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Holding onto lillithmon story

Outline: https://pastebin.com/nHUr959h

Suggested extra kinks: lactation from pent up sexual frustration, drinking milk from source, her receiving her first spanking as 'proof' of her desperation/frustration

D: Polar futas

Snekguy: squishy bugs

That other cool author: Loba and Lapiz


What a time to be alive

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4000 word update, skipped the Telaim/Paladin scene for now because I cant think of anything that feels appropriate, will add to that later.

New content at: "She wrapped her slim fingers around his neck suddenly"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
New tags:
>choking

>>10920148
You can write Polar futas if you like, but I'd only be interested in funding a Krell futa story, as that's canon and will add to the setting.

reposting from >>10918087
just some spitballing for Parallax on the off chance it sparks any ideas

>>10913510
Do the ink puddles all lead to the same spooky home realm these creatures are from, or is it specific to the one making the puddle unless they do it as a group, as more of a pocket dimension?

I'm kind of assuming the space within them is more or less unique to each of them, since it's basically their body. And full of tongues.

Actually, thinking of tongues, how long are they? Going by the first story they're erogenous zones but not enough to get off with, at least not when there's only a couple being used. If they could reach out then you could play around with some simple bondage-y stuff and/or extremely unusual variations on mouthplay, but keeping them very definitively at tongues in both description and as an influence on their behavior should make it easy to avoid them being a renamed version of ropes or simple tentacles.

Maybe letting them outside the body is obscene or particularly explicit for whatever the hell they are? That might play off the relationship being more developed (this was the first time MC was invited to her place, right?), and also the chemicals from regenerating making them especially aroused - like she'd only planned on taking MC to her home for tonight, not on going this far yet.

>>10919655
I don't think you need to post a hold in the thread any more, at this point it's pretty much turned into clutter and with such a small bump limit and archiving being a tad more awkward less thread churn would be nice.

>>10920148
I know, right?
DLFG and PARALLAX_ posting new stuff recently has been fucking great as well.

>>10920148
>wholesome werewolf story
>more outpost on the horizon
>fluffy futa
I couldn't feel any better or I'd be sick

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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here: http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions

>>10919476
>And /d/
Both sad and silly.

>>10920636
if nothing's happened yet, you'd be better off taking this to one of the pokémon porn threads. people here don't appear to have any real interest, and anyone new who might care about that is gonna go to those other threads for preference. if nobody there bites inside a month or two, you're never going to get anything unless you go somewhere like FA and find someone who you can commission to do it.

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http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch-4-page-39-414290765
http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch4-page-40-414856423

In these chapters Autzen, an autistic buizel, needs to use the bathroom, but is too scared to use the airplane toilet's loud noise. Despite wearing a diaper he doesn't want to use it, instead holds it throughout the entire plane ride, all six hours of it, even when he's sleeping during most of it, and makes it to the bathroom.
Can someone rewrite this page(s) so that Autzen ends up having an accident in his diaper, perhaps it happening during or shortly after his nap? Read the previous chapters to understand how he'd probably react to it.

Help a fellow autist out please.

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>>10919476

Reposting for the new thread. I really love how these turned out.

The Long Pull
https://pastebin.com/bqS5un4A
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-long-pull
>tags: futanari, futa-on-futa, big ejaculation, eating come, come in food, handjobs, masturbation, blowjobs, public nudity, exhibitionism, buttplugs, coffee

The Long Pull: Hand-Picked Dark Roast
https://pastebin.com/mVYcSR7t
>tags: futanari, public nudity, big ejaculation, come in food, masturbation, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, coffee

>>10920636
>>10921240
It's not gonna happen, just accept that

>I want to write, but all I have is an unclear scene
Fuckit, ya know?

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AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>10919476
New chapter of Northlands Garrison up.

>More kissing, and loosening of clothes in this chapter. Focus on culture clash and building intimacy between the two characters as each understands what the other wants.

Title: Northlands Garrison: An Officer and a Maid
Chapter VIII: Acclimation

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, original work, melee line infantry combat, blood, snow, alcohol.

Character Tags: Maid (female), Military officer (male).

Content Tags: M/F, consensual, body cleaning, kissing.

Summary: In a conquered settlement far to the north, a young officer struggles to hold together the garrison legion despite constant attacks from indigenous resistance groups who somehow are able to bring high-yield explosives and powerful spellcraft against him. After a day of blood, pain, and unpleasant surprises, he retires to his quarters in an inn that has been commandeered as a command post. A familiar serving maid, always in the corner of his eye but never underfoot, shyly brings him his evening meal and a wash basin. He's not taken great note of her before, far too much to do if he wants to keep his men alive in this hostile land, and she's not directly engaged him because of a natural shyness.

In his eyes, she's another victim of this drawn out conflict, an orphan taken in by the innkeeper after her parents starved due to food shortages caused by the war. Taking advantage of her would be shameful, against all he's fighting for. Besides, anyone could be an insurgent. But does the pointy-eared maid know something that could turn the tables against this mysteriously powerful rebellion, and if so, what does she want from him in exchange? Men kill in war. Hunger, cold, and disease kill more during the chaos. What are these two willing to do for the promise of restoring peace to this land?

(1/5)

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>>10925411
Northlands Garrison Chapter List
>Chapter I: Explosion
https://pastebin.com/nCuHz6bb
>Chapter II: Promotion
https://pastebin.com/vz62zdf0
>Chapter III: Admiration
https://pastebin.com/mcpNhpTz
>Chapter IV: Starvation
https://pastebin.com/eEXuBLfR
>Chapter V: Revelation
https://pastebin.com/KWfi5GNB
>Chapter VI: Confession
https://pastebin.com/yUVLyiN4
>Chapter VII: Suspicion
https://pastebin.com/LqW0yTjS
>Chapter VIII: Acclimation (NEW)
https://pastebin.com/rj2MvSJg

Noticed that the posting of this chapter coincides with the 31st day since activation of the AzimuthFlirt Pastebin account. Milestone!

Northlands Garrison actually has the lowest views-per-chapter of any ongoing story on the Pastebin. Have also received few comments about it, but all are very complimentary of the worldbuilding and characters. Personally worry that too much time and thought was invested into this story. Unneeded cultural, political, and social issues were investigated, resulting in eight chapters (~25,000 words) of worldbuilding with only mild touching and kissing instead of a cute, short smut fiction about an officer and a maid. To be clear, desire is not for raw view numbers, but to deliver stories that meet the interests of the target audience and fulfill the desire of the requester. Measuring those nebulous goals is difficult.

Overall, very happy with critique from requesters and readers. Also grateful for support from other authors, and have tried to pay that forward by contributing writing knowledge where possible. Author's wish is likely the same one held by invested readers: More! More feedback, more suggestions, more mentioning of /trash/'s writethread on other boards (noticed that someone started a /wst/ on /tg/ recently...) so that we can try to rebuild what was shattered. As expressed in >>10795590 T#28, we have lost so much already, to the detriment of both authors and readers.

(2/5)

>>10919476
>book4
Can I see the other 3 volumes?

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>>10919476
>>10920148
>>10920617
New chapter of Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves up. Happy to see it is awaited!

>Wrap-up of discussion between Lapiz and his father. Wanted to establish human perspective on werewolves more firmly before moving the story forward into action, since the dialog provides an excellent mechanic for informing the reader. Next chapter will have direct interaction between Loba and Lapiz, as well as direct interaction between their fathers.

Title: Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves, Chapter 5: Big Questions

Tags: Male(human)/Female(werewolf), school, fighting(fists), blood(minor).

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, original work, slice of life, school, nature

Content Tags: M(human)/F(werewolf), tomboy(female), artist(male), childhood friends, transformation(werewolf), fighting(fists), blood(minor).

Fetish Tags: Kissing. (More to come!)

Summary: In a world of magic carpets, clay houses, and verdant forests, the cities of man's empire are protected from corruption by vigilant investigators. But who, or what, protects the forests from threats within and without? As one boy grows from childhood to an adult, he learns that one of his schoolyard friends is perhaps more than she seems. The old myths tell of wolf-people who stalk the forests and devour those who would ruin the beauty of nature. But werewolves are myths. If they weren't, his yellow-eyed tomboy friend and her quaint nuclear family would have found out about them by now. They live in the woods, they'd warn him if those myths were true... right? There are more important things to worry about, like if he likes her as much as he thinks he does, and if she likes him the way he likes her, and why she keeps having those twitching fits during class now that they're all going through adolescence.

(3/5)

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>>10925546
Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves Chapter List
Chapter 1: Leave it to Loba...
https://pastebin.com/ePr6xUp3
Chapter 2: Family Fishing
https://pastebin.com/wSLjuicX
Chapter 3: Adolescent Confidants
https://pastebin.com/erPVrvWy
Chapter 4: Teenage Lessons
https://pastebin.com/MxwaZMPz
Chapter 5: Big Questions (NEW)
https://pastebin.com/1SvKeWhk

>>10898973 T#28
/tg/ certainly is worthy of its reputation for getting shit done. Noticed an interesting thread over the weekend that was immediately auto-saged. >>>/tg/54721837. Interesting mentions of /trash/ there. Hopefully further awareness efforts can bring additional interested readers here.

>>10923856
Get Q10.
http://www.baara.com/q10/
Put an outline together. Mark your "ideas" with plus signs at the start, or double slashes if your brain is used to reading commented code. Get the bones down, then put meat on them later. Once the scaffold is built, the building can be constructed. The hardest part is doing it, anon, but that builds willpower. You may not even like what you have written when you're done, but you will have done something productive. Make the effort!

(4/5)

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>>10919476
Regarding interest in a 40k Mechanicus/Sororitas story in Thread #28
>>10852976
>>10861104
Cleaned up an introductory chapter from old work. Probably full of typos and grammar errors. Intent was a story full of grimdark that made the warm-and-fuzzy moments all the sweeter. Gentle femdom and bondage mixed with Mechanicus-modified crazy-sex and Sororitas-grade puritanical perversion. This chapter is 3000 odd words of setup for that concept, under the premise that if the setup is no good, the sexual content won't be able to carry the story since it is a 40k story and lore is important to 40k.

Title: Damned Flesh (Old working title)

Tags: Mechanicus, Sororitas, Astartes(mention)

Content Tags: Mechanicus (mad) SCIENCE!, grimdark, extensive body modification (male), power armor, bondage (female, minor)

Note: Contains no explicit erotic content.

