>HYENA THREAD TWO: PEENCLIT BOOGALOO >LAST THREAD: ht

>>11076508
Only less terrible than mine would be. Mkay

>>11076531
We can decide on a template later, important thing rn is to get the chain going

>>11076561
A good start would be to hoard what precious little greens we got into a pastebin list like /hmofa/

Okay so
ZIG ZAG in.
But I'm in a buttload of pain, so I'm feeling slightly edgy.
Not good for Bast.
Would anyone object to a new story in the meantime?
THEME: War, drama, violence, madness and generally shit hitting the fan.

>>11076508
Wait is Rick drawing porn now?

>>11076508
THE MAD MAN DID IT

>>11076787
He got over his whole religion thing
Talked to him once, seemed a nice enough guy, if not a bit of a spaz

>>11076782
>a POW would be cool

Sidenote, if you need to stop for whatever reason, I'm sure all of us will be pretty chill about it

I would like to assume this thread isnt filled with moar whores, so just keep doing you man

>>11076782
Go for it senpai any content is good content

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>>11076508
I gave the hyena story a quick once over of proof reading. Hopefully it should flow a little better now. If anyone sees any typos or wants to give me feedback Id more than appreciate it. thank you


Anywhere But Here [First Half] [human(m)xmultiple hyena(f),violence, femdom, smut, pseudo-penis, romance, drug use]


https://pastebin.com/u3k83bNp

>>11076886
>POW
Actually not a bad idea, makes sense for what I'm going for.

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>>11076508
>peenclit boogaloo

Well, scientifically speeking, you're already off to a good start

>>11076886
Pic related

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bump for pseudo-peen


pseudo-peen straw poll
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>>11076928
>>11076886
You guys are honestly some of the best bros, I enjoy writing for you guys as much as I hope you enjoy my stories.
No matter what anybody says about the bad side of furries(or humanity at large) it's good to be reminded that some are genuinely awesome, no matter what they're into.

>>11076980
Still like that artist.

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>>11077010
I always enjoy hobby writefagging I'll try to offer crtique if its needed to. also you dont see my hyena love which is sad

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>>11076508

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>>11077010
Thanks man, I hope you enjoy writing stories as much as we enjoy reading them

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>>11077138
fuck! wrong picture,

Bring out your OC anons!

>>11077078
>don't see it
Dude, I feel it. Where it counts.

>>11077465
T-thanks for the save for my horrible typos. Seriously though not enough gnoll love

>>11076782
As long as it isn't misanthropic like most of the stories involving humans and furries.

>>11077528
Gnolls can be badass.

>>11077542
Misanthropic, none of that shit here bruh.
Honestly the whole beast race is slaves thing is boring after reading it so many times.
Now racism and species-hate? Always a thing. But I don't like it to be the focus.

>>11077617
Its a good world builder to add the culture clash between humans and non humans.

>>11077617
I'm just tired of the "humans fucked the world for everyone" trope, it's boring overused and stupid.

>the choppers and their cargo was definitely the highlight of the week
>choppers meant more everything, ammo, letters, food, and sometimes bodies.
>specifically fresh recruits who passed the draft
>some of the boys protested under their breath, seeing a spotted triangle flying under the stripes
>Camp Kinder, the hyena platoons main base.
>those fresher than most stumbled off the choppers, while the commander strolled out casually and began directing the anxious staffers to the cargobays
>and just as some feared, huge hyenas strolled around, some practically naked, no care for clothing like human women.
>But their commander was a different story
>dressed to kill in a pressed uniform and beret that hung onto one ear, almost over a cloudy grey eye
>from her smile, she was already analyzing her new recruits as she marched over, flanked by two other hyenas
>"woo, I can still smell the lawn they cut you boy's from you're all so green! LINE UP!"
>a brief scramble from the privates before a perfect line was made
>the hyenas moved down the line, name and rank, then where they would be stationed
>until one particular man caught the commander's attention
>"Name"
>"Konroy Nemo"
>the commander paused reading his sheet, a thin smile spreading across her muzzle
>"Callsign...Hyena?" She snorted, looking from him to clipboard
>the stone-faced private nodded "Yes sir"
>the commander raised an eyebrow before squaring down to eye-level with him, tapping the top of his head with the clipboard as if measuring him
>"hmm, I dunno lad, you look pretty damn short for a Yeen, even a striped or male" she grinned, baring all her teeth
>"whatcha think girls, he look yeen to you?" She turned half to her following officers who struggled to keep a straight face
>turning back she leaned in close, so he could feel her hot breath and smell the meat between her teeth
>" You ever tore a man's throat out? Drank his blood and snapped his spine while he drowned in his own fluids?"

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>>11077757

>mfw the story I am writing has humans fucking up the world

I tried anons, i tried

>>11078164
>quick, swap to beastmen instigating it

>>11078164
In fairness a fucked-up world has much more potential for drama than a world where everything is hunky-dory, and who's going to do the up-fucking if not us?

I mean, I suppose it could happen by accident or something; maybe a meteor impact or global plague or Yellowstone erupting or some such.

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I like hyenes

>>11078235
>>11078164
Silliness aside, its your universe, use it how you see fit

>>11078358
I'll take the flat punk over the bimbo anyday

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>>11078478
She's cute both ways imo

>>11078055
>the new recruit's face never shifted, only a deep breath made his nostrils flare as he spoke "No sir"
>She almost seemed impressed, or disappointed by his lack of reaction
>But She would see how long he could keep the stoic act up
>tapping his head again as she stood "well let's see how you live up to that name then greenhorn, Road Burners, Tent 5"
>then the list kept moving, until she heel turned back to the line of men and women "Alright Meat, make us proud, dismissed!"
>and the scurry began
>most fled to their assigned duties, some dragged their feet
>it was obvious who was pulled into the fight and who had some sense of duty to it
>The commander watched as "Hyena" dutifully marched to his assigned tent
>she briefly wondered why such a scrawny body would earn that particular callsign, before moving to address orders and moving to the map tent

