Write faggotry thread #27 Previous thread: http://desuarchi

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Found an interesting greentext scenario that could make for some good comedy smut involving Pokémon. Was wondering if anyone would like to try out writing a story for it:

>Any stories about fucking a Rosarade but the trainer is horribly allergic to her?
>the Roserade is completely oblivious to her trainer's allergy

>Roserade doesn't know much about humans.
>Thinks all his violent sneezing during sex is part of the human orgasm.
>Random sneezes start making her bothered, which makes her produce more pollen as a side effect.
>One evening Trainer is in pokecenter.
>Another trainer has a Leavanny out.
>Trainer bumps into it and sneezes.
>her face when

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Holding onto lillithmon story

Outline: https://pastebin.com/nHUr959h

Suggested extra kinks: lactation from pent up sexual frustration, drinking milk from source, her receiving her first spanking as 'proof' of her desperation/frustration

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http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch-4-page-39-414290765
http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch4-page-40-414856423

In these chapters Autzen, an autistic buizel, needs to use the bathroom, but is too scared to use the airplane toilet's loud noise. Despite wearing a diaper he doesn't want to use it, instead holds it throughout the entire plane ride, all six hours of it, even when he's sleeping during most of it, and makes it to the bathroom.
Can someone rewrite this page(s) so that Autzen ends up having an accident in his diaper, perhaps it happening during or shortly after his nap? Read the previous chapters to understand how he'd probably react to it.

Help a fellow autist out please.

>>10684032
Normally I don't like crying or pain or anything really unpleasant happening in my smut, but for some reason pics like this where the girl is just a complete mess turn me on more than anything.
Are there any stories/comics like that but without the awful stuff happening before it?

Yo Snek, how are our lovable bugs going to be handling the more intimate and tender sides of sexytimes? I don't imagine theyre going to be interested in pleasuring their mate or receiving any for various reasons, but if you have a good excuse for it, I'm all ears.

>>10684032
>>10684102
Weird, despite it being so common in glorious nippon smut, I absolutely cannot stand that or ahegao face of any sort. I can understand why someone can enjoy like 'I have broken down and now only feel lust/pleasure' faces, but it is just too over the top to me. It is like the porn equivalent of a girl obviously faking it in a porno.

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Chapter 6 up for Northlands Garrison. In this one, we actually find out the maid's name, and she finally works up the courage to confess her feelings. (At this rate, they'll probably die of old age before they snog. Or the rest of us will...)

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, original work, melee line infantry combat, blood, snow, alcohol.

Character Tags: Maid (female), Military officer (male).

Content Tags: M/F, consensual, body cleaning.

Summary: In a conquered settlement far to the north, a young officer struggles to hold together the garrison legion despite constant attacks from indigenous resistance groups who somehow are able to bring high-yield explosives and powerful spellcraft against him. After a day of blood, pain, and unpleasant surprises, he retires to his quarters in an inn that has been commandeered as a command post. A familiar serving maid, always in the corner of his eye but never underfoot, shyly brings him his evening meal and a wash basin. He's not taken great note of her before, far too much to do if he wants to keep his men alive in this hostile land, and she's not directly engaged him because of a natural shyness.

In his eyes, she's another victim of this drawn out conflict, an orphan taken in by the innkeeper after her parents starved due to food shortages caused by the war. Taking advantage of her would be shameful, against all he's fighting for. Besides, anyone could be an insurgent. But does the pointy-eared maid know something that could turn the tables against this mysteriously powerful rebellion, and if so, what does she want from him in exchange? Men kill in war. Hunger, cold, and disease kill more during the chaos. What are these two willing to do for the promise of restoring peace to this land?

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>>10686287
Northlands Garrison Chapter List
>Chapter I: Explosion
https://pastebin.com/nCuHz6bb
>Chapter II: Promotion
https://pastebin.com/vz62zdf0
>Chapter III: Admiration
https://pastebin.com/mcpNhpTz
>Chapter IV: Starvation
https://pastebin.com/eEXuBLfR
>Chapter V: Revelation
https://pastebin.com/KWfi5GNB
>Chapter VI: Confession
https://pastebin.com/yUVLyiN4

Available chapters focus on subtle character interactions and worldbuilding. No sexual content. Chapter 3 and onward contain minor intimate touching and body cleaning.


New chapter up for Paws, Pencils, and Kid Gloves. In this chapter, our intrepid male lead sees his childhood friend's wolfish side in full for the first time!

Setting Tags: Fantasy world, original work, slice of life

Content Tags: M(human)/F(werewolf), childhood friends, transformation(werewolf)

Summary: In a world of magic carpets, clay houses, and verdant forests, the cities of man's empire are protected from corruption by vigilant investigators. But who, or what, protects the forests from threats within and without? As one boy grows from childhood to an adult, he learns that one of his schoolyard friends is perhaps more than she seems. The old myths tell of wolf-people who stalk the forests and devour those who would ruin the beauty of nature. But werewolves are myths. If they weren't, his yellow-eyed tomboy friend and her quaint nuclear family would have found out about them by now. They live in the woods, they'd warn him if those myths were true... right? There are more important things to worry about, like if he likes her as much as he thinks he does, and if she likes him the way he likes her, and why she keeps having those twitching fits during class now that they're all going through adolescence.

>Chapter 1: Leave it to Loba...
https://pastebin.com/ePr6xUp3
>Chapter 2: Family Fishing
https://pastebin.com/wSLjuicX
>Chapter 3: Adolescent Confidants
https://pastebin.com/erPVrvWy

No sexual content (yet).

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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here: http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions

>>10686287
>>10686322
You sir, are a machine.

I mean that in a good way. As in, you are very productive.

I want to be the loving breeding mare for a pack of lonely beastmen.

>>10684102
I can relate, buy I'm more of a kinkier guy with this type of taste. I like it when a girl is fucked/seent to ahegao so hard that they might lose some control of body motors/functions aka climaxes that causes twitchiness, extremely strong grips, or even losing bladder functions to an extent. Think kinky electricity play

>>10684102
https://exhentai.org/g/1082410/dabfd9e65a/
https://exhentai.org/g/1075319/5a494c726e/
https://exhentai.org/g/263496/2d9d30487d/
https://exhentai.org/g/924912/f26a6d8616/
https://exhentai.org/g/1066756/b0bbcbbd41/

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Regarding lizard-girl request from Thread #26
(Working title: Plate and Scale)

>>10666156 T#26
Compliment appreciated. Worried that overlapping content may cause burnout, but so far fear unsubstantiated.
>>10666559 T#26
Acknowledged. Also uncertain of precise definition for tag. Are you referring to a Type-B "Dere" tsundre?
>>10669397 T#26
Feedback appreciated. All those tags are included in the draft scenes or outline, and should be processed into the story when time permits. Initial expectation of a "quick" story was overly optimistic.
>>10668975 T#26
Understood. Concern over content, not word-count. Intent was to write smut, ended up writing build-up instead. Disappointed with self, but result not entirely unexpected. Original intent for Northlands Garrison was a similar "short" story. Issue may stem from use of writing as a stress-relief. Easier to begin writing and let words flow on page with minimal guidance than chain mind to very specific objectives.
>>10670452 T#26
Feedback appreciated. Built outline. Original intent was an off-the-cuff short story without outline, which resulted in improper estimate of time needed for desired content. Am writing/editing scenes based on outline now, using agile development methodology instead of waterfall.
>>10671292 T#26
Critique appreciated, requester. Intent of "ethnic cleansing" reference was to indicate large-scale targeted extermination of lizard-folk, explaining why female character was forced to raise her siblings alone as well as her lack of knowledge about "the birds and bees". Will review.

Mention of attempted rape by other humans is to indicate high value she places on her virtue. Demonstrates that she does not view mating with the knight as a casual encounter, and also dispels notions that she would be as happy to have the knight if he was a cruel man. Intent is to discard notions of slave-mentality from the readers' minds. Will review.

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>>10688935
>>10687034
Compliment appreciated. Believe undeserved, however. Many more talented authors post here who are far more prolific. Simply trying to fulfill accepted commitments with respect to readers' time.

>Future plans for lizard-girl request
Intend to use as test-bed for Archive Of Our Own (AO3) hosting. Will be useful evaluation of service's functionality vs. pastebin.

Story currently has build-up, as shown in the expiring pastebin link given last thread, minor intimate contact leading to kissing, tail-stroking, oral sex (F->M, fellatio, deepthroat, cum swallowing), along with groping and breast-sucking (M->F).
Sexual tension builds to climax(oral), followed by his verbal acceptance of her desire to be his wife. Leads to her performing a very simple commitment ritual with the rings she wears around her neck.
>Aside: This ritual is actually one of the few cultural touchstones she knows, due to the death of her parents precluding most of the teaching she would have received while growing up. It is regarded as the oldest tradition among the lizard-folk, and easily taught to the young, long before they are old enough to learn about sexual intercourse. Attempting to incorporate heartwarming feel of children having "weddings", while retaining clarity that both are completely serious about this commitment.
After ritual, knight carries lizard-girl to his cot for full-contact sexual sparring. Begins with fingering/tail-job, progresses quickly. Missionary, cowgirl, possibly assorted other positions, with focus on intimacy and elements of her exotic body.
Intent is to also show "happily ever after" with careful pregnant sex and possibly lactation/nursing if reader interest exists.

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>>10682787
off topic but do any of you know how to alleviate the back pain that comes with writing for long hours. I am kind of an all or nothing person. I need to sit down and write for long hours or nothing at all.I love to write but hate the back pain/slouch Any advice? Gear?

>>10689181
Sounds like you're using a laptop. One of the many advantages of a desktop computer is that you can position the screen and keyboard independently. And almost all screens are designed for use with a standard "VESA mount", so you can get third party screen mounts that let you position them how you like instead of using the included stand.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flat_Display_Mounting_Interface

>>10689301
And you don't need a good PC for writing. A $5 Raspberry Pi Zero is good enough. You probably already have a phone charger that will power it, and people throw out shit-tier monitors that are perfectly adequate for writing all the time. All you need then is a MicroSD card, a HDMI cable, and a USB keyboard (all cheap).

