CYOA Refuge Thread - A thread for posting any and all CYOAs

do you like CYOAs where you get to be the dom, or CYOAs where you're the sub?

>>10516021
Why not both? And I prefer to Dom/.

Hey Tok, do you choose your corruption options when you choose curse and have to keep them, or can I apply varied curses to different people?

what's that lewd CTOA idea you've kept in your head but never tried to make?

>>10516100
Choose Tok's Odd Adventure?

>>10516021
Dom, or "sub" (i.e. everything that happens due to the CYOA would be to my liking despite technically "not having any say in it").

>>10515437
>>10515443
>>10515453
>>10515460
>7 Yellow Points
>3 Green Points
>7 Blue Points
>3 Purple Points
>3 Pink Points
>4 Red Points
>0/1 Black Point (Not sure if pokemon counts as furry or beast)

>Yellow Eromancy (Primary)
>Mana Regeneration: Mana Potion
Liquid Production (Upgraded) -2
Highten Libido (Upgraded) -2
Heighten Sensitivity (Upgraded) -2
Add Flavor -1

>Blue Eromancy (Secodary)
Time Stop (upgraded) -2
Electrolyze -1

>Boons
Immortality -5
Hidden Power (Enforce Law) -10

>Corruption
Sexy Girl -1
Urges -2
Magical Wardrobe -1
Magomaniac -1

This is going to be amazing.
The one and only law I'm enforcing? Everyone must be sexy all the time.
I hope this actually magically changes their bodies instead of leading to landwhales trying to wear stripper clothes.

>>10516100
mind flayer CYOA
give yourself various mental powers and physical modifications like draining somebody's intelligence or eating memories

>>10509471
>>10509477

I am alive, anon. I just rarely find time to uodate the cyoa. Partly because I really don't care about it anymore and partly because I'm busy. I have to force myself to work on it and there's like 3 other things I wanna do. I never should have promised an update.

>>10516021
Sub only. I don't want a slave I want to be one.
>>10516217
You don't have to update it if you don't feel like it. Even if I looked forward to it.
Your happiness is more important.

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>>10516336

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>>10516345

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TokHaar here, Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!

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>>10516500

/100009325262791/videos/1884607041860120/

For those guys in the /tg/ thread who asked.

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>>10516533

>>10516533
>>10516547
What happens if you pick the Unlimited Power boon, and then pick one of the corruptions that last until you're drained of mana?

>>10516500
Is this how Enslave works?

>I cast the spell on a pre-existing collar
>I now have a permanently enchanted collar, but no slave
>From now on, anyone who wears the collar becomes my slave
>nothing stops the collar from being removed, unless you order a slave to prevent it.
>the spell offers no condition to win freedom from slavery - removing the collar does not win freedom

>>10515954
>>10516500
Can I cast Sex Magic and Eronomicon spells on myself?

>>10516500
This seems.. really restrictive.

>>10516500
probably the best nsfw cyoa i've ever done
>magical essence
yellow: 2
green: 3
blue: 1
purple: 7
pink: 4
red: 2
black: 0

>primary (purple)
eldritch cock
summon tentacles
incubate (upgraded)
banish
>secondary (green)
enlarge (upgraded)

>boons
embrace corruption
power of corruption
immortality

>corruption
random transformation
eldritch girl
summon
spirited away
magic feedback
mana tanks

>>10516500
Reposting for the sake of reposting.
>Yellow: 3
>Green: 8
>Blue: 9
Didn't expect this to exceed Green.
>Purple: 4
>Pink: 0
A shiiiiiit
>Red: 4
What makes mind control a separate fetish from hypnosis?
>Black: 0

That gives me a Blue primary, Green secondary, and 11 miscellaneous points.

>Internal Ley Lines
Not all too into micro.

>Upgraded Spacial Manipulation 7
Detachable parts and instant travel.
>Upgraded Mind Sculpt 5
To be used sparingly.
>Upgraded Summon Person 3
Sometimes you just need a harem.
>Upgraded Spiritual Possession 1
Despite ILL strangeness, it's still useful.
>Electrolyze 0
Targetted orgasms are fun.

>Upgraded Enlarge 6
Weird that just making people curvier costs 2 points. Does this count as an enchantment that I can reverse?
>Gender Swap 5
Mandatory.
>Upgraded Alter Age 3
Green master race.
>Transform 2
It won't save on mana (or bundle Alter Age), so it's worth keeping the point.
>Upgraded Invigorate 0
Curing disease is worth it.

>Hidden Power 1
This is very overpriced; it costs 2/3 as much as buying an entire school. To balance this a tiiiny bit (and make the numbers work better), I'm assuming I get the basic version of
>Upgraded Normalify 0
for free; being able to use magic in public is definitely better than using another spell indefinitely.

And 4 points each in Blue and Green gets...
>Elf Girl 3
Being an elf futa ain't bad.
>Mana Tanks 1
Well, I don't have any way of gaining mana, so after they bottom out the first time, I could just grow them to the desired size.
>Accidental Summoning 0
Between Mind Sculpt, Spiritual Possession, and Spacial Manipulation, I should be statistically safe.

>Mental Change 3
Being someone else for a bit can be relaxing.
>Random Transformations 2
With Normalize never not active, it should be fine. Worst case, I summon and possess someone I want to look like.
>Fairy Rapists 0
Oh no. They're after my precisely no mana. However shall I cope?

>>10516547
Some of the corruptions seem like they could be taken multiple times (increasing their duration and/or frequency). If this is the case, would you mind making a note of it in the next version?

Also, you'd think the group dividers would go between options from separate schools, but currently they split some school options in half (i.e. three options on either side of the divider).

>>10516721
What do you think happens?
It's so damn boring to see all these people not imagining things....,

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>>10516632
>What happens if you pick the Unlimited Power boon, and then pick one of the corruptions that last until you're drained of mana?
TokHaar here, The faeries will stop after 24 hours, the living tentacle clothes... Congratulations, you have invented a bad ending for Eronomicon!

>>10516635
>Enslave
>Nothing prevents you from removing their collar and shtill control them.
Holy shit, will fix it for the next version.

>>10516848
>A bad ending
Unlimited power + Mana Tanks.

>>10516859
That's not a bad end.
You have infinite mana out of a max of infinity, so you get full-size tanks that just never go down.

>>10516859
hang on, if 50% is normal, then the maximum size is the same no matter the maximum mana

>>10516902
>Size doesn't scale with max Mana
Well okay then.

>>10516522
>sorry this content isn't available at the moment

>>10516921
Wait never mind I missed a zero.

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>>10516500
>Impregnation, Ahegao, Milking, Inflation, Cum drinking, Unbirth, Gangbang, Exhibitionism, Public use ,Cum
>Transformation, Monster girls
>Time stop, Magical girls, Fanny pack, Hypnotism, Invisibility, Mind break
>Tentacles, Parasite, living suits, Symbioses, Monster, Corruption, Tentacle job, xenophilia
>Femdom, forced orgasm, Submission
>Slaves, Humiliation (other), Mind control, Rape, Latex, Drugging, sex machines
Total: 34 points
10 yellow
2 green
6 blue
8 purple
3 pink
7 red
0 black
>Primary: yellow
>Secondary: purple
>Mana generation: Slut wear

>Normality (upgrade) (8 yellow points remaining)
>Liquid production (Upgrade) (6 points remaining)
>Heightened Libido (upgrade) (4 points remaining)
>Heightened sensitivity (3 points remaining)
>Add flavor (2 points remaining)

>Summon tentacles (upgrade) (6 purple points remaining)
>Banish (upgrade) (4 points remaining)
>Spawn parasite (3 points remaining)
>Summon abyssal girl (2 points remaining)

Total remaining: 22 points
>Immortality (age 20) (17 points remaining)
>Discrete spellcasting (12 points remaining)
>Signature spell: Normality (2 points remaining)
Mana pool: 19

>4 points of corruption for yellow and 3 for purple
>Flasher (3 yellow)
>Slut (2 yellow)
>Urges (0 yellow)
>Eldritch girl (futa) (2 purple)
>Corruption (1 purple)
>Spirited away (0 purple)

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>>10516500
>>10516988
I’m going to turn into a young looking abyssal girl (like pic related). I’m a futa and my balls are going to be internal. I’m planning on summoning a abyssal girl to help me do all of the fun things I want to do. I will use my signature spell “Normalize” On myself and pretty much everyone I meat and fuck. No One will ever question the fact that I’m a monster. I’m going to walk around in very skimpy clothing to regain mana while it is active so people will think it’s perfectly normal for someone to walk around half naked and flashing my naked body sometimes. I’m going to summon tentacles in public areas like malls and have them fuck random women. Again, everyone will think this is normal. Some women I’m going to fuck until their morals degrade into nothing and their libidos and liquid production are through the roof. It won’t be an odd sight to see two or more go into the center of a town with two tally boards and say “We’re gonna see who can make the most men cum”. Other women will be banished and turned into abyssal girls before being brought back and let loose. Men will have their cum production turned into overdrive, being able to solo bukkake or cumflate any girl. I’m going to make my cum taste like candy, It’s also going to be slightly addictive for most and highly addictive for those I like. Every now and again I will make tentacle armors for some women I like and then making their bodies highly sensitive. And I will only make the armors stop after they have been gangbanged by several men.

After a while in a normal day you will get on the train, see a girl getting fucked by a line of men on their way to work. Walk through a mall on your way to work and have several women around you be abducted by the tentacle plant in the middle of it. At work, your abyssal girl boss will ask you to cumflate her like usual and then to cover the cute receptionist girl in cum.

And all of this will be perfectly normal

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>>10516988
Im gonna need that sauce anon.

>>10517059
Artist name is Slugbox. It's an old pic of theirs.

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>>10516500
>>10516514
>>10516522
>>10516533
>>10516547
TokHaar here, Super minor update since Enslave diden't require the Collar to be worn, now it does.

