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>>11085997
Because OP forgot, here's the link to the wiki which has all the links, including the ones added after the move to /trash/:

https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page

>>11086288

Vluirty/Wiki admin/Professional Smut Wiki shill here

Thank you for that. I'm not anywhere near done adding all the fics I can there, but it's going well.

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3000 word update, new content at "Perhaps he should just go with Orobas"

Goetic Justice:
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>no tags yet

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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here: http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions

>>11087312
when are you going to get a job to pay somebody to write that

>teasing someone into farting
how do you even do this
do you shove beans up somebody's ass or something
spray them with fart gas?????

>>11087340
>how did you even do this
Stimulation of course. If you care for details they're all in the pastebin. I'm more interested in the humiliation/embarrassment of the Florges than I am in the actual farts, if that makes sense

>>11087312
>Still not giving up
Well, you should

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http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch-4-page-39-414290765
http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch4-page-40-414856423

In these chapters Autzen, an autistic buizel, needs to use the bathroom, but is too scared to use the airplane toilet's loud noise. Despite wearing a diaper he doesn't want to use it, instead holds it throughout the entire plane ride, all six hours of it, even when he's sleeping during most of it, and makes it to the bathroom.
Can someone rewrite this page(s) so that Autzen ends up having an accident in his diaper, perhaps it happening during or shortly after his nap? Read the previous chapters to understand how he'd probably react to it.

Help a fellow autist out please.

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Are there any stories revolving around the hot sorceress from dragon's crown? If not, I can make a request involving her

>>11089984
You can, but you're not going to get anything in this place. Also you have shit taste.

>>11086867
Well well whats this then? I missed the other thread. Who requested this?

>>11090050
>Also you have shit taste.
This is /trash/, not /d/. Shit taste is normal and expected here. There's no need to point it out.

>>11090074
But /d/ has as... well okay, /d/ doesn't have worse taste, but it's not exactly a tasteful place either.

>>11089984
Make the story include the amazon and the elf. Have them face a Naga who wants to make them his love slaves and captures them by coiling up around their bodies.

>>11090221
>his

>>11090221
I was thinking of something more 1:1 with a man finally manning up to bone the sorceress, though I wouldn't mind a male Naga doing that to her either, as long as her tits are used to the fullest extent, double that with a bit of bondage because of wrapping/squeezing shenanigans.

>>11090366
How about the first story is about one on one with sorceress, second one will have them team up against the amazon and the elf?

>>11090418
That...actually sounds pretty neat. Though that assumes whoever may or may not be interested in writing it is fine with making more than one chapter for such a thing. I'd imagine the Naga would be focused on Amazon's booty along with her breasts, spanking her with his tail to watch it jiggle and leave marks. Probably even anal or DP if you like snakes with two dicks instead of one. Sorceress could focus on some breast envy fun with elf to warm her up.

>>11090477
excellent idea.

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Throwing out a bump and a nice picture

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>>11091737
Neat.

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>>11090072
Nobody, I've wanted to write a succubus story for a while and I thought this might be more interesting than the usual affair.

Kind of torn on what to do with Orobas though, do I have him take the form of a woman, or have him conjure some kind of lesser demon or spirit who is female?

Could make the love interest a familiar maybe, Orobas commands 22 legions of spirits I think, but there's no info on what he can actually make them do.

>>11092393
I have a /smtg/ shitpost about making a new ars goetia demon but I can't find it. If think it goes
"this is [name], [rank] of [circle], commanding [legions]. Its power is [power], but [things you shouldn't do] or [monkey paw consequence]. But they don't say what they really do, just what the summoner could expect.

Why take an existing named demon for a succubus?

>low priority
Not criticizing though, I haven't read it yet. [spoiler]I'm waiting for sleethe and webber.[/spoiler]

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>>11092747
Well it's not intended to be a succubus, the MC summons Orobas to help him turn his life around, because he loses his job and his girlfriend, and is just generally at his wit's end. Orobas is especially suited to the task because of his abilities, and his being unusually loyal and reliable to the exorcist.

I'm going to turn that into a /gfd/ scenario somehow, either using Orobas or a familiar, I'm leaning towards a lesser demon of some kind so that I can design it myself. I like my women big and scary.

Unfortunately there are only like three Goetic demons out of 72 who take female form, and none of them were suited to the task.

Working on more Grave Goods right now but I'll do another update today if I have time.

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>>11092393
>tracked down a thread hat was
>Dantalion was number seventy seven
>in a book with 72 demons
Bad snek!

I wouldn't make Orobas change into a woman form. He's a demon, sources say he turns into a man if you ask, but his shtick is answering truthfully about past, future and present, not being a deceiver, and granting social status. He's not in the business of granting you a concubine or anything like that. In fact, I'm not sure why you picked Orobas -or the Lemegeton in general- if you want /gfd/. You're going to have a tough time justifying bringing a succubus into this. None of the three you mentioned really are in the business of going "gee Rincewind, nice bathrobe, here's a succubus, thanks for the soul". Usually succubi are predators, really. But hey, I haven't been able to go beyong 2k words on any of the things I tried, so, uh, good luck with that?

sacred-texts.com

This site is good for worldbuilding and related research.
For magic, I'd suggest the Grimoire section and the Wicca/Neo-Paganism sections.
Good stuff.

>>11093264
Oops that was supposed to be 71.

Again a succubus isn't really the intent here, he's not going to ask for one at any point, what I was maybe going for is some kind of familiar or lesser demon with the ability to 'see into the hearts of men' or something and who tries to get the reluctant MC over his breakup while he denies being torn up about it.

I've pored over all the entries in the Illustrated Goetia and Orobas is really all there is that suits the purpose of helping him fix his life, and also isn't going to rip his head off at the first opportunity.

I want to remain as faithful to the source material as possible, while still finding a creative way to introduce smut.

Perhaps:
>Orobas can't leave the circle and can't stick around for days at a time
>assigns a goat demon lady from one of his legions as a familiar
>basically follows the MC around outside the circle and relays instructions from Orobas in his day to day life
>light comedy with the MC interacting with demons that only he can see during job interviews and shit
>perhaps some pseudo monkey paw shit going on where he asks Orobas to 'fix his life' or something equally vague, and that's interpreted as helping him get over his ex too

The ultimate goal being to have comfy sex with a goat lady at some point and achieve some catharsis. I don't know if I built up his relationship with Becky enough for that to have enough weight though, maybe I can have his emotional state deteriorate as the story goes on.

Problem is I can't find anything that details how spirit legions can be used, what they can and can't do, or anything relating to how familiars work. For all the details they go into with the elaborate sigils and what position Venus needs to be in the fucking sky at what date of the lunar calendar is required to summon one of these cunts, the info on the demons themselves is threadbare.

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>>11093552
>demon monkey paw sex to get over someone you were invested in after she went BITCHES AND WHORES
>comfy
Sounds contradictory. I'm STILL not sure how you're going to explain her demon superior letting that happen without straying from his original purpose, and on top of that -enjoy manoeuvring enough character development for that to happen. Especially in an modern urban fantasy environment.
More to the point, I'm not big into occult, but it sounds like no-one describes how they bring the spirits into play because the occultists are more interested in either the chuuni- sorry, proper procedure to do these things without getting your soul torn in half through your nose; or they're more interested in the conceptual powers the demons grant- farsight, education, ethics, rhetorics, making men die of putrefying wounds within which worms breed for three days before the victim dies, or perhaps worst of all, mathematics. Which is just another way of saying you basically have free reign since no-one is going to crawl out of their grave to your house and bash your brains out with a grimoire for improper spirit use. Though if they do, maybe you can take pics and post 'em before you die. But I do know I wouldn't have really associated the ars goetia demons with the idea of using familiars when thinking up the pitch, because the usual description just uses these demons as a part of their resume- it's just a way of saying "Yeah this guy is a big deal, he has X amounts of low-level demons to fight Big G with".
In unrelated news, I'm beginning to think I sound like an asshole raining on the parade of every author I follow.

>goat lady
Of the chiyo-nee or goat-head-on-a-satyr body variety?

>>11093947
Well that's just it, if there's no information governing the use of familiars and spirit legions, then I can probably just make shit up without breaking any of the rules.

Orobas is going to be using his powers of prescience and his ability to influence people to help the MC get his life on track, but because Orobas can't follow him around in his every day life, it makes sense that he should employ a familiar as an intermediary, right? Someone who can be present at all times to relay information to the MC.

When (who I assume to be) Crowley summons Orobas in the Illustrated Goetia, he asks him to 'use all of the spirits under his command' to help him, which implies that the spirit legions can be employed as part of the pact.

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>>11093947
Oh, and I'm thinking something like this for the goat lady.

>>11094059
>t makes sense
My fa/tg/uy cortex is acting up. It makes sense to you in the optic of your story. I know I'm acting like a dick by being a rules lawyer about a fictional story based on things never verified from scripts where there are multiple, possibly contradictory versions, but I think of the lemegeton demons would not use intermediaries because you specifically summon them- you talk with them when they're summoned, period. They do use their servants- but they're like gremlins: you don't see them act, they're just what makes things and coincidences happen or at most whisper in the back of the minds of people. But that's really inconsequential, and anyway I really have no business dictating something that's aimed at a different public.