>Link: https://pastebin.com/2AaW0AFZ

Posting this story due to author nostalgia and because others expressed interest in pitch expressed in T#28. Hope someone enjoys it.

>Unexpected complications have arisen, severely limiting time available for writing. Stories will be completed, but pace of updates will slow or temporarily halt until complications are resolved. Will still make time to read and record quality critique for stories, all feedback is greatly appreciated.

(5/5)

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I wanna see a touhou fic about Patchouli and Marisa fighting over a new assistant that Patchouli conjured as a replacement for Koakuma. If it piques anyone I can post more details about the idea I had in mind.

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So I'm still in the process of editing my previous chapters while working on the next one, but I've been working on a story since about the 26th of March last year:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11862965/1/Kitsunegari
http://archiveofourown.org/works/10201733/chapters/22646174

And I'm not the exact best at describing my story so I'll just leave it at Show, not Tell.

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>>10919476
Let's revive an old tradition:
Skyla rape!

>>10923856

>I wanna be fit, but all I have is this flabby gut.

>>10920452
>or is it specific to the one making the puddle unless they do it as a group, as more of a pocket dimension?
This is what I was thinking. If I make the pool, it's my personal pocket dimension unless I am specifcally and deliberately cooperating with someone else.
>thinking of tongues, how long are they?
I'd say there's either 3 or 5 of them ( I feel like it needs to be an odd number for appropriate strangeness), and they're quite long (10+ feet). I do like the idea that using them for anything aside from grabbing food is the height of lewdness.

I have established that there's something else that can move around inside her body. I don't want to end up with her just becoming a generic tentacle monster. I was thinking maybe something like cilia, lots of little wavy fingers that sense things and move stuff around inside her body, but not quite tentacles. They won't really hold on to stuff well or stretch

>>10929637
Well fuck you too buddy, I like to have a proper idea and quality before I start writing.

>can't even find /trash/ if you don't know it's there
This is exile. Exile in furry-land.

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Holy hell, a new story by me is out.

Title: Love Reeks

>(Tags: F/M, Vaginal, Dubious consent, Furry/Anthro, Sweat, MtFTF (MtF Transformation), Bathing, Handjob, Cunnilingus, Size difference, creampie, Cuddling, Handholding, Kissing, Romance, Light femdom, Large breasts, Nippleplay)

https://pastebin.com/MgAQQv5y

>>10930085
Yeah, thanks.

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>>10929337
Hmm...it's been a while since I thought up of a request for Skyla, but I think I got something if anyone wants to tackle it.

I think in the anime she actually has a bit of darker skin (tan). So maybe after being defeated by a trainer in her gym and he approaches to take the badge, said trainer takes a look at Skyla and notices a tan line around her short shorts. Said trainer has a huge fetish for tan lines and blatantly points it out to her embarrassment. Camera out and shooting away, that kind of fanatic. However, it doesn't take long for him to get touchy with her belly to feel the 'texture' of the tan skin. When she doubts that there's no difference between tan and normal skin, her top soon disappears and disproves it by grabbing her untanned breasts to compare the two. She argues that breasts are naturally soft, so he pulls her shorts off and grabs her untanned ass instead, giving a few swats sometimes to show how pink her skin can get as opposed to her tanned skin. Too embarrassed to counterargue he gets kinkier, fucking her thighs before fucking her silly. All throughout she questions if tan lines really are that arousing.

I leave the ending up to the writer, but I imagine that her next male trainer has his own set of tan lines...to which a smile soon curls to her lips to answer her question.

I think this idea is a bit more tame compared to the other skyla ideas in the past, but TAN LINES.

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>>10921455
>avocado toast
You don't actually eat that right?

>>10927706
Why would patchy fire koa?

>>10930225
not fired, but stolen/gapped away by Yukari for one of her 'games' on a short notice.

>>10930085
Exile in obscurity is preferable to attempting to force an existence among those who would see us destroyed in spite or for amusement.

>>10930280
It's not the best option, but it's the only one we've got.

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>>10925597
>I went into the military. We had been sweethearts at the escuela, and were certain that we loved each other. By the time I completed training, she was dating two other men. At the same time. Neither knew about the other, or about me."
A little too real...

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>last thread's suggestions about lena & sleethe world tour of Krell
Yes.
>going back over/expanding upon Krell markings and their meaning + kink dimension inherent to marking your partner where everyone can see it
YES.
YES.
YES.

Ahem. I am seconding that suggestion.

>>10930202
D here.

No, I do not.

>>10930631
OR here, glad to see romantic body marking is less niche than I thought.
I'd seen it working as a passport stamp system too. When entering a foreign village you get a mark showing you're new around town; the time it takes for the newcomer mark to wear off being approximate to the time it takes to settle down.
Naturally, being travelers, Lena and Sleethe would end up as living canvasses by the end, including any mate marks.
Bonus points if, thanks to language barrier, Lena thinks she and Sleethe are receiving something ordinary but realizes toward the end of the trip that they've been marked with a "honeymoon" variant of the standard travelers mark.

>>10929684
>I feel like it needs to be an odd number for appropriate strangeness
Yeah, maybe because it implies that inside there's not the usual kind of bilateral symmetry? Seven would be tempting since that would avoid being a Fibonacci number as well, and I can only think of one species that specifically has seven of any appendage.

If they're only ever seen eating with straws, presumably even letting someone see the tongue is dangerously lurid, or people would have seen them using a spoon sooner or later. Maybe seeing people eat an icecream cone makes eldritch cryptids blush furiously until they get used to our weird culture, I dunno.

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2000 word update, new content at "She turned her head to gaze upon Jaswinder's exposed form"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
>no new tags

>>10930631
>>10932026
Definitely sounds fun, I'll get to it eventually. I've got at least three more months of backlog to get through before I can start on anything new but it's in the pipeline.

>>10919655
Okay, I've made you wait long enough, this is getting ridiculous. You deserve better. This is what I've been able to produce after all this time, just 1,000 words:

https://pastebin.com/pPYnMDj8

I think the prospect of how much there is left is keeping me from getting energized enough to write more, so here's what I'm going to do. I'll start again, and this time focus on telling a more compact, but still descriptive and satisfying, story. Hopefully it'll be to your liking, but at the very least I don't want to make you wait too much longer.

>>10934315
>https://pastebin.com/pPYnMDj8
OR. The story is off to a pretty good start. Few typos here and there, but it shows promise! Don't worry about the wait, since writer's block is a bitch to fight against. I'm still very certain what you'll make will be of amazing quality, so I'll still be hanging around then. Looking forward to the full story!

Hey writers, how did you write your first sex scene? I have a bunch of unfinished drafts but I can't fucking focus on one, and the sex scene just fucking stonewalls me every time.

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>>10935217
D here.

My first sex scene between two people was the long ending sex scene in the second chapter of my G4E fanfiction. These were originally written for a contest to try to win G4E.

I came up with the idea of Sayako's semen giving other women cocks based on the ball-less futa version of Tara he had used in some bonus images.

The story was supposed to end with Tara revealing her huge boner...

And then I could not stop myself.I wrote until I was so sleepy, I knew I couldn't write sensibly anymore.

Think of a scenario that it so arousing to you that each word makes it better than the last, that you can't let it stop because it's so hot, and you have to set your laptop on a table because you can't rest it on your boner.

If you're having trouble being that excited about a scene... just stop whacking it for a few days. Inspiration will find you.

>>10935501
I don't whack it though. Also 3D is a turn off.

But thanks.

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>>10935523
>I don't whack it though
>Also 3D is a turn off.
Key information.

Recommend focus on empathy between characters. Mechanically, writing sexual intercourse is the same as writing about any other activity. Think about what characters are feeling, and why they want to feel that way. What emotional connection, or lack of, exists between them? Is there fear of the consequences of sex (pregnancy, public shame, deeper emotional connection that may be misused or damaged later, mess), assurance that all will be well, or are they happily oblivious? Since you are trying to write erotic fiction, also recommend reading some that you enjoy. After the first read, go back and try to dissect why some things "worked" for you, then use those as inspiration for your own writing. There is plenty of quality content to peruse, even in this thread. Personally believe that Heinlein penned it best...

>Sex, whatever else it is, is an athletic skill. The more you practice, the more you can, the more you want to, the more you enjoy it, the less it tires you.
-Robert A. Heinlein, The Cat Who Walks Through Walls

Also think about the reader's perspective. Is the scene intended to arouse the reader, or make them feel warm fuzzies? Consider the emotional angles, decide which physical activities the characters will engage in, answer these questions in an outline, and you will have a much stronger scaffold to lean on when writing the scene. Since meatspace is a turn-off to you, focus on the idealized world offered by art.

Recommended reading:
https://pastebin.com/eVp3jXHv
Subheading: "The Act Itself"

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>literotica is full of literal typo-filled garbage
>initially reject my submission because I wrote the text on a sign in the same paragraph as dialogue

Do you think it would be possible to make a successful literotica successor? Stupidity aside, that site is stuck in, like, 2007, as evidenced by the fact that their 2007 contest still says "in progress."

>>10937149
Probably. Honestly, half of what I've seen barely sounds like English. The only question is who's going to host it.

>>10937149
AO3 hosts any "fannish" work. This is never officially defined, but AFAICT it means "anything the author says is fannish".

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>>10938150
I'm burning money anyways, and honestly it'd take me less time to make a site like that than figure out how to effectively trade on thinkorswim. Hell, I've got money to host contests.

Would you guys post your stuff to my cool new site? I don't know where else to go to seed it. (Outside of the hypnofetish community, that is, but I might be pigeonholing it like that.)

>>10938257
I suppose so...but you'll have to make it first.

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>>10937149
>make a successful literotica successor?
>>10938257
>I'm burning money anyways.
Anon, this isn't a "hey, wouldn't it be cool..." suggestion, this is a "hey, I have resources and a vested interest in seeing this come about", suggestion, correct?

Recommend looking at the competition first. Find their weaknesses. Identify what you can do better. For example: Archive Of Our Own (AO3) has a complicated tag search system, is focused on fanwork for established franchises, and does not track statistics very well (no views on each chapter, or references to incoming traffic from other sites). However, it does have a very flexible story hosting system, allows anonymous comments, and has a "kudos" system for people who just want to leave thumbs-ups. Also, it automatically translates stories into ebook format with no additional effort needed by the author.