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>>10517145

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>>10517171

>>10517171
Does Hidden Power include the cost of the spell? Can we pay to upgrade the spell purchased with HP?

>>10517145
Hey Tok, if i buy Hidden power, I still need the spell point to purchase that spell?.ie- I choose Alter age as my spell, do I need a green point to buy it right?, can we upgrade that spell?

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>>10517197
>Does Hidden Power include the cost of the spell?
TokHaar here, nope, it only give you the ability to purschase a spell outside of your primary and secondary schools.
>Can we pay to upgrade the spell purchased with HP?
yes

No more questions, there are several builds I need to fap to!

>>10516266
i'll try to finish it, seriously.

>>10517264
go and masturbate as much as you want, you beautiful degenerate bastard

>>10517145
Hey Tok. The fact that Green has two mutually exclusive *Girl options makes dealing with green corruption a pain. Can Goo or Plant Girl be dropped in favor of a different corruption option?

>>10517145
>>10517159
>>10517171
>>10517181
>>10516500
>>10516514
>>10516533
>>10516547
TokHaar here, Also updated Eronomicon 1 more time, the newest version can be found on my google drive.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTglodHhsOUVqNTFzeWc?usp=sharing

>Changelog
>Enslave: Before you diden't needyour slaves to wear the collars, u just needed to equip the collar and then you could remove it, it has now been fixed
>Spawn Parasite and Monster: before they had the Requirement: Oviposition, this is a type since I called Incubate Oviposition and I forgot to change it when I released Eronomicon.

>>10516310
>CQC
>Knife, Just a Knife = 90 points (50 * 2) - (20 / 2)
>smol + 2
>flat + 2
>huge - 4
>small + 2
>Expandable breasts & ass = 100 (25 * 2) * 2
>Masochist = -25 (50 / 2)

Total points = 100 + 90 + 2 + 2 - 4 + 2 + 100 - 25 = 267
Then, spend all 267 points on Teleport crystals. Totals to 89 Teleport crystals, meaning I could use ~12 teleport crystals a day.
Conclusion: Teleporting naked trap with a knife, masochist for death safety. Probably would be pretty damn good, considering I could just teleport ontop of someone and kill them, so long as I'm out of combat. If a knife doesn't do it, I can throw a few points from tp's into nades, for group clearing.

>>10517734
that's... an unconventional build. i guess i should've expected that when i added a "just a knife button

>>10517794
button? thanks brain

>>10516500
What does Upgraded Normalify do? It;'s basically the same as the basic spell.

>>10518084
unupgraded merely makes people overlook lewd acts like fingering some random lady on the train, whereas upgraded will make them ignore anything from murder to bank robbing

>>10518084

Looks like the basic version only makes people accept lewdness. Upgraded means they could beat someone to death or rob a bank and everyone would think they're fine.

>>10518099
>>10518107
Ah, thanks clone anon. I'm focusing too much on the lewd aspect that I forgot you can do things like that too,

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Hey folks, anyone knows what's happening with tg's Rosanon's in-depth yuri cyoa?
Last i saw was the google doc link couple months ago...

>>10516547
Can the corruptions that happen a certain number of times over a period (like Random Transformations) be taken multiple times?

>>10517145
If you choose a become a girl option. Can you use change gender to become a futa. Or transform to become a slime dragon.

Also if you are a futa can you choose not to have balls since having things dangling over a pussy doesnt really agree with my boner

>>10518236
Said Google Doc has been updated bit by bit. IIRC, he's currently working on companions (although more-or-less in secret).

>>10518332
>Also if you are a futa can you choose not to have balls since having things dangling over a pussy doesnt really agree with my boner
A futa with external balls is a futa. A futa with internal balls is a futa. A futa with internal multipurpose gonads (i.e. combined ovaries and balls or somesuch) is a futa. The CYOA doesn't specify what kind of futa you must be, so you get to be whichever, I'd say.

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>>10518336
Thanks, i don't have time to visit /tg/'s cyoa threads lately, they go by so fast ...

>>10517181
As has already been said, it'd be nice if there were more corruptions to choose from (i.e. more than six options per school). Any chance of this happening in a later version?

>>10517145
Maybe it's just me but the solid white background looks sind of boring to look at. I get that it was because of the multipul colours but surely they could have been placed in a fancy background white box and had the regular background be purple or something from eldrich gifts or something. Pure white is not great to look at desu. Maybe it's just me.

>>10518391
You could just bookmark the google doc link and check on it every now and then.

>>10518289

I hope so. It'd be a nice compromise if Tok can't think of more corruptions to add, or just doesn't want to toss any more in.

>>10517351
TokHaar here, Nope srry. Dropping options and replacing them makes people lose their shit, unless it's something everyone hates. It is nice to be able to have 2 girl options to choose from, but as you said it also limits the choices.

>>10518289
Nope, you can't purchase the same drawback twice.

>>10518332
See ---> >>10518379

>>10518379
Correct

>>10517171
Can I get the Upgraded version of a spell with the Hidden power boon?

>>10518481
Why not just have a section for all the race options that use any color of corruption points?

>>10518488
See
>>10517264

>>10517145

What if you take Fairy Rapists and Unlimited Power?

>>10516500
By frequently how frequently do you mean? e.g. I'm into sissy porn and some sissy porn has lactation but I only fap to lactation when it shows up. It's hot when it shows up but I don't seek it out in specific.

>>10518522
24 hours was the verdict

>>10518481
>Nope, you can't purchase the same drawback twice.
Then you definitely need to add more corruption options.

>>10517171
>Tfw I will never be able to Planewalk to fictional universes. Really ruins pretty much my greatest fantasy.
Feels bad man.

>>10518481
>TokHaar here, Nope srry. Dropping options and replacing them makes people lose their shit, unless it's something everyone hates. It is nice to be able to have 2 girl options to choose from, but as you said it also limits the choices.
Maybe I didn't make my point clearly. With respect to mitigating corruption, green is at a disadvantage as opposed to all other colors because it has 2 mutually exclusive options. Which is to say that you can take all of the corruption mitigation choices from the other colors, but you cannot do that with green. Purely quantitatively that puts green at a disadvantage.

>>10517145
Yellow Points
>6
Green Points
>3
Blue Points
>3
Purple Points
>12
Pink Points
>4
Red Points
>9
Black Points
>6

Primary (Purple)
Secondary (Red)

Mana Regeneration: Abyssal Summoner and Mana Leech

Purple Spells
>Summon Tentacle (Upgrade)
>Incubate (Upgrade)
>Spawn Monster (Upgrade)
>Spawn Parasite

Red Spells
>Drain Strength (Upgraded)
>Bind (Upgraded)
>Hex

Boons
>Immortality
>Mana Conduit
>Mana Resrvoir

Purple Corruption
>Corruption
>Eldritch Dreams
>Summon

Red Corruption
>Sadist
>Rapist

So, what does your summoner usually summon you for?

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>>10518518
>Why not just have a section for all the race options that use any color of corruption points?
TokHaare here, the races are themed after each school so no.

>>10518523
>By frequently how frequently do you mean?
>Example
That is enough to qualify as a fetish.

>>10518600
>You definitely need to add more corruption options.
I think it's good as it is.

>>10518635
Don't be sad anon, you just need to become more degenarate and then one day you might be able to to have enough points for Planeswalk.

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>>10516533
Does enforce law just make it a regular law that you get sent to jail for if you break it or does it bend reality to make it so the law must be followed?

>>10518635
>>10518725
Makes me wonder, is Planewalking a parallel universe version? Can I travel to different timelines in the same universe. Kinda wanna be immortal but don't want to have to watch the fictional universe I love grow old and fall to ruin at some time.

>>10518725
Can you address >>10518639

>>10516848
How do mana tanks work with internal leylines?

>>10518957
Wasnt green made by envy. Arent you in envy of all the other schools?

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>>10518811
>Enforce Law, how does it work?
TokHaar here, Everyone will magically follow the law and they will be incapable of breaking the magical law.

>>10518821
>Makes me wonder, is Planewalking a parallel universe version? Can I travel to different timelines in the same universe. Kinda wanna be immortal but don't want to have to watch the fictional universe I love grow old and fall to ruin at some time.
Planeswalk work like this, you decide a universe, place and a time in that universe then when you teleport there you will arrive at the universe at the time and place you choose. If you have the upgraded version you will be able to decide the universe, time and place each time you planeswalk. So you could avoid your ficional univers growing old and fall to ruin over time.

>>10517145
Can you buy empower multiple times for your deity?

>>10518985
Pretty sure it was already mentioned:
>you start out at full size
>if you cast spells beyond the free charges, your tanks shrink
>unless you have purchased an alternate method of mana generation, you can't regain the loss in size

>>10518985
More stupider, how does internal leylines work with infinite power? How does mana tanks work with infinite power? How does two options that obviously don't work together work together?

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>>10518957
>>10518639
TokHaar here, Yes, I'm aware of it and talked about it briefly in my reply >>10518481

>>10518985
>Mana Tanks+Internal Ley Lines=?
You count the "spell charges" as mana and basically your mana tanks will use the precentage of your "spell charges" instead of mana.

>>10519052
>how does internal leylines work with infinite power?
Basically you're at full mana forever, so it's kinda like infinite free charges instead of 2-per-spell-per-day.
>How does mana tanks work with infinite power?
Constantly at 100% size.

>>10518725
>>You definitely need to add more corruption options.
>I think it's good as it is.
You should replace Embrace the Corruption with a 1 point option that lets you move like a point or two of corruption to a different color, along with (slightly) reducing the cost of Hidden Power.

>>10519077
>I tried to make anon look dumb but looked just as dumb doing so
Like pottery

>>10519009
25 Fucking Points, TokHaar I'm not degenerate enough for that! Please I need more points I'll take Corruptions if only they gave me points for boons!
I love this cyoa but restrictions like this are really sad. And I don't want to lie even for a cyoa about my fetishes.

