Write faggotry thread #28 Previous thread: http://desuarchi

Repostin' my hypnosis thing because I put it up like ten posts before the end of the thread. Straight furry stuff. Woo!

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24341565/

>>10788565
this is why pastebin is so used since you don't have to sign in to read it
just saying you might get more bites though I'm not sure how popular hypno stuff is here

Reposting response to AzimuthFlirt's new Hardening fic.

>>10776570
YES!
You, sir, are quickly becoming one of my favorite writers in this crowd. You should drop by the Worldbuilding General threads on /tg/ if you are so inclined; you'd fit right in.
Absolutely adore the way you're making all the body mods have practical purposes, right from the first line. You've obviously put a lot of thought into it and your ideas are pretty damn clever. The piercing-corset-equivalent mod serving as a secondary nervous system in an emergency is just plain fucking cool.
It's not what I had in mind when I made the original request, but only because I'm not nearly original enough to come up with ideas like that.

Please keep going with it!

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This is my request.

>>10788608
If you don't have a furaffinity you probably don't want to read my furry story ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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>>10788671
There was a gnoll TF story that got posted a thread or two ago that was pretty well received despite not being listed on FA.

>>10786729
If you really need me to post weird stuff, I can do that.

Parallax here. Adding 3000 words to my repairman story, and I'm going to call that a wrap on part 1.


https://pastebin.com/tfMEDPVb
Tags: Monstergirl, cyborg, M/F, fellatio, 69

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Holding onto lillithmon story

Outline: https://pastebin.com/nHUr959h

Suggested extra kinks: lactation from pent up sexual frustration, drinking milk from source, her receiving her first spanking as 'proof' of her desperation/frustration

>>10788859
Forgot to mention, new stuff starts at "The darkness was broken". Feel free to send some critique of complaints my way.

I wasn't entirely sure on how to do the sex scene in this part. I wanted it to be a bit more romantic, but maybe I didn't make it sexy enough. Oh well, the next part will have more sex, but with a completely different tone.

Also, if it's not obvious. the village is intended to be set up like an insect hive. The most deformed girls end up getting low-quality or ill-suited cybernetics and end up as workers. Above them are the warriors who get advanced combat gear. Guardians who are tasked with defense of the village and enforcement of the laws are next, and Mother would normally fill the role of queen, but she has been usurped by the Perfect caste who control access to the few males of the village.

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http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch-4-page-39-414290765
http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch4-page-40-414856423

In these chapters Autzen, an autistic buizel, needs to use the bathroom, but is too scared to use the airplane toilet's loud noise. Despite wearing a diaper he doesn't want to use it, instead holds it throughout the entire plane ride, all six hours of it, even when he's sleeping during most of it, and makes it to the bathroom.
Can someone rewrite this page(s) so that Autzen ends up having an accident in his diaper, perhaps it happening during or shortly after his nap? Read the previous chapters to understand how he'd probably react to it.

Help a fellow autist out please.

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>>10788473
Just finished this, Id appreciate any feedback. Eventually, I will write a story thats not done in greentext.

The Lone Kobold [Human(m)xKobold(f), sex violence, romance]

https://pastebin.com/TrCJ3EAh


Here are my other two recent stories as well if your interested:

Yinglet Maids [romance, dark, yinglets OOPS]
https://pastebin.com/Pz36Dn7s

A Reason to Leave [Human(m)xBaxxid(f), romance, OOPS, Non-smut]

https://pastebin.com/nsz07h6j

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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here: http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions

Reposting:

Transformation, m/m
https://pastebin.com/eW6USRgA

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>>10788473
I've had this idea in my head for a while about some guy using a big suit of power armor or mech, paired with a built-in AI.

The user would be rather careless in battle, letting the suit take the bulk of damage rather than trying to actually strategize. At some point, the AI would override the user's controls, citing their inexperience as the the reason.

From there, femdom and other lewd things ensue.

>>10789973
Is... the AI the fem?

>>10789973
I really like the idea of it. Does the AI feel the pain inflicted on the suit itself? If so that could really add an emotional element. Overall, I dig the concept. Good luck

>>10790310
Not him, but I'd say no against that since that would be dumb. Still, the AI being aware and concerned with too much damage would work since some damage would be expected and mechs are just walking tanks and those can shrug off some gunfire.

>>10790671
Why would it be dumb to program an AI to fear death? Also if its going to be femdom you need some emotion or something connecting the main character to the AI on some level rather than just because of technical reasons or else your literally just going to have a story about a guy getting trapped in a suit the whole time. Thats like writing a story about a buisness man getting trapped in an elevator for a couple hours

Impromptu poll and discussion.

What kind of lewdness do you folks like the most, and why?

Is it innocent and awkward first time sex? Is it terrifying crying for mercy rape? Is it something so strange that calling it lewd is probably grounds to have you examined?

What is it? What about it do you like? Why do you think others should give it a shot?

>>10790751
I'm saying it's dumb to program a battle mech to feel pain. Self preservation is good and all but then does the AI put itself or its pilot's safety first? The mech/AI has to be worth a couple mill while there are several billion humans who could theoretically become a new pilot. Could also have AI grow an attachment to the pilot and want to keep/protect him more than standard level.

Oh wow, last thread hit bumplimit in less than a week?

Cool to see things so lively.

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I was told I could use this to summon Snek

Hey snek, catching up on rig runner and had a thought when you brought up stone age humans and ancient big cats. What if sabertooth borealens were a thing. Like it's some genetic thing that pops up like gingers or albinos.

>>10793481


They'd be even bigger and more feral in behavior and this is insanely hot to think about

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>>10793537

reposting last night's fic
can i get any critique?

https://pastebin.com/bYGeacmR
>The Apprentice's Folly
futadom / m, rape, kinda mindbreak, incubus-y soul stuff, hard beating, oral, anal, biting / scratching, demoness

>>10790784
I like rough stuff, but I require chemistry, setup and characterization.

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D here. Reposting this for the new thread.

The Long Pull: Hand-Picked Dark Roast
https://pastebin.com/mVYcSR7t
>tags: futanari, public nudity, big ejaculation, come in food, masturbation, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, coffee

Please let me know what you think of it.

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AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>10788620
Feedback appreciated.
Reference link to draft "Hardening", pastebin set to expire in just under two weeks: https://pastebin.com/JCD2D6Rq

Apologies, but unable to continue work on piercing/body modification space opera story at this time. As mentioned in initial post, desire was to briefly explore niche fetish before requester interest waned due to lack of response in thread. Development of flash fiction was straightforward due to requester verbosity. Intend to fulfill current commitments before taking on more long-term stories. As frame of reference, spent longer writing and editing Northlands Garrison Chapter 7 than on Hardening. NGC7, after extensive content cutting and edits, is ~600 characters shorter than Hardening at final draft. Would like to work on many large-scale stories, but lack time and resources to do so.

Secondary objective of answering request was to encourage other authors in-thread to try fulfilling requests within their areas of interest, even if only in brief. Have often seen good ideas with interesting details and clear effort by requester to be both polite and helpful fall by wayside. Personally feel that stakes are higher now that /trash/ is the only writethread. First /wst/ was purged from /tg/. Now all other writethreads have been purged. This is the last wall. Either this will be the watershed, or the final drop as the spigot is cranked shut. We from other boards are guests here in /trash/'s writethread, refugees in a sense because this existed before we came here, but we share a common culture and face a common threat of annihilation. Yes, there are other websites. Yes, there are other options. But look back on all that has been lost, and ask yourself how little there is left to lose. Content, critique, and camaraderie is all I have to contribute. I do the best I am able, in the time I have.

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Northlands Garrison Chapter 7 up. 4200 odd words.

Largest chapter yet. Difficult, exhausting to edit. Tried to compact from original draft without losing information or style. Did not want to split into separate chapters due to uneven sizings, lack of breakpoints, and loss of in-chapter momentum for reader. Intent of chapter to build emotion and provide a lead-in to intimacy. Uncertain if accomplished, but only reader feedback will tell.

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, original work, melee line infantry combat, blood, snow, alcohol.

Character Tags: Maid (female), Military officer (male).

Content Tags: M/F, consensual, body cleaning, kissing.

Summary: In a conquered settlement far to the north, a young officer struggles to hold together the garrison legion despite constant attacks from indigenous resistance groups who somehow are able to bring high-yield explosives and powerful spellcraft against him. After a day of blood, pain, and unpleasant surprises, he retires to his quarters in an inn that has been commandeered as a command post. A familiar serving maid, always in the corner of his eye but never underfoot, shyly brings him his evening meal and a wash basin. He's not taken great note of her before, far too much to do if he wants to keep his men alive in this hostile land, and she's not directly engaged him because of a natural shyness.

In his eyes, she's another victim of this drawn out conflict, an orphan taken in by the innkeeper after her parents starved due to food shortages caused by the war. Taking advantage of her would be shameful, against all he's fighting for. Besides, anyone could be an insurgent. But does the pointy-eared maid know something that could turn the tables against this mysteriously powerful rebellion, and if so, what does she want from him in exchange? Men kill in war. Hunger, cold, and disease kill more during the chaos. What are these two willing to do for the promise of restoring peace to this land?

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>>10795615
Northlands Garrison Chapter List
>Chapter I: Explosion
https://pastebin.com/nCuHz6bb
>Chapter II: Promotion
https://pastebin.com/vz62zdf0
>Chapter III: Admiration
https://pastebin.com/mcpNhpTz
>Chapter IV: Starvation
https://pastebin.com/eEXuBLfR
>Chapter V: Revelation
https://pastebin.com/KWfi5GNB
>Chapter VI: Confession
https://pastebin.com/yUVLyiN4
>Chapter VII: Suspicion
https://pastebin.com/LqW0yTjS


>>10788646
Quickly jotted idea. Hope requester will find it mildly satisfying. Have played Crusader Kings 2 for one hour, years ago. Disliked battle mechanics. Attempted to minimize need for experience with game in this flash fiction.

Tags: No explicit content, hooded female, pet snake, implied death by exhaustion.

Link: https://pastebin.com/ggQC2e29
Pastebin set to expire in two weeks.

(3/3)

>>10790784
I personally really like "gentle rough", where both parties are completely down with choking and biting and all that but are lovey dovey and don't really want to actually hurt each other.

>>10788859
Good fucking shit.

I would say be more descriptive but there's a fine line between description and purple waffles, and I personally tend towards the latter.

Either way, minor grammatical BS ('an' instead of 'and') and the eternal problem of "I don't know what the fuck is going on because there is no world-building". The latter problem is usually solved when the story is finished so don't focus too much on explaining the world... unless it comes about naturally. The former can be solved by having a beta who proof-reads the story, not an option for everyone I know.

