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Pony inflation thread #43 Ponies in 3D edition Writers (Nee

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Pony inflation thread #43
Ponies in 3D edition

Writers (Need more)
Writeslut the anon
http://pastebin.com/u/Writeslut_the_Anon
Splorch_Bucket
http://pastebin.com/u/Splorch_Bucket
MrBlitzy
http://pastebin.com/u/MrBlitzy
Fetish-the-menace
http://pastebin.com/u/fetish-the-menace
Pablote
http://pastebin.com/u/Pablote

Other pastes
Tankris (not active in thread, mostly fat)
http://pastebin.com/u/Tankris
R-Panic's Archive
http://pastebin.com/u/r-panic

Much better pastebin for older material:
http://pastebin.com/KtjTgw9e

Prev threads: http://pastebin.com/ke7cNjGf
#42 http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10456793
#41 http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10311243
#40 http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10173727
#39 http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10029619
#38.5 http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/9940110
#38 http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/9924603
#37.5 http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/9815695
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Long buildup on this sequence, only two more pages before the puffy though. Then I swear I have some definitive inflated pone art to do afterwards.

There should be more pics of pones pronking on puffy plots, really.
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>>10624604
Oh dear. Minty apparently never learned that, when you see a bulls-eye on the ground, you should stay the hell away.
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Speaking of Minty, I don't think this two-parter of his got posted here.

Discord shows off his costume, and brags about how he looks exactly like Fluttershy while wearing it. Fluttershy unwisely points out that the costume is not a good match, because it's much too fat.
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>>10625209

So Discord fixes the mistake, in the best possible way.
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>>10625209
>>10625222
I REALLY hate these two images. Discord looks like one of those freaky diapersuit things.
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>tfw Pablote chrysalis green is almost upon us
HYPE
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>>10625340
Eh, that's just how he does things. First of those two got absolutely slammed on derpi ratings-wise already, anyways.

He does have a couple of things in the works, some sequences of a more usual inflationary flavor, but he's been a bit of a lazy butt lately. One of them involves Squish going to the spa, though, so it's sure to be a treat.
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>>10625918
Of all these revamped images, I'm glad Twilight is the largest.
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last bump tonight
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Sexy socktavia says goodnight.
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>>10625488
What?
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Pump
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ulp ulp ulp
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>>10625488
>>10630716
Yeah, I'm looking forward to that story as much as the next guy, but I wasn't aware of him posting any status updates lately.
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>>10633302

Pablote here, status update:

Haven't worked on the story lately, and I don't know when I will. Currently, my creative goo is being eaten up by a big non-fetish-related project I'm working on.

Also, drawing on my tablet computer has re-kindled my interest in graphic art. So, some of my motivation and free time that normally would have gone to writing has been diverted to learning/teaching myself how to draw. So while that does mean no writing, it does mean you'll likely see actual drawings from me in the future. Unfortunately I'm still trying to get a handle on the basics and haven't yet worked my way up to ponies, but I will.

Anyways, yes, person who keeps being hype about changeling greentext. I'm really glad that you're looking forward to it, but I haven't made any tangible progress beyond what's in that document in the pastebin. I will, don't worry, but nothing lately. And when I do get some inspiration and writing time, Breathers chapter 7 is gonna take priority.

Oh, and speaking of pastebin, I got on to add some stuff to my notes for the Feng Shui game that I'm GMing, noticed that it had 18 hits, thought that was unusually high, and then noticed that I forgot to make it unlisted, and it was public. I went through my other stuff and then realized that the 80s music playlist I wrote down for a friend of mine was also public.

So, even though I don't see why you would, my OCD will eat away at me unless I at least ask-- did anyone here particularly care about either of those two documents? Cause if so, I'll put them back up. I primarily took them down cause I thought they'd cause confusion out of context. But, if for whatever weird reason you want to know what I consider to be the best new wave/80s alternative songs or my campaign notes for an RPG game that you're not privy to in a system you've never heard of, then by all means, I'll make it so.
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>>10634758
Okey dokey. Fine with waiting!

And I'd love to see them both up again!
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>>10634758
I think I'm looking forward to Breathers ch 7 more than the changeling story, so I've got no complaints.
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8aerondight8 gives us some dragon stuffing and bondage.
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>>10634861

Alright, whatever you want, ya weirdos. They're back up.
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I'm most looking forward to the next chapter of Whipped Cream, the last chapter was pretty hot and heavy
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>>10639301
Noted. Right now I'm working on that Discord/Fluttershy story I brought up a few threads ago, but I can do the next chapter of "Whipped Cream" first thing afterwards.
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>>10639566
I still need to remember to do a pic for that, after the countless number of other pictures still in the queue, anyways. The first bit with Flitter getting hosed from both ends and basically trapping herself while trying to get free is just too unf.
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pop
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>>10639768
While I'm a fan of inflation via factory equipment, the second chapter detailing wet Pinkie was just muh gawd
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Riding a bomb gains new meaning when it's a pooltoy one. Hooray for pegasus-guided warheads, cheaper than computers in the long run.

One more page until the blimps, folks.
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>>10641666
That story is seriously good. I don't even enjoy fats and I'm hooked on it. Here's hoping the next chapter is just as unfworthy.
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Hit the target right on the dot, easy to do when the bomb is bigger than the target, but whatever. The seams are not looking very happy, though, and in that same fraction of a second I think some of the P-235 might be fissioning apart into a whole lot of helium from that forceful impact...

I did promise blimps next page. Will tackle it in the morning, though, need an early night here.
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>>10645905
Interesting timing there. I can't remember the last time a picture of this point in the bursting process—a bunch of tiny tears all over. Normally people draw the balloon (or pony) after they've blown a gaping hole, or they've been reduced to scraps.
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>>10645200
>>10639301
Link?
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>>10646491
They're talking about:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/347102/whipped-cream-other-delights
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>>10646203
Wanted to go for the very moment where the fission reaction's started, but still largely contained inside the bomb, which also is the very moment where most of the momentum gained from falling was transferred into the inflatable surface and as a result the mass of the pegasus had stopped accelerating having very largely deformed the pressurized vinyl, straining the seams heavily in the process.

