Cyoa refuge, choose your own a/d/venture Desuarchive Link:

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Elf slave, wat do?

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Fulcrum 1

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Twisted Waifu 1

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Twisted Waifu 2

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Twisted Waifu 3

>>10584596
Put this in the /tg/ thread.

>>10584568
Who is the big fat guy in the fatherly picture?

>>10584477
Will you stop posting this hissy fit already, nobody fucking cares

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>>10585367

Does anyone have the lewd version of the island cyoa?

>>10585728
here
https://imgur.com/a/6hWsw

>>10584477
TheAmazingCornbot here? Don't know how long this thread will last, but here is my baby:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1asdU6nevCPRe5qaHTuMgvd8VeIh-mkeJNcYOJLsA8WM/edit

>>10585965

Needs a "Muscular and slight pudgy" sorta like bara for women.

Hey everyone, I'm the person making the sexfight CYOA and I'm wondering what types of characters you want to see as selectable opponents. I already have six different characters jotted down, and I'd like to integrate some more character ideas into it.

>>10585851
Thanks anon, I forgot to save the images when that other anon asked for it.

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I finally worked on this more, here it is with a lot more punishment options

I hope you guys like it!

>>10586066
Sorry, was not there for the entire development process. What exactly do you mean by sex fight? First to cum? Beat up then rape? etc

Also what kind of characters do you already have?

>>10586066

The Wrestling Milf (suburban white Milf with some martial arts knowledge, difficulty: easy), The Gentle Giantess (7 ft tall muscular but untrained and untalented and a wonder persion: difficulty: normal), The Military Chick (Traumatized yet sweet girl with PTSD difficulty prepare your diddly hole), The Thug (thin tough black chick form the ghetto, streetfighter, difficulty hard), Dragon Lady (asian mom, martial arts instructor, violent and overconfident, medium difficulty), Psycho bitch (barely legal, thin yet surprisingly strong, severe sexual sadist, hard difficulty), the slut (enters in it to lose and get "raped", throws fight for you difficulty)

With a futa option serperate, to Keep both futa and non-futa fans happy.

>>10586156
Are the points for the colored option supposed to be -

>>10586066
a few subs that can be broken if you puh their sub buttons in a very submissive way (like one of them breaks down if you call her derisive names, another one likes getting slapped, etc)

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and this is an example of the full work, I have to compress it down from 10 MB... but now you guys see that it will still be a lot taller than it is wide.. once I make all the sections

>>10586211
Definitely need someone with incredible flexibility for full range of movement, maybe a gymnast.

A superhero/villain who cheats by using superpowers/magic (not sure if this is to wacky for the cyoa)

The tease, an individual great at dodging and sexually frustrating you.

>>10586222
typo, there are a lot of typos. If its green it should have a +

>>10586211
a bbw glutton sumo chick

>>10586202
It's designed around a "first to cum" condition for victory. I've been a bit secretive about it, so I haven't mentioned much about it's development.

The characters I only have general archetypes listed out right now: A cowgirl BBW, a male wrestler, a muscle girl, a corrupted magical girl, a succubus, and a cocky male spellcaster.

Just to give a peak into the development, the first part of the "game" aspect of the CYOA is a rock, paper, scissors game between The Fighter, The Charmer, and The Spellcaster classes. There's more to this game aspect beyond that, but the point is I'm building characters to fit into those classes. Futa characters are allowed too.

>>10586300
>>10586320

Not the creator, just offering ideas

to make your ideas more specific:

gymnast (30ish experienced thai, flexible, muy thai girl, fights fair, difficulty prepare your diddly hole), stage magician (thicc italian girl, dresses in superhero costume and fights with props, hard normally but easy without her props), the dominatrix (brazilian prodomme, aggressively sexual, uses almost exclusively sexual moves, great at keeping you horny confused and frustrated, difficulty hard), the bbw sumo (giant japanese girl, wants to be first famous girl sumo, hits hard and can take a good hit but is sluggish, moderate difficulty)

>>10586417
Dev here again, also because the game is centered around a "first to cum" condition, that means the winner has their way with the loser since they haven't gotten off yet. Losing conditions with be included with each character, for those of you like are into that.

>>10586417
>>10586479
Some other ideas I had. Not sure if the other guy wants to help make the ideas more specific since I am not good at descriptions.

The Shapeshifter (Can change gender | limited control over body, adding limbs or changing body texture but must be humanoid)

The engineer (Creates top grade sex toys and contraptions)

An Angel (A Valkyrie who is sexually frustrated from lack of talented warriors to fuck)

Ninja (Uses stealth and special ninja techniques to pleasure/assassinate the target)

>>10586602
Yay losing conditions are fun

>>10586417

And now for some guys: The trap (qt3.14 tanned trap, surprisingly large cock, powerbottom, weak but fast flexible and with amazing sexual stamina, hard), the high school senior (attractive blonde 18 yo rich kid who's in it for sex, submissive, throws fight for you), the kang (buff black wizard man, uses scary elemental magic, okay hth, difficulty hard), sun wukong (yes that sun wukong, has decided to learn tantric buddhism, difficulty prepare your diddly hole), the "old joseph" (handsome, muscular and big older man, experienced but his age is starting to show, difficulty hard) the sorcerer (thin young man, has discovered magic and is powerful but has little control, difficulty normal)

>>10586654

The Doppelganger (Can assume any humanoid form and access fighting skills from the human collective consciousness, can be any role at random, body and skills take hours to change, whimsical and random, difficulty random)

The cyborg engineer (Completely destroyed and rebuilt every body part, gorgeous livingmetal body that's surprisingly soft, powerful and with a broad range of toys, sexually experienced top, futa, difficulty: hard)

An Angel (A sexually frustrated futa warrior angel, starts tournament a virgin, secretly a raging submissive, difficulty: actually easy)

Ninja (futa ninja, likes everything, flexible and adaptable with a lot of skill at stealth and special techniques, difficulty: hard)

The alien (small futa, "grey" alien, powerful-ish psychic, sexual virgin, dominant if she ever discovers herself, difficulty: easy)

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>>10586711
>not also listing young Joseph

>>10584613

>normal

>pleasure (-2)
>immortality (-7)
>low standards: 10 (-6)

>Vampiress: 2 (-7)
>High libido:5 (-2)
>Exhibitionist: tier 2 (0)
>Twin sister (1)
>Extremist: (shit) Nazi (3)
>Clingy: 2 (5)
>Magical girl (6)
>Let's Try that! (7)
>Sex marathon (8)
>Favorite toy (9) Vibrator
>Futa: 2 (11) Horse
>Fertility tier: 0
>Snug fit: 2 (13)
>Deserts (15) Cum
>Cum plugged: 1 (16)
>Weapon obsession (17)
>Seductive (18)
>Pet play (19) dog
>Favorite color (20) red
>Nympho (21)
>Quiet (21)
>Serial killer (22)
>Milk lover (23)
>Sexist (24)
>Horny (25)
>Super tight (26)
>Cum addict (27)
>Sensitive (28)
>Fuck me please (29)
>Blunt (30)
>Body swap (31)
>Unique style (32) Maybe Nazi clothes, to fit the ideology
>Cynical asshole (33)

>>10586417
>>10587056

Some more:

Female:

Jenny one trick (thicc inuit girl, summons spirit animals to lewd you, if you can grab her or disrupt her concentration her spirit animal disappers, she's very sensitive and cums very vast, Difficulty easy), chaos witch (nutty mage, in a strange costume, uses a variety of spells with random effects, experienced but not "good", overall medium but can be easier or harder) the loli (18 yo girl who went though a soft puberty, small and weak, small parts, secretly a raging perv but shy so she and her twin brother entered the tournament to lose their virginity, difficulty: easy-medium (She's a feisty dom once awoken))