>>10796299
>I don't know what the fuck is going on because there is no world-building".
I was trying to avoid delving too deep into exposition, but maybe I'm leaning too hard on the old sci-fi tropes I was building off of. The whole futuristic mega-cities separated by radioactive wasteland setting is probably common enough, but the "cities are controlled by a supercomputer that everyone slavishly worships" trope is one that has fallen out of fashion.

The next part will cover Zillion getting cybernetics, making repairs on Mother, and then being strapped to a table and having his DNA forcefully donated to the cause. I'll make sure to work a little more explanation and worldbuilding into that.

>>10796791
People keep on shitting on tropes, but they seem to forget how much it can help. Why is there a radioactive wasteland? Who the fuck cares? The reason WHY the wasteland exists is ancillary to the fact that it exist.

Anyway, just don't try to shove it in just because you feel you need to fill a quota. I'd prefer to have no world-building, enjoy the story, and fill in the blanks by myself against an exposition-dump of an shape or form.

Only have the woman explain themselves if Zillon asks or they feel forced to defend their way of life. Make it natural and shit.

>>10796900
I am planning to show rather than telling, when I can. I hate exposition dumps as much as the next person. Still, if my story is confusing because there's some necessary knowledge I haven't imparted to the reader, that's a valid criticism.

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>>10792837
I am summoned!

>>10793481
>>10793537
>>10793554
Entirely possible! I intentionally left most of the Borealan territories vague so that they could be filled in later as needed.
So far there's the Polar territory for the Polars, obviously.
Elysia which is home to the red-haired, pale-skinned variety like Raz, but that territory is kind of mixed and multicultural because it's the seat of power so you encounter more varieties there.
Then there's Rask, which I've just introduced in Rig Runner, which I figure is where the darker skinned variety like Nazka and Beltza come from.

You could certainly have a territory with archaic sabertooth cats, because until very recently the territories were all extremely isolated and their populations would have diverged and developed independently.

I don't want to go full furry and have "the cheetah ones" and "the tiger ones" but I can certainly take inspiration from existing species.

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>>10792837
no. but it will summon my dick

>>10797860

Yeah but do they even write porn/fetish stuff?

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>>10790244
Yes. The AI is the fem.

>>10789080
Can I ask you something?
Why do you post this every thread when no one ever replies to you?
If no one seems interested, don't you think you should just write it yourself?
I mean, you're the only one who knows exactly what you want to be done. Why not just do it?
If you can write a post you can write a story.

>>10798249
Aside from, I assume, literal mindfucking, what could a Titan do to its pilot?

>>10799752
I would say it is a little bit of both psychological fuckery with teasing/dirty talk from the AI, and mindfucking the pilot, since Titans and pilots are neurologically linked.

Aside from that, I imagined the AI would force the pilot to really learn how Titans and pilots are supposed to operate. This would all really be the AI locking down the cockpit and it's controls, giving the pilot a good mindfuck when he made an unsatisfactory choice on the controls.

It's essentially a tutorial that mindfucks you when you mess up.

>>10800113
Another option is you could have some fun with the neurological link. It could start of by the AI simply causing him to feel pain every time the mech takes damage. Later they might discover the link can go both ways and works for more than just pain. If the AI realizes it's never actually experienced pleasure before (being a machine not designed for that), it might refuse to let him out of the cockpit until he masturbates while uplinked.

>>10797568
Borleans with completely different cultures would be pretty fun, especially if humans can't tell them apart from other equatorials at first

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What-is-she-thinking-about bump.

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D here.

I've done it.

I've joined Tumblr and posted something. It's not erotic, but if anyone in this thread wants a way to follow me that isn't here, this would probably be the place to do it.

https://the-d-stands-for-d.tumblr.com/

>>10803237
i want a story where a marine is accidentally extremely racist against a group of borealans and he has no idea why they all try to gang up on him

>>10803237
I like this idea, I can think of some polar breakaway cultures that would make for fun stories and character interaction

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2000 word update, new content at "Erikson swooned for a moment"

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
>no new tags

>>10805600
just noticed you wrote his name has "Eriksen" at several points, like the very first word of the story, and then for the majority you wrote his name has "Erikson"

>>10793622
>https://pastebin.com/bYGeacmR

Good.

Pros:
Charcoal instead of brimstone
Feels campy but in a good way?
Excellent detail choice

Cons:
'Did I misread? Am I too weak for this,' he thought.
feels like it should have a ? instead of a , right before "he thought".

suggestion: the she-incubus gets summoned by someone that reads as a noob, like this summoner, and then lets her overconfidence bait her into a trap (bonus points if the trap is a trap).

>>10794871
Fuckin love it. I like the way Zelda lies, I like the imagery, I like the socio-economic commentary, I'm gonna need some serious CC's of Connie cock, STAT.

>>10806168
>and then lets her overconfidence bait her into a trap (bonus points if the trap is a trap).
I like the way you think
>prostate secretly enchanted with binding rituals

>>10801467
Now that's a thought. I really like those ideas

>>10806168
thanks for the input!
what do you mean by campy?

and that's actually not a half-bad idea. maybe have someone power bottom the fuck out of her
it'd be interesting, especially since i'd mentioned the willpower it takes to survive getting fucked by an incubus

>>10795618
>Quickly jotted idea.
This was fun; thank you!

Don't feel like you need to fulfill every request, though. You're under no obligation to pick up ANY request, really, and I fear you may burn out if you try to write at least something for everyone.

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>>10805600
I hope Eriksen tells her he likes it. Would be nice for consensual rough stuff?

Maybe I'm just drunk. Here have this Snek.

Question for the folks from /d/ Writethread: do you guys have stories that are written in first person, or is that frowned upon?

>>10809123
Greentext is often first person. Full stories are usually third person, but it's not "frowned upon" to write in first person if you prefer it.

>>10809123
Most smut is written in 3rd person, likely due to how familiar most English readers and writers are with that format. First person -can- work, and be really damn good, but not everyone can pull it off.

Honestly, this is one of those "That question has so many possibilities and qualifications as to render any answer pointless due to inherent contradiction."

The only POV that I believe sucks outright is 2nd person. Second person can be fun in short spurts (greentext, for example), but I've never, ever seen anyone pull off a full smut story in 2nd person.
CYOA stories may or may not count. I'm not sure.

>>10809305
Even second person isn't that bad to me (especially for something short like most smut) so long as it isn't you-do-this-you-do-that or the truly awful self-insert types. Usually reads like first person with different pronouns, so I guess you could say it's bad and the author might as well use first, but whatever.

I'd say the only why-are-you-doing-this choices are stupid gimmicks like future tense or third person plural that no one is ever going to do on accident. And somebody has probably written a well-liked book with one of those too.

>>10809754
Second person works, but it has a very specific sort of appeal. It doesn't really work with porn where 'you' are the dominant, unless you're playing a porn game or something which actually gives you choice.

What it does work well for is letting you, say self-insert into being fucked into submission.

>>10809305
>but I've never, ever seen anyone pull off a full smut story in 2nd person.
jesus, what?
a long time ago, i used to almost exclusively write second person, mostly because i grew up with CoC and started writing porn because of it.

i've purged all my old stories, though, namely because it's... not a great idea to permanently associate yourself with a pen name you made up when you were 16.

>>10809123
I could have swore I (fubot) wrote something in first person... But now I can't find which one it would have been... Third is just so useful for being able to briefly get psychic distance from the lead. Where as 1st has you following just that view, that feeling, that sensation.

Like, you can't follow both ends of an orgasm in 1st unless the mc is some sort of psychic, or you play it twice.

>>10808492
I don't think they're doing that?
Just "This interests/amuses me, lemme make a quickie"

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Snek how do you feel about this image

>>10809305
Tbh I think for smut second person works better than first.

>>10812574
depends on what you want
first person is the narrator telling you what happened to them
second person is the narrator telling you what happened / is happening to you
third person is the narrator telling you what's happening to somebody else entirely

mixing first and second person might be kind of interesting, though.

>>10806184
Thank you very much. It won't be the last story with Connie, I can promise that.

>>10814411
Give it a go here
>https://www.choiceofgames.com/welcome-to-moreytown/
and see whether you'd pay money for it on Steam. As well as letting everyone know on Steam that you're a furfag.

>>10809123
Just the one, I'm not used to that kind of style since it makes me feel like I'm running the risk of writing a self-insert without really trying to do so.

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To the skaven guy, I might have to restart your request, because somehow I just turned this into a long sappy love story and a little bit of a mystery.

I suggest you keep posting the request though, just in case someone with more talent picks it up.

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>>10808773
Noice.

>>10809123
I find that it's very hard to take second person seriously, in that it's unsuited to real attempts at literature, it only really works in the context of CYOA or extremely smut-oriented fapfics that aren't making any real attempt to tell a story or develop characters. Even then, 'telling' the reader what they're supposed to be feeling rather than letting them imagine it based on your descriptions is detrimental to smut.
That's not a crime or anything, there's a place for that kind of thing, but second person is very out of place where the work in question is presented as a story rather than a simulation.
I wouldn't say "never write in second person", but if I was presented with a story written in that format I would immediately judge it to be of lower effort or lower quality.

I've written extensively both in first and third person, and as I've matured as a writer and learned more, I've gravitated towards third, mostly because of the freedom it gives you to switch perspectives between characters or events.
First person works well for scenarios that are told from one perspective, with a very personal theme, but besides for a scenario where you literally want the story to be read as the narrator relaying it to the reader, I can't think of one where third person doesn't do it better.
Most of the stories that I wrote when I was less experienced would have been superior if I had written them in third instead of first.

>>10812257
Furries have kind of ruined Werewolves for me, to be honest.

>>10805670
Good catch, that's an odd oversight on my part, mass-replace tool, I choose you!

No, not yet.

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I guess I'll repost this one then: Requesting haughty bitch Belchandra (eidolon) from Aura Kingdom being separated from her powerful, detachable arms by her male human envoy/contractor so that he can spank her fat blue ass for being an annoying, unhelpful cunt during battle (taunting/bothering him, not fighting the opponent, causing trouble, the works). He then fucks her in the ass to fully shove the lesson inside her, balls deep.

If you need an outline:

Guy fights monsters with sword or gunfire
Belchandra does little help if at all during fight, preferring to laze around and chastise him for sloppy fight techniques n shit.
He comes up with a plan to separate her from her joy and pride: arms.
He does so, and outs the struggling lady onto his lap to spank her juicy blue jiggling ass red (or purple, whichever one works)
She swears and rants throughout the spanking while he simply enjoys the feeling of dominance and her blue ass.
He gets friskier as it goes on, fingering her asshole to her shock.
She bargains mercy, but he rejects and fucks her ass as punishment.
Throughout ass fuck he gropes and spanks her blue booty until he cums inside.

This is what I have in mind, but feel free to modify outline to your preference. I prefer contractor to be male though

>>10815900
That's the thing, though, is third person and first person do not involve the reader feeling anything. Period. Second person exists for a very specific niche, and is appreciated by that niche. That being said, you need to make sure whatever the reader is 'feeling' is something they're expecting to feel.

