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CYOA Refuge Thread - A thread for posting any and all CYOAs

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CYOA Refuge Thread - A thread for posting any and all CYOAs unpostable in /tg/'s /cyoag/ (and occasionally ones that aren't).

Previous thread: http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10584477

/cyoag/'s CYOA archives and related resources: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

And remember: If the CYOA calls for rolling (or you just feel like leaving something up to fate), use random.org (or physical dice, or something else that isn't your postnumber).
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>>10611242
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>>10611247
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>>10611268
Fingers crossed for part 4 today!
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>>10611407
"Yes please Tokhaar-san! Cum and shit down my neck!! I'll eat all of your shit if only you would stay with us, Yum! Yum!"
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>>10611407
Well he did post an unfinished version of it by mistake. You can still see it on Desuarchive.
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>>10611453
>You can still see it on Desuarchive.
I didn't notice him delete it. I thought he was just retarded, but now I think he might be retarded.
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>>10611247
>>10611268
The hell is TOK smokin, I'm concerned for you man.

Graymane
7th deviant
Lucy

Motherfucker

Butt-maid

Warfs daughter
Ring of binding
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>>10611424
Oh my god, you're right! I hate Tok now! GRRR!

Wait nevermind, I dont and continue to enjoy his work despite drama. ANONS GONA FREAK!!
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Can anyone upload 'waifu blues' cyoa?
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>>10611499
When your reputation is far enough down the drain, you can shitpost as much as you want without worrying about anyone thinking any less of you than they already do. He doesn't have to hold back now.
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>>10611621
I enjoy his work as well, I am just a bit dissapointed that he lets a vocal majority decide his course of action.

It sucks since it punishes all the people who actually enjoy his works and want to see more. Even if a work is a flop it is still opt in or opt out.

Like if you just wanted to stop making cyoas anymore that is fine. But complaining something is disrespectful and leaving basically does nothing to harm those who would alter it anyways and denies people who didn't alter his content new content.

Basically you are punishing those who are innocent for the fault of someone else.
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what's your favorite dom-oriented CYOA?
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>>10611727
You could go ask /tg/, or even get it directly from Beri's Google Drive (link in the pastebin).
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>>10611828
I thin hes going to continue The End for a bit longer then maybe take a break or just go start the next one right after and post it with a "Yeah shit happened and you can enjoy it or not because of that but here it is and I'm going to keep on going"
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>>10611840
The ones where I pick the dom that doms me ;^)
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>>10611212
>Amazing lewd CYOA author shows up
>Makes a bunch of dope shit
>Quits because a handful of people who probably don't actually even consume their work are mean.
>Author quits

Like they can do whatever they want, but why not just post OC somewhere else? Makes no sense to post your work somewhere that's known for having horrible, uneducated opinions then getting mad at said shit opinions. Like why would you put yourself in a position where you'll for sure get retards criticism regardless of the merit of your work if you can't ignore it?
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>>10611927
Because he's an attention whore and this is the only place that will give him any response.
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>>10611828
It's a really childish way to handle criticism. He seems to think he's standing up for himself, but he's literally just throwing a tantrum and making threats, probably hoping that people will start to beg him not to leave.
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>>10612499

Alter brest size -1
Lactation -1
Special milk x 2 -2
-Size Change
-Age Reversal

Big Penis (18')
Bestial -2 (Dog cock, or horse one)

Big Balls
Upgraded Boosted Cum Profuction -2

Super Strechy Vagina -1
Selective Fertility -2

Height 4'10"
Body type loli
Number of futas 1 third
Futas are normal

Social Status Worship

Aphroditic beauty -1
Everyone is beautiful -1
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>>10612499
Can't I just have futa waifu? I'd rather be stay myself
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>>10613018
be and stay *
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>>10613018
Do like, whatever you want, man.
It's not like reddit can stop you.
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>>10613018
The CYOA already has exactly such an option - ' Not I! ' at the bottom left, so... what was the problem again?
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>>10613018
/trash/ - Reading Comprehension
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>>10611242
>>10611247
>>10611268
OC!
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Looks like the author finally released the updated version.
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I havent been here in a few days. Is anon writing the new trap cyoa still working or did he get discouraged by those faggots whining about the imaginary enemas?
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Reposting my request from last thread

>Can you add a option to the penis and balls section that makes your cum tasty?

>And maybe remove the length restriction on the bullet vibrators option? I'd like to make a build where my owner uses my always erect large cock to flavor their meals and drinks, and with hair trigger, the vibrators are a good option to get their flavoring on demand.

>Or, just add an option where my owner gets a trigger word that will spontaneously make me orgasm?
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>>10613822
They're still working on it! They posted am update last thread
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>>10614022
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>>10613636
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>>10613636
>implying I'll even open this
stop spamming this shit and kill yourself already
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>>10613636
Your not supposed to take the bait bro.
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>>10613768
>Pill Type
X-Change Plus

>Modifiers
Clone

>Circumstance
Vengeful Ladyfriend

>Mental Changes
No.

Time to get paid $10,000 to get dommed hard.
This is going to hurt, and I'm going to love it.
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>>10611212
Can we go back to /d/ yet?
Are people going to start making OC yet?
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>>10614128
>Stop spamming this shit and kill yourself already
I see, so you choose "Work In The Salt mines" (pic related)
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>>10613636
>"I-I was only pretending to be retarded g-guys.. I-It's all part of my master keikaku!"
Epic ruse Tok, truly epic.
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Literally Tok.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8eXbI_iIE_o
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>>10614388
>A CYOA author made a CYOA about how he will quit making CYOAs. There is no sarcasm at all in CYOA.
Do you want some intelligence with your intelligence, because I can see you are very intelligent.
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What's a good place to get images for a cyoa?
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I'm using gurochan to find mine.
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>>10614320
I'll get back to working on mine after I put my laundry away. My desk chair is covered in pajamas.
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>>10615017
>My desk chair is covered in pajamas.

post panties
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>>10615493
I'm not wearing any.
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>>10615520

Pardon my disbelief, but I require photographic evidence as proof of your unlikely claim.
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>>10615536
Sorry, I'm too much of pansy to send nudes.
I beg your forgiveness, but understand if you are unwilling to give it.
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>>10615630

Post panty drawer.
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>>10615663
Right then, back to work.

On a cyoa related note, if you were a brain worm in charge of a legion of parasitic/symbiotic creatures, what kind could you absolutely not do without?

I have quite a few ideas of my own, I'm just interested to see what others might want.
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Dynastylights here.

Okay.... I may or may not have gone a little crazy with the MILF CYOA...

I added more Body options.

Another Breast size option.

Hopefully, I fixed some the grammar mistakes as well.

I'll be adding Hips and Ass options later. I need to rest.

I've added a few more Bachelors and two new Perks. Increased the perk limit to six. Cause with 20 different Perks? I think I kinda had to.

Well, here it is!

Hopefully, It's having some size problems.

