>/yeen/ - HYENA THREAD 3 >"WHY DID YOU FUCKS LET

>>11124549
>let it die
it was past bump limit and fell off page 10

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>>11124596
In that case, why not make a new one?

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>>11124620
because you made one

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>>11124624
Can't argue with that. I'll just dump some yeens until more anons show up.

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>>11124813

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>>11124813
Red lurker, standing by

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>>11124892

I will be lurking this thread for as long as it takes to get the rest of that prison story.

To tide us over until the real writefags arrive, here's a new green I'm working on about what happens when a hyena girl gets a crush on Anon.
>Math class has been going on forever
>You're bored and starving, and 100% done with your stupid teacher
>She's droning on and on about quadratic equations, which bore the shit out of you
>By the time you actually get a job, you won't use any of this crap because you'll have a calculator anyways
>Just as you're about to fall asleep, the bell rings
>At last, math class is over; time for lunch
>If there's one thing in this shitty school that's good, it's the food.
>Anthros gotta have their protein
>Which means meat is on the menu every day
>Your buddy catches up with you
>"Hey Anon," he squawks, "can I copy your chemistry homework?"
>Fucking Ethan, such a chancer
"Sure thing, bird-brain, but you're doing my math homework next week, faggot."
>The crow seems relieved, drooping a little bit
>"Aww thanks pal. You really did me a solid."
"Don't mention it."
>You're walking straight to the canteen. It's normally a little risky in the first couple of minutes of lunch in a mostly-anthro school, but you're starving and willing to bust out the sharp elbows to get food sooner
>Ethan's giggling a little
>"So uhh, did I tell you what happened yesterday with Eloise?"
"Lemme guess, she shot you down again?"
>He gives you a shit-eating grin
>"Nuh-uh! We're going out for coffee this weekend!"
>You grin back. Cool, the little nerd got some success for once
"Not bad, maybe you'll actually get to lose your hand-holding virginity one of these days"
>He chuckles
>"So what about you, dude?"
>Fuck.
>Now you're going to look uncool as shit.
>Not that you had much of a chance anyways, you're a nerd that hangs around with fucking Ethan in the library or computer labs every recess, and then goes home to shitpost before bed
>About the closest you get to a love life is-

>>11125383
>CRASH!
>Oh fuck, speak of the devil.
>Three tall hyena girls are standing in front of you and Ethan in the corridor
>The crash comes from the leader, smacking her hand into the lockers in front of you
>Her name is Athena.
>She's over six foot tall, clad in a leather jacket and a Misfits shirt, her short shock of dark hair featuring dyed streaks of red and blue. She has a set of headphones around her thick, fluffy neck.
>And she's staring directly at you, her not-so-secret crush.
>She licks her lips.
>"Crow, fuck off." she says, not taking her eyes off you for a second
>Ethan is only too happy to oblige, and he scurries off, tail quite literally between his legs
>She moves in a little closer, you can start to smell her and hear the heavy metal blaring from her headphones
"U-uh, H-hi Athena..."
>Athena growls at you, and with her thugs flanking her, you decide not to make any further comment
>"Don't give me that shit. Why didn't you sit with me in math today?"
>Is this bitch serious
"Because you scare the shit out of me?"
>You kinda blurted that out without thinking, but it must be something she's into, because she giggles
>"You little tease."
>Athena crosses the distance between you two, putting both hands besides your head, pressing her body against you
>She's close enough that she could steal your first kiss if she wanted to
>She stinks of feminine musk and cigs, and her breath smells of cheap whisky
>Despite this, you don't often have girls close to you, the attention is nice - aaaand yep, that's a boner.

>>11125396
>There's no way she wouldn't notice something like that when she's this close to you
>She licks her lips again, and gives you a predatory grin
>"You're free this weekend, aren't you, nerd?"
>Well, she's not wrong, you are a nerd, and you have got fuck-all to do
"Y-yeah, I'm free..."
>Her grin widens, and she licks your cheek, making you shudder
>"Good. You, me, and your little friend..." - she gives your growing tent a quick grope, making you moan softly - "...meet outside the Starbucks at 12 tomorrow. I'll leave the girls at home. Don't be late."
>With that, Athena releases you, and swaggers off. One of the other yeens chuckles as they follow her off. "You gon get laid, bitchboy~"

Thoughts? Shall I write more?

>>11125402
fun fact, for spotted hyenas presenting an erection is a sign of submission

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>>11125588
Oh I'm aware of that

>>11125402
Go ahead and write more, I enjoyed this little snippet. I mean, I'll probably stop reading it like most of these stories. Only reason I'm still here is waiting for more Bast, but even that has it's limits.

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Man the thread is molasses today

>>11125904
people from the last thread have wake up/get off work/find their way here still

>>11125904
>>11125927
Or still sleeping

>>11125638
REalizing how this sounds I want to elaberate. I wasn't saying your writing was bad, it's just that most of these stories go with having the psuedo acting as an actual penis and that triggers me so bad.

I mean, I like dominant women and anthros, even futa, but just can't stand the psuedo being used as a real one. I mean, it's called a psuedo-penis for a reason, because it's a fake and doesn't work that way.

>>11126672
Anatomical!
I understand how that might be a little annoying after awhile.
Rest assured I wasn't going to do that with Bast, I'm a stickler for anatomy and physiology.
Now given that, I will say hyena anatomy does seem like it would be able to do interesting things.
I would write more, but I need to see my doctor. Crooked spinal shit. I might need a goddamn posture brace. Fuck.

>>11126984
I specifically wanted Bast to be different from the other stories I saw.

>>11126984
Has nice as your stories are for us don't neglect any medical shit or attention on our accounts.
Also some spine advice, don't keep your wallet in your back pocket when you sit. The angle it makes take, especially with thicker wallets, will fuck you up later down the road.

>>11127033
>dubs don't lie
Well it's a good thing I hate putting stuff in my pants then.
I prefer jackets with pockets. Or something.

>>11125402
Holy fuck more. MORE

>>11125402
Very nice!

>>11125402
This has outstanding potential to turn extremely cute

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All these bullybait Hyenas. Whew lad

>>11128825
Bullies.

/thread

Yeens are smelly and should be bullied more.

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>>11129986
Look who's talkin', smoothskin. You reek of the shitty cheap deodorant you put on this mornin'. Don't worry, I know a few girls who'd be more than willin' to give you a nice musk bath, sissyboy.

>>11130089
>lollipop as surrogate cigarette
this will never not look stupid

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lol

>>11130400
why is the teacher an ant or some other bug shit

>>11130450
he's a small-souled bugman

>>11130563
What did they mean by this?

>>11125402
Welp, I wrote a whole lot more of this.
>It's Saturday, and the time is about 10am
>You've got a date
>Dragging yourself out of bed you wonder what she was thinking
>Athena has never been very subtle, so why's she asking you out on a date?
>From what you know of hyenas, they don't normally act that way, preferring the more direct approach
>Then again, that was based on internet porn, so it probably wasn't exactly accurate
>Either way, you're not about to end up on the shitlist of a hyena bully who's much bigger than you
>No showing is out of the question
>You hit the shower, and once clean pick an outfit
>She only asked you for coffee, so you might as well just go with the usual
>You pick out some nerdshit graphic tee and tight jeans, not exactly fashionable but that's how she sees you day-to-day so whatever
>And with that you head out, head still buzzing with thoughts of what lays ahead
>You get into town uneventfully, just about on the dot 12pm
>Athena is here
>Sure enough, she's dressed the same as always, her ragged leather jacket is still in place, she's swapped out the Misfits shirt for a Maiden one
>Those skinny jeans don't look familiar though, she looks good in them
>She spots you and gives a grin with more than a few teeth
>"Hey cute stuff."
>She grabs you in a bear hug, burying you in her substantial chest
>She still stinks, though her breath doesn't seem to smell of whisky today
>Does she only drink at school or something?
"H-hey Athena, you look great"
>That's not a lie, the jeans really accentuate her toned legs
>She lets out a happy yip and squeezes you even tighter, almost lifting you up
>"You little flatterer, we're gonna have some fun today"
"Haha, y-yeah"
>You're not used to her being *this* touchy, sure she likes to tease you but she's never bear-hugged you before
>Full spaghetti mode engaged
>"C'mon, let's go get some coffee."
>She finally releases you, then gives you a wink

>>11131487
>"I see you brought your little friend along, just like I told ya," she says, looking downwards
>Fuck's sake Athena
>Once again, close contact with a girl was too much for your virgin body, and you've erected a little tent
>You can feel the heat rising to your face and you hang your head in embarrassment
>Athena holds out her front paws and takes your hands in them
>Oh shit, there goes the hand-holding virginity
>"C'mon bitch, ain't nothing to be frightened of. I won't bite... much."
>She squeezes your hands gently
>Harsh words, gentle heart, you guess
>Releasing one hand, she leads you into Starbucks
>"Don't worry cutie, I'm buying. Let's get some food too, I'm starving."
>Sure why not, Starbucks isn't exactly the classiest but it's ok
>Plus if she's buying, you don't want to be a little shit and make her pay too much
>Cha-ching, one quick trip to the counter later, and you're sitting at a table with a panini and a mocha
>Athena went for an espresso and a toastie
>She's chowing down on it, and with no manners whatsoever starts talking while eating
>"So, I read on the net humans prefer to go on a date before doing stuff."
>Seriously!?
>You raise an eyebrow
"So what you're telling me is that this is for my benefit?"
>She chuckles, and swallows the bite of her toastie
>"Totally. If you were a yeen boy, we'd be fucking already."
>You almost choke on your panini and she slaps you on the back, laughing out loud
>Some of the other customers are staring at you
>They're a mixed bunch, mostly human with a few anthros, which is pretty rare. Most anthros don't like coffee, though, so you don't tend to see too many in coffee shops
>Fully in control of the situation and without a single fuck given, Athena sits back in her chair, hand over the back of it, and downs her espresso in one
>She meets the stares of the other customers with a cool, toothy grin and eye contact
>They quit staring soon enough

>>11131508
>So now she's able to turn her attention to you, and give you that grin instead
>She reaches over and traces a finger round the rim of your coffee cup
>"So, cutie, you ever 'date' a yeen before?"
>What kind of Chad Thundercock does she take you for
"Uhh, no, not before you."
>She cocks her head
>"Really? Just about every other yeen girl in the school wants you. They only backed off because they're scared of me."
>Ok, she has to be lying
>You snort in disbelief
"Somehow I don't believe that."
>She cups your chin in her paw, gently lifts your head, makes eye contact with you
>Wow, she has pretty eyes
>Despite that grin never having left her face, she looks sincere
>"Anon, you're cute as fuck."
>You can feel your face heating up again
>She's the biggest bully in the school, she has a reputation for a reason, and here she is being gentle with you- ohfuckshesclosingthedistance
>Your lips meet hers, and with her hands cradling your face you've no hope of escape
>There goes the first kiss, too
>She's holding back, being a little gentle with you, but you can tell she wants more

And now I'm going to do a ruthanon and sleep because I'm exhausted.