>that aren't making any real attempt to tell a story or develop characters.
Honestly, outside of porn games, I never really gave a damn about character build-up. A thousand words of foreplay work fine to set the pace, but in general, I'm fairly certain most people who are going to be reading your fics are doing so in search of a quick fap.

>>10818653
Oh, forgot her bio from the game if it helps:
Bel-Chandra is proficient in all of the world of dance. Whether happy or sad at the time, she always makes everyone engrossed in her wonderful dancing. Known throughoutpandemoniumas the Empress of Torment, Bel-Chandra harnesses fearful magic that wracks the bodies of her enemies in terrible agony. Drawn to the hidden darkness in mortals' hearts, she whispers emboldening words, encouraging mercilessness in battle.

>>10818686
>most people who are going to be reading your fics are doing so in search of a quick fap.

Definitely not in my case, most of my fics number in the 30k-80k word range, and I consider characters and setting as important, if not moreso than the smut.

Penis in vagina is always going to be pretty similar, but whose penis in whose vagina, where it's happening and what their relationship is, that's where it gets interesting. I'd rather read a quick fumble between two characters that I care about, than a finely detailed and elaborate scene about ones that I don't.

Then again I write stories that happen to have porn in them, not porn that requires a story for the setup, and while the latter certainly has a place it isn't something that interests me.

>third person and first person do not involve the reader feeling anything. Period

Absolutely wrong, the human imagination is more powerful than anything you can transmit via paper or text on a screen, your goal as a writer should be to direct the reader's imagination and let it do its own work, not simply tell them what to feel. It's so much less effective.
That's why metaphors and similes are so popular in erotic literature, because it hints at what is happening and then lets the reader's imagination fill in the blanks. Don't just tell him that something feels amazing, describe something that would undoubtedly feel amazing and then let him imagine himself in that scenario. His brain will do a far better job than anything you could write.

The problem with second person is that it removes all of that ambiguity, what you tell the reader to feel might not be anything close to what he's actually feeling, and he might never respond in the way that you describe. Then his immersion is broken. Every person is different, with different tastes and desires, and you can't possibly predict what those will be. What you 'can' do is guide their imagination and let them naturally gravitate towards what appeals to them.

>>10819297
>our goal as a writer should be to direct the reader's imagination and let it do its own work, not simply tell them what to feel
I'm pretty sure that's his point: that second person is directly telling the reader how to feel, as the writing style implies that the main character is the reader, or that the reader is heavily inserted as the character. Not that there can be no emotional reaction in first and third, just that, as you said, it's evocative rather than informative.

>>10819395
Second person has just never jived for me, because the author can't possibly predict how I would respond in any given scenario.
It works for CYOA and visual novels and such, because the reader has an element of choice that he can use to direct the story in a way that appeals to him.
In literature you can't do that however, there's one set path and if at any point your 'character' behaves in a way that the reader wouldn't, the immersion is broken and the very purpose of using second person is defeated.

>>10819443
Okay.

>>10819297
>and I consider characters and setting as important
I feel like this is a case of 'author versus audience'. Often times, authors have grand ambitions for what they want their porn to be, want to surround their porn with deep lore and character building. But the vast majority of readers are just going to see a lot more fluff to scroll through.

That's why second person is so niche. It works, specifically well, for people who sexualize being dominated. In that context, being told how they felt, being told what's happening to them, works very much well when combined with some sort of situation where they're being dominated in one sense or another.

You could very well create a more 'generalized' second person, by giving the reader less input on what they're -supposed- to feel, and more input on what's happening around them.

>>10819506
At the same time, that could also backfire by making the end result seem sparse and lacking in detail, or making the "you" character little more than a cardboard cutout surrounded by descriptions. It's a no-win situation.

>>10819542
Isn't that what you mostly write? The cardboard cutout surrounded by descriptions thing is just as liable to happen to first and third person as in second, as it's more a matter of the writer than the format. It could definitely turn into trash if it's handled improperly, but again, that's the case with most things of this type.

>>10819648
It's an even bigger risk in 2nd person though, since it's much more difficult to handle properly. Outside of fap and go greentexts, it's simply more trouble than it's worth.

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>>10819506
Not to blow my own horn, but you're talking to Snekguy here, domination is my bread and butter and I'm currently 50,000 words into the 18th entry in my scifi series.

I can tell you categorically that what you're saying is wrong, not just based on my own experiences, but those of many authors far more successful than myself who operate much the same way. You only need to look at the views and ratings on sites like Literotica to see that people appreciate and seek out longer stories with more developed characters and worlds.
Seriously the reader engagement is incredible, I've given up trying to answer all the emails I get and trying to respond to comments because there are just too many, and I'm not even scratching the surface of what some of the more popular writers see. That's all due to what you would dismiss as fluff, lore and worldbuilding that immerses people in the story you're trying to tell.

Of course there are people who are just looking for a quick fap, and not every writer desires to or should be expected to produce something on that scale, I'm not disputing that, but it isn't where the views are and it isn't how authors far more accomplished than myself are making a living writing smut.

>>10819840
>Not to blow my own horn
Well, you certainly did anyways.

>>10819918
Well we're talking about a subject that I'm intimately familiar with, so if I namedrop it's because it's relevant to the conversation.

>>10814885
D here.

Um... are we responding to the right message?

Maybe it's just me, but it seems like it's nearly impossible to write a scene involving prejudice against monstergirls and have it not come off as an analogue to racism.

>>10820016
You could have just listed the (botted) literotica statistics without jerking yourself off.

>>10821165
Considering the trends of today's culture, there's little you can do to avoid that.
Just keep on rolling and tell people who bring that stuff into your porn to shove off.

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https://pastebin.com/6rUWf05u
Not even sure what to tag with, but Chapter 3 also done.
Just over 13K words, featuring various degeneracies, a giant green cowgirl, and plot.

>>10821165
>>10821356
that's...kinda strange honestly. I haven't seen that kind of thing in a while, at least when reading stories involving the Monster Girl Encyclopedia, where girls are usually threatening the human population than caring about racism. When did that start up?

>>10821266
>botted
It's ok to be proven wrong without getting salty about it.
You made a blanket statement about what readers wanted and an established writer who trades on the very thing you said people don't want to read provided evidence to the contrary.

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>>10821165
D here.

Maybe it could be taken differently if the source of the prejudice was based on something that wasn't an analogue to real life, like mass forced migration, displacement of war or differing religions and cultures.

What if people hated Mimic-girls because they've managed to take the shape of UPS and Fed Ex boxes and get delivered to the men they want to bang? And a popular mimic Youtuber Mimic-Chan campaigned at congress to have X-rays removed from these shipping companies because of the danger they pose to mimics shipping themselves, even though that hasn't been conclusively proven?

What if people hated bee-girls because they got the government to turn a city block into a hive that has perpetual activity, including but not limited to bee-girl prostitution?

What if people hated scorpion-girls because of their propensity to kill the frog-girls who shepherded people across the river?

OK, this is dumb, even for me.

>>10821266
Whatever dude, but if you want to be successful you have to look at where the supply and demand is, examine what popular writers are doing and see how your own work measures up.
The user metrics on sites like Literotica or StoriesOnline are a great way to get an idea of where the traffic is going.

I'm not going to apologize for being moderately successful, you can either take my advice to heart or keep doing what you're doing, it's no skin of my nose.

>>10821951
That's not me, as in the person you were arguing(?) with about second person and whatnot. I didn't really feel like there was much to be said?

It depends on where you go, I suppose. I've mostly had experience writing for people who prefer quick faps. Where any story is told not through long periods of non-sexual content, but rather through series of sexual encounters.

That being said, I've never been able to produce nearly as much as you have due to... medical issues, so I can't really say I've ever gotten any one pen name to a significant level of renown.

>>10822207
The guy you're responding to isn't me either, really wish /trash/ had a name field.

There are certainly two distinct groups of people who consume smut, the ones you write for and the ones I do. I've done my share of short fapfics too, and there's definitely something to be said for the novelty and the lower workload. Writing novel-length stories can be an absolute chore sometimes but you just have to power through, try to reach the scenes that are more fun to write.

You can absolutely make bank writing short fapfics for extreme fetishes and doing commissions, though personally I don't have the stomach for that. I know some people who do it though, and that kind of stuff usually doesn't end up in the public forum because so many clients want to keep it to themselves, though we can assume that the traffic would be low due to the obscure nature of the content.

In terms of revenue, you'd potentially make more doing that, but goddamn if it isn't soul-destroying. Someone might pay you $300 to write a Goof Troop cock vore fic that only takes you a couple of days, but you're a real soldier if you can make that your day job.

>>10822407
>really wish /trash/ had a name field.

D here.

Really wish we could have ONE regular board that would take an erotic fiction thread.

>>10815265
I meant in a modern setting. I'm currently working on something set in modern-day America so it's even easier to accidentally hit that mark. Maybe it's just the most familiar form of discrimination by appearance, so there will always be parallels if you look hard enough.

>>10822407
honestly, the worst commission i've ever gotten was 'vanilla' bestiality
besides that it was pretty vanilla, like a bit of dickgirl stuff, some vanilla stuff (for example, a second person fic with some girl from cowboy bebop)
the only thing that i'd consider bordering the 'no zone' was an undertale commission, but that was less 'disgusting' and more 'well, okay'

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>>10823366
Yeah that isn't too bad, I think I could do vanilla bestiality. It feels like prostitution though, writing stuff that I find objectionable, and so much of my motivation comes from me enjoying what I write that I fear I wouldn't even get through it.

>>10822582
/qst/ exists despite violating the "rules" that they used to clear us out. Someone on the mod staff just doesn't like writing threads and will interpret the rules in any way they like.

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Dropping a Sequential Art idea for anybody who knows the comic. Not a restriction but it might sound weird to those who don't know the girl.

Hearing noises from Art's room one night, Scarlet sneaks in on him masturbating and surprises him by casually asking what he's doing. While Art's explaining himself / asking what she's doing there, she notices his erection and the textbook biology knowledge implanted in Scarlet's head tells her that happens when 'a male desires sexual intercourse'. That thing involves a vagina and she has one of those, so she wants to help her friend out.

>>10815837
I actually don't mind that and I left it open enough it could have gone many places

>>10823729
>/qst/ exists despite violating the "rules" that they used to clear us out. Someone on the mod staff just doesn't like writing threads and will interpret the rules in any way they like.

D here.

Well, I'm glad you're still around, snek. I just loved the crazy ideas that came from /d/enizens. Here, every idea seems to involve some kind of cartoon or something else that's super not my bag.

>>10824101
Yeah, I mostly make my own OC shit so I'm safe from that, but the /aco/ stuff does rub me the wrong way.
When you think about it there's really no tangible difference between asking for a fapfic about Card Captor Saukra or asking for one about Fairly Odd Parents, but if the latter seems distasteful I guess it's just our ability to sexualize a cartoon in one style but not another.