>>10689391
>USB keyboard
And a full size to micro USB adapter if you're going with the RPi Zero. Alternatively, if you know any nerds, which being on 4chan you probably do, one of them probably has a full size Raspberry Pi they bought on impulse and never used.

>>10689301
>>10689391
>>10689443
I can't drill into my walls because they are chock full of lead. do you think its still worth it to get a large monitor? Where would you suggest getting a large monitor for cheap. What program do you need on a raspberry pi to run a writing program? sorry iam not really tech savvy

>>10689487
Only way to get a large monitor for cheap is hope somebody is throwing one out and get it from them. And larger is heavier, so it's harder to position it exactly how you want, and the whole reason I suggested using one was so you could find some way to position it that didn't hurt your back.

You don't need to drill into walls. You can get monitor stands that clamp on your desk, or maybe the default stand will work for you.

Raspberry Pi will run LibreOffice (somewhat slowly), or any simple text editor. It's not like writing needs fancy software. Or you could just plug an external monitor into your laptop if its keyboard is good enough.

>>10690964
What repulsive art

>>10691029
Fortunate that this is a writing thread, then.

There's not nearly enough good smut with that character.

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Requesting Femanon making a "DIY Slime tutorial" with some rather unusual ingredients and gets fucked by her sentient slime partner

So, lately I've been playing a lot of Total Warhammer in anticipation of the sequel coming out.

Naturally, this kindled quite the interest in me about the lore of this old game, and I've been reading up on it wherever I can.

And, the deeper into it I get, the more I wonder why there's so little smut about it. Even from our elder members who were in /wst/.

I mean, you've got a dark elf king who's banging his evil MILF mother, you've got a cult of crazy witch elves who go into battle drugged up to the gills and practically naked because of how horny getting blood splattered on them makes them.

You've got the Wood Elves, who go on rapey, bloodthirsty rampages through the medieval france land they've got next door every year, lead by a guy who's half Cernuous (an ancient pagan God of, among other things, fertility) and half Pan (an ancient Greek god who was renown for raping anything that couldn't run away from him).

And that's just the ones I can think of off the top of my head! You've also got the beastmen (who reproduce through raping captives), most of the vampires (bloodplay, anyone?) etcetera, etcetera.

>>10694456
This thread is really not much for noncon, to be honest, and that's probably why

>>10695578
That seems... silly.

I'm sure people must have written non-con stuff for here by now?

>>10695883
There was actually a decent supply of non-con written in the past. Not sure if /d/ folks are into it as much as /trash/ folk though.

>>10696040
dubcon has been the staple since we were on /tg/

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>>10695883
I do noncon, but I never got deep into tabletop and I've heavily tapered off vidya in the past decade. I also only do gayshit and I've got a hefty enough backlog already.

>>10689181
Ideally you should get up to stretch or walk around every couple hours but if you're really all or nothing, then your best bet is physical conditioning and being more mindful of your posture. Having a solid core helps your body support itself when at rest and fixing your posture just makes life easier overall. Ergonomic chairs don't hurt either, but they don't come cheap.

>>10696060
Dubcon ≠ noncon.
It's the difference between "I wasn't really sure about this at first but I guess this is pretty good" and full throttle "OH GOD NO WHY" and all the torn orifices that tend to follow.

>>10696159
Yes, I know what each means and that's why I said what I did in that post

>>10695883
People write it, it just doesn't get a whole lot of interest or attention
The absolute closest thing to noncon that seems to popular at all amounts to "I didn't know I wanted to fuck until you said do"

>>10696246
most of it comes from the fact people would write humans being paired up with monsters/aliens/etc and thinking they were going to be killed at first until they see the beastie wants to fuck and then it turns into super cuddly and lovey stuff afterwards.

>>10696300
Dearie me, I've got my work cut out for me then.

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>>10696202
Phrasing could've been clearer given the context. >>10695883 seems to be looking for noncon specifically. By responding to >>10696040, who expressed doubt that the /d/ writers had interest in writing noncon, with "dubcon has..." without connecting how that relates to /d/ authors' attitudes towards writing noncon, it comes across like you're equating dubcon with noncon.

>Do /d/ writers like noncon?
>They do dubcon.
vs.
>Do /d/ writers like noncon?
>Not really, but they do a lot of dubcon.

I realize this might be pedantic.

>>10696603
Most of the /d/ writers are/were very vanilla. I always got the impression that one of two things happened for the majority of the 'kinkier' writers during the /efg/ days:
>Posted fetish work, got berated or ignored because said fetish was too far off the beaten path for the thread's tastes, and subsequently never posted anything else there
>Disregarded /efg/'s existence and only posted in their specific fetish thread

For example, I recall seeing clown TF stories and giant/giantess stories posted in their respective threads but they never bothered crossposting it to the writethread. There's a slavery thread up on /d/ right now that has a fair few original stories and I don't think they were ever hankering to share them with /efg/.

Your best bet is going to be making a specific request and seeing if anybody bites. If it was a weeb game I'd suggest going to /vg/ because there are a lot of writefags in generals for those types of games, but it seems /twg/ actually plays vidya so they'd probably tell you to fuck off.

>>10697521
The issue comes from the fact /efg/ didn't start on /d/ and is just /wst/ from /tg/ setting up shop their after the mods gave into shitposters and banned /wst/ instead of dealing with the shitposters.

>>10697521
For quick clarification, there's also the people that hung around the /trash/ drawthread before the whole exile from /d/ thing took place, who are into noncon as well.

>>10697521
Part of it is probably like you said, that people can go to specific threads to get exactly what they want.

I did a desperation/wetting story for the Omorashi thread on /d/ once, and someone else fulfilled the same request for them, all within a short span of time. But no one ever came to /efg/ looking for wetting fiction at all.

>>10697572
Yes, and by and large there was mostly interest in what was basically 'vanilla with sprinkles' back then, too
>>10697741
Also theoretically /aco/ writefags, though I'm not sure if any actually made it here

How to describe someone (say a woman doing a striptease/poledance) in writing so that it's still arousing, thread?

>>10697846
When you watch a striptease/pole dance what do you focus on? The person's movements and how their body is moving or how more and more is being shown off has more clothes go.

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>>10696603
Actually now that I'm thinking about it, that Warham stuff might be up t'Sade's alley, but I think he's up to his eyeballs in long-term commissions at the moment.

>>10697786
I don't recall there being much in the way of /co/-related requests since everything went down, so I doubt it. Their last thread got nuked from orbit without warning, unlike the massive /d/ shitstorm. It seems any of the writers that were there have segregated themselves into specific threads like the /d/-/efg/ divide.

>>10697984
That honestly makes more sense for/aco/ than a central writethread, considering how absurdly specific pretty much every request there was/is

>>10697951
Um, never really thought about it before.

Their body, I suppose, how it looks, the movements and so on.

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>>10697846
Ah. Vital topic of scholarly debate!

Personally, feel the best way to begin is remembering that the reader only perceives what you put in writing. Seems obvious, but often overlooked. Your sentences guide the reader's mind, much as a dancer's acts are supposed to guide the reader's eyes/ears. Focus on a steady pace, moving the scene with the dancer's actions.

Why is she teasing this particular character? Do the two of them have any history, or is this purely a commercial arrangement? Where are the viewer's eyes focusing, and what is the dancer showing? Consider reading up on how the act is done in real life, there's a surprising amount of art in the higher-end of pole dances and stripteases. Of course, there is a certain charm to an inexperienced girl trying to show off her body to her lover as well!

To more directly answer your question, focus on how the striptease or pole dance mixes intimacy with distance. Usually it is not acceptable to interact with the dancer during a performance (personal shows of course excepted), so the dancer is able to exhibit behaviors that tease the onlookers while they are forced to restrain themselves. Describe those behaviors, emphasize the use of unique clothing or props. If the character is supposed to be flexible, use that flexibility to suggest sexual prowess. When it's a shy or inexperienced character, perhaps trying to arouse her love before sex, focus on her emotions and how she forces through the reluctance. Think of awkward social situations you've been in, that's likely the shy girl's mindset but her desire to gain mastery over her fear or provide pleasure to her love is strong enough to help her through.

With poledances, movement is key. Work the pole, as the saying goes, show energy and style. Describe how motion affects her breasts and her outfit, many pole dancers have tassels for a good reason.

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>>10685067
I have some ideas.

I figured each caste could have a different attitude towards sex, with the workers being mostly curious and investigating in groups, the warriors being my preferred brand of femdom, the repletes being similar to Polars; and the queens being what you'd expect, if they have sex at all which they might not. Not sure what to do with the drones yet.
The general theme would be that the lower castes don't usually get to reproduce and so sex is a sought after novelty and a curiosity.

2000 word update, new content at "Things felt somehow different now"

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
>no new tags

>>10699547


I actually don't know what to expect about the queens other than be worried that you might make them too small. Help me out here.

>>10699627
They're gonna be about the size of a xenomorph queen, when I say 'queen' I also mean that in the sense of a monarchy, they have absolute authority by virtue of pheromones and genetics so having the MC defy her in some way could be fun.
Despite her massive size, she's built to breed with males of her species who aren't much larger than a human, so penetrative sex should be mechanically possible.
She's easily going to be the biggest character I've ever written.

>>10699716

I like what I'm hearing so far, but still have a few things to be wary about. Is she going to be a standard bipedal humanoid with very few alien like features(like equatorials)? Cause if so it's going to make very little sense for her to be super tall.

>>10695578
>Not much for noncon
Thanks guess I won't write here then

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>>10699763
No the bugs are very alien, observe these laughably crude sketches I've been doing as references for my artist when I eventually ask him to do the real character art.
Their overall design will be something along these lines, though much of the armor that you see in this drone can be removed and isn't part of their exoskeleton.
They have six limbs, exoskeletons, insect mouth parts, a body separated into segments, and once I've done enough research to know what I want, weird bug genitals.
Perhaps the queens could be quadrupeds in order to carry more weight, with only one set of usable hands, and they'll be anchored to a massive egg sack too.
I've done pretty minimal planning so far because I have a couple of projects that I need to finish before I can work on this in earnest.

>>10699901
Be the change you want to see in the world.

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>tfw you actually wrote bambo non-con domination fart porn
>tfw you enjoyed it
>tfw not even into farts, just wanted to write something weird
I'll post it, if anyone's interested. I don't want to shit up the thread with it if no one wants.

