CYOA Refuge Thread - A thread for posting any and all CYOAs

There's already a thread (made by a retard on /d/ so it doesn't have CYOA in the name)

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>>10544308
Nevermind I'm retarded and hadn't updated the old thread, so it still was only at like 100 replies.

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>>10544308
The one that's over the bump limit and on page 9?

>>10540393
Eronomicon's drawback system is fine in theory and I love fetishes = points idea but Eronomicon's true issue comes from a different flaw. I think what is killing Eronomicon is the lack of options, there are only 6 upgradable spells per school and 2 mana options now mix this with the 2 schools rule witch means your forced to pick from one of the mana option of you major school and can only take spells from 2 of the schools and only a 1/3 of page for boons that you have to use the rest of your points on. The lack of options also is what makes the force drawbacks bad because now you forced to pick from only 6 options 5(or 4 if you need to pay off a green magic debt) if you already picked a transformation option on top of barely have half the fetishes on the list and having most of the options be samey or not being true to the fetish like the electrolyze not being shock play but just being a pleasure beam that looks like lighting or the red magic have almost all it's points from things people could enjoy from a sub standpoint but only being dom things and pink being the the opposite all of of time adds up to give Eronomicon a huge lack of options

>>10544502
If it literaly just removed the 2 school limit it would improve greatly and still be balanced by the corruptions.

>>10544539
I do argee that the 2 school limit is a huge problem but I also think he should try and take some time to try and add more to Eronomicon and fit more of the fetishes on the lists in and make pretty much Eronomicon v2.0. But I know he does not like messing with or updating his CYOAs so I doubt it will happen

>>10544539
Literally nothing he's talking about would be fixed by that.

Hey I am working on a Hyperdimension neptunia CYOA. FIrst one i have made. I need help looking for imagines fill in page 3 of 4. Try to keep in the anime artstyle similar to the series. prefer ecchi, sexual undertones, or moe.

Looking for:
Military: soldier in uniform waiting or marching.
Industry: convaderbelts with tech on them. or just a good outside shot.
Schooling: a high school shot. prefer with characters from this series.
National park: filled with nature camping or hiking.
Amusement park: with rollercoasters.
Gaming: people working on games
Anime: People working on anime.
Arcade/bar: bar with games in background.
Tube travel: something like what is in futurama
hiding identity: or changing identity like a mask.
Friends: Human friends.
yandere: like three of them fighting for you. or one happy that she won.
Difficulty setting: Easy, medium, hard, and Newgame+
Changing personality: like possession i guess.

These i can find on my own but welcome to suggestions: Futa, Little sister, cityscape, and warfare.

>>10544539
The bigger you make Eronomicon, the smaller Eronomicon will feel. It's basically choose 2 schools and have the majority of content locked out. But if you don't lock out a lot of content, you get every fetish you want from it and the more drawbacks you add the less hard and challanging the CYOA will be.

>>10544539
Still Missing:
Coherent theme for the schools
Way to avoid shafting players with diverse/focused fetishes
Sensibly priced boons
Corruptions that are more than just "this perverted thing you happen to enjoy happens to you"

>>10544911
If you remove the 2 school limit you don't have to dump all the extra points into boons and can pick if you want boons or more spells that you will still need to take more drawbacks for.Also lewd CYOA drawbacks really should not be that hard, I'm not saying don't challenge the player or have times the player has to make some tough decisions but when people are trying to jack off I think they would like a fetish fantasy with a small amount of challenge not a hard challenge with a porn theme.

>>10544911
I think what the majority of people want is for it to be less hard and challenging.
The reason it's so hard to make a fun build is because some schools just corruptions are just all so bad you can't take them, so more of them would mitigate that.

>>10544334
Public use is so good.

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>>10544334
TokHaar here
>I Quit
Seems like the most reasonable option

>>10545663
Still MSPaint.

>>10545663
Does it matter if he steals you CYOA? People will never respect his version because it's just a rip off of your one.
The fact that you made Eronomicon can never be taken away from you.

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>>10545663
There's a third option, it's called "quit being a drama queen"

Demanding respect on 4chan?

>>10545663
Which porn mod did you make, again?

>>10545663
>If people do not show me basic fucking respect and do not steal my works, i will not create anything ever again.
>If people show me basic fucking respect and steal my works, I will create anything
The grammar tho.

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>>10545663
>Nexusmods
>muh respect for creators
you blew it, I almost thought this was serious
here's your (you)

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>>10544849
Hey its me again. Still looken for more but thought ill give a update since i decided on a few.

Looking for:

Industry: convaderbelts with tech or snacks on them. or a good shot of product use.
National park: filled with nature camping or hiking.
Amusement park: with rollercoasters.
Gaming: people working on games
Anime: People working on anime.
Arcade/bar: bar with games in background.
Tube travel: something like what is in futurama
hiding identity: or changing identity like a mask.
Friends: Human friends.
one happy that she won.
Difficulty setting: Easy, medium, hard, and Newgame+

Found:
Military
Schooling
Friends
Yandere
changing personality.
Futa, Little sister, cityscape, and warfare.pics.
Will still consider suggestions for these found ones though.

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>>10545663
>I shall die a knight
>donut steal muh oc or I will quit
pick one

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>>10545663
>nobody likes adds

You do realize you cannibalized dozens of artists by your use of photos in your CYOA? You aren't pure either.

I'm kinda with Tok on this. I'd be fuckin pissed if someone edited my OC, too.

>>10544849
>>10546134
What's it about?

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>>10546231
Becoming an immortal anime girl goddess who has to do Lewd and non-lewd things to maintain being a immortal goddess.
With a bit of city management, relationship, goals, lewd perks both mental and physical and a bunch of other little things.

The idea is that your mind adapts to one of four goddesses to the point were you are one and the same. (identity death) but you get some say in the matter through choices.

>>10546412
Ah. I'm the monogamous sort, so it doesn't sound like it'd fit me. Like I'll let anything be done to me by one person, but not multiple.

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>>10546497
Naw you got it wrong. YOU are the goddess. You just to choose which one you want to be.

>>10546562
No I got that, I just saw the whole 'has to do lewd things' so I'm assuming it's not going to be done to me by one person.

>>10546412
Sounds good to me (will there be a maker or gamer mode?)

>>10546412
>Identity death
Trash for suicidal losers.

>>10546412
>>10546685
Ahh yeah, that is a good point. Can you add something so that instead of replacing your personality. Both minds (the cyoa player and the goddess) share a body. Also that way you can hear Noire's embarrassed voice in your head while you masturbate using her hands

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>>10546685
Any CYOA that changes you mentally enough is to be considered Identity death.
Regardless of your opinion though.
You can make your own trash.
ill enjoy mine.

>>10546772
>>10546742
Can you include this option. If you don't, I won't mind just wanted to know your thoughts on the idea.

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>>10546742
Well to keep things a bit simpler you just inherit a small list of their quirks. There is a perk that lets you get 1 day a week to have full control.

Such as verts addiction to MMOs.

Wherever you are, tok, I had a great time with eronomicon. The two schools made it challenging, but I read through the whole thing, made some tough choices, and came out the other side as the futa plant girl of my dreams. Thanks for putting it out there! Making stuff is always better than the alternative.

>>10546772
>Any CYOA that changes you mentally enough is to be considered Identity death.
Sounds like a fat load of opinion. Memories and personality are what make a person, making you smarter will change you over time, but it doesn't immediately change your personality so it's fine. Same as growing up. Being a cute girl is something a lot of people here want to be and act like anyway, so it doesn't change their personality.