>>10519074
That response doesn't address the issue of imbalance at all though.

>>10519074
>You count the "spell charges" as mana and basically your mana tanks will use the precentage of your "spell charges" instead of mana.
Oh, so it's "2 charges per spell per day, and that's it", not "2 free charges per spell per day, and then you start draining mana".

>>10519114
Well, technically you can start draining mana, it's just that you can't ever *regain* that mana.

>>10519104
Be like me and have 55 points

>>10519129
Except that TokHaar's explanation in >>10519074 seems to imply that the "2 per spell per day" replaces mana entirely.

>>10519114
TokHaar here, ohh wait, no, you're right, Im wrong. Your mana tanks are based on the mana and it's "2 free charges per spell per day, and then you start draining mana".

Now i'm off to RS!

>>10518236
Devil
Strike a Deal (free)
Induce Desire
General Magic
Forget

Induce Desire and Make a Deal are almost too good together. Even assuming I can't contract with someone I've actively induced, I can still put people into a state where they feel horny, angry, envious, and so on. And it lets me accomplish all kinds of tasks. I can assassinate anyone by making someone else kill them, get anyone to sleep with anyone, get people to rob places then rob them in return and make them forget what happened, and so on.

I was tempted by 9/10 and Girl, but I can probably just get people to give me aspects of their appearance through careful wordplay. After all, if I tell someone that all I want is their smile, will they understand that I'm going to be taking it right off their face?

>>10517145
Damn. I'm just not perverted enough to be able to buy unlimited Planeswalking. Why must I be so vanilla?

>>10516500
Oh boy, oh boy.
>Yellow 6
>Green 3
>Blue 2
>Purple 5
>Pink 8
>Red 3
>Black (literal garbage) 0


Let's start there.

I'll start with summon Deity, but I'll upgrade it to get a red-headed bombshell futa.
I'll then take an upgraded empower to give her Bind and Enforce Law, and I'll take the divine gift to grant Voodoo. That comes out to three corruption points in pink.
For yellow, I'll take the basic versions of normalify, charm, heighten libido, and heighten sensitivity, coming to a total of two corruption points.
That leaves me with five spellpoints, just enough for immortality...before tapping into my 13 miscellaneous points.
I'll make Normalify my signature spell, so I don't need mana to cast it. I may as well make this interesting, so I'll embrace corruption with two of my remaining points and let the last point go to waste.
For my corruption, I'll take sissification, Sadist, and Nymphomaniac from pink, and Urges from yellow. Urges shouldn't be too much of an issue, since I can just cast normalify on myself and jack off in public.
For the embraced corruption, I'll take four points, which I'll put into magical feedback, corruption, and spirited away.

Unf, I'm going to enjoy being a submissive little fuckslave.

>>10519304
I feel you friend, there is no escape for us, not for such pure souls as ours.

>>10517159
I wish there was an option for just donating some of my own spells to my deity. I guess I could use apprentice, but it just feels kinda wrong power dynamics-wise for her to be stuck with a measly 2 spells while I have access to nearly a full set from a secondary school.

>>10518199
Athena +9
Ame-no-Uzume +6
Bastet +6
Epona +3
Eris +6
Izapapalotl +6
Izanami +3
Minerva +9
Nephthys +6
Pachamama +3
Sif +3
11 Wives! +15

Athena and Minerva can fight for my affection, both trying to win me over with gifts, time and sex. Bastet can stir the pot through gossip, making the other wives jealous of her for having sex with me, increasing my wives' desire for me. Eris can protect me from angry goddesses and Pachamama can serve me good meals whilst she sucks me off. Sif and Epona can give me info on my wives so I am clairvoyant about making decisions regarding who I spend time with. Ame-no-Uzume can keep the peace using her diplomatic skills. Izanami is comfy as fuck, whilst Itzpapalotl seems very fun.

Comfort Royale
75 points
Guards -1
Maids -1
Larger comfort -1
General Market -2
Great forge -2 (Hephaestus)
Casino -2
Festival -2
Entertainment center -2
Comfort control -3
Increased strength -1
Love shift -1
Increased endurance -2
Lewdification -2
Clockworks -2
Youthful springs -2
Legendary Hero -10 (Theseus, Aeneas, Jason, Perseus, Achilles)

The Beach
Home Movies
Romantic dates
Grand Balla
Sexual release

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>>10516021
Power sub. For example, in the Mindslaver cyoa, my build revolved around setting up an underground auction where patrons would buy slaves for a period (sometimes a day, sometimes a few months, but rarely forever), and I would regularly change my appearance and add myself to the chained chattel to be tagged and sold.

>>10519424
Jordi needs to do more works along that line. That was so hot.

>>10516021
Sub in my opinion. It just makes it more interesting thinking of the possible punishments and such happening to yourself

>>10519074
If you don't want to remove options is there any chance of add more options? Like a self incontinence drawback for black magic or more spells/boons

>>10518725
>I think it's good as it is.
Eh, I guess I could always just buy the upgraded planeswalking boon and go somewhere with a better eronomicon.

>>10516500
If I Normalize lewd acts for myself does that transfer to anything the target reacts with? Screaming in pleasure isn't exactly a normal occurrence.

>>10518424
Do you have it? Last time i checked it wasn't in the pastebin

>>10519666
That'd be because pastebin only lists more permanent things like archives and such, not transient stuff like WIPs.

Regardless, here you go, Satan: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jEIhgnDAVtiKR60HMK8smKhecnq5N9BmTyPaD_2LYeQ/edit

Reddit OC
too large to post
https://imgur.com/a/6hWsw

>>10519718
>too large to post
Learn to IrfanView (or something similar).
Over 10k pixels in one dimension? Rescale it.
Over 4 MB in filesize? Set the filesize limit (requires plugin) while saving.

>>10516049
Reasking

>>10517145
>Transform +
>If you have either the unupgraded or upgraded version of Gender Swap, Enlarge and/or Shrink you can choose to incorporate their effects to this spell.
So if I get Transform+, and wanted to make someone's breasts as large as the rest of their body, would I only need the regular version of Enlarge to make that happen?

>>10516500

yellow //////
green ////
blue ////
purple //
pink ////////////
red ///////////
black //

Primary pink, secondary red, I am so fucking switch

Divine Radiance
Pink 12, so I can afford everything upgraded!
Empower II - my god gets upgraded Transform and Gender Swap powers
Summon Deity II
Divine Portal II
Divine Gift II
Divine Blessing II
Power Word: Stop II

Red 11, so I'm obliged to skip one of my upgrades
Drain Strength I
Enslave II
Bind II
Hex II
Enforce Law II
Summon Succubus II

Spare spell points: 18
Discreet Spellcasting 5
Power of Corruption 5
Runic Trap 5

Corruption points: pink 6, red 6
Orgasm Denial 2
Sadist 1
Slave 2
Nymphomaniac 1

Vampire Girl 1
Role Reversal 1
Sadist 1
Tyrant 2
Kinky Wardrobe 1

Mana pool:
10 base
23 from spell points spent
12 from Power of Corruption
Total 45

>>10519831


So, I can conjure up a goddess of my choosing. The Lady of Torment, let's call her. Truly she will be a cruel mistress to us all. She loves me dearly as a favourite pet and fucktoy; I serve much of the time as her footstool, but otherwise I work with my coven of succubi to expand her cult of underlings, slaves and worshippers around the world.

Which won't be hard because I can impose four lewd laws on day one and two more every day thereafter. We'll do away with an awful lot of principles about equality, for example, and about consent, and about public decency. Soon the world will be receptive to the goddess of perversion.

Some cultists I'll make vampires like myself. I'll bestow magical gifts on some, surrounding myself with slaves with upgraded spells of a range of colours that complement my own. I can create ageless daywalkers too.

And some people I'll just hex into being public victims. That'll be fun for us all to watch. Nobody will care about the poor wretches, they'll be kicked from place to place and used and abused as people please. We have to have some entertainment, you know, and we have to offer the faithful a sacrament, to show their devotion to our Lady of Torment. Their cruelty shows their commitment.

Of course I can't be denied the holy sacrament myself, as our Lady's chief apostle. So twice monthly one of the succubi will take the responsibility of humbling me publicly. A degradation, a humiliation of the priestess, to remind us all that only our Lady of Torment deserves worship. All of us are her slaves, even I; and I would never wish to be away from her.

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>>10516500
Rue the Day of the Tentacle!
Or don't, it doesn't matter.

>Magical Essence
Yellow; 6
Green; 8
Blue; 3
Purple; 11
Pink; 2
Red; 4
Black; 3

>Primary, Purple
Mana Regen; Abyssal Summoner
Upgraded Summon Tentacles 9
Upgraded Incubate 7
Upgraded Spawn Monster 5
Upgraded Spawn Parasite (Eldritch Girl) 3
Upgraded Summon Abyssal Girl 1

>Secondary, Green
Gender Swap 7
Upgraded Alter Age 5
Transform 4
Upgraded Invigorate 2

>Mana Pool
34

>Boons (21)
Power of Corruption 16
Planeswalker ("Medieval Fantasy World") 1

>Corruption
Purple 5
-Eldritch Girl 4
-Summon 2
-Spirited Away 1
-Eldritch Dreams 0

Green 3
-Fairy Rapists 1
-Random Transformation 0

>>10517145

TokHaar, you do great work as always.

This is the first one though that I think there's a bonerkiller? For reference, I had 54 points total.

The bonerkiller is that I feel like I have to give up most of my powers (that I thought were hot) in order to reduce my corruption stat.

The reason is that I have 54 points. That means that I like to dabble in a lot of different fetishes, but I like to switch opposing fetishes around rather than having them be permanent. The way it's set up now doesn't really allow that. For example, under pink corruption (which is my choice for prime), "slave" sounds really hot, but not if it restricts me strictly to being a sub in perpetuity with no chance of variation.