Males:

The young joseph (tall handsome man, trickster, flexible adaptable and charming, mixes magic and mundane tricks for devastating results, difficulty hard), satyr (slightly chubby satyr with lower body of a upright goat and upper body of a human and horns, young and experienced but overenthusiastic, difficulty: medium), the shota (18 yo boy who went though a soft puberty, small and weak, small parts, secretly a raging perv but shy so he and his twin sister entered the tournament to lose their virginity, difficulty: easy-medium (he's a feisty dom once awoken))

Futa:

The centauress (a futa centaur, a human female and a male horse combined with front mounted lady bits and male horse bits, cursed with endless lust and the ability to magically safely stretch any hole, very strong and stimulating but with little sexual endurance on the male bits and no experience using the lady bits with a partner, difficulty medium)
the tentacle monster (schoolgirl infested with a symbiote that turns her into a tentacle monster, tentacles are male but rest is female, physically very tough, excellent grappler, able to fire out gallons of splooge as an offensive attack, difficulty: prepare your diddly hole)

Hey, Anons. Dynastylights here.

Well, I've done it. My MILF CYOA Is almost done. It's only two pages long too.

There won't be any points or drawbacks though. It's literally picking and choosing what you want.

I just need four more Perks to be done though.
Perks so far are...
Harem
Allure
Heightening Fertility
Sensitive body
Kemonomimi-ification (Can be taken twice to become a furry)
Elegance
Submissive Mindset
Dominant Mindset
Reverse Harem
Lactation
Job
Amazing cleaner
Kitchen Mistress
Well lubricated

I need four more to complete the last page.

>>10586271
>Huge balls still unclear on whether you need to pick Large or Massive (or either) penis to get the discount
>Fuckable still refers to an even 6" rather than 6"-or-more

>>10588194

Futa, one related to turning "straight" girls and gay guys, excessive wealth, ravishment bait, bedroom skills, giant, smol

>>10588407
sorry, this is such a large CYOA that I cant be 100% consistent, so its nice that you caught that mistake for me! I have over 70 options, I will have many more than this, so there are so many chances to make mistakes. Did you know that there are two "diaper" punishments? I'll put "diapers" into a misc section later.

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>>10584477
FFS Anon! Post the latest version.

Reminder to voice your opinions in the /d/ meta thread and 4chan feedback to get us back in /d/ where we belong. And do try to be eloquent.

Hey, Anons. Dynastylights here.
Here's the MILF CYOA
There isn't any points or draw backs so you can pick whatever you want.

http://imgur.com/zdCEmFX Page 01
http://imgur.com/S9Dm3b3 Page02

Wish I could actually post it here directly but sadly they're both too big.

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Dynastylights here!

AND WAIT A SECOND! Sleep deprivation hasn't beaten me yet!

Here they are!

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>>10589328
Don't tell me what to do, fag.

>>10589397
>>10589407
It's good but missing butt size options and possible a muskelmom option aswell

gotta be S T R O N K for the babby

Dynastylights here

>>10589496
I'll probably add an ass option in the next version... As for a muscled milf?

Hmm... I guess I could add it.

>>10584477
>>10585326
Anyone know what font Tokhaar uses for the body of his cyoas? I'm trying to correct his shitty spelling in Deus Vult.

>>10589397
Body tyoe:
Loli
Breast size:
Average
Bachelor:
Julia Roc

Perks:
1.Kitchen Mistress
2.Heightened Fertility
3.Amazing Cleaner
4.Elegance
5.Dominant Mindset

I will now be the man in the relationship!

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Body Type
Curvy

Breast Size
Large

Bachelor
Henry Willhelm Valintine

Perks
1.Kitchen Mistress
2.Amazing Cleaner
3.Heightened Fertility
4.Submissive Mindset
5.Sensitive Body

I am now a shota's eager lover...

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>>10589397

Questions: Can I take Harem and Reverse Harem at the same time for a big polyamorous family?
If I take Harem, do I have to take it on the other three wives as well? Reverse Harem as well, if the two can combine?

>>10590379
Dynastylights here

I didn't think of that...

Hah...

Well, I guess so. There's nothing saying you can't so I guess you can.

>>10586271
How many more sections will there be, and what will the remaining sections detail / be about?

>>10589397
Ohmigod I love this. I can already make so many builds!

Curvy
Large Breasts

Chung Ae Choi
Chinatsu Matsuda
Dartz Colshune
Joey "Jessica" Monshelly

Kitchen Mistress
Heightened Fertility
Amazing Cleaner
Reverse Harem
Dominant Mindset

Being the Dominant Housewife Mistress and make babies with all my daddies.
Make Monshelly and Choi peg best daddy Matsuda and Dartz with their cocks while they eat me out Mmmph~

Dynastylights here

>>10590506
I'm you like it.

Next update I'll be adding an Ass choice and a fourth Body option (Muscled/athletic)

and maybe a few more bachelors as well.

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>>10584874
I dont know if its from something more original than this

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Dynastylights here

>>10590585

>>10586156
Didn't you promise to include something so you'd only have to crap once a day instead of shitting out of your chest or shitting yourself every two hours?

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>>10584477
>>10589140
OC! The squeal The End 3 won't be made unless I see at least a dozen of different builds for the End 2.

>>10590982
>The End 3 won't be made unless I see at least a dozen of different builds for the End 2.
>letting other people decide whether you make something or not
I thought you said you weren't going to do that anymore?

>>10590982
Kinda would prefer it if you made cyoas not shitposts.

>>10590982
...Come on Tok, don't embarrass yourself more than you already have.

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>>10589397
> body type:
loli

> breast size:
large

> bachelor:
Chung Ae Choi

>perks:
Heightened fertility
Lactation
Sexually gifted
Kitchen Mistress
Amazing Cleaner

Well I share with Chung Ae my preggo fetish, and if I'm not the husband, I can carry the kids myself... Also I will make her forget about her previous collection and show her how a better lover I am...

>>10589397
>>10591074
Dude, that body type isn't loli. That's just an average woman's body.

>>10590982
kys

>>10591057
He's already at rock bottom, a drunk hobo covered in vomit and rotting trash can't really fall muchlower

>>10590982
>Challange Accepted!
>Meredith Vickers
>The Guardian
>Graymane
>Mother fucker

>>10591156
it's more like a porn star's body, but definitely a mature woman

>>10591264
Regardless, I have to wonder where the fuck this guy got the idea that adult bodies were 'loli'.

Dynastylights here

In my defense... I didn't get any sleep last night.

And I already know that the picture isn't exactly loli.

I've already got a picture planned to replace it.

>>10591296
are you trying to bait the 16 year old loli argument again

>>10590982
>Challenge Accepted
>Zilly - Because Zynthia
>The Seventh Deviant - Because Eronomicon was the last cyoa.
>Debbie - No orgasms for the Rotten!
>Weapon - I skip, I will rely on my allies to reach Tok and then talk to him.
>Traps aren't gay!

And talking to Tok could have gone better...

Game over man, game over!

>>10591340
One can hope

>>10591332
Does that body even look like a 16 year old to you?

>>10591381
have you ever eaten a placenta?

>>10591344
And to think my love of Jun Watarase could not save me! Oh well, I don't really care for masculinity anyhow.

That being said, as much as I like Tok and his lewd powers, I don't exactly want his finger near my butt, let alone it.

>>10591381
Yeah. I remember this girl from high school who was basically like that, including the hips but especially the breasts.

>>10591431
Rather overdeveloped girl there.