I do miss the long discussions and brainstorming on /d/, I wish I could inspire that in readers off-site, but 4chan is just unique in that way I suppose.

>>10824268
>I do miss the long discussions and brainstorming on /d/
There is a lot less of that here. Most of the regular writers made the jump to here. The readers, not so much.

Whatever happen to RSanon?

>>10825693
Vanished, like so many other writefags.

>>10824511
I've stopped brainstorming/requesting because Snek hates the niche I like (loving couples being degenerate), and every other living writefag is busy with their own projects/has extremely narrow niches.
heck even snek has been busy working through his backlog lately, so I just don't see the point of making suggestions that only come off as extra work at best or get discarded/blacklisted due to overload at worst.

>>10828467
Nobody's mean enough to have a blacklist here. Besides, if people like >>10788963 and>>10789080 can keep requesting even after it's been made clear nobody wants to write their ideas, surely you can be just as persistent and probably much luckier for good measure.

>>10828530
We also keep telling people if no one is doing your shit then try writing yourself. It's pretty much how all writefags get started.

>>10828559
True enough, though it seems some people either just don't have the talent or the ability to do so. I'm not blaming them for it, this shit is tough.

>>10828530
I meant blacklist as in "things that I won't write" and snek has already blacklisted longstanding romance because of personal disgust + the reactions to Worlds Apart (caused by his personal inability to think of any interpersonal relationship in any terms other than dominance/submission, so I don't blame him for no longer writing what he mentally can't write)

>>10828704
Ah. I'd like to write more of the lovey dovey stuff, but it's taking me long enough to finish my current project already. I'd rather not get your hopes up by making promises I can't deliver on.

>>10828530
I'm anchorposting, not requesting.

>>10828755
Switched to phoneposting so shorter messages, but the main suggestion was a krell/human fic (preferably Lena/Sleethe because develiping relationships over multiple stories is <3 but the couple was an afterthought from the start so I'm not pushing) with heavy themes of exhibitionism/nudism and experimenting with alien flora.
Couple goes to alien planet (Back to Krell? Could make a catchy title) to study life there. Safe conditions and/or local culture leave the main couple wearing nothing more than tribal paint and accessories as they explore the planet and its people, occasionally finding erotic use for a discovery.
"Vanilla Twist" sort of story; classic loving relationship but the partners have deep perversions they enjoy together.

>>10829080
Bugger, I don't know enough about Snek's setting to do justice to the concept. It sounds like you have a good idea of how to go about it though- why not give it a shot yourself? What do you have to lose from trying?

>>10829113
that's not, honestly, great advice
writing may -technically- be accessible to everyone, but it's still really hard to produce actual quality, especially when you're inexperienced
it's like being told to just draw your own porn

>>10829169
There's only one way to get better at it, though. Experience doesn't just come out of nowhere.

>>10829193
yeah, but when you just want to see a single story, spending months improving your writing ability seems like a bit of an exaggerated effort

>>10829235

Trust me, after you learn to write, you'll want to see way more than just a single story

>>10829113
Same reason as you for a start: I know I'd never do the setting justice. Two it would feel like cheap fanfiction if I wrote it for myself, which would kill any enjoyment in it. Three, setting aside that I'm a terrible writer whose will to write universally burns out after a page or so of maddened typing, if I'm going to write I would prefer to write something entirely my own. I have a few ideas clawing at the inside of my head that can't get out because of aforementioned writing disability. I'm working at remedying it through short fiction, but that's going to take a while.

>>10829169
It is somewhat easier start than "draw your own porn" though, because you've been practicing how to express your ideas with words for your whole life, as opposed to expressing them with art.

>>10824511
They'll probably trickle in eventually

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I found this in the willing transformation thread of /d. I cant find any more like it. another poster said there might be a story where the woman who buys this learns to communicate through morris code (or whatever) and they fall in love. she finds out why this futa willingly chose this. she then either frees the futa, or keeps her as a pleasure object.
I would take a stab at writing it, but im in the middle of my work season and my time is limited right now. Anyone else want to take a crack at it?

>>10830276
It's morse code.

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Requesting a one-shot based on either of these two JOI images. Both have good potential for a longer story.

>Canine friend realistically in denial about being gay - basically knows he is, but doesn't like to identify that way - starts talking about how masturbation is much better with a sensitive knot.
>Offers to demonstrate after some banter, jerking himself off right in front of his human friend.
>Story ends with pic related. Him finishing and asking you to cum for him, then to let him fuck you.

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>>10831168
>Guy posts ad for an orgy online. If you're a cheetah, come fuck him!
>A lot of them show up, but they all cum way too fast to satisfy him.
>Story ends with pic related happens, and he finds someone who can last long enough to at least partly satisfy him.

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Are any writers here taking commissions and willing to write human male/female and male/male?

>>10831402
human male on human female, and human male on human male?
i certainly don't see why not

asking because of pic related

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AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>10788473
Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves, Chapter 4 up. 2100 odd words.

>Spoilers: Loba and Lapiz briefly kiss in this chapter!

Tags: Male(human)/Female(werewolf), school, fighting(fists), blood(minor).

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, original work, slice of life, school, nature

Content Tags: M(human)/F(werewolf), tomboy(female), artist(male), childhood friends, transformation(werewolf), fighting(fists), blood(minor).

Fetish Tags: Kissing. (More to come!)

Summary: In a world of magic carpets, clay houses, and verdant forests, the cities of man's empire are protected from corruption by vigilant investigators. But who, or what, protects the forests from threats within and without? As one boy grows from childhood to an adult, he learns that one of his schoolyard friends is perhaps more than she seems. The old myths tell of wolf-people who stalk the forests and devour those who would ruin the beauty of nature. But werewolves are myths. If they weren't, his yellow-eyed tomboy friend and her quaint nuclear family would have found out about them by now. They live in the woods, they'd warn him if those myths were true... right? There are more important things to worry about, like if he likes her as much as he thinks he does, and if she likes him the way he likes her, and why she keeps having those twitching fits during class now that they're all going through adolescence.

Link: https://pastebin.com/MxwaZMPz

>>10812257
D'awww... cute!

>>10808492
Feedback appreciated. As >>10812148 expressed, intent of answering request was to clear head and hopefully inspire others to write similar short responses to requests. Personally maintain stance taken in >>10795590. Quality content needed for growth of community and revival of positive content creation/critique environment previously taken for granted.

>>10828704
He only blacklisted it because of the alarming levels of autism that you continue to exhibit.
I think we need to stage an intervention and get you the help that you so obviously need.

anyone interested in doing transformation stories/caps involving people turning into cartoon characters?

>>10830673
Morris has a code too. Ask him.

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>>10829080
I'll put it on my to-do list, I'm really happy some people took a liking to the Krell, it makes the whole venture feel worth it. Highway to Krell was 50k words but I never really had time to make it a 'Krell Fineprint' like I originally wanted, I'll give it another go when I have time. Sleethe and Lena are a great framing device to do it with.

I want to get those two on the book cover as well, wish my artist worked faster, or that I had more money to hire more people.

Also that I had several clones of myself so that I could actually write all the requests you guys give me. Maybe after Grave Goods and the Betelgeusian fic are done I'll do another request month.

Really need to get to the Broker fic too.

>>10833730
I've had a krell idea sitting around for quite a while that'd work fine for a shorter story, maybe I'll pitch it next request month

>>10833777
Fire away, I add all of your requests to a master file, even if I can't dedicate an entire story to every request I try to fit elements of them into future stories.

>>10832202
OR here, very happy to see more of this story, and it continues to be quite cute
Gonna make a longer post later, once I've finished recovering from my buddy's engagement celebration, but I'm kinda thinking that some direct loba/lapiz interaction would be nice soon

>>10833796
Alright, here it is
>soldier guy is assigned to mixed-species squad
>gets to be good friends with the only krell in the unit
>krell buddy literally saves his ass from a rowdy borlean squadmate
>guy takes his buddy out for very many drinks to say thanks
>unexpected but not unwelcome kissing ensues
>they take it back to their room, and the human guy discovers that his buddy is actually a 'she', currently in the futa transitional form downstairs
>high impact futasex and cuddling occurs

>>10833611
By most people's standards, we all need help. Otherwise we wouldn't be here.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/11637996/chapters/26273595

OR of the Knight/lizardman story. Story's going along just fine, but I do feel this chapter was a bit too heavy about politics/worldbuilding/whatever builds up the setting, it really interfered with me enjoying the BJ scene, but that is just me. Maybe next chapter could focus more on them than worrying about the state's abolishing of the orgasm.

>>10835238
IMO it feels like the author is just ripping paragraphs from communist manifestos to pad out space in each chapter.
I get why he's doing it but damn is it a boner kill AND a major hit to my interest in following the story.

>>10833796
Gonna throw my two cents in with a request for a human woman having rough but consensual sex with multiple equatorial males and maybe a female

>>10835708
I had a similar idea a while ago so I'll just slap it next to this one:
Since the integration of the cats into the UNN, some humans have been interested in joining or imitating the Borealan culture, to varying degrees of success. Some of those people wear tattoos or charms to mark themselves out for Borealans who know what to look for, showing that they are fair game for Borealan dominance. Maybe a human chick with one such tattoo going to a bar that off-duty Borealans tend to frequent, trying to catch a horny cat but getting a whole squad instead. She can't believe her luck and they just drag her to the back of the bar, not even bothering to find any real privacy.

>>10833796
>wife wants to understand husband better
>has spell/curse put on her or eats something, etc
>turns into some fat cartoon dad/husband/fatherly person (Baloo, Peter Griffin, Mufasa, etc.)
>proceed to become husband's drinking buddy (with benefits)
>husband turns into the cartoon wife/love interest of his wife's new form
>they fugg
>have children, etc

Or

>guy TFTG into Colleen from Road Rovers

>guy TFTG into a female Raccoon before getting sucked into the Guardian's universe and meeting a turned-on Rocket

>>10835898
I doubt this is being fulfilled, by anyone, ever.

>>10835708
dunno how much equatorials are into sharing; It seems more a polar thing vs fighting to claim individuals in serial. broad strokes characterization here.

Leads to a thought on something similar though >>10833796 M/F/M story along the lines of Friendly Competition; girl goes out looking for a date and runs into a polar/krell pair, probably buddies from a military unit. Escalating action and 'dating' that ends in the girl sandwiched between fluff and scale as the two gently stuff her.
really more a smutfic than a proper story, but hey request/suggestions are up and krell need more exposure, which pairing them with your breadwinner could help with.

>>10836935
Oh man, that sounds excellent, definitely seconding that request

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>>10834265
Ah, futa? I'm not really into that, but I absolutely set myself up for it, so I should probably give it a go some time. I'm not sure what futa sex entails so maybe you could elaborate and I'll take it down.

