanting to go back to wherever it came from. Another option would be that the summoning spell drains mana and increases arousal in proportion to the summon duration, so the summoner gets more aroused the longer she keeps the summoned monster around. Seriously theres a bunch you can do with this one and imo it's the best.

>>11352839
>>11332632

>Partner
Not sure what class would work best as a companion to the summoner but here are a few suggestions
*Battle mage: Perhaps a student of the came school as the above character but one learned how to cast both "fireball" and "fist" at the same time. Perhaps she's a nympho, to the disgust of the previous character, or maybe she's the dominant female 'I'll sit on your face and you WILL eat me out' type.
*Paladin: Knight of some holy order who takes it upon herself to remain pure. Could be cursed so that she always winds up naked in every fight or so she's almost always winds up getting dicked for some reason. Could also hate magic and encourage her friend to not cast spells unless they are in dire need.
*Amazon: could have been adopted into the village. Supernaturally strong and buff, but also really sweet.

And thats all I got dude. I really hope ya decide to take this concept up. It's really neat.

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>>11350917
>>11350541
Nice, that's actually pretty close to what I imagined.

Change up some of the fur placement and make her a bit thiccer, and that'd be pretty much spot on.

I'm in talks with a new artist about getting some more book covers done, maybe I'll try to get some Nahash art if he's up to it. I'll keep you guys updated.

>>11288474
>>11290917
new bet
$100,000 both of these autists post their requests next thread

Up

>>11353928
Harsh, don't you think?
>>11290917 seems polite about all this, the toots request isn't even at the top of the thread this time. I'm all for a good hatefest, but with all the recent activity someone might actually write those stories if the askers are polite. Not like anyone can do anything if they keep posting. At least they aren't posting the same request a couple times each thread.

If it really bothers you that much, maybe petition the mods to let writethreads back on /d/ again?

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>>11352839
>>11352888
Thank you for the input.

Interesting ideas. The summoner idea in particular is more smut-centered than my original concept for the story, but if I end up going in that direction I could see it maybe working something like that.
>Konosuba
I honestly don't understand why people like that series so much. The humour falls flat for me, and I've never managed to watch or read it long enough to see the blonde sword lady introduced.

Don't know if I ever would have thought of issuing an amazon-type for the friend, so thank you for the idea.

>I like the stuff you've written so far
Might I ask who you think I am?
I haven't posted a story since /d/.

Pic unrelated, but amusing

does anyone have the Tara strong and Lauren faust fapfic where they're in a convention sucking some anon off? The pastebin link died

>>11355720
Using, not issuing. Why do I even bother on this phone?

>>11355651
>polite
One of them completely flipped their shit earlier in the thread and ate up half of the post. If he can do that, so can the other. They signed their own graves

>>11355933
The hateboner is strong in this one

new thread
>>11356325