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>>10516500
>>10520041
Dank as fuck.
I'm trying it on myself, first. The abyssal girls are next, and I'll definitely experiment on using my monsters as incubators. That would also help me figure out what to do while involuntarily transformed. My tits are going to store some spare parasites, because I find the parallel to pulling objects out of my cleavage to be humorous. Age alteration goes very well with eldritch girl, allowing me to shift between eldritch light, and eldritch heavy modes with an expenditure of mana. Invigorate helps take care of disease and injury, while allowing me to scratch that odd urge to fuck my tits. Transform and gender swap are quite useful, altering myself or partners to be more suited to whatever we might be doing. Most of that doing is incubating eggs and holding parasites.

Monsters and parasites are pretty awesome. Combining their native strangeness with transform will likely get me some interesting results. Say I need armor for fighting or space/ocean exploration? I could probably give birth to it. I need a house or vehicle? Check the stamp, it says "Made in Abyss." Sure, they'll always be lewd as hell, but that's half the fun. And it goes without saying that they make good muscle when things get rough.

I'm not out to take over the world, or anything. While I do have and get off to rape fantasies, I doubt I'd be down with it in practice. Not that I would need to, outside of roleplay. There are enough people that want what I have, that I can stay rolling in pussy, to say nothing of the abyssal girls. Hell, one of them even summoned me to another world.

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>>10516500
>>10520041
>>10520072
My sweet little mistress. What a pervert. I actually imagine her as an alt-reality version of myself. I like girls that look like me, so a girl with a familiar face, that likes girls with egg laying tentacles is definitely something I would consider "attractive." It will be fun using Plainswalker to visit her in my off hours. Imagine the look on her face, when the tiger she bought is just wandering outside of it's cage. Then imagine her face when it just wants to cuddle.

The fairies, the dreams, and the abyssal filling stations are all things I look forward to. It's an odd bit of pride that the nightmare waifus want a piece of the action, and I'm always down for more tentacles. Hell, I'd probably spam uncontrolled tentacle spells when the fairies show up, if they're down for it. While it does drain my mana faster, it makes for a more intense overall experience. Besides, powerful fey should be able to catch that wasted energy.

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>>10519765

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>>10520094

>>10520094
>cropped
Why?

I love you TokHaar.

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>>10520140
Still recommend going to https://imgur.com/a/6hWsw because this was cropped and resized.

>>10516500
>No boon to let you convert an unused schools points into additional points which can be used in a school that you have chosen.

>>10520146
It's too big.
1200 x 10294
1200 x 12431

>>10520146
Because >>10519718

>>10517619
Only problen with eromicon that I can see is that there's no way to make every or really anyone esle. A futa. I want to make the world futa! Damn it!. Lol

>>10520206
>>10520260
But why cropped (i.e. cutting things out) rather than just resized (i.e. everything's still there, just smaller)?

>>10520263
That sounds like something you'd do with Gender Swap, actually.

>>10520204
Assuming you weren't using Pink for something else, you could use Empower/Divine Gift to do something like that.

>>10520366
Pink is way too restrictive to be worth taking if you have something in mind other than worshiping a god.

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>>10520263
>Only problen with eromicon that I can see is that there's no way to make every or really anyone esle. A futa.
Black: Curse
Purple: Parasite
Green: Transform
Green: Gender Swap

>>10520502
Get it as your Tertiary or unlock the spells via Hidden Power, spend the pink points to get the required spells, and pick whichever spell(s) you wanted from your Primary or Secondary schools.

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You know that moment when you belatedly realize that you could have taken more black points because you regularly schlick to Drainage City?

Well, I'll do some more builds tomorrow.
Plants and Liches.

>>10516500
TokHaar, you sick genius son of a bitch, I fucking love you.

>>10519516
That's what I'm leaning toward. The lack of balance in green is irritating.

>>10520788
kill yourself

>>10518725
The races obviously aren't tightly themed after the colors, or you'd have put vampire under black and used a succubus or something for red

>>10520831
vampires have always been about sexual dominance, so they fit red perfectly. Also, blood is red.

>>10517145
6 Yellow
5 Green
6 Blue
2 Purple
8 Pink
2 Red
1 Black

Primary: Pink
Secondary: Yellow

Power of Worship

Summon Deity
>A gentle, loving futa with a sadist streak. Average to Large sized breasts and an average penis. Looks human enough to pass in public.

Empower 2
>Enforce Law & Time Stop 2

Divine Portal

Normalify 2
Charm

Immortality
>25

Planeswalker
>RWBY

Sexy girl
>Futa, 7 inch peen
Flasher

Sadist
Nymphomaniac

>>10520896
>Also, blood is red.

And yet cannibal is black, and makes you crave both the flesh and the blood of humans.

>>10520896
>blood is red
When exposed to oxygen. It's naturally blue in a vacuum.

>>10520896
And all of the blood related fetishes are black.

Also night empowerment is black.

It's a good CYOA but it has issues. I just hope Tok is willing address them.

>>10520949

Don't forget, vampires are undead. Also more fitting with black and it's focus on death.

>>10520974
kek

>>10520939
This is an 'urban legend' (myth? tall tale? factoid?) that somehow became mainstream. This isn't actually true at all, blood in a vacuum will still be red (albeit a different shade).

>>10520975
>it's

Well fuck my grammar.

>>10520626
To be fair transform says you can't change gender or the size of anything and I didnt think of futa as a gender. Especially says the wording of gender swap is "changes to the other gender" and curse is... doable but maybe I don't want everyone I turn into a futa to also be blonde bimbo or a stranger girl type.I want to make everyone amazonian horse dicked futas and thats only slightly possible with all of green and that's not my color. *shrug*

>>10516021
Dom. Abusive power fantasies ahoy. Speaking of which...

>>10515954
Sorceror (6 spell slots)

Charm
Enslave
Normality+1
Erase Memory
Porn Physics
Immortality+1 (Grimoires)

Artifacts: 2x Grimoires

>>10520999
>Especially says the wording of gender swap is "changes to the other gender"
Which version are you looking at? 'Cos 1.2 says the following:
>The target of this spell will magically change gender, this can be done instantly or over a long period of time.
And the upgrade:
>This spell is now able to target a large are and everyone in that area, instead of a single individual.

>>10516848
>the living tentacle clothes... Congratulations, you have invented a bad ending for Eronomicon!
Why not make them burst from overfeeding instead?

>>10521114
Well. Alright then. I was wrong.

But fuck though. I hate having to specialize. I want five primary schools. Lol

>>10521141
Cuz it's more fun to have a bad ending? Lol. Lol

>>10521155
Two schools really IS too restricting. For people that have at least 50 Spell Points, you have to waste 30% of those points to get a third school. You should at least have Tertiary School for free.
[spoiler]It's another 'Tok doesn't know how to balance his own CYOA again' episode.[/spoiler]

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>>10516500
Alright let's go.
>Yellow: 10
>Blue: 6
>Green: 5
>Purple: 7
>Pink: 11
>Red: 11
>Black: 1
Total: 51 points

Primary: Pink
Mana regeneration: Power of Worship
Spells:
Summon Deity (Upgraded) 2 points
Divine Portal (Upgraded) 2 points
Divine Blessing 1 point
Empower (Upgraded) 2 points
>Summon Person
>Transform
Power Word: Stop 1 point
Total: 8 points

Secondary:Yellow
Spells:
Charm (Upgraded) 2 points
Liquid Production 1 point
Heighten Libido 1 point
Add flavor (Upgraded) 2 points
Total: 6 points

Corruption:

Pink: (4 points)
Sissification (1 point)
Slave (2 points)
Nymphomaniac (1 point)

Yellow: (3 points)
Flasher (1 point)
Urges (2 points)

Boons (51-8-6=37 points):
Immortality (Age 18) 5 points
Planeswalked (Upgraded) 25 points
Discrete Spellcasting 5 points
Embrace Corruption 2 points

Extra Corruption:
Summon 2 points (I know you need to be an Eldritch Girl for this to work I'm going to break the rules a bit and pick it anyways because I find the idea hot)

I'm going to enjoy being a submissive sissy bitch for my goddess but also banging all the hot girls I like when I'm away from her.

>>10521247
Pink 11 and Red 11. I like you

>>10521235
He did say that he believes that to be the balancing factor for the overly deviant

>>10519074
>>10518725
>>10517264
If I take Tertiary school or Hidden power, do I get corruption points for the spells I acquire with them?

Because some of the schools have some pretty shit corruption effects that are enough of a pain in the ass that the spells are arguably not worth it, especially with Hidden power, where you burn 11 spell points for a single un-upgraded spell, and possibly have to sink a corruption point on top of it.

>>10521323
More like hand holding for the people who aren't deviant enough to be really into the CYOA in the first place

>>10521312
Thanks. I was going to go Pink and Red but I realized the only thing I want from Red is the Enslave spell and upgraded Charm pretty much does the same thing anyway.

>>10516021
Dom.

It's a bit annoying how many cyoas are set up so that submissives get tons of free shit just for indulging in their fetishes, while anyone dominant has to bow and scrape to get a small handful of perks while also being forced to compromise and accept fetishes that they dislike.

>>10521434
>If I take Tertiary school or Hidden power, do I get corruption points for the spells I acquire with them?
Yes, since they're spellpoints spent in an eromancy school.

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>>10521434
>If I take Tertiary school or Hidden power, do I get corruption points for the spells I acquire with them?
TokHaar here, yes u get corruption points from those.
>Hidden power, where you burn 11 spell points for a single un-upgraded spell
You can upgrade it, it does not specifically say unupgraded or upgraded. It just says 1 spell.

>>10520788
>>10520171
Thanks anon!