I tend to prefer the gaping hole approach myself, just seemed like it worked better in this case if it were the seams just beginning to fail from all the pressure.
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Guess whats finally getting animated.

New audio, same basic idea.
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>>10648775
The hype is real.
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>>10648775
oh fuck yes, this looks like an actual storyboard from a tv show.
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>>10648775
Max hype engaged
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Splorch_bucket here with an update. I've actually been active the last couple days and ended up writing a decent amount. The funny thing is, most of the development went into a story I abandoned two paragraphs in months ago. It was going to be a short fic about Sombra toying with Luna and Celestia, but it spun out of control into an AU setting I'd like to do a couple of stories in. The first one is more or less just setting up the status quo for the setting. Well, that and Celestia Inflating and exploding a lot. Like really a lot. To the point where part of the status quo is that Celestia is either inflating or exploding at any given time. The other main characters will be Twilight and Luna. Before the story even starts Luna was mindbroken to the point of returning to Nightmare Moon, and now serves as a primary lieutenant for Sombra. Early on in the story, Twilight gets corrupted and ends up as succupone bookhorse. Sombra will be present, but distant. I may also make Sombra rule 63 to open opportunities later.

The main reason I'm telling people this, instead of just working on it and dumping it as I go, is to gather a few suggestions. Story 1 focuses primarily on Celestia getting the Prometheus treatment. Is there anything in particular someone would want to see? It's worth noting that this is going to have a darker gritty feel to it so things like "helium tank" don't exactly fit. It can also be expected to be consistently messy. What I have so far:
>Celestia incubates a particular type of shadow monster being used by Sombra's armies. She fills overtime with shadowstuff until it takes a form and bursts out. This is the default inflation that happens on a daily basis.
>Twilight's transformation takes place inside Celestia. Twilight exits from the front.
>Cum inflated to bursting by old members of her Day Guard
>Bellyful of crystals. Things get... pokey.
>SuccuTwi wants to show her old teacher some new spells she's been having fun with. There are several of these.
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>>10652725
Wow.
Hype as fuck, but holy shit, you're going dark. That said, I like it, a breath of fresh air amidst all the mild stuff.
Considering the mood so far I can suggest some sort of power boosting potions that have a complicated brewing process. Think cola and mentos.
I tried to think of something else, but ended up going full sado with not enough inflation.
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>>10652963
>Hype as fuck, but holy shit, you're going dark.
Its got some leftover stuff recycled from the Changeling story I dropped forever ago given that they share some of the same themes, but on the whole it should be much lighter than I planned that one to be. Humor can be expected to be present. Twilight may be a demon now, but she's still Purplesmart. Nightmare Moon is genuinely enjoying her newfound freedom. It isn't full-on grimderp, and there's no permadeath stuff planned. As I had said Celestia is getting the Prometheus treatment, so by definition she recovers from everything thrown at her by the next day at the latest. Bad ends are certainly normal, death of characters most certainly won't be.

I like the potions thing, she could certainly be a testbed for that kind of stuff.
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>>10652725
Maybe Sombra possesses the Elements of Harmony or Tree of Harmony, but he can't control them at all. They're still active and constantly seeking Bearers to overthrow Sombra's rule. To neutralize those effects, Twilight distills all that Harmonic Energy into liquid rainbow form, then pumps it all into Celestia until she bursts. This has to be done on a monthly basis. (Or maybe even weekly?)
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>>10639768
I hope this isn't piling too much onto your plate but... I got a comment just today from someone hoping "Of Apologies and Parties" could get some fanart love.
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>>10653807
I'd rather not touch on the elements, or their bearers, just yet. Its extremely tentative, but I'd like to eventually work around to a redemption arc for Twilight with a defeat of Sombra at the end of it. As such I'm not sure where I'm going with the elements yet. They shouldn't be brought up until they become relevant. This is all early stage for that stuff though, so it's subject to change as the narrative demands.

Though something similar (minus the bursting) was somewhat planned to be ongoing with Cadence and the Crystal Heart. Pic somewhat related.
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>>10648775
>that moment when she's wagglin her hooves before they become sucked in divots

Oh god yes
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>>10654247
So Cadance is absorbing the energy from the Crystal Heart, leaving her in a constant state of bloated immobility? I can dig it.
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>>10648775
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE^132856182365981236
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>>10654173
Eh, might consider it. Still have plenty to do yet, including someone who approached me yesterday about yet another sequence commish, but I can do with a few single pictures to break things up here and there.
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>>10648775
GOOD GOT IT'S HAPPENING
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Pre-bed sitrep; LAZCON 3 today, no pics tonight despite needing to draw and wanting to get two done, will be postponed to tomorrow night hopefully. If not, advance to LAZCON 2 and keep Strategic Art Command on the line.

Still have a few things planned, but I'll try and chip away at them over the rest of this week and the next. Something for pabs, finish the Tavi/Vinyl sequence off since I finally have a good idea to do so, maybe something involving Twilight Sloshle and/or fuller Flitter too, and commissions, naturally. One thing at a time, though.
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Discoshy (Fluttercord?) slapstick orgy update: about 5K words written so far.
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>>10664564
Bueno. How long do you think it'll eventually be?
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>>10665248
10K is my best guesstimate right now.
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Don't die on me, thread.
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>>10665339
Neat, that sounds like a lot happening to yellow birdhorse.
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Puff
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>>10668646
I'm shooting for "Roger Rabbit" levels of G-rated sadism. Here's hoping.
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How long before we see stuffing art/fics about this guy?