>>11131533
Cute and adorable.

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[Teether here, the last thread died before I could get a response to an anon who gave me feed back on ABH. If your still here anon here's my response]

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>>11108738
>the characters
Yeah I far as the characters go I'd agree with your assessment. Angel is probably my least favorite character of the four. A lot of the shallowness of her character came through the fact that she's not supposed to be particularly bright. Her character is supposed to be very superstitious,very sweet, but hollow headed . This lead to a lacking character and dialogue. Its not a good excuse for a poor character but its all I got. I am wondering if rewriting her character from the ground up would be a good idea.

As far as Riley goes, she was both intentionally and unintentionally made as a flat character. Her character is supposed be the stable figure of discipline that all the other varied characters hinged on to hold their shit together. Originally, the story was only going to be the first part but then I liked it enough to continue. So some of her flatness comes from being written as means to Twigs end of being plowed for a short story. I was planning on fleshing out her character a little bit closer to the end but I am still thinking about the details behind it.

I am still amazed at the fact that people other than me like Mace. She is an exceptionally "traditionally unattractive" character with a very harsh, realist personality. I loved her from the moment I created her but I honestly thought she was going to have an extremely negative response.

>technical
could you go into greater detail about the formatting, grammar, and spelling issues I had? I proof read the story while extremely high and I might have done a messier job than I thought.

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>>11134862
(cont)
>bad bits
You sad there were bad bits that dragged the story down. Could you give me examples of where you thought that happened?

I really am happy your took the time to read the story and write out detailed feedback for me. Thank you. It helps me get a better feel of how good or bad I am fucking up

>>11108738
>any way I can keep posted other than /yeen/

All I really have right now is my pastebin profile, any other suggestions for sites etc.

https://pastebin.com/u/Teether

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>>11126672
I use the anthro pseudo-peen as a regular peen in my stories because it allows more sexual flexibility when typing a smut segment.

Also, having the ability to switch from max submissive to max dominant with the changing genitals appeals a lot to me as a bisexual.

I know its "anatomically incorrect" but hey its fantasy and thats how I like doing it.

I think a lot of people hate it just like you but I am going to stick to what makes me feels right to me when writing.

Hopefully, when I get more time I'll make a more traditional hyena smut writing but well see.

>>11130391
drugs are bad mmkay?

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tfw no cute pictures of fluffs

>>11130391
I just like to imagine it makes her taste a little sweet as she's ramming her tongue down your throat.

>>11136529
Hey man, not asking you to change just telling you that it doesn't appeal to me personally. I really hope that my post wouldn't make you stop writing the story the way you wanted, I mean shit, I'd feel bad at that point.

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>>11136948
don't be sad anon

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>>11125383
>real writefags
you are a real writefag anon. don't be so harsh on yourself

>>11125396
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>>11131533
good shit. the casual humor plays well. I like the thought of Athena's downplaying her status as bad girl alpha just to help anon be more ok around her.

keep it up anon

are you the one who writes Ruth the Bat?

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>>11136948
(yeen laughter)

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bump for yeens

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POST MORE PSEUDOPENIS

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>>11124549
just read the hyena chan green

I liked it a lot. telling a story from the female hyenas perspective was a nice change and the dialogue was very interesting

I hope the random anon who wrote it will do more in the future

>"Anywhere"
>"Anywhere but here"

yah cheeky bastard. well done

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>>11139588
I SAID MORE PSEUDOPENIS, NIGGERS

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>>11139588
wish there was more pictures. Most of whats good is hard to find. hopefully some drawfags will lend their talent at somepoint.

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>>11140013

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>>11140013
ecm seems pretty legit on pseudo peen like most things.

ecm's art always amazes me

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>>11140013
"be careful what you wish for little bitch!"

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>>11140013
DO I GOTTA DO THIS SHIT MYSELF?

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>>11140241

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>>11140241
peens on yeens

>>11124620
>Ywn impregnate a hyena gal and have a litter of hyena pups with her

And before you mention flesh tube birth with spotted hyenas, C-section

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>>11140241
yeenus penus

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>>11140241
yeenpeen uprising

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>>11140432
demon yeen with psuedo peen

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>>11140514

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>>11140448

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>>11140540

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>>11140241
thats all the yeenpeen I got.

rest easy now little bird

>>11126984
your own health>yeen stories

zigzag, please take care of yourself. we'll be fine here despite the occasional moaning

>>11140477
Nothing's wrong with Hyena birthing, Anon. Its just something you gotta support her through

>>11138970
Thanks man. I appreciate the compliment but nah I'm not ruthanon. I wrote the goat story on /hmofa/ a while ago but I've not really had any good ideas on how to continue it.

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REMEMBER TO PROTECT YOUR MEN YOU MISANDRIC CIS SCUM!!

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>>11141134
>"Don't worry, hun! I'll fight these ladies off for you!

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>"You sure guys like women who sing a love song for them?"
>Yes. Just say lewd things in spanish so they won't know what you mean

>>11141190
I would swoon regardless.

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>>11141276
Of course they would swoon. It's Male hyenas were talking about. Just say "I'm going to rape your boi pussy" and they would be swoon like idiots

>>11141334
I meant...oh. okay.

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>>11141334
When is someone going to drop a green where a human boy becomes a yeen boy's alpha and makes him ahegao

>>11141693
That would probably be a different thread...but easy enough to do.

>>11141753
This is the hyena thread, not /hmofa/, so long as it has yeens it should be gucci

>>11139588
That's an odd bear

>>11140432
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>>11140521
What kind of sparkledog shit is this

>>11125383
loving this.

>>11142930
agreed, I hope we'll get more

Where the fuck is Templar yeen writefag?

>>11134895
>technical aspects

This will seem very nitpicky, but here are a few examples as I reread the story:
-8
--There should be a comma between "hot" and "rocky". Whenever two or more adjectives are strung together to modify another word, they ought to be separated by commas.
-9
--Your vs. you're. You're describing the state of the protagonist in the second person so it should be "you're", not "your". Maybe it's autocorrect doing this or w/e, but it was a bit distracting thoughout the story. Showed up quite frequently. In line 10 too.
-11
--The tense of the story before and after this line is present tense. This line, however, is past tense. And, as far as I can tell, there's no reason for it to be. This is somewhat disrupting to the story's flow.
-17
--"a eighteen wheeler" This should be "an eighteen wheeler". Little quirk of English. See, vowel sounds kinda slur together when right next to each other. This is because the defining trait of a vowel is that there is no obstruction of the mouth, either by tongue, teeth, or lips. When transitioning from one to another, it gets rather messy. Thus, somewhere along the line it became a rule of English that whenever a word begins with a consonant sound, the syntax is "a <word>". Vowel sound, then, has the syntax of "an <object>". Note that I say consonant/voweal sound, not consonant/vowel. That is, "an hour" and "a university".
--I see the opposite problem here regarding lists of adjectives, telling me you know the rule and just had a bit of oversight. Suffice to say, the last comma in such a sequence should be between the last two abjectives, not the last adjective and the word being modified. Disrupts the flow of the sentence and is unnecessary.
-19
--While I definitely like getting some of Twigs's thoughts, it would be nice if they were delineated from the rest of the text more explicitly so I can be certain it's not part of another line without checking the line number. Quotes, maybe?

Bad bits next.

>>11134895
The bad bits were really just Angel's chapter and transitioning from Dee to Mace because I was still kinda attached to Dee. I think that's just a consequence of writing an endearing character. It's a good problem to have.

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>>11141190
>wearing kilts
>Spanish
Nothing worse than an uncultured yeen.

>>11144281
Maybe kilts are just really popular with with spotted hyena females because it covers them, has a pocket, and they don't have to wear underwear. They pretty much have to wear men's underwear if they want anything comfortable anyways.

>>11143788
Here!

https://pastebin.com/AFGqErU5

I'll be adding more after work today most likely.

Starting to get to the real "meat" of the story too.

Btw, it makes me genuinely happy to know someone out there likes my story, thanks man.

>>11144195
Templar dude here, I wish pastbin supported italics, I use italics for internal dialog but it doesnt carry over to pastebin.

>>11144881
Single quotes, maybe?

>>11145043
Good point, might update it to that.

Usually thats for things like quotes within dialog though right?

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>>11144195
Thank you for being my second set of eyes when dealing with this story. It helps a lot as I am an extreme amateur. I go more by what sounds right in my head which is why past and present keep flipping. Once again, the last time I proof read the first half I was very high so any amount of bugs could be in there that I don't know about.

I usually use italics for thoughts but it doesn't show up on pastebin for some reason. I use quotes for direct speech. Maybe using brackets would be a better idea.

Are all these technical issues prevalent throughout the story or just on the lines mentioned? (Sorry about the laziness, I promise to proof read again after writing the next chapter)

>>11144211
I think you have convinced me to go back and flesh out/rewrite Angel's chapter more. Looking back, it is a really shit chapter with a flat character. After I am done writing this next chapter I will go back and spend some more time rewriting it, thank you.

I hope in the future you will continue to give me feedback. You've been a real help

>>11136529
>>11139376

Always so pensive. What's she so worried about I wonder?

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Anyone who is in the mood for an extremely rapey incestous short fic? I wrote a quick fic about 2 female hyena school girls raping a small school boy hyena and would like feedback if your interested. Nothing deep, just straight rough intersex psuedo-peen bully smut.

Sisterly Love [2(f)x1(m), Hyena, Dark, Femdom, Bullying, Incest, Intersex, Pseudo-penis, Blood]

https://pastebin.com/uShfS0Pr

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>>11145360
I think her backstory as far as I can gather is that she pissed off the wrong people and now has to deal with hitmen coming after her, hence the facial scar

>>11145281
>>11145308
Use *asterisks*, it's a de-facto standard to imply italics in plaintext

>>11145412
thanks, will do

>>11145393
Read it, loved it.

The only error I noticed was a small typo near the end:
>“You ungrateful little shit, Next time we decide to chose you,
Should be 'next time we choose you'.

Other than that; smashing stuff!