>Tent 5 was barely even a tent, more a circus of equipment and a large drape over everything
>several large hyenas stared him down as he approached, all in various states of undress and longuing on top of their equipment
>"Look, new meat"
>Konroy smirked, and snorted "You ladies look like you've had enough Meat for 10 of me
>all of them sat up
>" Well, well, this meat has a mouth"
>"think you're funny Meat?"
>another hard snort "No, I can't be funny, your faces alone would outdo any joke
>one rolled her eyes, the others let out a growl with a smile full of fangs
>"Meat, we could rape you into the mud and leave you to die, you got a lot of nerve"
>Konroy snapped, a full stupid smile, almost showing every crooked, stained tooth in his mouth as he started laughing, deep chest laughter that left a little vibration in his chest
>"I am...I'm sure you could! But I wouldn't mind if it got me out of this goddamn army!" Barely managing to talk behind his laughter
>they weren't sure what to make of him, but they hadn't even noticed how he had slipped through them until he disappeared into the tent

>>11078164
>inb4 its NAM with gnolls

Which would really be rad thinking about it

>>11078548
You got a suggestion, I'd love to hear it

>>11078573
Not really a suggestion since its your story but I was thinking something 1970s or 80s NAM era US war culture with gnolls thrown in considering the mindset around that time

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>ywn have a tomboyish wrench-jockey hyena gf

>>11078545
>The inside was much like the outside, everything patched together and makeshift
>And a bit of hyena fur here and there
>tables, chairs, beds, all easily broken down junk
>"Hope you like junk Meat, it's how we move" the women pushed past him, shoving him out of the way.
>"Sarge says nothing we can't remake when we get there, otherwise it's too heavy"
>Konroy smirked "Pragmatic"
>"yeah we'll see how you feel about it when you're walking through the jungle and you lose your bed"
>the group groaned and shook their heads almost collectively, moving around to their respective junk pile
>one hyena with large sunglasses waved him over, a large rifle disassembled on the table before her "so, Name?"
>Konroy
>" Hmm, Shades" she grunted, then started pointing her thumb at the others, naming them.
>"Rot, Vomit, Echo, Shock and you already know Sarge"
>Konroy blinked stupidly, looking and trying to memorize names to faces before he realized the Commander was standing in the tentflap
>"Right, however Hyena, you are to address me as Leader, Matriarch or just Queen if you've fucked something up"
>immediately she walked over to him, picking him up by his skull and lifting him off the ground to her level
>"You WILL keep up, or you will die here no one will come back for You, understood?"
>Konroy bit his lip, blood trickling down his chin "Yes...sir"
>the Commander smirked and put him down gently before turning to the room "This is Hyena, he will be our new blood since the pencil pushers don't like an entire hyena squad, keep your claws in and if I hear of any roughhousing without my consent, you'll get to deal with me"
>her voice was as cold as ice and he swore he saw two of them shiver before saluting "Yes Ma'am!"
>Konroy dug his nails into his palms, wincing
>Shades, closest to him, noticed before Commander walked away
>" You nervous?'
>he jumped and smiled "its...a nasty habit, gotten me in trouble with humans a lot.."

>>11078862
Why do you want to hurt me like this?

>>11078862
>You will never toss her about the bedroom as to relive the stress of working on complicated mechanics all day

>>11078358
>>11078478
Can I get the punk girl with the bimbo's proportions?

>>11078933
Fuck fuck fuck. My spine is killing me. I really hate to do this but fuck I can't even form whole thoughts anymore. Fuck and I liked this idea.

Fuck my goddamn crooked spinal shit.

>>11079039
You are so cruel.

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>>11079175
Here's the closest I've got, her as a hooker.

>>11079212
It's okay, I still love you!

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merry early christmas

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>>11079212
take some meds and lay down.

Close your eyes and continue brainstorming while you relax

>>11079212
yeah senpai, go lay down and chill, you were talking about having a bad day so no need to stress over it and be in pain

>>11079620
>>11079583
>>11079527
Sorry dudes.
Chronic pain isn't fun.

>>11078933
I don't get it. Is Konroy supposed to be a human, or is he a hyena too?

>>11080394
Human with a nervous tick so his nickname is Hyena.

>>11079583
>>11078862
>draw hyperedgy punk character
>literally say "don't use this" in the picture itself

That's a shortlived rebellion.

>>11078862
I have a huge soft spot for manic characters...maybe Because I am a bit spaztic myself, but fuck if she isn't sexy.

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>>11080518
yeah. its super edgy. Some of the other picks have neon mouths and golden teeth. Its very deviantarty but goddamn if I still think the characters hot

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>>11080585
manic is hot and can be awesome as long as it not someone self-inserting with the text, "lol I am just like the joker"

>>11080614
I always thought gold teeth were stupidly awesome. I knew they were dumb, I wanted them anyway.
Even with my crooked fucked up teeth

>>11080663
>"Lol, joker"
Ew, gross.
I honestly hate the character of the joker, because any mania gets turned into that basically.
I like mania that follows genius, but humble, just kind of stuck in their own head and bursts of creativity.

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>>11080723
what like eccentric?

>>11080865
Yeah
>powerful woman
Hnng nice..

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I like it when hyenas play against type

>>11080923
Good Lord, embrace the cartoon

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>>11080923
shy yeens are great too

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>>11080972

>>11081010
...I'm confused.

>>11081040
tomboy hyena got tits, now the team she was playing pickup football with wants to fuck her instead

>>11081079
Oh, I wasn't even sure if that was the same character

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>>11081243
daawwww
hello friend

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>>11081301

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Bless this thread

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Fucking adorable

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>>11081386
>>11081381
>>11081351
>>11081301
>>11081243

>wanna give yeen a big huge
>irl hyena would rip me to shreds with its sharp teeth
>still really wanna give it a hug

>>11081816
You ever seen that dude who fucking lays down with hyenas? Madman.

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>>11081816
why not hug a hyena though

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>>11081864
why not KISS a hyena

>>11081891
>>11081864
Madman

>>11081816
I know that feel. Why are the cutest animals the ones most likely to eat you?

>>11081891
Well, they're carrion-eaters for one; so it's probably not a good idea just from a hygiene standpoint alone....

Guys, newer writer here, I got a story I'm writing but it's not greentext, and the perspective is different, that cool?

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>>11081939
While spotted hyenas are big and angry, striped hyenas are smaller and very tameable. People in Africa have been using them as hunting animals forever.

>When raised with a firm hand, they may eventually become affectionate and as amenable as well trained dogs, though they emit a strong odour which no amount of bathing will cover. Although they kill dogs in the wild, striped hyenas raised in captivity can form bonds with them.

So smelly but friendly cousins to the striped hyenas.

>>11082158
Does it have cute hyenas? If yes then we're good.

>>11082158
Why isn't it greentext?

>>11082113

Eh, your dog is a carrion eater if it gets the opportunity, but most people don't scruple to give them wuv!