Anyway 16 is a legal adult where I live, so going all 'muh 16 year old loli' doesn't work too well on me.

>>10591449
The 16 year old loli thing is because of the vagueness of the term loli, if you search across the internet that's about the highest age in definitions you'll find.

>>10591461
I think you're the one trying to draw people into this argument, huh. Been a while since I've seen you shitposting in general.

>>10591449
>Rather overdeveloped girl there.

>a high school girl
>looking like the loli pic in that cyoa
>overdeveloped

Where the hell do you live, Anon? Some kind of Amish enclave where you shitpost with a smuggled-in cellphone?

>>10591476
I can't really cause an argument by pointing out facts. I mean, yeah, some retard might confuse what I'm saying and think it's my opinion or some kind of claim to truth or whatever, but retards will retard.

>>10591480
>>10591074

>>10591500

Well fuck me I'm retarded then. Less common but still a thing, though.

>>10589397
Loli with small breasts married to Julia Roc.
>>10589407
Alluring sexually gifted rapebait with a well-lubricated sensitive body

>>10591480
>This anon thinks most adults have massive tits and breeder hips because he reads too much hentai

>>10591449
High school girls tend to look more or less like adult women, assuming they've been properly fed isntead of growing up in some third world country. In terms of curve, at least. Plenty of girls are pretty much done growing, aside from growing fat perhaps, by the time they're 16.

>>10591536
Going to reiterate a few points

1. Someone used the language 'mature' body. If they're done growing, their body is mature, regardless of their numerical age.

2. As I pointed out, 16 is an adult where I live, so a 16 year old IS an adult woman.

>>10591574
All 16 year old human bodies are mandated by law to stop growing where you live? Dang, man, how do they enforce that?

>>10591609
>A law that makes 16 year old bodies to stop growing can be enforced
Excuse me while i research how replicate that and make a secret loli/shota utopia island

Captcha:Chemin bowls

>>10591609
Oh boy you're trying to start an argument over the term 'adult'.

>There's still a guy arguing a porn term based on lolita complex, which is a Japanese way of referring to someone attracted to prepubescent girls, actually applies to grown or nearly grown late teen girls

>>10591801
I'm so glad I got you covered in that post :^)

>>10591849
People like you are making the /trash/ thread even more shitposty than the /tg/ one, which is impressive.

>>10591801
>loli is a porn term
hey mister, are you a pedophile?

>>10591867
Sure is, unless you're being an autist. Hentai is a type of porn, anon.

I'm going to point out that you're on a website founded by lolicons too, though I get the vibe that you're the shitposter on all the CYOA threads.

>doms have to barely scrape b in most CYOAs and have to compromise with fetishes they don't enjoy
>subs literally get rewarded for their fetish
when will it be the other way around? when will the doms be at the top, as it should be in the natural order?

>>10591895
When subs stop making CYOAs.

>>10591888
>>10591863
>>10591801
>complains about shitposting
>in three posts he piles up more shit into the thread than everyone preceding him combined

>>10589397
>Curvy
>Large Breasts
Duh.
>Dartz Colshune
Maybe when the technology's advanced enough, we can get... partial changes.

>Dominant Mindset
It's no fun if they don't push back a little...
>Elegance
Obviously.
>Allure
Well, you can't expect me to be *ugly*, can you?
>Ara Ara~
Fun.
>Sexually Gifted
Rather obligatory.

>>10591895
doms don't deserve anything for free, they need to go out and make the world give them those things

>>10591895
This is your chance anon, show those subby bitches who is on top! [spoiler]I have been having too much fun anon please punish me[/spoiler]

>>10590982
I was filled with respect, but this infection keeps opening sores all over my respect sac, and now the respect is just oozing out onto the ground.

I didn't think it would be that color...

>>10586271
Vagina/breasts when?

>>10592537
>Vagina
>In trap CYOA
I Doubt it

Does anyone have that growth CYOA that was posted in a thread long ago?

>>10592762
>that growth CYOA
Please explain in greater detail.

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>>10585326
>>10585339
>>10585367
>>10585388

Class; >Martyr
Judgements; >Holy Seed, Charm, Fucked Straight, Burden of Sin

Blessings; >Diligence, Virgula Divina+, Divine Protection+, Divine Beauty+, Immortality, Holiest of Swords+, Sealed Demon of Wrath, Favored Enemy+(Witches, Hellhounds), Harem+

Chosen Enemies;
>Mortals, Possessed, Witches, The Undead, Vampires, Demons, Fallen Angels, Minotaurs, Hellhounds

Companions;
>Sister Anna, Sister Cathryn, Beatrice Beaufort, Sister Sarah, Sister Mercy

Base of Operation
>Church

Missions;
>The Night Queen, Demon Layer(Gluttony) The Secret War, Cult of Cthu

Drawbacks;
>Double-Edged Sword, Stalked, Damsel in Distress, Heroism

Secrets;
>Beastmaster (Hellhound, Minotaur)

I am the Holy Husbando. My allure is unmatched by any, drawing the corrupted to me with tremendous fervor. My judgement brings them into my harem, some as guardians, companions, or brood-mothers, yet all faithful lovers to me. Many of those who seek to best me employ tricks to avoid my judgement, yet the strength of my harem is more than enough to subdue them once drawn in by my divine beauty.

Between the many missions, my ability to sense the corrupted from a mile away, and the forces of evil always out to kidnap my flock, I likely will remain constantly on the move. Wherever I go, the people shall become pure, and the women pregnant, with my ever-growing band of apostles/lovers to keep me company. I will personally see to it that the next generation is faithful, pure, and blessed with fantastic jawlines and clear skin.

Challenge accepted - lets do this shit
The Guardian - She's a cute
Meredith Vickers - Dont mind a horse cock but balls the size of melons might be hard to walk with...
Wendy - I chose her once ill chose her again.
Dildagger - all of the dildaggers ill use them as throwing weapons....

>>10590982
Are you literally autistic?

>>10593293
Ignore it. It's just Tok shitposting.

>>10590982
>>10593293
>>10593305

With the amount of shitposting he does he could start his own Tok show.

>>10589397
No offense, but you should work a lot on your grammar and formatting. You could also try not using Times New Roman and a flat single color background. For all his faggotry, Tokhaar Gol did some good work on that respect. Also considering there's a lot of futas already, there should be an option to let you become one as well, for more efficient breeding (and pegging).

Anyways, build.

>Curvy
>Large breasts
Well, if I'm going to be a MILF, I gotta look the part.

>Joey
>Kotomi-er, Chinatsu
>Henry
>Dartz
Gotta have harems

>Reverse Harem
Obvious option
>Kitchen Mistress
I have 4 mouths to feed already and that's before the children.
>Allure
Yes.
>Sexually Gifted
YES.
>Ara Ara~
You heard me.

I'm going to cocktease my cute hubbies relentlessly and see who's the first to crack and ravish me.

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Dynastylights here

>>10593538

Kudos to your brilliant Pun.

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>>10590982
OC! The Fellowship of the Ring!

Dynastlights here

>>10593682
Yeah... I don't have Gimp all figured out sadly. As for grammar and formatting... I do need to work on that.

Any suggestions on how to improve my backgrounds?

But no. You will not have the option to become a Futa yourself.

If you dislike it. Then please, by all means, use my MILF CYOA and make one that suits your likes.

I will be balancing out the futas with more males in the next update.

>>10589397
Can we get some men who aren't old or a shota? I only see one and he's a nigger.

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>>10585326
I am making a gay version of Deus Vult. Here is the first page. I will continue if there is enough support for it.

Does anyone have the rwby waifu one? Forgot to save it and can't find it in the pastebin.