>accidentally walk in rough part of town or bump into spotted hyena gang
>terrified you're about to ripped apart
>they just flirting and saying how cute you are
>dick is happy, but brain is now confused

>spotted hyena GF has to take care of her sick human BF
>is panicking about what to do and worried about trying to be gentle when taking care of him
>isn't used to how weak and fragile humans are when sick
>it's just a minor cold, but she's still freaking out

>>11145532
thanks, I haven't really proof read it since I am writing ABH. I'll be sure to give it a quick once over when I get the chance

>>11145537
D'aaaww!!

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>>11145537
thank you anon, this helped warm my cold unfeeling, grinchy heart

>>11145308
I'm glad to help! Anything to bring more dommy yeengirl smut into the world is a win in my book. And yeah, those technical errors are found throughout the piece. Shouldn't be too hard to correct. Might read through the story again today and post a mostly error-free copy later. Do you have a Discord, by any chance? If so, I'm Batra#9177. Feel free to send me a message.

>>11145537
You're giving me ideas for my Athena green

post more herms

>>11147614
fuck off, that's not how they work

>>11147614
>>11147624
The whole "using the pseudo-penis as a real penis" thing makes sense actually.

Before man became sentient we probably didn't engage in bondage, breath play, or femdom.

I mean, if they can walk and talk and have the same level of sophistication as humanity it makes sense they would develop "unnatural" kinks.

It being used as a penis ALL THE TIME however does get excessive.

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>>11147860
>>11147624
>>11147614
>infighting over genitals like every thread in trash rather than just enjoying the content and people's company

please don't make this place toxic. Its one of the few threads I enjoy because it has managed to stay free of shit flinging and instead encourages content making

>>11148012
Amen brother. I personally am not going to include herm-y stuff in my story but I've no problem with people doing it in theirs. So long as the thread gets bumped with OC, fighting over specifics is just pointless.

>>11131533
I swear if this thread dies before you finish your story,you better start the next one

>>11131533
So, I have a title now, "Schoolyard Crush." Pastebin of what I've got so far: https://pastebin.com/8MhU8M4b

I'll be doing drips and drops this evening rather than one big dump before bed

>You kiss Athena back
>This... isn't bad.
>Heck, it's pretty nice.
>Rolling with it, you raise your hand and place it behind her head, stroking her short, fluffy hair
>She makes a low rumbling sound, halfway between a growl and a purr
>She shifts her own arms to be wrapped around your neck
>Even if this is just a chaste kiss, it's a heck of a chaste kiss.
>She breaks it first, in a show of amazing self restraint, and meets noses with you in an Eskimo kiss
>"That was pretty nice. Maybe you humans are onto something with this whole 'taking things slowly' shit."
>You chuckle softly
"See, we can be pretty fun, too"
>She grins widely at you, and gives you a kiss on the cheek this time
>You suddenly notice that the other patrons are staring again
>Human/anthro relationships aren't necessarily frowned upon, but they're pretty unusual and guaranteed to draw stares
>Athena seems to have noticed too, because she gives you another wink before caressing your cheek, and finally sitting back in her chair again
>"Finish up that coffee, cutie, then let's go somewhere more private."
>You nod and lift the mug to your lips
>It's the quickest you've ever drained a coffee cup before
>You pick up your panini too and start stuffing it in your mouth
>She laughs out loud
>"You know you can eat that as you walk, right?"
"Oh, yeah, ehehe, right."
>Sheepishly you stand up with your head hung
>Athena stands up, too, swaggers over to you and wraps her arm around your shoulders
>"C'mon, there's a pretty chill place where we can hang out for a bit just a few blocks from here."

>>11148307
good shit! keep it up!

>>11148307
hahaha I lied. I ended up doing one big block after all. Will dump.
>She wasn't lying, it's not too far away
>There's a thick door with a slot near the top, at Athena's eye level
>She bangs on the door loudly, and the slot opens, revealing deep blue eyes with slitted pupils
>"Hey slut, it's me, Athena. Got a cutie with me, any room in there right now?"
>The slot closes, then the door opens, revealing a black feline anthro girl behind it
>She's dressed in similar punk-ish getup to Athena, though lacking a leather jacket and with a tank top rather than a tee
>Well, considering it's some extremely aggressive looking punk band's logo, it could be a modified tee
>She fist-bumps Athena
>"Athena, you fucking cow! Yeah, sure, one of the 'guests' just cleared out yesterday. Room's a bit messy, but he didn't jizz on the carpet or anything."
>"Safe."
>From the way she said 'guests' this doesn't sound like an ordinary hotel
>Suddenly, the cat notices you
>She cocks her head
>"A human, Athena?"
>Athena growls with... pride?
>"Hell fucking yes a human. Isn't he cute?"
>She appraises you for a second
>"Not my type, Athena, but hey, ain't my place to judge."
>Athena chuckles, and gives you a squeeze. You begin to feel a bit embarrassed. Are you just arm-candy to her?
>"Be gentle with him at least. The cleaner hates my guts as is, without you making a pigsty out of the room. It's number 12 by the way. You know the way?"
>"Sure do. Ciao, kitten."
>"Fuck off, Athena. Have fun."
>Well that was an interesting exchange.
>Athena guides you in through the door. Inside, it's a shitty looking corridor with doors leading off, like a hotel with no front desk. You guess the surly cat at the door is the receptionist

>>11149208
>There's a 'CRASH!' as she puts the heavy door back into place, and goes to a deckchair laying off by the side
>She picks up her copy of some seedy magazine, opens it up about halfway through, and turns it on its side straight away
>The cover is a barely dressed panther boy draped over a male lion who's wearing a shirt labelled "DADDY"
>Even the title makes you blush
>Better stop staring and leave her to it.
>Athena leads you deeper inside, past several doors
>Everywhere there are punk and metal posters on the walls and doors, and a fair amount of graffiti
>'Sam sucks fat bison dick' and similarly classy stuff
"J-just what is this place, Athena?"
>She puts a clawed finger to your lips
>Finally you reach a grubby door that someone's scrawled '12' on in black sharpie
>Right underneath the number is a Saxon poster
>"Saxon, yeah, why not." Athena mutters, as she pushes the door open
>It's basically a crappy hotel room, no en-suite, just a double mattress with a ratty looking blanket and some sad looking pillows, with a few beer cans and empty cig packets scattered around
>There's an ancient looking CD player with an aux cord trailing out of it
>As the door shuts, she takes her phone out, a battered Samsung with a band sticker on the back, and plugs it into the aux cord
>'Princess of the Night' by Saxon starts playing from the slightly tinny speakers
>With the ambience out of the way, she comes right up to you and wraps her arms around you
>"Yeah, I know it's not the classiest place out there, but the 'guests' keep to themselves and Rache won't let anyone in if they look like trouble."
"That still doesn't answer what the heck this place even is!"

>>11149239
>"Calm down babe. It's just a safehouse for the scene round here. Some of the lads will get in trouble if they get up to their usual shit in a proper hotel, so Rache and a few other cats run this place. The policy is that you do whatever you want in your own room, so long as you don't fuck with the other guests. Oh, and you pay up front and agree to let the staff into your shows for free - if you don't suck."
>You let out a deep sigh
"So this is a punk-rock hotel, is what you're saying?"
>She chuckles
>"Sure is. I've done some bouncer work for Rache recently, so she owes me a favour or two. I figured I'd use it to get some quiet one-on-one time with my cutie"
>She kisses your forehead and leads you into the room. You sit down on the bed with her, and she flashes you a smile while stroking your head softly
>"And hey, the shit I read on the net says it's bad form to ask a human boy back to your house on a first date."
>The absurdity of it gets to you, and you laugh softly
"So you took me to a seedy hotel instead?"
>She cocks her head, thinks about it for a second, then slaps her forehead as if to say "D'oh!"
>You laugh a little louder and snuggle up to her. She obliges, putting an arm round you and giving you a squeeze
>"Oh, uh, sorry about the music, too. If Rache hears anything but loud fucking coming from in here, I'll lose some major street cred. So, I put the music on in case you're not feeling up to that."
>You can feel your face heating up again. You'll never get used to how nonchalant anthros can be about sex.
>Still... that she's willing to take it slowly with you is a huge comfort. You were more than a little worried that this whole date thing was an excuse for her to trap you for some weird kinky sex
>Who knew, it turns out that the rough-round-the-edges bully has a heart of gold that she hides from everyone
>You turn your face to hers, feeling emboldened, and when she turns her head a little you meet her lips again

>>11149257
>Once more, she seems to want more than you're giving at the moment, but restrains herself
>That is until you run your tongue over her lips, and she opens her mouth to let you in
>When your tongues meet, she starts to get a little braver, wrestling you with her rough predator's tongue
>You settle into her arms, hands pressed up against her chest submissively, and she seems only too happy to oblige, cuddling you close and tight
>Once again, you feel a stirring in your pants, and your tent presses up against her legs
>She breaks the kiss, and again segues straight into Eskimo kissing you, making that low growl again
>"It's so fucking cute when you do that," and she shifts her legs a little to let you know what she means
>You seem to be incapable of forming words right now, the kissing overwhelmed you a little, so you let out a soft whimper
>She really liked that, as she gives you another tight squeeze
>"God damn you're cute. You sure you don't want to, y'know..."
>Oh now she's being coy?!
"Ahh... Maybe you could..."
>She smiles widely, and releases you so that you're laying on your back. One arm is still around you, but the other is free
>She puts her big paw on your chest and makes a walking motion with it, heading slowly downstairs
>"I could...?"
>She's gonna make you say it, the bitch
"Mmnn... use your paw..."
>She lets out another predatory growl, and pushes her paw underneath your waistband
>ohmygodshestouchingit
>"I thought you'd never ask..."
And that's all I've got for tonight.

>>11130637
He's Chinese.

why spotted hyena females like human BFs
>bites, scratches, and hickeys are much more visible on human skin
>their skin is more sensitive to touch/licks/bites/etc and easier to make them make cute sounds
>get them naked and they will cling to fur for warmth and since they like the feel of fur
>small and weak has well as having no fangs or claws so they really can't fight back at all
>etc
I can imagine leaving really visible bite marks/hickeys are probably one of biggest pluses

>>11149920
Plus the varying types of humans there are. Not Every hyena is a butch and males by default are scared of even female children meanwhile humans just universally like cute shit and hyena's are super cute

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>>11149920
All of these are turn ons for me

>>11150498
Hmm, that might be fun, purely psycho yeen, keeps her first lover who betrayed her as a head in a container.
Maybe some type of mercenary or something. Drags along anon for sexual release after a long job. Immediately afterwards.