That or D. is free to take a crack at it if he likes, I can provide any information needed about the races and setting.

>>10835807
>>10835708
Yeah, I can see that, though I'd have to have a think about the psychological aspects of that. I'm not sure that Borealans would be into group stuff, at least not spontaneously like that. There's probably a way to fudge it. That's a 'maybe' on that one.
One idea I did have was a human female becoming the Alpha of a pack through complete accident, and then abusing her newfound status for sexual favors, maybe she accidentally injured their Alpha in some way and it's misconstrued as a successful challenge. They could arrive at a similar outcome, group sex with a lot of Borealans.

>>10836935
>>10837102
That's cool, I would definitely like to write that.

>>10835898
Sorry I should have been more specific, I'm only taking requests that I can incorporate into my OC setting right now, I do like to take unrelated requests when I can but I rarely have time.

>>10837426
>One idea I did have was a human female becoming the Alpha of a pack through complete accident, and then abusing her newfound status for sexual favors, maybe she accidentally injured their Alpha in some way and it's misconstrued as a successful challenge. They could arrive at a similar outcome, group sex with a lot of Borealans
Oh shit, I was going to suggest basically that, cause that fills like five fetishes of mine at once.
I am 200% all for this

>>10837426
>I'm not sure what futa sex entails so maybe you could elaborate and I'll take it down.
Really just stuff taking advantage of having both sets of bits, like eating her pussy while jerking her off, G-spot fingering during a blowjob, vaginal riding and then fucking the guy in the butt whole his cum's still dripping out of her, that kind of thing

>>10833730
Oh! I hadn't expected you to pick up my throwing out an old pipe dream idea like that. I'm really happy to see Krell and S/L are things you actually enjoied writing, one of my bigger blocks in posting Krell suggestions was thinking they weren't an interest.
If you don't mind I'll post more detailed thoughts on the idea and see what appeals.

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Can anyone recommend a good story about a large male character (tall and well built, plus massive cock) paired with a petite female?
Preferably human or close to human as I'm not really into monsters or furry stuff.

Specifically looking for an eager guy and a nervous girl, with the girl getting steadily more into it as they go on.

>>10837426

Hey snek just a quick fyi that if you don't stop using pliant and supple to describe soft fat, I'm legally obligated to find you and punt you into space

(I just got done re-reading Or Die Alone and while I still love it, fuuuuck you need new words)

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>>10842304
I'm running out of words, pliant, supple, yielding, soft, doughy, the English language only has so many lol.
That or I need to hire an actual editor rather than bumbling through it myself, but goddamn they're expensive.

>>10837499
I'm not sure when I can get to it, but I'll put it on my list, maybe next request month.
It's a fun scenario and it lets me explore the pack dynamics a lot more, I can also do the small dom/large sub thing I keep getting requests for. .

>>10837714
Sure, go for it.
Ideally I'd want all of my species to be as developed as the Borealans, but due to their popularity and the high demand for more Borealan stories, I've not had much time to flesh out (or even introduce) others.
I have a lot more planned for the Krell, and by extension the Brokers, because they share a weird relationship that I've only had the time to hint at so far.
I'm hoping I can really nail the Betelgeusian story and drum up interest for them, the Krell one didn't do enough to explore their culture and that's what hooks people. Hopefully I can rectify that in a sequel where they spend more time on the homeworld.

>>10837620
I see, I'll probably need to do some research before attempting anything like that.

>>10838737
I got one like that, but it involves dubcon initially until she gets into it.
I have another one that is unambiguously consensual but that basically involves a furry race.

>>10842862
>That or I need to hire an actual editor
You could try crowdsourcing your editing, or just finding some volunteers. I know for one that I'd be up for something like that to at least get some practice doing that sort of thing.

>>10842862
If you've taking requests, I'm gonna request more stuff with the Outpost cast, the last story was just too good and I need moar

>>10837426
>That or D. is free to take a crack at it if he likes, I can provide any information needed about the races and setting.

D here.

This has come up a few times. I'm not sure snek and my writing styles are close enough that it would work.

I'd be willing to give it a shot, if it's not going to be too long of a request.

>>10844201
It's futa on male just FYI

>>10843279
I have considered that, but I feel like based on the speed that I write and my eagerness to get new content out, I'd get frustrated with volunteer editors, and that wouldn't be fair to them.
I'm sure it would take days to edit a 50,000 word manuscript.

>>10843575
That story was extremely well received, I'd be happy to write more of those characters. I was thinking of maybe having the female human in the group sex request be Riya, too, just to tie it into the overall universe. There's no polite way to say that someone has a reputation for cruising for giant dicks, but she does. Maybe she drops a cargo pallet on the Alpha or something while loading her shuttle.

>>10844201
Hell I might as well make it official and commission you if I can afford it, what are your rates? I can post the story on my web pages and send some of my traffic your way too if you'd like.
I'm sure you'd do it justice.

>>10845121
>I was thinking of maybe having the female human in the group sex request be Riya, too, just to tie it into the overall universe. There's no polite way to say that someone has a reputation for cruising for giant dicks, but she does. Maybe she drops a cargo pallet on the Alpha or something while loading her shuttle
Taking advantage of that kind of situation doesn't really feel like it fits her character.
On the other hand, though, she'd be a perfect fit for the polar/krell sandwich story

>>10845121
Would you mind if I throw a couple outpost-related scene ideas at you now, for consideration for the request month?

>>10845121

> I have considered that, but I feel like based on the speed that I write and my eagerness to get new content out, I'd get frustrated with volunteer editors, and that wouldn't be fair to them.
I'm sure it would take days to edit a 50,000 word manuscript.


What if you had a guy edit every 2-3k words you write each day, and instead of paying him for it, he pays you instead?

Would that work?

>>10845925
>he pays you instead
For what purpose

>>10846227
he makes it a tier for his patreon and we both know it'd get people

>>10845121
You generally only write about 2-3k words per day right? That's a pretty manageable amount even for a particularly new or slow editor.
Also, if anyone else around here wants any critique or editing, I'm trying to get some more practice under my belt.

>>10842862
>I got one like that, but it involves dubcon initially until she gets into it.
Might I ask for the title, or a link?

>>10846227

Snek will know

>>10845342
Yeah maybe, I keep a big list of characters and what their jobs are in any case, so I can have shameless cameos wherever possible.

>>10845450
Sure, like I said I take everything down.

>>10845925
That's an odd proposition and I don't know why anyone would do that, but I wouldn't refuse.

>>10846721
I don't lol.

>>10846249
I've actually been meaning to try that, I signed a contract with my artist to obtain the copyright to any book covers he makes for me, which means I can potentially sell presentable ebooks. If I can get them edited too, that just adds to the value, and hopefully I can start making some kind of return on that investment.
I thought of having the regular ebooks be free, same as I always do, and then having ones with covers and someone besides me editing being for backers and sale on sites like Amazon if I can get that set up.
Sure people could just read the regular ebook and view the artwork separately, but I don't want to be locking off any content, just making a more presentable version that I can try to make some money on.
It will take months to get all the covers done in any case, so I have time to plan.

>>10846693
Hostage:
>When a deal on a used starship goes badly, a merchant must leave his spoiled daughter in the custody of the Patriarch of Borealis as collateral. With no knowledge of their unique culture, how will she fare in the company of the aggressive aliens?
12,882 words.
http://pastebin.com/4sPqykcU
Ebook: https://www.patreon.com/file?h=7806179&i=783236
tags:
>maledom, dubcon, oral, kissing, vaginal, large insertion, creampie, rough, biting, scratching, choking, hair pulling, size difference, muscle, sweat, multiple orgasms, angry sex, trash talking, happy ending

>>10809123
No, I only ever bothered with third person. I don't like first person because of how smothering it is both as a reader and a writer. If I wrote more things that weren't porn I might be more inclined to experiment with it, but the vast majority of my stuff is just porn (with or without plot).

>>10809305
I recall 2nd person being semi-common for Hamsteak fanfics when I brushed against the fringes of their fandom ages ago but that seemed like a nod to Hussie's preferred storytelling method than a functional stylistic choice. Aside from that, greentext, and CoC I've never seen much in the way of 2nd person porn.

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>>10829235
Oh boy, time for some blogging:
A little over two years ago I started weaning myself off drugs and curtailed the binge drinking that was rapidly shifting into alcoholism because I went on a massive bender and wrote 20k+ words of a story in three days (followed by 7k more words in the three days after) and when I came out the other side, I was laying in bed scrolling through what I'd written and thought to myself, "Huh, this could be something. But I don't have the skills I need to write it yet. I hate that. I want those skills."

I studied in my free time and honed my craft and started putting my work out more broadly for feedback. I'm not quite where I want to be just yet, but I'm getting closer with each day and each story I rack up. I can see massive improvements from the stuff I wrote two years ago to stuff I've written in the past few months. And it's not just "I can write a sentence more gooder", it's knowing when and where to cut or add material, how to pace a story, how to do better dialogue, etc. I've gotten to a level I'd never dreamed possible and I can honestly say that the past two years have been some of the most frustrating yet fun I've had with writing.

I am where I am today because I wanted to write a specific story. What seems like an exaggerated effort to you could be a perfectly reasonable goal for someone else.

>>10847433
>Hostage
Danke

>>10831283
>filename
Respectable kek.

>>10847730
drugs are probably the only way i'll ever be able to consistently write, desu
and i'm not talking about adderall

>>10847433

>That's an odd proposition and I don't know why anyone would do that, but I wouldn't refuse.


You're killing me Snek. How could you forget? We've done that setup several times now and you don't even recall it.

brb killing self

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>>10848039
I wasn't talking about Adderall either.

But to return to the original point, if you do like it and you're just shit at it, then you're going to have to find a way to deal with getting through the shitty beginning parts and develop a system that works for you. Consider what times of the day you're most productive, what type of working environment makes it easier/less distracting for you to work, set goals to do x amount of writing per day (whether that's wordcount or number of hours) so you get in the habit of it, and so on and so forth.

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>>10848813
Oooh, right.
You're getting commissions though, if you were just paying me to be able to edit my stuff, that would be weird.

Have this thicc furry I found.

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>>10849807

Apology accepted.

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>>10847730
Battle-brother! I know the feeling all too well. Writing is a skill that develops with use, as long as you're writing something you want to write and trying to push your abilities, it's not wasted time. A 40k story I wrote about a techpriest and a sororitas is a perfect example.

A disgraced Magos Biologis, exiled to be the only techpriest at an Adeptus Sororitas convent in the hope that Sisterhood would kill him off since his political rivals in the Mechanicus couldn't quite manage that on their own, notices that one of the Veteran Superiors is extremely fastidious about maintaining her squad's wargear. In fact, she's often repairing things that she shouldn't be, such as vehicles and heavy weapons that would normally require a techpriest's attention. He never officially mentions it, since he's overworked and the machine-spirits don't complain when he incants diagnostic rituals, but also notices her watching him an awful lot. Shy and cynical, he develops a crush on her even though two have never actually spoken directly to each other aside from mandatory interactions with lots of others around.