>>10699934
>race of female kamen riders

>>10699987
See the OP. Just post it.
>>10699901
But all writers are welcome.

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>>10699987
Rule 34 is in full effect, huh chief?

>>10699934


Well hot damn, you're really flexing your creative muscles here. I fucking stand corrected.

Is this because being on /trash/ removed the power-level limiters /d/ installed on your for race design?

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>>10700087
If you say so.
https://pastebin.com/G4v1Ufpr
No bully

>>10699987
>Bambo
As in the plant? Wouldn't mind seeing what you got, since that kink is obscure

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>>10700156
>>10700113
The deer on that cover.

>>10700156
>>10700167
There was also a drawfag ages ago on 4x2chan who drew the same thing. I wrote the story to go along with the pics, but they're long gone I'm afraid.

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Another off topic question. Has anyone here used any sort of speech-to-text programs? Is there any programs that you recommend? Are there any good speech-to-text programs for macs?

>>10700146
Not much into m/m but gave it a read.

It's a quickie, but one that makes for a quick setting for revenge capture fun. While you might not be into farts, I did found that section to be real enough from someone being dommed and forced to inhale. It has been a while since I read something like this, so I wonder if there's a way to extend those scenes even more...

Anyway thanks for the share. More kinks for writethreads is always welcome in /trash/

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>>10700135
There's an element of that, yeah. I designed the Equatorials to comply with global rule 3, and because at the time, traditionally furry content didn't really appeal to me. That didn't work out too well and the mods tarred everything with the same brush regardless.
Then I made the Polars as a nod to my FurAffinity readers, they were only supposed to have a minor role but they exploded in popularity.
Then there's the Krell who were never intended to be romantic interests, and ended up that way due to popular demand.
Now I'm just gonna do whatever I think is cool and works in the setting.

>>10700345
For quick proofreading I just use Google translate to make sure a sentence sounds okay if spoken out loud.

>>10700453

Fuck yes. It was painful to see you designing races that were so obviously hamstrung because if you went too far from humans it would earn you a ban

My body is ready for the new age of unfiltered Snek

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>>10700440
I love writing shorter stories. Less time for the novelty of the premise to grate. I also wrote foot porn for fuckin' BUI, back before he destroyed /furry/.
>>10700251
So, I found the images, but they're on 3+3+2chan in an MP4 that has a bunch of Bambo sound effects played on top, instead of full-resolution originals. The search continues.

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>>10700622

>>10700453
>Man catalogs his spiral into degeneracy

Neat. Awesome art too.

>>10700622
>Writing for Bui
Madman detected. Guess your tastes come and go.

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>>10700757
I did it because it was funny

>>10699547
>https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
Just
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=axZ6mG__ZqU

Alright, working on an expansion piece. My issue is that it has a VR element, and I'm having an issue with making
>If you get bimbo'd in VR, YOU GET BIMBO'D IN REAL LIVE
Not feel horribly contrived.

>>10686322

This writing is fantastic, I hope you'll keep going.

>>10701263
Why not just:
>Describe the transformations in thorough detail, like it's "almost real"
>Faff about in the game some more or whatever after that
>Take off the VR and don't even notice the changes from that point forward

>>10700345
Missing a hand or two or are you just a slow typer?

Here's a short story I wrote a year ago.

https://pastebin.com/eW6USRgA

Transformation, brutification, m/m.

Also shitty ending but writing endings to smut aint easy

>>10702573
I always just go for either mass confusion, or a punch line.

Though I guess laughter could be a boner killer for anyone actually looking to have a good time.

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>>10701263
Ever play Shadowrun, chummer? Checkout Virtual Realities 2.0 (ISBN 1-55560-271-1), I'm sure you can find a .pdf easy enough. Mine's on dead trees. Grab an eyeful of page 49, "psychotropic black IC". Get geeked in the matrix by one of those, and you won't die from dump-shock. The megacorps'll mess with your head. From the "Judas" sub-personality that silently betrays your friends without you even knowing, to the "Cyberphobia" override that makes your wetware freak whenever you even think about jacking back in, that stuff is the new State of the Art in Fear. "Positive-Conditioning Psychotropic Intrusion Countermeasures" is what you're looking for. They call it "I-Love-The-Company" on the streets, and that's just what it does. Page 59 has the goods on a decker who got his hoop slotted and now, he can't "do the nasty without the Transys holo shining away."

What's all this tech-drek got to do with your project? Easy. Take your sweet lil' angel and slam her with some of this custom ware. Cuties like her shouldn't be pokin' their noses into Aztechnology's business, right? But it'd be a shame to waste the raw material. Just change "I-Love-The-Company" to "I-Love-The-Cock" and... well, you get the idea. Hey, that's lettin' her off easy, most Azzies would want her frog-marched to the top of a pyramid!

>>10696040
>Not sure if /d/ folks are into it as much as /trash/ folk though.
Requests of raping that one pokemon gym leader in various inventive ways were a staple of the early threads here.

>https://pastebin.com/SXLVvJFQ

Lizard girl a cute.

Good job so far, glorious comrade.

>>10699547
Hey, I had some ideas about your version of faster than light travel, that I don't expect you to do anything about, I just thought I'd share.
The general gist is that perhaps the in-between realm that they travel through is inhabited by a form of extra dimensional alien which interacts with the travellers, sort of like the Prophets of DS9 or the Warp's Chaos entities. The FTL alien/s directly interface with the travellers' nervous system to take the form of memories or thoughts as the aliens try to interact and understand. Almost all of the experience is unintelligible once they leave the FTL plane, which leaves them completely wrecked and unsure of who or where they are.

>>10702358
Nah just curious about it. Just wanted to tinker with it

>>10702900
To be fair, once again, skyla is hot as hell

>>10705989
Rape is an awful fetish, though

>>10696040
It was a divisive issue then and still is now; some people were fond of it, others despised it. I don't care for it myself, but if you feel like writing it I can't exactly stop you either.

For the guy asking for the thing about a not!Skaven, do you have a way you'd like it to start?
I already have one written up but I think it's boring and I'm sure you thought of something better.

>>10682827
I'm taking this idea. Don't expect anything soon though, I'm a lazy fucker

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>>10688935
>>10688967
AzimuthFlirt reports.

Lizard-girl request from >>10664721 T#26 partially fulfilled. Revised initial chapters based on feedback from /trash/. Due to project growing beyond initial timetable, chose to use for experimental foray into Archive of Our Own (AO3) hosting as justification for further work. Currently have three chapters posted. Divided revised pastebin draft into two chapters and finalized third's content. Additional chapters to follow, primarily erotic now that build-up is complete.

>Title: Plate and Scale

>Character Tags: M(human, knight), F(monstergirl lizardman, warrior), tomboy(F), tsundre(F), muscle(F), tanlines(F), reluctant(M), muscle(M).

>Erotic Tags: M/F, consensual, heavy petting, tail-stroking, kissing, mutual first time.

>Setting Tags: Fantasy world (GURPS TL3), armor, village, single combat.

>Summary: He is a knight, a proud protector of the working class. She is a lizard-girl who's never lost a fair duel before. While his heroism saved his village, it also earned him her affections. Despite his rejections, she keeps following him, wanting his hand in marriage. How long will his resolve last, and how much do either of these lifelong warriors really know about seduction?

>Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/11637996/


Evaluation of story's AO3 tags from anon experienced with their tagging system would be helpful. Uncertain if "Monster Girls | Monster Boys" tag is applicable, use of vertical bar indicates OR statement in most contexts and since one character is a monster girl this seems acceptable.

Intent is to provide a better quality, easier to read experience to readers on /trash/ through use of AO3. Different, slightly more cumbersome than using pastebin, but also more suited to larger, multi-chapter works. Hope format is acceptable to readers, open to critique and suggestions.


>>10704181
Feedback appreciated. That is the desired reader reaction for this story!

(1/2)

>>10702818
Definitely checking that out, I was thinking more the physical changes, implants and such.

>>10701930
This is the kind of thing I want to avoid, I want her to see it coming, lacking a better phrase.

>>10707471
I'd toss the reluctance tag, because it's basically synonymous with generic dubcon shit, which isn't what you're doing here.
Like 'clumsy seduction' might be a better tag

>>10707471
>Y-you've already kissed me, so I'll probably get pregnant
You know I always love lines like this. Humor in porn is often forgotten, but it makes well for easing into things. Nice to see it again. I do think a bit of detail regarding the texture/touch of the tail could be added

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I could use some help brainstorming a story.
I've always wanted to do a fic following a youngish orphan girl getting taken in by a crotchety retired military officer living in a country estate. He would have some sort of semi-tragic backstory, possibly involving a dead lover and a forced early retirement, resulting in his being kind of a distant dick. She would be naive and intimidated by her new surroundings, and would suffer from boredom due to being the only person her age in the area.
Over time he'd soften as she warmed to him, and they would eventually develop a close student/teacher relationship that in turn would develop into something more. This process would likely involve his imparting his martial knowledge to her.
Pretty generic and common setup, but I've never had a go at it.

Anyway, I need help figuring out how to do this without it being... creepy.
I'm cool with the age difference (the "early retirement" bit from earlier is actually supposed to mitigate this somewhat already), but I want the story to be sweet and not have a nagging undercurrent of squick.
I'm not a big fan of incest, even with distant relatives, but I can't figure out a good excuse for her to be there if she's not her "last living relative" or some such. Her getting adopted would be just as bad (and possibly worse), so that's out too. Maybe she could just be the new maid, or something? That option seems a little weak, is the thing.

Does anybody have any ideas?

The setting is either going to be straight up medieval fantasy or a fantasy (magic yes, elves and orcs no) mid-late Victorian era world.

>>10708763
It really depends on how early his retirement is, honestly. Like if he was a NCO forced out after 20 or officer forced out *before* his 20, then he'd be in his mid-late 30s and with a girl of 19-20 that would be merely odd and not nasty
Maybe as for the why she's there, her father saved this guy's ass in a war a long time ago, and before he got all busted up he promised to look after the girl if anything happened to the dad, and since it has, here she is

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>>10707471
1/2
AHI here, you seem to be falling into the pitfall I did when I started using AO3 and going for sadpanda-style tagging, which partially works but won't allow your story to reach its full readerbase. I suggest reading the tag section of the FAQ as well as parts of the tag wrangling guideline, but I'll try to give the most relevant points, useful links, and a tagging template that I've been tooling with lately.