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>>11150540
could be cool. I feel like that would be hard to pull off without it going into edgy-overload. Something like a self-aware short horror might be interesting

>>11150615
>porn made/staring spotted hyena females/marketed towards spotted hyenas come off has horror movies with sex to other species
I'm sure Halloween gets them all kinds of horny and an excuse to wear fun/weird outfits

>>11150615
>bottlecap nipples

Yeah I suppose, but a little foray into edgy territory could be fun

>tfw everyone expects you to play the villain and all you want to do is sign and make people happy.

All I want is to make people laugh.

>>11150486
You are not alone, anon.

>Human has hyena daughter with hyena wife
>Sweet girl that takes a lot after her father
>As she gets older she starts having aggressive urges and thoughts that frighten her
>Dad Anon has to explain to her that it's something all hyenas go through
>Daughter hyena switches moods on a dime, from angry, hyper bitch to kind, nuturing gentlewoman, often times leading her to starting fights and apologizing profusely after winning

>>11150655
thats why I said self-aware. that would help balance the edge and make it more enjoyable to read

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>>11151129
>tfw you'll never have a rough gf that acts like a hyena girl irl

>>11151215
Hmm, makes sense. Yeah. I>>11151215
Getcha.

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>Hyena girl goes out into the world after growing up in an exclusively anthro town
>Gets a human lover and expects hyena-boy twink behavior
>Gets hard dommed instead
>Tries to resist submissive behavior unsuccessfully
I want to put her pseudo-penis in a chastity cage and fuck her ass.

>>11149920
>small and weak has well as having no fangs or claws so they really can't fight back at all

What's with humans and wanting to be domestically abused?

>>11143788

Templar story update, added about half of the 3rd chapter. More to follow, maybe tonight, maybe tomorrow.

https://pastebin.com/AFGqErU5

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>>11151392
Thats the good bully right there

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>>11125383
>>11125396
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>>11131533
>>11148307
>>11149208
>>11149239
>>11149257
>>11149274


This shit both really hot and really cute at the same time. Keep up the good work anon

>>11152702
Fuck yeah my compatriot of African descent
been waiting for this

>>11152702
Nice work so far! I'm enjoying the world building

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>>11124549

>>11152702
>fucking sky gods show up with shiny armor, glowing lights and chariots pulled by nothing but air
>talking about how they want to drive the demonic hoards back to hell
"Lets kidnap one!"
>fucking brilliant!
>I'll get a promotion for this for sure!

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>>11152702
>rebel forces 'revengence' crew photo, colorized, 2xxx


Smooth moves there, champ, sure xavier and a few others are going to take it well

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>>11124549
>tfw Yeens have conpetetion

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>>11151392
>Domming doms

>spotted hyena females join football in high school due to being huge and testosterone filled
>confuse the fuck out of team mates who are human/other species due being female but also needing to wear a cup and most likely having bigger dicks
>still acting like jock bullies to nerds, but the nerds are their boyfriends which further confuses the nonhyena jock team mates
>making their nerd/small/weak BFs come and watch their games and maybe even getting them be their cheerleaders
>their small BFs NEED to be near by after every game because they are jacked up from adrenaline after games and no one wants a bunch of rampaging horny hyena females running around

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>>11160226

>>11155742
>>11156334

Now that you mention it, I should probably go back and add a bit explaining how the local government understands the templar are not gods, and that humans seem weak to them.

Also the church is separate from the ruling class, later in the chapter there was going to be a confrontation between the two, the government is after the technology, but the church is batshit crazy.

I have lots of content planned but rush a little to fast, I gotta work on that.

In other news I've been modeling a gnoll cause I had this crazy idea to mod ARMA (I guess I have a thing for military hyena people). Now I'm thinking I should just do some proper art for my story when I feel like taking a break from writing.

Anyways, I am seriously digging that you guys like my work, thanks. I was thinking the whole minimum lewdness thing would turn most of this community off.

Seriously, thanks.

>>11161478
I think its a common assumption due to thier punkish style and mindset. Also Minimum lewds are cool. I just enjoy gnolls being used in shit aside from BUTCH DYKE MC CLAMFUCKER and the stereotypical brainless savage.

>>11161532
Spotted hyenas are fairly smart social species. They even have a better hunting/kill average than lions do.

>>11161553
As someone pointed out in a previous 'yeen thread; Spotted Hyenas have the largest brain of any hyena type, even accounting for their bigger skulls.

Ugh...sorry to vent here lads but I'm in a lot of pain and it's making me think stupid things.
Fuck.

>>11161781
Spine still fucked? or is this a different anon?
>tfw no yeen chiropractor

How does one fuck a hyena girl, would you stick it in her clitoris hole? How does this work

>>11161864
>yeen becomes a chiropractor
>gets off on hearing her patients bones/spines make that popping noise
>ends up doing more harm than good because she likes making the noise so much

>>11161892
Their pseudopenis is just an elongated clitoris and yes you put your dick into her fake dick. It does retract when they want to mate, but think of it like a woman having a fleshlight attached to her vagina.

>>11161864
Spine still fucked.
I got a doctor appointment this afternoon

>>11161920
Kek, reminds me of a story I heard from a friend.
Guy goes to a massage therapist, they say, if it even starts to hurt, tell me and I'll stop.
Later, the guy has not one but Two broken ribs because the dumbass refused to tell the lady when it was hurting.

>>11161532
Yeah, I was trying to show different personalities between Enyo and Deborah. Even then Deborah isn't a complete bull dyke and I was going to expand on her character soon.

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best yeen coming through

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>>11162158
who dis?

>>11161920
got another funny idea
>big hyena lady is a masseuse
>sitting around eagerly waiting for customers
>big hyena lady is of course a big intimidating hyena lady and not getting too many takers
>finally gets one and it's a small human guy
>she is very happy, very
>is actually a good masseuse and the size difference lets her cover more area and she knows how to use her claws to massage too
>the size difference also means she's utterly covering his entire body with hers in some positions
>has to stop herself from groping and grinding on him too much, but not top completely
>human guy is too overloaded with conflicting feelings
>fear, arousal, tension, relaxation, etc
>she's partially getting off to sounds she's making him make
>she doesn't stop flirting, but in spotted hyena fashion, the whole time
>ends it with her saying she can't wait for to be a repeat customer and asking him out

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>>11162224
I think he's literally just called "Stripey yeen"

either way he is good and cute

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howdy yall. Teether here. I am getting a feeling that each additional chapter is getting longer than the last, currently 3/4s through chapter 6 draft. I don't know if additional chapters will completely flood the thread in the future if I post them here. Should I still go ahead a post them as greens or should I just put individual chapters up on my pastebin? Should all the chapters just be broken up into individuals or should I keep it bundled together in 2 big parts. Any thoughts?

>>11162274
for ABH*

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>>11162252
cute! yeens bois are very cute

>>11162274
I want mah green.

>>11161979
Good luck with that, tell us how it goes if you want. I don't know what you do for a living, but if its that serious for anything not related to manuel labor, take any action he/she suggests.

>>11162274
You could post the beginnings in the thread to give people an idea of what's going on, then link to the full thing in pastebin.

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>>11161979
get better zig zag and good luck!

>>11162274
Give us the greens


Its how we rope in more poor bastards into the light

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>>11162557
>>11163001
>>11163023
cool, well as far as its going right now, I see the whole story wrapping up to be about 10 chapters and hopefully under 40,000 words total but we shall see what I can do. So be patient with me. Its gonna be a lot of writing. Hopefully I can keep everyone interested enough in my shlock to make it worth their time

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So, a question - am I correct in saying this general follows the same expected images/greens found in /hmofa/(while not strictly being human) minues the whole psudo/herm/dgirl attributed to spotted hyenas?

Or am I outright wrong in that fact, and that m/m cboy and the above mentioned herm/dgirl is included as well, and that no one really offered to do that. I dont write(on a borderline presentable level), so I'm not offering those scenarios

I do however personally enjoy all of the above and I wouldnt mind seeing it

What do you guys like/tolerate/dont want to see, along with the above question?

>>11163201
To me anything yeen is good. I don't really care what it is as long as it has yeen. I can't really speak for the rest of the board

>>11163248
Only asking because this and the m/m werewolf boards are one of the chillest, comfiest ones I've seen in a long while

As in, a refreshingly lack of shitposts and autism flinging

>>11163201
I will read none of that shit and dislike all of that. I actively despise that shit. This isn't a dickgirl thread, but one about actually using anatomical correct spotted hyenas. It doesn't have to be a human guy, but most here, including myself, seem to prefer that pairing.

>>11163201
I want more yeenboys.

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>>11163385

>>11163404
let me clarify

I want to see yeen peen

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>>11163418
found some

If you don't want your hyena gf to fuck you with her pseudopenis which is way longer and thicker than yours, you're gay.

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>>11163724
>I want all the fem yeenpeen and yeenboipeen

>>11163827
With all the aggressive anal half the time, youd think the gif is already happening

Not in the camp that psudo/d/herm is gay though, but I get why others would, lol

I like the dominant female theme of the thread but goddamn am I super not attracted to the pseudopenis.

Cant you guys take some liberties with the anthropomorphisation and give em some normal bits down there? Otherwise it's kinda gay.

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>>11163724
Well I am.

>>11163201
I give a shit more about how those things are executed rather than them outright. If an anon wants to take a crack at them sure, but playing into natures role has its perks without having to worry about "sexual flexability" part of the spice of life is playing your hand the best you got and not being a jack of all trades

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>>11164296
>Having sex with a 100% biological female.
>Gay.

>>11164296
Its not really gay, they dont fuck with it. its acts like a super long clit to bully. and when fucking it retracts and looks pretty mych like your average fortune cookie.

>>11165184
It's 50% gay.

>>11165248
Wait do males fuck the pseudopenis or do they also have a vag?

>>11165804
The psudopenis is the vag lol, When the female is aroused it retracts and allows males easier access. Otherwise it functions like a child spewing dick in all respects

>>11166006
To add to that note it makes me wonder what happened so long ago that the females needed to become biologically more beefy and gain what essentually is natures anti-rape stick

>>11165804
>>11166006
also it tears violently the first time a female hyena gives birth

>>11166048
And the first born is always stillborn.

>>11161977
>It does retract

what do you mean

>>11166230
It goes flaccid and retracts. Much like how a dogs dick does

>>11163017
>>11162997
>anons cheering me on
That's real fucking heartwarming dudes.
You guys rock.

>>11166063
That's really damn sad if true.