>>10593930
>Can turn everyone into traps and fuck them into becoming my loving wives (male)
YES FINALLY
would've preferred a bisexual version but what can you do

>>10593930
Change the name to Gay-Ass Vult and you'll have my support

>>10593930
You need to find better images and make them less banned in the UK with those edges. Reincarnation was the only good one, most were ok and some for ugly fucking trash.

I mean the least you could do is not literaly paste over his CYOA. It's shit. Dont do more unless you're going to actualy just make your own instead of copy pasing 90% of someone elses CYOA.

>>10593840
What about submissive Kotomine Kirei? But yeah I would enjoy having some hunky Jonathan Joestar-like musclemen.

>>10594016
I know what age you listed, but he looks a lot older to me.

>>10590982
I actualy enjoyed this even though it was mostly a joke I was unironicly aroused and ammused. Fun laid back meme stuff is pretty good and chill.

>>10586271
The shade of green you use in Permanent Erection is basically unreadable on that background color.

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>>10593958
This one?

>>10594330
"real"

>>10594350
They are real. As in, the delusions are really happening.

>>10594330
Yes, thanks!

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>>10594330
>>10594376
Here's the Mystery Box, then. Can't spoiler it because red board.

>>10593930
I'm okay with this, as long as there are trap/shota options.

>>10590982
Accepted the challenge. But then didn't read the text. Muhahaha. The only winning move is not to play.

>>10592898
You created a girl and decided to what size she could grow and in what way and all that jazz and then what she would do while at said size. Sorry i don't remember much.

rasco here
>>10594000
Haha maybe. I thought of calling it Gaius Vult to fit with the Latin theme. Instead I went with militum sodomiticum (soldiers of sodomy)
>>10594012
Finding images was a challenge, and I know some are pretty trash
>Less banned in the UK with those edges
???
>I mean the least you could do
I have credited this as his. What I am doing is similar to installing a mod in a video game.
Also, it is hypocritical to claim the ethics of stealing someone's cyoa work when the author themselves has not asked permission for any of the artwork used.
>>10594436
>>10593998
Thx for feedback, the final thing will have more dickgirl content

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>>10594521
Guessing you mean this one, then?

Page 1/3.

>>10594012
Also I would appreciate suggestion images for the choices, or images that you think should replace ones I have put

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>>10594776
Page 2/3.

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>>10594786
Page 3/3.

>>10594685
Get rid of the stupid part about having to buy each monster separately and you'll have improved it massively with less effort than it takes people to complain about it.

>>10594814
what part do you mean? is it from the DLC, cause if im honest ive never read the DLC...

>>10594834
He means having to spend points to judge demons, witches, ect.

The DLC only mattered to me because you can have a vagina with no dick and can transform others with a touch.

>>10594685
>the final thing will have more dickgirl content
That's a shame.

Also, traps aren't futas. Traps are men who look like girls without tits. Shemales are men with tits. Dickgirls/futa is hermaphrodites.

>>10594776
>>10594786
>>10594796
yes, that's it, thank you anon

>>10594814
>>10594925
Right, thanks. For balance I might make it so that you can spend points to instantly judge some monsters (so avoid their penalty for losing) and the rest you have to defeat in combat to judge (unless you pick martyr)
>>10594950
noted. i thought dickgirl was a general term. i might make some monsters be traps/shemales, but the focus will be full metal faggotry

>>10590982
Chalenge Accepted, Bitch.
>Meridith Vickers
Maybe no Horse cock futa but fun will deffinately be had
>Debbie
I-It's not like I like orgasm denial or anything!
>The Unnamed
I-IT'S NOT LIKE I LIKE FOOTJOBS EITHER!!
>Critique
You know what I realy liked about just about all of your CYOAs but was missing in Eromancer? characters. Just about all the ones with more than one page with the exception of infected has either a waifu or cool interactable characters. Mindslaver even had pacts which involved people which was cool. Even the characters in this little meme CYOA are fun and I like them. It's just thatI think tha- etc. etc.

>meme showdown with Tok and transformed into trap with a new quest
Yeah this was pretty good. Well done.

>>10594685
>>Less banned in the UK with those edges
>???
Knives are banned in the UK and the images are jaggy as fuck

>>10595031
>i thought dickgirl was a general term.
It is, encompassing both shemales/newhalfs and futas (but generally not traps). The other stuff that >>10594950 said is more-or-less correct (except for the "men with tits" part, since at least to me, that'd imply masculine males with tits as opposed to feminine males with tits - the latter being what shemales/newhalfs are, and the former generally having their own /d/ threads separate from dickgirls).

>>10595247
Men = male. That's decided by your chromosomes, no amount of surgery changes that.

>>10594330
Pyrrha
Winter
Neo
Yang
Get a song of ice and fire and juicy fat tits

>>10595337
This is hentai, not real life

>>10595337
>Men = male.
Unless they're cuntboys.

>>10589397
Curvy, average breasts
Dartz Colshune
Mark Walhart
Chinatsu Matsuda

Reverse harem
Ara Ara
Allure
Sexually gifted

>>10595393
Still true in hentai unless we're involving magic.

>>10593734
The adventure continues from here: >>10595199

>Dwarves
Nothing worse than drunk hairy manlets. how terrible this trial will be for me.

>Butt-Maid
Oh no! Looks like I have become a butt slut, how terrible. How can a cute trap like me go on with such an afliction, but I must!

>lost my leg
fuck.
nobody will carry me for free and no gold to pay with, even if I did Debbie would have spent it all. FUCK!

>Thunder Thighs
Because strong women
>Warf's Daughter
Because cute!

>they were all his wives
thank god I didnt get tricked and picked selfishly! sph is my fetish so the real joke is on everybody else.

>Cockring of Binding
I will bind Tok's cock and make it limp forever so that he can only experence pleasure from taking it from behind like what he did to me! Oh, and drag him back to /trash/ and have him make more porn or something. also /tg/ cant have him. Priorities though.

Dear Deus, I hope I dont have to go to Reddit. Part 2 was better because I didnt haveto fuck smelly manlets and lose a leg but the memes were good and the dwarf babes were fine.

>>10595337
you're entitled to your wrong opinion

>>10593734
I think everyone missed this.

>>10595610
>Part 2
>dwarf babes
Assuming you're talking about the thing you replied to, it'd be Part 3, not 2.

>>10595612
Shut up, tranny.

>>10595686
I was saying 2 was better because x but in this one i enjoyed the dwarf babes and memes.

My post was a continuation from my reply to part 2.

>>10584568
Dark elf
Salvation
Teenager
Charismatic
Leather collar
Adore rune
Stamina rune
Casual clothing
Respectful
Firm
Spanking, isolation and reprimand
Literature, history and courtesan
Greeter
Outings, journal, candy and fine jewelry

get 16 year old dark elf. quick witted yet disciplined, would be a politician if not for her slavedom. Treat her with respect and value, make her like me and trust me, be her friend. Also fuck her on the casual

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>>10593930
>Ruining Tok's best CYOA to spite him.

>>10595740
Ah, so "part 2 was better because X, but I enjoyed part 3 because Y". Got it. Apologies for failing to properly parse what I read.

>>10584613
>Body type
3
>Flaws
66 Super tight
5 Dirty mouth
53 Horny
9 Extremist
60 Romantic messages
57 Daddy issues

This girl is a full on Marxist, and will always want to talk about politics and is a member of antifa. This, along with her dirty dirty language and filthy filthy behaviour is partly to rebel against her conservative parents, which explains her daddy issues.