>>10521492
Fucking this so much, subs get paid for being degenerates when it comes to a lot of lewd cyoas

>>10519074
Hey TokHaar, I'd like to suggest maybe making either Mental Change or Random Transformation worth 2 points instead of 1 to balance Green having two mutually exclusive options. It would appease everyone looking for Green to be balanced with the other colors and at the same time not require you to remove or add any new options.

>>10521528

What does "not something a witch, wizard or magical girl would wear" mean? Technically there are wizards who wear all sorts of clothes, including boring clothes like jeans, but you probably didn't mean that? Is it clothes those groups would be more likely to wear than normal people, like maybe tuxedos or Japanese school uniforms? Or only clothes that look like a costume? And how about ensembles that look like a costume, but include some relatively normal clothes, like the suit + robe Hogwarts students wear? Does the suit catch fire if you try to wear it without the robe, and if so how would you put the ensemble on if you are trying to wear it with the robe?

>>10521582
I can say for certain that if he does that with Mental Change, he won't be appeasing everyone.

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>>10521701
Stereotypical clothing for witches, wizards and magical girls.

>>10517145
Hmmm, my only issue with this so far is that I have to wade through gigantism and microscopic shrinking in order to actually shapeshift myself. Basically, I have to pay 6 points for a bunch of stuff I don't care about just to reliably change the size of my own assets. That...doesn't seem right. Most of the time, the upgraded fetish is related to its base power and you only have to pay two points to do something.

>>10521565
I have no problem with dengeneracy, without degenerate subs how would I be able to satisfy my own deviant kinks?

But it's irritating when a cyoa pretty blatantly favors subs, such that the point costs make it nearly impossible to play unless you want to be a submissive public cumslut

>>10521760

So are tuxedoes (like Zatara/Zatanna), Japanese school uniforms and Hogwarts uniforms fine or not?

>>10515954
summoner+

enslave+
normality+
immortality+
transform+
porn physics

scrying orb
wand

ghost

I'll cast normality through my scrying orb before summoning them with enslave, now they think i'm a saint for kidnapping and raping them so long as I send them on their way before I hit the 10 hour mark.

since I can't use the scrying orb to cast spells on fictional characters before I enslave them, i'll probably have my ghost familiar possess their bodies since i'm a pussy and if my victims are crying/struggling i'll have a hard time getting it up. it's for the best, as I gotta regen that mana sometime.

>>10521760
>>10521701
>>10521854

If we're being completely honest here, if you can shoot lightning out of your fingertips, stop time, rip open holes in time and space, and bend the minds of lesser beings to your will, why would you not wear a wizard hat and robe at all times?

What's the point in being a motherfucking wizard unless you get to wear all of the gear at all times and orgasm-lightning anyone who talks shit about it?

>>10521772
The problem is that it's hard to make being a dom inconvenient

>>10521528
You going to work on any of the balance issues we're talking about?

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>>10521854
TokHaar here, magician tuxedoes (like Zatara/Zatanna are fine, Japanese school uniforms are not fine and Hogwarts uniforms are fine but only if you wear the black robe too.

>>10521870
>If you are a motherfucking wizard, why would you not dress like one?
I know right, wizards have the coolest cloths.

>>10521713
Not that anon but he needs to do something for green, as green is more cost prohibitive than all the other options. Giving 2 points for Mental Change is an easy fix.

>>10522168
>>10522143
Or just have a one-point boon that recolors a Corruption point or two.

>>10518391

Instant Transformation -20
Acceptance -20
Average look -20
Flat chest -20
Cute butt -20
Child-like hips -10
Yuri route -30
Curious -10
Age regression

>>10522216
I'd definitely take that over nothing, but that doesn't fix green. It just gives a work around for green.

>>10522143
It sure would be unfortunate if someone was to have a sadistic goddes that gave them mana per hour as their regen and also had the living clothes drawback too. They would be souly at her mercy. Surely she wouldnt just tie them up and watch them squirm and beg at her feet for mercy, would she?

>>10522125
>You going to work on any of the balance issues we're talking about?
Nope, I'm playing RS. But I have been thinking about making a 5th page with more drawbacks, but I donno. Would be really hard to come up with a new page full of options and pictures, especially since I have exhausted my CYOA image folder. Will need to gather a lot more images before I make any new CYOAs, so I don't think I will be updating or making anything new anytime soon. As for now I will bask in the glorious builds that are being made and enjoy them. Will make some strawpools once Eronomicon has been out for a while to see what people think about my newest CYOAs.

>>10522216
>>10522305
If I add anything, then I need to make a 5th page and I'm not really fond of doing that.

>>10522305
It also gives a workaround for some other obnoxious corruption issues in other trees, which is important.

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>>10516500
This is Pallas, posting as Pink with my name on the post because that's real dedication. Also, someone else is making my Deity because multiplayer makes everything way more fun
Yellow: 12 [-5]
Green: 9
Blue: 5
Purple: 10 [-4]
Pink: 8 [-8]
Red: 8
Black: 5
Total: 57
>Primary: Pink
>Secondary: Yellow

>Regens: Power of Worship, Mana Potion
Pink Spells
>Summon Deity -1
>Empower Upgraded -2
>Power Word: Stop Upgraded -2
>Divine Portal -1
>Divine Gift Upgraded (Upgraded Shrink) -2
Yellow Spells
>Heighten Libido -1
>Heighten Sensitivity -1
>Add Flavor -1
>Normalify -1
>Liquid Production -1
Purple Spells
>Incubate Upgraded -2
>Spawn Parasite Upgraded -2
Mana: 31
Boons: Tertiary School, Mana Reservoir, Mana Conduit

>Pink Corruption: Sissification, Orgasm Denial, Nymphomaniac
>Yellow Corruption: Urges, Slut
>Purple Corruption: Corruption, Spirited Away

>>10522342
What about the idea of making Random Change or Mental Change worth 2 points instead of 1?

>>10522362
Aww, you're such an adorable pussy.

>>10522342
What would happen if a green took shapeshifter as their mana source but either didnt have the mana to cast any spells and had no alternate method of getting mana?

>>10516500
No fixed point pool. Interesting.

>Yellow: 7
>Green: 10
>Blue: 6
I haven't even heard of two of these, and another one I didn't even realize was a fetish.
>Purple: 0
Nnnnope.
>Pink: 2
>Red: 9
>Black: 2
Surprisingly.

Total: 36

Primary School: Green

>Enlarge+
>Gender Swap
>Alter Age+
>Transform+
>Invigorate

Secondary School: Yellow

>Normalify+
>Charm
>Liquid Production
>Add Flavor
>Heighten Sensitivity
>Heighten Libido

Mana Pool: 25
Mana Regeneration: Shapeshifter, Mana Potion

Boons: Mana Conduit
Not much better to do with my meager point total.

Corruption:
>Random Transformation
>Fairy Rapists
>Plant Girl
>Random Orgasms
>Flasher
>Urges
Most of these are fortunately not much of a problem with Normalify.

>>10522168
Green's also more cost prohibitive on its spells, which means you have to scramble even harder to pay corruption. Normal shapeshifting doesn't cover reshaping your body--you need Shrink/Grow+ to do that.
As worded, you need shrink to undo your own enlarge. So in order to increase the size of your assets, you need Shrink+, Grow+, and Transform+, I think. Transform+'s wording is rather unclear and I'm unsure whether it's a completely pointless upgrade or an absolutely mandatory upgrade to even do things not related to the Transform spell.

So that's 6 points and 3 corruption just to get/cause slightly bigger boobs, which should be the most fundamental, basic feature of the entire tree.

>>10522342
Will you at least make Mental Change 2 as opposed to 1 to help offset green?

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>>10522397
>>10522445
TokHaar here, yeah I guess I could do that. Will upload the new version on my google drive when it's done. Will take about 15 mins.

>>10522443
>So that's 6 points and 3 corruption just to get/cause slightly bigger boobs, which should be the most fundamental, basic feature of the entire tree.
Transform lvl1 lets you change cup sizes

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>>10522362
>Also, someone else is making my Deity
Her likes are cumming inside of cute boys, watching them slobber all over her cock, and cuddling at night.

Her dislikes are wearing clothes and not getting to cum often enough.

Her hobbies are hunting, archery, and embroidery.

>>10522534
Fuck yeah. Thanks man.

>>10522570
He meant another namefag is already working on one. Sorry to ruin your efforts. Why are you posting censored pics?

>>10522443
>So that's 6 points and 3 corruption just to get/cause slightly bigger boobs, which should be the most fundamental, basic feature of the entire tree.

While I do agree that the balancing of Green is complete fucking shit, having only one point in Transform is enough to change your breast size by one cup. No going from AA's to HH's, but A to B would be fine.

Still, Transform seems almost useless by itself. You could do hair color, eye color, skin color, and I guess change hair growth throughout your body, but you need Gender Swap, Alter Age, Shrink, and Enlarge if you don't want the equivalent of a magical bottle of hair dye or plastic surgery. It might let you get gills or grow extra limbs, but it still seems like a limited option despite being an "everything but what's been listed already" type of grab-bag.

>>10522598
I originally downloaded and censored the pic to post in /tg/'s thinly veiled fetish threads.

>>10517145
>>10517159
>>10517171
>>10517181

Questions:
Does a summoned succubus get succubus abilities like a charm or disguise effect, or literally just what it says on the spell?
Same for Abyssal girl summons.
Does a Goddess have any abilities besides those spells you can give her through casting the appropriate spell?

How can we get an orgasm denial spell similar to the one your goddess can give you from pink corruption? Use the Enforce Law spell from red? Would an order to a target hit by the Enslave spell work?

Alright been a while. Went through Desu, pretty sure I got all the new CYOAs since we got forced off d.

But wondering what happened to the body swap one. Didn't see it, is it still being worked on? Did I just miss it?

>>10522764
Author died in the transition.

>>10522764
Oh, I'll force you off, if you know what I mean.