1/1
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>>10616026
Is this a CYOA for ants?
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Dynastylights here.
>>10616026
Fucking hell...
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>>10616057
>>10616040
>>10616026
Ha. Ha aha ah ha ha!
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>>10616026
When will you change that hideous background to some more muted?
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>>10616026
Did you resize it by mistake?
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>>10615970
>actually posted your panty drawer

I was honestly planning on complaining about how you're being terrible for my attempts to gain a new fetish when you didn't post it. Good job, and I'm a fan of the striped ones.

>brain worm

Also not a fetish I have, but some sort of control over the development of your host's body would be nice. Not saying you need to be able to go full blown shapeshifter, or even include genderswapping like everything else does, but having the ability to change fat distribution and hormones would open a lot of doors for minor shifting. (growing or shrinking breasts/penis, looking more masculine or feminine, controlled muscle development regardless of physical activity)
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>>10615970
Hivemind of varying degrees of effectiveness from communicating via some sort of weird pheromones in the air to full blown telepathy internet
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Dynastylights here.

>>10616040
I hope they enjoy it

...

...

...

Anyone know how scale down the resolution of a picture?

Apparently, it's too large for me to post my CYOA.
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>>10616026
>>10616057
Change the fucking background colour, dumbass.

No matter how much you improve the cyoa, if it keeps that horrible shade of purple, your cyoa will go unposted forever because no-one wants to read a cyoa that's in such an atrocious colour.
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>>10615970

What level of intelligence do the symbiotes/parasites have? The host and symbiote being able to communicate would be neat if they're intelligent enough for abstract thought. More so if they live longer than humans/hosts.
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>>10616468
>Anyone know how scale down the resolution of a picture?
Which editor are you using?
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>>10616468
Why not take the lazy route and make it 2 pages?
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>>10616468
>Anyone know how scale down the resolution of a picture?
Yes, if using Photoshop. The easiest would be saving the image then ctrl+T and draggin at the corner (remember to hold down shift to keep the dimensions).
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>>10615970
>On a cyoa related note, if you were a brain worm in charge of a legion of parasitic/symbiotic creatures, what kind could you absolutely not do without?

Something that let me hijack bodies for my own personal use.

Being a human is great, from our opposable thumbs to our genitals, which everyone in here probably agrees are pretty great, at the very least in the top 2% of all dicks and vaginas across the animal kingdom.

Even if I had control of a parasitic legion, I'd still want to be able to have a body, even if it's just something to pilot around when I'm not plotting to make all of humanity submit to my rule.
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>>10616540
>Being a human is great
The best choice considering the other choices available? Yes.
Great? No.
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>>10616540
I intend the player to be able to choose between being a free worm, building a body out a symbiotic organism or colony, or taking a host and changing it to varying degrees.

>>10616481
Depending on how I type it out, spawn intelegence will either be a broad purchase, or predetermined on certain units. Like having clever infiltrators and control nodes, while the little things that stimulate a host's fluid production or build structures are driven by simple instinct and require oversight to accomplish complex tasks.

>>10616408
Pheromones and telepathy are in. Lack of a hivemind would only go in if I mess around with drawbacks.

I really, REALLY, like hiveminds.

>>10616332
Definitely letting you have fun with a hosts body. I'm thinking a host can have minor hormonal shifting, with a perk they can take to really move the meat around, while those going with a colony type body are already variable in shape, and can take a perk to grow a skin suit to their liking.
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>>10613768
>delicious chocolate black is +2 points

Why are you like this?
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>>10616887
Because they want to pay people to be delicious chocolate. Duh!
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Dynastylights Here

>>10616534
Doing that now actually
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>>10616887
Not the author. IIRC, they gave more points to the options that they thought wouldn't be taken as much.
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>>10616917
Just upload the full-size version somewhere and I'll fecking resize it into something you can bloody post.
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>>10616481
I was just making dinner, when I realized that I had forgotten to address the second part of your post.

Yeah, host/symbiote communications is something I'm considering. It's necessary for those looking for consenting hosts, or just those wishing to flex those sadism muscles.

>More so if they live longer than humans/hosts.
Kind of like the Trill from Star Trek, but with more conversation?
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>>10617266
>Kind of like the Trill from Star Trek, but with more conversation?

Maybe? I haven't watched that many episodes of Star Trek, I was thinking more in line with the Tok'ra from Stargate.
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>>10617441
That is a better analogy, and I feel bad that I didn't think of it.

Time to marathon Stargate again while I go on an image hunt.
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>>10616026
>>10616057
>>10616468

http://www.picresize.com/
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>>10617657
or
https://tinypng.com/
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>>10616804
>and can take a perk to grow a skin suit to their liking
So does that mean you can be like a weird goo thing feeling around all the host body?
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>>10616804
How well will a colony-type be able to mimic the feel and/or function of human anatomy (especially the sexier parts)?
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>>10617916
Hmm, that might be a good idea. I'll put it in my notes.

>>10618015
Very well. Nearly indistinguishable from the outside if you have the skinsuit perk, and it feels good on your end whether or not you took it.


But now I must go, IRL calls.
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what is going on with the meme cyoas?
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>>10613636
This is legendary. Please make more.
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>>10618244
Tok makes meme cyoas, then repeatedly replies to them in order to make himself feel more relevant.

It's sad.
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>>10616479
... you do realize the background is not purple, right? Not that I disagree that the pink background used is hard on the eyes.
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>>10618439
Closer to purple imo.
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>>10620670
You beat me to it.
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Did Dynastylights resize the cyoa yet?
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>>10622503
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Back when I was on SB I knew those FF.net kiddies were no good. (Back when the SB fanfiction forum was made. Long ago...)

Fucking kiddies ruin everything.

#ModestProposal
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>>10611927
>Mean
>Legitimate criticism and suggestions are mean
Defense force please go
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>>10613822
He said he'd add an option to reduce that and the 'whining' stopped, antagonistic one.
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>>10613636
Everyday I'm more and more sure you're underage.
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Honestly, can hated jiust turn their fucking head and let us who like Tok's stuff enjoy it?

(FF.nutters are cancer.)
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>>10622880
Oh god it's another twelve year old furry.
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Anyone have the trap maid cyoa?
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>>10622643
>SB
Space Battles? The fuck are you babbling about that garbage for?
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>>10623448
He's most likely an idiot from us over on QQ, sadly enough. He was ranting about something quite similar there too and seems to have a hateboner for SB/SV
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>>10623632
>QQ
The dumping ground for all of the poorly written lewd quests that are too shit even for SB?
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>>10623685
>>10623632
>>10623448

What the hell is going on here? Space Battles? QQ? FF? What are these things, and why are they here in the CYOA refuge?
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>>10623685
Hey, there's some nice stuff. Shit too ofc. But I believe this anon
>>10623756
has it right that this doesn't have much to do with the thread.
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>>10623756
>What are these things
Fanfiction and quest sites

>why are they here in the CYOA refuge?
Because some faggot brings up SB at least once a thread for no reason.
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Tok, make the CYOA for you and your one true fan - you seem to enjoy creating stuff - then a year later come back and post them out of boredom.
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Dynastylights here

>>10621930
Yeah... I passed out over the computer working on it.

I've decided to Add the hips and ass option to the first page.