>>11090477
I like the sound of this already. Keep going anon, what do you imagine the "plot" of this being?

Who is the Naga, for one thing?

>>11094307
Yeah you summon the demon, and you ask them to perform a task, but how they perform that task has not been finely detailed in any works that I've been able to find. Stuff just starts happening that benefits you.

I think it's likely that a demon would employ underlings to perform more menial tasks, I don't imagine these Goetic demons snapping their fingers and making miracles happen, but influencing events in subtle ways to benefit the exorcist.

For example, let's say you asked for a girlfriend. Which of these scenarios sounds more plausible?

A:
>demon conjures a woman for you by magic
>demon brainwashes some nearby woman and makes her fall in love

B:
>demon tracks down a woman who would be suited to you
>sends underlings to cut her Tinder date's brake lines so that he crashes and never makes it to their date
>makes sure that her and the exorcist bump into eachother as she's leaving the restaurant
>uses powers of mindreading or prescience to inform him of what she likes and how she'll respond to his advances
>mission accomplished, and to an outsider it all looks like good luck or coincidence

I know that scenario B is at least more entertaining.

>>11094504
C: He breaks your legs and eats you for asking him something that he doesn't do.

Joking aside, I'm not sure I see your point. I mean yes, B) is fiction, A) is porn without plot, but, uh, it was pretty obvious you weren't going to gun for A. Not in this story or other stories, as far as I know (I only read the orignial DJ steno and snek, & the female pov stories to the end. Actually I think you aren't the guy that wrote DJ stheno, did you?), it's not your style to dump two horndogs in a room that might as well have been a vacuum and go straight to porking it.

And you also already said you were going to have a familiar and that you planned on interview shenanigans, so that meant no outright "you're hired/want the dick because mind control", which meant a more subtle approach.

Besides, you're already planning on having a physical body for the familiar to sex mc with, otherwise you'll need to come up with something else to justify it and make it cohabit with the summoning.

Or did I miss something?

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>>11094504
Neither, there's no plausibility to demon summoning.

>>11094716
Well Orobas is one of the few demons who won't break your legs or try to fuck you over. He's described as being loyal and truthful, and one of the few demons who won't try to harm you or your loved ones.
Everything the MC asks of him, he can do, the requests are all reasonable and align with his abilities.

Don't think I wrote any of those stories, I'm the guy who does the XCOM and Scifi stuff.

I'm confused as to what you're asking me to do, I've been studying the Lesser Key and the Illustrated Goetia for days and everything that I'm doing falls in line with the rules outlined therein, or either is not described or detailed in any way and thus is open to interpretation.

Unless you have a source that prohibits the demons from doing what I'm describing, then I don't understand your objections. I've never played SMT or Persona or anything like that, I'm basing this entirely on the grimoires.

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>>11094059
Ever read the Screwtape Letters? Might not be the angle most people would expect, but there is a shit-ton of practical application for wickedness and malevolent activity in there. It's written from the perspective of an older demon advising a younger demon on the younger's "patient", a man the demon is trying to corrupt. Has a lot in common with option B here: >>11094504

>I live in the Managerial Age, in a world of "Admin." The greatest evil is not now done in those sordid "dens of crime" that Dickens loved to paint. It is not done even in concentration camps and labour camps. In those we see its final result. But it is conceived and ordered (moved, seconded, carried, and minuted) in clean, carpeted, warmed and well-lighted offices, by quiet men with white collars and cut fingernails and smooth-shaven cheeks who do not need to raise their voices. Hence, naturally enough, my symbol for Hell is something like the bureaucracy of a police state or the office of a thoroughly nasty business concern.

Sounds dry at first, but it might provide some good ideas on the logistics behind proper wickedness. Gutenberg has the full script, and there's plenty of plot summaries around too.
https://gutenberg.ca/ebooks/lewiscs-screwtapeletters/lewiscs-screwtapeletters-00-h.html

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>>11094337
just got back. Interested? I'll think it up.

Let's see...perhaps after the Sorceress is tired of summoning nothing but the undead to do her bidding, she tries to spice up a summon ritual by summoning something from the living: a demon. Through whatever new summon process, she summons up a male Naga (the one that pops in my head is the one from Shin Megami Tensei series, particularly either Nocturne/Imagine or Persona 3 version). The contract is made and things go on normally until Naga tires of Sorceress's endless chores/fights and demands (nonspecified) payment as part of the contract. When she tries to take control of him, she realizes that her manipulation only limits her control to dead things, not the living. Before she can actively fight back with other skills Naga is already on the prowl, restraining her with his coil and disarming her staff/orb. He originally would've taken a bit of her life force, but sees the bountiful chest of hers as better payment, groping/sucking them, slapping them, shifting his squeeze so that they appear even fuller, maybe even give her tits or ass a few tail whacks too while he's teasing her about the size of her goods to her embarrassment. Enough stimulation eventually makes her climax to his amusement, so he uses his lower half to play with her pussy/ass while he manhandles her chest until he decides to penetrate her. Whether you give Naga two dicks as rule of nature or just one is up to the writer, but whatever it is sends the sorceress to absolute bliss while she's being ravaged until he fills her up with his seed.
Afterwards, the desire for more payment could lead him to go after amazon and Elf with Sorceress's aid.

Do you prefer seduction, dubcon, or noncon? I'm fine with any way the writer takes it.

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>>11094896
Okay, so it's midnight here, so sorry for not being clear.

My "objections" are purely for form. There are, or were, in no way meant to say "no don't do that". Think of it as when someone brings up a splatbook, and two people who had different implementations of something passingly mentioned inside it say they thought of it differently- neither are right/wrong, I'm just saying it because I have a big mouth, I like talking (out of my ass) and don't know how to breach subjects properly. I'm not asking you to do anything (again, I don't think I'm your audience, so I'm not making suggestions- I only read what's there because I wanted to know how it was shaping up to answer >>11092393, otherwise I'd have seen "man mc uses demon and gets life back on track" and gone on my way), I'm just idly saying it as a bystander that it sounds weird giving a familiar to Orobas, because I usually think of familiars as having a special bond to their masters and having a purpose, and that clashes with the goat-lady thing. Subordinate isn't really better either, since subordinate are demons unto themselves, and they're workers, really... why would they sex up their charge? It's really only that: I don't know how you plan on going from "materialise X to help this dude" to "X and dude have sex". Especially since I don't think you're clear on it yet either... so it starts to sound like things I saw (many) author authors announce boldly and then never finish. So I'm, worried I guess?

I'm pretty sure you wrote krell. DJ steno (maybe her name is different) was one of the earliest snek stories. It was about a woman having her place requisitioned to host a viper (and throat kissing). There were two, maybe three pastebins. As I recall, you wrote something superficially similar, but het.

I only mentioned smt as a joke, in any case that source material sticks with the texts and is even more vague for the few demons it portrays (yes that's possible).

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>>11095550
>male naga
Weird to see.

Is there a specific word for stories about someone taking a homeless, and possibly sick or injured, person into their home and leading to a relationship?
It seems pretty common in Japanese fiction, especially porn.

Even just taking young runaways home for the night seems to be part of it (or the other way around). That hilarious orc x elf story seems to be a parody of the idea.

Anyway, it's common enough that I feel like it should have a name. And if it does, I wouldn't be surprised if the name has something to do with cats since characters in those stories often make references to taking cats home, as if it's a cultural thing (like talking behind someone's back makes them sneeze).

>>11095686
Not that I'm aware of.

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>>11095591
Well I'm still working all of this out, but I think it will make more sense paired with proper character development and more context.
As I understand it a demon has legions of spirits that can be commanded to help the exorcist, as referenced in the Illustrated Goetia, and they can assign familiars as referenced in the Lesser Key (eg; X demon gives good/reliable familiars) so I think it will work.

I'm not familiar with DJ steno, but that sounds right up my alley and I'd like to read it if you have the links handy.
Yeah I wrote Highway to Krell, that's part of my Pinwheel setting, this Goetia story is quite different from what I usually write (which is partly why I'm having so much fun with it).

Don't worry, so far I've finished every story that I've ever written, the only one that ever got delayed is Grave Goods, which I am working on presently.

What do you do when you have a plot, setting and conflict but no main character..

>>11095771
Take two characters you like and fanfiction up their child. Then adapt that to the setting, plot, and conflict.

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>>11095623
is it? I always though Nagas were the male counterpart to the female Lamias. SMT had two versions of them two, the regular Naga and the Raja Naga (king)

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>>11095748
Found the first part. Short little thing.

>>11095813
Wait really?...not a terrible idea.

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>>11095550
Sounds like you know what you want, that always helps.

As for seduction, dubcon etc, I'm not sure. I *did* ask why there was so little non-con on here the last time I visited a thread, but the idea of him outright raping her doesn't quite fit to me.

That being said, I never like using the "raped until she starts liking it" thing as it always felt kinda... eh, I don't like it, is the point. Though I suppose I could work something out where he coaxes her until she consents.

What do you think? It's your idea, do you have any preferences?

>>11095826
As I understand it, a lamia is the "top half human, bottom half snake) thing, whereas a Naga is "big snake with arms and a humanlike face".

>>11095826
Yeah, well, it's just like how people started talking about rapist manticores when I still thought of manticores as the big flying lion-scorpions dungeon T6. Not the same thing, right?