>Tag things that are relevant to your story
>Avoid redundant tagging when possible, if there are two similar tags for a concept, try to find the one that describes your story's content the best
>Dividing tags into 'male namespace'/'female namespace' like on sadpanda tends to be useless, if not actively harmful in AO3's system
>For any tag you wish to add, see if there's a canonical tag* covering that concept in order to put it in front of as many eyes who want that content as possible

Visual elements like 'tanlines' or 'muscle' tend to not be especially useful for a tagging system built around written content unless it's a component of something like 'Muscle Growth'. However, sometimes there are canonical tags for visual elements like 'Military Uniforms' so it might be worthwhile to take a look and see if any visual elements that can be used as tags.

*A canonical tag is a tag that has been deemed common enough to warrant its own easily searched tag grouping. Examples of this include things such as: 'Anal Sex', 'Fantasy', 'Action/Adventure', etc. Having your story in these groupings is useful not only because AO3's built-in search engine is a bit arse, but because it helps improve the your story's lifespan. A poorly tagged story might get some traffic during its first few days of publishing but once it falls off the first few pages of whatever canonical tags it does have, it might as well just vanish into the fucking ether. A well tagged story will fare better over time and still have a chance to pull in new readers.

>>10708955
As I said, the age difference isn't a problem. In fact, that's part of the draw for me (girl being attracted to manly salt-and-pepper type).
Your idea of how she ends up there, however, just might be what I'm looking for. I might combine that with my maid idea (since I still don't want him adopting her), and that would also add in a good reason for him to be initially reluctant even if he finds her attractive.

I'll play around with it a bit, but this is definitely a good start. My thanks, anon.

------
Oh, just out of curiosity, would anyone even be interested in reading a story like this?

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>>10709554
>>10707471
2/2
With that said, one must be mindful to not tag every petty little thing and make a massive block of tags that fill an entire computer screen because that tends to annoy users, but if you're really lacking in tags, you can fudge something minor but canonical to give yourself a bit of a boost. It's a balancing act.

Within the past couple of months I decided to make a basic template for myself in order to expedite tagging. I put it at the header of my document and return to it as I'm writing to add things I know I can tag when I'm ready to post the story. It currently goes as follows:

>Setting/Scenario | Self-explanatory.
>Warnings | Reminders to click the relevant archive warnings.
>Themes/Fetish Content | Themes of the story or story elements that are otherwise not covered in Setting/Scenario. (ex.: 'Infidelity', 'Cruising') Fetish Content is self-explanatory.
>Acts Performed | List of sexual acts performed in story, may not be exhaustive.
>Silly Tags: Something I add one or two of to all my stories because they tickle me and seem to up reader engagement.

Hopefully this can get you headed in the right direction.

Relevant links:
https://archiveofourown.org/faq/tags?language_id=en#whatisatag
https://archiveofourown.org/wrangling_guidelines/11

(By the way, it's 'tsundere'.)

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>>10709577
A guy would be pretty salt and pepper (if his hair survived at all) grizzled after a 15-20 year hitch.
Hell, after ten years honestly

>>10707471
Almost forgot, yes, the vertical bar is being used as an OR statement in this instance. Most of the time it's used to denote two different 'canonical' names of a character or series, like 'Phoenix Wright | Naruhodou Ryuuichi' or 'Gyakuten Saiban | Ace Attorney'.

>>10709577
I like the premise somewhat, I'm just particular about age gaps not being TOO big and relationships that feel too much like parent-child
So I guess kinda

>>10709906
Yeah, the parent-child thing is what I'm trying to avoid. But it's difficult since I'm kind of set on a 16-18yo female lead and a mid-forties male.

>>10706082
>rape
>awful

>>>/mlp/
get gud u skrub

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>>10707471
Fuck, I also forgot to mention that the easiest and fastest way to figure out if a tag you want to use is canonical, is by typing in part of it and seeing what pops up. Pic related.

>>10710134
Her having lived independently before meeting him would help a lot, I think

>>10711593
Perhaps. But wouldn't that also take away from the being-stuck-together aesthetic? If she's been independent, she could be again.

>>10712343
Say the inheritance she was living on ran out, her father's pension isn't enough on it's own, and the fiancé she thought was waiting for her turned out to be screwing 3-5 whores a week
Having had but losing independence would actually enhance what you're going for IMO

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>>10707471
>>10701889
Feedback appreciated. Believe all authors can empathize with this train of thought:
>Phew, that was a lot of work, but this will certainly be enjoyed by others, so there will be a net positive gain from the effort.
>I... I mean, only three views after ten days is alright, at least someone else looked at it. Write to make yourself happy, because the story deserves to be told on its own merits, and to improve your skills. That's the spirit!
>Wow, that other author has a lot more views, and people are talking about that anon's work all the time. Did something go wrong with my post? Are the links broken? Someone would say something if the links were broken... r-right?
>Don't measure yourself against others, just strive for your personal best and keep improving!
>Um... is that anon's story really about... how? Why?
>This is /trash/, we're all in this dumpster together. If you can post something encouraging for another author, do so. Share knowledge if someone else is struggling and you can help. If not, don't kill the thread early with useless posts!
>Gee, I'd really like to write about that other prompt, but I'd have to put off working on something I've already committed to.
>Note it down and keep working. Persistence and reliability are what matters. Other authors are in the thread, someone who might be able to do it more justice than you could tag in.
>Why do I even bother, none of my stuff will ever be as good as those other anons' work...
Then someone posts a bit of feedback or critique, and everything seems worthwhile. This is why I try to post detailed feedback for others' work when that writing falls within my areas of competency.

(2/2)

>>10713745
I usually just skip to the last step. Scratch that. I always skip to the last step.

>>10712996
As intriguing as the idea is, I think I'm going to pass. I'm more interested in showing her develop into independence than having her deal with losing it.
Still, you've definitely given me more to work with, and for that I heartily thank you.

>>10713745
>only three views after ten days
That's less of a problem if you're not putting your eggs into one site's basket which is why Snek is on almost everything that'll let him post lewd words as well as why I assume you wanted to make the move to AO3. Pastebin is fine if you're just writing for anons and don't care too much about whether or not you get heaps of feedback, but it's awful if you're trying to max the eyeballs on your work.

>>10713745
Hey Azimuth, OR for the werewolf request here, just checked the thread
I don't have a lot to say about the current chapter, because I continue to like your writing, and nothing about it brings to mind suggestions for future chapters.
I like the Father's dire mutterings about the state if the school system, they add a nice touch of humor, which I think a bit more of would be a good thing. Maybe loba and lapiz playfully teasing each other some once the story moves into direct interaction between the two rather than recountings

Also I've been following the lizardgirl story, because that's also my kind of thing, and I'm liking it, even aside from my pathological hatred of communists. I get you want to go short on it, otherwise I'd suggest that it'd be better off with a few days of them living together before it gets lewd, but with your intended framework in mind, I'd say it's pretty dang good
Maybe have him do some thinking about how maybe a wife who actually *wants* him might be better than one assigned to him by central planning?

>>10706308
Didn't have anything specific in mind, but I could try if you need me too.

>>10714644
Nah, it isn't necessary, I was just thinking the guy stumbling through the woods and being dragged off screaming (or trying to) was a bit cliché and/or boring. I was going to build up the reason why rat lady chose him later on, but still seems like I should have something more interesting going on at the start.

This shit is driving me insane.
Does anyone know this word? It's been on the tip of my tongue for hours but I can't grasp it.

It's a noun that describes someone who takes the opposite stance to someone through spite rather than conviction, it's similar to 'contrarian' but it's not that.

For example, if you disliked someone, and they expressed a love of a movie, you might tell them that you hate that movie, even though you don't have a strong opinion of it.

>>10715915
Dr Cox?

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>>10700862
2500 word update, teach Borealans not to rape edition, new content at "Erikson wasn't sure what to say"

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
new tags:
>consensual, romance

>>10705192
That's a cool concept, though I do tend to shy away from anything relating to psychic powers or telepathy.
Reminds me a little of Larry Niven's 'Known Space' setting, where they eventually work out that what they thought was gravity wells destroying spaceships when they came out of warp too close, was actually extra-dimensional space monsters lurking around planets eating their ships.

>>10716437
more like you gotta teach humans to stop being so rapeable and tempting to Borealans

>>10716495


That would actually be a hilarious read. Imagining an equatorial legitimately trying to teach their human how to be less rapeable in order to protect the fragile little thing

>>10713745


I'll keep sliding you critique if you keep telling us what happens next with Loba.

>>10716868
>over protective Borealans, equatorial and polar, trying to keep their precious fragile little cinnamon bun humans safe from everything
>polars are worse since they already have that built in paternal/group caring instincts heavily built in and humans must come off has really small and weak kittens to them

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>>10716868
Really the only feasible defenses against borlean idio-sociopathy are either shooting at the slightest indication that they're going to try something, or else convincing them that you're pic related levels of batshit and therefore too dangerous to fuck with
That or bring along a krell who's only job is to best borleans senseless all the time

>>10717059


Yeah sure, if you have 0 idea on how either type works and also have never read a single snek story past the first one. Otherwise, there are tons of things you can do that don't involve death or insanity

>>10717059
Shooting them and acting like that just turns them on. An even better bet is just have your own borealan around you when near other ones. Though you need to hope yours isn't up for sharing or a competition breaks out for who gets to ruin your pelvis this night.

>>10717173


I like your style.

>>10717059
Eh, there's more than that
The proper defense against polar females is just being 100% gay and letting them assume that you're asexual from their cultural norms, same with the males, but flipped.
Against equatorials the best defense is not volunteering for suicide duty in the first place, ensuring you have a krell XO in the second place, informing your squad that rape is a death-penalty crime in the third place, carrying something in at least .44mag and preferably in 12 gauge in fourth, and wiring a claymore mine to your zipper in a distant fifth
Of course having roboarms means that knowing martial arts designed to defend against wrestling is a decent alternative to all of the above

>>10717654


You can just tell polars no. They lose interest immediately if you actually don't want it.