And that the MILF-ification CYOA will be two pages.
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>>10624176
>two pages

Nothing wrong with that. It's nice that you try to keep it easy to post, but two pages isn't bad.
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>>10622462
Nahlia'Uma, Queen of the New West-African Empire

Wife, betrothed to me by her father King Tariqu the Hung.
International figure
Tsundere
Bisexual
Mean, Dom, tomboy, bookish, high strung, mature

Normal libido, average sensitivity
Bishe face, toned muscles
Thick, tall, healthy breasts, drizzle
Thimbles, mini discs, big butt, dangerous thighs
The RBF
Black African, with long gold curled hair like Beyonce often has.

Growth: other (grows when given gifts and praise, including having displays of song and dance in her name)
Smooth growth rate with diminishing returns up to the 12m mark. Feels pleasurable, growth rate is 1%.

Reacts to changes with joy
When big: same except expanded breasts, oversized butt and military grade thighs, fuckable nipples
More romantic and valuable, less patient and considerate
Face becomes smug, strong libido, sensual sensitive, himedere
Mouth play, self pleasuring, attention whoring, breast play/nipple fucking
Reaction - worship, occupation- ruler, goal - receive worship

Dick size manipulation, libido manipulation, sexuality manipulation, sex fluid manipulation, sex physics (beam)
Grant breath, libido manipulation (field)
Libido manipulation (aura)
Sex fluid manipulation, sex physics, henshin agogo (self)
Vibrator beam, big girl, bigger house
Infinite points

Historical happening! Take it back to the classical era: a new empire rises in West Africa, the queen of which welcomes trade and immigration from all civilizations, making the empire ethnically diverse. I, a humble traveling poet was betrothed to the queen in an organized marriage. initially she was cold to me, until the voodoo spirit of the mountain bush cursed the queen with giganticism and a raging libido. Despite being her husband, I held title as prince not king, she did all the ruling. She sits on a marble and gold throne in her palace like some Greek goddess, and uses her powers to manipulate her husband and other court entertainers into sexual activities
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Dynastylights here

>>10624503
Yeah I learned my lesson with my A new life with a fantasy world CYOA (Which is 14 pages long. I'll be shortening it sooner or later but at the moment I just wanna work on other projects.)
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>>10614321
kek
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>>10611212
I find the lack of motivation to go through this CYOA. I mean, given a class to choose and a number of perverted spells. No reason to start with. Only the four classes have draw backs. And no reason to go ahead with the spells. Who is anon supposed to fight with ? what are they against with ?

A rework would be nice I think.
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>>10625750
>Only the four classes have draw backs
The drawbacks are optional, you take them for an extra spell

>Who is anon supposed to fight with ?
The temptation to use your spells to do horribly lewd things to the general populace.

>what are they against with ?
The perverted spells you chose.
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>>10613636
The people being salty babies cant stop me from enjoying it.
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>>10612499
>12
Double Dees
·Alter size–Lactation–Special milk: size change-holly
>8
Big (13 inches)
·Beastial–Magic
>6
Big balls
·Special cum: Demonic
>5
Vag: Clean
>4
Height: 7ft
Body type: Athletic/Fit
Nº: 1 third
Demeanor: Dominant
Soc.Stat.: Nonchalant
Abilities: Strong–Tentacles–Aphroditic beuty–Flight
>0

An easy re-start of life on easy mode
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>>10625750
Sometimes, life isn't about killing people anon. You don't have to base your life around being antagonistic to people. People find meaning in their lives beyond that you know.
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>>10624667
Planning on posting tomorrow then?
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Dynastylights here

>>10626069
I'll try. But I won't make promises
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>>10612499
Double Dees
Alter Breast Size

Big: 9 Inches
Magic Cock
Normal balls

Super Stretchy
Squeaky clean

1%
Dominant
Master Race

Strong
Siblings
>Fuuka, Jade, and Veronica from the incest cyoa
Aphroditic Beauty
Twin
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>>10612499

C Cups 11
Special Milk x2 9
Aphrodisiac
Age reversal
Big 8 Inch 8
Magic cock 7
Normal 6
Demonic Jizz 5

Pacifying 4
Super Stretchy 3
Clean 2
Selective 1

6'7 tall, Slight curves.

We are the 1% heh.

Normal demenour. Up to each personality.

Nonchalent social status

Aphroditic Beuty 0

Would suggest a Equal or greater than zero point cap lower limit. Also drawbacks to gain points or for each selections.
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>>10626667
2/4
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3/4
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>>10626711
4/4
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>>10625941
True. Absolutely. Dont have to be killing the anon who takes it.
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>>10626770
same anon here.

I mean some stupid situation or reason that makes us want to go through it. At least if I come up with one, ill suggest
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>>10612499
I don't choose to be a futa, i choose my futanari waifu.

>Breasts
Flat chested
>Breast abilities
Special milk: size change
>Penis
Average
>Penis abilities
Magic cock
>Balls
Big as plum
>Ball abilities
Special cum: demonic jizz
Addictive cum
>Vagina
Selective fertility
>Hight
Various
>Number of futas
Third
>Demenor
Dominant
>Social status
Master race
>Special abilities
Strong
Not I
Succubization
Aphroditic Beauty
Everyone is beatiful
Magic: shrink another person, dominate mind.
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>>10622974
As we all know, people who disagree with you are necessarily weird assholes who you can't relate to in the slightest ;) Hooray for unproductive conversation!
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>>10627085
People who speak like they have brain damage are either brain damaged or underage.
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>>10627085
Just like pedophiles
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>>10622880
Do you have brain damage?
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>>10613768
>plus
>breeder
>black
>brown
>chubby
>flat
>pawg
>slave
>submissive
>party girl
>exhibitionalist
>bimbo

So I'll basically become a baby machine, but at least I'll get 480,000 for my hundreds of kids, which is pretty much winning on an evolutionary level.
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>>10623291
Yea.
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>>10613768

>X-tra
>purple (no vag)
>black
>brown
>petite
>big
>bubble
>college
>forget
>submissive
>party girl
>bimbo


Basically a massive amount of sex and fun, no risk, and 52000 at the end of it!
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>>10628349
can you post?
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>>10613636
Continuing from when I took the ring of binding

>get raped
dominant women are fine

>gloryhole
cum addiction is fine

>rampage
oh...

>reveal
guess I got tricked then

>reject reality
Because I'm less salty than I am dissapointed and confused. oh well.
In order of quality
2>3>1>4
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>>10611828
>Vocal minority
As much as I hate this pointless drama, let's test that...
http://www.strawpoll.me/13518266
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>>10629523
Here's the thing, you can like his older stuff while still thinking his recent work sucked, and people thinking Eronomicon could use some updates is what triggered Tok into meltdown mode.
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>>10624176
>And that the MILF-ification CYOA will be two pages.
Why though?
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>>10629546
That's why I said "generally" to be fair, though I see your point. Still, it should serve as a pretty good barometer.