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>snekposting
THE ONLY GOOD VIPER IS A DEAD VIPER
VIGILO CONFIDO
VIGILO CONFIDO

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>>11096032
Embrace the snek, resistance is futile.

>>11096048
My cock says: Holy hotness that's hot

My brain says: yes but remember how you were a little bitch and couldn't even hold a ball python?

>>11096077
lucky for you the snake will holding you this time

>>11096099
Hmm! Nope. Still weird feeling.

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>>11095870
So you are not opposed to noncon. That's actually nice for a change, since it's usually a mixed bag for reception. I welcome it personally, so now I don't have to think of forcing it to be consensual.

Let's see...the sorceress is in a position where she's disarmed by the very thing she summoned. In addition, she has no control over said demon unlike her previous undead minions. And she's being groped around by the same thing she summoned. Scaly, rough, hard without much consideration of how she's feeling, I think she would definitely not be happy about the situation, not even a little bit.

However, this would be the very first summon ever done by a human that spawned a living being. This would make history once she spreads word about it. If it turned out that the summon she made had to be killed off as a failure or 'ran away' from its master, it would definitely bring shame to herself and to whatever magic community she was involved with.

I think the best way to describe it would be forced cooperation, or even blackmail once Naga learns how valuable his presence is to the summoner. At best he could take advantage of this to have his way with her (refer to demands of payment), and if you like, go after a few others (Amazon, Elf) as means of 'payment.' Does what I say make sense?

>>11095932
>>11095937
guess there's still more to monsters that I gotta learn, but it's definitely fun to see alternate takes on them

>>11096152
Y'realize every PC slaughtered a small kingdom worth of monsters in that game, right?

>>11096152
>Does what I say make sense?
I think so. Unsure how the Naga would become aware of this himself, mind. Though I guess we could fit that into the brief period where she's bossing him around.

Considering he has her at his mercy, why would he need to go along with a blackmail plan? I mean, I understand why you suggested it, I'm talking about in the story.

>>11096288
>Unsure how the Naga would become aware of this himself, mind.
This is the first time such a summon involving a living being happened (previous summons from other magicians/sorceresses involved spirits, golems, undead, and other nonliving things). She'd probably be overjoyed about her success and talk about it nonstop, whether to herself, friends, or to the Naga while he's being bossed around (as an option, she could assume that he doesn't understand the language, or is too dumb to understand what she is saying, which could bite her in the ass, or tits, whatever), which can give him fuel to blackmail her via run away or bluff about entering town and rampaging until he dies.

As he is first and foremost a demon, they love making deals. Mostly though, the demons in SMT (or in general) prioritize payment by any means necessary. Whether material gain, leeching life force, exchanging items, they always get what they want in exchange for services, else the deal's off or if really unlucky, they'll take what they want. This, I think, is why he would prefer to blackmail her, because the benefit he gets would be far better than just money/items, or just life force.

>>11096244
That's usually the case for a lot of games. For this instance I just wanna say a bit of porn logic never hurts.

>>11096486
>This is the first time such a summon involving a living being happened (previous summons from other magicians/sorceresses involved spirits, golems, undead, and other nonliving things). She'd probably be overjoyed about her success and talk about it nonstop, whether to herself, friends, or to the Naga while he's being bossed around (as an option, she could assume that he doesn't understand the language, or is too dumb to understand what she is saying, which could bite her in the ass, or tits, whatever), which can give him fuel to blackmail her via run away or bluff about entering town and rampaging until he dies.
>As he is first and foremost a demon, they love making deals. Mostly though, the demons in SMT (or in general) prioritize payment by any means necessary. Whether material gain, leeching life force, exchanging items, they always get what they want in exchange for services, else the deal's off or if really unlucky, they'll take what they want. This, I think, is why he would prefer to blackmail her, because the benefit he gets would be far better than just money/items, or just life force.
I've an idea. She summons this guy by accident, right? Without really knowing how she did it?

She goes and talks herself up to everyone, making out like she knew exactly like what she was doing and soaking up all the praise and admiration and that. All this time she believes the naga to be a dumb brute barely capable of speech.

Until he waylays her, reveals that he knows exactly what's happened, and that he'll blow her secret wide open if she doesn't do what he wants. How does that sound?

>>11096551
That actually sounds pretty good! She probably didn't catch what made this summon unique like previous summons and just went with the discovery for the praise/admiration. I still imagine he demands 'payment' to keep her secret concealed between him and her, which leads to the scenario and lewd bits seen in >>11095550.

I like your thinking.

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>>11096685
Great. Now, a couple more things I'll need to know.

What are the basics of the Sorceress' character? And the naga's, for that matter.

Also, I'm imagining the naga as looking more or less like the guy in pic related, is that okay?

>>11096716
Well, the sorceress is a player character, so her personality is up for interpretation of the writer/player. You can make one up based on her appearance and profile
>Bewitching women with knowledge of dark magic. They are weak of body, but the great knowledge they wield of the arcane arts cannot be ignored. Sorceresses can create delicious food, control skeletons, and turn foes into harmless frogs. A jack-of-all-trades support class, they can provide aid to their friends in countless ways
You can read up a bit more of her at http://dragons-crown.wikia.com/wiki/Sorceress if you need to know any skills. I personally like my magic girls a bit on the haughty side, especially since this one is feeling good about the summon. Maybe even carefree to a point.

As for the Naga, I imagine him to look more like >>11095550 or >>11095826 if you want to use one. The Naga still holds the deal-making trait of any demon, but I'd also imagine that he can be quick to be bored, maybe a bit prideful himself considering where he came from, but knows how to have fun.
His bio from the series is below
>Half-snake, half-human, they are divine beings in Hindu lore. Worshipped as bringers of fertility...enjoy singing and dancing when they are not fighting.

Does this sound do-able?

>>11096930
Personally I'd rather he be more brutish and animalistically-shaped, but I'll bow to your wishes if that's what you want.

As for anything else, nah, that should be it. Just need to figure out _how_ she summons this guy by accident...

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DLFG here. I mentioned last thread that I was working on something, and here it is finished, largely based off this picture. Unfortunately it's far from the best thing I've ever written; working with other people's OC's is always a challenge, I can't quite get into their heads in the same way I can with my own characters. As a result the story is a bit short and the sex itself rather mechanical, without the emotional focus I normally like to play up. But it's something else to post so, enjoy.

M-demon/F-human, missionary, vaginal, excessive come, teratophilia.
https://pastebin.com/z0w52Lif

I'm going to be involved with RPG stuff for the next little while, so most of my writing time will probably be going into planning out sessions and writing up NPC's instead of smut, but we'll see if I can sneak anything else out in between the busywork.

>>11097061
if you mean a more brutish personally you're free to make him more brutish if angered. Otherwise thanks for the consideration/talk man. I'll keep an eye out.

>Just need to figure out _how_ she summons this guy by accident...
Sugar, spice, everything nice, accidental chemical snake.

Jokes aside, I believe demons are aligned with the moon in SMT, so maybe during one of a particular moon phase in conjunction of another element (eclipse, unique ingredient, etc) could lead to his summon?
Otherwise I'll leave it up to you to decide if needed.

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>>11085997
D here.

Still feeling uninspired. I'm trying to make some headway in Grande Futapest Hotel, but it's slow going.

Does anyone else listen to music when they write? I could never listen to a podcast while writing; that would be too distracting. But music seems to not 'occupy' the same part of my mind that I use when I write.

I tend to just find one song and listen to it over and over while writing. Not sure how I came to do that. For certain projects, I like writing with certain songs on that give me the feeling of the themes I'm looking to express in the writing. GFH is somewhat romantic, so sometimes I listen to cheezy love songs like "Truly Madly Deeply" by Savage Garden.

Somehow, in the course of the last few months, I forgot the other song I'd often listen to while writing. Layla by Derek and the Dominos, where I got one of the character's name. I actually named her Layla because I thought the theme of the story would be obsession, but that hasn't really come through yet.

For anyone who hasn't read the story so far:

The Grande Futapest Hotel
http://pastebin.com/SjeEbP1Y
>tags: futanari, futa-on-female, futa-on-futa, huge dicks, balls, ballsucking, blowjobs, anal, vaginal, deepthroat, vibrator, hands-free, cumswapping, kissing, porn, real world, I wish the real world would just stop hasslin' me

(Pic is the only one I have of a futa holding a musical instrument. And since nobody is going to bitch about Western art on /trash/, let's go for it.)

>>11097170
Neato burrito, will read.

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>>11097170
APPROVED.

>>11097237
I like this image. It's one I haven't seen.
Futa with dicks out in public is something I don't see nearly enough.

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2000 word update, new content at "The thing seemed to calm down"
There are some not fully realized attempts at Olde English that I will work on as I have time.

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
>no tags yet

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1500 word update, new content at "Fine, if that was the way he wanted it, Val would oblige."
Also went back and touched up the last update a bit.

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
New tags:
>MMF with trap, anal, handjob

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>>11095829
Nice, that's pretty good. For some reason Viper on female never crossed my mind, but it makes me want to do some Viper King DP fics.

>>11101914
>Nice, that's pretty good. For some reason Viper on female never crossed my mind, but it makes me want to do some Viper King DP fics.
I don't usually partake of your stuff, Snek, but I'd read a fic like that.