(Picrelated is official art from MLP: The Movie's facebook page.)
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>>10671322
hopefully never
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>>10671221

Eeeeexcellent. That's totally my jam. That's the sort of thing I aimed for during the climax of Sun and Moon Are Harsh Mistresses.
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>>10672418
>>10671322
Too late Anon.

This should be him after a few hours of non-stop Toon Boom pastries.
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>>10674299
Or I could not post the picture.
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>>10675725
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>>10623202
This kills the horse.
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>>10674308
meh
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>>10675725
>>10675735
>ulp ulp ulp
My favorite onomatopoeia out there.
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Whatever.
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After much frustration with wifi and videos buffering, I've finally finished that series with some blimps. P-235, despite fusing into helium when it undergoes fission and emits P-radiation is a very dense gas, so it does sink readily. This makes a gaseous P-235 canister shell very good for dealing with crowds, when you don't want to blind them with a big bright beautiful mushroom cloud of inflation.

I suppose my drawing mood wasn't quite as good as I thought it was tonight, but I'll still soldier on with the next pic as it's fairly cut and dry for what it is. More fun with P-235 ahead.
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Slapstick story is tentatively titled "Fluttershy's Wild Night". Current word count: about 7K.
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>>10681560
Does she reach sizes comparable to the Treehugger story?
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Don't say I didn't warn you this would happen, pabs. Night Strike is a mare who makes good on her promises.

Also wrote up a little story in the descriptions, too, here's a link for anyone who wants to give it a read; http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24284218/
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>>10682698
I can't make any promises, but I'll see what I can do.
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Late night bump.
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Pump
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>>10685822
What a lucky balloon.
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Rump
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>how Spitfire got her embarrassing nickname
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>>10682822

WOW

I think you're progressing through this part of weird fetishdom faster than I did. And you managed the tongue part a bit better than my attempts (thinking I went too big, like always).

Also I think that was the push I needed to figure out what I should be working on, since I'd been sort of floundering around on it the past few days. Gonna try and get out a sorta comic thing on the blog that introduces a weird inflation assistance device I came up with ages ago into the mix. I say this knowing full well that mentioning I'm doing a thing anywhere paradoxically makes my dumb brain not want to do it on that fact alone, but maybe by also mentioning _that_ it'll help me get over it, because I really fuckin need to.

I'd post a new thing if I had one, but as implied by the aforementioned floundering, I haven't finished anything in like, two weeks.
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>>10690169
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Its always awkward when something is summarized in three lines in the outline, but now I'm 2000 words deep and only at the second line.
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>>10693372
That just makes me more excited to see the finished product.
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>>10693372
>>10693690
I mean, I know firsthand how daunting it is to start a story you think will be easy, then get partway through and realize it's going to be much longer than you anticipated. Just, as long as it's an idea I'm personally excited about, the extra length usually means a finished story that I'm happier with.
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>>10682698
Update: I don't wanna spoil anything, but thanks a lot for asking this.
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>>10698655
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>>10697218
My pleasure, thanks a lot for the stories you do, I really enjoy them.
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Pre-bed sitrep; holding at LAZCON 3 once again, did not plug in my tablet once today. Aiming for at least three pictures tomorrow as a result.

In other news, some of you may be happy to hear that plans for finishing the Octavia/Vinyl sequence are next in the queue, and unlike earlier revisions will involve some more inflation of both musicpones.

>>10688964
Aye, looking at the sketches you did way back when the size of the tongues was a little overboard for incorporating them. It's all about finding the right proportions, which is weird to say when it involves turning someone's head into a glorified bouquet of differently-styled cloudbuster balloons. In some cases, with some parts of the anatomy, even in inflation less is more.

Definitely looking forwards to seeing whatever that WIAD is, always fun to find new ways to get pones or gryphs huge. If you want someone to keep hammering that idea in so you don't get the lazy on it, can oblige.
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>>10700521

One of the problems I used to have (an I guess still do) when finding new aspects to fetishize was always going way too overboard on it, almost on principle. I guess it does actually function as a sort of exploratory "how much of this thing can I take before boner says no" test, though. Only way I can find my limits is trial by fire, it seems.

Also thanks, I think I'm doing okay this time. Like I'm just now starting to try and break some of my years-old habits that I formed when I was in hiding, that have turned out to probably do more harm than good now that I'm out and about. Like my insistence on never showing a single part of a thing until it's completely totally done, which on larger projects leads to discouragement when I've had several days of hard work put into it and still nothing to show publicly, and in almost all cases ends in abandonment. So I'm gonna try and maybe post WIPs and progress stuff sometimes here and there. For instance, I got the first panel of the comic thing already done.

Granted, I probably won't post EVERY WIP and progress report somewhere like here, since most of it probably won't be relevant to the thread subject, and I'd feel bad for spamming this place with unrelated content, more than I already do about blogposting all the damn time. But I've got some discord friends and communities to bother and maybe get feedback from when I need it.
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>>10648775
It's working

IT'S WORKING
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>>10703992
Source, please?
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>>10704124
me
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>>10704162
Very nice.
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Welp. First draft of "Fluttershy's Wild Night" is nearly done. All the "good stuff" is written. Just gotta go back and add the prologue and setup now.
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>>10702548
Oh my god! Ridiculous Cake mod! I can't believe how close it is to the finish product!

Just one thing, Ridiculous Cake mod.
>New audio
Is there anywhere we can find a preview of the new audio, or will we have to wait until the full animation is finished?
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>>10703992
>Pinkie is the babysitter and spends the whole night stuffing her ward

I love this concept, could you do a follow up where Rarity comes home?
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>>10702548
We wait...
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>>10708025
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Oh, boy. My first draft of "Fluttershy's Wild Night" is done. 11K words. Now I just need to make some editing passes and wait for feedback from prereaders.