I'm gonna call that the largest group of people are ambivalent to his body of work, then the next largest group will say they liked his work, then a few people will say they disliked it.
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>>10629669
'General' opinions don't help, though.
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>>10629699
If you want to go make a big long survey just to see if his work was well liked be my guest.

Sometimes it pays to look your local weather radar, sure, but you may be surprised to hear that taking a step outside and looking up generally accomplishes the same thing.
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>>10624176
And here's a version of >>10629612 with a less saturated background.
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>>10629780
>>10629612
He updated it, but the update is too big to fit into one image.
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>>10629769
Except if Eronimicon is considered the one singular misstep in his career.
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>>10629612
>>10629780
>Kemonomimi
>Take this perk again and you will become a furry

W-what happens if you take it a third time?
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>>10629820
Well then just say that you generally liked his shit. No need to be anal retentive about it.
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>>10629901
Which gives him the impression that the people who criticized Eronimicon were just shitposting, even if the people who think he used to do okay but Eronimicon sucked are often one and the same.
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>>10629799
Correction, the updated version was too large to post on 4chan as one image.

Which is why I asked him to upload it somewhere else, so I could download it and make it postable.
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>>10629523
Where's the
>I didn't bother reading his stuff because the font, colors, design and lack of grammar made immersion impossible as well as what works I did read where generic and boring
option?
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>>10630003
Pretty sure thats called "Disliking his work" anon~
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>>10629523
Tbh I feel like Tok uses alot of the same stuff in all his cyoas, I remember seeing that Charm power repeated in quite a few. I can petty much read one and get all I need leaving the rest.
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>>10630071
I noticed the same thing, I think he's a bit obsessed with callbacks if nothing else.

Hell, you can even see it in "The End" where he keeps on pointing out ad nauseam that different things were only used once or twice, like he intended to use them over and over again for some reason.
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>>10630124
I thought it was fine. Nothing wrong with having an expanding universe of his own to toy with but I can understand why someone wouldnt like it.
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>>10630190
It's fine sure, but now that I think about it he did do it quite a bit.
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>>10629887
You become the animal
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>>10629887
>>10630262
The option can only be taken twice, so the question is moot.
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>>10630190
I like expanded universes in Cyoas but when they add little to nothing from the previous one's they become pretty boring and useless.

It's sad because Eronomicon was my first exposure to his cyoas that weren't Messed Up Waifu, and didn't have a specific theme like mindslayer so It had room for lots more lewd powers to choose from without a theme restriction. But unlike the other cyoas you're heavily restricted by what your real fetishes are which really ruins the whole thing for alot of people.

How he thought that was a good idea for a cyoa is beyond me, atleast adding some way for people with few fetishes to actually play with any enjoyment. Allowing people with sporadically placed fetish colors to exchange them for other colors. Or better some sort of %discount for low numbers of fetishes. I don't know, that's for authors to figure out. (And while I'm an author I'm way to lazy to figure it out)
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>>10630330
>moot
Who?
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>>10630345
The answer was to remove the 2 school limit so if you had even 1 point somewhere you could get a spell there and it would be balanced for people with hight numbers because there are only so many corruptions you can take before you become warped from what you once were.
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>>10630367
>Who?
What?
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>>10630502
When?
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>>10630367
>Who?
M00t Poole
>>10630502
>What?
The inventer of memes
>>10630840
>When?
11th of September 2001
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>>10626667
Warden 300

High tech Prison 290
Medium 275
Mixed Prison(staff as well)
Gwendolyn(Futa) 310
Classic Uniform
Suppression collar 300
Elite guards 290----10
Med facility 285
Armory 280----5
Saferoom 270----10
Survailance room 260----10
Assistant 255
Mind Reader 245----10

You Looked at me wrong

11 Orgasm limit 235
5 Min Orgasm 230
Bullying 210
Word of the day 200

(P)Heightened Libido 190
(T)Milking 170
(P)Spanking 160
(P)Sex Machine 150
(P)Group Rape 135
(P)Slave Training 125
(P)Public Use 115
(P)Bondage 105
(P)Tentacle pit 95
(T)Punishment 85

235-85=150
power negation = 10
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120
Gwen = 1
118
45
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Riot Points 73

Seldom 63
Fucked Silly 43
Its all fun and games 23
Ambushed 13
Futanari 8
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>>10631084
*Glory Hole
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>>10631084
>>10631176
Expanding on it, basically im in debt to Gwen in past. I had been a criminal in one of a corrupt prison. Which is one of many owned by Gwens family. She visits the prison during a riot in which I murder the Warden and get out by hiding as a top ranked officer. But Gwen Vitnesses the Murder. I Make my way up on Prison business and lead a good life.

Basically the prison uses sexual activity and humiliation to keep prisoners in order. Punishments and even rewards. For example a Prisoner punished with public use would be usable for prisoners. Not wardens. Those Punished with Bondage, Sex machines, would be in public places will be a able to groped by anyone. Prisoners sentenced for Group rape are handed over to guards. Glody hole can be either. However, there are corrupt buisnesses under the wraps as well. The treatments of milking female prisoners and selling off them as pure milk earnsquite the amount. Sometimes Slave trained prisoners are rented for small amount of time for pleasure.

Later Gwen makes her way into Prison business and decides to be a vice warden first to get the hang, before fully owning all of the complex. Discovering me, she make me her bitch blackmailing me threatening to expose my past.Behind curtains Gwen uses her ability to punish me for the times I have pissed off for the day. Or simply for the fun. Sometimes even going the length to cover my face putting to public. The Prison complex is fully aware of a special Prisoner X who's face is covered sometimes Strapped to the sex machines, group rape rooms, bondage racks or a Glory Hole wall. They all know the isolated prison The Prisoner is in. But not aware its secret door back wall leads to Gwens room.

The only salvation is the riots. Which even though in trouble I can enjoy her being getting a dose of her own medicine. Or being transformed to a Futa. In which Gwen just do not expose me in public punishments.
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>>10629546
Second.
I vote this.
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>>10614017

Youthfull andflat chest
No hair

Clothes:

Comfty Boxer Shorts
Pure Virginal White
Sultry Thights

Plain Vest
Frilly Dress
Disarming Child's

Fasion:
Something between Girly and Carefree

Accessories:
Remote Vibrator
Taser
Phone

Things I'll do:
Masturbate
Seduce Girls
Sleepover
Cafe Maid

Siblings:
Big sis and little sis

Behave:
Cute and perverted
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>>10626667
I'm a rootin' tootin' criminal

>Design & size
High Tech (I was charged as a super villain after all)
Medium
Mixed genders

>Warden/Vice Warden
W: Niandra (Just doing my bit to help her dreams of motherhood
VW: TAY (it don't question bug warden)

>Clothes
Classic for the majority of the time
Extended parasite suit runs for naughty prisoners

>Power Negation
Shock collars are fun right?