>>11082220
I guess
>>11082235
wrote it in another program, i'll give it a shot

WARNING: world / character building incoming with minimal lewd. story was an idea from long ago for a book I never got around to. Let me know what you think!

also, rough draft

>Deborah’s mouth turned into a wicked grin as her rifle barked to life. The half dressed dirty creature before her exploding in a brilliant scene of gore with it’s shriek of terror still ringing in her ears. So much better than working for the city watch, she thought as the dead creature’s compatriots scrambled for cover. Advancing forward through the crumbling ruin older than her people's written history, her large assault rifle rang suppressive fire towards the battered stone walls her prey hid behind. The gear, the job, even the food is better. No way I’m going back after this, Deborah reflected, Enyo was right.
>Her powerful body lurched forward through the gore splattered ruin with little sign of finesse. Carried on by her muscled legs with claws digging into the soft overgrown ground, teeth bared in a massive smile across her scarred muzzle she was the epitome of horror given form. The black skinned horned creatures, the demons of the waste she called her home, screamed in fear and fled rapidly. They met her kind in battle before, but never when they slung weapons that blasted flame and thunder, wearing blindingly white armor with the large red cross emblazoned on the chest that turned away all blows from arrows or swords.

>>11082401

>Ironically, Deborah knew as much about the science of her new gear as the impish creatures she was dismembering did. Enyo’s new ‘friends’ brought them when they came to her world, and they knew how to keep them running, taught her how to raise hell with them and as far as Deborah cared that was all she needed. They were devastating and powerful and she loved them even more than she loved any of the males she kept herself company with back in the city. Hell, full auto was better than sex,she mused as she dispatched the last of the squat monstrosities, that days before would have given her pause, even if she would never admit it.
>After the ringing in her ears stopped there was an eerie calm, a total silence that even the wind dare not break as if the whole world around her stopped in awe of the beautiful display of violence.
>“I could get used to this” Deborah said quietly, her deep but still vaguely feminine voice rumbling in her throat.
>“I assume by the sudden quiet you’re done” the voice in her ear came to life, disturbing the stillness Deborah’s wrath enforced on the world. Enyo spoke to her on the other end, her voice smooth and soft, much like Enyo herself, truly the polar opposite of Deborah but together they fit like two sides of the same coin, a strong friendship from childhood holding them together through the worst the world had to offer.
>“Weak younglings and slaves, I guess our good friends from Tophet don’t want to waste their good troops on patrols” Deborah scowled “the must be to busy crushing some poor corner of the earth that isn’t under their control yet” It felt alien to speak to the open air, no person in sight, then again, the ‘gifts’ that made up her gear did come from another world.

>>11082428

>“We’ll take the fight to them soon enough Deborah, We don’t have the manpower for a flat out assault yet, there isn’t enough of us including the Templar.” Enyo spoke dismissively, as she was tired of reminding her friend of this fact. “Head on back, we need to calibrate your rig now that it’s got a baseline for your vitals”
>Deborah started moving towards their hidden camp, quietly for a few moments before breaking the silence. “Enyo?”
>“Yeah?”
>“What the fuck does any of that mean?”
>There was a pause, then a lightly constrained laugh. “I have no fucking clue, Xavier said it to me.”
>The smile returned to Deborah’s face, wide and baring teeth. “Good thing you didn’t ask for an explanation, last time I did that hairless freak confused me even more with his ‘explanation’.” Deborah hooked two fingers in a mocking quotation mark, an effort lost on her radio conversation, and lost on her too in truth. She picked up the habit from the otherworldly beings back at camp and due to being illiterate had no concept of the grammar application of the symbol.
>“See you soon Deborah” Enyo said, with a hint of humor in her voice. The radio fell dead as her march back ‘home’ was just getting started.

>>11082468

If you guys like it, I got more. I have a 22 page document of notes for this "book" I never got around too and nothing else to do for the next hour or so.

>>11082531
You think anyone is crazy enough to not accept perfectly good green when offered?

>>11082531
Pretty interesting. Nice that you're not going first person perspective as well. gets more characterization in as well as perspective change. I would always recommend paste binning with small excerpts from the new updates in here as to not bog down the thread if you have 22 pages worth of thought to put into play you madman

>>11082262
I don't own a dog and I'm one of those people who shudder with disgust when I see people let there dogs lick there faces.

I'll pet a dog if it's friendly, but I always wash my hands thoroughly afterwards just like with handling any animal.

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>>11082531
just pastebin it man, put the link here

>>11082781
Gah!
*their dogs
*their faces
Sorry, it's late & I'm tired!

>>11082781
ehh I've raised lots of pets and I've never had a problem with their hygiene. For me it makes me realize how dirty people are. Sadly, there are a lot of people more unhygienic then the common house cat or dog

>>11082783
She needs some fruit with scurvy that bad

>>11082815
I certainly won't dispute that, but I don't let random people lick my face, either.

>>11082891
>"random" people
Kinky

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>>11082891
what if the dog or cat are part of your family? theyre not strangers. Also you know what they've gotten into or eaten so its not really that big of a deal

>>11083449
>Majin Banzai
Sounds like someone liked DBZ too much or something

Just curious for anyone who wants to share since our lovely thread is a little slow tonight:
What would you consider your weirdest fetish?

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>>11084519
Uhhh, probably pet play for me.

>>11084519
The fact that I can feel fine lurking in bara/cboy/s or g threads/ and herm threads

>and apparently psudo peen now

I guess, lol - I would describe that as a fetish even though romantically in rl, I could care less. At the most, I'd probably be into straight

That or I'm wrong and just a massive degenerate

>>11084742
Heh, collar and lash deal? Getting called a good boy and stuff like that?

>>11084941
Hey, you never know what you're into until you try it I say. Now there are some things you might Just like in porn and nowhere else, doesn't make you a degenerate or anything.

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Have a mean yeen with some class

>>11085013
That is some butch Hartman looking toon

>>11084519
I guess just raw unfiltered hedonism is the weirdest thing for me. I'm usually slow romance long term lover but fuck if I just dont wanna cut loose and degrage someone from time to time

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>>11084519
Also, transformation.

>>11084989
Anon, please. Those kinds of things are lewd.

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>>11084989
I mean. Maybe I might be into that sort of thing.

>>11085070
Nothing in particular? Just a big dom fetish?

>>11085087
TF can get pretty odd. But it can also be pretty fun.