Make the website clean, easy to read, compatible with "reader" modes on web browsers. Make good use of space with the interface. Compare the user experience on the frontpage of Literotica with the user experience on the frontpage of AO3. Putting aside the community it caters to, look with an open mind at the webpage design and community structuring systems on fimfiction.net. New stories, top stories, site news posts, popular stories, all laid out right on the front page. Click on an AO3 story, compare reading stories on multiple different websites.

Why is this important? Because authors write for themselves, but also for their readers. If a reader finds it easy to navigate a website, easy to find and read content in a functional interface, they will keep reading. Not just one author's work, which might have brought them to the website, but others' as well. As a content delivery service, when you make life easier for your content creators and content consumers, they will appreciate it even if they do not consciously realize how much that attention to detail improves their experience.

Exceed what exists.

>>10938150
>only question
The big issue is competing against the thousands of stories and huge audience they already have and a new website won't.

>>10939431
>this is a "hey, I have resources and a vested interest in seeing this come about", suggestion, correct?
I'm a professional developer with no debts, no children, no potential children, and a very understanding boyfriend. If anyone's in a position to do it, it's probably me.

>allows anonymous comments/upvotes
That's already on my must-haves for sure.
>ebook mode
Would probably poll the community to see who would use that feature once it got rolling.

I'd expect that my theoretical site's main draw for authors would be two things - one: modern design; two: a contest system with cash prizes that encourages both writers and editors to participate in the process. Hopefully, the semi-regular money would encourage people to join in with quality material. Eventually maybe I could hook up with Patreon or whatever to grow contest prizes beyond my own pocketbook.

The challenge I still need to figure out is submission review/moderation. I could write some shit with NLTK to automate garbage rejection, but that seems like it might be overkill. I know how I want to reward editors; I don't know how I want to *trust* people to mod. Maybe a level system of some sort - though that might lead to a problem of self-interested judges, in light of the contests. It'll need a bit more thinking.

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>>10939687
>I don't know how I want to *trust* people to mod.
Smart. Very smart, especially if money will be involved. Ugh, jotted ideas for this shortly after the axe fell on /d/'s writethreads, but cannot find notes and am in project crunch right now.

AO3's semi-gated system (must wait for an invite to create an account, but once the account is up, author may freely post) has some merits. Will state again that fimfiction.net is worth inspection, while sign-up is global (encouraging readers to get accounts and engage since there is no anonymous commenting), all stories must be human-eyeballed to meet (very low and clearly written) minimum standards. Beyond that, things like popularity are determined by algorithms based on user feedback.

Top item from notes in memory is the old adage "If you build a better mousetrap, the world will beat a path to your door". >>10939630 makes a similar point, as does >>10938272. Don't try to make a successor, or an emulation. Polish all the details so that it is easier to read stories on your website than anywhere else. Easier on the eyes, easier to find well-tagged and summarized stories, easier for authors to expunge spam, and so on. Lubricate all the gears. Personally have spent hours upon hours getting material properly formatted for upload to websites or things like Pastebin.

Authors will compete for money, but many also are just interested in having a clean, well-designed place to host their hobby projects. Look at Spacebattles' fan fiction section, its integrated kudos section and other amenities. Austere, but good enough for a lot of writers who have put months of their lives into building universes. To that end, recommend focusing on having a really good system that authors and readers prefer using. After that is established, financial incentives and input sanitizing can be handled.

Your ideas are exciting, in case that was unclear.

>>10929691

That helps, but the only way to get better at writing is by writing a lot.

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Gonna repost this since the original guy who took a crack it seems to have dropped it or didn't like how wrote it. Granted, from what he said it turned into I would be fine with that story too. So retrying and/or signaling to that orginal guy too
>Requesting a story where a big rat monster female/not Skavens takes a fancy to a smaller human guy and captures him for snu snu and cuddling

Night thread

sheesh, /trash/'s speed spiked suddenly again

>>10939687
>>10940005
AO3's tagging seems fairly well executed, it collapses redundant tags together more reliably than I've seen anywhere else, so you're not playing games with variants.
Being able to set and exclude a combination of tags seems to be a feature missing from most sites that would be really appreciated.

>>10945938
The other thing is how the Ratings show you ONLY the option selected.

Honestly, a lot of complaints I have about AO3 could be solved by greater user customisation. The only reason I think they don't do that is because it would tax their servers too much.

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>>10943307
I didn't drop it, no worries. I'll always finish something I told someone I was working on, regardless of how the end result will be.
I just suggested you keep posting the request in the off-chance someone who's far better at this takes it up. I've often noticed that when I inevitably disappoint people, they never ask for someone else to take up the request, so the only attempt ever given is whatever I made.

>>10943307
>That
Oh jeez.
That looks like Ralph bashki territory.

>>10930092
>https://pastebin.com/MgAQQv5y
Those tags. I'll have to give this a shot.

>>10946220
>tax their servers too much
Except instead of searching for "not gay", I have to do multiple searches for straight/gen/lesbian/other.

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give me a good cow girl story to read

>>10948786
There's none, sorry.

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>>10925468
I simply cannot understand why no one seems to bother reading these. The writing is more than solid and you're clearly putting a ton of effort into the world and story; it's sad seeing people ignore it like this.
Sorry for taking so long to get around to reading the new chapter; life happened and all that.
Thoroughly enjoyed this entry. The slow, slow buildup may be killing me, but it's doing so in all the right ways. The pacing and gradual increase in erotic content is hot as fuck. I'm also enjoying the way you focus on the characters at least as much as the actions. It's hard to pull that off in a sex scene but it make sit much more engaging a read. I also noticed that the pair seem to be speaking less the more they get into the act, which to me shows a clear progression of how seriously they're taking it. Good work.
Thank you very much, Azimuth, for going so far with Northland Garrison.

I did find one typo mid-paragraph at .40:
>The touch of their lips touch wake a hunger
I believe one "touch" here to be erroneous.

There is one thing I feel I have to say, though. While I am very thankful that you have taken so much time and effort to write this based on my request, I can understand if you are getting frustrated by the lack of response from other readers. It's not fair to you to only have one or two people checking out your work after putting so much effort into writing it.
If you decide to put this story on hiatus or even drop it in favor of focusing on works that more people will enjoy, I will understand. I will absolutely keep reading as long as you keep writing, but please please please don't feel compelled to keep doing so just for my sake.

If you just keep writing what you want to write I will be happy regardless.

And thank you again!

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Bump.

Artist is J.J. Frenchie, I believe.

>>10948775
You can search for -m/m to exclude that.

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>>10948775
Search within results: -M/M
Works for any tag you want to remove.

>>10951137
>>10951311
Thanks

>>10920578
>DLFG and PARALLAX_ posting new stuff recently has been fucking great as well.

DLFG here - I hope to have something else to post next week as well.

>>10946901
No problems then. The last time you said anything just made it sound like you were dropping it. The lack of a name field also makes it slightly more complicated with catching word or seeing who is doing what. Also this big time difference for me adds on.

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2000 word update, new content at "Though injured, the assassin showed no sign of backing down"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
>no new tags

>>10953804
Snek you need to do a Oni story sometime.~

https://e-hentai.org/g/1098996/df31f8e982/

>>10930092
>https://pastebin.com/MgAQQv5y
>>10930092
Are you planning on doing a sequel? I'd love to see Lulu prove how much big and stronger she is.

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>>10955976

Vluirty here!

A sequel? Probably not because writing this story in the first place wore me out. If you do have ideas you are dying to see, I will keep them in mind for encouragement, though.

>>10956780
>Picture
LEWDNEESSS!!

>>10953804
Holy shit Snek, I got worried when the write thread disappeared from /d/, I decided to look at /thrash/ today and found it here. What happened? Is there any other board you have been posting your stuff?

AzimuthFlirt reports.

Should be working on important matters, to improve quality of life and seize opportunities. Should be self-motivated, eagerly attacking challenges.

>Human incompetence.
>Lack of proper communication despite continued requests.
>Ingratitude for saving others time, money, and/or their jobs.
>Waste caused by lack of cohesive structure despite personal efforts to remedy the problem.
>Incomprehensible project goals and directives. Requests for clarification result in further confusion.
>Personal apathy toward non-immediate problems.

Eh. Can do that junk later. Not like there's a fast-approaching deadline or anything... what's on /trash/? How's the Pastebin? Oooh, Northlands Garrison got another viewer! Since the view ticker starts at one, because you're forced to view it upon upload, that means two people have read the latest chapter! Or one person refreshed the page midway through. But! Take happiness where it can be had!

Besides, there are others on here who would be overjoyed to have any views, or feedback, at all... count one's blessings, and so forth.


>>10949119
Requester critique appreciated. Typo added to revision notes. Currently pressed for time, but have archived feedback for later digestion. Priority: clarification of intent. Greatly appreciate your expression of understanding for a decision to terminate the story, understand desire to express it as well as desire to see completion. Northlands Garrison will be completed. Current outline from memory is at least another five chapters. However, all ongoing stories will be slowed due to external factors as expressed in >>10925713.

Also, am encountering technological issues with Pastebin/AO3 that will require time to address. Time is the finite resource that must be managed carefully. Writing relieves stress, allows development of ideas and experimentation. Flights of fancy are vacations for the mind.

It'll get done.

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>>10930389
Have heard that tale too many times, from too many good men. Personally try to be respectful when incorporating such things into stories, but feel that they are powerful anecdotes of human behavior. Hope you enjoyed the chapter!

>>10919476
>>10948786
Here is a cow girl story to read. Cannot vouch for if it is "good" or not, that determination is left up to the readers. Written mostly in one go, not edited, likely has typos/grammatical errors. Have wanted to write a story about cow-girls for quite some time, felt inspired by your posted photo, needed to decompress.


Title: Happy Accidents

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, alchemy, farm

Character Tags: Farmer (male, muscle), Alchemist (male, minor, nonsexual), Cow-girl (female, monstergirl, muscle, large breasts)

Erotic Tags: M/F, kissing, hugging, heavy petting, lactation (female) breast milking (M on F, sensual), penis milking (F on M), milk drinking, paizuri (AKA titjob).