>Facilities
Medical facility
Gym
Safe room
Surveillance
Additional VW

>Special Rules
5% Lottery
No Orgasm (hope the bug breeding isn't too arousing)
Bullying (slipping off rings will be fun)

>Punishment/Treatment
Upgraded futafication treatment
Upgraded Milking treatment
Upgraded bimbofication treatment
(Let's make all our bug breeding sows into bimbo futa cows)
Upgraded for whole body sensitivity punishment + libido punishment + orgasm denial punishment (I know I have no orgasm as a special rule, but I feel it's fair enough to make it so the inmates won't accrue all that punishment time :^) )
Upgraded Nipple plugs punishment
Upgraded monster menagerie (probably just more bug aliens)
Torture

95 Riot Points

>occurence
Seldom (don't know how riots happen if everyone's a bimbo cow but I don't argue superpowers)

>Riot scenarios
Public humiliation + Riot orgy + A taste of your own medicine (I have to see those treatments on some bug alien)

Seems hot. While I might get out in 2 years I don't think my mind will survive this ride.
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Bizzle hump.
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I'm continuing to work on my Familiar CYOA, and I would really like your comments.

https://pastebin.com/fsn1FZjx

I feel I have most of the elements I need. Is anything missing?

After that, I've got to start putting in some points and mana-costs.
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>>10611242
>>10611247
>>10611268
>>10613636

OC! The quest continues!
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>>10633008
shitposting is art
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>>10633008
Tok is pretty bad at this whole moving to Reddit thing.
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>>10632859
What would the following magical effects (castable on yourself or others) fall under:
> increased production of bodily fluids (magically fueled, so no increase in nutrient needs)
> negating bodily needs (target can go without food/water/sleep/air/etc. but can partake if desired)
> negating bodily waste (regardless of target's intake of food/drink/etc, target will neither produce bodily waste nor suffer any unwanted buildup or other such negatives)

As for your musings regarding time-reversal, how about something along these lines:
> 1 - can only send information (i.e. your mind) into the past
> 2 - can send yourself (and your familiar, possibly others?) as you are into the past (so you could, for example, bring your childhood self a birthday present or whateverthefuck)
> 3 - can (selectively?) undo the effects of excursions in the past (so if, say, the aforementioned birthday visit resulted in some undesired happenstance, you could just undo the visit)
And if you had the highest tier from the other time-related school, you could (at reversal tier 2 or above) essentially travel through time as you please (or letting you essentially rewind a movie - or heck, a play - even in public theaters).
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>>10632859
Why not be able to make it a literal book like weiss?
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>>10632859
I presume stuff along the lines of increasing stretchiness or eliminating refractory period would fall under Polymorph?
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>>10633160
You can't fuck a book.
(Said anon, knowing full well that they would be proven wrong.)
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>>10633147
Presumably those would go under polymorph/change size, but I suppose that making a more specialized version would be a good idea.

And about time travel, I just thought that I shouldn't go entirely crazy/start creating all sorts of paradoxes? On the other hand, can just let the player worry about that.

>>10633160
What is weiss? And also because the point of the CYOA is the balance between empowering your familiar and yourself. Books don't try to fuck your face, in general.

>>10633170
It would, yes. As said, maybe I can do something more specialized. Perhaps a spell for these things specifically. I thought going with more generally worded spells might do, though.
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>>10633123
That's because he isn't trying to leave. We're the only people who give his life any sort of meaning and he wants to return soo bad he's willing to carry on this pantomime until the hate for him morphs into pity and he can return without people getting annoyed hurting his feelings again.
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>>10632859
Does being incorporeal also give her the option of being invisible?
Can I still feel my incorporeal familiar?

Also, how about some utility spells like Mending, Cleaning, Obscurity (not invisible, but people don't register it when you do anything weird), Refresh (makes you feel like you just had a full night's rest, also makes you feel like you haven't cum in a month).
Portal spell?
Phantom stimulation?
Dream walking?
Body swapping?
Induce lactation?

An option for how lewd/mischievous your familiar is?

Also, how about sexy accidental effects like:
Your familiar can choose to make you orgasm when either of you cast a spell?
Or you become unbearably horny after casting a spell?
Lightning Rod (you are permanently erect whenever your familiar is within 10 ft of you)
Once a day, your familiar will become irrationally horny, but will only be able to cum when you do. She knows it and will do whatever it takes to make it happen.
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>>10633237
Here you go.

>>10633256
Weiss is a human soul bound to a book. From Nier.

Also she aint going to be fucking my face regardless, I hate futa so it's vagina only for any familiar I make.

Still, you should see this image too.
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>>10633008
>Using a picture of traps as the cat-sisters image
what did he mean by this
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>>10633356
Read further.
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>>10633256
>And about time travel, I just thought that I shouldn't go entirely crazy/start creating all sorts of paradoxes?
Going by my suggestions, I don't think #1 would even allow for any actual paradoxes, and #3 would just let you undo the damage if they happened.

Alternatively, you could just say that paradoxes don't happen with it (for whatever reason). Or you could heavily suggest that the reader also picks the 3rd tier Shield to protect themselves from any potential paradoxes (since it does say it blocks any effect or force you don't explicitly allow).
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>>10633289
I separated the ghost form and invisibility. I always intended for those to be toggled off and on, though.

Utility spells, sure. Just have to think of some tiers, or maybe just have some spells work on 1 level only.

The option for how lewd your familiar is is kind of built into the Devotions, I feel? That's the idea, anyhow, that she goes from plain to lewd with the right choices. But I've deliberated a lot about if the 'attitude/servitude' choices work well enough.


>>10633353
A lady can fuck your face too, anon.
And eh, maybe? The whole 'being a book' thing really doesn't gel with the rest of the changes, though, cuz then she'd have no human form.
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>>10633008
>worshipping SDAs feet
>not ass
yes, i mad
rejoice, villian
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>>10632859
"Normalization" doesn't seem to fit into any of the presented categories. Unless of course "unfavorable opinion" or "legal action" and such count as effects or forces that can be blocked with Shield 3.
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>>10633440
I siad the same, and he uploaded a fixed one on /tg/
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>>10633008
>>10633440
>>10633466
Mistakes were made, but I am mature enough to listen to criticism and realize my mistakes.
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>>10633599
>Mistakes were made
I'll say.
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>>10633599
>gramatical error in first paragraph
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>>10633424
I think some single level spells are okay. They don't all have to have tiers. Also, portal magic please.
As to the lewdness/devotion, I don't think I'd realized at first what you were doing with the godess sections.

I'm just working off this idea:
My familiar casts subtle alterations on me throughout the day, slowly driving my balls into higher and higher production because she "knows" how much I'll enjoy it when I finally cum.
But, after a while, I still haven't used my magic to have my way with every woman around me ending in a giant fountain of cum, so she starts taking more and more liberties. Buttons break on blouses, pants rip and underwear mysteriously disappears. At this point, I know what she's doing, but I don't do anything, wanting to see how far she takes it.
She breaks just before I do, my balls tight and churning, my erection throbbing.
Unknown to me, she summons a portal in my pants. Just as I feel my penis slide into somewhere hot, tight, and so very wet, I see the cute waitress across the restaurant sit down abruptly, her knees clearly buckling in pleasure, her face flushing. We both sit there, basking in pleasure as the portal thrusts me inside her, until her spasming pussy sends me over, and I fill her with the magical load I've accumulated over the day.