In the meantime, YOU can help me decide: Should I troll Fimfic with this story? Write up a long, long description that pushes all the kink tags below the "read more" button, so the most visible part of the synopsis looks indistinguishable from a normal Fluttercord clopfic. Worth it?
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>>10708576
If you're ambivalent about the inevitable flood of negative scores people would give a clopfic for fetishes they don't have, go for it.
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>>10708576
Considering that Fimfiction laps up pretty much any flavor of shit I doubt you'd get much of a rise out of it.
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>>10710049
Fair enough. I guess I'll save the trolling for when I do my "Screw you, everyone who's ever upvoted a minor cumflation story" fic.
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The VinTavia sequence reminds me of a potential writefriend we had, a potential story about inflationary playboy, and I blew it.

Confound these ponies. They drive me to drink.
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>>10702548
TOP-O-TH'-MORNING TO YA!
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>>10702548
It's pretty weird to see how fast this is moving along after wondering for months what would happen to the first version.
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Fwoomp
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another little update.
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>>10717183
What's with the dots over Twi's body? Does that help you animate?
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>>10717258
Just a texture/shading idea. Since the backgrounds are so realistic It contrasts well to make Twilight look like she's from a comic book.

Not sure if I'll keep it though.
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Sorry for the small dump, just getting the rest of this out of the way. Incidentally, did you guys know that where I come from, when someone says they'll be continuing something next week, they actually mean they'll be continuing it damn near a month and a half later?
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I'm not surprised if you didn't know that, because it doesn't mean that at all and I've just been astronomically lazy. But hey, puffy cellopone's back, baby, and she's only gonna get puffier and squeakier from here on, for the next five pages or so, anyways.
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Late night pump.
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Ignoring all the...OC stuff, I've always liked the inflated shape in this pic. So round. It's a nice take on the Spike At Your Service thing.
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>>10721108
I wonder what the ratio of Pinkie inflating others to being inflated herself is.
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>>10722773
Actually, that in itself is a bit of a paradox
You would expect her to be wild and wacky enough to inflate others, but then again, she is just as likely to inflate herself.
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>>10722921
She wants the world to be a parade, where everybody's a blimp
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Slow thread today, inn't it?
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>>10733080
Yep. I was hoping the Fluttershy-Discord story would've been posted by now, I guess the fimfiction prereader is having troubles.
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>>10733393
I'm waiting on one last pre-reader, who's a friend. Said he'd look it over tonight. If I don't hear from him by then, I'll just post it anyway.

Part of the reason editing is taking so long is because I was a bit premature in declaring my first draft done. Based on pre-reader feedback, I wound up expanding one scene near the end A LOT.
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>>10733737
That's good to hear, I can only edge for so long
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What's the best way to take the edge off of an especially strong brew of tea? Milk and sugar, naturally! Though, I'm not sure if Octavia remembers precisely what she'd put in the milk a while back... or knows about Vinyl's own slight mixing as well...

Gigantic griffblimp in the window unrelated.
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>>10738097
Loving the hair. Also made me realise just how hot Tavi would be with long mane framing her head
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>You sit tight, Luna, the refill should be here in ten minutes.
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Everyone, your patience has been rewarded. Fluttershy and Discord's orgy of slapstick has been submitted, and should go live soon.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/380590/fluttershys-wild-night
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>>10743805
>Detailed scene about bloated Fluttershy being smushed flat and all her blubber stretching out

That was great
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>>10717183
2 of 6 sequences down.
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>>10748362
I like the look of Twiball, but the dots are kind of distracting in my opinion.
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>>10748362
Hhyyppee
That's two "Hype"s merged
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>>10743805

>Read story
>Enjoy story
>Reach artist's comment
>Cites you, in particular, as an inspiration and says you're the best
>mfw

I feel kinda bad hijacking your suggestion and turning it over so quickly, and I'm sorry if that put any...undue pressure on you. Yeah, I know,
>holyshittwocakes.jpg
But, thank you for the kind words and thank you for writing this.
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>>10743805
>This story is rated M for graphic depictions blahblahblah
Hey, I thought you wanted to hold back on trolling for now. Still got a smile out of me
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>>10748362
>>10748776

Yeah, it looks like someone walked by and thought she'd love super sweet with one of those hydrographic patterns on her. But when they tried to dip her in the water, she was too big to fit in the container, so it just transferred on that one little part of her.
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>>10750122
I was aiming more for silliness than trolling, this time. I did make the whole description JUST short enough that it wouldn't get collapsed under a "read more" button. Which I think means it's not my fault anymore if the reader doesn't look at the whole description.

>>10749581
You've got nothing to apologize for, man. Honestly, writing this was some of the most fun I've had in a while.
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Octavia's only now realized that she used the wrong milk, and to compound things Vinyl's apparently gone and bought a peculiar brand of granulated sugar as well, both of which currently are mixed in with their tea. This will certainly end well for all involved - or, well, at least the viewing public at home who enjoy watching music mares end up as big squeaky balloons.

Here's hoping for two parts tonight if I can hold off the lazy.
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>>10752485
And for some behind-the-scenes stuff...

My initial idea was for the epilogue scene to happen in Fluttershy's bedroom. That would have put a hard limit on how big she could be in that scene, so I was just planning on not inflating her any bigger than room-sized. But this fine anon >>10682698 got me to consider going bigger, and wondering how to pull it off. So that's why the epilogue's in Discord's home dimension instead, and why I completely threw my self-restraint out the window for the last inflation bit.

Also, my initial plan for the final inflation itself was for Flutters to get her head crammed into a tea kettle, then crash into a water tank (or some other liquid). The spout pierces the side of the tank, and the water pours through the spout to inflate Flutters. But I thought of the waffle setpiece later and liked it even better as the story's climax. By that point, the rest of the story was outlined thoroughly enough, I couldn't rework the tea kettle inflation into any earlier points. So that concept had to go, but I'm still a bit disappointed I didn't get to write it.
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Got out a thing while I was working on that other story sequence thing, wherein I practice more big bloated headshapes. Used to always have trouble showing the neck connecting or obscuring the body a bit, so I'm gonna try and tilt them back a bit when I can.