>>10546825
You don't need to suck up to him. He's an adult. If he can't handle criticism, then that's his problem.

>>10546817
Cool, even if it isn't exactly like I hope. This sounds like it can work out well. (Hoping for Iris Heart option to dom sweet neptune~) Looking forward to it

The fuck is going on in this thread? I feel out of the loop.

>>10546846
I mean, it's our problem far more than his. Tok is the biggest content producer by a mile and is doing a lot to keep the /d/ exiled community alive. If he bails, it's a huge kick in the nuts for us. So the tough talk is nice and all, but treating Tok well is very much in our best interests.

>>10546945
You're on 4chan. It's completely against the spirit of the site to censor your opinions just to fluff up someone's feelings.

>>10546951
Or you can have an opinion that thinks Ero book is good.

>>10546945
>>10546951
I mean, the thing is that I'm not even trying to fluff up his feelings. His cyoa was well formatted and while it didn't have an optimal amount of choices. It was still pretty decent, it may not be up to the standard of deus vult in fun value.

He didn't do that bad yet people are remaking his work without his consent. That isn't fluffing up someones feelings or censoring your opinion that is flat out undeserved blatant disrespect.

>>10546870
TL;DR:
>Tokhar made a new CYOA
>Many people have complaints about it and some are willing to help fix it
>Tok is being a drama queen and acting like everyone here is attacking him for doing a shit job
>Tok admitted he entered his new CYOA (Eronomicon) into a Contest on Reddit for a shot at $25 in Steambux
>There's been a lot of shitposting and maybe Anons falseflagging as Tok
>It's hard to even tell if he's serious anymore or what the fuck is happening, he may abandon us for Reddit since all they do is praise him

>>10546951
You can be nice to someone without "censoring your opinions". To pretend there's no nice middle ground is...unhelpful.

And while I'm fully aware we're on 4chan, I'd like to credit most here with a basic sense of self preservation. Not biting the hand that feeds is like...common sense 101. No need to be an idiot just to preserve "mah c0unterculture!!".

>>10547006
>He didn't do that bad
But he did do bad.

>flat out undeserved blatant disrespect.
There's no reason to respect him to begin with.

>>10546997
Which is fine. Doesn't dismiss the people who disagree though.

>>10547012
Let's be honest. Most people being 'mean' to him only did it after he did shit like dismiss criticism as whining, say we're wrong because reddit liked it, and (maybe) did that image whining about the guy making a spinoff.

You fools isn't this what /d/ mods want! To turn us against each other so we shall never return! We must gather our forces and wait until the time is right. We must not squabble among ourselves!

>>10547208
Tits > ass

>>10547146
Sure, he didn't behave perfectly. So what? The whining about his whining passed the point of legitimate criticism a loooong time ago and is now putting us on pace for a Darwin Award.

The #1 reason content creators leave is because we're assholes to them, usually over how they deal with criticism. Said circlejerks are never constructive and can never really achieve anything--it's just people being pissy because they think someone else was pissy first. And then the content dries up.

Tok is basically the only content creator we have right now. At a time that the community is really, really not doing well. If we drive him away, we're straight up too dumb to live. Too stupid to breathe. Fetishizing stupicide.

Which is why having a tantrum when people are nice to Tok in a pretty modest and non-sycophantic fashion is a bad idea.

>>10547222
Shrug, you could have tits the size of mountains or asses the size of continents. I like both in proper proportions (Though I prefer tits).

>>10547270
>Tok is basically the only content creator we have right now.

Not strictly true but yeah I get your point. We really shouldn't be trying to force people out of our community (that aren't spammers, more so for content creators).

>>10547006
Spinoff creator here.

>He didn't do that bad

People trashed it for being overhyped. All he had to do was say "ah well, you win some, you lose some, and it's a little late to remake the whole thing"

>yet people are remaking his work without his consent.

Eronomicon featured images of copyrighted characters "such as the wendy's girl" and maybe total a hundred different erotic pictures, none of which he provided any artist information for, and he entered it into a contest with a cash prize. Even in his 10 or so unarguably non-commercial CYOAs, he uses large quantities of h-pictures with no attribution of the original artist. That's much greater theft than simply taking the core idea of someone's cyoa and remaking it with your own spin.

>undeserved blatant disrespect

Respect is earned, not deserved. If people are disrespecting you, do more to earn their respect.

>>10547270
Honestly, you really do sound like you want to censor any critical opinion, considering you're calling everyone who had a complaint a shitposter.

>>10546412
This sounds awesome. Can't decide which goddess to choose though. Will Plutia/Iris Hear be an option?

>>10547270
If he's going to get triggered and threaten to leave for eddit because of criticism, then he was going to leave anyway. Your only 'solution' to that is to not give any criticism and just suck his dick, which is censoring your opinions.

>>10545663
This whole thing is really overblown, I don't understand why people are getting so pissy over a cyoa that he made for free and for the enjoyment of others.

Even if it was a letdown, is it really so terrible a personal affront that this big a mess needs to be made about it?

Don't be dicks, respect the time that was put into making it to begin with, and the fact that it is still a polished piece of work

>>10547449
He didn't even enter it for a profit, he wants to use the money to incentivize more original content being made.

>Respect is earned, not deserved. If people are disrespecting you, do more to earn their respect.

All the other, high quality and extensively well balanced and updated CYOAs that he has made without asking anything of others don't earn him any respect, or any forgiveness for whatever level of disappointment one may have? That's the dumbest thing I've heard in a long while

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Not at the moment. Everything takes a bit longer then i thought to do small edits. But atm Its only the 4.
But i do like the idea of adding plutia. But the problem is it would break a lot of the balance of the game. And would require a lot of reworks. part of the idea is your kinda running the nation , and plutia is in a different world of the same nation, with its own versions of the other characters.
The best i could do is change the character specific perk i gave nepgear. (which is the ability to transform for free as much as you want but with out powers) to (all cases of nepgear is replaced by Plutia and gain X quirks)

I'm done for today. Ill come back tomorrow and hopefully i can get some image help. And the drama is blown over.

>>10547547
Nobody was getting pissy until Tok got pissy, accused everyone of whining, said only reddit's opinion's mattered, then flip shit at getting criticism.

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>>10547008
>doing it for gabendollars
also he didn't cater to my fetish so he can go fuck himself

>Nobody started sucking Gol off until it sounded like he was going to quit
Fake as fuck sycophants.

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>>10547547
>you should be satisfied for the free content he made
I appreciate it but that doesn't stop me criticizing it. I don't get why I shoudn't be allowed to critique something like this. It's just a CYOA hobbyist thing. He shouldn't be taking this like I'm tearing out his heart and stomping on it.

>>10547637
>he didn't do it for profit
>he did it to fund something else
That means it's for profit. He did it specifically for the money and nothing else. How are you not getting this?

>>10547647
What’s your fetish, underwater basket weaving ?

>>10548069
[spoiler]pure and chaste marriage with hand-holding and procreative sex followed by wholesome family life[/spoiler]

>>10547637

>He didn't even enter it for a profit, he wants to use the money to incentivize more original content being made.

"I wasn't committing copyright infringement, I using the picture to incentivize to make money that I was totes gonna give to someone else."

>>10547270
>content creators leave
So?