>>10717654
Or even better, making sure your superior knows that you despise working with disgusting xenos filth and would rather rip your own head off than mate with one of the beasts.

Remember, the only good alien is a dead one.

equatorial genocide when

>>10717687
That's the point, telling them 'no' while also telling them that there's no point trying to get you to reconsider

>>10717687
at worst they'll just still want to cuddle/pet you, but that's par for the course on friendly polar behavior

>>10713517
It is sad I can instantly recognize that style, and tell I do not want.

>>10717139
Still would be nice to read about someone who is so convinced that the Borlean is going to rape his pelvis into dust that he convinces himself to go full fucking suicidal retard in an attempt to ward her off.

>>10713517
Oh fuck, is this Franken Fran? I'm into some freaky shit, but there's lines I will die before I cross.

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>>10719269
Are you saying you don't want to fug the bug?

>>10719322
No, it's one of Horihone Saizou's doujins.

>>10719322

I have a tiny, shitty story I wrote where something similar happens, if you care to read it. No suicidal retard, but he does fight back

>>10719924
Sure. Would you mind if I critique as well, or is a story where you don't care for it?

>>10686322
Jebus Christmas, I'm in love with the worldbuilding in Northland Garrison. It's got the vibe of a good Brandon Sanderson novel, or Butcher's Codex Alera. Likeable characters paired with an interesting world in a scenario where they are struggling.
I'm only three chapters in (and holy fuck, it's almost 3am, I need to sleep), but it's great so far. I'm impressed you've managed to keep only one POV character so far. It's damn hard telling a story like that and you've pulled it off very well so far.

Keep up the good work, my friend.

One thing I've noticed a few times, however, is that you sometimes forget to capitalize the first word of speech in a quotation if the quotes don't begin the sentence.

Chapter III, Line 26
>A soft knock came at the door. His head slumped forward onto the desk, and he whimpered softly into his hands before calling out, "enter!"
Enter should be capitalized because it's the start of the speaker's sentence, even though it's not the beginning of the entire sentence. It's an odd rule, but can be a bit distracting as it can lead a reader (or me, at least) to reread the sentence to see if I missed where the speaker "started" talking.

It's find if you break up a speaker's sentence with other text. For example:
>"I can't," said the example character slowly, "believe this was the best sentence I could come up with."

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>>10720699
Okay. Couldn't stop reading, had to finish to Chapter VI.

Great set up, great chapter ending, great everything.

Looking forward to chapter VII.

The paragraph at .74 of chapter VI needs to end in a quotation mark since he finished speaking.

Sleeping now.

>>10720570

https://pastebin.com/6j91d8WH

Critique is very appreciated.

Tags: Large cats not always getting their way, bad ideas, shocking outcomes, liquid karma.

Hey write thread,
I normally just lurk and read stories but lately I've been driven to write a story, plain and simple I just need a school name for xxbbws

>>10723941
The MacDonald Institute for the Calorie-Challenged.

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Anyone want to make a story behind this image? Character is Niko from OneShot

>>10719014
>>10723864
>>10724350
>>10725054

D here.

When people just post pictures, is it because people want something inspired by the picture? I'm just trying to figure out how it works around here.

>>10725646
This "only posting a picture" only really started after /d/ and /aco/ moved here. We used to have a few bumps in this fashion, so I assume they're merely that, bumps, with the slight intention of inspiration.

>>10725646
I think they're mostly doing it to bump the thread.

>>10725663
>>10725665
Ahh, OK. I just never saw that happen at /efg/ or the /aco/ writethread, so I assumed it was something native to the /trash/ thread.

>>10725646
there used to be a daily image challenge to make a quick snippet based on a pic when it was just /trash/ without the move. Some people took arms and made quick greentexts or proses from the image. Most were pretty lax about it, with some greens either being arousing or aiming more for quick humor/gags than anything overly serious.

>>10725646
>>10725699
Guy who posted them here, I do it both because I think they'd be good story seeds and to bump the thread.

Win-win, as I see it.

>>10726580
>I think they'd be good story seeds
You thought wrong, faggot

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I have a desire to turn this into a story: half-demon boy x elf lady; good 'ole /ss/.

Rough premise would be demon boy living in orphanage w/ the usual bullying and ostracizing. Elf lady lives in the town and is pretty much the only one to treat him decently. Demon boy often runs away or otherwise spends time with the elf lady, whom he has a crush on. His personality is bratty as he puts on a tough-guy exterior, but she sees straight through him.

Not so sure about the details, though. The elf lady's job, for example. The reason why -she- doesn't just adopt him. How descendants of demons are treated by the society as a whole. Who takes the initiative. What sort of sex they have. Her personality, and why she would be interested in sex with him.

Anybody want to see anything in particular in this type of story? Is "Hey kid, wanna ss?" preferred (ie, she knows he likes her so she teases him until he's ready for a good pouncing), or would it be better to have it start off with an embarrassed love confession on his part followed by almost-pity sex (while making it clear this is a one-time thing)?

It's been a long time since I've written smut so I'm at a bit of a loss.

>>10726642
Do you have any better suggestions?

>>10727054
Well, let's see.

You could tie the lady's job into why she can't adopt him, perhaps she's simply not able to afford it. Or perhaps there's some regulation where they live forbidding her from doing it.

As for why she's interested in sex with him, maybe she's lonely? I see her as being a pretty sensitive person with a lot of love to give, and she's not able to. So, she latches onto the first person who shows her any kind of affection.

I feel like the "Wanna /ss/?" storyline is a bit overplayed, and wouldn't fit in this context regardless. Instead, the awkward pity sex (emphasis on awkward) would fit better for their first time together.

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>>10726580

D here.

If you posted this one:
>>10719014
Then you might like my most recent story:

The Long Pull
https://pastebin.com/bqS5un4A
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-long-pull
>tags: futanari, futa-on-futa, big ejaculation, eating come, come in food, handjobs, masturbation, blowjobs, public nudity, exhibitionism, buttplugs, coffee

>>10728409
Sadly that one wasn't me. The only futa material I carry is related to Angel Moon, and I tend not to bring that out for fear of the banhammer.

>>10728507
D here.

(googles Angel Moon)

(Google asks me for my location)

...Oh, GOOD, it's THAT kind of manga.

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>>10728678
I've no idea what you're looking at, but I've a feeling it's the wrong thing.

This lot look familiar to you at all?

>>10728275
Very good points. Awkward sex and lonely lady sound pretty good.
Still kinda stuck on the job, though. Maybe sort of healer, or pseudo-nun-type-thing? Or maybe she's a mage, and people are afraid of magic, or something?

>>10729396
Yeah, maybe she's like a back-alley healer, since mages and magic are publicly shunned.

>>10729441
Certainly better than my first idea, which was just having elves also be a maligned group.

Also, I feel like a bit of an idiot. I could just have local laws require a married couple for adoptions. The elf is single, so she can't adopt.

Still quite like the back-alley-doc idea, though. The village witch archetype is always a fun one to play around with.

>>10727054
>>10729441
>>10729685
Another option would be to have the elf lady be a prostitute. They made friends when he was hiding once and she was on break. Now he hangs out with her as much as possible, which isn't much given her job.
He eventually fell in love and has been trying to save up enough money to buy her for a night. Eventually he resorts to stealing, gets caught, and is badly beaten for his trouble.
When she sees him again she scolds him the crime, then is shocked when he admits to his motivation and feelings.

And see where it goes from there.

Not sure which I wanna do, now.

Hi, new writefag here.
Before the SCP thread died, I posted a male SCP-1471 story there. If you like cute stuff and don't mind narration from first person, you might like it.
https://pastebin.com/tv3DhwTU

Before that, I did some stories for /aco/ Doom thread, both straight and gae, so here's a list: https://pastebin.com/YV7x1uPD

So, yeah, enjoy. Criticism is welcome, including grammar and typos.

>>10730078
>SCP thread
>SCP-1471
Please define these terms. They confuse me.

>>10730102
It's like a creepypasta site, but with a conjoined universe based around a secret organization and the things it contains.
http://www.scp-wiki.net/

>>10730164
Oh, neat. Thank you.

>>10730102
SCP foundation is a site full of fictional paranormal entries for a secret organisation founded to contain things potentionally dangerous for humanity. It ranges from innocent things like an endless pizza box, a strange machine that turns things inputted into something else to a large reptilian beast that seems to be indestructible. It's quite addictive to read through all of those and there's a shit ton of it.

http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1471
SCP-1471 is one of the more, well, overused ones when it comes to smut. It's a dog-like humanoid with a skull for its face. It appears when you download an app to your phone and soon you'll start receiving pictures of places you've been to with the aforementioned creature somewhere in them. Affected people usually become paranoid because of this, thinking they're being stalked. In later stages, they actually start seeing the creature either in their clear vision or, for instance, in mirrors etc. but the creature itself seems to be harmless, the people seem to become crazy themselves, not by a direct influence from Mal0.

>>10730078
I'm reading some of your doom stuff and it's pretty decent, have you thought about writing some non-vidya/SCP-based stuff?

>>10731120
Not much, I was thinking about making some Mass Effect stuff, especially of some of the more unusual races (Drell, Hanar, the like). As for SCP, I like 049, The Plague Doctor, so I might come up with something for him.
And as for other non-vidya related stuff, I haven't thought about it much. I was lurking in the werewolf threads here for a few days now, so that might be worth checking out for me. Again, I'd like to make something that's not been covered too much by greentexts and other fics, but with awoo's, pretty much everything's been explored already.
Lastly, just a heads up, I'm fixing some typos and errors in the Pastebins. Nothing to make the stories worth checking out again, I'm just saying this to explain today's possible edits on months old entries.