>>10595824
>Ruining
Either you're homophobic or that is just your opinion
>Tok's best CYOA
Naw mate, Enslaved is the best
>to spite him.
No. I was thinking about doing this before the drama. I really like Tok's work although I wish he'd use spellchecker or just learn English. I do think he is being a brat by talking about quitting. This is not to spite him.
If Tok gets pissed at me for doing this, then I'd be dissapointed, cause that would show him to be a complete and utter brat.
No h8 tok bby xxx

>>10593138

The very first sentence under "Missions" says you can only take one mission, you illiterate retard.

>>10596036
>you're homophobic
WEW LAD

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What other types of Mommies are there? I only have slutty, oblivious, and doting so far and I feel like I need more.

>>10596152
Abusive.

>>10596152
Cool mom Discipline mom?

>>10596152
Monster mom.

Can someone explain all the controversy around tokhaar? Why were people calling him autistic and spiting him? What happened?

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>>10596036
>you're homophobic

>>10596152
Succubus mom, Accidentaly alway giving me a boner mom, mom dom mom, sleepy mom, fit mom, librarian mom, business mom and ntr/lesbian mom (she steals all your gfs)

>>10596298
The last one reveals you to be a shitstain.

>>10596231
He got angry that people didnt like eronomicon, people told him to change some things, he didnt want to and said that there would be flaws and decided he was not going to do any updates and just move on, people got angry, he got angry, people got angry and it devolved into just angr and shitposting.

Looks like he's made an 'I quit' cyoa but then updated it with a part 2 so anons could go on an adventure to find Tok and he made a part 3 to it so he seems to be coming down and dealing with it in meme cyoas that are actualy pretty decent. still a little salt can be picked up from it and the anons are a little salty too.

I dont hold anything against Tok even though I was personaly dissapointed in what eronomicon ended up being but I still enjoyed and fapped to it. Hope this shit blows over and people drop this shitty grudge shit.

>>10596231
He made a cyoa called Eronomicon but it was really unfinished in that some of the mechanics were outright broken. People who were excited for a new Tok cyoa were disappointed and complained in the /trash/ thread. Unfortunately, Tok was in the thread and was pretty angry with everyone who was criticizing him (although I can understand why)
Then Tok revealed that he was making the cyoa in order to win a competition on Reddit to win 25$ on steam (wew). Tok receives nothing but praise from Reddit, so upon visiting 4chan it was a bit of a shock for him.
Then an anon said that he would "remake" an "improved" Eronomicon and that really pissed Tok off. He said he would quit and then made that "THE END" cyoa that is reposted in every damn thread. Anons then started calling him a wuss for not taking the criticism.

>>10596398
Holy shit, is that why he made the end cyoa?

>>10596395
What exactly was the issue with eronomicon?


Thank you to both of you anons, btw.

>>10596398
>>10596448
this is the /trash/ thread. Tok always posts here and everyone knows it, the criticsm was directed at him. Tok had planned Eronomicon long before the reddit competition so it wasnt made for that but people accused him of rushing it because of that but the deadline is like 3 weeks so it wasnt that and he just posted it there anyway. He was saying that reddit was praising him though compared to 4chan though. That one anon coming up with ideas for his own version of eronomicon did piss him off though.

>>10596448
>Holy shit, is that why he made the end cyoa?
it was kind of a way to both let out anger and prove that the post was coming from him as realy only he would know who was fraud posting and who was realy him.

>What exactly was the issue with eronomicon?
Common complaints were balance stuff between the schools, which spells belinged in which schools, fetishes giving points but not having spells related to them, green having 1 less possible corruption choice than othr schools, feeling short or small because of the limit of 2 schools. Just read it yourself and make your own judgements on it. I'l post it for you.

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>>10596448
1/4

>>10596448
The main mechanic was that there were 7 schools of magic, each with a different colour.
Points used in exchange for lewd spells were gained by having fetishes. Each school had a list of 12-16 fetishes, and the number of those that you had would determine the number of points you had in each school.
Then you'd pick 2 schools and could only use spells from those 2. That meant that a huge cyoa became a tiny one. You had a choice of 5-9 spells at most because of this 2 school restriction.
Also, it was not really clear what passed for "having" the fetish. Most /d/enizens could get stacks and stacks of points, and then have only a few spells to pick from.
Only 3.5 of the 7 schools were very good, so if your main fetish was not in those, the cyoa was really boring.
It just wasn't up to his usual standard really. A 6 page cyoa that you could only use 2 pages,

>>10596571
Ah, Thank you. Seriously.

>>10596515
>That one anon coming up with ideas for his own version of eronomicon did piss him off though

How'd he react?

Sorry, I just love drama.

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>>10596584
2/4

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>>10596596

>>10596448
>What exactly was the issue with eronomicon?
Green required tremendous investment to perform absolute basic functionality, several schools quite noticeably didn't have any spells or corruption for most of the fetishes listed under their Essence heading, Red's corruption options were almost entirely either crippling or caused massive personality changes (and/or identity death), all of the schools inexplicably had a "turn into (colour specific) girl" corruption option, that was usually the least inconvenient option, meaning that most players ended up having to become girls just to get one or two spells, and Planeswalker and Unlimited Power are both so much better than anything else in the cyoa that there's no reason to not get at least one of them you have the points.

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>>10596612
4/4

>>10596585
>Each school had a list of 12-16 fetishes
they all had 14 each
>A 6 page cyoa that you could only use 2 pages,
it was 4 pages and the math equaled to about 5/12 being used

>>10596660
thanks for the enlightment

I think the problems can be more-or-less summarized as "the powers one can gain from the CYOA proper are not as great and/or come with more and/or worse downsides than powers one can gain from THG's other CYOAs".

Wonder if Tok would've done a better job if he had done it as seven stand-alone single-page CYOAs that could be combined (kinda like Conduit) instead of what it ended up being.

>>10596677
>seven
...or eight, if you add in the boons, rules, etc. as a similar page to what Earth is for Conduit.

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TOK HAAR GOL

In regards to your Seven Deadly Sins Waifu CYOA: Would the waifus, Lust, Greed, Pride and Wrath in particular behave appropriately/give you space if something really sad/depressing/bad happened to you? If you had to attend a funeral, could they stay within reasonable cultural behaviors for the duration?

Thank you in advance

>>10596591
>How'd he react?
He felt disrespected and was the last straw for him and he made "The End". Then a part 2 and 3 which used memes and banter more than anger so It looks like he's having fun with those at least and less angry when he left. Hope he comes back or keeps making the meme parts, they are fun to read.

>>10596618
>Green required tremendous investment to perform absolute basic functionality,
That was fixed, I feel, in the last update he did where upgraded shrink and grow were not needed for big/smaller individual body parts and was placed in basic version of transform.

>>10596711
Way to kill the mood, sorry for your loss.

>>10596717
>It looks like he's having fun with those
He's desperately damage controlling and making himself look like a fool by continuing them. He should just go, if he can spend soo much time making The End garbage why couldn't he spend time fixing Eronomicon.

>>10596907
I dissagree and find them amusing and somewhat arousing, probably because I dont have a grudge up my ass with his name on it. Personaly just moving past Eronomicon is the best thing at this point, it just pissed everyone off and clearly nobody realy wants it. I'd would just piss everyone off by bringing it up again. If he makes good shit I'll fucking enjoy it because I dont give a shit about this drama bullshit.