Bumpo

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>>11101914

Dumping bugs for snek

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And here's a picture of Cola from Fineprint laying a huge turd, because I foolishly okayed that fur color with that tail placement...

>>11104130


I like to believe she's shitting her thiccness out too because god damn that is the thinnest equatorial I've ever seen

>>11105147
Why a picture?

>>11105155
2000 character limit

>>11105161
That's what pastebin's for

Wrote some goblin Genderbend/Transformation stuff, not sure if this goes here but why not, about 8000 words so far:
https://pastebin.com/kJbFDGHm

>>11106349
https://pastebin.com/LCfUyR2E shit forgot part 2

>>11101914
Hey snek, I have a kinda general minor request.
Basically I think more minor displays of affection would be a nice, cute addition to your stuff; in particular your next outpost thing. Like just more kissing that isn't a direct part of lewd shit, and if you are hardcore enough to dare it, even handholding and extended periods of cuddling and falling asleep together

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>>11106953
>handholding
Hold up, let's not take things TOO far

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Here's the first part of a story I finished editing. 3000 or so words.

Titled it 'Cassie the Hotel Receptionist'

pastebin.com/vBFWbU67

>Workplace smut story
>Female x Herm
>Light femdom
>Blueball ending (for the reader)

Let me know what you think.

>>11106953
I am backing this guy up. Little things mean a lot too. Hugs. Kisses. Holding hands side by side. Cuddling. Nuzzling. Princess carrying the other. Hickies.

>>11094097
That's a good choice.

>>11106953


Hi my name is Shiny Umbreon and I approve of this message

>>11112821
You can't prove that.

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>>11112856

Yeah I can

>>11112910
I stand corrected then. Just keep that to a minimum, mods get pissy about avatarfagging.

>>11112932

I dont post avatars ever outside of cases where I actually need to prove it's me instead of just mentioning I'm speaking

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>tfw writing smut because it's the closest you can come to living out not only sexual but lifestyle fantasies which are causing crippling depression because you'll never get to experience them in real life

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>>11112932
D here.

There are MODS in /trash/?

>>11112932
technically the avatarfag rule doesn't exist in /trash/, but there's anons that do get hissy over it.

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>>11113711
Trust me mate, when you get to the point I'm at, that ends up being a good thing.

How the fuck do you decide on good names for your characters? Every name I think of sounds really bland and unsexy.

>>11114593
Oh yeah, because people are gonna be getting off to the names of your characters.

Just use a random generator, mon. It's what I've always done, or crib from mythology.

>>11114593
Pick names you like?

>>11114593
Depends on the setting. If the setting is anything like the real world, or at least set in something like the USA, I just take out a yearbook and open to two random pages, taking one random person's first name and the last name from a second random person.
If I don't like the result I just try again.

>>11113711
>tfw live out your sexual fantasies by being a slut online but keep writing smut anyway

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>>11114593
D here.

Coming up with names is a real hassle. I usually come up with something to make references to and draw names from it.

Take Lock Croc. The whole thing is basically an excuse for naming the lovely croc-girl "Odile." The main character is Michael because the real "Crocodile" Dundee was named Michael. The first Peter character was named after the director, and "Linda" "Faiman" is the last name of the director and the first name of the star. And then I just started pulling names out of my ass. I wish I hadn't made two characters named peter, but I apparently had two named Kris without realizing it until right now.

For The Long Pull, I just made their names puns or reductions of their assigned flavors. Mel = Caramel, Vanna = Vanilla, Connie=CoCONut and Zelda = HaZELnut.

There's also a joke as far as where some of the names from Player Witch Augment come from, too. I'm sure someone could guess the source, though.

>>11090221
>his
waste of a good naga

>>11114593
http://www.fakenamegenerator.com/
done, forever

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>>11116752
Philistine.

Would it kill you to post writing prompts with the imagedumping?

>>11120808
The image is the writing prompt you simple plebe.

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>>11120808
Well, most of the time there's not really I could post that wouldn't just be saying what's in the pic.

What's more, I sometimes feel as though doing something like that would make people think I was placing a request.

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>TFW all your potential requests are things that won't get done, for various reasons

Half of them are too weird and detailed to be anything except commissions, and I haven't found anyone interested. The rest are either too complex or too boring.

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>>11122708
Well, you could always try, I'unno, writing it yourself?

That's how a lot of my stuff got written, because it wasn't anywhere else and I knew nobody would write it the way I wanted.

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>>11106953
That kind of stuff isn't very appealing to me, because I have a medical condition where I was born without a soul.
I can give it a go though, maybe even with this Goetia story, as I'm wanting to make it more romantic than what I normally write.
MC cuddling with goat lady as she helps him get over his breakup, y/n?

>>11113711
We all float down here, Anon.

>>11114593
I usually just Google 'common names X country'.

>>11104079
It's pretty hard to find bug pics. Why people don't want to fuck giant insects is beyond me.

Didn't have time to write any updates today, more tomorrow!

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>>11122939

Cuddling and intimacy are probably some huge favorites within your fanbase, I'd say it's worth it to brush up on your skills with it even if you dont like it. You tried gay stuff with my commission and look how well that went!

Now have some Sneks

>>11122899
Do artists jack off to their own art? I don't want to request this stuff because it's beautiful and deserves to exist, I'm trash and it's trash. But it turns me on.

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>>11123073
You see the big banner at the top of the page where it says "/trash/ - Off-Topic"?

We're all in the same dustbin here, nothing you can come up with would be as bad as what at least two of us have already done. Like me.

I can think of two of my stories that I wrote purely because *I* was aroused by what was in them and because I knew nobody else would be.

That's all you need.

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>>11122988
What kind of stuff do you guys look for in that context?
Mostly I would be worried about it not sounding genuine, and breaking immersion.
You can phone in a porn scene but it's very hard to write something genuinely romantic or touching if you're not inspired.

>>11123370
I mean if you're genuinely serious about being a sociopath then don't bother because it's physically impossible for you to understand.

Otherwise I'd say just restrain and "make PG" a lot of the things you use to show lust in your smut scenes. Strip the gratuitous tongue from kisses and replace it with a simultaneous full body hug. Alternatively, throw in a playful lick of the face that signals teasing affection and shows off alien biology with minimal prolonged contact.
It's late and I'm phoneposting so to cut short the examples: steal signs of affection for your cats from actual earth cats. Curling up against, wrapping a fuzzy paw around, etc..
If you have trouble with human emotional tells then steal animal ones.

>>11123370

You were on the right track with polars in general. You cubble with someone to make them feel good AND to show them you love them. The second part is important,youre not just trying to give them pleasure, you're giving them love and making them feel warm and safe. Here's a quick and dirty list of intimate things to do with your loved one:

-Hugs. Lots of hugs.Quick ones, longs ones, tight ones, picking up your lover during them, embracing them. And most importantly, just holding them close

-Massaging, especially when your loved one is tired/exhausted. Go for points on the bidy that get the most stress and pressure on them throughout the day, and for females with larger chests, shoulder massages can be downright orgasmic from how good it feels on those aching muscles that had to carry massive mammaries all day.

-Gentle nibbling. Great when combining with hugs, avoid sensitive areas unless you want to lead it into sex.

-Gentle, slow scratching. This can be done for huge amounts of time and is very relaxing for both parties. Belly scratching is great,and everyone loves back scratches

Feel free to add in anything else guys.

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>>11122988
>>11123370
Why do I find this stuff so appealing? Is it because I'll never experience this IRL?

>>11124029

Some of us are just naturally predisposed to being tender and loving. Could be upbringing, could be environment, it's a number of reasons really

>>11114593
Parallax here

I usually have trouble with mundane names, but fantastic names aren't too hard to come up with. I usually pick a theme and stick with it. For example in my repairman story it's "things in nature" (Brook, Rose, Violet), and for my elementals story it was "pun-ish names related to their element" (Ferrah, Connie, Noxie, Calipa).

Write

>>11125285
But it's haaaard.

>>11106349
>>11106490
I like it and want more thanks

>>11120868
>>11120866
It doesn't work that way, anons.

>>11120808
Anything I want written I can write myself.

>>11123073
Sometimes you must. It's harder to look at older stuff as you get better, but in the heat of the moment, you just needed the thing no one else was providing.

>>11123606
Rubbing cheeks is one I'm fond of that's found in cats. One hands gently gripping the back of the head, pressing your cheek into theirs.

>>11126377
Go to France, all they want to do is rub cheeks and make kissy noises into each other's ears.

>>11123606
There's a clear difference between making PG lewd scenes and just adding expressions of affection when no one's looking. Or even in front of everyone if they're territorial.

>>11126392
Some parts of france. You get actual cheek kisses in other parts, or just shaking hands in others.

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>>11128399
Hookah lounge is a shit site to defend even if you somehow don't get bullied out of sunset.

>>11131310
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>>11131310
What

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Vluirty here.

New (mini)story out!

>A Touchy Feely Night
>https://pastebin.com/dmgT6Zi4
>(Tags: F/F, Drunk sex, Biting, Blood, Fingering, Dark skin, Dirty talking, Teasing)

Note: I mostly wrote this to practice my lesbian/same-sex scene abilities. For some reason, it's also one of my more mundane and vanilla fics. Not sure how that happened. I also wanted to make this a monster girl thing, but decided against that because I just wasn't feeling it, so in the end, this piece is kinda throwaway but I still like it a good bit.