One day, while he's in the workshop elbows-deep in a problem, the Canoness drags his crush in and tosses her to the floor. Tells him she's been found guilty of tech-heresy, and in keeping with their pacts to the Cult Mechanicum she is to be mind-wiped and converted into a servitor to pay for her crimes. The techpriest freaks out internally, suppresses his emotions, and manages to convince the Canoness that she doesn't want to stick around to watch what happens. Then he pulls the trembling sororitas up off the floor and gets the full story. She was trying to fix the engine on a Rhino when the Canoness and her command squad stormed into the bay, intent on "borrowing" that Rhino for a possibly-unsanctioned purging at the nearby hive-city. He declares her innocent on a technicality, disguises her as a servitor, and discovers she's great with the machine-spirits.

...

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>>10850232
While she does of course initially try to kill him for worshiping a deity other than the Emperor, once he is able to explain the age-old compromise that the Omnissiah is actually the Emperor under a different name (and points out that the Emperor Himself sanctioned that worship under the treaty of Olympus Mons while the Ecclesiarchy sort of sprung up after the Emperor's internment on the Golden Throne), she decides he's not a heretic after all. Cute handholding and eskimo-kisses between the two when they're in their repair exoskeletons ensue. She's able to continue serving the Sisterhood and protecting her comrades while keeping up the act that she's "just a servitor" with the help of an exoskeleton and faceplate, accompanying him wherever he goes. The techpriest actually has a very experienced combat veteran watching his back whenever the Sororitas drag him out into the line of fire on one of their excursions. Also, he finally has an extra pair of hands attached to an independent brain around the shop, allowing him to have some free time for once.

While he defers to her completely when they're in combat, to the point of her throwing him into cover and bossing the actual gun-servitors around while laying down heavy fire with the heavy-bolter she can one-arm thanks to the exo, the Sororitas is extremely submissive when they're alone in the workshop. She often takes advantage of his awkwardness to tease him in clever ways. Wearing almost nothing while applying sanctified oils, asking him to dribble hot wax down her body while she meditates, and insisting that she sleep in the same bed as him so that her prayers and presence can, by the Emperor's grace, guard his soul from Chaos' corruption.

...

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>>10850263
The battle-sister was crushing on him hard prior to being dragged into his workshop, and his decision to not mind-wipe her had two strong effects on her mind. Firstly, she considers herself dead already since she was judged guilty by the Ecclesiarchy even though he found her innocent, and secondly she thinks he was sent by the Emperor according to some grand plan, meaning that she views him the same way she might view Sebastian Thor. Meanwhile, he thinks she's a ray of hope in this dark exile from the Omnissiah, since she's eager to learn and knows just how to cheer him up.

Wow, this post ran long. The point I was trying to make is that I put 55k words of cute hugs and snuggles into this story, while still keeping the grimdark quotient at reasonable levels. Wrote it mostly in large spurts like what you talked about. None of it has ever been published, but I'm really happy with how it helped me develop dialog writing skills, build reasons for characters to interact, and of course explore the 40k universe for research. Writing takes time and effort, but once you write one thing, you want to write more, and you already have the skill. It's sort of like building your own PC.

>>10845121
>Hell I might as well make it official and commission you if I can afford it, what are your rates? I can post the story on my web pages and send some of my traffic your way too if you'd like.
>I'm sure you'd do it justice.

D here.

Email me at dtales AT protonmail DOT com

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>>10850285
>>10850263
>>10850232
Sounds rad as fuck. And yeah, once you develop a skill or hobby you enjoy past a certain point, it keeps feeding itself as long as you'll let it.

I would be elated to see either of these written!

1st one.

>Girl 18-19 has a love of muscled, Twilight style Werewolves
>Is going on her third date with an actual Werewolf, who isn't like that at all
>She takes him home and invites him inside
>He gives the "If we're going to have sex, there's something you should know" talk.
>She's really excited until he transforms
>Then she's uncertain, but decides to try
>Realizes rough, beastlike creatures with long tongues and 30 minute orgasms > prettyboys who turn into big dogs
>Gets off crazy hard and loves Werewolves more than ever.

>>10853472
Did you forget to post the rest?

>>10853472

2nd one.

>Feminine straight guy applying to be a licensed prostitute
>Passed the medical and sexual exams, now they're testing him on partner compatibility
>Enters the room to find a guy, semi-muscular and in fairly good shape
>Says prostitutes can't choose their clients, but they have to get hard and fuck them anyway
>Blah blah porn logic, they have to fuck
>Straight guy is understandably disgusted, because he's actually straight and not "straight," but goes along with it because the absurd amount it pays
>Gay dude manages to get him hard through a combination of a vibrator, years of blowjob skill, and knowing all his fetishes and weak spots
>Gives him a vibrating cockring to keep him hard

>As straight guy is eased into pleasuring a male client, other guy talks about how sexual attraction isn't always needed for physical pleasure.
>Lots of girls say they don't like how dicks look, but they like getting filled by them.
>If you have friction, you're hard, and you're not completely, absolutely repulsed, you can enjoy fucking someone.
>Straight guy doesn't really believe it, but he assumes the other guy isn't lying
>They eventually move to anal
>Straight guy still does not enjoy fucking a guy, and keeps his eyes closed for most of it.
>Finds he can enjoy the incredible slick tightness around his cock, the feeling of plush, soft skin against his thighs as he thrusts, and the knowledge that he's making a lot of money
>Seriously. Other guy has an incredible ass.
>And has had about three orgasms so far. Thankfully he's wearing a condom, so the room doesn't smell like cum.

>Straight guy finally manages to explode
>Trainer congratulates him on succeeding.
>This is the first step on the road to completely disconnecting sexual attraction from physical fulfillment
>Adds that he isn't gay at all. But his prostate is incredibly sensitive, so he really enjoys anal unlike most guys.
>Straight guy collapses.

>>10853472
I love this one.

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AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>10835238
Requester critique greatly appreciated. Supplementary feedback >>10835412 also useful.

Concern legitimate. Issue arose due to time compression. Should have minimized exposition during erotic scene. Story does not require tremendous exposition. Intention was to express the male character's indoctrination as a source of reluctance, as well as his defiance of that indoctrination due to growing feelings for the lizard-girl. Initially, this story was taken on as a brief prompt that had only two hours of writing time allocated to it. Plan was to produce a flash fiction that met the request, then return to work on primary commitments. For reference, >>10795590 discusses a similar flash fiction. However, project proved larger than anticipated. Continual efforts were made to compact story and write it more quickly. This mindset was a mistake.

Desire was compact story, result was too many different things (erotic content, non-erotic worldbuilding, backstory, ongoing immediate action) happening at once and nothing of value being produced. Reader feedback from prior chapters also suggested additional focus on male character viewing the lizard-girl as a superior option to a state-assigned wife, which required some explanation of why that would be so. Good concept, poor implementation on author's part. No excuses, merely explaining situation from author's point of view. Reader feedback critical to improvement, especially feedback from original requester. Feedback also shows interest in story, which is appreciated.

(1/2)

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>>10855959
Reviewed chapter. Errors significant. Chose to revise. Originally had larger plans for character interactions, including erotic interactions, but attempted to compress and include exposition at the same time. Mistake, priority of story eroticism and characters. Conducted extensive revisions originally skipped due to desire to rush out an update. Broke into two separate chapters due to revisions causing size increase in line with original drafts. Will replace current chapter 4 "Cracks in the Armor", and upload split revision as chapter 5 "Breakthrough", once chapter 6 "Encirclement" is complete. Am also shifting priority of this story from a flash-fiction that took longer than expected to a full-fledged story, such as "Northlands Garrison" or "Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves".

>tl;dr
>Reduced communism exposition dumps
>Added more smut instead.
>Less baking powder, more vinegar, let's see how the volcano erupts this time.
>Changes not posted yet, the split chapters will be posted alongside an entire new chapter of content. Yes, three chapters at once, even though only one will be totally new.

Additional note, hope for this sort of feedback from readers invested in the story is why the request was originally taken. Readers here are unafraid to provide critique that lists why they do not like the story, what they think could be improved, and how it affects their perceptions. Negative feedback that only seeks flaws and attacks the author is as useless as positive feedback that assumes the author can do no wrong. Writethreads often generate high-quality feedback. In short, t-thanks /trash/.


>>10833821
Requester feedback greatly appreciated! Next chapter will have minor direct interaction between Lapiz and Loba's fathers, direct interaction between Lapiz and Loba may occur in the chapter after. Eagerly await detailed feedback. Suggest ginger chews in moderation (laxative effect if overused) for recovery from festivities.

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>writing a commission about a guy and his wife's self-inserts getting brainwashed and doing kinky shit
>not sure the wife knows about it

Feels questionable, but $$$

live

>>10856843
D here.

Good lord.

(opens his fan and fans himself)

>>10842862
OR for the return to Krell thing here, dropped from the thread a bit but I sketched up some things to expand on the initial pitch:

Simple plot prompt: by military need for better direction and/or a personal request, Lena and her 'bodyguard/assistant' head back to Krell to tour the planet gathering information on how krell live and communicate in more than just the isolated test cases observed so far.
Traveling over the whole planet, making hops through different regions with their personal shuttle, gives lots of freedom to put the characters in different environments while showing off variation/similarity in Krell tribes.

Intimacy between the couple, krell shamelessness, and the general environment leads to Lena shedding clothing over the initial parts of the story; most of the story would be spent with her wearing only what protection she needs at the time, and whatever krell ornaments and garb she receives along the way. While largely a fetish element it also gives the chance to throw in a lot of detail about krell fashion across cultures.

Expanding on the "engagement ring" mark, the Elder's lines, and krell writing in general: krell paint markings are used widely, not just in ceremony. Profession, rank, goals, homeland, and (of course) relationship status, are among things the markings could be used for, with variance across groups.
For consistency, the marks would be left unapplied during mating times (except for the cases already established) because of the frantic and carefree nature of the event.
As direct detail into krell culture and linguistics, it works well with a female lead is a linguist. Also an outlet for body-marking fetishism, which is a definite motive, albeit a tame and not inherently sexual one until applied to the more sensitive-skinned humans. The suggestion runs a lot into "writing the setting for you" so I'm a little apprehensive to suggest it, but it builds off cannon material and adds a lot of literal detail to the krell.

>>10859219
Not *that* kinky. Mostly just foot/paw stuff.

Anyone know if furry stories get any traction on literotica? Thinking of posting some stuff there, not sure if I need to edit the fur and tails off of everything first, though.

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on the off chance the dude who said he'd write this is still around and see it, could you throw me a pastebin?