Time to clear some shit up
>the pseudopenis is not a real penis and does not have the same functions has a real one
>the females DO NOT penetrate anyone
>the females don't even exhibit mounting behavior
>the males do at a very young age since putting a dick inside a bigger fake dick added with the odd body shape of spotted hyenas means the males need all the practice they can get
>when the females want to mate the pseudopenis retracts into their body and becomes a somewhat more conventional mammal vagina
>the females also have pseudo testes which are just pockets of fat and have no actual function
>the females mate through, give birth, and piss out their pseudopenis
>yes, it is has painful as it sounds and many mothers and pups die in the process
>funny enough the more dominant females have bigger pseudopenis and pseudo testes than less dominant females

>>11166489
it's almost always one pup per pregnancy too and even with all this against them they are not endangered and I don't think they ever were in the past

>>11166531
>>11166500
Some animals sure are damn weird. I wonder why all of this happens in the first place. You'd think losing pups and mothers every pregnancy would be a trait evolution would want to remove eventually.

>>11166631
The females can't be raped and they have full control over which male's semen they keep in them since they can just piss after a mating to flush it out. But the females like younger submissive mates and the males are always smaller than the females so it's not about picking the strongest mate.

>>11166631
Litters tend to buffer against that.

>>11166667
>females like younger submissive males.
Ohhboy.

>>11166694
younger male/older female is actually fairly common in a lot of animal species

>>11166667
Actually it kinda is. Hyena cubs practice infacide as soon as they are born. Often killing the weaker siblings. males who survive while still submissive to females gain more breeding rights than other males

>>11166761
Really? I always though it was "strongest oldest male gets the herd" kind of thing

>>11166836
Old after a point means slower and weaker. It differs somewhat depending on how mates are selected.

>>11166864
>in furs cucking and milfs are common

>>11166922
go look up how fucked cuckoo birds are

>>11166941
You mean the parasitic young?
Yea it's fucked.

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I typed up a greentext ahead of time and will be dumping it for you all. I was going to put this in /hmofa/, but /yeen/ has been awesome so far. Human (You) + female gnoll. Spoilers: no yeenpeen, sorry. Also, please excuse the dump spam.

https://pastebin.com/xKvEc883

>You are anon, loveless loner and interim courier
>Recently stationed somewhere in Afrikenyubabwe for a sabbatical or something
>You were sent from a small town with a sealed envelope and a backpack across the savannah plains to a compound
>A compound now controlled by gnolls
>It used to be some kind of outpost or reservation back in the day, the hyena people keeping their distance at first
>They’re scavengers by nature, taking clothes, food, and even weapons from people who wander too far onto the plains
>Mostly dumb tourists
>Then the marauding gnolls learned to use guns, and all the humans in the compound were kicked out
>You’ve heard many rumors about the gnolls, but they keep to themselves most of the time and you’ve never seen one up close before
>Today’s the day you’ll get the chance, after you were sent out for “negotiations” with the gnolls
>Strangely enough, you weren’t given much briefing on what the negotiations are supposed to be or what to do when you get there
>And you were told to take as many of your belongings as you can carry
>”It might take a while,” is all they said before shooing you out of town
>You weren’t even given a ride over
>Guess it’s so you don’t spook them or something
>So now you’re walking half the day until you see the fenced in compound, right after taking the last swig of your canteen
>The first gnolls you spot are males perched up in the watchtowers flanking the front gate
>They are stout, burly creatures with some pretty mismatched clothing; most wear casual clothes stretched over their bestial frames and leather scraps roped together for some kind of armor
>The males would probably be a good head taller than you if they weren’t so hunched over

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>>11168181

>You wonder if it’s because of their skeletal shape or because they are always submissive to the females
>Oh yeah, most of the stories about the gnolls involve the noticeably larger and more aggressive hyena women, who tend to be the dominate ones
>That, and rumors about what they’re packing “down below”
>You see a few females gather around the gate as you approach, pushing the smaller males out of the way
>They’re almost all carrying some type of firearm, from shotguns to rifles, all battered and in states of disrepair
>Most have their manes done up in very punkish ways, some dyed in pastel colors and knotted with bones
>Then the biggest gnoll of the pack steps forward as the sea of hyenas parts
>She has a scraggly mane, a toothy snarly, and her muzzle is painted chalk white in rib-like stripes
>She wears a flak jacket that barely contains a hefty pair of breasts and none of the muscles on her arms, and a pair of dusty slacks with numerous holes for her fur to poke out of
>Her hair is spiked up a bit, but droops to the sides from its length, running along her neck and even hanging down her back like a horse tail
>Her right arm is cleanly shaven to show off a heavily inked tattoo
>You can’t make out what it’s supposed to be, but part of it looks like tally marks
>A lot of tally marks
>Oh, and resting on her shoulders behind her neck is a massive gun as black as her spots and practically as long as she is tall
>Talk about a BFG…
>Big Fucking Gnoll
>She’s intimidating to say the least, but part of you can’t help by be impressed by her force of presence
>”Should we let him in, Ngarlu?” one of the males asks
>The large hyena woman pivots and smacks him with the butt of her gun
>”Well, dipstick, we’re not gonna to get him when he’s out there, are we?” she says, her voice both raspy and vampish
>The gate slides open and you gingerly present the envelope
>She snatches it from you and rips it open with her teeth

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>>11168209

>The other gnolls wait eagerly around her as her narrowed eyes scan the inside letter
>For a moment you wonder if it’s all just a show; are gnolls even literate?
>But she seems perfectly capable of reading, as her mouth pulls back into a devilish grin
>She lets out an infectious laugh, spurring the others to join in even without context
>But they know to stop when she does, and it’s totally quiet
>”’Anon’, is it?” she says in an unsettlingly sweet voice
>You nod slowly
>”Sorry, love, but someone back home must really hate you. Well enough to make you their patsy, anyway,” she says
>Patsy?
>”You see, we make a deal with your little town.” She plants her gun into the dirt and leans into it, waving the paper between her claws
>She’s right in your face with those pearly teeth, those flared nostrils…
>…those beautiful sienna eyes…
>”Ev’ry few weeks we get a nice crate of guns and goods from them. They give us the boomsticks, and we ‘promise’ not to fire their way.”
>A few of the females chuckle, with their guns in some pretty raunchy positions
>”We even leave some game out there for them to hunt.”
>She crumples up the letter and tosses it over her shoulder
>One of the males grabs it in his mouth and swallows it instantly
>”But it looks like they’re tryin’ to bribe us in another way, by sendin’ some poor whelp for collateral.”
>The rest of the pack creeps in, leaving you no place to escape
>One of them snatches your backpack and flings it into a cluster of smaller gnolls, who descend on it like it’s prey
>”You ain’t worth the same as those guns, and I think we might have to pay them a little a visit soon…”
>In one quick motion she swings the gun around you, pulling it against you
>And you against her
>”But in the meantime, love, you can be damn sure we’re gonna’ get as much use out of you as we can.”

>In the center of the compound is what seems like a workshop
>Inside is full of random pieces of technology and equipment on tables all scavenged by the gnolls

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>>11168228

>Busted radios, dismantled guns, boxes of scrap metal
>And a few blinded windows too high to climb out of
>Ngarlu pushes you inside, making you trip against the debris on the floor
>”You humans have some nice shit, but everythin’ we bring back ain’t workin’ so well. Fix it for us.”
>It definitely wasn’t a request
>You are left alone with the piles of junk as she locks you in
>You aren’t the engineer they probably think you are, but as you begin tinkering with the stuff you see that it’s actually not too hard to fix
>Most of it is just a frayed wire here or some loose screws there
>Even the weapons seem easy enough to put back together
>They didn’t leave you ammo, though
>You wonder if all this stuff was just mishandled when they brought it back with them
>It feels good to get so many things working again, but you remember after a while that you’re still technically a prisoner
>Maybe you could take the box of scraps and make a battle suit, or…
>The door swings open and one of the grunts drops a plate of mystery meat and browning fruit on the floor for you
>It definitely looks like the gnoll took a taste or two on the way over
>You eat your meal and get back to the task
>After a few more hours, Ngarlu returns to inspect your completed work
>”Not too bad, runt. I guess you deserve a break after all y-“
>She stops, sniffing the air for a moment
>The two of you stare at each other for what feels like forever
>She flicks the end of her snout with her thumb
>”Get over here, and I’ll show you where you’re gonna to be sleepin’”
>You follow her to the barracks, neither of you saying a word until you arrive at what seems like a storage closet
>Inside are a small cot and a table
>”This will be your home, now,” she sneers. “Make sure you keep the door closed. Gotta make sure the men don’t break you too soon.”
>You’re left alone in complete darkness

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>>11168243

>The next two days follow the same pattern: wake up, get sent to the workshop, take a short break for food, return to your tiny room
>Each step has someone either guarding you or guiding you around
>If it’s not Ngarlu herself, it’s usually another female leading a few grunts as well
>They don’t miss a chance to shove you into walls or rip holes in your shirt
>On the fourth day in the workshop, you realize just how much you reek from sweat
>Ngarlu seems to notice as well
>”Alright, we don’t need you stinkin’ up the place. You’re gonna to have to get cleaned up.”
>She takes you to part of the compound with indoor, tiled showers
>Looks like the place doesn’t get much cleaning, since the drains are clogged with clumps of fur
>”Alright, clothes off,” she says
>She doesn’t have her gun with her this time, but you’re not fighting her hand-to-hand
>It’s embarrassing to strip in front of her, for sure
>But her being non-human almost takes the edge off a bit
>Still, you remove your underwear much slower than the rest
>When you’re fully exposed, Ngarlu gives you a catcall
>”No sense coverin’ up, runt. You got nothin’ I won’t see eventually anyway.”
>You turn the water on and step under the streams
>You keep facing the wall as you lather up, using a lonely bar of soap that’s practically growing mushrooms on it
>Eventually you have to twist and bend to get your whole body clean
>You steal a glance at Ngarlu, who looks almost mesmerized by your junk
>You turn away and scrub your hair, and that’s when you hear the pattering and clicking of her paws on the tiles approaching you
>”Get in there deep, runt,” she says as she digs her nails into your scalp. “You’re not bringin’ any bugs into my barracks.”
>You let her do her thing, not wanting to piss her off
>Admittedly, the “massage” feels amazing
>That is, until she grabs a clump of your hair and pulls you back
>You stumble right into her
>And then you’re pushed away