Speaking of Eronomicon, someone repost it please the other thread died.

>>10547305
I have mixed feelings about large assets. In written works, I definitely love descriptions of ridiculously large tits and asses.

But in visual works, I don't find them nearly as hot. I tend to prefer more moderate proportions.

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>>10548480
Why are you even in the thread if you don't want more CYOAs?

>>10548775
presumably because anyone can make a cyoa so sucking the dick of some faggot is misguided

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>>10545663
This is my last CYOA, since the other one was imbalanced and I don't want another faggot to take over that CYOA and defile it.

>>10548845
Hahahahaahahaha

>>10548798
Anyone can make a shit CYOA. Quit acting like its easy to do something you're incapable of.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dunning%E2%80%93Kruger_effect

>>10548845
This is masterful.
10/10

>>10548933
anyone can make a decent cyoa if they put some effort into it, except maybe tokhaar

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>>10545663
Man you are terrible at responding to criticism. I am personally not of the opinion that you should not argue with critics, but if you do, it should be about the constructivity of their criticism. It doesn't matter how disproportionately bad they say it is, as long as they can help you understand what to to do differently. And if your critics are 4chan users... Well, I better lower my standards even further. Not because they are morally privileged, but just because it would be really naive to think I could get them to apologize for anything.

Maybe you are responding this way because you didn't realize that you had to think carefully about how your cyoa would be received? Maybe you thought that if your work was bad, others would just politely ignore it? Maybe in some communities. But not on 4chan.

Thing is, you don't even have to please everybody to make a good CYOA. If your cyoa can only garner criticisms which are strongly a matter of personal taste, then at least you can say that it's *someone's* style other than your own. But one thing I really didn't like about your CYOA is that it gave out points for having certain fetishes which could only be spent on the correlated domain, and the domain doesn't even match the fetishes that you gain points for! That is the kind of choice which no one will appreciate. It's functionally objectively bad. Sometimes the way that your work is functionally objectively bad is complex and only a few people will mind. But the fact that only a few people mind doesn't make it more subjective, especially when the criticism is about inconsistency between the apparent intent of the work and how it would realistically be perceived by certain audiences. And that's why criticism is important, or at least constructive criticism; even if the criticism is disproportionate.

I hope you become a better CYOA maker, anon. I'll say at least that I liked the idea behind your CYOA.

>>10548845
8/10. Watch animu and animu apocalypse are in the wrong sections. Sequels kill good anime and Eromanga is dogshit.

>>10549092
>if you get better
kek

>>10549092
Oh shit I didn't read the CYOA lmao nvm

I just found these threads a day ago and the only content creator is already leaving?
Why are we here? Just to suffer?

>>10549301
>the only content creator
oh sweet summer child

>>10549324
That's what im getting from these recent posts anon, I'm not going to read every single one. Just here for the good reads honestly.

>>10548845
>Not posting a NSFW version

>>10549364
Just go over to the /tg/ thread if you haven't already, there's hundreds of authors and many make fetish CYOAs

Tok is giving me a great Christmas gift, five months early at that. Not only is this parasite consigned to /trash/, but it's losing all of its creators too. It's amazing.

>>10546945
>best interests
No it's in your best interest to make cyoas and not wait for one person to do it.

>>10548845
>On to new adventures
>No write a book option

>>10548798
>anyone can make a CYOA
You willing to put your money where your mouth is?

>>10545663
This makes me sad directly in my pants, but I get it. 4chan is a rough audience to throw your pearls to. Thanks for making what you did.

Question:
In eronomicon, does the green gender swap spell overcome the slimegirl/plantgirl femaleness? Can I gender swap to a male again? or I am cursed to always be female/futa?

>>10549496
>Caring this much about a thread that has never negatively impacted you in any way, shape or form
I almost feel sorry for you anon, what's it like to have a life so boring and uneventful that you get giddy with joy at the thought of a lewd cyoa thread dying? It's like you think the rest of us are as autistic as you are, and that our lives will be deeply affected by the loss of a fucking 4chan thread.

>>10550006
>He doesn't gloat when a parasite dies.

>>10549898
>cursed to be a futa
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GmPRw-joU7E

>>10550156
Futa is fucking repulsive, you closeted tranny fucker.

>>10545663
What was this cyoa stealing thing Tok is mad about? I think I missed it.

>>10550180
Somebody said he was going to take the eronomicon concept and rewrite it completely his way, with different spells, categories etc.

>>10550189
Oh, haha, I hope that wasn't me he's referencing, I was just gonna change up the descriptions so they made more sense to me. No additional spells and stuff. For my personal enjoyment tb h.

>>10550244
Nah it was someone else.

>>10548845
Fucking great man.

>>10550279
It really is the best thing to happen.

>>10550180

http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10531199/#q10540390

Here you go. (this is after pages of Tok aggressively fighting any and all criticism)

>>10547646
I also feel he's being whiny and creating unnecessary drama, but I know that it's surprisingly hard to shrug it off when you feel like you're getting a lot of negative backlash for something you put effort into. And it really doesn't help that most people don't bother posting unless they have feedback to give, which makes it seem like everyone has a problem with you. Even if someone bothers to post a "great work, dude!", it just gets buried in the criticism, since only the latter promotes discussion.

He should probably just take a break and cool off a little. Sometimes you need some distance from this place to realize that some random faggots on the internet disrespecting you and your efforts shouldn't really be affecting you that much.

>>10550325
I don't really feel sympathy, being able to take criticism and recover is absolutely necessary for any creator. If he can't handle it, then he's simply doomed.

>>10550144
>Calling any 4chan thread a parasite
Genuinely can't tell if you're retarded or not

>>10550311
>http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10531199/#q10540390
Thanks senpai.

>>10550359
Fuck off, parasite.

>>10550374
I think this is what broke him:

http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10531199/#q10541577

"
>Super vauge drawback that you think I will magically balance and make super balanced.

Nope, this is inspired by yours, since you said you're not going to make a new version, I will

>Really a fan of your stuff anon.

I liked the idea behind your original, which is why I'm making a re-write, no need to be salty.
"

>>10550510
Super mundane and harmless post.

>>10550510
>dat reddit spacing
He who lives by reddit die by cancer.

a named anon here

what the fuck's going on with this stealing thing
TokHaar you're cool man but the fact that there are people ``stealing'' you stuff (from what i get they're just trying to adapt it to their liking) is nothing but a sign that the amount of interest people have in your CYOAs has reached that point.

apparently it's not even really stealing since he's reusing the concept to make his own thing

chill out and jack off to derivative works, i know i did for lactofork and a-slug-guy's versions of enchante/d/ rings. if anything, i'm sad not more ideas from my CYOA have been stolen to make more stuff 'cause there are a few good ones in there i'm proud of.

>>10548845
I don't quit!

Make Mods
Don't quit

Zynthia

Nothing of value was lost. He's always cared more about quantity than quality. I can't think of a single one of his cyoas that hasn't been terribly flawed in some way or another.

>>10550689
> if anything, i'm sad not more ideas from my CYOA have been stolen to make more stuff 'cause there are a few good ones in there i'm proud o
Probably your fetishes aren't as good or liked as you think

To the anon complaining about lack of thread name: To my knowledge, only threads that are _moved to_ /trash/ can have one, since when starting a new thread, the only two text fields you're given access to are the text body (the one where you type the post proper) and the one labeled Options.