If not, well it's not the best of requests so I understand. Thanks.

>>10824511
They'll trickle in. Hell, /d/ was still a ways off matching the depth of discussion and brainstorming that went on in some of the threads on /tg/, though it was growing in that direction.

>>10860633
D here.

But will it? I don't know if we can have the same kinds of conversations when the board is this fast.

>>10860735
Nerds gonna nerd, and 4chan is rammed to the gills with those faggots. Considering worldbuilding discussion was gradually rising on /d/ despite the generally stricter policy against pure discussion, I can't see it not cropping up over time here.

>>10850232
>>10850263
>>10850285
Sounds pretty cool. Is the early stuff really so bad as to be unreadable? The world could always use more SoB smut.

>>10860735
I don't see why you can't, this thread pretty much belongs to /d/ now anyways

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3000 word update, finished! I'll be chaptering, proofreading and editing this over the next couple of days, I really want to improve that aspect of my writing process.
New content at "The alien moved fast"

Rig runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
>no new tags

>>10846467
Sure, feel free to give it a go. I'd be interested to see what you come up with.

>>10859813
I like those ideas, I dig the tribal stuff and I'm 100% onboard for sexualized body painting, that's not something I've ever written before. I'll add this to the master file.

>>10860260
My stuff is basically furry and I've had no problems on Literotica.

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>>10862099
Here are those outpost ideas, snek
>Riya really enjoys being the meat in a boyfriend sandwich with Schaeffer and runt
>Riya and Schaeffer hooking up, maybe some butt stuff in the showers?
>{I just figure that scenes involving both of them+borleans, which I think would be really hot, would make a lot more sense if they'd already fucked)
>riya doing some interspecies lesbian experimentation
>Schaeffer getting it from zagza, just the two of them
>Schaeffer giving Scarface a happy-ending massage after she comes back from a long hunt
>zagza giving the dick to both Schaeffer and riya at the same time in a massive cockstravaganza
>Schaeffer getting spitroasted by runt and another male
>Riya helping Schaeffer improve his blowjob skills, working on runt, basically just the two of them blowing runt into a sweaty boneless mess

And just a couple of little side things
>Scarface being surprisingly affectionate with Schaeffer when nobody else is around
>Schaeffer waking runt up with oral, for once
>Runt, Schaeffer and Scarface sleeping together in a little pile in a room of their own, maybe riya joins them?
>Schaeffer works out a shitton since there isn't much else to do when he's not horny, so he's actually gotten pretty buff
>maybe he also teaches runt how to lift to try and boost his confidence by helping him get stronger?

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>>10861104
D here.

I was more concerned about the board speed and the fact that there's NO on-site archive.

On the other hand, I guess I could post any picture I want.

(continues to post futa)

>>10862099
>still calling him a cabin boy
bitch please, after this performance he's clearly going to rank higher than anyone else she's likely to get on her crew and she knows it.

>>10865021
>Schaeffer getting spitroasted by runt and another male
Y'know, thinking in terms of hetero/gender inverted versions of things, does anyone know what the female version of a spitroast would be?
It may just be the tequila talking, but all I'm coming up with is terrible puns along the lines of tandem ride.

>>10865454
Like in what sense? One girl sitting on the face and the other on the cock?

>>10865021
Whew
Gonna have to second basically all of these

>>10865522
Yeah, basically.

>>10862099
>My stuff is basically furry and I've had no problems on Literotica.
Maybe I'll give it a go, then. The "furry" and "anthro" tags are pretty empty, though; is there another one that people actually use?

>>10862099
>I'm 100% onboard for sexualized body painting
ahhh yes! It's pretty rare to see works where it's a focus, and even though it's not maligned it seems to usually just be interest-neutral.

on the side, a few small-mostly-fetish ideas:

Some tribes might use paints more like henna made to leave lasting stains on the body until scales are shed. They might last a very different amount of time on humans given relative skin/scale toughness and rate of shedding/exfoliation.

Krell alligator-floating on water; Lena riding on Sleethe's belly like he's a living pool raft. Could go from just enjoying the sunbathing and skin contact to Lena working to keep her balance on Sleethe as she performs for/on him.

Getting caught and suspended by jungle plants. Nobody is harmed, but it gives the couple ideas. Bonus: Sleethe is the one caught and hung upside down, and Lena gets very interested in the unique angles.

>want to write
>Only granted half baked idea and an intense need to get it out
Ugh, I'm always debating if I should just scribble it out or ignore it until I get a whole idea

Or just fill in the details of the tale as I go. Frustrating.

>>10866276
D here.

GO FOR IT. You can do it. Somewhere out there, Chris Noth believes in you! My entire existence here and everything I've posted in this thread was because I decided to write something stupid about a croc-girl.

WRITE. Maybe it'll be bad, but it will BE.

>>10866276
If it's just some trash for /trash/, just do whatever, man. Big ideas are for big series and novels and shit. Half-ideas are good to work towards in a short story and see what you end up with.

>>10866387
>>10867113
I suppose so. I'm trying to work my way up.
So far I can consistently write 3 pages a day on any one idea. Hopefully I can do more and solidify my ideas.

Life with brain dablage is hard dudes.

>>10868207
good job

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>>10865021
Added to the ever expanding pile. Do you raging degenerates really want human on human content? I'll write it if you want it, but it feels kind of redundant based on the pairings available. Could go the route of a full-on cuddle pile involving every character.

>>10866003
I don't tag mine as furry, though many of the races can be interpreted that way. Not sure what tags you'd use, or if the site has a list of common tags in use.

>>10866276
>>10866387
Same, I'm only where I am because I woke up one night at like 3am and decided to write a laughably poor story about a guy fucking an XCOM Viper because there was so little porn of them available. Obey that urge to write.

https://pastebin.com/TZ3KjdXm

A very small part of a longer idea I have, is it at least interesting so far?

>>10871926
And my smut, for those who haven't read it. I value almost any opinions.
Zig-Zag-specialist
>B is for bear(and boner)
https://pastebin.com/Vy48Katg

>Giraffes and hard times
https://pastebin.com/t3qDpYaS

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>>10862099
W-well that was bitter sweet! I'm not crying you are crying. I hat u snek.

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>>10866276
Never ignore an idea. Always write it down as soon as possible. You can figure out how things fit together after you've gotten it down.

>>10872412
It's hard not to get discouraged my friend. Especially with my track record

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>>10872430
It doesn't matter so much if you finish every single idea you have or not, you just need to get in the habit of writing things down ASAP.

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>>10875559
Cute and cozy. Reminds me that I keep meaning to do a hypnosis story at some point.

>>10876252
Proceed immediately

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Parallax here. So a while back, I wrote a story based on this image (only to find out later, it was the artists OC and not just some one-off random, oops). It was a minor hit, and I swore I could never do a follow up.

Well, I'm doing a follow-up. I've got about 3100 words done, and I've decided to post what I've got for C&C before I get into the sex scenes.

https://pastebin.com/AZJ8XkX3
Second Date 2: Double Date
Tags: M/F/F, Monstergirl (Creepy)

Warning for the faint of heart: There is non-sexy violence and gore at the beginning.

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>>10878372
If you haven't read the original, here it is for reference.

https://pastebin.com/UD6ztvq3
Second Date

Tags: M/F, Monstergirl (Creepy)

>>10878394
>(Note: EX-AM is short for EXtra-species AMerican. It’s considered more polite than what they used to be called, monsters.)

I'm not sure if first person is exempt from it, but I would avoid using AN/Author's notes in the middle of the story to explain things. It just breaks immersion almost immediately regardless of justification. If you like to fit it in somewhere subtly, then the MC could correct himself before he said the M-word instead of EX-AMs. If they must be implemented as a direct note, do so before or at the end of the story.

Story is pretty cute though. I like details about the unusual monster girls, though the sex reminds me more like messing around with a slime girl and her core than it does with the girl in your pic.

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Does anyone writefag here for a living? Do any of you feel that the furry community would grab at opportunities for furry writers or do you feel that it would be a bad idea?

>>10878372
Not a huge amount to say at this stage really, other than I Know Exactly Why I Have This Boner. The conversation towards the end is well balanced, speaker assignment was minimal without being unclear, and never repetitive which can be a problem even in otherwise solid writing.

>>10879260
The parenthetical statements as a whole felt like a reasonable way to represent someone expanding briefly on something as they recount a story, the slight change of tone while they give some passing aside. That one specific one with "Note:" comes across as more textual than conversational which is a little conflicting.

>>10879670
I wouldn't depend on writing commissions from furry communities be good for a living, mostly because they like visuals more so than text (at least outside of deviantart). It is possible, but don't expect big bucks unless you wanna draw em too (or latch onto fanfics to write about).

Actually, come to think of it, it seems like there's a lot more talk about commissions and commissioning here than usual. Does /d/'s writethread have people that are more open to lending money for such a cause?

>>10880030
Not that I'm aware of. There was one particular guy to my knowledge, but it's mostly feedback and discussion.

>>10879988
I was worried about how dialog-heavy it was becoming.

You're right about the note, though. I think I'll change it to:
>(EX-AM being short for EXtra-species AMerican, which is considered more polite than what they used to be called: monsters.)
The only problem with making updates to the first story will be remembering all the places I've posted it to keep them all in sync.

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Guess I'll post this again in case anyone is interested in writing some Princess Peach smut:

Anon gets an opportunity to have a sleepover with princess peach. On said night for fun she'd be wearing something like pic related for the occasion: tight pajamas that show off her big peach bomber booty.
While joshing around and playing some vidya games, anon gets the idea to use her ass as a cushion to lay his head on, surprising her. Amused, he plays with her ass while she tries to keep her eye on the vidya, groping, slapping, and burying face in her butt to make silly noises out of her throughout. When she finally finishes the level or dies, she shoves the controller (his turn) and sits on his lap, using her ass to make him hot and bothered as he plays the level too. When he bumps into a loading screen he takes the opportunity to push a few fingers into her ass crack to stimulate her, and things go on and get lewd from there.

More details about the request and of any kinks to add can be read at https://pastebin.com/Bw8H0eE0

>>10874183
I try to, but then I just have pages and pages of notes and half-baked ideas, since I prefer writing on paper to get out my idea.

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>>10872382
I'm so glad you guys liked the ending, I was a little worried because people seem to like unambiguously happy ones, and this one was a little more bitter. I figured that she was still somewhat of a villain and so she shouldn't get exactly what she wanted.
The first 40,000 words are proofread and chaptered, all the way up to the start of chapter 9. It's probably a two day job, I'm trying out a new, more thorough editing process and I've never tried to read one of these all the way through in one sitting before, I've been at it for six hours straight. Also tell me what you guys think of the new scene change indicator, I figure that will make them less jarring in the Ebooks or on websites where they change the formatting from the default.