>>11085112
Sorry, I'm a natural tease

>>11085124
Such a cute boy. Heh.
But it's understandable, not too strange I'd say.

>>11085173
More or less, Though that bleeds into other things like oviposition and things like that.

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>>11085173
>cute boy
>Sweat.png
Pls no bully. I'm just here to post cute hyenas

>>11085212
Fuck I wanna Hyena cub to feed meat scraps from hunts too

>>11085200
Monstrous porn. Plenty of that around.

>>11085212
No bullyin, just having some fun.

>>11085240
True, but I guess I dont find my other taste all that wierd I guess, abnormal sure.

>>11085236
As damn well you should.

>>11085240
Lies. Fun is the purest form of bullying.

>>11085212
That kind of looks like my pup.

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>>11085543
Your pupper might be a hyaenidae in a wig.

>>11085592
I...would certainly hope not.
He likes nipping too much.

>>11085874
>he likes nipping too much
Anon it's already too late. If you see him going for the spice rack, run.

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>>11076508
Will there be wimpy girly boys with protective hyena gfs in this thread?

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>>11086002
Don't give me ideas or I might just have to make something out of them

>>11086094
Eghplant

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>>11086094
Just make a girly bird boy who's weak and fragile and cries a lot while his Hyena girl comes in kick ass

>>11084519
Honestly? Casual things.

Dresses with exposed backs, kissing, hand holding, cuddling, talks about the future together, sex out of love not for pleasure, etc.

I think I've been exposed to way too much porn and begun to obsess over the regular, lovey dovey shit. Regular sex and the freak shit fetishes just don't do it for me anymore.

>>11082262
my dogs jaws aren't strong enough to crush every bone in my body tho.

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>>11083266

>>11082262
also hyenas tend to roll around in filth, such as carcasses and what not.

Wanna marry a hyena
Gonna marry a hyena

>>11082113
Humans have one of the most disgusting bites in the animal kingdom. It's pretty common to identify someone who has punched someone in the teeth from the infection they get on their hand.

Shit, anyone who has ever known a dentist can tell you that. Shit hasn't gotten better since we started supplementing our diet with sugary crap and other processed foods.

But you can still kiss people without that affecting you. So I think you'll be fine.

>>11087953
i'm pretty sure its guaranteed that you'll get an infection from a human bite.

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>>11076936
Read like half of this. Got my hopes up. It's fuckin gay my nigga

>>11088326
Magical expanding assholes are gay?

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>>11084519
being femdom raped with choking, striking, biting, scratching, and cutting. yes I am ashamed of myself.

inb4 die beta cuck

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>>11088326
>>11089104
pseudo-peen gay? naw man

>>11085039
she's butch and taking my heart man

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>>11085013
>>11085087
neat, i can dig it

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>>11076508
Remeber, protect your girly bf, Hyena girls

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>>11089550

>>11088174
Well, yes, but that's partially because the kinds of microbes which live in the human mouth are (unsurprisingly) the kind of microbes which specifically like to live in the human body.

I suspect a human bite would have a lower risk of infection to some other species.

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>>11077154
Would you let her make you her prison bitch anons?

>>11090038
Nah.

I'd have a loving relationship with her where we beat the shit out of anyone that gets in our way.

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>>11090118

ooo, even better

>"me and you will take over this jail anon. We'll show everyone not to fuck with us. Anybody gives you any looks, you come to me, yah hear me? I'll show them not to mess with my bf. After we get out of this fucking shit hole, me and you will show the entire world not to fuck with us"

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>>11089442
The watermarking from this person's obnoxious enough that I felt compelled to tone it down to something a bit less intrusive myself.
If you want people to know that you made this artwork outside of wherever you post it, it's perfectly reasonable to put some text in to say who you are, maybe a URL as well to make it really easy to find you, but don't throw text/logos allover the image to the point that it distracts from the artwork itself. It just serves as a massive detriment to the effort put into making it if all that people see is MADE BY ME DON"T USE THIS ©©©©©©©©.

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>>11090371
thank you hyena-friend. yeah watermarking is ok but this artist is just fucking over the top with it

>>11089706
>I looked it up
Human bites account for as many as 20% of all bite injuries in some urban areas. The risk of infection after a bite is 10–20%, and about 30–60% of the infections are of mixed aerobic-anaerobic origin.

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>>11090591
hmm i guess naked face eating bathsalt zombies are more common then we think

So. I'm gonna try to finish Bast today.
Hopefully my spine won't give out again.
Might take requests after that

>>11090701
BASED
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S
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>>11090701
Awww yeah more Bast bully

>>11090038
>Flick slammed against the cell wall, feeling the rough brick of the wall through her theoretically-white prison singlet.
>"Get off me you fuckin' psycho!" she yowled.
>Her new cell-mate, a hyena by the name of Razor had been transferred from another facility just the day before. Rumour had it she'd brutalised a guard who tried to pull her off another inmate.
>The powerfully-built hyena, already topless, grinned, showing off her jagged fangs.
>"Don't play coy with me, sugar-plum, I seen the way you look at me when I'm workin' out in the yard! You want this."
>The Razor held the grey-furred feline by the throat with one, clawed, hand and slipped the other under Flick's top; roughly squeezing and groping at her breasts hard enough to draw another cry.
>"Augh! You're fuckin' crazy! Get away from me you fuckin' bitch!"
>With a final, vicious twist of a stiffening nipple, Razor withdrew her hand, leaving Flick's singlet pushed up to reveal her soft, round tits, jostling against the sexually aggressive hyena's own, larger mounds. The helpless feline could feel the other female's nipples were already stiff with arousal.
>"Oh, we gon' see who the bitch, bitch; gon' get me some o' that pussy-pussy."
>The hyena slid her free hand down Flick's side; caressing the cat's hip, and finally reaching around behind her to kneed her ass.
>Flick gasped in spite of herself; at halfway through a fifteen-year stretch for grand larceny it had been a very long time since she'd had anything other than her own tongue and fingers between her legs. Deep within her core, she felt something urging her to give in, and let the butch hyena have her way.
>Even though she denied it, the slim feline *had* been staring at Razor in the yard; watching the hyena's muscles flex and knot under the strain of weights most of the girls around her couldn't even attempt.
>Even so, Flick pulled away as Razor leaned in to kiss her.
Any feedback, criticism, idle abuse, etc, welcome. Anyone want any more?

>>11092208
i want to have your children

Gonna have a go at writing a pastebin for the thread, bear with me.