Enjoy!

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3000 word update, new content at "Well we have two weeks, so the sooner we get started the better."

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
>no tags yet

Working on more Grave Goods too, but I have a little less time today than I expected, that might be later tonight.

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>>11123606
No, lol, I'm just not naturally inclined to write about that. Everyone knows how to have sex, it's instinctual, but romance and intimacy are learned behaviors I think. It's a lot harder to write if nobody has been showering you with affection. The only story that I've personally read that did it right was Cynical's 'Love Coils' and he achieved that by just laying on the diabetes-inducing romance in ways that wouldn't work in my stories.

>>11123622
Ok, those are some solid suggestions.

>>11124029
See, that kind of stuff just borders on blatant wish fulfillment for me, do people really behave like that outside of fiction?

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>>11135585
Do your characters all act like you'd imagine they do in real life?
That example is a bit extreme. A more apt would be the ceremony wherein the elder krell draws the imprint on Sleethe and Webber, followed by Sleethe saying something apparently embarassing to Webber and nuzzling her in front of everyone. Okay that's still basically cheating, but I think it's applicable enough for what we're discussing- it's a simple vignette, but it shows the couple being affectionate and at the same time it develops the xenos' culture.

>>11137278
too bad that's not a real comic.

>>11137278
>Tough, powerful warrior women for whom sexual assault is just part of the job, something that just usually makes them angrier instead of causing them to break down in tears and doesn't leave lasting emotional scars

It's fucking perfect, I need more

>>11135585
>do people really behave like that outside of fiction?
I am so, so sorry that you had to find out like this

>>11135585
>See, that kind of stuff just borders on blatant wish fulfillment for me, do people really behave like that outside of fiction?
I mean, isn't blatant wish fulfilment kind of the point of smut?

>>11135585
>wish fulfillment
It's about three thousand times less wish-fulfillmenty and more realistic than anything you've written

Anyone interested in doing a fic centered around Gabriel Angelos and Macha getting intimate in bed?

>>11135585


Isn't wish fulfillment literally everything you've been writing including the poorly thought out rape catgirls?

>>11139872
You're right, but smut is only about 20% of most of my stories. Even if the sex scenes are idealized there needs to be drama and conflict happening between them.

>>11139962
Conflict is realistic, people fight, they argue, they're ignorant and most of the time they treat eachother like shit. They don't communicate their feelings until it's too late and they make bad decisions.
I like to write about people overcoming those problems though, learning to love eachother, putting their differences aside and finding qualities that they like in eachother.
I guarantee you that the number of people who learned to love their partners over time and had to overcome problems in their relationship dwarfs those who had an immediate connection and spent the rest of their lives skipping through fields of flowers.
Does it happen? Probably, but it's certainly not the status quo. It's also less fun to write about.

>>11140217
Characters losing limbs and attempting suicide, or being held at gunpoint aren't wish fulfillment, or at least I'm not crazy enough to wish for those things.
Yeah my rape cats are just a fetish made manifest, but calling their relationships with humans rocky would be an understatement, there's nothing idyllic about it.

I don't want to polarize the discussion, I can certainly see why people want to read about those scenarios, and I will attempt to introduce more of those elements in the story I'm writing right now and I'll continue to do so if it goes over well. It definitely makes sense for some of the established couples who have gotten over that initial rough patch, and it won't be too different from any of the other research that I have to do.

(not writing any more virgins though)

>>11140145
I'm pretty sure someone already did that, it was linked on the discord:

http://ivorytowerblr.tumblr.com/post/77765633628/things-left-undone-gabemacha

>>11141675

I agree that doing such things instantly is not the way to go, but I certainly would love to see it after the characters have been through enough together to actually learn it. the characters from Or Die Alone would be great candidates assuming they get a part 2, for example.

>>11141750
Yep, against all odds I've ended up with a large cast of characters that have essentially resolved all of their issues and ended up in healthy relationships.

The 'shore leave' shit I did in the request month was really popular, I'm definitely going to expand on that next time.

I'm gonna use the Goetia story to test this stuff out and see if I can meet your expectations, I want to make it very /gfd/, got all the violent rape out of my system with Rig Runner.

>>11141871


Shiny Here. I'm gonna read that story when I get a chance, but if you think you'll like writing it enough, I'm up for putting it on the "buy art for this story" list

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Here's a weird request.

>Hentai was right
>It's discovered that cumming inside a woman just as she starts to orgasm quadruples the chances of conception, in some cases curing natural infertility.
>Also possible to edit sperm using an offshoot of CRISPR to create any kind of child you want.
>Talented female medical student around 26 has never had an orgasm. Finds the service and has an idea.
>Has an IUD put in, plus gets an operation to make herself infertile
>Pays to have herself impregnated, fakes all the forms
>Buys a "pregnancy or we try again!" guarantee
>Uses it like a booty call

>>11138304
I'm afraid that's pretty much the only one I've got. Found it by accident, I think, no idea what to search for to find others like this.

Which is a shame because I enjoy the concept too.

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>>11141908
That'd be great, I've got Grim on book cover duty and it's going to take him a while, might see if I can round up a second artist, tried to hire someone to do some Nazka character art but that fell through. Still got that list of artists you recommended somewhere.

Been doing research for the bug story too, learning how people live on military bases and reading about insect colonies.
Seems to be 90% people without shirts being intermittently mortared.

>>11141675
>Characters losing limbs and attempting suicide, or being held at gunpoint aren't wish fulfillment
obviously you don't talk to enough crazy people :^)

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Hey snek, I've got this, uh, kind of habit to occasionally make myself a height chart for height difference couples. So I kinda started going through lizardman thread for something suitable for a male krell. Uh, would something like that be about right? Yes, they're supposed to be hunched down and naked, but it's hard enough to find something in a neutral pose with appropriate musculature.

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>>11143264
There's also this if we really insist on posture, but the claws are impractically large and the overdeveloped upper body is, well, ugly. I'm afraid I got nothing with too many toes though.

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>>11143275
Actually I'm not too sure how hunched they are or how long the necks are or what their head look like.

>>11141675
I would bet money that you're under twenty-five and just got out of a shitty relationship, right?

I mean, the majority of relationships as a whole being as you describe? Like that, sure. But successful, healthy, lasting relationships? No fucking way
I'm uncomfortably close to forty and I've seen friends go through probably a couple hundred relationships total, and shit like that? The closest I've ever seen it come to 'working' are couples who don't really care about each other but are too afraid of being single to quit, unfortunately involving kids way too fucking often.
Straight up, the only relationships that I've seen actually WORK are ones where the people would still be good friends even if they didn't have romantic feelings for each other

>>11143688
>the only relationships that I've seen actually WORK are ones where the people would still be good friends even if they didn't have romantic feelings for each other
well, yeah, the whole idea of 'dating' is bumfuck stupid.
if you haven't known somebody long enough to be very good friends with them, you shouldn't be dating them. period.

>6 am
>the wizard wakes up

>>11135585

For the love of God snek, stop cramming so many commas into your dialogue. Use periods! Read your dialogue out loud to see when a comma feels out of place

>>11143867
you would probably hate my writing
>every sentence has at least 3 commas

>>11143945
You should take his advice then, the gueuloir is a good practice.

>>11143736
Could be a Brit or ausfag

>>11143875
D here.

What penis-nose keeps posting that discord, while the writefag discord someone made isn't getting posted?

>>11144201
he spammed it on several other threads too

>>11143688
Well grandpa, the thing is that what makes for good real-life relationship makes for really boring stories

>>11144201
if that's the writefag discord i'm thinking of, it isn't much better
for a long while it was just a few guys bitching about snek

>>11144269
This thread's astonishing thirst for wholesome pornography seems to indicate differently

>>11144277
D here.

The last thing posted in the one I'm thinking of was July 31, and it was me posting The Long Pull spinoff.

>>11141675
Straight up, snek, what you need more of is the nonhuman characters showing/acting like they actually give a shit about the human character they're with, because a lot of it really comes across like they don't give a shit and are basically taking advantage of the human's feelings without returning them

>>11106349
Ah, yes. I remember reading chapter one somewhere before.

Glad to see it continued!

>>11144269
depends on the audience.
super-romantic cuddly stuff is pretty far on the 'emotional attraction' side of the spectrum, so. idk.
seems like something girls would be more into desu

>>11145999
>seems like something girls would be more into desu

Depends. Overly cuddly romantic stuff turns me right off. I turn to porn when I want something properly dirty and raunchy or to fulfill a kink that can't be enjoyed in reality, not to simulate a relationship.

>>11146052
well yeah, the 'simulate a relationship' aspect would presumably primarily appeal to people who aren't in a relationship / haven't been in one for a long time? i dunno
personally, i barely consume erotica anymore, and mostly just enjoy writing it. not even sexually, it's just kinda fun to write.

>>11097061
Shit how could I forget.
Popping cherries/virginity loss (female) is also my fetish. Do you think you can slip it in for sorceress?

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>>11146534
I find it a little difficult to believe that a woman like her would still be a virgin.

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>>11145999
>seems like something girls would be more into desu
>implying
Some people have a "hard-rape" or "guro", or even "best plue player games" folder. I have a non-h folder.