>>10522597
TokHaar here, It's up
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTglodHhsOUVqNTFzeWc?usp=sharing

>>10522662
>Does a summoned succubus get succubus abilities like a charm or disguise effect, or literally just what it says on the spell?
A Succubus is capable of charming others but they can't do Normalify.
>Same for Abyssal girl summons?
Abyssal girls does not have charm or normalify. If you want more info about what a Abyssal girl can do look up their entry my Deus Vult CYOA.

>How can we get an orgasm denial spell similar to the one your goddess can give you from pink corruption?
>Would an order to a target hit by the Enslave spell work?
Yes and no, the slave would stop pleasuring themselves of try to stop reaching orgasm if they got close to one, becouse they can't dissobey your orders. But if you keep stimulating them they will cum, even if you ordered them not too. But it's close, I guess.

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>>10522362
Hi Pallas. Here's your deity:

Catraya, the Lotus Empress
>Summon Tentacles (purple)
>Curse (black)

Curse Corruptions:
>Sexy Girl (yellow)
>Slut (yellow)
>Random Orgasms (yellow)
>Nymphomaniac (pink)

Catraya is adept at effecitvely turning others into hot blonde sex slaves for you (and, of course, herself). She can even turn other deities into horny nymphomaniacs, turning them on their own summoners to fuck their brains out. All the while, her mastery over tentacle summoning will ensure nobody escapes her tendrils of lust.

While she may be your deity, she likes to maintain an air of superiority over others, as pride is her sin of choice. Not that she'll mind mind-breaking others alongside you; it's just that she dislikes the notion of being underneath someone else. Otherwise, if you prove to be a loyal partner to her, then she will be easy to get along with. Displeasing her, however, will earn you a quick, lengthly hatefuck with her tentacles. And you may have to control her from time to time, as she may get ahead of herself and go on a sex-slave transformation spree every now and then.

[spoiler]I'll be nice and say that you can change Sexy Girl to any of the other transformation corruptions to your preference.[/spoiler]

[spoiler]t. SDA[/spoiler]

>>10517145

yellow: impregnation, ahegao, exhibitionism, normalization, harem
green: furry, monster girls, transformation, gender swap
blue: time stop, magical girls, petrification, hypnotism, invisiblity, somnophilia
purble: n/a
pink: femdom, sissification, worship, forced orgasm, submission, ruined orgasms
red: mind control
black: incest
23 total spell points

pink school [primary]:
power of worship
upgraded summon diety
upgraded divine portal
upgraded divine blessing

yellow school [secondary]:
upgraded normalify
upgraded highten sensitivity

Boons:
Signature Spell [divine blessing]

Corruption:
urges
nymphomaniac
yandere

desu i'm not a fan of this one, but at the rate you're churning these out they can't all be winners.

my interest in the pink fetishes clearly deviates from what you consider them to be. I like being dominant over sissy traps, and I like the idea of a girl playing me like a fiddle (at least sexually). I have no interest in becoming a sissy myself, or being treated like shit, or yandere's, but whatever. at least I can cast immortality spells like crazy and I have a deity/waifu and pocket dimension of my own design.

>>10522601
That's just what Tok does. Mindslaver had the same issues. I'm not sure if Tok hates the transformation fetish, or is making some kind of elaborate joke about how hard it is to find good stuff for it unless you're also into furry, genderbending or bimbos.

Pink: I assume the list is (self) like masochism(self) and not liking other people being masochists ?

>>10522601
Well transfrom can make you another person entirely that is the same size, age and gender at level 1. It sounds like nothing but it's not nothing.

>>10516500
Yellow: 5
Green: 5
Blue: 9
Purple: 8
Pink: 4
Red: 3
Black: 2
Schools: Blue, Pink
Regen: Ley Lines (Blue)
Spells, using U for Upgraded:
Time Stop U 2
Spatial Manip U 2
Spiritual Possession U 2
Summon Person U 2 (8 blue)
Summon Deity U 2
Divine Portal U 2 (4 pink)
Gender Swap 1
Alter Age U 2
Transformation (4 green with tertiary)
Left with 24.
Discreet Spellcasting
Tertiary School (green)
Accidental Summoning
Magic Feedback
Elf Girl (dark elf futa)
Sissification
Nympho
Fairy Rapists

>>10523012
>I'm not sure if Tok hates the transformation fetish
That's what its starting to look like

>>10520173
>recommend getting the much worse .jpg instead of the .png
fuck off

>>10516500
I looked into your work and I hope it's still WIP. There's plenty of fetishes to draw power from but many of them lack any counterpart in the spells and summons. The idea is good, the mechanics works (though I'd simplify the mana or even take it out altogether - the number crunching doesn't help the immersion at all at that point, unlike how it is with spells in general) but there's just a couple of spells per each path and their prices are rather high, which makes the whole thing underwhelming a bit.

>>10516500
So instead of listing all the fetishes, lets just go with points.
Yellow 8 Green 5 Blue 8 Purple 6 Pink 6 Red 9 Black 3

Looks like I'll be taking Red and Yellow.
Main : Red. [9]
Mana: Power of Dominance
Enslave Upgraded [7]
Bind, upgraded [5]
Enforce Law upgraded [3]
Summon Succubus [2]
Hex [1]
So I can make as many laws as I want that has to be followed, get slaves that will be more loyal as time goes on, and a cute little succubus to help me break them in.

Yellow [8]
Normalify [7]
Charm upgraded [5]
Liquid production [4]
Heighten Libido upgraded [2]
Heighten sensitivity upgraded [0]

I spend 16 spell points for 26 max mana. Not that I wont constantly have a slave by my side.

That leaves me with : Red 1 Green 5 Blue 8 Purple 6 Pink 6 Black 3 . I really wanted blue but I dont know that it's worth losing sensitivity and libido altering.
Thats [29] mana points.
Going to take Hidden Power and buy upgraded Alter Age for the eternal youth. [17]
Then, Planeswalker and travel to a universe that has dimension hopping for whenever our universe ends. [2] and I cant do anything with 2 points.

Corruption : 4 yellows and 4 reds
Random Orgasms, Flasher, Urges. Not too bad when I can give in to these anytime I want without consequence.
Man red's downsides suck though. I wish there were more to choose from.
Sadist, Kinky Wardrobe, Rapist

Well. I guess I'm going to have to make it a law to have some girls "chosen" for public service duty every day.

Kinda wish I can trade rapist for like, mana tank or something. Maybe we can implement a thing where I can take like twice the amount of corruptions for another color to make up for a corruption of my color?

Going to start with a law of me being able to do whatever I want and no consequences. And one thats the basic no harming me. Then I'll go collar my first slave. Enjoy the rape and slow mind breaking. Then more rules, like the chosen girls for public service, peace on earth, focusing science, etc

>>10516500
This pleases me. Thanks for posting a new CYOA!

> Yellow: 5
> Green: 2
> Blue: 7
> Purple: 5
> Pink: 0
> Red: 13 (I have problems)
> Black: 3

Red (primary) and Blue (secondary) schools
> Power of Dominance
Red spells (8 points spent):
> Drain strength (upgraded), Enslave (upgraded), Bind (upgraded), Enforce Law (upgraded)
Blue spells (7 points spent)
> Mind Sculpt (upgraded), Summon Person (upgraded), Spatial Manipulation (upgraded), Spiritual Possession
Total mana: 25

Boons (21 points left)
> Immortality, Planeswalker

Red corruptions (4 points):
>Sadist, Role Reversal, Rapist (aww)
Blue corruptions (4 points):
>Magic Feedback, Mana Tanks

>>10524267
>13/14 Red
What don't you have?

>>10524325
Probably either breathplay or tickling, I'm guessing.

They are the most isolated from the other fetishes on that list.

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>>10517145
Yellow 16
Green 16
Blue 16
Purple 15 (Melting)
Pink 15 (Ball busting)
Red 15 (Drugging)
Black 11 (Guro, Snuff, Vore(hard), Torture, Diapers)
104-85boon-2black-8blue-6purple=3leftover
I come from the land of the melancholic chinese bear, don't judge me.

Boons:
5 Discrete spellcasting
10 Runic trap
20 Hidden power
45 Planeswalker
85 Unlimited power

Black Hidden power
2 Upgraded Raise dead
Black corruption
1 Sinister aura

Blue Primary
2 Upgrade time stop
4 Upgrade spatial manipulation
6 Upgraded mind sculpt
8 Upgrade Summon person
Blue corruption
1 Magical wardrobe
2 Magomaniac
4 Mana tanks (always huge due to unlimited power?)

Purple Secondary
2 Upgraded incubate
4 Upgraded spawn monster
6 Summon abyssal girl
Purple corruption
1 Futa eldritch girl
2 Corruption (can undo through mind sculpt?)
3 Eldritch dreams


You may not want to live in the same multiverse as I. Probably.

>>10524373
>having sixteen out of the fourteen potential fetishes

Anon, I...

>>10524414
I'm a pervert, not a mathamatican.
Remove discrete spellcasting and runic trap, no way I'm giving up escaping the heat death.

>>10524414
That just mean he's efficient and more worthy of those other two fetishes than you are.
Try not to feel jealous, Anon.

>>10516500
>Points: Yellow 10, Green 7, Blue 7, Purple 7, Pink 1, Red 11, Black 1
Thank you, Taimanin Asagi. Your porn has accumulated me so many points

>Primary School: Red, Secondary School: Yellow
>Mana Regeneration: Power of Dominance
>Yellow Spells: Normalify (Upgrade), Charm (Upgrade), Liquid Production (Upgrade), Heighten Libido (Upgrade), Heighten Sensitivity (Upgrade)
>Red Spells: Enslave (Upgrade), Drain Strength (Upgrade), Bind (Upgrade), Hex, Enforce Law (Upgrade), Summon Succubus (Upgrade)
>Boons: Embrace Corruption, Discrete Spellcasting, Immortality, Power of Corruption, Runic Trap
I had 23 points to spend on boons, and a lot of the 5-point picks were pretty straight-forward selections. I've got 1 point left, but oh well.