Summary: The local alchemist's up to no good again. Sure, some of his potions save lives, but he's a walking fire hazard and a raving loon to boot. One of his few friends, a local farmer who only survived the Black Plague because of the alchemist's elixirs, is listening to the tale of his latest lab accident and receives a "once-in-a-lifetime" purchasing opportunity at the end. A so-called "self milking cow" that will plow his fields, cook his supper, and generally improve his life in every way possible... provided he is willing to part with a little coin to help the wide-eyed loon restart his alchemical research! Could this cow be worth the price... especially if it turns out to be more than just another bovine?

>Link: https://pastebin.com/BMpvVerL
Pastebin set to expire in two weeks. Story not edited prior to upload. Reader feedback appreciated.

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>>10957085
Mods decided to nuke us, CYOA, and caption threads because of "persistent quality issues". /aco/ was similarly affected.

>>10957575
>technological issues with AO3
I might be able to troubleshoot that.

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>>10957085
Nah, they kicked us off all the boards, /aco/ and /d/ included. I've just been posting my updates here (and on my Patreon).

Some mod has a vendetta and decided that "imageboards aren't for writing" which is absurd considering that /lit/ and /qst/ exist for that very purpose, so writefag threads got purged off all the boards.

So here we are, seems like most of the writers at least found their way here.

>>10955194
Nice.
I read this dojin once that was about a guy who goes to whatever the Japanese version of hell is, and he gets tortured by Onis, but he uses reverse psychology to trick them into getting him off because he's a huge masochist. I forget the name but that one was great.

>>10957815


What even is that monstergirl?


...source?

>>10961004

Nevermind, found source. That was extremely fucked up and heartwarming at the same time.

>>10957575
Hey, Azimuth, werewolf OR here.
Started new job, been quite busy, haven't had a chance to feedback on the two most recent chapters yet, doing so now.
For chapter 4, not much to say beyond "all good, keep it up". Only thing that seems off is lapiz talking about loba kissing him; way he talks seems slightly stretched, too descriptive for situation of talking to parent. Maybe make a small change, unelaborated statement in dialogue, small flashback in full detail? Would be more fitting, I think.

Fifth chapter, everything is good, exposition dump necessary, importantly doesn't feel out of place. Lapiz's emotional response feels slightly flat, but it makes sense since he would obviously be rather a bit shocked by this revelation. A little more nervous/excited reaction might be a change for the better, though.
Eager to see lapiz and loba having a conversion like the one in this chapter, about why she wants him, except obviously quite a lot sappier

On the topic of Northlands Garrison, I've actually been meaning to read it, but have been putting it off until there's enough for a binge read. Might just start now instead, though
>>10930389
I'm just wondering what the spanish equivalent of Jody is

>>10959915
Terrifying.

Here's some ideas:

1.) Sofia the First- Sofia and her step siblings going full Lannister. Sofia has been fucking both of her step siblings separately, with Amber she is the assertive top and with James Sofia plays at the submissive bottom. But she really wants them both at the same time, so she tricks them into sleeping with each for blackmail material.

2.) Monster High- While Frankie Stein is a virgin, her body parts aren't. She has the muscle memory of a slut

3.) Attempted Small Penis Humiliation- A squad of cheerleaders or various races accost a white nerd. They're holding him down in the girls; locker room humiliate him. But it turns out he has a big dick, so now they're daring each other to see how much of it they can handle

4.) Nonplussed Cucking- Wife is cucking husband, but he doesn't care. Example: She's sucking her black lover off at the table while he reads the paper, she's going "Nigger cocks taste so good!" Husband keeps reading the paper, says, "I'll have to take your word for it, sweetie." Wife is pissed and tells her lover to "act blacker" Lover is getting really uncomfortable.

5.) Monster High- Draculaura slaking her thirst for semen at a glory hole.

6.) 6teen- Caitlin fingering herself behind the counter of the Lemon

7.) 6teen- Jen super aggressively riding someone's face

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>>10956780
Awww, well that's disappointing.

Oh I just wanted more basically with some new ideas thrown in. Like using her newsize and strength to do some gentle femdom to him. More or less what you were hinting at. Maybe some laction?

Also you could of taken advantage of her being a skunk. Like she uses Pheromones that can make him cum on command. I could see that being pretty hot.

>>10925468
>noticed that someone started a /wst/ on /tg/ recently...

How long did it take to get pruned?

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>>10919655

Over a month, if not two? 1k words.

After starting over, and after a couple days? Nearly 3k words.

I don't understand how my brain works. It's a jerk.

Anyway, here's chapter 1 of the 3 part Lilithmon story:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/TheDjinn/25520/Before-Lilithmons-Eyes

http://archiveofourown.org/works/11774511/chapters/26546331

Chapter 1 will focus on Angewoman, 2 will be about LadyDevimon, and 3 will be the finale with Lilithmon breaking and begging to be his sex pet. Tough to write about a character as hot as Lilithmon and make it so no one wants to fuck her, so I tried to focus on her arrogant attitude being the root cause. Hopefully that's fine. If not, let me know, and I'll fit in the preferred reasons in the next chapters.

Any futa on male? It's a thing I really like.

>>10965087
OR. Brains are tsundere when it comes to choosing when to work.

I'm beginning to see what you mean by compact. The story is pretty damn good so far. I don't mind Angewomon smut being on the short end since she isn't that crucial, but I wouldn't mind seeing Ladydevimon (and of course lillithmon) with more detailed sex because evil ladies are sexy as sin. I'm definetly more than hyped to see the rest of the story unfold. Will look foward to it, and don't be afraid to ask any questions or suggestions!

>>10965305

https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Property_of_Prasmille
https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/The_Apprentice%27s_Folly
https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Trap_Train

>>10957612
>https://pastebin.com/BMpvVerL
Nice story, short but sweet.
Any thoughts to continue or extend it?
Because at it's current length the lewd content seems to be back-loaded. Something common that tends to happen in most works or is it just your writing style?

>>10959915
Reminds me of Mode-Seven. Is this something of his from the older days? Always thought he was into vore rather than this?

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>>10967171
Nah, it's from a /y/ drawfag, but I do recall him mentioning being a fan of Mode-Seven, so there might be a touch of inspiration from his work.
https://viddharta-joshua.tumblr.com/

>>10967294
>https://viddharta-joshua.tumblr.com/

You ever see something which makes you consider that being less tolerant a valorous course of action?

...

Anyway, what's the most esoteric fetish you can think of? Mine i
>a strong, good-hearted, woman who isn't afraid of hard labour (farm-hand basically) going from friendly and kind to sopping wet and lewd

From
>Hey, dahling, how you doin? Bettah be eating them veggies or I might have to feed them to you myself.
to
>Hey, dahling, why don't you hold me down and fuck me like a dog fucks his bitch? I don't rightly ave a preference, just make sure you fill me up, wear me out, and leave a child or two in my belly!

>>10968114
>Anyway, what's the most esoteric fetish you can think of?
Happy fluffy couples having tender romantic sex... In front of an audience

>>10965772
>they're all mine
really making me think here, anon.

>>10968219
Knowingly?

>>10968243
D here.

Maybe I should explore futa-on-male. There must be a way I can do it that's fun.

Request #3 here: >>10963444 interests me, but of course, some or all of the cheerleaders would be futas... but the other requests just make my skin crawl since they're all based on kid's shows, most of them about high schoolers. I sort of don't want to do it because of the other requests. (Also, I swear I've seen that request before.)

What would you want to see in a futa-on-male story? Maybe I can come up with something.

>>10968854
haven't you described yourself as being the futa guy, last thread or so? i would have assumed you already do a fair bit.

or do you only do futa on female / futa?

i admittedly get a little bit trope-y with the "strong girl with dick fucks effeminate to average guy into submission" setup

>>10965087
>a digimon smut story that doesn't focus on ships or human only pairs
>Man actually fucks female digimon instead of blue balling them
Where have you been all my life?

>>10969011
D here.

Futa-on-female and futa-on-futa just works me up SO much more than futa-on-male, or even male-on-female.

I highly doubt I'll write a 'fucks someone into submission' sort of thing, because that's not really my style. But there must be a way I can get into it.

>>10963444
#4 sounds like some good stuff, alas, it seems like it would be more suited to comedy than anything else

>Act more like a nigger, damnit!
>Okay, that's just offen- Sweet Jesus!
>Act like a fucking nigger or I'll rip your balls off.
Better do as she says, trust me, she can be a real bitch when you don't bend over backwards for her every whim.
>Er, er, er, we wuz kangs and sheet- Oh fuck let go of my balls.

>Oh darling, how did it ever come to this? Where did the love go?
>Well, dear, I believe it was lost sometime between the days where you fucked over 100 miles of dick behind my back since the day we got married and the day when I found you fucking several dogs on my bed.
Now, it's not the miles of dick you allowed into your vagina, that I can forgive. After all, I never found out about that until after the day you fucked the dogs.
But rather, it the fact that you never stopped, after being found out that is.
>Fuck you you piece of rancid, half-eaten shit.
No thank you dear, you've already destroyed whatever libido I had watching you get fucked by a half-dozen dogs.

>>10969307
i wasn't the guy requesting, by the by, i just found it funny that apparently mine are the most notable futa-on-male fics?

there's plenty of opportunities for it. obviously, people typically like the girl to be dominant, and the guy to be submissive, so there's often a 'mistress / femboy' comparison, to some extent
though you could easily just have a male switch getting a dickgirl to top him. i think a lot of people into futa on male are into futadom specifically, though.

>>10968854
>What would you want to see in a futa-on-male story?
A relationship dynamic where they both have distinct personalities, for one thing. The Actual Character/submissive outline waifu dynamic is way too goddamn common, and somehow more so a thing than usual in futa on male stuff
Kind of an extension of the above, but both characters taking an active role in sex; like, she may be jackhammering his prostate and generally fucking him into the mattress, but he's still holding her tight and whispering lewd/cute things in her ear and maybe leglocking and/or poking her G-spot at exactly the right moment.

Also, this is just a personal preference, but I don't like futa!angst as a story element, beyond something like say the girl thinking about how gosh, she's heard that some people aren't into girlcock, but her %lovertype sure seems to like it as much as he loves everything else about her

>>10971091
D here.

Thinking on it, I tend not to write quick 'fuckfics' where two established people who fuck do it again. I'm interested in stories where the dynamic between two people change. I'd need to think of some way the story between a futa and a male would be jostled a bit.