>>11146534

In the realm of fanfic, nothing is too dumb or out there. I mean, the Omegaverse is a thing for reasons.

You could easily bullshit some reasons for why the Sorceress is a virgin. Maybe she's a virgin because she believed that it makes her better at ~magic~

>>11145999
I dunno australian satan, I'm a guy and I love that shit

>>11145999
Thing is, more mainstream sources of porn or hentai tend to focus most on that because they do it better. With text, it works best when it shows the stuff that a video alone can't depict.

>>11144277
If it's the discord in the master list, then that one hasn't had any whiners in it for ages. They tend to get kicked out rather fast.

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>>11147064
D here.

I haven't checked the master list in a while.

(checks)

Nope. I guess I'll join that one.

>>11146980
>>11146634

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>>11147021
I would guess the audience is not girls but lonely people.

I mean, not that I would know anything about that, of course.

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>>11143275
>>11143264
I'd say it's somewhere between these two, I'm hoping to get Webber and Sleethe for the book cover of HTK so there should be some sanctioned art of a male Krell at some point in the future. Grim did some really cool concept art for males that I unfortunately cannot find right now, it's lost in an email chain that's a mile long. I'll post it if I can find it.
Cool project by the way, I'd like to see the chart when you're done, I'm pretty bad at visualizing height and weight.

>>11143688
What the hell are you talking about?
>the only relationships that I've [...] each other
I have not and would never dispute that, I don't even know what you're arguing about.

Love fades, you can't build a relationship on infatuation, and when it fades you'd better be damn sure you have something to like about that person or have shared interests. Relationships take time and work, 'love at first sight' is a myth.

I don't want to write about idyllic virginal loving relationships with no conflict because IT FUCKING BORES ME. I'd sooner write guro, at least then I'd be interested in what I'm writing and I'd be challenging myself.

>>11144277
>for a long while it was just a few guys bitching about snek
I am not surprised in the least, it's getting pathetic at this point.
It's like sending threatening letters to Taylor Swift because she refused your suggestion to produce a Death Metal album.

>>11144334
Great, there are lots of people besides me who can write it then, so stop asking.

>>11145062
The whole point is to create aliens and cultures that do 'not' behave like humans, that would defeat the purpose. They're going to show affection and treat relationships in different ways too. If you're immediately put off by that, then my stories probably just aren't up your alley.

>>11143867
That you Shiny? I reduced it to two commas per sentence, or is it just the frequency of their use? I'm still struggling with that.

>>11147345
It's more that I'm one of those miswired weirdos who doesn't even get hard unless gooey feelings are already happening IRL, so that's the shit I need in porn, too

>>11147967
D here.

I'm sort of curious what you think of my work, then.

>>11147947
People aren't asking for you to just make the aliens act human, they're asking for them to show their own alien affection at all. Likewise nobody wants some boring fairytale love; what has been asked for is the exact relationship-building work that you acknowledge is necessary.
You've already written these exact sort of this people are asking for, we wouldn't be asking for more otherwise.
I think you're working off a significantly different definition of romance than everyone else, the sappy effortless one, when people here are defining romance as the exact give and take dance of understanding and staying close with another person; you seem to have an entirely different word and/or definition for this.

Whatever the case, it's probably better for all requesters to take the hint and shut up. Lots of anger is coming out of this and pushing is only going to get snek to spitewrite again.

>>11147947
>That you Shiny? I reduced it to two commas per sentence, or is it just the frequency of their use? I'm still struggling with that.


Yep, it's me. I just finished patenting the concept of complaining to you about your comma use, so if you see anyone else doing it, let me know and they'll be hearing from my lawyer.

In all seriousness, you reeeeeeally need to say your lines out loud. If you read something out and it sounds like a full sentence, chances are it needs a period unless you are intentionally making a character speak quickly. Same goes for narration in general. Here's a narration example that is a candidate for punctuation swapping:


>Like a puppy that won't sleep at night without a clock placed under a pillow to simulate its mothers heartbeat, he missed the presence of another person terribly, the lack of simple comforts like the hypnotic breathing of a partner or the warm contact of their skin left him with a kind of insomnia.

>>11148362
I sadly can't say I'm very into them. Like I wholeheartedly am happy that you're writing non-futadom futa, because that shit's exceedingly rare and more is always good, but it doesn't push my weird and highly specific buttons the right way . Nothing on you, but I'm not *at all* into sex as part of the romantic build-up, while you are, and that's pretty much it, as I said before, I'm literally not wired for any kind of interest in casual sex stuff, and it just throws me right out of a story when it shows up, though I get that your stuff would be good for the other 99% of readers not wired that way
I like how you keep things lighthearted and humorous, FAR too much porn takes itself and everything way too seriously, and the opposite is always nice.
I guess basically I think they're good stories and you should keep writing them, but they aren't for me

>>11148362
How's the gangbang fic, D.? Enough done to post a segment here?

>>11148362
Y'all still interested in trying writing a futa in male story? I've got a pitch for y'all if that's still the case

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>>11150438
>I wholeheartedly am happy that you're writing non-futadom futa, because that shit's exceedingly rare

Is it? I didn't know that.

>Nothing on you, but I'm not *at all* into sex as part of the romantic build-up, while you are, and that's pretty much it, as I said before, I'm literally not wired for any kind of interest in casual sex stuff, and it just throws me right out of a story when it shows up

Huh. I never really noticed how casually I throw in the sex. Then again... it is smut.

At any rate, thank you for giving it a chance. I hope you find all the lewd handholding smut or whatever your heart seeks.

>>11150118
Yeah, if they want that kind of stuff they should learn Snek is the worst possible person to write it. He has an extremely unorthodox view of relationships where anything more complex than dominance and submission is completely incomprehensible to him.

The man quite literally cannot write romance as you describe it because the concepts it requires make absolutely no sense to him. Anyone else who makes a request from him should be fully aware of that.

>>11151094
>I hope you find all the lewd handholding smut or whatever your heart seeks.
I'm actually really lucky at the moment, because Azimuth is writing like three separate stories that are exactly what I'm into, and I didn't even have to request any of them

>>11147947
>I am not surprised in the least, it's getting pathetic at this point.
It's like sending threatening letters to Taylor Swift because she refused your suggestion to produce a Death Metal album.

As opposed to spitefully lashing out at some people who criticized you months ago as if they were boogeymen haunting you to this very day? I thought you said you were letting that go.

>>11151309

>The man quite literally cannot write romance as you describe it because the concepts it requires make absolutely no sense to him. Anyone else who makes a request from him should be fully aware of that.

Objection. I would like to submit "Or die alone" as evidence.


>>11151380

I take it you didn't notice one if the recent threads where people indeed were still bringing it up? In fact based on your whiny reaction I bet you were the guy who did it

>>11151363
i have a similar issue where i notice i can only really write 'archetypes' and play them off against eachother, because nuanced, "normal" characters start to fall well out of my realm of experience
probably the autism desu.

>>11151604
>Objection. I would like to submit "Or die alone" as evidence.

In that case, why is he still being so defensive about it?

>I take it you didn't notice one if the recent threads where people indeed were still bringing it up? In fact based on your whiny reaction I bet you were the guy who did it

Now this is just the equivalent of holding a "TROLL ME" sign. It takes some real paranoia to assume that all of his critics are just a handful of guys who have nothing else to do with their lives but say mean things about his work on 4chan.

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>>11150118
I don't know what the complaint/request is then.

Things I have committed to doing:
>experimenting with introducing more touchy-feely stuff and shows of affection between characters
>working on improving romance between established couples most notably in sequels like the 'shore leave' shorts and the upcoming Krell sequel

If that's not what you want, then I dunno.

>>11151380
What's hilarious is that I've been getting spiteful comments and spam emails for approximately six months because a handful of people didn't like a story that I wrote for them (which is one of my best reviewed btw), and also they had a Discord dedicated to bitching about me apparently.
Sounds like I'm not the one who needs to let go.

I don't know what you're trying to achieve, it's certainly not going to encourage me to write content for you, and it hasn't disrupted my content production by one iota.

>>11151309
I cannot confirm or deny that, but I will agree with you that I am the least suited person to writing that content.
I'm not good at it, I don't want to do it, I don't know how else to phrase it.

>>11150146
I feel like I need to get my head around this before I go back and re-edit my older stuff to go with the new book covers. I'm clearly just not getting something about it.

Speaking of which, what do you guys think of this? The art is 99% done, still a few little touch-ups to do, do you like the ink blotch or would it look better without it? I'll post the full-rez version when it's finished tomorrow.

Not sure what cover is up next, I'm letting Grim pick what he wants to work on.

>>11151723

There's an even bigger sign for the few guys who constantly whine about his stuff. We don't have a ton of people who view these threads, by default it really is a few whiny guys in comparison to the amount of people who disagree and/or like his work

>>11151723
> just a handful of guys who have nothing else to do with their lives
not him, but that's literally what happened.
there were a few guys who'd bitch and moan on discord because snek writes too much and has too many fans
most of everyone else didn't give a shit and just told them to write more

>>11151723
It's at best two or three people, they aren't criticizing anything, they're just bringing up the same stale points over and over about how Snek is literally Hitler because he doesn't like romance.