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>>11168260

>”Watch it!” she barks. “You’re gettin’ my clothes wet!”
>The whole thing befuddles you
>SHE pulled your into HER, didn’t she?
>”Great, now it’s all damp,” she says in what sounds like a practiced tone
>Before you can say anything, she grabs the bottom of her flak jacket and pulls it over her head with one fluid jerk, taking her bra off along with it
>Her weighty breasts bounce free, large in size and lightly furred compared to the rest of her body, each one capped with a dark nipple visible even among the hair
>Completely unabashed in her partial nudity
>She doesn’t give you any time to ogle, and spins you back around to face the wall
>Your hair is once again combed with her claws, but only from one hand (paw?) this time
>The other is wrapped around your waist, dancing a little too close to your groin
>She pulls you into her body, clearly not caring about the wetness anymore
>You can feel her breasts against your spine, followed by those soft nipples
>There’s no mistaking how erect they are as they brush against your shoulder blades
>You’re afraid to move back against her, but she’s gripped too tightly on you to escape
>But you relax and learn to enjoy it
>A little too much
>She’s working through your pits, and then moves to the hair in the south
>She skims against your growing arousal with her hand and recoils
>”Alright, shower’s over.”
>She shuts off the water and tosses you a ragged towel
>You go to retrieve your clothes, but she intercepts them
>”These are ruined,” she says, like you’re a dog who peed on them. “Wait here.”
>You are left to dry off as she leaves with your things
>You think you can hear sniffing right after she leaves your sight
>In a few minutes she returns with a new outfit
>Ill-fitting shirt, ripped pants, and some kind of animal-hide vest
>Once again you’re led back to the barracks, but you walk right by your closet

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>>11168268

>She stops you at a different room, this one a little bigger than the other and not so dangerously close to the ones occupied by the grunts
>”G’night,” she says after shutting you in

>The next week follows a stranger pattern
>You toil in the workshop
>You’re “forced” to take a shower with Ngarlu, who now wears shorts but still no top
>And then you’re led to a completely different bedroom in the evening
>First it’s a little farther into the barracks, but soon you’re on higher floors
>Now you’re on the “alphas’” floor, with all the gnoll women who glare at you from their doors
>Ngarlu even drops in to check on your progress in the workshop every hour or so, dropping off more junk for you to sift through
>You don’t ask where she gets it, though
>What she doesn’t give you is a way to cool down as you work up a sweat each day
>In fact, the shades on the workshop windows have been torn off completely, cooking you when the sun gets a direct shot
>The sweat is profuse now
>And the heat becomes unbearable
>And your temper gets shorter with every electronic you struggle to fix
>When Ngarlu checks up on you late in the day she picks up the bulky television you had been devoting much of your time to
>You can vizualize the machine’s fate of being dropped to the ground, undoing a few days’ worth of effort instantly
>Without thinking, you lose your cool
>You shout at her to put the television down, your voice reverberating in the workshop
>And she complies
>Not very gently, mind you
>The screen cracks and the components jostle around inside as she slams it on the table
>At first you’re ready to hear a demon roar at you
>But when that doesn’t come, you almost think she might CRY from your outburst
>The expression on her muzzled face is deadpan for an eternity
>Finally, those thin black lips part carefully
>”You…” she breathes, sending a chill up your back
>Ngarlu closes the distance, her outstretched arm clearing everything on the table

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>>11168282

>You’re not going to dare yell at her for the damage on all that
>Her hot breath washes over you as she looms over your dripping body
>”You are PERFECT,” she says in exasperation
>Pardon?
>In an instant you’re hoisted up and dropped onto the now-vacant table, flanked by her muscular arms
>”Do you realize how long I’ve been waitin’ to hear a male raise their tone to me? To CHALLENGE me?”
>You can only smile nervously
>She digs her snout into your clothes and then draws in deeply, puffing out her chest into your face as she proceeds to arch her back
>The gnoll exhales slowly and looks down to you
>You flinch as her mouth opens, but it’s only her tongue you see
>A fairly large tongue, comparatively speaking
>She laps up your salty, dripping flesh ravenously
>The fear rekindles a bit for a moment
>She wouldn’t EAT you, right?
>Right?
>But when she stops there’s a sultry look to her eyes that you would never expect from such a bestial creature
>”Humans have been this girl’s secret desire for years,” she says.
>It’s a little funny how such a powerhouse of fur, muscle, and primal heritage could talk about herself like she had a teenage crush
>”Your smooth skin, your scent, your way of workin’ those tools…”
>The subtlety with that one struck you like a rhino to the gut
>She pulls her legs onto the table one at a time, now crouched over you
>The integrity of the table becomes your biggest fear now
>”I want you to fight back a bit,” she warns you. “I don’t mean to hurt you, but as long as ONE of us is enjoying this I ain’t stoppin’.”
>Her legs splay out on top of your own as she resumes coating you with her tongue
>Your arms are pinned to the table, the flow of blood getting constricted
>At least it has other places to go to
>You feel the adrenaline coursing through you, and, heading her words, you push back against her
>At first your retaliation is weak, but you soon let loose as if wrestling with a bratty sibling

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>>11168301

>You know deep down you’d never overpower her, even if you put all your energy into it
>She squeezes your legs together with her thighs, redoubling her puppy kisses on your face
>Now your erection is even trying to fend her off
>But the biggest mistake the gnoll makes is letting Anon get a chance to catch his breath
>When she pauses her licking for some air you make the counterattack
>Your tongue plunges into her muzzle, trying to grapple with her own
>Her eyes light up for a second before closing dreamily
>She obviously likes you taking initiative, so you push your luck a bit
>When you wrench your arms free they dive into her jacket, ripping it open before you slip right in under her bra
>You try your damnedest to hold those whole breasts as your palms glide over her nipples
>Now she’s moaning into you, easing back on the strength she’s exerting on you
>That is, until you try to flip her over
>As if sensing your intentions, her vigor floods back and pins you down once more
>”Love, you wouldn't make a lady lie on some filthy ol’ table, would you?”
>She slides down off the table and pulls you with her by the collar
>”If you’re tryin’ to get dirty, I have a much better place for us.”
>Ngarlu leads you out the workshop and towards the barracks, with your neck in a teasing chokehold
>You ascend higher than you’ve ever been so far in the barracks
>Up to the top-most level
>”OUT, ALL OF YOU!” she roars
>Several gnolls loitering in the hall dash back down the stairs
>A few even run from their own rooms to vacate the floor entirely
>”They know when a girl’s gotta have her private time,” she says, beaming
>She leads you to the last room on the floor
>The largest room in the barracks
>HER room
>It’s covered from floor to ceiling in animal pelts, weaponry both prized and retired, wood masks, and even a few paintings of the savannah
>Oh, and your old clothes are peeking out of a dresser drawer, still stained with old sweat

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>>11168323

>”Lived-in” comes to mind, but so does “cozy”
>She pulls you over to the bed, perhaps the comfiest you’ve ever seen before
>”Now then, what was it you were tryin’ to do, again?”
>You tackle her to the bed and resume being tangled up in her body
>Clothes are torn off along the way without you even realizing it, and you can feel her plush fur brush against your naked skin
>It feels even softer than the sheets
>You kiss some more, and then you’re nipping at her neck
>Her claws dig into your skin, but don’t break the surface
>If her tail could escape the smothering, it would probably be wagging furiously
>Ngarlu is completely vulnerable when you crawl back to the end of the bed and pry those meaty thighs apart, exposing the femininity she guards so dearly day after day
>Well, at least now you know those rumors about gnoll women were bullshit
>Still, her nether lips are far more pronounced and swollen than you’ve ever fantasized about human women
>So what technique works on a hyena?
>You do what you can to pleasure her
>Burring your nose into the crevice, lapping up her juices, digging into the folds with your fingers
>Her thighs lock around your head as you nibble on the flesh softly, but she no longer has the strength to deter you
>She begins to whimper, her arms bending back and gripping the backboard tight enough that you’re positive you hear it cracking
>You don’t have much time down below before she pulls you closer by the armpits with her feet, curling you into a full embrace
>”D-don’t go and do somethin’ I’m gonna to have to pay you back for later,” she huffs into your ear. “I’m not gonna do down first…”
>Well, you beat her to it anyway
>”…So that means we’re gonna have to do this together.”
>She props you up on her stomach, leaning forward and coaxing your growth to full length with a few licks and a couple of deep-muzzle sucks
>It’s just enough to lubricate you
>She definitely doesn’t want to waste much time on oral
>Oh well, maybe later

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>>11168348

>She doesn’t take lead, as you anticipated, but lets you slide back to her ready entrance
>And so you drive into her
>The heat is incredible, and she holds you up with her arms as you begin to buck forward
>She’s keeping you away at full wingspan, so when you try to fondle her breasts you end up tugging at the teats whenever you draw back
>Her hands then wrap around you and aid your thrusts, pulling you forward with each grunt
>It’s not easy to be the top when such a massive creature is essentially using you like a life-size sex toy
>The rhythm picks up gradually, and you wonder if the walls are going to be enough to stifle your noises
>You kind of hope they aren’t
>The pace picks up, and you’re matting her fur down with your sweat
>She bellows and whines, building up the imminent finale
>You climax in perfect unison, though Ngarlu’s cries drown yours out
>She begins to laugh triumphantly as you flop onto her chest
>It’s still just as infectious, and you join in
>The two of you lie together for some time
>You gaze at the framed savannahs, and you can faintly hear the wildlife within them
>And sniffing
>”Anon,” she sighs
>You’re soon switching positions, with her mounted over you
>The setting sun through the window is a halo around her wild beauty
>”When we’re done, you’re gonna need a shower”

>Months pass, and the compound is now your home
>The gnolls’ “visit” to the human town never comes, as you’re eventually seen as a fair exchange
>You continue to be their tinkerer, fixing their equipment and even making new commodities like the humans have
>The transition into the pack has a rocky beginning
>The gnolls who once sized you up to be their next plaything gaze on in confusion to see their leader followed by a human so closely
>The women were even a little envious, but Ngarlu made sure everyone knew who you belonged to
>It was a turbulent time for a while, as everyone seemed to want you to go back to your hometown

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>>11168366

>The males because they felt you’d steal away all their women
>And the females because they hoped you could bring back some human men for them
>Eventually, though, a change happened with the male gnolls
>They began being more assertive, challenging the dominance of the females
>Of course, they never got too far
>The ladies were always on top, but they loved that the male gnolls were growing more of a backbone
>Hunched ones, but backbones nonetheless
>Which means you had Ngarlu all to yourself with no fear of becoming the pack’s chew toy or breeding slave
>And speaking of breeding…
>It’s a cooler, breezy morning out
>The kind that keeps you in bed for a little longer than usual, nestled up against the back of your furred lover
>You stroke her hair as she stirs awake
>”Morning, Anon,” she says, turning toward you

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>>11168379

>Her gorgeous face comes first, still feral in shape and decoration but breathtaking in passion
>Then her breasts flop over to rest between you two, stacked heavy and engorged with those perky thick black nipples looking out at you
>Finally, the gravid swell of her belly arcs over, cradled by her arm
>It’s absolutely immense, even in spite of her overall size
>Even the gnoll midwives are shocked
>She’s apparently got a little more growing to do in the coming weeks
>You rub your hands over her stomach, the fur stretched taught to where you can see a little of the skin underneath
>Nobody has the nerve to question her choice in mates, with her holding you close to her swollen middle everywhere you go
>When Ngarlu’s waddling around the compound, she’s just as commanding and intimidating as ever to the lesser gnolls
>Only now when she bullies them, it’s usually by threatening to crush them with her bulk
>Or “shove them up inside to see the cubs”
>But when she’s alone with you, she’s an entirely different hyena
>She strokes her pregnant belly without pause, sometimes leaning over it and laughing in unrepressed rapture
>More than once she laughs to the point of tears dripping onto her stomach
>She confides in you her happiness; never did she think she’d be gifted with someone like you
>That she’d end up taking the best of the worst among the submissive males
>On one hand, she would have been much more impressed by the budding confidence of the gnoll men
>But on the other hand, it’s all thanks to you that they’ve become what they are in the first place
>It’s all thanks to you
>”Anon”
>You break away from your thoughts, now lost in the gnoll’s unbroken love for you
>”You’re gonna have to get back to workin’ on those cribs today,” she says
>You place a palm on her belly, trying to feel for movement
>Ngarlu only laughs
>”Not quite,” she says. “I just want you to get dirty so we can hit the showers.”