Unrelated: I just noticed that Out of the Bag pulled ahead of PWA on Literotica. Does Literotica like the less-dirty stories better?

>>10972040
I think it's more about how well you play the category than the amount of sex on there.

If anyone is taking requests, I'd love to see any of these.

>Gradual, mostly unwilling male to shemale TF
>Brutal but weirdly erotic life of a professional breeder
>Dragon cum is extremely valuable as an alchemic regent, but only if given willingly - dragons are paid extremely well to edge themselves and cum
>Guy visits a capsule hotel built on land once used for an Inari shrine, finds it's run by Kitsunes
>Gay dudes paid to fuck monstergirls for porn because they're the only ones that don't cum instantly.

>>10968854
>>10972040
before I throw my whole idea at you, I'm going to ask what your level of interest/disinterest in light incest (IE, cousins and the like) stuff is

>>10973541
>your level of interest/disinterest in light incest (IE, cousins and the like)

D here.

None. Incest is a hard pass.

Sorry, mate.

>>10973693
Fair enough m8, that's why I asked

Alright friends, I'm actually working on getting this site programmed; I think I know the frameworks and stuff I'll be using for the backend. I'm thinking of asking users to select things from this list that they're particularly interested in seeing in their feed or blacklisting. Sorta like a f-list kink panel that's less crammed with crap for people to sort through. Let me know what I'm missing.

Sexuality Tags: Straight, Gay Male, Lesbian
Scenario Tags: Group Sex, Crossdressing/Transgender, Swinging/Cuckolding, Incest, Noncon, Sci-Fi, Fantasy, Fanfiction, Romance, Masturbation/Toys
Kink Tags: Anal, Feet, BDSM, ABDL, Furry/Inhuman, Mind Control, Exhibitionism, Vore, Transformation, "Squick"

"Squick" in particular I don't like the name of and want to think of a replacement for. I just kinda want a catch-all that's in the blacklist by default for stuff like shitplay, watersports, bloodplay - that sort of stuff. Open to suggestions.

>>10974725
Well squick would depend on the person, really. many find incest to be squicky, for example, while some people aren't bothered by it at all.
You're looking for "Guro" and "Scat." Perhaps "Snuff" if actual death is involved.

Between those three you've got most of the extreme stuff covered.

Also might want a "Bisexual" tag as some stories include a mix of m/m, m/f, and f/f.

>>10974725
Impregnation
Mind Break
Bestiality

Furry and Inhuman should be separate tags. Stuff like xenomorphs or other aliens wouldn't really count as furries, and I'd even say a Monster tag (dragons and other D&D style beasties) as well.

>>10974725
>Noncon
Can we just call it Rape, please? That's what it means. We're a bunch of internet perverts writing about sick shit so other perverts can get off. Do we really need to be PC?

>>10974975
Noncon covers any kind of sexual assault, not just rape.

>>10974975
There's actually a difference between noncon and rape. Rape has the chance for one party to hate the other, or one to be misguided by love to force unwilling sex. Noncon assumes both parties hate each other while fucking each other. The similarity is that the sex is nonconsensual

>>10974792
I'm just looking for a single tag to catch things that I don't want to showcase to new, unregistered users who haven't specifically opted into that content.

>>10974894
No bestiality on the site, sorry. There will be user-defined tags as well that people can use for searching; these are just the major overarching categories that I'm going to use to determine a lot of other stuff on the server. (E.g. I don't want someone who is only ever active on the vore tag to become a mod and go off and passing judgement on stuff that doesn't have to do with vore.)

>>10974975
I don't think there's anything "PC" about downgrading "rape" to "noncon/dubcon." It's more about not having a big "Rape" button on my front page; I imagine literotica has the same reason for doing it this way. Plus, I don't want people to have to think about, "Well, this story isn't SUPER rapey, just a little rapey; I won't tag it with that category." Like >>10975049 said, I'd like to just catch it all in the less-specific tag.

>>10974975
Noncon covers a variety of things, while rape is specifically a violent attack in which one party overpowers another with force.

There are many scenarios I write that are not consensual but have no elements of violence or abuse.

Rape is never fun, when I imagine rape it's a scruffy hobo holding a knife to someone's neck in an alley, not merely a scenario where somebody is being coerced or blackmailed or whatever.

>>10974725
After some thinking, I've made the following changes.

Scenario: added Pregnancy
Kinks: removed Squick; added Violence/Injury, Bathroom Fetishes, Other Fetishes

Scatplay/watersports can be differentiated by user tags. I'll be excluding Noncon, ABDL, Vore, Violence & Injury, Bathroom Fetishes, and Other Fetishes from the default view of the frontpage - i.e. only for users that haven't yet been prompted to select their interests, which is a demographic I'll obviously be trying to minimize. Objections, authors?

>>10975560
sexual intercourse without consent is rape
noncon just sounds less offensive

>>10976941
Not really.
We're not talking about the legal definition of rape here, we're talking about what people expect from the tag when they see it in a story.

Nobody expects violent sexual assault with the tag 'noncon' and nobody expects mild coercion with the tag 'rape'.

>>10925597
I just started this, but I feel like it might really scratch my Taiyakisoba itch. I miss his stuff.

>>10977605
Is there something going on with him, or is he just being painfully slow?

The important thing to take away from this is to define the tags somewhere on the site.

For what it's worth, to me noncon is violence or mind control type things, blackmail and other technically-had-a-choice stuff is dubcon.

>>10977643
I don't think he really writes anymore, I dunno. I haven't heard much from him since /gfd/

>>10977674
It's weird, because I've always understood 'dubcon' to basically mean tsundere for the dick/ "I didn't know I wanted to fuck until you told me so" scenarios, while blackmail and shit are still straight noncon

>>10974725
I'd say toss snuffags and guro out the fucking window/helicopter where they belong, lest they take your site over, and both have an 'extreme' tag that can be added to most others and renders a story default unseen, and a catchall 'disgusting to the uninterested' tag to be thrown on all stories with greasy tags (which you should add to the list, like scat ect), that hide it unless specifically that tag is searched for

>>10969399
This actually gives me an extremely silly story idea
>black guy meets a cute girl, she invites him home
>he goes with her, gets to 'her place' realizes from things she's said and the house that she's trying to recruit him for nasty cuckold shit
>spies the husband's number on some piece of paper, bails and gives him a call
>after the two confront his impending ex-wife, they go out drinking it off
>turns out the black guy just broke up with his fiancée and was indulging his heterocuriosity for the first time
>His Erection and Optimism: Gone
>prospective 'cuck' ironically reassures him that this shit is in no way normal
>they decide to stay in contact
And here's my best idea for a pornographic component to it
>the two are drinking at the first guy's favourite bar and end up pouring out their tale of improbable woe to the bartender, while the girl next to them listens
>turns out she just walked away from her last crazy ex-GF and wants to try something different
>extremely experimental true MMF threesome ensues

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1500 word update, was a bit busy today, new content at "They moved along one of the piers"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
New tags:
>bisexual Asian pirates

>>10977313
no, it's all actual rape
you don't "enjoy rape" just because it's coercive as opposed to violent
just because *you* associate rape with assault, doesn't mean everybody else does
noncon works fine for most people

>>10977674
i think dubcon is usually just "you don't really want it but you go along"
blackmail would still be non consentual

>>10978006
>Extreme
That's a good name for what I was looking for; thanks.

>>10974725
>Crossdressing/Transgender

D here.

I personally would like a category for 'futa' that is distinct from this. But if nobody else sees it as necessary, that's fine.

>>10984223
There will be a more specific tag for dickgirls that's a subset of that category. Though now that you mention it, I'll add an "Other" sexuality category to catch all the potential debates and odd cases like MMF/MFF.

Kinda wanna write a sgmhort thing
>Son of great conjurer tries to summon demon to exact revenge
>Instead is drawn in to hell as sacrifice
>Finds out that the knowledge his father gained and later bequathed was given in exchange of soul of his firstborn son - young conjurer's
>Demon presents 'choice' if dying and being eternalky damned, or becoming servant for exchance of perhaps being allowed outside of hell to further demon
>Reluctantly accepts, dicking ensues

>>10985005
What is "sgmhort"?

>>10984223
Hey, D. How's the gangbang fic going?

>>10986177
Every time I see this, I'm always like, "Fuuuuck, I forgot about that one."

I'll work on it tonight.

By all means, keep posting here to remind me. It's evidently the only thing keeping it on my mind. And I DO intend on finishing it.

Request for tf thing. Could be either serious or comedy.

>Almost all of the Werewolf myths are wrong
>People know them as either deranged murderers or ugly monsters, neither of which are accurate
>Those depictions of Lycanthropy are more, uhh, "metaphorical" than most people know
>Werewolves are creatures of untempered, beast-like passion. Passion that was far too scandalous to be written about in plain language during the time people believed in them.
>The only literally true parts are "You turn into something wolf-like," "The moon has something to do with it," and "You act in a way society of a few centuries ago would find heretical or satanic."

>Guy realizes he's turning into a werewolf
>Is scared he's going to start hunting people or get super dangerous on a full moon
>Almost every single piece of Werewolf lore turns out to be code for something sexual or mostly benign
>"Mostly" because going from "I'm pretty straight but traps are cute" to "I will fuck anything attractive that agrees" is pretty jarring
>As is developing a ton of new fetishes out of nowhere
>And orgasms that last 30 minutes

>>10987143
>And orgasms that last 30 minutes
That sounds painful. Repetition is the death of excitement.

>>10987227
Canines IRL ejaculate for that long. I wasn't just making that up.

>Repetition is the death of excitement.
It doesn't have to be when literal magic is involved. It could fluctuate in intensity, feel more like a pleasurable fog, or something else like that.

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2000 word update, new content at "I didn't even ask for payment yet,"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
New tags:
>voyeurism

>>10987644
He meant for the reader.

>>10989841
I wasn't implying the entire thing should be written out!

>>10990876
Oh, thank god for that.

I've been working on a rewrite for an old story of mine. Progress is being made, first three chapters are a go.
( There's no actual smut yet. I'll get there eventually. )

https://pastebin.com/dYDHP6Ki [ Chapter 1 ]
https://pastebin.com/z8nH1y2Z [ Chapter 2 ]
https://pastebin.com/z02q8e0j [ Chapter 3 ]

>>10925597
So I binged this last night, and I really love it. Are there plans to break from the conversation with padre format though? Don't get me wrong, it's creative and interesting and good, and I'd be fine with it if the entire story was like that. But at the same time, I feel like some of the emotion is missing when the story is just a retelling of things that have already happened. Everything's more intense in the moment.