My familiar isn't "dominant", but she loves getting me off in creative ways, and will take any liberties I don't forbid her.
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>>10633599
glad to hear it tok :)
just out of interest, how would you feel about someone modifying a cyoa of yours, but still crediting it as yours but modified?
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>>10633894
Was ONLY talking about SDAs butt.
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>>10633289
Okay, I put some some of those ideas in. Some of these go under Polymorph, though.

Accidental effects are a good idea, trying to think of a good way for it.
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>>10632859
Looks interesting
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>>10634082
Also, please see my request for portal magic. >>10633773
This also kinda explains what I meant about lewdness vs mischievous vs dominant
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>>10633894
You do not understand irony, do you?
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>>10632859
Attitude seems to have an equal amount of positive and negative tiers (plus one neutral), but Servitude only has two positives while also having three negatives (and no neutral).
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>>10633599
The continued adventues of the only person still doing this >>10628923

>robot leg
yay
>companions left
meh
>ZBG
just because
>Deviancy
because lewd
>The cat sisters
Because they're all clearly traps and I want the cuddles


I've come to realise that all the dispair happening might have been because of having the arch demon of dispair as a companion and now that shes gon things are noticably less terrible.

Also noticed Tok not having a working cock might be related no not being able to fap to all the builds that get posted after a new lewd CYOA like he used to.

A marked improvement over the amputation of 3 and the all of 4 past the gloryhole. morale remains low.
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>>10630021
To dislike something means you have to read it anon~
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>>10634325
But you dislike it for other reasons.
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>>10633599
This is beyond stupid.
Like funny stupid with a side of what if stupid.
Like "is this guy really tok" stupid? And "two threads were destroyed due to toks ego blowing up and you came back and said, yeah sorry" stupid?

Well whatever, we're all human and the pressure got to you. Just try to keep the ego down the next time you receive criticism.
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>>10634847
You didn't see this? >>10633917
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>>10635120
>I'm mature enough to admit when I made a mistake
>Not that mistake though, I'll never admit that I was wrong about that one

That's not any better.
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>>10635168
Actually makes him look more petty.
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>>10634348
No. I never read his stuff (after the first one or two). It's important to know how to read.
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Hey do you guys have the futa slave cyoa?
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>>10635312
It's ok to dislike something because of how it looks but that is still disliking it.
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>>10635401
Here you go.
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>>10635510
nice, i barely made it through the other threads and missed a bunch of good CYOAs
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>>10612499
Double Dees
Lactation (11)
Special Milk: Aphrodisiac, Age Reversal, Holy (8)
Penis: Big, 8"
Magic Cock (7)
Balls: None
Vagina: Squeaky Clean, Completely Selecive Fertility (5)
Height: 6' 3"
Body Type: Ripped
Number of Futas: 1%
Demeanor: Dominant
Social Status: Worship
Special Abilities: Strong, Flight, Aphroditic Beauty, Everyone is Beautiful (0)

Kind of wish there was a "replacement" option for gender. I'm into Futa on Female, so it'd be nice to just make all guys into Futas, and I'm sure some people would probably love the reverse.
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>>10626562
Only abilities cost points, man. You've got a lot more than you think.
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>>10633773
I think I'll add a portal spell, and then consider it done. Need to go in and add points to everything though, which sounds really blah to do, so I'll have to find the drive somewhere.
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>>10629612
Not that I mind, but the loli body type is definitely not loli. Have you forgotten what 3D proportions look like?
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>>10636240
You should point complaints to the author: >>10624176
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>>10612499
Kinda dumb that I can choose to not have a penis, but can't do the same with the vagina
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FUCK
Why is it so fucking hard to come up with an idea for a cyoa? I have fuckloads of images I want to use!
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>>10636780
That's an unusual issue. I hav eloads of ideas and get sidetracked before finishing anything. On the other hand, I don't create lewd ones ...
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>>10636780
Help me get images for this, instead. https://pastebin.com/fsn1FZjx
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>>10636780
what images do you have?
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>>10636496
Perhaps it's so you can use it with the "Not I!" special at the end to convert the CYOA into a (more regular kind of) waifu-builder?
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>>10636942
>Waifu builder
>Choosing no penis
>Not wanting to give your futa waifu a super-sensitive tiny cock and then milking her every day while she begs you to stop.
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Dynastylights Here

>>10636240
Yeah, that's already been pointed out. And I've already fixed it in the new version.
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Have you tried something in the lines of happiness raven?

You can pick random pictures and then put whatever text to them.
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>>10636855
Lots.
Lots and lots and lots.
Especially asses
>>10637077
With asses?
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>>10637234
Sure. Just get a succubus to deliver gifts; or maybe something like pic related.

It doesn't have to be complex -- This is my favorite CYOA, since it's quick, easy, and has a fun tone.
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>>10637286
How to do humor?
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>>10637286
I really don't see the point of those kinds of CYOA (there's no real character/work-building involved, so it's not super inspiring), but it's nice that there's something for everybody!
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>>10636780
Why not post your 5 favorite, or 5 that have something in common, and we'll give you ideas?
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>>10637493
They're shitposts.
This one in particular is a fan expansion to an another shitpost, originally made to lampoon /tg/ posters who complain when there's no "be the little girl" option.
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>>10637542
Will do.
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>>10637736
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>>10637776
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>>10611268
this has to be the cringiest shit I have ever seen in my life
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>>10636780
Try starting with a Genie one
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Reposting this.
I think the author is still working on it, if so huge thank you man.
I've cum buckets to it already, the sheer detail in it is amazing. If this carries on it'll be my favorite cyoa since slut life.
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>>10637286
>something like pic related.
Well you got me to work on something alright! No idea where this is headed or how big it'll be/how long it'll take but we'll see!
>>10637872
But I want to use my own images?
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>>10637975
>But I want to use my own images?
You could use the template as a base, fill it with images you like, and think up some manner of magical wish related to each image.

Wouldn't be the first time someone's done that instead of letting others decide on one aspect and then filling in the other.
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>>10637872
>Genie
Did the Anon from the other weekend ever finish?
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>>10637975
>But I want to use my own images?
That's why I gave you the template
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>>10638261
who?
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>>10638296
Some Anon who took a bunch of images and said he'd make a Genie CYOA from them.
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10431002/#10441823
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I'll see if I can finish it tomorrow. I don't know exactly how much I want to add but I wrote down about 2/3 options for 5 more categories.
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>>10638261
Never saw a finished one, which was a shame because there were some great pictures submitted
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>>10638395
Fuck it! If we don't see a finished one by this weekend, I'll try and do it myself. How long do the desu archives last mm
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>>10638546
Well the archives seem to reach 2015, so...

Also, from what I can tell, off-site 4chan archives are generally meant for keeping shit online, so you shouldn't so much worry "when will this particular post disappear" as much as "when might this particular archiving service go under".
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>>10638546
:D
And they last a long time.
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>>10636780

Tbh I'd like to see another scifi one, last good one I remember was Tok's prison. Maybe the reader is enlisted in a planet colonization Corp and it revolves around them, the other explorers, and weird stuff they discover..
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>>10638405
Looking forward to it! This looks quite fun.
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>>10637902
that lazy faggot haven't fixed the green-blue contrast shit
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>>10638546
Just make a new one. Dont make the cunt feel like he did something good
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>>10629924
Then make your own poll specifically to show that.