If you know how to use the aforementioned Options box to somehow put a name on the post, do share.

>>10548718
Small-time CYOA maker. I actually really like this CYOA and I don't see where it's a let down. Tokhaar has always made CYOAs where you have to consider every single point you spent and every drawback you take. His CYOAs are hard and make you think instead of wondering what else to take for giggles. There are plenty of CYOAs out there that let you becoming a god with or give you more points than what you know what to do with, if that's what you want then go play them. This CYOA is really good, probably one of my favorites Tokhaar has done (I don't think he'll every top his Magnum Opus that is his messed up waifu cyoa) and any option that would allow you to dump corruption or freely pick spell to your heart's content would undermine the whole concept of this cyoa.

But now you entitled assholes have made one of the best content creators this sub-genre has ever had and completely demoralized him because you think this is Burger King where you can get it your way. You all do know you can play with the rules, in your heard, when playing the CYOA? I've done it. You want to remove the school limit? Do it for a playthrough. You want to add ways to dump corruption? make it 1/4 a point per point for a playthrough. Is that so fucking hard? I knew coming to /trash/ would be the death of these wonderful threads.

>>10549898
Also, can someone explain the deity more?
Is it just a fictional charactor made real? like the blue magic? or does the deity have superpowers beyond the other pinks you buy?

>>10551358
this :) :(

What are some other good critical CYOAs?

>>10551358
You forgot your tokhaar here.

>>10551381
I dunno, anon. I think the experience of having unfair criticism is a pretty common human experience, and so it's not so improbable that someone would sympathize and retaliate, even if 4chan is usually a shithole. Being nice to people on this site is actually like a favorite hobby of mine because it stands out and is appreciated much more.

>>10551358
This just reads like a long list of dicksucking and declarations that anyone who disagrees with you is wrong.

>>10551358
Old IP, samefag.

>>10551358
>Ignoring a CYOA's rules
>Valid
Go fuck yourself.

>>10551498
desu I ( >>10551417 ) agree though

>>10551514
You agree that all criticism is instantly wrong without even reading any of it? How astute of you.

>>10551521
Specifically I agree with >>10551498, not >>10551358. Excuse my vagueness.

>>10548845
i'd buy the games you'd make mods for

>>10551525
Ah, I see. My mistake.

Fapped two times to Lewdbook today. Probably a third on the way.
More faps than i did with most CYOA, it got my dick's seal of approuval.

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Guys Where is CYOA anyway

>>10551621
Not /trash/, fuck off.

Well if it's true that Tok is gone that means we all have to step up our game in making sweet OC.
If we don't make enough OC we will never have enough to pay Charon to get back into our holy of /d/.
Let's step up our game /d/eviants.

>>10551647
Stay strong /d/enizens of /trash/ I all goes well I may make something for you.
(I hope you guys like being sex slaves(Female))

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Is it wrong that I want to take Materialize Spell and Enforce Law and make the world (Perverted) CHILDREN'S CARD GAMES!

>>10548718
Amen.

>>10551358
I mean amen to that .

>>10551693
I just imagine you spend all your mana all day everyday that you can have at least 1million spell cards and you give them away to be used as tickets for a grand tournament where to enter you need five of those spell cards.

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>>10551693
Hmmm, tell me more.

>>10551621
Dead. No OC and /trash/people haven't started making them yet.

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>>10551804
>>10551831

Well, presuming that, once bespelled, using the cards expended the mana, but not the spell, and could be recharged by anybody with magical talent, or even some sort of mana-battery...

Basically, combine Shapeshifting and Invigorate 2 for 'Monster' cards (you need friends to be your 'monsters'... or slaves via winning matches. Invigorate so they don't die when mortally wounded, or maybe they sex-fight, first to orgasm loses, varying levels of Heighten Libido/Sensitivity affecting their 'attack' with possible weak spots...) with other spells as spell cards and maybe Runic Trap for traps, with the Laws enforcing the rules of the game...

And yes, definitely a tournament.

>>10551358
For 25 points (of any colour), you can jump into any fictional universe of your choice as often as you want, with no mana cost or drawbacks. For 40 points, you become completely unkillable unless you want to. Neither of these gives you any drawbacks, so you're basically an Old Planeswalker, only better because plenty of the fictional places you go to blow MtG out of the water. That is significantly more than most of those "plenty of CYOAs out there that let you become a god."
For the same investment in actual spells, that is, in what is supposed to be the point of the cyoa, you can spend 19 points in your primary and secondary schools, and then you have to spend 15 more points to let you spend another 9, 10 on hidden power to let you spend another 2, and you're left with 10 points you can't spend, spells to sate a fairly small number of your many, many fetishes, and 16 points of corruption over four schools. And that's if your fetishes line up in the right schools; you could be stuck with a lot less if they're more spread out.

This isn't a hard cyoa. You don't need to remove school limits, or dump corruption, or whatever other easy mode thing you might suggest. They're already in it, and they apply to the most powerful picks in the CYOA by a massive margin. It's like there was a "pick one option" cyoa where your options were "get anally raped by a spiked bat," "get anally raped by a burning hobo," "get anally raped by a furry with HIV" and "Morgan Freeman comes to you in the middle of the night, reveals that he is in fact God, hands over all his power while keeping a lesser copy so he can do all the tedious administration for you, and then bends over and hands you a burning, barbed bat."
I mean, sure, that's fine, but don't pretend the CYOA is hard and full of difficult decisions.

>>10551647
Agreed! Lead the charge! What're you making?

>>10549496
Cut one tentacle of, two more take it's place
Hail Hydra!

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>>10551996
I haven't made a cyoa in a while (a year or so) and I usually hate telling others what i'm making but it's going to be a lewd maid cyoa with a surprise or a father x daughter cyoa.
It may take about two to three weeks to make it (since i'm a bit rusty and real life work) but it's going to be 2-5 pages long.
However if real life gets in the way I will make a small one to compensate next week instead.

>>10552239
I vote lewd maid!
>2-5 pages in two-three weeks
Jesus! That's fast! I'm disgustingly slow...

>>10549778
that's why I was saying it, dumbass

>>10552298
>I'm disgustingly slow
Same.
My bigger worry is that if I start a tentacle CYOA, my magical realm will start leaking into the Strange Aeons game that I'm running.

I'll do it anyways.

>>10552298
Well to be fair part of my college module last year was to make a website.
There's barely any difference in the skills/tools you need to make a website and to make a cyoa. (html, css, dreamweaver,ms paint etc.)

>>10552333
My problem is I can't seem to get started and my imagination quickly stops working.

>>10552333
I don't think HTML has anything to do with cyoas t bh

>>10552307
Cool. Can't wait to see the Mona Lisa you will no doubt create.

>>10552405
On the contrary if you look in the pastebin there's proof in some of the makers that html was used to make their cyoa (before even creating said makers).
You just gotta be creative, though to be fair people say html/css belong in the same category and when one refers to one they also refer to the other.

>>10552543
>Spending hours to make a 'CYOA maker' when all you have to do is plop some images and text down in MSPaint at least.
Why tho?

>>10552372
That happens to everybody you just gotta push through, start off small by making a one page cyoa and build up for the big couple page cyoa from there. All you need is practice and getting used to the tools, everything else will come.

>>10552572
For some, creating the tool is more fun than using it.

>>10552572
BECAUSE I CAN

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>>10546202
>>10546154
>>10545823
>>10545950
>>10546032
>>10548967

>>10552632
No no no, you're doing it all wrong.
I'll show you a real shit post in about a minute.