>Corruption (Yellow 5, Red 6, Up to 5 of Any): Random Orgasms, Flasher, Slut, Urges, Sadist, Tyrant, Kinky Wardrobe, Rapist, Corruption, Sinister Aura, Magomaniac, Mana Tanks
Now sure how Rapist and Magomaniac would interact with Random Orgasms; multi-orgasmic magical rapes, I guess. Also, time to go buy some leather pants and jackets, I guess.
>Total Mana: 46 (10 Base + 10 Yellow + 11 Red + 16 Corruption)

First order of business is to cast Normalify and Liquid Production on myself. Then I find a cute girl, cast Enslave and Heighten Sensitivity on her, then take her somewhere private and rape her. Maybe repeat once or twice to get two or three.

Once I've gotten myself a reliable supply of mana regeneration, I'll cast Enforce Law every so often as I get the mana back to send society full /pol/; first, I make sex slavery legal and whites the official Master Race, then I go and send women back into the kitchen.

>>10516500
Gonna write this down since I got off on it. Yellow 12
Green 11
Blue 12
Purple 10
Pink 9
Red 11
Black 5
Primary yellow mana regen drink fluids. Spells: increased production2 libido increase2 normalize increase sensitivity and add flavor
Green secondary
Spells: enlarge2 genderswap transform and invigorate2
Boons: hidden power: enforce law2
Materialize spell and planeswalk2.
So I can go anywhere and make it however I like while drinking down all of their futa cum and saving up all that spell power in cards. I could make a law that whenever you're horny you fuck the person in the stockades (and then be that person)

>>10522412
Take the random transformations drawback and you'll get your mana back eventually

>>10522842
What about deities? Do they have any abilities besides what you give them or what they're called out as immune to?

>>10520094
>>10520140
>Thinks its a cool update to the island adventures
>Forces you to be female or a shit futa
Well at least this thing is in the trash where it belongs, no one will play it.

>>10525014
They'd presumably be overpowered as fuck when the PvP dlc comes out since they can no-sell 90% of the listed spells.

>>10524325
>>10524369
Latex, actually. Don't mind it, just not a specific fetish. Always seemed like an unnecessary, extraneous part of BDSM to me. Like, okay, we're doing all this awesome dom/sub stuff, but some people want to wear these silly outfits for it?

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Yellow 10
Green 11
Blue 4
Purple 9
Pink 3
Red 7

Primary: Green
Secondary: Yellow
Mana: 24

Yellow
>Liquid Production (Upgraded)
>Heighten Libido
>Heighten Sensitivity

Green
>Mana Regeneration: Shapeshifter
>Shrink (Upgraded)
>Enlarged (Upgraded)
>Transform (Upgraded)
>Invigorate
>Gender Swap

Red
>(Hidden Power) Drain Strength

Boons
>Hidden Power
>Signature Spell: Transform
>Discrete Spellcasting
>Immortality

Corruption
Yellow
>Urges

Green
>Mental Changes
>Fairy Rapists

Red
>Vampire Futanari

Decadence. Blood. Commanding lust and shaping flesh. Life as an immortal vampire futanari powered by the eronomicon will be fun. Outside of the traditional vampires powers, I can stealthily transform whoever I want however I want and it doesn’t cost me any mana. I can create thralls and then craft their bodies however I like. If faced with an opponent or if I’m just bored I can steal the strength from another and leave as either them a weak girly trap with the tiniest little cock or a comically slutty looking bimbo. Eternity will be entertaining.

>>10525061
>Like, okay, we're doing all this awesome dom/sub stuff, but some people want to wear these silly outfits for it?

On subs, it generally looks good, especially with bindings and vibrators attached, but on doms it almost always looks like they wanted to be a 90s supervillain but don't want to actually come out and say it.

>>10523605

I hope not. Maybe I'm too hard on the guy, I'm not sure how I could have made Green in a way that would be better than what he's got. Everything's gotta have six options, but personally I would've had Shrink and Enlarge merged into one option (with the ability to flatten, inflate, stretch, etc.), Alter Age and Gender Swap would've been options taken for granted, therefore completely unlisted. I probably would've had a basic "anything human" option, one for animal transformations, including simply adding traits (for the furry and catgirl crowds), one for inorganic transformations allowing anything from turning people into dildos or panties all the way into making cyborgs/androids or elementals. After that, plant forms I guess. Nothing's wrong with Invigorate, but I doubt I would've come up with something as good to finish the section off. I probably would've made an option allowing for both sexual and asexual reproduction so shifters could populate the world with species of their own making. Sure, they could just turn other people into dog girls and dog guys then let them fuck, but if one were to end up in an unpopulated region somehow there's nobody else to transform, so splitting off an autonomous clone would be the easiest way to unleash your creations.

>>10517145
4 Yellow
5 Green
6 Blue
1 Purple
2 Pink
2 Red
3 Black

Primary Blue, Secondary Green

Internal Leylines (mana regen, all spells have 2 daily uses)

Blue 6:
Spiritual Possession 2
Spatial Manipulation 2
Mind Sculpt 2

Green 5:
Gender Swap 2
Transform 2
Alter Age 1

Spare points: 12
Embrace Corruption
Power of Corruption
Discrete Spellcasting

Corruption Points: 3 Blue, 3 Green, 2 misc.
Mana Tanks (2 Blue)
Magic Feedback (1 Blue + 1 Misc.)
Mental Change (1 Green)
Plant Girl (1 Green)
Random Transformations (1 Green)
Flasher (1 Misc.)

>>10520643
#4, #4.2
Don't know why the other one is considered a boon, its more of a drawback than anything else.

>>10525133
>especially with bindings and vibrators attached
Hmm. I could see that. But then it starts being more utilitarian for me, a tool to aid in restraint or sensory overload, and I think way more about that than the outfit itself, and soon the outfit is standing between me and their bare, soft, vulnerable skin, and then...

Wait, what were we talking about?

>>10517145

Yellow: 6 (6)
Green: 10 (16)
Blue: 6 (21)
Purple: 4 (25)
Pink: 8 (33)
Red: 9 (42)
Black: 0 (42)
>Seems a bit much now that I tally them up...

Boons:
Immortality -5 (37)
Planeswalker -25 (12)

Primary: Green
Secondary Blue
Mana Regeneration: One With Nature

Green Spells:
Shrink (Upgraded)
Enlarge (Upgraded)
Transform (Upgraded)

Blue Spells:
Mind Sculpt (Upgraded)
Summon Person (Upgraded)

Green Corruption:
Random Transformation
Fairy Rapists
Nature Spirits
Mental Change

Blue Corruption:
Elf Girl
Mana Tanks
Magical Feedback

Multiverse here I cum!

>>10517145
Eronomicon feedback

SPELLCHECK
Page 1
Forth deviant ; Fourth

merging/ Absorbation
Should be Absorption. Unless this is some other fetish I’ve never heard of.


Your primary school then your secondary school: Should be ‘than’

Able to revers the spells effect: should be reverse

Energy which fuel all spells: should be fuels

Swelling in the balls and breasts; should be ‘or’ or ‘and/or’

Page 2:

Faeries is used as the plural of Fairy. Is this on purpose?

Spatial manipulation: dettach should be detach

Purple eromancy: revolve should be revolves

Become a ovipositor: should be an

Banish upgrade, transformed into a abyssal girl: should be an abyssal girl
Spawn monster: enchant a abyssal egg, should be an
Spawn parasite: a - an abyssal egg, an abyssal parasite

Summon abyssal girl: An abyssal girl
In short, any ‘a’ in front of ‘abyssal’ should be ’an’ instead.

PINK
Summon deity: they want too, should be to
Divine portal: will matches, should be ‘will match’ or ‘matches’
Upgrade divine gift: should be ‘an upgraded spell’

PAGE 3

Red:
Hex: tenancy, should be tendency
Enforce law: costumers should be customers
Summon succubus: ‘a excellent slave trainer’ should be an

Black:
Raise dead upgrade: faster then any, should be faster than
Curse: worth of 2 corruption, should be worth 2 corruption
Voodoo: an onahole,
Voodoo upgrade: cut of an arm should be cut off
Voodoo upgrade: an onahole

BOONS:
Apprentice, an apprentice

>>10525825
And on page 4 the bottom line of bimbofication is fucked up like it's squished.

>>10517145
Well, first off, to check what I qualify for:
>Yellow: 5
>Green:8
>Blue: 8
>Purple: 8
>Pink:2
>Red:4
>Black: 1
>Total: 36

Now to actually get to the spell spending:
Green (Primary):
Shrink (u)
Enlarge(u)
Gender Swap
Alter Age (u)
Invigorate
Blue (Secondary):
Spatial Manipulation (u)
Time Stop

Boons: Materialize Spell, Unconventional Mana (Power of Darkness).
Corruptions: Magical Wardrobe, Plant Girl, Random Transformation, Mental Change

The fact I'm only really powerful at night is countered by the fact that I can essentially stockpile my spells for later in the form of these little cards (or just teleporrt over to somewhere where it's nighttime). Fortunately for everyone else, I'm not particularly ambitious. I just want to live a pleasant life of porn, vidya and doing as minimal work as possible. To that end, I'm gonna go into business selling my spell-cards. Cranks already make a bunch of money lying about selling things that I can actually provide, I'm sure I could carve myself a niche on the internet.Being a curious sort, I'll spend a lot of time screwing around in different forms within the limits of my ability.

>>10525951
Selling an instant gender altering spell card online and expecting the LGBT community to not hunt you the fuck down for making these poor tortured trannies pay. You're nothing but a nazi and a biggot. What right do you have to keep these people from their true selves and force them to either pay your extortion or live every day a living hell.