I didn't make this to rub it in Tok's face because I couldn't give less of a shit as to what he thinks, I just made it because I was curious as to what people think about him.

This whole thing is of no import and I honestly regret even responding to the topic at this point. I've been here long enough that I should know better.
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>>10637736
>>10637765
>>10637776
>>10637788
>>10637804
Urban Fuck-venture
You are one of a dozen people that has been kidnapped and forced to compete in the sex games. Points are awarded by cumming inside "targets"
You get 5 starting perks.

Each target you successfully fuck gets you points, but each one presents a particular challenge.

Which targets are you going for? What will your high score be?
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>>10641072
Note, if you end up not using this idea, I'll add it to my list of pending cyoa ideas I may get around to eventually. But if you did use it, please try and make it look good :)
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>>10641072
>That name
Would work better as a more open-ended apocalyptic future scenario, IMO.
>You are some Scavenger
>Go out and loot shit
>Gene mods are a thing and sell on the open markets, which are home to the last humans and demi-humans plus the Monsters who aren't entirely feral anymore
>Make friends
>Fuck 'em
>Get fucked
>Loot cool shit
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>>10638405
Are there any options where girls force me to dress up another cute girl?
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>>10638405
Plane :3
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>>10637902
Thanks! [spoiler]I blushed reading that[/spoiler]

I'm still working on it but I was busy for the past 5 days so, I couldn't get anything done. I really like reading the positive feedback.

>>10639773
Oh, I see what you did! I didn't even think about that... okay, so this is my try at it, in pic related, thanks for the help!

Next post is going to be the rest of my work that hasn't been shown. Its not much but I will make it larger soon. I'm starting a new section, so it'll be great! It's going to have a LOT of sub-sections, though. If anyone still has suggestions for the "anal" section, I can totally add a few more, you can see the empty space in that image.
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Dynastylights here

Here is 1/2
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Dynastylights here

>>10642095
Goddamn it...
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>>10642095
The keks.
>>10642109
Are endless.
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>>10637804
>>10637788
>>10637776
>>10637765
>>10637736
>>10636780
Sexy Apocalypse

One of those Globalized fetish threads got hit by a drunken wizard, its a zombie apocalypse where they want your sperm instead of brains.

They are smart, fast and horny. In small groups or one on one they are survivable or even domesticated but if they swarm they will kill either from exhaustion or out right ripping a man apart when fighting over him.

If enough time is put into it you can literally fuck sense into them, as they grow accustomed to a man they grow calmer and more submissive. Once adapted to a man they only need sex once a day, can be stretched to every other day at the cost of higher intelligence or once a week for a mostly tame fuck zombie.

Unscrupulous sorts are joining together and forming mid sized harems of barely tame combat fuck zombies. The world has just barely survived the initial chaos, the armies are exhausted, the goverment in shambles and ass-bandits are a rapidly rising threat.

>fuck zombie seems like a stupid name, pick somthing better. The Fucked? Fuckers?
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>>10642095
How the fuck Do you manage to save a thumbnail of your own OC ?
速く張り出してください。
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>>10642095
>>10642109

Dynastylights again
I have an idea... I'll fucking post it even if it kills me.
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>>10642193
Select the image first. Then press submit.
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>>10642193
Are you related to epic fail guy?
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>>10642085
So how much do you have done? I've only seen the penis and ass one and they look great.
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>>10642085
Honestly I don't see what's wrong with the current color scheme.

For anal options maybe permanent inserted bullet vibrators as separate from regular vibrators?
My problem is that I'm sitting on a 40 point surplus because I wanted all the punishments.

Also what's your source on the images. I love them but I don't recognize all the artists.
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>>10612499
>Mammoth
>Alter Breast Size

>Big

>Big
>Demonic Jizz

>Vagina
>Squeaky Clean
>Selective Fertility

>7ft

>Hourglass/Thick

>1 Third

>Submissive

>Nonchalant

>Strong
>Twin
>Aphroditic Beauty
>Not I
>Everyone is beautiful
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Dynastylights here

I split the damn CYOA into three pages.

Let's see if it fucking works now.

1/3
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2/3
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3/3
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>>10642474
That's basically all I have done. It takes me a while to do anything just because of how exhaustive i'm being. It can take a while for some of these...its surprisingly hard to find a picture of lotion up someone's butt, or a picture of, say, JUST a prolapsed anus.

I'm trying to be as through as possible, so i'll accept any suggestions people have. (unless I forget, etc)

>>10642558

> I don't see what's wrong with the current color scheme.
Different monitors have different contrast settings. I was editing it on a monitor with a contrast that made it easy to read, even though the contrast was low. But on someone else's low contrast monitor, its unreadable.

>My problem is that I'm sitting on a 40 point surplus because I wanted all the punishments.
I will solve this when I get to the "owner" system. Certain punishments will only be available with certain owners and their specific makeup of fetishes, etc. The game is also in great need of re-balancing, so don't worry about that. I plan on making the punishments less rewarding. I hope that helps it!

>Also what's your source on the images. I love them but I don't recognize all the artists.
I can upload my folder if you want, I dont have the source but I have been on a combination of rule34.xxx and danbooru (mostly rule34) to find these images. Some of them are actually girls, or futa, or furry porn, or something that isn't a trap, but are cropped so that they are acceptable to use. I really hope that doesn't spoil it for anyone... You try finding "lotion dripping out of an anus but its also clearly a boy"

I honestly cant remember all the sources but if you check them on reverse image search, you can definitely find the rule34.xxx links, which may contain sources. https://my.mixtape.moe/tleltw.zip

This is what i'm working on now, so i'll show off more soon.
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>>10642726
>>10642754
>>10642765
The left side seems cut off a bit too sharply for the first pic but otherwise ok.
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Dynastylights here

>>10642897
Eh, I can fix that. Just later though I'm eating dinner
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>>10642726
Curvy
Large breasts
Child bearing hips
Large ass
Rose Whitewald
Kitchen Mistress
Amazing Cleaner
Sensitive Body
Sexually Gifted
Elegance
Job
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Can someone post the virus one? Mine got corrupted
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>>10642726
>>10642754
>>10642765

>Build
Athletic
>Breasts
Small
>Hips
Normal
>Ass
Average
>Partners
Regina Prince
Edmund McDaniel
Young II Seo

>Perks
Kemonomimi x2
Dominant Mindset
Allure
Sexually Gifted
Reverse Harem

Regina and I will have a pleasant relationship, and I'll help her run her orphanage, while Young brings in money and we make Edmund watch and never participate while Regina, Young, and I have fun.
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>>10643359
>virus one
>got corrupted
Kek.
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>>10642726

Body
Curvy

Breasts
Large Breasts

Hip Size
Child bearing

Ass Size
Average

Bachelor
Mark Walhart

Perks
Submissive Mindset
Sensitive
Lactation
Kemonomimi (Dog Girl)
Heightened Fertility
Elegance
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>>10632859
No option for petite sized familiars?
What about tongue enhancements, like longer and prehensile?
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>>10613768
X-Change Plus
Purple(+2)
Black(+2)
Brown(+1)
Toned(-2)
Big(-1)
PAWG(+1)
Slave(+5)
Bimbo(+1)
Total=9=$180,000
Not bad, not bad :)
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>>10642726
Here's two builds.