>>10925597
>Interesting mentions of /trash/ there. Hopefully further awareness efforts can bring additional interested readers here.
I hope its OP found his/her/its way here.

Am I to understand that most of /d/'s erotic fiction general has migrated to this general now, yes?

>>10996236
Some. We've bled a tonne of viewers and content creators every time we moved boards, but a decent chunk of the regulars came this time.

>>10996331
Any of the notable ones come in?

>>10996367
AA here. I'm not as active as I used to be by a long shot, but I'm still lurking and (attempting to) write things. I know Snek, D, and a couple of other guys have come along as well.

>>10996450
Interesting. I'd feel like undergoing an endeavor to write here but I'm still weighing the option of writing over at /tg/'s Storythread as well.

>>10996492
I see no reason not to do both at once.

>>10996506
Probably. I still have some motivations I need to work out for the leader character.

Do you guys read or watch references when writing porn?

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Snek here, some more progress on the Fineprint book cover, still some changes to make but it's getting there.

Got some Nazka art on the way from a new artist too, we'll see what kind of job he does.

>>10997879

write the bug story already asdasdasfad

Questions for world builders: do you look up other cultures when writing?

>>11000694
Sort of. I make up the collection of traits I want X group to have without looking at anything, and once I have that outline, I look up RL cultures who share some of those quirks, and borrow some details from them

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>>10997708
Yeah, sometimes. If I'm writing a bunch of blowjob scenes, for example, I'm almost guaranteed to go read a Fue doujin since he's the blowjob king. Anything else, if I get stuck on something, I usually take a look at a story by a writer I like or check if there are stories with similar concepts to see if there's another angle I can be attacking the scene from.

>>11000641
It's good to be excited, but please refrain from haranguing authors to update/start writing specific stories, especially if you know they're working on something else. Some of us have backlogs we need to get through before we can start or resume working on a specific story. I know Snek has to finish Grave Goods (and possibly something else, I don't keep too close an eye on his work) before he can get to the bugs.

>>11000694

Like all the time to the point of just smashing things together to make some new. There's a lot of neat things in history, ancient and modern.

>>10996450
DLFG seems more alive than since /tg/ which is nice, and parallax is doing shit again in the last thread or two.

The variety is kinda refreshing.

>>10997879
That is a supernaturally awful suit, like, everything the tailor could have done wrong, they did. In the wrong size.

>>11005116
>supernaturally awful
Please tell me more, I know very little of fashion.

>>10953287
I think I'll be done this week. 7000-8000 words is reasonable I feel, despite how utterly slow I've been, there's just been a lot of other irrelevant things going on.

https://pastebin.com/prEXy26p

Edgy shit I had to get out of my system. Apologies.

>>11005217
WELL
Late as fuck here, but at a quick glance:

The jacket is completely shapeless and drops straight down
The pockets are not only on the outside, but actually a bit bulgy
The line of the jacket collar suggests the jacket is unable to close without being weirdly pulled about torso
Why the fuck are there cuffs on the jacket
And also apparently the hem of the trousers holy shit
And the toe boxes on those shoes look like trainers instead of smart shoes
Skinnyjeans can get dangerously obnoxious done wrong all by themselves, but the basic cut of a suit invariably doesn't work with ultra skinny trousers because it will always jar with the cut of the jacket, which can't be elastically clingy
Shirt collar sticking out over the jacket suggests a really poor fit
The tie isn't quite peanutted, but it's way too damn short unless you're a uniformed british schoolkid engaging in a really pathetic attempt to rebel against the dress code because you're still four years away from even thinking about maturity
Also the knot there appears to have a fold in it that's only physically achievable if the tie is on backwards, in which case the other tail end would be awkwardly draped down the top of the main tie
For the love of god you don't put pens in your breast pocket you idiot, that thing can only hold small, very flat items by design since larger things would jut out weirdly against your body there
Hence it's common use for a decorative (or practical) handkerchief, or for storing things like tickets, or securing a flower or other ornament on special occasions
There's usually at least three internal pockets located more appropriately for things like a pen, phone and wallet; two inner breast (but where stuff in them lies better against the torso) and one low and on the wearer's right
The main pocket on the wearer's right usually has a few inner coin pockets, so you can carry a little change easily reachable and it won't jingle much if you divvy it a bit

>>11010900
Fashion anon destroys again, holy fuck.

>>11010503
God, I wrote it and I hate it...ew.

There any good vg cats Aeris fics about?

>>11014095
Fuck no, and thank god for that.

>>10997879
I think my only criticism of your commissions that you do choose is; you never do anything explicit. I want sex mang.

That said, I do like all of these covers. Especially how this one is turning out.

>>10997879
Hey snek, I'm testing out StoriesOnline and I was wondering if you got more comments with Public Comments turned on or off or if that was something you had experimented with at all.

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>>11010900
Damn son, calm down.

>>11010900
That was more informative than expected. Thanks.

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>>11017523
Well. This is a new one.

>>11006826
Got a name? Curious if I read any of your other stuff.

be mindful of where the thread is on the catalog, we got retards spamming their general again

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>>11000641
It's up next! Grave Goods probably had another 20 days or so left.

>>11010900
Lol. I asked for a bad suit because the character is a two-bit lawyer, so Grim either knows nothing about suits or he excelled.

>>11014326
Problem is if I make my covers overly pornographic then sites like Amazon won't carry them. If I start making some more Patreon bucks maybe I can afford some porn too.

>>11015962
I leave all public comments on, but SOL recently switched to an in-site mailing system, so check the site inbox.

>>11019781
>Got a name?
Nope, never really bothered with one.
>Curious if I read any of your other stuff.
I dread the thought.

>>11020882

By Patreon bucks you mean "Ask Shiny and he'll just get it for you", yes?

Who needs cover, people are here for the writing, the illustrations are "just" bonus. If you (or people) really want porn you can always stick it at the end since it's all digital.

>>11021177
I wish, though I'll be using commission money from the bug story to buy more covers and if we ask nicely Shiny might be willing to help fund some bug character art.
I'm bringing in a second artist to work on non-book cover related stuff, but it remains to be seen if his work is up to par and if he's reliable.
>>11021246
Right now I'm banking on getting these covers done, and I'll be going back and re-editing my older work to bring it up to standard, I wanted to hire a real editor but it's just too expensive. If I don't produce something presentable that I can sell, I'll have to get a real job and dramatically reduce my output.

I wrote a thing, first in a while. First time poster so bear with me

Complements of the Domino Lady
https://pastebin.com/dX2JxqhB
>tags: femdom, trampling, shoejob, ruined orgasm

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>>11021333
>trampling

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>>11017848
I thought everyone on 4chan knew about sexy planes by now.

>>11020882
I'll give it a look, thanks.

>>11020882
That suit would be really expensive, because you'd never find one like that off the shelf. It'd be way cheaper and easier to make a better suit than that thing. Dude wasn't portrayed as incompetent enough to buy a suit nearly as bad as shown, and even a two-bit lawyer can still roughly do a tie. Yeah, he's meant to be a little fish being pushed into the role since nobody else will take it, but it's not really credible for him to be all THAT shit and have even met someone in his kind of job, let alone work it. It's already a bit reaching for the dead end posting to a literal deathtrap not to be going to a highly skilled professional anyway.

A cheapass suit picked out by someone who isn't literally a moron usually shows up because the shoulders are a bit weird where the back is pulled funny or is too loose, it dimples in right at the top of the sleeves because the shoulders are too wide, the sides hang a little awkwardly putting some lateral rumples on the body. That usually isn't desperately awful until you do up the jacket though.
The legs are often rumpled at the bottom too for most people, and are meant to be shortened by a tailor, or by getting the taper on the legs wrong they hug a bit on the thigh, or are a bit loose on the shins.

...actually, a good reference with tons of material for what a cheap, shitty suit looks like is Trump. He's wearing crazy expensive suits, but for whatever reason he takes pride in not having them altered. He's also unusually shit at picking off the rack, which undoes whatever good buying an expensive make does. He's also an example of someone who is Really Bad At Ties, but who is still trying to do it basically correctly. Wearing a badly fitting suit seems to be a somewhat common thing with politicians, but Trump takes it to the next level without quite crossing into "you need to be trying really hard to fuck up this bad".

>>11021325


The secret is Shiny is the one who said that original post. I reeeeally hate note having a name field.

>>11020882
Oh shit I didn't know you were making free covers for amazon stuff! That changes everything.

>>11020882
i'm glad to see that artist is finally improving
so much of their stuff was rigid and eugh
well drawn in terms of actual... visual quality, but bland and with unappealing anatomy

>>11024560
don't you fucking stare at me

Im looking for a story where humans were put into cybernetic dog suits and they fight in wars. does anyone have a link?

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Vluirty here and blah blah blah.

Added 4 (Four!?!?) new fics to the wiki by some newish writer named Smol Kobold. Because of their experience or etc, the formatting is a bit rough on some fics, but I think they are decent enough reads.

Lastly, they asked for feedback and reponses, so if anybody could do that, it would be appreciated by all parties involved.

https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Category:Smol_Kobold

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2000 word update, new content at "Val wrapped Jas in her cloak and helped her with her boots and gloves"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
>no new tags

>>11022153
Oh fair enough, lol. Yeah, I had hoped to ask you about maybe going 50/50 on some bug art, or a cover. I'd love to get a piece done that showcases all of the different forms, but that would amount to like twice my monthly budget.

>>11022537
Yeah I'm hoping to get one done for at least all of the larger stories, and most of the covers can double as character art so I'll be killing two birds with one reasonably priced stone.

>>11028811

>Oh fair enough, lol. Yeah, I had hoped to ask you about maybe going 50/50 on some bug art, or a cover.

How about we do 0/100 on both? Preferably if we can have at least one of them involve our favorite queen to be because I'm dying to see her design, but it's understandable if not and I'll cover both anyway.

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D here.

I'm feeling really unmotivated right now. I might have too much going on. I open up my many incomplete works and can't find the motivation to work on any of them. I really want the next chapter of GFH to come out, but that's still a while out.