>>10731969
>ME stuff
I'd kinda like to see something with a female krogan and male human, if that interests you at all

Anyone have any futa on male stories that they'd recommend?
no noncon or dubcon pls

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>>10723864
>Date this girl
>Want to touch her
T H I C C
H
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C
C
>thighs
>Imagine they must be like pillows
>Get to N^25th base, finally get to touch those soft-
...
>Oh holy hell they're hard as wood and feel like corded steel wrapped in insulation. And not good insulation either, more like thick recycled paper that the builder decided was good enough because he was running out of time and budget.
>Back to the problem at hand, you've talked w/ your medical insurance and apparently crush injuries as a result of sexual misadventure are not covered by your plan
>And now you have to find a way out of sex with this girl you've been dating for the better part of a year whilst avoiding the implication that she could likely hold you down with her thighs alone and /fit/ enough to push her off

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2000 word update, new content at "It was like some cosmic contradiction"

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
new tags:
>blowjob

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>>10739136
Oh, also I figured out how tagging works on Patreon, so if you guys want to search for older Ebook downloads or see the artwork in more of a gallery format, you should be able to find stuff a lot easier now.

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>>10739136
Feel like a borealan, polar or equatorial, learning about ancient Egypt and their cat goddesses and playing up that aspect in their clothing/make up style along with being a smug shit about it could make for a fun little story

>>10724008
rip guess ill have to be original then.

>>10739248


They'd both look pretty awesome in ancient Egyptian garb and face markings.

Snek?

>>10728716
D here.

Not at all, I'm afraid.

>>10727054
Damn. Made the mistake of tracking down the image source. Reading the characters' backstories kind of killed my desire to write a smut about 'em.

So much for that.

Just throwing this out there, not looking for judgement, just want to know: would anyone be interested in a r63 Harry Potter story in which female Harry gets raped by Uncle Vernon?

>>10743424
I'll admit I'm not fond of rule63ing characters to make genders fit, but I wouldn't mind reading a story like that.

>>10743452
I feel the same way, honestly. But I don't write m/m stuff (I've tried, it turned out terribly every time), and I don't think Vernon would be into that anyway.

>>10743452
Anything in particular you'd like to see in such a story?

Current plan is for it to start with "Harriet" getting bullies by Dudley and his friends. The abuse turns sexual until Vernon finds out and breaks it up. Then he decides to "punish" her for seducing his son.

AzimuthFlirt reports.
>>10707874
Feedback appreciated. Replaced "Reluctant Male" with "Seduction, Awkward First Times, Awkward Flirting, Interspecies Awkwardness, Awkward Sexual Situations". All are canonical tags.
>>10708076
Feedback appreciated, reader reaction in-line with intention of quote. Reassuring to see story is conveying desired message with clarity. Additional detail for lizard tail added to revision notes.
>>10709554
>>10709586
>>10709724
>>10711455
Advice highly useful. Saved suggested template. Tsundere tag spelling corrected. Revised tags to primarily use canonical options. Discouraged by AO3's use of such inaccurate/broad tags with minimal enforced categorization, but presumably decision was made after considerable thought. Will review FAQs again. Deeply grateful for verbose explanations.
>>10713871
Don't give up, anon. Believe in the writefag that believes in you!
>>10714136
Interest appreciated. Greentext intended to vent emotion and hopefully provide touchstone for other writers. Enjoy writing for an interested community. Personally prefer quality feedback to raw numbers. This is why all my linked pastebin posts are set to "unlisted". AO3 provides stable platform for multi-chapter works, along with auto-generated ebook formats and other eye-saving options for readers. These features of particular interest for larger stories (Northlands Garrison).

Fear expressed in greentext was of being ignored and failing to understand why, rather than hunger for higher raw viewer count. Do not mind having eggs in one basket if it is a really good basket. Personally would rather spend time writing than promoting works across multiple disparate platforms. Hope that enthusiastic readers will spread word and draw more eyes if they enjoy the content. Desire persistent quality rather than loud pride. This is personal opinion, not intended as a slight against other authors.

(1/3)

>>10714267
Feedback appreciated. Knowing that others are interested in the work is a morale boost for any author. Your comments provide assurance that the mechanics of the story (subplot of the father's antics, successful construction of characters through concise dialog instead of verbosely showing every small detail through narrated action, demonstration of characters' attitudes through dialog) are functioning as intended.

Suggestions for lizardgirl story are also in-line with current drafts. Intent of communist backdrop is to provide mildly depressing comparison between life under political oligarchs vs. life under feudal lords.

>"my pathological hatred of communists."
>...
Have been at work on a draft concept. Should not mention. But...
>Prey of the Atomic Mantis-girl! A uranium-charged tale of an insect, a boy, and his convertible Chevrolet in the Pacific Rim, USA!
https://pastebin.com/aBbaxL0f
>Pastebin set to expire in two weeks.
Feedback greatly appreciated. Uncertain if will follow through on idea. Desire an almost comic book or Kaiju movie feel for the scenario, and uncertain if romantic elements will mesh well. Initial drafts promising, though. Am attempting to focus on currently-active commitments.
>>10716941
We don't negotiate with terrorists! But interested readers are greatly appreciated, especially when they give quality feedback. Will see what can be done.

(2/3) >>10743866

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Handy writing tool.
Enjoy!

>>10720699
>>10721083
Critique greatly appreciated. Correct on quotation rules, such grammatical flaws are bothersome to the reader, like incorrect shadows in a photoshopped image. Worse, that rule is known to me, but was misremembered. Occasionally do break from US grammar to include points of UK grammar that are more logical, but in this case the flaw is clear. Your comment expressing the reader's uncertainty about when the quoted speaker began speaking emphasizes why the rule exists. Will revise for marked errors when time permits. Such quality feedback demonstrates why posting on /trash/ is worthwhile.

Believe that ChVII will be satisfactory to your expressed tastes. Interesting, and humbling, comparisons to successful published works. Glad that you found Northlands Garrison worthy of staying up late to read, but do get your rest. Story completion assured, barring author death or catastrophic equipment failure. Intend to move into AO3 format for archival purposes after more complete understanding of format achieved.

(3/3) >>10743891

>>10743848
well you already got the bully thing going. It would depend on how sexual the bullying becomes, whether its light skirt flips or outright groping, touching, and disrobing, which are all fine in my book. I could think up of specific scnearios if you like

>>10742741
Where did it come from if you don't mind me asking?

>>10744421
http://neko-yasha.deviantart.com/art/DnD-OC-His-First-Haircut-139352706

The biggest issue for me is that they're apparently peoples' DnD characters. I'd feel like a major asshole changing them so much and then making them fuck.

>>10743891
Been playing a lot of Fallout recently? Maybe some Gamma World?


As for the story, this one seems a bit out there, maybe too out there, and the frontloaded shotgun exposition dump doesn't help.
Really the whole thing seems a bit rushed, like the reader is watching a video tape and fast-forewarding through the intro. Maybe rework presentation, guy explaining historical background of atomic madness to newly mutated mantis-girl?
Kinda feel like anything but the absolute cheesiest of romantic plotlines would feel out of place here, given how blatantly silly everything else feels

Might be worth putting this one back on the shelf until current projects are wrapped up, definitely would need full-time attention to work well

>>10744404
>light skirt flips or outright groping, touching, and disrobing,
Pretty much what I'm thinking as well. They are pretty young, so they'll not be entirely aware of what they're doing. They just know that making her show them her body is something she hates, that it makes them feel naughty, and they really are at the curious stage.

Vernon will be another story.

And yes, feel free to share any ideas, I can't guarantee I'll use them all, or even most, but I'd be happy to include anything that you'd like to see, provided it fits the story.

(edited and reposted to appease my OCD)
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(fml)

>>10744821
I give up. The comma wins.

>Decide to check what the most popular choose your own adventure stories are on Writing.com
>Male weight gain is #1 followed by various fetish fuel stuff and some interesting things
>Sort by longest
>Sonic at high school with over 8K chapters (last update a year ago)
>Popular women in diapers, English/German at almost 8K (last update an hour ago)
>male weight gain (#1 rated) last updated 4 days ago with almost 7700 chapters
>Followed by a list of mostly fetish fuel stuff
God, what the fuck.

>>10744897
Wait, chapters or word count?

>>10744932
Chapters. Pretty sure Writing.com only shows word count for non-interactive pieces.

>>10744821
Sounds like they play doctor with her, non consensually of course. At the very least I would suspect some fingering going on and touching of anywhere that can make her shiver. They could also have her bent over to make fun of how her butt looks.

>>10745062
Hammer of fucking Sigmar, that's horrifying.

>>10743424
Absolutely, but only if you email the finished manuscript to JK Rowling.

>>10739248
>>10741189
I was asleep lol.
Yeah that would be a cool idea, I know Kaisha from Purple Heart would be aware of the Egyptians because she's a humaboo.

>>10745068
Yes, I can definitely see that fitting in nicely.
No idea when this'll be done, but I can work with this.

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Anybody interested in writing a story about a halfling housewife and her human husband?
She buys into the traditional halfling/hobbit values of food, gifts, food, friends, food, money, food, and eating, but also has a bit of an adventurous streak ever since she met her now husband. Said husband is a human adventurer. She absolutely adores her husband, almost to the point of being a fan girl. She sort of treats him like a trophy husband and loves bragging about his exploits (typically exaggerated) and showing him off to her friends.
For his part, he sees their relationship sort of like one of those "We'll get married if we're both still single at 30" type of deals. He cares for her, and certainly would never cheat on her, but for him she's his best friend. He quite enjoys her cooking.
Both enjoy the sex.
A lot.

Sometimes the neighbors complain about the noise.

>>10744897
>Writing.com interactive stories
Their servers have "heavy volume" more often than not. I don't know how anyone can honestly use it half the time.
>Guests aren't even allowed to see the story tree anymore so they can see the path that'd have the most content so they don't have to constantly backtrack

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>>10746992
Whoops.

>>10746992
>>10744897
I regret every minute I ever spent on writing.com. The worst thing is, you can't delete or even edit chapters you've written for other people's interactive stories, so I can never wash my hands of the place.

>>10747401
There are a few good things in there, Anon. While you might not have contributed to the ones I like, someone probably likes your contributions. The no edit thing is a bit shit, however. Especially if the owner isn't active much more and you can't reasonably contact them for changes.
>TFW my favorite is long-dead for some reason, was about a tiger fur girl in a bunch of different fetish situations
>TFW 2nd favorite hasn't had an update in over a year

>>10747509
Well, it's more of the fact that I'm kind of regretting writing shota/loli material. I don't personally think that writing it is harmful, but I wish I had written under a different pseudonym/persona to keep it separate from my other work. If I ever go "mainstream" I don't want to have to worry about people dredging those old stories up and beating me over the head with them.