>>10552632
>>10552645
;^)

>>10552587
I've already made three one page CYOAs. I want to make a bigger one, larger and with a point system.
I already know what it will be about but it's intimidating, and the topic isn't as attractive to me as the prior ones have been.

>>10552724
I think the problem is the pressure you're putting yourself through to try and make it good.
I believe that's the reason why you're losing interest/imagination with the subject is because you're trying to meet expectations that aren't there.
Just continue working on it, but not with the goal of making it so people will like it but because you made it so you can play with it.

>>10552820
>not with the goal of making it so people will like it but because you made it so you can play with it.
It is literally impossible to make a cyoa and play it, or play it and enjoy it the same way you would someone else's cyoa.
Feels bad.

Kek
>only 4 cyoas in a cyoa thread
Do you want me to go to reddit or something

>>10552834
Not true. Making a cyoa that you would play is the best thing you can do. if you do it for recognition you might as well go to reddit, if you do it so your cyoa will be liked by anons you will feel empty by the end of it all.
Making a cyoa that you would play has the benefits of not swelling your ego and not feeling completely dead inside.
So enough dancing about the subject go out there and make your cyoa.

>>10552211
Nice tripple dubs

>>10552938
I have made cyoas for myself, and none of them I was able to get enjoyment from when playing them. How can a God enjoy a world they know everything about? Every hidden secret, every drop of lore, every source of power.

>>10552932
Their only real creator just told them he was leaving because he likes reddit better.

>>10552963
So tok who made a shit ton of cyoas decides to quit after one gets stolen.

>>10552981
>Stolen
>Some guy is going to make his own, completely rewritten version
>Stolen
No more than Tok stole the images.

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>>10552989
Since when has anyone cared about credit or stealing on 4chan? My god.
t. different anon with a very soft penis because of the lack of cyoas

>>10552997
Since yesterday apparently. Basically one salty boy.

>>10552820
Could be. Not sure if I should change it from a "You sell ice cream" CYOA to making a fullblown somewhat lewd RWBY CYOA.
>>10552834
>>10552951
That. Writing some of the options for RWBY Ahegao was hot. But I can't look at it the way anyone else will. It's why the balance for Dick Deity was flimsy.

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Someone said that it was probably just a random troll disguised as Tok that did the "I quit" claim.

>>10553023
If he doesn't show up by midnight, we know he's gone. Halfway there.

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>>10551912
I'd make a law saying that all disputes must be settled through children's card games, with the complete submission of your opponent as the winning condition. Since you cast the spell to create the card, I'm assuming that I could create different types of cards with the same spell. So I could use Bind to create some common cards that put your target in a bondage harness, and some rare cards that forces your target into a bitchsuit. And for even more variety, I could just print paper cards and enforce their effects with laws ("if your opponent in a card match plays the card named 'Easy Victim', you're not allowed to resist sexual advances for 3 turns").

Coming up with all the rules is hard, so I guess I'd have to make another law saying that the best card game designers in the world must come together and plan out how to make it the most fun and balanced card game ever.

Would be kinda boring if everyone just ended up as permanent slaves to ancient Pharaohs in the bodies of Japanese children, so I'd need another laws to force all effects to be released at the end of the match (or maybe a little later, would be a waste to make your opponent beg for your dick with your lust deck and not get to give it to them). And it's obviously forbidden to use the cards outside of an approved match. But there could also be a special rule for agreeing at the start of a match that the winner gets to use one or more cards on the loser after the match. Could really add some tension to a tournament match when the cost of losing isn't just disappointment, but also your humiliation being broadcasted worldwide. Or maybe losing your freedom altogether.

We're in this sites version of purgatory.
The benefits of this purgatory is that since it's "hidden" and not THAT many threads are made here we got a cozy spot that will never go away.
The bad side is obvious from the lack of a easy to access archive, faster than /d/ etc.
There's really nothing to worry about of the future of /d/cyoag, it's not uncommon to have threads that don't have any oc in them but the oc will come do not worry.

>>10553097
Honestly you can just use the slavery power to get rich and become pegasus or kaiba and use the slavery power on creators to help make the card game for you.

>>10553030
Who's midnight?

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>>10553144

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>>10553144
>Who's midnight?

>>10553023
class: sorcerer
spells: alter world (upgraded), porn physics (upgraded), transform (upgraded)
artifacts: grimoire (immortality), familiar
familiar: angel

>alter all men to become extremely effeminate traps, boys, or futa
>alter all men & women to become subconsciously submissive towards manly-men
>transform myself into the last remaining manly man on earth
>cast immortality and maximized porn physics on myself
>enjoy an immortal existence in a world that is basically my extended harem
>use angel to revive dead people i want to fuck

>>10553109
>The benefits of this purgatory is that since it's "hidden" and not THAT many threads are made here we got a cozy spot that will never go away.
That's not good.
>There's really nothing to worry about of the future of /d/cyoag, it's not uncommon to have threads that don't have any oc in them but the oc will come do not worry.
Faith is bad. Proof is good. I'll agree with you when I see it.
>>10553144
A teacher in Hero Academia. She has big floppy titties and a fetish for manly boys and youth.

>>10553023
If anything good at all came out of this Eromancy shitfest it's that it made me more interested in Tok's previous work which I never looked at, anyone wanna post some more?

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>>10553282
a man of truely patrician taste

>>10552517
im sure you've already seen at least twenty of the ones i created over the past five years

>>10553294
-- TokHaar Gol --
Google Drive:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTgloRXVUV19DR19hdEk?usp=sharing

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I've noticed that I make cyoas that are strongly grounded in reality, restrictively so and I never go the route of magic. So I have a question, do you guys prefer 'real' or fantasy cyoas with spells and magic artifacts, thinking of changing it although I'm not sure how well I'd do at adding magic stuff.

>>10553432
I for one prefer CYOAs that can get highly unrealistic. Whether this happens via magic or sufficiently advanced science is not that important.

>>10553432
I like modern stuff the most, it's easier to selfinsert into. The best is our setting but you can change how the world works to make it sexier.

>>10548718
Yellow: 7
Green: 8
Blue: 9
Purple: 3
Pink: 6
Red: 12
Black: 2

Total: 47. Man I'm fucked up.

Primary: Blue
Upgraded Time Stop (45)
Upgraded Spacial Manipulation (43)
Corruption: Elf Girl - Dark Elf, Magical Girl
Secondary: Green
Transform (42)
Gender Swap (41)
Invigorate (40)
Corruption: Mental Change
Boons: Unlimited Power (0)

Man, unlimited power is expensive. Worth it, though. Unlimited time stop and teleportation wherever I feel like it, and the ability to turn people into cute monster girls or alien girls. I think I'll probably begin with my dream of making the entire world into a mix of fiats and women rather than the current gender dichotomy we have now. I don't think I'll leave anyone the same, either - all men become women, all women get penises or become inhuman. Let's see how things work from there.

>>10553432
Can I be a dick and say I prefer grounded fantasy? CYOAs are about escapism for me, so I wanna be able to do stuff I could never do in real life, but if it gets too crazy, my imagination can't handle it.

>>10548845
dude, people never actually finish those projects. I've had someone proclaim they were making an alternate version of my cyoa as well. Doesn't happen.