>>10584568
>Dark Elf
Because they're the cutest
>Spirited Away
>Teenager
Adult is probably slightly older than me, so that may interfere with the power dynamic, plus she'll be more malleable than if she was fully grown
>Friendly, Clever, Charismatic
Because fuck subrace description
>Intricate Choker
Just so she doesn't get into trouble if she's out without me escorting her
>No runes
>Casual Clothes
Fashion
>Master Bedroom
I have a pullout couch, we can share the bed later
>Fatherly
Sugar Daddy
>Appeasing
But I'm not gonna let her take advantage, her being clever and all
>Reprimand, Pillories, Spanking
But I'll probably only use reprimand
>Literature, Mathematics, History
>Management
>Journal, Fine Jewelry, Warm Cloak, Small Pet, Free Time, Outings, Candy, Furniture
Rescue Dark Elf from dick master, don't have extra rooms, so we share, I think with my dick, so I'm really nice to her, and I guess she falls for me because I'm the first guy who's been nice to her and hasn't tried to force his fireman up her snatch.

>>10589140
I swear, If I ever make my own CYOAs, I'm gonna infringe on Tok's OC just to be a dick. That'll probably just be a bunch of Zynthia, since I don't really recall him coming up with much more than that, and even she's just Hex Maniac by a different name.

>>10589397
Couple things design wise. That background color is terrible. Way too saturated. The compression on the cyoa is also terrible. It's far too much causing artifacts around the words and making it difficult to read. They're not even close to the 4 meg limit so you have room to ease off on the compression.

So that aside, thanks for making content!

>>10596717
If he comes back, it probably won't be as Tok, since he sperged out and went full retard. We'll probably have a new original content creator who's style and tastes are suspiciously similar to Tok's, but will vehemently deny being the same person.

>>10597233
Ifhe comes back as himself I'd be fine with him because even though I was angry with how dismissive he was kind of being to requested changes and the whole shitstorm happened, It was ironicly "The End" that made me realise that I can still enjoy the stuff he makes. So I dont hold it against him and hope for his swift return for part 4.

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As a sometimes content creator myself, i understand tok's frustration. Making long cyoa's for absolutely nothing and just hearing complaints the moment you drop it out. It really is disheartening and depressing, and pisses you off a little bit.

That said, his autistic outburst and melo dramatic 'quitting' was just pathetic. I've alwyas disliked him, since he has this weird God complex around himself. Even before he was the sole regular OC creator here, he seemed to think he was some kind of alpha or some shit of the CYOA general. It's kinda fun to see him collapse, not gonna lie.

>>10597310
You seem suspiciously hungry to suck his cock for some reason, and I'm not sure if it's autofellatio or not.

>>10597320
What's wrong with criticism? I love getting it, it helps me improve and shows me things I may have missed when making it. Sure you might get shit thrown in with it too but alot of it is easily filtered and can be safely ignored.

>>10597404
Nothing against criticism, just when you get insulted. Constructive criticism is awesome. It's when people just whine.

>>10597337
I'm just not angry at him anymore and can look over this fucking retarded drama shit.

>>10597320
Sounds like jealousy. post what you made and we'll see. thb when only one pwerson continualy makes above average content and nobody can compete then hes going to be the only one getting atention. You realy just sound salty.

>>10597449
Why are you trying so hard to suck his cock?

There are tons of more successful cyoa creators I admire and think are awesome. SDA being the main one. Tok had a narcissistic obsession with his own work.

>>10597320
>I've alwyas disliked him, since he has this weird God complex around himself.
I always found his posts funny and actually better than pretty much all other authors. Probably my favourite author for his comments atleast.
With this though, not sure what to think. Just goes to show, namefags truly need to go, for their own mental health and for the good of the general.

>>10597484
I'm just not bandwaggoning on this retarded hate because I already got over it. If he does stupid shit in the future I'll get mad again but right now I'm over it. That's not sucking his dick.

>>10597518
I'm not a namefag?

>>10597542
Something lost in translation?

>>10596152
reasonable
insane
the really good yet overweight mom (not anime overweight, actually fat)

>>10597537
m8 he's gotten worse over the past three days, not better

>>10597404
Criticism can get crippling when there's so much that you don't know where to start with it. But most of all, I think the problem was that he disagreed fundamentally with the criticism and didn't want to make changes in the direction people wanted, which makes the criticism unconstructive. Which is fine if you just put your foot down on the issue and deal with the fact that not everyone will like it, but he also decided to argue about it, which just invites more criticism and ironically makes him look more stubborn than if he didn't take the criticism at all.

>>10597484
Tok is the patron saint of humility compared to SDA.

>>10596152
Anyone have that Uno Makoto image with the moms? Should be good for inspiration.

>>10597988
It's still constructive criticism to tell someone their roof is leaky even if they're too lazy to fix it.

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>>10598042
I think I'd rather put up with SDA's smug than Toks legion of cock suckers.

Can someone post the most recent version of Mindslaver?

>>10598193
1. No it's not.
2. That's a really bad analogy.

>>10598293
>This retard wants to sit in his leaky house and pretend it's not a problem.
Sub-human.

>>10598293
1 Yes, it is.
2 It's actualy a very accurate one.

>>10598324
Not an argument.

>>10598364
Your's was literaly "1. No it's not."

>>10586156
Glad you're still working on it!

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>>10598265

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>>10599419

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>>10599429

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>>10599444
Though looking at the version number, I'm not certain that this is the most recent

>>10584613
>>10584621
>>10584634
>Normal

>money -3
>luck -5
>pleasure tier 2 -8
>Heath and Home (Comfy lake cabin with all the modern conveniences) -9
>Immortality Tier 2 -15
>Beauty -17

>choosy (girl 37 + 21)

>Twin Sister +1
-girl 37
-Loli +2
-Daddy Issues +3
-Super Tight +4
-girl 21
-Milking +5
-Orgasm Denial +6
-Sweaty +7
>Exhibitionist +9
>Sex Marathon +10
>Seductive +11
>Milk Lover +12
>Hungry +13
>Junky (psychedelics) +14
>unique style (flower child) +15
>Neet +16
>Extremist (shaman)

>>10590982
You misspelled busy in the motherfucker description.

>>10589397
curvy
Average
Lucy Krause

Kitchen Mistress
Allure
Submissive Mind
Elegance
Sexually Gifted


Im an easy victim when its mentioned about a Futa/shemale domme. Didnt bother about a Job. Allure to get things done when she's not around. Taking cooking to prepare meals for her. Submissive mind obvious. Elegance because royalty. Hopefully though her marriage ceremony would be me kneeling down and her locking the collar, instead of rings exchange.

>>10596711
He's gone, had a shit attack over people criticizing his latest CYOA and sombody wanting to make ine based off it, said he was migrating to reddit, "where they respect his artistic integrity"

>>10599570
there are plenty of typos but it's still fun.

>>10599787
>said he was migrating to reddit, "where they respect his artistic integrity"
He technicaly didnt say that and he even recognises that the content over on reddit is basicaly taken from 4chan and basicaly none is made there and is basicaly useless for discussion. I'm looking forward to his next CYOA. Hoping it's the dnd one with Susie.

>>10600026
>He

>>10584568
High Elf
>Higher they are lower they fall.

Purchased
> A spoil of war being sold for money urgencies of a soldier.

Adult
>Grown enough for me to be interested

Clever
Charismatic
Friendly
> Clever and Charismatic as a full grown high elf. More than enough to realize if she behaved a little friendly, she could survive.

Leather Collar.
> Custom made.

A Sorcerer Rune
>to see her magic capabilities

Maid outfit
>For household work
Harem Jewelry
>When in public

Servernts Quarter
>Slightly better than the picture. A small room with a bed, table, chair, cupboard, Book rack.

Respectful Treatment

Firm
>A good balance of appreciation and punishment.

Pillories
> In the front yard. Other workers get to grope. Visitors or travelers passing by get to use the mouth. She should learn she is no longer high.
Spanking/Paddle
> Give a good paddling, so she'll remember.

Literature
> She would speak human.
Courtesan
> For my pleasure
Combat
> In case an emergency.