>DETHRONING THE QUEEN
BODY: Athletic
BREAST: Large
HIPS: Child Bearing
ASS: Large
BACHELOR: Lucy Krause
>PERKS
Allure
Dominant Mindset
Well Lubricated
Elegance
Sexually Gifted
Ara Ara~

>BOYTOY
BODY: Curvy
BREAST: Huge
HIPS: Child Bearing
ASS: Large
BACHELOR: Henry Wilhelm Valentine
>PERKS
Submissive Mindset
Allure
Sensitive Body
Animal Magnetism
Rape Bait
Slave
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>>10642726
>>10642754
>>10642765

NTR Trash Build

Curvy
huge breasts
child bearing hips
large ass
Joey "Jessica"
submissive mindset
Allure
sensitive
rape bait
lactation
Heightened Fertility
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>>10642765
Ojou-sama seems a bit strong. Needs a downside. Like you have to try your best to act proper and regal. .
Maybe some kinda bad reputation. (married into money)
Or other woman are jealous and its hard to make friends.
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>>10636780
How about an Incest Waifu Builder Cyoa? You're given the options of fucking your mother, a younger sister, an older sister, aunt, cousin, petgirl, service girl, and childhood friend.
Give us a section about you as a person like choosing your age (shota, teenager, young adult, adult, old man) how the father is involved (dead, business trip, Lesbian moms, oblivious cuck, willing cuck, Fun for the whole family), and how Incest is viewed in the world.
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>>10646263
Isn't there one like this but with your guardian angel instead?
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>>10646290
Is it the one with choosing between a demon and an angel girl or something else? Would you mind posting it?
Someone asled me to make one as I prescribed with Petgirl, Service girl, and childhood friend all in one page without incest but honestly I have such poor memory I'm thinking about making it all day, blank when I get to the computer, and afraid to jot anything down in case anyone sees.
>>
https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/0Bwl-aJm3wG4nZkVBY3lRQ0ROVVk

it's under 'Guardian Angel'
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>>10646488
Thanks anon. And yeah I have this one saved. I just want an Incest themed waifu builder, like Gentle Femdom or Anon's Imouto.
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>>10642085
Glad to help anon, remember to explore your tools for solutions
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How is this pic >>10642085 bigger than this one >>10639773 ?
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>>10647127
Yeah, thanks!

>>10647172
He's posting a cropped version that was re-compressed with inferior compression. Its impossible for me to upload the full pictures without running them through an aggressive png compressor, which is why the one's I post are small.

Hopefully the png compressor can get me an under 5 MB image for the full CYOA. Im working on that next section, so i'll post progress soon!
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>>10641594
No?
For what purpose?
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OK, here is the section of the CYOA that I am working on, with the latest changes added. I hope that allowing you to have full breasts doesnt undermine it as a trap CYOA.
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>>10647548
forgot image
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>>10646263
>Waifu Builder
Are we seriously not past this meme yet?
>>10646349
>not writing down notes
...
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bump limit passed and on page 8. going to need that new thread soon, boys.
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>>10642726

MILF-ification V2

Body:

Curvy Body
Large Breasts
Child-Bearing Hips
Large Ass

Perks:

Kemonomimi (Catgirl wheeeee)
Heightened Fertility
Sensitive Body
Sexually Gifted
Harem
Reverse Harem

Husbandos: Lucy Krause, Regina Prince, Young II Seo

Harem-mates:

Lauri- Loli body (She's 21 I swear!), Average Breasts, Wide Hips, Average Ass, Kemonomimi (Imouto-chan!) Dominant Mindset, Sensitive Body, Elegance, Sexually Gifted, Heightened Fertility. (Tiny catgirl who frequently competes with Lucy regarding who's on top, calls her a titty monster, secretly loves subbing when Lucy fucks her into the floor as much as she loves riding Lucy only to edge her for hours before letting her cum. When pregnant, as per the rules, she'll usually prefer anal to vaginal sex- when she's on top. When she's on the bottom having her tight rear pounded, she hates how good it makes her feel, but pretending you're going to stop can make her agree to almost anything if you'll just fuck her ass until she cums. Will reluctantly listen to me as her 'big sis.' Our heat cycles are synced so we're usually pressed up against each-other being repeatedly filled on the night of the full moon. Me and her are usually naked around the house- and in public if we can get away with it.)

Cont.
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>>10648194
Mutsumi- Plump body, Large Breasts, Child-Bearing Hips, Large Ass, Kitchen Mistress, Heightened Fertility, Amazing Cleaner, Lactation, Ara Ara~, Sexually Gifted. (The 'mom' of the group, and a nigh-tantamount Yamato Nadeshico. Doesn't do all the housework on her own, but is definitely in charge of keeping everyone fed and the place clean, even if she has to unleash her 'terror stare' to make someone pitch in. Always there with a kind word when you're down and a kind tongue when you're horny. She'll tease you terribly if you're playing along though, and loves being thrown to the floor or over the counter to be ravished, ridden, or both. Serene almost to a fault, she can usually be found wearing her apron... and nothing else.)

Zephyr- Curvy body, Average Breasts, Normal Hips, Small Ass, Well Lubricated, Submissive Mindset, Slave, Allure, Rape Bait, Animal Magnetism. (The House's slutty submissive cum-dump. She can be found chained up in Lucy's room any time she isn't pregnant (though that's usually quickly fixed) and when they aren't trying to make sure she's carrying the child of someone in-house, she's at the glory hole or being gangbanged on the train during the day and being used as a cock-sleeve at night. Also keeps the family pet happy, plus most of the neighborhood dogs. And she loves every. Last. Bit.)
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>>10642726
Curvy

Normal Breasts

Wide Hips and a bubble butt, Average Ass

Young II Seo
Jessica
Yui Ishikawa

Kitchen Mistress
Reverse Harem
Allure
Sexually Gifted
Ara Ara~
Ojou-sama

So do I need to get pregnant in the first ~3 months to have my baby by the year?
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New thread is up: >>10648483
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>>10642085
Since the last two times I asked about it were met with no response (probably because threads died before you could see my posts), I'm-a ask again:
Have you considered an option for overgrown foreskin? Kinda like the following (except without the filthier implications):
http://i.imgur.com/AERsaHg.gif
http://i.imgur.com/voe9hpz.gif
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>>10647557
It is really expensive and flat chests are superior so it is alright
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>>10642726

Curvy
Average
Wide Hips
Large Ass


Lucy

Submissive Mind
Kitchen Mistress
Amazing cleaner
Sexually gifted
Well Lubricated
Elegance
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