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>>10552239
I vote maid as well. Especially if it is as good as trap maid. But with out the trap.
And or your turned into the maid.

Im working on my first CYOA in paint. And i would rather learn some HTML skills so i am not completely wasting my time.

Whats this base tool you speak of? Can i look at the raw code as i work so i can tinker.

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>>10553023
Summoner
10 Mana
9 Spells
2 Mana / hour of fucking familiar

Alter World 2
Summon Toy 1
Transform 2
Pleasure 1
Immortality 1
Porn Physics 1
Summon Familiar 1

Artifacts:

Scrying Orb
Mana Gem

Familiars
Centaur (Permanent)
Catgirl
Fairy

Open the world more to sex, maybe make Monster Girls a natural phenomenon, some tentacle beasts for flavor. Fly around the world on my Centaur Waifu delivering toys and transformations with our friendly fairy and pet catgirl. In-flight mana provided by transforming myself into a parasite suit to fuck one of the three as we go. On the ground we could fuck in the park (would fucking three familiars at once provide 2 mana per hour each?) whether that means getting some pussy, using the fairy as a condom, plundering the doughnut, or bending over myself to get plowed by the dicks I've given them.

Of course, I'd eventually settle down to more of a local service while raising a few foals with my waifu.

>>10551693
So EnteeCards from anonkun?

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>>10553686
>Especially if it is as good as trap maid
You thought it was good? Huh. Thanks. Don't see it posted much.

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>>10553896

>>10553896
Ya i like it. Good amount of choices yet simple and good images.And i fucking love maids.

Traps just aren't my thing though.

>>10553896
Maybe it's because everyone liked it and saved it so they have no need to repost it.

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>>10553948
>Traps just aren't my thing though.
I understand that. I really like them.
Still got so many unused images.
>>10553962
Never thought of that.

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>>10553762

I am unfamiliar with this and wish to learn more.

>>10553896
It's great.

The only bad part is that builds never get posted any more, so I don't get to claim other anons who chose to be the trap as my own.

Does anyone have the island one? With cryptids and nemesis n shiet?

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>>10554025
>I don't get to claim other anons who chose to be the trap as my own.
Was my plan too.

>>10554217
Because I'm a lazy shit:
https://imgur.com/a/6hWsw

>>10553896
>>10554025
>>10554228
try it
>be the maid
>regular
>professional
>long ponytail
>brown
>feminine
>average
>regular
>cute
>simple
>pyjamas
>disobedient fem
>play along
>pure
>protector
>cake
>finances
>shopping
>no toys
>no kinks
>no position

>>10553896
Trap maid is great, but I'm not that interested in penises, which massively kills my interest in it.

>>10554406
>not that interested in penises
What are you? a faggot?

>>10554406
It's the same for me. It's a good CYOA, just not my cup of tea.

>>10553896
I'd like it more with a random mode. I like a bit of randomness in my cyoas

>>10553432
Magic is nice, if only because it lets you get crazy affects without having to really question anything.

>>10554008
It's an (all but abandoned) anonkun quest. Just go to fiction.live and search for Card, you'll find it. Sadly the last chapter put some folks off, which seems to have hurt the writer's motivation to continue it, so he's focusing on his other quests for now.

Tok has uploaded The End on his google drive....
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTgloRXVUV19DR19hdEk?usp=sharing

>>10553432
Mild magical elements. I don't find too much appeal in shooting meteors out of my dick, but stuff that allows you rather free reign of your private life or interpersonal spells does appeal.

>>10554246
Thanks anon

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>>10554406
Same. I wish there was a reverse trap butler option.

>>10553432
I despise reality with passion. In my opinion the more fantasy the better.

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>>10548718
Yellow: 10
Green: 4
Blue: 3
Purple: 3
Pink: 7
Red: 7
Black: 1
Total: 35

Main School: Yellow
Mana Regeneration: Mana Potion
Spells:
Upgraded Normalify
Upgraded Charm
Heighten Libido
Upgraded Heighten Sensitivity
Add Flavor

Secondary School: Red
Spells:
Upgraded Drain Strength
Hex
Summon Succubus

Boons:
(21 points left)
Discrete Spellcasting
Power of Corruption
Apprentice

Corruption:
Random Orgasms
Flasher
Slut
Urges
Role Reversal
Sadist

Mana Pool: 31

Well that turned out okay. My first build went with pink magic until I saw the corruptions for it. I wish there was a boon for removing corruption.

>>10553896
Be the trap maid!

Purpose - Love
Relationship - Lovey-Dovey
Hair Style - Long Ponytail, Brown
Face - Girlish
Donger - Big

Outfits!
Work - Regular
Casual - CUTE
Formal - Fancy
Bedroom - Your T-Shirt

Personality - Neutral-Fem

Traits - Shy + Play Along, Neat Freak + Insecure
Food - Cake

Assignments! - Cleaning + Cooking + Grooming + Bathing + Shopping

L-lewd Page
Toys - Cat Tail + Cat Ears + Choker
Sub Kinks - Kissing + Warm Embrace + Cuddling + Cosplay + Girl + Blowjobs + Cum + Deepthroating + Fucked Silly
Dom Kinks - On Top + Reversal; Blowjobs
Position - Blowjob + From Behind + Missionary

>>10554611
>>10554611
>>10554611
can someone make this?

>>10554807
>someone
Yes

>>10554622
Minor powers:
1.Overflowing
2.Tasty
3.Knot
4.Youth
5.Innuendo
6.Always Clean

Minor drawback:
Blue balls

Major powers:
1. Scent
2.Monstergirls
3.Harem
4.Ruined
5.Love
6.Fervor
7.All you need is fuck

Major drawbacks:
Captain Cock-block

>>10553762
There is no way to access archived chats from there, is there?

>>10554806
Just to be clear, you want to penetrate and be penetrated, yes?

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>>10554806
Except the big dick I love every part. Love and Lovey-dovey is my own favorite setup.
I would love to take a trap in a fancy dress to a party. Have him be cute and blushing and afraid of being made.
Your t-shirt is also good.
Would have loved you took Massage as well.
Only problem with a cat tail is it needs to be taken out in the bedroom. Shame you're not into cock worship.

Very good build.
I need to go take care of something.

>>10555034
>>10555027

I want to penetrate and be penetrated
I don't want a "big" dong, just one that's a little bigger than average

>>10555034
Woops, I meant to take massage

>>10555079

I'd love to take you in.

>>10555079
>I don't want a "big" dong, just one that's a little bigger than average
Okay that's better.
Well it will take a bit for me to get used to being penetrated and giving blowjobs but I'm sure it will be enjoyable.

>>10555009
Depends on what you mean. After each 'post' there's a comments section, where you can see at least some of the discussion and such that happened. And there is a Pop-Out button and a Page button (it defaults to showing as Latest, because it's currently showing the latest chat 'page') at the top of the Chat section, which is to the right of the story stuff and below the Topic section. Unfortunately, anonkun is pretty unreliable in serving up old chat, so sometimes you go to a particular page but it just keeps showing what you had been looking at before.
I hope that made sense.

>>10548718
I found I'm vanilla as fuck

>>10548718
Could I get a bit of clarification on the [pink] Divine Gift spell? Its wording seems slightly vague to me; do I choose which unupgraded non-pink spell I can gift people with on purchase, or do I just buy Divine Gift and thereafter choose from any non-pink spell to gift when I cast it? Obviously one interpretation seems way more reasonable than the other, but that doesn't necessarily make it correct.