Maybe I'm feeling burnout. What do you do for burnout?

>>11030170
¨Pick up a game/book I like and binge it. Works with works I don't know yet too if they're good.

>>11030170
Read new things to freshen your brain. Your writing brain must be well fed and aerated.

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>page 9
how horrifying

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>The woman was the infamous Dark Mechanicum Slaanesh worshipping Tech Priestess "Labia Nipple Johnson" (first name Labia, middle name Nipple, surname Johnson), a notorious data thief who had once hacked into the data network of the Tau Earth Caste on the planet Dal'yth to steal many terabytes worth of technology blueprints and schematics.
What am I reading

test

>>11037776
Something I sincerely hope is a parody, because otherwise GW writing has hit a new low.

I kind of want to try writing a smut story in the style of a Japanese light novel. Maybe something along the lines of a reincarnation or "died and was sent to a fantasy world" type of plot. Sort of an experiment to see what would happen if a typical overpowered LN protag actually got laid in a timely manner instead of pussyfooting around for 150,000 words.
Thoughts or ideas?

>>11040033
>isekai
I hope you get eaten by a spider.

>>11040033
I think that kind of plot is currently oversaturating the market at the moment
>died and sent to a fantasy world

If you need someone to send to the fantasy world, then perhaps they don't need to die, but are instead summoned to be the 'key' to save the world, or save the population from being oppressed by bullshit enemy force. Hell, he could even switch between real world or fantasy world if the time would call for it.

Several threads ago an anon wanted to make a story where a human was able to save the female race from being enslaved to an empire of mercenaries based in some hentai named Kuroinu: Kedakaki Seijo wa Hakudaku ni Somaru (was famous for first episode dark elf sex). Perhaps your smut could be in this verse where the summoned hero is called to save the dark elfs, or whatever race is being forced into sex slavery in that series.

>>11040276
>>11040278
>I think that kind of plot is currently oversaturating the market at the moment
That's kind of the point, though. The idea would be trying to mimic the style, and such a common trope/plot would help make it feel like an LN.

But I see your point.

beep

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AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>10919476
>Three new chapters of Plate and Scale up. Two are revised from original Chapter 4 based on reader feedback, the third is completely new material.

Character Tags: M(human, knight), F(monstergirl lizardman, warrior), tomboy(F), tsundre(F), muscle(F), tanlines(F), muscle(M).

Erotic Tags: M/F, consensual, clumsy seduction, heavy petting, tail stroking, kissing, mutual first time, oral intercourse(blowjob, scrotum fondling, prehensile tongue, deepthroat, cum swallowing), breast groping, breast sucking, fingering(minor).

Setting Tags: Fantasy world (GURPS TL3), armor, village, single combat, marriage.

Summary: He is a knight, a proud protector of the working class. She is a lizard-girl who's never lost a fair duel before. While his heroism saved his village, it also earned him her affections. Despite his rejections, she keeps pushing him, wanting the knight's hand in marriage even though it is not his to give. How long will his resolve last, and how much do either of these lifelong warriors really know about seduction?

>Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/11637996/

>>10967126
Feedback appreciated. Happy someone enjoyed the cowgirl short story! Agree that erotic content is back-loaded, unsure if this was because of angle taken on story or caused by personal writing style. Intend to re-evaluate all short stories after completion of current large works. "Plate and Scale" started out as a short story intended to take no more than two hours, but currently competes with "Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves" and "Northlands Garrison" for writing time. Also, currently under pressure from unforeseen complications that limit available hobby time.

Will state again, as have stated before, "More!" is positive feedback regardless of if it is the reader asking for more quality content or the author asking for more quality critique.

(1/2)

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>>11045192
>Remarks on Lizard-girl story
Much time spent revising, rewriting, and editing. Refocused story on characters. Based on reader feedback, significantly reduced knight's thoughts about his communist upbringing and why it goes against marrying the lizard-girl. Original idea behind concept was modification of common "knightly code of honor". Instead of being bound by codes of nobility and a monarch, the knight is instead bound by communist dogma and its commissars. Experimental, as is much of story.

Happy with what was produced, but feel story is not as good as it could have been if entire story was designed from the beginning as a larger scale work. Originally planned to be a short story, like "Hardening"(body modification in space opera setting) or "Happy Accidents"(cowgirl milking/paizuri short). Story grew larger than expected due to efforts to do the concept justice.

Should probably not have taken on this project while working on "Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves" as well as "Northlands Garrison", but initially thought it would be a much smaller story and wished to use as a testbed for AO3 hosting. Feedback so far has actively indicated lessening interest from readers due to manner in which story has unfolded. Personally intend to complete for sake of completing story, if nothing else. Learning experience.

Reader feedback greatly appreciated. Hope this revised version is more in line with desire of original requester as expressed in >>10664721 T#26.

(2/2)

>>11045192


Man I am really loving this story, along with Paws and pencils. Seeing either get updated makes me so happy

>>11039018
I think she's mostly joking, but I'll let you decide.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/11664153/chapters/26247297

>>11045192
I'd kinda like to see the cowgirl story extended with additional porn, maybe ass-focused

>>11045553
I couldn't even make it past the giant list of tags, it's like a checklist of all the fetishes that freak me out.

I wrote a 2910 word greentext for the Gardevoir thread >>11046411

>>11046430
you know you could just. copy paste your post, right????

>>11046441
I don't want to clutter the thread with duplicate information.

>>11046464
Fair point, but this is /trash/, so if the thread you linked dies before this one the info is lost.

>>11046430
>2910 word greentext
w h y

just write like normal fucking humans do at that point

>>11046464
yeah, so instead you're making people click through to another thread, just to save... two lines of text worth of vertical space

>>11046704
>tfw you can only get hard to memes

>>11046662
Good point:
Reader/Original Female Wild Gardevoir/Original Furisode Girl
POV Second Person, greentext, Kissing, Blow Jobs, Pokephilia, Cunnilingus, Threesome - F/F/M, On-model Gardevoir, Cosplay, Dyed Pubic Hair, Kalos-chihou | Kalos, Words: 2,910
https://archiveofourown.org/works/11815281

>>11046704
I didn't think it would grow this long when I started writing.

>>11043316
huh, that synopsis does seem very familiar to that genre of fantasy. Was it a popular book in Japan?

>>11047455
I think it's more likely indirect influence via Dungeons and Dragons.

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Has anybody else noticed how common paintings of nude slave girls being inspected/sold are?

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1500 word update, new content at "She showed them to their bunks"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
>no new tags

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Here's the first 4000 words of a thing I felt like writing today. I've wanted to do a succubus story for a while, and those of you who have been reading my work for a long time know I have a horror story that got canned, but I thought that a properly researched story based on the Ars Goetia might be more fun than the standard affair.

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
>no tags yet

This one is quite heavy on the drama, but the tone will lighten as it goes on. The premise is that a guy's life goes completely off the rails, he loses his job and his girlfriend, suffers a string of bad luck, and then once he's at rock bottom he decides to summon a demon to help him get his life back on track.
I may go back and fluff up the opening a bit, I feel like maybe he turns to demonology a little too quickly, but whatever I shit this out in an afternoon and it needs refinement.

This isn't replacing any scheduled stories, it's low-priority and I'll work on it whenever I have the free time.

>>10994789
Recommend posting a short description with tags alongside links to your chapters. Clear communication of a story's intent and setting helps potential readers choose to read your work. Also provides them the correct mindset for giving feedback since they will have a better idea of what you are aiming for.

>>11010503
>>11011322
Plausible idea, needs tuning. Contains basic grammar errors that can be easily corrected. Concept of being the "last of your kind" not limited to furries vs. humans, also explored in works such as the "Last of the Mohicans" and of course Asimov's "Foundation" books. If the idea is interesting to you, put in some work and make it shine. The difference between something terrible and something readable is often research and editing. To quote from an interview Fantasy Literature had with published author Jim Butcher...

>"Me being an arrogant kid, I wrote him back saying, “Why don’t you give me TWO terrible ideas for a story, and I’ll use them BOTH.” The core ideas he gave me were Lost Roman Legion and Pokémon… Thus was Alera formed."
http://www.fantasyliterature.com/author-interviews/jim-butcher/

So began a six-work series that is in print. Personally haven't read 'em, but it's an inspiring story!

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>>11052105
>new derenashi never
>last append was full of unfinished sketches

up

>>11052349
Can't be helped.

>>11054278
But it's haaaard

https://discord.gg/RvBdsm
https://discord.gg/RvBdsm

>>11054777
Fuck off

>>10921455
D here.

Found this in /s/.

>>>/s/17641682

I really thought I was making up the notion of partially-clad women making coffee.

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>>11055215
Follow the money.
http://www.seattlepi.com/business/article/Seahawks-Stadium-hands-off-coffee-contract-to-1093278.php
To no one's surprise, this seems to have started up in Seattle. Bunch of tech entrepreneurs with large amounts of disposable income, coffee shops on every corner, instead of upping the quality of their product (hard) it's easier to just let the staff strip down (easy). Same concept floats Hooters, which has been around since 1983.

Also, no disrespect D, but isn't there a technical difference between women baristas in skimpy outfits and the intersex coffee shop workers you write about?

>>11056206
All of Washington state is covered with these. I have to drive past 2 to get to Arby's. Never actually stopped at one. I like boobs and coffee but the combination just raises sanitation questions.

>>11030170
Watch something funny. Gets you into a better mood and eases the tension on your head.

>>11057668
It's unbelievable what thirsty losers will throw at women for some minor titillation.

>>11057748
Well, it's better than Florida. "Massage" parlour on every block.

I can't remember if these bikini coffee places started before or after Idiocracy came out. I remember the first one opened in Mulkiteo and the health department tried to shut it down.

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>>11056206
>Also, no disrespect D, but isn't there a technical difference between women baristas in skimpy outfits and the intersex coffee shop workers you write about?

D here.

In my mind, all women are futa until proven otherwise.

(It's also the fact that I set it in Seattle, and these are apparently in Seattle, too... the truth really is stranger than fiction... until the women with penises stick stuff up their ass and jizz hazelnut. Then that's probably stranger than fiction.)

>>11057748
As someone who writes what is essentially comedy... I find it hard to get into most comedies.Most comedies lately are either nasty, cruel or both.