>>10718444
>>10738097
>>10752791

Hey cool, more musichorse balloons. Really enjoying how ridiculously soft Tavi looks in each of these, and kinda also liking the concepts of doing daily/casual tasks while ballooned.

>that window view

oh my god yes

I swear if you keep this up someone's going to start building a timeline to catalog our universes' DEEP LORE.
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>>10753683
I'm very glad I made that comment then, as bigger is better.
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>>10755065

The My Little Pony Inflated Body Part Cinematic Universe.
MLPIBPCU.
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>>10756737

Don't think I won't do it myself. The relatively "clinical" aspects of some of my early stuff (here's a pone blowing up in a purple void with no context whatsoever) was actually an intentional departure from my usual methodology of interconnecting EVERYTHING and thinking up some kind of halfway logical reason for everything that happened in my non-fetish works. As I have recently reconsidered my stance on never letting those two fields cross, I have no idea how deep the rabbit hole is about to go.

In fact, here's the reason behind how the situation in this >>10755065 very image came to be.

>>10743805

I may never truly enjoy the whole spectrum of cartoon shenanigans to the degree that our buddy Pablote does, but that was a hell of a trip regardless. Inflations were good, and there's basically fuckall for good flattening writings out there, so I'm pretty overjoyed to see it done well at all. Personally might have enjoyed that bit (on flutters) a little more if she didn't get stretched skinny before even getting fully spread out, staying a massive flat rug for a bit, some multiplicative degree wider than her fattened/inflated body just was. But I imagine that'd be hard to connect into the rest of the unending cascade of absurd happenings that was the overall narrative for this lunatic story, so it's cool.

Ending was of course pretty great, as well. Think I mentioned before that I usually don't care as much when they become unrecognizable and are just a tremendous blob/balloon, but the specific details about HOW absurdly tremendous she was this time (especially the cutie marks, hnnng) made this into an exception for me.

tl;dr 10/10 do more fgt


>>10749581
You too, you inspirational person you.
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Pooltoyification on both sides and P-235-infused sugar is a fun combo. At least Vinyl was courteous enough to save Tavi's favorite mug this time around.

>>10757312
I don't see why that'd be considered a bad idea, there's nothing wrong with ingesting inflationarily radioactive metals en masse. The results really speak for themselves, even if Linework can't.

I dunno what it is, I just like knitting in little nods in the background of images here and there, sorta making everything loosely linked in a coherent narrative. Part of the reason why I got that pic of Pabs getting to know Night Strike done so fast was because I've got other plans for the pegasus in the works and wanted her to have a clear schedule, even if I didn't get to 'em right away. It's just fun, really.

Will admit that that initialism is a mouthful. Howsabout something a bit simpler, like the P-235-verse or something, I dunno. It's 20 to 4 here, I'm too tired ti think of a good one.
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>>10757312
Also, to be honest I'm actually kinda tempted to work out a little map of the rough area wherein most of these puffy occurrences happen, and the respective structures and landmarks that go with them. Figure out where stuff such as the Gusty/Bang/Line residence is when it isn't riding atop a gigantic gryphon's plumage, the Ponyville-adjacent airfield where all manner of bombs, rockets, and pegasi with inflationary grenade rifles (and possibly gryphons with inflationary 20mm autocannons) can be found, the house where a government-funded (because he's a good source of amusement for Celestia) mushroom-cloud-loving pegasus inventor blows stuff up from, the scrapyard an irritable earth pony mare runs and supplies him and a diving pegasus with material from, the various lakes and former winter battlefields in the area, and maybe even the river-adjacent paper mill another earth pony lives out of.

Whatever adjacent corner of Ponyville all these things occupy is gonna be pretty dang busy, and big.
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>>10757423
>>10757588

Dude, background gags/references are the best, and I'd do more of them myself if I ever drew a background that wasn't a cloudy sky or empty field.

I've given my own thoughts to at least making a concrete floorplan for Bangline House, but figured I'd end up either forgetting or finding some other reason to not always stick to it. Though I suppose I could make a running gag of it always being different because they destroy it so often with their ongoing shenanigans.

Never even thought about making a larger area map, though that was when I was on my own, and it was basically just "giant field on the outskirts of Ponyville" anyway. But given that I'm already mentioning and sorta giving my own interpretation of Line and Night Strike's relationship in this silly thing I'm working on, I think we've already passed the point of no return on world merging. And as mentioned just previous, I actually really enjoy lore and worldbuilding, I just was always sorta hesitant of cramming it into a primarily fetish-oriented medium.

I dunno, maybe it's finally time we jump the hurdle of only ever communicating through a 4chan thread and start bothering one another on discord or something.
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>>10757312
>Ending was of course pretty great, as well. Think I mentioned before that I usually don't care as much when they become unrecognizable and are just a tremendous blob/balloon, but the specific details about HOW absurdly tremendous she was this time (especially the cutie marks, hnnng) made this into an exception for me.

Holy crap, thanks. Honestly, I expected I'd lose some readers by taking the final inflation scene that far. But I just said, "Screw it. I'm pandering to myself for this scene, and no one's gonna stop me." So, hearing I made it connect for someone who isn't into that inflation approach is pretty surreal.

And send some love to Not Worthy. He gave me some great advice on how to turn my (not very good) first draft of the ending, into the version you read.
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>>10757786
Eh, a rough floorplan wouldn't hurt, some things can benefit from having a definite layout - give an example, someone actually managed to create a pretty damn close recreation of the Mystery Shack from Gravity Falls in a videogame, purely because the show stayed so accurate as far as the layout of the place was concerned.