>>10555573
I'd think you choose the spell to gift when you purchase Divine Gift, and are stuck with your choice after that.

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RIP still can't believe

>>10554406
>>10554463
>>10554611
Fourth, and an "oh hell yes" on that last one.

>>10555795
I can't believe somebody could be such a bitch.

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>>10553896
>>10553903
Another "be the trap" build

>Purpose: Roleplayer
>Dynamics: Lovey-dovey
Looks:
>Hair Style: Long ponytail
>Hair Color: Blonde
>Face: Androgynous
>Penis size: Small
Outfits:
>Work: French
>Casual: Sundresses
>Formal: Fancy
>Bedroom: Nightgown
Personality:
>Obedient Feminine
Traits:
>Submissive
>Enjoying it
>Play along
>Charming
>Talkative
Favorite Food:
>Popsicles
Maid assignments:
>Cooking
>Cleaning
>Shopping
>Grooming
>Relief
Toys:
>Cat tail
>Cat ears
>Vibrator (both controls)
>Choker
Submissive kinks:
>Kissing
>Warm embrace
>Cuddling
>Cosplay
>Teasing
>Undressing
>Girl
>Emasculation
>Ribbons
>Blowjobs
>Cum
>Ear Nibbling
>Nipple play
>Deepthroating
>Impregnation
Dominant kinks
>Fingerlicking
Position
>Blowjob
>From Behind
>Cowgirl
>Missionary
>Tied up

>>10554611
Tell me what to write, what image to use and I can make an option. Won't be on the CYOA, there's no room.

>>10548718

If I went by my definition of what having a fetish means, I'd have jack-shit when it comes to points. Fortunately, this cyoa considers anything I've fapped to a few times (even incidentally) to be a "fetish".

Yellow: 10
Blue: 9
52 magical essence
Mana Regen: Fairy Familiar
Blue Eromancy: Upgraded Time Stop, Upgraded Spatial Manipulation
Yellow Eromancy: Upgraded Heightened Sensitivity, Add Flavor
Boons: Immortality -5, Planeswalker -25, Signature Spell (Time Stop) -10, Discrete Spellcasting -5
Corruption: Magomaniac, Magical Wardrobe, Urges

First thing I try to do is fuck off to a universe far far away. If an eromancer before me somehow managed to cast Enforce Law in a way that prevents me from escaping before they have a chance to cast Enslave on me, I'll just kill myself and get it over with... but let's assume that isn't the case, and I was able to get out of the hell hole that is this dimension.

Once I'm free of this shit world, I'll do what everyone always does when they're given the power to travel the multiverse: accumulate power and become the ultimate outside context problem. Hopefully I'll have a good long run before I accidentally stumble across a more powerful being that crushes me like an ant.

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>>10554523

>>10552239
Lewd maid cyoa please.

>>10545663
Dude, don't let a few pissant trolls get to you, this is what ends of up happening to so many CYOA authors on 4chan.
A few guys give them a hard time, take enjoyment out of pissing them off and then next thing you know no more author.
The trolls celebrate and have a good life before jerking each other off and the rest of the community laments the loss of yet another fine author that they enjoyed and followed the working of happily.

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>>10546412
Still hunting for imagines for my Hyperdimension Neptunia CYOA. If you happen to have any image below it would be a great help. Try to keep in the anime art style like the series. prefer ecchi, sexual undertones, or Moe.

Looking for:
Industry: conveyor belts with tech on them. or just a good outside shot. Or product being showed off.
National park: filled with nature camping or hiking.
Amusement park: with rollercoasters.
Gaming: people working on games
Anime: People working on anime.
Arcade/bar: bar with games in background.
Tube travel: something like what is in futurama
hiding identity: or changing identity like a mask.
Friends: Human friends.
yandere: like three of them fighting for you. or one happy that she won.
Difficulty setting: Easy, medium, hard, and Newgame+

Found:
Changing personality, Yandere, school, military. Futa, Little sister, cityscape, and warfare. But I’m open to suggestions.

>>10546134
Here's a conveyor belt one anon.

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>>10556440
Whoops

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Hey Anons! It's Dynasty Lights!

And well after some work Here's the newest Version of my "A New Life in a Fantasy World CYOA" With a Bonus DLC

However, I would love to shrink it down without sacrificing the text. Any Suggestions? For some reason If I have the text smaller than 30, it comes out blocky and cramped together...

But yeah. Here's page 1/14

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>>10556472
>But yeah. Here's page 1/14
How about fucking merging a few pages instead?

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4/14

>>10556472
>14 pages
No.

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5/14

>>10548845
Honestly, fuck you Gol for being such a fucking man-child.
>Hur dur dur someone wants to steal my work to work on it while I stole a ton of pictures to even make it in the first place
KYS. You should be grateful anyone wants to touch your shit let alone improve on it. I've made CYOA's and have always said that if someone wants to change them they can because I'm not a fucking putz. I do hope you go to Reddit. I do hope you won't come back. I'm fucking tired of hearing about it. Actually KYS, you fucking pissbaby. This ain't your goddamn secret club. And this isn't even just about this CYOA it's about how you've been a putz up until then. I'd say grow some thinker skin but honestly KYS.

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6/14

>>10556472
>However, I would love to shrink it down without sacrificing the text. Any Suggestions? For some reason If I have the text smaller than 30, it comes out blocky and cramped together...
The problem isn't that the pictures are too large, the problem is that you're not using the resources at your disposal as well as you could.

For example, the first three pages could all fit in one file without even touching the 10k pixel limit on image dimensions. The filesize might go over 4 MB, but that's easily fixable with a proper image viewer (e.g. IrfanView) or something else that can compress the image a bit further.

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7/14

>>10556546
When's the porn pages coming?

>>10556622

Yeah.... I admit I'm still a bit green at using Gimp...

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8/14

>>10556652
>Gimp
There might be something for that in the pastebin. If not, you can always go to /tg/'s /cyoag/ (or the CYOA Discord, link in the pastebin) and ask Symbiobro for GIMP advice.

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>>10556652
Creative narrative. The porn is yours to write. This is just your new life. Whatever you want to do go and do it.

Even though I admit This CYOA is more suited for those that enjoy Plot with their lewds.

9/14

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>>10556689
Oh? I might just do that Later...

10/14

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DLC
1/6

>>10555545
Yeah, all these folks getting immortality and infinite cosmic power, meanwhile I'm trying to decide between being an elf girl with portal powers and a fairy familiar, or pool everything together to get immortality but no spells or corruptions.
But that's the nature of /d/eviants. Some folks have a lot of things that get them going, others have a more focused band of interests. Besides, I'm sure Suzie can appreciate someone not being too ambitious in the acquisition of her blue ero-magic.

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DLC
2/6

>>10556472
Since there are no NSFW imagery (at least in the main CYOA), you might as well be posting it on /tg/'s /cyoag/. Might want to reconsider the whole rolling aspect, though.

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>>10556472
You have obviously put some effort into this, and the basic concept is decent, so I'll try to keep my criticism polite and constructive. If you want to help people create some kind of an interesting, possibly erotic narrative about their new life in a fantasy world, you should really offer more info on that world. That would help a lot. What doesn't help are stats whose exact numeric values don't really matter because they aren't really any game mechanics associated with them. Page after page of options that give +2 to one stat or another don't really mean much either. Cut out needless crunch, add in more fluff. I mean, when it comes to TTRPGs, I generally prefer crunchy games to rules light games, but crunch should serve some purpose. In this case it doesn't.