>>10747706
Thankfully pen names are a penny a package. I'm sure you can get a new one if you really need it.
>Shota/loli
Not my thing unfortunately.

>>10746992
>When you're skimming a fapfic interactive and a more serious piece
>Refresh one and it finally comes back around
>Refresh the other half a second later
>server load
Like seriously. If your servers are that bad, look for a fix or not have such autistic sign-up procedures just so you can harass your users.

>>10747768
Straight shota/loli isn't my thing either, but this had other fetishes of mine featured prominently. I've since changed my writing.com account name, but there's still ways of tying them to me elsewhere.

>>10747962
Fair enough. What your fetishes anyway/

>>10747979
Various combinations of futa, size play, hyper, and domination. I'd rater not get too specific, as I'm trying to avoid people actually finding and reading them.

>>10736266

Post some ideas

>>10748120
No problem then. I was more curious what led to the situation than finding it, thanks.

>>10748122
No thanks.

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DLFG here. I have written a thing. It's a sequel to another story I did right back at the start of the year, about one of my RPG characters, a Golgari Rogue from a Dungeons and Dragons game run in one of MtG's various universes. It's also the first time I've ever written lesbian sex.

https://pastebin.com/7FU3Xf4c
M/F/F-Humans, drunk sex, mild coercion, blowjob, facial, cumplay, yuri, threesome, fingering, cunnilingus, vaginal, anal

If the scene at the end seems a little odd, it's because I used this as an excuse to buy a level in Bard and get cool magic powers which I didn't end up ever using. Picture related is the character in question; I'll be posting it up on tumblr once I've been able to proofread it more thoroughly.

>>10750524
Cool!
Reading now, will post review/response/whatever upon completion.

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>>10750524
>>10751072
Alrighty. Gonna start off with a few typos (or possible typos) I noticed:
5. red paint, not read paint

9. halfway towards her twentieth year
Sounds like she's 10? I know you mean she's 19, and say so later, but the wording is a bit odd here.

11. Guild charged carrying
Guild charged with carrying

143. not so much it might cause - or worse, injure,
I think you meant
not so much it might caus pain - or worse, injure -

239. Am I gay now?
Seems a bit anachronistic for Ravnica. Sounds overly modern, as does a bit of the dialogue. More a style thing than anything else, and it's been about half a decade since I've read a Ravnica novel.

269. "Uh, yeah, I am, kind of." Anatta said
kind of," Anatta said
The period should be a comma

Also, some of the references to time surprised me. It seemed like only a moment or two after Anatta and Zarri meat that Zarri says they met twenty minutes earlier. Then, later, Anatta comments to herself that she's about to fuck some people she's only known for less than an hour. While technically true even if we're talking about a minute, wording it like that always puts me in the mind of "almost an hour, but not quite."
Might just be me though.

As for my impression of the story, it's great. Fun characters, exotic setting, and an impressively long sex scene. I find those hard to keep going, but this keeps up the pace and ups the ante marvelously.

Coincidentally, I've got a fetish for threesomes featuring experienced women coaxing newer girls on. In fact, I've been trying to come up with a good pitch for a few days now, and then here you come along. So, thank you very much for psychically filling my request before I made it.

Btw, you did a great job with the lesbian material, doubly so since I've been lead to believe you're not into that and haven't written it before. You could have fooled me.

In short, loved it. Very enjoyable read and glad to see you posting!

>>10752058
Thank you very much, I appreciate the typo-sniping and have gone back to fix them. The rather modern dialogue is something that other people have pointed out in my fantasy stuff before, so it's something I'm aware of, but I'm not sure how to fix it without making the dialogue feel overly staid or stodgy. Being that Ravnica is a more advanced Plane I hoped it wouldn't feel too odd, but it might be that my dialogue just works better for scifi or modern stuff.

>So, thank you very much for psychically filling my request before I made it.

Hah, well, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's a concept I've been playing around with in my head for some time but could never really find a good hook hang it upon. In this case it just felt right for the character - Anatta isn't naive enough to trust a man who tries to coerce her into an orgy, but another woman would have a far easier time of it. As for the lesbian stuff, yeah, it's not really my thing for the most part - F/F stuff on its own doesn't interest me but if there's a guy involved I can swing it. Good to know that felt natural as well. Thank you again for taking the time to read it over!

>>10709577
If you're still about, sure, it could be interesting.

Usually the biggest risk for things getting creepy in that setup is that since she's basically dependent on him, things look coercive as fuck very easily. In the seedy, tawdry sort of way, rather than some kind of eroticized power dynamics way. Him being reluctant on that front with her pushing the "something more" would help mitigate that a lot.

>>10752772
Yes, this is exactly what I'm worried about. Even if I can avoid the incest stuff, it's still very easy to slip into a rapey vibe, or the sleaze you bring up.
Reluctance despite apparent interest sounds good. I think going with either the deceased lover or her being the daughter of a friend point will also help since it would help explain that reluctance on his part. Using both would probably be a bit too much, though.

Thank you for the input, anon.

am writing story about gainer mmo
fat = in game power
the mmo under the thumb of a corrupted ssbbw femanon selling in game curreny for real world food and gaining more in game power.

kinda will take suggestions cause im a bit brain dead right now.

>>10754065
The plot features a group of girls who, in real life, are close friends. They hear about this new, super-popular MMO, "Weight of the Empire" from an advertisement or something. Their personalities are bubbly, smart, angry, and lazy with whatever bodies you want, could even technically skip describing them and going onto their characters loading into the game.
Good luck.

>>10746172
Seems like a concept that would benefit from art from InCase. Without InCase quality art, my shortstack love would never be the same.

>>10754134
Mm the characters i've got so far would actually forfill this really well, im taking this idea an encorperating it now, the girls would all also start out a bit fat to begin with.

>Weight of an Empire
also stealing this name cause its better than
>Weight Blade Online

>>10754248
>Weight of an Empire
I actually explicitly chose "of THE empire" because it's referring to the growing meat colossus who runs it.

>>10754277
well, thats actually even better, i skimmed over the suggestion but am using it.
think that the team of girls will get to fighting the "Queen" losing and coming back later when they themselves have become each much fatter and then beating her with their powers combine then once defeated she relinquishes her position and the new girls take it and become just as corrupt from all the power given to them, with some angle of the Queen also not really having been defeated at all and still controlling the world though the new queens

>>10754532
More like:
>Queen has an avatar in the game
>They beat it
>She's still in control even if her in-game throne has been usurped, it just gives her more time to eat and code new content

>>10754955
>>10754532
>>10754277
>>10754248
>>10754134
>>10754065
How is this supposed to be erotic rather than disgusting?

>>10754979
why do you think it's called /trash/?

>>10754979
I won't bother even trying to explain the allure of fatfaggotry. It's a "you get it or you don't" deal. Sounds hot to me.

>>10754955
10/10
>>10755919
if you want any input on it now is the time.

>>10756100
Nah, go wild my man.

>>10756100
Will you be planning this as a slow burn and drawn-out plot as they go on adventures or a mad-dash time-lapse as they grind up through the size levels?

>>10756143
Alright just asking cause any input saves me some time and a small bit of effort.
>>10756423
Mm likely will have time skips but the main focus will be on the girls rise to the top, would very much have bad romance with the girls finding feeders who feed then in long raid sessions

>>10756705
Good enough 4 me. Take your time, I'll always be here.

Book

>>10746172
>Eating dragon
Quit reminding me of Dungeon Meshi, that's just cruel.

>>10758096
If you removed the XenoQueen's ability to breed, would she be more docile? After all, the whole face-fuck with a face-hug is due to her laying eggs which beget, eventually, xenomorphs which kill and feed her.

If you keep her fed she'd let you live so she wouldn't have to hunt.

>>10759888
You would also have to remove her desire to breed, I imagine. The Queen has a fairly good level of intelligence and I think she wouldn't stop trying to figure out how to propagate her species once more, especially since that's her role within the caste system.

>>10759888
>>10760275
Just have it be an android, like the artificial xenomorph who smoked cigars from that one comic. Say she's an experiment to control regular ones.

That way you've got human-like intelligence paired with the body.

D here.

Some of the tumblrs of 3D artists I like aren't visible in 'safe mode' anymore (though not the one I'm posting)... so I signed up for Tumblr.

Wow, Tumblr's interface sucks. I might not use it at all except as an "Yes, I'm an adult!" switch.

If I do post something to it, I'll post it here.

Any writers open to a pretty detailed M/F / M Solo request about a professional breeder in a world where women are facing a shortage of men, and problems men in that career path have to deal with?

>>10760916
Did you have a plan in mind, or were you keeping it open for the (potential) writers?

>>10682827
Sneeze fetish mixed with oblivious, I like it.

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I request more stuff like this. Tasteful body piercings, elegant tattoos, those piercings that go on the pee pee and make a girl feel good when they rub against the walls of her hoo hoo, and the like. Also, that haircut girls get sometimes that's sort of like a mowhawk but without the hair gel so it waves to the side.

Bonus points for tieflings and other semi-demon looking creatures. Preferably this would be the male, with a human female.

For a story idea: female character who grew up very sheltered is finally on her own and has fallen in with a bad crowd after falling for a bad boy. He's slowly been getting her to dress more risque, get tattoos and piercings, and the like.
Story would focus on her getting something done that she's been too afraid of getting earlier, like nipple piercings or something like that. The bad boy/boyfriend character is with her and is very supportive, though he is clearly pushing for her to keep going with it. They both get steadily more aroused as the procedure goes on, so much so that by the time they get home they're fucking like wild animals. Or maybe the boyfriend has enough to clout to tell the person doing the procedure to fuck off while they go at it right there.

If the group does conduct some sort of dangerous or illegal activity for fun or for a living, the female lead will have a surprising natural talent for it, which is a big part of why the male lead became interested in her.

Sorry for being long winded.

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>>10746172

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Hey Shiny tell me what you think of this overall plan for the bug story, been doing some brainstorming in my free time.