I really like Anchorman, Airplane, and the recent Popstar: Never Stop Never Stopping was brilliant. I even liked the new Spiderman movie, which was essentially the best teen comedy in years. The Marvel movies are all funny enough that they make the glut of nasty comedies look real grim.

Maybe I'll look around Netflix and find a comedy.

(sees Masterminds listed on Netflix)

(sets fire to computer)

>>11059078
This was meant to respond to this.

>>11057725

>>11051104
They're pretty good. I usually skip the second book when rereading the series, but overall it's got good characters, solid worldbuilding, interesting and unique races, and a magic system on par with anything Brandon Sanderson has written. A large part of the appeal is that the MC is the only human without magic, forcing him to think outside the box to defeat people.

My main complaint is that when cultures clash, the human faction is always the one that has to compromise. It's especially prevalent later on when the MC is in a position of authority and still has to bend over backwards to other species' societal quirks. Apparently humans are the only ones to recognize the importance of not being a stubborn jackass when the apocalypse is on the horizon.
It was even worse in his steampunk book, The Aeronaut's Windlass. I had to stop reading barely a fifth of the way through because of those fucking cats.

>>11059078
You are mentally ill

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>>11059695
D here.

Why? Because I didn't like Masterminds?

Also, there's a thread on /d/ for orgasm denial, and someone wrote a story for it and posted it in the thread. And it's still there.

...I just want to know what the rules really are, please. If you can have someone posting stories in imagethreads on your imageboard, why not a general? This makes no sense.

>>11059787
nobody probably cared enough to report it

>>11059695
>>11059787
I have seen this pic before. Would this place be as popular as futa brew?

>>11059985
Dunno. What's their pitch?

>>11060016
I dunno. "All natural" non dairy milkshakes.fresh Ranch or honey mustard table service. A convenient place to carry the paper towl roll or the condiment caddie when serving a table. A bartender that has a variety of mixers on tap. It's a great place to get some glazed wings and watch the latest futaball match.

A good place for Mel and whats-her-face to have their much demanded date.

magic futa buttplug technology is being applied to the resturant industry as a whole, not just coffee. Futine must be popular in canada.

I dunno if there is a narritive in there, but the setting could be fun.

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>>11059985
>>11060016
>>11060886

D here.

I cannot say how much it means to me that people like my silly smut enough to think about this stuff independently. This is why I miss /efg/.

Thank you all so much. You keep me going.

>>11061452
Please stop starting your posts with that. We can tell it's you. And stop posting disgusting 3D, please.

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>>11061812
It's /trash/, he can post whatever he wants.

>>11061812
anon here.
he's obviously using "d here" in place of a name field.
peace out anon, from your brother, anon.

>>11062555
In this land of forced anonymity it's the only way to keep a consistent conversation aside from arvatarfagging or signing posts, both of which are much worse faux pas than starting posts with "X Here"

>>11062616
le me: you could type out all your messages as if you were in a chat room
le me: that way you wouldn't have to sign your posts or be obnoxious

D Here.

I actually hate futas.

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>>11063491
D here.

Confound it, I don't remember saying that, but that post is legally binding!

Guess I hate futas now. Darn.

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2000 word update, why am I doing this to myself edition, new content at "Val suddenly regretted drinking quite as much wine as he had"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
Tags for this scene:
>voyeurism, public, blowjob, deepthroat, hair pulling, trap/twink/femboy/gay/whatever helps you sleep at night

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2500 word update, new content at "Ryan awoke the following morning with a renewed desire to see the project through"

Goetic Justice:
https://pastebin.com/3ey7dvhz
>no tags yet

Kind of crapshoot, but does anyone know if Crowley actually wrote the Illustrated Goetia or if the narrator is somebody else? I may have my facts wrong on that one.

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>>11029576
Sorry Shiny I totally missed that post, the lack of a name field is screwing with me. Sure that's peachy, I had an artist doing Nazka art but that fell through, so my wallet is a little heavier this month than I expected it to be. Maybe I'll just hang on to that money and put it towards bug art.

>>11069273
Just says he "edited" it, but it seems most of the drawings come from another book and by the artist Louis Le Breton. Seems there's been a lot of different version with revisions and such to each.

>>11069368
Yeah that's all I could find too, I'm trying to determine if the story about summoning Orobas from the Illustrated Goatia is actually supposed to be about Crowley, or if it's narrated by somebody else.
/sum/ is slow as fuck and they haven't clarified anything yet.

Gotta say this shit is a lot of fun to research. Shame there are only like 3 of 72 Goetic demons who appear as women, but I guess I can just fudge that.

>>11069451
Could fudge it and say they fucked up the gender in them due to how old they are or some are probably vague enough you could just say they're female

Good night

>>11069273

Keep that wallet heavy, by 0/100 I meant I'm the 100.

up

beep

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Anyone who could write something cute with PaRappa and Lammy?

I'd love to see something short about this.

>Girl famous in porn for her femdom scenes
>Especially light masochism
>Every tiny slap to her victim's dick or balls makes them cum uncontrollably
>People assume they edge first
>She's actually a goddess of lust, and her touch alone is enough to bring someone to mind-shattering orgasm

how the fuck do you avoid doing purple prose? it's a really bad habit of mine, and i have to constantly rewrite paragraphs because i put too much shit in it. asking for a friend

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>>11079095
>avoid doing purple prose

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>>11079218
give me an answer you little shit

>>11079443
If it's in porn, then a little purple prose isn't a bad thing.
Try reading it out loud. If you can say the paragraph without finding yourself saying, "Fucking really?" then you're probably safe.

I'd argue that doing the opposite and being too direct and clinical is even worse. Both purple prose and smut are inherently self indulgent, so it's actually rather appropriate. You probably wouldn't get much out of porn written by a robot, or in the style of a seventies nature documentary.

>Ah, yes. Here we see the male of the species copulating with a female.
>Notice the quick, jerking motions of the male's pelvis as he continues to thrust.
>Typically we would see the female's nipples harden and her skin brighten as it flushes with blood, a common feature of arousal.
>Here, however, the female is clearly un-engaged with the process and is simply going through the motions.
>One can almost see the female rolling her eyes, but out of politeness, or perhaps apathy, she does not.
>Still, by her inactivity and clear lack of interest we can tell the female is not enjoying this particular act of procreation.
>This is likely due to her partner, who happens to be my boss, Dave.
>Dave has a reputation for poor sexual performance, which is why this particular female is receiving monetary compensation and Dave's wife tends to spend Friday nights at my place.

>>11079825
thanks anon

>>11079443
purple prose is good. there's really not that much going on in porn to begin with.
"dave fucked her in the ass. he kept fucking her. her pussy was nice. he fucked her until she came, and he came too."

in order to get people lost in the experience you try to describe the sensations of what's happening, the feeling between them. you want them to know what things look like, and what's happening, but more importantly, you want them to know how things -feel-. and pacing is the most important thing for that.

>>11079825
Right, it's when you start getting into turgid swords and secret gardens and nobody is really quite sure it's even about sex any more, then you've gone too far.

>>11080492
His dick was an enigma, a bastion of mystical sexuality wrapped in a thin layer of tender mystery, the foreskin like a virgin's veil, his cockhead an idealism, a sculpture of masculine virility, begging to enter the folds of his flesh, but held back by a quiet dignity, a dignity of character, but a dignity of appearance, too, a graceful sort of nobility carved into every detail of his magnificent manhood. His slit was a keyhole to ecstasy, a window into his sexual self, an entryway for all the pleasured demons of his inner self to worm their way into the echelons of the human world. The rod was a figurehead of purity, secrecy, all the sexuality the world could funnel into a man, buried in seven concise inches of sexual muscle. He strained at himself, with the force of a raging god, a pent-up deity thirsting for the fruits of his lover, desperate for passion, but holding himself back in a fit of what could only be described as incomparable dignity. And his dick was not merely a visual spectacle - it was a full orgy of the senses, intoxicatingly drug-like, a member threatening to overload the senses of any lesser being, capable of being properly experienced by only the most refined specimens of humanity. The smell was like heaven, dashed with the flames of hell, a musk so sickeningly rich that one could not help but waver at its scent, feel a weakness in the knees, and be consumed by an attraction so mindnumbingly fierce that even those obnoxiously heterosexual men were forced to bend knee to its sexual glory.

>>11083742
I really appreciate the thought you put into thinking about my idea, but that's way different than what I'm hoping for. I wanted something short, lewd, and silly, not detailed, depressing, and about the death of a god.

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>>11080852
10/10

Have you guys tried to contact the mods to talk about this thread? It makes me sad that it had to be moved to /trash/, there's people that probably don't even know it was moved to here.
It was perfect when it was open at /d/.

>>11084451
I do remember some people talking to mods about the move.

The tl;dr from the mods translates to: the writethreads can come back over their dead bodies.

>>11082092
Go ask the NTR threads on /h/, there's at least three or four up at any given time. Most of us on the other hand tend to avoid that subject like the plague.

>>11084788
Thanks for the tip

>>11082092
yeah ultimately there are multiple answers to why NTR attracts fans. Some have a kink for breaking cuties and turning them anti-loyal to their loved ones. Others might be more emotional masochists and enjoy being chastised by their lover as to how Y is better than them or how much they love X more than them. Some are just sadists and enjoy the despair yet aroused position of the poor sap that's the victim of it. Ultimately one of those would be the trigger that gets you into the kink, but it'd have to be strong enough to surpass the 'blech' factor that is cheating on loved ones and preferring the cheater.

If you're really curious about the kink, one of the summer anime is labeled NTR: Netsuzou Trap if you want an introductory on the kink, while still being on-air.

>>11084177
Understandable. Apologies, mind has wandered in dark places of late. Probably due to work stress, lack of sleep, and restricted diet.

>>11084451
The issue at hand isn't the mods/janitors. If the userbase demands quality content, if people with 4chan VIP passes (or whatever they're called) advocate writethreads, and if enough individuals are willing to become mods/janitors to change the makeup of that council, it will happen. Discussions won't change anything, respectable action will. Until then, the mods' word is law, and objecting loudly will earn bans or further punitive action. Think there's a rule about that on the books...

>>11085322
Most of the userbase just doesn't care one way or another, though. And there's no sign of the mods changing anytime soon- plus, the current group never listened to the userbase anyhow.

>>11085382
Welcome to 4chan, where the standards are made up and the quality doesn't matter.

new thread
>>11085997