>>10880030
I know I'm trying to make it a viable business, mostly just because if I don't, then I'll have to stop doing it at some point. I've seen people make a living doing this, so I know it can be done.

>>10866243
Yeah I like the idea of that, I'm kind of into one partner marking another in some way, like when the Borealans bite someone they like to scar them. Would be cool if the body paint they use lasts longer than expected on humans, and then Lena has to try to explain why she's covered in marriage and mating paints to her superiors.
The idea of involving the flora is interesting and not something I had really thought about before, guess there could be all kinds of poisons and herbs that might have different effects on people.

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>>10880608
That's how writing works.

Write, reflect, organize, repeat.

>>10871383
>Do you raging degenerates really want human on human content? I'll write it if you want it,
Yes, definitely.
>but it feels kind of redundant based on the pairings available
I mean the only 100% human scene is pretty much worldbuilding sex, like it could be slotted in along side more of them just interacting. I suggested heterosodomy because you haven't done that yet and I figured it'd make things more interesting

>>10881582
I suppose.
Hard to write with no audience though, for me anyway.

Also, What in God's great green jizz is that picture?

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>>10881711
Art.

>>10881711
Horihone Saizou is a crazy motherfucker.

This is pretty niche, but anyone have any fics along the lines of a girl being double-teamed by a gay couple?

>>10883105
>girl being double-teamed by a gay couple
How would that even work?

>>10883158
Two bisexual dudes together is still a gay couple

>>10883105
>tfw no bi-gay guys to worship you while they fuck

>>10881032
>I figured that she was still somewhat of a villain and so she shouldn't get exactly what she wanted.
Yeah, her getting what she wanted would have been an absolutely infuriating ending given the overall arc. Her getting fucked over would have felt overly harsh given how she was developed in the fic, though it would have at least felt in keeping with the story.

I'm just going to assume that they enter into a Jolene/Linebeck type relationship except Erikson is actually competent, and whenever they meet it turns into a few nights of passion.

>>10880030
While we're on the subject of commission s, I would like to know what the protocol is.
I have ideas I would like to see but I have neither the skill nor the time to do them well right now.
What are common rates?
How does one pay, and how does one ensure delivery of finishe'd material?
What are resonalble time periods to expect for delivery?

>>10881032
Bugs are next on the writing block I imagine?

Anybody else ever read their old work and feel so disgusted they want to delete it?
I can't believe I was proud of this stuff once.

>>10888165
At least you were proud of it once.

say, wasn't there someone working on a star wars related smut fic? How's that working.

>>10888165
Keep it around, it's a good reminder of how much you've improved.

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>>10882830
Oh God is that "Sewer Outlet" or whatever it was called? That shit was an experience, made me dry-heave.

>>10887044
Nah, still gotta finish Grave Goods, I need to make good on my promise despite having absolutely zero motivation to do so. The sooner I get it done the sooner I can move on to more fun projects like the bug story.

>>10891484
Why did kahl have to die?

so close

>>10891484
Drainage City, yeah.

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>>10888165
D here.

Disgust because of the quality of the work, or because of the paraphilias you explored within it?

>>10896050
Quality.

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>>10860078
>That uncomfortable moment when you realize Northlands Garrison is borderline "elf slave what do" content and wonder if you have browsed /tg/ for too many years.

>>10866276
>>10868207
Personally have entire folders of unused ideas, both paper and digital. Trust me, they will stick in your brain after you write them down. It's like making notes for higher math, when you take the time to write down long equations you start to recognize patterns in them over time. Then those patterns help you when you're working other equations. Same thing with writing, put your ideas down and the subconscious will keep chewing. You may not use the idea in its current form, but you might use it in a different form later once your brain has worked out all the kinks. We all start somewhere, anon.

>>10871926
Intriguing writing style, reminiscent of much-enjoyed early 1900s literature such as H.P. Lovecraft's works. Have you read "Dagon" or "The Picture in the House"?

Dagon - http://dagonbytes.com/thelibrary/lovecraft/dagon.htm

The Picture in the House - http://dagonbytes.com/thelibrary/lovecraft/thepictureinthehouse.htm

Similar writing style, may provide inspiration. Regarding precise critique of your work, aside from typos common to such early drafts, story shows promise. A more gripping description of protagonist's night terrors, such as a vivid depiction of dreams (if lacking ideas, visit /x/, spend five minutes giggling, turn a few of their pictures sideways and jumble up their ramblings, you'll soon be writing loopy bat-winged snuggle-seagulls), would better describe the main character's desperation. "Dagon" an excellent reference for such description, "The White Ship" another (available at same website). Of course, if intent is to hold the reveal of the night terrors' exact content until the end as a "wham line" of sorts, it would still be advisable to include some vague foreshadowing at the beginning of the work.

Hope this is of help.

>>10860078
Well, apparently you purchase her as a nanny for your children.

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>>10898816
>wonder if you have browsed /tg/ for too many years.
/tg/ is a magical, amazing place. One cannot spend too much time there.

>>10898963
I've had an idea for a society which sees elf slaves as a status symbol. They serve as nannies and servants for generation after generation since they're so long-lived.

Then I realized I was just making a sexy version of Harry Potter house elves.

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>>10899046

>>10899655
I don't know which would be worse, you having made that so quickly nor you already having that saved.

>>10887014
Generally someone notes me with an idea, I send them the length I think the story will be, a corresponding quote, and a paypal link. If they pay me, I give them a story. If I don't give them a story, they refund the payment. If I do give them a story and they refund the payment anyways, I'm basically fucked because that's how paypal works, but I haven't had to deal with that yet.

Common rate is $10 for 1000 words for a lot of people, though I encourage authors who are legitimately good at writing a niche thing to put surcharges on that because that rate is waaaaay for quality. How long you'll have to wait to get your story depends; you'd have to check with individual authors about their schedules at the time. Personally, I delivered >>10875559 (which I'd consider a medium-length piece, 6000-7000 words) in about 3 days, but my last commission of a similar length took I think closer to 10.

>>10899991
*waaaaay too low for quality

>>10899046
If you want to avoid that, just flip the scenario on its head.

Everyone thinks the noble families have enslaved these elves as status symbols, but nobody can really recall who started the practice. In reality, the elves have never been enslaved and could leave whenever they want, but what would the nobles do if they did? They've relied on their immortal servants to educate and raise their children for so long, they can't imagine their society functioning without them. Over the countless years elves have been living amongst the noble families they've used their insidious influence to bend their "masters" to their will guiding and shaping the family as they see fit. How long has human politics been merely game played by bored elf women?

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Snek here, me and D. are maybe working on a Krell futa fic, so give us your ideas and requests and he'll see if they interest him and whether he wants to commit to it.

>>10902642
Well, not onto into futa myself, but best of luck to the both of you.

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>>10902642
D here.

Snek's the Krell expert, I'm the futa expert. I know what I like in futa, but as far as the Krell stuff, I'll need some guidance Make as many suggestions as you like.

>>10898816
Oh thank you so much!
That helps immensely!

I will admit I'm not the best at editing my own work, I like to freewrite first and then go back and worry about things like Grammer and punctuation. A personal failing of mine.

I have read Dagon but never the Picture in the House. Actually I dislike Lovecraft and his story telling tropes, but his writing is fantastic and always at least initially gripping for me.

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>>10895912
It's just a project I've been dragging my feet on for a long time.

Rig Runner is now finished, Ebook is on the way, but I have a couple of people who have offered to help me proofread so I'll wait for them before I finalize it.

Rig Runner:
>A freighter pilot is plunged into a fight for his life when Borealan pirates board his vessel, but their sadistic captain may have more on her mind than just his cargo.
60,060 words.
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
tags:
>femdom, reluctant, dubcon, biting, scratching, alien, large breasts, size difference, dark skinned female, muscle, sweat, bathing, massage, oral, vaginal, creampie, messy, long tongue, kissing, leg locking, handjob, blowjob

>>10860078
Going by her expressions, her scorn for the humans of all creatures having the gall to refer to elves as "depraved savages" has just collided with her burgeoning desires for her charge.

Bonus points if the painful epiphany arrives as a result of an especially innocent and heartfelt apology for what she went through because slavery makes twelve year olds sad.

>>10902642
>>10903748


P-P-P-P-P-POLAR FUTAS

>>10903748
Do you have this in a Google Doc or something else that allows highlighted comments / annotations? I'd love to go at this and point out some of the janky syntax and logic but it'd take a lot of space up in the thread to do so in 2000 character posts.

I wish NP++ would count words, the story I'm writing is 6 paragraphs and a few dialogues.

>>10788473
Why Dickbutt of all things?

>>10910143
Nobody knows anymore, it's just what is.

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>>10909967
Notepad++ does count words! Noticed this after similar struggles. View>Summary>Words.
>>10910143
Because /trash/ most probably. Implication that frantic panic to produce something, anything, original leads to creation of things that should not be. Good check on author egos, but also discouraging to potential readers (possibly, this is 4chan...).

>>10910143
TL;DR:
>/trash/ is a board about random shit
>It stands out among other threads
>I couldn't think of anything else at the time

>>10910599
if you are who I think you are, it might be time to make a third book soon

>>10905139
D here.

Maybe that'll be next.

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>>10789486
Very good stories

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>>10914953
Any specific critiques? Anything you think I should pursue more? Thank you for the response regardless

>>10911487
I was planning to make 1 each year, but I can go ahead and start drafting a new one.

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>>10911487
Done.

>>10917155
Ah, good ol volume 3. New OP material confirmed. Needs a few dick bookmarks if you like.

>>10917246
>dick bookmarks
Eh. I can toss a Skyla in there if you want.

>>10917402
It has been a while since the last skyla request though. What other bookmarks do you got?

>>10917690
I haven't been around much in a while, so none technically.

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>>10917155

>>10917955
D here.

Should that instead say "and /efg/"?

>>10917968
"and few other writers from /d/"

>>10913510
Do the ink puddles all lead to the same spooky home realm these creatures are from, or is it specific to the one making the puddle unless they do it as a group, as more of a pocket dimension?

I'm kind of assuming the space within them is more or less unique to each of them, since it's basically their body. And full of tongues.

Actually, thinking of tongues, how long are they? Going by the first story they're erogenous zones but not enough to get off with, at least not when there's only a couple being used. If they could reach out then you could play around with some simple bondage-y stuff and/or extremely unusual variations on mouthplay, but keeping them very definitively at tongues in both description and as an influence on their behavior should make it easy to avoid them being a renamed version of ropes or simple tentacles.

Maybe letting them outside the body is obscene or particularly explicit for whatever the hell they are? That might play off the relationship being more developed (this was the first time MC was invited to her place, right?), and also the chemicals from regenerating making them especially aroused - like she'd only planned on taking MC to her home for tonight, not on going this far yet.

>>10917955
let's put this new book to use. Thanks for dropping by book anon
>>10919476

>>10919482
No problem.