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>>11168399

>As you rub your thumb over her naval with one hand, you bring the other to her muzzle
>Your lips connect for a good morning morning kiss

Well shit, I could have fit the last two lines in if I spaced the previous posts better, but oh well. The end.

>>11168430
Oi.

Good shit. Good progression, great ending.

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>>11168813
Thanks a lot. Really appreciate it.

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Chapter 6 (here we go!)ABHChapter 6

>You hear birds chirping as you slowly open your eyes
> Cascading pillars of gold spread throughout the room, pouring from the crooked blinds covering the window
>You look down and see Mace snoring with her head and arm over your chest as you both lay naked in bed
>You stroke the top of her head, running your fingers through her greasy silver tan hair
*She’s actually pretty cute when she lets down her guard
>Mace snorts loudly and growls as she tightens her grip on your chest
*On second thought….
>You hear the sound of boots as you see a large figure peer in through the cracks of the motel blinds
>It just stands there for a couple minutes staring
*Goddamit Riley can’t I just have one morning in peace
“Go away Riley! Whatever it is you can tell me later!”
>The figure moves away from the windows down towards the door
*Good
>You suddenly hear the loud shuffle of multiple boots outside
*What the?
>Mace’s eyes shoot open as she grabs you by the shoulder and pulls you over the edge of the bed against the wall
SMASH!
>The door explodes off its hinges as three giant bulls walk into the room spaying the place with submachine gun fire
>Everything around you including the bed you were just in flies apart from the impact of hundreds of bullets
>While bullets crack all around you, Mace reaches under the bed
>She just barely manages to grab the sling from her shotgun, pulling it back to her
>She looks at you and puts a finger to her lips as the barrage dies down
>The room is filled with deafening silence as bits of kicked up feather and cloth slowly flutter to the ground like snowflakes
>Mace grabs a empty beer bottle and flings it from underneath the bed to the entrance of the bathroom
>The bulls begin firing into the bathroom entrance across from the bed as Mace jumps up and quickly fires off three rounds from her pump shotgun in quick succession
BOOM! chk chk BOOM! chk chk BOOM! chk chk

>>11168976
(ABH, 6.2)
>All three shots find their targets square in the chest
>An explosion of gore bursts out their backs and onto the wall behind them
>Each bull drops to the ground dead as an ocean of blood flows over the dusty carpet
>You hear multiple screams and gunshots come from outside
>Mace quickly picks a box labeled “lead slugs” from the end of the bed and frantically reloads the shotgun
>”Do you know how to use a gun?” said Mace sliding in the last shell into the receiver
>”My father showed me how to use a revolver when I was little but that’s it” you say still shaken from what just happened
>Mace gets up and runs to the front doorway
>She picks a submachine gun off a dead bull and slings it over her shoulder
>She grabs Boris’ forty-four revolver off of the side table and throws it onto the bed next to you
>”Take that, check the other rooms, and don’t get yourself killed,” said Mace cocking her shotgun before running to the right, down the outside stairs to the first floor
>You quickly slip on a pair of bullet hole riddled pants from the floor
>You hear more gunshots and banging as you nervously pick up the large revolver and head out the door to the left
>After passing a couple normal rooms you see a kicked-in door on your left
>You hear a blood-curdling scream come from inside and heavy thrashing
>You peek around the corner to see Angel face down on the bed with her pants around her ankles as a bull mounts her from behind
>He has a revolver to the back of her head as he thrusts in and out of her
>”Damn bitch you sure are ugly, you should thank me, this is going to be the finest dick you’ve ever taken before I blow your ugly brains out” said the bull
>Angel just curses and growls as she rocks back and forth trying to throw the large bull off
>The bull laughs, as he hits her in the back of the head with the grip of his gun with a loud crack

>>11169001
(ABH 6.3)
>”Shut up! I am almost done here bitch!” the bull says as he thrusts faster and harder
>You feel anger swell in your chest as you pop out from around the corner and fire the revolver
BAM!
>The shot lands in the wall two feet from the bull’s head
>The bull turns his head up at the bullet hole and back to you
>He quickly climbs off the bed firing three consecutive rounds at you wildly
>Two shots land right between your legs as the third zips past your right ear with an audible snap
>You fire the revolver again as your hands start to tremble
BAM!
> The recoil almost smashes the front of the gun into your face from your loose, sweaty, grip
>The bullet flies into the ceiling about a foot from the bull’s head as he begins to move towards you
>You duck back behind the door trying not to freak out as your heart begins to beat in your throat
>You swallow and pop around the corner again with the revolver out in front of you
>Your heartbeat sinks, slowing down to a crawl
>The bull is two feet away from you and already pulling the trigger
>But you’re quicker
BAM!
>The bullet discharges from your revolver as the barrel spews flame from its ports
> The round enters the bull’s left shoulder as it erupts into a chunky explosion of gore and sinews
>The bull screams as he covers his right arm, dropping to one knee
>Its arm dangling by a few ropey threads as blood pours onto the floor
>You feel the adrenaline coursing through your veins as you run up to the bull and press the barrel against his head
click click click ………clickclickclickclickclickclick
>You frantically pull the trigger as your brain fails to process how fucked you are
>The bull smacks the gun out of your hand before getting back on his feet
>He levels his revolver in his right hand to your head as you freeze in place
*fuck! move move move! Come on!
>But your legs stay frozen to the floor
>You close your eyes, waiting for your skull to rip apart into a millions misty pieces

>>11168430
Very nice!
>ywn be held hostage by a fort of gnolls

>you will never have a hyena gf
Why even live

>>11169155
(ABH 6.4)
>You open your eyes as you see Angel punch the bull’s arm into the air with a pair of bladed brass knuckles
>The Bull yells in pain as he accidentally fires a round into the ceiling
>Angel repeatedly punches the bull over and over again in the chest and stomach in a fury of fists
>Blood sprays out from its chest, bones collapsing under the heavy blows
>The bull falls back dead on the floor, its chest nothing more than shreds and ribbons
>Angel pulls off the bladed brass knuckles and tosses them onto the dead body
>She picks up the bull’s revolver and a short double sided-ax covered in runes from her duffle bag on the floor next to her bed
>”My very own creation, poison tipped knuckles, never thought I would ever get to use them. Too impractical.” Said Angel in a low tone before lobbing off the dead bull’s head with one hard swing from the ax
>Angel pulls the ax out of the floor, resting the gore-covered weapon on her shoulder as she walks towards the door
>”Thanks sweets” she says in a moot tone before running out the door and up a flight of stairs to the third floor
> You pick a sheath knife off one of the tables in the room and run back out the door
BRATATATATATATATATATATAT
>You look across the motel to the opposite side as you see two bulls being riddled with bullets
>One drops to the ground as another careens over the railing and onto the parking lot below
>You see Dee load another drum into a smoking Thompson submachine gun
>”All clear!” you hear her shout from the other side
>You hear loud banging from above as a bull with an ax lodge in its gut screams, dropping down from the third floor in front of you to the asphalt below
>Its body impacts the ground with a sickening crunch
>You can hear an exchange of gunfire for a while from above and below you along with more thrashing
>You hear Angels voice yell “All clear!” from the third story

>>11169548
(ABH, 6.5)
>You hear a shotgun cocking from below as Mace’s gravely voice yells out “All clear! Regroup on me!”
>You walk down the flight of steps to the first floor still shaking as you grasp the sheath knife with both hands
>You see Mace still completely naked with her shotgun pointed at the back of two bulls kneeling on the ground, their arms behind their heads
>You see Riley walk out her motel room, the door already busted off its hinges
>Riley’s paws are wrapped tight around the necks of two bulls, dragging them kicking into the parking lot
>She throws the bull in her right hand to the ground
>The bull props itself up on its elbows as it reaches a hand out towards Riley, about to speak
>Riley pulls a revolver out of her pants waist and fires it without hesitating
>The bull’s head explodes across the pavement as bits of fur and brain matter paint the asphalt in a v-shape
>The bulls kneeling in front of Mace visibly flinch as the corpse glugs blood onto the ground like a tipped over gallon of milk
>Doors and windows around the motel begin to open as people peek out onto the scene
>Riley looks around and roars as she fires a round into the air
>Any open door or window immediately slams shut
>Riley brings the bull in her left hand in front of her face
>She presses the smoking barrel to his cheek, singeing the fur it touches
>”Who sent you? Is this the Bastards? Answer me!” in a deep voice thick with anger
>”Fuck you bitch” spat the bull kicking its legs
>Riley wraps her jaws around the bulls left ear and tears it off like a piece of jerky
>The bull screams as she spits the ear out onto the ground
>Riley licks her mouth, “Now you’re going to answer me or I am going to enjoy ripping you apart bit by bit like a fine steak”
>The bull remains silent
>Riley leans forward about to wrap her jaws around the bulls remaining ear