>>11090627
Holy shit, my dick is diamonds. Got any more?

>>11076953
that's not how you sue a wrench

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>>11092870
nah, i can't find anymore femdom of this character but i do have two more topper hyena fem pics

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>>11092971

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thats all i got for now
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>>11092870
Done. I went with /yeen/ for the name: https://pastebin.com/uTjjFWw8

Thoughts on this/anything to add?

>>11093056
Thanks anon. time to yank my fucking cock off to these

>>11093035
That's some wonky perspective

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>>11093360
thanks anon! Its about time we gathered the yeen stuff

>>11092971
Is that a chain going from a piercing in his tongue to a piercing in her peen?

That just seems like a disaster waiting to happen. And not in a sexy way either

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>>11093930
kinky, but a disaster none the less

ZIG ZAG IS UP.
Dunno for how long though, heavy storm might lock down the systems.

>The diner was nice, Bast insisted you not take her anywhere fancy
>and luckily so.
>Bast and her idea of dinner conversation wasn't exactly high class but she was charming in a roguish way
>"..and this one time, one of my girlfriends tried it out with another hyena, a male this time and the fuck ate so much, she could barely get to his dick! Ha ha! So much for being well hung!'
>"so...you've never been with a male Yeen?"
>" What? Oh, no I have, kinda, they act all big and tough but any show of force in the bedroom and they completely shut down, turn into submitting little bitches" she snorted, shaking her head, earrings jingling from her spadelike ears
>You pause, hearing another side to that story
>"Have you been with any Females then?"
>Bast paused and swallowed what was in her mouth this time

FUCK. GODDAMN. Why is it every time I try to do something...fuck. consider that a preview then

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>>11094286
You should get back to resting, no writing until you're better

Doc's orders

>>11092496
...thanks?
>>11092208
cond.

>Flick's right hand was on Razor's wrist, trying to support some of her body-weight as the savage hyena was almost lifting her off the ground, strangling her.
>"G-get off me, f-fuckin' dyke b-b-bitch!" She managed to choke out, and raised her left hand, claws extended in a threatening gesture.
>Without effort Razor grabbed the claw and twisted it painfully back behind Flick's back.
>The cat let out an involuntary squeak as her cell-mate yanked her closer; the hyena's muzzle almost touching her fur, hot breath in her ear.
>"Don' fuckin' try my patience, sugar-plum. Wouldn' wan' to turn this rape into a murder, huh?"
>So saying, with a loud clack Razor snapped her jaws, easily powerful enough to shatter bone, so close to Flick's cringing face that she felt the air displaced.
>The grey cat flinched away, but demurred with mild "please.. p-please don't."
>Without a word Razor flung her face-down onto the bottom bunk, where the feline lay, unresisting as the hyena yanked down her orange, prison-issue, pants.
>Standing back for a moment, Razor leered at her victim.
>"Hmmm, tha's a nice ass. I'm gonna enjoy this."
>Looking back over her shoulder with dread Flick saw the predatory lesbian pull her own pants down to mid-thigh.
>Flick had heard the rumours about hyenas, who hadn't? Especially in a womens' prison. She just always assumed they'd been exaggerations or outright lies.
>Now, there it was; a broad, fully erect, Spotted Hyena pseudopenis.
>To the terrified cat it looked huge.
>"Fuck me!" She breathed.
>Predictably, her cell-mate smiled wickedly and let out brief, hyena-cackle.
>"Ahahaha! Tha's th' sprit, girl!"
>"N-n-no, p-please, no!" Flick begged as >Razor climbed on top of her, pressing the throbbing tube of flesh between the cat's buttocks.
>"Lessee if we can put that mouth to better use; c'mere."

Part 3 shortly.
Any feedback at all very welcome! (Srsly you guise am I doin it right?)

>>11094512
I guess all the regs are out sleeping with non-yeen girls, fucking normalfags.

But yeah, this is good, pretty hot stuff, post more.

>>11094512
Yes you are "doin it right"

>>11094512
Hey, if no one told you it's garbage yet, then it's good.
I like your pacing.

>>11094403
You can't make me!
>it doesn't help I constantly try to write during work.

>>11094926
I get you then, whatever helps through the grind

Did you ever see a chiropractor for you spine though?

>>11095452
Nope. I still have to make an appointment

>>11084519
My own weirdest fetish is probably my foot fetish.
Everything else I can indulge in and talk to people to. But even my perverted deviant friends think it's gross and weird.
So I don't talk about it and try to ignore it.

>>11095524
And things like this are precisely why.

>>11094512
It's okay, doesn't have any story or depth but it seems to just be some mindless smut so it's passable.

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>>11092208
>>11094512

This is great stuff anon. overall the flow is just right, ability for direction is great, the mental and vocal dialogue is well done

the only quips I have are very minor and not really a big deal verging on nitpicking but since you asked for feedback here it is: You have one or two redundancies in phrasing like ex. ("back behind Flick's back.") [instead just omit the first "back"]which hinder flow but really aren't that big of a deal. Every writer has redundancies in phrasing at some point.

Second nitpick is Razor's accent, maybe I am stupid but I just can't put a finger on her accent. Maybe next time you include a character with a custom dialogue I would either mention their accent or give prior dialogue to give the reader the ability to picture how they sound ex. (Razor gnashed her teeth next to Flick's ear before continuing in a thick Carolinian drawl "etc etc etc")


Overall amazing and really well done, keep up the good work! I hope to see more of your greens in the future!

>>11094512
Cond.

>>11094658
>>11094664
>>11094677
Okay. Thanks!