Yes, I know I'm comparing a well-thought-out and lovingly crafted Disney show to a couple of guys at their computers making art about fucking massive (and/or massive fucking) ballooned technicolor horses, but still.

Heh, personally wouldn't think Night Strike would go quite so far as to immediately pass on a copy of every new toy she gets her hooves on to Linework, but keeping her topped up on enough forty-mil grenades to make sure she can have fun would definitely be in the cards. Doesn't mean she couldn't 'accidentally' drop a piece of equipment from her plane in such a way that it always lands right outside of their hose while Line is the only one there to see the impact every now and again, though. Whoever says fetishes have no place in a lore-rich worldbuilding situation, or vice-versa, has obviously never read Fallout: Equestria.

Aye, prolly wouldn't hurt. Not on discord much but it is an option, more reliably on Steam, we can swap info via FA notes later. For now... I should probably really get to sleep before the birds start chirping again.
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though I used to fucking hate balloon butts the series is making it grow on me.
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>>10738097
>tea heating up (or gas sugar adding to) the air
>>10752791
>gas sugar kicking off
>>10757423
>latex milk showing its effects
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>>10743805

Alright, I, Pablote, have dilly-dallied long enough and it's time I put on my serious business hat and give actual feedback.

I was pleasantly surprised at how..."normal" the food factory setting was. Knowing you, I was expecting more along the lines of Evil Expandtress, since setting it in Discord's realm gives you carte blanche to make everything as nonsensical as you could possibly imagine. So I appreciate the restraint, and yet you were still able to get really creative with a lot of the gags.

One big difference between the way you and I write is that you're very detail-oriented, and I was wondering if you were gonna try to do something more fast-paced, or a series of distinct set pieces like your other stuff, since taking the time to describe everything can bog down the pacing of a story. Which is fine in a story where the pretenses don't matter so much and we just wanna embiggen the pone and describe it happening in detail some might call pornographic. In some spots, you did sacrifice detail in favor of simply describing things as they happened, and it read super quick and super easy. Fluttershy scooting along the factory floor smacking her face on every low-hanging thing sticks out in my mind. Other times, you got a little too bogged down obsessively describing stuff. I know that sometimes it can't really be helped, like if you have a technically complex gag with an elaborate setup or with multiple things happening at once. But when Fluttershy is catching lightning jars as they fall, and although you sped along the descriptions to keep the pacing up, you still took the time to describe every jar that falls off, where she catches them, how many of each are on each limb, how she's adjusting her stance to keep them balanced, etc. In stories like these, pacing should take priority over everything. The best of these kinds of slapstick cartoons always strive to be visually interesting and well-animated.
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>>10743805
>>10763706

So, there's a certain sort of economy of description that happens. Describe things sufficiently that the audience can picture it in their heads, but quick enough that they're seeing it in their heads in (roughly) real time, as if they were watching it happen in front of them. And you demonstrate wonderful comedic timing here, moreso than in any of your other stories. You have a good instinct for setting up and paying off jokes, so that's something I wouldn't mind seeing more of in your future stuff. You say that you don't enjoy the full bevy of cartoon violence like I do, and yet Fluttershy's muffled screaming face-first in the floor while her flat, stretched-out butt was repeatedly abused was more unf than I can admit without shamefully questioning if I'm some kind of sadistic psycho pervert. I don't know if that's what you meant when you said that, I just felt like that needed to be said.

Overall, I really enjoyed it! I wouldn't mind at all if you wanted to write something like this again. You said yourself, there really isn't any more of this stuff out there.

So, see pony slapstick fetish fics not as they are, but as they could be. The internet needs more pony slapstick fetish fic writers. *Overwatch theme*
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what the fuck are you people doing, writing fucking essays about kiddie-tier inflation fetishism
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One upside to the whole pooltoy thing, pooltoys were made to be easily deflatable when needed. Octavia's favorite fleece robe survives for a while longer.

Also this image really does not want to upload in full res here. Best to nab it off derpibooru if you want it in its 3382x2443-pixel glory for whatever reason.
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>>10763706
>difference between the way you and I write
Not him, but I still want to point out - while most of your points are true to a degree, you guys are different. I can see what you're talking about, but personally I enjoyed the story as is - even though inflation for me is just a fetish and comedic gags aren't my thing. Despite what I think you're implying, the over-detalization. If that even is a word.
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>>10767998
Oh, a 4k by 3k image goes up just fine from my laptop, but 3382x2443? Nope, broken, apparently contains an embedded file when I know for a fact it bloody doesn't. Fuckin' 4chan sometimes, seriously.
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>>10763706
>>10763723
Thanks a lot for the feedback. I definitely see where you're coming from about the pace of the whole thing. I'll keep it in mind if I do another story like this in the future.

>I was pleasantly surprised at how..."normal" the food factory setting was.
I think at one point I wanted to set the scene in a sort of Wackyland, because Discord. But I changed it because I agree with the point I think you're getting at, that going too surreal and ignoring logic / cause-and-effect ("It's chaos magic. I don't need to explain shit!") hurts a story like this one. Because the twisted in-universe logic is a huge part of the appeal for me. If inflation is sex, then all the convoluted coincidences that set up the inflation are foreplay. And you can't really get that in a dimension where literally anything can happen for no reason.

>You say that you don't enjoy the full bevy of cartoon violence like I do,
I guess for me, all those other forms of slapstick are also a kind of foreplay. Great as a lead-up to inflation, but not things I enjoy for their own sake.
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By some magnificent stroke of luck, I managed to get this sequence finished before the end of July, so officially the Octavia/Vinyl series has finally concluded on a pleasant note. Vinyl will be fully deflated before Octavia is, for obvious reasons, the horrible tea will be binned, and Vinyl still doesn't fully realize that Octavia is all about getting turned into a blimp.