Jarilo is a newly discovered, Earth-like planet on the fringe of contested space, uncommonly habitable and with an environment suited to farming. The UNN scrambles to lay claim to the planet, but advance scouts discover that a Betelgeusian fleet is already prepping Jarilo for colonization.
A battle group is dispatched to secure the planet, and the UNN gains orbital superiority after a costly and intense naval engagement. When the Marines try to secure a foothold on the surface, they discover that the picturesque landscape is infested with bugs, and their basecamp is harried by daily raids.
While on LRRP in the nearby foothills, the MC is captured and taken prisoner.

Goals:
>demonstrate orbital engagement
>drive home importance of colonization and flesh out reasons for war
>explore local ecosystem
>learn about and detail military life manning a base in hostile territory
>develop bug culture and society
>reveal bug motivations

I figure the first third will be pure action and life on the base, and then that should serve as a nice contrast to make life in the hive feel even more alien in comparison. I'll start researching life on military bases and come up with some cool local flora and fauna when I'm done with Grave Goods.

>>10762748
I don't think Shiny has shown up here in months.

>>10762781
Nah he's been around, we've been brainstorming the next commission.

>>10761403
I have a ton of details actually! Although they're all just ideas, not requirements.

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>>10760456
I've never heard anything good about tumblr's UI so between that and the mostly retarded userbase, I never bothered with it. I really want to know what the hell they think they're doing with this switch.

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>>10762280
An artist on /b/ kindly arted this for me after I used that image as a reference for a request, so I thought I should share it here.

Oops, posted the wrong image at first. Similar filenames are a bitch.

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3000 word update, new content at "She flopped down beside him" (I'm pretty sure, kind of lost track there I'm tired as fuck)

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
>no new tags

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D reporting in.

I have one of The Long Pull spin-offs finished. Rather than hold onto it, I'd rather just post it.

The Long Pull: Hand-Picked Dark Roast
https://pastebin.com/mVYcSR7t
>tags: futanari, public nudity, come in food, masturbation, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, coffee

I hope you like it. Let me know what you think here. If there are any errors, please let me know.

>>10769407
[Thumbs up emoji]

Awesome. I'll read this when I get home tonight

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Bump

How much are people here into 'hard' rape / degradation? I'm finishing up a noncon futadom story involving beatings and the like, and am considering options for future stories.

>>10772492
Depends on the scenario in question, but I'm going to give a tentative yes. Extreme degradation would bother me more than the other option, but I've seen it done well as well.

>>10772492
I know some trash folk are into it, though not everyone. I welcome it and look forward to whatever future stories you have in mind, though personally I'm not keen on futa

>>10772613
I honestly get tired of futa stuff pretty easily (not that I dislike it, just that I end up writing it a bunch), but it's the easiest way to get attention on HF, and I desperately need to rebuild an audience, so....

Gay / straight stuff can be refreshing, but it also rarely receives as much attention.

>>10772492
When asking about fetishes, the better question is "How many people here are into X"

Some will like stuff, others won't; somebody will call you a fag, and another will say you are awesome.

>>10772940
You'll probably find an audience for it, depending on the subject matter. Just tag it and you'll be fine.

>>10762781


I'm always here, shitposts and all. there are not complains since I don't have a tag, despite my shitposting not changing. You're all a bunch of silly geese.

>>10762748
This would be a great intro to the story, world building is always important.

PrayingMantra here. Spent 3.5 or so hours on this today so I'm fucking exhausted.
It might be kind of rough, don't have the stamina to go over the whole thing right now.

The Apprentice
>Tags: Futadom/male, Degradation, Sorta mindbreak, dickgirl demon, weird incubus-y soul stuff, beating, light biting / scratching, oral, anal
https://pastebin.com/ZBwc4AwR

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>post story
>thread dies
red flag desu

>>10775293
wth, that girl should be careful not to spill her drink all over herself like that. Even if she is in a swimsuit, that is just messy.

>>10773697
Good shit. Can't enjoy since it gives me memories, but it is excellently written.

Question for tagging: would beating / abuse alone count as BDSM? It seems like it'd be a good tag to use, but I'm not certain if it fully applies.

BDSM strikes me as usually involving a lot more fetish gear, and usually being roleplay-y.

I had a little inspiration today for a story about a guy and gal friend, where the girl is notoriously bad at choosing her bets, willing to gamble just about anything on anything, leading to the guy always making lewd bets with her.

>>10775608
BDSM is usually consensual before-hand. I like some good bondage and sub/dom but I'm not really into abuse and rape.

>>10744820
Not recently, but do greatly enjoy the Interplay Fallout games and would enjoy playing tabletop Gamma World if only there were people to play it with locally.

Pastebin pitch was intended to be a rushed idea, designed to float the backstory and universe. Very rough and unpolished, not representative of the final story except in ideas. Actual story drafts focus on historical situation and build a minor relationship between the male lead and the female mantis prior to her transformation. Romance is also somewhat over the top, idea is that she feels very alone in a strange world and only trusts him because he was diligent about feeding her, while he is attracted to her since she's very loyal and actually kinda cute.

Would definitely take time and effort to do right, wanted to float the idea and see what public response was. Might scrap it and repurpose concepts for different stories. Often do that. Feedback appreciated.

>>10775293
Don't worry, happens to everyone. Also, to fill out your dance card, look out for "post story and it is ignored until the next thread where people mention it in passing", or "post story, thread immediately 404s"!

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>>10762280
>>10766552
Interesting concept. Unsurprisingly niche. Long-windedness appreciated. >>10768185 also inspirational. Threw together an extremely rough draft for backstory, with heavy emphasis on showcasing already pierced, tattooed, and augmented characters, as a proof-of-concept. Actual story would of course include augmentation of previously baseline character. Lacks substance and likely has typographical errors, intent is to float an idea prior to requester interest fading rather than fulfill the request. If of interest, further work may be possible after current requests completed. Timeframe unknown. If not, was pleasant diversion to cleanse pallet. Continual editing and re-editing of chapters clogs the mind.

Title: Hardening

Setting Tags: space opera, pirates, privateers, interstellar megacorporations.

Content Tags: blood, graphic violence, alcohol, criminal activity.

Fetish tags: red skin (male), horns (male), body piercings, body augmentation, extreme body modification, cyberware, detachable limbs, lip piercing, corset piercing (female), tongue piercing, mohawk (female), subdermal electronic tattoos, business wear (female), gloves (female), stockings (female), glasses (female).

>>Link: https://pastebin.com/JCD2D6Rq

No explicit sexual content. Pastebin set to expire in two weeks. Feedback on ideas and setting appreciated.

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>>10707471
>"Plate and Scale" (knight and lizard-girl story)
Chapter 4 "Cracks in the Armor" up. 3400 odd words.

Contains more kissing, first-time fellatio with a prehensile tongue, and more nervous knight and lizard-girl interactions. AO3 tags updated.

>Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/11637996/

>>10750524
Always good to see more /tg/ style content. Recommend shaping into chapters. Probably around 3-4k words per chapter, but divide by concept and arc rather than arbitrary numbers. Easier for readers to digest than 12k words straight, also makes it easier for readers to return to specific parts they enjoyed. Learned this the hard way long ago.

>>Regarding story's Worldbuilding
Unfamiliar with background universe, relying entirely on author-provided descriptions. Reader familiar with background may have a different experience. Personally found a cohesive if mildly overloading description of the culture and surroundings. Descriptions of festivities demonstrates the action and debauchery surrounding the rogue as the story opens. However, description of other characters and guilds largely revolved around names, races, and brief acts, which were then referenced later. Can be difficult for readers to keep track of multiple strange names, especially when similar names are present.

Example: Myril is defined as a "Cryptwatch" earlier in the story(Line 7), but at mention of her brain-death(Line 29) character is only referred to by name, not by title. Adding the title would create a firmer connection, reducing the likelihood of the reader having to look back upward to find out exactly who the "dead" character is.

Not a simple problem to correct, especially when much worldbuilding needs to be done in a short period of time. Personally struggle with this in my stories. Hope this is of help. Integration of foodplay as part of foreplay interesting, well done. Once exposition dump finished, relatively few odd names referenced.

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>literally can't write happy stories because most of my motivation lately comes from being angry at depression / adhd and the only thing angry motivation does for me is make me want to write noncon / snuff

>>10777421
You can write some more serious stories. It doesn't even have to be smutty.

>>10777863
it's not that i don't like writing smut. it's just that i can't write *anything*, unless i've randomly gone into one of my periods of intense motivation, which happen once in a blue moon

>>10769407
I liked it. I think the first day at awkward day at work would be a good addendum to this.

Keep up the good work

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>>10776570
YES!
You, sir, are quickly becoming one of my favorite writers in this crowd. You should drop by the Worldbuilding General threads on /tg/ if you are so inclined; you'd fit right in.
Absolutely adore the way you're making all the body mods have practical purposes, right from the first line. You've obviously put a lot of thought into it and your ideas are pretty damn clever. The piercing-corset-equivalent mod serving as a secondary nervous system in an emergency is just plain fucking cool.
It's not what I had in mind when I made the original request, but only because I'm not nearly original enough to come up with ideas like that.

Please keep going with it!

>>10706693
Hows it coming?

Anyone got anything that's very relaxed and caring? Like, less focused on smut and more like cuddling and touching? Preferably with Monster Male on Human-ish Female.

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New story here! Hypnosis stuff, sorta. No straight-up sex, but sexish things happen that you may be able to jerk off to.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24341565/

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I haven't been here awhile

Are furry requests still okay or no longer?

Because I wanted a F Drauk/M Seedling, with her being fascinated by his soft body and exploring it sensually, ending in a handjob

>>10782197
It's /trash/ my man
furry's always been fine here

>>10780449
D here.

Thank you. I've got other shorts based around the other characters, including some that haven't been introduced yet. I'll brainstorm and see if there's enough to write about on a training shift, or maybe orientation. But it could also be someone else's orientation.

Thank you very much for reading.

>>10782197
oh hey you played the game too? I recall an anon working on some other Ever Oasis story like a few threads ago, but he might be open to try it if he returns. Good to see more people trying out the game.

beep

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>>10786390
>>10786390
Pretty vanilla

new thread
>>10788473

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How do you like your female characters?

>>10788593
Proper.

If there ain't plenty hidden, there ain't much to reveal.

>>10788593
Setting and character would make that differ a lot.

>>10788593
Could be anywhere on that scale, even for a single character depending on the scene. It's entirely contextual.