>>11169898
(ABH 6.6)
>”OK! Ok! Yes, we’re the Bastards! This was a hit order put out by Artur, The head taking over for Boris. He demanded a full scale attack on the SoCal Sisters for Boris’ death”
>”Are you all fucking dense? The gathering will see your deaths as justified and you all guilty for gang-genocide,” said Riley snapping her jaws in the bulls face
>The bull flinched but smiled “I doubt it. You freaks have more enemies then you realize. The Bastards won’t go down that easily”
>Riley raises an eyebrow before lowering her revolver to her side
>”Waste ‘em” says Riley to Mace as she glares at the bull in her paw
>Mace without hesitation quickly shoots both bulls in the back, their chests bursting onto pavement as they fall forward
>Riley throws the bull onto the ground as she stomps on him relentlessly with her massive boot
>The snap and crack of bones echoes off the concrete walls as Riley stomps the bull harder, her face filled with rage as the bull screams in pain
>Riley picks the half-conscious mess off the ground, its face broken and bleeding
>”You get your ass back to Artur and you tell him to meet us at the cemetery on the edge of town at midnight. No goons, got it?”
>The bull mumbles something through a mouthful of blood and shattered teeth
>”GOT IT?” said Riley snarling
>”Yes” the voice barely whimpered as Riley set the bull down on its feet
>”Get the fuck out of here before I change my mind” said Riley as the beaten mess limps down the parking lot leaving drips of blood behind
>Riley brings up her revolver and fires a round at the bulls feet from across the lot
>”I said move it!” she yells as she cocks the hammer again
>The bull trips but gets back up, as it limps full speed down into the main street
>You stand there, your stomach doing flips as the adrenaline wears off
>You lean on a concrete pillar next to you as you begin retching what little was in your stomach onto the ground

>>11169925
(ABH 6.7)
>”Hey Riley come over here” you hear Mace say as she squats down next to the row of SoCal Sister motorcycles
>Riley slips the revolver back into her pants waist and walks over to Mace
>Mace rolls a frayed line from the bike through her fingers, “Before they knocked in the doors, they sabotaged the bikes. There’s no telling what they did to them”
>Riley sighs as she looks over the row of bikes, “where are the Twins? I haven’t seen those two idiots since we got here”
> “Where they always are,” Mace says matter-of-factly not looking Riley in the face
>Riley let out another sigh, “Alright, go get dressed, grab some gear, and meet with me back here in a couple of minutes”
>Mace gets up and walks back upstairs to your room while Riley begins to walk around the corner of the motel building
>You follow Riley poking your head around the corner as she walks along the wall towards a dumpster
>Lying slumped on the ground against the dumpster are two young hyenas you’d guess are in their teens, both only a couple inches taller than you. The one on the left is wearing torn dirty blue overalls covered in band patches with a shredded dirty t-shirt with the sides cut out. Bundled dreads flow down her back all the way to her butt with rings and feathers bound to them. Across her body are various fur-stain tattoos of scared geometry and animals. Around her neck lay a pair of dirty, scratched, welder goggles. The hyena on the right has a spandex yellow sports top with the words “Eat A Dick!” written across the front of her small chest. She has an open midriff with boxer briefs showing the elastic tag “Calvin Klein: Beast Edition”. Most of her underwear shows over her oversized sweatpants with the legs rolled up mid-calf. The right side of her head is buzzed while the rest of her head is covered in butt length cornrow braids.

>>11162158
>striped
>best yeen

>>11170708
>caring about specific species when there are gen-u-ine cute boys

>>11170421
(ABH 6.8)
>Besides the obvious fashion differences, you could swear that both the hyenas looked identical to each other.
>If it wasn’t for Riley’s calm look, you would have bet money the two of them were dead
>Riley squats down in front of the two slumped hyenas
>She looks the twins over before sighing and picking up a discarded pipe next to the dumpster
>Riley takes a wide swing, pummeling the dumpster so hard that large craters form in its surface
>Both the twins lean forward and grab their heads, “Fuck!” they both yell at the same time
>Riley drops the pipe and lifts the twins off the ground by the fronts of their shirts, glaring into their faces
>”Were you two idiots doing dope again? I swear to the fucking gods-“ said Riley with bile
>”No Mom, we weren’t doing dope again! We promise!” they both said shaking their heads
*Mom? What? Riley’s a mother?
>Riley looks dubiously over at the ground to see a used needle and spoon laying on a broken piece of concrete before glaring back at the twins
>”Alright maybe we did a little bit, but hey we had a couple weeks without. That’s a pretty good record, isn’t it mom?” said the one with the dreads
>”No Tinker it isn’t” said Riley in an gravely tone
>”Aww come on mom! Your acting like we can’t handle our shit” said the one with the cornrows
>”Shut up Tyler,” said Riley not even looking at Tyler as she placed the twins back down on their feet
*Tinker and Tyler, phhfft you’ve gotta be kidding me
>“We got us a little nosy one don’t we hon?”
>“Yes, darling, quite the curious puss”
>You turn around to see Dee and Angel guns still in their hands and splattered with blood
>Dee leans down to look over your body, running an investigative paw over you
>”Everything ok? Your not hurt are you darling?” said Dee in a nervous and worried tone

>>11171196
(ABH 6.9)
“No, I am ok. Actually, I think I came out of this more unscathed then most” you said looking over at Angel as she breaks eye contact with you
>Dee looks over at Angel, confused at what you were looking at
“So what’s the story with these two burn outs, are they Riley’s kids?” you say as you watch Riley chew out the twins
>”That’s a long story, darling” Dee says as Angel gives a light harrumph
>”Riley’s not a mother, never has been, never will be, she’s barren Sweets” said Angel
>You look over Riley suddenly feeling slight pity for the monstrous hyena
>”Don’t feel too sorry for her darling, she wouldn’t want kids even if she could have them. As much as I love her, Riley was always meant to be a tough loner, not a caring mother.” Said Dee
>”Some people just weren’t meant to be mothers,” Angel said with a vile in her voice
*Did we strike a cord their Angel?
>Dee glared down at Angel before continuing, “We came into the twins about eight years ago during some of the harshest fighting of the war. We were riding as fast as we could away from the east coast to get away from the bombings and fighting. We just barely made it out of DC alive as we fled down through Virginia. We were sure at that time the war was going to scorch its way from shore to shore. With the war literally on our backs we did the only thing we could do which was run.”
>”We should have stayed and fought instead of running like cowards” said Angel in a deeper tone, her arms crossed

>>11171227
(ABH 6.10)
>Dee ignored the comment and continued, “We took a detour down a side road as the main highways were blocked with traffic escaping the fighting. We could hear bombs and gunfire in the distance quickly approaching. As we rounded a tight corner we saw them, the twins. They were just shivering bones, barely able to walk, yet determined to push on. They were only eleven at the time. We tried to talk to them but the only thing that they would say is “where’s momma, do you know where our mother is?” We didn’t have the time to go looking for their parents and we knew that if we left them there they would die. We did the only thing we could do; we took them with us. They kicked and screamed the whole time but in the end we saved their lives. During the next couple days Virginia was completely glassed along with most of the East Coast.”
>Dee looked down at Angel again to see if she was listening to the story
>Angel grumbled saying nothing as she shuffled her feet
>”Riley and Me took the twins under our care and did the best we could with the limited resources we had at the time. We both clashed on what we should do with the twins or how we should raise them, seeing as how neither of us are really parent material“ said Dee
>Angel let out another huff
>Dee flicked the side of Angel’s head causing her to yowl as Dee continued, ”As the twins began to grow, their story began to come out bit by bit. I gathered what little information I could from them and the rest from other refugees that lived around them during their childhood. Their mother was a Beast Division soldier in the military during the height of the war. She died in combat a year before the fighting reached the east coast. Their spineless father in a fugue state panicked and left town two months before the east coast erupted in fighting. “
>You could see Dee getting teary eyed but managing to keep her strong composure

>>11171276
(ABH 6.11)
>”Those twins spent two months wandering through their house wondering where their mother was as the father never told them about her death. The twins ate what little rationed food was left in the house that their father didn’t take and drank whatever water came from the tap before it was shutoff. They starved, slowly turning to bone as they scavenged the remaining water from the toilets and bathtubs. They eventually took it upon themselves to look for their mother as they journeyed down from their house deep in the woods and followed the back road.” Said Dee as Angel’s face grew depressed
>”I swear if I ever see their father, if he’s still alive, I will kill him where he stands.” Said Dee grinding her teeth as her grip on her gun tightened
>Angel rested a hand on the side of Dee’s thigh, stoking it reassuringly
>Dee looked down at Angel’s puppy dog eyes and continued ”The twins grew up to become something of an integral part of the SoCal Sisters, despite their ‘issues’ they are natural-born mechanics. Tinker excels at physical parts and pieces while Tyler excels at wiring and jerry rigging. Like everyone else here, Tinker and Tyler aren’t their real names but rather the names they gave to themselves when they were both thirteen or so”
>You look over again to see Riley, now calmer than you’ve ever seen her try tirelessly to haggle with the twins.
*She just killed multiple people and ended a full-scale attack minutes ago but she can’t even begin to talk sense into her ‘kids’
>Dee sighs again looking over your shoulder at Riley and the twins “The twins took to Riley seeing her as their step-mother, they love her and she loves them despite all the arguing. Unfortunately, once they hit puberty, they became brash and rebellious like all Hyena girls do. I think because of their past, they take it a little too far.

>>11171311
(ABH 6.12)
>"I’ve told Riley to let them be, but just like everyone else here, she feels personally responsible for them. You might not believe me darling, but Riley carries the health of the gang on her shoulders. She cares about each and every one of us even if she can be kind of brash, that’s including you." said Dee
*me?
>Riley begins to walk back towards you looking defeated as you turn around to Dee and Angel
>Dee gets on one knee and looks at you in the face, ”Look darling, I am telling you all this because I want you to understand. Despite the twin’s behavior, they really are hurting inside. I am not trying to excuse their disgusting behavior but I want you to know many of the people we consider freaks; junkies and trash are good people. Be kind to them, be patient with them, for they have more demons then you can possibly imagine little one.”
>Angel begins to sniffle as a couple tears wet the fur on her muzzle
>Dee stands up and wraps an arm around Angel, “Come on Angel, let’s go round up the others, we still need to gather some supplies. It’s going to be a long journey still”
>Dee begins to walk away with Angel before she looks back at you and winks “Good luck, little one, and remember what I’ve told you”
*Good luck?
>A large paw gently presses down on your right shoulder as Riley stands next to you
>“I am really sorry about this Twigs but your going to have to be babysat by the Twins” said Riley in a genuinely sincere tone
“What! Me?! By those two slobs!”
>Riley grip significantly tightens on your shoulder “Watch what you say human, those are my kids you’re talking about”
“Yes Riley” you say through pain and gritted teeth