Management
> Looking after other workers and slaves.
Guard
> In cases of emergencies.

Elven Trinkets.
Warm Cloak
Free time
Outings.


Telepathy
Heal
Treatment


A high elf captured by a soldier. His money troubles make him sell her, and i get lucky with it. She works as a manager for my workers. And on evenings my sex doll. Although friendly she has her high elf attitudes. In such arrogant moments she would get a paddling, or in worse pilloried. In time she will slowly turn.

>>10600099
I know for a fact that Tok's a guy. And his dick's actually a pretty nice size too.

Motherfucker needs to clean his fucking room though, it's a mess.

>>10599419
>>10599429
>>10599444
>>10599459
Yeah, there was at least a 1.3. Thanks anyways anon!

>>10600154
Is this his mother?

>>10600574
Probably saw a dickpic.

>>10600154
That's why Susie is best gir.

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Heres updated mindslave from the one in the thread now.

1/3

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>>10601017

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>>10601068
3/3

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>>10600989

>>10601017
Thanks anon!

>>10601350
4 pages into 3 pages to make it easier to post and changes a thing so that your chosen slaves change from saying "mind fucked and vampyrism is optional on them as you see fit" to removing the part about vampyrism because it was already optional I guess.

>>10593930
>>10594685
That looks like fucking garbage. I'll swap the futa parts you're adding with the original since futa is great though.

>>10589397
You mislabeled the average body as loli, the plump body as curvy, and the huge cow as plump.
Same thing for breasts.


Maybe some of that is just to taste, but there's not nearly enough variety in body types, is what I'm saying.

Also no other body choices. Face, age, height? Anything?

Finally, the layout is pain in the ass to read when images and text aren't arranged to the same height / width

>>10593734
The key to winning this is to obviously do what Tokhaar himself would do!
>I choose whoring, because Tokhaar is already addicted to anal sex! (maybe?)
I gain 100 gold, and then Zilly takes it away from me.

I now lose my leg to a lego, and no party member can carry me, but at least my party has souvenirs.

>Unleash the beast on Bitch Face and Warf's Daughter!
Ultimately this ends up as expected. I'm no Tok after all.

>I choose the Cock ring of Iron!

...
Wait a second, if the cock rings make it impossible to orgasm, wouldn't that seal Tok's lewd powers, and subsequently his cyoa making ability?

>>10602354
>>I choose the Cock ring of Iron!
YOU FOOL! In the next part Tok flips the tables on you and plants that ring on YOU! what a foolish mistake you have made. You were to pick wat would be best for you which should ave been becoming limp dicked anal super trap!

>>10602456
I was actually expecting him to flip the tables on me to a certain extent. If that's what will happen then so be it! remember me anon, for I will be a martyr! (And also an idiot weaboo.) Come Tokhaar Gol! Take me now and show me what it means to be lewd!!!

>>10602550
You will not be forgotten but also your adventure will probably not end after the flipped tables of the ring reversal and will likely be sent on an adventure to aquire another one of the only pieces of equipment powerful enough to stop him. But you will do that adventure as the always aroused trap with a butt plug and eternal erection that just wont quit. You'd be sure to get a name for yourself going around like that.

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>>10584568
I like elves
>Race:
Celestial
>Encounter
Spirited away
>Age
Child
>Characteristics
Friendly–Charismatic–Clever
>Brand
Intricate Choker
>>Magic
>Personality Runes
Addict
>Physical
Strenght
>Clothing
Casual–Harem
>Accomodations
Master bedroom
>Treatment
Fatherly
>Severity
Appeasing
>Punishment
Reprimand–Spanking–Isolation
>T&E
Sorcery–Craftsman–Combat
>Employment
None
>G&T
Journal–Wooden Toys–Plushie–Cloack–Pet–Free time–Candy–Furniture
>Magic
Possesion–Telepathy

I want a cute daughter to raise and make schemes to get free candy from time to time :'(

>>10584596
Tristain & The Caller
>>+1
>Combat
>Command
>Wild Lore
>Alchemy
>Wind
>Water
–Skill
·20
>Combat lv.3
·18
>Alchemy lv.3
·16
>Wild Lore lv.3
·14
>Command lv.2
·13
>Arcana lv.3
·10
>Tradecraft lv.3
·7
>Shadowcraft lv.3
·4
>Crafting lv.3
·1
>Investigation lv.1
·0
–Magic
·20
>Water lv.5 +Arcana
·16
>Wind lv. 5 +Arcana
·12
>Earth lv.5 +Arcana
·7
>Fire lv.5 +Arcana
·2
>Abyss lv.2 +Arcana
·0
[…]
Part 2 when?

>>10586271
>bright green on sky blue
it hurts to try to read it, can't you change either the bg color or the letter's one?

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>>10592609
breasts sound nice tho.
A cute little trap with a pair of A cups

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>>10584613
Money
Skill
Adventure
Home


Emasculation girl

Exhibitionist
Butt Plug
Futa
Orgasm denial
Desert (cum)
Seductive
Emasculation
Horny
I Say Stop
Sex Marathon

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4/4

I actually really like this idea of some kind of arena deathmatch game where the winner can inflict punishments on the losers

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>>10589397
please, more options in regards to body and more info on the "Bachelors" maybe add a pic of their dicks for the ones that ain't showing it off

>>10596298
Stacy's mom (has got it going on)

>>10585326

Gun Priest
Salvation
Straight to Hell
Second chance

Divina

Missionary
Immortal
Upgraded Demon

Mortal
Possessed
Demons

Sister Anna
Sister Mercy

Heaven

Wolfs among Sheep

Last chance
B'Elena
Double Edged sword

>>10594786
Full size (lel) pic of the angelic option please

>>10601017
>14
Familiar.
Seems like a fun option
>12
Unaware.
'tis better if they don't know it
>11
Rewrite memory–induce fetish–Age manipulation–Mass control–immortality–Hive mind
> 0
Flesh sculptor–Expanded mind–Telekinesis–planeswalker
> -17
Permanent changes–Rapey–Laura–Deus vult–Eldritch horror–sign of influence–Madness–Unnatural aura–Star guardians–the abyss
> -3
Pact of comfyness
> 0
*free slave* Melissa

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>>10584568
>celestial elf
>???
>child
>submissive
>clever
>friendly
>???????????

tfw no master to make as happy as i can because he takes care of me

>>10590982
>That feel when anons continue to rub salt in Toks' wounds.

>>10597449
>continualy makes above average content
>implying

>>10605744
It's like the Princess fiasco all over again.

>>10605744
Tok's the one making these. He puts them in his google drive.

>>10605792
Why? 0.o Now I'm confused.

Did he realize he overacted and is now trying to play it off? Is he still tilted and trying to shitpost? What he playing us for a loop the whole time?
Whats going on?

>>10605897
The only one who knows what makes tok tick is tok

>>10596152
teacher mommy

>>10584568
>be me
>find half-elf girl rotting away, abandoned
>she's only a teen, and I think it'd be a waste to let her die alone
>take her home
>she seems pretty friendly, though she seems pretty terrified at first, albeit submissive

>decide to give her a really nice, intricate choker
>want her to warm up to me, but given the state of things I may have to put an adoration rune on her choker
>also bless her with fertility, so that she can give me many children if ever need be

>give her cute and submissive maid outfit
>make her sleep in my bedroom, since it can get a little lonely in there
>treat her with respect, but stay firm when it comes to punishments
>train her in literature and history, so that she can read to me at night
>train her in courtesanship, for if the need ever arises
>have her as greeter for my guests

>decide to give her a few things to help her adjust
>mainly some simple stuff, such as a journal for her thoughts, a cloak for the weather, and some, as well as a couple outings and free time for her to relax

>over all, hopefully this elf waifu will be a good one

>>10607005
>>train her in courtesanship, for if the need ever arises
Don't pretend this is innocent. You trained her as a prostitute, a practice that's going to involve having her get fucked by strange men and women so she knows how to fuck well. All so you could farm her out for cash like a whore.