Well, for now, anyways.
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>>10748362
more than halfway done now, should be up by the weekend.
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>>10772663
awww yiss
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>>10772663

...Okay, I love that this is finally happening, and I'm hyped for it and everything, but I have to say something. So, this looks like this is you firmly committing to the dot pattern...thing on the side of Twilight. Please get rid of the dot pattern. It looks like crap. It doesn't make her look shaded on that side. It doesn't conform to the shape of her body, which is painfully evident in >>10748362 , where it just goes flatly across the curvature of her body, over her inflated leg and hoof on a layer completely separate from everything else. It doesn't even look like it's being projected on her body, it looks like a watermark or something. It looks like you took a pre-made square of a simple pattern and just slapped it somewhere on her body in every sequence with little care or thought.

If you have a way to justify it, like it looks better in motion, or that it is, in fact, a watermark, by all means, tell us. But from the way it looks now, please. Please, please, please get rid of the dots.
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>>10772663
Oh wow...that face, those puckered lips...
The hype is real
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>>10628970
>>10717836
>>10738097
>>10752791
>>10757423
>>10765776
>>10770783
>they'll never float
Great sequence by the way.
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>>10776397
There can always be two versions and people can decide which they like better.
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>>10776397
did you really make a huge post about the dots? jesus christ you sound like a whiny baby.
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>>10776397
You're just making me want to keep the dots more man.
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>>10782035
Then please, don't bother finishing it. Nobody wants to see your animation if it's covered in shitty dots, nor are we interested in supporting you and your bad attitude.
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She may have lasted longer than the last recruit, but that tank is still nowhere near empty. And judging by those creaking noises, she might not be Wonderbolt material after all.
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What if they're like, not dots at all, just miniature inflated ponies?
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>>10782173
As an outside observer, you're the only one with a bad attitude here, matey. Howsabout instead of getting your panties all bunched up because someone's putting a lot of work into something a lot of us want to see done and not doing it in the way you'd like, you go out and make your own magic backup twipop animation, eh?

Come back when you've got that telephone pole removed from your butt.
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>>10782251
Content creators are beholden to their audience, not the other way around. If you refuse to make the changes we wish to see, then you're simply not welcome.
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>Responding to an obvious falseflag
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>>10782301
At the same time, content creators don't owe their audience shit. Unless you're paying the guy to make it, which I highly doubt, you really don't have much of an argument going for ya.

Shunning artists because they didn't do something exactly how one specific anonymous person wanted it, now that's definitely a way to keep content flowing freely.
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>>10777834
>>10782173
>>10782251
>>10782301
>>10782382

>...Okay, I love that this is finally happening, and I'm hyped for it and everything
Jesus fucking christ, you people. I never said he shouldn't make the animation, I'm just as excited as everyone else. It's just one annoying little nitpick that I knew would be easier to fix now than later. I realize that we're getting this for free, and I realize that CDT's well within his rights to make whatever artistic decisions he wants, and is perfectly free to consider or ignore any critique or feedback he gets. I never said the dots are ruining everything, I just said they look like crap, cause that's my opinion. If there are dots, then I'll just have to learn to live with them or learn how to make my own animation catering to my own tastes, cause that's the way things go. I'm sorry that everyone got upset over this, but I'm not trying to troll anyone and I'm not saying anything is ruined. We will all carry on, the animation will be awesome, and everything will be FINE.
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>>10783876
What happened to that interactive dream lesson thing that was going on a few threads ago. I enjoyed it.
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>>10782668
>>10782301
>>10782173
>>10776397
>when you whine like a spoiled toddler over a tiny nitpick and the whole thread tells you to shut the fuck up but you defend yourself using anti-logic while simultaneously still insulting the artist who the rest of us actually like
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>>10785137
On a side note, I hope ridiculouscake doesn't even bother with a dotless version just to spite this fucker.
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Does EVERYBODY properly read ALL of the previous posts in the thread? Regarding this whole backlash of the dots, I posted >>10717258 asking what the dots were for, thinking logically that they wouldn't be featured in the final product, to which Ridiculouscake replied with >>10717925 . Would it not be an occurrence to think that the dots are a technique to help him animate, or perhaps a "shading idea" as he mentioned? And look at the image file names:
>color test (number).png
>color test
>test

Now, as I asked before, does everybody properly read every post in the thread? I know some people do, but after seeing this argument over dots when the point of the dots has clearly been made, obviously not everybody...
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>>10785955
wELL ThEn, you should have replied to >>10717925
with
"I don't think they look very good. Can you maybe make a version without them?"
Instead of, y'know, insulting everyone.
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>>10782324
It really is an art, derailing the thread like that. If only it happened more often.
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>>10765676
Not as funny as mr. Kown guy
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>>10788794
On a side note, I'm kind of glad I missed this derailing. It kind of makes me sad seeing somebody gets so overly offended at just one little detail a certain artist makes.
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Alright, I can't keep silent anymore. The "dots look like shit" person is me, Pablote. I don't want anyone to think I'm trying to hide behind internet anonymity, I'll own up to this. I'm sorry. I really, really didn't mean what I said as an insult towards CDT or his work. I have a huge amount of respect for CDT, and I love his stuff. When I said "lazily slapped it on" I didn't mean to imply that the whole thing was lazy, poorly put together, or that he isn't busting his ass working on this for our sake, I meant that (at the time) I couldn't ascertain the purpose of the dots, and so there didn't seem to be much rhyme or reason where they were placed.