>>11151768

Cola looks freakishly thin and small for an equatorial, I could have sworn they have more muscle mass than that.

As for your comma dilemma, I'm always an email or discord/telegram ping away. Hit me up any time if you want to discuss specifics.

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>>11151094
Fuck. This was me, D.

>>11150601
Fuuuuuuuck. There's something about working on this one that I keep avoiding. Maybe because I'm trying to write this one without using the word 'cock,' since I use it as much as a two-year old uses "no." I'm also trying not to measure any of the futa cocks, as I almost always contrive a way to do. It's when you realize the common threads in your writing, that you must do your best to flex out of them. Unless they're hot.

Maybe there's something about the approach that I can't get into. It's already a challenge to make the restraint thing unambiguously consensual.

>>11150613
Pitch away. Unless you want to keep it secret, in which case you can email me. dtales AT protonmail DOT com

>>11151768
I'm asking you to learn how to stop responding to their posts so you don't keep repeating this whole thing over and over again like you always do. It takes two to tango, Snek.

>>11151782
>>11151810

Then it's their fault for not getting off their stupid asses and writing what they want to see themselves. If you think he's your only shot at getting it made, then think again and remember that there's only one person who knows exactly how you want your request to go: yourself. Snek can't be held responsible for your slothfulness.

Get to work, you lazy fuckers, and either show him what you want to see or go somewhere where you can be catered to better. This thread has never had enough contributors at any point in its history, and it certainly won't if none of you care enough about your requests to take a crack at them yourselves.

>>11151768
When's the next request month? I have an idea to throw at you

>>11151920
>It's already a challenge to make the restraint thing unambiguously consensual.
She isn't supposed to be locked in or anything, the setup is just a prop for her fantasy

>>11152108
Well, she's actually locked in, but she's holding a buzzer that she can stop it all at any point. If you don't like that, I can change it.

>>11152258
Oh, that sounds good.
Let's go with that

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>>11151768
You, uh, you want my honest opinion?

Looks cartoonish, in a bad way.
Putting hair, skin, and fur on the same person with no transition whatsoever looks awful. The thighs and breast size on middle are retardedly, cumbersomely big for cats which as far as I know are by and large physical brawlers. Right isn't far of that either, but I'd be interested in seeing middle's layer with nothing in front, because her skeleton looks fucked up. The man isn't better off either, with stick thin limbs, a thigh gap you could park a truck through, a comically small head, or rectangle core that's one size too big for him... Right's tail looks like a sollen worm, it's too slick, and the bear cubs ears looks remarkably out of place.

All in all, terrible erotica material.

>>11152337

The middle one is a polar, who don't do any brawling and need thick fat to survive their harsh environment

>>11151920
>>11152108
>>11152258
How about an good to go/time out light that she controls?
I'm assuming this is some sort of futa bondage thing

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A CHALLENGE

ROLL ON THE CHART AND WRITE A SCENE HEAVILY FEATURING THE POSITION ROLLED

NO OTHER MANDATORY CRITERIA

JUST HAVE FUCKING FUN WITH IT YOU WONDERFUL FUCKING PEOPE

>>11152442
No

>>11152337
Ah well, that's too much stuff for me to change at this stage, but thanks for the in-depth breakdown.

>>11151976
Probably a couple of months yet, but fire away, I take down all of your requests.

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>>11152395
Need more hair then. And why do they look like a carebear?

>>11152442
Several of those don't seem like they'd be possible unless you were a contortionist, weighed next to nothing, or both.

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>>11147947
Okay. I miss the spoiler function.

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>>11152629
Damn that's fucking cool man.

>>11152629
Bonus: elder krell, described as "heads and shoulders above sleethe". Though they're supposed to be hunched, and I didn't find a big lizard in a poncho covered in markings.

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>>11152753
Ayyy.

>>11151768
>If that's not what you want, then I dunno.
It IS what I'd like to see; and it seems like a natural growth of stuff you write without interference anyways. Again I think this is a communication issue where people like the "end state", maybe better phrased as just the mutual attraction state, of many of your pairings and request more of that while calling it 'romance'.

Hell I would actually like to see more of the "managing through conflicts" side of relationships that you mentioned; just about any of your human/cat pairings are ripe for the usual "this habit your people have does not compute" situations, which can then just get tempered with a layer of "- but we care about each other and want to maintain the relationship, so we'll work on understanding it" which seems like the basis of a genuinely lasting relationship.
Heck unless memory fails me, that was a lot of the first pinwheel story.

While on the topic of constructive suggestions: Krell are also really good to write relationship conflict for, as opposed to the aggressive/culture clash angle of the Borealians, it's just born out of misunderstanding and communication issues from the language barrier that's always somewhat opaque in even the best circumstances.

Question for snek:

How feasible is an eating contest between an equatorial alpha and a polar while on pinwheel.

I need to know this for reasons.

>>11153228
I'd imagine it would need to be planetside somewhere, just because the quantity they'd have to eat for it to qualify as a 'contest' might be unacceptable for station resources.

>>11153346

Surplus of a large order of experimental synthmeat that turned out to be unpopular with humans and piled up in storage. The expiration date was hitting soon, and the battalion commander had a great idea to get rid of it while boosting morale and not wasting it all.

>>11153458
>turned out to be unpopular with humans

Military Rectal Explosives say that doesn't matter one bit whether the soldiers are eating them.

Still a surplus that needs to be used would be a good enough excuse/framing device.

>>11153537

Excellent.

One more question then: Do Borealans of either type have the insanely stretchy stomachs that big cats have in real life?

>>11153537
>Military Rectal Explosives
Do you really want me to bust the caps anon?

>>11125538
>>11145656
Awesome! Yeah, I got super caught up in things and got a little stuck trying to figure out where to go from there (in the first draft Morgan was less sympathetic and a lot more rapey). Got a bit of writing fire in my belly so hopefully I'll get the next chapter much sooner.

Nump

I'm just a little passerby looking for some advice.

Do I focus hard on trying to be good and get close to little accomplished (but what comes out is usually acceptable), or do I just write and try to like and improve whatever autism comes out?

>>11156451
Read much. Write much. Make little available for public consumption. Repeated practice will improve your skills and make what you do find worthy of posting worth someone else's time. Write for the enjoyment of writing, knowing full well that you will agonize over little details that no one else will notice. Discover what you like about others' works by critiquing them, dissecting what you find interesting, and then think of ways you can produce those things you enjoy with your own skills.

When choosing between writing something "average" that will remain on your hard drive, or stressing out over writing something "good" that you believe others will enjoy, write the average piece first. If nothing else, you have spent time developing something you enjoy instead of wasting time in agonized labor that drains you. Remember also that the majority of polish is done in the editing phase, after large blocks of words have been vomited forth onto the screen. Keep a copy of the original draft, edit a second copy. Delete, add, reword, re-read your work until you're sick of it. That is the difference between something "average" and something "good", the amount of polish put in during the editing phase. (Plot and other high-level concepts abstracted for the sake of focusing purely on writing mechanics, of course.)

Do not stress while writing about others' approval. It is very likely that the work you put out will go unnoticed, even by what you thought would be your target audience. Write to improve your skills. Talent and persistence will bring interested eyes to your work. This advice is given from personal experience and review of accomplished authors' careers, without full knowledge of your exact situation or intentions. Hopefully this is helpful.

>>11156641
I find that I barely have to revise my fics at all, and they get received pretty well. My "first draft" is almost identical to the finished work, save for a few reworked sentences here and there.

Then again, having ADHD and writing at a snail's pace probably helps me by letting me agonize over how everything sounds.

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1500 word update, new content at "She slinked off to fetch his order"

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
>no tags yet

Sorry the update is a bit small today, had to do a bunch of book cover shit that took up my time. I need to find a secretary who will accept payment in IOUs.

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>>11152753
Yeah they just keep growing if nothing kills them, might be cool to have some giant elder Krell lurking in swamps and shit.

>>11153228
Could make a fun short, I wouldn't say no.

>>11153652
Polars definitely do, so I'd assume that their close evolutionary cousins would too.

>>11156451
Just write, write write write, even if you write badly you'll gain experience and improve, no time spent writing is wasted. It's like drawing, it's a skill you just have to keep working at.

>>11152629
>>11152682
Is me btw those charts are cool.

What's up Shiny, you wanted me to check the thread?

>>11157328

Shiny here, you answered my question. I'm not going to commission it cause I know you aren't into such shenanigans, but the amount of possibilities you opened up for personal idea generation just exploded.

>>11085997
anybody from the /mlp/ writefag's guild lurking? I'm looking for critique

Naga fucking anonymous lizard
https://pastebin.com/ezaQ10Gu

>>11113717
haha

no.

>>11157328
>>11157348


Wait wait, I lied. One more question:

Equatorials, particularly their alphas, have an innate need to be the best at what they do correct? With their time on pinwheel and being exposed to other cultures, I imagined they sort of branched out on ways to show how they are dominant.

And of course, I must ask: What are the chances of an equatorial alpha seeing value in being unbeatable when it comes to eating? Not as their primary accomplishment of course, but as one of the many ways to show their pack that theyre the best.

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>>11157624
Equatorials are not especially smart, you could theoretically goad them into doing basically anything you wanted if you phrased it as a challenge, though there's a 50/50 chance that they'd just beat the shit out of you instead.