>>10607033
What if he just wants her to be a good lay for himself?

>>10601068
>Method
Familiar

>Slave types
Pet
Conditioned
Unaware

>Boons
Libido
Fuckable Urethra
Cum Addiction
Orgasm Control
Lactation
Rewrite personality
Combat training
Tireless servant

>Powers
Flesh sculptor
Telekinesis
Summoning

>Drawbacks
Permanent
Mind fucked
Laura (oh shit what am I in for)
Unnatural Aura
The Abyss

>Pact
Pact of Hell (No, I can't submit to comfy)

>Slave
Melissa

Making a force of sexy pets, maids, and warriors seems lovely and fun

>>10607784
Still had this scared girl forced to fuck strange men and women to become an expert at sex. Pretty monstrous.

>>10584568
>Celestial elf
>Purchased
>Child
>Dull Friendly Sorrowful
>Intricate choker
>Sorcerer rune
>Harem jewelry Casual clothing
>Master bedroom
>Fatherly
>Appeasing
>Reprimand Spanking Isolation
>Literature Mathematics Sorcery
>None
>Journal Fine jewelry Wooden toys Stuffed plushie Elven trinkets Small pet Free time Candy
>Mystic arrow Empathy Commune Heal Treatment
Wanted to buy a daughterfu, Ended up with more that i can deal with.

>>10603914
>Assault
I can't aim good, just palm me off some assault rifles or something
>Assault Rifle(+UB grenade launcher)
>High Capacity Pistol, Compact Shotgun
Shotguns are always a necessary weapon
>Normal Height
>Huge Breasts
>Huge Ass
>Large Penis
If I'm lucky, the massive assets will take most of the bullets, and hopefully those breasts will protect my heart right?!?!?! :^)
>Expandable Breasts
>Expandable Ass
>Gun fetishist
Is this supposed to be punishment?
>Extra breasts
Extra heart protection, and if my boobs are huge because of expansion, extra head protection too :^)
>5.56mm (20 times)
>12ga (10 times)
>5.7mm (7 times)
>40mm (5 times)
I have no idea what the fuck I'm doing

Time to just run around like a dick head and just fuck/get fucked/whatever.

>>10586271
Have you considered an option for overgrown foreskin? Kinda like the following (except without the filthier implications):
http://i.imgur.com/AERsaHg.gif
http://i.imgur.com/voe9hpz.gif

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>>10589397
Curvy Body
Large Breasts

Perks:
Kemonomimi (Catgirl wheeeee)
Sensitive Body
Sexually Gifted
Harem
Reverse Harem

Reverse Harem: Lucy Krause, Chung Ae Choi, Julia Roc, Chinatsu Matsuda

Harem-mates:

Lauri- Loli body (She's 21 I swear!), Average Breasts, Kemonomimi (Imouto-chan!) Dominant Mindset, Sensitive Body, Elegance, Sexually Gifted. (Tiny catgirl who frequently competes with Lucy regarding who's on top, calls her a titty monster, secretly loves subbing when Lucy fucks her into the floor as much as she loves riding Lucy only to edge her for hours before letting her cum. When pregnant, as per the rules, she'll usually prefer anal to vaginal sex- when she's on top. When she's on the bottom having her tight rear pounded, she hates how good it makes her feel, but pretending you're going to stop can make her agree to almost anything if you'll just fuck her ass until she cums. Will reluctantly listen to me as her 'big sis.' Our heat cycles are synced so we're usually pressed up against each-other being repeatedly filled on the night of the full moon. Me and her are usually naked around the house- and in public if we can get away with it.)

(Other two to follow)

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>>10609089
Mutsumi- Plump body, Large Breasts, Kitchen Mistress, Heightened Fertility, Amazing Cleaner, Lactation, Ara Ara~ (The 'mom' of the group, and a nigh-tantamount Yamato Nadeshico. Doesn't do all the housework on her own, but is definitely in charge of keeping everyone fed and the place clean, even if she has to unleash her 'terror stare' to make Chung pitch in. Always there with a kind word when you're down and a kind tongue when you're horny. She'll tease you terribly if you're playing along though, and loves being thrown to the floor or over the counter to be ravished, ridden, or both. Serene almost to a fault, she can usually be found wearing her apron... and nothing else.)

Zephyr- Curvy body, Average Breasts, Well Lubricated, Submissive Mindset, Slave, Allure, Rape Bait. (The House's slutty submissive cum-dump. She can be found chained up in Lucy's room any time she isn't pregnant (though that's usually quickly fixed) and when they aren't trying to make sure she's carrying the child of someone in-house, she's at the glory hole or being gangbanged on the train during the day and being used as a cock-sleeve at night. And she loves every. Last. Bit.)

Aside: I'd love just one more Futa Husbando option :p

Dynastylights here

>>10609104
There will be more futas and males for you to choose from. I'm currently going through it and fixing my grammar mistakes first though.

>>10584613
I don't understand how the points work, sorry for being retarded

>>10599787
Wait, is there a subreddit for CYOAs?

>>10610365
You pick quirks for your waifu (or yourself if playing Be The Girl Mode) to have and get the listed points, and spend them on the various Compensation options (or on options in another CYOA if playing Compatibility mode - in which case you get half as many points, rounded down).

Is that clear enough for you? If not, please specify what exactly you're having trouble with.

>>10610435
Oh, so the first part in the CYOA has to be chosen the last, okay

>>10610454
>Oh, so the first part in the CYOA has to be chosen the last, okay
Not exactly. There isnt a specific order but you could pick the quirks you'd accept and then go spend the point's from them.

>>10610394
It's basicaly all just the content form here. And there cant be any general discussion because of the way it works unless you specificaly make a general talking thread but you'ld get no replies from it. Reddit is just a garbage site.

>>10610454
Actually, it downright tells you to pick your boons before even looking at the quirks.

>>10608457
>This anon with the foreskin fetish in every fucking thread

>>10610558
>foreskin fetish
Just thought it might make for an interesting option.
>in every fucking thread
1. This was the second time I posted the suggestion, and there have been five threads between this one and the one where I first posted it.
2. I'm only posting it again because last time, I didn't receive any response from the author.

>>10610590
i was just joking hun xx
>those gifs are pretty good
i just thought it was funny how the comment was copy pasted from another thread
and i know that feel when no one else recognises ur fetish :)))

>>10610590
I'll tell you what you infected me wit a foreskin fetish last time you posted them.

>>10610616
what's your fetish anon

>>10610616
>i just thought it was funny how the comment was copy pasted from another thread
That is in fact exactly what I did. Couldn't be arsed to rewrite it.

And since we just hit bump limit, I'll probably have to resuggest it again the next time the author bothers posting about their CYOA.

>>10610901
just for u anon, i'll try to include it in my next cyoa :)
idk if it will be good tho

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>>10584568
>Celestial

>Spirited Away

>Teenager

>Obsessive
>Friendly
>Clever

>Nothing

>Formal Dress
>Casual Clothing

>Guest Room

>Fatherly

>Appeasing

>Reprimand
>Spanking
>Isolation

>Sorcery
>Literature
>Mathematics

>Sorcery

>Journal
>Fine Jewely
>Elven Trinkets
>Warm Cloak
>Free Time
>Outings
>Candy
>Furniture

>Mystic Arrow
>Raise Dead