>She grabbed hold of Flick's hair pulling her head back sharply, and clamped her mouth over that of her helpless victim; aggressively invading with a furious, whirling, tongue.
>Less a kiss, more oral wrestling; a forcing of further dominance even as the hyena ground her hips; hot-dogging her bulbous length between her cell-mates ass-cheeks.
>Still slurping messily on the feline's mouth, Razor reached under her to start grabbing at her breasts again; kneading them one at a time in the palm of her hand.
>Breaking the lip-lock the hyena withdrew, leaving ropes of saliva connecting her face to that of Flick as she spluttered and gasped.
>"Kaff kaff - Ah! Please, you're hurtin' me!" Pleaded the frightened cat.
>Running her hand down the feline's belly to grope roughly between her legs Razor extracted more half-pained, half aroused gasps and squeals from her captive.
>The sexually aggresive convict brought her hand back up; her fingers glistened with still-warm excited wetness.
>"looks to me like you enjoy a li'l o' th' rough stuff, sweety! Ahahahaha!" Razor giggled malevolently.
>"How's it taste, shug?" The hyena pushed her fingers into Flicks mouth, forcing the cat to taste her own juices. Almost involuntarily, Flick suckled on the intruding digits, a small moan escaping her.
>The hyena grinned like maniac "Shit, girl, I think you're about as ready as you're ever gon' be!"
>Razor rocked her hips back and reached down, seizing the fleshy tube of her pseudopenis, pushing the end against the drooling-wet lips of Flick's cunt before surging forward into the molten-hot depths of her helpless cell-mate.
>Although girthier than a true cock, Razor's imitation member was somewhat softer and spongier. Nevertheless, Flick was stretched to her limits.
>All she could do was force a wad of dirty, prison, bed-linen into her own mouth and bite down hard to stifle a scream.
Sorry it's taking so long for each update!

>>11096867
Oops, I missed this one when I replied to the others.

Yes, I noticed some redundancy when I re-read what I'd writen after I posted it; I'll have to watch for that in future.

As for Razor's accent; I was going for 'stereotypical black inmate'. Y'know; 'cause hyenas are an African species (Is that racist? I mean, I'm on 4chan, so I probably shouldn't care, but still...). If that's not comming off in the dialogue then I suppose I need to work on it, as I'm not really sure how to describe that particular accent. Ebonic, maybe? I know 'urban' is used as a euphemism for black sometimes, especially when referring to them in a negative context.

Anyway; thanks very much for the feedback. I'll try and get part 4 up tonight, but I can't make any promises as it's already 2:30 a.m. here (but, on the other hand; it is the weekend tomorrow, so you never know).

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>>11084742
>>11085124
>>11085212
>>11085592
IMPOSTER REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>11098708
Goodness.

>confession time
Heh, uh, I actually like the smell of rot and death.
Quite a morbid story behind that..

Damn slow ass Friday night

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>>11089685
I like to imagine that the male Hyenas are seen as sweet and innocent when really, they pretend to be 'bullied' and cry to their gf hyena on how they were being 'rude' and give a mean dark smirk when their face revealed off from their gf's chest as their gf beat the shit out of those bullies

>>11101762
I mean you wouldnt be wrong. Males are pretty beta and back stabby in most matriarchal hierarchies

>>11082637
>>11082783

Well I added more content to my story and threw it all into a pastebin for you guys, let me know what you think.

Criticism is more then welcome!

https://pastebin.com/AFGqErU5

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>>11098265
I usually try to sway away from stereotypical ebonics because its hard to pull off without sounding really cheesy or "too-poochy".

I dunno I usually recommend letting the character reveal their voice to you as you brainstorm them instead of grabbing a voice you want and giving it to the character as pretentious as it sounds. I think some of the crappiest dialogue I ever wrote came from trying to start with an accent before creating the character.

keep it up man!

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>>11101762
yeah I could see that too

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>>11099925
go on......

>>11101762
>Male Hyena get's mad at a guy for not giving him a free burger
>Male Hyena cries to his bara female Hyena
>"That guy won't give me some food because he doesn't sell to wimps like me"
>Bara Hyena babe cracks her knuckles and march to the guy
>Fucboi hyena wipes his tears and gave a nice smug face

>>11101997
>text with that picture
Are...are you trying to seduce me?

But if you're really interested: I grew up in Texas, but specifically in a weird area. Texas=hot rot. Eugh.
Not only that the area I lived in wasn't developed for a long add time so the area just outside the suburbs had tall grass, almost marsh like areas.
Long story short, killer hid a few bodies in one of those areas me and my ma used to frequently ride past. Took a few days or so to find the bodies.
Not only that, when I was younger, various issues mostly regarding money had me and my mother move to a junkyard shack. They had dogs. The dogs loved me. Their show of affection? Protection/bringing me their kills.

>>11102116
This could easily come back to bite him since in this case the guy could just say he was trying to get a free one. I'm sure the females are fine with protecting their men, but being used or having their time wasted will still piss them off.

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>>11102166
>implying female Hyenas are smart

>>11102273
spotted hyenas are actually rather clever and they can teach each other things too

>>11102295
Like what? Teach the boys how to make a sandwhich for them?

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>>11102165
I just love learning about people's thoughts and the way they tick. Thanks for the story!

>>11102389
Yup. Anytime.
I'm full of them.

>>11102389
What do male Hyenas do all day?

>>11101928
This is pretty good! And it's nice to see humans as allies considering how most these stories involving the two go. Looking forward to some more updates mosdef. I'm on mobile so I'm just going off what I remember but I think a bit more descriptive text for the characters are needed to paint a better picture. It seems you get some details in but some are missing as well

>>11102441
>sleep
>hunt
>lay around
>wander
>get bullied by the females
>etc

>>11102450
By bullied you mean "something else", right?

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>>11102441
masturbate probably

>>11102480
I was talking normal animal spotted hyenas. The females do not put their pseudopenis in anyone and don't even mount other clan mates. There's actually very little mating done between the males and females of the same clan. The males that wander around by themselves and follow a receptive female until she lets him get closer are the majority of matings.

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Page 10 is a pretty bad place to be

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>>11103754

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>>11103763

>>11103754
Unf punky bitch..my heart is all aflutter

>>11103763
She caught a teen shark, isn't that illegal most places?

>>11103766
Army punk. Nice. I'm not cut out for the army myself, heh I'd rather be the husband waiting for her return.

>>11102389
Honestly I'd love to get a big ass magnet and fuck with her

>>11102346
Kek

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>>11103754
new favorite waifu
>>11103763
>>11103766
these are amazing

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>>11104732
>"lets see if your magnet can pick up this"

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>>11104980

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>>11104963
>>11104714
Same
Shame that e6 only had 3 of her for the bump post

https://e621.net/post/index/1/sybil_(deathhydra)

Most of them are on FA sadly

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>>11105171
Dig that she looks 5'8 at the most, and not very brawny

>but she can still kick your ass

i wanna see some freaking hyena girl penis

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>>11105165
>>11105167

Is it just me or is it too fucking hot in here with all these gorgeous 10/10 hyenas ladies?

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>>11105196

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>>11105196
>>11105631

>>11076936
I loved that. Part two?

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>>11105196
what about yeeny femboy peen?