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5/6

>>10556857
There we go, the first NSFW picture in the whole CYOA (and it took us until page 3 of the DLC)!

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>>10556873
Been working on this one CYOA for about 3 years now.

As for the Info of the world... I don't want to limit people on that aspect. I mean everyone has their version of what a fantasy world is yeah?

The numbers are more for balance on yourself than anything really...

6/6

>>10556472
>For some reason If I have the text smaller than 30, it comes out blocky and cramped together...
Try rasterizing.

>>10553896
Sex
Lovey-dovey
Messy blonde
Girlish
Hung
French, skimpy, fancy, nude
Obesdient-fem
Enjoying it, play along, lewd, happy, charming
Popsicles
Cooking, cleaning, grooming, relief, finances
Choker
Worship
On top
From behind

>>10554622
Overflowing
Innuendo
Tentacle
Tasty
Huge
Paid
Fucked stupid

World champion
Scent
Dick is happiness
Fervor
Love
Ruined

>>10557047
Rasterizing?

I uhh... Don't know what that is actually.

>>10556472
So in order to play this I have to have my dick out an give it a tuck whenever I see something somewhat erotic or lewd and let go to read more pages?

anyone remember that guide that was posted for making a new cyoa?

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>>10556394

Something like this?

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>>10557209

>>10556823
>decide between being an elf girl
There made your choice.

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>>10557209
OOOOh thanks that's perfect. I can easily photoshop a chick onto that. If anyone got a white background character that will go with that shot go ahead and share. Otherwise ill fine my own.
Thanks Anon.

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>>10557283
Anything specific?

>>10557191
Was it one of the ones listed in the pastebin?

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>>10557342
Guess anything like she belongs. Like she is currently work there in some form.

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>>10557368
Best I got.

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>>10557368
I have a thing for personifications like that. Like Google-chan turning 18, shit like that.

>>10557112
A function you'll find in most image editing softwares that smoothens out your text.

>>10555826
cute build, would definitely 'employ'

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>>10557739
You should check out the games then. They are not the best. But if you want to have a party of characters that are personification of many game companies. then its the rpg for you

Pic is a recurring character named 5bp. the company that does a lot of the music for the games.

>>10557835
Thank you, kind master or mistress

>>10548845
>makes a work to ask for basic respect of their work, meanwhile ripping off dozens of other people in the very same work he just made
fucking masterful

>>10551498
I am a fan of his CYOAs, yes. If you think being a fan of a content creator's content means I'm sucking his duck, okay. I don't think anyone who disagrees with me that this is a great CYOA is wrong, that's your opinion and there are legitimate complaints to be had for this CYOA. It's not perfect. Where I think you are wrong is demanding X without giving a reason beyond "I want it to be" or attacking Tokhaar directly when he doesn't want to touch something so toxic. So you're not wrong, you're just an asshole.

>>10551508
I make it more difficult too. You can tell me how to enjoy my CYOAs. Some get stale after a while.

>>10551932
I would love for there to be more options to spend your points on but unfortunately Tokhaar says he's done.

New thread (because /trash/ is faster, and if the thread isn't made early enough, the regular in-board previous thread link feels a bit futile): >>10558086

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>>10548718
>>10548727
>>10548730
>>10548737
Why even bother having a list of fetishes when there's almost nothing related to most of them?

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>>10557283

>>10557739
>18
Too old

>>10555826
>Roleplay
This is the best. It says your maid is your boyfriend first, not a literal maid that fell for you
>Lovey-dovey
Yes. This is the best. Even if Dominate is hit as hell and Submit could be too this is still the best.
(Dick literally already diamonds just from this. It's too lewd to talk like this to and about someone! I don't know if it's okay to feel like this...)
>Long blond ponytail
I'm more into brunettes and I think the side ponytail is cuter but it's not biggie!
>Androgynous
More into girlish but it's still okay! Probably better for a real relationship
>Penis
The best. It's cute and fits comfortably in your hand. Also you can grab it through his skirt and panties and rub it, then feel it get bigger (but not much bigger).
Oh wow that sounds great. When my maid walks past to play with him and tease him a little. Just enough to make him count the seconds till his "workday" is over...
>French
Best. You are cosplaying, not a real maid so it makes sense. I''ll still like you to wear some school-girl outfits sometimes, if you're okay with that...
>Sundresses
Cute! (Even if skimpy is really hot!)
>Fancy
It's great. I like the idea of a trap getting dressed up so much
>Nightgown
That pic is too erotic!

>Submissive
Not into the spanking so much but hey, misbehaving because he wants my attention sounds pretty cool
>Enjoying it
Of course
>Play along
Cutest "fetish"
>Charming, talkative
There's gotta be stuff you do outside of sex alright
>Popsicles
Ain't complaining, there's no wrong choice here.

>Grooming
Would be pretty cool. He'll be the best at making me look proper, for his sake
>Relief
Oh my

Gotta break up the post! Then we get to the hottest part!
(That sure is a long list of kinks)

>>10556662
Is this a joke page? Everything except the 'design your own weapon' just doesn't like it would be worth it, at all.
I mean, a wooden sword? For 50 points?

>>10558320
(I would have loved it if you picked Bathing)

>Picking all the toys
Madman! I love it, even if it might be a tight fit.
Really helps with my plan to tease you during your shifts. Some hot heavy kisses, grabbing you downstairs and pushing the button... but never getting you off
Not until your shift is over

>All the options on the first row
Best maid! Especially cosplay that's cute and goes well with you cosplaying a maid. Teasing goes well with my plan. Oh it will be wonderful to help you get rid of all that pent up desire I've filled you up with
You'll make a mess
>Row 2
Great too! Ribbons is cool
>Row 3
I'm okay with not picking the others they're a bit extreme
>Row 4
I don't get ear nibbling nipple play so you'll have to teach me...
Cum fetish is great!
>Row 5
>Impregnation
O-oh my! I don't even have words for how great that is!

>Fingerlicking
Okay I don't have problems with that. Would love Licking and maybe Tease too but that's okay.

>Positions
All are great! Hugging would be perfect but I get it.

>>10558446
>I mean, a wooden sword? For 50 points?
It's a very sharp wooden sword.

>>10558320
>>10558503
Oh my, such an in-depth analysis, master. You've put a lot of thought into how I can best serve and service you~

>>10558651
I enjoyed writing it very much.

>>10550381
>being this butthurt

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>>10556472
First off, I love this but fuck sake dude. Try to make it not as any pages.
Second:
>Pay 100 for choice. (1400 remaining)
>Age: 18
>Female
>Overdeveloped

>Demon (1300)
>+ 60 cha for 600 points (700)
>Darkness (cha) (550)
>Nilbix (450)
>Book of magic (390)
>Archmage robes (330)
>Book of beginning Hypnotism (280)
>Hermaphrodite (180)
>Succubi's delight (80)
>Family love (-120)
>Yandere goddess: Nilbix . (80)
>Place: 11: Moirramm
+ 100 points (180)
>+ 15 mag for 150 (30)
>Companions: Sol and Luna
>Scenario DLC: 1

Total stats:
Str: 20
End: 21 (used racial bonus)
Agi: 19
Mag: 33
Cha: 84

I look something like this but with bigger breasts and hips.
I might write a scenario for this later.