Now-- I'm not trying to defend what I said. Quite the opposite. There are so many other, better ways I could have brought the issue up, but I didn't take any of those. No, I hadn't read that post about it being a test and him probably not keeping it. If I had, I wouldn't have written that whole thing. I was in a bad mood, the dots annoyed me, and I impulsively wrote a rant with a really hostile tone. I woke up, re-read what I wrote, thinking that it was a lot more angry-sounding than I remember it being when I wrote it. And, of course, a handful of people jumped down my throat in response, so I got defensive. I thought about apologizing more thoroughly then, and owning up to what I said rather than stay anonymous, but I chickened out at the last second.
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>>10789539

Now-- do I still care about the dots? Fuck no. It was a nitpick to begin with, enough to get me to impulsively write a post complaining about them, but it's definitely not worth derailing the thread over. Not worth feeling this guilty all day for fucking the thread up and then not admitting that I did it when I had the chance. Over fucking dots. Whether or not he keeps them, I don't care. I respect his artistic integrity, and he can do whatever he wants with the sequence, color and shade the thing however he wants. I just want this argument to definitvely be over with. I'm sorry. I take it all back. Board-- I'm sorry. CDT-- no hard feelings, really.

To make up for this in a productive way, I'm throwing myself to the mercy of the rest of the thread. I'm taking requests for fitting punishments to suffer from for the shit I caused and any feelings I hurt. I figured the board could use some more OC, and I'm looking for more ways to practice drawing. And if you want to vindictively say that my stuff sucks and hurl insults my way, go ahead. That counts as a fitting punishment, too, although I'll ask nicely ahead of time that I'd prefer we channel this through art rather than keeping the hate going around.
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>>10787050
That wasn't me! I'm not the one complaining about the dots! I like Ridiulouscake's art. Why would I insult him or anyone on here?
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>>10789550
Well, you're certainly a cute little colt. I think sitting on an air compressor until your big white belly is covered in bright red stretch marks would be a fitting punishment.

Then, let CDT do as he wishes.
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>>10789605
And Pablote, I'm sorry too. All I was trying to get at was the "dots look like shit" guy should have read all of the posts on the thread to see what CDT was explaining with the dots so they wouldn't have to nitpick. Realising it was you, I thought you would have been one of the people here to read all posts on the thread to see what has been happening.

I just want us all to move on from this and not make CDT regret making this animation, because it was for US, the users of the thread, and we should be grateful for it.
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>>10776397
>>10782668

For transparency's sake, I'll clarify that these two posts are mine.
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>>10789680

Thank you.
Normally I am, but that one just kinda slipped through the cracks, I guess.
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I say we all just take a breath, step back, and be pleasantly happy that regardless, this thread's 23 posts to the bump limit anyways and we can start off with a fresh one relatively soon. This place is largely drama-light most of the time, let's not let this bleed over into the next.

>>10789550
...at least, beyond the inventive ways we can think of to properly abuse Parchment and give pabs some reason to draw ballooned pones rather than just write them. Perhaps sucking on a pair of bellows in the hooves of an orange apple horse might be a fair punishment as well.

But, really dude, you don't have to draw anything to apologize, it wasn't entirely your fault the thread went and asploded over it. Takes a village, and all.

On a side note, is that a copy-pasted cutie mark there? Lazy, lazy... (jk, your art seriously looks pretty great for only now getting serious about it)
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Let's just hit this bump limit so we can put this all in the past already
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>>10789954
Ooh, ooh, wait, better idea, after the bellows aren't going fast enough, AJ recruits Big Mac and his Big Lungs to properly give Parchment some puffing. Maybe.

That scene from the first chapter of Breathers remains to be one of my absolute favorites just on principle of a big stallion puffkissing a smaller pony. It's just so unf.
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Regarding the dots thing, remember that EVERYONE eventually has a bad day. Even the nicest fucker you see on the street has flipped their shit once in their life. The sad thing about the internet is that since everything is so immediate, we don't actually get a chance to truly think out our responses before we throw them up.

I just wanna say thanks for making great stuff for us, CDT, and good on you pablote for owning up to your messages. A true douchebag would have stayed behind the veil, the fact that you stepped out speaks volumes about your character

Finally, for the real reason I jumped on, the Pinkocalypse has started. I'm halfway through the first inflation. Coincidentally, it's Flutters on the block. She's getting some real love lately.
Also, because I can't help myself, there's some shipping in the first chapter. I SHOULD have it done by the weekend, but no promises.
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>>10772663
I think this could be better if they were smaller, a bit darker, and did follow the body more. But I think it's a great idea to try something different :3
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>>10789550
I'm just really looking forward to that Chryasalis story, desu.
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I kind of want this thread to reach its limit so we can start a new thread fresh in the morning.
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Pop imminent
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I'm gonna level with you...I have no idea how to do stretch marks, nor am I into them, so I don't really know what to do. Hope this is a good enough job.
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>>10794056
That's actually pretty good. Consider yourself forgiven.
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>>10794169

Thank you. There weren't a lot of good refs for this one, so I was flying by the seat of my pants on this one.

Alright, I'm gonna pick this back up in the next thread. I have one and a half requests lined up. Anyone have any more suggestions?
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Fuckin autism levels are off the charts here
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>>10782187
source?
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>>10795215
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>>10795220
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>>10789550
>>10794056
U-Unf
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>>10794038
Holy sweet unf grenades of Unfioch, I did not expect this one to mash as many buttons for me as it did. Probably just forgot that this sorta situation is just so goddamn good on it's own. Absolutely marvelous.

I, for one, wholeheartedly welcome this new era of Pabloat.
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>>10623202
>complaining about complaining
>apologizing for complaining
>revealing oneself after shitposting
>wanting to get back on good terms
>not going batshit insane at each other
You all are by far the least infl fag like of infl fags. You all are simply nice. Why are you all so fucking nice?
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>>10794555
Bring Mr. Kown back please.
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>>10795558
At risk of digging up an old as hell meme, love and fucking tolerate, baby.

We're all chill here, we just wanna see pones get huge and puffy. Drama only rarely comes up, and when it does, well... see above. We let other threads deal with the neverending drama shit.

It could also have something to do with the massive amounts of chemicals left in the water after that rubber ducky tanker truck explosion incident, but whatever.
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BUMP LIMIT ACQUIRED
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>>10795662
>not organs from exploded animals
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