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>>11105659
This is the first half of the story, I am taking a short break to get irl shit done and brainstorm for the second half. I'll be picking it back up in couple days or sooner whenever I get free time and enough material for the second half.

Thank you for the feedback. What did you like about it? any critique or questions?

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>>11105196
"heh you really wanna see my junk don't you anon? Yeah, fucbois like you are so easy to get. You all want to see if the rumors are true. Ha, well get ready honey, I am about to show you what a real woman looks like."

>>11105685
Will give ya detailed feedback in four hours once work's over, if thread's still up.

>>11105171
Hmm, zombie killer?

>>11105717
Hmm. For some reason I read that as Hot Ice Hilda...
Damn I loved outlaw star

>>11102295
Wikipedia says Spotted Hyenas have the largest brain of any hyena type, even accounting for the larger skull size.

>>11106208
Big ole yeen heads

>>11105685
You seem to like teeth

>>11105717
freaky dick on dick sex excite

>>11102449

Interesting, some other advice I got was leaning the other way, somewhat. Will see what I can do.

Yeah, I got plenty of updates planned, this is a story I've been developing since those "humanity, fuck yeah" threads on /k/ years ago.

>>11105685
Add a tongue and I will save that image

>>11105685
Aaaalright. Lifting boxes sure is hard on the back.

What I liked:

>The worldbuilding
Clearly more than just some inane excuse to have animal girls with dicks running around in leather. Aside from the one implausible element (the furries, of course) it is believable and reveals itself naturally without exposition and leaves enough unknown that I want to know more. In addition, it doesn't pull any punches, which leads nicely into...

>The tone
It is obviously lewd but, save for the very first bit with the girls giving Anon a ride in exchange for a ride and Angel's dick magic (more on this one later), it is largely free of porn logic and doesn't pull any punches. When bull dude is threatening Anon's life, military yeen lady doesn't suck his dick in exchange for mercy. She fucking murders him, because that's pretty much the only option left to her. The story is not gratuitous with its violence but it doesn't ignore it for the sake of trying to preserve the boners of the more squeamish members of the audience.

>Dee
I was a mite concerned when she was introduced that this character would be yet more porn logic. Much to my pleasant surprise, she turned out to be somewhat lewd but ultimately more motherly and affectionate, leading to very cozy character development and worldbuilding, which made the sex scene actually meaningful instead of another in a series of shags.

>Mace
Who told you I like flat-chested girls that kick ten flavors of ass but also have a soft side? Mace is stellar. Not the first time I've been musing over something "deep" while fapping but definitely the most memorable one in a while. Mace's sexual catharsis and mourning were excellent. And again, I love the worldbuilding from her scene.

>The variety
Even when I don't like a portion of the story, I can just skim along through until the next gang member is introduced. It keeps the bad bits from dragging and the good bits from getting stale. Furry harem anime?

Parts I disliked next post.

>>11105685
>>11108637
Fuggin' character limits.

What I disliked:

>The technical aspects

It's a good start to negative criticism when the first thing called out is simple technicality. The formatting, spelling, grammar (your vs. you're in particular), punctuation, etc. need some work. It wasn't so bad that it prevented me from enjoying the story, but I did notice it throughout.

>Riley
She definitely had some fun banter with the whole Twig schtick and whatnot but, by and large, she does feel too flat and generic when put against Dee or Mace. Maybe it was intentional; using her as some kind of base template for a lewd pseudoherm yeen biker that the other Sisters expanded upon. Maybe you just had to get into the swing of things, as she was the first character you wrote besides anon. Either way, she was servicable (*rimshot*) but not memorable.

>Angel
Angel felt like a badly-executed gimmick. I would've enjoyed her rather more if she was a bit more esoteric and freaky with her religion and less an excuse to break Anon's dick for cum magic.

All in all, this story was rather excellent and I look forward to part two. Any way I can keep posted on it in a manner that is more reliable than monitoring /yeen/?

>>11078933
Is this going to be updated anytime soon? I really enjoyed it so far.

>>11108763
Dang really? I wrote it as kind of a one off but I could continue. I kind of want to finish my Bast story firstly though but we'll see how I feel once my shift goes.

>>11108810
I'd prefer a Bast update, but I'm cool with seeing not-Yossarian bone his way through a yeen unit.

>>11108810
>nervous human stuck in a squad of female yeens
This is almost exactly my fetish.

>>11109432
What's that anon?

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Post awkward smiles not smut you nerds

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>>11110372
posting a smug pupper.

>>11082186
Don't forget that striped hyenas can also spray a foul smelling liquid from their anus as a defense mechanism which is hard to wash off. Good thing to remember if you do want to get one.

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Brown hyenas are also pretty awesome looking.

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>>11094403
Dat bitch.

>>11112556
Pretty sure you'd be the bitch.

>>11112672
Not me dood. I'd run away.

>>11112769
I wouldn't. If I found another sentient being who actually wanted me the last thing I'd do is run away.

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>>11113393
>>11112769
Was pulvarised into a herm hyena four days in on Flexible Survival

I then proceeded to beat the shit out of the military and wyverns

>>11113588
Damn dubs yeen.
Get buff, ruin assholes

Um...hello, anons? Dudes?

>>11114598
Yes, hello? This is anon; how can I help?

>>11114750
What happened to the thread?

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>>11114598
Anons need to recharge too

>>11114954
I suppose so..goodness

>>11114954
>>11114973
This is one of the downsides to making something a general. There will be down times and whether the general can survive depends on how much new content it gets. We seem to have maybe 3 writefags they all just went through a period of activity. Also one seems like his spine is trying to leave his body so he's going to be out for some time.
tl;dr either post pics, start up discussion, or write something

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Collected the bits of the prison story so far.

>>11115057
Who's from /hmofa/ thats here? Time of post the thread is about to go down with 91 dudes

For what can be our oddly specific general, 41 is a pretty great number here

Pofg seems to be crawling pretty hard too

>>11113588
Ich glaube es nicht!

>>11116130
何?

>>11116197
j'en sais pas

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Bamp

>>11102449

More updates to the space crusading hyena-human story!

https://pastebin.com/AFGqErU5

as always, feedback is welcome.

As a side note, the story originally had no hyena's in it until I couldn't find a good "alien" to use and decided to use something unconventional and a friend recommended Gnolls

>>11116957
>ywn fight off a pack of hyenas using a tommy gun

>>11117934
i did not ask for these feels right before bed

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Hyena doodle for you peoples.