You basicaly end up setting yourself up to get doxxed and hunted down by schitos and commies. Even if you could safely with 100% certainty enact a trade with no risk to yourself that's some magic that the highest bidder has all to himself to go ruin someones life.

Great power and responsibility and shit, dog.

>>10517145
Can i learn divine gift twice?
Whats the point of divine portal if my deity can just summon me to her world?

>>10526295
>Whats the point of divine portal if my deity can just summon me to her world?
It's up to her to summon you and you cant go to her and can at best summon her to you. It's like having the keys to the house you share.

>>10526516
By the way theres a lot of the things that can get you spell points that doesnt really have any powers associated. Especially blacks which seems to basically be necro spells.

>>10526534
Did not mean to quote.>>10526516

>eronomicon is ruined by the last page

B+ for effort at least

>>10522842
Yellow - 6
Impregnation, Ahegao, Milking, Cum Drinking, Cum, Harem - 6

Green - 4
Transformation, Furry, Monster Girls, Gender Swap

Blue - 3
Time Stop, Magical Girls, Hypnotism

Purple - 8
Tentacles, Oviposition, Symbiotes, Monsters, Corruption, Nightmare Waifus, Tentacle Jobs,Xenophilia

Pink - 5
Femdom - 1
Sissification - 2
Worship - 3
Pegging - 4
Submission - 5

Red - 5
Slaves, Spanking, Pet Play, Mind Control, Dominance

Black - 2
Beastiality, Incest

Purple School - Eldritch Cock
Summon Tentacles
Incubate
Spawn Monsters - Upgraded
Spawn Parasites

Green
Alter Age
Transform
Invigorate
Alter Gender

Mana Pool 19

Boons - 25 Points
Immortality - -5, 20
Hidden Power - -10, 10 (Enforce Law)
Runic Trap - -5, 5
Power of Corruption -5, 0

Purple Corruption - 3 Points
Futa Eldritch Girl ( Purple Skin )
Summon

Green Corruption - 2 Points
Mental Changes

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>>10517159
>soft vore gives you a point in purple
>there isn't a vore spell
don't tease my dick like this Tok

>>10516500
I have a few questions/issues about the red corruption options.

With Tyrant do I cease caring about friends/family too?
I guess the purpose of it is to make you not care about raping random people, but that's not what it says.

With Sadist will I wake up depressed every morning?

>>10527582
You wont care about anyone and you'd probably have as long as the last time you were bad befoe going to bed. I mean you probably do evil sex shit and have them sleep on the floor of your bed.

These red corruption options aren't fun. I have 7 red spell points and 1 black spell point, but all the red corruptions are so repulsive I'd rather take black corruptions.
Having looked through the other colours, they all seem to have 3+ corruption points I'd willingly take.

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Psst. I made something here.

>>>54400230

Please direct comments to this post, please.

>>10527931
Goddamn it I always mess up crossboard links:

>>>/tg/54400230

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>>10527950
>goats
>exotic

>>10527807
Similar reaction. A couple of them were okay, but I found myself trying to decide whether being a leather-clad vamp futa, a committed rapist, or a stone cold isolated sociopath was worse. I'm not sure what that says about me (13/14 red guy here).

Currently considering alternate suggestions.

>>10516500
I was wondering if there was any way to get out of taking some corruptions? Can I spend spell points of the same colour to negate the corruption points or something similar.

>>10528079
I think the issue is that red spells/fetishes are about control/domination, whereas the red corruptions are all represent a significant loss of control.
They directly oppose each other, whereas most other colour's spells/corruptions tend to compliment each other.

>>10516547
I wish Bloodlust was toned down. What's wrong with some bloodplay instead of murder? Why do I have to mangle someone? Just drain them until they pass out instead.

>>10528053
In the sense that most people don't put goats in their top-ten sexy kemonomimis lists.

>>10528312
That's because people don't normally count succubi even though they often should.

>>10522342
You really need some colorless drawbacks.

>>10528189
Iiinteresting. I hadn't originally looked at it like that, but it makes sense. A lot of them are about loss of control of self, even if that loss isn't directly imposed by someone else.

That might be inescapable, since they're corruptions and have to be involuntary, but there might be a way to make them about imposing your will on someone else to avoid some crippling drawback.

Some brainstorming for alternate red corruptions:
* Can't sleep unless using someone else's body as a cushion (maybe they have to be awake)
* Each slave you own will randomly regain their free will once a month and try to escape (requires Enslave)
* Every time you cast a spell, 5% chance that you and the target of your spell will be teleported to the middle of a local law enforcement office (have fun explaining that one! Or maybe it won't be a problem for you if you took Hex.)
* Your summoned succubi are tricksters and not under your direct control. They will usually follow orders, but will routinely prank you, deliberately misinterpret instructions for shenanigans, and otherwise get you in trouble. Once a succubus has been summoned, you must always have at least one. (Requires Summon Succubus)
* 10% chance that Drain Strength, Enslave, Bind, or Hex will target you instead of the intended target. Wears off after 12 hours (Enslave version is too similar to Role Reversal)
* Overlord: your slaves will be incapable of making decisions on their own and require you to micromanage every aspect of their lives without falling apart (Requires Enslave)

>>10526851
You can definitely recognize it as a Tokhaar cyoa, even without anything else.

>>10516547
>Role Reversal corruption for Dom School
>No Power Bottom/Bottom corruption for Pink

Found the sub.

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>>10516500
yellow 8
green 10
blue 6
purple 6
pink 4
red 2
black 1

Primary: Green
Regen: shapeshifter
Green Spells: Enlarge+, Gender Swap+, Transform+, Invigorate+ (8)
Corruption: 4

Secondary: Yellow
Spells: Charm, Heighten Libido+, Heighten Sensetivity+, Add Flavor+ (7)
Corruption: 4

Tertiary: Blue
Blue Spells: Spatial Manipulation+
Corruption: 1

Magic Points: 20
Tertiary School (-15) Blue
Embrace Corruption (-5) +5 corruption points

Green Corruption: Mental Change, Random Transformation, Plant Girl, Fairy Rapists
(4 green)(1 any)

Yellow Corruption: Flasher, Slut, Urges
(4 yellow)

Blue Corruption: Magical Wardrobe, Mana Tanks, Accidental Summoning
(1 Blue)(3 any)

Purple Corruption: Corruption
(1 any)

I'd probably find myself coming back to the form of a futa tsareena girl quite a lot.

>>10522842
I'm going to be that guy and invoke Sartre and make my own rules

Changes from CYOA
1) Spell Points aren't determined by fetishes. Instead you gain 6 spell points for your primary school and 4 spell points for your secondary.
2) You start with 20 points for Boons.
3) Corruption points aren't gained from spells and the Embrace Corruption boon isn't an option. Instead Corruptions can either give spell points equal to their 'cost' for the appropriate color (I.e. Slut gives 1 Yellow Spell Point while Mental Changes gives 2 Green Spell Points) or points for boons equal to their 'cost' times fives. Power of Corruption gives mana equal to the total 'cost' of all corruptions you take.

Green School - Primary
Gender Swap
Alter Age+
Transform
Invigorate
Enlarge+
Shrink+

Purple School - Secondary
Summon Tentacles
Incubate
Spawn Monster+

Mana Pool - 29
Eldritch Cock

Boons - 35 Points
Immortality - -5, 30
Runic Trap - -5, 25
Hidden Power(Enforce Law) - -10, 15
Unconventional Mana - -10, 5
Power of Corruption - -5, 0

Corruptions - 6 points
Futa Slime Girl +1 Green Spell
Mental Changes +2 Green Spells
Magical Wardrobe +5 Boon Points
Mana Tanks +10 Boon Points

>>10528458
Not that I'm contributing anything better, but I feel like most of those options don't really fit with the aesthetic of corruptions/magic. Except Overlord, I probably wouldn't take it, but it seems appropriate for the CYOA and to be red.

Maybe something like, the more you have sex with someone the more possessive (like you perceive you own them) you become.

The idea of corruption is inherently related to the self (and they're meant to be drawbacks), so it seems really hard to make something appropriate for a magic about control. I honestly can't think of anything corruption related that doesn't represent a loss of control (except physical changes, which the CYOA isn't big on)

>>10528849
Tok immediately waifu'd the bitchy femdom genderflipped version of himself in the shitposter cyoa, so there's probably some pretty hard submissive tendencies floating around in there.

>>10517145
If i empower my deity with enslave spell, she can enslave other people?

>>10528946
>appropriate for a magic about control.

Control issues then?

>Unable to trust others to do things right without your supervision
>Paranoia that others are out to get you
>Becoming anxious if you can't reaffirm to yourself that you're still in control
>Flying into a rage when denied, rejected, or ignored.
>Automatically casting a Red spell on anyone who questions you, without regard to the time or place.

>>10529159
Yes. These seem to fit the CYOA, fit being a corruption and fit being red. I'd pick some of those.

Yellow:
Normalization
(1)

Green:
Shrinking
Gigantificarion
Transformation
Furry
Monster girls
Multiple body parts
(6)

Blue:
Time stop
Objectification
Magical girls
Identity death
Wormhole
Mind break
(6)

Purple:
Tentacles
Tentacle jobs
Nightmare waifus
Xenophilia
(4)

Pink:
Femdom
Sissification
Worship
Submission
(4)

Red:
(0)

Black:
Scat
Pee
Nightmare fuel
Farting
(4)

Mana regeneration type: Fairy familiar

Primary magic school: Blue
Spells chosen - Upgraded time stop, upgraded mind sculpt, and upgraded spatial manipulation

Secondary magic school: Pink
Spells chosen - Summon deity (female), power word stop, upgraded empower (unupgraded unleash hell and upgraded enlarge)

Boons:
Signature spell (time stop)
Discrete casting

And now for the fun part, dealing with all that corruption!

3 points of blue corruption:
* Magic feedback
* Accidental summoning

2 points of pink corruption:
* Eldritch girl
* Corruption