I would say that an Alpha has an almost pathological urge to outdo people in all areas.

>>11158054

Luckily on Pinwheel, beating the shit out of people is highly frowned upon and I suspect Equatorials are at least smart enough to understand jail isn't worth it.

On the other hand, fuck my life that possible commission is so extremely tempting. What I wouldnt give for the time required to write the idea myself.

I have to lightly fan myself at the very thought of an equatorial alpha bragging about her comically distended stomach to her wide-eyed pack as she triumphantly slaps her stomach and dares anyone to challenge her.

>>11158164
Now that I think about it, there would logically need to be some kind of specialized MP squad dedicated to subduing unruly Borealans.
Fucking MILSPEC animal control officers, probably with Krell for backup, because how else are you going to stop a Borealan who drank one beer and is on a drunken rampage.

>>11158262

Eh, normal security with long distance tasters set to "Borealan" would work just fine, their muscles don't like electrical impulse distortions anymore than human muscles do

>>11158262
That's probably basically what STEEL FISTS MORALEZ does for a living

>>11158262
Use a laser pointer and a cage.

>>11158443


Snek please make this canon

Please snek, we're begging you

>>11158262
Step one: Train Krell or guys with bionic arms in boxing and kung fu
Step two: All borleans BTFO for ever

>>11151768
>I'm clearly just not getting something about it.
I offered before, but I'll do it again: if you want someone to help highlight good and bad usage of commas in your work, or potentially more general grammar and syntax issues, I'd be happy to do so.

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>>11157328
>1500 update
Please Snek this isn't enough
I'm already showing withdrawal symptoms

up

>>11123622
>cubble
is this a mixture of "cuddle" and "coddle"? idgi

>>11161207

Nope, just a typo.

>>11161728
>replied to your typo with a typo
i meant cobble but yeah lmao

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Bumping with a hot goth pic I found on Tumblr

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Snek here, here's the big-ass, full resolution Fineprint art without the title for those who want it, it's too big to post here.

https://c10.patreon.com/3/e30%3D/patreon-posts/ecz_F5caLR0LxYWiYRl6PxU7l5dXOwRXFwbpEYCr4sn7pyOl40JuRYZzQMY3M-TB.png?token-time=1504569600&token-hash=3C9nkGDNPhCW28lD9hF-FxPSXfnyf7fezjVNQatrJyc%3D

>>11165929

Write more goetic justice!

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>>11168190
Hang on nigga I'm 1400 words in.
It'll be ready in a few hours, might do a bit more than 2000 today.

>>11168291

Please do, that tiny ass update from yesterday blueballed half the thread

Have a 40k fic request.

Normally, Eldar are slim figures, but one of the Banshee's is a muscle girl who is ashamed of her deviant physique, with many of the others making cutting remarks about her.

When they're deployed alongside Imperial soldiers, she meets a Guardsman who's thing is fit girls or girls with muscles, and because of the haunting allure that Eldar have, and the recent alliance now making them more friendly, he starts hitting her up and starting to form a relationship with her, being the only one who appreciates her body for what it is.

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>>11170926
Gah, if I knew how to pull off the muscle kink worth a damn I'd be all over this one. Sadly, all I can do is to second the request and wish you luck. Oh, and leave you this lewd picture of Jain Zar Inker did a while back.

>>11171153
Well, muscly in comparison to other Eldar. May not be too muscly for human tastes.

thanks anyways, though

>>11171213
Well, back in the day I did do a fic with a more curvy Banshee, but I'm not sure that's what you had in mind. It's also one of my older works so I don't know if it's aged very well. Still, I can link it if you like.

>>11171236
I think i might have read it before, but go ahead and link it.

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>>11171274
You might have, but here it is just in case.

Diplomatic Missionary (In retrospect, that was a ridiculous name but it's way too late to change it now)
https://pastebin.com/g1UghCe8
Tags: Howling Banshee x Guardsman, tl;dr, vanilla, breastplay, titfuck, vaginal, kissing, hand holding, pompoir

>>11171416
thx.

In return, here's another story I requested a long time back:

https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/MersenniusPrime/20916/Mind-Games

Mind Games

Sisters of Battle x Psyker. Tyranids x Sisters of Battle.

>>11171556
Oh hey, I remember when he first posted that over on /tg/ (or was it /d/? Can't believe I'm already forgetting). I didn't know he had a HF account.

>>11165929
Holy shit nice! Ursa's tits are fucking huge. Sad they didn't get enough focus.

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>>11169836
3000 word update, new content at "I'm feeling pretty lucky today,"

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
New tags:
>large breasts, cuddling

>>11158606
Sure, I wouldn't say no to that.

>>11158443
>>11158565
Will write a laser pointer scene at some point.

>>11171860


Shiny here. Could you do me a favor and throw this on a google doc and toss me commenting permission when you get a moment? You know why.

>Will write a laser pointer scene at some point.

Bless your kind soul.

I'm having a conundrum of allocating what sort of lower body my half-human beastmen should have. Do people mostly prefer the standard human structure with beastly qualities like fur and claws and junk? Or do they prefer an entirely animal lower body, plumbing and all?

>>11172341


Half and half is the most fun

>>11172245
Done, you should get an email.

>>11173353

Comments and period swaps done.

>>11097237
>Still feeling uninspired. I'm trying to make some headway in Grande Futapest Hotel, but it's slow going.

I want a spinoff comprised entirely of scenes where Selena gets to cum a full load, just because of how happy she'd be.

>>11172341
Basically, a typical beastman or a centaur? Both are good, though personally I'd prefer a beastman. You've got more room to work with positions for a start - with a centaur there isn't really much the woman can do except bend over and get railed.

>>11176100
It really disappoints me how little porn there is of dragon/girl pairings in this pose. It always seems like she's riding him, which is just nowhere near as hot as the other way around.

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>>11176142
I'd love to see something where the dragon has a paw pressing down on her head, and generally being pretty dominating, but the girl looks completely into it. It's either the girl's hating it or the girl's in charge, like this.

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Any reading suggestions for m/m romance? Read most or all of kyells, rukis, km hirosakis and whyteyotes stories already.

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>>11176164
>something where the dragon has a paw pressing down on her head, and generally being pretty dominating, but the girl looks completely into it

That would be a fucking delight.

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>>11176244
How about something where the dragon actually look like a fucking fire-breathing lizard made of muscle, claw and scale and not cheap play dough?

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>>11176701
That's great anon.

>>11176272
>wanting to fap to nightmare fuel

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>>11176824
>not wanting to fap to nightmare fuel
Fucking amateurs...

Is it acceptable to post short stories in a greentext / ywn format here? Currently working on something involving an elf maiden and a bunch of horny skaven. I've never written anything before and I felt it was easier to start that way.

>>11177449
Usually dumping greens is fine, but thread got a lot of visitors since the /d/ exorcist. You'll want to link your greentext offsite to pastebin, but they are allowed. After all, it's /trash/. Anything goes.

>>11171574
That was on /d/, a bit over a year ago. For the record, I am still very much alive, merely terribly unproductive. I have over half a dozen WiPs and have been struggling to finish any of them.

>>11177449
I posted a greentext and people complained about it being greentext, but it's getting more hits than I expected. It's the most successful thing I've written if measured by popularity:writing time ratio. Chances are somebody is going to like it despite the format.

>>11177449
I would argue that greentext is not only not the easiest way to start, but a potential detriment do further development. Sometimes it's best to just jump in with both feet.

>>11177933
Greentext is closer in style to verbal storytelling than any other popular written format. What could be easier than that?

>>11177992
Natural language

>>11178005
It's all natural language. What do you mean specifically?

>>11177493
You're not alone by a long shot there; seems a lot of people are struggling with productivity these days.

>>11178019
Not the guy you're responding to (actually the first guy), but it really is not. Nobody speaks in sentence fragments beginning with "you will never".

Smut is about detail and language, elements that tend to suffer in greentext format. It is an inherently broken (flow-wise) format that provides little opportunity for improvement.

I have nothing against greentext in general, but believe it to be about as good a medium for smut as cubism.

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>>11178167
>Smut is about detail and language
I think it's primarily about aiding the reader's imagination (pic related). And like Infocom's writing, I think detail should be used sparingly. Some detail helps, too much risks contradicting something they already imagined, or going against their preferences. Likewise the language shouldn't draw attention to itself, or the reader might remember it's just words on a screen.

>>11177449
Greentext is really only good for basically storyboarding a regular prose story IMO, and the >ywn format is pretty terrible

>>11178245
If you're just looking for aiding imagination, captions are almost an objectively better medium (or would be, if more writers used anything that resembled standard English).

Language does not need to draw attention to itself in order to be important. Ideally, you should not notice it at all. Good writing is not about flowery language or big words, but rather conveying ideas in the least intrusive way possible by maintaining a smooth flow. Greentext encourages the opposite, necessitating repetition and overly blocky sentence structure. To run the risk of invoking appeal to authority, there is a reason that thousands of years of human literature has not produced any noteworthy >colorwords.

>>11178364
>If you're just looking for aiding imagination, captions are almost an objectively better medium
I disagree, for the reasons stated in the Infocom advert.

>thousands of years of human literature has not produced any noteworthy >colorwords.
It wasn't invented for most of them.

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