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I drew a hyena once but I'm not very good at drawing

>>11119027
a hyena/gnoll sized bow would be able to shoot further and have more power behind it than a human war bow. The fact spotted hyenas can also see in the dark makes it even more terrifying. Imagine a clan raiding villages for food, materials, slaves, and/or boy toys.

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>>11119107
Speaking of gnolls, here's an older greentext from cripple/tg/ about a human/gnoll relationship. Sorry for the quality.

>>11116957
That makes me think of something stupid and deviant.
But maybe I've just been edging too long.
Just gnolls and anthro right? No feral shit?

>>11119378
Do it now, be judged harshly later

>>11119549
Aye aye mon sewer

>>11119354
Fuck dude, my heart.

>>11119354
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
YOU CRUEL MONSTER HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME

>>11118975
Awsome dude! Hyena bois are the biggest babies >:3

>>11076508
>These wives are the ones protecting their husbands

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>>11120422
Forgot pic

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>>11120438
>no thicc waifu to protect you

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Why would you do this to us? I didn't ask for these feelings.

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>>11120496
Let's just say if Hyenas were still a tribe, I imagine the two female Hyenas falls in love with the same male would willing to fight each until one of them dies and does the male have any freedom to choose?

>>11120516
Meant for >>11119354

story, guy getting turned into hyena by tribe of barbarian hyenas

https://kotep.xyz/post/demophagiai/

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>>11076508

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>>11120651
Awsome! Thank you!

>>11116957
Awful idea inspiration
>FUCK
>why are there so many hyenas on my goddamn road?!
>friend suggests justs running them down
>Too fucking many jackals, besides hyenas are built like fuzzy tanks
>they'd probably just waddle back over if not immediately dead
>seriously, why the fuck are there all these hyenas?!
>friend suggests its the loot
>don't be a superstitious hick, we just stole from those guys.
>tell him he's an idiot
>fire a few warning shots at the bastards
>Hyenas don't give any ducks.
>what the fuck?
>Have to stop the truck now, fucking road is clogged with useless hyena cunts
>friend is freaking out
>stop being a pussy!
>Hyenas start giggling, fuck that noise
>Hyenas start gnawing and trying to peel the truck apart
>THIS SHIT ESCALATED QUICK!
>buddy is pissing himself, smack him and crawl out the window to the hood
>Trusty Tommy got my back
>load, safety off
>Commence mowing down hyena ass
>Hyenas going nuts, leaping and trying to bite me and shit.
>Ha ha you cunts!
>FUCK, didn't think this would take more than one round
>turn to buddy
>his useless ass is getting dragged out
>he's sobbing
>You bitch! Now I have to save your dumbass!
>who will save my dumbass?
>get yanked down from the hood by cunts
>they're tearing my buddy apart
>manage to somewhat beat bitches off with my Tommy
>Hyena cunts still get the best of me
>I'm half bloody and naked by the time they pry Tommy away
>Tommy no
>Hear jangling
>MY FUCKING LOOT!
>Hyena cunts actually started dragging the shit into the road
>some naked dude is strolling up
>Fucking help you dick!
>"and why would I help a thief? Stealing from my tomb?"
>what?
>great, the only help is a dark skinned mad cunt
>wait.
>boobs...
>dude has some serious mantits going on
>finally notice hyenas have stopped trying to make me a new asshole
>can't move or they will
>splotchy mad cunt starts looking over our loot, pulls out some gaudy necklace shit

>>11120717
>"this is usually reserved for kings...but your world needs so much help if your kind are desecrating tombs now"
>what? You mad bastard, help me!
>I'm thinking some very racist thoughts about now
>" your kind forgot so much...it is time for new kings to remind you...perhaps not men this time"
>I'm still in midperil you cunt!
>she puts the necklace on me
>"Thief, you are strong, you will have the honor of bringing this new order"
>what?
>necklace gets really fucking hot
>FUCK BEES AND FUCK YOU CUNTS!
>burning passes, necklace is gone
>got a nice brand for my pain
>look up, mad cunt is gone...replaced by GIGANTIC FUCK OFF HYENA
>NO
>Fucking magnet demon shit!
>demon hyena smiles, other furry cunts back off
>NOTHANKS!
>try to bolt
>get maybe three feet before demon hyena grabs me and flings me back into the hood
>Ow fuck

>"Submit thief, and you may just live"
>scary fucking demon hyena
>me, no Tommy
>please don't rape my asshole with your teeth
>Hyena demon god thing takes this to mean yes
>drags my bloody ass into the road
>Squat
>WHA T IN GOD'S UNWASHED FUCK DICK BEARD?!
>"mine is bigger than yours Thief...do you wish to feel it?"
>I ASKED FOR YOU NOT TO RAPE MY ASSHOLE!
>Hyena god thing slaps her salami on my stomach
>her weird looking wang actually knocks the wind out of me
>"You and I will be very well acquainted before the end...shall we begin with a kiss?"
>cunt smiles, those fucking TEETH!
>No was not an option
>thick, like FUCKING MASSIVE hyena tongue dives into my mouth
>My head hits dirt from the force, hyena god demon just toying with my head and mouth, moving me around with her tongue strength alone
>it's disgusting, sloppy
>drool dripping all over me
>she tastes like meat
>been trying to pry her disgusting hyena lips from my face
>starting to pass out from lack of air
>she yanks her tongue out
>she sees my hangman boner
>"good, your seed is strong"
>wait NO.
>her weird penis thing picks up off my stomach
>WHAT THE EVERGREEN TREE LOVING FUCK

>>11120799
>her shaft sucks down mine better than my old lady's cunt
>start fighting
>massive teeth move to throat
>stop fighting
>feel her weird pussy-dick thing start sucking the cum from my balls
>brain stops
>pleasure or pain?
>can't decide
>shut down, reboot needed
>pass out
>wake up later
>massive god thing moved on to fucking and pumping into the smaller hyenas
>"ah good, you're awake for round 2, you better be ready this time, you have a new race of rulers to breed"
>she finishes up, moves back to me
>every hyena she's fucked runs off in different directions
>"a whole new race of beasts and man...you should be proud"

-account, gnolls bedtime story of how they were fucked into being.
(Note, only slightly worse than celtic or Egypt mythology)

>>11120824
>>11120799
>>11120717

This hurts worse than my spine does..
I'm going back to sleep

>>11120546
Why would they fight to the death rather than just to submission?

>>11121034
Because hyenas?